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Ty for the mod Gaia!Gaia wrote:
From Strawberry Mousse modding team
since you're a newer mapper i'll be giving a more generalized mod
[Normal]
Everything in your AIMod has to be fixed! ty didn't see those. Fixed all
00:01:233 (1,2,3) - this does not flow very well
00:08:733 (1,2,3) - ^
00:12:014 (4,1) - ^
take a look at this post https://osu.ppy.sh/news/61334266941 cuz it's really helpful Seen already, fixed all above, i thought it was fine.
00:14:123 (3,4,1) - don't stack in the easiest difficulty Fixed in AI modding
00:19:514 (8,1) - ^ and etc ^
00:32:170 (3,5) - use copy and paste so your map looks cleaner Done
00:41:545 (5,1) - blanketing can be improved too Fixed
00:43:889 (2,3) - ^Fixed
alright, so basically this diff can improve by fixing the above mentioned points. flow, stacks, blankets and cleaner patterns
i didnt point everything out so try to look for the other problems yourself.
[Hard]
00:08:029 (3,4,5,1) - this spacing is an issue because it's the same rhythm as 00:06:155 (3,4,5,1) - yet the gap is considerably larger Fixed.
00:08:733 (1,2,3) - rhythm can be improved Staying the same
00:12:014 (4,1) - u can blanket or sth Position intended so that 00:10:608 (1,2,3,4) have the same distance between the end of a slider and the starting of one.
00:15:998 (1,2,3) - this spacing is really difficult for triples in a hard. rather use a smaller DS or just stack it This DS is used for all triplets.
00:16:233 (3) - redo this slider and blanket it perfectly Same Slider, Fixed Blanket
00:17:873 (1,2,3) - same as 00:15:998 (1,2,3) -I would but I prefer how it currently goes into 00:18:811 (4,5,6)
00:23:733 (1) - (and others) 00:23:967 has a beat too so sounds odd without this mapped I Wanted to but I want a good blend of sliders. I use it in a constant way anyway so I gets easy to expect and understand.
00:32:873 (4,1) - flow Fixed I guess.
00:36:858 (1) - try this http://puu.sh/bQpG0/cd75cc0759.jpg Done
00:41:311 (3,4) - flow as well. Kept the same
ok so to summerize, listen to your rhythms and see what sounds missing / unneccessary . as well as the same things i said in normal, flow and blankets and also spacing.
i'd say improve your rhythms before you look to improve this map aesthetically
[Insane]
00:14:123 - why not have 2 circles here to make it a triple? fits in the music. Added
00:14:358 (1,2) - flow is an issue For insane I dont think that small distance is exactly a problem...
00:17:170 (3,4,5,6,1) - some pretty stressed jumps u have here.Smaller
00:19:045 (3,4,5,6,1) - here too. ^
00:21:858 (1,2) - doesnt look very good Kept
00:49:983 (1,2) - flow Kept
00:54:201 (3) - looks pretty bad Fixed
00:55:608 (1,2,3) - (and other places) wrong usage of kicksliders (1/4 sliders) use them when you realllly want to stress some notes understood but I deem the way i use them to be fine, for now anyways. I had a lot more 1/4 sliders earlier.
pretty much the same as others, flow and aesthetics
rhythm is the better of the 3 since you mapped most of the stuff i guess
however, really look at your spacing because you have some really big jumps for a slow song like this one
if you have any questions dont hesitate to come ask me (:
Ty vm for feedback! while I agree my jumps when a gave them a...3rd thought they were kinda big. But there was no way I was gonna settle for small jumps, and for a song that is easy and slow, there was absolutely no way I wanted it to be a z/x clickfest. So I choose large jumps to be this song's insane...feature I guess
good luck and have fun!