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AKINO from bless4 - MIIRO

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HabiHolic
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HabiHolic
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015년 1월 22일 목요일 at 오후 9:20:10

Artist: AKINO from bless4
Title: MIIRO
Source: 艦隊これくしょん -艦これ-
Tags: みいろ TV Size opening kantai collection kancolle Laurier
BPM: 195
Filesize: 18016kb
Play Time: 01:32
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.57 stars, 93 notes)
  2. Hard (2.97 stars, 205 notes)
  3. Hyper (3.64 stars, 277 notes)
  4. Insane (4.7 stars, 344 notes)
  5. Laurier's Insane (4.87 stars, 346 notes)
  6. Normal (2.1 stars, 156 notes)
Download: AKINO from bless4 - MIIRO
Download: AKINO from bless4 - MIIRO (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Sup


2015.1.5 - Change Mp3 file
2015.1.6 - Change Video
2015.1.20 - Change Mp3 again
Last edited by HabiHolic , edited 50 times in total.
Enon
2,690 posts
Joined November 2012
Enon
[Normal]
00:11:725 (1) - x: 151, y: 135로 옮겨서 슬라이더랑 완벽하게 겹쳐주시는게 좋을 듯??
01:25:571 (1) - ^

[Hard]
00:02:187 (2) - Ctrl + H 하는게 더 모양 이쁜것 같음..

[Insane]
00:26:648 (2) - 이걸 여기에 배치해보시는건 어떨까요?


맵이 좋아서 지적할게 없네요.. 지죤 짧은 모딩 ㅈㅅ
HabiHolic
5,372 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
HabiHolic

Enon wrote:

[Normal]
00:11:725 (1) - x: 151, y: 135로 옮겨서 슬라이더랑 완벽하게 겹쳐주시는게 좋을 듯?? / 수정!
01:25:571 (1) - ^/ 수정!

[Hard]
00:02:187 (2) - Ctrl + H 하는게 더 모양 이쁜것 같음.. / 끙... 이건 뭐랄까.. 이렇게 배치하는게 제 스타일이여서 ㅋㅋ 이건 그냥 둘게요!

[Insane]
00:26:648 (2) - 이걸 여기에 배치해보시는건 어떨까요? / 수정! 플로우가 더 괜찮은것 같아요!


맵이 좋아서 지적할게 없네요.. 지죤 짧은 모딩 ㅈㅅ
모딩감사합니다!
Lari
367 posts
Joined June 2013
Lari
[Hard]
00:10:341 (5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2491813 처럼 살짝 휘게 해보는건 어때여
00:42:033 (7) - Ctrl + G 하시는게 다음노트 칠때 느낌이 더 좋은거같아여

[Insane]
00:35:264 (3) - 요거 00:34:418 (4) - 여기 자리에 두는건 어때요? 위로 커서 올리는거보다.. 오른쪽 왼쪽으로 움직이는게 더 편하기도 하고..!
00:51:725 (4) - x : 336 y : 248 에 두는건 어때여? 처음에 두셧던 자리는 조금 햇갈리는 부분이 있어서.. 옆으로 옴겨놓는게 치기 편할거같아요 모양은 조금 안나오지만..
00:53:110 (1) - x : 344 y : 212 로 둬서 뒤에 연타 자리랑 같은곳에 두게 해바여
00:53:264 (2) - x : 264 y : 40 위에꺼 적용 하시면 요렇게!
00:59:418 (7) - 이건 그냥 단순한 제안인뎅 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2491957 이거 어때여 ?
01:01:341 - 슬슬 연타가 나오기시작하니 손풀겸 여기 노트 하나 추가 !
01:05:648 - 그리고 여기 중간에 노트 하나 빼서 단타로

[Laurier's Insane]
Add kia time

00:27:418 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2498705 形を少し変えてみてはいかがですか？
00:45:725 (3) - Ctrl +G 歌音が下がっています。それに合わせて銅線も下に向けするのはいかがですか？
00:48:495 (1) - 00:48:802 (2) - Ctrl +G 今現在配置良いと思うが。ハイライト部分に向かって音が高まっているので下に向けてジャンプを作成するよりも、スライド2つを向けるのも良いと思います
00:52:187 (1) - もう少し左に ( x : 88 y : 208 )
00:56:956 (1) - Ctrl +G より難しくなって後ろに3回4回ノートの位置も同様に変更すると、動線も良く負けるです
00:57:571 (3) - x : 284 y : 360
00:57:725 (4) - x : 136 y : 180
01:09:264 (4) - x : 249 y : 353 DSが同じ短打より、ジャンプが入ると、より良いような気が提案します

음.. 양이 별로 없네요.. 죄송 ㅠㅠ
Last edited by Lari , edited 1 time in total.
Winnie
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Joined November 2013
Winnie
Laurier is still alive oh boi. I'll leave this here once his GD is done I'll mod this :)
Laurier
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Joined February 2011
Laurier
http://puu.sh/em7OJ/8e89b41232.osu
my diff
Spayyce
693 posts
Joined December 2013
Spayyce
Hey from #modreqs
m4m request? I will link you the map when I done mod :3, do you do marathons tho?

WANNKAAAAAAAAA~

[General]
Hitsounds are a tad loud, they kinda overwhelm the music x.x
is this a short version, because it seems the audio is cut on the end?

[Easy]
00:00:495 (1,2,3) - The blankets don't fir together fully as shown in the picture below, you'll need to add sxc
Blankets
00:07:264 (2,3) - Curve slider 2 more to give off a nicer impression of flow to the player.
00:12:187 (2,3) - ^
00:17:725 (3,4,1) - Why not make the curve on slider 1 curve over both of the sliders for a cool symmetrical effect?
00:19:725 (2,3) - Blanket off by a touch on the left ( use the approach circle for a guide to blanketing )
00:21:110 (4,1) - ^ (to the right this time though)
00:55:879 (1,2) - ^

[Normal]
00:58:802 (2) - Curve more for a nicer flow perhaps and nicer look for the next curve slider?
01:11:879 (1) - ^
01:14:341 (4,5) - Make the same slider for consistency to the music.

[Hard]
00:10:802 (6,7,1) - Another blanket issue :3 both on the right
00:54:033 (7) - idk but it looks better to me if the make it in this angle
Angle
01:08:110 (9) - Remove clap it sounds out of place here x.x

[Insane]
A lot of blanket issues here tbh, I would double check all the ones you've made
00:55:879 (1,2) - Why not have slider 2 in the center of the curve part in slider 1 for example:
Slider
01:28:956 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - That diff spike tho x.x I would be careful here with the diff spike

[Laurier's Insane]
Why no kiai time? x.x
00:07:571 (5,1) - Put the note on the right of the slider, I think it looks better here and makes for a nicer triangle imo.
00:10:341 (1) - Clap on start of slider?

01:20:341 (1,2) - No blanket?

Great mapset, all of the diffs are really good, wouldn't be surprised for rank soon xD
Ichigaki
1,767 posts
Joined February 2013
Ichigaki

IRC mod

Discussing about HabiHolic's diff (Easy-Insane), Fixed some stack issue in normal, and offset (tho still considering by Habi)


Mod
2015-01-11 10:02 HabiHolic: Hello!
2015-01-11 10:02 Ichigaki: hi~
2015-01-11 10:03 HabiHolic: can you my map mod?
2015-01-11 10:03 HabiHolic: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/589693 AKINO from bless4 - Miiro]
2015-01-11 10:03 Ichigaki: wow
2015-01-11 10:03 Ichigaki: Kancolle
2015-01-11 10:03 Ichigaki: finished mapset?
2015-01-11 10:03 HabiHolic: yea!
2015-01-11 10:03 HabiHolic: all done!
2015-01-11 10:03 HabiHolic: 4 diff made me
2015-01-11 10:03 HabiHolic: 1 diff GD
2015-01-11 10:03 Ichigaki: so fast owo)
2015-01-11 10:03 HabiHolic: total 5 diff!
2015-01-11 10:03 Ichigaki: teach me ><
2015-01-11 10:04 HabiHolic: haha...
2015-01-11 10:04 Ichigaki: dl-ing
2015-01-11 10:04 Ichigaki: i only can do irc now
2015-01-11 10:04 Ichigaki: can you?
2015-01-11 10:04 HabiHolic: yes
2015-01-11 10:05 Ichigaki: okay then
2015-01-11 10:05 Ichigaki: lol dl speed so slow :<
2015-01-11 10:05 HabiHolic: lol..
2015-01-11 10:06 HabiHolic: indonesia is internet slow?
2015-01-11 10:06 Ichigaki: a bit slow
2015-01-11 10:06 Ichigaki: probably
2015-01-11 10:06 Ichigaki: my dl speed only 10-40 KBps
2015-01-11 10:06 Ichigaki: :<
2015-01-11 10:07 HabiHolic: orz...
2015-01-11 10:07 HabiHolic: my dl speed is 3 mb..
2015-01-11 10:07 Ichigaki: `-`)
2015-01-11 10:07 Ichigaki: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/589711 AKINO from bless4 - Miiro]
2015-01-11 10:07 Ichigaki: done
2015-01-11 10:08 Ichigaki: what diff first?
2015-01-11 10:08 HabiHolic: haha
2015-01-11 10:09 HabiHolic: Easy
2015-01-11 10:09 Ichigaki: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/589693 AKINO from bless4 - Miiro [Insane]]
2015-01-11 10:09 HabiHolic: Insane frist?
2015-01-11 10:09 Ichigaki: yes
2015-01-11 10:09 HabiHolic: ok~
2015-01-11 10:09 Ichigaki: 00:04:956 (2,3) - should be ctrl + G, i mean slider first
2015-01-11 10:10 HabiHolic: hmm.. i think this flow bad..
2015-01-11 10:10 HabiHolic: so no Fixed..
2015-01-11 10:10 Ichigaki: ah okay
2015-01-11 10:11 Ichigaki: 00:06:033 (1,2) - for vocal right?
2015-01-11 10:11 HabiHolic: yea this note flow vocal
2015-01-11 10:11 Ichigaki: 00:08:341 (3,4) - slider first
2015-01-11 10:11 Ichigaki: for the rhythm
2015-01-11 10:12 Ichigaki: 00:14:956 (7) - how about remove?
2015-01-11 10:13 HabiHolic: \00:14:956 (7) -
2015-01-11 10:14 Ichigaki: 00:24:187 (2) - better note stacked
2015-01-11 10:14 HabiHolic: no... this remove very awkward..
2015-01-11 10:14 HabiHolic: so this sound base
2015-01-11 10:14 Ichigaki: um okay, 
2015-01-11 10:15 HabiHolic: 00:08:341 (3,4) - this  Fixed
2015-01-11 10:16 Ichigaki: 00:25:110 - better add a note here, than move the spinner on 00:25:187 - 
2015-01-11 10:16 HabiHolic: o.o? why..?
2015-01-11 10:16 HabiHolic: i think white tick batter..
2015-01-11 10:17 Ichigaki: ah okay, i can't explain :<
2015-01-11 10:17 HabiHolic: ;w;
2015-01-11 10:17 Ichigaki: 00:42:033 (5) - better not stacked
2015-01-11 10:17 HabiHolic: not stack?
2015-01-11 10:18 Ichigaki: i mean not stacked with 00:42:341 (1) - 
2015-01-11 10:18 Ichigaki: move it along
2015-01-11 10:18 HabiHolic: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2498709
2015-01-11 10:18 HabiHolic: this one?
2015-01-11 10:18 Ichigaki: not like that
2015-01-11 10:19 Ichigaki: maybe on x:348 y:92
2015-01-11 10:19 Ichigaki: but it's up to you
2015-01-11 10:19 HabiHolic: wait~
2015-01-11 10:19 Ichigaki: 00:48:033 - this part shouldn't an end of slider, you need to make it at least the start of slider or just normal note
2015-01-11 10:20 Ichigaki: *normal circle
2015-01-11 10:21 Ichigaki: 00:51:879 (5,6) - confusing, and unsnapped. 
2015-01-11 10:22 HabiHolic: Fixed!
2015-01-11 10:23 Ichigaki: 00:53:110 (1) - move to x:248 y:192 or stack with 00:52:648 (8) - 
2015-01-11 10:24 Ichigaki: 01:07:418 (7) - ctrl + G?
2015-01-11 10:24 HabiHolic: 01:07:418 (7) - this no
2015-01-11 10:24 HabiHolic: small jump this
2015-01-11 10:25 Ichigaki: huehue
2015-01-11 10:25 HabiHolic: 00:53:110 (1) - this Fixed
2015-01-11 10:25 Ichigaki: 01:06:802 (4,5,6) - i can't read this lol, but good anyway
2015-01-11 10:25 HabiHolic: lol...
2015-01-11 10:26 Ichigaki: 01:15:110 (9,10,11) - how about ctrl + G?
2015-01-11 10:26 Ichigaki: more challenging
2015-01-11 10:26 HabiHolic: change is good! but flow is bad.. orz
2015-01-11 10:26 HabiHolic: no Fixed.. sorry
2015-01-11 10:26 Ichigaki: no problem
2015-01-11 10:26 Ichigaki: just my opinion
2015-01-11 10:27 Ichigaki: anyway the end of song
2015-01-11 10:27 Ichigaki: not good
2015-01-11 10:27 Ichigaki: where do you get this song?
2015-01-11 10:28 HabiHolic: tI'm this song is full ver cuting
2015-01-11 10:28 HabiHolic: haha..
2015-01-11 10:28 Ichigaki: lol
2015-01-11 10:28 Ichigaki: then add cut version on tags
2015-01-11 10:28 Ichigaki: anyway, about diff spread
2015-01-11 10:29 Ichigaki: gap from normal to hard is high
2015-01-11 10:29 Ichigaki: depending from your easy and normal
2015-01-11 10:29 HabiHolic: hmm..
2015-01-11 10:29 Ichigaki: okay now go to hard
2015-01-11 10:29 Ichigaki: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/589711 AKINO from bless4 - Miiro [Hard]]
2015-01-11 10:31 Ichigaki: 00:15:110 (8) - stack this with 00:15:264 (1) - 
2015-01-11 10:32 HabiHolic: hmm... now is not bad..
2015-01-11 10:32 HabiHolic: and change is flow bad.. my think..
2015-01-11 10:32 Ichigaki: ah okay
2015-01-11 10:33 Ichigaki: the gap from normal and hard isn't higher than 1.5
2015-01-11 10:34 HabiHolic: hmm..
2015-01-11 10:34 HabiHolic: https://osu.ppy.sh/b/577139&m=0#
2015-01-11 10:34 HabiHolic: this map spread normal hard is.. gap...?
2015-01-11 10:34 Ichigaki: ah okay
2015-01-11 10:35 Ichigaki: the gap from normal and hard isn't higher than 1.5 at least
2015-01-11 10:35 Ichigaki: then it should be find
2015-01-11 10:35 Ichigaki: now let's check the Hard
2015-01-11 10:35 Ichigaki: Insane should be fine for me
2015-01-11 10:39 Ichigaki: Hello
2015-01-11 10:39 Ichigaki: sorry my osu crashed orz
2015-01-11 10:40 Ichigaki: 00:52:495 - http://puu.sh/emhYN/537960433e.png
2015-01-11 10:40 Ichigaki: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/589711 AKINO from bless4 - Miiro [Hard]]
2015-01-11 10:41 HabiHolic: ㅐㄱㅋ..
2015-01-11 10:41 HabiHolic: ok
2015-01-11 10:41 HabiHolic: Fixed
2015-01-11 10:41 Ichigaki: what's that?
2015-01-11 10:41 Ichigaki: :<
2015-01-11 10:41 Ichigaki: 00:54:033 (7) - kick drum started 00:54:341 - 00:54:495 - 
2015-01-11 10:42 Ichigaki: 00:54:264 - 00:54:110 - no drum sound in blue tick
2015-01-11 10:42 Ichigaki: consider it
2015-01-11 10:44 HabiHolic: Fixed
2015-01-11 10:44 Ichigaki: 00:55:418 (1) - compared with your insane, this should be red 'i mean the combo colour'
2015-01-11 10:45 Ichigaki: 01:18:956 (4,1) - confusing, try to move 01:19:264 (1) - somewhere, 
2015-01-11 10:47 Ichigaki: 01:19:264 (1) - maybe add a note here, for the drum roll
2015-01-11 10:47 Ichigaki: hard already good lol
2015-01-11 10:53 Ichigaki: wow, this is catchy
2015-01-11 10:53 Ichigaki: normal ar is 4, and hard is 8
2015-01-11 10:53 Ichigaki: too high
2015-01-11 10:53 Ichigaki: change normal ar to 5 and hard to 7
2015-01-11 10:53 Ichigaki: hello?
2015-01-11 10:54 HabiHolic: yea?
2015-01-11 10:54 Ichigaki: consider that
2015-01-11 10:54 HabiHolic: yes
2015-01-11 10:55 Ichigaki: already look at all mod?
2015-01-11 10:56 HabiHolic: yes..
2015-01-11 10:56 Ichigaki: about ar?
2015-01-11 10:56 HabiHolic: my computer is suck..
2015-01-11 10:56 HabiHolic: orz..
2015-01-11 10:56 Ichigaki: wwww
2015-01-11 10:56 HabiHolic: Normal AR ahnge 5?
2015-01-11 10:57 HabiHolic: change*
2015-01-11 10:57 Ichigaki: yes
2015-01-11 10:57 Ichigaki: and hard to 7
2015-01-11 10:57 Ichigaki: at least
2015-01-11 10:57 HabiHolic: ok
2015-01-11 10:57 Ichigaki: now normal
2015-01-11 10:57 Ichigaki: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/590595 AKINO from bless4 - Miiro [Normal]]
2015-01-11 10:58 HabiHolic: yea
2015-01-11 10:58 HabiHolic: i'm now is normal
2015-01-11 10:58 Ichigaki: 00:01:725 (1,2) - blanket?
2015-01-11 10:59 Ichigaki: 00:24:187 (6,7) - don't stack, move the slider
2015-01-11 11:01 HabiHolic: all Fixed~
2015-01-11 11:03 Ichigaki: 00:27:879 (4,5) - don't stack too
2015-01-11 11:03 Ichigaki: 00:31:725 (2,3) - ^
2015-01-11 11:04 Ichigaki: 00:35:264 (4,5) - 
2015-01-11 11:04 Ichigaki: 00:57:571 (2,3) - ^
2015-01-11 11:04 Ichigaki: 01:01:264 (2,3) - ^
2015-01-11 11:04 Ichigaki: 01:08:033 (3,1) - ^
2015-01-11 11:05 Ichigaki: 01:10:495 (2,3) - ^
2015-01-11 11:05 Ichigaki: just avoid stack in middle of pattern, if like 00:58:648 (1,2) - , it's okay
2015-01-11 11:05 Ichigaki: for normal
2015-01-11 11:10 HabiHolic: ok
2015-01-11 11:10 HabiHolic: all done..
2015-01-11 11:10 Ichigaki: now easy
2015-01-11 11:10 Ichigaki: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/590593 AKINO from bless4 - Miiro [Easy]]
2015-01-11 11:11 Ichigaki: 00:23:571 - should add a note here
2015-01-11 11:13 HabiHolic: very hader patten
2015-01-11 11:13 HabiHolic: no..
2015-01-11 11:13 Ichigaki: no much issue
2015-01-11 11:13 Ichigaki: done
2015-01-11 11:13 Ichigaki: this song is soo cool
2015-01-11 11:13 Ichigaki: ><
2015-01-11 11:15 Ichigaki: i'll post this :)
2015-01-11 11:18 HabiHolic: ok!
2015-01-11 11:18 HabiHolic: update~
2015-01-11 11:19 Ichigaki: pls change the offset into 491
2015-01-11 11:19 Ichigaki: i think it's the better one
2015-01-11 11:21 Ichigaki: what do you think?
2015-01-11 11:21 HabiHolic: hmm
2015-01-11 11:21 HabiHolic: smaill Fast 491..
2015-01-11 11:22 Ichigaki: i used offset analyzer lol
2015-01-11 11:22 Ichigaki: but up to you
2015-01-11 11:23 HabiHolic: ok..
2015-01-11 11:23 HabiHolic: later Fixed offset..
Laurier
1,785 posts
Joined February 2011
Laurier
http://puu.sh/emy7L/81e17cce3f.osu
Ujimatsu Chiya
2,480 posts
Joined December 2013
Ujimatsu Chiya
[Laurier]
  1. 00:11:110 (4,1) - follow feel werid to play
  2. 00:52:956 (6) - cheak blanket pls
[Insane]
  1. 00:04:187 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - 서클 슬라 리듬자체가 조금 어색한데 슬라>서클>슬라>서클 이런식으로 해주는게 좋을거 같네요 리듬이랑 별로 어울리지않네요 지금은
  2. 00:06:187 (2) - 피니쉬 지워주세요 딲히 여기서 이 힛사로 강조할 필요가 없네요.
  3. 00:08:802 (5) - 차라리 00:07:879 (1) - 이쪾 테일에 두는 방법이 좋아보임 힛사도 클렙써서 점프 넣어주는편이 낫다고 봐요 갑자기 확 줄어드는 느낌이 들어서 별로네요.
  4. 00:11:879 (2) - 블랭킷 확인해주세요
  5. 00:21:418 (1) - ^
  6. 00:21:110 (7) - 흠..ctrl+G 해주는것도 좋아보임
  7. 00:33:110 (3) - 이거 조금 왼쪾위로 두시는게 어떄요? 갑자기 확 떨어지는 느낌 줄여주는기도 하고 서클 방향이 왼쪾향하고있으니 추천
  8. 00:40:802 (3) - 마찬가지로 블랭크 확인
  9. 00:48:187 (6) - 개인적인 바램인데 여기서 점프 넣어주면 좋아보여요 여기파트 연속으로 클렙나와서 점프 넣어주면 재밋어보임
  10. 00:50:033 (1) - 꼬리쪾 테일 재확인
  11. 01:04:187 (6) - 이것도 블랭킷 확인
[Hyper]
  1. 00:06:187 (9) - 인센에서는 피니쉬 쓰시면서 여기는 휘슬? 인센이랑 맞춰주시던지 아니면 그냥 인센 처럼 지워주세요.

    하이퍼는 갠적으로 너무 마음에들음 ㅋㅋㅋ
[Hard]
  1. 00:30:033 (4) - 블랭킷 확인
[Easy]
  1. 이지에있는 브레이크타임 노트 그냥 추가해주세요. 티비사이즈맵이서 이런식으로 브레이크 넣는거 진짜 별로같음
어쨰 난이도가 내려갈수록 모딩할꼐 않보임 >_> ㅈㅅ

/me run
HabiHolic
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Topic Starter
HabiHolic

eINess wrote:

[Insane]
  1. 00:04:187 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - 서클 슬라 리듬자체가 조금 어색한데 슬라>서클>슬라>서클 이런식으로 해주는게 좋을거 같네요 리듬이랑 별로 어울리지않네요 지금은 / 딱히 고칠 이유가 없어보이는게 리듬에는 맞는것같아요..저는
  2. 00:06:187 (2) - 피니쉬 지워주세요 딲히 여기서 이 힛사로 강조할 필요가 없네요. / 보컬이 있어서 이걸로 강조한건데.. 일단 유지해보겠습니다.
  3. 00:08:802 (5) - 차라리 00:07:879 (1) - 이쪾 테일에 두는 방법이 좋아보임 힛사도 클렙써서 점프 넣어주는편이 낫다고 봐요 갑자기 확 줄어드는 느낌이 들어서 별로네요. / 저는 흐름이 별로 안좋아진다고 생각해서 이것도 거절할게요~
  4. 00:11:879 (2) - 블랭킷 확인해주세요 / Fixed
  5. 00:21:418 (1) - ^ / Fixed
  6. 00:21:110 (7) - 흠..ctrl+G 해주는것도 좋아보임 / Fixed. 흐름이 훨씬 좋아졌네요
  7. 00:33:110 (3) - 이거 조금 왼쪾위로 두시는게 어떄요? 갑자기 확 떨어지는 느낌 줄여주는기도 하고 서클 방향이 왼쪾향하고있으니 추천 / 제 스타일
  8. 00:40:802 (3) - 마찬가지로 블랭크 확인/ Fixed
  9. 00:48:187 (6) - 개인적인 바램인데 여기서 점프 넣어주면 좋아보여요 여기파트 연속으로 클렙나와서 점프 넣어주면 재밋어보임 / 기각.
  10. 00:50:033 (1) - 꼬리쪾 테일 재확인 / Fixed
  11. 01:04:187 (6) - 이것도 블랭킷 확인 / Fixed
[Hyper]
  1. 00:06:187 (9) - 인센에서는 피니쉬 쓰시면서 여기는 휘슬? 인센이랑 맞춰주시던지 아니면 그냥 인센 처럼 지워주세요. / Fixed

    하이퍼는 갠적으로 너무 마음에들음 ㅋㅋㅋ
[Hard]
  1. 00:30:033 (4) - 블랭킷 확인 / Fixed
[Easy]
  1. 이지에있는 브레이크타임 노트 그냥 추가해주세요. 티비사이즈맵이서 이런식으로 브레이크 넣는거 진짜 별로같음 / Fixed. 패턴 매핑했습니다.
어쨰 난이도가 내려갈수록 모딩할꼐 않보임 >_> ㅈㅅ

/me run
Thanks for mod!
HabiHolic
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Topic Starter
HabiHolic

[ Karen ] wrote:

[Hard]
00:10:341 (5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2491813 처럼 살짝 휘게 해보는건 어때여
00:42:033 (7) - Ctrl + G 하시는게 다음노트 칠때 느낌이 더 좋은거같아여

[Insane]
00:35:264 (3) - 요거 00:34:418 (4) - 여기 자리에 두는건 어때요? 위로 커서 올리는거보다.. 오른쪽 왼쪽으로 움직이는게 더 편하기도 하고..!
00:51:725 (4) - x : 336 y : 248 에 두는건 어때여? 처음에 두셧던 자리는 조금 햇갈리는 부분이 있어서.. 옆으로 옴겨놓는게 치기 편할거같아요 모양은 조금 안나오지만..
00:53:110 (1) - x : 344 y : 212 로 둬서 뒤에 연타 자리랑 같은곳에 두게 해바여
00:53:264 (2) - x : 264 y : 40 위에꺼 적용 하시면 요렇게!
00:59:418 (7) - 이건 그냥 단순한 제안인뎅 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2491957 이거 어때여 ?
01:01:341 - 슬슬 연타가 나오기시작하니 손풀겸 여기 노트 하나 추가 !
01:05:648 - 그리고 여기 중간에 노트 하나 빼서 단타로

[Laurier's Insane]
Add kia time

00:27:418 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2498705 形を少し変えてみてはいかがですか？
00:45:725 (3) - Ctrl +G 歌音が下がっています。それに合わせて銅線も下に向けするのはいかがですか？
00:48:495 (1) - 00:48:802 (2) - Ctrl +G 今現在配置良いと思うが。ハイライト部分に向かって音が高まっているので下に向けてジャンプを作成するよりも、スライド2つを向けるのも良いと思います
00:52:187 (1) - もう少し左に ( x : 88 y : 208 )
00:56:956 (1) - Ctrl +G より難しくなって後ろに3回4回ノートの位置も同様に変更すると、動線も良く負けるです
00:57:571 (3) - x : 284 y : 360
00:57:725 (4) - x : 136 y : 180
01:09:264 (4) - x : 249 y : 353 DSが同じ短打より、ジャンプが入ると、より良いような気が提案します

음.. 양이 별로 없네요.. 죄송 ㅠㅠ

[ Space ] wrote:

Hey from #modreqs
m4m request? I will link you the map when I done mod :3, do you do marathons tho?

WANNKAAAAAAAAA~

[General]
Hitsounds are a tad loud, they kinda overwhelm the music x.x
is this a short version, because it seems the audio is cut on the end?

[Easy]
00:00:495 (1,2,3) - The blankets don't fir together fully as shown in the picture below, you'll need to add sxc
Blankets
00:07:264 (2,3) - Curve slider 2 more to give off a nicer impression of flow to the player.
00:12:187 (2,3) - ^
00:17:725 (3,4,1) - Why not make the curve on slider 1 curve over both of the sliders for a cool symmetrical effect?
00:19:725 (2,3) - Blanket off by a touch on the left ( use the approach circle for a guide to blanketing )
00:21:110 (4,1) - ^ (to the right this time though)
00:55:879 (1,2) - ^

[Normal]
00:58:802 (2) - Curve more for a nicer flow perhaps and nicer look for the next curve slider?
01:11:879 (1) - ^
01:14:341 (4,5) - Make the same slider for consistency to the music.

[Hard]
00:10:802 (6,7,1) - Another blanket issue :3 both on the right
00:54:033 (7) - idk but it looks better to me if the make it in this angle
Angle
01:08:110 (9) - Remove clap it sounds out of place here x.x

[Insane]
A lot of blanket issues here tbh, I would double check all the ones you've made
00:55:879 (1,2) - Why not have slider 2 in the center of the curve part in slider 1 for example:
Slider
01:28:956 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - That diff spike tho x.x I would be careful here with the diff spike

[Laurier's Insane]
Why no kiai time? x.x
00:07:571 (5,1) - Put the note on the right of the slider, I think it looks better here and makes for a nicer triangle imo.
00:10:341 (1) - Clap on start of slider?

01:20:341 (1,2) - No blanket?

Great mapset, all of the diffs are really good, wouldn't be surprised for rank soon xD

Ichigaki wrote:

IRC mod

Discussing about HabiHolic's diff (Easy-Insane), Fixed some stack issue in normal, and offset (tho still considering by Habi)


Mod
2015-01-11 10:02 HabiHolic: Hello!
2015-01-11 10:02 Ichigaki: hi~
2015-01-11 10:03 HabiHolic: can you my map mod?
2015-01-11 10:03 HabiHolic: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/589693 AKINO from bless4 - Miiro]
2015-01-11 10:03 Ichigaki: wow
2015-01-11 10:03 Ichigaki: Kancolle
2015-01-11 10:03 Ichigaki: finished mapset?
2015-01-11 10:03 HabiHolic: yea!
2015-01-11 10:03 HabiHolic: all done!
2015-01-11 10:03 HabiHolic: 4 diff made me
2015-01-11 10:03 HabiHolic: 1 diff GD
2015-01-11 10:03 Ichigaki: so fast owo)
2015-01-11 10:03 HabiHolic: total 5 diff!
2015-01-11 10:03 Ichigaki: teach me ><
2015-01-11 10:04 HabiHolic: haha...
2015-01-11 10:04 Ichigaki: dl-ing
2015-01-11 10:04 Ichigaki: i only can do irc now
2015-01-11 10:04 Ichigaki: can you?
2015-01-11 10:04 HabiHolic: yes
2015-01-11 10:05 Ichigaki: okay then
2015-01-11 10:05 Ichigaki: lol dl speed so slow :<
2015-01-11 10:05 HabiHolic: lol..
2015-01-11 10:06 HabiHolic: indonesia is internet slow?
2015-01-11 10:06 Ichigaki: a bit slow
2015-01-11 10:06 Ichigaki: probably
2015-01-11 10:06 Ichigaki: my dl speed only 10-40 KBps
2015-01-11 10:06 Ichigaki: :<
2015-01-11 10:07 HabiHolic: orz...
2015-01-11 10:07 HabiHolic: my dl speed is 3 mb..
2015-01-11 10:07 Ichigaki: `-`)
2015-01-11 10:07 Ichigaki: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/589711 AKINO from bless4 - Miiro]
2015-01-11 10:07 Ichigaki: done
2015-01-11 10:08 Ichigaki: what diff first?
2015-01-11 10:08 HabiHolic: haha
2015-01-11 10:09 HabiHolic: Easy
2015-01-11 10:09 Ichigaki: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/589693 AKINO from bless4 - Miiro [Insane]]
2015-01-11 10:09 HabiHolic: Insane frist?
2015-01-11 10:09 Ichigaki: yes
2015-01-11 10:09 HabiHolic: ok~
2015-01-11 10:09 Ichigaki: 00:04:956 (2,3) - should be ctrl + G, i mean slider first
2015-01-11 10:10 HabiHolic: hmm.. i think this flow bad..
2015-01-11 10:10 HabiHolic: so no Fixed..
2015-01-11 10:10 Ichigaki: ah okay
2015-01-11 10:11 Ichigaki: 00:06:033 (1,2) - for vocal right?
2015-01-11 10:11 HabiHolic: yea this note flow vocal
2015-01-11 10:11 Ichigaki: 00:08:341 (3,4) - slider first
2015-01-11 10:11 Ichigaki: for the rhythm
2015-01-11 10:12 Ichigaki: 00:14:956 (7) - how about remove?
2015-01-11 10:13 HabiHolic: \00:14:956 (7) -
2015-01-11 10:14 Ichigaki: 00:24:187 (2) - better note stacked
2015-01-11 10:14 HabiHolic: no... this remove very awkward..
2015-01-11 10:14 HabiHolic: so this sound base
2015-01-11 10:14 Ichigaki: um okay, 
2015-01-11 10:15 HabiHolic: 00:08:341 (3,4) - this  Fixed
2015-01-11 10:16 Ichigaki: 00:25:110 - better add a note here, than move the spinner on 00:25:187 - 
2015-01-11 10:16 HabiHolic: o.o? why..?
2015-01-11 10:16 HabiHolic: i think white tick batter..
2015-01-11 10:17 Ichigaki: ah okay, i can't explain :<
2015-01-11 10:17 HabiHolic: ;w;
2015-01-11 10:17 Ichigaki: 00:42:033 (5) - better not stacked
2015-01-11 10:17 HabiHolic: not stack?
2015-01-11 10:18 Ichigaki: i mean not stacked with 00:42:341 (1) - 
2015-01-11 10:18 Ichigaki: move it along
2015-01-11 10:18 HabiHolic: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2498709
2015-01-11 10:18 HabiHolic: this one?
2015-01-11 10:18 Ichigaki: not like that
2015-01-11 10:19 Ichigaki: maybe on x:348 y:92
2015-01-11 10:19 Ichigaki: but it's up to you
2015-01-11 10:19 HabiHolic: wait~
2015-01-11 10:19 Ichigaki: 00:48:033 - this part shouldn't an end of slider, you need to make it at least the start of slider or just normal note
2015-01-11 10:20 Ichigaki: *normal circle
2015-01-11 10:21 Ichigaki: 00:51:879 (5,6) - confusing, and unsnapped. 
2015-01-11 10:22 HabiHolic: Fixed!
2015-01-11 10:23 Ichigaki: 00:53:110 (1) - move to x:248 y:192 or stack with 00:52:648 (8) - 
2015-01-11 10:24 Ichigaki: 01:07:418 (7) - ctrl + G?
2015-01-11 10:24 HabiHolic: 01:07:418 (7) - this no
2015-01-11 10:24 HabiHolic: small jump this
2015-01-11 10:25 Ichigaki: huehue
2015-01-11 10:25 HabiHolic: 00:53:110 (1) - this Fixed
2015-01-11 10:25 Ichigaki: 01:06:802 (4,5,6) - i can't read this lol, but good anyway
2015-01-11 10:25 HabiHolic: lol...
2015-01-11 10:26 Ichigaki: 01:15:110 (9,10,11) - how about ctrl + G?
2015-01-11 10:26 Ichigaki: more challenging
2015-01-11 10:26 HabiHolic: change is good! but flow is bad.. orz
2015-01-11 10:26 HabiHolic: no Fixed.. sorry
2015-01-11 10:26 Ichigaki: no problem
2015-01-11 10:26 Ichigaki: just my opinion
2015-01-11 10:27 Ichigaki: anyway the end of song
2015-01-11 10:27 Ichigaki: not good
2015-01-11 10:27 Ichigaki: where do you get this song?
2015-01-11 10:28 HabiHolic: tI'm this song is full ver cuting
2015-01-11 10:28 HabiHolic: haha..
2015-01-11 10:28 Ichigaki: lol
2015-01-11 10:28 Ichigaki: then add cut version on tags
2015-01-11 10:28 Ichigaki: anyway, about diff spread
2015-01-11 10:29 Ichigaki: gap from normal to hard is high
2015-01-11 10:29 Ichigaki: depending from your easy and normal
2015-01-11 10:29 HabiHolic: hmm..
2015-01-11 10:29 Ichigaki: okay now go to hard
2015-01-11 10:29 Ichigaki: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/589711 AKINO from bless4 - Miiro [Hard]]
2015-01-11 10:31 Ichigaki: 00:15:110 (8) - stack this with 00:15:264 (1) - 
2015-01-11 10:32 HabiHolic: hmm... now is not bad..
2015-01-11 10:32 HabiHolic: and change is flow bad.. my think..
2015-01-11 10:32 Ichigaki: ah okay
2015-01-11 10:33 Ichigaki: the gap from normal and hard isn't higher than 1.5
2015-01-11 10:34 HabiHolic: hmm..
2015-01-11 10:34 HabiHolic: https://osu.ppy.sh/b/577139&m=0#
2015-01-11 10:34 HabiHolic: this map spread normal hard is.. gap...?
2015-01-11 10:34 Ichigaki: ah okay
2015-01-11 10:35 Ichigaki: the gap from normal and hard isn't higher than 1.5 at least
2015-01-11 10:35 Ichigaki: then it should be find
2015-01-11 10:35 Ichigaki: now let's check the Hard
2015-01-11 10:35 Ichigaki: Insane should be fine for me
2015-01-11 10:39 Ichigaki: Hello
2015-01-11 10:39 Ichigaki: sorry my osu crashed orz
2015-01-11 10:40 Ichigaki: 00:52:495 - http://puu.sh/emhYN/537960433e.png
2015-01-11 10:40 Ichigaki: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/589711 AKINO from bless4 - Miiro [Hard]]
2015-01-11 10:41 HabiHolic: ㅐㄱㅋ..
2015-01-11 10:41 HabiHolic: ok
2015-01-11 10:41 HabiHolic: Fixed
2015-01-11 10:41 Ichigaki: what's that?
2015-01-11 10:41 Ichigaki: :<
2015-01-11 10:41 Ichigaki: 00:54:033 (7) - kick drum started 00:54:341 - 00:54:495 - 
2015-01-11 10:42 Ichigaki: 00:54:264 - 00:54:110 - no drum sound in blue tick
2015-01-11 10:42 Ichigaki: consider it
2015-01-11 10:44 HabiHolic: Fixed
2015-01-11 10:44 Ichigaki: 00:55:418 (1) - compared with your insane, this should be red 'i mean the combo colour'
2015-01-11 10:45 Ichigaki: 01:18:956 (4,1) - confusing, try to move 01:19:264 (1) - somewhere, 
2015-01-11 10:47 Ichigaki: 01:19:264 (1) - maybe add a note here, for the drum roll
2015-01-11 10:47 Ichigaki: hard already good lol
2015-01-11 10:53 Ichigaki: wow, this is catchy
2015-01-11 10:53 Ichigaki: normal ar is 4, and hard is 8
2015-01-11 10:53 Ichigaki: too high
2015-01-11 10:53 Ichigaki: change normal ar to 5 and hard to 7
2015-01-11 10:53 Ichigaki: hello?
2015-01-11 10:54 HabiHolic: yea?
2015-01-11 10:54 Ichigaki: consider that
2015-01-11 10:54 HabiHolic: yes
2015-01-11 10:55 Ichigaki: already look at all mod?
2015-01-11 10:56 HabiHolic: yes..
2015-01-11 10:56 Ichigaki: about ar?
2015-01-11 10:56 HabiHolic: my computer is suck..
2015-01-11 10:56 HabiHolic: orz..
2015-01-11 10:56 Ichigaki: wwww
2015-01-11 10:56 HabiHolic: Normal AR ahnge 5?
2015-01-11 10:57 HabiHolic: change*
2015-01-11 10:57 Ichigaki: yes
2015-01-11 10:57 Ichigaki: and hard to 7
2015-01-11 10:57 Ichigaki: at least
2015-01-11 10:57 HabiHolic: ok
2015-01-11 10:57 Ichigaki: now normal
2015-01-11 10:57 Ichigaki: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/590595 AKINO from bless4 - Miiro [Normal]]
2015-01-11 10:58 HabiHolic: yea
2015-01-11 10:58 HabiHolic: i'm now is normal
2015-01-11 10:58 Ichigaki: 00:01:725 (1,2) - blanket?
2015-01-11 10:59 Ichigaki: 00:24:187 (6,7) - don't stack, move the slider
2015-01-11 11:01 HabiHolic: all Fixed~
2015-01-11 11:03 Ichigaki: 00:27:879 (4,5) - don't stack too
2015-01-11 11:03 Ichigaki: 00:31:725 (2,3) - ^
2015-01-11 11:04 Ichigaki: 00:35:264 (4,5) - 
2015-01-11 11:04 Ichigaki: 00:57:571 (2,3) - ^
2015-01-11 11:04 Ichigaki: 01:01:264 (2,3) - ^
2015-01-11 11:04 Ichigaki: 01:08:033 (3,1) - ^
2015-01-11 11:05 Ichigaki: 01:10:495 (2,3) - ^
2015-01-11 11:05 Ichigaki: just avoid stack in middle of pattern, if like 00:58:648 (1,2) - , it's okay
2015-01-11 11:05 Ichigaki: for normal
2015-01-11 11:10 HabiHolic: ok
2015-01-11 11:10 HabiHolic: all done..
2015-01-11 11:10 Ichigaki: now easy
2015-01-11 11:10 Ichigaki: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/590593 AKINO from bless4 - Miiro [Easy]]
2015-01-11 11:11 Ichigaki: 00:23:571 - should add a note here
2015-01-11 11:13 HabiHolic: very hader patten
2015-01-11 11:13 HabiHolic: no..
2015-01-11 11:13 Ichigaki: no much issue
2015-01-11 11:13 Ichigaki: done
2015-01-11 11:13 Ichigaki: this song is soo cool
2015-01-11 11:13 Ichigaki: ><
2015-01-11 11:15 Ichigaki: i'll post this :)
2015-01-11 11:18 HabiHolic: ok!
2015-01-11 11:18 HabiHolic: update~
2015-01-11 11:19 Ichigaki: pls change the offset into 491
2015-01-11 11:19 Ichigaki: i think it's the better one
2015-01-11 11:21 Ichigaki: what do you think?
2015-01-11 11:21 HabiHolic: hmm
2015-01-11 11:21 HabiHolic: smaill Fast 491..
2015-01-11 11:22 Ichigaki: i used offset analyzer lol
2015-01-11 11:22 Ichigaki: but up to you
2015-01-11 11:23 HabiHolic: ok..
2015-01-11 11:23 HabiHolic: later Fixed offset..
thanks for mod! almost Fixed!
caren_sk
782 posts
Joined October 2010
caren_sk
good luck !!

IRC modding
18:56 *HabiHolic is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/589711 AKINO from bless4 - Miiro [Hard]]
18:56 HabiHolic: can you my map mod caren?
18:59 caren_sk: !!
18:59 HabiHolic: !!
18:59 caren_sk: im extra mapper,,,cant mod but proposal isane~
18:59 HabiHolic: haha..
18:59 HabiHolic: ok..
19:01 caren_sk: p/3701205
19:01 caren_sk: miss !!
19:01 caren_sk: 00:35:418 (4) -
19:01 caren_sk: hard jump...
19:02 HabiHolic: hmm..
19:02 caren_sk: why 3→4　
19:02 caren_sk: Direction of travel？
19:03 HabiHolic: hmm
19:03 HabiHolic: this is flow batter..
19:03 caren_sk: ok,np
19:04 caren_sk: 01:05:571 (5,6,7) - proposala
19:04 caren_sk: down it
19:04 caren_sk: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2508013
19:05 HabiHolic: nice!
19:05 HabiHolic: Fixed!
19:05 caren_sk: not find other proposal!
19:06 caren_sk: 00:30:802 (5) -
19:06 caren_sk: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2508021
19:07 caren_sk: hmm...never mind ,i think not better w!!
19:12 HabiHolic: 00:30:802 (5) - i don't like this overlap
19:13 HabiHolic: sorry..
19:15 caren_sk: ok nevermind!
HabiHolic
5,372 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
HabiHolic

caren_sk wrote:

good luck !!

IRC modding
18:56 *HabiHolic is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/589711 AKINO from bless4 - Miiro [Hard]]
18:56 HabiHolic: can you my map mod caren?
18:59 caren_sk: !!
18:59 HabiHolic: !!
18:59 caren_sk: im extra mapper,,,cant mod but proposal isane~
18:59 HabiHolic: haha..
18:59 HabiHolic: ok..
19:01 caren_sk: p/3701205
19:01 caren_sk: miss !!
19:01 caren_sk: 00:35:418 (4) -
19:01 caren_sk: hard jump...
19:02 HabiHolic: hmm..
19:02 caren_sk: why 3→4　
19:02 caren_sk: Direction of travel？
19:03 HabiHolic: hmm
19:03 HabiHolic: this is flow batter..
19:03 caren_sk: ok,np
19:04 caren_sk: 01:05:571 (5,6,7) - proposala
19:04 caren_sk: down it
19:04 caren_sk: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2508013
19:05 HabiHolic: nice!
19:05 HabiHolic: Fixed!
19:05 caren_sk: not find other proposal!
19:06 caren_sk: 00:30:802 (5) -
19:06 caren_sk: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2508021
19:07 caren_sk: hmm...never mind ,i think not better w!!
19:12 HabiHolic: 00:30:802 (5) - i don't like this overlap
19:13 HabiHolic: sorry..
19:15 caren_sk: ok nevermind!
Thanks CRN!
Pretty Rhythm
654 posts
Joined February 2012
Pretty Rhythm
포스트 안하면 까먹을거같애서 일단 포스팅만 해둡니다..

모딩은 차후 이포스트 수정하거나 새로 다시쓸게요
MineC24
1,072 posts
Joined May 2010
MineC24
Modding~

Hard
00:08:341 (2) - 디스턴스를 이구간만 1.1 정도로 하셨는데, 1.3 이상 으로 하는게 좋을 것 같아요
00:23:725 - 이 구간에 노트가 없는데, 뒤에 00:23:879 (1) 를 더 길게 끌거나 노트를 추가해서 약간 바꾸는게 좋을 것 같아요
00:57:725 (7,8) - 곡선의 곡률을 조금 더 크게 하는게 좋을 것 같아요

Hyper
01:05:571 (9,10) - 느낌상 스택하기보다는 낮은 간격으로 다다닥 배치하는게 좋을 것 같아요

Insane
00:21:110 (7) - 컨트롤 + G 순간적으로 간격 넓히지 않고 그냥 쭉 흘러가는게 좋은 것 같아요
01:05:571 (5,6) - Hyper와 같은 이유

00:39:802 (5) - remove this note and set distance
01:12:341 (3) - stack 01:11:879 (1)'s head or http://puu.sh/epBYb/45fc7b848b.jpg
01:30:341 - add finish sound

제가 모딩을 못하기도 하고 이 맵이 잘만들었기도 해서 뭐라 할게 없네요... :D
lolia
1,356 posts
Joined May 2012
lolia
Hi, here's the modding as your request!

  • General
  1. Check-out the Widescreen like your Insane diff
  2. I recommend the AudioLeadIn - 1600
  3. Consider of adding the 'TV Size' and 'opening' in TAGs plz

  • Easy
  1. 00:02:956 (3) - 머리에 휘슬 넣어주는것도 괜찮아 보이네요
  2. 00:07:264 (1) - 이지난이도는 스핀후에 4비트를 비워줘야한다는 바보같은 룰때문에 이건 지워야할꺼같네요 ㅋㅋ
  3. 00:08:956 - 이쪽에 강한 피니시가 있기때문에 00:10:341 (1) - 여기보다는 00:09:418 (3) - 여기에 뉴콤을 넣는게 나을꺼같아요 (뒤의 01:22:802 (1) - 여기처럼..)
  4. 00:11:879 (2) - 위와 같습니다
  5. 00:12:802 (1) - 슬라가 길기때문에 앞의 슬라처럼 좀 꾸며주는게 덜 지루하고 보기에도 괜찮을꺼같아요 (그리고 담요도 같이 고쳐주세요)
  6. 00:16:495 (1) - 이것도 룰때문에 걸리는 부분인데 스핀을 지우고 좀 찍어넣어주시는게 나아보이네요
  7. 00:18:341 (3) - 피아노 소리에 맞춰서 휘슬 머리로 옮겨주시고 00:18:956 (4,5) - 얘들 머리에도 휘슬 넣어주세요
  8. 00:26:341 (1,2,3,4) - 여기 시간이 너무 길어서 00:30:033 (1,2) - 이부분이 상대적으로 너무 짦게 느껴지는 부분인데 (3)에 뉴콤을 넣고 00:30:033 (1) - 이걸 지우는게 좀 더 나을꺼같아요
  9. 00:34:802 (4) - 여기 콤보가 좀 긴거같은데 이쪽에서 끊어주세요
  10. 00:35:110 - 여기에 휘슬 틱소리 넣어주시고 00:35:418 - 이 꼬리부분의 휘슬은 피니시고 바꿔주세요
  11. 00:35:879 (5) - 클랩을 넣기엔 배경음악에 비해 너무 튀는거같은데 휘슬로 바꿔주는건 어떤가요?
  12. 00:36:187 - 이 파트 볼륨이 좀 큰거같은데 50%정도로 줄여주세요
  13. 00:37:418 (1,2) - 음..얘들 꼬리에 휘슬을 넣어주셨는데 들어보면 머리쪽의 보컬이 더 강하기도 하고 00:39:879 (3,4) - 얘들이랑 휘슬 박자가 좀 안맞게 느껴지기도 하는 부분이에요. 꼬리보다는 머리쪽에 넣어주는게 더 듣기 좋을꺼같네요 (이건 뒤의 00:41:110 (1) - 여기부터의 파트에도 같이 바꿔주세요)
  14. 00:41:110 (1) - 개인적으로 동선이 약간 애매하게 느껴지는 부분인데 이런식으로 만드는게 더 확실한 느낌을 주지 않을까요?
    SPOILER
  15. 00:46:033 (1) - 피니시로 바꿔주세요
  16. 00:46:033 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 리듬이 단순해서 이렇게 계속 같은방향으로 돌리면 좀 지루한 느낌도 살짝은 있을꺼같네요..뒤에 스피너도 있어서 고치기도 좀 쉬울꺼같은데 변화를 주시는것도 괜찮을꺼같아요
  17. 00:53:110 - 앞에 전부 클랩을 넣어서 그런지 보컬이 지속되는데 여기서 끊어버리니 좀 어색한 감도 없잖아있네요 노트 하나 넣어주는것도 괜찮을듯..
  18. 01:00:495 - 비워두기엔 보컬이 너무 강하게 들리네요..(01:10:341 - 여기도 같습니다)
  19. 01:02:033 (2) - 꼬리쪽에엔 휘슬보다 드럼피니시에 더 가까운거같아요
  20. 01:12:956 (3) - 리듬의 차이가 있긴 하지만 01:03:110 (1) - 여기처럼 뉴콤 넣어주세요
  21. 01:17:418 - 틱 휘슬
  22. 01:18:033 (5) - 노래를 잘 들어보면 머리부분에 휘슬이 아니라 클랩소리가 들릴껍니다!
  23. 01:18:033 (5,1) - 이렇게 찍는게 좀 더 부드러울꺼같네요
    SPOILER
  24. 모든 난이도에 해당하는건데 난이도 끝부분에 소리 줄이는게 나을꺼같아요. 노래가 점점 작아지는데 끝에 소리가 너무 커서..

  • Nmrmal
  1. 하드랑 하이퍼로 나눠놨지만 그래도 비피엠이 높기때문에 노말을 AR5로 올리고 하드를 AR7.5로올리는게 좋아보이네요
  2. 00:06:495 (1) - 노말에는 스핀뒤에 2비트를 비워야해서 언랭요소가 될꺼같네요 ㅋㅋ
  3. 00:08:187 - 틱클랩 넣어주세요
  4. 00:08:648 (4) - DS체크해주세요
  5. 00:08:956 (1) - 꼬리에 휘슬
  6. 00:18:956 (1) - 이것도 DS체크 부탁드려요
  7. 00:22:495 (3,4) - 이렇게 찍는게 더 자연스러운거같네요
    SPOILER
  8. 00:25:110 (1) - 머리에도 휘슬 넣어주시는건..?
  9. 00:27:418 (3) - 1/2 박자들보면 이것처럼 거의 1.3x인것도 있고 00:29:264 (2) - 이것처럼 같은 파트인데 1.0x, 1.1x인것들도 있는데 파트별로 통일시켜주는게 좋을꺼같아요. 개인적으론 1.2가 나을꺼같은데..
  10. 00:28:033 (5,1) - 이렇게 보컬을 따라가는게 더 어울리는거같네요
    SPOILER
  11. 00:36:187 - 이지와 같습니다 (이 파트 조용한 파트인데 뉴콤이 너무 짧은거같아요. 하나씩 지워서 두개를 묶어주는것도 괜찮을꺼같은데,,)
  12. 00:46:033 (1) - 이지와 같습니다
  13. 00:47:879 (1) - 뉴콤 00:48:495 (3) - 이쪽으로 옮겨주세요 (00:50:341 (6,7,1) - 여기처럼..)
  14. 00:50:341 (6) - 꼬리부분 클랩으로 바꿔주세요 (00:47:879 (1) - 여기처럼..)
  15. 01:02:648 (5) - 이지랑 같습니다 (머리부분)
  16. 01:05:110 (4) - 이건 1/1보단 1/2리버스가 더 어울릴듯한 부분이네요
  17. 01:08:033 (3) - 힛사하나 넣어주는게 나을꺼같네요
  18. 01:14:341 (4) - 방향 반대로 해주세요
    SPOILER
  19. 01:20:802 (1) - 이것도 스핀룰때문에 걸리지않을까싶네요
  20. 01:22:033 - 틱클랩 넣어주세요
  21. 01:22:802 (1) - 꼬리에 휘슬

I'll mod other diffs tomorrow! orz
HabiHolic
5,372 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
HabiHolic
thanks for modding almost Fixed!
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Suimya
Hey Habi :3


General:
  1. you should remove the widescreen support on all diffs, since you didn't really use it on your map o.o
  2. I really think you forgot to add a soft-sliderslide on your map, i really suggest you to add it
  3. I think the title should be like this "MIIRO" since it the official site has that o.o
  4. How about adding "みいろ" to the tags, this also says "Miiro" , and yeah it's from the official site as well..so yeah o3o/


Easy:
  1. 00:12:495 (2,3) - I think you should fix the blanket between those slider+note, it's kinda off right but i think you should fix it easily :3
  2. 00:18:033 (2) - I think you should remove this note, since i kinda don't hear anything and i don't think it fits here. and it'll make the diff a bit easier imo
  3. 00:21:110 - I think a note here would fit much better, since it'll follow the lyrics in the music
  4. 00:37:418 (1) - I highly suggest you here to remove this nc, since it don't really follows anything in music
  5. 01:16:187 (2,3) - how about switching those notes into 1 1/1 slider instead, i think it might fit better with your style here on this diff o.o


Normal:
  1. 00:01:725 (1) - how about adding a whistle to slider's repeat, i think it'll follow with music pretty nice imo :3
  2. 00:02:956 (2) - ^
  3. 00:04:187 (1) - I don't really think whistle on this spinner really fit, so i highly suggest you to remove it
  4. 00:19:418 (2) - this slider kinda sounds off to me for some reasons, how about doing something like this instead? o.o (this would follow the vocal much better imo)
  5. 00:22:495 (3) - ^
  6. 00:32:495 (4) - how about adding nc here, to follow the vocal change in the music o.o
  7. 00:34:341 (2) - how about moving the last slider's point to x:260 y:220, to give the it better flow for the next slider :3
  8. 00:46:033 (1) - how about adding a finish with that whistle on slider's start, it'll follow the song better. Since there is a finish sound in the music so i think it'll fit o.o
  9. 00:48:495 (1) - ^
  10. 01:08:187 (1) - ^


Hard:
  1. 00:03:418 (2) - how about adding a whistle to slider's start, i think it'll follow the piano sound nicely imo :3
  2. 00:04:187 (1) - I really suggest you to remove this whistle from the spinner, since i don't really think it follows any sound in the music.></
  3. 00:15:571 (5) - how about making this slider with ctrl+g, it'll give this slider some fun flow and i really think it'll play even much better imo
  4. 00:23:571 (6,1) - I really suggest you to move those few grids down, since they're a bit too high right now, and they're too close to score line so yeah ></
  5. 00:35:418 (3) - I can hear a clear finish in music on slider's start, how about adding a finish there, I think it might fit o.o
  6. 00:37:418 (3,4,5) - how about adding a whistle to these slider's repeat, it'll follow the piano sound perfectly and it'll sound much better imo
  7. 00:42:341 (3,4) - ^ with same reason above
  8. 00:52:956 (7) - I think you should add a finish to slider's tail, since i can hear it clearly in the music..so yeah i think it might fit here
  9. 00:58:341 (1) - ^ but on slider's start for this one o.o
  10. 01:08:187 (3) - ^
  11. 01:19:571 (2) - how about giving this slider a ctrl+g, to give some fun flow for this part. I think it might fit
  12. 01:27:571 (5) - finish on slider's tail might follow great here, since i can hear it in the music


Hyper:
  1. 00:05:418 (5) - how about adding a nc here, i think it'll follow the music perfectly o3o
  2. 00:16:033 (4) - I think this note sounds great with clap, how about replacing it with a finish instead. finish would sound much stronger then clap here, that's why o.o
  3. 00:21:418 (1) - I don't think the repeat gives nice flow for this part imo, how about removing the repeat and adding 1 1/2 slider or 2 notes instead. it'll follow much better then
  4. 00:28:802 (9,1) - I really think you should switch the nc here, since the new vocal started at (9) not at (1) imo
  5. 00:34:802 (1) - I really think finish on slider's start would sound great, since i can hear it there ><
  6. 00:37:418 (3,4) - how about adding a whistle to both slider's repeat, i think it'll sound much better with music imo
  7. 00:42:033 (7) - how about making this slider with ctrl+g, it'll give it some flow for the next slider, and i really think it'll be much fun too
  8. 00:48:495 (1) - how about giving the slider's start a finish, since it'll follow great with music here, and it'll fit as well o.o
  9. 00:53:418 (5) - ^
  10. 00:56:648 (3) - I think this slider would flow much better if you give it a ctrl+g, since the flow here is kinda weird right now, so yeah ><
  11. 01:29:110 (1) - I really think you should reduce this by one repeat till it end here 01:29:571 - , it'll follow better with music imo (and don't forget you should add a finish to slider's end if you did that o.o)
  12. 01:29:725 (2) - I think this slider follows anything in the music, how about removing it and add a spinner instead. It'll fit much better imo

Insane:
  1. 00:10:341 (6) - how about adding a nc here, since i think it fits for the jumps you did here o.o
  2. 00:16:033 (4) - same as i said about this on Hyper diff, finish would fit much better here
  3. 00:16:495 - why you did hitsound this part, it sound kinda weird, since you did it on the other diffs, so you should get that check ><
  4. 00:37:418 (3,4) - how about adding a whistle to both slider's repeat, it'll follow great with the music imo
  5. 00:42:341 (1,2) - ^
  6. 00:46:033 (1) - how about adding a finish to slider's start, since i can hear it in the music so i think it'll fit imo
  7. 00:46:648 (3) - how about adding a nc here, cus it'll make weird jump without it imo, so i think it'll fit
  8. 00:48:495 (1) - I think finish on slider's start would sound great imo, since i can hear it clearly in the music o.o
  9. 00:52:187 (6) - how about adding a nc here for the jump you did on this part o.o
  10. 00:54:495 (7) - how about replacing this clap with finish instead, clap don't really sound as strong as finish here..so yeah ></
  11. 00:57:110 (5) - how about adding a nc here, it'll fit for the jump you did on this part
  12. 01:04:495 (7,1) - I really think you should switch the nc here, since the new vocal started at (7) not at (1) imo
  13. 01:05:571 (7,1) - ^
  14. 01:07:110 (8) - how about adding a nc here, it'll follow great with music imo, and it'll make a better jump
  15. 01:11:879 (6) - ^ to follow the new vocal in the music and to fix the jump on this part
  16. 01:14:341 (6) - ^
  17. 01:16:802 (1) - how about adding a finish to slider's start, it'll sound much better with the music imo
  18. 01:29:725 (4) - ^ to follow the finish in the music


BL's Insane:
  1. 00:02:956 - I think 20% volume is a bit too low, so i think you should rise it up a bit to 40 or to 35, both would fit better imo
  2. 00:08:648 (5) - I think this slider giving this part a weird flow imo, so how about doing something like this instead o.o
  3. 00:10:341 (1) - how about adding a finish on slider's start, since it'll follow the music great imo
  4. 00:16:187 (5) - I don't really think this note really follows anything in the music, so i think you should just remove it (if you did that don't forget to add finish to this note 00:16:033 (4) - since i can hear it in the music imo)
  5. 00:16:495 (1) - I think replacing the finish on slider's start with a whistle would sound much better imo, since the finish sounds too strong for this slow relaxing part o.o
  6. 00:18:956 (1) - how about adding a whistle to slider's start, to follow the piano in the music o.o
  7. 00:21:418 (1) - ^
  8. 00:31:264 (1) - I think finish on slider's start would sounds good, since i can hear it clearly here
  9. 00:33:725 (1) - ^
  10. 00:37:418 - how about adding green line here with soft default hitsounds, then you should add some whistles for this part o.o (since this part sounds kinda empty right now, and i don't think it fits imo)
  11. 00:37:879 (5) - ^ add whistle to slider's start here
  12. 00:38:648 (1) - ^
  13. 00:39:264 (3) - ^
  14. 00:40:341 (2) - ^
  15. 00:41:418 (2) - ^
  16. 00:41:110 (1) - ^ but at slider's tail this time
  17. 00:41:725 (3) - ^ but for this at slider's start
  18. 00:42:802 (2) - ^
  19. 00:44:187 (3,4) - ^
  20. 00:48:802 (2) - how about making ctrl+g for this slider, to give it a better flow and fun play for it o.o
  21. 00:50:956 (1) - how about adding a finish to slider's start, i can hear in the music, so yeah o3o
  22. 00:54:495 (6) - ^
  23. 01:22:802 (1) - ^
  24. 01:24:956 (5) - I think this slider would flow much better with the music, if you did a ctrl+g for it, since the flow here kinda weird so yeah =3=/
  25. 01:29:418 (1) - how about adding a finish here 01:29:571 - , i can hear it clearly in the music o.o


That's all i can find on this map, good map as always Habi and baka Laurier =w=/ <3

Good luck getting this map ranked :3
[ Zzz ]
1,296 posts
Joined June 2011
[ Zzz ]
모딩 늦어서 미안행!!

Easy
  1. 00:02:956 (3) - 저렇게 하는게 더 흐름이 좋아보여.
  2. 00:21:418 (1) - 슬라이더 끝에 휘슬추가. 00:22:341 (2) - 휘슬제거. ( 그 이유는 이전 슬라 두개정도에서 비슷한 리듬이있으니까 일관성을 위해 저렇게 하는게 더 좋아보여서.. )
  3. 00:29:725 (4) - 서클추가 + 클렙추가. ( 00:29:110 (2) - 될수있다면 여기도 추가해주는게 좋다고 봐. )
  4. 00:32:187 (2) - 서클+클렙추가.
  5. 00:33:418 (4) - 위와같음 ( 근데 이거랑 위에꺼는 노말난이도랑 비교해도 괜찮을꺼같아.
  6. 00:42:033 (2) - 위와같음
  7. 01:00:495 (6) - ^
  8. 01:01:725 (2) - ^
  9. 01:04:802 (3) - ^
  10. 01:06:648 (2) - ^ x128 y308
  11. 01:10:341 (8) - ^
  12. 제안이긴 한데 .. 01:19:879 (2) - 여기에 서클하나 추가해주면 어떨까?
난이도 스프레드때문에 서클넣기 좀 그렇다면 안심해도될듯..1.56 > 1.61 ( 노말과의 차이 0.49이상나니까 .. ) 개인적으로 서클추가해주는게 좋을꺼같아.
너무 어색해 지금으로는 ..

Normal
  1. 00:08:187 (4) - 여기 틱레 2로 해서 클렙소리 넣어주는게 더 좋을꺼같아.
  2. 00:11:264 (5) - ^
  3. 00:19:879 (3) - 틱레 3으로 해서 휘슬소리 넣어주면 좋을꺼같아.
  4. 00:22:956 (4) - ^
  5. 00:32:802 (5) - 간격이 좀 큰거같은데 .. 1.32
  6. 00:47:879 (4) - 시작에 00:48:187 (5) - 끝에 휘슬대신 클렙추가. ( 더 좋아보여! )
  7. 00:50:341 (4,5) - ^ 위와 같이 올 클렙

Hard
  1. 01:27:571 (5) - 이걸 지우고 서클하나로 변경.( 하드는 잡을게없어서 ..제안! )
  2. 01:27:725 (1) - 여기서부터 스피너. 01:30:341 (1) - 끝.

Hyper
  1. 00:50:495 (8,9) - 여기 중간에만 클렙들어가있는데 전부 클렙 ㄱㄱ
  2. 01:08:110 (9) - 클렙제거.( 파란선에 클렙이라 좀 .. )

Insane
  1. 00:04:956 (2) - 가리는데다가 다음으로 이어지는 흐름도 안좋은거같아 .. 보이면서 흐름도 좋게 만들어주면 좋을듯!
  2. 00:48:341 (7) - 휘슬 클렙 스왑해줘.
  3. 00:50:495 (2,3) - 여기도 하이퍼처럼 2번 시작에 휘슬대신 클렙넣어주고 3번 서클에도 클렙넣어줘. 그게더 보기좋아. ( 하이퍼에서 이해가 안된다면 이거참고 . )
개인적으로 저렇게 완벽하게 가리면 .. 너무 치기 힘들꺼같아 .. 노트 외워야되는거같고 .. ㅠ_ㅠ.. 바꿔주면 좋을꺼같아.
몇몇 많은 ... 가리는 서클들..

Laurier's Insane
  1. Hi~ Laurier
  2. 00:15:879 (3,4) - Add Clap!!
  3. 00:50:495 (7,8,9) - Some!
  4. 00:51:571 (3) - Slider head ( Whishle > Clap ) Swap
  5. 00:52:187 (1) - Whishle > Clap ( Swap )
  6. 00:52:802 (5) - Some!
  7. 00:52:802 (5) - Some!
  8. 00:53:725 (2) - Slider head ( Whishle > Clap ) Swap
  9. 00:54:341 (4) - Whishle > Clap ( Swap )

Good map!! Star~ :3
HabiHolic
5,372 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
HabiHolic
Thanks mod~

[ Zzz ] -> 흠.. 개인적으로 겹치는 패턴을 내가 좋아해서 ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ 한번 고려해볼게~
lolia
1,356 posts
Joined May 2012
lolia
no kds

  • Hard
  1. 00:06:495 (1) - 노말처럼 꼬리에 휘슬 넣어주세요
  2. 00:08:956 (1) - 이것도 위와 같은 음이기때문에 넣어주세요 (그래야 00:11:418 (3) - 이까지의 힛사가 맞을꺼에요)
  3. 00:10:187 (4) - 디스턴스 같게 해주세요
  4. 00:15:879 (6) - 이 음은 강하기때문에 ctrl g 시켜서 패턴에 변화를 주는게 더 어울릴꺼같아요
  5. 00:23:725 - 보컬이 강해서 무시하고 00:23:879 (1) - 이 음을 따라가는건 좀 어색하네요.. (1)을 1/2스냅 당기는게 나을꺼같아요
  6. 00:36:187 - 음..이 파트 노말 뉴콤보 킵하셨던데 하드 ~ 인센까지도 똑같이 뉴콤 적용시켜주세요. 노말만 짧고 나머지는 전부 기네요..
  7. 00:44:802 (5) - 앞의 규칙처럼 디스턴스 1.1로 맞춰주시고 리버스에 드럼클랩으로 바꿔주세요
  8. 00:48:033 (7) - 여기에 뉴콤을 넣어주시거나 00:50:341 (1) - 이쪽의 뉴콤을 풀어주세요.
  9. 00:48:187 (8) - 머리 = 휘슬, 꼬리 = 클랩
  10. 00:50:341 (1) - ctrl g 시키는게 앞과 더 자연스럽게 연결되는데 이 난이도 디스턴스가 일정범위내에서 일정하기때문에 애매하네요..
  11. 01:15:264 (7) - (76,172)부근으로 옮겨서 이 뒤의 슬라와의 디스턴스를 1.4로 해주세요
  12. 잘만드셨는데..디스턴스 규칙을 알 수가 없어서 잡을게 없네요 ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ

  • Hyper
  1. 00:00:341 (1) - 으..스노하 언랭되고나서 1/6박에 민감해졌는데 이부분 1/6스냅으로 바꿔주세요 ㅋㅋㅋㅋ
  2. 00:06:033 (4,5) - 음악이 없는 부분이라 노트로 찍어놓으니 좀 많이 어색하게 들리는 부분이에요. 슬라로 바꾸는게 더 어울리겠네요..
  3. 00:34:417 (4) - 인세인에서라면 괜찮은데 하이퍼에서는 필요없는 리듬같네요
  4. 00:36:802 (2) - 좀 너무 올라가지 않았나싶네요. (300|248)정도가 더 나을꺼같은데..
  5. 00:45:264 (2) - 하드와 같습니다
  6. 00:52:495 (2) - 얘 혼자 1.2로 되어있는데 1.3으로 고쳐주세요 (444,92)
  7. 00:56:956 (4) - (nazi) 꼬리 1그리드 내려주세요
  8. 01:07:264 (5) - 크게 차이는 없지만 이게 약간 더 나을수도있을꺼에요
    SPOILER
  9. 01:18:648 (3) - 꼬리부분 하드처럼 휘슬로 바꿔주세요
  10. 01:29:110 (1,2) - 이거 클랩 지우는걸 추천드려요. 음악이 점점작아지는데 클랩이 너무 튀어서 오히려 듣기가 불편하네요,,

  • Insane
  1. 00:00:341 (1) - 하이퍼와 같습니다
  2. 00:04:956 (2,3,1) - 음..듣자마자 어색한느낌이 들었는데 이렇게 바꿔보세요
    SPOILER
  3. 00:06:187 (2) - 피니시 없는게 음악이랑 더 잘맞겠네요
  4. 00:24:187 (2) - 앞의 스택처럼 00:24:341 (3) - 여기에 스택시켜주세요
  5. 00:30:956 (6) - ctrl g
  6. 00:42:341 (1,2) - 이 이전의 난이도들보다 디스턴스가 좁으니 좀 안어울리기도하고 00:37:418 (3,4) - 여기는 넒게 찍으셨는데 이것도 수정을..
  7. 00:46:033 (1,2,3,4) - 이런식으로 하는게 더 재밌겠네요
    SPOILER
  8. 00:48:341 (7) - 이거는 00:48:495 (1) - 얘 머리에 스택시키는게 더 나아보이네요
  9. 00:52:187 (1) - 이거 ctrl g 시키는게 다음 점프랑 더 부드러워보이는데 이거랑 00:51:879 (5) - 이거까지 ctrl g 시키면 괜찮을꺼같네요
  10. 00:53:418 (3,4) - 이것도 각각 머리위치 바꿔주는게 00:53:110 (1,2,3) - 이 점프랑 00:53:725 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 이 흐름이 더 자연스러워질꺼같네요
  11. 01:04:033 (5) - 개인적인 의견으로는 (4)에 스택시키는게 더 어울리는거같아요
  12. 01:19:725 (4,1,2) - 삼각점프로 만든다음 (4,1)뉴콤 바꾸는것도 어울리겠네요
  13. 01:29:725 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 비피엠도 높고 로리어 인센에서도 1/4슬라로 연타를 다 처리해서 얘들은 1/4 리버스로 놓는게 좋아보이네요

  • Laurier's Insane
  1. 00:00:341 (1,2) - change this to 1/6 snap notes or 1/6 reverse slider plz
  2. 00:14:802 (5) - change the head's whistle to clap? It will be better to emphasize the music
  3. 00:15:879 (3,4) - ^
  4. 00:16:495 (1) - consider of removing this finish cuz the music is silent and there's no cymbal sound
  5. 00:31:264 (1) - finish on head
  6. 00:45:264 (2) - Personally head's sound is close to drum-clap rather than drum-finish
  7. 00:48:802 (2) - Ctrl g is better flow imo
  8. 01:30:033 (1) - remove one arrow and add a note at the end?

뭘 모딩해라는거죠 ㅜ

Good mapset, GL!
Laurier
1,785 posts
Joined February 2011
Laurier
http://puu.sh/eswHT/03f53c6cd5.osu
HabiHolic
5,372 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
HabiHolic
Karia's modding Fixed and Laurier diff update
Sonnyc
7,753 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
General:

-- soft-hitclap, soft-slidertick4 음량 감소 http://puu.sh/esGDh/5b2e95b368.wav

Laurier's Insane:

-- Recommend adding a volume reduction here. 00:04:187 -

00:25:725 (4,5,6) - Suggesting shrinking the pattern to avoid repeats. This is an extremely personal suggestion. http://puu.sh/esGVZ/e417536d7c.jpg
00:49:725 (1) - Imo the current flow to (2) seems way too smooth. The sharpened flow which appears after ctrl+G would rather fit.
01:30:340 - Mind adding a Finish to end the map?

IRCed with HabiHolic.
SPOILER
22:19 HabiHolic: 완료 ㅋㅋㅋ
22:44 Sonnyc: 밸런스 위해서 우선 노말 ar5로 조절해주세요
22:44 HabiHolic: dk
22:44 HabiHolic: 아
22:44 HabiHolic: 노멀 AR5 극혐인데 저..
22:44 HabiHolic: 밸런스를 위한것이니
22:44 HabiHolic: 5로 올릴게여 ㅋㅋㅋ
22:45 Sonnyc: 이거 mp3
22:45 Sonnyc: 컷컷인가요?
22:45 HabiHolic: 아
22:45 HabiHolic: 다른맵들도
22:45 HabiHolic: 전부 저런식으로 짤려있던데
22:45 HabiHolic: ㅋㅋㅋㅋ
22:46 Sonnyc: 다른곳에서 구해오신거에요?
22:46 HabiHolic: 아 저는
22:46 HabiHolic: 네이버에서 찾은거예여
22:46 Sonnyc: 넵
22:49 HabiHolic: 저도 정확히 끊킨거찾을라했는데
22:50 HabiHolic: 다 저래서
22:50 HabiHolic: 그냥..
22:50 Sonnyc: 신작인가봅니다? ㅋ
22:53 HabiHolic: 들킴
22:53 HabiHolic: 칸코레 애니로 나왔자나여
22:53 Sonnyc: 저는 모딩밖에 모릅니다 ㅋㅋ
22:53 HabiHolic: 칸코레 오프닝임
22:53 HabiHolic: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
22:53 Sonnyc: 이지 00:18:956 (4) - 콤보가 좀 길어졌는데뉴콤 부탁합니다.
22:53 HabiHolic: 수정~
22:56 Sonnyc: 00:31:571 - 00:32:802 - 00:34:033 - 기분탓인지 모르겠는데 소리가 너무 큰듯 해요
22:56 Sonnyc: 이것들만 60%로 조정 가능하신가요?
22:56 Sonnyc: 그냥
22:56 Sonnyc: 힛사 자체 소리가 좀 큰거려나요<<
22:57 Sonnyc: 아 귀아파요 ㅠㅠ
22:57 HabiHolic: ..
22:57 HabiHolic: 귀태러 ㅈㅅ
22:57 HabiHolic: 일단 수정!
22:57 Sonnyc: ㄴㄴ 수정 무르시고
22:57 Sonnyc: 제가 음량 줄여서 힛사 보내드릴게요
22:58 Sonnyc: 파장이 너무 크네요 지금 ㅠㅠ
22:58 HabiHolic: 그냥
22:58 HabiHolic: 증폭내리면
22:58 HabiHolic: 되지않을까여?
22:58 Sonnyc: 하비님이 힛사 증폭 내려주실건가요?
22:59 HabiHolic: 저 mp3gain 인가
22:59 HabiHolic: 그걸로
22:59 HabiHolic: 증폭조절
22:59 Sonnyc: 조절 부탁드립니다~~
22:59 HabiHolic: 맨날하는뎈ㅋㅋ
22:59 HabiHolic: 일단 조절하고
22:59 HabiHolic: 재업로드 할게여
23:00 Sonnyc: 노말 00:29:264 (2) - 간격
23:01 HabiHolic: 수정
23:01 Sonnyc: 00:30:033 (4) - 이거도 간격
23:01 Sonnyc: 00:32:495 (1,3) - 간격
23:01 HabiHolic: 이미수정
23:01 Sonnyc: 00:34:802 (3) - 
23:02 HabiHolic: 간격?
23:02 Sonnyc: 넹
23:02 HabiHolic: 수정~
23:02 Sonnyc: 00:51:571 (2) - distance
23:03 HabiHolic: 수정~
23:04 HabiHolic: 수정~
23:04 Sonnyc: 01:05:571 - 노트 넣어주세요. 가사 있는데 비어있어서 어색한 기분인듯해요
23:04 HabiHolic: 흠 너무 어려워질거같아요...
23:04 HabiHolic: 가사만 강조해도 좋을것 같다는 생각..
23:04 HabiHolic: 크게들리는 보컬
23:05 Sonnyc: 새 피니시 도입부라서 넣는거도 괜찮아 보이지만
23:05 Sonnyc: 그렇게 생각하시면 패스~~
23:05 Sonnyc: 01:12:802 (3) - 간격
23:05 Sonnyc: 01:15:879 (2) - 간격
23:05 HabiHolic: 힛사
23:05 HabiHolic: 증폭기가
23:05 HabiHolic: 안됨
23:06 HabiHolic: 수정
23:06 Sonnyc: 01:22:494 (3) - 간격
23:06 Sonnyc: 01:26:341 (3) - 간격
23:06 Sonnyc: ㅋㅋ 간격 에러 왤캐 많아요
23:07 HabiHolic: 그러게요
23:07 HabiHolic: 디스턴스 켜고
23:07 HabiHolic: 이지 노멀은 만들거든요
23:07 HabiHolic: 전..
23:07 HabiHolic: 노트찍으면
23:07 HabiHolic: 노트들ㅇㅣ
23:07 HabiHolic: 이리저리로 도망가요;;
23:07 HabiHolic: ㅡㅡ
23:07 Sonnyc: zzzz
23:08 HabiHolic: 힛사 불륨
23:08 HabiHolic: 줄여주시면 안댈까여;;
23:08 HabiHolic: 줄이려고했는데
23:08 HabiHolic: 이게 mp3 파일만되가지고
23:08 HabiHolic: 하하..
23:09 Sonnyc: 넵
23:09 Sonnyc: 하드도 간격 좀 보이는데 말씀드릴까요?
23:10 HabiHolic: 흠.. 하드는
23:10 HabiHolic: 제가 점프를 넣지않아서
23:10 HabiHolic: 그렇게 눈에띄지 않으면
23:10 HabiHolic: 별로 고치고싶지가 않아여..
23:11 Sonnyc: 넵
23:11 HabiHolic: 풀맵셋 찍으니까
23:11 HabiHolic: 모딩받기가 좀 힘드네옄ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
23:12 Sonnyc: ㅋㅋ
23:12 Sonnyc: 짧은것들을 선호하니.
23:13 HabiHolic: 그래도 저건
23:13 HabiHolic: 제가 풀맵셋을
23:13 HabiHolic: 찍어보고싶었슴돠
23:14 Sonnyc: ^^
23:15 HabiHolic: ^^
23:16 Sonnyc: 하드 01:02:956 (6,1) - 이거 콤보 다른데 스택이라 미적 우수성이 감소됐는데 (6)에서 콤보 시작 고려해주세요
23:16 HabiHolic: 근데 저거 보컬시작부분이라서
23:16 Sonnyc: 01:07:571 (1,3) - 음악에 맞춰서 (3)에서 콤보 시작해주세요.
23:16 HabiHolic: 저대로 두고싶은데..
23:17 HabiHolic: 수정
23:17 HabiHolic: :3
23:17 Sonnyc: 01:10:341 (7,1) - 이건 간격좀
23:17 Sonnyc: 01:12:802 (5) - ^ 1.4
23:17 Sonnyc: 음
23:17 Sonnyc: 헷갈리네요 ㅋ
23:17 HabiHolic: 수정했습니다.
23:20 Sonnyc: 하이퍼 00:48:956 (2) - 이건 간격좀
23:20 Sonnyc: 00:53:418 (5) - 뉴콤 넣어볼만해 보이네요
23:21 HabiHolic: 오
23:21 HabiHolic: 졸다
23:21 HabiHolic: 수정
23:21 Sonnyc: 00:55:264 (2,1) - 둘 스택시키고 (1)의 콤보 푸는게 안티 점프 느낌나고 괜찮을 것 같은데 도전좀
23:22 Sonnyc: 01:13:418 (2) - 간격
23:22 HabiHolic: 00:55:264 (2,1) -
23:22 HabiHolic: 이건 제 스타일이라 별로 고치고싶지 않은데..
23:22 HabiHolic: 둬도 되나요?
23:22 Sonnyc: 물론이죠
23:23 HabiHolic: 간격수정!
23:23 Sonnyc: 라우리어꺼는
23:23 Sonnyc: 따로 포스팅해야하죠?
23:23 HabiHolic: 지금
23:23 HabiHolic: 온라인인데
23:24 Sonnyc: 네
23:24 Sonnyc: 하이퍼/인센 공통으로 00:04:187 - 여기에 음량 감소 넣어주셨으면 좋을것 같습니다.
23:24 HabiHolic: 30으로
23:24 HabiHolic: 줄렸습니다
23:25 HabiHolic: 줄였습니다.
23:25 Sonnyc: 00:41:110 (4) - 뉴콤 넣으시고 00:42:341 (1) - 뉴콤 빼셔야 대칭 패턴의 콤보가 00:37:418 (3,4) 이거처럼 나옵니다.
23:26 HabiHolic: 인센?
23:26 Sonnyc: 네
23:26 HabiHolic: ㅇㅋ
23:26 HabiHolic: 수정!
23:26 Sonnyc: 01:22:802 - 다른 난이도들처럼 소프트 피니시로 해주세요
23:27 Sonnyc: 01:25:264 - ^
23:27 HabiHolic: 다들
23:27 HabiHolic: 제맵 어려워졌다고
23:27 HabiHolic: 난리
23:27 HabiHolic: 그건제가
23:27 HabiHolic: 미리다 고쳐놨습니다.
23:27 HabiHolic: 껄껄
23:27 Sonnyc: ㅇㄴ 업로드 안하시고 뭐함
23:27 Sonnyc: 제가 업데이트를 안한건가요 ㅋ
23:28 HabiHolic: 아니여
23:28 HabiHolic: 하이퍼
23:28 HabiHolic: 모딩하시는동안
23:28 HabiHolic: 슬쩍..
23:28 HabiHolic: 가서
23:28 HabiHolic: 수정해놨습니다.
23:28 HabiHolic: 지적하실것같아서..
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