nix9011 wrote:

Hi, wanted to do a m4m.
mod is highly subjective, please take it as suggestion only.
so here I go
Just gonna go for the standard difficulties as I have barely played any taiko ;-;

tag : opening
*please consider replacing the black combo color as some players have full background dim preventing them from seeing the approach circles ( pure white may also be a problem) [/color]

Easy

00:34:060 (3) - copy , reverse & replace to 00:35:393 (1) - would look better I dont really get it, but If its what im thinking, I dont want jumps/anti jumps in an easy map
01:03:393 (2) - same above ↑ to 01:04:060 (3) or the other way around 3->2 ^
00:46:060 (1) - New combo ( gonna be 4) Fixed
00:47:893 (2) - ↑ ( 1 ) Fixed
00:49:060 (3) - ↑ ( 2 ) Fixed
00:50:727 (1) - maybe shorten 1 white tick back to give a bit more room for 00:53:393 (1) Okay, i moved the end back a white tick

Normal

00:11:394 (1) - copy , reverse & replace to 00:12:060 (2) I think it would look better if i didn't do that
00:36:727 (3) - extra note , keep beat going Fixed
01:04:060 (6) - new combo ( 1 ) Fixed
01:04:727 (1) - ↑ ( 2 ) Fixed

Hard

00:44:227 (3) - 1/2 slider or 2 notes, 00:44:393 (3) - sounded off since you were going along with the vocals Fixed
00:50:393 (6) - copy , reverse & replace to 00:50:727 (7) Done
maybe slow down slider velocity, it felt too fast or up the AR to 8? I dont know, ill look it over a couple times and see if i want to change it

Insane

00:30:727 (4) - This slider needs love, remove unnecessary waypoints ( ctrl + right click ) Fixed
raise HP drain to 7 imo, given the speed That a little extreme, missing one note would take 1/2 of your health

I noticed that quite a lot of your sliders have unnecessary waypoints, consider removing them.
removing points sometimes help you shape the sliders better.

All done for me.
It is my first mod btw, I hope this helps
Thanks & good luck!

Saut wrote:

Yo, sorry for the waiting period, as i already mentioned im quiet busy in the last few days.
Anyways, I am not very experienced with mods, but nethertheless i gonna try my best. I will only mod the insave version of your osu standard map because i literaly know nothing about easy/normal/hard diffs.

Insane

offset: 11414 - the inherited point isnt placed on a concrete tackt
00:09:394 (1) - try to start the spinner at offset 9227 (feels better while playing) i agree
00:30:727 (4) - (very subjective) not familiar with this slider - looks ugly in my opinion and doesnt fit to the rest of the map yeah, i didnt know what to do with that slider, but i made it basically i half circle now, so it looks better
00:59:227 (1) - try to add a hitcircle right there and move the (1)slider 1/2 tackt further forward and change the (2) to a 1/2 slider (think it fits pretty well because of the singing) im a little confused, but ok
01:00:393 (4) - ^ - in general (subjective) i like to hit sliders when ever the artists rise his voice (even if its just 1/2 slider) ^
01:04:227 (9) - dont like the position of this circle, was pretty "hard" to reach it (considering its a 4,3star map) ok i made it closer to the end of the stream
01:06:227 (7) - considering that you stacked the ending of the the (3) slider on the (1) - it would be great to see the (7) stacked on the (5) and the ending of (8) on (4) - (idk why but i love such detailed stuff and i notcie it while playing, also the map gets more consistent) i see what your saying , ok
01:03:227 (2,3) - maybe you should rethink the shift right here, because im not sure if it fits to the rest of the mapconstellation at first i didnt get what you were saying, bnut now i get it. i made the stream rounder annd i made it so it flows off of the slider
00:22:060 (1) - because you changed back the BPM velocity to 1,00x the distance snapping changed here - (1) is slightly closer to the last circle than the other circles in the stream fixed
00:43:393 (1) - you could add an inherating point here and change the bpm velocity to 0,75 for example till you reach the kaitime part- so it fits to the slow part of the song.
in general you should work a bit more on the hitsounds.
maybe as a guidline you can add here for example a finish 00:22:060 (1) - and then constantly from here 00:22:393 (2) - a clap every second tackt. (- 00:30:727 (4) - then you can add here a clap + at the end of 4 + 00:31:560 (1) - 3 claps on the 1 slider + 00:31:893 (2) - start and end + 3 and then continue with the regular clap tackt from the new combo (every second tackt again)) Ill work on my hitsounds
Also in my opinon there are too many new comobs. You could remove some here and there - for example this one could be removed 00:12:560 (1) - this one 00:15:227 (1) - ... (maybe you could set on these points a new combo 00:15:560 (4) - 00:15:893 (6) - 00:16:227 (2) - 00:16:560 (4) - if you get what i mean) if you work on your NC pattern your map also gets more structured, readable + enjoyable ^-^ sadly i dont know what an NC pattern is

I guess im done here
Btw as I already mentioned this one was my first "official" mod ever lmao, you can disagree with every point ofc. But still i hope this mod is useful for you.
Thanks for the m4m and good luck with this one

saut

trammiexo wrote:

Hi, from M4M : 3 https://osu.ppy.sh/b/528255&m=0://url

Easy:
00:08:560 (2) - Starts on red tick. Most easy diffs have all objects starting on white and ending on white ticks so it might be confusing to new players. I dont really think that would be a problem, it goes with the song...
00:31:893 (2) & 00:33:734 (2) - fix overlap! fixed
00:54:060 (2) - Looks weird to me, could it be more symmetrical? fixed
01:01:393 (3) - Overlap fixed
01:03:393 (2) - ^ fixed
01:10:727 (1) - ^ fixed
01:18:060 (1,2,3) - Uneven blanket fixed
Notes: Be careful with objects not starting and/or ending on white ticks since it's not a full beat. This can be challenging for new players again i dont think it would be much of a problem as long as it goes with the song

Normal:
00:11:394 (1) - Curve like the second slider Fixed
It looks good!!

Hard:
All I can say is to align notes neatly (on top of them) if you plan on putting them on top of each other, so do please go back in this diff and fix any

Fixed
Well... I cannot mod most insanes (yet) ^^' sorry! But good mapset, best of luck to you!

• [Hard]

1. 00:07:394 (1) - repeat 2 times will be better ..
2. 00:11:394 (1) - Ctrl+G
3. 00:12:560 - add note here .. weird , you following the beat when no note here
4. 00:16:894 (2) - try make like this
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:23:393 (1) - Ctrl+G
6. 01:02:727 (1) - start this spinner at 01:02:560 and 01:03:727
7. 01:12:227 (1,2) - change to slider "i think"
8. 01:24:060 (5) - repeat 2 time will be better ..
9. 01:24:893 - add note here

• [Insane]

1. 00:08:060 (4) - try make like this
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:12:893 (2) - move to X:272 Y:172
3. 00:15:560 (1,2) - Ctrl+G ?
4. 00:16:227 (1,2) - ^
5. 00:27:227 (9) - remove "i think" there's no beat here
6. 00:41:060 (2,3) - Ctrl+G
7. 01:05:893 (6) - ^
8. 01:25:143 - add note ?

Sky Trias wrote:

Hey, sorry Late ! Got busy ..

M4M from my beatmap : https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/256870/start=0

• [Hard]

1. 00:07:394 (1) - repeat 2 times will be better .. Fixed?
2. 00:11:394 (1) - Ctrl+G Fixed
3. 00:12:560 - add note here .. weird , you following the beat when no note here Fixed
4. 00:16:894 (2) - try make like this
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:23:393 (1) - Ctrl+G Fixed
6. 01:02:727 (1) - start this spinner at 01:02:560 and 01:03:727 Fixed
7. 01:12:227 (1,2) - change to slider "i think" Fixed
8. 01:24:060 (5) - repeat 2 time will be better .. Its already repeating 2 times
9. 01:24:893 - add note hereFixed

• [Insane]

1. 00:08:060 (4) - try make like this Fixed
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:12:893 (2) - move to X:272 Y:172 Fixed
3. 00:15:560 (1,2) - Ctrl+G ? I like it better how it is, i think its smoother
4. 00:16:227 (1,2) - ^ ^
5. 00:27:227 (9) - remove "i think" there's no beat here Fixed
6. 00:41:060 (2,3) - Ctrl+G Fixed
7. 01:05:893 (6) - ^ Fixed
8. 01:25:143 - add note ? Fixed

Good Luck for the rank


Take my stars

Tsumetaku wrote:

Hi OuO M4M From your queue~

★ = Some overall comments
◆ = Strong suggestions
▲ = Unrankable stuffs

General
=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=
▲ There can't be any objects before the first red line,
so maybe you should change this red line to 00:07:394 - (Applies to all diff) Fixed
◆ You should avoid using black and white as object colors,
cuz if someone turn the screen opacity to 0%,they can't see anything but black. Fixed
Whith is from those who playing multiplayer,when they're dead,the hit circle will turn all white (I heard this from an old mapper)
◆ plz unmark the Widescreen and Letterbox in Design~ its useless without story board Fixed
★ 00:11:394 (1) - Go find a hitclap with this clappy clap will helps alot on quality OuO(?

E
=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=
★ Uh... i would define this diff to"a little bit messy and confusing" but exactly almost fine imo :(
▲ If i remember right,Easy diff can only has 1.0x SV.1.25x is unrankable Fixed
00:50:810 (1) - pull this to previous white line Fixed
00:55:393 (3) - i think these rhythm are weird,this will fit vocal~ Fixed

SPOILER

01:04:727 (1) - the rhythm after this one is also kindof weird,can be change to a better way Fixed
▲ 01:25:227 (1) - An object appears after spinner within 2 beats is forbidden in easy Fixed

N
=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=
▲ Also,SV.1.25x in Normal is unrankable either. Fixed
00:17:394 (2,3) - Try to blanket these Fixed
00:22:393 (2) - bad stacking Fixed
00:24:060 (2) - ds Fixed
00:25:060 (4) - dis circle on red line is weird,there's no need to follow vocal here,you can just put it on white line beats. Fixed
★ 00:31:727 (1,2) - Like these beats on red line is well following vocal
00:34:727 (5) - blanket Fixed
00:36:060 (2) - rhythm like this will fit here Fixed

SPOILER

★ the kiai part has wrong DSx so i'll skip what is DSx?

H
=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=
★ hard has some ds and stacking issues,you should sometimes self check though >u>
00:11:394 (1) - blanket Fixed
00:12:394 (4,5,1) - ugly flow here Fixed
00:34:727 (4,5,6) - why these circles have different Ds... make it consistent Fixed
00:35:393 (1) - i would recomment a rhythm like this Fixed

SPOILER

00:51:060 (1) - this part can place some wonderful rhythm~ dont let a spinner take over Fixed
01:15:393 (1,1,1,1) - fill these with some object plz... it feels so empty in hard Fixed
01:17:727 - put a 4 reverse stream simulating slider here Fixed
01:24:060 (5) - 2 reverse is confusing Fixed
01:25:393 (1) - pull the tail to 01:28:393 - Fixed

I
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★ same as hard,check the issues
★ No doubt,Insane has the highest quality among all diff,but the jumping measurement can be hold more correctly
00:21:227 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - improve the flow of these streams Fixed
00:23:060 (4) - ~ somehow feels better I dont know what you mean here,

SPOILER

00:35:893 (2) - stacking issues Fixed
01:10:060 (1) - u can follow insts instead of stopper a spinner in it Fixed
01:24:893 (2,3,4) - expand these Fixed

i think a mod like this is my limit ˊuˋ

Julie wrote:

[Easy]
I think you might want to recheck your easy, lots of rhythmn change, which make it harder for new player to get good accuracy on Ok, i went through the map and fixed all of the weird rhythm patterns

Might want to fix that, unrankable issue Fixed
00:34:060 (3,1) - this is way too close, unrankable issue not detected by AImod, try moving (1) out, you'll see "distance snap" activate again Fixed
01:18:060 (1,2,3) - symetric here Fixed

[Normal]
00:32:727 (1,2) - try to make it so these 2 end doesn't touch Fixed
00:37:727 (4,1,2) - symmetric here Fixed
01:00:060 (3) - uwahhh what happen to this one, end it on the red stick!! xD Don't suddendly use 1/8 mostly when is a normal Fixed
01:23:393 (4,5,6,1) - could add more rhythm on this part, and use slider instead of just circle, because circle are harder to get accuracy on then slider Fixed

[Hard]
00:07:893 - add a note, losing rhythm Fixed
00:11:394 (1,2) - would look good if you did a blanket here so the curve doesn't look to close to (2) Fixed
00:13:227 - add a note here losing rhythm Fixed
00:18:727 (3,4) - this look overlap O.O, I'm sure you can make something better here :3. Or maybe you can delete (4) and put one more reverse to (3) so it has more effect when clicking 00:19:394 (1) Fixed
00:48:727 (3) - add finish Fixed
00:51:393 (1,2,3,4,5) - what happen here? O.O a loud part with no hitsound :<!! While you did add some on your insane which was epic xD Fixed
01:22:560 - add a note here, losing some rhythmn Fixed
01:25:393 (1) - finish should end at 01:28:338 , I used 1/6 to get that timing, because you can hear the finish hitsound after the drum Fixed

[Muzukashii]
00:16:060 (29,30,31) - consider changing this triple, might be hard for muzukashii players ok, i made it a little easier
00:18:727 (45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53) - this long stream might be too hard for a muzukashii, as a muzukashii player I only see max is ddddd or kkkkk as the longest Fixed
00:48:560 (190) - delete Fixed
01:10:060 (294) to 01:13:227 (314) - to long for muzukashii xD Fixed
01:14:393 - add a note here for vocal Fixed
01:21:893 (358) - delete no sound Fixed
01:23:727 (369,370,371,372,373,374,375,376,377,378,379,380,381) - same reason as 00:18:727 (45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53) Fixed
01:25:227 (383) - add finish Fixed

[Oni]
00:10:060 (10,11,12) - hmm how about some alternate? kkd Fixed
00:11:227 (20) - k? Fixed
00:19:894 (82,83,84,85) - Ohh how about adding finish here, strong note :3 Fixed
00:31:893 (153,154) - finish same reason as above Fixed
00:42:560 - add a note here? Since your also mapping the music sound Fixed
00:44:727 (227,228) - ctrl+g ?, why would i ctrl g 2 ds?
00:54:060 (3) - finish, strong sound! Fixed
For the kiai part, I really love all your stream, my favorite pattern and all !! But it might be a bit too much and overmap a bit xD. Fixed
00:59:727 (47) - k Fixed
01:00:227 (51) - k Fixed
01:04:727 (91) - k Fixed

[Insane]
00:11:560 (2,3) - make these 2 sames curves, just different angle Fixed
00:16:727 (1,2,3) - take a bit of time to make it symmetric :3 For the slider, you can copy paste and then ctrl+h Fixed
00:31:893 (2) - move this a bit to the right so it doesn't touch the end of 00:30:727 (4) Fixed
00:31:560 (1) - add clap on the end of the slider for drum Fixed
00:32:393 (3) - remove clap and clap here instead 00:32:560 (4) , because you put clap on the end of this 00:31:893 (2) Fixed
00:32:727 (1) - add finish? Fixed
00:35:393 (1,2,3) - this look a bit random, how about something working it a bit~ Fixed

Suggestion

00:35:393 (1) - middle point x:293 y:315 | last point x:249 y:320 Fixed
00:36:060 (3) - middle point x:258 y:207 | last point x:267 y:240 Fixed

00:36:560 (1) - make a nice blanket with the head of 00:36:060 (3) , so it doesn't look a bit overlap Fixed
00:37:060 (2,3,4,5) - make it symmetric :3 Fixed
00:38:060 (1) - finish on the beginning of the slider and remove finish of the end of slider Fixed
00:39:226 (2) - add finish here? Fixed
00:39:560 (1,2,3) - same spacing, for better symmetric Fixed
00:40:727 (1) - add finish beginning of slider Fixed
00:41:893 (5) - Hmm how about adding a finish here and make a jump Fixed
01:00:560 (6,7) - symmetric here Fixed
01:25:060 (3,4) - make a jumpu! Fixed
00:41:227 (3) - remove clap, clap should be here 00:41:060 (2) from the way you map it for the drum sound Fixed
01:25:393 (1) - finish should end at 01:28:338 , I used 1/6 to get that timing, because you can hear the finish hitsound after the drum Fixed

GL WITH THE MAPSET !! Hope it help :3!! Try your best!!!

Thanks so much!

• 
  offset:maybe +10 is better?
  The offset number is a llttle much…try to decrease it to avoid causing other problems(crash down because green lines before red lines or something like this..OvO)..
  You re really good at make rhythm… and the choice of slider or note

• 
  my map has only one diff so I can’t say too much..but those diffs’ some sliders maybe needs change a position…
  For example Normal’s 00:22:060 look like you’re follow the lyrics to compose notes but the slider here one contains 3 beats and second one contains 2..it’s a little stranger.╮(￣▽￣”)╭
  Also the Easy’s 00:26:060 last bar start at 00:22:060 with a slider’s start…but 00:26:060 with slider’s end= =why…..

• 
  00:11:393 the green line is not snapped ╮(￣▽￣”)╭
  00:59:060 (8) –this note has different DS with one before and after…
  
  maybe we can make it a triangle’s hide jump(forgive me I don’t know how to say)…like this
  
  https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2254560
  or square jump like this
  
  https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2254576
  00:42:810 it's overmap i think...2 beats here but 3 notes....
  01:01:393 maybe place at the left better?╮(￣▽￣")╭ like this
  
  https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2254657
  this note is going out of the monitor╮(￣▽￣")╭ (i'm not sure)~~
  01:04:227 this note has different DS with one before and after…
  01:19:727 maybe restart kira time here？

• 
  it’s a good map~~ds and slider velocity is increasing by diffs is good~~good luck to rank~~

albatross11 wrote:

Hi, from #modreqs!

I'm new at modding so .....here is

[General]

• 
  offset:maybe +10 is better? i think the one i have now is better
  The offset number is a llttle much…try to decrease it to avoid causing other problems(crash down because green lines before red lines or something like this..OvO).. what.
  You re really good at make rhythm… and the choice of slider or note

[EasyNormalHard]

• 
  my map has only one diff so I can’t say too much..but those diffs’ some sliders maybe needs change a position…
  For example Normal’s 00:22:060 look like you’re follow the lyrics to compose notes but the slider here one contains 3 beats and second one contains 2..it’s a little stranger.╮(￣▽￣”)╭ i dont really kno what your trying to say
  Also the Easy’s 00:26:060 last bar start at 00:22:060 with a slider’s start…but 00:26:060 with slider’s end= =why….. ^

[insane]

• 
  00:11:393 the green line is not snapped ╮(￣▽￣”)╭ Fixed
  00:59:060 (8) –this note has different DS with one before and after… Fixed
  
  maybe we can make it a triangle’s hide jump(forgive me I don’t know how to say)…like this Fixed
  
  https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2254560
  or square jump like this
  
  https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2254576
  00:42:810 it's overmap i think...2 beats here but 3 notes.... if you hear the drum in the background, the notes i placed go with it
  01:01:393 maybe place at the left better?╮(￣▽￣")╭ like this fixed
  
  https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2254657
  this note is going out of the monitor╮(￣▽￣")╭ (i'm not sure)~~
  01:04:227 this note has different DS with one before and after… Fixed
  01:19:727 maybe restart kira time here？I think it would be better if i didnt

[Others]

• 
  it’s a good map~~ds and slider velocity is increasing by diffs is good~~good luck to rank~~

Aldwych wrote:

Hi!
From my modding queue as requested

[General]

Try to end your std diff as the same time.
2 Oni and no futsuu? Ow8 wat?
Add Julie to tags, since there's a GD.

[Izi]

00:26:060 : Nazi blanket. lolwhat i dont get it
00:29:393 : I found the flow not really good, especially for an easy diff. I advise you to ct-rl-h the slider plus move it to the right. Fixed
00:32:727 : Also nazi blanket, coz actually, the slider is not so beatifull. :<Fixed
00:35:393 : Blanket for these 2 sliders. Fixed
00:38:060 : Near perfect slider Fixed
00:40:393 : Up this circle + make a better blanket with the 2 next sliders. Fixed
00:43:393 : Move this slider to the left, it's overlapping the previous one. Fixed
00:49:060 : Move the slider to 00:49:727, coz you miss the finish hitsound part which myst be the begining of the slider and the end a clap. Fixed
00:50:727 : Imo, it's better to start the spinner at 00:51:393 Fixed
00:53:393 : The flow you give for the next slider is not good, you should curve it to the left to help the beginners to go to the next one. Fixed
00:56:060 : Blanket. Fixed
01:03:393 : Use the same slider as the next one. Fixed
01:05:893 : This kind of 3/2 spacing could be resolved by deleting this slider and the previous one, replacing them by a unique slider which start at 01:05:393 and reverse at 01:05:893. Fixed
01:08:393 : I advise you to move it to 272;308 , the flow will be much better. Fixed
01:10:727 : Remove the clap hitsound, there's no need. Fixed

There's others blanket problem i won't say, i think you will also see.
I'm a bit confuse for an easy diff. First the star rating is really high, maybe coz you put to much object for an easy one, you're using many times 1/1 or 3/2 spacing between 2 notes (i'm not talking about the DS right), 1.20 Distance spacing, i also found the SV too much high, maybe decrease to 0.70 / 0.60. With all theses point, i'm for a reworking of the diff, but making more sliders with a 2~4/1 slider length

[Normal]

00:08:060 : Curve it more, it will be better. Fixed
00:16:727 : Blanket. Fixed
00:18:060 : The curving part is not making a good blanket with the previous one. (But the previous slider has a good blanket! ) Fixed
00:22:727 : Use the same slider as the next one. Fixed
00:26:060 : Blanket Fixed
00:30:060 : Blanket. Fixed
00:34:727 : The flow here needs a rework, i advise you to ctrl-g the slider. Fixed
00:40:060 : ^ Fixed
00:43:393 : Blanket. Fixed
00:50:727 : Same as easy. Fixed
00:55:393 : Rework this slider for a better blanket. Fixed
01:15:393 : I'm not sure if stacked slider is a good solution, you should move them. Fixed
01:22:060 : Blanket. Fixed

OK, so the diff is much better. Same as easy, there's some problems of blanket and flow listed above.

[Hard]

00:14:560 : You should add circle and also at 00:15:060, this part is so void in comparison of the whole part. Fixed
00:27:893 : Blanket Fixed
00:29:393 : Use the same slider as the next one. Fixed
00:33:227 : Overlapping with the first slider. Fixed
00:44:727 : Use the same slider as the next one, it will give also a better flow. Fixed
01:00:227 : Bad overlapping? :< Fixed
01:25:393 : End of spinner is not well positioned. Fixed
Some blanket i go throughout.

Imo the only diffcult part of the hard is the speed, coz there's no real jump instead one. :<
But i'm not suggesting of a rework m8.

[Muzukashii]

00:14:227 : Change your part to kkdkd Fixed
00:15:060 : Delete, your combo is too long Fixed
00:16:727 : Delete, your combo is too long for a muzu Fixed
00:16:893 : Move to k. Fixed
00:23:893 : Delete all your d to 00:24:727. Fixed
01:03:560 : Delete, combo is too long. Fixed
01:04:393 : Change to d, you must avoid triplets ddk on muzukashi. Fixed
01:23:727 : Penta d + too long combo. Need a rework here. Fixed

Imo you're map as a high bpm, you must not have too long combo without a break of 1/1 spacing, so try to clean a bit your muzukashi and put essentially 3~7 combo -> break etc... Also try something else kdkdkdk pattern, is not really enjoyable on taiko. :< Fixed

[Oni]
Check AI mod, you've got an error. Fixed
Nothing really bad, just the begining with i found too long combos without breaks. Ok i removed notes where it didnt go with the music

[Julie's Oni]
01:21:393 : I found it very confuse, the fact is you're using 1/2 / 1/4 all the map, and here 1/3, also you're finishing your combo on a 1/3 tick which is strange, imo you should find a solution and rework this little part. Fixed
Overall it's a good oni.

[Insane]

00:18:394 : The overlapp is not good, the flow too and the readability too. You should move this slider else where. Fixed
00:23:060 : You should move it down the slider, the flow you give here, is not really good. Fixed
00:25:393 : Better make a blanket around the end of the last slider? Fixed
00:31:560 : Nearly good blanket. Fixed
01:05:893 : Ctrl-g for a better flow. Fixed
01:21:727 : Use the same DS all over these circles. Fixed
01:25:227 : Why there's a jump here and not on the others? Try to be consistent on the DS of this circles combo. Fixed

Gl hf for the rank.

Your Good Self wrote:

Here for M4M

[Whole Mapset]
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/218098
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/220844
^ You should probably follow these 2 maps' metadata. (i.e. using caps for title) Fixed

[Easy]
00:09:394 (1,1) - Not enough recovery time. t/241019 Fixed
00:13:727 - Add note Fixed
00:14:060 (1,1) - Ewww overlap D: Fixed
00:20:727 (2) - 1/2 slider probably isn't a very good idea in Easy. Replace with a single hitcircle. Fixed
00:21:393 - Add note (optional) I think its better without one
00:31:893 (2) - Should avoid adding notes on red ticks, but it's okay here I guess.
00:31:893 (2,1) - Make a blanket here. Then have 00:34:060 (2) start on the tail of 00:31:893 (2) Fixed
00:36:560 (2) - Blanket can be improved here Fixed
00:40:727 (2,3) - (3) is further away from (1) than (2). Fixed

SPOILER

00:46:060 (4) - Doesn't flow well, I suggest a ctrl+H here Fixed
00:49:060 (2) - Start 1 beat earlier, end at the same time. Fixed
00:50:727 (1) - Also insufficient recovery time (for an Easy at least) Fixed
00:54:060 (2) - Not symmetrical Fixed in previous update
00:56:060 (4) - Fix blanket Fixed
01:00:060 (2) - Replace with single hitcircle. Place it on the tail to keep the blanket with 01:00:560 (3) Fixed
01:03:393 (2,3) - Sliders aren't identical. Copypaste (2) and flip/rotate twice to make (3) Fixed
01:06:727 (4,5) - Replace with single slider ending at 01:07:227 Fixed
01:12:727 (1,2) - Can improve blanket here Fixed
01:18:060 (1,3) - Blanket isn't perfect, which kind of spoils the circle effect. Fixed
01:18:060 (1,2,3,4,5) - Can add NC somewhere here, I would say (4) Fixed

[Normal]
00:09:227 (1) - Not enough recovery time for Normal Fixed
00:15:394 (4,1) - Improve blanket here Fixed
00:18:060 (3) - Try to make the slider ball 'bounce' on the white tick 00:18:393. Also you can try for a better blanket with the head of 00:17:394 (2) Fixed in previous update
00:26:060 (1) - Improve blanket Fixed
00:44:727 (3) - Move down to blanket with (2). Fixed
00:46:060 (1,2) - Improve blanket Fixed
00:46:060 (1,3) - Overlap D: Fixed in previous update
00:50:727 (1) - Also not enough recovery time for a Normal. Deleting 00:53:393 (1) should fix it. Fixed
01:08:727 (3) - Flow is a bit bad here, should move this down to where 01:07:393 (1) is, then move (4) to fix DS and tweak 01:09:393 (5,1) for blanket. Fixed
01:22:060 (3,4) - Improve blanket Fixed
No ending spinner? Fixed

[Hard]
00:11:394 (1,2) - Blanket can be better Fixed
00:16:727 (1,2,3) - ^ Fixed
00:18:560 - Add note Fixed
00:19:394 (1) - Seems like quite a big 1/4 jump. Granted the slider has some leniency with the circle but it's still kind of hard without knowing exactly where to prepare. Fixed
00:22:393 (2,3) - Improve blanket Fixed
00:23:393 (1,2) - ^ (a bit nazi though) Fixed
00:27:893 (3) - Nudge 1 grid to the right, to stack with 00:27:060 (7) Fixed
00:28:393 (4) - Just my opinion but I think this would be better off moving upwards to flow with (3) instead ?
00:29:393 (3,4) - Should be made into identical shaped sliders. Fixed in previous update

SPOILER

00:31:393 (1) - Split into 1 beat slider + hitcircle 1/2 beat later Fixed
00:32:727 (1,2,3) - Move (3) up to form triangle Fixed in previous update
00:34:227 (2) - Move up a little Fixed
00:36:060 (3) - Improve blanket Fixed
00:37:893 - Add note Fixed
00:51:393 (1,2,3,4,5) - How about something like this? Fixed
00:58:227 (3,1,2) - Fix blanket Fixed
01:00:227 (5) - Move down 1 grid to stack with 00:58:727 (1) Fixed in previouys update
01:04:727 (3) - NC? idk Fixed
01:10:060 (1,2) - Blanket here Fixed
01:12:727 (3,4) - ^ Fixed
01:15:393 (1,1,1,1) - Can probably cut back on some of the NCs here. Fixed
01:22:060 (1,2) - Blanket can be better here Fixed

[Insane]
00:08:060 (4,5) - Improve blanket Fixed
00:13:727 (1) - Remove NC Fixed
00:15:227 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1) - Reduce number of NCs Fixed
00:19:060 (1) - Also remove NC here Fixed
00:25:393 (2) - Curve is quite sharp and out of place. Fixed
00:30:727 (4,1) - Improve blanket Fixed
00:37:060 (2,3,4,5) - ^ Fixed
00:38:060 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
00:39:560 (1,2,3) - ^ Fixed
00:40:560 (4,1) - ^ Fixed
00:47:060 (3,4,1) - ^ Fixed
00:47:727 (2,3) - ^ Fixed
00:52:560 (1) - Feels strange to put a spinner here. But it's still up to you. Fixed
00:58:060 (3,5) - Is the offset intentional? If not stack them. Fixed
01:04:143 - Should continue with the stream here Fixed
01:04:310 - ^ Fixed
01:04:893 (2,3) - Blanket can be better Fixed
01:08:727 (1,2,3) - It would be better if you used identical shaped sliders (copypaste + rotate) Fixed
01:16:227 - Maybe add a note here? Fixed

[Thoughts]
Overall not a bad map. Quite a number of blanket issues though. When done properly, blankets help to make the map look polished and immaculate, but any noticeable errors are quite obvious and breaks the effect.

Good luck getting the map ranked!

Nyark Kidoune wrote:

Hi!

Hard

00:16:894 (2,3) - maybe you should copy / paste these two to show the repetition in music fixed

Normal

00:44:727 (3,4) - both slider touches fixed
00:53:393 (1) - I think this slider comes too quickly compared to the end of the spinner for normal fixed

I'm sorry, I do not have much skill in modding I did my best

Kocari wrote:

Just here for one of the difficulties and a to get back into my modding days because you requested =)

[Hard]
Only my preference but in the first 7 seconds of the song I feel like it's missing things. Maybe throw in a slider in there because those sections could be easily accessible with mapping techniques for example using sliders and at like 00:06:060 that hits a really big mark for a spinner at least.
00:16:060 (2,3) - Inconsistent DS http://puu.sh/d4fDq/40d4016371.jpg make sure those are distance apart. 00:17:394 (3) - Same issue here no point of making it further out just snap it back into place. fixed
00:35:393 (1) - Not sure if you wanted that to be misplaced but if not try stacking them together. fixed
00:45:393 (6) - Distance Snap this fixed
00:45:393 (6,7,1) - Uneven spacing fixed
01:13:227 (4) - Only my preference but maybe move that slider over a little so the slider before that can be aligned in the center. (Fixed)http://puu.sh/d4fVE/9382b2601f.jpg fixed
01:15:727 (2,1,2) - Color coding is weird here. You have 1 slider as red but the others fall off on their own sounds as well. I suggest sticking with 1 color or changing 01:17:060 (2) into another color. fixed
Other than that it is fine. I hope to see this ranked in the near future.

Aldwych wrote:

[Julie's Oni]
01:21:393 : I found it very confuse, the fact is you're using 1/2 / 1/4 all the map, and here 1/3, also you're finishing your combo on a 1/3 tick which is strange, imo you should find a solution and rework this little part.
Overall it's a good oni.

AndreasHD wrote:

MOD4MOD ~



[Easy]

It would have been better to use circle size 1 , I tested the whole diff with it, and it works fine. Fixed

IMPORTANT!!! 00:42:060 (4) - It can't be out of screen, so drag it up! Fixed

00:50:060 (4,5,6) - space these out, since new players read it as a fast stream. Fixed

00:54:060 (2) - Use DS Fixed


[Normal]

For me, it feels like you don't know how to use Distance Snap (DS). :(

I didn't find like.. anything particularly "wrong" in this difficulty, so I'll let you have it as it is.


[Hard]

00:11:393 I don't think you need this inheriting section. Fixed

Set HP Drain to 4 maybe? I just felt it was kinda hard drain when I played. Fixed

00:07:394 (1) - This slider could use some work on the blanket around (2) better make it like this Fixed

SPOILER

00:09:227 put the spinner here, not here 00:09:393 Fixed

00:11:060 Remember to stop spinner here. Fixed

00:14:560 (3) - Why make this a small jump? Distance-snap it Fixed

00:15:227 (6) - DS this aswell. Fixed

00:16:894 (2) - Why are you not following the DS ?? Fixed

00:21:727 (2) - You don't need to reverse this more than one time, this is a hard after all. Fixed

00:23:393 (1) - It's very important that you use DS on this one, because right now, it's awkward to play! Fixed

00:42:227 (5) - I'd rather copy-pase this 00:41:727 (4) - and then CTRL+J&H it. Fixed

01:10:893 (3) - Place this note more like this Fixed

SPOILER

so that it's blanketed around (1) or atleast it has angel more upward.

01:15:060 (3,2) - This overlap looks ugly, and it's awkward to read. Fixed



[Insane]

00:11:560 (2) - add a clap hitsound Fixed

00:15:227 (6) - Remove NC Fixed

00:15:393 (1) - NC Fixed

00:15:560 (1) - Remove NC Fixed

00:16:060 (5) - make the NC here instead of 00:16:227 (1) - please don't ignore this. Fixed

00:55:227 (5) - Stack this with 00:54:560 (3) - just remember to blanket this one 00:55:727 (6) - after. Fixed

00:58:227 (4) - CTRL+G this slider, you get much much better flow by doing that. Fixed

00:58:893 (7) - Make this a jump too, 1,4X like you use on the notes after. Fixed

01:10:727 (4) - this is important! you need to drag this slider a bit down, so it doesn't overlap with the HP-Bar!!! Fixed

01:14:893 (1) - Remove this NC Fixed

01:13:727 (3) - ^ Fixed

Otherwise, this diff just has alot of blanketfails, if you can, try to fix all of them i fixed as many as i could for now

dorothy3242 wrote:

Hi there here for your M4M Queue! ovo/


[Easy]
00:09:060 (3) - Get rid of this note and- i think its better the way it is
00:09:394 (1) - Move this spinner up to start at 00:09:060 on the timeline and make it longer so it still ends at the same point.i think its better the way it is
00:24:393 (3) - Move this to 00:24:727 as it sounds better. im following the vocals with that
00:38:893 (2) - Move this to 00:39:060. uh, i dont think so
00:48:727 (2) - Move this to 00:48:893 and make it longer so that it ends where 00:50:060 (4) currently is. ??
00:56:060 (4) - New Combo Ok fixed
00:57:393 (1) - Remove New Combo Ok fixed
00:58:393 (3) - Move this to 00:58:393 and make it so it ends at 00:58:727 Ok fixed
01:02:060 (5) - Remove New Combo Ok fixed
01:03:393 (1) - New Combo Ok fixed
01:06:727 (4) - New Combo Ok fixed
01:07:727 (1) - Remove New Combo Ok fixed

[Normal]
00:32:393 - Add a hitcircle here, after the 00:31:893 (2) slider? it would go more with the music if i didnt
00:43:393 (1) - A little change to make it blanket 00:44:393 (2) a little bit better. Like this: Ok fixed

SPOILER

01:05:560 (4) - Should probably be stacked under the ending of 01:05:060 (3) 1. i dont want to move (5) because it blankets (1) 2. I cant find a way to make the flow as smoooth as i have it now if i did that 3. I did change the position a little bit though
01:09:393 (5) - It would be really neat if this note blankets the beginning of the next slider like this: ok?

SPOILER

01:18:060 (1) - Instead of a long slider make it a slider half as long that repeats. in a normal?

[Hard]
00:15:560 (1,2) - You should get rid of the strange jump between these two notes. Ok fixed
00:44:060 (3) - Should be moved to 00:44:227 Ok fixed
00:50:393 (5,6) - Here is another strange jump. You could maybe make these two notes blanket each other? ?
00:51:893 (2) - Put a clap hitsound at the beginning Ok fixed
00:52:393 (3) - Put a clap hitsound at the beginning of this one, too. This is so that since they are all following the same sound repeated, and they are the same slider shape repeated, the hitsound is also repeated. Ok fixed
00:58:727 (1) - This note doesn't seem to be following anything? You should probably get rid of it and change Ok fixed
00:58:893 (2) - To a New Combo. Ok fixed
01:23:393 (4) - Maybe make this a reverse slider like 01:22:727 (3) and 01:24:060 (6) with notes on the red ticks in between them? Ok fixed
01:24:727 (1,2,3) - It would flow better if you Ctrl+G this combo. Ok fixed

[Insane]
00:28:727 (1) - Maybe remove this-
00:29:060 (2) - Then New Combo and move this forward to 00:28:893, remove the clap hitsound, then add a hitcircle between it and 00:29:393 (3)?
I fixed it in my own way
Other than that I think it looks good!

Modem wrote:

Hi~! For M4M (> w <)
General
Umm.... Just some suggestion
01:04:060 Disable kiai time
01:04:727 Enable kiai time I dont think its necessary
Another is fine

Everything i fixed unless i say otherwise

Easy
CS+1
AR-1
00:08:060 (1) Add finish hitsound
00:15:727 (2) Recorrect blanket for this slider. Make this slider more curved to form a perfect blanket
00:19:393 (1) Add whistle hitsound to follow the music
00:19:893 (1) Here too, add whistle
00:20:393 (1) And here too, add whistle hitsound
00:20:727 (2) Add whistle hitsound at this note too
00:31:393 (1) Add whistle at Normal Sampleset (Timing Setup Panel) I dont know how to do that
00:31:893 (2) Add whistle at Normal Sampleset (Timing Setup Panel) ^
00:32:227 (2) Add whistle at Normal Sampleset (Timing Setup Panel) ^
00:32:727 (1) Add finish + whistle here
Because it feels a bit silent without any hitsound around these part, so here are my suggestion
00:33:727 (1) Add clap hitsound
00:34:393 (2) ^
00:34:727 (3,2) Stack (3) slider's head with (2) slider's head (the slider at 00:36:560) properly
00:35:060 (3) Add clap hitsound
00:37:393 How about add a slider from here to 00:37:727 then add clap hitsound at 00:37:727 ??
00:42:727 (4) Add whistle hitsound for this slider
00:43:393 (1) There is a strong beat at this part, so add finish + whistle hitsound here
00:52:727 (1) Add finish hitsound
00:49:727 Add a note + clap to complete the flow
00:53:393 (1) Add whistle hitsound
00:53:727 (1) ^
00:54:060 (2) Add finish hitsound
01:15:060 (3,1) Stack (3) -> slider's tail with (1) -> slider's head

Normal
AR-1
OD+1
00:08:060 (2) Add finish hitsound
00:19:393 (3) Add whistle hitsound, I think it fits the music more
00:19:893 (1) Here too ^
00:20:393 (2) Here as well ^
00:20:727 (3) Same ^
00:20:893 (3) And here too ^
00:25:060 (4) Umm... you really need clap hitsound for this note
00:31:393 (6) Add whistle at Normal Sampleset (Timing Setup Panel) I dont know how to do that
00:31:893 (2) Add whistle at Normal Sampleset (Timing Setup Panel) ^
00:32:227 (2) Add whistle at Normal Sampleset (Timing Setup Panel) ^
00:38:060 (1) Add whistle + finish hitsound for this slider
00:40:727 (1) ^
00:43:393 (1) You really need to add finish + whistle hitsound here
00:48:727 (1) Add finish + whistle again for this slider since there are strong beat from the music
00:54:060 (1) Add finish hitsound here
00:58:393 (4) Make this slider form symmetrical shape with this slider -> (2) (the slider at 00:57:060). If you follow my suggestion then, copy & paste the slider at 00:57:060 then flip it horizontally then reverse selection. Then put that slider at x:260 y:240
00:59:393 (1) Add finish hitsound for this note
01:10:060 (1) Same here, add finish hitsound for this slider.
01:24:727 (1) Add whistkle hitsound at this slider's tail
01:25:227 (2) ^

Hard
HP Drain Rate must be a little higher since this is hard diff. So, it should be : HD+2
00:08:060 (3) Add finish hitsound for this slider
00:19:393 (1) Add whistle hitsound here
00:19:893 (2) Here too ^
00:20:393 (3) Here as well ^
00:20:727 (4) Same ^
00:20:893 (4) And here too ^
00:26:893 Add a note because I think it would create a good rhytm
00:29:727 (4) Umm... you really need to add clap hitsound at this slider
00:31:393 (1) Add whistle at Normal Sampleset (Timing Setup Panel) dont know...
00:31:893 (2) Add whistle at Normal Sampleset (Timing Setup Panel) ^
00:32:227 (3) Add whistle at Normal Sampleset (Timing Setup Panel) ^
00:38:060 (1) Add finish + whistle hitsound for this slider's head
00:39:227 (4) Add finish + whistle hitsound for this note
00:40:727 (1) Add finish + whistle hitsound for this note
00:41:727 (4) Add whistle at Normal Sampleset (Timing Setup Panel) ^
00:41:893 (4) Add whistle at Normal Sampleset (Timing Setup Panel) ^
00:43:393 (2) Add whistle + finish hitsound for this slider's head
00:51:393 (1) Add whistle at Normal Sampleset (Timing Setup Panel) ^
00:51:893 (2) Add whistle at Normal Sampleset (Timing Setup Panel) ^
00:52:393 (3) Add whistle at Normal Sampleset (Timing Setup Panel) ^
00:52:727 (3) Add whistle at Normal Sampleset (Timing Setup Panel) ^
00:52:893 (4) Add whistle at Normal Sampleset (Timing Setup Panel) ^
00:54:060 (1) Add finish hitsound
01:05:060 (1) Add finish hitsound at this slider's tail
01:20:893 (3,4) Recorrect this blanket
01:23:227 I could clearly hear violin sound from the music, so add a note to complete the flow
01:24:727 (1) Add whistle hitsound
01:24:893 (2) Umm... Remove this note??
01:25:227 (3) Add whistle hitsound

Insane
00:08:060 (4) Add finish hitsound
00:19:393 (1) Add whistle hitsound
00:19:893 (1) Add whistle hitsound
00:20:393 (1) Add whitle hitsound
00:20:727 (2) Add whistle hitsound
00:20:893 (3) Add whistle hitsound
00:25:727 (3) Add clap hitsound for this note
00:31:393 (4) Add whistle hitsound at Normal Sampleset (Timing Setup Panel) ^
00:31:893 (2) Add whistle hitsound at Normal Sampleset (Timing Setup Panel) ^
00:32:227 (2) Add whistle hitsound at Normal Sampleset (Timing Setup Panel) ^
00:36:393 (4) Stack with the note at 00:35:893 -> (2)
00:43:393 (1) Add finish + whistle hitsound here'
00:48:727 (5) Add finish + whistle hitsound
01:24:727 (1) Add whistle hitsound at Normal Sampleset (Timing Setup Panel) ^
01:25:227 (4) Add whistle hitsound at Normal Sampleset (Timing Setup Panel) ^

That's all!!! Sorry for my bad english
Good luck on getting this map ranked!!!

Thanks SO MUCh for the mod!

saisee2010 wrote:

Hi For M4M >> Sorry for my bad English.

Unless i make a comment, i fixed it

Easy

SPOILER

00:10:727 (1) drag spinner to 00:11:060 (1)
00:32:641 (1) add finish hitsound and clap for 00:33:727
00:34:393 (2) add clap
00:35:060 (3) -^-
00:43:393 (1) add finish
00:44:727 (2) add clap
00:49:393 (3) -^-
00:54:060 (2) add finish
00:57:060 (4) add clap
00:58:393 (3) -^-
00:59:727 (1) -^-
01:02:727 (1) ^
01:05:060 (2) ^
01:06:393 (3) ^
01:25:227 (1) add finish

Normal

SPOILER

00:07:727 add a note here (Use DS x1.2)
00:10:727 (1) drag spinner to 00:11:060 (1)
00:30:060 (6) NC here
00:31:727 (1) Remove NC
00:51:060 (6) add a note here (Use DS x1.2)
01:21:060 (1) Remove NC
01:28:643 (1) add finish

Hard

SPOILER

00:13:393 (3),(4) Remove 1 reverse I think its better the way it is
00:21:727 (2) add 1 reverse
00:54:560 add a note here (1.1x DS) ^
01:13:893 copy a slider from 01:13:227 and drag under 01:13:727 (1) (Use1.1xDS)

Insane

SPOILER

00:07:481 (1,2,3) stack them
00:15:060 (7) move it to X-88 Y-268
00:15:393 (1) Remove NC and NC at 00:15:560
00:24:234 (1) -35 Rotate and fit 00:24:060 (2,3,4,5) By 1.2xDS ?
00:31:560 (1) remove NC add drag a slider to a white tick im confused about the second part
01:00:893 (7) add reverse
01:18:060 (1) remove NC
01:18:227 (2) add NC here

This is my second mod in my life ->>>
Good Luck for ranked map
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Modem wrote:

To do that, go to timing setup panel, then add timing section (Green coloured (+) symbol). Change the audio to normal sampleset

otamangaka wrote:

Hi , m4m in you queue

[Easy]
00:43:393 (1,2) - I think i fixed it
Sliders were not very neat here. Consider this thread on making sliders.

[Normal]
ok

[Hard]
00:51:393 (1,2,3) - I think i fixed it
Try this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2296583

[Insane]
00:37:227 (3,4,5) - I think i fixed it again
More beautiful : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2296596

Thanks for m4m
Good Luck i'll FC this map

FlobuFlobs wrote:

For M4M

[General]

1. :D

[Insane]

1. How about -1 HP so you have a nice spread of +1hp every difficulty
2. 00:08:060 (4) - this would fit more as a jump like i show in screen as oval flow since 00:07:560 (3) - you started here already with a curved slider
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:08:560 - how about repeating the slider like the vocals do? also 00:09:060 (6) - snap it then
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:12:560 (5) - you mapped those weird sounds in the music as clickable objects before, so change the slider to circles
   00:12:560 (5,6,7) - make a jump out of them because its a important part in the music that doesnt get emphasize
5. 00:12:893 (2) - this one should be a repeat slider like you did before 00:11:560 (2) -
6. 00:16:060 (1,2,3,4) - this makes no sense, theres nothing you can emphasize and you are ignoring important 1/4, timeline should be like this
   
   SPOILER

   
   You can make it easier with repeat slider instead of triple circles.
   and also descrease the spacing, 00:15:560 (1,2,3) - these are important to emphasize 00:16:060 (1,2,3,4) - these not
7. 00:23:060 (4) - you are clearly following the vocals on the map so why no slider here? you can here this "NEEEEEEEEE" from 00:23:060 - 00:23:393 - .
   Add slider instead of circle
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:24:060 (2,3,4,5) - Simple slider on the white ticks would follow the vocals way better, maybe like this?
   
   SPOILER

   
   i would prefer to make them straight
9. 00:27:227 - please just add a note somewhere XDD KEEP MOVING
10. 00:27:893 - i dont know how to explain XD but how about this? it follow the vocals better
    
    SPOILER

    
    SPOILER

    
11. 00:29:393 - 00:29:727 - like above, simple slider would fit better
12. 00:38:060 (1) - Space it way more since its a loud noice in the music
13. 00:39:226 (2) - Add spacing+ slider on this one, it needs to be emphasized way more, atm it gets ignored
    also how about this timeline ? 00:38:893 - 00:40:560 -
    
    SPOILER

    
14. 00:43:393 (1) - even if you are slowing down you need to emphasize loud notes, so how about this?
    
    SPOILER

    
15. 00:44:727 (1) - a repeat would fit the lyrics better, you can hear how it continues here 00:45:060 -
16. 00:45:560 - add note xDD
17. 01:24:643 - add a note here, you can hear something like a "whoooosch" sound here it also emphasizes 01:24:727 -

Strange how much better the kiai is xDD

[Hard]

1. 00:08:060 (3) - its a loud note that you should emphasize
   A simple ctrl+g would emphasize this better since a triangle movement is a bit more action then just a curve xD
2. 00:11:394 (1,2,3) - Blank here doesnt really fit, how about this?
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:18:560 - please add note here >_>
4. 00:18:727 - you can hear how the music changes sightly 00:19:060 - here
   so how about this to get a feeling when you need to press 00:19:393 -
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:23:727 - change circle to slider to follow the vocals better?
6. 00:27:727 - just for the look, how about this?
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:30:060 - 00:31:060 - shoud be like this if you want to follow the vocals:
   
   SPOILER

   
8. All those 1/1 spacings while the kiai, fill them >_> it plays horrible always to stop
   fill them with slider for example:00:54:060 - 00:56:060 -
   
   SPOILER

   
   well i skip until 01:10:060 - cuz you Need to change that
9. 01:13:893 (2) - whats up with the spacing here lol
10. 01:25:060 - r u missing a note here ? xD

For the normal: Keep always the same distance otherwise its unrankable

1. fine IMO

1. AR2 is too low. I suggest AR3.
2. 00:11:394 - 00:18:060 - You should use some Hitsounds.
3. 00:11:394 (1) - This green line is unnecessary.
4. 00:22:060 (1) - ^
5. 00:09:393 (1) - There is not enough time after spin. So You should End at 00:10:727.
   (And I suggest start around 00:09:227.)
6. 00:16:727 (1) - You MUST use Distance snap in Easy diff.
7. 00:26:060 (1) - ^
8. 00:32:727 (1) - Why you use slider whistle & finish? It's unnecessary.
9. 00:50:060 (4,5,6) - make symmetrically like this?
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:03:393 (1,3) - These overlaps don't look good. Please consider to fix
11. 01:16:060 (4) - You MUST use Distance snap in Easy diff.
12. 01:18:060 (1) - ^
13. 01:19:393 (3) - Ctrl+g makes better flow. Ofc, then You should fix 01:20:560 (1,2) .

1. 00:11:394 (1) - This green line is unnecessary.
2. 00:22:060 (1) - ^
3. 00:09:227 (1) - same as Easy
4. 00:18:060 (3) - You should use Distance snap.
   
   SPOILER

   

   384,219,17393,2,0,P|415:259|472:281,1,99.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   492,164,18060,2,0,B|472:116|425:101|405:98|405:98|427:66|444:8,2,200,0|0|
   
   0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

   SPOILER

   00:22:393 (2) - Please keep same DS
   00:24:060 (2) - ^
   00:25:393 (5) - ^
   00:28:727 (3) - ^
   00:30:060 (1) - ^
   00:56:060 (5) - ^
   01:00:560 (4) - ^
   01:01:727 (2) - ^
   01:05:893 (5) - ^
   01:07:393 (1) - ^
   01:10:060 (1) - ^

1. 00:07:393 (1,2) - exchange the rhythm? It makes better rhythm and flow.
2. 00:19:394 (1,2,3,4) - Please consider use Distance snap. They are hard diff.
   Here is my way.
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:15:060 (5) - missing clap
4. 00:16:227 (3) - why clap? please remove
5. 00:16:393 (4) - If you did ^, pls add clap

1. 00:07:477 (2) - overmap. Remove this pls.
2. 00:16:310 (3,4) - DS error.
3. 00:16:560 (5,6) - ^ You seem to misunderstand why these stuff were allowed in Some maps.
4. 00:21:477 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - You should reduce their DS. Excuse me I can't speak
   
   English well but their really odd while playing.

Urushi38 wrote:

For M4M

[General]

1. fine IMO

[Easy]

1. AR2 is too low. I suggest AR3.
2. 00:11:394 - 00:18:060 - You should use some Hitsounds.
3. 00:11:394 (1) - This green line is unnecessary.
4. 00:22:060 (1) - ^
5. 00:09:393 (1) - There is not enough time after spin. So You should End at 00:10:727.
   (And I suggest start around 00:09:227.)
6. 00:16:727 (1) - You MUST use Distance snap in Easy diff.
7. 00:26:060 (1) - ^
8. 00:32:727 (1) - Why you use slider whistle & finish? It's unnecessary.
9. 00:50:060 (4,5,6) - make symmetrically like this?
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:03:393 (1,3) - These overlaps don't look good. Please consider to fix
11. 01:16:060 (4) - You MUST use Distance snap in Easy diff.
12. 01:18:060 (1) - ^
13. 01:19:393 (3) - Ctrl+g makes better flow. Ofc, then You should fix 01:20:560 (1,2) .

[Normal]

1. 00:11:394 (1) - This green line is unnecessary.
2. 00:22:060 (1) - ^
3. 00:09:227 (1) - same as Easy
4. 00:18:060 (3) - You should use Distance snap.
   
   SPOILER

   

   384,219,17393,2,0,P|415:259|472:281,1,99.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   492,164,18060,2,0,B|472:116|425:101|405:98|405:98|427:66|444:8,2,200,0|0|
   
   0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

   SPOILER

   00:22:393 (2) - Please keep same DS
   00:24:060 (2) - ^
   00:25:393 (5) - ^
   00:28:727 (3) - ^
   00:30:060 (1) - ^
   00:56:060 (5) - ^
   01:00:560 (4) - ^
   01:01:727 (2) - ^
   01:05:893 (5) - ^
   01:07:393 (1) - ^
   01:10:060 (1) - ^

[Hard]

1. 00:07:393 (1,2) - exchange the rhythm? It makes better rhythm and flow.
2. 00:19:394 (1,2,3,4) - Please consider use Distance snap. They are hard diff.
   Here is my way.
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:15:060 (5) - missing clap
4. 00:16:227 (3) - why clap? please remove
5. 00:16:393 (4) - If you did ^, pls add clap

[Insane]

1. 00:07:477 (2) - overmap. Remove this pls.
2. 00:16:310 (3,4) - DS error. Oh this was an accident
3. 00:16:560 (5,6) - ^ You seem to misunderstand why these stuff were allowed in Some maps. ^ someone told me to add it and i meant to remove it
4. 00:21:477 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - You should reduce their DS. Excuse me I can't speak
   
   English well but their really odd while playing.

Something Rude

Easy and Normal needs a lot of works.
Hard is not bad, but still not good.
Insane is, tbh This diff needs remap more than MOD. I know what I said.

Good luck

Xinchii wrote:

Hello ~

From your M4M queue

[Easy]

1. How about circle size -1 ? better fit with "Easy" diff

[Normal]

1. 00:37:393(3) - x:208 | y:216 to make better blankt
2. 00:56:060(5) - overlapping with 00:55:060(3) -
   
   SPOILER

   

[Hard]

1. 00:13:393(3) - make the arrow overlapping with 00:12:060(3) - 's slider start , it will be more tidy
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:52:893(4) - attention on spacing , it's too close to slider's end , use 1.0x plz
3. 01:08:393(3) - it's out of screen , make this more inside plz

1. Great rhythm and veiw

[Insane]

1. 00:12:727(2) - is this a Jump? if it is , then I think 1.2x spacing is similar with 1.0x , I will suggest you to set this more far , like overlapping with 00:11:560(2) - 's slider arrow (and (3) can be set at 00:11:560(2) - 's slider start , it will be more tidy and convenient to fix notes after this)
   
   SPOILER

   
   it no , just set 1.0x spacing with front note
2. 00:24:060(2) - Remove the clap on slider start or add clap on 00:29:393(2) - 's slider start , it will be more symmetry.
3. 00:45:560(2) - I will like to blankt this better :
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:46:560(2) - overlapping with 00:45:560(2) - will be better tidy
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:47:893(3,4) - I fell flow bad here , maybe set (4) at right of (3) will be better , or some thing like:
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:00:560(6) - Set at x:91 | y:224 same with 00:59:060(8) - will be tidy
7. 01:10:560(3,4,5) - look crowd here , I will like to make space in (1)'s slider end and (3)
   
   SPOILER

   

1. Good diff I think , fun for playing
   you can working more little hard on making view more tidy , it will be great

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:15:727(26,27) - Change
   and same 00:16:227(28,29) - here
   it will better fit the music's sound here I think lol
2. 00:26:393(78) - d? it don't have the piano sound like (76) and (80) worth to use k follow
3. 00:46:393(171,172) - Change , patten will be better here.
4. 00:55:060(210,211) - Change to fit patten?
5. 00:56:393(216,217) - ^
6. 00:57:727(225,226) - ^
7. 01:02:560(251,252) - ^
8. 01:15:227(311,312) - ^

I am not good at modding taiko , but I try to point some place that I fell odd when I playing in Muzu diff , you can reference some
although I want to point some in Oni too , but umm yes I am weak so I better write not thing here

騷然　鳴りやまぬMusic　眠っていた心響く~
Yay , good song

and good luck for rank ~

shoot one star to you ~

Estellia- wrote:

Helleuuuu from your M4M queue~ Sorry but I can only mod standard

• 
  [Insane]

1. 00:11:393 (1,2,3) - Try blanket?
2. 00:13:393 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - The distance here is very inconsistent
3. 00:17:227 (3) - Try ctrlg so 2 leads into 3 better
4. 00:22:560 (3,4) - Blanket
5. 00:23:393 (5,1) - ^
6. 00:24:393 (3,1,2) - ^
7. 00:30:727 (4,5) - Fix blanket
8. 00:32:560 (8,1) - ^
9. 00:44:727 (1,2) - ^
10. 00:54:727 (4,5) - Try something more circular
11. 01:12:727 (1,2) - ^
12. 01:13:227 (2,3,4) - ^
13. 01:25:393 (1) - Think the end isn't snapped or something
    
    This Insane is super crude, the sliders are frequently curved too much causing very uneven blanketting. Sliders like 00:23:060 (4,5) - these are curved too much, the effect that they make can be perceived as off-putting. The flow is generally fine, but places like 01:07:560 (4,5,6) - where 4-5-6 don't lead right into each other may make flow slightly broken. So more work needs to be done on refining this map.
    
    [Hard]
14. 00:13:394 (3,4) - Try to make this more linear, the flow right now seems rather jagged
15. 00:23:727 (2,3) - More circular
16. 00:54:727 (3,4) - ^
17. 01:12:727 (3,4) - Fix blanket
18. 01:23:227 (4,6) - Try stack
    
    You're definitely more accustomed to mapping Hards. One of the Hards that I had the easiest time modding so far. Nice job!
    
    [Normal]
19. 00:07:727 (2,3) - Blanket fix
20. 00:15:394 (4,1) - ^
21. 00:21:393 (1) - Suggest splitting this into slider, hitcircle, then NC on hitcircle
22. 00:22:727 (3) - Ugly stacking, either perfect stack or shit further away
23. 00:22:727 (3) - stack
24. 01:05:893 (5,6) - Try something more circular
25. 01:10:060 (1) - I believe this is about to go offscreen, try shifting it in
    
    Not many issues, but plenty of blanket fixes required. I'm not gonna mention them here since I don't wanna be too nazi about it. Everything else is fine.
    
    [Easy]
26. 00:09:227 (1,1) - Not enough recovery, spinner should end here: 00:10:060 -. Else, use a slider in replace
    
    No issues practically, just some blanket problems. One thing to consider is to decrease the DS since the notes look overly far apart.

ENI just requires some slight edits and the Hard is perfect. That's it from me.

1. d is don note
2. k is kat note
3. D is big don note
4. K is big kat note

• 
  
  Muzukashii -375notes
  Julie's Oni -396notes (+21notes )
  Oni -499notes
  
  I think Julie's Oni more add note? or Muzu & Oni more delete notes? Muzu≒Julie's Oni (notes)
  or again,Oni→change Inner Oni,Muzu more delete notes?

• 
  
  00:16:149 - add k.
  
  00:19:212 - delete.because,add need break time.
  
  00:21:907 - delete.because,no need.
  
  00:26:382 - ^
  
  00:57:245 - ^
  
  01:15:727 (311,312,313,314,315,316,317,318,319,320,321,322,323,324,325) - this part diff=Muzu>Julie's Oni.so think again?
  
  01:22:076 - http://puu.sh/dkOx2.jpg　change→ http://puu.sh/dkOro.jpg

Charlotte wrote:

Hi! from my modding queues.

[ about]

1. d is don note
2. k is kat note
3. D is big don note
4. K is big kat note

[ General]

• 
  
  Muzukashii -375notes
  Julie's Oni -396notes (+21notes )
  Oni -499notes
  
  I think Julie's Oni more add note? or Muzu & Oni more delete notes? Muzu≒Julie's Oni (notes)
  or again,Oni→change Inner Oni,Muzu more delete notes?

[ Muzukashii]

• 
  
  00:16:149 - add k. ok
  
  00:19:212 - delete.because,add need break time. ok
  
  00:21:907 - delete.because,no need. ok
  
  00:26:382 - ^ ok
  
  00:57:245 - ^ ok
  
  01:15:727 (311,312,313,314,315,316,317,318,319,320,321,322,323,324,325) - this part diff=Muzu>Julie's Oni.so think again?fixed
  
  01:22:076 - http://puu.sh/dkOx2.jpg　change→ http://puu.sh/dkOro.jpg ok

someday,I will mod Julie's Oni& Oni.call me when you ready.Good luck

1. 00:38:060 (191) - D
2. 00:38:310 - add d here
3. 00:37:060 - k
4. 00:37:310 - d
5. 00:39:227 (199) - K because cymbal sound
6. 00:41:393 (211) - k vocal here
7. 00:43:560 (224) - delete isn't unnecessarily

1. 00:44:727 (231,232) - ctrl + g because 00:44:727 (231) - the vocal beat here
2. 00:44:893 (232) - kkd to 00:45:059 (234) - and for consistent 00:45:893 (239) - kkd to 00:46:060 (241) -

Genocide wrote:

ok

[General For Taikos]
F6->and use Normal is better imo
Oni = hp=od=5
Julie's Oni =hp=od=5
Muzukashii = hp=od=4 for better spread

[Oni]
00:10:060 (10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - kkd k ddd k kkd d kkd d
00:11:060 (18,19,20,21,22) - change to kkddk
00:11:560 (23) - delete, isn't unnecessarily imo
00:11:560 (23) - delete same reason with about ^
00:16:310 - don here for following the rhythm
00:19:893 (80) - unsnapped fix it
00:21:643 - add don here for continue the stream and rhythm
00:22:227 (92) - delete? isn't unnecessarily imo
00:22:560 (93) - k here
00:23:477 (100) - delete the snare is bad here if you accpe this change this 00:23:893 (101,106) - k
00:30:060 (139) - K the sound is highly strong if you accept this change this 00:31:393 (145) - K
00:30:643 - add don here, since the sound is strong
00:34:143 (162) - delete and 00:34:060 (161) - k, the stream 1/4 d is bad here
00:34:560 (165,166,167,168,169,170,171,172,173,174,175,176,177) - maybe like this? http://puu.sh/dnvzJ/8cd8cbd338.png (cursor at here 00:35:560 -)

00:36:893 (183,184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192,193,194) - you can improve this patterns , maybe like this

1. 00:38:060 (191) - D
2. 00:38:310 - add d here
3. 00:37:060 - k
4. 00:37:310 - d
5. 00:39:227 (199) - K because cymbal sound
6. 00:41:393 (211) - k vocal here
7. 00:43:560 (224) - delete isn't unnecessarily

00:43:727 (224,225,226,227,228,229,230,231,232,233,234,235,236,237,238) - D:

1. 00:44:727 (231,232) - ctrl + g because 00:44:727 (231) - the vocal beat here
2. 00:44:893 (232) - kkd to 00:45:059 (234) - and for consistent 00:45:893 (239) - kkd to 00:46:060 (241) -

00:46:893 (243,244) - ctrl + g since 00:47:060 (244) - the highest sound here

00:47:393 (245,246,247,248,249,250,251,252,253,254,255,256,257,258,259,260,261,262,263,264,265,266,267,268,269) - 1/2 notes make player bored, add don here 00:48:977 - , 00:50:143 - , 00:47:977 - , 00:48:310 - ,
00:51:393 (275) - D , 00:51:727 (1) - move this spinner to 00:51:560 (1) -

00:53:393 (1,2) - k , since high sound
00:54:227 (4) - delete? isnt important beat imo
00:55:643 (16,18) - ctrl + g 00:56:060 (19) - d for clearly beat
00:56:310 - k for better snare 1/2 beat is bored imo
00:57:393 (29,30,31,32,33) - ddddd k ddk
01:01:643 - d here for better snare
01:08:060 (117) - i don't recommend you to use this slider just put 01:08:060 (117) - and 01:08:393 (118) - k
01:08:393 (118,119,120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127,128,129,130,131,132) - try use like this http://puu.sh/dnxeN/86de739729.png( cursor 01:09:227 - ) also its overmapped too
01:11:560 (146,147,148,149,150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157,158,159,160) - try to use like this ddk ddk d k ddk
01:14:893 (172) - use k since your pitch is here01:15:393 (175) -
from 01:19:727 (191) - to 01:24:727 (229) - try to re-arrange to be clearly and flow