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SPYAIR - Imagination

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AnreFM
781 posts
Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
AnreFM
Thank you very much for the mod guys! I will reply it as soon as I can, when I have more time ><

Thank you anyway! <3
KUURAhoshi
585 posts
Joined January 2014
KUURAhoshi
Mod Request From Kazamastar’s Modding Queue
Hello, AnreFM !
Thank’s for calling me to mod your beatmap 
Let’s get started..
Easy
00:07:302 – add circle,
00:09:655 (2) - ^,
00:12:596 (1) – you don’t need this ‘New Combo’ (I think?)
00:57:155 (1,2,1,2) – change them to a slider (per-combo)
Normal
01:29:067 (1) – remove finish.
Hard Collab
Perfect chart, nothing to mod 
Fly!
I think you must change some slider with Stream, Why ? Because it’s Expert diff 
That’s All AnreFM ! Good luck !
yurunneram
682 posts
Joined January 2012
yurunneram
Wheeeeeeeee~~~ ~~~ ~~~~

Gomene an kun O^O Yu chan hasn't modded in a while and well I conclude I can't mod this map of yours >.> So sorry

Alsho, mee outta kudosu so ima can't star spam jyur map ((_ _)) Another day >wO)/

And Easy and Normal's rhythm is almost exactly the same shame on you

Easy AR quite high oso

and dat BPM.......

Oh well

Sorry again

Bye
AnreFM
781 posts
Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
AnreFM
*No comment/blue = Fixed *Red = keep

Rtyzen wrote:

Hiii there, from my queue
Blue means personal opinion
[Easy]
  1. 00:14:949 (1) - NC move to 00:14:361 (2)
  2. 00:17:302 (1) - NC move to 00:16:714 (3)
  3. 00:19:655 (1) - NC move to 00:19:067 (3)
  4. 00:38:332 (1) - ^ 00:37:890 (4)
  5. 00:40:684 (1) - ^ 00:40:243 (3)
  6. 01:08:920 (1) - ^ 01:08:479 (4)
  7. 01:11:567 (1) - ^ 01:10:832 (4)
  8. Diff is pretty good so only NC mods here :P Also easy MIGHT be abit too hard since easy is supposed to be below 1.5 stars.

[Normal]
  1. 00:13:184 - Add note here?nope, wanna keep it steady
  2. 00:13:773 (1) - Remove NC
  3. 00:14:949 (1) - NC move to 00:14:361 (2)
  4. 00:17:302 (1) - NC move to 00:16:714 (3)
  5. 00:19:655 (1) - ^ 00:19:067 (3)
  6. 00:22:008 (1) - ^ 00:21:714 (4)
  7. 00:24:361 (1) - Remove NC
  8. 00:25:537 (1) - NC move to 00:25:243 (2)
  9. 00:40:096 (4) - Clap on head move to the reverse arrowsure
  10. 00:45:390 (1) - NC move to 00:44:949 (5)
  11. 01:01:861 (1) - ^ 01:01:420 (3)
  12. 01:04:214 (1) - ^ 01:03:773 (4)
  13. 01:11:273 (1) - ^ 01:10:832 (5)

[Hard collab]
  1. 00:20:537 (5) - NC
  2. 00:31:420 (5) - NC
  3. 00:32:596 (1) - Remove NC(you decide)
  4. 00:45:390 (1) - NC move to 00:44:949 (8)
  5. 00:50:096 (1) - ^ 00:49:655 (6)
  6. 01:01:861 (1) - ^ 01:01:420 (8)
  7. 01:05:979 (3) - Make it one circle and one reverseit kinda plays the same, but I like mine better so I'll keep this one owo
  8. 01:12:449 (7) - NC

[Fly!!]
  1. I couldn't find anything on this diff besides the NC stuff I mentioned in the previous diffs. And I think some of those triangle jumps might be abit intense for 204 BPM but then again it's supposed to be an extra right?

That's it from me, feel free to ignore the NC stuff if some of those were meant to be like that. Quite good mapset, hope it gets ranked soon~
Good luck!~ :DThank you very much! I have fixed some NCs though I kinda forgot which one is the original x_x Thank you very much!

jinhang_ang wrote:

From my queue :D

Easy
1. 00:33:773 (1) - Short spinner, better use a slider. Because if your Easy is aimed at beginners, they will just - "what?" then get a 50 for it lol.sure fixed

Normal
1. 00:56:714 (1) - Something like the slider is too short or too slow, it looks like a stub instead of a slider. Don't slow down at the moment. It really looks like two overlapping circles lol. ya sure!

2. 01:01:420 (3) - Well this really look like two circles. Make it faster to extend its lengthehh I guess it won't be a big problem imo.

Hard
1. 00:48:332 (3) - Put it's head on 00:47:743 (1) 's tail. Increases difficulty :)it's quite hard already, so I'll keep this ;w;

Fly!
1. 00:00:684 - The notes at the starting can be snapped closer since it's still not heating up, and speed up a little at 00:03:184.

2. 00:20:537 (4,1) - This blanket is almost perfect! Make it perfect please.

Done! Great map :D Hope to see it gets ranked :)Thank you for the mod and star <3!

Chyo-Kun wrote:

Requested in my modding queue : t/229105

&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;General


  1. According to the Ranking Criteria, your background image is too big for 4:3 and too small for 16:9. Resize it to 1024x768 and it will be fine.
    &nbsp;
  2. Kiai times in this mapset are somewhat different in all the difficulties. I suggest making them precisely the same in every diff.
    &nbsp;
  3. The audio Lead-In is ~800ms in all difficulties. I highly suggest to change this to 2000, so you follow the ranking criteria guidelines.
    &nbsp;
    Your hitsounds in the beginning are very loud compared to the song. I would suggest making two quick changes to make it sound overall better:
    &nbsp;
  4. 00:00:832 - Use 15% audio on this greenline. Sounds way better.
  5. 00:03:184 - The song is slowly getting louder. Add a greenline here with 20% audio.

    Those changes should be applied to all your difficulties.

    Easy



  6. 00:24:214 Unsnapped green line
    &nbsp;
  7. 00:27:890 (3) - Unnecessary clap
    &nbsp;
  8. 00:28:920 Unsnapped green line
    &nbsp;
  9. 00:33:773 (1) - A finish would sound better than a clap in this difficulty. Why? Because in the song there are 3 clap-like sounds and in your spinner you can have only one. So instead of having only one clap, add one finish which sounds fine.sure
    &nbsp;
  10. 00:52:596 (1) - Add a finish to this spinner? (Keep the clap)removed this one lol
    &nbsp;
  11. 01:13:773 (1) - ^ Same thing but this time keep the whistle
    &nbsp;
  12. 01:28:773 (1) - Add a clap to this beat, but keep the finish.
    &nbsp;

    Normal

    &nbsp;
    &nbsp;
  13. 00:07:890 (1) - Mhh.. Listen to how whistle+clap would sound on this beat and then decide if you want to add it or not. Because I think there should be a clap, but the vocal goes up,so a whistle is an option aswell.whistle it is then
    &nbsp;
  14. 00:24:214 - Unsnapped green line
    &nbsp;
  15. 00:56:714 (1) - I don't really like how this slider is shaped.. I see the effect you want to achieve there, but I still think that a normal straight slider would be betterI can't think of something better atm lol
    &nbsp;
  16. 01:01:420 (3) - ^
    &nbsp;
  17. 01:29:067 (1) - Add a clap to this beat (Keep the finish)&nbsp;

    Hard Collab

    &nbsp;
    &nbsp;
  18. 00:23:920 (1,2,3) - In my opinion this jump is a little too "Cruel" considering that we're just at the beginning of the map. Consider reducing the distance between the beats. (Just an opinion, you can keep it like this if you want).sure I've change this, thanks
    &nbsp;
  19. 00:24:214 - &nbsp;Unsnapped green line
    &nbsp;
  20. 00:26:714 (1) - Mh.. Does this slider have any reason to be shaped up like this? It's not very good-looking among all the other different ones..
    &nbsp;
  21. 00:28:920 - Unsnapped green line
    &nbsp;

    Fly!!

    &nbsp;
    &nbsp;
  22. 00:24:214 - Unsnapped green line
    &nbsp;
  23. 00:28:920 - ^
    &nbsp;
  24. 00:38:920 (3) - This slider touches the healtbar. I suggest moving the whole pattern down by a littleya
    &nbsp;
  25. 01:16:567 (4) - NC To help the player distinguish the two triangle jumps
    &nbsp;
  26. 01:28:331 (4) - ^
    &nbsp;
  27. 01:28:773 (7) - ^^ fixed
    &nbsp;
    &nbsp;
    &nbsp;
    &nbsp;
    I hope this helped your map. 頑張って！Thank you for the mod!

_Stan wrote:

hi from my Q

[Easy]
check AImod

00:15:979 (2) - (456,184)
00:19:655 (1) - the ending point of slider move to (260,328)
01:03:773 (4) - (272,324)

my suggestion is in EZ you'd better not grab vocals, try to grab rhythm or the drums. Cuz not everybody know the rhythm of vocals. As for someone who listen the song first time, they probably do not understand the rhythm of vocals, but everybody knows the rhythm of drums. So, this is only my suggestion.

[Normal]
check AImod

00:05:243 (6,1) - and 00:07:302 (2,1) - why their DS is different?they have different SVs
00:43:626 (2,3,4) - ^
00:45:390 (1,2,3,4) - ^^
01:00:684 (2,3) - up the DS
01:04:214 (1,2,3) - different DS
01:25:832 (2) - move the ending point of slider to(332,290)

[Hard Collab]
00:15:390 (2,3,4) - DS....
00:15:684 (4,5) - why?
00:20:832 (7,8) - DS
00:20:832 (7,8) - there, DS is reasonable, but I didn't understand 00:23:037 (4,5) -
00:28:184 (3,4) - DS
00:48:332 (3,6) - overlap
01:04:802 (8,9,1) - the sound here didn't crescendo, keep same DS?

[Fly]
00:11:420 (1,2) - and 00:12:596 (1,2) - same rhythm, but different DS?I kinda like the flow, so I'll keep this
01:06:420 - there's drum is fast, you can make 4 notes to reflect it chz the diff is hardest
01:10:831 (3,4,5) - DS should be same

good luck~ :)Thanks for the mod~

Kazamastar11 wrote:

Mod Request From Kazamastar’s Modding Queue
Hello, AnreFM !
Thank’s for calling me to mod your beatmap 
Let’s get started..
Easy
00:07:302 – add circle,
00:09:655 (2) - ^,eh no, it's quite hard for Easy as it already is
00:12:596 (1) – you don’t need this ‘New Combo’ (I think?)stanzass
00:57:155 (1,2,1,2) – change them to a slider (per-combo)
Normal
01:29:067 (1) – remove finish.eh why
Hard Collab
Perfect chart, nothing to mod 
Fly!
I think you must change some slider with Stream, Why ? Because it’s Expert diff 
That’s All AnreFM ! Good luck !Thank you for the mod!
and as for Chippy, I have also applied all of your hitsounding suggestions, thank you very much for those! as for other things, I can reply you ingame in case you want to, I just forgot which I fix and didn't due to lots of fixing at once, deeply sorry for that x_x

And thanks again for the mods guys! You guys rock!
Last edited by AnreFM , edited 1 time in total.
Kihhou
1,040 posts
Joined March 2013
Kihhou
urrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrra

[Flly]
  1. 00:18:184 (4,1) - increase ds to emphasize 1 more? its a stronger vocal than the one emphasized at 00:17:743 (3) - . maybe move (4) to 442, 39?
    SPOILER
  2. 00:23:479 (2,3) - slider 3 doesnt really follow anything significant. 00:23:479 - follows a pretty strong vocal while 00:23:626 (3) - has the vocal on the tail and nothing that stands out on the head. it would follow the music better if you switched it and tried this rhythm and maybe this kind of setup?
    SPOILER
  3. 00:52:449 (1,2,3,4,1) - idk about this. all your strong drum and finishes are on the tails of the sliders so it sounds really off. i recommend having the head of the sliders on the emphasized parts so you can feel the beats better when playing. ofc if you make this change, dont forget to move the hitsounds to the head
    SPOILER
  4. 00:56:714 (5) - drum finish?
  5. 00:59:508 (1) - normally, this would be fine but for the other two, you put sliders instead of a hitcircle. this one is the same as 00:57:155 (1,1) - except the vocal is a bit faster so you should make it a slider for consistency. try this?
    SPOILER
  6. 01:14:949 (6,1) - imo (6) is more emphasized than (1) so try putting (1) farther away from 01:14:655 (5) - ? can stack it on 288,256. feels a lot better that way
    SPOILER
  7. 01:17:743 - silence here? add inherited point at 15% volume?
  8. 01:18:184 - ^
[haard]
  1. 00:16:420 (5,6,7) - this doesnt really flow well and the gap at 00:17:155 - is very off putting. 00:16:861 (7) - also doesnt follow anything significant since the head is right inbetween two strong vocals and drums and lands on neither so its really weird to click inbetween them. try this and adjust the placement?
    SPOILER
  2. 00:49:214 (5,6,7,8) - the flow here is pretty bad o_o its reaaaaally uncomfortable to play since you had a rotation change at 00:49:361 - and then another one immediately at 00:49:508 - . try another pattern or ctrl-g 00:49:655 (6,7) -
  3. 00:56:714 (5) - drum finish?
  4. 01:05:979 (3) - make it a 1reverse and add a note at 01:06:420 - . the 2nd reverse is pretty unpredictable and itll flow better into the kiai time if theres more objects and a direct flow into the slider 01:06:567 (1) - . maybe something like this?
    SPOILER
  5. 01:15:096 (6) - right now, this slider skips right over a clap at 01:15:243 - when this should be a heated section with lots of objects. i think a 1/1 slider doesnt fit well here. try shortening it to a 1/2 and then add a hitcircle at 01:15:390 - ?
    SPOILER
  6. theres a couple notes that arent fully stacked and i dont see a reason for it to be intentionally unstacked. may want to check over thatr~
[Norm]
  1. 00:56:714 (1) - drum finish on head
[Easy]
  1. ok~
nice clean mapset~ hard might be a bit too hard but oh well
AnreFM
781 posts
Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
AnreFM

Kihhou wrote:

urrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrraurrrrrooooooo

[Flly]
  1. 00:18:184 (4,1) - increase ds to emphasize 1 more? its a stronger vocal than the one emphasized at 00:17:743 (3) - . maybe move (4) to 442, 39?
    SPOILER
    yeah, fixed. and uh the overlap dooesn't looked really nice so I'm changing the shape there
  2. 00:23:479 (2,3) - slider 3 doesnt really follow anything significant. 00:23:479 - follows a pretty strong vocal while 00:23:626 (3) - has the vocal on the tail and nothing that stands out on the head. it would follow the music better if you switched it and tried this rhythm and maybe this kind of setup?
    SPOILER
    gonna keep this one as I used (3) to follow the main beatso that the next 3 jump circles can be read better owo
  3. 00:52:449 (1,2,3,4,1) - idk about this. all your strong drum and finishes are on the tails of the sliders so it sounds really off. i recommend having the head of the sliders on the emphasized parts so you can feel the beats better when playing. ofc if you make this change, dont forget to move the hitsounds to the head
    SPOILER
    sure, fixed the rhythm
  4. 00:56:714 (5) - drum finish?mm
  5. 00:59:508 (1) - normally, this would be fine but for the other two, you put sliders instead of a hitcircle. this one is the same as 00:57:155 (1,1) - except the vocal is a bit faster so you should make it a slider for consistency. try this?
    SPOILER
  6. 01:14:949 (6,1) - imo (6) is more emphasized than (1) so try putting (1) farther away from 01:14:655 (5) - ? can stack it on 288,256. feels a lot better that way
    SPOILER
  7. 01:17:743 - silence here? add inherited point at 15% volume?
  8. 01:18:184 - ^fixx^
[haard]
  1. 00:16:420 (5,6,7) - this doesnt really flow well and the gap at 00:17:155 - is very off putting. 00:16:861 (7) - also doesnt follow anything significant since the head is right inbetween two strong vocals and drums and lands on neither so its really weird to click inbetween them. try this and adjust the placement?
    SPOILER
  2. 00:49:214 (5,6,7,8) - the flow here is pretty bad o_o its reaaaaally uncomfortable to play since you had a rotation change at 00:49:361 - and then another one immediately at 00:49:508 - . try another pattern or ctrl-g 00:49:655 (6,7) - removed the shitty jumps and arranged a more friendly pattern lol
  3. 00:56:714 (5) - drum finish?ya
  4. 01:05:979 (3) - make it a 1reverse and add a note at 01:06:420 - . the 2nd reverse is pretty unpredictable and itll flow better into the kiai time if theres more objects and a direct flow into the slider 01:06:567 (1) - . maybe something like this?
    SPOILER
    nice!
  5. 01:15:096 (6) - right now, this slider skips right over a clap at 01:15:243 - when this should be a heated section with lots of objects. i think a 1/1 slider doesnt fit well here. try shortening it to a 1/2 and then add a hitcircle at 01:15:390 - ?
    SPOILER
    suure
  6. theres a couple notes that arent fully stacked and i dont see a reason for it to be intentionally unstacked. may want to check over thatr~welp I'm so bad at that, hope I didn't miss another one
[Norm]
  1. 00:56:714 (1) - drum finish on headsure
[Easy]
  1. ok~~
nice clean mapset~ hard might be a bit too hard but oh weloh well indeed loll
Thank you for the modz Kihhouu \:D/
jyu
1,336 posts
Joined August 2012
jyu

Chyo-Kun wrote:

Requested in my modding queue : t/229105

Hard Collab

 
  1. 00:24:214 -  Unsnapped green line fix
     
  2. 00:26:714 (1) - Mh.. Does this slider have any reason to be shaped up like this? It's not very good-looking among all the other different ones.. nooooo.....
     
  3. 00:28:920 - Unsnapped green line fix

    I hope this helped your map. 頑張って！

_Stan wrote:

hi from my Q

[Hard Collab]
00:15:390 (2,3,4) - DS.... fix
00:15:684 (4,5) - why? idk either
00:28:184 (3,4) - DS fix

good luck~ :)

Kihhou wrote:

urrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrraaaaaayy

[haard]
  1. 00:16:420 (5,6,7) - this doesnt really flow well and the gap at 00:17:155 - is very off putting. 00:16:861 (7) - also doesnt follow anything significant since the head is right inbetween two strong vocals and drums and lands on neither so its really weird to click inbetween them. try this and adjust the placement? adjusted the placement, but will reconsider about the rhythm
    SPOILER
  2. theres a couple notes that arent fully stacked and i dont see a reason for it to be intentionally unstacked. may want to check over thatr~
nice clean mapset~ hard might be a bit too hard but oh well remapped some parts yay
Thank you for mods!! :)

edit :
update wheezeee
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: SPYAIR - Imagination (TV Size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 35641
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.3

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Artist:SPYAIR
ArtistUnicode:SPYAIR
Creator:AnreFM
Version:Hard Collab
Source:ãƒã‚¤ã‚­ãƒ¥ãƒ¼!!
Tags:haikyuu opening collaboration alpacacokelat
BeatmapID:455458
BeatmapSetID:186141

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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

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AnreFM
781 posts
Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
AnreFM
Updated!
Hinsvar
osu! Alumni
3,804 posts
Joined December 2011
Hinsvar
Yo; modding!

*Bold = Unrankable atau wajib di-fix; merah = Sangat disarankan untuk diubah; hitam = Hanya saran-saran kecil yang (mungkin saja) bisa bikin map-mu lebih baik.

>Easy
  1. 00:18:332 (2,3,4,1) - Coba bikin posisi gini biar flow dari (4) ke (1) lebih bagus + tampak lebih rapi? Pokoknya coba bikin agar (4) kelihatan lebih "nyambung" ke (1).
  2. 00:24:361 - Tambah finish? Ada bunyi instrumen yang cukup nyaring di sini, dan rasanya aneh kalau cuma ditekanin pake whistle. Kalau merasa terlalu nyaring tinggal kurangi volume aja.
  3. 00:29:067 - ^
  4. 00:33:773 (1) - ^. (Yang ini gak perlu dikurangi ofc, dan bunyinya jelas banget loh...) Dan ini lebih bagus kalau dijadiin slider 4/1 lalu ditambah circle di 00:35:243. Lebih akurat dalam ngikutin ritme di sini dan gak terkesan kosong. Kalau nggak yah, ganti circle ini dengan spinner sampai 00:34:949 kayak di diff-diff yang lain.
  5. 00:49:655 (3,2) - Dua slider ini nyentuh satu sama lain, dan secara sekilas kelihatan nimpa waktu main. Coba pertimbangin untuk ngatur dua slider ini.
  6. 01:05:096 (2,1) - ^ (Ini jauh lebih "sekilas" sih, tapi ya...)
  7. 01:17:743 - Timing point di sini gak dipake kan? Hapus aja.
>Normal
  1. 00:02:596 (4) - Pindahin ke (352,16) biar blanket di 00:01:861 (3,4) kelihatan lebih bagus?
  2. 00:40:096 (4,1) - Sebenernya gak gitu kelihatan sih, tapi apa 1,06x gak terasa dikit lebih gede dari spacing default?
  3. 01:00:684 - Finish ketinggalan atau gimana nih? Di sini jelas banget loh cymbal-nya...
>Hard Collab
  1. Gak terlalu penting sih, tapi mungkin mau buat SB kecil-kecilan berupa nama mapper di part milik mereka?
  2. 00:16:420 (6,7) - Saya pribadi terkecoh waktu pertama main pattern ini, karena saya pikir jarak antara kedua objek ini satu ketukan, bukannya setengah. Saya gak tahu sih buat yang lain, tapi ini rasanya... menjebak karena spacing dari objek-objek sebelum pola ini.
  3. 00:20:096 (4,5) - Gak apa yah spacing kayak gini... Gampang kebaca jadi seperti berjarak 1/4 ketukan IMO. (Berlaku buat pattern yang seperti ini.)
  4. 00:49:214 (5,6,7,8,1) - Coba bikin seperti ini biar flow jadi lebih bagus? Ini juga bakal bikin gerakan kursor jadi gak terkesan maksa, seperti kalau ngemainin pattern yang ada sekarang.
  5. 01:07:743 (5,6,7,8) - Dan coba bikin kayak gini? Sekali lagi, ini buat flow, biarpun yang ini masih bisa dikatakan minor.
>Fly!!
  1. 00:26:420 (5,1) - Blanket di sini sempurna menurut approach circle, tapi kalau diperhatiin lagi, lengkungan (1) masih dikit terlalu mencekung ke kanan. Coba geser-geserin node di sini.
  2. 00:44:214 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - IMO, segienam ini belum terlihat sempurna (apalagi dilihat dari distance spacing antara keenam circle ini). Kalau mau gampang sih, pake Create Polygon Circles aja.
  3. 01:27:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Segienam ini sah-sah aja, tapi jauh lebih pas sama lagu kalau dibikin jadi dua segitiga terpisah. Optional sih ini; gak mau juga gak masalah.
Udah gitu aja owob

Good luck on the way 8-)
Mortem
695 posts
Joined July 2013
Mortem
Hi, as requested.

Normal
00:47:743 (1,2) - You made a great alignment of the sliders before. Just move the redpoint little bit closer to the beginning point.
00:52:155 (4) - Same ^^

I think that's all I found. I know, there can be some more mistakes, but I didn't find them.
Hope that helps
If not, then sorry.
Good Luck!
Konei
2,959 posts
Joined March 2012
Konei
Aw maaan, I'd have mapped this awesome song too. ;_;
AnreFM
781 posts
Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
AnreFM

Hinsvar wrote:

Yo; modding!

*Bold = Unrankable atau wajib di-fix; merah = Sangat disarankan untuk diubah; hitam = Hanya saran-saran kecil yang (mungkin saja) bisa bikin map-mu lebih baik.

>Easy
  1. 00:18:332 (2,3,4,1) - Coba bikin posisi gini biar flow dari (4) ke (1) lebih bagus + tampak lebih rapi? Pokoknya coba bikin agar (4) kelihatan lebih "nyambung" ke (1).agak nggak suka flow yg lurus2 banget gitu, lebih baik zigzag gini imo
  2. 00:24:361 - Tambah finish? Ada bunyi instrumen yang cukup nyaring di sini, dan rasanya aneh kalau cuma ditekanin pake whistle. Kalau merasa terlalu nyaring tinggal kurangi volume aja.
  3. 00:29:067 - ^^ fixed
  4. 00:33:773 (1) - ^. (Yang ini gak perlu dikurangi ofc, dan bunyinya jelas banget loh...) Dan ini lebih bagus kalau dijadiin slider 4/1 lalu ditambah circle di 00:35:243. Lebih akurat dalam ngikutin ritme di sini dan gak terkesan kosong. Kalau nggak yah, ganti circle ini dengan spinner sampai 00:34:949 kayak di diff-diff yang lain.[/color]
  5. 00:49:655 (3,2) - Dua slider ini nyentuh satu sama lain, dan secara sekilas kelihatan nimpa waktu main. Coba pertimbangin untuk ngatur dua slider ini.hmm fine2 aja sih sama overlapnya karena gak terlalu jelek imo, agak diubah sedikit
  6. 01:05:096 (2,1) - ^ (Ini jauh lebih "sekilas" sih, tapi ya...)^
  7. 01:17:743 - Timing point di sini gak dipake kan? Hapus aja.
>Normal
  1. 00:02:596 (4) - Pindahin ke (352,16) biar blanket di 00:01:861 (3,4) kelihatan lebih bagus?sure
  2. 00:40:096 (4,1) - Sebenernya gak gitu kelihatan sih, tapi apa 1,06x gak terasa dikit lebih gede dari spacing default?fixx
  3. 01:00:684 - Finish ketinggalan atau gimana nih? Di sini jelas banget loh cymbal-nya...[/color]
>Hard Collab
  1. Gak terlalu penting sih, tapi mungkin mau buat SB kecil-kecilan berupa nama mapper di part milik mereka?
  2. 00:16:420 (6,7) - Saya pribadi terkecoh waktu pertama main pattern ini, karena saya pikir jarak antara kedua objek ini satu ketukan, bukannya setengah. Saya gak tahu sih buat yang lain, tapi ini rasanya... menjebak karena spacing dari objek-objek sebelum pola ini.
  3. 00:20:096 (4,5) - Gak apa yah spacing kayak gini... Gampang kebaca jadi seperti berjarak 1/4 ketukan IMO. (Berlaku buat pattern yang seperti ini.)
  4. 00:49:214 (5,6,7,8,1) - Coba bikin seperti ini biar flow jadi lebih bagus? Ini juga bakal bikin gerakan kursor jadi gak terkesan maksa, seperti kalau ngemainin pattern yang ada sekarang.
  5. 01:07:743 (5,6,7,8) - Dan coba bikin kayak gini? Sekali lagi, ini buat flow, biarpun yang ini masih bisa dikatakan minor.
>Fly!!
  1. 00:26:420 (5,1) - Blanket di sini sempurna menurut approach circle, tapi kalau diperhatiin lagi, lengkungan (1) masih dikit terlalu mencekung ke kanan. Coba geser-geserin node di sini.
  2. 00:44:214 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - IMO, segienam ini belum terlihat sempurna (apalagi dilihat dari distance spacing antara keenam circle ini). Kalau mau gampang sih, pake Create Polygon Circles aja.
  3. 01:27:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Segienam ini sah-sah aja, tapi jauh lebih pas sama lagu kalau dibikin jadi dua segitiga terpisah. Optional sih ini; gak mau juga gak masalah.all fixed!
Udah gitu aja owob

Good luck on the way 8-)
Thanks for the mod, Kak Hinsvar! :)

Pjecoo wrote:

Hi, as requested.

Normal
00:47:743 (1,2) - You made a great alignment of the sliders before. Just move the redpoint little bit closer to the beginning point.
00:52:155 (4) - Same ^^

I think that's all I found. I know, there can be some more mistakes, but I didn't find them.
Hope that helps
If not, then sorry.
Good Luck![/color]
Thank you for the mod~

Konei wrote:

Aw maaan, I'd have mapped this awesome song too. ;_;
Koneiiii ;w;
jyu
1,336 posts
Joined August 2012
jyu

Hinsvar wrote:

Yo; modding!

*Bold = Unrankable atau wajib di-fix; merah = Sangat disarankan untuk diubah; hitam = Hanya saran-saran kecil yang (mungkin saja) bisa bikin map-mu lebih baik.

>Hard Collab
  1. Gak terlalu penting sih, tapi mungkin mau buat SB kecil-kecilan berupa nama mapper di part milik mereka? anre males
  2. 00:16:420 (6,7) - Saya pribadi terkecoh waktu pertama main pattern ini, karena saya pikir jarak antara kedua objek ini satu ketukan, bukannya setengah. Saya gak tahu sih buat yang lain, tapi ini rasanya... menjebak karena spacing dari objek-objek sebelum pola ini. fix
  3. 01:07:743 (5,6,7,8) - Dan coba bikin kayak gini? Sekali lagi, ini buat flow, biarpun yang ini masih bisa dikatakan minor. fix
Udah gitu aja owob

Good luck on the way 8-)
makasih kak Hinsvar :)

Update
osu file format v13

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AnreFM
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Mystyk
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Hi! Mod from my mod queue!

[General]
Turn off widescreen support on the Hard Collab difficulty because that's the only one which has it turned on so it's inconsistent with the other difficulties.

[Easy]
  1. 00:05:537 (1,1,1,1) - I would put these further from each other since they are far from each other on the timeline - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1953741 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1953762 (just examples)
  2. 00:59:508 (1,2) - why don't you add finish on these too? the music is just as loud as here 00:57:155 (1,2) - so they should be similar
  3. 01:05:096 (2,1) - same problem as 00:05:537 (1,1,1,1) - they are too close but on the timeline they are far, so there should be more distance between them, example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1953795 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1953799 (of course it can be done in a nicer way >.<)
  4. 01:10:832 (4) - small thing but try to rotate this slider to have equal distance - http://puu.sh/b38MI/5de092f48f.jpg --> http://puu.sh/b38Tj/3a52a54812.jpg (I also replaced 01:11:567 (1) - a little bit, and it also makes the blanket nicer)
  5. 01:13:773 (1) - you should start this spinner at 01:14:067 (1) - to give some time for beginners to react
Also, I would rather avoid using slider velocity changes on the Easy difficulty, so please try to avoid it in the future.

[Normal]
  1. 00:33:184 (4) - the spinner starts a bit early right after the slided ends so I would rather remove one reverse from the slider to give some break for beginners
  2. 00:53:479 (4,5,6) - the begininng of (6) is too close to (4) which is confusing, so I would suggest something like this to make it easier to read: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1953939
  3. 00:56:126 - I would rather remove this slider velocity change, it makes 00:56:714 (1) - too short which might be hard to read because 2 hit circles can look like that too http://puu.sh/b3aSO/29c2074a68.jpg - but if you remove the slider velocity change it's obvious that it is a slider because it will be clear that there is no number at the end of the slider >.< also https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1953971 - like this 00:57:155 (1,2) - will be also easier to read because the sliderends won't be too close
  4. 00:59:508 (1) - add finish to the beginning of the slider because the music is loud and you used it here too 01:00:684 (2) -
  5. 01:05:390 (3) - add finish to the beginning because the music is loud
  6. 01:17:890 (1) - I can't really hear this, I would rather rase the volume up to about 30-40% and add soft whistle, it wouldn't be loud but it would fit the music and it would still be audible
  7. 01:20:684 (1,2,3) - make this blanket (and pattern) a bit nicer - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1954042
[Hard Collab]
  1. 00:13:626 (1,2) - don't start these sliders on red ticks, the end on big beats, so they should start on the white ticks, and also I would add a hit circle here 00:13:626 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1954149
  2. 00:15:684 (4,5,6,7) - well firstly replace (4) to make the distance better (it will look nicer) 00:15:684 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/b3e2d/a815768b78.jpg
    also I believe you can make this blanket nicer too 00:15:979 (5,6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1954195 - and thirdly try not to start this on the red tick 00:16:861 (7) - I think it will play better if you do what is shown on the screenshot (remove reverse from (6), put (7) earlier and add a hit circle here 00:17:008 -
  3. 00:20:096 (4,5) - and 00:22:449 (2,3) - I don't understand these kind of distant changes, it is kind of misleading, I would rather perfectly stack them or use the same distance that you used before
  4. 00:24:361 (1) - add finish to the beginning of the slider, the music is loud there (you can lower the volume a little bit if you add finish)
  5. 00:29:067 (1) - add finish here too because the music has a finish sound too
  6. 00:36:052 (1) - I don't know what happened here but this slider should start on the red tick at 00:35:979 -
  7. 00:47:743 (1,3) - I'm not really a fan of this half stack, try to replace some things, examples: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1954957 or https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1954956 or etc.
  8. 00:53:479 (4,5,6) - it's better to play if sliders start on white ticks both because of the beats and vocals - http://puu.sh/b3spD/5c8e09759b.jpg
  9. 01:03:037 (3) - why not add a finish to the beginning of the slider? the music is loud and it's similar to this 01:01:861 (1) -
  10. 01:05:390 (1) - add finish to the beginning too because it's in the music
  11. 01:17:890 (1) - same that I said on Normal, I can't really hear this so you should turn up the volume until about 30-40% to make it audible (and personally I think that it is annoying to play something that I can't even hear)
[Fly!!]
  1. 00:04:655 (6,7) - stack properly? I think it would be easier to read since it wouldn't be misleading and you stacked these too 00:08:920 (4,5) -
  2. 00:24:361 (1) - a finish at the beginning would fit
  3. 00:29:067 (1) - same here about adding finish to the beginning
  4. 00:33:773 (1,1) - you should end the spinner earlier, it is hard to hit 00:34:949 (1) - because the spinner end is too close http://puu.sh/b3thO/8734db8fbb.jpg
  5. 00:59:508 (1,1) - like I suggested on previous difficulties, add finish because of the loud music
  6. 01:00:979 (2) - I know what you map to here, but I think less would be enough because this is a slow part - http://puu.sh/b3tvs/99997dc9d5.jpg
  7. 01:05:979 (3,4) - why don't you add a stream here? I can hear the fast sounds in the music, and this is the hardest difficulty, so I think it wouldn't hurt to use a stream (or a reverse slider) it might be more fun to play in my opinion :P http://puu.sh/b3tzA/f0e42770e4.jpg or http://puu.sh/b3tBb/462d0c6cdf.jpg
  8. 01:14:949 (6) - this beat is a little stronger than the others, I think you could emphasize it with a finish
  9. 01:17:743 - same thing that I told on the other difficulties, please turn up the volume
  10. 01:27:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think it would be better if you only emphasized the big beats, it sounds a bit overmapped in its current state http://puu.sh/b3tWF/9c620bc5b6.jpg
Good luck!
KSHR
osu! Alumni
1,668 posts
Joined July 2010
KSHR
Metadata check as per Mystyk's request, but there is not a official source that says this needs a label such as TV Size.　About the artist, the current one is correct. In short, there is nothing wrong with metadata.

SPOILER

http://www.j-haikyu.com/anime/music.html
jyu
1,336 posts
Joined August 2012
jyu

Mystyk wrote:

Hi! Mod from my mod queue!

[Hard Collab]
  1. 00:15:684 (4,5,6,7) - well firstly replace (4) to make the distance better (it will look nicer) 00:15:684 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/b3e2d/a815768b78.jpg
    also I believe you can make this blanket nicer too 00:15:979 (5,6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1954195 - and thirdly try not to start this on the red tick 00:16:861 (7) - I think it will play better if you do what is shown on the screenshot (remove reverse from (6), put (7) earlier and add a hit circle here 00:17:008 - fix
  2. 00:24:361 (1) - add finish to the beginning of the slider, the music is loud there (you can lower the volume a little bit if you add finish) fix
Thank you for mod!! :)

update
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: SPYAIR - Imagination (TV Size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 35537
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 5537,14949,19655,24361,30243,34949,45390,57155,61861,66567,73626,78331
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Imagination
TitleUnicode:イマジネーション
Artist:SPYAIR
ArtistUnicode:SPYAIR
Creator:AnreFM
Version:Hard Collab
Source:ハイキュー!!
Tags:tv size haikyuu opening collaboration alpacacokelat
BeatmapID:455458
BeatmapSetID:186141

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

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Video,0,"Haikyu!!.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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//Background Colour Transformations
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420,280,68332,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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284,236,72302,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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48,36,75537,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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364,44,76126,5,4,0:0:0:0:
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AnreFM
781 posts
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Topic Starter
AnreFM
Sorry for the late reply, school's too chaotic ;w;

Mystyk wrote:

Hi! Mod from my mod queue!

[General]
Turn off widescreen support on the Hard Collab difficulty because that's the only one which has it turned on so it's inconsistent with the other difficulties.fixed

[Easy]
  1. 00:05:537 (1,1,1,1) - I would put these further from each other since they are far from each other on the timeline - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1953741 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1953762 (just examples)
  2. 00:59:508 (1,2) - why don't you add finish on these too? the music is just as loud as here 00:57:155 (1,2) - so they should be similar
  3. 01:05:096 (2,1) - same problem as 00:05:537 (1,1,1,1) - they are too close but on the timeline they are far, so there should be more distance between them, example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1953795 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1953799 (of course it can be done in a nicer way >.<)
  4. 01:10:832 (4) - small thing but try to rotate this slider to have equal distance - http://puu.sh/b38MI/5de092f48f.jpg --> http://puu.sh/b38Tj/3a52a54812.jpg (I also replaced 01:11:567 (1) - a little bit, and it also makes the blanket nicer)
  5. 01:13:773 (1) - you should start this spinner at 01:14:067 (1) - to give some time for beginners to react
^ Fixed them all, thank you~

Also, I would rather avoid using slider velocity changes on the Easy difficulty, so please try to avoid it in the future.

[Normal]
  1. 00:33:184 (4) - the spinner starts a bit early right after the slided ends so I would rather remove one reverse from the slider to give some break for beginnerssure
  2. 00:53:479 (4,5,6) - the begininng of (6) is too close to (4) which is confusing, so I would suggest something like this to make it easier to read: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1953939ok
  3. 00:56:126 - I would rather remove this slider velocity change, it makes 00:56:714 (1) - too short which might be hard to read because 2 hit circles can look like that too http://puu.sh/b3aSO/29c2074a68.jpg - but if you remove the slider velocity change it's obvious that it is a slider because it will be clear that there is no number at the end of the slider >.< also https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1953971 - like this 00:57:155 (1,2) - will be also easier to read because the sliderends won't be too closelol yeah, I don't like this one too. removed the SV change and changing this one to a circle, hope it's good ><
  4. 00:59:508 (1) - add finish to the beginning of the slider because the music is loud and you used it here too 01:00:684 (2) -
  5. 01:05:390 (3) - add finish to the beginning because the music is loud
  6. 01:17:890 (1) - I can't really hear this, I would rather rase the volume up to about 30-40% and add soft whistle, it wouldn't be loud but it would fit the music and it would still be audible^ Fixed
  7. 01:20:684 (1,2,3) - make this blanket (and pattern) a bit nicer - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1954042sure
[Hard Collab]
  1. 00:13:626 (1,2) - don't start these sliders on red ticks, the end on big beats, so they should start on the white ticks, and also I would add a hit circle here 00:13:626 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1954149moved this one further
  2. 00:15:684 (4,5,6,7) - well firstly replace (4) to make the distance better (it will look nicer) 00:15:684 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/b3e2d/a815768b78.jpg
    also I believe you can make this blanket nicer too 00:15:979 (5,6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1954195 - and thirdly try not to start this on the red tick 00:16:861 (7) - I think it will play better if you do what is shown on the screenshot (remove reverse from (6), put (7) earlier and add a hit circle here 00:17:008 -
  3. 00:20:096 (4,5) - and 00:22:449 (2,3) - I don't understand these kind of distant changes, it is kind of misleading, I would rather perfectly stack them or use the same distance that you used beforeyeah, noticed that too, why did I do this lol
  4. 00:24:361 (1) - add finish to the beginning of the slider, the music is loud there (you can lower the volume a little bit if you add finish)
  5. 00:29:067 (1) - add finish here too because the music has a finish sound too^ fixed
  6. 00:36:052 (1) - I don't know what happened here but this slider should start on the red tick at 00:35:979 -lolol
  7. 00:47:743 (1,3) - I'm not really a fan of this half stack, try to replace some things, examples: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1954957 or https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1954956 or etc.umm I'm actually quite fine with this imo. My intention is to keep the distance Normal and this kind of pattern isn't all too unusual, I hope ypu can understand><
  8. 00:53:479 (4,5,6) - it's better to play if sliders start on white ticks both because of the beats and vocals - http://puu.sh/b3spD/5c8e09759b.jpg
  9. 01:03:037 (3) - why not add a finish to the beginning of the slider? the music is loud and it's similar to this 01:01:861 (1) -
  10. 01:05:390 (1) - add finish to the beginning too because it's in the music
  11. 01:17:890 (1) - same that I said on Normal, I can't really hear this so you should turn up the volume until about 30-40% to make it audible (and personally I think that it is annoying to play something that I can't even hear)Fixed all above
[Fly!!]
  1. 00:04:655 (6,7) - stack properly? I think it would be easier to read since it wouldn't be misleading and you stacked these too 00:08:920 (4,5) - yeah fixed
  2. 00:24:361 (1) - a finish at the beginning would fitsure
  3. 00:29:067 (1) - same here about adding finish to the beginningmm
  4. 00:33:773 (1,1) - you should end the spinner earlier, it is hard to hit 00:34:949 (1) - because the spinner end is too close http://puu.sh/b3thO/8734db8fbb.jpgokay
  5. 00:59:508 (1,1) - like I suggested on previous difficulties, add finish because of the loud musicyes
  6. 01:00:979 (2) - I know what you map to here, but I think less would be enough because this is a slow part - http://puu.sh/b3tvs/99997dc9d5.jpgsorry but I kinda like the effect created by these two reverses and the beat is quite audible in the background so I'd like to keep this ;w;
  7. 01:05:979 (3,4) - why don't you add a stream here? I can hear the fast sounds in the music, and this is the hardest difficulty, so I think it wouldn't hurt to use a stream (or a reverse slider) it might be more fun to play in my opinion :P http://puu.sh/b3tzA/f0e42770e4.jpg or http://puu.sh/b3tBb/462d0c6cdf.jpgsure, hope it's not too bad now haha
  8. 01:14:949 (6) - this beat is a little stronger than the others, I think you could emphasize it with a finishsure
  9. 01:17:743 - same thing that I told on the other difficulties, please turn up the volumesure
  10. 01:27:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think it would be better if you only emphasized the big beats, it sounds a bit overmapped in its current state http://puu.sh/b3tWF/9c620bc5b6.jpghmm I actually would like to keep the consistency with the earlier part, and since this one is the last beats, having it a bit difficult wouldn't be too bad imo, I'll keep this for now owo
Good luck!
Thank you for the mod Mystyk <3

KSHR wrote:

Metadata check as per Mystyk's request, but there is not a official source that says this needs a label such as TV Size.　About the artist, the current one is correct. In short, there is nothing wrong with metadata.

SPOILER

http://www.j-haikyu.com/anime/music.html
Alright then, thanks for checking KSHR :D

Updated!
Come[Back]Home
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Joined October 2011
Come[Back]Home
Mod :3

Easy
00:07:890 (1) Delete NC
00:12:596 (1) ^
00:36:714 (2) I dont know if this is okay in an Easy diff
01:19:508 (3,4) The overlap looks ugly
01:28:773 (1) Delete NC

Normal
Its depressing that i couldnt find anything after looking at it twice....

Hard Collab
00:11:420 (3) Stack it ordinary with the end of 00:10:243 (1)
00:14:067 (2,3) Why the jump here?
00:47:670 (1,3) I really dislike the overlap

Fly!!
00:00:684 Add HC
00:00:758 ^


This Map is awesome. Im pretty sure it will get ranked really fast because its so nice. Sadly its depressiv for modders to mod it because it is so good :(
AnreFM
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Topic Starter
AnreFM

Come[Back]Home wrote:

Mod :3

Easy
00:07:890 (1) Delete NC
00:12:596 (1) ^I'm using DC per 2 stanza, so leaving this one will make it a bit too long beat-wise
00:36:714 (2) I dont know if this is okay in an Easy diffit.. should be? lol I'll try to see BAT's opinion
01:19:508 (3,4) The overlap looks uglyhmm fixed I guess
01:28:773 (1) Delete NCfixed

Normal
Its depressing that i couldnt find anything after looking at it twice....lol it's fine

Hard Collab
00:11:420 (3) Stack it ordinary with the end of 00:10:243 (1)okay
00:14:067 (2,3) Why the jump here?oh yeah I just realized that it's really really bad, fixed
00:47:670 (1,3) I really dislike the overlaphmm it's intentional. The pattern is a bit unusual and I'm trying to make the readability better

Fly!!
00:00:684 Add HC
00:00:758 ^eh what's HC? orz


This Map is awesome. Im pretty sure it will get ranked really fast because its so nice. Sadly its depressiv for modders to mod it because it is so good :(lol I'll try to get it ranked soon, don't worry about stuffs like can't find anything xD
Updated, thanks!
gyuwife
19 posts
Joined October 2012
gyuwife
Hello
Alpaca's request
I'm still learning to mod, so my apology if it's not perfect

Easy

00:05:537 (1,1) - Distance is too close. Beginners can be tricked
00:10:243 (1,1) - Same
00:28:773 (4) - How about deleting this note? Because the vocal stopped here
01:05:096 (2,1) - Distance is too close

Normal

00:35:537 (1) - Really not good when I played it. Also, Hard diff and Easy diff don't have this rhythm

Hard Collab

00:04:214 (3,4) - Stack this properly
00:13:332 (2,1) - It's really hard to read this. Maybe because the previous notes follow the vocal while the notes after this follow the drum
00:21:273 (8,10) - Stack this properly
00:23:184 (5,1) - Stack this properly
00:24:214 (3) - Move to X:384 Y:176 if you want better triangle formation
00:49:949 (8,1) - Stack this properly
01:05:390 (1,3) - Stack this properly

Insane

00:04:655 (6,7) - Stack this properly
00:06:567 (4,5) - Stack this properly
00:08:920 (4,5) - Stack this properly, maybe you should turn off Grid-Snap when doing this

Good Luck
Winnie
1,343 posts
Joined November 2013
Winnie
Here as requested from my modding queue and a mighty fine song choice from the volleyball anime. If only kuroko had songs that could be made :o

[Easy]

00:17:302 (1) - DS also at the same time adjust it to something like this for a better blanket http://puu.sh/dpUtf/946806376a.jpg
00:19:361 (4) - DS I'm ok with millimeter change but this isn't a millimeter =)
00:24:361 (1) - Major snap error I believe, or maybe it's just the SV change that created the problem for me
00:37:155 (3) - DS
00:37:155 (3,4) - Do this for a better blanket http://puu.sh/dpUAv/05534c2129.jpg
00:46:126 (2) - Move down and left a bit for the same reason
01:03:773 (4) - Snap and move up a little bit so the note/slider can be perfectly aligned and moving in the space direction
01:22:302 (2) - DS

[Normal]

00:05:537 (1) - DS
00:07:890 (1) - DS

[Hard Collab]

00:18:037 (4,5,6) - Allow these 3 to have equal spacing for balance
00:19:655 (3,4) - Something like this looks pretty cool too http://puu.sh/dpVYv/c4a406d488.jpg

That's about it. The Fly!! difficulty was really good. Overall this mapset is amazing. Reason I'm so strict on DS for easy/normal is because it can be lead to not rankable material. Balance is key, yes there we SV changes but during those changes inside the time frames there we still error in spatial distribution and that is critical. I revise to go back and make sure all your DS is how you want them to be. I hope I helped you in anyway. Hope to see this ranked in the future :)
Come[Back]Home
1,790 posts
Joined October 2011
Come[Back]Home
I forgot to leave a star for this Map.... How emberassing
AnreFM
781 posts
Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
AnreFM

gyuwife wrote:

Hellohey there~
Alpaca's request
I'm still learning to mod, so my apology if it's not perfect

Easy

00:05:537 (1,1) - Distance is too close. Beginners can be trickedguess not, I mean the distance time-wise is far enough, I think this one should be fine
00:10:243 (1,1) - Same^
00:28:773 (4) - How about deleting this note? Because the vocal stopped hereeh it would make the rhythm harder to read due to the gap, I'll keep this one
01:05:096 (2,1) - Distance is too close

Normal

00:35:537 (1) - Really not good when I played it. Also, Hard diff and Easy diff don't have this rhythmyeah good point, fixed

Hard Collab

00:04:214 (3,4) - Stack this properly
00:13:332 (2,1) - It's really hard to read this. Maybe because the previous notes follow the vocal while the notes after this follow the drumyeah, removed all the stupid notes
00:21:273 (8,10) - Stack this properly
00:23:184 (5,1) - Stack this properly
00:24:214 (3) - Move to X:384 Y:176 if you want better triangle formation
00:49:949 (8,1) - Stack this properly
01:05:390 (1,3) - Stack this properlyfixed the stacks I guess lol

Insane

00:04:655 (6,7) - Stack this properly
00:06:567 (4,5) - Stack this properly
00:08:920 (4,5) - Stack this properly, maybe you should turn off Grid-Snap when doing this^

Good Luck
Thanks for the mod! :3

Kocari wrote:

Here as requested from my modding queue and a mighty fine song choice from the volleyball anime. If only kuroko had songs that could be made :o

[Easy]

00:17:302 (1) - DS also at the same time adjust it to something like this for a better blanket http://puu.sh/dpUtf/946806376a.jpgfix
00:19:361 (4) - DS I'm ok with millimeter change but this isn't a millimeter =)lol fixed
00:24:361 (1) - Major snap error I believe, or maybe it's just the SV change that created the problem for me
00:37:155 (3) - DS fixed
00:37:155 (3,4) - Do this for a better blanket http://puu.sh/dpUAv/05534c2129.jpg^
00:46:126 (2) - Move down and left a bit for the same reason^
01:03:773 (4) - Snap and move up a little bit so the note/slider can be perfectly aligned and moving in the space directionhmm I liked the current position better, if I moved it up, there would be a overlap with the comboburst
01:22:302 (2) - DSaye

[Normal]

00:05:537 (1) - DS
00:07:890 (1) - DS^ fixed

[Hard Collab]

00:18:037 (4,5,6) - Allow these 3 to have equal spacing for balanceoh nice, fixed
00:19:655 (3,4) - Something like this looks pretty cool too http://puu.sh/dpVYv/c4a406d488.jpgdon't want to add more difficulty on this diff lol, it's pretty hard already on some part, I'll keep this one simple :')

That's about it. The Fly!! difficulty was really good. Overall this mapset is amazing. Reason I'm so strict on DS for easy/normal is because it can be lead to not rankable material. Balance is key, yes there we SV changes but during those changes inside the time frames there we still error in spatial distribution and that is critical. I revise to go back and make sure all your DS is how you want them to be. I hope I helped you in anyway. Hope to see this ranked in the future :)
Thank you! I noticed that there may be a few of the notes' distance that looked off based on the DS due to the SV changes, but I've arranged some of them by spacing them based on their grid, this way it won't create much problem for the readability since all notes will be spaced the same between each other, I hope you can understand >.<

Anyway, thank you for the mods you two, and also for the star, Kocari and Come[Back]Home! <3
Sieg
3,981 posts
Joined February 2012
Sieg
Hello

[General]
  1. mp3 quality really bad, these overloads sounds horrible. So try to search for better one version maybe #modhelp can help :)
  2. add "haikyu" to tags, since crunchyroll… well this will not hurt anyone
  3. Check your first kiai end for consistency, I don't see a reason why they are not.
  4. Timing: http://puu.sh/drXPh/74ec2fd06e.png It would be great if you get second check for this
[Easy]
  1. All these SV changes on easy looks strange, but well… whatever
  2. 00:33:773 (1) - There should be 1 full measure for recovery after spinner for easy. Consider to replace this spinner. Or just place circle 00:33:773 () and leave this place for short-break. Also this spinner is way too short for easy.
  3. 00:52:596 (1) - ^
  4. 01:13:773 (1) - ^
[Normal]
[Hard Collab]
  1. 00:19:361 (2) - Something like ~284:320 will improve readability a lot here
  2. 00:23:920 (1,2,3) - Flow is kinda sharp here, try something more smooth http://puu.sh/ds0zt/48605f20fa.jpg
  3. 00:44:655 (7,8,1) - Some kind of aesthetics improvement http://puu.sh/ds137/0996568e33.jpg
  4. 00:46:273 (4,5) - Feels like too big jump, consider to lower a bit
  5. 00:49:655 (6,7,8) - Make DS equal here. I don't see a reason why they are not.
  6. 01:14:949 (5,6) - Since lyrics is not landing on 01:15:096 () accurately It would be better to Ctrl+G them
  7. 01:22:302 (6,7,8,9) - Flow is bad here, also 01:21:861 (5,7) - hurts this even more, you can try something more smooth http://puu.sh/ds08B/27893890b9.jpg
[Fly!!]
  1. Last jumps are bit complicated compared to the rest of diff.
I'll give detailed look for Insane and Hard on weekend. There is some spots I'd like to mention.
Last edited by Sieg , edited 1 time in total.
DeletedUser_1574070
DeletedUser_1574070
- RECIZE YOUR BGFILE INTO 1024x768 or 1366x768 (RECOMMENDED)
- REMOVE USELESS GREENLINE LIKE 01:17:890 (same volume, same sv rate, same kiai status)


  • Easy

    consider reducing AR just a bit.
  1. 00:39:214 (2) - this can be confusing. call me on ingame then lets consider the alternatives.
  2. 00:52:596 (1) - spinner begins before the slider 3 ends.
  3. 01:13:626 (4) - this can be confusing too. + spinner issue again.
  4. 01:27:890 (4) - NC for newbeat.
  • Normal
  1. 00:40:096 (4) - i found someway weird here.
  2. 01:06:126 (1) - no need for NC here
  3. nothing else
  • Hard
  1. 00:19:067 (1,2,3) - keep spacingconsistency.
  2. 00:20:832 (1) - NC is needed imo
  3. 00:36:567 (3,4) - rhythm should be switched.
  4. 00:49:949 (8,1) - rotate -30' for better flow. and move this 00:50:684 (3) - to 249:294
  • Fly
  1. 00:56:126 (1) - I think red tick is enough. reduce a tick.
edit : call me if u r ready
Last edited by DeletedUser_1574070 , edited 1 time in total.
AnreFM
781 posts
Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
AnreFM

Sieg wrote:

Hello ><

[General]
  1. mp3 quality really bad, these overloads sounds horrible. So try to search for better one version maybe #modhelp can help :)I'll try getting a new one then
  2. add "haikyu" to tags, since crunchyroll… well this will not hurt anyoneokay
  3. Check your first kiai end for consistency, I don't see a reason why they are not.fixed them all
  4. Timing: http://puu.sh/drXPh/74ec2fd06e.png It would be great if you get second check for this
[Easy]
  1. All these SV changes on easy looks strange, but well… whatever
  2. 00:33:773 (1) - There should be 1 full measure for recovery after spinner for easy. Consider to replace this spinner. Or just place circle 00:33:773 () and leave this place for short-break. Also this spinner is way too short for easy.
  3. 00:52:596 (1) - ^
  4. 01:13:773 (1) - ^I felt that there's enough time for this two, compared to the above, so I I'll keep this for now
[Normal]
[Hard Collab]
  1. 00:19:361 (2) - Something like ~284:320 will improve readability a lot herefixed
  2. 00:23:920 (1,2,3) - Flow is kinda sharp here, try something more smooth http://puu.sh/ds0zt/48605f20fa.jpgfixed
  3. 00:44:655 (7,8,1) - Some kind of aesthetics improvement http://puu.sh/ds137/0996568e33.jpgalright
  4. 00:46:273 (4,5) - Feels like too big jump, consider to lower a bitreduced it
  5. 00:49:655 (6,7,8) - Make DS equal here. I don't see a reason why they are not.yeah
  6. 01:14:949 (5,6) - Since lyrics is not landing on 01:15:096 () accurately It would be better to Ctrl+G themI actually am following the bass here and doesn't really focus on the vocal, so I'll keep this one for now, I hope you understand
  7. 01:22:302 (6,7,8,9) - Flow is bad here, also 01:21:861 (5,7) - hurts this even more, you can try something more smooth http://puu.sh/ds08B/27893890b9.jpgyeah fixed
[Fly!!]
  1. Last jumps are bit complicated compared to the rest of diff.alright changed it to become similar with thte previous jump patterns
I'll give detailed look for Insane and Hard on weekend. There is some spots I'd like to mention.
Thank you very much for the check Sieg, I hope I can solve those problems on Easy and the mp3 quickly ><

Kloyd wrote:

- RECIZE YOUR BGFILE INTO 1024x768 or 1366x768 (RECOMMENDED)fixes
- REMOVE USELESS GREENLINE LIKE 01:17:890 (same volume, same sv rate, same kiai status)alright, checked them all and I hope there isn't one anymore


  • Easy

    consider reducing AR just a bit.
  1. 00:39:214 (2) - this can be confusing. call me on ingame then lets consider the alternatives.
  2. 00:52:596 (1) - spinner begins before the slider 3 ends.
  3. 01:13:626 (4) - this can be confusing too. + spinner issue again.
  4. 01:27:890 (4) - NC for newbeat.
  • Normal
  1. 00:40:096 (4) - i found someway weird here.
  2. 01:06:126 (1) - no need for NC herekay
  3. nothing else
  • Hard
  1. 00:19:067 (1,2,3) - keep spacingconsistency.fixed
  2. 00:20:832 (1) - NC is needed imoalright
  3. 00:36:567 (3,4) - rhythm should be switched.
  4. 00:49:949 (8,1) - rotate -30' for better flow. and move this 00:50:684 (3) - to 249:294did changes based on Sieg's suggestion, I think it's better now :3
  • Fly
  1. 00:56:126 (1) - I think red tick is enough. reduce a tick.alrighty
Thank you for the check Kloyd, I hope we can conclude a better adjustments for the Easy and that one slider in Normal ><

Anyway, thank you very much again, both of you, I really appreciated it :'3 I know that my main issue right now is the rhythm on the Easy and meanwhile I'm not really bothered with it, I hope you can help me with a better with suggestion if you can >< (And I'll look for a better mp3)
jyu
1,336 posts
Joined August 2012
jyu
hurr durr late mod reply im sorry

gyuwife wrote:

Hard Collab

00:04:214 (3,4) - Stack this properly gdi fix

Kocari wrote:

[Hard Collab]

00:18:037 (4,5,6) - Allow these 3 to have equal spacing for balance fix

Sieg wrote:

[Hard Collab]
  1. 00:19:361 (2) - Something like ~284:320 will improve readability a lot here fix

Kloyd wrote:

  • Hard
  1. 00:19:067 (1,2,3) - keep spacingconsistency. fix
Thank you for mods! :)

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AnreFM
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Updated! Also with a new and better mp3 :3
lukmanz
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nice
DeletedUser_1574070
DeletedUser_1574070
DEFINITELY NEED 1500 AUDIOLEADINS



  • Fly!!
  1. still exists. 56545,
  2. 01:18:162 - kiai unsnapped (1ms for all diffs)
  3. Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
    00:24:077 - snap to 00:24:045
    00:28:760 - snap to 00:28:751

  • Hard
  1. 01:17:868 - guitar exists... it sounds so strong imo so consider converting this into circle+slider following the codes.
  2. Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
    00:28:760 - snap to 00:28:751

nothin on Normal

but
[*]Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:24:077 - snap to 00:24:045

  • Easy
  1. 01:27:721 (4) - NC
  2. Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
    00:24:077 - snap to 00:24:045
    00:28:760 - snap to 00:28:751

need somebody to know how to use aibat for 1ms unsnapped timingline stuff
AnreFM
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AnreFM

Kloyd wrote:

DEFINITELY NEED 1500 AUDIOLEADINS



  • Fly!!
  1. still exists. 56545, hmm I extended removed the circle then extended the sliderto this point since the heavy beat is here
  2. 01:18:162 - kiai unsnapped (1ms for all diffs)
  3. Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
    00:24:077 - snap to 00:24:045
    00:28:760 - snap to 00:28:751

  • Hard
  1. 01:17:868 - guitar exists... it sounds so strong imo so consider converting this into circle+slider following the codes.eh it would make the rhythm harder to read imo, as the Hard is full of fast sliders and jump, and also by how complicated this part is(with the very slow SV) I think it'd be safer if I just make this one simple orz
  2. Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
    00:28:760 - snap to 00:28:751

nothin on Normal

but
[*]Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:24:077 - snap to 00:24:045

  • Easy
  1. 01:27:721 (4) - NC
  2. Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
    00:24:077 - snap to 00:24:045
    00:28:760 - snap to 00:28:751
Fixed all!

need somebody to know how to use aibat for 1ms unsnapped timingline stuff
Thanks for the recheck Kloyd, updated! also had to change the BG due to stuffs sobs
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for some more things fixed and i think its fine
AnreFM
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Great, thanks Kloyd! :3
Sieg
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Sieg
yo

easy:
00:34:780 () - useless green line
01:05:810 () - 01:17:574 () -

Hard Collab:
00:23:457 (6,1) - ctrl+g them to follow vocals better, or you can try something like http://puu.sh/dHXDQ/5eb7db3e99.jpg or whatever also fits
00:45:810 (3,4) - ^ http://puu.sh/dHXLl/c41cd7416a.jpg
01:06:986 (3,4) - ^
00:48:898 (4,5) - ctrl+g here too seems better for rhythm

Fly!!:
00:23:015 (1,2) - 00:32:133 (4,1) - I don't think that extending this is a good idea, background for extended sliders is way to week and this is kind of bad rhythm variety technique in general, consider to make 1\2 sliders instead of 3\4
00:23:457 (3,4) - ctrl+g them to follow vocals better
00:36:251 (2,3,4) - ^ http://puu.sh/dHYKG/d9ce77a545.jpg or something that covers long vocal beats better
00:45:662 (2,3) - ctrl+g them to follow vocals better
00:46:839 (2,3) - ^ here too
01:03:604 (3,4) - ^ 01:06:839 (2,3) - ^
01:05:883 (4) - guess this is not needed cus stream starts from 01:05:883 (4) - in music
01:19:780 (3) - splitting this into slider + circle will follows instruments better http://puu.sh/dHZ9j/e1c964e4e5.jpg
01:21:692 (1) - ^ 01:22:868 (1) -
01:26:986 (3,4) - try something like http://puu.sh/dHZkq/ff493e7eba.jpg or http://puu.sh/dHZlk/fd88f2516f.jpg here, will follow music better too imo

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AnreFM
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AnreFM

Sieg wrote:

yo

easy:
00:34:780 () - useless green line
01:05:810 () - 01:17:574 () - ^ FIxed

Hard Collab:
00:23:457 (6,1) - ctrl+g them to follow vocals better, or you can try something like http://puu.sh/dHXDQ/5eb7db3e99.jpg or whatever also fitsalright
00:45:810 (3,4) - ^ http://puu.sh/dHXLl/c41cd7416a.jpgum I decided to keep the Kiai part of the Hard out of too much complex of the rhythm, the SV and the DS is already making it a bit too hard and thus I think keeping this part less clickab;e would be ideal for gameplay, I hope you can understand><
01:06:986 (3,4) - ^fixed this one though
00:48:898 (4,5) - ctrl+g here too seems better for rhythmum I was sticking to the lead in for the next drum, this repeat here will make the next three circle more powerful><

Fly!!:
00:23:015 (1,2) - 00:32:133 (4,1) - I don't think that extending this is a good idea, background for extended sliders is way to week and this is kind of bad rhythm variety technique in general, consider to make 1\2 sliders instead of 3\4I kind of like the earlier one, but I also hate the latter one, fixed both of them :3
00:23:457 (3,4) - ctrl+g them to follow vocals betterah this one is also like the one I mentioned in the Hard; I was emphasizing the heavy drum on the background here, not the vocal><
00:36:251 (2,3,4) - ^ http://puu.sh/dHYKG/d9ce77a545.jpg or something that covers long vocal beats betterfixed then
00:45:662 (2,3) - ctrl+g them to follow vocals betterfixed
00:46:839 (2,3) - ^ here toofixed
01:03:604 (3,4) - ^ eh I was following the rhythm created by the drum, I think this fits here imo>< 01:06:839 (2,3) - ^ fixed this
01:05:883 (4) - guess this is not needed cus stream starts from 01:05:883 (4) - in musicyeah
01:19:780 (3) - splitting this into slider + circle will follows instruments better http://puu.sh/dHZ9j/e1c964e4e5.jpg
01:21:692 (1) - ^ 01:22:868 (1) - ^ I was following the guitar here, also I'd like to make the rhythm more variable here with long sliders so that not all of it become circle + sliders><
01:26:986 (3,4) - try something like http://puu.sh/dHZkq/ff493e7eba.jpg or http://puu.sh/dHZlk/fd88f2516f.jpg here, will follow music better too imoalsright

Oh wow so many changes to the pattern, I hope I didn't mess something up :o Thank you Sieg! :3
Sieg
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<3
Ichigaki
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Kyaah, Gratz AnreFM~
SPYAIR, Haikyuu!! ftw
HabiHolic
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HabiHolic
oh.. new SPYAIR song!!!!!

Gratz!!!
Rukaru
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Rukaru
wow grats anre :D
didn't see this coming. it's good to see your ranked map again
AnreFM
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wawawawa thank very much Sieg! <3

And also I'd like to thank everyone who helped me making this happen, thank you very much everyone, you're the best! :D
jyu
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yay congratz!! \o/

and now we wait for a week
Konei
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Awesome song, sorry I didn't get to it!
gyuwife
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Congratulations!
Winnie
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I congratulate you on your achievement :)
luxoDeh
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Gratz Anre :3
Trust
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Trust
(late) grats!

I'm more on board with kagehina tho <3
mingmichael
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wahhhhhhhh selamat anre & alpaca!!! \:D/
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grats, nice insane :)
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