[General]
- Remove letterboxes and widescreen sup lel
That's all, kudo pls - Stop putting albums in Source field Gezo pls
- 01:32:936 - until 01:36:365 - Make the hitsound choice consistent on every diff?
- Most of the big white ticks fit to the beat better with a d imo. You're not following the beat on your mapset most of the time and I guess it's okay, but imo, those ones should follow it, else it sounds awkward. Though, maybe it doesn't fit to the pitch as well, so that's just a subjective suggestion.
- For 16 stanza after 00:38:079 - you have no break. 00:50:079 (49) - d and remove 00:50:936 (50) - to put a break before the kiai maybe?
- 00:51:794 (51,52,53,54,55,56,57) - If 00:52:222 - is mapped, I think 00:53:079 - should be too. 00:53:508 (54) - Fits better as a d imo. And I think you should remove 00:54:794 (56) - since a break would fit here.
- 01:08:936 - Same thing about the 16 stanza without break, consider removing 01:21:365 (92,93) - ?
- 02:21:794 (165) - d? Should be a dkd again to fit the music instead of 2 kkd in a row.
- 02:31:222 (179,180,181,182,183) - Change into dkkkd/dkdkd?
- Why are there 1/3 doublets while more than 50% of the map feels like a Kantan? Gezo pls
- Add a d at 01:08:079 - or something? it's weird to have a d dK here imo.
- 01:26:079 (125,126,127) - Should be consistent with 01:22:651 (120,121) -
- 02:05:365 (189) - Remove or add one at 01:58:508 -
- 02:21:651 - Add a d for 1/3 consistency? >.>
- 00:24:258 - Add a d for consistency with 00:31:115 (56) - ?
- 00:50:936 (107) - Remove? Because of the lack of break again >.>
- 00:57:365 (130,131,132) - kkd to follow the beat and pitch?
- 01:00:365 (139,140,141,142,143) - Do the same as 00:53:508 (116,117,118,119,120,121) - ? 01:01:222 (141,142) - Doesn't fit to the music imo.
- 01:05:079 (153) - Should be a k to follow the beat (there's only beat here). It's this way on every other diffs too.
- 01:16:222 (181) - Should be a k for consistency, beat, etc.
- 01:19:008 (190) - Remove and add a d at 01:20:294 - instead?
- 01:22:222 (200) - Remove for a break?
- 01:46:008 (262) - Remove? Doesn't really fit imo.
- 02:32:508 (378) - Would fit better at 02:29:079 - imo. It fits better to the pitch here and consistency with 02:35:936 (388) - . Maybe consider adding dons at 02:15:365 - and 02:22:222 - too.
- 02:38:079 (391,392,393,394,395) - k k d d D fits better to the pitch imo.
- 00:46:651 (122) - d?
- 01:21:472 (277,278,279,280) - kddd for symmetry with the previous pattern and because 01:21:794 (280) - fits way better as a d?
- d on 01:24:365 (295) - for consistency? (this whole pattern is really tricky to play imo ;_;) Also same sugestion for the similar next parts.
- Remove 01:55:079 (406) - or add a note at 01:54:651 - ? The first suggestion would be the best one imo since it's always nice to have more emphasis on the start of a kiai and it would be consistent with the next patterns too. Also, there's no note here on the Inner, so I don't see why you wouldn't remove it.
- 02:11:508 (467,468,469,470,471) - Make it kinda similar as you did on Inner? This note 02:12:079 (470) - is awkward imo.
- Gibe creditz for monotone 1/8 suggestion plz (I think your patterns are still really tricky in comparison to k kkk k d though ;_;).
- 00:58:651 (239) - Should be a d like 00:51:794 (194) - . And 00:58:222 (235) - should be a k for the beat.
- 00:59:508 (242,246) - Should be dons too
- 01:36:365 (440) - You forgot the finisher on this diff.
- 01:46:651 (484) - d?
- 01:49:222 (500,501) - d k for the same reason as the previous suggestion?