HouseForever wrote:

GENERAL:

It downloaded 2 times the Harddiff.. dunnow why

EASY:

There are very nice blankets here.

00:09:213 (1) Its not perfectly symmetrical
01:01:367 (1,2) Make 1 a hitcircle and a slider between the sliders tail and 2
01:12:444 (2) It isnt perfectly symmetrical
01:14:290 (4) Transfer it into one hitcircle and one slider
01:16:136 (2) ^
02:20:059 (3) This one isnt perfectly symmetrical
02:23:059 (2) Put the red sliderticks in a way, that the first one is at 02:23:290 and the second one at 02:23:521. It fits to the vocals
03:31:367 (4,1) The blanket is not perfect

I will edit this post soon, I have to leave my computer now... its important Today in the evening I will finish the mod.
Now Im back, lets go

NORMAL:

Maybe do more Blankets in the difficulty
Maybe dont always follow a direction, when slider meet. Turn the boath sliders in opposite directions, so it gives you more opportunities.

00:18:905 (3) Put this exactly like 1 on the other side of 2
00:38:752 (1,2) Use a turned version of 2 for 1
00:39:444 (2,3,4) DS-Mistake
03:33:675 (4,5) Something like this doesnt look very nice. Change the direction of 5 or put 5 a little bit down, so it continues the curve. You made it often
03:45:906 (1,2) Fix the blanket

HARD:

00:03:675 (1) should be here 00:03:905 (1)
00:04:136 (2) should begin here 00:04:367 (2) fits the rythm better
00:56:521 (4,5) Fix blanket
01:11:752 (6) Put it to x:348 y:120
01:40:598 (1) I think converting it to 2 hitcircles would be much easier to play
02:22:136 (1,2,3) Fix Blanket
03:04:829 (2,3) ^

The rythm is good, but you should check all of your blankets again and make them perfect like its done in EASY.

INSANE:

00:01:829 (1,2,3) Check the distance between 1,2/2,3
00:16:136 (7,1) Fix Blanket
00:46:829 (3,4,5) Make it more beautiful
00:51:213 (4) Put it onto x:270,y:122 (You can adjust the position of hitcircles more precisely holding Shift)
00:54:213 (3,4,5) 4 isnt in the middle of 3 and 5
01:40:482 (2,3,4,5,1) its kinda weird. there should be a slider from 5's tail to 1's head
01:54:905 (1,2,3) Compared to the other parts of the song its too hard
02:52:136 (3,4) The distance is too short
02:59:752 (3) Bend it more to the right
03:38:752 (1,2,3,4) The distances are not the same. You should use DS here, too, not because it would be too hard, but it looks better
03:40:367 (3,4,5) ^
That was it EASY is nearly perfect, the rest needs a little bit precise overlooking. Overlook the blankets and the distances between hitcircles.

NeviltiS wrote:

Hi~ from my queue

[Nardo's Muzukashii]
02:29:290 (492,493) - remove? (It looks good also reduce the Notes little because after the chorus has been completed.) As the drum sounds are quite obvious, following them would be fine.

[Nardo's Oni]
00:51:098 (172) - d? fixed
02:46:021 (659) - k? d could result in a better flow imo.

Good map! I'll throw a star.
Good luck!

NeviltiS wrote:

Hi~ from my queue

[Nardo's Muzukashii]
02:29:290 (492,493) - remove? (It looks good also reduce the Notes little because after the chorus has been completed.)

[Nardo's Oni]
00:51:098 (172) - d?
02:46:021 (659) - k?

Good map! I'll throw a star.
Good luck!

1. add tag opening

1. 00:01:829 - add Greenline Vol 40%
2. 00:31:367 - add Greenline Vol 50%
3. 01:11:982 - Vol 40～50%
4. 02:22:598 - Voldown plz
5. 03:46:136 - add Greenline Vol 60%
6. 00:17:521 (2,3) - melody follow try thiis
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:24:905 (2,3) - ^
8. 01:27:675 (2,3) - ^
9. 00:28:598 (2,3) - Sound of reverse
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:35:059 (2,3) - ^
11. 01:38:752 (2,3) - ^
12. 01:45:213 (1,2) - Sound of reverse
    
    SPOILER

    
    00:45:675 (5) - I think that we should put NC from Kiai time
    
    SPOILER

    
13. 01:00:444 (4) - ^
14. 01:55:829 (5) - ^
15. 03:16:598 (4) - ^
16. 03:00:444 (2,3) - 03:00:675 - I want to extend the sound of here
    
    SPOILER

    
17. 03:02:752 (1) - additions Drum clap or CS4 Clap

1. SV1.4 high Rate 1.2 is best
2. Remake 12 per DS is lower than Easy
3. I think preferable to use a more 1/1 slider is good
4. Long mod...Normal & Insane continue in the future

1. 00:42:445 (1) - add Finish hed
2. 00:53:290 (6) - same NC
3. 01:36:444 (1) - blanket
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:40:598 (1,2,3,4) - This is a bit difficult try this
   
   SPOILER

   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:45:213 (1) - add whistle
6. 01:52:136 (5) - add finish end
7. 02:04:598 - incompatibility add circle and whistle?
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 02:52:136 - must not Greenline & kiai flash
9. 02:57:905 (2) - whistle hed 02:57:675 (1) - delete whistle
10. 03:03:905 (3) - whistle end
11. 03:17:405 (7) - same NC

rew0825 wrote:

Hi from my mod requeue

[ Nardo's Muzukashii]

1. 01:53:752 (362) - k Retained for consistency as 00:43:598 (128) -

[ Nardo's Oni]

1. 00:51:098 (171,172) - ctrl+g kdk could fit the snare at 00:51:213 (173) - while matching the vocal pitch.
2. 01:02:636 (219) - move to 01:03:098 I think both positions are fine.
3. 01:05:521 (232) - k Nope, the vocal has the same pitch as 01:05:290 (231) -
4. 03:36:906 (182) - k same as ^

Good luck

1. 00:17:521 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Remove Clap & Finish
   during this section, the whistle should be on the 1.3 beat
2. 00:36:905 (3) - Remove Clap hed
3. 00:37:367 (1) - Remove Clap end
4. 00:44:059 (2,3,4,7,8) - Remove Clap all
5. 00:46:136 - 01:11:982 - during this section, the soft-default whistle should be on the 1.3 beat
   Where there is hit Finish as it is
6. 00:59:982 (3,4,7,8) - Remove Clap
7. 01:06:213 (1) - Remove Finish meddle end
8. 01:07:367 (2) - Remove Clap
9. 01:26:752 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Remove Clap
   during this section, the whistle should be on the 1.3 beat
10. 01:33:675 (4) -is fine though
11. 01:41:521 (2) - add finish hed
12. 01:44:521 (1) - remove clap all
13. 01:47:059 (4) - Remove Clap hed
14. 01:54:213 (2) - Remove Clap middle
15. 01:55:367 (3) - Remove Clap hed
16. 01:56:059 (5,6) - Remove Clap
17. 01:56:290 - 02:22:598 - Same as 1
18. 02:02:290 (3) - add clap hed
19. 02:02:752 (4) - Remove Clap end
20. 02:03:444 (1,2) - Remove Clap
21. 02:09:675 (2) - Remove Clap end & add whistle
22. 02:10:598 (4) - add whistle
23. 02:13:829 (3) - Remove Clap
24. 02:23:059 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - during this section, the Clap should be on the 2.4 beat
25. 02:36:559 (4,5,6) - Remove Clap
26. 03:02:752 (3) - Remove Finish
27. 03:06:444 - 03:43:136 - Same as 1
28. 03:10:367 (1) - Remove Clap middle
29. 03:20:290 (4) - Remove Clap
30. 03:23:752 (7) - Remove Clap end
31. 03:28:598 (7) - Remove Clap hed&end add hed finish
32. 03:30:444 (4) - Remove Clap hed
33. 03:31:136 (1,3,6,7) - Remove Clap
34. 03:35:059 (7) - Remove Clap
35. 03:38:752 (1) - Remove Clap
36. 03:43:021 (3,4) - Remove Clap
    
    
    
37. 01:27:213 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - This arrangement is not possible in this rhythm I strongly recommend a change of sound
38. 01:50:521 (5,3) - It is difficult to this rate change also read in discomfort...Another Pattern
39. 03:17:059 (2,3,4) - 1/4 music 03:17:175 - add note

ReallyFastCat wrote:

Hey! From my modding queue!

[General]
- Set AudioLeadIn to 500 in every .osu file it's already good now
- Set slider tick rate to 2 (all diffs)

[Normal]
00:44:752 (3,1) - Bad overlap it's stil readable
00:57:213 (2) - A normal curve would be better here (Just remove the red anchor) okay...
02:23:521 (3,4,5) - Why change the spacing here? oh sorry.. thanks
03:18:444 (2,3) - Blanket these okay
03:33:444 (3,4) - Improve blanket done

[Insane]
00:19:827 (3) - Not snapped Oh my... Thanks
01:00:444 (5,6,7,8,1) - Move (8) to x323 y299 Alright
01:02:521 (5,6) - Blanket fixed
01:03:213 (7,8) - ^ ]done
01:56:059 (5,6,1) - Make this a straight line ]fixed
02:54:213 (3,4) - Stack these? The spacing is really confusing right now ]alright


Good luck with the map! ^o^

Xelasto wrote:

Hello! from my modding queue Hi~

Normal

00:30:905 (1) - This is a very uneven blanket Ah, yes. Fixed
00:37:367 (2) - Blanket 1 better i don't know but.. i think i intended to do this.
00:39:675 (2,3) - Copy 3 of 2 it's already a copied slider
00:55:367 (5) - Blanket better done
00:59:290 (4) - ^ it's already well blanketed
00:59:982 (1) - No NC this is for matching with the vocal
01:03:213 (4) - Blanket better Already fine for me
01:15:213 (1) - No NC NCed so player can know that these objects are stacked
02:01:367 (4) - Move the middle point up 2 this one already fine.. i think
02:17:752 (7) - NC here, not on the slider same reason with the previous NC mod
03:08:060 (3) - Blanket better doing this intentional
03:30:675 (2) - ^ already fine
03:53:291 (1,3) - Overlap these 2 fixed

Quite a good difficulty, just some blanket problems

Sorry. I'm not going to mod insane It's okay~

Very great map. Awesome use of sliders. Good luck on your map. Sorry I didn't find much. This is a very high quality map.

ts8zs wrote:

My earphones was broken,maybe there are some nonsense in it.
offset 1813(-16) This will be considered by Shurelia.
[Nardo's Oni]
01:02:059 (215) - d k would be better since the vocal is higher-pitched than 01:01:598 (214) -
01:08:982 (248) - k d could result in a better emphasis of the next higher-pitched note at 01:09:444 (249) -
02:45:098 (651) - del I followed the guitar sound there.
03:22:252 (112) - k d would sound better imo.
[Nardo's Muzukashii]
01:41:290 (317) - del? fixed

some nonsense

02:29:290 (491,492,493) - ddd fixed
02:31:598 (499,500,501) - d k Retained to map the background sound there.
03:16:713 (66,67) - del? fixed in an alternative way.
03:25:136 (98,99,100) - k k fixed
03:39:906 (153,154) - k k fixed

255,144,66197,2,0,B|296:144|296:144|336:192|392:176,1,140
368,96,66889,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,116,67120,2,0,P|469:182|449:248,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
388,308,67813,6,8,P|319:308|253:285,1,140,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

448,256,114197,2,0,B|448:224|448:224|480:172|441:119,1,140

200,224,122274,2,0,B|235:194|228:137|228:137|254:85,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

414,319,140736,6,0,B|346:307|346:307|284:365|218:313,1,210,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

231,358,188044,2,0,B|271:329|262:270|262:270|286:228,1,140

336,304,194505,2,0,B|276:305|251:259|251:259|204:244,1,140

24,296,221274,2,0,B|64:348|128:328|128:328|168:328,1,140

288,204,142120,6,0,P|256:152|164:136,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,240,142813,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,344,143043,2,0,P|104:308|80:240,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

472,32,155505,6,8,B|432:72|452:124|452:124|472:176|440:220,1,200

pkhg wrote:

hii Shurelia =w=/ Hi pkhg <3

[General]
Your current BG is 1365x768, so here's the new one in 1366x768. Yeah, the people even complain about these little things :/ Ah, yes.. Thanks for the correction!

[Normal]

00:22:582 (1) - remove nc okay
00:30:889 (1,2) - swap nc and remove from this 00:32:274 (1) - okay~
00:38:274 (3,4,1) - I dont recommend stacks on easiest diffs, isnt hard but its up to you :3 Removed (4) , because it's easier XD
00:41:966 (1,2) - - swap nc, 00:43:813 (1,2) - same and remove from here 00:45:428 (1) - done
01:06:197 (4,5,6) - better blanket looks better , Thanks

255,144,66197,2,0,B|296:144|296:144|336:192|392:176,1,140
368,96,66889,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,116,67120,2,0,P|469:182|449:248,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
388,308,67813,6,8,P|319:308|253:285,1,140,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

01:11:736 (1,1) - You need around 750ms after a spinner to place a note. More info here >wo ah.. yes.. Fixed , Thanks
01:41:043 (1) - clap on tail instead of head Should be a "Finish", but fixed XD
01:48:428 (3,4,1) - you know xD but remember, its up to you same XD
01:54:197 (2) - better blanket fixed!, Thanks

448,256,114197,2,0,B|448:224|448:224|480:172|441:119,1,140

01:52:120 (1) - same as 00:41:966 (1,2) :3 done
02:02:274 (6) - better shape done

200,224,122274,2,0,B|235:194|228:137|228:137|254:85,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

02:03:197 (7,1) - maybe you can unstack these done :3
02:20:736 (1,2) - better blanket done

414,319,140736,6,0,B|346:307|346:307|284:365|218:313,1,210,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

03:02:274 (4) - Improve the shape fixed
03:08:044 (3) - blanket fixed, Thanks

231,358,188044,2,0,B|271:329|262:270|262:270|286:228,1,140

03:13:351 (7) - up to you I'm keeping this one ><
03:14:505 (2) - blanket fixed~

336,304,194505,2,0,B|276:305|251:259|251:259|204:244,1,140

03:17:505 (1) - move the 2nd slider point 2 grids left done XD
03:28:582 (2) - finish on head added :3
03:30:659 (2) - rotate -11o from selection centre Thanks you
03:32:274 (1,2) - (2) is too far from (1) ah.. right. Fixed thanks
03:38:274 - feels empty, maybe you can do something nice here :3 done XD hope you like it
03:39:659 (1) - finish on head added
03:41:274 (4) - better blanket Fixed

24,296,221274,2,0,B|64:348|128:328|128:328|168:328,1,140

03:56:505 (1,3) - swap nc fixed, Thanks

[Insane]

00:37:351 (1) - remove nc okay~
00:42:197 (2) - split into circle + 1/2 slider okay
01:17:274 (2) - delete the middle point and add it again, right now looks like a really old slider xD fixed
01:38:274 (4) - add nc, here too 01:38:966 (3) - done
01:41:505 (2) - finish on head added
02:01:351 (1) - remove nc done
02:03:197 (9) - move to x204 y228 done
02:17:966 (8,9) - (8) is too close to (9) fixed
02:35:505 (1) - better shape done

472,32,155505,6,8,B|432:72|452:124|452:124|472:176|440:220,1,200

03:16:120 (1,2) - dont sacrifice rhythm for a pattern :c o. okay ><
03:31:813 (4,5,6,7,1) - make it curved or linear. Right now its a bit ugly ;w; fixed
03:40:351 (3) - move the 2nd slider point to x424 y192 done
03:42:197 (1) - move the 2nd red point 1 grid down fixed

That's all :3

Good luck Shurelia >w<

1. 00:16:582 - Coba kurangi volume di sini untuk mengikuti musiknya jadi 50%.
2. 00:12:428 (4,1) - 1.04x DS? Gak nampak sih bedanya, emang, cuma kalau bisa ya dibikin konsisten spacing-nya...
3. 00:30:889 - 00:31:351 - Coba pake inherited timing point dengan volume 55 sama 60 persen di dua tempat ini (secara berurutan). Alasannya sama seperti pada saran pertama.
4. 01:04:120 - Kenapa clap ini gak terus dipake aja di white tick ke-2 dan ke-4 tiap birama sepanjang kiai, mengingat pas dengan instrumen yang dimainkan?
5. 01:41:043 - Coba pake finish Soft di sini, dan pake finish Normal di 01:41:043 dengan volume yang direndahkan (50% deh)? Kombinasi dua finish ini pas untuk menekankan bunyi cymbal yang ada.
6. 01:55:351 (4) - Ini sedikit bersentuhan dengan 01:53:505 (2) (biarpun cuma nampak sesaat waktu bermain, tapi tetep aja terasa sih), jadi coba pindahin ke (68,228)? Dan coba pakai finish sama clap dengan volume yang lebih rendah dari biasanya untuk mengikuti instrumen yang dimainkan di sini?
7. 03:15:428 - Err bentar, kok gak pake finish? (Tahu sendiri lah kenapa saya ngomong gini.)
8. 03:42:428 - ^

1. Melihat SV yang dipakai dan intensitas objek di sini, coba pakai AR4,5?
2. 00:04:120 (4) - Pindahin ke (252,324) biar spacing lebih konsisten di sini?
3. 00:12:889 (8) - Err kenapa pake finish? Di sini rasanya terlalu sunyi buat ditambahin satu finish...
4. 00:44:736 (3,1) - Slider (3) nimpa (1) waktu bermain, dan ini kelihatan gak rapi banget. Coba deh pindahin ke mana gitu biar ini nggak terjadi.
5. 00:47:043 (2) - Kenapa tiba-tiba ada slider yang kayak gini? Melihat 00:46:120 (1,3) yang bentuknya lengkung biasa aja, kenapa nggak ini juga biar flow lebih bagus dan gak terkesan random?
6. 00:52:120 (6,1) - Inkonsistensi dalam spacing.
7. 00:58:582 (3,4) - ^
8. 01:15:659 (1) - Ini gak perlu NC kok. Gak ada alasan buat nambahin itu di sini. Dan kenapa ada clap di seluruh slider, bukan cuma di ekornya?
9. 01:26:735 (8) - Eh, kok ini gak ada finish...
10. 01:32:274 (1,2) - 1,08x DS? Default-nya 1,2x kan...
11. 01:35:505 (2,3) - ...Ini tahu sendiri lah ya kenapa. (Pokoknya perhatiin aja masalah spacing dari awal sampai akhir di map ini.)
12. 01:41:505 - Sama dengan 01:26:735 (8). (Masalah cymbal yang gak ditandain finish juga tolong diperhatiin sendiri yah; mod ini bakal kepanjangan dan membosankan kalau ditulis satu-satu.)
13. 02:20:736 (1,2) - Blanket di sini masih kurang sempurna tuh o.o
14. 03:07:351 (2,3) - ^
15. 02:51:659 - 03:02:736 - Bagian ini terasa... aneh aja dimainin. Peletakan dan bentuk slider kadang terasa random dan... ya, agak susah sih kalau mau dideskripsikan secara detil. Coba deh bagian ini diperlambat SV-nya dan dirapiin desainnya.
16. 03:11:505 (4,6) - Gak sekalian dibikin simetris aja biar kelihatan lebih rapi?
17. 03:15:428 - Ah, ini serius gak mau di-map? Terasa kosong banget sih kalau dibiarin gak di-map...

1. 01:55:351 (4) - Why no finish to emphasize the cymbal here?
2. 01:59:505 (4,5,1) - Inconsistent spacing.
3. 02:29:274 (5,6,1,2,3) - ^ (The spacing is inconsistent while playing due to the automatic stacking. Just move 02:29:505 (1,2,3) to (183,354) to fix this.)
4. 02:56:966 - Add a whistle to accentuate the piano note?
5. 03:01:813 - ^

1. 00:07:813 (5,6,7,8,9) - Flow di sini agak aneh karena gerakan di 00:07:813 (5,6,7) yang terkesan lurus tapi dikit membelok, diikuti dengan 00:08:505 (7,8,9) yang di (8,9)-nya terasa kurang natural karena arah gerakan dari (8) ke kepala (9) tidak sesuai dengan lengkungan pada slider (9) itu sendiri.
2. 00:11:966 (7,8,9,10) - Flow pattern ini juga terbilang kurang nyaman karena gerakan kursor yang diperluin. Kasusnya mirip 00:07:813 (5,6,7) lah.
3. 00:16:120 (9,1,2,1,2,3,4) - (9) ke (1) yang pertama mestinya bisa dibikin jump untuk menekankan instrumen yang keras itu. Terus buat (2,3,4), kenapa harus tiba-tiba spacing-nya jadi gede? Dan kenapa perlu nggak konsisten seperti ini? Flow juga terasa terlalu lurus sehingga rasanya kaku ketika dimainkan.
4. 00:23:043 (7,8,9,10,1) - Ini bisa dikatakan menjebak banget karena spacing secara visual terlihat sama tapi ternyata dari (8) ke (9) waktunya lebih sedikit daripada (7) - (8).
5. 00:46:813 (3,4,5) - Coba deh minimal (4) dibikin agar posisinya tepat di tengah-tengah lingkaran (3) dan (5). Sekarang kesannya kurang rapi dan tidak begitu enak dilihat.
6. 00:58:582 (4,5,1) - Melihat posisi (1)... Ini kesannya kurang tempat sehingga (1) diletakkan sebagaimana yang terlihat sekarang, padahal sebenarnya masih banyak ruang untuk dipakai toh?

Hinsvar wrote:

o/

*Bolded = Unrankable or very, very strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.

>Normal

1. Melihat SV yang dipakai dan intensitas objek di sini, coba pakai AR4,5? Hmm.. Ntar saya pertimbangkan dulu deh..
2. 00:04:120 (4) - Pindahin ke (252,324) biar spacing lebih konsisten di sini? yes.. oh my.. why there's so many inconsistent at this diff ;;
3. 00:12:889 (8) - Err kenapa pake finish? Di sini rasanya terlalu sunyi buat ditambahin satu finish... changed to whistle then?
4. 00:44:736 (3,1) - Slider (3) nimpa (1) waktu bermain, dan ini kelihatan gak rapi banget. Coba deh pindahin ke mana gitu biar ini nggak terjadi. fixed
5. 00:47:043 (2) - Kenapa tiba-tiba ada slider yang kayak gini? Melihat 00:46:120 (1,3) yang bentuknya lengkung biasa aja, kenapa nggak ini juga biar flow lebih bagus dan gak terkesan random? hmm... yeah.. changed.
6. 00:52:120 (6,1) - Inkonsistensi dalam spacing. done
7. 00:58:582 (3,4) - ^ done
8. 01:15:659 (1) - Ini gak perlu NC kok. Gak ada alasan buat nambahin itu di sini. Dan kenapa ada clap di seluruh slider, bukan cuma di ekornya? kinda not know what this supposed to be mean.. I'll pm you later.
9. 01:26:735 (8) - Eh, kok ini gak ada finish... added
10. 01:32:274 (1,2) - 1,08x DS? Default-nya 1,2x kan... fixed
11. 01:35:505 (2,3) - ...Ini tahu sendiri lah ya kenapa. (Pokoknya perhatiin aja masalah spacing dari awal sampai akhir di map ini.) done
12. 01:41:505 - Sama dengan 01:26:735 (8). (Masalah cymbal yang gak ditandain finish juga tolong diperhatiin sendiri yah; mod ini bakal kepanjangan dan membosankan kalau ditulis satu-satu.) done, and okay~
13. 02:20:736 (1,2) - Blanket di sini masih kurang sempurna tuh o.o done
14. 03:07:351 (2,3) - ^done, i think...
15. 02:51:659 - 03:02:736 - Bagian ini terasa... aneh aja dimainin. Peletakan dan bentuk slider kadang terasa random dan... ya, agak susah sih kalau mau dideskripsikan secara detil. Coba deh bagian ini diperlambat SV-nya dan dirapiin desainnya. udah cukup enak sih buat saya, dan penempatannya juga gara2 dipaksa untuk mempertahankan konsitensi Distancenya.. tapi ntar saya pikirkan lagi..
16. 03:11:505 (4,6) - Gak sekalian dibikin simetris aja biar kelihatan lebih rapi? buat ngalihin ujung slidernya ke object selanjutnya.
17. 03:15:428 - Ah, ini serius gak mau di-map? Terasa kosong banget sih kalau dibiarin gak di-map... okay..

Buat Insane... overall bener-bener bisa dibikin lebih baik lagi. Yang sekarang secara teknis rankable, tapi design sama flow masih bisa diperbagus. Beberapa contoh bagian yang bisa dipermak:

1. 00:07:813 (5,6,7,8,9) - Flow di sini agak aneh karena gerakan di 00:07:813 (5,6,7) yang terkesan lurus tapi dikit membelok, diikuti dengan 00:08:505 (7,8,9) yang di (8,9)-nya terasa kurang natural karena arah gerakan dari (8) ke kepala (9) tidak sesuai dengan lengkungan pada slider (9) itu sendiri. done
2. 00:11:966 (7,8,9,10) - Flow pattern ini juga terbilang kurang nyaman karena gerakan kursor yang diperluin. Kasusnya mirip 00:07:813 (5,6,7) lah. done
3. 00:16:120 (9,1,2,1,2,3,4) - (9) ke (1) yang pertama mestinya bisa dibikin jump untuk menekankan instrumen yang keras itu. Terus buat (2,3,4), kenapa harus tiba-tiba spacing-nya jadi gede? Dan kenapa perlu nggak konsisten seperti ini? Flow juga terasa terlalu lurus sehingga rasanya kaku ketika dimainkan. okay
4. 00:23:043 (7,8,9,10,1) - Ini bisa dikatakan menjebak banget karena spacing secara visual terlihat sama tapi ternyata dari (8) ke (9) waktunya lebih sedikit daripada (7) - (8). fixed
5. 00:46:813 (3,4,5) - Coba deh minimal (4) dibikin agar posisinya tepat di tengah-tengah lingkaran (3) dan (5). Sekarang kesannya kurang rapi dan tidak begitu enak dilihat. iya benar.. XD, makasih
6. 00:58:582 (4,5,1) - Melihat posisi (1)... Ini kesannya kurang tempat sehingga (1) diletakkan sebagaimana yang terlihat sekarang, padahal sebenarnya masih banyak ruang untuk dipakai toh? mudah2an lebih baik sekarang

Normal juga masih bisa di-improve dari segi desain dan flow, walaupun udah tergolong lumayan bagus bila dibandingkan dengan Normal.

Overall map ini oke-oke aja, cuma Normal sama Insane sendiri masih bisa dibikin lebih baik

Good luck!

Laurier wrote:

yo yo

General
Clean

Normal
00:14:043 - you should add note. the space is breaking the rhythm. よーし
00:37:351 (2) - you missed blanket. please move to more bottom. はい
00:39:659 (2) - correct this curve. http://puu.sh/eP5er/acd3ce05de.jpg わかったわ
01:26:735 (8) - add finish はい
01:32:274 (1) - remove NC from follow the your pattern. done
01:55:582 (1) - dont need NC. you didnt NC to 00:45:428 (3,4,5) - fixed
02:01:351 (4) - same as 00:39:659 (2) - はい
02:07:351 - why partition kiai at here. 02:10:120 - should be partition at here. done
03:28:582 - same thing as above. done


Insane

00:23:966 (1) - why don't use slow slider ? its same sounds pattern as 00:16:582 (1) - yes you should keep to pattern. done
00:56:505 (9) - add note here. for example stack on head of 00:55:120 (5) - done
01:11:736 (4,5) - please make steream. the sound is fit to them.いいよ
01:38:736 (3) - add note with follow the strong beat.
01:43:120 (6) - add NC
[*]01:45:428 (10) - ^
[*]01:46:351 (1) - remove NC
[*]01:47:043 (1) - add NC added all
01:58:582 (3,4,5,6,7) - please try this pattern. it will more fit the song. http://puu.sh/ePazJ/52a92564c9.jpg http://puu.sh/ePaBD/88c2c2b2ad.jpg Okay
02:27:659 (1) - it should make more jump as 02:27:197 (3,4) - maybe move 02:27:659 (1) - to stack on 02:28:120 (2) - it will be better.done
03:01:813 (1,2,3) - make a triangle ? Looks will be the better http://puu.sh/ePb6f/eccf7a106f.jpg done
please correct kiai if you corrected in normal.

Hinsvar wrote:

o/

*Bolded = Unrankable or very, very strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.

pkhg wrote:

hii Shurelia =w=/

[Solar's Easy]

00:17:505 (2) - from this to 00:30:428 (4) - every 4 white ticks, you can add a soft-whistle, like Shurelia did on Insane. Use 35% volume in this section too. (I have my own volume pattern here so..)
00:31:813 (2) - forgot a clap here~ (oh right, fixed)
00:55:813 - to 00:59:966 - you didn't put claps, do it every 2 white ticks like the previous parts :3 (done~)
01:02:274 (2) - 01:03:197 (4) - add claps (fixed)
01:09:197 (2) - make it 1/1, so it's end will be here 01:09:659 - add clap on tail if you do it (fixed)
03:41:966 (4) - finish on tail, not head (fixed with my own way)

That's all :3

Good luck Shurelia >w<

>Solar's Easy

1. 00:16:582 - Coba kurangi volume di sini untuk mengikuti musiknya jadi 50%. (woke)
2. 00:12:428 (4,1) - 1.04x DS? Gak nampak sih bedanya, emang, cuma kalau bisa ya dibikin konsisten spacing-nya... (woops)
3. 00:30:889 - 00:31:351 - Coba pake inherited timing point dengan volume 55 sama 60 persen di dua tempat ini (secara berurutan). Alasannya sama seperti pada saran pertama. (fixed)
4. 01:04:120 - Kenapa clap ini gak terus dipake aja di white tick ke-2 dan ke-4 tiap birama sepanjang kiai, mengingat pas dengan instrumen yang dimainkan? (wdw ketinggalan maap)
5. 01:41:043 - Coba pake finish Soft di sini, dan pake finish Normal di 01:41:043 dengan volume yang direndahkan (50% deh)? Kombinasi dua finish ini pas untuk menekankan bunyi cymbal yang ada. (saya masih seneng cara saya sih mz)
6. 01:55:351 (4) - Ini sedikit bersentuhan dengan 01:53:505 (2) (biarpun cuma nampak sesaat waktu bermain, tapi tetep aja terasa sih), jadi coba pindahin ke (68,228)? Dan coba pakai finish sama clap dengan volume yang lebih rendah dari biasanya untuk mengikuti instrumen yang dimainkan di sini? (fixed)
7. 03:15:428 - Err bentar, kok gak pake finish? (Tahu sendiri lah kenapa saya ngomong gini.) (fixed, kebiasaan lupa hhe)
8. 03:42:428 - ^

Laurier wrote:

yo

Solar's Easy
00:55:120 (3) - how about make a blanket like this ? http://puu.sh/eP3wP/355f9ba025.jpg (fixed)
01:02:274 (2,3) - the flow is seems bad. move to more bottom because the aim is going to down. http://puu.sh/eP3JL/b89e0f5ec7.jpg (いい提案です）
01:09:197 (2,3) - the pattern is a bit hard to beginners. delete 3 and makes 2 is more longer. maybe good to beginners if you using more longer slider. (fixed with my own way)
01:40:582 (4) - I don't think to good about overlap like this. please move to more top. (fixed)

bananannian wrote:

Hi! From my forum NM/M4M taiko queue.
I am pretty thorough, so don't feel bad if I point out a lot of issues. A lot of times they are just my opinions, so feel free to object to them. :3
After looking through my mod, would you mind taking the time to check out my taiko set? <3

Btw, I don't know how to make bpm/offset/scroll speed changes, so don't ask me those pls. XD

d = don
k = katsu
D = big don
K = big katsu


[General]
Nothing of note except I like your mapping style ^.^

[Nardo's Muzukashii]
00:19:351 (52) - change to d, same note on melody It's a good idea. But I would prefer following the noticeable instrument with k.
00:23:736 - add k, follow melody It would be better to leave it blank since the music is rather soft.
00:26:736 (70) - change to d, same as 00:19:351 same as 00:19:351 (52) -
00:31:120 - add k, same as 00:23:736 same as 00:23:736 -
00:50:505 (146) - change to k, same note on melody Mapping it as d could emphasize the higher-pitched vocal at 00:50:966 (147,148) - in a way better.
00:58:120 (169) - move to 00:57:889, personally I like this offbeat pattern more, just a suggestion Retained to map the beat at 00:58:120 -
01:05:274 (195) - change to k, same as 00:50:505 Similar to 00:50:505 (146) - , d would be fine imo.
01:29:967 (272) - change to d, lower note on melody (after some thought kkd sounds fine to me as well, but I personally like dkd more) As vocal pitch becomes higher, k would fit well.
01:33:889 - add d, follow melody same as 00:23:736 -
02:08:505 (400) - change to k, mapping k as melody would be better, 02:08:967 (402) can also be k, but the pause right after that note makes d a valid choice as well Remain unchanged for the sake of pattern consistency as the first kiai.
02:20:967 (447,448) - change to KD, to better match melody It would be better to use k D when prioritizing the vocal pitch. However, the current pattern could fit the strong cymbal at 02:21:197 -
02:33:659 (493) - add d, match guitar Retained for snare consistency.
03:29:967 (115,116) - change to dk, latter note is paired with a higher pitch in melody, making it k also creates anticipation for the following bar's dkdk pattern As they have the same pitch, k d would be better for maintaining snare consistency.


[Nardo's Oni]
I saw your comments on my previous mod of one of your GD/taiko sets, and I did know that star ratings are only guidelines for map difficulties... Still. Being a bad player as I am, I still can't associate the word "Oni" with this level of difficulty Consider increasing star rating to 3.75, add some 1/4 patterns in non-kiai time, offbeat patterns? Just my suggestion. Again, I won't add notes to pursue a higher level icon since I map according to the vocal, drums and the music.

The following items are things that aren't necessary but does fit in the map and could be used to raise difficulty.
00:17:736 - add d, match melody Similar to Muzukashii, it would be better to have a lower note density in this session since the music is soft.
00:23:736 - add k, ^ ^
00:25:120 - add d, ^ ^
00:38:389 - add k, piano plays a louder chord at 00:38:274, could be used to signify that The triplet formed would be a bit unnatural because of the absence of vocal and stronger instruments.
00:55:351 - add kk, follow 00:47:966 (156,157,158) I found it a bit weird because of the different vocal at 00:54:659 (186,187,188) - . It makes sense, but currently I would like to keep the pattern as it is.
02:36:197 (605,606,607,608,609,610,611) - change run to ddkdkkd, match melody more and make onbeat d As the vocal at 02:36:659 (609) - is lower-pitched than 02:36:428 (607) - , the current one would be fine.

Other suggestions:
00:34:928 (103) - move to 00:34:466, match previous use of ddk 1/4 pattern Retained for a better variety of patterns.
00:41:851 - add d, match previous use of ddk 1/4 pattern I prefer keeping it for consistency as the previous 00:38:043 (114,115) -
00:46:120 (148) - change to K, hitsound (cymbals) would note the beginning of the chorus, also match melody pitch D would be better since the vocal pitch is not high enough to use K imo.
01:05:620 (233,234) - change to dk, match melody It's a actually a good idea. But considering the use of dkddk at 03:36:890 (182,183,184,185,186) - , kd here could make the parts more coherent imo.
01:08:966 (248) - change to k, match melody pitch d would be better since its pitch is lower than 01:09:428 (249) -
01:27:659 and 01:31:351 and 01:35:043 and 01:38:736 - I feel it's quite weird to have very audible snare sounds here and not map those... Hmm... I am not sure what to do though, I will think about it more. I prefer focusing on vocal more when the music is calm.
01:45:082 (370) - move to 01:44:620, same as 00:34:928 (103) same as 00:34:928 (103) -
01:58:120 (433,434) - change to d k, match melody better Retained for hitsound consistency as 00:47:966 (156,158) -
02:05:505 (470,471) - change to d k, ^ ^
02:16:351 (522,523,524) - change to kdd, match melody, as well as making onbeat d dkk could follow the stretched vocal in a way better.
02:22:813 - add k, this pause is kinda weird in my opinion, and there is another break at 02:23:966 The break is quite natural since the vocal starts again at 02:23:043 -
02:50:043 (1) - shorten spinner, and add a note at 02:51:428. The note is not really necessary since the music of the next session is the softest.
03:16:351 (76) - change run from this

to this

as it would better match melody (with 03:16:813 and 03:17:274 changing to k) The current pattern could follow both the vocal and snares nicely.


Very nice map set, I admire your taiko mapping style! Hope you find this mod helpful, and good luck beatmapping!

Jemmmmy wrote:

soft-sliderslide 1~5 are the same, keep one and del the rest
[normal]
pls recheck the blanket which include this slider shape 01:23:505 (1) - ok
00:12:659 (7,8) - fixed
00:21:659 - I'm going to keep the current one
00:37:351 (2) - decrease angle done
00:47:043 (2) - increase angle done
01:09:428 (3) - remake this slider done
01:47:505 (2) - done
03:35:966 (1) - remake this slider fixed
03:45:890 (4,5) - blanket done
03:48:197 (2,3,4) - done

[insane]
00:08:966 (8) - done
00:15:889 (8,9) - blanket fixed
00:23:966 (1) - why use slow slider, can't hear anything different maybe for the start of new slow rhythm? XD
00:37:351 (4) - ctrl+g done
00:38:043 (5,6,7) - not in straight line fixed
01:02:736 (6,8) - bad overlap fixed
01:04:582 (1) - remake the slider done
01:06:197 (1,2) - no need to use 3/4 slider done
01:08:736 (2,4) - snap fixed
01:24:197 (2,3,4) - check distance fixed
01:29:274 (7,8,9) - ^ fixed
01:32:274 (8) - NC ok
01:34:120 - to 01:37:813 - a little bit messy fixed
01:54:889 (1) - remake the slider done
02:03:659 (3) - ^ done
02:11:736 (2,4) - use same shape done
03:05:736 - fixed
03:11:736 (5) - more angle fixed
03:16:235 (2,4) - del ok
03:40:351 (3) - look bad fixed

No Dap wrote:

one with the underscore is not used I think

Jemmmmy wrote:

[easy]
00:38:736 (1,2,3) - (fixed)
02:19:351 (2,3,4) - (not much difference so no thanks)

1. 00:29:043 d to show emphasis on the next high pitch k
2. 01:39:197 ^
3. 02:25:582 k
4. 02:40:582 d to emphasize next k
   

1. Seems fine
2. 我不喜歡雞蛋裡挑骨頭
   

mliencheng wrote:

Short taiko mod. Request from forum queue

I'll only mention points where I feel important to change , since I don't like changing the map style of others ~


Nardo's Muzukashii]

1. 00:29:043 d to show emphasis on the next high pitch k As 00:29:043 (77) - has a higher vocal pitch than 00:28:120 (74) - , k would be reflect it in a way better.
2. 01:39:197 ^ same as ^
3. 02:25:582 k I think d would be better since the vocal has a similar pitch as 02:25:813 (467) -
4. 02:40:582 d to emphasize next k fixed

[ Nardo's Oni]

1. Seems fine
2. 我不喜歡雞蛋裡挑骨頭 謝謝

ByBy_ChAn wrote:

From


Here's my mod

asdf - nazi or suggestion
asdf - unrankable issue

General

1. You have 133 errors ! Check the AiMod It's only a common issue
2. Enable widescreen support since there's a cute SB It'll give a bug if i enable it

Insane

1. 00:02:736(4)- Place it to 342|159 for a better pattern : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2807549 Alright, done
2. 00:05:505(11)- NC should be here so swap NC here and remove NC from next object it's to make Stack more readable
3. 00:07:813(5)- Incosistent spacing . Here you use 2.0x DS so it should be 1.6x DS to have a consitent spacing for whole pattern okay
4. 00:09:005(8)- I don't like how looks (8)- . It looks weird . Try this instead : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2807564 done
5. 00:11:274(5,6)- There's a nazi blanket no ? Try this : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2807572
6. 00:12:889(10)- Swap NC same reason
7. 00:14:966(5,6)- This blanket looks nazi but weird . Here's a unnazi blanket which improve the flow ;D : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2807584
8. 00:20:736(1,2)- The pattern looks kinda weird . Why you not try this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2807592 ? It will improve the flow and the cursor movement done
9. 00:22:120(5)- Add whistle and remove clap cuz there whistle sounds better then clap done
10. 00:26:966(2)- Place it to 330|49 cuz there's a incosistent spacing done
11. 00:33:659(7)- This note is not stacked well with 00:35:274(4)- . Place it to 392|112 to stack well done
12. 00:52:120(6,7)- In my opinion , the pattern looks weird . Try this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2807623 done
13. 01:03:197(7,8)- Same ~~ the pattern . I don't like the placement of the sliders . : Try this instead : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2807635 it'll give a bad overlap with the next object
14. 01:14:736(1,2)- The flow looks weird cuz the pattern . Take this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2807643 done
15. 01:27:659(3)- Ctrl+g for a better flow alright
16. 01:36:428(9)- Ctrl+g pls ^^^
17. 01:38:736(3)- Add whistle for consistency with 01:37:813(3)- added
18. 01:39:197(5)- Remove whistle cuz it doesn't fit the calm beat better done
19. 01:39:428(1)- The slider placed here doesn't fit well the vocals and the instruments . Place it to 01:39:659()- (white tick)- and add a note there to follow the vocals and instruments much better done
20. 01:40:466(2)- This note is dezoriented and it could ruin the flow . Place it to 97|230 to allign better with next 2 notes changed by my own
21. 01:47:043(1)- Ctrl+g maybe ? okay
22. 01:57:659(1)- Remove NC cuz no new vocals done
23. 01:59:505(7)- Here you use 1.6x DS but is an incosistent spacing . Use 1.3x DS instead to make the spacing consistent ;3 fixed
24. 02:31:120(3,4,5)- (4)- and (5)- doesn't fit well the drums rhythm . Place (4)- to 02:31:582()- and (5)- to 02:31:813()- but be careful ! you should remove the note after (5)- done
25. 02:54:428(4)- Remove whistle cuz it doesn't really fit the downbeat agree
26. 03:47:043(7)- Place it to 144|152 for a better cursor movement done

Well , that's all for Insane :3 But try to get more mods for Insane cuz there are some weird patterns and uncosistent NCs .

Call me back ~ Uuups sorry I'm not BN yet . Good Luck ~