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MAPSET
"A difficulty's name must indicate its level of difficulty, with the exception of the hardest level of difficulty in a set. The mapset's hardest difficulty may use an appropriate custom difficulty name, unrelated to a username. Mapsets may also use a complete set of custom difficulty names that clearly indicate their level of difficulty to the player. Marathon maps with a single difficulty may use free naming."
Im not sure if "Walking" "Sleeping" "Dancing" sounds good, if you like the mapset maybe is acceptable, but if you look like some "Playerxxx is playing Taylor Swift - Stay Stay Stay [Walking]" sounds like this is a extra diff or something. Ask some bat if this namediff sounds good. was very creative ;D
Sleeping
00:22:972 (6) - in this position is morebeautiful and improves the flow https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2362825
00:36:772 - you dont need stop the rhythm here, you can add something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2362811, "oh, but this is overmap", no, have guitar sound and the rhythm is more adorable
00:52:972 (1,2,3,4) - this is a bit hard for Easy, agree? in all the distance snap is 1,60x and is 1/4 tape
01:05:872 (3) - this circle in this position improves the flow https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2362839
01:05:872 (3,1) - stack
03:02:572 (1,2,3) - i think this is hard, the angle of the flow is high, maybe the (2 stack in (3) sounds good https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2362855
03:12:172 (1,2,3) - /\ is beautiful but is hard for a Easy x.x
Walking
00:13:372 (3) - better angle, i think https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2362869
01:12:172 (1,2,3,4) - it is tiring to play x.x, rotate this in 20º 01:14:572 (3,4) - anti-clockwise
01:21:472 (4) - try this, improves the flow
Dancing
01:14:272 (8,1) - this jump is really high and does not match the time
01:34:672 (10,11) - /\
01:32:572 (5) - add new combo
01:19:372 (9) - /\
Nice map, i love
Your style is really fun to play ^^
+1 star and good luck
/wiki/Ranking_Criteria
MAPSET
"A difficulty's name must indicate its level of difficulty, with the exception of the hardest level of difficulty in a set. The mapset's hardest difficulty may use an appropriate custom difficulty name, unrelated to a username. Mapsets may also use a complete set of custom difficulty names that clearly indicate their level of difficulty to the player. Marathon maps with a single difficulty may use free naming."
Im not sure if "Walking" "Sleeping" "Dancing" sounds good, if you like the mapset maybe is acceptable, but if you look like some "Playerxxx is playing Taylor Swift - Stay Stay Stay [Walking]" sounds like this is a extra diff or something. Ask some bat if this namediff sounds good. was very creative ;D
Sleeping
00:22:972 (6) - in this position is morebeautiful and improves the flow https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2362825
00:36:772 - you dont need stop the rhythm here, you can add something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2362811, "oh, but this is overmap", no, have guitar sound and the rhythm is more adorable
00:52:972 (1,2,3,4) - this is a bit hard for Easy, agree? in all the distance snap is 1,60x and is 1/4 tape
01:05:872 (3) - this circle in this position improves the flow https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2362839
01:05:872 (3,1) - stack
03:02:572 (1,2,3) - i think this is hard, the angle of the flow is high, maybe the (2 stack in (3) sounds good https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2362855
03:12:172 (1,2,3) - /\ is beautiful but is hard for a Easy x.x
Walking
00:13:372 (3) - better angle, i think https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2362869
01:12:172 (1,2,3,4) - it is tiring to play x.x, rotate this in 20º 01:14:572 (3,4) - anti-clockwise
01:21:472 (4) - try this, improves the flow
Dancing
01:14:272 (8,1) - this jump is really high and does not match the time
01:34:672 (10,11) - /\
01:32:572 (5) - add new combo
01:19:372 (9) - /\
Nice map, i love
Your style is really fun to play ^^
+1 star and good luck