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Kawada Mami - Prophecy

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Nyukai
2,431 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
Nyukai
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on jueves, 8 de enero de 2015 at 15:32:29

Artist: Kawada Mami
Title: Prophecy
Source: Shakugan no SHANA S
Tags: 灼眼のシャナ OVA Burning-Eyed Opening TV Size Sonnyc
BPM: 119
Filesize: 16205kb
Play Time: 01:35
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,35 stars, 59 notes)
  2. Insane (3,08 stars, 283 notes)
  3. Normal (1,79 stars, 110 notes)
  4. Sonnyc's Hard (2,56 stars, 175 notes)
Download: Kawada Mami - Prophecy
Download: Kawada Mami - Prophecy (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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More Shana <3
Last edited by Nyukai , edited 36 times in total.
Mint
1,611 posts
Joined February 2013
Mint

i'll give you an invisible one instead ;_;

yes moar shana o3o/
Nyukai
2,431 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
Nyukai
Don't worry dear, I appreciate your support :3

Anyway, this is pending and ready for mods! ><

Also, if someone could find a better video quality I'd be really thankful ;w;
Shushan
627 posts
Joined November 2013
Shushan
hi there i am ohad1881
easy
first of all try make it 1/2 it is much easier in ez diffs
00:31:715- it is a little bit of overlapping there with 1-move it
00:32:723-u made a slider with red dots in it-this is not recommended in ez and normal diffs- this is for the rest of the map also
00:40:791 until 00:54:404-u should put more circles and not just sliders
01:22:639-over lapped with 1
normal-
00:55:317-don't do it a new combo
01:32:014-don't do it a new combo
sonnyc's hard-
i didnt find anything wrong
insane
i couldnt find either gj
gl!
Nyukai
2,431 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
Nyukai

ohad1881 wrote:

hi there i am ohad1881
easy
first of all try make it 1/2 it is much easier in ez diffs
00:31:715- it is a little bit of overlapping there with 1-move it Changed.
00:32:723-u made a slider with red dots in it-this is not recommended in ez and normal diffs- this is for the rest of the map also As long as it's an slider and there's no need to click, it's fine
00:40:791 until 00:54:404-u should put more circles and not just sliders For this part is fine, imo.
01:22:639-over lapped with 1 Looks good for me here.
normal-
00:55:317-don't do it a new combo
01:32:014-don't do it a new combo

Both cases are stanzas, so it's fine.
sonnyc's hard-
i didnt find anything wrong
insane
i couldnt find either gj
gl!
Thanks ^^
CSLM
1,058 posts
Joined May 2013
CSLM
dejame hacer un gd plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
yo estaba planeando mapear esta cancion... me arrebataste la idea ;w;
Nyukai
2,431 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
Nyukai
Lo siento, no acepto más GDs, el mapset está listo. :(
CSLM
1,058 posts
Joined May 2013
CSLM

Inyuschan wrote:

Lo siento, no acepto más GDs, el mapset está listo. :(
;wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww;
mod incoming
GamerCL
GamerCL
Requested via PM (I've been busy to make a mod to other difficulties)

[Insane]

00:15:455 (3,7) - Hace mas circular eso, quedaría bien :D

00:48:858 - RS

01:12:807 - RS

Y eso :l

Comentario: me gusto bastante que en un upload no tengas tantos errores (por lo que vi yo o-o)

Suerte!
peggaso
46 posts
Joined October 2012
peggaso
MOD
Bueno aqui vamos, buen mapa me gusta buen bpm tu gustos son buenos pero segun yo te aconsejo que cambies el primer color no se, simplemente lo digo
Easy: mmm me parece un buen lugar para comensar a jugar 00:08:522 pero quedaria mejor esta forma https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2379363
creo que quedaria mejor cambiarlos de lugar 00:16:589, este tambien 00:24:656 ponelo en otra parte, el segundo luego del break,
quedaria mejor un poco mas abajo supongo que deberias moverlos un poco mejor con el Distance Snap :P https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2379395
este si que me gusto te quedo bastante bien \:D/ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2379402, creo que quedaria mejor esta forma no? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2379410
http://puu.sh/dGwF8/1286b270ff.jpg o3o 00:54:782
01:09:026 eh me gustaria que lo pusieras un poco mas abajo :P
esto queda feo :/ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2379425
exelente Mapset y eso es todo

Normal Mod:
cambiale la forma 00:18:606
no so lo te pido que lo cambies de lugar, tambien la forma 00:30:707
cambialo de forma y de lugar 00:41:547
de forma y lo acomodas 00:53:648
01:04:488 creo que quedaria mejor asi http://puu.sh/dGxcz/885b8ab169.jpg
lugar y forma 01:04:992, 01:28:186 lugar y forma
Finish


Hard Mod:
00:22:639 acomodalo un poco
creo que deberias cambiarle la forma acá 00:29:698
cambiale la forma 00:37:009
00:39:530 cambiale la forma
cambiale la forma 00:43:564
lugar y forma 00:47:093
00:50:370 lugar y forma
00:53:396 WHAT https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2379487
eso queda feo 01:04:992
01:22:891 forma
Lugar 01:25:917
Finish

Bueno esto es todo solo Mod hasta la Hard por que no modeo Insane y buena suerte! Nota: Algunas notas no las escuche concuerdo a la cancion quisas el bpm u Offset :P
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Nyukai
2,431 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
Nyukai
@GamerCL: No changes but thanks for your time.

@peggaso: Los colores encajan para mi gusto xD Por mi parte ningún cambio, además de que deberías haberte organizado mejor, simplemente no entendí algunas cosas porque ni me las explicas ni mencionas las notas concretas :/ Y aunque aprecio tus sugerencias, prefiero lo que hice yo.

Voy a traducir lo que dijiste del Hard ya que el mapper no habla español.

  1. 00:22:639 - Adjust it a bit.
  2. 00:29:698 - You should change the form here.
  3. 00:37:009 - Change form.
  4. 00:39:530 - Same.
  5. 00:43:564 - Same.
  6. 00:47:093 - Change form and place.
  7. 00:50:370 - Same.
  8. 00:53:396 - Well the same he said
  9. 01:04:992 - That looks ugly.
  10. 01:22:891 - Change form.
  11. 01:25:917 - Change place.
mods without any explanations ftw

Now waiting for CSLM's mod.
Kazuya
894 posts
Joined May 2013
Kazuya
Hello \o It's only ideas!

[Insane]

Use: AR 8, OD: 7 half values = makes no sense. :/

00:11:043 (3) - 00:12:051 (7) - I think, use two 1/4 slider, because it's 1/4 part! Timeline example: http://puu.sh/dGFNL/85bcc2c3a3.jpg Follow the Guitar.

00:13:060 (2) - Same as above ^
00:14:194 - 00:14:446 - Missing object. Here audible sound. Fill out! >_<
00:15:076 (2) - Hey. It's insane. Don't use long slider! It's 1/4 part! :3

00:21:631 (3) - I think, use 1/4 slider. This 1/2 slider is not fit here, because here is beat: 00:21:757 - ! >_< Map the drum!

00:28:186 (6,7) - It's Bit misleading, because this distance snap is similar than 1/2 distance snap. Please, use lower distance snap. Spacing examples (1/2

objects): 00:27:555 (4,5) - 00:29:194 (2,3) -

00:29:698 (3,4) - Okay. Use this similar: http://puu.sh/dGGcK/333635993b.jpg My suggestion is better fits the vocal! :3

00:32:723 (1,2) - Same as 00:28:186 (6,7) - Spacing.

00:47:976 - Missing circle. Put it here.

00:48:858 (1,2,3) - Misleading 1/4 spacing.

00:54:152 (6,7) - I think follow the vocal. Use 1/2 reverse slider here: 00:54:152 - . and delete 00:54:656 (7) - circle.

01:00:707 (1,2) - Huh. Please, follow the vocal, because stronger! Use this similar: http://puu.sh/dGGMy/a6a146460b.jpg

01:02:723 (1,2) - Same as above. Currently conception is not good here. Use this similar: http://puu.sh/dGGQG/7395f1b79c.jpg

01:04:866 (2) - Please, delete circle, because there is no clearly audible beat.

01:06:127 (6) - Same as above ^

01:08:774 (1,2,3,4,5) - Please, follow the vocals and drums. :3 use this similar: http://puu.sh/dGH5h/a62b3c8729.jpg

01:12:807 (1,2) - Vocal, please. :3 The sliders don't fit here, don't follow anything. Use this similar: http://puu.sh/dGH9n/39cd9eff41.jpg

01:21:127 (3,4,5) - yay. Please, map/follow the vocal. Vocal is so strong!

[Hard]

00:25:665 (4) - This slider is weird here. I think, follow the vocal. Use this similar: http://puu.sh/dGIGS/bd9c34eb0f.jpg
01:00:455 - Huh. Put circle here. Please. :3
01:08:522 - ^

Okay.

[Normal]

00:32:849 (1) - 00:40:791 - Please, map the parts! This song is very short.
00:45:581 (2,3,4) - Please, follow the vocal: http://puu.sh/dGJ4b/640f59b438.jpg

[Easy]

yay. CS2 is not too big? :O


Same as Normal: 00:32:849 - 00:40:791 - Map the parts. :3

Ok. This map is fine. ;w; Good luck!
Yuii-
2,501 posts
Joined July 2013
Yuii-
Hi, hi! (Spanish + English mod!!)
Easy

General: Te sugiero CS:3,0 (Como mucho 2,5 o algo así. 2,0 me parece muy poco)


00:36:883 - 00:40:665 - Tomarse un break está bien. Pero... ¿3 ~ 4 segunditos? Vaaaamos, toca completar esa parte!! :)

00:58:186 - ¿Puedo sugerirte una nota?



Normal

General: Puedo sugerir AR:4,0


00:09:278 (2) - No me gusta como suena, ¿soy el único?

00:36:883 - 00:40:665 - Igual que lo que te decía con el "Easy" :D

00:45:581 (2,3,4) - Si podés arreglar eso para que siga el ritmo de Kawada, mejor. Evalúalo. Sería con un slider más. En mi caso, hice que quedase:

01:31:211 (1) - Me rompes el corazón cuando usas un nuevo combo para la última nota. Queda solita :'(



Sonnyc's Hard:

General: I love this map. Amazing.


00:13:060 (3) - This slider is marvelous, can I take it?

00:32:471 (4,1,2) - This part does not convince me... or maybe I am deaf!

00:34:992 (2) - Same ^ ^

00:36:001 (4) - Same ^ ^

01:00:455 - Can I suggest a circle, here? You could place it

01:08:522 - Same ^ ^

01:10:917 - Same ^ ^ (it sounds great... I... think)

01:14:824 (1) - Oh, man. I'm loving this sliders... Batmaaan!!!

01:22:135 (3) - I think this note does not fit very good.

01:31:211 (1) - Do not leave this poor circle with a new combo!! He needs a partern!



Insane

General: Te sugiero AR: 8,0 // OD: 7,0 // HP: 6,0 // El CS no le veo problema como está, ahora se usa 4,0 en casi todos los mapas difíciles. Sin embargo, ¿probaste con 5,0?


00:08:396 - Le agregué una nota antes de que empiece la primera original. ¿No creés que suena mejor?

00:17:093 (3) - 00:17:597 (4) - Yo le agregaría una nota en el medio.

00:17:976 (6) - Como que no... no va. Debería ser más largo el slider, en todo caso. La nota 7 la dejaría igual.

00:19:488 (4) - Queda mejor sin este 4. Escuchalo y decime tu opinión.

00:32:723 (1) - Mucho espacio entre nota y nota.

00:58:816 - Le agregué una nota, ¿qué te parece?

01:04:866 (2) - Nope.

01:06:001 (5) - ¿Puedo sugerir mandar este circulo debajo del final del último slider?

01:06:127 (6) - Nope.

01:18:984 - ¿Me parece a mí o acá un 8° quedaría bien?

01:27:681 (3,4) - No me gusta cómo suena :(

01:31:211 (1) - ¿Un combo nuevo para la última nota?

Excelent map besides this ^^ :D
Good luck on Rank!
lolia
1,356 posts
Joined May 2012
lolia
Hii, here's my poor modding!

  • General
  1. Easy,Normal,Hard : Remove the Widescreen plz
  2. How about checking the Letterbox for Easy and Normal?

  • Easy
  1. 00:08:522 - Delete this greenline and use the timingline to adjust the volume plz
  2. 00:28:690 (1) - Curve this? A bit better imo
    SPOILER
  3. 00:30:202 (3,4) - Check the DS plz
  4. 00:58:438 (1) - I don't know the spin rule exactly, but there is 1 full recovery time in Easy diff. So you should delete this note (Rule is here)
  5. 01:04:992 (3,4) - I wonder why only these have different rhythm @3@ (others are all same rhythm - 3/2 reverse slider)
  6. 01:08:522 (2) - move to (76|192) for stack with 01:11:043 (1) - ?
  7. 01:15:076 (1) - Also DS error

  • Normal
  1. 00:17:093 (2,3) - Personally this is better with music
    SPOILER
  2. 00:24:152 (3,4,1,2,3) - Maybe this is a bit hard to Normal player imo cuz (2,3) is sudden stack..
  3. 00:28:942 (1,2) - I don't know why, but this is better to hear for me ww
    SPOILER
  4. 00:31:967 (2) - clap on tail
  5. 01:02:976 (1) - Bend this like 01:00:959 (1) - this?
  6. 01:06:253 (3,4) - with the vocal, note -> 1/2 slider is better imo!
    SPOILER
  7. 01:27:177 (1,2) - if you bend these two slider, it become better flow I think!

  • Sonnyc's Hard
  1. 00:15:833 (5) - 여기는 드럼피니시가 더 어울릴꺼같아요
  2. 00:22:639 (4) - 여기랑 00:30:707 (1) - 여기가 같은자리인데 뉴콤이 다른거같네요..하나로 맞춰주는게 나을꺼같아요
  3. 00:25:665 (4) - 소프트휘슬이 빠진것같습니다
  4. 00:54:908 (5) - 리버스쪽에 소프트휘슬 넣는것도 어울릴꺼같은데 음..힛사쪽은 약해서 잘 모르겠네요 ㅋㅋ
  5. 01:07:891 (3) - 드럼피니시 00:59:824 (4) - 여기처럼 넣어주세요
  6. 01:25:160 (1,2) - 개인적으론 슬라-노트순으로 놓는게 보컬이랑 어울릴꺼같네요

  • Insane
  1. 00:37:135 (2) - clap on head is nice imo
  2. 00:48:102 (5) - Hmm..move at 00:47:976 is better
  3. 00:50:875 (1,2) - Try 3/4 slider and 1/2 slider for consistency
  4. 00:58:690 (3) - change to 1/4 slider?

QwQ Quite good map, I can't fine anythings..
If my modding is bad, you can ignore mine orz
Good luck!
Sonnyc
7,761 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
SPOILER
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Prophecy (TV Size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 56673
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 8522,16841,32723,40539,58186
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Prophecy
TitleUnicode:Prophecy
Artist:Kawada Mami
ArtistUnicode:川田まみ
Creator:Inyuschan
Version:Sonnyc's Hard
Source:Shakugan no Shana S
Tags:灼眼のシャナ Burning-Eyed Opening TV Size Sonnyc
BeatmapID:569527
BeatmapSetID:247069

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Konachan.com - 29075 shakugan_no_shana shana sword weapon.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
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16589,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
30707,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
56799,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
58186,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
58942,-100,4,1,1,80,0,1
91211,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0
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94236,-100,4,1,1,40,0,0
94488,-100,4,1,1,35,0,0
94740,-100,4,1,1,30,0,0
94992,-100,4,1,1,25,0,0
95244,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 241,169,120
Combo2 : 234,209,111
Combo3 : 223,111,111
Combo4 : 196,163,149

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464,248,36253,2,0,B|420:256|386:238|386:238|352:220|308:228,1,160,8|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
296,324,37009,6,0,P|256:332|216:324,1,80,4|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,228,37513,2,0,B|160:220|126:238|126:238|92:256|48:248,1,160,4|2,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
76,156,38270,2,0,P|76:116|64:76,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
144,24,38774,5,4,0:3:0:0:
236,52,39026,2,0,L|268:28,2,40,2|0|8,0:3|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,140,39530,2,0,B|212:184|256:192|256:192|300:200|312:244,1,160,4|2,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
276,332,40286,2,0,L|244:356,2,40,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
372,320,40791,5,0,0:0:0:0:
456,276,41043,2,0,P|456:236|468:196,1,80,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
508,112,41547,2,0,P|436:112|376:52,1,160
288,88,42303,2,0,L|212:120,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,156,42807,5,0,0:0:0:0:
88,244,43060,2,0,P|128:244|168:256,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,304,43564,2,0,P|292:256|384:256,1,160
436,176,44320,2,0,P|440:160|436:96,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,16,44824,5,0,0:0:0:0:
340,100,45076,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,148,45328,2,0,P|192:156|124:112,2,120,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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404,348,46841,5,0,0:0:0:0:
312,364,47093,2,0,P|276:344|236:336,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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4,188,48354,2,0,P|8:236|32:272,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
99,203,48858,5,0,0:0:0:0:
64,112,49110,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,40,49362,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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296,36,50370,2,0,L|374:52,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,140,50875,5,0,0:0:0:0:
352,216,51127,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,232,51379,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,308,51631,2,0,P|320:308|256:236,1,160
176,293,52387,2,0,P|163:255|168:216,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,152,52891,6,0,P|196:124|88:160,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,212,53648,2,0,P|48:164|48:60,1,160
132,12,54404,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,60,54656,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,24,54908,2,0,P|352:24|420:48,2,120,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,120,55917,5,0,0:0:0:0:
352,196,56169,2,0,L|392:196,2,40,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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72,280,58186,5,0,0:0:0:0:
36,192,58438,1,2,2:0:0:0:
72,104,58690,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,92,58816,1,2,2:0:0:0:
120,80,58942,6,0,P|168:76|204:88,1,80,4|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
256,160,59446,1,8,0:0:0:0:
313,84,59698,1,2,0:3:0:0:
313,84,59824,2,0,P|352:75|440:104,1,120,0|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
480,176,60455,1,8,0:0:0:0:
480,272,60707,5,2,0:3:0:0:
416,344,60959,2,0,P|368:328|304:244,1,160,4|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,243,61715,2,0,P|167:311|96:344,1,160,0|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
32,272,62471,1,8,0:0:0:0:
84,192,62723,1,2,0:3:0:0:
32,112,62976,6,0,L|68:40,1,80,4|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
160,56,63480,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,140,63732,1,2,0:3:0:0:
204,140,63858,2,0,P|268:164|308:140,1,120,0|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
352,56,64488,1,8,0:0:0:0:
444,40,64740,1,2,0:3:0:0:
508,112,64992,6,0,P|516:192|508:272,1,160,4|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,312,65749,2,0,P|412:232|420:152,1,160,0|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
328,184,66505,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,148,66757,1,2,0:3:0:0:
216,140,66883,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,132,67009,6,0,P|144:132|96:160,1,80,4|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
115,239,67513,2,0,P|152:253|192:252,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
216,244,67891,2,0,P|275:241|331:262,1,120,0|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
416,212,68522,1,8,0:0:0:0:
472,132,68774,5,2,0:3:0:0:
436,44,69026,2,0,B|356:24|356:24|316:40|304:78,1,160,4|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,78,69782,2,0,B|196:40|156:24|156:24|76:44,1,160,0|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
40,132,70539,2,0,P|36:176|44:216,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
92,292,71043,5,4,0:3:0:0:
140,208,71295,1,4,0:3:0:0:
232,232,71547,2,0,P|276:236|316:224,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
332,216,71925,2,0,P|389:201|449:208,1,120,0|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
440,304,72555,2,0,P|401:313|361:309,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
268,288,73060,6,0,P|189:293|134:348,1,160,4|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,220,73816,2,0,P|150:214|205:159,1,160,0|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
112,132,74572,1,8,0:0:0:0:
36,72,74824,6,0,B|76:20|144:28|176:60|176:60|216:48|256:68|256:68|296:48|336:60|336:60|368:28|436:20|476:72,1,480,0|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
400,132,76589,1,8,0:0:0:0:
440,220,76841,5,2,0:3:0:0:
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205,159,77849,2,0,P|150:214|72:220,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
8,292,78606,1,8,0:0:0:0:
100,312,78858,6,0,B|160:316|212:284|212:284|256:292|300:284|300:284|352:316|412:312,2,320,4|0|0,0:3|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
71,219,81127,2,0,P|72:160|104:108,2,120,4|0|2,0:3|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
160,184,82135,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,100,82387,1,2,0:3:0:0:
304,100,82639,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,184,82891,6,0,B|412:184|412:184|448:184|484:196|501:220,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
428,284,83648,1,8,0:0:0:0:
428,284,83900,2,0,B|368:284|368:284|332:284|296:272|278:247,1,160,0|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
260,156,84656,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,192,84908,1,2,0:3:0:0:
84,156,85160,5,4,0:3:0:0:
84,156,85412,2,0,P|80:172|92:240,1,80,6|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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332,228,86673,1,8,0:0:0:0:
423,251,86925,1,2,0:3:0:0:
495,189,87177,5,4,0:3:0:0:
403,166,87429,1,4,0:3:0:0:
331,103,87681,2,0,P|377:71|440:77,2,120,8|4|4,0:0|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
256,164,88690,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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109,166,89698,1,8,0:0:0:0:
84,256,89950,5,2,0:3:0:0:
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217,279,90455,1,2,0:3:0:0:
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300,324,91211,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,91337,8,2,95244,0:0:0:0:
Nyukai
2,431 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
Nyukai
Kazuya

Kazuya wrote:

Hello \o It's only ideas!

[Insane]

Use: AR 8, OD: 7 half values = makes no sense. :/ Although BPM is slow, it has a lot of rhythm, but AR9 / AR8,5 was a bit high for me, so I think AR8,3 is fine. More or less the same for OD, since it's an Insane I feel OD7 a bit low.

00:11:043 (3) - 00:12:051 (7) - I think, use two 1/4 slider, because it's 1/4 part! Timeline example: http://puu.sh/dGFNL/85bcc2c3a3.jpg Follow the Guitar. Nah, is more important the music I'm following imo.

00:13:060 (2) - Same as above ^ Same.
00:14:194 - 00:14:446 - Missing object. Here audible sound. Fill out! >_< Same. There is no (at least important) music in those blue ticks o.o
00:15:076 (2) - Hey. It's insane. Don't use long slider! It's 1/4 part! :3 I've been using this kind of slider all the time and you didn't complain xD It's fine.

00:21:631 (3) - I think, use 1/4 slider. This 1/2 slider is not fit here, because here is beat: 00:21:757 - ! >_< Map the drum! Well, I'm following vocals here. For consistency with 00:20:875 (2) - :3u

00:28:186 (6,7) - It's Bit misleading, because this distance snap is similar than 1/2 distance snap. Please, use lower distance snap. Spacing examples (1/2 Should be fine due the slow rhythm, I feel here can be a very little jump.

objects): 00:27:555 (4,5) - 00:29:194 (2,3) -

00:29:698 (3,4) - Okay. Use this similar: http://puu.sh/dGGcK/333635993b.jpg My suggestion is better fits the vocal! :3 Did something similar.

00:32:723 (1,2) - Same as 00:28:186 (6,7) - Spacing.

00:47:976 - Missing circle. Put it here. Nah but I changed 00:47:597 (4) -

00:48:858 (1,2,3) - Misleading 1/4 spacing.

00:54:152 (6,7) - I think follow the vocal. Use 1/2 reverse slider here: 00:54:152 - . and delete 00:54:656 (7) - circle. Actual pattern follows vocal too >:

01:00:707 (1,2) - Huh. Please, follow the vocal, because stronger! Use this similar: http://puu.sh/dGGMy/a6a146460b.jpg Same as before.

01:02:723 (1,2) - Same as above. Currently conception is not good here. Use this similar: http://puu.sh/dGGQG/7395f1b79c.jpg Same.

01:04:866 (2) - Please, delete circle, because there is no clearly audible beat. Not sure here, atm I think fits good o.o

01:06:127 (6) - Same as above ^ Same.

01:08:774 (1,2,3,4,5) - Please, follow the vocals and drums. :3 use this similar: http://puu.sh/dGH5h/a62b3c8729.jpg More important music is already followed imo~

01:12:807 (1,2) - Vocal, please. :3 The sliders don't fit here, don't follow anything. Use this similar: http://puu.sh/dGH9n/39cd9eff41.jpg They follow :c

01:21:127 (3,4,5) - yay. Please, map/follow the vocal. Vocal is so strong! Sliders and notes are not following ONLY vocals, keep that in mind.

[Normal]

00:32:849 (1) - 00:40:791 - Please, map the parts! This song is very short. But I want to add a little break in E and N.
00:45:581 (2,3,4) - Please, follow the vocal: http://puu.sh/dGJ4b/640f59b438.jpg Is more or less the same as I did. So it's not a problem xD

[Easy]

yay. CS2 is not too big? :O It's fine for an Easy.


Same as Normal: 00:32:849 - 00:40:791 - Map the parts. :3 Same.

Ok. This map is fine. ;w; Good luck!

Yuii-

Yuii- wrote:

Easy

General: Te sugiero CS:3,0 (Como mucho 2,5 o algo así. 2,0 me parece muy poco) Quizá, pero está bien para un Easy. Normal ya tiene CS:3.


00:36:883 - 00:40:665 - Tomarse un break está bien. Pero... ¿3 ~ 4 segunditos? Vaaaamos, toca completar esa parte!! :) Hay muchos mapas (incluso tv size) con algún pequeño break, depende de la música.

00:58:186 - ¿Puedo sugerirte una nota? No estaría mal pero meh, como es una línea roja no estoy segura.



Normal

General: Puedo sugerir AR:4,0 No me gusta CS:4 para un Normal.


00:09:278 (2) - No me gusta como suena, ¿soy el único? o.o está bien

00:36:883 - 00:40:665 - Igual que lo que te decía con el "Easy" :D Lo mismo.

00:45:581 (2,3,4) - Si podés arreglar eso para que siga el ritmo de Kawada, mejor. Evalúalo. Sería con un slider más. En mi caso, hice que quedase: No mapeo líneas azules en el Normal >< En este caso, quiero decir.

01:31:211 (1) - Me rompes el corazón cuando usas un nuevo combo para la última nota. Queda solita :'( Pero es por la stanza.

Insane

General: Te sugiero AR: 8,0 // OD: 7,0 // HP: 6,0 // El CS no le veo problema como está, ahora se usa 4,0 en casi todos los mapas difíciles. Sin embargo, ¿probaste con 5,0? Ya expliqué lo del AR aunque voy a modificar un poco el OD. El HP está bien. Y sobre el CS, al menos para esta canción no me gusta CS:5.


00:08:396 - Le agregué una nota antes de que empiece la primera original. ¿No creés que suena mejor? Puede ser, de todas formas prefiero empezar con la nota fuerte.

00:17:093 (3) - 00:17:597 (4) - Yo le agregaría una nota en el medio. Nah, no hay nada importante.

00:17:976 (6) - Como que no... no va. Debería ser más largo el slider, en todo caso. La nota 7 la dejaría igual. Mejor un triple que un slider largo siendo insane xD

00:19:488 (4) - Queda mejor sin este 4. Escuchalo y decime tu opinión. No estoy de acuerdo, la siguiente línea blanca también es importante.

00:32:723 (1) - Mucho espacio entre nota y nota. No lo veo mal y menos siendo BPM lento.

00:58:816 - Le agregué una nota, ¿qué te parece? No hay algo que necesite ser pulsado.

01:04:866 (2) - Nope. Creo que lo expliqué antes, el triple encaja.

01:06:001 (5) - ¿Puedo sugerir mandar este circulo debajo del final del último slider? Rompería la simetría xD Al menos por ahora no lo cambiaré.

01:06:127 (6) - Nope. Lo mismo.

01:18:984 - ¿Me parece a mí o acá un 8° quedaría bien? No xD Encaja mejor los triples de los que te quejas y ahora vienes y dices que eso quedaría bien, pues no (?)

01:27:681 (3,4) - No me gusta cómo suena :( Vocales.

01:31:211 (1) - ¿Un combo nuevo para la última nota? Stanza.

Excelent map besides this ^^ :D
Good luck on Rank!

Karia

Karia wrote:

Hii, here's my poor modding!

  • General
  1. Easy,Normal,Hard : Remove the Widescreen plz Done.
  2. How about checking the Letterbox for Easy and Normal? Nah, title appears at the beginning in all diffs o3o

  • Easy
  1. 00:08:522 - Delete this greenline and use the timingline to adjust the volume plz It's not necessary I think.
  2. 00:28:690 (1) - Curve this? A bit better imo Maybe, but it's part of my style :3 I'll keep it for now.
    SPOILER
  3. 00:30:202 (3,4) - Check the DS plz Oh my, nice catch, fixed.
  4. 00:58:438 (1) - I don't know the spin rule exactly, but there is 1 full recovery time in Easy diff. So you should delete this note (Rule is here) If I'm not mistaken this is fine o.o There is time enough for recovering, but not sure.
  5. 01:04:992 (3,4) - I wonder why only these have different rhythm @3@ (others are all same rhythm - 3/2 reverse slider) Well, here exactly I think fits better this rhythm ><
  6. 01:08:522 (2) - move to (76|192) for stack with 01:11:043 (1) - ? Sure :3
  7. 01:15:076 (1) - Also DS error True uwu Fixed.

  • Normal
  1. 00:17:093 (2,3) - Personally this is better with music Well, it's more or less the same. Is better my pattern.
    SPOILER
  2. 00:24:152 (3,4,1,2,3) - Maybe this is a bit hard to Normal player imo cuz (2,3) is sudden stack.. Did something different.
  3. 00:28:942 (1,2) - I don't know why, but this is better to hear for me ww Nah, I prefer mine >:
    SPOILER
  4. 00:31:967 (2) - clap on tail No hitsounds there :3u
  5. 01:02:976 (1) - Bend this like 01:00:959 (1) - this? Not here ><
  6. 01:06:253 (3,4) - with the vocal, note -> 1/2 slider is better imo! It's following the vocals better, I'm sure.
    SPOILER
  7. 01:27:177 (1,2) - if you bend these two slider, it become better flow I think! Maybe.

  • Insane
  1. 00:37:135 (2) - clap on head is nice imo It doesn't fit in this blue tick u.u
  2. 00:48:102 (5) - Hmm..move at 00:47:976 is better Nope, it would follow a wrong rhythm.
  3. 00:50:875 (1,2) - Try 3/4 slider and 1/2 slider for consistency I prefer this for now, because vocals x)
  4. 00:58:690 (3) - change to 1/4 slider? Nah, just notes there.

QwQ Quite good map, I can't fine anythings..
If my modding is bad, you can ignore mine orz
Good luck!

Big thanks for your mods guys <3 Anyway @Sonnyc could you reply mods properly? To know what you changed :c
Sonnyc
7,761 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
Sorry, because I don't actually enjoy replying mods lol
Giving a proper reply now anyways, and think I've forgot to say thanks for the modders :3
SPOILER
Kazuya:

00:25:665 (4) - This slider is weird here. I think, follow the vocal. Use this similar: http://puu.sh/dGIGS/bd9c34eb0f.jpg // I don't want to use 1/4 rhythms at the first part of the map.
01:00:455 - Huh. Put circle here. Please. :3 // added both
01:08:522 - ^

Yuii-:

00:32:471 (4,1,2) - This part does not convince me... or maybe I am deaf! // Becuase I didn't wanted to use 1/4 at the first part of the map, and wanted to use symmetry here, I've kinda simplified the rhythm here. I can also feel that the rhythm here doesn't 100% suits, so I need more opinion, but currently I'm wiling to keep.
00:34:992 (2) - Same ^ ^
00:36:001 (4) - Same ^ ^
01:00:455 - Can I suggest a circle, here? You could place it // added circles via previous mod.
01:08:522 - Same ^ ^
01:10:917 - Same ^ ^ (it sounds great... I... think)
01:22:135 (3) - I think this note does not fit very good. // I'd like to keep symmetry here.
01:31:211 (1) - Do not leave this poor circle with a new combo!! He needs a partern! // I usually end the last note as a single comboed note if it ends as a new stanza. This was the case.

Karia:

00:15:833 (5) - Add drum-finish here // added
00:22:639 (4) - This is the same combo spot as 00:30:707 (1), but it feels different. Better make them consistently. // (4) is missing a combo because the rhyhtm is connected with the previous combo. If 00:30:707 (1) was a 3/4 rhythm, I'd happily remove the combo, but since it's a 1/1 and is constructing a new symmetric pattern, I've decided to add a combo there.
00:25:665 (4) - Missing a soft whistle // added
00:54:908 (5) - Maybe add a soft whistle at the reverse? // I'd like to make soft whistle sound only at 00:56:799 around here.
01:07:891 (3) - Add drum-finish as 00:59:824 (4) // Drum-finish sounds were added after the song's effect. Anyways something seemed to be wrong around here, and fixed.
01:25:160 (1,2) - Slider-note order feels to fit the vocals better. // Wasn't aiming after vocals here.
Mint
1,611 posts
Joined February 2013
Mint
mod incoming ....

sorry again for forgetting it x_x

:idea: General


* Check your BG dimensions.
* Yeah, the video is a bit 'meh'. Dunno if you already asked someone to get the video, but I have one for you here. I hope it's fine enough, but if you do plan to use this video, you'll probably need a video offset of around -55. You can find out where it should be, because at 01:07:009 (1) -, Shana's eyes must be fully opened.

Easy


* Missing video in this diff.
* 00:12:051 (4) - Nazi, but could you move this just a bit up? Would improve the flow by a bit.
* 00:32:219 - Useless green line
* 00:40:791 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Well, it's an Easy diff so I guess it's supposed to be easy, but this is just the same rhythm all over again. Maybe you could try switching between two rhythms or something? (i personally dont have any good recommendation though ;w;)
* 00:58:438 (1) - Just wanted to say, that the spinner time should be fine. The player has 1639ms of recovery time, which is more than the minimum 1500ms.
* 01:07:009 (1) - I guess it's just me, but I feel that the red points are too squished in, try this?

Nothing really jumps out to me, these are all just (dumb) suggestions. I think that this diff is actually already good to go now owo

Normal


* 00:18:354 (4) - Move to (44,192) instead? Putting this to the other side of the slider would keep the flow going.
* 00:22:639 (1,2) - Yeah, this blanket is off - please try to fix it (just move 1's end to the right a bit)
* 00:32:219 - Useless green line ;_;
* 00:32:471 (2) - There's a clap sound in the song, why not add one?
* 01:06:757 (4) - Yeah, I think you missed one here as well >_>
* 01:08:522 (3) - Just a small thing that I noticed, not a problem or anything. But with all your other 1/2 slider you have a small curve in them. Would be nice here, or else you have 3 straight sliders right after each other :c
* 01:23:144 (1,2) - Where's your constant 1.3x distance?

Clean diff! Couldn't find a lot, I like your use of rhythm!

Sonnyc's Hard


* Missing video in this diff.
* Turn off 'Widescreen Support'. Map has no storyboard.
* 00:11:043 (3) - To me, the finish on the repeat give way too much emphasis on a note in the background. I must say the bass is quite strong, but this is actually more similar to 00:10:791 (2) - rather than 00:10:539 (1) - . A drum clap or even a drum whistle would give a nicer effect here.
* 00:13:060 (3) - I don't think the sound on the slider end is strong enough to have a finish. Try a drum whistle instead?
* 00:15:581 (4) - To me, a whistle sounds much better since it has a kind of a hi-hat sound to hit.
* 00:17:093 (2) - The soft whistle on this slider end is a bit weird to me. The vocals actually are lower here, and there's no (noticeable) instrument it can really go with. I'd actually place it on the head of (3), since the vocals are quite strong there.
* 00:18:858 (2) - I personally think that something from the drum-sampleset would fit better here, because of the bass.
* 00:19:362 (4) - If you are following the vocals/piano you could consider adding a whistle on the slider head as well.
* 00:20:118 (5) - Placing a 1/1 slider here might not be a good idea. I see why you might do this, but you are skipping a bass sound on the red tick, a clap sound on the blue tick, and the downbeat is also skipped. I recommend to have at least the downbeat clickable here after skipping those sounds. A 1/2 slider + circle fits OK here.
* 00:28:186 (4) - Using the drum sampleset on the slider end would work nicely here.
* 00:30:707 (1,2) - Nazi, but why 1.13x? Shouldn't it be 1.2 flat?
* 00:33:480 (3) - Hmm.. I don't really hear a bass here.. consider using a whistle instead?
* 00:35:749 (4) - ^
* 01:14:824 (1) - Gotta admit, this is pretty awesome o3o/
* 01:22:891 (1) - I don't recommend having a 1/1 slider here. There's a cymbal sound on the large white tick, which you don't really want to skip. I recommend having a circle here, and have a 1/2 slider that starts on the white tick.

I think it's more a mappers preference, but I disagree with your uses of the drum finish in the beginning of the song. For non-downbeats I suggest you to use drum claps instead, since for example 00:15:581 (4,5) - would sound weird on other skins / other game modes. I know it shouldn't influence the rankability/quality of the map, but it'd be nice if you changed it though. As far as rhythm and placement goes I must say that I really enjoyed this diff. Everything looks very clean and neat c:

Insane


* 00:16:085 (8) - I do hear a sound on the slider end here... quite strong actually. Add a clap?
* 00:11:799 (6,7) - Are the supposed to be a blanket? If they should be, I think you can do better than this :3
* 00:23:396 (4) - I'm a bit unsure about the clap on the slider end, because it's not an actual clap sound in the song. It's just the bass and you didn't hitsound the bass throughout the whole diff x_x
* 00:24:908 (2) - I'm wondering why you have an offbeat slider here. If you just CTRL+G (2,3) for rhythm only, it'd work the same way as 00:16:589 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - with absolutely no offbeat rhythms.
* 00:58:816 - I'd add a note here on the blue tick. There's no other instrument you can really follow here, because only the vocals are present here, and there's clearly a vocal note here. Otherwise other 1/4 rhythms like 00:59:698 (4,5) - wouldn't really make sense anymore.
* 00:30:707 (1) - Add a clap on the slider end?
* 00:31:589 (4) - Again, only bass sound here but there's a clap. I'd actually add a clap on 00:31:211 (3) - 's slider end where the actual clap is.
* 00:32:471 - I think you should add a clap here on the red tick as well o_o
* 00:36:757 (1,2,3) - You should get more opinions on these. I didn't have problems with it, but these 3/4 sliders are like almost spaced the same as a normal 1/2 rhythm, for example 00:35:749 (6,7) - , but I guess it's fine since you used a lot of rhythms like 00:28:564 (7,1) - However, you should consider spacing them normally like 00:40:791 (1,2) -
* 00:39:278 (3) - Missing clap here?
* 00:40:286 (7) - I hear a double-clap rhythm here, so I think you should also add one on the slider end.
* 00:44:698 (7) - Yeah, here as well. I think a clap fits here good with the extra sound that's present here.
* 00:52:639 (7) - Clap on the slider end here as well?
* 01:02:471 (8,1) - I'd have at least 1.0x DS here, dunno why it's so low here.
* 01:03:858 (4) - Uhmm, again clap on the slider end? There's a sound there (sounds weird with 25% playback rate, but if you listen it to 100% it actually makes sense)
* 01:04:992 (3,4) - This blanket is also off ;w; (sorry for mentioning these shit blanket things ;_;)
* 01:11:925 (4) - If you agreed with all those clap suggestions, add one here as well :3
* 01:16:841 (1) - I personally think that S:C1 whistles would fit this part (especially the slider end here) really well, but you'll have to add a lot more green lines etc dunno if you want to do that.., so you can ignore this owo
* 01:28:060 (4,5) - This really confused me, especially since you just spaced it normally with (3,4)... I highly recommend just to keep DS here.
* 01:29:446 (2) - What about splitting this slider up into two circles instead? Both the vocals and the clap would get a good emphasis, and it'd be consistent with 01:23:144 (1,2,3) -

Almost Andrea map, especially with a Shana song. Good job mapping it, I'd only check the hitsounds a bit and then it should be ready owo

abuse contact me when you need me again, i love symmetry maps *_*

oh yea, here's the real thing

good luck ~
Momochikun
1,944 posts
Joined October 2012
Momochikun
hi, as requested on my queue :3

I'd recommend adding silent normal-sliderslide here.. even if the sounds doesn't really bother in higher diff. But in Easy and Normal which has many long sliders, the sliderslide sound is really noticeable which sometimes it could bother players imo ><

[Insane]
hmm.. honestly i feel confused with the inconsistency of Ds in most of 1/4 rhythm part here, at the intro 00:11:547 (5,6) - something as far as this were seperated by 1/4. But later 00:27:555 (4,5) - it was closer yet different rhythm. And it was happen a lot on the map just like 00:28:690 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:36:757 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 01:09:908 (5,6,7) - 01:13:816 (3,4) -
00:38:774 (1,2,3) - to 00:39:530 (4,5,6) - which very close yet separated by 1/4 and 1/2 and many more.
The most easier way to avoid this issues is to make the 1/2 note rhythm on this map become more farther so it'll be easier to point it on gameplay especially at HD mode, i hope you understand what i mean xD.. i try to keep it as simple as possible ><

00:14:572 (1) - A clap here at slider end may fit perfectly according to the bgm imo
00:29:698 (3) - Pls move this farther from (2) or make it closer to (4) for readibility issue, since it was looks like same rhythm yet it's not
00:31:841 - The gap between (4) and (5) maybe a bit confusing, i'd add note here since you can hear a sound. Also it' be easier to follow
00:43:690 (3) - Delete note instead or make them closer just as same reason as i explained before
00:46:337 (5) - the flow would be more cool with this Ctrl g'ed imo
00:54:152 (6) - move them farther pls ;w; . this way very confusing after 00:51:883 (4,6,7) - orzzz

[Hard]
00:23:396 (5,6) - this blanket could be more better imo
00:40:791 (1) - i think you forget a finish here
00:47:093 (2) - as you were following vocal on the pattern before 00:45:328 (3) - , i'd like to see this as a triplet or duplet so you'd catch the vocal too
01:27:681 (3,5) - maybe you could make them symmetrical ? lol
also the last spinner is missing NC if you check aimod.

[Normal]
00:22:639 (1,2) - orzz sorry to be nazi but this blanket is really could be better
00:17:093 (2) - slider may work better here to emphasize the vocal, but its up to you
00:20:623 (1,2,3) - Hmm this is kind of boring, i'd recommend more following the vocal just like you did at 00:30:707 (1) -

00:58:942 (2) - shouldn;t this be NC ed just to fit your Insane ?
01:28:942 - how about adding a note ? the vocal pitch is pretty high here imo

[Easy]
00:21:127 (2,4) - I'd like to see them on same shape to create sweet contact on it. Try
SPOILER
00:58:942 (2) - same as normal
01:04:992 (3) - why dont you make it just like 01:00:959 (5) - ? i think it's more catchy that way


good luck :3
Nyukai
2,431 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
Nyukai
appleeaterx

appleeaterx wrote:

:idea: General


* Check your BG dimensions. Hm, k o3o
* Yeah, the video is a bit 'meh'. Dunno if you already asked someone to get the video, but I have one for you here. I hope it's fine enough, but if you do plan to use this video, you'll probably need a video offset of around -55. You can find out where it should be, because at 01:07:009 (1) -, Shana's eyes must be fully opened. Thank you so much :3

Easy


* Missing video in this diff. Fixed
* 00:12:051 (4) - Nazi, but could you move this just a bit up? Would improve the flow by a bit. Sure.
* 00:32:219 - Useless green line True, lol.
* 00:40:791 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Well, it's an Easy diff so I guess it's supposed to be easy, but this is just the same rhythm all over again. Maybe you could try switching between two rhythms or something? (i personally dont have any good recommendation though ;w;) I think making this only here it's fine, more variety for me :3
* 00:58:438 (1) - Just wanted to say, that the spinner time should be fine. The player has 1639ms of recovery time, which is more than the minimum 1500ms. Yeah, I guess so :3
* 01:07:009 (1) - I guess it's just me, but I feel that the red points are too squished in, try this? It was intentional, anyways I've changed it a bit.

Nothing really jumps out to me, these are all just (dumb) suggestions. I think that this diff is actually already good to go now owo

Normal


* 00:18:354 (4) - Move to (44,192) instead? Putting this to the other side of the slider would keep the flow going. Nice~
* 00:22:639 (1,2) - Yeah, this blanket is off - please try to fix it (just move 1's end to the right a bit) Should be fine now.
* 00:32:219 - Useless green line ;_; Yep, my fault >:
* 00:32:471 (2) - There's a clap sound in the song, why not add one? It doesn't fit for me.
* 01:06:757 (4) - Yeah, I think you missed one here as well >_> I agree here.
* 01:08:522 (3) - Just a small thing that I noticed, not a problem or anything. But with all your other 1/2 slider you have a small curve in them. Would be nice here, or else you have 3 straight sliders right after each other :c 01:06:253 (3) - This slider is straight too. I don't see any problem here :3u
* 01:23:144 (1,2) - Where's your constant 1.3x distance? My fault, fixed.

Clean diff! Couldn't find a lot, I like your use of rhythm!

Insane


* 00:16:085 (8) - I do hear a sound on the slider end here... quite strong actually. Add a clap? Hm... It's fine I guess.
* 00:11:799 (6,7) - Are the supposed to be a blanket? If they should be, I think you can do better than this :3 Fixed a bit.
* 00:23:396 (4) - I'm a bit unsure about the clap on the slider end, because it's not an actual clap sound in the song. It's just the bass and you didn't hitsound the bass throughout the whole diff x_x It fits imo ;w;
* 00:24:908 (2) - I'm wondering why you have an offbeat slider here. If you just CTRL+G (2,3) for rhythm only, it'd work the same way as 00:16:589 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - with absolutely no offbeat rhythms. Because the vocals, the slider here is fine.
* 00:58:816 - I'd add a note here on the blue tick. There's no other instrument you can really follow here, because only the vocals are present here, and there's clearly a vocal note here. Otherwise other 1/4 rhythms like 00:59:698 (4,5) - wouldn't really make sense anymore. Maybe, but I want to keep all the pattern as it is. Just to make a ~calm~ part before kiai, since there are vocals and not music.
* 00:30:707 (1) - Add a clap on the slider end? Sounds good at least for me.
* 00:31:589 (4) - Again, only bass sound here but there's a clap. I'd actually add a clap on 00:31:211 (3) - 's slider end where the actual clap is. As I've said, it fits imo.
* 00:32:471 - I think you should add a clap here on the red tick as well o_o Doesn't fit here, I didn't want to add any hitsound there.
* 00:36:757 (1,2,3) - You should get more opinions on these. I didn't have problems with it, but these 3/4 sliders are like almost spaced the same as a normal 1/2 rhythm, for example 00:35:749 (6,7) - , but I guess it's fine since you used a lot of rhythms like 00:28:564 (7,1) - However, you should consider spacing them normally like 00:40:791 (1,2) - Hm, since it's slow BPM, should be fine. However, I'll think about it.
* 00:39:278 (3) - Missing clap here? It was intentional, but it fits I guess.
* 00:40:286 (7) - I hear a double-clap rhythm here, so I think you should also add one on the slider end. Sure, should be good.
* 00:44:698 (7) - Yeah, here as well. I think a clap fits here good with the extra sound that's present here. Sounds fine.
* 00:52:639 (7) - Clap on the slider end here as well? Not sure here.
* 01:02:471 (8,1) - I'd have at least 1.0x DS here, dunno why it's so low here. Moved (8), it was a mistake.
* 01:03:858 (4) - Uhmm, again clap on the slider end? There's a sound there (sounds weird with 25% playback rate, but if you listen it to 100% it actually makes sense) Yeah, maybe.
* 01:04:992 (3,4) - This blanket is also off ;w; (sorry for mentioning these shit blanket things ;_;) No problem, anyways it wasn't my intention here :3u It's not a blanket.
* 01:11:925 (4) - If you agreed with all those clap suggestions, add one here as well :3 Yep.
* 01:16:841 (1) - I personally think that S:C1 whistles would fit this part (especially the slider end here) really well, but you'll have to add a lot more green lines etc dunno if you want to do that.., so you can ignore this owo You are right but I'm not good with hitsounds indeed ;w;
* 01:28:060 (4,5) - This really confused me, especially since you just spaced it normally with (3,4)... I highly recommend just to keep DS here. B-But the blanket orz
* 01:29:446 (2) - What about splitting this slider up into two circles instead? Both the vocals and the clap would get a good emphasis, and it'd be consistent with 01:23:144 (1,2,3) - I prefer to use a slider for the vocals.

Almost Andrea map, especially with a Shana song. Good job mapping it, I'd only check the hitsounds a bit and then it should be ready owo

abuse contact me when you need me again, i love symmetry maps *_*

oh yea, here's the real thing

good luck ~

Momochikun

Momochikun wrote:

hi, as requested on my queue :3

I'd recommend adding silent normal-sliderslide here.. even if the sounds doesn't really bother in higher diff. But in Easy and Normal which has many long sliders, the sliderslide sound is really noticeable which sometimes it could bother players imo >< Yeah, maybe... I'll try.

[Insane]
hmm.. honestly i feel confused with the inconsistency of Ds in most of 1/4 rhythm part here, at the intro 00:11:547 (5,6) - something as far as this were seperated by 1/4. But later 00:27:555 (4,5) - it was closer yet different rhythm. And it was happen a lot on the map just like 00:28:690 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:36:757 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 01:09:908 (5,6,7) - 01:13:816 (3,4) -
00:38:774 (1,2,3) - to 00:39:530 (4,5,6) - which very close yet separated by 1/4 and 1/2 and many more.
The most easier way to avoid this issues is to make the 1/2 note rhythm on this map become more farther so it'll be easier to point it on gameplay especially at HD mode, i hope you understand what i mean xD.. i try to keep it as simple as possible >< Maybe, but being an insane and slow BPM, I don't see a big problem :3u At least for now.

00:14:572 (1) - A clap here at slider end may fit perfectly according to the bgm imo Sure.
00:29:698 (3) - Pls move this farther from (2) or make it closer to (4) for readibility issue, since it was looks like same rhythm yet it's not Did something different.
00:31:841 - The gap between (4) and (5) maybe a bit confusing, i'd add note here since you can hear a sound. Also it' be easier to follow Okay.
00:43:690 (3) - Delete note instead or make them closer just as same reason as i explained before Adding this sometimes it's fine o3o Due the slow BPM.
00:46:337 (5) - the flow would be more cool with this Ctrl g'ed imo True.
00:54:152 (6) - move them farther pls ;w; . this way very confusing after 00:51:883 (4,6,7) - orzzz Something similar as before.

[Normal]
00:22:639 (1,2) - orzz sorry to be nazi but this blanket is really could be better Already fixed with another mod.
00:17:093 (2) - slider may work better here to emphasize the vocal, but its up to you Slider fits better here 00:17:597 (3) - for me.
00:20:623 (1,2,3) - Hmm this is kind of boring, i'd recommend more following the vocal just like you did at 00:30:707 (1) - I'm trying to not follow blue ticks in this Normal ><

00:58:942 (2) - shouldn;t this be NC ed just to fit your Insane ? Maybe, but since I've started before kiai, I think it's fine due the vocals already started so I added NC previously.
01:28:942 - how about adding a note ? the vocal pitch is pretty high here imo Sure.

[Easy]
00:21:127 (2,4) - I'd like to see them on same shape to create sweet contact on it. Try Yep, done.
SPOILER
00:58:942 (2) - same as normal Same.
01:04:992 (3) - why dont you make it just like 01:00:959 (5) - ? i think it's more catchy that way I prefer 01:04:992 (3,4) - in this part, the others one is better catching vocal.


good luck :3

Thanks a lot guys, now waiting for Sonnyc :3
Sonnyc
7,761 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
SPOILER
appleeaterx:

* Missing video in this diff.
* Turn off 'Widescreen Support'. Map has no storyboard. // fix
* 00:11:043 (3) - To me, the finish on the repeat give way too much emphasis on a note in the background. I must say the bass is quite strong, but this is actually more similar to 00:10:791 (2) - rather than 00:10:539 (1) - . A drum clap or even a drum whistle would give a nicer effect here. // Added finish at 00:10:791 (2) instead.
* 00:13:060 (3) - I don't think the sound on the slider end is strong enough to have a finish. Try a drum whistle instead? // removed hitsound
* 00:15:581 (4) - To me, a whistle sounds much better since it has a kind of a hi-hat sound to hit. // Hmmm.. I would just prefer mine.
* 00:17:093 (2) - The soft whistle on this slider end is a bit weird to me. The vocals actually are lower here, and there's no (noticeable) instrument it can really go with. I'd actually place it on the head of (3), since the vocals are quite strong there. // Added soft-whistles at most upbeats with an exception at the slider head of a 1/1 slider if both beats are an upbeat. Prefering my hitsound pattern here.
* 00:18:858 (2) - I personally think that something from the drum-sampleset would fit better here, because of the bass. // ^
* 00:19:362 (4) - If you are following the vocals/piano you could consider adding a whistle on the slider head as well. // Whistle was only placed at the tail to emphasize the vocals.
* 00:20:118 (5) - Placing a 1/1 slider here might not be a good idea. I see why you might do this, but you are skipping a bass sound on the red tick, a clap sound on the blue tick, and the downbeat is also skipped. I recommend to have at least the downbeat clickable here after skipping those sounds. A 1/2 slider + circle fits OK here. // Fixed
* 00:28:186 (4) - Using the drum sampleset on the slider end would work nicely here. // I don't think it fits nicely..
* 00:30:707 (1,2) - Nazi, but why 1.13x? Shouldn't it be 1.2 flat? // Maybe I was a little lazy. Fixed
* 00:33:480 (3) - Hmm.. I don't really hear a bass here.. consider using a whistle instead? // Removed hitsound.
* 00:35:749 (4) - ^ // ^
* 01:14:824 (1) - Gotta admit, this is pretty awesome o3o/
* 01:22:891 (1) - I don't recommend having a 1/1 slider here. There's a cymbal sound on the large white tick, which you don't really want to skip. I recommend having a circle here, and have a 1/2 slider that starts on the white tick. // I'd like to keep my pattern because the vocal is repeating, and I was intending that slider to interact with 01:23:900 (3).

I've tried with the hitsounds, but I felt drum-clap sounds too high.

Momochikun:

00:23:396 (5,6) - this blanket could be more better imo // fix
00:40:791 (1) - i think you forget a finish here // add
00:47:093 (2) - as you were following vocal on the pattern before 00:45:328 (3) - , i'd like to see this as a triplet or duplet so you'd catch the vocal too // Well I think I wanted to follow the drums only here, ignoring the vocals..
01:27:681 (3,5) - maybe you could make them symmetrical ? lol // auto stack sucks. fix
also the last spinner is missing NC if you check aimod. // fix
Hard
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88,344,14824,5,2,0:3:0:0:
164,284,15076,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,312,15328,1,2,0:3:0:0:
348,284,15581,1,4,0:3:0:0:
424,344,15833,1,4,0:3:0:0:
487,269,16085,2,0,B|484:228|484:228|476:192|476:192|484:156|484:156|488:112,1,160,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,84,16841,5,2,2:0:0:0:
316,136,17093,2,0,P|272:148|232:144,1,80,8|2,0:0|2:2,0:0:0:0:
144,120,17597,2,0,P|84:117|27:134,2,120,0|2|2,0:0|2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
168,216,18606,5,0,0:0:0:0:
100,284,18858,1,2,2:0:0:0:
192,312,19110,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,244,19362,2,0,P|312:220|412:224,1,160,0|2,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
504,256,20118,2,0,L|488:153,1,80,8|2,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
420,112,20623,1,4,0:3:0:0:
452,20,20875,5,2,2:0:0:0:
356,12,21127,2,0,P|312:19|282:38,1,80,8|2,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
224,112,21631,2,0,P|172:142|113:151,2,120,0|2|2,0:0|2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
316,128,22639,2,0,P|316:187|294:243,1,120,0|2,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
175,320,23396,2,0,P|98:319|45:262,1,160,0|2,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
84,173,24152,2,0,P|116:197|136:231,1,80,8|2,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
232,240,24656,5,0,0:0:0:0:
280,156,24908,1,2,2:0:0:0:
372,180,25160,2,0,P|392:145|424:122,1,80,8|2,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
512,160,25665,2,0,L|512:284,2,120,0|2|2,0:0|2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
500,64,26673,6,0,P|468:36|412:28,1,80,0|2,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
340,40,27177,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,27,27429,2,0,P|176:68|164:148,1,160,0|2,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
192,232,28186,2,0,L|192:312,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,344,28690,6,0,L|100:264,1,80,0|2,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
120,172,29194,1,8,0:0:0:0:
44,112,29446,1,2,2:0:0:0:
96,32,29698,2,0,L|216:32,1,120,0|2,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
296,152,30455,1,2,2:0:0:0:
372,96,30707,6,0,P|432:88|512:148,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
509,240,31463,2,0,P|450:291|372:288,1,160,0|2,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
296,232,32219,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,288,32471,1,2,2:0:0:0:
136,244,32723,5,4,0:3:0:0:
136,244,32976,2,0,L|56:244,1,80,2|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,156,33480,2,0,B|72:156|72:156|116:136|116:136|172:136,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
216,52,34236,2,0,B|256:56|256:56|296:52,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
392,52,34740,5,4,0:3:0:0:
340,136,34992,1,2,0:3:0:0:
340,136,35244,2,0,B|396:136|396:136|440:156|440:156|496:156,1,160,8|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
464,248,36001,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,248,36253,2,0,B|420:256|386:238|386:238|352:220|308:228,1,160,8|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
296,324,37009,6,0,P|256:332|216:324,1,80,4|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,228,37513,2,0,B|160:220|126:238|126:238|92:256|48:248,1,160,4|2,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
76,156,38270,2,0,P|76:116|64:76,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
144,24,38774,5,4,0:3:0:0:
236,52,39026,2,0,L|268:28,2,40,2|0|8,0:3|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,140,39530,2,0,B|212:184|256:192|256:192|300:200|312:244,1,160,4|2,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
276,332,40286,2,0,L|244:356,2,40,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
372,320,40791,5,4,0:0:0:0:
456,276,41043,2,0,P|456:236|468:196,1,80,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
508,112,41547,2,0,P|436:112|376:52,1,160
288,88,42303,2,0,L|212:120,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,156,42807,5,0,0:0:0:0:
88,244,43060,2,0,P|128:244|168:256,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,304,43564,2,0,P|292:256|384:256,1,160
436,176,44320,2,0,P|440:160|436:96,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,16,44824,5,0,0:0:0:0:
340,100,45076,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,148,45328,2,0,P|192:156|124:112,2,120,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,196,46337,2,0,L|340:276,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,348,46841,5,0,0:0:0:0:
312,364,47093,2,0,P|276:344|236:336,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,336,47597,2,0,P|156:268|100:204,1,160
4,188,48354,2,0,P|8:236|32:272,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
99,203,48858,5,0,0:0:0:0:
64,112,49110,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,40,49362,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,128,49614,2,0,B|240:112|240:112|316:128,1,160
296,36,50370,2,0,L|374:52,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,140,50875,5,0,0:0:0:0:
352,216,51127,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,232,51379,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,308,51631,2,0,P|320:308|256:236,1,160
176,293,52387,2,0,P|163:255|168:216,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,152,52891,6,0,P|196:124|88:160,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,212,53648,2,0,P|48:164|48:60,1,160
132,12,54404,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,60,54656,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,24,54908,2,0,P|352:24|420:48,2,120,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,120,55917,5,0,0:0:0:0:
352,196,56169,2,0,L|392:196,2,40,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,272,56673,2,0,L|300:312,1,40,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,280,58186,5,0,0:0:0:0:
36,192,58438,1,2,2:0:0:0:
72,104,58690,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,92,58816,1,2,2:0:0:0:
120,80,58942,6,0,P|168:76|204:88,1,80,4|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
256,160,59446,1,8,0:0:0:0:
313,84,59698,1,2,0:3:0:0:
313,84,59824,2,0,P|352:75|440:104,1,120,0|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
480,176,60455,1,8,0:0:0:0:
480,272,60707,5,2,0:3:0:0:
416,344,60959,2,0,P|368:328|304:244,1,160,4|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,243,61715,2,0,P|167:311|96:344,1,160,0|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
32,272,62471,1,8,0:0:0:0:
84,192,62723,1,2,0:3:0:0:
32,112,62976,6,0,L|68:40,1,80,4|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
160,56,63480,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,140,63732,1,2,0:3:0:0:
204,140,63858,2,0,P|268:164|308:140,1,120,0|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
352,56,64488,1,8,0:0:0:0:
444,40,64740,1,2,0:3:0:0:
508,112,64992,6,0,P|516:192|508:272,1,160,4|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,312,65749,2,0,P|412:232|420:152,1,160,0|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
328,184,66505,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,148,66757,1,2,0:3:0:0:
216,140,66883,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,132,67009,6,0,P|144:132|96:160,1,80,4|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
115,239,67513,2,0,P|152:253|192:252,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
216,244,67891,2,0,P|275:241|331:262,1,120,0|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
416,212,68522,1,8,0:0:0:0:
472,132,68774,5,2,0:3:0:0:
436,44,69026,2,0,B|356:24|356:24|316:40|304:78,1,160,4|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,78,69782,2,0,B|196:40|156:24|156:24|76:44,1,160,0|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
40,132,70539,2,0,P|36:176|44:216,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
92,292,71043,5,4,0:3:0:0:
140,208,71295,1,4,0:3:0:0:
232,232,71547,2,0,P|276:236|316:224,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
332,216,71925,2,0,P|389:201|449:208,1,120,0|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
440,304,72555,2,0,P|401:313|361:309,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
268,288,73060,6,0,P|189:293|134:348,1,160,4|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,220,73816,2,0,P|150:214|205:159,1,160,0|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
112,132,74572,1,8,0:0:0:0:
36,72,74824,6,0,B|76:20|144:28|176:60|176:60|216:48|256:68|256:68|296:48|336:60|336:60|368:28|436:20|476:72,1,480,0|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
400,132,76589,1,8,0:0:0:0:
440,220,76841,5,2,0:3:0:0:
440,220,77093,2,0,P|361:214|306:159,1,160,4|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
205,159,77849,2,0,P|150:214|72:220,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
8,292,78606,1,8,0:0:0:0:
100,312,78858,6,0,B|160:316|212:284|212:284|256:292|300:284|300:284|352:316|412:312,2,320,4|0|0,0:3|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
71,219,81127,2,0,P|72:160|104:108,2,120,4|0|2,0:3|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
160,184,82135,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,100,82387,1,2,0:3:0:0:
304,100,82639,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,184,82891,6,0,B|412:184|412:184|448:184|484:196|501:220,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
428,284,83648,1,8,0:0:0:0:
428,284,83900,2,0,B|368:284|368:284|332:284|296:272|278:247,1,160,0|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
260,156,84656,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,192,84908,1,2,0:3:0:0:
84,156,85160,5,4,0:3:0:0:
84,156,85412,2,0,P|80:172|92:240,1,80,6|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
102,329,85917,2,0,B|144:324|168:288|168:288|216:288|240:261,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
332,228,86673,1,8,0:0:0:0:
423,251,86925,1,2,0:3:0:0:
495,189,87177,5,4,0:3:0:0:
403,166,87429,1,4,0:3:0:0:
331,103,87681,2,0,P|377:71|440:77,2,120,8|4|4,0:0|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
256,164,88690,1,8,0:0:0:0:
181,103,88942,2,0,P|112:68|32:108,1,160,0|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
109,166,89698,1,8,0:0:0:0:
84,256,89950,5,2,0:3:0:0:
111,260,90076,2,0,L|193:274,1,80,4|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
217,279,90455,1,2,0:3:0:0:
296,228,90707,2,0,L|335:234,2,40,8|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
300,324,91211,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,91337,12,2,95244,0:0:0:0:
Thanks~
Nyukai
2,431 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
Nyukai
Updated everything :3
Lally
3,177 posts
Joined December 2011
Lally
#queue

[General]
  1. your bg is 1023x767 wich is a wrong size you should change it to a correct one wich is 1024 x 768
[Normal]
  1. 00:28:438 (2,3,4) - personally i dislike this pattern imo the flow could be better here,you could try to change the pattern to something like :
    SPOILER

    wich consist do give another shape to 00:28:438 (2) - and to change the circles 00:28:942 (3,4) - to a slider and to move a little bit 00:29:698 (4) - for a perfect spacing,why don't you try it out ? here is the code so you can see the difference
    204,103,28438,2,0,P|184:144|144:171,1,65,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    164,240,28942,2,0,P|185:266|220:284,1,65,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    376,324,29698,2,0,B|432:292|432:292|440:216,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
[Hard]
  1. 00:11:043 (3,4) - what about to change this pattern like this:
    SPOILER
    just cuving a little bit the slider to create a blanket \o3o/
    364,224,11043,2,0,P|336:284|348:348,2,120,8|4|2,0:0|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
  2. 00:24:152 (6,1,2) - this pattern doesent flow really good specially 00:24:656 (1,2) - are the biggest problem,you should try to re-do you flow because atm is really meh,here is how your flow does it look like ._. try to fix specially the problem between 00:24:908 (2,3) -
    SPOILER
  3. 00:42:807 (1,2) - here i would suggest to just to ctrl+j and to rotate the slider a bit to get something like this wich flows better
    SPOILER

gl o3o
CSLM
1,058 posts
Joined May 2013
CSLM
wtf! lol...
here is my mod, sorry for the late u.u

Unrankeable
Important
Suggestion

General

  1. no estoy seguro acerca del mp3 si es que es de 320kbps o mi computadora me esta engañando, pero si mi computadora no me esta engañando, seguramente sabes que el mp3 con 320kbps es unrankeable
  2. bg unrankeable: 1023x767 no es rankeable que yo sepa

Easy

  1. 00:10:539 (3,4,1) - el flow mejoraria mucho imo si tu haces una conexion entre estos 3 objetos algo asi: http://puu.sh/dM7Tv/86aac76a72.jpg se veria mejor imo
  2. 01:07:009 (1) - mueve el primer punto rojo de este slider a x272 y116, asi el slider mantiene una mejor simetria en ambos lados
  3. 01:29:698 (4,1) - yo sugiero que (4) lo reduzcas un tick de bpm antes (en 01:30:707 - ) y con el spinner muevelo a 01:31:211 - y extiendelo hasta 01:35:244 - de esa manera el newbie tendra la posibilidad de prepararse para el spinner y suena mejor imo

Normal

creo que el star spread no es el apropiado para un normal, en el easy es todo 1/1 pero en el normal es todo 1/2, y esa no es la idea para un normal, usualmente en el normal se usan bastantes 1/1 pero tambien se le agregan varios 1/2 cuando es apropiado, se que es un bpm bajo, pero no lo suficiente como para hacer un normal asi, yo sugiero que quites varios 1/2

tambien unos asuntos con las conexiones entre las notas, seria mejor si configuras las siguentes notas de esta manera:

  1. 00:11:043 (2) - muevelo a x388 y336
  2. 00:26:673 (1) - ^ x264 y32
  3. 00:48:858 (1) - ^ x360 y272
  4. 00:48:858 (1) - ^ x340 y288
  5. 01:14:320 (3) - con este siento mejor que lo vuelvas horizontal compleamente
  6. 01:24:908 (3) - muevelo a x216 y116
  7. 01:28:942 (3) - ^ x356 y84

Sonnyc's Hard

  1. 00:14:068 (5) - turn the first and the last red point in curve points, look better imo
  2. 00:16:085 (6) - ^
  3. 00:25:665 (4) - i don't feel very well the slider alined of this way, i sugest what you move the last point to x496 y284
  4. 00:27:177 (2) - move this note to x340 y20, of that way make a better conection between 00:26:673 (1) - and 00:27:429 (3) -
  5. 00:29:698 (4) - the flow will be a lot better if make this slider curve to up, like this: http://puu.sh/dMabZ/5ee9fd516f.jpg
  6. 00:47:597 (3,1) - *nazi* bad stacked, try to move (3) or (1) without the Grid Snap option

Insane

  1. 00:10:286 (7,2) - este blanket lo podrias hacer mejor?
  2. 00:11:799 (6,7) - ^
  3. 00:27:807 - te sugiero que coloques una nota aqui, asi es menos confuso
  4. 00:33:858 (4,5) - blanket
  5. 00:37:891 (4,5,6) - este extend slider no me gusta, los microsliders empiezan en los blue ticks (y asi no tienen que ser, ya que se verian desprolijos), muevelos plzz
  6. 00:38:396 (6,1) - el spacing entre estos 2 objetos es sumamente confuso, ya que estas usando el mismo spacing que usas para el ritmo 1/4 en el de 1/2)
  7. 00:43:312 (2,3,4) - ajusta estos 3 objetos para quitar el spacing entre la cola de (2) y (3), por la misma razon que dije arriba, algo asi se veria mejor: http://puu.sh/dMbbe/bf477f7404.jpg
  8. 00:52:639 (7,1) - blanket
  9. 00:54:026 - añade nota, por la misma razon de antes
  10. 01:05:497 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - un blanket entre estos objetos no estaria mal

Kawada Mami's voice is soo sweet >.<
i had the idea of map this song ;w;
anyway, GL with rank
choo choo~
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
insane
i think you should use ar8 w
00:38:396 (6,1) - why is 1/2 the same distance with 1/4 in this part, can't distinguish orz
01:28:564 - voice is here, consider this rhythm osu.ppy.sh/ss/2403159

others are fine, i think
this map has the feeling of old times lol

_(:з」∠)_
Nyukai
2,431 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
Nyukai
Lally

Lally wrote:

#queue

[Normal]
  1. 00:28:438 (2,3,4) - personally i dislike this pattern imo the flow could be better here,you could try to change the pattern to something like :
    SPOILER

    wich consist do give another shape to 00:28:438 (2) - and to change the circles 00:28:942 (3,4) - to a slider and to move a little bit 00:29:698 (4) - for a perfect spacing,why don't you try it out ? here is the code so you can see the difference
    204,103,28438,2,0,P|184:144|144:171,1,65,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    164,240,28942,2,0,P|185:266|220:284,1,65,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    376,324,29698,2,0,B|432:292|432:292|440:216,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

    Applied, I don't like that slider though.

CSLM

CSLMVenezuela wrote:

wtf! lol...
here is my mod, sorry for the late u.u

Unrankeable
Important
Suggestion

General

  1. no estoy seguro acerca del mp3 si es que es de 320kbps o mi computadora me esta engañando, pero si mi computadora no me esta engañando, seguramente sabes que el mp3 con 320kbps es unrankeable No me sale que sea de 320 kbps, me habría dado cuenta.
  2. bg unrankeable: 1023x767 no es rankeable que yo sepa

Easy

  1. 00:10:539 (3,4,1) - el flow mejoraria mucho imo si tu haces una conexion entre estos 3 objetos algo asi: http://puu.sh/dM7Tv/86aac76a72.jpg se veria mejor imo Creo que te entiendo, de todas formas si comparo con tu sugerencia me gusta más lo mío. Aun así intentaré algo diferente.
  2. 01:07:009 (1) - mueve el primer punto rojo de este slider a x272 y116, asi el slider mantiene una mejor simetria en ambos lados Un poco nazi imo xD Pero está bien, aplicado.
  3. 01:29:698 (4,1) - yo sugiero que (4) lo reduzcas un tick de bpm antes (en 01:30:707 - ) y con el spinner muevelo a 01:31:211 - y extiendelo hasta 01:35:244 - de esa manera el newbie tendra la posibilidad de prepararse para el spinner y suena mejor imo Buscaba seguir la vocal, pero sí, me gusta.

Normal

creo que el star spread no es el apropiado para un normal, en el easy es todo 1/1 pero en el normal es todo 1/2, y esa no es la idea para un normal, usualmente en el normal se usan bastantes 1/1 pero tambien se le agregan varios 1/2 cuando es apropiado, se que es un bpm bajo, pero no lo suficiente como para hacer un normal asi, yo sugiero que quites varios 1/2 No estoy del todo de acuerdo, lo único que veo que puede ser un problema es el DS, así que es lo único que fixearé en ese sentido.

tambien unos asuntos con las conexiones entre las notas, seria mejor si configuras las siguentes notas de esta manera:

  1. 00:11:043 (2) - muevelo a x388 y336 Hecho.
  2. 00:26:673 (1) - ^ x264 y32 Debido a la curva que hice aquí, no lo veo tan mal. Por ahora lo dejo.
  3. 00:48:858 (1) - ^ x360 y272 Nop, lo he probado y no me gusta.
  4. 00:48:858 (1) - ^ x340 y288 Me mencionaste el mismo >:
  5. 01:14:320 (3) - con este siento mejor que lo vuelvas horizontal compleamente No lo veo tan mal aquí.
  6. 01:24:908 (3) - muevelo a x216 y116 Hecho.
  7. 01:28:942 (3) - ^ x356 y84 Puede que deba mejorarlo pero tu sugerencia no me gusta xD

Insane

  1. 00:10:286 (7,2) - este blanket lo podrias hacer mejor? Lo veo bien.
  2. 00:11:799 (6,7) - ^ Lo mismo.
  3. 00:27:807 - te sugiero que coloques una nota aqui, asi es menos confuso Lo veo más confuso si pongo otra nota xD
  4. 00:33:858 (4,5) - blanket Fixed.
  5. 00:37:891 (4,5,6) - este extend slider no me gusta, los microsliders empiezan en los blue ticks (y asi no tienen que ser, ya que se verian desprolijos), muevelos plzz Quizá tengas razón... veré qué hago xD
  6. 00:38:396 (6,1) - el spacing entre estos 2 objetos es sumamente confuso, ya que estas usando el mismo spacing que usas para el ritmo 1/4 en el de 1/2) Supongo.
  7. 00:43:312 (2,3,4) - ajusta estos 3 objetos para quitar el spacing entre la cola de (2) y (3), por la misma razon que dije arriba, algo asi se veria mejor: http://puu.sh/dMbbe/bf477f7404.jpg Quité una nota y ya.
  8. 00:52:639 (7,1) - blanket Está bien.
  9. 00:54:026 - añade nota, por la misma razon de antes Lo mismo xD
  10. 01:05:497 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - un blanket entre estos objetos no estaria mal Puede, pero no conseguí que quedara bien :3u

Kawada Mami's voice is soo sweet >.<
i had the idea of map this song ;w;
anyway, GL with rank
choo choo~

@CSGA: First point fixed, but I didn't want to follow vocals. And AR:8'3 fits better for me, this has a lot of rhythm although the BPM is low.

I'll fix BG once I update ><

Thank you guys, just waiting for @Sonnyc
Sonnyc
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Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
SPOILER
Lally:

00:11:043 (3,4) - what about to change this pattern like this: // I'd like to maintain the linear flow with (1), and the symmetry.
00:24:152 (6,1,2) - this pattern doesent flow really good specially 00:24:656 (1,2) - are the biggest problem,you should try to re-do you flow because atm is really meh,here is how your flow does it look like ._. try to fix specially the problem between 00:24:908 (2,3) - // This was in fact made as a mind of a zigzag. I've fixed the placement to make a stable zigzag.
00:42:807 (1,2) - here i would suggest to just to ctrl+j and to rotate the slider a bit to get something like this wich flows better // Both way looks fine, but I'd prefer mine.

CSLMVenezuela:

◾00:14:068 (5) - turn the first and the last red point in curve points, look better imo // I'd like to give a linear curve here, as I've done at (3).
◾00:16:085 (6) - ^
◾00:25:665 (4) - i don't feel very well the slider alined of this way, i sugest what you move the last point to x496 y284 // I feel a straight slider is more stable here.
◾00:27:177 (2) - move this note to x340 y20, of that way make a better conection between 00:26:673 (1) - and 00:27:429 (3) - // Agree~
◾00:29:698 (4) - the flow will be a lot better if make this slider curve to up, like this: http://puu.sh/dMabZ/5ee9fd516f.jpg // There are straight lines since 00:25:665 (4), I'd like to be consistent here.
◾00:47:597 (3,1) - *nazi* bad stacked, try to move (3) or (1) without the Grid Snap option // Fixed
SPOILER
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Source:Shakugan no Shana S
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Thanks for the mod~~
Nyukai
2,431 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
Nyukai
Okay, everything updated. BG should be fine as well.
ProfessionalBox
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
771 posts
Joined September 2013
ProfessionalBox
Sneaky mod here o3o

Easy

>00:30:707 (4,5) - You could make these blanket nicely
>00:48:858 (1,2) - Same here
>01:09:026 (3) - Maybe make the shape here a little bigger since the zigzag is really tiny
>01:23:144 (1) - The flow here is awkward, you could shape this slider otherwise. This could be fun since it would give you a triple blanket if you move this 01:25:160 (2) - and everything after it a bit :p (and I love blankets)

example

Normal

>00:20:623 (1,1) - Stack these ^^
>00:23:396 (2) - Make the curve on this a bit sharper for better blanket !
>00:54:404 (3) - Move this to 323|87 for a nice sharp line, also adjust the circle after this
>01:03:732 (2) - Blanket o3o

Hard

>01:16:589 (2,2) - Blanket here
Really neat diff

Insane

>00:11:799 (6,7) - Blanket
>00:33:858 (4,5) - Blanket o3o
>00:37:513 (3,4) - Blanket ^^
>01:01:715 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - Blanket x)
>01:05:497 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Blanket :3

That's it for the mod, Good luck ^^
Sonnyc
7,761 posts
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Sonnyc
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Nyukai
2,431 posts
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Topic Starter
Nyukai

ProfessionalBox wrote:

Sneaky mod here o3o

Easy

>00:30:707 (4,5) - You could make these blanket nicely
>00:48:858 (1,2) - Same here
>01:09:026 (3) - Maybe make the shape here a little bigger since the zigzag is really tiny Was intentional :3
>01:23:144 (1) - The flow here is awkward, you could shape this slider otherwise. This could be fun since it would give you a triple blanket if you move this 01:25:160 (2) - and everything after it a bit :p (and I love blankets) Was intentional too, I like the pattern. Anyways would be nice if you give me the code of your suggestion.

example

Normal

>00:20:623 (1,1) - Stack these ^^
>00:23:396 (2) - Make the curve on this a bit sharper for better blanket !
>00:54:404 (3) - Move this to 323|87 for a nice sharp line, also adjust the circle after this
>01:03:732 (2) - Blanket o3o

Hard

>01:16:589 (2,2) - Blanket here
Really neat diff

Insane

>00:11:799 (6,7) - Blanket It's fine imo.
>00:33:858 (4,5) - Blanket o3o ^
>00:37:513 (3,4) - Blanket ^^ ^
>01:01:715 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - Blanket x) ^
>01:05:497 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Blanket :3 I didn't want to make a blanket.

That's it for the mod, Good luck ^^
Please @Sonnyc redownload the map because you still have the previous video and we changed it xD

Thank you dear, everything not mentioned means fixed :3
Sonnyc
7,761 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
oh didn't knew that lol
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Rakuen
As requested!

Legend
Default = Normal mods
Blue = Strongly recommended
Red = Unrankable issue
Pink = Will be discussed if not changed

Hitsound

  • There's slight delay for a hitsound (1ms+), prefer it to be cleared

    Use the trimmed one instead: http://puu.sh/eciFD/61046b8b69.wav

    Applies to:
    normal-hitclap
    normal-slidertick2

Normal

  1. 00:08:522 (1,2,3) - Minor, try to symmetry it again, there's veeery little difference there (yea fk this rakuen :d)
  2. 00:23:900 - Remove clap?

Wow, my quickest job in these 2 months, nice map :3

Call me back!
Mystima
71 posts
Joined March 2011
Mystima
Herro M4M here :3

  • General:
  1. Great map, love shana, love Mami.
  2. Found no faults, only things I think could be improved.

    Easy:
  3. 00:32:723 - You could add a note here and move spinner. (It felt unsatisfying without a note there)
  4. 01:31:211 - ^

    Normal:
  5. 00:08:522 (1,2) - I think it sounds better like this: (example)
    SPOILER
    (Vanilla feels kinda stiff)
  6. 00:26:169 (4,1) - turn the left end of the long slider more towards the short one (up)

    Insane:
  7. 00:39:530 (4,5,6,7,8) - The spacing is weird here, 4-5 short 5-6 long 6-7 long 7-8 short
  8. 00:40:539 (8,1) - ^ 8-1 long
  9. 00:51:757 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^
  10. 00:55:917 (5,6,7,8) - ^ 6-7 long
  11. 01:23:648 (3,4) - sudden jump
  12. 01:28:060 (4,5,6,7,1) - ^
Nyukai
2,431 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
Nyukai

Rakuen wrote:

As requested!

Legend
Default = Normal mods
Blue = Strongly recommended
Red = Unrankable issue
Pink = Will be discussed if not changed

Hitsound

  • There's slight delay for a hitsound (1ms+), prefer it to be cleared

    Use the trimmed one instead: http://puu.sh/eciFD/61046b8b69.wav

    Applies to:
    normal-hitclap
    normal-slidertick2 Done.

Normal

  1. 00:08:522 (1,2,3) - Minor, try to symmetry it again, there's veeery little difference there (yea fk this rakuen :d) Lol, I think it's ok but fixed just in case xD
  2. 00:23:900 - Remove clap? It's added in all diffs, I think it fits o3o

Wow, my quickest job in these 2 months, nice map :3

Call me back!
@Mystima: Thanks for your time, although I've received Rakuen's mod, I've checked your mod too! But sadly, I didn't do any change, everything you said is fine as it is imo, I appreciated your suggestions, but sorry :(

Anyways @Rakuen this was a M4M right? I'll mod yours asap.

Also, updated~
Mystima
71 posts
Joined March 2011
Mystima

Inyuschan wrote:

Rakuen wrote:

As requested!

Legend
Default = Normal mods
Blue = Strongly recommended
Red = Unrankable issue
Pink = Will be discussed if not changed

Hitsound

  • There's slight delay for a hitsound (1ms+), prefer it to be cleared

    Use the trimmed one instead: http://puu.sh/eciFD/61046b8b69.wav

    Applies to:
    normal-hitclap
    normal-slidertick2 Done.

Normal

  1. 00:08:522 (1,2,3) - Minor, try to symmetry it again, there's veeery little difference there (yea fk this rakuen :d) Lol, I think it's ok but fixed just in case xD
  2. 00:23:900 - Remove clap? It's added in all diffs, I think it fits o3o

Wow, my quickest job in these 2 months, nice map :3

Call me back!
@Mystima: Thanks for your time, although I've received Rakuen's mod, I've checked your mod too! But sadly, I didn't do any change, everything you said is fine as it is imo, I appreciated your suggestions, but sorry :( Will you still take a look at my map :?. I'd greatly appreciate it

Anyways @Rakuen this was a M4M right? I'll mod yours asap.

Also, updated~
Nyukai
2,431 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
Nyukai
Don't worry @Mystima I'll mod your map soon.

where's my bubble
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Rakuen
Bubbled
Nyukai
2,431 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
Nyukai
Thank you :3 ~
Tari
osu! Alumni
1,671 posts
Joined July 2012
Tari
INYUS makes good maps!

Will check.


[General]


  1. Shakugan no Shana S -> Shakugan no SHANA S from the video : http://puu.sh/ednnj.jpg
  2. For some reason I can't play the video on Windows Media Player o3o You could probably place it with a better video.
[Easy]
  1. 00:52:891 (1) - This new combo isn't needed , try to prevent 1 note combo's the drain don't go fast enough for the need and plus, there are no patterns enough for new combo's to show.
  2. 00:54:908 (1) - I would rather end the spinner at the white tick and silent it, fits better to me.
  3. 00:58:438 (1) - You need to remove this note, you need 4 beats of recovery for the easiest diff.
[Normal]

  1. 00:32:723 (4) - Same as easy, this new combo isn't needed.
  2. 00:54:908 (1) - Same as easy, the spinner end fits better at the white tick.
  3. 01:14:320 (3,1) - Spacing, simply move 3 to the right and 1 to the left.
[Hard]

  1. 00:56:673 (3) - Extend the reverse to white tick, there is still a sound there, and maybe drop volume by 10%
  2. 01:30:076 (2) - This looks nicer stacked.
[Insane]

  1. 00:14:068 (6) - The spacing is confusing, you need to put this in the center of the two previous sliders like this : http://puu.sh/eduW7.jpg
  2. 00:54:152 (6) - Same as above, try this : http://puu.sh/edvcz.jpg
  3. 00:56:673 (8) - Reverse this.
Good Job!
Sonnyc
7,761 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
SPOILER
osu file format v13

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 56673
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Prophecy
TitleUnicode:Prophecy
Artist:Kawada Mami
ArtistUnicode:川田まみ
Creator:Inyuschan
Version:Sonnyc's Hard
Source:Shakugan no Shana S
Tags:灼眼のシャナ OVA Burning-Eyed Opening TV Size Sonnyc
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
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205,159,77849,2,0,P|153:217|75:222,1,160,4|2,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
8,292,78606,1,8,0:0:0:0:
100,312,78858,6,0,B|160:316|212:284|212:284|256:292|300:284|300:284|352:316|412:312,2,320,4|0|0,0:3|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
71,219,81127,2,0,P|72:160|104:108,2,120,4|0|2,0:3|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
160,184,82135,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,100,82387,1,2,0:3:0:0:
304,100,82639,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,184,82891,6,0,B|412:184|412:184|448:184|484:196|501:220,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
428,284,83648,1,8,0:0:0:0:
428,284,83900,2,0,B|368:284|368:284|332:284|296:272|278:247,1,160,0|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
260,156,84656,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,192,84908,1,2,0:3:0:0:
84,156,85160,5,4,0:3:0:0:
84,156,85412,2,0,P|80:172|92:240,1,80,6|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
102,329,85917,2,0,B|144:324|168:288|168:288|216:288|240:261,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
332,228,86673,1,8,0:0:0:0:
423,251,86925,1,2,0:3:0:0:
495,189,87177,5,4,0:3:0:0:
403,166,87429,1,4,0:3:0:0:
331,103,87681,2,0,P|377:71|440:77,2,120,8|4|4,0:0|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
256,164,88690,1,8,0:0:0:0:
181,103,88942,2,0,P|112:68|32:108,1,160,0|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
109,166,89698,1,8,0:0:0:0:
84,256,89950,5,2,0:3:0:0:
111,260,90076,2,0,L|193:274,1,80,4|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
217,279,90455,1,2,0:3:0:0:
296,228,90707,2,0,L|335:234,2,40,8|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
300,324,91211,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,91337,12,2,95244,0:0:0:0:
Fix the source for me Inyus plz~

Extended reverse, didn't made the stack because I didn't prefer 1/4 stack being appeared this map.
Nyukai
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Nyukai

Tari wrote:

INYUS makes good maps!

Will check.


[General]


  1. Shakugan no Shana S -> Shakugan no SHANA S from the video : http://puu.sh/ednnj.jpg Sure.
  2. For some reason I can't play the video on Windows Media Player o3o You could probably place it with a better video. I've played it with WMP and there's no problem. I might ask to someone else just in case the problem is mine.
[Easy]
  1. 00:52:891 (1) - This new combo isn't needed , try to prevent 1 note combo's the drain don't go fast enough for the need and plus, there are no patterns enough for new combo's to show. It's for consistency, shouldn't be a problem.
  2. 00:54:908 (1) - I would rather end the spinner at the white tick and silent it, fits better to me. I don't really agree, it fits better where it finishes atm.
  3. 00:58:438 (1) - You need to remove this note, you need 4 beats of recovery for the easiest diff. Ranking Criteria says: "Easy: 1 full measure of recovery time -> 1500 ms" So I think there's time enough. Anyways I've removed it just in case.
[Normal]

  1. 00:32:723 (4) - Same as easy, this new combo isn't needed. Same as before.
  2. 00:54:908 (1) - Same as easy, the spinner end fits better at the white tick. Same as before.
  3. 01:14:320 (3,1) - Spacing, simply move 3 to the right and 1 to the left. Fixed.
[Hard]

  1. 00:56:673 (3) - Extend the reverse to white tick, there is still a sound there, and maybe drop volume by 10%
  2. 01:30:076 (2) - This looks nicer stacked.
[Insane]

  1. 00:14:068 (6) - The spacing is confusing, you need to put this in the center of the two previous sliders like this : http://puu.sh/eduW7.jpg
  2. 00:54:152 (6) - Same as above, try this : http://puu.sh/edvcz.jpg
  3. 00:56:673 (8) - Reverse this.

    Fixed everything.
Good Job!
Also fixed Source in GD as @Sonnyc requested me to do it.

Still not sure about it though, "Shakugan no SHANA" looks a bit weird for me >: But well, if it's official metadata, it's fine, ofc.

Updated everything~ rip bubble
Tari
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Enjoy this heart~

Qualified!
Ujimatsu Chiya
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gratz~
Winnie
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Congratz on the Shana map :)
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yay congrats
Nyukai
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Tari wrote:

Enjoy this heart~

Qualified!
Oh, thank you <3

Also thanks guys :)
Xinely
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omg grats Inyuschan <3
CSLM
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yyyyyyyyyyyaaaaaaay gratz~ inyus moe
T a r i y o u a r e m y h e r o <3
Natsu
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Natsu
Congrats, I liked easy, normal and hard diff, anyways there was some stuff in the insane diff that I think need some more improvements, maybe for future mapsets.

  1. probably my main complain is the spacing (is kinda random in my opinion), sometimes the 1/4 and 1/2 patterns are the same or the 1/4 jumps are bigger than the 1/2 ones, I have the same feeling as Momochi in his mod: p/3598654
  2. 00:31:841 (5,6) - this double was really weird to play (even with the low bpm), according to the music should be a triplet, there is not reason to ignore 00:31:715 - and map 00:31:841 - 00:31:967 - (since the 3 spot has the same sound/instrument)
  3. 00:18:354 (7,8,1) - your NCs are a bit inconsistent as well, for example here 00:18:354 (7,8,1) - you didn't NC 00:18:354 (7) - but you did it different in 01:04:740 (1,2,3) - even if in both places the vocals are starting in the same place. Another example can be 01:24:908 (1,2) -
  4. 00:37:135 (2) - breaking your clap pattern for not reason? this happen in some other spots as well 00:37:135 (2) - 00:51:253 (2) -
  5. 00:47:597 (4,5) - flow in some spots is kinda bad, personally I found the transition from 4 to 5 really forced to play. (00:48:102 (5) - maybe ctrl g XD
  6. 00:56:169 (6,7,8) - spacing was a bit weird some times like here and other 1/4 jumps.
  7. 00:56:673 (8) - I was a bit confused, since this slider should end in 00:56:925 -
  8. 01:00:707 (1) - 01:02:723 (1) - 01:08:774 (1) - etc, also there are some pasive sliders like this one (not a big problem) but they break the rhythm a bit, even if you are following vocals the slider should start in 01:00:959 - (with the stanza, vocals and music are louder there) also your combo pattern get breaked often due to this.
Overall I think this diff could have a bit more work, spacing, rhythm, hitsounds, blankets and other minor stuffs.
just my personal opinions, anyways consider this for future mapsets.
Nyukai
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Nyukai
Yeah, well, I admit Insane could've been better. It was hard for me mapping it, maybe because the ~slow BPM~, maybe the rhythm overall... So, I'll try to improve some stuff next time, thanks for your advice...

EDIT: I've checked a bit better Natsu's post so I'd like to answer it.

Natsu wrote:

Congrats, I liked easy, normal and hard diff, anyways there was some stuff in the insane diff that I think need some more improvements, maybe for future mapsets.

  1. probably my main complain is the spacing (is kinda random in my opinion), sometimes the 1/4 and 1/2 patterns are the same or the 1/4 jumps are bigger than the 1/2 ones, I have the same feeling as Momochi in his mod: p/3598654
  2. 00:31:841 (5,6) - this double was really weird to play (even with the low bpm), according to the music should be a triplet, there is not reason to ignore 00:31:715 - and map 00:31:841 - 00:31:967 - (since the 3 spot has the same sound/instrument) Sorry but triplet doesn't fit here
  3. 00:18:354 (7,8,1) - your NCs are a bit inconsistent as well, for example here 00:18:354 (7,8,1) - you didn't NC 00:18:354 (7) - but you did it different in 01:04:740 (1,2,3) - even if in both places the vocals are starting in the same place. Another example can be 01:24:908 (1,2) - Not at all, at least in whole map there are more or less the same number of NCs, so I don't think they're consistent
  4. 00:37:135 (2) - breaking your clap pattern for not reason? this happen in some other spots as well 00:37:135 (2) - 00:51:253 (2) - Maybe this is a bit weird, yeah, but I felt like it's not a problem due the slow bpm, and I thought I could make a blanket. Anyways I'll take care about this.
  5. 00:47:597 (4,5) - flow in some spots is kinda bad, personally I found the transition from 4 to 5 really forced to play. (00:48:102 (5) - maybe ctrl g XD Tested, but I didn't like it, in my opinion it flows better as it is.
  6. 00:56:169 (6,7,8) - spacing was a bit weird some times like here and other 1/4 jumps. Changing spacing here due the stream with sliders is not a problem for me o.o
  7. 00:56:673 (8) - I was a bit confused, since this slider should end in 00:56:925 - Not really, it's louder in blue tick.
  8. 01:00:707 (1) - 01:02:723 (1) - 01:08:774 (1) - etc, also there are some pasive sliders like this one (not a big problem) but they break the rhythm a bit, even if you are following vocals the slider should start in 01:00:959 - (with the stanza, vocals and music are louder there) also your combo pattern get breaked often due to this. Since it follows vocals shouldn't be a problem, as you said.
Overall I think this diff could have a bit more work, spacing, rhythm, hitsounds, blankets and other minor stuffs.
just my personal opinions, anyways consider this for future mapsets.
Well, sorry, I couldn't check your comments properly before. I appreciated your comments, and I'll take care of that next time, I just hope there's no unrankeable stuff :/
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