hii Shurelia =w=/
[General]
Your current BG is 136
5x768, so
here's the new one in 1366x768. Yeah, the people even complain about these little things :/
[Solar's Easy]
00:17:505 (2) - from this to 00:30:428 (4) - every 4 white ticks, you can add a soft-whistle, like Shurelia did on Insane. Use 35% volume in this section too.
00:31:813 (2) - forgot a clap here~
00:55:813 - to 00:59:966 - you didn't put claps, do it every 2 white ticks like the previous parts :3
01:02:274 (2) - 01:03:197 (4) - add claps
01:09:197 (2) - make it 1/1, so it's end will be here 01:09:659 - add clap on tail if you do it
03:41:966 (4) - finish on tail, not head
[Normal]
00:22:582 (1) - remove nc
00:30:889 (1,2) - swap nc and remove from this 00:32:274 (1) -
00:38:274 (3,4,1) - I dont recommend stacks on easiest diffs, isnt hard but its up to you :3
00:41:966 (1,2) - - swap nc, 00:43:813 (1,2) - same and remove from here 00:45:428 (1) -
01:06:197 (4,5,6) - better blanket
255,144,66197,2,0,B|296:144|296:144|336:192|392:176,1,140
368,96,66889,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,116,67120,2,0,P|469:182|449:248,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
388,308,67813,6,8,P|319:308|253:285,1,140,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
01:11:736 (1,1) - You need around 750ms after a spinner to place a note.
More info here >wo01:41:043 (1) - clap on tail instead of head
01:48:428 (3,4,1) - you know xD but remember, its up to you
01:54:197 (2) - better blanket
448,256,114197,2,0,B|448:224|448:224|480:172|441:119,1,140
01:52:120 (1) - same as 00:41:966 (1,2) :3
02:02:274 (6) - better shape
200,224,122274,2,0,B|235:194|228:137|228:137|254:85,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
02:03:197 (7,1) - maybe you can unstack these
02:20:736 (1,2) - better blanket
414,319,140736,6,0,B|346:307|346:307|284:365|218:313,1,210,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
03:02:274 (4) - Improve the shape
03:08:044 (3) - blanket
231,358,188044,2,0,B|271:329|262:270|262:270|286:228,1,140
03:13:351 (7) - up to you
03:14:505 (2) - blanket
336,304,194505,2,0,B|276:305|251:259|251:259|204:244,1,140
03:17:505 (1) - move the 2nd slider point 2 grids left
03:28:582 (2) - finish on head
03:30:659 (2) - rotate -11º from selection centre
03:32:274 (1,2) - (2) is too far from (1)
03:38:274 - feels empty, maybe you can do something nice here :3
03:39:659 (1) - finish on head
03:41:274 (4) - better blanket
24,296,221274,2,0,B|64:348|128:328|128:328|168:328,1,140
03:56:505 (1,3) - swap nc
[Kanari's Hard]
00:17:505 (3) - rotate 5º from selection centre also you can easily ignore ds to do this
http://puu.sh/eESy5/e817cae34f.jpg00:07:582 - 00:08:043 - delete those greenlines, I dont see the point on lowering volume for that whistle. Add a finish if you wanna use them xD
00:24:197 - add a greenline with 40% volume, you forgot it
00:30:889 (3,4,5,1) - this may be confusing. Move (3) elsewhere :3
00:35:043 (1,2) - - you know. Around x137 y92
00:55:697 (1,2) - swap nc
01:39:197 (3) - nc here, might help a bit to read :3
01:40:582 (1,2,3,4,5) - it's too spaced and the angle doesnt help either. Make it curved or reduce the spacing
01:43:120 (6,1,2) - you know
02:19:351 (3,4) - spacing. Move (4) to x192 y120
02:22:120 (1,2,3) - blanket
288,204,142120,6,0,P|256:152|164:136,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,240,142813,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,344,143043,2,0,P|104:308|80:240,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
02:35:736 (2,3,4,5,6) - its too hard. Delete (5) and adjust spacing
03:15:197 (4) - replace with a circle
[Insane]
00:37:351 (1) - remove nc
00:42:197 (2) - split into circle + 1/2 slider
01:17:274 (2) - delete the middle point and add it again, right now looks like a really old slider xD
01:38:274 (4) - add nc, here too 01:38:966 (3) -
01:41:505 (2) - finish on head
02:01:351 (1) - remove nc
02:03:197 (9) - move to x204 y228
02:17:966 (8,9) - (8) is too close to (9)
02:35:505 (1) - better shape
472,32,155505,6,8,B|432:72|452:124|452:124|472:176|440:220,1,200
03:16:120 (1,2) - dont sacrifice rhythm for a pattern :c
03:31:813 (4,5,6,7,1) - make it curved or linear. Right now its a bit ugly ;w;
03:40:351 (3) - move the 2nd slider point to x424 y192
03:42:197 (1) - move the 2nd red point 1 grid down
That's all :3
Good luck Shurelia >w<