1. NOVICE diffの１本目の赤線(00:00:000 <=ココ)消しましょう。
   

1. こういう音ゲー譜面、OD8のほうが面白い気がします！

1. finishばっかになっちゃった・・・、明らかにシンバルの音が鳴ってる場所を書いてるので、わざと付けてなかったりするのであれば無視してください。

SPOILER

SPOILER

• 00:51:981 (6,7) - 이부분 귀로듣기엔 약간 안맞는 듯한 느낌이 들면서 그냥 이대로도 괜찮은 느낌도 나고 하니까 걍 리듬 하나 링크띄우고갈게요
  배치는 아예 안했으니까 리듬만 보시면 되요 http://puu.sh/9n60q/ae4dc99fab.jpg
  00:55:980 (1,2,1,2) - 이거는 4덩어리가 1패턴같은데 nc한개 푸는건?
  01:12:647 (1,2) - 리듬을 Ctrl+G
  01:40:647 (4,5,6,7,8) - 스트림도중 스페이싱을 바꾼 이유가 있나요?
  01:45:397 (10,1) - 이거랑 01:45:731 (2,3) - 이거는 패턴일관성을 위해 같은모양으로하는건 어떨가요 01:42:647 (1,2,3,4) - 이거처럼요

• 서클4로해도되지않을까 싶네요
  00:33:981 (1) - 흐름이 Alt+F4느낌나는데 슬라이더 180도 뒤집는건 어떤지요
  01:02:397 (4,5) - 요녀석은 아래로 붙여주는게 미관상 더 나아보임 뒤에나오는같은패턴들처럼
  01:10:314 (3,4) - 요녀석들 서로 같은슬라이더로 해서 180도회전한 패턴 바로그패턴 01:13:314 (4,5) - 이런식으로
  01:17:481 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - 5개까지는 그래도 괜찮은데 이건 좀 긴듯 3타다음부터 리턴슬라이더신공 ㄱㄱ
  01:52:544 (4,1,2,3,4,1) - 요거는 http://puu.sh/9n6nn/e1ff9f9561.jpg 이런식으로 하면 더 괜찮을거같음

• 00:39:314 (1) - 76:239
  00:57:981 (3) - 이거 생명선 가릴거같은데? 가 아니라 가림 좀 덜꺾어야될듯. 아니면 위치를 바꿔주던가
  01:43:981 (1) - 여기다가 뉴콤넣은거면 01:45:314 (3) - 여기서 패턴 끝나부리니께 여기도 뉴콤

• 00:43:981 (2) - 이건 걍 앞에슬라이더랑 방향 똑같이 하는게 나을듯
  01:35:981 (1) - 441:195
  01:53:929 (4) - 오버랩이 약간 애매함 걍 방향 돌리는것도 나쁘지 않은 Choice

Kloyd wrote:

하이루 from Hi. I'm Kloyd

EXHAUST

• 00:51:981 (6,7) - 이부분 귀로듣기엔 약간 안맞는 듯한 느낌이 들면서 그냥 이대로도 괜찮은 느낌도 나고 하니까 걍 리듬 하나 링크띄우고갈게요
  배치는 아예 안했으니까 리듬만 보시면 되요 http://puu.sh/9n60q/ae4dc99fab.jpg 유지
  00:55:980 (1,2,1,2) - 이거는 4덩어리가 1패턴같은데 nc한개 푸는건?done
  01:12:647 (1,2) - 리듬을 Ctrl+G done
  01:40:647 (4,5,6,7,8) - 스트림도중 스페이싱을 바꾼 이유가 있나요? 네
  01:45:397 (10,1) - 이거랑 01:45:731 (2,3) - 이거는 패턴일관성을 위해 같은모양으로하는건 어떨가요 01:42:647 (1,2,3,4) - 이거처럼요 ok

DECNAVDA

• 서클4로해도되지않을까 싶네요 하드치고는 어렵다. 라는 의견이 많아서요
  00:33:981 (1) - 흐름이 Alt+F4느낌나는데 슬라이더 180도 뒤집는건 어떤지요 done
  01:02:397 (4,5) - 요녀석은 아래로 붙여주는게 미관상 더 나아보임 뒤에나오는같은패턴들처럼 done
  01:10:314 (3,4) - 요녀석들 서로 같은슬라이더로 해서 180도회전한 패턴 바로그패턴 01:13:314 (4,5) - 이런식으로 nope
  01:17:481 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - 5개까지는 그래도 괜찮은데 이건 좀 긴듯 3타다음부터 리턴슬라이더신공 ㄱㄱ 일단은 유지
  01:52:544 (4,1,2,3,4,1) - 요거는 http://puu.sh/9n6nn/e1ff9f9561.jpg 이런식으로 하면 더 괜찮을거같음유지

ㅜㅒ퍛ㄸ

• 00:39:314 (1) - 76:239nope
  00:57:981 (3) - 이거 생명선 가릴거같은데? 가 아니라 가림 좀 덜꺾어야될듯. 아니면 위치를 바꿔주던가 done
  01:43:981 (1) - 여기다가 뉴콤넣은거면 01:45:314 (3) - 여기서 패턴 끝나부리니께 여기도 뉴콤 done

베이직

• 00:43:981 (2) - 이건 걍 앞에슬라이더랑 방향 똑같이 하는게 나을듯nope.
  01:35:981 (1) - 441:195 done
  01:53:929 (4) - 오버랩이 약간 애매함 걍 방향 돌리는것도 나쁘지 않은 Choicedone

별로 잡을것도 없셈 굳럭

1. There're some inconsistencies in your kiai #2. See this for more details. According to the rules, kiais shouldt be consistent.

1. The SV changes in the easiest diff are rather confusing. the SV changes aren't really necessary, since there're some rd lines already and changing the speed even more feels confusing.
2. Reduce both OD and HP Drain by one tick since they are too high for the easiest diff and don't work well with your rhythm.
   Note: since the rhythm is quite changeable, I'd reduce OD to 2. So, the BPM changes will be less confusing for beginners.
3. 00:43:314 (1) - acording to your previous combo patterns, this NC shouldn't be here.Moreover, it doesn't really fit with the song. Consider removing it, please.
4. 00:56:647 (1,2,1,2) - I really doubt that 1/2 patterns are playable enough for this diff. The diff is already hard enough and those 1/2s are just too much, imo. Since the diff is meant to be the easiest, you can try something like this.
5. 01:53:929 (4) - the spacing here is much bigger that it's supposed to be. Moreover, the overlap looks out of your style and appears quite messy to me. Considr fixing the spacing here, I feel like it should be around x1.6 or so and try to avoid the overlap since it can conduse some players.
   
   Your flow felt quite tricky and some of the patterns weren't intuitively playable, but it looks like a part of your style, so I guess it's okay. This diff could need some more modding and work, imo.

1. 00:21:314 - ignoring the drum here dosn't sound like a good idea to me. Consider making the slider 1/1 shortre and maybe placing a circle at 00:21:647, so you'll be abl e to follow the drums closer and to keep your rhythm more logical. Here's an exaple, in canse if you need one.
2. 00:22:647 (4) - please, do not use such sliders in the E/N diffs. The second rverse arrow appears way too fast and feels unexpected. Players just don't have enough time to read and end up missing it. What to do, then? Try using red nods to curve the slider in the parts, where the pepeats were. This way. So, the beats won't be ignored and you'll be able to keep the diff more readable.
3. 00:37:981 (2) - minor - the blanketing here isn't perfect and this is pretty obvious, to be honest. Consider fixing it or just poke me in game and I'll give you the code.
   Note: you see to be pretty good with the editor, so I assume that you can fix it on your own.
4. 00:57:981 (3) - minor - the overlap with the HP-Bar feels rather untdy. Since quite a lot of players use custom and huge HP-Bars this little overlap may turn into a disaster. Consider moving the slider down in order to avoid overlapping!
5. 01:05:981 (1) - previously you were placing NCs less often, so this one feels kinda unnecessary and makes your comboing look untidy.
6. 01:42:314 - a circle here would reflect the drums and fit with your rhythm. try placing i here and see if you like it or not!
   
   The diff was okay, although I recommend you to get some more mods just to make sure that there're no more minor mistakes/problems left.

1. Consider making your circles a bit smaller? There're quite a lot of objects in the playfield and using this circle size can make your map look quite untidy.
2. Increasing HP Drain by one tick would make the diff a bit more challenging and enjoyable. It'd also work well with the balance of the mapset.
3. 00:12:148 (4) - an NC here would reflect the rhythm changes greately, it is also needed here to point out that therer'resome very unusual beats.
4. 00:33:647 (4,1,2) -transitions between these objects didn't work very well to me. Consider using something different to make your flow feel more natural . Looking for an example?
5. 00:37:231 - a circle here would fit. Try to place it and see if it is playable enough or not, personally, i feel like without it your rhythm feels incomplete.
6. 00:45:981 (1) - make this slider shorter, so players will have enough time to switch from this slider to the next one. Having 1/8 gap here is just not enough and makes players feel uncomfortable and miss.
7. 01:09:647 (7) - a new combo her is kinda necessary since the rhythm and amount of repeats change on this slider.
8. 01:11:647 (2) - hthese sliders look like they have just ONE repeat, and the second repeats is way too hard to notice. Consider making the diff a bit more readable. For example, you can move the tail of this slider CLOSER to the following object, this way. So, players wil understand that there might be 2 repeats!
   Note: 01:14:147 (2) - same here. Never been a fan of such sliders, but it kinda fits here, so, why not.
9. 01:17:481 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1) - according to the guide, this diff is meant to be Hard. Using these long streams here is too complicated for this kind of diffs, so I recommend you to replace some of them with a spinner!
   
   The diff seems to be too tricky for a regular Hard, imo. Anyway, probably it's just me. Otherwise, you did a pretty good job.

1. Your OD is way too high for a song with rhythm and timing changes. Reducing OD by one tick would increase the playability a lot.
2. 00:16:897 - 00:17:231 - the beats at these points are ignored and it seems kinda unreasonable to me. Why do you ignore them? They're pretty loud and quite important.
3. 00:48:647 (1) - this is way too soon after the spinnre. An average player needs much more time to be able to read and catch the slider. Consider leaving some more space there.
4. 01:03:147 (6) - the jump feels exaggerated. Yeah, the beat here is a bit louder than normal ones, but this jump is way too big for it. It is really confusing, imo.
   Note: same happens a few more times, see for yourself.
   
   The diff is quite alright. You did a pretty good job with this one!

-Bakari- wrote:

As requested. Thank you for your request!

[General]

1. There're some inconsistencies in your kiai #2. See this for more details. According to the rules, kiais shouldt be consistent.

[BASIC]

1. The SV changes in the easiest diff are rather confusing. the SV changes aren't really necessary, since there're some rd lines already and changing the speed even more feels confusing.
2. Reduce both OD and HP Drain by one tick since they are too high for the easiest diff and don't work well with your rhythm.
   Note: since the rhythm is quite changeable, I'd reduce OD to 2. So, the BPM changes will be less confusing for beginners.
3. 00:43:314 (1) - acording to your previous combo patterns, this NC shouldn't be here.Moreover, it doesn't really fit with the song. Consider removing it, please.
4. 00:56:647 (1,2,1,2) - I really doubt that 1/2 patterns are playable enough for this diff. The diff is already hard enough and those 1/2s are just too much, imo. Since the diff is meant to be the easiest, you can try something like this.
5. 01:53:929 (4) - the spacing here is much bigger that it's supposed to be. Moreover, the overlap looks out of your style and appears quite messy to me. Considr fixing the spacing here, I feel like it should be around x1.6 or so and try to avoid the overlap since it can conduse some players.
   
   Your flow felt quite tricky and some of the patterns weren't intuitively playable, but it looks like a part of your style, so I guess it's okay. This diff could need some more modding and work, imo.

[ADVANCED]

1. Consider making your circles a bit smaller? There're quite a lot of objects in the playfield and using this circle size can make your map look quite untidy.
2. Increasing HP Drain by one tick would make the diff a bit more challenging and enjoyable. It'd also work well with the balance of the mapset.
3. 00:12:148 (4) - an NC here would reflect the rhythm changes greately, it is also needed here to point out that therer'resome very unusual beats.
4. 00:33:647 (4,1,2) -transitions between these objects didn't work very well to me. Consider using something different to make your flow feel more natural . Looking for an example? Nope. No reason to change
5. 00:37:231 - a circle here would fit. Try to place it and see if it is playable enough or not, personally, i feel like without it your rhythm feels incomplete. Nope. No reason to change too
6. 00:45:981 (1) - make this slider shorter, so players will have enough time to switch from this slider to the next one. Having 1/8 gap here is just not enough and makes players feel uncomfortable and miss. No reason to change. maybe hard players well playing done this way
7. 01:09:647 (7) - a new combo her is kinda necessary since the rhythm and amount of repeats change on this slider. Nope. It's a change to hard for reading
8. 01:11:647 (2) - hthese sliders look like they have just ONE repeat, and the second repeats is way too hard to notice. Consider making the diff a bit more readable. For example, you can move the tail of this slider CLOSER to the following object, this way. So, players wil understand that there might be 2 repeats! Doesn't matter to playing. Why not? this is 1/6 repeats slider. but, Same as time 1/4 repeat slider
   Note: 01:14:147 (2) - same here. Never been a fan of such sliders, but it kinda fits here, so, why not. 　Same as just avobe
9. 01:17:481 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1) - according to the guide, this diff is meant to be Hard. Using these long streams here is too complicated for this kind of diffs, so I recommend you to replace some of them with a spinner! for the time being I'll keep this. I know it is hard. considering. but I'm following this. https://osu.ppy.sh/s/103372 Hyper is not Hard. Hyper is semi Insane
   
   The diff seems to be too tricky for a regular Hard, imo. Anyway, probably it's just me. Otherwise, you did a pretty good job.

[EXHAUST]

1. Your OD is way too high for a song with rhythm and timing changes. Reducing OD by one tick would increase the playability a lot.
2. 00:16:897 - 00:17:231 - the beats at these points are ignored and it seems kinda unreasonable to me. Why do you ignore them? They're pretty loud and quite important. nope. I don't ignore beats
3. 00:48:647 (1) - this is way too soon after the spinnre. An average player needs much more time to be able to read and catch the slider. Consider leaving some more space there.
4. 01:03:147 (6) - the jump feels exaggerated. Yeah, the beat here is a bit louder than normal ones, but this jump is way too big for it. It is really confusing, imo.
   Note: same happens a few more times, see for yourself.
   
   The diff is quite alright. You did a pretty good job with this one!

In general, the mapset could use some more work, some polishing and so on. But I like the way how it's done, keep improving it!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck!

1. good i like this mapping style just need some improvement on jump and stream

azintairin710 wrote:

hei... from my Q

oh... sh*t -_- my headphone is wrecked :3 maybe i just modding the placement and curve :3 so sorry

Overall

1. good i like this mapping style just need some improvement on jump and stream

EXHAUST
AR = 9? i think it better than force with the SV ok
00:02:481 (3,4,5) - stream better (imo) so it follow the flow
00:02:981 (7) - curved slider slightly better
00:03:231 (8) - fix the placement, make it stream instead of little jump
00:04:731 (2) - don't use to high angle point here :3 not following the rhythm ok
00:07:814 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - fix the distance :3 make it more beautiful
00:11:314 (1,2,3) - make stream like this
00:14:647 (4,5,6) - use stream to down right
00:25:981 (1) -i'm not sure this one is can be caught by player (even it's the best player) move the start point maybe no... you can't do this ._. i have re-check the ranking criteria and this one is an unranked criteria ._. fix this
00:40:064 (4) - unsnapped done
00:44:147 (2,3) - ctrl+g? ok
00:51:147 (1,2,3) - use stream
01:00:981 (3) - don't hide circle in AR 9 (except it's a fast click)
01:06:814 (2,3) - ctrl+g
01:12:647 (1,2,3) - fix the stream ok
01:28:647 (3) - fix ok
01:39:981 (1,2,3) - same as 00:02:981 (7,8,1)
01:40:897 (7,8) - why you do different spacing?

ADVANCED
quite good just reduce some fast click :3 it's like an easy insane :3 but ignore this if it's were your purposes
00:41:647 (4) - remove this and use new reverse (to hard if it's a hard diff :3 just ignore if it's an easy insane)
00:50:481 (2) - move to x:116 y:148 :3 better blanket here instead of stack (better flow to
01:11:981 (3) - fix the curve make better blanket
01:23:981 (1) - wow @_@ quite big jump :3 maybe fix this

good luck

1. 00:05:981 fix this, the sliders end is placed weirdly
2. 00:07:981(2) blanget this from (1)?
3. 00:25:981(1) make it straight

1. 00:01:981(1) make it straight

[Kanbe Kotori] wrote:

[KSHR's novice]

-00:22:647 (1,2) - how about using one repeat slider?
> No change. How can I do this? There are 4 beats in 1/6 here, so this rhythm can't be turn into a slider with one repeat.

-00:36:647 (1) - how about adding finish on head of slider?
> A cymbal sound doesn't go here, so no change.

-00:41:814 (5) - place on same position with former circle?
> Indeed it might be a bit hard for players to play this pattern. Okay.

-01:02:981 (4,5) - former one(01:02:314 (2)) looks better imo.
>Okay, turn them into a 1/4 slider with two repeats for consistency with 01:02:314 (2) - .

-01:12:647 (5) - add NC
> Nope. Select 01:09:981 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and you can notice the reason why I don't do this.

N a s y a wrote:

gomi mod desu
僕のtotal kudosuが1桁のときの内容見てみてください・・（闇）

[KSHR's novice]

00:56:314 (5) - finish付け間違え？
> 難聴でした・・　Removed

01:09:314 (3) - finishいれてもいいかもしれない
> Fixed. soft finishいれました

[ HalLoWeeN ] wrote:

[General]
AIMod 를 체크해주세요! Your AIMod
프리뷰 포인트가 일치 하지 않다네여 lol

그... 익저랑 어드밴스드의 난이도 갭이 좀 많이 큰 것 같아요. 베이직과 노비스의 차이도 약간 큰 것 같구요.
다른 분들은 어떨지 모르겠지만, 제가 느끼기에는 좀 많이 큰 차이가 있는 것 같네요...

[BASIC]

np XD

[KSHR's NOVICE]

np XD

[ADVANCED]

01:50:929 (1) - 리버스를 하나 없애고 익저처럼 한 리듬 당겨주시는게 좋을 것 같아요.
그 외에는 딱히 없네요 :3

[EXHAUST]

00:10:314 (3,6) - 요 슬라 두개도 서클로 바꾸시는게 더 박자감이 살 것 같아요.

00:47:397 (1) - 이 스핀의 끝 지점을 00:48:481 - 여기로 당기시는건 어떨까요? 약간의 텀을 주는게 좋을 것 같아요.

01:25:981 (3,4) - 이 두개를 ctrl+G 해서 순서를 바꾸는건 어떨까요? 더 자연스럽게 흘러 갈 것 같아요.

01:50:930 (1) - 리버스를 없애고 한 박자 당겨주시는게 듣기가 더 좋을 것 같아요.

짧은 슬라들이 매우 멋지군여!

[ HalLoWeeN ] wrote:

Hello! as your in-game req!
Noob modder's trash short mod incoming!
I always give a suggestion. If you don't want to change, You don't need change anything.

[ HalLoWeeN ] wrote:

[General]
AIMod 를 체크해주세요! Your AIMod
프리뷰 포인트가 일치 하지 않다네여 lol ok

그... 익저랑 어드밴스드의 난이도 갭이 좀 많이 큰 것 같아요. 베이직과 노비스의 차이도 약간 큰 것 같구요.
다른 분들은 어떨지 모르겠지만, 제가 느끼기에는 좀 많이 큰 차이가 있는 것 같네요... :D.. 상관없는겁니다!

[BASIC]

np XD

[KSHR's NOVICE]

np XD

[ADVANCED]

01:50:929 (1) - 리버스를 하나 없애고 익저처럼 한 리듬 당겨주시는게 좋을 것 같아요.
그 외에는 딱히 없네요 :3

[EXHAUST]

00:10:314 (3,6) - 요 슬라 두개도 서클로 바꾸시는게 더 박자감이 살 것 같아요. 그럴거같기도 하지만 배치를 하는게 귀찮으므로..

00:47:397 (1) - 이 스핀의 끝 지점을 00:48:481 - 여기로 당기시는건 어떨까요? 약간의 텀을 주는게 좋을 것 같아요. ok

01:25:981 (3,4) - 이 두개를 ctrl+G 해서 순서를 바꾸는건 어떨까요? 더 자연스럽게 흘러 갈 것 같아요. ok

01:50:930 (1) - 리버스를 없애고 한 박자 당겨주시는게 듣기가 더 좋을 것 같아요. 어드밴스드와 마찬가지로 nope. 1/6박자에 맞춰논거기때문에 당기면 박자에 안맞습니다.

짧은 슬라들이 매우 멋지군여!

Nice map :]
Good Luck!

Sonnyc wrote:

[BASIC]
00:01:981 (1) - 2칸 오른쪽으로. ok
00:28:981 (1) - 간격 ok
00:46:981 (4) - 개인적으로 00:45:647 (2)와 대칭되는 위치에 놓아도 괜찮은 스핀 이전 마무리가 될것 같은데 고민한번 바랍니다. nope
01:54:848 (2) - 가장 쉬운 난이도에 이런 변속 노트는 너무너무 가혹하네요. ok

[KSHR's NOVICE]
Good diff, but I don't feel this diff as a "Novice".

[ADVANCED]
00:41:647 (4,5) - 이거 대신 1/4 리버스 슬라 쓰면 좀 별로려나요? 별 의미는 없어보이네요

[EXHAUST]
00:16:730 (2,3,4) - 끝에 피니시 같은거 넣어주실 수 있나요? 00:16:897 이런 중간 박자를 씹어서 어색한 느낌을 덜해줄지도. ok
01:39:536 (2) - y축 2개 더 높여서 226 만드시면 완벽히 (1,3) 가운데에 위치해요ok

BASIC은 노말 느낌인데 NOVICE와 ADVANCE는 하드+ 느낌이네요. 익저 난이도의 난이도 차이는 괜찮다 쳐도 베이식-노비스 갭이 크네요.

그건 노비스가 엄연한 하드기때문이죠. 어드밴스는 인세인입니다. 익저스트는 엑스트라구요

ShiraKai wrote:

オッホッホ

[General]
none.

[BASIC]

1. 00:22:981 (4) - add finishとNCどうでしょ～ いいアクセントになると思います ok
2. 00:45:647 (2,4) - ここのclapはS:C9のじゃなくていいんです？ なんかデフォルトのだと浮いている気が… ok
3. 00:56:647 (1) - 好みだけど尻尾の方もうちょっと曲げませんか？ しっかりブランケットする方が僕は好きなのら ok
   
   ム

   
4. 01:23:314 (1) - 01:23:981 - をもっと際立たせるために01:23:314 - の音量をもうちょっと下げたいなあ ん…特に意味はさなそうなのでnope

[ADVANCED]

1. 00:10:481 (2) - x168,y:190とかにちょっとだけ下げた方がAIMしやすそうです( ˘◡˘ ) ok( ˘◡˘ )
2. 00:38:647 (2,3) - 音取りなんですけど00:37:314 (2,3) - と一緒でいいと思います、というか今のだと少し違和感が…やってみたもののこっちの方に違和感を感じたのでnopeで
3. 00:54:647 (1,1) - remove NC? 形的にも無い方が綺麗に見えると思います その後に出る風車形の奴らと合わせたものなんだしEXHAUSTと合わせたものでもあります
4. 01:01:314 (5) - 終点にwhistle?ok
5. 01:16:647 (1) - 01:16:981 (2) - と同じ形置きたくないですか？コピペ少なめにするための意図的な曲げでした
6. 01:46:314 (7) - 00:45:981 (1) - 　みたいなパターンで1/4から1/8に代わってるのでNC入れませんか？1/8関係なくNC入れるところでした( ˘◡˘ )
   01:46:314 (7) - ^
7. 01:39:314 (1,2) - (1)は始点と終点、(2)は中点にfinishとかどうですか 　入れ忘れ( ˘◡˘ )Nice

[EXHAUST]

1. 00:16:314 (6,1,2,3,4) - 音取りが少し怪しいような… 00:16:897 - 00:17:231 - 00:17:564 - の音を無視しているのがとても気になりました
   上記の音を拾わないにしても00:16:730 (2,3,4) - を青線から始めるのは打っててとても変な気分でした…
   
   
   音取りの提案を幾つかしておきます 最大限に参考にして音取りしなおしました
2. 01:39:536 (2) - 始点のfinishいらないと思います
3. 01:45:397 (10) - 好みですケドこの辺こんな感じでNCいれたいッス～おｋ
   
   ム

   before
   
   after
   

ストリームの配置がcoolすぎてビビりマシマシ (*ゝω・)ﾉ ｱﾘｶﾞ㌧♪

以上です～ ベリーナイスマップでした

1. 노트소리가 전체적으로 작은거같은데 기붕탓인가 긁적..
2. 지금 안건데 ADVANCED 랑 EXHAUST 사이에 난이도 차이가 좀 크네요.

1. 00:00:648 (1,1) - 이거 스피너사이 간격이 쪼매 좁은거 같기도한데 BPM이 높은것도 그렇고 전체적인 난이도를 보니 기대 수치가 높은 것 같으니 이쯤해둘게영.
2. 00:16:481 (3) - 디스턴스가.. 그리고 자세히보시면 또 삐끗한것들 꾀 많아여.
3. 00:54:647 (3,4,5) - 엄청난 의외인건 제가 블랭킷을 매우 좋아한다는거죠.
4. 01:10:481 (2) - 다른파트처럼 서클두개는 어때여. 뭔가 뉴비들은 이거 처리하기 힘들어 보이는데.

1. 00:13:147 - at this part, the note density was increased suddenly. so, I think the players may confuse beat with visual side.
2. 00:22:647 (1,2) - I don't think some player can't hit this. if I'm a mapper of this, I wanna put 4-hit repeat slider at here. / 少し難しく見える
3. 00:46:981 (2) - how about NC here? probably, some players miss at previous note. so, we should safe way for supply HP as add NC. plus, no break time immediately after the slider.

1. 00:06:481 (2) - 이건 겹치지 않는게 어떤가여? 아님말고
2. 00:26:647 (1) - 소리가 너무 안들려요. 최소한 휘슬이라도 넣어주세요.

Pandiar wrote:

[KSHR's novice]

00:15:814 (4) - 好みの問題なのですが、(3)の最後がやや下向きで終わっているので画像のような形はどうでしょうか

SPOILER

>Fixed

01:53:006 (1) - ここ(01:53:467)のピアノの音がテンポもわかりやすいので、単発で拾っても良いのではと思いました。

SPOILER

>曲調に合わせてobjectの数を出来るだけ増やしたくないのでこのままで。

Sonnyc wrote:

[KSHR's NOVICE]
Good diff, but I don't feel this diff as a "Novice".
Simplified some rhythms/patterns. I'm going to do it again or partly remake if someone points out the same.

ShiraKai wrote:

[KSHR's NOVICE]

1. 00:14:314 (2) - 曲げて00:14:647 (3) - と対応させたくないですか？
   
2. 00:22:870 (2) - プレイしてみての感想なんですけど、そのまま下に流すより上に持って行った方がやりやすかったなあと言った感じです
   
   たとえば

   
   Fixed
3. 00:51:314 (1) - 始点、中点とともに終点も同じ音だと思うので終点にもwhistle欲しいです。
   Fixed
4. 00:52:647 (1) - SamplesetのNormalの付け忘れ？
   ついてるはず！
5. 01:05:647 (4,2) - 綺麗に重ねたいッス
   おっと

Dark Fang wrote:

[KSHR's NOVICE]

今晩は Hi

1. 00:13:147 - at this part, the note density was increased suddenly. so, I think the players may confuse beat with visual side.
   I'm sure it doesn't really affect gameplay though. Well moved downward 00:12:647 (1) - by 1 grid to make DS consistent.
2. 00:22:647 (1,2) - I don't think some player can't hit this. if I'm a mapper of this, I wanna put 4-hit repeat slider at here. / 少し難しく見える
   It would be easier for players to play 2 repeat sliders with 8 objects (the current pattern) than 4 ones with 4 objects (the one you suggested) imo.
3. 00:46:981 (2) - how about NC here? probably, some players miss at previous note. so, we should safe way for supply HP as add NC. plus, no break time immediately after the slider.
   Is there stuff that misleads players here? 00:44:647 (1,2) - can give enough HP recovery imo. Well I see no reason to add NC more than necessary.

1. これ多分difficulty spreadアウトかもしれない・・・(EXHAUSTとADVANCEDの差)　ADVANCEDをもう少し難しくするのが一番手っ取り早いかも。間にもう１個diff作るほうが確実だけど・・・。
   

1. 00:00:648 (1) - 終端だけでもsoft hitsound使ったほうがいいかも。ここに音が入るのは不自然です。
2. 00:21:981 (1,2) - 00:22:647 (1,2,3,4) - ここはいいんだけど00:21:981 (1,2) -こっちはまだ1/3の音ないような・・・ちょっと難しいかもしれないけど1/4リズムでここは音取りしましょう。
3. 00:29:564 (3) - ここも1/8じゃないです。1/4なのでこんな感じにしてみては？
   
   
   nice stream :3
   

1. 00:19:314 (1) - finish
   

1. とてもきれいです
   

1. 00:19:314 (3) - finish
2. 00:28:981 (1,2) - スペーシング乱れてるので直しておきましょう。
   

1. 01:27:981 (6,7) - もうちょい綺麗にできそう
2. 01:54:848 (2) - 最低難度でスタックダメだってQATアンランクしてた気がする
3. 01:55:185 (1) - この減速最低難度にしては難しくない？スピナーいやなら緩めてもいいと思う

1. 01:46:647 - 曲に負けてる感じがあるのでVol10％上げませんか？

1. Widescreen　KSHRさんのにも入ってたんで一緒に
2. 00:12:147 (5) - これCtrll+Gして00:13:314 (3) - これにスタックさせた方が流れよくない？
3. 01:39:147 - このリズム難しそうだしadd Noteするか手前の単発sliderにしない？
4. 01:45:814 (3) - 違和感あるんだけどよくわからんち01:45:980 (4) - 多分ここととってる音違うからだと思うから統一したら消えそう

-Nanaka- wrote:

あずりくえすと
軽くでいいとのことなので

[BASIC]

1. 01:27:981 (6,7) - もうちょい綺麗にできそう fixed
2. 01:54:848 (2) - 最低難度でスタックダメだってQATアンランクしてた気がする fixed
3. 01:55:185 (1) - この減速最低難度にしては難しくない？スピナーいやなら緩めてもいいと思うfixed

[EXHAUST]

1. Widescreen　KSHRさんのにも入ってたんで一緒に ok
2. 00:12:147 (5) - これCtrll+Gして00:13:314 (3) - これにスタックさせた方が流れよくない？ 今のがいい
3. 01:39:147 - このリズム難しそうだしadd Noteするか手前の単発sliderにしない？　今のがいい
4. 01:45:814 (3) - 違和感あるんだけどよくわからんち01:45:980 (4) - 多分ここととってる音違うからだと思うから統一したら消えそう変えるつもりのところだった。最大限に工夫してみた

言うことなかったよねーｗ
頑張って


mod time:0.5 hour

1. 00:38:897 (3) - これ始点は青線からのほうがいいと思う

• 00:22:759 (1,2) - これタイミング分かりにくすぎる。00:22:759 (1,2) - の間が1/4だと思ってしまいます。こんな感じでdistance通り置きましょう。http://puu.sh/e8rIt.jpg

1. 00:35:981 (3) - 終点に笛で　00:36:481 (4) - は笛をはずす
2. 01:38:980 (6) - ここ単発でとまるのやってて違和感あります。01:38:647 (5) - をコピーしてこんな感じのほうがやりやすい　http://puu.sh/e8sSt.jpg
3. 01:40:897 (X) - ここadd noteしたいな
4. 00:51:814 (2) - add 笛？
5. 00:57:647 (9) - 終点に笛あってもいいかも
6. 01:00:647 (1) - 終点の笛いらないと思う
7. 01:39:758 (3) - finishは終点のほうがよくない？

1. 00:38:897 (4) - これ青線から開始じゃない？今までの流れからだと
2. 00:51:981 (4,5) - こういうリズムは？　http://puu.sh/e8qOl.jpg

rui wrote:

|ω・｀)ﾉ

[ADVANCED]

1. 00:38:897 (3) - これ始点は青線からのほうがいいと思うとりあえずこの難易度はそうしよう

[EXHAUST]

• 00:22:759 (1,2) - これタイミング分かりにくすぎる。00:22:759 (1,2) - の間が1/4だと思ってしまいます。こんな感じでdistance通り置きましょう。http://puu.sh/e8rIt.jpgおｋ

1. 00:35:981 (3) - 終点に笛で　00:36:481 (4) - は笛をはずすおｋ
2. 01:38:980 (6) - ここ単発でとまるのやってて違和感あります。01:38:647 (5) - をコピーしてこんな感じのほうがやりやすい　http://puu.sh/e8sSt.jpg　今のがいいと思ってる。ストリームたくさんだからBreakにもなるし後の1/3の強調にもなる
3. 01:40:897 (X) - ここadd noteしたいなおｋ
4. 00:51:814 (2) - add 笛？おｋ
5. 00:57:647 (9) - 終点に笛あってもいいかもおｋ
6. 01:00:647 (1) - 終点の笛いらないと思うひつよう
7. 01:39:758 (3) - finishは終点のほうがよくない？音の強調ははじめのところで起きてる

[INFINITE]

1. 00:38:897 (4) - これ青線から開始じゃない？今までの流れからだとどう聴いても1/2の拍子だ。このままで
2. 00:51:981 (4,5) - こういうリズムは？　http://puu.sh/e8qOl.jpg音のある白線を無視するわけにはいかん

見るとこないめう

VINXIS wrote:

ayyyy lmao
from me modding q
last mod dam n

general

seems 2 b fine

BAS

i might be wrong about the blankets idk
00:22:647 (3) - Ctrl+H and same position as before done
00:40:314 (2,3) - imperfect blanket (the circle is too down) done
01:00:647 (1) - remove nc doe
01:30:314 (2,3) - circle's too right done
01:31:981 (1,2) - circle's too left done

ADV

00:15:231 (2) - add note and have that and 00:15:147 (1) - just like 00:15:314 (2,3,4) add note. stack on slider of (2)
00:39:981 (3,4) - imperfect stack done
00:49:981 (1,2) - ^ done
00:54:314 (2,2) - Ctrl+G each seperately nope

EXH

00:22:759 (1,2) - stack nope. that so hard for reading what is 1/3 beats.
00:59:147 (3) - Ctrl+G nope. is not my style
01:09:314 (1,2) - ^ but each seperately nope
01:16:981 (2) - ^ ok
01:31:814 (3) - Ctrl+G and put beginning at the same position as before nope

INF

00:44:647 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - make this part of teh stream just as curved as the other part pls sorry. nope.
00:48:981 (2,4) - imperfect stack done
00:49:314 (3,1) - ^ done
01:00:647 (2,3) - ^ doe
01:06:814 (2,3,4) - Ctrl+G it all lma o, and then Ctrl+G 01:06:981 (3) after nope
01:28:314 (2,3,4) - imperfect stack ok
01:40:647 (4,5,6,7,8) - u wot m8 haha
01:41:813 (7,8,9) - spacing fixed
01:54:511 (2) - Ctrl+G nope

good map. Good luck! Can't wait to hdhr pp farm the exhaust c:

-Nanaka- wrote:

[KSHR's NOVICE]

1. WideScreen外しました
2. 01:46:647 - 曲に負けてる感じがあるのでVol10％上げませんか？
   ここなんで-20%になってるんだろう・・ もう10%足して80%にしました

VINXIS wrote:

00:04:647 (1,2,1,2) - i actually rlly like this dam n yay
00:07:981 (3,3,1) - imperfect stack It's perfectly snapped.
00:15:314 (2,4) - ^ Fixed
00:22:647 (1,2) - i'd make this into one repeating slider instead tbh
Probably it's kinda hard for players to read a slider with 2 reverses because of its length. (It's mapped in 1/6 beat, so a repeat slider need have 2 reverse if I do this.) That's why 2 sliders are used here.
00:28:647 (1,3) - imperfect stack Maybe I fixed it successfully.
00:41:231 (3) - start on white tick, sounds off to me tbh
Yours sounds off to me.. It's following the synthesizer not the drum btw.
00:43:647 (2,4) - Ctrl+G each seperately
It's awkward to increase the spacing between 00:44:314 (4,1) - . Also this jump pattern is mapped on purpose.
01:02:647 (3,1) - imperfect stack Maybe I fixed it successfully.
01:04:647 (1,3) - obvs imperfect stack rip ^
01:18:981 (4,2) - imperfect stack ^
01:30:647 (1,3) - ^ ^
01:52:083 (3,1) - ^ lma o Fixed. This is the first time for me to see a mod in which many imperfect stacks are mentioned lol

Fixed some imperfect stacks you mentioned by editing .osu file.. LOL
I think there is no need to check stacks strictly because Stack Leniency moves them slightly in play mode. Check them in both modes once.

[color=#FF0000]Maybe I fixed it successfully.[/color]

kajiyatta wrote:

M4M
[General]
SB無いのでWIdescreen Supportのチェック外しましょう。おｋ
[BASIC]
最小難易度なのでAR5か4にしたほうがいいと思います。Normalは5以下にする必要があるので、5.5はUnrankだと思います。Easy無いし…4.5に
Placement
00:55:314(2)　ブランケット上に配置するより、外側においたほうが初心者向きの配置に見えます。おｋ

SPOILER

Rhythm
01:15:314 不要な緑線
01:23:981 ^
01:24:314 ^
01:55:185 ^
01:56:533 ^全部おｋ
00:01:981(1) スピナーの後にノータイムでスライダー配置するのは、最小難易度としては結構難しいと思います。こんな感じにしてみては？スピナーをすでに消しております

SPOILER

[ADVANCED]
Placement
00:17:647(1,2) 他のdiffと揃えるためにSwap NC. おｋ
01:27:314(3) ダウンカーブの方が前後のスライダーの動きが自然になると思います。おｋ

SPOILER

[EXHAUST]
Rhythm
01:40:230 ここにnote追加してみては？バックの音も結構大きいのでここは取ってあげたほうがいいと思います。　e.g.)おｋ

SPOILER

Hit Sound
00:12:647(1) 始点にfinish追加。
00:20:647(1) ^
00:21:314(3) ^
00:21:981(1) ^ and more?おｋ
このdiffだけHit soundのつけ忘れが多い気がするので、一度チェックしてみるといいと思います。作った時期が9ヶ月以上差があるので仕方ないのにゃあ・・・
[INFINITE]
Placement
00:40:981(1) 次のストリームの方へ曲げてやると打ちやすいと思います。おｋ

SPOILER

00:56:314(3) ずっと(1,2)で区切ってたので、ここだけNC無いのは少し見栄えが悪いように思います。配置は綺麗なので余計に目立ってるのかも。最初はそうしてたけど結構突っ込まれてた。でもEXHAUSTを考えてもやっぱこれがアッてる
Rhythm
00:10:064 ここにnote追加してみては。前の同じようなパート(00:04:647,00:05:981)で2連打で音取りしてるので、ここも同様にすると揃っていい感じになると思います。この部分は後ろのドラムの音を気にして作った記憶がある、けどこれだけはやっておくべきかと
Hit Sound
01:55:353(1) 最後のwhistle無い方が曲に合ってると思います。バックに音もなくデクレシェンドかかっているので、無音で終わらせてみては？　全diff同じ。おｋ

Nice mapset as always. Good luck.

kajiyatta wrote:

[NOVICE]
Placement
01:23:981(1) 結構下の方にあるので、次のnoteへ向けて上向きのスライダーにしてやると打ちやすいと思います。 e.g.)

SPOILER

画像の流れ方があまり好きではなかったので、赤いway pointの位置を思い切って変えました
Rhythm
01:23:981　不要な緑線　Removed
01:53:006(1) 真ん中のピアノ音を取ってみては？次の(3)でそういう音取りしてるので、どちらかに合わせる形にした方がいいと思います。あと(3)はBPM30くらい変わってるので他のdiffに合わせてNC付けてやったほうがいいと思います。
Pandiarさんも以前に似たような提案をしてくれていたのでやっぱり修正しちゃおうと思います。お二人とも提案ありがとう！

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Source:SOUND VOLTEX II -infinite infection-
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136,268,67981,2,0,L|76:276,7,35,4|0|0|0|0|0|0|0,1:2|1:0|1:0|1:0|1:0|1:0|1:0|1:0,1:2:0:0:
60,248,68647,6,0,P|72:216|76:180,1,70,6|0,1:2|1:0,1:2:0:0:
16,100,68981,2,0,P|47:85|82:80,1,70,6|0,1:2|1:0,1:2:0:0:
164,136,69314,1,4,1:2:0:0:
252,92,69481,1,0,1:0:0:0:
296,180,69647,2,0,P|328:192|364:196,1,70,4|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
456,160,69981,5,6,1:3:0:0:
300,348,70647,1,6,1:3:0:0:
380,96,71314,1,6,1:3:0:0:
392,316,71981,1,6,1:3:0:0:
472,64,72647,1,6,1:3:0:0:
316,252,73314,1,6,1:3:0:0:
292,36,73981,5,6,0:3:0:0:
292,36,74314,1,6,0:3:0:0:
292,36,74647,2,0,L|304:108,1,70,6|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
212,148,74981,2,0,L|224:220,1,70,4|6,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
316,252,75314,6,0,P|316:288|308:320,1,70,6|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,372,75647,2,0,B|191:379|191:379|123:363|123:363|87:371,2,140,2|2|2,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
308,164,76647,6,0,P|340:168|380:192,1,70,2|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,276,76981,2,0,P|444:272|484:248,1,70,2|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,156,77314,2,0,L|480:88,2,70,2|0|2,1:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
316,252,77981,6,0,P|284:248|244:224,1,70,6|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
184,160,78314,2,0,P|204:228|184:292,1,140,2|2,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
104,348,78814,1,2,1:0:0:0:
12,312,78981,2,0,L|4:242,1,70,2|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
64,164,79314,6,0,B|52:60|52:60|24:84,2,140,2|0|2,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
4,242,80147,1,2,1:0:0:0:
100,260,80314,2,0,P|136:260|168:252,1,70,2|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
244,188,80647,6,0,B|296:176|344:204|344:204|328:236,1,140,6|2,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,304,81147,1,0,1:0:0:0:
332,368,81314,2,0,P|400:384|468:368,1,140,4|2,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
512,280,81814,1,2,1:0:0:0:
448,204,81981,6,0,L|440:132,1,70,2|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
364,72,82314,2,0,L|320:136,1,70,4|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
244,188,82647,2,0,L|176:144,1,70,2|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
104,92,82981,2,0,L|72:160,1,70,4|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
24,244,83314,6,0,B|77:263|142:227|142:227|117:295|141:346,1,245,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,376,83981,6,0,B|212:360|212:360|336:384,1,140,6|2,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
388,316,84481,2,0,L|456:327,1,70,2|2,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
512,248,84814,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,172,84981,2,0,P|412:172|380:180,1,70,2|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,252,85314,6,0,P|264:236|208:236,1,105,2|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,252,85647,2,0,P|184:224|196:188,1,70,2|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,136,85981,2,0,P|276:100|264:64,1,70,2|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,28,86314,1,2,1:0:0:0:
104,96,86481,1,2,0:0:0:0:
36,164,86647,6,0,L|52:268,1,105,2|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,256,86981,2,0,L|28:332,1,70,2|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,372,87314,2,0,P|140:352|160:320,1,70,2|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,232,87647,2,0,P|224:252|244:284,1,70,2|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,376,87981,6,0,P|288:360|340:364,1,105,2|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,384,88314,2,0,P|412:384|448:376,1,70,2|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
508,300,88647,2,0,P|472:296|440:280,1,70,2|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,192,88981,1,2,1:0:0:0:
448,108,89147,1,0,1:0:0:0:
400,192,89314,6,0,B|296:216|296:216|264:204,1,140,2|2,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
204,128,89814,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,220,89981,2,0,L|180:288,1,70,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,340,90314,2,0,L|84:272,1,70,2|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
3,216,90647,6,0,P|52:167|63:99,1,140,2|2,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
0,24,91147,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,99,91314,1,0,1:0:0:0:
144,44,91481,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,44,91647,2,0,L|216:36,1,70,2|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,116,91981,6,0,P|256:148|248:184,1,70,2|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,224,92314,2,0,P|168:258|185:291,1,70,2|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,360,92647,2,0,B|288:352|288:352|356:368,1,105,2|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,348,92981,2,0,L|466:367,1,70,2|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,276,93314,6,0,P|512:208|496:140,1,140,2|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
412,92,93814,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,40,93981,1,2,1:0:0:0:
496,40,94147,1,2,1:0:0:0:
496,40,94314,1,4,1:2:0:0:
496,40,94481,1,2,1:0:0:0:
412,92,94647,6,0,B|312:64|312:64|280:80,1,140,6|2,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
228,164,95147,2,0,P|228:200|240:236,1,70,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,280,95481,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,356,95647,2,0,P|228:356|196:348,1,70,2|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,272,95981,6,0,P|84:280|40:312,1,105,2|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,352,96314,2,0,L|8:284,1,70,2|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,192,96647,2,0,L|24:84,1,105,2|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,52,96981,2,0,P|88:56|128:76,1,70,2|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,152,97314,5,2,1:0:0:0:
220,64,97481,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,64,97647,2,0,L|292:56,1,70,2|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,128,97981,2,0,B|460:116|460:116|448:152,1,140,0|2,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
388,228,98481,1,0,0:0:0:0:
484,244,98647,6,0,P|496:296|484:348,1,105,2|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,368,98981,2,0,P|404:368|372:360,1,70,2|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,288,99314,6,0,L|252:296,2,46.6666666666667,2|2|0,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
341,235,99647,2,0,L|388:228,2,46.6666666666667,2|2|0,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
284,208,99981,6,0,P|272:160|280:104,1,105,6|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,64,100314,2,0,P|276:72|236:76,1,70,2|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,152,100647,2,0,P|145:134|119:111,1,70,6|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,24,100980,1,2,1:2:0:0:
76,24,101147,1,2,1:2:0:0:
20,104,101314,6,0,P|16:155|36:203,1,105,6|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,224,101647,2,0,P|80:260|72:292,1,70,2|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,356,101981,1,6,1:2:0:0:
0,356,102147,1,2,0:0:0:0:
92,384,102314,2,0,P|124:384|160:376,1,70,4|2,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
236,308,102647,6,0,L|340:328,1,105,6|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,364,102981,2,0,L|388:380,1,70,2|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
460,324,103314,2,0,P|448:292|444:256,1,70,2|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
472,164,103647,2,0,P|420:164|372:192,1,105,2|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,224,103981,6,0,L|336:120,2,105,6|2|0,1:2|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
368,320,104647,1,6,1:2:0:0:
172,336,104981,2,0,P|124:324|84:284,1,105,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,248,105314,6,0,L|44:352,2,105,6|2|0,1:2|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
148,192,105981,2,0,L|131:123,1,70,2|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
36,104,106314,2,0,L|19:35,2,70,6|0|6,1:2|1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,106731,12,2,109314,0:0:0:0:
448,256,111006,6,0,L|472:252,2,23.3333333333333,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,308,111621,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,256,112083,1,2,0:0:0:0:
332,172,112544,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,256,113006,6,0,P|276:260|252:256,1,52.5000020027161,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,276,113467,2,0,P|193:259|179:239,1,52.5000020027161,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,196,113929,6,0,L|180:128,2,70,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,284,114848,2,0,L|98:306,3,23.3333333333333,0|0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,115353,12,2,116533,1:0:0:0:

1. 00:03:981 (4) - 너무 아래로 향해있어서 흐름이 이상한것 같아요 끝포인트를 약간 올리셔서 굴곡을 줄이시는게 어떠세요?
   
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2. 00:05:314 (3) - 시작부분에도 휘슬 넣어주시는게 좋을듯요
3. 00:05:314 (3) - same (^)
4. 00:35:981 (3) - 지금도 괜찮지만 (2)번 슬라이더랑 Blanket 어떠신가요
5. 00:45:647 (2) - 뒤에 휘슬로 강조를 워낙 많이하셔서 이 클랩은 별로 안어울리네요 그냥 휘슬로 바꾸시는게 어떠세요?
6. 00:58:981 (4,1) - 개인적으로 이지 난이도에 이런패턴은 좀 아니라고 생각하는데 그냥 리버스 한번이 좋다고 봐요 00:49:314 (2) - 이렇게.
7. 01:00:314 (3,4) - same (^)
8. 01:01:981 (1,2) - 빨간틱보다는 앞에 흐름 맞춰서 그냥 딱딱 끊어지게 하얀틱에다가 맞춰주시는게 어떠신가요
9. 01:25:981 (1,2) - Ctrl+G 하시면 리듬흐름이 어색하 보이지 않을겁니다.
10. 01:43:981 (1) - 개인적으로 이곳은 뉴콤보 길게빼셔도 될것 같아요. 그냥 뉴콤보를 지우시는게 어떠신가요?

1. 00:02:647 (2) - 이건 너무 치기 불편할것 같아요 차라리 간격을 약간만 넓혀서 Ctrl+G 하는게 좋아보이네요
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:13:314 (3) - 파란틱까지 늘리셨는데 저는 별로 안어울린다고 생각해요 그냥 1/2 슬라이더 어떠신지..
3. 00:14:314 (2) - 흐름때문에 지적했습니다. 앞에 노트랑 좀 간격을 유지하셔서 흐름이랑 모양 둘다 좋게 해보세요
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   
4. 01:14:981 (5,1) - 이건 점프라고 해도 간격이 너무 엉성하다고 생각드네요. 그냥 넓은 간격으로 일정하게 유지시켜주시는게 어떠신가요

1. 00:04:730 (2) - 제안입니다만 이거 슬라를 파란틱까지 줄이고 하얀틱에 노트 추가해보시는게 어떠신가요? 칸베님 맵에서도 쓰여서 한번 지적해봅니다.
2. 00:10:064 (2) - Same (^)
3. 00:10:064 (2) - 개인적으로 저는 이런 슬라모양을 싫어하는데 보정할 생각 없으신가요
4. 00:22:870 (2) - 슬라보단 강조를 강화시키기 위해서 노트 두개도 좋다고 생각해요
5. 01:26:981 (2) - 흐름상 Ctrl+G가 처리하기 편할듯 합니다.
6. 01:39:147 - 여기에 음이 있는데 비우신 의도를 잘 모르겠네요. 노트 추가해주시는게 어떠신가요?

1. 00:05:314 (5) - 4번노트 Blanket 어떠신가요. 개인적으로 전 좋아보입니다만...
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:12:647 (1) - 앞에 파트랑 똑같이 1/2 슬라이더랑 노트로 구성하시면 더 좋을듯요 00:01:981 (1,2) - 이렇게
3. 00:40:981 (1) - 이거때문에 연타가 자연스럽게 이어지지 않는 기분? 이 듭니다. 그냥 여기도 노트로 연타를 구성해주세요
4. 01:40:647 (4,5,6,7,8) - 이건 연타 간격 지켜주셔야 좋아보일것 같은데...
5. 01:54:511 (2) - Ctrl+G? 여긴 점프 들어가면 좀 패턴이 재밌어질듯 합니다.

HabiHolic wrote:

Modding Time

[BASIC]

1. 00:03:981 (4) - 너무 아래로 향해있어서 흐름이 이상한것 같아요 끝포인트를 약간 올리셔서 굴곡을 줄이시는게 어떠세요?ok
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:05:314 (3) - 시작부분에도 휘슬 넣어주시는게 좋을듯요 ok
3. 00:05:314 (3) - same (^) ok
4. 00:35:981 (3) - 지금도 괜찮지만 (2)번 슬라이더랑 Blanket 어떠신가요 ok
5. 00:45:647 (2) - 뒤에 휘슬로 강조를 워낙 많이하셔서 이 클랩은 별로 안어울리네요 그냥 휘슬로 바꾸시는게 어떠세요?
6. 00:58:981 (4,1) - 개인적으로 이지 난이도에 이런패턴은 좀 아니라고 생각하는데 그냥 리버스 한번이 좋다고 봐요 00:49:314 (2) - 이렇게. 이부분은 nope. 이지가 아니고 노말이기때문에 이정도는 괜찮다 봅니다.
7. 01:00:314 (3,4) - same (^) 여긴 바꿈
8. 01:01:981 (1,2) - 빨간틱보다는 앞에 흐름 맞춰서 그냥 딱딱 끊어지게 하얀틱에다가 맞춰주시는게 어떠신가요 이대로가 나아보이네요
9. 01:25:981 (1,2) - Ctrl+G 하시면 리듬흐름이 어색하 보이지 않을겁니다. nope. 양쪽다 맞지만 01:26:314 (2) -이쪽의 박자가 더 강하기에 1/2은 그대로 배치
10. 01:43:981 (1) - 개인적으로 이곳은 뉴콤보 길게빼셔도 될것 같아요. 그냥 뉴콤보를 지우시는게 어떠신가요? ok

[ADVANCED]

1. 00:02:647 (2) - 이건 너무 치기 불편할것 같아요 차라리 간격을 약간만 넓혀서 Ctrl+G 하는게 좋아보이네요 ok
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:13:314 (3) - 파란틱까지 늘리셨는데 저는 별로 안어울린다고 생각해요 그냥 1/2 슬라이더 어떠신지.. nope
3. 00:14:314 (2) - 흐름때문에 지적했습니다. 앞에 노트랑 좀 간격을 유지하셔서 흐름이랑 모양 둘다 좋게 해보세요조금 바꿈
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   
4. 01:14:981 (5,1) - 이건 점프라고 해도 간격이 너무 엉성하다고 생각드네요. 그냥 넓은 간격으로 일정하게 유지시켜주시는게 어떠신가요 너무 과하지도 않고 점프라 할생각도없고 그냥 박자가 새로 시작되니 스페이싱을 조금 더 둔거뿐이니 난이도 유지를 위해 이대로

[EXHAUST]

1. 00:04:730 (2) - 제안입니다만 이거 슬라를 파란틱까지 줄이고 하얀틱에 노트 추가해보시는게 어떠신가요? 칸베님 맵에서도 쓰여서 한번 지적해봅니다.난이도가 너무 올라갑니다.
2. 00:10:064 (2) - Same (^) nope
3. 00:10:064 (2) - 개인적으로 저는 이런 슬라모양을 싫어하는데 보정할 생각 없으신가요 네.
4. 00:22:870 (2) - 슬라보단 강조를 강화시키기 위해서 노트 두개도 좋다고 생각해요 난이도 문제로 nope.
5. 01:26:981 (2) - 흐름상 Ctrl+G가 처리하기 편할듯 합니다. ok
6. 01:39:147 - 여기에 음이 있는데 비우신 의도를 잘 모르겠네요. 노트 추가해주시는게 어떠신가요? 매우 약한음이고 그전까지의 스트림과 후의 1/3을 강조하는데도 적합하고 난이도상의 문제로 nope

[INFINITE]

1. 00:05:314 (5) - 4번노트 Blanket 어떠신가요. 개인적으로 전 좋아보입니다만... 배치를 바꿈
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:12:647 (1) - 앞에 파트랑 똑같이 1/2 슬라이더랑 노트로 구성하시면 더 좋을듯요 00:01:981 (1,2) - 이렇게 1/8슬라이더가 연결되있기에 브레이크로 1/1로 배치함. 손이꼬이게됩니다.
3. 00:40:981 (1) - 이거때문에 연타가 자연스럽게 이어지지 않는 기분? 이 듭니다. 그냥 여기도 노트로 연타를 구성해주세요 테스트 플레이 결과 문제는 없었습니다
4. 01:40:647 (4,5,6,7,8) - 이건 연타 간격 지켜주셔야 좋아보일것 같은데... 너무 단조롭습니다. 5연타를 싫어하는데 이렇게라도 안하면 뒷부분이 너무 단조로워요. 치는데도 문제는없구요
5. 01:54:511 (2) - Ctrl+G? 여긴 점프 들어가면 좀 패턴이 재밌어질듯 합니다. 배치를 바꿈

That all. Best of Luck~

1. 00:06:314 (5,1) - blanket could improve here
2. 00:22:647 (3) - should be snapped in 1/3, 1/2 doesn't fit at all and it still should be fine to play since it's a slider before a break
3. 01:04:647 (1,2) - blanket could improve here
4. 01:33:314 (3) - try to adjust this so the red point is in the center, will make the shape neater
5. 01:42:647 (1,2,3) - was this intended to be symmetry? it's a bit off

1. try AR 6.5? feels a little quick at the moment and this will slot into the spread perfectly
2. maybe try a bigger CS? something like 3.7-8 just to make things a bit easier to hit with the faster pace of the map
   nothing otherwise, sweet diff

• would recommend OD 7 for this, very large gap between AR and OD at the moment

1. 00:27:981 (3) - any reason for the sliderbody whistle here? doesn't seem to be doing much ingame from what i could hear
2. 01:27:981 (1,2,3) - this stack ends up looking odd since the sliders stay in the same place, but only 2 does an automatic stack out. so i would recommend doing a manual stack like you do with 01:28:897 (4,5) - right after

1. similar to above, maybe OD 7.5 would work best for this diff
   awesome

1. and for this diff, i'd love to see OD 8.5 on it, but 8 would work as well
2. consider using a smaller CS for this, i found that 4.5 fit really well with the style of the map but something like 4.2 or 4.3 could work too. up to you
3. 00:53:981 (1,2,1,2) - i'm not sure i would use a stacked 1/4 pattern like this when you first start the 1/4 sliders, i think a pattern like this is better used when the slider spam has already been established
4. 01:23:314 (1,2) - i would reduce the volume on these two sliders a little, just seem very loud since you kept normal sample (or, adjust volume to fit the music lowering in volume + pitch as it goes through)
5. 01:41:730 (6) - might be best to remove this note to better follow the melody sound

captin1 wrote:

[BASIC]

1. 00:06:314 (5,1) - blanket could improve here
2. 00:22:647 (3) - should be snapped in 1/3, 1/2 doesn't fit at all and it still should be fine to play since it's a slider before a break
3. 01:04:647 (1,2) - blanket could improve here
4. 01:33:314 (3) - try to adjust this so the red point is in the center, will make the shape neater
5. 01:42:647 (1,2,3) - was this intended to be symmetry? it's a bit off

[KSHR's NOVICE]

1. try AR 6.5? feels a little quick at the moment and this will slot into the spread perfectly
2. maybe try a bigger CS? something like 3.7-8 just to make things a bit easier to hit with the faster pace of the map
   nothing otherwise, sweet diff

[ADVANCED]

• would recommend OD 7 for this, very large gap between AR and OD at the moment

1. 00:27:981 (3) - any reason for the sliderbody whistle here? doesn't seem to be doing much ingame from what i could hear Just a my mistake
2. 01:27:981 (1,2,3) - this stack ends up looking odd since the sliders stay in the same place, but only 2 does an automatic stack out. so i would recommend doing a manual stack like you do with 01:28:897 (4,5) - right after

[EXHAUST]

1. similar to above, maybe OD 7.5 would work best for this diff
   awesome

[INFINITE]

1. and for this diff, i'd love to see OD 8.5 on it, but 8 would work as well
2. consider using a smaller CS for this, i found that 4.5 fit really well with the style of the map but something like 4.2 or 4.3 could work too. up to you chose the 4.2
3. 00:53:981 (1,2,1,2) - i'm not sure i would use a stacked 1/4 pattern like this when you first start the 1/4 sliders, i think a pattern like this is better used when the slider spam has already been established
4. 01:23:314 (1,2) - i would reduce the volume on these two sliders a little, just seem very loud since you kept normal sample (or, adjust volume to fit the music lowering in volume + pitch as it goes through) fixed. and adjust to be unified in other diffs
5. 01:41:730 (6) - might be best to remove this note to better follow the melody sound

great mapset, sorry for the delay

let me know

Sonnyc wrote:

BASIC:

00:06:315 (5) - (1)에 블랭킷 시켜주세요. 00:05:314 (3) 보다 곡률이 높아서 부자연스러운 느낌이 듭니다.

KSHR's NOVICE:

00:28:647 (1,3) - Stack can be better here.

ADVANCED:

00:57:647 (5) - 연타 소리에 맞춰서 3/4 넣어주신듯 합니다만 00:57:647 (5,1) 이렇게 두 번 사용돼서 효과가 덜한 느낌입니다. 1/4 줄이시는거 고려 한번 해주세요. 약간의 변화로 00:58:147 - 이부분을 1/4화했습니다. 00:57:981 (1) - 이부분은 이게 적당하다 보이네요
01:53:698 (4,1) - 간격을 수치에 맞추지 마시고 실제 거리에 맞춰주세요. http://puu.sh/fbqLj/2324dcbb20.jpg

EXHAUST:

-- 01:54:511 - 녹색 라인 삭제해주세요.

00:22:481 (4) - 1/3 박자가 00:22:647 부터 시작되기 때문에 그 지점에 뉴콤보를 가진 노트나 슬라이더가 나와야 자연스럽게 읽을 수 있습니다. 이 상황에서는 (4) 슬라이더의 시작과 끝을 모두 노트 처리하거나 00:22:481 는 생략하고 00:22:647 만 노트화하는 방향으로 고쳐주셔야 하겠습니다.

INFINITE:

-- 01:54:511 - 녹색 라인 삭제해주세요.