1. Another - 7Key (4.27 stars, 1154 notes)
2. Black Another - 7Key (5.67 stars, 1768 notes)
3. Hyper - 7Key (2.88 stars, 862 notes)
4. Normal - 7Key (1.53 stars, 434 notes)

neonat (Timing)
Ringating (BG)
iJinjin
Niji
[Shana Lesus]
LNP-
Lunatic Raccoon
Kruzon
-Kamikaze-
playin14
_S u w a k o_
MEGAtive
schwarzvgrune
_Xenophilius_
Harbyter
Meiko Senpai
[ M o m o ]
KaitoKid1998
Rumia-
- R e b a -
YunoFanatic
_FrEsH_ChICkEn_
Raediaufar
17VA
Ichigaki
ExUsagi
Blocko

neonat wrote:

offset is wrong, so everything else screwed up, so I will just give you some basic pointers to start you up~

Offset should be 5960 I soon realized that 6030 is wrong but just you reminded me that 6000 is still incorrect. Going into 25% speed make this much clearer. Fixed
156BPM is fine, correct.

For more precision in making shapes and positions, you can use a higher grid level, which can be found under the view tab, grid level. done

Make sure that spacing in the simpler difficulties like Normal and Easy follow strictly to one consistent distance snap throughout the map, this is to ensure that spacing causes no confusion for players, especially beginners when they play. Apparently AiMod doesn't catch a lot of distance snap issues, have to tweak every map note by note, especially after fixing the offset... Done)

Well then, good luck and I hope my offset helps you!
Remember to go to the Menu Bar and go to Timing and Resnap all Notes to my offset I gave you (if you agree with my offset) done

pwhk wrote:

BG is too small...
However I am not sure about this, because currently included size is the original size (ripped directly from the BMS folder)

png master race

Ringating wrote:

from my queue:

pwhk wrote:

BG is too small...
However I am not sure about this, because currently included size is the original size (ripped directly from the BMS folder)

it was 640x480, which is much too small for osu (image height on bg images for osu should be 768 pixels). So, I extracted the character in the image and placed her over a larger image of space, then I remade the moon/ball of light/thing so it would be large enough to fill the new image. Here is the final product
no kudosu

iJinjin wrote:

Hello, from Chobo's modding queue ~

You requested the 7K Black Another diff, so I took a look at it ^^
In fact I requested for all Mania diffs, but in two different requests (because Black Another is a late addition) but anyway~

columns: 1|2|3|4|5|6|7

[7K Black Another]

SPOILER

00:08:940 (8940|0,9036|4,9036|0,9036|2) - Change this to http://puu.sh/cxZYs/39a5a00f65.png , this fits the overall song much better Used 2-2-3 instead
00:27:402 - Add to 5 done
00:27:498 (27498|4) - Move to 6 done
00:31:344 - Add a note Adding a note here would be inconsistent to others, hm... I think I found an issue that there is an extra note at 00:31:056...
00:36:729 to 00:37:113 - This pattern is very random, and the chords do not agree with each other (6-6-4-5 ?) I think http://puu.sh/cy0rz/e1619c4237.png will work much better, or at least make the chords equal (5-5-5-5) It meant to be 6-6-6-6 but some notes disappeared for no reason It was obviously different pitch so I would prefer different chords.
The following suggestions below are given because this difficulty is Black Another - the hard-hitting beats should be represented with corresponding chords so that it feels better musically.
00:55:190 - this chord can be bigger, I recommend adding 2 notes done
00:55:960 - Add 3 notes ^
00:56:729 - Add a note ^
00:57:498 - Add 3 notes ^
00:58:267 (58267|0,58267|2,58267|4) - Make this the same pattern as before, as the sound/pitch is the same done
00:59:036 - Add 2 notes ^
00:59:806 - Add 2 notes ^
01:00:575 - Add 3 notes ^
01:00:960 (60960|0,61088|0,61152|1,61216|0,61216|2,61344|1,61344|0) - Consider changing this pattern to http://puu.sh/cy0UP/2e03ced41f.png for better playability done
01:02:113 - Add 3 notes done
01:03:267 - Add a note ^
01:03:652 - Add 3 notes ^
01:04:036 (64036|2,64036|6,64133|5,64133|3,64229|4,64229|2,64325|1,64325|5,64421|3,64421|6,64421|0) - Change to http://puu.sh/cy10g/2d60300241.png done
01:04:710 - Add 2 notes done
01:04:998 - Add a note ^
01:05:190 - Add 2 notes ^
01:05:960 - Add a note ^
01:06:152 - Add a note ^
01:22:594 (82594|0,82594|2,82690|1,82690|0,82786|0,82786|3,82883|1,82883|2,82883|0) - consider changing this pattern to something more enjoyable this one is difficult, hm... Change to double 1/16 jack I think
01:28:748 (88748|6,88748|4,88844|3,88844|6,88940|5,88940|6,89036|4,89036|6,89036|2) - ^ ^
01:41:344 to 01:42:690 - can be 5 note chords instead of 4 ^^ done
01:50:575 to 01:50:960 - Again, change this like the pattern suggested for the 36 sec one Same as above, used same pattern as above

Good luck~ Thanks~

Nijigen-kun wrote:

Hello, Mod as Requested from my Queue

Coloumn : l 0 l 1 l 2 l 3 l 4 l 5 l 6 l

Black --> My Suggestion/opinion
Red --> Unrankable issue
Blue --> Comment
Green --> Positive Support

Mod inside

[General]
use capital at ur Keyspread name.. 7k ----
or Delete ur "7K" word if u didn't make other key spread.. Changed capitals. Cannot remove 7K because it would clash with ST diffs...
No Kiai mode .-. Fixed

[7K Normal]

HP Drain --> 7
OD --> 7 done

00:18:267 (18267|6) - hasn't long sound, change to normal note..

00:18:652 - add note

00:18:652 - 00:30:960 - i dont know what sound what u follow to chart.. this'll make unrankable issue This is for piano/main instrument, but mapping all of them would definitely be too hard for Normal. Removed LN to hopefully make things clearer. Lets see how it goes...

00:18:652 - 00:41:729 - Better u follow drum.. follow drum hit with Normal note. Just for 00:24:421 - 00:28:652 I think (which would arguably be simplified main actually). Following the drum all the way for like 23 seconds would be boring for me

00:52:690 (52690|4) - change to normal note.. done

00:55:960 (55960|4) - make this double note.. and place at different coloumn for make pattern not borring done

00:57:498 (57498|4) - ^ ^

00:59:036 (59036|4) - ^

01:00:575 (60575|4) - ^

01:02:113 (62113|4) - ^

01:03:652 (63652|4) - ^

01:05:190 (65190|4) - ^ All done

[7K Hyper]

HP --> 7
OD --> 8 Done

00:19:806 - 00:30:960 - Please use BSD 1/4 - 1/6 .. and please make good pattern..I do use 1/4 - 1/6 Beat Snap Divisor for all this

00:52:690 (52690|4,52786|4,52883|4) - jackhammer =/ BSD 1/4 make pattern like this .-. rethink pls ^

00:55:960 (55960|6) - add note, make double / triple done

00:57:498 (57498|6) - ^

01:00:575 (60575|6) - ^

01:02:113 (62113|6) - ^

01:03:652 (63652|6) - ^ All done

01:19:806 - 01:29:036 - make variation at ur pattern, this is so bored, This fits the music (all the sounds are virtually same pitch) which I wish to emphasize. Probably change if there are more modders complain...

[Shana Lesus] wrote:

Hello pwhk
mod ready

[7K Normal]
So I decided to change 00:21:729 - 00:29:036 to drum beats as more than one modder suggests...
00:21:729 - add note to 5 done
00:21:825 (21825|4) - delete done
00:22:498 - add note done
00:23:267 - ^ done
00:23:460 (23460|4) - delete done
00:23:652 - add note done
00:28:844 (28844|0) - delete done
00:29:036 - add note done
01:07:979 (67979|2) - move to 5 done
01:08:844 (68844|2) - move to 4 done
01:09:517 (69517|2) - move to 5 done
01:09:036 (69036|2) - move to 2 done
01:09:325 (69325|1) - move to 3 done
01:09:517 (69517|2) - move to 5 repeat??
01:11:056 (71056|2) - move to 5 done
01:14:133 (74133|4) - move to 3 done
01:14:998 (74998|4) - move to 4 that's no change?
01:15:190 (75190|4) - move to 6 done
01:15:479 (75479|5) - move to 5 done
01:17:210 (77210|4) - move to 3 done

[7K Hyper]
00:44:421 (44421|1) - move to 4 done
00:46:729 (46729|3) - move to 6 Keep same as 7K Normal
00:52:690 (52690|4) - move to 3 done
00:52:786 (52786|4) - move to 4 done
01:00:960 (60960|5) - move to 5 that's no change?
01:01:088 (61088|4) - move to 4 ^

Good luck ! Thanks~

LNP- wrote:

Mod here~

My Column:
1|2|3|4|5|6|7

7K Normal

> 00:37:113 - add note 4 done
> 01:15:960 - add note 4 LN at 3, note at 7 instead
> 01:31:729 - add note 3 at 6 instead
> 01:40:960 (100960|3) - LN end at here 01:41:344 - done
> 01:41:344 - my suggestion done

> 01:44:421 - add note 5 done
> 01:50:960 - add note 4 done

sorry , i just can mod 7K Normal Nevermind~

Nice Song & Good luck. Thanks!

Lunatic Raccoon wrote:

Hi pwhk, here comes my mod *sorry for delay ;w;*
I'll go with 7K Hyper and Another

General

1. If you're going for 7K only, delete "7K" in every diff please~As I said before, it will clash with ST diffs (namely Normal)... However, I am probably going to split ST and Mania diffs into two maps, and will do once split

Hyper

1. 00:16:825 (16825|5) - This be a long note would fit perfectly, but as i see you rarely use long notes, so consider this a suggestion No. This is for SE present in previous measures, and this song don't have many places for LNs anyway
2. 00:37:306 to 00:41:152 - Still same sound, but you use double for some notes. I think you should let them be single, or carefully double only at sounds with kicks in them (but not really recommended, i think all-single is more fine) I found this part being obviously louder than previous, and I think that the official BMS also make these doubles.
3. 00:41:921 (41921|1,42498|3) - Long notes? Not for 00:16:825 , so not for here
4. 00:59:036 - Double only please. Or else 00:55:960 and 00:57:498 and 01:00:575 and many heavy snares later have to be triple too I tried remove this and found this weird, because there is a piano sound in addition to snares...
5. 01:12:113 (72113|1,72883|6) - Pretty weird to put LNs here. I recommend you should fill them with normal notes then put LNs here: 01:12:690 - 01:13:267ok

Another

1. 00:13:652 to 00:16:344 - Maybe double? I don't like emphasizing drums like this
2. 00:19:036 - Double no sound other than drum..
3. 00:21:729 - Double ^
4. 00:37:113 - Quadruple only ok
5. 00:37:306 to 00:41:152 - kind of like Hyper, i only recommend using single ones (you can make it harder by having doubles/triples at sounds with kicks) Same as Hyper, no.
6. 00:41:921 (41921|1,42498|3) - Long notes? ^
7. 00:52:786 (52786|4) - Suggestion: i think you should move the note to another collumnok
8. 00:59:036 - Same as Hyper Same as Hyper, no...
9. 00:59:806 - Double Basically, I don't like emphasizing kicks..
10. 01:03:267 - ^ ^
11. 01:04:806 - Double, maybe? ^
12. 01:05:960 - Double ok
13. 01:07:883 - 01:08:267 - 01:09:421 - 01:10:960 - 01:11:344 - 01:12:113 - 01:12:306 - 01:14:036 - 01:13:460 - 01:14:421 - 01:15:575 -...too many to list all orz. Remember to have kick sounds double Sorry but I don't like emphasizing all the kicks, especially not overriding the main instrument.
14. 01:12:113 (72113|0,72883|6) - Same as Hyper done
15. 01:16:152 - 01:16:344 - Double is fine ok
16. 01:30:575 to 01:31:729 - I really think you should have notes following zig-zag patternok
17. 01:32:113 - Double or triple is fine ok
18. 01:38:267 to 01:40:863 - No reason to go jacks like that. All single please, and again, double/triple at kicks onlyok
19. 01:50:960 - Quadruple is fine ok
20. 01:57:113 - How about unsnap the 4th coll note, then add 2 notes at 3rd and 5th coll? Y'know, to make differences between diffs? ok

Good luck~Thanks~

Kruzon wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue

-No general errors
-Key Column Formula: 1~7

7K Another
00:18:075 (18075|3,18139|4,18203|5) - how about use 1/8 beat snap on this area? The piano are indeed 1/6 and I prefer be technical here
00:18:460 (18460|0) - to 3 done
00:19:036 (19036|6) - to 6 For bass, so not to change this
00:19:036 (19036|6) - delete Contradict with above?
00:19:549 (19549|5) - to 7 and add note to 3 piano does not suggest double
00:20:190 (20190|0) - to 4 move the note at 2 instead
00:20:671 (20671|6) - to 2 (on 1/6) 12.21 is an awkward pattern...
00:21:344 (21344|6) - to 6 ok
00:21:633 (21633|3) - to 5 done
00:22:594 (22594|4) - to 4 ok
00:22:594 (22594|4) - to 3 (on 1/4) I guess you meant 00:22:690 (22690|3) - ? Done hmm.. seems like there's inconsistent in beatsnap divisor, but there's nothing wrong with it though..
00:22:883 (22883|5) - to 5 done
00:23:171 (23171|3) - to 3 I found this same pitch as the 1/2 before, so probably not to change this
00:23:267 (23267|0) - to 5 I prefer the way it is.
00:24:036 (24036|0,24229|0) - both move to 2 ok
00:28:267 (28267|6) - to 5 ok
00:29:902 (29902|0) - add note to 1 and also add here 00:30:190 (30190|0) - to 1 There isn't any extra sound
00:34:036 (34036|6) - to 6 ok
00:34:133 (34133|0) - to 4 ok
at this point, go symmetry all the way, add long note on 00:41:344 (41344|1,41536|2,41729|6) - and a note on 6 (just duplicate a mirror side of the notes) done
01:12:690 (72690|0) - to 6 and 01:13:267 (73267|6) - to 4 done
01:13:460 (73460|2) - to 5 That would be inconsistent for main instrument
01:35:767 (95767|6) - to 6 done
01:59:806 (119806|4) - add note to 5, stronger sound better at 3 instead
02:02:883 (122883|1) - add note to 2, stronger sound at 4 instead
02:05:960 (125960|2) - add note to 3, .. at 4 instead
...

My modding ends here.

-Quite challenging, a very good jackhammer map
-I wish you good luck Thanks~

-Kamikaze- wrote:

This month is hella busy for me orz

#SWAG4MOD

General outline of what my mods contain:
>My thoughts about mapset
>Some advices
>Harsh opinions about map if I feel like it needs more work
>Complaining about mapstyle (sometimes even shouting)
>Commenting on 90% of things I mention
>Funny maymay arrows
>w33d
>Random images
>All the bad shit you may not expect
Keep in mind that all harsh things I say, not because I hate stuff, but because I care about every single map I mod and want to help you get it ranked. I'm voicing all of my opinions without restraint. Please don't rage at me because of this, I don't mean to offend you in any way. Also do note that I'm still learning, so I might misunderstand some things. and I'm terrible at naming instruments orz

Columns are: |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

I like those diff settings lol
Only lower Another's OD to 8,5 and maybe up Hyper's HP to 7,5 for the sake of spreadok

You need to do hitsounds for this to get it ranked. Also lower volume to 60% MAX, 80% is too loud and quite annoying Volume OK, will do hitsounds

I'm going to focus on Black Another, but I'll drop few suggestions for Normal as well:

[Normal]
00:24:421 (24421|1) - Move to 1st for finger ballanceok
00:41:344 (41344|5,41536|4,41729|0) - I don't think that accenting main beat with bass is a good idea and for other sound, you didn't get the rhythm right, take care of itI decided to keep it as is. Couldn't think of better way to map the main here
01:12:113 - Add ok
01:12:306 - And // Possibly as jack on spacebar (4th), it just fits there sure
01:38:267 (98267|1,98267|5,99806|4,99806|2) - Following the main 2/1 beat here seems like a better idea that those LN's sure

[Black Another]
Patterns look okay for me so I'll point out what's bugging me on other things
SV calculator, should be useful

00:36:729 - I'm a bit concerned about this jack, I think it should be 5, 6 seems a bit over ok
00:45:863 - Missed note(s) done
00:52:017 - ^ done
00:53:652 - Add note for guitar done
00:54:421 - This is where everything starts to go wrong. I understand the idea (halved BPM like in oj charts), but while this pattern is not so bad to read (it's still very unpleasant tho), this whole section starting from there is very hard to read on 0,5x. And the sudden back to 1,0 on 01:05:960 - kills any left FC's from sightread. Please use higher value from around 00:55:190 - (I recommend 0,75x so it's a stable progression) ok
01:19:806 - 01:29:036 - You're biasing one hand with jacks too much, move stuff around so it isn't so painful on left hand here This is more of an experiment in fact, at least I don't found any other songs that keep the same pitch for so long. Tried moving 3 to 4 but doesn't really work for me
01:32:113 - And here we go again. This time it's even worse. Absolutely no SV progression results in 01:38:267 - scrolling at half the speeds which looks like really bad o2jam convert and is rather unplayable. Please use higher SV values. done
01:41:344 - You could do SV jumps between those chords for bigger impact here sure
01:57:113 - And here you're using 1,0x SV, when it could use 0,8 or so lmao sure

Good luck!

playin14 wrote:

Hi from Modding Queue

click

column 0|1|2|3|4|5|6|

[General]
I wonder if you have newest version because many "from" notes do not match...
change offset to 5.983 (don't forget to adjust the notes and the inherited points) Putting song in 25% seems the current offset (5.960) is good enough

[Normal]
00:55:983 (55983|2) - move from 2 to 3 ok
00:59:059 (59059|4) - move from 4 to 3 ^
01:32:713 (92713|3) - move to 01:32:521 I think at least you can move this note and the next. This should be better to play That's don't go to piano well
01:33:002 (93002|4) - move to 01:32:906 ^
01:41:367 (101367|0) - move to 2 This part has been changed quite a bit, and notes do not match and hence these do not apply any more
01:41:367 (101367|6) - move to 4
01:42:425 (102425|1) - move to 0
01:42:425 (102425|5) - move to 6

[Hyper]
00:28:867 (28867|2) - delete Putting into 25% indicates that the piano is indeed 1/6s
00:28:963 (28963|1) - move from 1 to 2 ^
00:29:059 (29059|0) - move from 0 to 1 Jacks? no...
01:34:733 (94733|0) - move from 0 to 2 ok
01:34:829 (94829|3,94829|4) - move this two to 0 and 1 ^
01:34:925 (94925|5) - move from 5 to 2 ^
01:35:021 (95021|2) - move from 2 to 3 ^
01:35:021 (95021|6) - delete There is only one note, and contradicts with above...
01:35:117 (95117|0) - move from 0 to 4 ok
01:35:213 (95213|1) - move from 1 to 5 ok
01:39:059 (99059|6) - add note to 6 01:39:036 - instead
01:39:059 (99059|6) - add note to 6 repeat?
01:40:598 (100598|6) - add note to 6 01:40:575 (100575|0) - instead
01:41:079 (101079|5) - move from 5 to 4 No jacks here
01:41:175 (101175|4) - delete There is sound...

[Another]
00:19:829 (19829|1) - delete Has piano sound
00:22:521 (22521|6) - delete ^
00:23:675 (23675|0) - delete ^
00:29:059 (29059|5) - add note to 5 Adding this means adding a lot more notes for drums for consistency, so I think I just leave it
01:24:156 (84156|2,84156|0,84156|5) - 1/6 and move these three to 01:24:188 Sorry but, not sure if it is because you have different offset used, I found all these notes should be good 1/3s (and I think the original BMS also do this...)
01:24:252 (84252|5,84252|2,84252|0) - same here 1/6 and move them to 01:24:316
01:25:309 (85309|5,85309|0,85309|2) - 1/6 and move them to 01:25:341
01:25:406 (85406|0,85406|5,85406|2) - 1/6 and move them to 01:25:470
01:30:694 (90694|6,90694|4,90694|2) - move them to 01:30:726
01:30:790 (90790|1,90790|5,90790|3) - move them to 01:30:854
01:31:079 (91079|5,91079|3,91079|1) - move them to 01:31:111
01:31:175 (91175|2,91175|6,91175|4) - move them to 01:31:239
01:31:463 (91463|2,91463|4,91463|0) - move them to 01:31:495
01:31:559 (91559|5,91559|1,91559|3) - move them to 01:31:624

[Black Another]
01:24:156 (84156|1,84156|0,84156|2) - 1/6 move them to 01:24:188 Same as Another, sorry!
01:24:252 (84252|2,84252|1,84252|0) - move them to 01:24:316
01:25:309 (85309|1,85309|2,85309|0) - move them to 01:25:341
01:25:406 (85406|2,85406|1,85406|0) - move them to 01:25:470
01:30:694 (90694|3,90694|5,90694|1) - move them to 01:30:726
01:30:790 (90790|1,90790|5,90790|3) - move them to 01:30:854
01:31:079 (91079|5,91079|3,91079|1) - move them to 01:31:111
01:31:175 (91175|3,91175|5,91175|1) - move them to 01:31:239
01:31:463 (91463|1,91463|5,91463|3) - move them to 01:31:495
01:31:559 (91559|1,91559|3,91559|5) - move them to 01:31:624

These are only suggestions! Feel free to ignore them.
Nice map and good luck

_S u w a k o_ wrote:

Hi! Requested Modding from forum.

[Normal]

Click!

• 
  
  * 00:13:652 (13652|4,13652|0,14036|0,14421|0,14806|0) - how about ctrl + h? sure
  
  * 00:20:190 (20190|1) - Move to 3 ok
  
  * 00:22:883 (22883|2) - Move to 6 No for PR
  
  * 00:30:190 (30190|6) - Move to 6 No as not to put same column to next note
  
  * 00:32:690 (32690|5) - Move to 7 No for PR 2 notes later
  
  * 00:35:767 (35767|1) - Move to 3 ok
  
  * 00:38:844 (38844|5) - Move to 7 No, again
  
  * 00:41:729 (41729|0) - Move to 3 ok
  
  * 00:47:306 (47306|2) - Move to 2 ok
  
  * 00:53:171 (53171|5,53460|6) - Ctrl + G no for PR
  
  * 00:55:190 (55190|0) - Move to 2 ok
  
  * 01:10:190 (70190|3) - Move to 5 for balance ok
  
  * 01:16:536 (76536|0) - Move to 2 ok
  
  * 01:30:383 (90383|4) - i think it's not change of sound.. it's added sound. how about makes it LN which is end 01:31:729 - here? ok
  
  * 01:33:267 (93267|4) - Move to 6 ok
  
  * 01:46:536 (106536|1) - Move to 1 This part is mirror to first half. First half is no for this
  
  * 01:47:883 (107883|0) - Move to 2 But I think its ok for this
  
  * 01:51:921 (111921|3) - Move to 5 But no for this
  
  * 01:55:383 (115383|4) - Move to 6 I was considering no, but for Normal I think it's ok
  
  * 01:56:344 (116344|1) - Move to 3 ok
  
  * 02:02:113 (122113|1) - Move to 1 yes because of next one
  
  * 02:02:883 - add a note on 2 for sound. ok. But there are 3 places for this

[Hyper]

Click!

• 
  
  * 00:09:036 - why didn't you put note on 7? Because it is a lesser chord than the very first one
  
  * 00:13:652 (13652|4,13652|0,13748|5,14036|0,14421|0,14806|0) - how about ctrl + h Sure
  
  * 00:17:947 (17947|1,18011|2,18075|3,18139|4,18203|5,18267|6) - ^ I like the way it is now
  
  * 00:19:133 (19133|1) - Move to 6 No, this is same sound
  
  * 00:21:216 (21216|2) - Move to 6 ok
  
  * 00:21:280 (21280|0) - Move to 5 ^
  
  * 00:21:344 (21344|1) - Move to 4 ^
  
  * 00:24:133 (24133|6) - Move to 5 No for PR
  
  * 00:24:229 (24229|4) - Move to 4 ^
  
  * 00:24:517 (24517|0) - Move to 5 ok
  
  * 00:24:421 - 00:28:652 - can you re arrange here please? i think you can make more neatly than now
  
  there is a lot of good connecting 1/4 beat snap pattern such stair stream pattern
  
  * 00:30:383 - how about this? http://puu.sh/dVnrp/c8462279e7.jpg ok
  
  * 00:32:979 (32979|2,33075|4) - Ctrl + G No for PR
  
  * 00:36:152 (36152|3) - Move to 1 Not same column as 3 notes before...
  
  * 00:37:594 (37594|2,37594|4,37690|1,37690|5) - Ctrl + G This looks awkward...
  
  * 00:41:729 (41729|0) - Move to 3 ok
  
  * 00:45:767 (45767|2,45960|0) - Ctrl + G No for PR
  
  * 00:59:806 - Add a note, here has some good sound to add hm... I don't found the sound to add
  
  * 01:00:960 (60960|5,60960|0,61088|0,61088|4,61216|2,61216|0) - it's reasonable. but it can be a little hard as Normal difficulty,
  
  i suggest to use Ctrl + G pattern and it can be 1/3 density 3 notes. recent pattern seems like 1/3 4 notes.. There are 4 notes tho... I agree the pattern is a bit hard so I moved around a bit.
  
  * 01:02:498 (62498|2) - Move to 4 No for PR
  
  * 01:02:626 (62626|5) - Move to 3 ^
  
  * 01:06:729 (66729|0) - how about turn it to LN? it has good sound to use LN sure
  
  * 01:09:806 - http://puu.sh/dVwPB/e340c856c6.jpg how about it? This is all one-handed, seems quite hard for Hyper
  
  * 01:15:863 - http://puu.sh/dVx0p/c9b5048028.jpg it would be better to consider sound of interval sure
  
  * how about moving some notes which are i pointing out? this way can be better feel to play sure
  
  01:21:344 - 01:22:883 - 01:24:421 - 01:27:498 -
  
  * 01:34:806 - http://puu.sh/dVxnx/e5c90de12e.jpg ok
  
  * 01:41:344 (101344|3) - move to 6 and 01:41:344 - add a note on 7 hm.. Just move note to 7 I think
  
  * 01:45:286 (105286|1) - move to 1 no, after-all I think its good enough to be equidistant for this
  
  * 01:52:690 (112690|6,112690|4,112786|5,112786|3,112979|4,112979|2,113075|5,113075|3) - Ctrl + H ok

[Another]

Click!

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  * 00:13:652 (13652|4,13652|0,13748|5,14036|0,14421|0,14806|0) - Ctrl + G I guess you actually meant Ctrl-H?
  
  * 00:18:652 (18652|6) - Move to 1 for hand balance ok
  
  * 00:20:960 - http://puu.sh/dVxXv/af273480d0.jpg how abut this ok
  
  * 00:22:308 - http://puu.sh/dVxZX/a2d69e5ecc.jpg^ I like the way it is now
  
  * 00:32:498 (32498|5) - Move to 5 ok
  
  * 00:35:094 (35094|1,35190|2,35286|0) - Ctrl + G sure
  
  * 00:35:960 (35960|0) - Move to 5 ok
  
  * 00:36:056 (36056|6) - Move to 6 That would be mini-trill? no...
  
  * 00:38:652 (38652|5,38652|1) - Move to 1,7 ok
  
  * 00:40:479 (40479|2,40479|4) - Move to 1,7 for hand balanceok
  
  * 01:00:960 (60960|5,60960|0,61088|0,61088|4,61216|2,61216|0) - same reason as below difficulty So do same as Hyper
  
  * 01:09:806 - 01:10:479 - ^ But look, here is Another! I think this would be good to apply
  
  * 01:21:344 - 01:22:883 - 01:24:421 - 01:27:498 - ^ So do Hyper, yes
  
  * 01:28:748 - http://puu.sh/dVysn/2c67f8eaa8.jpg sure
  
  * 01:34:806 - http://puu.sh/dVyy9/66906f2dfc.jpg ok
  
  * 01:55:190 - 01:55:960 - umm.. rearrange please.. quite uncomfortable to play. ok

[Black Another]

Click!

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  * 00:19:613 (19613|2,19677|3,19710|4) - it doesn't follow sound. So here what happens on Black Another, when mixing 1/3 pianos and 1/4 noise... But I decided to move notes around a bit anyway
  
  * 00:21:056 (21056|1) - ^ ^
  
  * 00:51:921 - delete a note please.. u know follow sound lol hm.. This is for soft piano
  
  * 00:54:710 (54710|3) - Move to 1 ok
  
  * 00:54:806 (54806|4) - Move to 3 ^
  
  * 00:54:902 (54902|2) - Move to 2 ^
  
  * 01:04:613 (64613|1) - how about move note to 3 and add a note on 5 There isn't extra sound, but I think I would still add a note for symmetry anyway
  
  * 01:15:767 - 01:16:729 - how about giving rest time on here? such delete 1 column. ok
  
  * 01:22:594 (82594|0,82594|2,82690|2,82690|0,82786|0,82786|2) - if you didn't intend jackhammar, you can re arrange here.. quite hard to play I do intend to jackhammer here lol. p.s. it was even harder on the very first version
  
  * 01:28:748 (88748|6,88748|4,88844|4,88844|6,88940|6,88940|4) - ^ ^
  
  * 01:30:960 - 01:31:344 - ^ ok, use same pattern as Another
  
  * 01:41:344 (101344|2) - how about delete here? looks hard because of it Moved to 7 to keep all chords having 5 notes
  
  * 01:54:229 - 01:56:729 - same reason as below difficulty, or at least you can give jackhammar to right hand some parts for hand balance ok

overall : wow, your black another was quite nice good luck! Thanks~

MEGAtive wrote:

Hi
(Really Late) Mod from my queue

Just Mod the Normal Diff, and it's really good that I barely found any error there. Hyper and Another seems fine. Black Another just beyond my 7K Modding skill.

00:40:575 until 00:40:960 - Add note on 00:40:575 , Delete the note on 00:40:671 , and add a note on 00:40:767

Yeah, just one suggestion. As I said, it's really good I barely found any error there.

This map is awesome. Good Luck with your map.

Layout:

7k: |0|1|2|3|4|5|6|

schwarzvgrune wrote:

hi, from grun's mania queue
https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/295871/start=15

general
you don't use a lot of hitsound, so i guess you can set sample to 30 or 40% instead (sfx)
the cymbal sound doesnt go well with the song, so keep the volume small for sfx sure

another

SPOILER

00:09:036 - follow earlier pattern, put 4 notes I think more than one people has been mentioning this, time to change this

00:08:940 (8940|0) - move to 4 ok

00:41:921 - until 00:54:229 - you're following the instrument and the beat, LN would be better for the instrument just to keep that phase filled. I tend not to add a bunch of LN for no musical reasons, no change

from there until 01:06:729 - is optional to add LN because the there are more beats ^

note placement up to you, based on your maps i know you're a pro in mapping :3

Black

00:09:036 - follow earlier pattern (4 notes) ok
00:41:921 - 00:55:190 - you have the instrument (the long one) so LN would be better, and would suit the difficulty better to give more varied pattern of LN SN mix instead of just SN Same as Another

01:07:883 - add notes for every 1/4 beat instead of every 2/4 beat to follow the beat more.
example, to add a note on

01:07:883 - 01:08:267 - 01:09:421 - 01:09:806 - ok

01:10:190 - dont add here because you know why, and follow the pattern again until 01:12:494 -




its a very good beatmap already i think, so good luck! Thanks!

_Xenophilius_ wrote:

Hi! From M4M.

Layout:

7k: |0|1|2|3|4|5|6|

Normal

1. I suggest to add a LN from 00:30:575 - to 00:30:960 - or to expand 00:30:190 (30190|6) - until 00:30:960 - ok, added LN
2. 01:20:286 (80286|5,81056|5,81825|5,83363|5,84902|5,86440|1,87210|1,87979|1) - I suggest to use double on those notes It would be too strong I think, when the music doesn't really warrant this, so no.

Hyper

1. 00:09:036 - use tripe notes also here ok
2. 00:13:748 (13748|1) - 00:16:825 (16825|1) - Move on 3 for pitch sure
3. 00:41:344 (41344|4,41536|3) - Suggest to extend them until 00:41:921 - Generally I don't like stacking LNs like o2jam
4. 01:00:960 (60960|0,61088|0,61216|0,61344|0) - I think you don't need them hm.. I would keep it for consistency of bass + instrument throughout this part
5. 01:22:690 (82690|4) - Move to 5 since you have used jacks 01:21:056 (81056|0,81152|0) - This is for main instrument rather than beat, which has different pitch. I could have mapped the beat instead, but that means this would be a 4-note 1/4 jack (pattern like 5565 here is really awkward for me), which might be too hard for Hyper
6. 01:28:748 (88748|1,88844|0) - Same ^ ^

Another

1. 00:09:036 - Quadruple note here ya, above mod has changed this already
2. 00:13:748 (13748|1,16825|1) - Same as Hyper done
3. 00:41:536 (41536|2,41536|4) - Same suggestion as hyper Same as Hyper, no
4. 01:00:960 (60960|0,61088|0,61216|0,61344|0) - Same as Hyper Same as Hyper, no
5. 01:21:344 (snip) - Ctrl + H, the pattern might be boring otherwise I really wished to keep this but you've been like 3rd or 4th person to complain this, so I think I have to change.
6. 01:43:652 (103652|0,103780|0,103908|0,104036|0,104165|0,104293|0,104421|0) - I am not convinced by this jackhammer, simply use a LN ok

Black Another

1. 00:09:036 - Quadruple note here ya, above mod has changed this already
2. 00:16:729 - Add note in 3 ok
3. 00:16:825 - Add note in 4 ^
4. 00:35:575 (35575|2) - Better in 4 sure
5. 00:36:729 (snip) - make this simmetrical, my suggestion is 00:36:729 (36729|5) - in 4 00:36:633 (36633|4) - in 5 ok
6. 00:41:536 (41536|2,41536|4) - Same as Another So no
7. 00:41:536 (41536|4,41536|2) - Double note here as you done in 01:13:652 (snip) - I suggest to add in 5 ya, just found this error. fixed
8. 01:22:498 (snip) - Ctrl + H, same as Another So do Another

Harbyter wrote:

hello ~ mod re via queue by M4M

[General]

you should fix the gap between every diff, should be max 1.50 difference with star rating
Where did you see this rule? I searched the rules (both general and o!m specific) and did not mention this......

Normal ---> Hyper 1.57 gap ,unrankable suggest to try to increase the Normal rating up to 1.44
...But I am going to up Normal anyway as one BN complained about diff icon gap (tho I looked into the rules and saying that {N} icon can be skipped..... )

Another----> Black Another 1.53 gap ,here after the mod maybe the star rating will increase

[MOD]

will focus on pattern consistency and other little stuff , but i'm not so good in 7k so sorry if the mod isn't so good

Column-1-2-3-4-5-6-7-


[Black Another]

00:19:517 - i think you should add another notes here,for the piano I put this into 25% and the pianos are 1/3s here

00:21:825 - remove one note?? no piano here There are indeed piano here, again in 25%

00:23:460 - ^ ^

00:24:133 - move one of those note here 00:24:165 - ,piano is 1/3 ok

00:24:421 - seems like from here you changed the consistency with the notes so i will not point out the piano

00:30:575 - remove one note??sound here is the same like this 00:30:767 - ok

00:36:248 - you forgot another note here, add? previous 2 notes are noise+main, and main does not exist here

00:39:517 - here maybe you put only one note on purpose,but this is inconsistent with your consistency in this section,add two note? again, main does not exist here

00:40:383 - 00:40:479 - add another note?? ok

00:41:056 - here too add two notes, if you think this is really hard then i suggest to reduce one note per each chord starting from this section 00:39:806 - Same as 00:39:517 -, so no

00:51:633 - add a note here,here we got another sound like the other double sure

00:52:786 - ^

00:53:171 - ^

00:54:036 - ^

00:55:094 - ^ All done

00:55:960 - suggest to remove one note,here there isn't that sound like the previous chord of five notes ok

00:57:498 - ^

00:59:036 - here is ok

01:00:575 - remove one note here too All done

01:01:088 - 01:01:216 - add one? ok

01:03:652 - remove one? done

01:06:953 (66953|2,67338|1) - i can't hear nothing in 1/12 here I don't find any note there!

01:12:306 - after seeing this drum with one note i'm sure you put only 1 note for drum in this section, then i suggest to remove one note here 01:08:652 - 01:11:729 - ok

01:15:863 - following your rhytm and consistency you should delete one note cause you didn't followed that other sound starting from here Here is main+piano, so I guess I would keep double here

01:16:536 - add one note here ok

01:22:594 - 01:22:690 - 01:22:786 - after those i understand you put two notes in the drum in this section then you should add two notes here 01:21:152 - sure

01:22:017 - add one note here,another piano

01:23:460 - add two notes here too

01:24:998 - ^

01:27:306 - ^ All done

01:28:748 - 01:28:844 - 01:28:940 - add one note ok

01:30:479 - suggest to remove two note here,follow the previous consistency sure

01:37:979 (97979|6,98075|4,98171|2) - this section didn't end you should still follow the piano in 1/3 sure!

01:53:363 - 01:53:556 - other sound where you started you put double notes for those sound, add only one note here instead of two?? jere are only one note for noise (main doesn't present here)



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that's all ,hope i'll be helpfull Thanks!

Meiko Senpai wrote:

Hi~ mod for req via queue

Normal

00:31:152 - add note ok
00:36:729 - are necessary two lns? I wish to emphasize this special SE and used double here, keep.
00:54:998 (54998|1) - move to 3 or 5 for balance ok
01:13:460 - add note? ok
01:56:729 - necessary two lns? ok, reduce to 1 LN
01:59:613 - add note in 4? sure
02:05:767 - ^ done

Hyper

00:55:960 - add note? ok
00:57:498 - ^
01:00:575 - ^
01:02:113 - ^
01:03:652 - ^ All done
01:13:460 - ^ sure
01:32:113 - why quadryple? Indeed there is a strong sound to emphasize here, compare to 1 beat before. But I agree quadruple may be too strong here. Lets remove a note from both location

that's all good luck Thanks!

[ M o m o ] wrote:

Hi! , mod request via queue~
Column 1,2,3,4,5,6,7
Black Another

00:05:960 - Add note in 4, this sound is strong sure
in 00:21:825 - you like it? http://puu.sh/gCN3Y/380f99490c.png sure
00:24:710 - Delete one note, no piano here There is indeed piano here (25%)
00:36:729 - i think 5 note is much for this part D: http://puu.sh/gCNvV/dbc9c245bf.png maybe? I guess 5 is ok here. Another has 4 already
00:45:863 - Add note in 6? is same sound here 00:08:940 - sure, but I would prefer add all three notes for one kind of sound
00:52:017 - ^ ^
00:59:229 - Delete one note Keep. This is one low-pitch piano + one high-pitch piano
01:00:318 - Miss 1/6 here >.< Good catch!
01:02:498 - Suggestion, 01:02:690 (62690|6) - Delete, and change this part, example: http://puu.sh/gCOGa/add0b69751.png, i think is better ok, tho I would put notes around for pitch reasons.
01:25:960 - i like this, for this part http://puu.sh/gCPkK/bfaeb1f13c.png I don't find anything suggesting a broken LN here. Keep
01:42:115 (102115|3) - Move to 5? ok
01:50:575 - Same thing I said here 00:36:729 - >.< ^

Good luck! awesome map ^^ Thanks!

KaitoKid1998 wrote:

Mod requested from my modding queue:

[Normal]
00:41:344 (41344|5,41536|4,41729|2) - Merge those 3 LNs to make a single LN (something like this 00:41:344 (41344|2) -) ok
00:52:883 (52883|2) - Add a note here, since I felt while playing it that a note was missing there for no reason. There isn't any extra sounds, other than mapping all the background piano too hard for Normal

[Hyper]
00:41:344 (41344|4,41536|3,41729|2) - Same as Normal, merge those 3 LNs to a single one Keep 3 notes for 3 sounds
02:02:690 (122690|6) - Delete this note, it's ok with one note there, there's no emphasis there ok

Well, can't help you much, since I'm not that good at modding still, but it's also because that map is well done (=w=)b

Anyways, good luck with your beatmap Thanks!