Sekai-nyan
Hey Gero, Mod requested from pm in-game owo/ First mod ftw, Gero stop being so lazy ww
General:
Easy:
Normal:
Hard:
The bpm of the song kinda low and i don't think it fit with ar8, so how about lowering it down to 7.5. It'll play much better then o.o Fixed
That's all i found from this short song =w=/ good map as always Gero <3
Good luck getting it ranked baka ww
General:
- you should totally remove the widescreen support, since you didn't really use it on your map o3o/ Fixed
- the stack leniency kinda low on all diffs, i think you should fix that Fixed
- How about adding some audio lead in, i think 1200, would be good enough :3 Fixed
Easy:
- 00:07:979 (1) - I think finish would fit much better then a whistle here, since i can hear a strong sound in the music. So i think it might fit here (if you did that don't forget to lower the volume for it too) Fixed
- 00:13:651 (1) - ^ Fixed
- 00:17:432 (3) - you should move this slider few grids down, it's kinda too close to score points. So it's kinda far away right now ></ I don't think so
- 00:19:323 (1) - I think finish would fit great here, since there is a strong sound in the music (and again lower the volume for it too o3o/) Fixed
- 00:24:995 (2) - the blanket between this slider and this slider 00:23:104 (1) - kinda looking weird, how about doing something like this instead :3
- 00:26:886 (1) - the whistle on slider's body kinda sounds weird with the music imo, how about removing it ></ Fixed
- 00:34:436 (1) - I think this note will flow more naturally if you moved this note up not done, like this i mean o.o Fixed
- 00:38:217 (1) - how about replacing this whistle with a finish instead? since i can hear it clearly imo Fixed
- 00:51:452 (4) - same as i said about this on here 00:17:432 (3) - Isn't touching the hp/numbers at all
Normal:
- 00:07:979 (1) - how about adding a finish here on slider's start, there is a strong beat in the music. so i think it'll fit (and ofc if you did that don't forget to lower the volume for it) Fixed
- 00:09:633 (4) - I can't really hear anything in music on this note, i think you should move this note to here instead 00:09:161 - . Since i can hear the sound there not where you placed it imo If you should listen carefully
- 00:11:288 (3) - ^ ^
00:12:706 (2,3) - these two sliders kinda gives weird flow and looks weird too, how about doing something like this instead to fix it up :3 I've made something different instead - 00:14:596 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - too much copy and paste here, how about making something like note+1/2 slider, like you did on the other part of the music. I think it'll look more natural, this this c/p =3=/ Fixed
- 00:37:035 (2) - I think the blanket between this slider and this one 00:36:326 (1) - , would look much better if you move the final slider's point of this slider 00:37:035 (2) - to x:8 y:92, the blanket would look much nicer then :3 Fixed
Hard:
The bpm of the song kinda low and i don't think it fit with ar8, so how about lowering it down to 7.5. It'll play much better then o.o Fixed
- 00:11:524 (4) - I think if you moved this note to x:160 y:120, it'll make a better blanket with this slider 00:11:760 (1) - Nah.. I think is fine as it is
- 00:13:651 (1) - the whistle on the slider's body kinda sounds weird here, so how about removing it o.o It fits with the instrumental imo
- 00:16:960 (1) - this is the only jump you did on the whole map, I really suggest you to do the spacing like you did on the whole diff, since it's looking kinda weird right. Since it's the only jump you did on the whole diff, that's why i highly suggest you to fix this one =3= It's fine for me
- 00:27:831 (3) - I think you missed a whistle on slider's head, i think you should add it Fixed
- 00:39:281 (5) - I don't really hear anything on this note, i really think it's just overmapped, how about removing it ></ Same thing that I've mentioned on the normal difficulty
- 00:44:598 (4) - I think this slider would make better blanket with this slider 00:43:889 (3) - , if you moved this last slider's point 00:44:598 (4) - few grids down, it'll much nicer then :3 Fixed
That's all i found from this short song =w=/ good map as always Gero <3
Good luck getting it ranked baka ww
Kodora
as requested~
[General]
*As Sekai mentiored at her post, AR8 feels quite fast and doesn't works well with your choosen patterns. AR around 7-7.5 should work quite nicely here, try it! Fixed
I don't really see anything wrong with it - onliest my suggestion here would be add more finishes during kiai (every big white tick for example), as for now only clap + whistle sounds kinda boring. Note that same can be applied in all diffs. Fixed
Great & clean diff!
[Normal]
*Same concerns about AR - AR 5 feels kinda fast and doesn't work nice with your patterns here. Try AR4 - it should work much better here!
*Your DS choice at the beginning feels quite clamped, and it looks even more strange considering that your DS goes higher near the end of map while music stays same at this point. Any reasons for this? Personally, I'd prefer to see x1.10 DS at the whole diff as it looks way more clean with your symmetrial patterns. Fixed
[General]
- Since map starting kinda fast I'd suggest you add some audio lead-in via .osu files to give players a bit more time to prepare for playing. Fixed
- You may delete OP from tags, as website search wouldn't work with less than 2 characters anyway, and it wouldn't work nicely in-game. You can also remove brackets as they doesn't affect anything anyway Fixed
- Tag un is doubled, remove one please Fixed
- If you'll look at your hitsounds carefully you may notice that soft-hitnormal.wav and soft-hitfinish.wav have weird peak of volume, which makes them sounds kinda strange while playing. I'd suggest you replace them - don't worry, there's fixed version here, just download & replace! Fixed
- Your custom slidertick sound have more than 5ms delay, and it's almost inaudible compare to the very loud BGM volume... I can fix it for you if you want, but I'm not sure if you really wants to use it - imo, default slidertick sound works here quite nice already. Fixed
*As Sekai mentiored at her post, AR8 feels quite fast and doesn't works well with your choosen patterns. AR around 7-7.5 should work quite nicely here, try it! Fixed
I don't really see anything wrong with it - onliest my suggestion here would be add more finishes during kiai (every big white tick for example), as for now only clap + whistle sounds kinda boring. Note that same can be applied in all diffs. Fixed
Great & clean diff!
[Normal]
*Same concerns about AR - AR 5 feels kinda fast and doesn't work nice with your patterns here. Try AR4 - it should work much better here!
*Your DS choice at the beginning feels quite clamped, and it looks even more strange considering that your DS goes higher near the end of map while music stays same at this point. Any reasons for this? Personally, I'd prefer to see x1.10 DS at the whole diff as it looks way more clean with your symmetrial patterns. Fixed
- 00:19:323 (1,2) - After triple of 1/2 notes and 1/1 slider these two 3/2 repeat sliders sounds very strange - they doesn't really works nice with vocals, and they breaks your clap-pattern here. I'd suggest you sinple continue using 1/1 sliders same as you did before: Sorry but I'd really prefer to follow the vocals here
- 00:31:127 (2,3,1) - I can't say that it goes very well with music, maybe try something like this instead? Note that same goes for 00:39:162 (3,4,5,1) - as well Same as above
- 00:04:198 (1) - you may remove whistle from tail here to made a better accent at the incoming note I don't think so, sorry
- 00:21:214 (2,3) - Considering your previous rhythm, 3/2 repeat-slider would sounds here a lot better rather than two 1/1 sliders ^
- 00:26:886 (1) - Remove whistle from sliderbody? It doesn't sounds quite nice hare Fixed
- 00:45:780 (1) - finish instead of whistle on head Fixed
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General
- Metadata - Seems good owo ✔
- Audio Lead-In - add some audio lead in to the diffs since they start at 417 add like 1583 to make the lead in 2000 ✔ Fixed
- Video - All good~ ✔
- Background - Good its the proper size owo ✔
- Hitsound files - Look at Kodora's post lol xD✔ Fixed
- Lyrics - Lyrics are good no 18+ content obviously xD owo ✔
- Tags - Maybe add Cartoon Network into the tags this was aired on there remove OP from tags search doesn't search anything with less than 3 characters Remove XANA from tags since you already have it in it will already be searched Fixed
Easy
- 00:11:760 (3) - There should be a NC here keep your consistency of every 2/1 Remove the NC here 00:13:651 (1) - 1 NCs are just confusing Fixed
- 00:23:104 (1,2) - Wanna adjust this a teeny weeny bit so that it doesn't make that little overlap it doesn't look so nice ;w; Fixed
- 00:26:886 (1) - Remove the whistle from the body it sounds kinda weird Fixed
That's it for easy
my childhood I love you ;w;
Normal
- I agree with Kodora about the DS
- 00:00:417 (1,2,3) - This patterns flow is a bit choppy since you made the sliders end flow away from the next notes placement causing a bit of rough gameplay I think this pattern works a lot better since the flow is much more smooth Fixed
- 00:09:397 (3,4) - Its kinda a suggestion to not stack too many ontop of notes in the easier diffs since they confuse the noobs
- 00:11:288 (3) - Gero this looks like a failed blanket xD pls fix that overlap ;w; Fixed
- 00:12:706 (2) - Tecnically this is on the wrong snap it should be here 00:12:785 - in 1/6 divisor if you go into 25% you will hear that it is actually hitting the 1/6 note but you can get away with this because there is a noise here 00:12:706 - but at the end here 00:12:942 - there is nothing the noise at the end is right here 00:13:021 - again 1/6 and since it is 1/6 it shouldn't be used in normal that consists of many 1/2 and 1/1 here this rhythm hits notes and is still nooby friendly Fixed
- 00:14:596 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Im not entirely sure if you should use this much 1/2 notes relentlessly its a bit tough for a nooby to hit Fixed
- 00:26:649 (2,1,2) - I know you can reposition this pattern a bit to make it clumped together Fixed
- 00:39:162 (3,4,5) - Its kinda a suggestion to not stack too many ontop of notes in the easier diffs since they confuse the noobs I'd prefer to keep them
- 00:42:471 (3) - You forgot an NC here Fixed
That's all owo
Hard
- AR 7 fits much better with the low bpm of this song I agree with Sekai~ Fixed
- 00:12:706 (3) - Same as Normal I think it sounds better at 1/2
- 00:14:833 (1) - - Remove the NC here so that this 00:13:651 (1) - doesn't confuse players Fixed
- 00:24:522 (7) - Why is there no NC here all the other times like this you put an NC here like 00:20:741 (1,2,3,4) - 00:18:850 (1,2,3) - 00:16:960 (1,2,3) -
Well either way I agree with not adding a nc here since most of the time its just a comma stop and not the actual end of the sentence. but whatever you chose to go with make it consistent throughout Fixed - 00:26:413 (4,5,6) - Like the Above Fixed
- 00:30:194 (4,5,6) - Above Fixed
- 00:53:106 (1) - Why is there an NC here ? xD Fixed
I love your hard diffs not much wrong the only thing that needs works is the NC needs to be more consistent ;w;
Thanks for the helpful mods.
Updated ~