Updated~Garven wrote:
[General]
I love the skin. It works really well with the background, though consider filling in the numbers with color. It's hard to tell on the fly when you're getting off tempo or make missed when everything that pops up is white - the font borders just aren't enough of a different to tell while playing.Thank you~♥ But would you please let me know what numbers did you mean? There're lot's of them in the skin. ;w;
The kiai makes these light colors very bright. Maybe not use it at all or use it for strategic star fountains and that's it? Up to you. Star fountains it is, then~
Higher quality MP3 here. Don't forget to check your hit sound volume and the off set.
[romantic poem]
00:42:850 [2] I'd recommend unstacking these hits after the sliders. The patterns you use up to this point indicate that there is a fast hit right at the end of sliders, and suddenly you go into a 3/4 waltz-like rhythm and I kept reading it wrong naturally. I had to think and remember that the circles are on the beat instead of swung. Changed, better now?
00:44:050 [4] ^
00:46:450 [4] This one might be fine to keep it stacked after the first two if you do the spacing thing. At least that rhythm will now be with the player and it will be more intuitive. ~
02:22:850 You may as well add a soft finish to this spinner. The music also does a cymbal crash here. OK~
[love song]
Lower the OD by 3-4 ticks. At max OD, even auto play slowly dies with this few notes. I'd suggest 4 ticks so players can at least have a chance of recovering some health from a mistake. during the beginning. I lowered both HP drain and OD by two ticks, is it good?
01:04:250 [2, 3, 4] Rhythmically speaking, this set of beats does not make sense in the context of the song. I'd delete 3 and leave 2 and 4. OK~
01:08:650 [2] Remove clap OK~
01:08:750 [3] ^
01:18:850 [3] Remove finish OK~
01:19:250 [4] ^
01:19:450 Add a finish to this spinner OK~
I'm liking this map. It's nice and relaxing mostly flows really well.
Thank you very much~♥
