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JeZag

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

JeZag 2014-09-04T22:43:26+00:00

streeteelf wrote:
SEE's Modding Queue

[Easy]

*00:07:324 (1) - Out of playfield LOL I testplayed only using 16:9 resolution, so never actually experienced the "off screen" until I changed the resolution.... fixed
*00:11:714 (4) - ^ fixed
*00:23:056 (2) - ^ fixed
*00:25:617 , 00:27:080 , 00:28:544 and 00:30:007 - Circle Not sure whether I want to or not...
*00:57:080 (1,2) - Out of playfield fixed
*01:00:007 (1,2,3,4) - Change this patter to have the same DS as in the whole map fixed
*01:11:714 (1) - Out of playfield Not sure if it's actually out of the field; a play test using the "worst" screen ration plays it fine
*01:14:732 (1) - I think this spinner is too close to circle Personally spinners after circles should be fine, BUT not the other way around for beginner
*01:38:147 (1) - ^ ^
*01:54:153 (1) - Out of playfield fixed
*02:08:787 (1) - ^ fixed
*02:14:732 (1) - I think it's too close to circle too ^^^

[Normal]

*Keep the same DS in whole map
*00:39:886 (4) - Out of playfield

*I think this Normal require remap, but it's only my opinion. xD I saw this one coming for a LONG time... It's just really messy, but IDK how to map right

[Hard]

*No suggestions

[Reunion]

*No suggestions

I think that's all. Good luck~

Thanks for the mod ^_^
BTW, for Normal diff. is constant D.S. needed?

HanzeR

921 posts

Joined May 2012

HanzeR 2014-09-05T01:32:58+00:00

JeZag wrote:
SeNoZinD wrote:
HanzeR's Insane
00:34:489 (3,4) - Maybe make this overlap clearer? http://puu.sh/bhJWQ/9200e01a14.jpg i like it my way
00:59:641 (5,6,7,8,1) - Connect the stream better with the slider maybe ^
00:38:056 (1) - Finish hitsound?
00:43:910 (1) - ^^ same not necessary imo
00:55:068 (4) - End with drum whistle? sure
01:43:910 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Why ;-; \:D/
02:11:531 (5) - Take this drum whistle and add it here 02:11:349 (4) - ok
streeteelf wrote:
SEE's Modding Queue
[HanzeR's Insane]

*00:02:934 , 00:02:934 , 00:08:788 , 00:11:714 - Circles no
*Larger sections of Kiai, like in JeZag diffs no

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64,92,135190,2,0,L|80:188,1,88,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,332,135739,2,0,L|161:277,1,44,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,208,136105,5,2,0:0:0:0:
68,280,136288,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,260,136470,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,260,136653,2,0,P|28:276|12:308,1,88,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,344,137202,2,0,L|296:332,1,44,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,260,137568,5,2,0:0:0:0:
336,244,137751,1,2,0:0:0:0:
260,208,137934,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,304,138117,2,0,L|484:292,1,88,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,224,138666,2,0,L|212:216,1,44,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,136,139031,5,2,0:0:0:0:
420,120,139214,1,2,0:0:0:0:
452,204,139397,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,128,139580,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,84,139763,5,2,0:0:0:0:
432,100,139946,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,200,140129,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,52,140312,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,240,140495,6,0,P|184:236|168:224,1,44,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,196,140861,2,0,P|171:173|168:153,1,44,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,140,141227,2,0,P|208:112|220:96,1,44,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,112,141592,2,0,P|282:95|302:92,1,44,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,136,141958,2,0,P|348:140|363:152,1,44,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,200,142324,2,0,P|360:222|363:242,1,44,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,264,142690,2,0,P|307:291|296:307,1,44,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,284,143056,6,0,P|217:300|197:303,1,44,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,244,143422,2,0,P|148:239|132:228,1,44,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,160,143788,2,0,P|131:137|128:117,1,44,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,88,144153,2,0,P|200:60|212:44,1,44,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,72,144519,2,0,P|306:55|326:52,1,44,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,128,144885,2,0,P|387:132|404:144,1,44,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,224,145251,2,0,P|392:246|395:266,1,44,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,145617,5,8,0:0:0:0:

XinCrin

2,845 posts

Joined January 2012

XinCrin 2014-09-07T01:27:48+00:00

Hi JeZag. I'm here because of M4M \o/

Easy

00:01:471 A little suggestion here, try using some Whistle at the beginning of map. Music really needs it
00:06:592 (5) You really should consider to move this slider. The entire slider is a bit hidden for 00:04:397 (3) and it could be hard to read for beginners.
00:11:714 (4) Could be better if you move this circle to x:420 y:300 since the next objects is very close to this one
00:23:056 (2) The Finish from the beginning of this slider feels overused. So, I suggest you to remove the Finish and use a Sampleset Drum|Whistle| as you did it in other parts
00:24:153 (3) (^) Remove Finish maybe (?
00:30:373 (1) The current slidershape makes a bad flow in my opinion. You could try to move the last sliderpoint to x:160 y:40 and fix the position of this slider for a better flow. Something like this:
Example
00:53:422 (3,1) I really hate to be nazi, but I'm sure that you can improve this blanket!
01:30:739 (3) A slider with more that 1 repetitions will be hard to play for beginners. So, I suggest you to remove all repetitions of this slider and add two circles later. Here's an example:
Example
02:02:202 (4) I'm not really sure if this 1/2 slider it's okay in an easy diff. Maybe try asking to some BAT about this

Great diff, I really enjoyed it!

Normal

A little suggestion here, check combos in all diff. They are a bit inconsistent in some places. For example 00:21:958 - Combo with 5 objects , 00:24:885 - combo with 3 objects. It's a bit weird that sometimes is a long combo or a short combo
00:02:568 (2) Check the spacing with previous object
00:04:031 (1) (^)
00:23:788 (4) The Soft Whistle sounds bad and for better consistency with hitsounds I suggest you to change the Sampleset Soft to Drum. It's better imo
01:27:812 (1) Is this NC really necessary?. You should remove it
02:06:592 (1) The Finish from the beginning of this slider sounds bad in my opinion. What about to remove it?

Hard

00:10:983 (3,2) |Nazi| Try to improve the stack between these objects
00:29:275 (1,1) Are these NCs really necessary? ._. . Consider remove them
00:50:130 (1,1) (^)
01:50:129 (1,1) (^)
01:51:136 (2) While playing I felt that this objects plays bad. Since this object is not necessary because there's not any important sound in voice/music. So, What about to delete it?

Sorry for not mod Hanzer's diff. But I feel that his diff has a weird rhythm in some places, overmapped and ....
Well, that's all for now . Good luck JeZag !!

JeZag

518 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

JeZag 2014-09-07T02:03:08+00:00

XinCrin wrote:
Hi JeZag. I'm here because of M4M \o/

Easy

00:01:471 A little suggestion here, try using some Whistle at the beginning of map. Music really needs it
00:06:592 (5) You really should consider to move this slider. The entire slider is a bit hidden for 00:04:397 (3) and it could be hard to read for beginners.
00:11:714 (4) Could be better if you move this circle to x:420 y:300 since the next objects is very close to this one
00:23:056 (2) The Finish from the beginning of this slider feels overused. So, I suggest you to remove the Finish and use a Sampleset Drum|Whistle| as you did it in other parts
00:24:153 (3) (^) Remove Finish maybe (?
00:30:373 (1) The current slidershape makes a bad flow in my opinion. You could try to move the last sliderpoint to x:160 y:40 and fix the position of this slider for a better flow. Something like this:
Example
00:53:422 (3,1) I really hate to be nazi, but I'm sure that you can improve this blanket!
01:30:739 (3) A slider with more that 1 repetitions will be hard to play for beginners. So, I suggest you to remove all repetitions of this slider and add two circles later. Here's an example:
Example
02:02:202 (4) I'm not really sure if this 1/2 slider it's okay in an easy diff. Maybe try asking to some BAT about this
Great diff, I really enjoyed it!
Normal

A little suggestion here, check combos in all diff. They are a bit inconsistent in some places. For example 00:21:958 - Combo with 5 objects , 00:24:885 - combo with 3 objects. It's a bit weird that sometimes is a long combo or a short combo
00:02:568 (2) Check the spacing with previous object
00:04:031 (1) (^)
00:23:788 (4) The Soft Whistle sounds bad and for better consistency with hitsounds I suggest you to change the Sampleset Soft to Drum. It's better imo
01:27:812 (1) Is this NC really necessary?. You should remove it
02:06:592 (1) The Finish from the beginning of this slider sounds bad in my opinion. What about to remove it?
Hard

00:10:983 (3,2) |Nazi| Try to improve the stack between these objects
00:29:275 (1,1) Are these NCs really necessary? ._. . Consider remove them
00:50:130 (1,1) (^)
01:50:129 (1,1) (^)
01:51:136 (2) While playing I felt that this objects plays bad. Since this object is not necessary because there's not any important sound in voice/music. So, What about to delete it?
Sorry for not mod Hanzer's diff. But I feel that his diff has a weird rhythm in some places, overmapped and ....
Well, that's all for now . Good luck JeZag !!

Ofc, I will edit in a reply with things corrected, but right now is a bit past my bedtime zzz
Thanks again for the mod ^_^

TaikuGx

89 posts

Joined April 2014

TaikuGx 2014-09-07T15:59:18+00:00

Hey there ~
from my modding queue

Easy
Nazi mode activated since this diff already looks awesome
00:11:714 (4,1) - Blanket
00:19:031 (1) - I'd use a slider like this here : http://puu.sh/bppgX/dedba69f9a.jpg
00:32:203 (3,1) - Overlap doesn't look very nice
00:40:617 (3,2) - I'd let 2's body pass directly between 3's head and tail like this: http://puu.sh/bppt5/74518f3afb.jpg

Normal
00:01:471 (1,2,3) - Although the pattern looks nice the spacing between 1 and 2 is not the same as between 2 and 3 which will most likely confuse beginners. I'd always keep constant DS for Easy and Normal diffs.
00:02:934 (3,1,2) - ^
Move 00:26:166 (1) - to y:208 for perfect stack with 00:25:251 (2) -
00:41:715 (3,1) - I'd blanket them
01:27:446 (2,1) - ^
01:28:910 (1) - Start here 01:28:727 - (vocals start here again) and reverse one more time
02:08:422 (1,2) - Looks a bit weird. Why not make a smoother transition like this? http://puu.sh/bpqln/8a0b7303ba.jpg

Hard

00:07:507 (2) - Move to x:411 y:181
00:21:959 (5) - NC here instead of 00:22:507 (1) -
00:29:641 (1,1) - Just my preference but I'd remove NCs here. Doesn't sound like a new part begins
00:34:580 (3,2) - Stack tails better
00:50:130 (1,1,1) - Same as 00:29:641 (1,1) -
00:56:714 (4) - Compared to 00:55:618 (1,2,3) - the change of direction seems too big
01:30:739 (1,2) - Move 2 to y:257 for perfect stack

That's it from me. I wasn't able to find a lot because this mapset is already really well done! You better get this ranked quickly

Maybe you can still make use of my suggestions. Best of luck!

JeZag

518 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

JeZag 2014-09-07T17:12:12+00:00

TaikuGx wrote:
Hey there ~
from my modding queue

Easy
Nazi mode activated since this diff already looks awesome
00:11:714 (4,1) - Blanket Fixed
00:19:031 (1) - I'd use a slider like this here : http://puu.sh/bppgX/dedba69f9a.jpg Fixed
00:32:203 (3,1) - Overlap doesn't look very nice Fixed
00:40:617 (3,2) - I'd let 2's body pass directly between 3's head and tail like this: http://puu.sh/bppt5/74518f3afb.jpg Fixed

Normal
00:01:471 (1,2,3) - Although the pattern looks nice the spacing between 1 and 2 is not the same as between 2 and 3 which will most likely confuse beginners. Fixed
I'd always keep constant DS for Easy and Normal diffs.
00:02:934 (3,1,2) - ^ Fixed
Move 00:26:166 (1) - to y:208 for perfect stack with 00:25:251 (2) - Fixed
00:41:715 (3,1) - I'd blanket them Fixed
01:27:446 (2,1) - ^ Fixed
01:28:910 (1) - Start here 01:28:727 - (vocals start here again) and reverse one more time Fixed
02:08:422 (1,2) - Looks a bit weird. Why not make a smoother transition like this? http://puu.sh/bpqln/8a0b7303ba.jpg Fixed

Hard

00:07:507 (2) - Move to x:411 y:181 Fixed
00:21:959 (5) - NC here instead of 00:22:507 (1) - Fixed
00:29:641 (1,1) - Just my preference but I'd remove NCs here. Doesn't sound like a new part begins Fixed
00:34:580 (3,2) - Stack tails better Fixed
00:50:130 (1,1,1) - Same as 00:29:641 (1,1) - Fixed
00:56:714 (4) - Compared to 00:55:618 (1,2,3) - the change of direction seems too big All same DS, so no change for now
01:30:739 (1,2) - Move 2 to y:257 for perfect stack Fixed

That's it from me. I wasn't able to find a lot because this mapset is already really well done! You better get this ranked quickly Maybe you can still make use of my suggestions. Best of luck!

Thanks for the mod! >w<

XinCrin wrote:
Hi JeZag. I'm here because of M4M \o/

Easy

00:01:471 A little suggestion here, try using some Whistle at the beginning of map. Music really needs it I'll see what I can do xD
00:06:592 (5) You really should consider to move this slider. The entire slider is a bit hidden for 00:04:397 (3) and it could be hard to read for beginners. Fixed
00:11:714 (4) Could be better if you move this circle to x:420 y:300 since the next objects is very close to this one I'll think about it
00:23:056 (2) The Finish from the beginning of this slider feels overused. So, I suggest you to remove the Finish and use a Sampleset Drum|Whistle| as you did it in other parts Fixed
00:24:153 (3) (^) Remove Finish maybe (?) Fixed
00:30:373 (1) The current slidershape makes a bad flow in my opinion. You could try to move the last sliderpoint to x:160 y:40 and fix the position of this slider for a better flow. Something like this:
Example
Fixed
00:53:422 (3,1) I really hate to be nazi, but I'm sure that you can improve this blanket! Fixed lol
01:30:739 (3) A slider with more that 1 repetitions will be hard to play for beginners. So, I suggest you to remove all repetitions of this slider and add two circles later. Here's an example:
Example
Fixed
02:02:202 (4) I'm not really sure if this 1/2 slider it's okay in an easy diff. Maybe try asking to some BAT about this Shouldn't be that hard to read, and fits the music (I'll change it if I must)
Great diff, I really enjoyed it!
Normal

A little suggestion here, check combos in all diff. They are a bit inconsistent in some places. For example 00:21:958 - Combo with 5 objects , 00:24:885 - combo with 3 objects. It's a bit weird that sometimes is a long combo or a short combo Combo changed due to it being sort of "harder" after the beginning
00:02:568 (2) Check the spacing with previous object Fixed
00:04:031 (1) (^) Fixed
00:23:788 (4) The Soft Whistle sounds bad and for better consistency with hitsounds I suggest you to change the Sampleset Soft to Drum. It's better imo I have to see what I can do with hitsounds
01:27:812 (1) Is this NC really necessary?. You should remove it LOL Fixed
02:06:592 (1) The Finish from the beginning of this slider sounds bad in my opinion. What about to remove it? Fixed
Hard

00:10:983 (3,2) |Nazi| Try to improve the stack between these objects Fixed
00:29:275 (1,1) Are these NCs really necessary? ._. . Consider remove them Fixed
00:50:130 (1,1) (^) Fixed
01:50:129 (1,1) (^) Fixed
01:51:136 (2) While playing I felt that this objects plays bad. Since this object is not necessary because there's not any important sound in voice/music. So, What about to delete it? Point taken; fixed
Sorry for not mod Hanzer's diff. But I feel that his diff has a weird rhythm in some places, overmapped and ....
Well, that's all for now . Good luck JeZag !!

Thanks for the mod

OblivioN

OblivioN 2014-09-10T16:42:16+00:00

sorry for delay
From Lazy modding team(¦3[____]

General

Turn off the widescreen support in Easy ,because you haven't make storyboard for the beatmaphttp://puu.sh/bteoH/98e22dfe14.png

Easy

00:06:592 (5,2) - make the tail of 00:06:592 (5) - with the head of 00:08:788 (2) - be a good stack
SPOILER
00:19:031 (1,2) - - take care of them tails if you accept the suggestion.Don't fogot fix the stack 00:20:129 (2,1) - http://puu.sh/btpqC/2a8d1ffd72.png

00:34:397 (2) - ummm……actually，I don't think it‘s a good shape……because the 00:34:397 (2) - overlap with 00:32:568 (4) - makes people feeling insouciant

how do you feeling about this shape? ：

SPOILER

here the code that I think it would be helpful & won't spent much time:

159,231,32202,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,168,32568,2,0,L|317:157,1,70.0000005960464,2|0,3:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
344,256,33299,1,2,3:0:0:0:
277,328,33665,6,0,P|254:297|253:249,1,70.0000005960464,4|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
236,169,34397,2,0,P|248:129|244:69,1,70.0000005960464,2|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
346,118,35129,2,0,P|384:92|420:90,1,70.0000005960464,4|2,2:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
418,186,35861,2,0,P|451:213|468:244,1,70.0000005960464,4|2,2:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:

00:42:446 (2) - missing a obviously beat at 00:43:178 try this rhythm:
00:48:300 how about normal-hitnormal finish？
01:11:714 (1) - it's nearly touch the scorebar

Normal

00:18:300 (3,3) - try make a pretty stack
00:34:397 (2,1) - ^
00:36:593 (1) - sounds odd……try lengthen the tail to 00:37:324
00:42:447 (1) - ^ to 00:43:178
00:48:300 (2) - hitnormal finish
01:05:313 (1) - oh……I think the slider is hard for newbie……
01:14:733 (1) - drum？
01:28:727 (1) - ;w; same opinion with 01:05:313 (1)
01:33:666 (1,2) - why not only a slider from 01:33:666 to 01:34:214 ？I'd ignore the weak beat（01:33:849）and mix（following） with vocal here.
02:00:739 (3,5) - stack

Hard

in fact……the soft clap before 00:13:178 sounds odd……;w; I advice that try to found another suitable hitsound
00:34:946 drum whistle？
01:10:618 (2,4) - do a pretty stack ~
01:14:733 (1) - drum whistle？

HanzeR's Insane

a beautiful diff ;w;that I 'm useless ;w;
00:17:202 (5,5) - stack
00:42:080 (2,3) - why overlap here ？【curious】a bit unbefitting……
02:25:617 (1) - maybe use whistle to instead of clap will sounds comfortable

could I skip the Reunion? ;w; I had watched the diff very much time ……but I can't understand many things…… ;w; so that I can't make suggestions in this diff any more ;w; sorry

take my star and good luck

JeZag

518 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

JeZag 2014-09-10T19:34:54+00:00

OblivioN wrote:
sorry for delay
From Lazy modding team(¦3[____]

General
Turn off the widescreen support in Easy ,because you haven't make storyboard for the beatmap fixed
http://puu.sh/bteoH/98e22dfe14.png
Easy
00:06:592 (5,2) - make the tail of 00:06:592 (5) - with the head of 00:08:788 (2) - be a good stack
SPOILER
fixed
00:19:031 (1,2) - - take care of them tails if you accept the suggestion.Don't fogot fix the stack 00:20:129 (2,1) - fixedhttp://puu.sh/btpqC/2a8d1ffd72.png
00:34:397 (2) - ummm……actually，I don't think it‘s a good shape……because the 00:34:397 (2) - overlap with 00:32:568 (4) - makes people feeling insouciant how do you feeling about this shape? ：
SPOILER
fixed
here the code that I think it would be helpful & won't spent much time:
159,231,32202,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,168,32568,2,0,L|317:157,1,70.0000005960464,2|0,3:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
344,256,33299,1,2,3:0:0:0:
277,328,33665,6,0,P|254:297|253:249,1,70.0000005960464,4|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
236,169,34397,2,0,P|248:129|244:69,1,70.0000005960464,2|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
346,118,35129,2,0,P|384:92|420:90,1,70.0000005960464,4|2,2:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
418,186,35861,2,0,P|451:213|468:244,1,70.0000005960464,4|2,2:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
00:42:446 (2) - missing a obviously beat at 00:43:178 try this rhythm: it's made to fit an earlier slider >w< will change if ppl can't read it right
00:48:300 how about normal-hitnormal finish？changed
01:11:714 (1) - it's nearly touch the scorebar fixed
Normal
00:18:300 (3,3) - try make a pretty stack fixed
00:34:397 (2,1) - ^ fixed
00:36:593 (1) - sounds odd……try lengthen the tail to 00:37:324 it's on purpose to fit the piano
00:42:447 (1) - ^ to 00:43:178 ^
00:48:300 (2) - hitnormal finish fixed
01:05:313 (1) - oh……I think the slider is hard for newbie…… dang, will change if moar mods bring it up (remapping will be hard)
01:14:733 (1) - drum？I personally never end spinners with loud hitsounds ;w;
01:28:727 (1) - ;w; same opinion with 01:05:313 (1) will change if need to
01:33:666 (1,2) - why not only a slider from 01:33:666 to 01:34:214 ？I'd ignore the weak beat（01:33:849）and mix（following） with vocal here.thinking about it
02:00:739 (3,5) - stack fixed

Hard
in fact……the soft clap before 00:13:178 sounds odd……;w; I advice that try to found another suitable hitsound no hitsound at all now... w/e
00:34:946 drum whistle？too powerful so soft whistle instead
01:10:618 (2,4) - do a pretty stack ~ changed
01:14:733 (1) - drum whistle？I personally never end spinners with loud hitsounds ;w;

take my star and good luck

Thanks for the mod and the star *o*

Nozhomi

Global Moderator

4,579 posts

Joined May 2013

Nozhomi 2014-09-11T01:27:52+00:00

Hi~ From Strawberry Mousse Modding Queue.
Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why to improve my futur mods.
If you've any question, ask me in-game.

- General :

I found your Green for combo color kind of too much "fluorescent". This one http://puu.sh/btZIK/231e697754.png looks better imo.

- Reunion :

00:04:946 (4,5) - Maybe blanket them ?
00:08:422 (5) - I would see more something like this http://puu.sh/btZYC/32a4861b19.jpg. Flow is much better.
00:25:068 (5,6,7,1) - I would move then to stack 00:23:605 (2,6,1) - .
00:27:813 (4) - If you move a little the anchor point, everything would be perfect http://puu.sh/bu0Ke/4df789875e.jpg.
00:27:629 (3,5) - Stack them correctly.
00:30:739 (1,2) - Bad blanket.
00:35:679 (2,5) - Why not stack them (stack slider end) ?
00:36:958 (1,1,2) - Bad blanket.
00:39:153 (4,1) - ^
00:50:861 (5) - Move slider end to 220:287 to improve flow.

- HanzeR's Insane :

Your stack leniency is maybe too low. Check it with a BAT probably.
00:34:489 (3) - It's maybe me, but I think this circle is just overmapped, and also not really fun to play.
00:42:080 (2,3) - Maybe can you change this to avoid this little overlap ?
01:46:653 (4,1) - You can make it perfectly http://puu.sh/bu21d/c502fe546d.jpg.
Pro diff.

- Hard :

CS3.5 fit better with this objet density.
00:17:568 - NC should be here.
00:19:031 - NC here too.
00:27:813 (3,4) - You could improve this blanket a little.
00:32:203 (1,3) - This overlap looks not so good here.
01:51:227 - NC
01:56:897 (1,2,3) - Stack them properly.
02:07:324 - NC here too no ?

- Normal :

From start to 00:13:178 - I didn't understand how you did your NC here.
00:33:666 (1,2) - Inconsistant DS here.
00:35:861 (4,1) - Blanket them no ?
00:43:910 (3,4) - Bad blanket?
00:43:544 (2,5) - What do you think about stack them?
01:03:483 (2,1) - I would make it like this to get better flow http://puu.sh/bu5qQ/6b233a4be8.jpg.
01:09:885 (1,2) - Bad flow. Make similar flow like 01:08:422 (1,2) - .
01:29:275 - For me, this big tic should be played, so maybe change your rhythm for this http://puu.sh/bu5F3/8aa385e114.jpg.
01:57:446 (3,2) - Little overlap.
02:13:178 (1,3) - Stack them, don't go ruin flow at the end.

- Easy :

00:04:397 - NC ?
00:10:251 - ^
00:19:031 (1,2) - Bad blanket.
00:30:739 - Feel strange to not play this white tic, because it sounds important here.
01:35:129 (1) - Flow could be better if you do something like this http://puu.sh/bu6cQ/1bf46424ad.jpg.

That's all, I hope it help you.
Good luck Mukyu~

HanzeR

921 posts

Joined May 2012

HanzeR 2014-09-11T02:52:50+00:00

OblivioN wrote:
HanzeR's Insane
a beautiful diff ;w;that I 'm useless ;w; <3
00:17:202 (5,5) - stack this is really annoying to fix lol and it would look off
00:42:080 (2,3) - why overlap here ？【curious】a bit unbefitting…… i like the way it looks
02:25:617 (1) - maybe use whistle to instead of clap will sounds comfortable clap sounds neat here i think

Nozhomi wrote:
- HanzeR's Insane :
Your stack leniency is maybe too low. Check it with a BAT probably. its fine :p
00:34:489 (3) - It's maybe me, but I think this circle is just overmapped, and also not really fun to play. its maybe overmapped but i like it
00:42:080 (2,3) - Maybe can you change this to avoid this little overlap ? i like it
01:46:653 (4,1) - You can make it perfectly http://puu.sh/bu21d/c502fe546d.jpg. fixed
Pro diff.<3

thx mods

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JeZag

518 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

JeZag 2014-09-12T00:03:13+00:00

Nozhomi wrote:
Hi~ From Strawberry Mousse Modding Queue.
Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why to improve my futur mods.
If you've any question, ask me in-game.

- General :
I found your Green for combo color kind of too much "fluorescent". This one http://puu.sh/btZIK/231e697754.png looks better imo.
- Reunion :
00:04:946 (4,5) - Maybe blanket them ?
00:08:422 (5) - I would see more something like this http://puu.sh/btZYC/32a4861b19.jpg. Flow is much better.
00:25:068 (5,6,7,1) - I would move then to stack 00:23:605 (2,6,1) - .
00:27:813 (4) - If you move a little the anchor point, everything would be perfect http://puu.sh/bu0Ke/4df789875e.jpg.
00:27:629 (3,5) - Stack them correctly.
00:30:739 (1,2) - Bad blanket.
00:35:679 (2,5) - Why not stack them (stack slider end) ?
00:36:958 (1,1,2) - Bad blanket.
00:39:153 (4,1) - ^
00:50:861 (5) - Move slider end to 220:287 to improve flow.
- HanzeR's Insane :
Your stack leniency is maybe too low. Check it with a BAT probably.
00:34:489 (3) - It's maybe me, but I think this circle is just overmapped, and also not really fun to play.
00:42:080 (2,3) - Maybe can you change this to avoid this little overlap ?
01:46:653 (4,1) - You can make it perfectly http://puu.sh/bu21d/c502fe546d.jpg.
Pro diff.
- Hard :
CS3.5 fit better with this objet density.
00:17:568 - NC should be here.
00:19:031 - NC here too.
00:27:813 (3,4) - You could improve this blanket a little.
00:32:203 (1,3) - This overlap looks not so good here.
01:51:227 - NC
01:56:897 (1,2,3) - Stack them properly.
02:07:324 - NC here too no ?
- Normal :
From start to 00:13:178 - I didn't understand how you did your NC here.
00:33:666 (1,2) - Inconsistant DS here.
00:35:861 (4,1) - Blanket them no ?
00:43:910 (3,4) - Bad blanket?
00:43:544 (2,5) - What do you think about stack them?
01:03:483 (2,1) - I would make it like this to get better flow http://puu.sh/bu5qQ/6b233a4be8.jpg.
01:09:885 (1,2) - Bad flow. Make similar flow like 01:08:422 (1,2) - .
01:29:275 - For me, this big tic should be played, so maybe change your rhythm for this http://puu.sh/bu5F3/8aa385e114.jpg.
01:57:446 (3,2) - Little overlap.
02:13:178 (1,3) - Stack them, don't go ruin flow at the end.
- Easy :
00:04:397 - NC ?
00:10:251 - ^
00:19:031 (1,2) - Bad blanket.
00:30:739 - Feel strange to not play this white tic, because it sounds important here.
01:35:129 (1) - Flow could be better if you do something like this http://puu.sh/bu6cQ/1bf46424ad.jpg.

That's all, I hope it help you.
Good luck Mukyu~

EVERYTHING FIXED BC I CANT MAP orz
thx for the great mod >w<

Nuolong

1,032 posts

Joined August 2014

Nuolong 2014-09-13T21:29:15+00:00

From modding queue 2 rules broke~~Only HanzeR's

Mod

******b
00:35:861 (1,2,3,4) - This looks abnormal. Doesn't look like you for this when it's a stream. Make an abstract M for McDonalds instead.
00:35:861 (1) - to x:452, y:140
00:35:952 (2) - to x:408, y:108
00:36:044 (3) - to x:360, y:108
00:36:135 (4) - to x:328, y:136
Above~An example, do that or something like that
******e
00:38:788 (3,4) - too normal
01:31:288 (5) - ctrl+h and to x:484, y:156
******b
01:37:507 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Too perfect do something like:
01:37:507 (1) - to x:376 y:328
01:37:599 (2) - to 416 352
01:37:690 (3) - 464 368
01:37:781 (4) - 460 324
01:37:873 (5) - 488 296
01:37:964 (6) - 496 252
Above~An example, do that or something like that
******e
01:59:641 (1) - 208 332
01:59:733 (2) - 232 288
01:59:824 (3) - 264 320
01:59:916 (4) - 288 284
02:20:495 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Spread these out more and faster

Think my mod is not worthy? Don't give me kudos.

Good Luck w/ your first beatmap!

And HanzeR just Good Luck! lol

HanzeR

921 posts

Joined May 2012

HanzeR 2014-09-13T23:32:03+00:00

NolanM wrote:
From modding queue 2 rules broke~~Only HanzeR's

Mod
******b
00:35:861 (1,2,3,4) - This looks abnormal. Doesn't look like you for this when it's a stream. Make an abstract M for McDonalds instead.
00:35:861 (1) - to x:452, y:140
00:35:952 (2) - to x:408, y:108
00:36:044 (3) - to x:360, y:108
00:36:135 (4) - to x:328, y:136
Above~An example, do that or something like that i like the way it flows there
******e
00:38:788 (3,4) - too normal ?_?
01:31:288 (5) - ctrl+h and to x:484, y:156 doesnt feel like there needs to be a jump here
******b
01:37:507 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Too perfect do something like:
01:37:507 (1) - to x:376 y:328
01:37:599 (2) - to 416 352
01:37:690 (3) - 464 368
01:37:781 (4) - 460 324
01:37:873 (5) - 488 296
01:37:964 (6) - 496 252
Above~An example, do that or something like that changed differently
******e
01:59:641 (1) - 208 332
01:59:733 (2) - 232 288
01:59:824 (3) - 264 320
01:59:916 (4) - 288 284
02:20:495 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Spread these out more and faster why?

Think my mod is not worthy? Don't give me kudos.

Good Luck w/ your first beatmap!
And HanzeR just Good Luck! lol

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thanks for the mod!!

[ Setsuna ]

422 posts

Joined October 2013

[ Setsuna ] 2014-09-14T05:36:34+00:00

came from my modding queue :3

I'm only going to do 4 difficulties, as I suck at Easy I won't be doing that. lol this is the only song I haven't 95%+ in deemo

Reunion

00:06:410 (4,5) - Consider blanketing the 5 to the 4
not a mod but, LOL @ the "You Ready?" at 00:12:263 (4)
00:18:300 (3) - Put this closer to the stream, as it will be hard for players
00:30:190 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Ugly stream, use slider to stream converter
00:32:568 (2,3) - Blanketed wrong.
00:56:349 (5) - Read the second mod

So In the Kiai time's I see you using the basic clap pattern, cept with whistle.

02:02:934 (5) - NC

HanzeR's Insane

00:12:446 (1) - You could make this longer if you just put a inherited point to increase slider speed.
00:35:861 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This might rek a few people, might wanna make it easier
01:26:531 (2) - This jump is too far
01:37:507 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - This stream is too hard
01:43:910 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - This kills my eyes. (Combo Color)
02:25:617 (1) - No NC

Hard

gwad can you teach me how to map like this

Normal

00:25:251 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - This. Don't start beats on red ticks, red ticks are fillers, white ticks are important.
01:32:385 (2,1) - Blanket 1 to 2's curve

JeZag

518 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

JeZag 2014-09-14T13:23:18+00:00

[ Setsuna ] wrote:
came from my modding queue :3

I'm only going to do 4 difficulties, as I suck at Easy I won't be doing that. lol this is the only song I haven't 95%+ in deemo

Reunion
00:06:410 (4,5) - Consider blanketing the 5 to the 4 Fixed
not a mod but, LOL @ the "You Ready?" at 00:12:263 (4) Used to crack me up too xD
00:18:300 (3) - Put this closer to the stream, as it will be hard for players Fixed
00:30:190 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Ugly stream, use slider to stream converter On purpose (meant to be 2 sliders to change direction
00:32:568 (2,3) - Blanketed wrong. Fixed
00:56:349 (5) - Read the second mod Fixed

So In the Kiai time's I see you using the basic clap pattern, cept with whistle.
idk what I did but it sounds pretty good with the custom hit sounds xD

02:02:934 (5) - NC Fixed

Hard
gwad can you teach me how to map like this
With love, patience, and TONS of remapping

Normal
00:25:251 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - This. Don't start beats on red ticks, red ticks are fillers, white ticks are important. remapping will be a pain to do and besides; I mapped that way to match the vocals x.x
01:32:385 (2,1) - Blanket 1 to 2's curve Fixed

Thanks for ze mod! >w<

pooptartsonas

128 posts

Joined January 2012

pooptartsonas 2014-09-21T20:56:07+00:00

Hi, here for the m4m! And Deemo!

[Reunion]

00:06:958 (5) - Could be blanketed better (the tail)
00:11:349 (5) - Remove whistle from tail, and
00:12:080 (3) - remove whistle, to stay consistent? The music changes and I kinda get what you're going for but it sounds like a lot of whistles, maybe just remove one of them?
00:16:653 (3,1) - Overlap is not exact, move the later slider to x101 y333
00:32:935 (3) - Maybe rotate by -10 degrees and reblanket to put some space between it and the slider two before it
00:40:618 (1) - Try moving to x488 y128?
00:42:812 (2) - Move to x133 y33 for perfect overlap (I guess move the whole pattern over by 1 so the triangles
00:46:288 (1) - Try x62 y254
00:52:507 (5) - Try x67 y51
00:57:629 (3,4) - Better blanket
01:26:349 (1) - I think the hitsounds should be quieter than they were at the beginning here; even though there's additional singing and guitar I think quieter hitsounds would fit the hushed vocals. Then I think you can increase it at 01:32:202 (3) and then possibly again at 01:35:129 (3)
01:26:897 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Just saying that this is so nice for the music
01:32:751 (5,6) - I'm not a fan of the flow here. I don't really know what the best way to be to fix it is but what I did was rotate these two notes by 60 degrees and place them (with the same orientation) so the circle is at x179 y116 and forms a triangle. It's not that bad though so maybe not idk, it just felt a little awkward for me playing through.
01:35:129 (3) - Move red point to x178 y111 for better blanket

[HanzeR's Insane]

This is a lot different from how I map so I don't know if I'll be able to help much on making it flow well, I'll look for what I can though.

00:12:446 (1,2,3) - This is confusing, the two notes after the slider look like 1/4 notes. I read them as 1/4 even though I know the song. Maybe stack them or something? I don't think it's a problem once the rhythm starts going, ie I think 00:14:275 (5,6) is fine.
00:14:641 (1,4) - This blanket is pretty off
00:19:031 (1) - ^
00:22:690 (3,1) - Not egregious but still off a bit
00:53:605 (4,1) - ^
01:04:031 (4) - Move this note farther away from the slider?
01:45:556 (1,2,1,2) - Highly reccommend not having the spacing get so high at the end of this stream, I had trouble playing it even when I knew it was coming and when I did FC it I usually got 100s due to notelocking I believe.
01:46:836 (1) - Move last point to x277 y127 for better blanket

[Hard]

00:02:385 (4) - Move middle tick to x98 y298?
00:02:934 (1,2) - Could make 2 blanket in 1 better
00:08:239 (5,3) - These two aren't perfect copies of each other so they don't overlap perfectly
00:10:800 (2) - Make this overlap with 3 from the next combo?
00:20:861 (2) - Move to x327 y159 for perfect overlap
00:25:252 (2) - Move to x211 y219 for perfect overlap
00:32:935 (3,4) - Tail could be blanketed better
00:35:495 (2) - Move to x168 y208 for perfect overlap
01:05:129 (3) - Move to x226 y193 for perfect overlap
01:56:349 (5,6) - Blanket better

Really pretty diff!

[Normal]

00:06:592 (5) - Remove whistle from tail?
00:19:763 (2) - Move to x272 y118 for perfect overlap
00:21:959 (1) - Move to x418 y237 for perfect overlap
00:55:618 (1) - Make this overlap with 00:58:178 (1) maybe? They're pretty far apart in time but why not

[Easy]

00:02:934 (2) - Move the second to last tick to x363 y218 and the last tick to x421 y295 and it blankets better
00:24:153 (3,1) - Wrap 3 tighter around the 1 so the blanket is better maybe
01:12:446 (2) - Move to x76 y172 for perfect overlap (or move the slider to x76 y171 is better to maintain the square I guess)

Good luck with the map! Have a star!

JeZag

518 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

JeZag 2014-09-22T02:23:49+00:00

pooptartsonas wrote:
Hi, here for the m4m! And Deemo!

[Reunion]

00:06:958 (5) - Could be blanketed better (the tail) fixed
00:11:349 (5) - Remove whistle from tail, and patterns i create are too hard to follow x.x
00:12:080 (3) - remove whistle, to stay consistent? The music changes and I kinda get what you're going for but it sounds like a lot of whistles, maybe just remove one of them? fixed
00:16:653 (3,1) - Overlap is not exact, move the later slider to x101 y333 fixed orz didnt see that one
00:32:935 (3) - Maybe rotate by -10 degrees and reblanket to put some space between it and the slider two before it was on purpose (see how 00:32:203 (1,2,3) form a neat triangle? :>
00:40:618 (1) - Try moving to x488 y128? on purpose to be in between 00:40:251 (4) (which i shifted up a bit for perfect stack anyway )
00:42:812 (2) - Move to x133 y33 for perfect overlap (I guess move the whole pattern over by 1 so the triangles look better) fixed orz something else i missed
00:46:288 (1) - Try x62 y254 shifted a bit
00:52:507 (5) - Try x67 y51 changed for better flow :>
00:57:629 (3,4) - Better blanket orz had this one coming CHANGED
01:26:349 (1) - I think the hitsounds should be quieter than they were at the beginning here; even though there's additional singing and guitar I think quieter hitsounds would fit the hushed vocals. Then I think you can increase it at 01:32:202 (3) and then possibly again at 01:35:129 (3) fixed with even more gradual increases in audio
01:26:897 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Just saying that this is so nice for the music this was something i decided to keep from my original diff. before the remap because i liked it so much <3
01:32:751 (5,6) - I'm not a fan of the flow here. I don't really know what the best way to be to fix it is but what I did was rotate these two notes by 60 degrees and place them (with the same orientation) so the circle is at x179 y116 and forms a triangle. It's not that bad though so maybe not idk, it just felt a little awkward for me playing through. Remapped my own personal favorite way >.<
01:35:129 (3) - Move red point to x178 y111 for better blanket kept the anchor, but fixed the blanket

[Hard]

00:02:385 (4) - Move middle tick to x98 y298? meant to make a triangle spread with 00:02:934 (1)
00:02:934 (1,2) - Could make 2 blanket in 1 better fixed and remapped
00:08:239 (5,3) - These two aren't perfect copies of each other so they don't overlap perfectly fixed
00:10:800 (2) - Make this overlap with 3 from the next combo? fixed, but inb4 some mod complains that 00:11:714 (1,2,3,4) aren't straight anymore :<
00:20:861 (2) - Move to x327 y159 for perfect overlap fixed
00:25:252 (2) - Move to x211 y219 for perfect overlap fixed
00:32:935 (3,4) - Tail could be blanketed better fixed
00:35:495 (2) - Move to x168 y208 for perfect overlap fixed
01:05:129 (3) - Move to x226 y193 for perfect overlap fixed
01:56:349 (5,6) - Blanket better fixed SO MUCH CARELESSNESS orz

[Normal]

00:06:592 (5) - Remove whistle from tail? fixed
00:19:763 (2) - Move to x272 y118 for perfect overlap fixed
00:21:959 (1) - Move to x418 y237 for perfect overlap fixed
00:55:618 (1) - Make this overlap with 00:58:178 (1) maybe? They're pretty far apart in time but why not lol challenge accpeted

[Easy]

00:02:934 (2) - Move the second to last tick to x363 y218 and the last tick to x421 y295 and it blankets better fixed
00:24:153 (3,1) - Wrap 3 tighter around the 1 so the blanket is better maybe fixed
01:12:446 (2) - Move to x76 y172 for perfect overlap (or move the slider to x76 y171 is better to maintain the square I guess) fixed

Great nazi mod! Didnt even notice most of these

HanzeR

921 posts

Joined May 2012

HanzeR 2014-09-23T01:45:58+00:00

pooptartsonas wrote:
[HanzeR's Insane]

This is a lot different from how I map so I don't know if I'll be able to help much on making it flow well, I'll look for what I can though.

00:12:446 (1,2,3) - This is confusing, the two notes after the slider look like 1/4 notes. I read them as 1/4 even though I know the song. Maybe stack them or something? I don't think it's a problem once the rhythm starts going, ie I think 00:14:275 (5,6) is fine. ok
00:14:641 (1,4) - This blanket is pretty off fixed
00:19:031 (1) - ^ fixed
00:22:690 (3,1) - Not egregious but still off a bit fixed
00:53:605 (4,1) - ^ fixed
01:04:031 (4) - Move this note farther away from the slider? i think its fine
01:45:556 (1,2,1,2) - Highly reccommend not having the spacing get so high at the end of this stream, I had trouble playing it even when I knew it was coming and when I did FC it I usually got 100s due to notelocking I believe. reduced a bit
01:46:836 (1) - Move last point to x277 y127 for better blanket ok

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- Ruu -

- Ruu - 2014-09-28T01:24:01+00:00

mod it because love the song

Normal

• 00:36:593 (1) - end the slider at here? 00:37:324

HanzeR's Insane

• 01:13:178 (1,2,3,4) - make them like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2078908
• 01:28:544 (3) - move to x268 y168 looks better on it

Reunion

• 00:32:842 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - rip hue
• 00:32:842 (1,2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2078917 ... delete the 2nd slider, move the first slider on 00:32:934
• 00:33:300 (4) - remove the circle
• 00:33:666 (1) - remove the slider
• 00:32:934 (1,2,3) - make them like this?

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2078932
• 00:33:666 (3) - add finish

i'm sorry if my mod doesn't really helpful, still newbie at modding :'<
Good luck /o/

JeZag

518 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

JeZag 2014-09-28T02:39:02+00:00

Every mod is a chance for correction \o/

- Ruu - wrote:
Normal
• 00:36:593 (1) - end the slider at here? 00:37:324 On purpose, just like 00:42:447 (1)

Reunion
• 00:32:842 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - rip hue WTF I DONT REMEMBER DOING THIS fixed lol
stoopid errors
• 00:32:842 (1,2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2078917 ... delete the 2nd slider, move the first slider on 00:32:934
• 00:33:300 (4) - remove the circle
• 00:33:666 (1) - remove the slider
should all be fixed now (IDK how it happened >.<)
• 00:32:934 (1,2,3) - make them like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2078932 mapped to match vocaloids
• 00:33:666 (3) - add finish soft finish should be enough ^^

i'm sorry if my mod doesn't really helpful, still newbie at modding :'<
Good luck /o/

Thanks for the mod and your time

HanzeR

921 posts

Joined May 2012

HanzeR 2014-10-01T01:36:26+00:00

- Ruu - wrote:
mod it because love the song
HanzeR's Insane
• 01:13:178 (1,2,3,4) - make them like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2078908
• 01:28:544 (3) - move to x268 y168 looks better on it

no changes thx

JeZag

518 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

JeZag 2014-10-01T01:59:00+00:00

oops...

AppLoad

AppLoad 2014-10-01T13:53:36+00:00

Hi JeZag. Mod from my modding queue, thanks for mod) Go~

Hard
00:25:252 (2) - Maybe change the end of slider?
00:57:813 (2) - Move from under the slider.
01:06:410 (2,3) - I don't like this, especially 01:06:958 (3) this slider. Maybe made Reverse Selection and move this slider in another place or anything else?
01:12:446 (3,4) - These sliders located farther the preceding note. Maybe make them nearer?
02:05:130 (3) - ^

HanzeR's Insane
00:21:958 (1) - Maybe change the end of slider and make it near to next slider?
01:37:781 (1,2,3) - Maybe a bit compressed this moment? For example
01:48:849 (1) - Delete NC here, 01:49:763 (2) - Add here, and delete here 01:50:495 (1).

Reunion
00:30:464 (7) - This object comes out from stream or not?
00:40:251 (4) - Maybe make this slider so?
00:53:422 (4,5,6) - I think it will look better

It's all, nice song - nice map. Good Luck. Go to rank)

HanzeR

921 posts

Joined May 2012

HanzeR 2014-10-02T00:18:53+00:00

[AppLoad] wrote:
Hi JeZag. Mod from my modding queue, thanks for mod) Go~
HanzeR's Insane
00:21:958 (1) - Maybe change the end of slider and make it near to next slider?
01:37:781 (1,2,3) - Maybe a bit compressed this moment? For example
01:48:849 (1) - Delete NC here, 01:49:763 (2) - Add here, and delete here 01:50:495 (1).

no change thx

JeZag

518 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

JeZag 2014-10-02T00:49:32+00:00

[AppLoad] wrote:
Hard
00:25:252 (2) - Maybe change the end of slider? knew this was coming sooner or later x.x changed
00:57:813 (2) - Move from under the slider. fixed
01:06:410 (2,3) - I don't like this, especially 01:06:958 (3) this slider. Maybe made Reverse Selection and move this slider in another place or anything else? On puropse; no change
01:12:446 (3,4) - These sliders located farther the preceding note. Maybe make them nearer? This gap is the same as a gap before it; no change
02:05:130 (3) - ^ seems like a big gap but it is actually constant with the other sliders; no change

Reunion
00:30:464 (7) - This object comes out from stream or not? It is part of the stream, no change
00:40:251 (4) - Maybe make this slider so? On purpose (although it looks better like that, it doesnt quite play out so well)
00:53:422 (4,5,6) - I think it will look betterLooks better, so changed

It's all, nice song - nice map. Good Luck. Go to rank)

Thanks for le mod

tutuhaha

3,053 posts

Joined October 2010

tutuhaha 2014-10-03T02:18:20+00:00

[Reunion]
00:04:031 (5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2094883
00:09:885 (5) - ctrl+g
00:25:068 (5) - delete？
00:27:446 (2) - maybe move this to x416 y160
00:36:135 (x) - well, I hope you can find a way to add note on here
00:40:983 (2,3) - ctrl+g with BOTH note
00:41:349 (4) - and then move this one on x132 y132
00:48:208 (x) - miss rhythm I think
00:27:446 (2) - ...I am really sure this rhythm will work better than what you doing now
osu.ppy.sh/ss/2094891
00:56:166 (4,5) - I think the space was too large and doesn't make sense...I think...make be try the space shorter than 00:55:617 (1,2,3) -
01:06:775 (4) - ctrl+g
01:37:599 (x) - add note
01:37:781 (x) - ^ i hope you can do that
02:03:483 (3,4) - ctrl+g
02:08:788 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - I really like this part, you doing really good job about rhythm and composing <3
02:12:080 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - some part like this, I am not really sure about that. Actually, I think there has too many unnecessary rhythm on this diff, like this, I only can hear about 1/2 rhythm.........

[HanzeR's Insane]
02:25:251 (7) - ctrl+g
00:14:275 (5,6) - this will be make sense if it put in 00:14:641
00:21:227 (5) - move to x88 y168
00:31:836 (4) - well..I think should end the 00:32:111
00:37:324 (3) - ..end at 00:37:599 will be more funny I think xP
01:44:092 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - .....I hope you find enough test play for this part...and now I dont think this should happen on the easier Insane.........
01:56:349 (5) - move to x284 y236
02:02:934 (1) - use 1/4 rhythm please........
02:12:995 (6) - move to x224 y224?
02:17:568 (1,2) - use the same distance with 02:19:031 (1,2) -

[Hard]
HR+1
00:29:092 (x) - add rhythm?
00:45:373 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I like this part <3
01:08:056 (3) - end at 01:08:330
01:52:142 (4) - delete whistle
02:06:227 (1,2,3,4,5) - unnecessary note :<....
really good hard when I begin to play, but I felt werid begin with 01:51:227 (1) - ..........maybe just because I am a bad player...but it felt werid when you change the distance without change the slider Velocity

[Easy]
SliderMultiplier:0.700000005960464
just change it to 0.7

JeZag

518 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

JeZag 2014-10-03T22:16:16+00:00

tutuhaha wrote:
[Reunion]
00:04:031 (5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2094883 I want to keep consistent DS and (half assed) flow
00:09:885 (5) - ctrl+g ^^^
00:25:068 (5) - delete？Nah xD
00:27:446 (2) - maybe move this to x416 y160 I was thinking about flow into 00:27:813 (4) rather then flow out of 00:26:898 (5) ._.
00:36:135 (x) - well, I hope you can find a way to add note on here xD yes i did
00:40:983 (2,3) - ctrl+g with BOTH note I like this design.. changed
00:41:349 (4) - and then move this one on x132 y132
00:48:208 (x) - miss rhythm I think changed
00:27:446 (2) - ...I am really sure this rhythm will work better than what you doing now let a mapper overmap once in a while xD
osu.ppy.sh/ss/2094891
00:56:166 (4,5) - I think the space was too large and doesn't make sense...I think...make be try the space shorter than 00:55:617 (1,2,3) - I <3 my jumps x.x
01:06:775 (4) - ctrl+g nah, I like the flow personally
01:37:599 (x) - add note mhm fixed
01:37:781 (x) - ^ i hope you can do that going to map the whole entire next part x.x so going to include this too i guess
02:03:483 (3,4) - ctrl+g like it better... fixed
02:08:788 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - I really like this part, you doing really good job about rhythm and composing <3 thx <3
02:12:080 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - some part like this, I am not really sure about that. Actually, I think there has too many unnecessary rhythm on this diff, like this, I only can hear about 1/2 rhythm......... xD apparently I love overmapping

[Hard]
HR+1 meh fixed
00:29:092 (x) - add rhythm? changed
00:45:373 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I like this part <3 <3 me too
01:08:056 (3) - end at 01:08:330 fixed
01:52:142 (4) - delete whistle idk where you mean (two whistles on both ends)
02:06:227 (1,2,3,4,5) - unnecessary note :<.... xD I can delete if others find this annoying too
really good hard when I begin to play, but I felt werid begin with 01:51:227 (1) - ..........maybe just because I am a bad player...but it felt werid when you change the distance without change the slider Velocity too bad im too much of a lazy asse to remap with faster SV xD

[Easy]
SliderMultiplier:0.700000005960464
just change it to 0.7
I honestly dont know how it got there.... fixed

thx for the mod

I Want a Cuddle

I Want a Cuddle 2014-10-10T18:33:04+00:00

[Easy]
00:07:324 (1) - I'd move this to x:224 y:304
00:54:153 (1) - Modify this slider, make it curve.
01:14:641 (5) - Delete this note
01:14:732 (1) - Move this slider to 01:14:641 and adjust the end.
01:38:056 (5,1) - The same. Delete the note and move the slider.
01:57:080 (1) - Move this. It's out of the map
02:05:861 (1) - ^
02:08:787 (1) - ^
02:14:641 (5,1) - The same note and slider. Imo i don't like it

[Normal]
00:04:031 (1,2) - Improve here. Don't do the same.
00:12:812 - Here. i'd prefer this: http://prntscr.com/4uvjh5
00:27:629 - I feel like i need something here.
00:48:300 (2) - Move this to: x:256 y:304
00:57:812 - Make a new note here.
01:36:592 (1) - Move this. Out of the map.
01:59:275 - Make a new note here.

[Hard]
00:34:580 (3,2) - Overlapping looks bad here.
01:00:008 (1) - Out of the map
01:56:349 (5) - Out of the map
WOW. I really like this DIFF. *here's a star*

[HanzeR's Insane]
00:01:471 (1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Improve this whole part. It looks good but it's boring and repetitive.
00:16:105 (1) - Don't end the slider at blue tick. Sounds bad.
00:21:958 (1) - The same.
00:34:489 (3) - Delete this note.
00:35:861 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Make the stream with the same distance snapping.
00:50:769 (4) - Delete this note.
00:54:153 (1) - Meh, slider ending in a blue tick.
01:11:349 (5,6) - Modify it. Looks bad and it doesn't fit with the music imo.
01:37:507 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Overmapping and if you're gonna make a stream, use the same distance snapping.
01:39:153 (5) - Move this to x:256 y:116
From 01:44:092 to 01:45:830 - A lot of overmapping, try to do this with sliders. It'll improve the map alot.
01:50:769 (2) - Delete this.
01:59:458 (5) - Move this to x:64 y:272
02:04:306 (4) - Delete this.
02:08:422 (5) - Move this to x:344 y:192
02:20:495 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Dont be repetitive.

HanzeR

921 posts

Joined May 2012

HanzeR 2014-10-10T19:03:54+00:00

tutuhaha wrote:
[HanzeR's Insane]
02:25:251 (7) - ctrl+g nothx
00:14:275 (5,6) - this will be make sense if it put in 00:14:641 ?
00:21:227 (5) - move to x88 y168 ok
00:31:836 (4) - well..I think should end the 00:32:111 lol cool idea ... maybe
00:37:324 (3) - ..end at 00:37:599 will be more funny I think xP
01:44:092 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - .....I hope you find enough test play for this part...and now I dont think this should happen on the easier Insane......... i like it
01:56:349 (5) - move to x284 y236 fixed
02:02:934 (1) - use 1/4 rhythm please........ maybe
02:12:995 (6) - move to x224 y224? fixed
02:17:568 (1,2) - use the same distance with 02:19:031 (1,2) - fixed

I Want a Cuddle wrote:
[HanzeR's Insane]
00:01:471 (1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Improve this whole part. It looks good but it's boring and repetitive.
00:16:105 (1) - Don't end the slider at blue tick. Sounds bad.
00:21:958 (1) - The same.
00:34:489 (3) - Delete this note.
00:35:861 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Make the stream with the same distance snapping.
00:50:769 (4) - Delete this note.
00:54:153 (1) - Meh, slider ending in a blue tick.
01:11:349 (5,6) - Modify it. Looks bad and it doesn't fit with the music imo.
01:37:507 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Overmapping and if you're gonna make a stream, use the same distance snapping.
01:39:153 (5) - Move this to x:256 y:116
From 01:44:092 to 01:45:830 - A lot of overmapping, try to do this with sliders. It'll improve the map alot.
01:50:769 (2) - Delete this.
01:59:458 (5) - Move this to x:64 y:272
02:04:306 (4) - Delete this.
02:08:422 (5) - Move this to x:344 y:192
02:20:495 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Dont be repetitive.

no changes thx for mods

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JeZag

518 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

JeZag 2014-10-10T21:16:26+00:00

I Want a Cuddle wrote:
[Easy]
00:07:324 (1) - I'd move this to x:224 y:304 ruins the blanket x.x
00:54:153 (1) - Modify this slider, make it curve. it is curved right now; no change
01:14:641 (5) - Delete this note personally like a note before sliders due to no hit sound; no change
01:14:732 (1) - Move this slider to 01:14:641 and adjust the end. ^^^ no change
01:38:056 (5,1) - The same. Delete the note and move the slider. ^^^
01:57:080 (1) - Move this. It's out of the map fixed
02:05:861 (1) - ^ this shouldnt be off the map; test played it and its on the editor grid; no change
02:08:787 (1) - ^ ^^^
02:14:641 (5,1) - The same note and slider. Imo i don't like it again with no hitsounds on a spinner :<

[Normal]
00:04:031 (1,2) - Improve here. Don't do the same. meh... changed
00:12:812 - Here. i'd prefer this: http://prntscr.com/4uvjh5 i didnt map like that for the other piano parts earlier so not going to now (just fo consistency and note density)
00:27:629 - I feel like i need something here. don't wanna stress out normal diff. too much
00:48:300 (2) - Move this to: x:256 y:304 i see that you're suggesting symmetry, but i was mapping a triangle between 00:47:203 (2,1,2)
00:57:812 - Make a new note here. Following lyrics, not rhythm
01:36:592 (1) - Move this. Out of the map. fixed
01:59:275 - Make a new note here. Following lyrics, not really rhythm

[Hard]
00:34:580 (3,2) - Overlapping looks bad here. if its a hard diff, i'm assuming players can read it (besides, it does follow the rhythm and lyrics)
01:00:008 (1) - Out of the map fixed
01:56:349 (5) - Out of the map fixed
WOW. I really like this DIFF. *here's a star* thanks *o*

thx for the mod ^_^

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2014-10-12T18:13:19+00:00

mom help im becoming a tsundere

Overall:
00:12:446 - ex. . . excuse me?

Re. . . reunion?:
02:16:105 (1,2,3) - Like, I can sort of get why the other jumps exist, but these just don't flow very nicely compared to the last ones
02:17:568 (1,2,3) - ^

Actually really nice. The hitsound style isn't really my cup of tea, but like, it's consistent and creative where it needs to be, so whatever.

HAnz:
00:14:275 (5,6) - but why
01:26:349 (1) - this jump doesn't have to be as big as it is.
01:37:781 (1,2,3) - ??????????????????
01:44:092 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - OK THESE COMBOS LIKE you don't need all of that NC

Hard:
Ye

Normal:
combocolors??????

Easy:
COMBOCLOLROS???

yeah uh i could bubble this after you fix these

JeZag

518 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

JeZag 2014-10-12T20:12:13+00:00

CDFA wrote:
mom help im becoming a tsundere

Overall:
00:12:446 - ex. . . excuse me? 'Tis one of the things you get used to once you map the map ;w;

Re. . . reunion?:
02:16:105 (1,2,3) - Like, I can sort of get why the other jumps exist, but these just don't flow very nicely compared to the last ones seemed fine to me when I mapped it.... fixed anyhow
02:17:568 (1,2,3) - ^ fixed too

Actually really nice. The hitsound style isn't really my cup of tea, but like, it's consistent and creative where it needs to be, so whatever. I started this mapset not knowing how to hitsound, and this is how it turned out xD

HAnz:
00:14:275 (5,6) - but why
01:26:349 (1) - this jump doesn't have to be as big as it is.
01:37:781 (1,2,3) - ??????????????????
01:44:092 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - OK THESE COMBOS LIKE you don't need all of that NC

Hard:
Ye
This be my fav. diff

Normal:
combocolors?????? Originally I wanted to vary colors to represent intensity but it didn't work orz fixed

Easy:
COMBOCLOLROS??? fixed

yeah uh i could bubble this after you fix these

Thanks for the mod >w<
Just waiting on HanzeR now~

HanzeR

921 posts

Joined May 2012

HanzeR 2014-10-12T20:23:16+00:00

CDFA wrote:
HAnz:
00:14:275 (5,6) - but why the guitar note is repeated >_>
01:26:349 (1) - this jump doesn't have to be as big as it is. changed
01:37:781 (1,2,3) - ?????????????????? changed
01:44:092 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - OK THESE COMBOS LIKE you don't need all of that NC removed combos by 1/2

thxs mod

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Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2014-10-13T19:33:32+00:00

Forum PM me after you change HanzeR's stuff (Unless you already did. I copy-pasted HanzeR's diff into the .osu and it says "Update to Latest" so sorry if I'm wrong, lol

)

EDIT: Here we go

JeZag

518 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

JeZag 2014-10-14T21:26:29+00:00

Thanks for the bubble!
So close to rank (than I have ever been) >w<

zxhzxhz

70 posts

Joined November 2012

zxhzxhz 2014-10-27T01:22:35+00:00

nice map~~hope your map ranked earily

SPOILER

i played:

JeZag

518 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

JeZag 2014-10-27T01:29:35+00:00

zxhzxhz wrote:
nice map~~hope your map ranked earily
SPOILER
i played:

Any day now >w<
lool

Lin-Kun

88 posts

Joined June 2014

Lin-Kun 2014-11-01T17:30:28+00:00

Woop! a VERY late+short mod from my Q!

MOD!

Hard
00:13:544 (2) to 00:17:202 (3) - They're all in the same area O.o Move it around a bit?
01:03:483 (4,1) - Awkward Stack
01:30:739 (1,2) - idk why i don't like stacking the ends of sliders...
02:05:130 (3) - Doesn't this look a bit far away from 02:04:398 (1,2)?

Easy
One thing i notice is that... well... easy is 90% slider. Lots of sliders in an easy mode is normal, but this is ALOT
00:01:471 (1) - the curvy part at the end of this slider looks kinda... awkwardly small... (Same for the other sliders like this) I just think they show up too much
00:43:909 (3) - Maybe this can blanket both 00:42:446 (2,1)? (I tried, it's actually kinda hard... Kudosu if you do)
01:10:251 (3) - Maybe this can blanket slider before or hit circle after somehow
01:37:324 (4) - ctrl-g this and move (5)?

actually had a hard time finding flaws O.O i think your map is great

JeZag

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JeZag 2014-11-06T16:15:55+00:00

Lin-Kun wrote:
Woop! a VERY late+short mod from my Q!

MOD!
Hard
00:13:544 (2) to 00:17:202 (3) - They're all in the same area O.o Move it around a bit?
01:03:483 (4,1) - Awkward Stack
01:30:739 (1,2) - idk why i don't like stacking the ends of sliders...
02:05:130 (3) - Doesn't this look a bit far away from 02:04:398 (1,2)?

Easy
One thing i notice is that... well... easy is 90% slider. Lots of sliders in an easy mode is normal, but this is ALOT
00:01:471 (1) - the curvy part at the end of this slider looks kinda... awkwardly small... (Same for the other sliders like this) I just think they show up too much
00:43:909 (3) - Maybe this can blanket both 00:42:446 (2,1)? (I tried, it's actually kinda hard... Kudosu if you do)
01:10:251 (3) - Maybe this can blanket slider before or hit circle after somehow
01:37:324 (4) - ctrl-g this and move (5)?
actually had a hard time finding flaws O.O i think your map is great

Nothing here is game-breaking or experience-ruining enough to pop a bubble, but if another mod comes in that forces a bubble, pop, I will let you know the things I take into account! Thanks for the mod

pishifat

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pishifat 2014-11-29T01:09:45+00:00

mod coming soon

JeZag

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JeZag 2014-11-29T01:30:02+00:00

~~MY ANUS IS READY~~
take your time owo

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pishifat 2014-12-01T06:35:02+00:00

hi

asdf = minor/suggestion
asdf = come on do it
asdf = umm really ok

popping because of multiple unrankable issues and overall quality concerns

[general]

remove soft-sliderslide2.wav since it's not used in any difficulty
offset should be 1467 (-4)

[reunion]

a lot of your comboing in this diff makes little sense. i've already explained why in-game, which i think you understood and agreed with. do this stuff and everything will be fine (be sure to fix the colorhaxing afterwards):
SPOILER
1. 00:24:336 (1,4) - swap ncs
2. 00:24:336 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - uhm are your new combos supposed to be following vocal or musical phrasing? it seems like neither right now. immediately after this you apply newcombos on each downbeat so it would make sense to do so here too.
3. 00:36:593 (7,1) - swap ncs
4. 00:46:105 (4,1) - swap ncs
5. 00:47:203 (5,1) - swap ncs. 00:47:935 (3,4,1) - does this thing right
6. 00:56:531 (1,7) - swap ncs
7. 00:59:641 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - treat this section the same way you treated 01:01:105 (1,2,3,4,1) - . there's too much broken combo stuff to explain with words here so um screenshot fun
8. 01:02:569 (1,5) - swap ncs
9. 01:07:873 (1) - remove nc. if you want to keep this separated in order to not have a 10 object combo, swap the nc with 01:08:056 (3) - instead.
10. 01:11:714 (5,1) - swap ncs
11. 01:14:275 (1) - remove nc
12. 01:32:019 (1,3) - swap ncs
13. 01:33:483 (1,3) - swap ncs
14. 01:35:038 (1,2) - swap ncs
15. 01:38:056 (11,1) - swap ncssssss
16. 01:46:105 (9) - could nc here to keep the streamcomboconsistencystuff, although not necessary
17. 01:48:849 (3) - should nc here so the SV change is apparent
18. 01:51:043 (1,3) - swap ncs
19. 01:55:251 (1,5) - swap ncs
20. 01:55:983 (1,5) - swap ncs
21. 01:59:641 (1,5) - swap ncs
22. 02:00:373 (1,5) - swap ncs
23. 02:02:568 (1,5) - swap ncs
24. 02:11:349 (1,5) - swap ncs
25. 02:12:080 (1,5) - swap ncs
26. 02:12:812 (1,5) - swap ncs
27. 02:14:276 (1) - nc not necessary
28. 02:17:568 (5) - nc is necessary
29. 02:25:617 (7) - nc is recommended
you've got a few objects that touch the default skin's hp bar (which you usually wanna avoid ya know). here's a list of those. moving them slightly lower shouldn't be an issue since none are in inconvenient positions
SPOILER
1. 01:12:446 (1) - so close to user interface
2. 01:28:361 (4) - lower due to hp bar
3. 01:38:605 (1) - lower due to hp bar
4. 01:57:630 (3) - 2close2ui
5. 02:11:166 (4) - aye hp bar
6. 02:13:544 (6) - aye hp bar aye aye
and here's other stuff:
00:17:019 (4) - seems like this would work a lot better if 4 were moved higher and to the left. follows a much more circular path rather than the awkward linear thing you've got going on right now.
00:17:934 (2) - aesthetically speaking, this slider is pretty eh. could easily be better if it were angled less, like this for example.
01:09:703 (4,6) - 01:09:885 (5,1) - these overlaps would look a lot nicer if they weren't sort of slightly touching as they are now. dedication to the overlaps is better.
01:11:166 (4) - similar to the awkward linear movement pointed out at 00:17:019 (4) - , this would play a bit better if 4 were moved more to the right/up.
01:31:836 - there's a pretty unique sound in instrumentals here and strong vocal which could be accented a lot better with a clickable object rather than a sliderend. converting 01:31:653 (4) - into two circles would be good.
01:37:141 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - hitsound volume here should be higher. i know you're trying to do a volume increase thing, but starting at 25% seems too quiet for what's going on here. doing something like this would work fine (despite going higher than the target volume)
01:51:043 (1,2,3) - spacing inconsistency uh yea
01:51:215 - kiai is unsnapped. you can tell where it should be.
02:06:592 (3,4) - two finishes right after each other sounds pretty ugh. your hitsounds on the normal diff would work there.

just as a last note, you might want to re-draw some of your sliders like 01:51:227 (3) - 02:06:775 (4) - 01:59:092 (3) - etc so they use the newer slider algorithm. right now they're are super grossly bendy, which you can see if you try moving their middle anchors. if you feel like making your map perfect you could fix all of those up. most people don't really notice them so it's not too big of a deal tho. there's also some rhythms and patterns i'm not a huge fan of, but eh they're acceptable i guess

[hanzer]

hitsound volume could use some adjustment. the 15% intro is too low, 33% kiais are too low, and 20% mid-section is too low. the outro should use the same volume as the mid-section (or at least quieter than the kiai). 01:37:507 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - needs to be waaaaay louder
01:30:739 (4) - pretty sure there should be a new combo here since this is the only 2 measure combo

spicy

[hard]

you've got some pretty extreme jumps for a hard diff like... everywhere. it makes it hard to tell which positions are following distance snap and which are just jumps. the most extreme example of this would be 01:49:763 (1,2,3,4,1) - since they're literally spaced the same distance for 1/1 and 1/2 gaps. this same sort of broken spacing applies to everywhere in the difficulty since you've got jumps that extend past 3x distance snap at times. in most cases, it's common to keep distance snap for jumps on a hard at a max of maybe a bit higher than 2x, but more than that just makes for jumps harder than what the actual difficulty is. unfortunately, fixing this would require some remapping, so... sorry bout that :/ it just is too much.
00:01:471 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - whole section has a lot more object density than it really should. it's pretty much the same as the section starting at 00:13:178 (1) - yet the music is waaaaaaaaaaay different. you'll probably want to reconsider the rhythm you use at the beginning. i mean -- the "reunion" difficulty even has less movement than this, which is not right at all. you'll probably want to create less intense rhythms here.
same nc-swapping from "reunion" would apply here too. they should be recognizeable enough so i don't have to point them out specifically.
objects that should be lowered becuase they touch the hp bar:
SPOILER
1. 01:52:142 (4) -
2. 02:01:288 (4) -
3. 02:09:337 (3) -
01:02:202 (3,4) - pretty hardcore double here. delete whichever object doesn't have the hitsounds cuz uh i dont even need to say
01:13:910 (1) - umm i don't think this new combo is necessary
01:40:983 - doing that break extension thing to this downbeat would be cool.
02:06:592 (3,4) - see reunion
02:14:642 (5) - centering this with the spinner would be nice. its current slightly-offset position is pretty gross when compared to the perfectly centered spinner

well, other than the jumps being too extreme and those minor things, the map is... well alright. using the same slider velocity all the way through is pretty weird when the song is so dynamic, so i'd really say to lower it at places like the intro and 01:26:349 - , which really messes up a lot of what you've mapped unfortunately. the rhythms are fine for the most part, although you use a lot more 1/2 sliders than i'd really expect to be necessary in a hard diff for this song. hopefully some mods will help with that kind of stuff, and if not, i can look into it with you. the amount of stacks you use is also concerning, which some scrubby testplayers of mine were able to confirm by sucking balls at reading everything, so if you're feeling cheeky you can adjust some of those too. also just a general thing: you'll want to avoid over-curving these 1/2 beat objects like 00:18:666 (5) - . just looks better if not curved to that degree

[normal]

similar to the hard diff, there's some rhythm issues in the intro here. it's not actually as bad as the hard diff's stuff though, this is just a lot of issues with polarity. that issue can be found in the multiple 3/2 beat gaps here, which could easily be fixed by rethinking your rhythm to only include 1 beat and 1/2 beat gaps in the intro. something like this or this or anything in between would work, just try to avoid the 3/2 beat gaps.
00:06:592 (5) - well uh there's no sound in the music for this slider's head, which is really nonrepresntative of the music for obvious reasons.
00:24:886 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - something you'd really want to avoid in normal diffs is spamming 1/2 sliders. i know you're trying to cover the important beats, which is fine, but using more 1/2 gaps would be less uncomfortable to play. i don't want to make your map for you or anything, but just as an example, doing something like this covers the important beats in teh song without abusing 1/2 sliders like you currently are. you're really lacking in 1/2 gaps between objects, which could easily be used to make the section play a whole lot better. you're also missing some pretty important beats like 00:32:751 - 00:34:214 - which you had managed to map right before this, so #consistency yea. alsooooooo this same issue appears at the slower mid-section of the song, so i'd really suggest changing stuff up there too so there's less 1/2 sliders there.
00:35:861 (4) - using a rhythm to cover the drum roll into 1 would fit a lot nicer.
00:36:592 (1,2) - adding an object at 00:37:324 - could easily fix the polarity issue present here (explaination somewhere up there^). fits the music really well since there's a strong snare hit there
00:38:056 (3) - should be extended in the same way as 00:36:592 (1) - since it's the same exact thing in the song
00:42:446 (1,2) - you already know
00:43:910 (3) - yeah...
00:57:081 (1,2) - yeaheyeayeayea
00:58:178 (1,2) - combos should be swapped
00:58:544 (2,3) - yeayeayaeyaeyaeya
00:59:642 (1,2) - combos shoudl be swappedddd
01:03:483 (2) - uh maybe it's just me, but angling this so sharply doesn't really fit that well. there's nothing in the song worth doing that for, so just bending it less would be fine
01:05:313 (1) - multiple repeats on a 1/2 slider in lower difficulties is something you really don't want to do ever since it's impossible to read the second repeat. just use a different rhythm and it should be fine.
01:04:398 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - i have no idea what you're thinking with the new combos here. just putting them on the downbeats would be better than these weird places that aren't following musical or vocal prhasign
01:09:519 - add an object for the polaritieszzzzfsfsf.
01:10:983 - ^
01:08:422 (1,2) - swap ncs
01:09:885 (1,2) - ^
01:11:349 (1,2) - ^
01:14:733 (1) - really trivial thing, but putting a 1/2 space between object/spinner is better than a 1/4 space on normal/easy diffs for reading purposes. doesn't affect anything you're mapping so yea
01:26:349 (1,2) - look waht we have here. in case somehow it wasn't clear, you should avoid the 3/2 gap in ways explained eariler
01:34:763 (1) - the downbeat here would be a lot better suited to have a clickable object instead of a sliderend. also maybe pay attention to the comboing in that screenshot maybemaybe
01:38:147 (1) - spinner length should be the same as hard? or hard's should be the same as this, i dunno. just whatever you want that's consistent will work fine. if you make it the same as hard, be sure to include the break extension thing too
01:52:141 (3) - same thing as 01:05:313 (1) -
01:57:080 (1) - similar thing to 01:03:483 (2) -
01:59:092 (5,1) - ayyyyyyye
02:00:008 (2,1) - exactly overlapping a sliderbody is usually not great. variable placements are much more readable and less repetitive.
02:03:849 (3) - ok this one really can't just be me, it's angled way too sharply.
02:06:410 - you reallyyyyyyyyyyyy need to map this beat. just do it
02:14:733 (1) - same stupid thing mentioned earlier about 1/2 gap instead of 1/4

there's a couple more new combo spots which i didn't mention cuz i think you should know where i'd point them out by now. if not, i'll just point them out whenever i check the map again. there's some pretty blatant rhythm issues here though, which will require some adjustment. sorry. there's also some more catmull sliders like 01:08:788 (2) - which could be re-drawn to be less gross but nobody really seems to care about them anymore. also be sure to avoid those 3/2 gaps if possible

[easy]

00:21:226 (3) - ctrl+ging this object seems like it works a lot better. the weird motion between the tail of 2 and head of 3 is really unappealing when there's an effortless alternative available
00:21:958 (1,2) - not important at all, but rotating these counter-clockwise allows for some pretty easy stacking with 00:21:226 (3) - and 00:24:153 (3) -
00:24:885 (1,2,1,2,3) - rhythm here is uh... really awkward. the music is pretty much the same here as it is at 00:31:104 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - , which does it much better. replicating a rhythm like that would be good. 2 beat sliders like 00:31:104 (2) - are your friend in this section especially
00:25:982 (2) - the reverse on this is unsnapped by 2 milliseconds, which is... uh... bad. resnapping shouldn't be hard tho.
00:38:787 (1) - like 2 pixels from being offscreen. you should reallllllllly move this upwards
01:05:129 (3) - 01:59:275 (3) - uh...what's with the hitsounds on these? they're not in any other difficulty and they don't follow anything specifically in the music soooo kill them
01:14:732 (1) - the length of the spinner here is too short for an easy. extending the break or whatever it's called (note the nc) works to give the same effect. extending the spinner to go through another measure like 02:14:733 (1) - also works, but if you choose that, do it on all of your own difficulties too for #consistency. if hanzer doesn't really want to do it on his diff that's fine.
01:52:324 (3) - would be nice to not have 01:52:690 - as a slider end. rethinking the rhythm there to have the downbeat be a clickable object would be veeery good. anything like 02:02:934 (1,2,3,4) -
01:54:153 (1,2,3,1) - supernazi but these should all have equal spacing between sliderbodies.
02:02:202 (4) - better to make this into a 1/1 slider. will cover that note on next white tick + no more bad polarity, which is even more of an issue on an easy diff
02:14:733 (1) - same thing as normal. would apply to that other spinner too if you decide to keep it as a spinner

better than normal/hard at least. getting this diff to a ready-state shouldn't be as problematic

sorry to say, but i don't think that this map should have been bubbled. there's some pretty clear rhythmic issues in the lower difficulties that need adjustment along with some other minor things in all of jezag's diffs. anyway, i really think this should get a few more mods before pushing it forward again, specifically focusing on the non-hanzer difficulties. i'll try to get some quality modders to take a look at it as well, since it's also my responsibility to get this rebubbled, but you should try to get some too. i haven't looked at hitsounds closely, but will do when re-checking eventually

bye

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Shohei Ohtani 2014-12-01T06:46:54+00:00

whoops

Kinshara

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Kinshara 2014-12-01T08:08:04+00:00

Attack of the pishiBAT

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Kibbleru 2014-12-01T20:39:47+00:00

Kinshara wrote:
Attack of the pishiBAT

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guineaQ 2014-12-01T21:03:06+00:00

Kibbleru wrote:
Kinshara wrote:
Attack of the pishiBAT

JeZag

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JeZag 2014-12-01T23:06:32+00:00

RIP x.x
It'll take a while to respond to this mod QQ
thx for the pro mod and I'll have a more polished map ~~in a couple years~~ soon!

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FlobuFlobs 2014-12-02T00:46:42+00:00

Holy crap XD

JeZag

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JeZag 2014-12-02T00:53:41+00:00

2/6 done almost there TwT (Easy, Insane, GD)
Still have hard & normal to go

pishifat wrote:
hi

asdf = minor/suggestion
asdf = come on do it
asdf = umm really ok

popping because of multiple unrankable issues and overall quality concerns

[general]
remove soft-sliderslide2.wav since it's not used in any difficulty fixed
offset should be 1467 (-4)
fixed

[reunion]
a lot of your comboing in this diff makes little sense. i've already explained why in-game, which i think you understood and agreed with. do this stuff and everything will be fine (be sure to fix the colorhaxing afterwards):
SPOILER
00:24:336 (1,4) - swap ncs
00:24:336 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - uhm are your new combos supposed to be following vocal or musical phrasing? it seems like neither right now. immediately after this you apply newcombos on each downbeat so it would make sense to do so here too.
00:36:593 (7,1) - swap ncs
00:46:105 (4,1) - swap ncs
00:47:203 (5,1) - swap ncs. 00:47:935 (3,4,1) - does this thing right
00:56:531 (1,7) - swap ncs
00:59:641 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - treat this section the same way you treated 01:01:105 (1,2,3,4,1) - . there's too much broken combo stuff to explain with words here so um screenshot fun
01:02:569 (1,5) - swap ncs
01:07:873 (1) - remove nc. if you want to keep this separated in order to not have a 10 object combo, swap the nc with 01:08:056 (3) - instead.
01:11:714 (5,1) - swap ncs
01:14:275 (1) - remove nc
01:32:019 (1,3) - swap ncs
01:33:483 (1,3) - swap ncs
01:35:038 (1,2) - swap ncs
01:38:056 (11,1) - swap ncssssss
01:46:105 (9) - could nc here to keep the streamcomboconsistencystuff, although not necessary
01:48:849 (3) - should nc here so the SV change is apparent
01:51:043 (1,3) - swap ncs
01:55:251 (1,5) - swap ncs
01:55:983 (1,5) - swap ncs
01:59:641 (1,5) - swap ncs
02:00:373 (1,5) - swap ncs
02:02:568 (1,5) - swap ncs
02:11:349 (1,5) - swap ncs
02:12:080 (1,5) - swap ncs
02:12:812 (1,5) - swap ncs
02:14:276 (1) - nc not necessary
02:17:568 (5) - nc is necessary
02:25:617 (7) - nc is recommended
fixed all of this (i hope)
you've got a few objects that touch the default skin's hp bar (which you usually wanna avoid ya know). here's a list of those. moving them slightly lower shouldn't be an issue since none are in inconvenient positions
SPOILER
01:12:446 (1) - so close to user interface
01:28:361 (4) - lower due to hp bar
01:38:605 (1) - lower due to hp bar
01:57:630 (3) - 2close2ui
02:11:166 (4) - aye hp bar
02:13:544 (6) - aye hp bar aye aye
i think they are better than before -_-'
and here's other stuff:
00:17:019 (4) - seems like this would work a lot better if 4 were moved higher and to the left. follows a much more circular path rather than the awkward linear thing you've got going on right now. fixed
00:17:934 (2) - aesthetically speaking, this slider is pretty eh. could easily be better if it were angled less, like this for example. fixed
01:09:703 (4,6) - 01:09:885 (5,1) - these overlaps would look a lot nicer if they weren't sort of slightly touching as they are now. fixeddedication to the overlaps is better.
01:11:166 (4) - similar to the awkward linear movement pointed out at 00:17:019 (4) - , this would play a bit better if 4 were moved more fixedto the right/up.
01:31:836 - there's a pretty unique sound in instrumentals here and strong vocal which could be accented a lot better with a clickable object rather than a sliderend. converting 01:31:653 (4) - into two circles would be good. fixed
01:37:141 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - hitsound volume here should be higher. i know you're trying to do a volume increase thing, but starting at 25% seems too quiet for what's going on here. doing something like this would work fine (despite going higher than the target volume) fixed
01:51:043 (1,2,3) - spacing inconsistency uh yea fixed
01:51:215 - kiai is unsnapped. you can tell where it should be. LOL fixed
02:06:592 (3,4) - two finishes right after each other sounds pretty ugh. your hitsounds on the normal diff would work there.
fixed
just as a last note, you might want to re-draw some of your sliders like 01:51:227 (3) - 02:06:775 (4) - 01:59:092 (3) - etc so they use the newer slider algorithm. right now they're are super grossly bendy, which you can see if you try moving their middle anchors. if you feel like making your map perfect you could fix all of those up. most people don't really notice them so it's not too big of a deal tho. there's also some rhythms and patterns i'm not a huge fan of, but eh they're acceptable i guess to be fixed

[hanzer]
hitsound volume could use some adjustment. the 15% intro is too low, 33% kiais are too low, and 20% mid-section is too low. the outro should use the same volume as the mid-section (or at least quieter than the kiai). 01:37:507 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - needs to be waaaaay louder
01:30:739 (4) - pretty sure there should be a new combo here since this is the only 2 measure combo
spicy

UNTOUCHED BY JEZAG SO FAR
[hard]
you've got some pretty extreme jumps for a hard diff like... everywhere. it makes it hard to tell which positions are following distance snap and which are just jumps. the most extreme example of this would be 01:49:763 (1,2,3,4,1) - since they're literally spaced the same distance for 1/1 and 1/2 gaps. this same sort of broken spacing applies to everywhere in the difficulty since you've got jumps that extend past 3x distance snap at times. in most cases, it's common to keep distance snap for jumps on a hard at a max of maybe a bit higher than 2x, but more than that just makes for jumps harder than what the actual difficulty is. unfortunately, fixing this would require some remapping, so... sorry bout that :/ it just is too much.
00:01:471 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - whole section has a lot more object density than it really should. it's pretty much the same as the section starting at 00:13:178 (1) - yet the music is waaaaaaaaaaay different. you'll probably want to reconsider the rhythm you use at the beginning. i mean -- the "reunion" difficulty even has less movement than this, which is not right at all. you'll probably want to create less intense rhythms here.
same nc-swapping from "reunion" would apply here too. they should be recognizeable enough so i don't have to point them out specifically.
objects that should be lowered becuase they touch the hp bar:
SPOILER
01:52:142 (4) -
02:01:288 (4) -
02:09:337 (3) -
01:02:202 (3,4) - pretty hardcore double here. delete whichever object doesn't have the hitsounds cuz uh i dont even need to say GG fixed this tho
01:13:910 (1) - umm i don't think this new combo is necessary
01:40:983 - doing that break extension thing to this downbeat would be cool.
02:06:592 (3,4) - see reunion
02:14:642 (5) - centering this with the spinner would be nice. its current slightly-offset position is pretty gross when compared to the perfectly centered spinner
well, other than the jumps being too extreme and those minor things, the map is... well alright. using the same slider velocity all the way through is pretty weird when the song is so dynamic, so i'd really say to lower it at places like the intro and 01:26:349 - , which really messes up a lot of what you've mapped unfortunately. the rhythms are fine for the most part, although you use a lot more 1/2 sliders than i'd really expect to be necessary in a hard diff for this song. hopefully some mods will help with that kind of stuff, and if not, i can look into it with you. the amount of stacks you use is also concerning, which some scrubby testplayers of mine were able to confirm by sucking balls at reading everything, so if you're feeling cheeky you can adjust some of those too. also just a general thing: you'll want to avoid over-curving these 1/2 beat objects like 00:18:666 (5) - . just looks better if not curved to that degree

[normal]
similar to the hard diff, there's some rhythm issues in the intro here. it's not actually as bad as the hard diff's stuff though, this is just a lot of issues with polarity. that issue can be found in the multiple 3/2 beat gaps here, which could easily be fixed by rethinking your rhythm to only include 1 beat and 1/2 beat gaps in the intro. something like this or this or anything in between would work, just try to avoid the 3/2 beat gaps.
00:06:592 (5) - well uh there's no sound in the music for this slider's head, which is really nonrepresntative of the music for obvious reasons.
00:24:886 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - something you'd really want to avoid in normal diffs is spamming 1/2 sliders. i know you're trying to cover the important beats, which is fine, but using more 1/2 gaps would be less uncomfortable to play. i don't want to make your map for you or anything, but just as an example, doing something like this covers the important beats in teh song without abusing 1/2 sliders like you currently are. you're really lacking in 1/2 gaps between objects, which could easily be used to make the section play a whole lot better. you're also missing some pretty important beats like 00:32:751 - 00:34:214 - which you had managed to map right before this, so #consistency yea. alsooooooo this same issue appears at the slower mid-section of the song, so i'd really suggest changing stuff up there too so there's less 1/2 sliders there.
00:35:861 (4) - using a rhythm to cover the drum roll into 1 would fit a lot nicer.
00:36:592 (1,2) - adding an object at 00:37:324 - could easily fix the polarity issue present here (explaination somewhere up there^). fits the music really well since there's a strong snare hit there
00:38:056 (3) - should be extended in the same way as 00:36:592 (1) - since it's the same exact thing in the song
00:42:446 (1,2) - you already know
00:43:910 (3) - yeah...
00:57:081 (1,2) - yeaheyeayeayea
00:58:178 (1,2) - combos should be swapped
00:58:544 (2,3) - yeayeayaeyaeyaeya
00:59:642 (1,2) - combos shoudl be swappedddd
01:03:483 (2) - uh maybe it's just me, but angling this so sharply doesn't really fit that well. there's nothing in the song worth doing that for, so just bending it less would be fine
01:05:313 (1) - multiple repeats on a 1/2 slider in lower difficulties is something you really don't want to do ever since it's impossible to read the second repeat. just use a different rhythm and it should be fine.
01:04:398 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - i have no idea what you're thinking with the new combos here. just putting them on the downbeats would be better than these weird places that aren't following musical or vocal prhasign
01:09:519 - add an object for the polaritieszzzzfsfsf.
01:10:983 - ^
01:08:422 (1,2) - swap ncs
01:09:885 (1,2) - ^
01:11:349 (1,2) - ^
01:14:733 (1) - really trivial thing, but putting a 1/2 space between object/spinner is better than a 1/4 space on normal/easy diffs for reading purposes. doesn't affect anything you're mapping so yea
01:26:349 (1,2) - look waht we have here. in case somehow it wasn't clear, you should avoid the 3/2 gap in ways explained eariler
01:34:763 (1) - the downbeat here would be a lot better suited to have a clickable object instead of a sliderend. also maybe pay attention to the comboing in that screenshot maybemaybe
01:38:147 (1) - spinner length should be the same as hard? or hard's should be the same as this, i dunno. just whatever you want that's consistent will work fine. if you make it the same as hard, be sure to include the break extension thing too
01:52:141 (3) - same thing as 01:05:313 (1) -
01:57:080 (1) - similar thing to 01:03:483 (2) -
01:59:092 (5,1) - ayyyyyyye
02:00:008 (2,1) - exactly overlapping a sliderbody is usually not great. variable placements are much more readable and less repetitive.
02:03:849 (3) - ok this one really can't just be me, it's angled way too sharply.
02:06:410 - you reallyyyyyyyyyyyy need to map this beat. just do it
02:14:733 (1) - same stupid thing mentioned earlier about 1/2 gap instead of 1/4
there's a couple more new combo spots which i didn't mention cuz i think you should know where i'd point them out by now. if not, i'll just point them out whenever i check the map again. there's some pretty blatant rhythm issues here though, which will require some adjustment. sorry. there's also some more catmull sliders like 01:08:788 (2) - which could be re-drawn to be less gross but nobody really seems to care about them anymore. also be sure to avoid those 3/2 gaps if possible

[easy]
TL;DR Everything fixed lol
00:21:226 (3) - ctrl+ging this object seems like it works a lot better. the weird motion between the tail of 2 and head of 3 is really unappealing when there's an effortless alternative available
00:21:958 (1,2) - not important at all, but rotating these counter-clockwise allows for some pretty easy stacking with 00:21:226 (3) - and 00:24:153 (3) -
00:24:885 (1,2,1,2,3) - rhythm here is uh... really awkward. the music is pretty much the same here as it is at 00:31:104 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - , which does it much better. replicating a rhythm like that would be good. 2 beat sliders like 00:31:104 (2) - are your friend in this section especially can't nazi fix because rotating 00:21:954 (1,2) the right amount to make it nice triangles and stuff is off the screen to make 00:24:149 (3) stack and I'm sorta lazy and don't want to muddle things around... ._.
00:25:982 (2) - the reverse on this is unsnapped by 2 milliseconds, which is... uh... bad. resnapping shouldn't be hard tho.
00:38:787 (1) - like 2 pixels from being offscreen. you should reallllllllly move this upwards
01:05:129 (3) - 01:59:275 (3) - uh...what's with the hitsounds on these? they're not in any other difficulty and they don't follow anything specifically in the music soooo kill them
01:14:732 (1) - the length of the spinner here is too short for an easy. extending the break or whatever it's called (note the nc) works to give the same effect. extending the spinner to go through another measure like 02:14:733 (1) - also works, but if you choose that, do it on all of your own difficulties too for #consistency. if hanzer doesn't really want to do it on his diff that's fine.
01:52:324 (3) - would be nice to not have 01:52:690 - as a slider end. rethinking the rhythm there to have the downbeat be a clickable object would be veeery good. anything like 02:02:934 (1,2,3,4) -
01:54:153 (1,2,3,1) - supernazi but these should all have equal spacing between sliderbodies.
02:02:202 (4) - better to make this into a 1/1 slider. will cover that note on next white tick + no more bad polarity, which is even more of an issue on an easy diff
02:14:733 (1) - same thing as normal. would apply to that other spinner too if you decide to keep it as a spinner
better than normal/hard at least. getting this diff to a ready-state shouldn't be as problematic

sorry to say, but i don't think that this map should have been bubbled. there's some pretty clear rhythmic issues in the lower difficulties that need adjustment along with some other minor things in all of jezag's diffs. anyway, i really think this should get a few more mods before pushing it forward again, specifically focusing on the non-hanzer difficulties. i'll try to get some quality modders to take a look at it as well, since it's also my responsibility to get this rebubbled, but you should try to get some too. i haven't looked at hitsounds closely, but will do when re-checking eventually

bye

Last edited by JeZag 2014-12-02T01:49:17+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

HanzeR

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HanzeR 2014-12-02T01:36:12+00:00

All fixed

faito jezag~!

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248,260,121101,2,0,P|176:264|136:204,1,132,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,240,121466,6,0,L|60:136,1,88,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,36,121832,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,184,122015,1,4,3:0:0:0:
16,64,122198,1,6,2:0:0:0:
152,120,122381,1,2,2:0:0:0:
64,140,122564,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,100,122747,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,296,122930,6,0,P|104:308|48:240,1,176,4|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
264,256,123479,2,0,L|360:264,1,88,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,328,123845,2,0,P|396:332|460:280,1,176,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,196,124302,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,208,124393,6,0,L|492:116,1,88,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,32,124759,1,2,3:0:0:0:
388,160,124942,2,0,B|292:148|292:148|244:112,1,132,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,104,125308,2,0,P|204:124|192:172,1,88,2|8,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
240,220,125674,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,95,125857,6,0,L|131:276,1,176,4|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
204,320,126406,2,0,P|219:272|204:230,1,88,0|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,352,126771,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,344,126954,2,0,L|388:336,1,88,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,220,127320,2,0,P|452:212|404:280,1,132,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,328,127686,5,2,0:0:0:0:
508,128,127869,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,192,128052,1,4,0:0:0:0:
444,64,128235,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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144,96,128784,6,0,P|112:136|124:192,1,88,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,284,129149,1,2,3:0:0:0:
108,256,129332,2,0,L|12:272,1,88,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,304,129698,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,168,129881,1,2,3:0:0:0:
240,364,130064,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,216,130247,6,0,P|412:228|440:264,1,88,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,348,130613,1,2,3:0:0:0:
276,244,130796,2,0,L|308:52,1,176,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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324,88,131527,2,0,P|318:116|298:136,1,44,0|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
184,60,131710,6,0,P|116:56|80:116,1,132,4|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,104,132076,2,0,L|16:208,1,88,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,364,132442,1,4,0:0:0:0:
112,204,132625,1,0,0:0:0:0:
0,292,132808,1,2,0:0:0:0:
124,124,132991,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,308,133174,6,0,P|296:328|364:316,1,88,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,160,133540,2,0,P|111:167|67:220,1,88,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,104,133906,2,0,P|337:72|337:2,1,88,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,172,134271,2,0,P|228:212|284:196,1,132,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,88,134637,6,0,P|184:76|156:76,1,44,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,108,135003,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,92,135186,2,0,L|80:188,1,88,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,332,135735,2,0,L|161:277,1,44,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,208,136101,5,2,0:0:0:0:
68,280,136284,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,260,136466,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,260,136649,2,0,P|28:276|12:308,1,88,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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340,240,137747,1,2,0:0:0:0:
260,208,137930,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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268,224,138662,2,0,L|212:216,1,44,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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420,120,139210,1,2,0:0:0:0:
452,204,139393,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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432,100,139942,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,200,140125,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,52,140308,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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204,140,141223,2,0,P|208:112|220:96,1,44,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,112,141588,2,0,P|282:95|302:92,1,44,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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312,264,142686,2,0,P|307:291|296:307,1,44,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,145613,5,8,0:0:0:0:

Bara-

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Joined April 2013

Bara- 2014-12-04T06:59:46+00:00

My name is in the tags for the hitsounds right?
Maybe also add to description?
Also, if you changed the hitsounds completely, you may delete me from tags xD

JeZag

518 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

JeZag 2014-12-04T22:06:35+00:00

baraatje123 wrote:
My name is in the tags for the hitsounds right?
Maybe also add to description?
Also, if you changed the hitsounds completely, you may delete me from tags xD

Yah changed the hitsounds >.>
gonna change the tags later

FlobuFlobs

617 posts

Joined June 2011

FlobuFlobs 2014-12-05T00:54:00+00:00

well you asked for a testplay

ive tested reunion

Personaly, the spacing between the jumps is way too high, its a smooth calm song with low bpm and those jumps are like x2 ~ x3 spaced? i would decrease the spacing

its just over emphasizing stuff

also xD

00:10:247 (1,2,3) - whats up with this spacing ?

01:14:637 - 01:26:345 - you should probably map it like the beginning, it the exactly same part of the song
same with 02:15:003 -

Some slidershapes are unintuitiv like 02:07:686 (2) - 02:11:710 (1) - 02:12:442 (1) -

i wouldnt make a jump part out if 02:20:491 -

Some jump pattern are really hard to play cuz weird flow
00:46:832 (4,5,1) - triangle flow here then a flowbreak 00:47:199 (1,2) - here and the slider is even poiting to the wrong direction of the next objects
it makes you thing the next object after 00:47:381 (2) - is somewhere on the right side

Well, its late but i will testplay the other diff tommorow

JeZag

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Topic Starter

JeZag 2014-12-05T01:06:01+00:00

ty for the testplay ^_^
I can't tell that its over mapped and stuff because I know where everything is when i test play it ._.
Also I can't even tell when readability is bad because ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
xD

JeZag

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Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

JeZag 2014-12-05T01:30:46+00:00

JeZag wrote:
ty for the testplay ^_^
I can't tell that its over mapped and stuff because I know where everything is when i test play it ._.
Also I can't even tell when readability is bad because ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
xD

EDIT: some fixes

FlobuFlobs wrote:
well you asked for a testplay

ive tested reunion

Personaly, the spacing between the jumps is way too high, its a smooth calm song with low bpm and those jumps are like x2 ~ x3 spaced? i would decrease the spacing
I made spacing huge because I wanted ppl to feel excited just like I do when playing deemo with super fast approach rates owo

its just over emphasizing stuff

also xD

00:10:247 (1,2,3) - whats up with this spacing ? same as beginning spacing

01:14:637 - 01:26:345 - you should probably map it like the beginning, it the exactly same part of the song
same with 02:15:003 -
the problem with mapping slow like the beginning sorta kills the mood that its at in the beginning
besides, this part is relatively easier than the rest of the song, to recreate a more peaceful mood

Some slidershapes are unintuitiv like 02:07:686 (2) - 02:11:710 (1) - 02:12:442 (1) - changed lol

i wouldnt make a jump part out if 02:20:491 - i sorta did something about that but its still a bit of a jump; besides its supposed to mapt he piano

Some jump pattern are really hard to play cuz weird flow
00:46:832 (4,5,1) - triangle flow here then a flowbreak 00:47:199 (1,2) - here and the slider is even poiting to the wrong direction of the next objects
it makes you thing the next object after 00:47:381 (2) - is somewhere on the right side I'll think about this a bit; never thought like this before o.o

Well, its late but i will testplay the other diff tommorow

HanzeR

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HanzeR 2014-12-13T22:50:55+00:00

rebubble plz

pishifat

osu! Paragon

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pishifat 2014-12-13T23:03:38+00:00

jezag plz

JeZag

518 posts

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JeZag 2014-12-14T04:39:49+00:00

Working on the new diff T^T
and life is giving me no time to work on it
RIP maybe I can pick this up after January SAT
Back in pending ^__^ mostly because I can't wait a month

123alert

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123alert 2015-01-02T21:06:13+00:00

JeZag pls

Birdy

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Joined April 2011

Birdy 2015-01-06T02:23:56+00:00

By pishifat's recommendation.

[General]
02:14:729 (1) - (The four easiest diffs) Should start 1/4 later. It appears a tad too soon after the last hitobject.
01:38:143 (1) - Same.

[Easy]
00:13:174 (1) - End point x292 y92, middle point x328 y52 for better blanket.
00:30:369 (1) - I think the bar start should have its own hitobject, and not a sliderend.

Rhythm suggestion.

00:35:125 (3) - Should be a little higher for a better flow. x400 y88 works fine IMO, for example.
01:32:198 (1) - I feel like the slider track should not overlap the next slider's end.

[Normal]
00:26:162 (4) - The slider should not end on the beat which should be clickable.

Rhythm suggestion.

00:28:723 (3) - Extend by 1/2.
00:30:735 (1,2,3) - This rhythm again doesn't really work. You should use something similar to the 00:32:198 (4,5,6,7) here too.
00:54:149 (1,2,3) - Replace (2) with a 1/1 slider and put a circle where (3) currently ends. That would fit the vocals better (and I'm fairly sure you want to match the vocals more than the beat).
01:11:345 (2) - Should be moved 1/2 forward.
01:57:076 (1) - Would be better reversed. Adjusting the next objects might take time, but I'd say it's worth it.

[Intermediate]
00:17:198 (3,1) - The order should be reversed. The repeat slider is pushing the next object 1/2 late, which is why the reversed order should match the music way better.
00:24:515 (4) - Replace with a 1/2 slider and a circle. The new section at the current sliderend should start with a clickable hitobject.
00:56:710 (4) - Replace with circles in the start and the end. Again, the current sliderend is at a point where there's already a bar start.
01:01:101 (4) - Refer to the second thing mentioned (Replace with a 1/2 slider and a circle etc.).
01:02:564 (4) - ^
01:37:686 (3) - First, Ctrl+G. Then shorten by 1/2 and add a circle to the end. Normal has just fine finish there, not sure why did you put a long slider here in a supposedly tougher difficulty.
01:56:710 (4) - Refer to the second thing mentioned (Replace with a 1/2 slider and a circle etc.).
02:08:418 (4) - ^

[Hard]
00:35:857 (3,4,1) - The jump should be kept consistent. The distance between 3,4 is shorter than 4,1.
01:27:625 (2,3) - The order should be reversed. The 3,4 should be same as with 01:26:345 (1,2) to match the piano, this one doesn't really fit it.
02:05:492 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Think about these streams. They don't really fit a Hard difficulty, especially since there's really nothing in the music supporting this fast buttonsmashing.

[Hanzer's Insane]
Could use the same kind of combo colour system as other diffs (one scheme in choruses, one in verses).
00:34:485 (3) - This doesn't fit the pattern or the music?!?
01:44:088 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Probably a tad controversial stream because the music definitely isn't in 1/4. I don't know what to do with this section tbh. Needs some heavy pondering.

[Reunion]
01:43:906 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same stream again. I guess this should be discussed with someone from QAT maybe.
02:20:491 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I heavily dislike this, but that might be just my opinion. Back and forth jump patterns always work well, so maybe consider that. I like the overall flowyness of this difficulty, and here it's just ruined IMO.

JeZag

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JeZag 2015-01-06T03:31:53+00:00

Static Noise Bird wrote:
By pishifat's recommendation.

[General]
02:14:729 (1) - (The four easiest diffs) Should start 1/4 later. It appears a tad too soon after the last hitobject. Fixed
01:38:143 (1) - Same. Fixed
There was another slider in normal, intermediate, hard like that so i fixed that too

[Easy]
00:13:174 (1) - End point x292 y92, middle point x328 y52 for better blanket. Oh gosh that was a bad blanket
00:30:369 (1) - I think the bar start should have its own hitobject, and not a sliderend. Fixed (my own way)
Rhythm suggestion.
00:35:125 (3) - Should be a little higher for a better flow. x400 y88 works fine IMO, for example. Fixed
01:32:198 (1) - I feel like the slider track should not overlap the next slider's end. Fixed

[Normal]
00:26:162 (4) - The slider should not end on the beat which should be clickable. Fixed
Rhythm suggestion.
00:28:723 (3) - Extend by 1/2. Fixed
00:30:735 (1,2,3) - This rhythm again doesn't really work. You should use something similar to the 00:32:198 (4,5,6,7) here too. Fixed
00:54:149 (1,2,3) - Replace (2) with a 1/1 slider and put a circle where (3) currently ends. That would fit the vocals better (and I'm fairly sure you want to match the vocals more than the beat). Fixed
01:11:345 (2) - Should be moved 1/2 forward. Fixed
01:57:076 (1) - Would be better reversed. Adjusting the next objects might take time, but I'd say it's worth it. Fixed

[Intermediate]
00:17:198 (3,1) - The order should be reversed. The repeat slider is pushing the next object 1/2 late, which is why the reversed order should match the music way better. Fixed; plays tons better
00:24:515 (4) - Replace with a 1/2 slider and a circle. The new section at the current sliderend should start with a clickable hitobject. Fixed
00:56:710 (4) - Replace with circles in the start and the end. Again, the current sliderend is at a point where there's already a bar start. Fixed
01:01:101 (4) - Refer to the second thing mentioned (Replace with a 1/2 slider and a circle etc.). Fixed
01:02:564 (4) - ^ Fixed
01:37:686 (3) - First, Ctrl+G. Then shorten by 1/2 and add a circle to the end. Normal has just fine finish there, not sure why did you put a long slider here in a supposedly tougher difficulty. Fixed
01:56:710 (4) - Refer to the second thing mentioned (Replace with a 1/2 slider and a circle etc.). Fixed
02:08:418 (4) - ^ Fixed

[Hard]
00:35:857 (3,4,1) - The jump should be kept consistent. The distance between 3,4 is shorter than 4,1. fixed
01:27:625 (2,3) - The order should be reversed. The 3,4 should be same as with 01:26:345 (1,2) to match the piano, this one doesn't really fit it. fixed
02:05:492 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Think about these streams. They don't really fit a Hard difficulty, especially since there's really nothing in the music supporting this fast buttonsmashing. fixed

[Hanzer's Insane]
Could use the same kind of combo colour system as other diffs (one scheme in choruses, one in verses). Finished haxing
00:34:485 (3) - This doesn't fit the pattern or the music?!?
01:44:088 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Probably a tad controversial stream because the music definitely isn't in 1/4. I don't know what to do with this section tbh. Needs some heavy pondering.

[Reunion]
01:43:906 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same stream again. I guess this should be discussed with someone from QAT maybe.
02:20:491 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I heavily dislike this, but that might be just my opinion. Back and forth jump patterns always work well, so maybe consider that. I like the overall flowyness of this difficulty, and here it's just ruined IMO. fixed

Thanks for the mod x.x

Last edited by JeZag 2015-01-08T00:08:27+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Okoayu

Nomination Assessment Team

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Okoayu 2015-01-07T02:50:35+00:00

reminder thing stuff thing yes

Eni

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Eni 2015-01-08T05:22:53+00:00

Hi from my queue
testing http://waa.ai/46ff

[Easy]

00:27:808 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Check your New Combos here. It is a bit longer than the rest..
00:20:125 (2,1) - Avoid stacking here as the AR makes Slider 1's Approach Circle appear before the End of Slider 2. Alternatively, you can adjust the pattern of 00:21:954 (1,2,3) - so it flows instead of stacks. You should be able to maintain your Distance Snap without changing anything major via this method.

~
00:55:613 (2,1) - Slider 2 points directly at Slider 1, which may be confusing for the novice player. I did a quick check of your Normal and did not see many similar patterns featured there ( I only saw 00:53:052 (2,1) - ), so it does not make since to introduce this pattern to the player in Easy. Instead of blanketing the Slider 3 at 00:56:345 (3) -, you need to make it more playable by increasing the horizontal distance spacing between the objects so the player has a clear path from Slider 2 to Slider 3. You may need to adjust your next pattern to fit the new Distance Snap.
01:08:784 (2) - Most of the Approach Circle is cut off here, which should be avoided in the Easy difficulty. Try to raise the Slider a bit so the Approach Circle is more visible.
01:14:637 (1) - Instead of going back to the previous for a stack, try using x:204 y:24 instead for a continuous square motion.
01:30:735 (3,1) - Similar to mentioned above, you should not use such pattern in Easy because the next Slider is shown before the previous ends. In this case, Slider 1 shows before Slider 3's repeat occurs. I strongly recommend that you Ctrl+H the next pattern ( 01:31:832 (4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - ) and move as you see fit to flow with Slider 3 and make it more playable. An example is below.

~

[Normal]

00:01:467 - to 00:24:881 - Try using a bigger variety of sliders (e.g: add another vertex, add a red vertex, etc.)
00:20:126 (3,1) - Stack these objects. Adjust Slider 5 if needed.
00:45:370 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Remove the other two New Combos? I think consistency is more important than emphasis here.
01:13:174 (1) - Instead of "blanketing" or "stacking" this object, I suggest that you try something completely different: flow it!

~
02:00:004 (1,1) - Don't overlap like this in lower difficulties, it is confusing in which the player thinks they have already played the part.
02:03:845 (3) - The sharp curve here occurs too soon. You must make it more readable like e.g: 02:07:320 (1) -.

[Intermediate]

01:56:527 - Relatively bad overlap here with Slider 3 and Slider 2. I suggest that you alter the pattern to stack or change it to something else.
02:01:466 (1) - x:194 y:210 to stack with 02:02:564 (5) -, 02:04:210 (4) -.

~~okoratu will probably mod the higher difficulties~~ I looked through them and saw nothing in particular, good job.

Good overall, Good luck

HanzeR

921 posts

Joined May 2012

HanzeR 2015-01-08T07:48:20+00:00

@SNB -- found no issues other than combo colors (jezag fixed this) . I think it's fine to approximate the stream like that, it would be fcking hard as fck to play otherwise because i don't think the solo was timed to a metronome and wouldn't be fair to players at all.

JeZag

518 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

JeZag 2015-01-08T22:13:19+00:00

Project Railgun wrote:
Hi from my queue
testing http://waa.ai/46ff

[Easy]
00:27:808 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Check your New Combos here. It is a bit longer than the rest.. Oops... even my combos after that were screwy
00:20:125 (2,1) - Avoid stacking here as the AR makes Slider 1's Approach Circle appear before the End of Slider 2. Alternatively, you can adjust the pattern of 00:21:954 (1,2,3) - so it flows instead of stacks. You should be able to maintain your Distance Snap without changing anything major via this method. fixed

~
00:55:613 (2,1) - Slider 2 points directly at Slider 1, which may be confusing for the novice player. I did a quick check of your Normal and did not see many similar patterns featured there ( I only saw 00:53:052 (2,1) - ), so it does not make since to introduce this pattern to the player in Easy. Instead of blanketing the Slider 3 at 00:56:345 (3) -, you need to make it more playable by increasing the horizontal distance spacing between the objects so the player has a clear path from Slider 2 to Slider 3. You may need to adjust your next pattern to fit the new Distance Snap. fixed
01:08:784 (2) - Most of the Approach Circle is cut off here, which should be avoided in the Easy difficulty. Try to raise the Slider a bit so the Approach Circle is more visible. fixed
01:14:637 (1) - Instead of going back to the previous for a stack, try using x:204 y:24 instead for a continuous square motion. changed
01:30:735 (3,1) - Similar to mentioned above, you should not use such pattern in Easy because the next Slider is shown before the previous ends. In this case, Slider 1 shows before Slider 3's repeat occurs. I strongly recommend that you Ctrl+H the next pattern ( 01:31:832 (4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - ) and move as you see fit to flow with Slider 3 and make it more playable. An example is below. fixed

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[Normal]
00:01:467 - to 00:24:881 - Try using a bigger variety of sliders (e.g: add another vertex, add a red vertex, etc.) fixed
00:20:126 (3,1) - Stack these objects. Adjust Slider 5 if needed. fixed in the name of art
00:45:370 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Remove the other two New Combos? I think consistency is more important than emphasis here. fixed
01:13:174 (1) - Instead of "blanketing" or "stacking" this object, I suggest that you try something completely different: flow it! fixed

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02:00:004 (1,1) - Don't overlap like this in lower difficulties, it is confusing in which the player thinks they have already played the part. fixed
02:03:845 (3) - The sharp curve here occurs too soon. You must make it more readable like e.g: 02:07:320 (1) -. fixed

[Intermediate]
01:56:527 - Relatively bad overlap here with Slider 3 and Slider 2. I suggest that you alter the pattern to stack or change it to something else. fixed
02:01:466 (1) - x:194 y:210 to stack with 02:02:564 (5) -, 02:04:210 (4) -. fixed
~~okoratu will probably mod the higher difficulties~~ I looked through them and saw nothing in particular, good job.

Good overall, Good luck

Thanks for the mod >w<

Okoayu

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Okoayu 2015-01-11T01:53:51+00:00

over the course of 4 days several irc things happened, proof is in next post

JeZag

518 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

JeZag 2015-01-11T01:58:25+00:00

A Bunch of Logs

2015-01-05 19:48 Okoratu: good you're here
2015-01-05 19:48 Okoratu: so i can obtain information about what i actually do
2015-01-05 19:48 JeZag: *^*
2015-01-05 19:48 JeZag: irc mod?
2015-01-05 19:49 Okoratu: no rather
2015-01-05 19:49 Okoratu: which diff do i even
2015-01-05 19:49 Okoratu: the hard
2015-01-05 19:49 JeZag: :O
2015-01-05 19:49 Okoratu: is that one new
2015-01-05 19:49 Okoratu: or
2015-01-05 19:49 JeZag: redownload
2015-01-05 19:49 JeZag: i made a new diff entirely
2015-01-05 19:49 JeZag: "intermediate"
2015-01-05 19:49 Okoratu: i don't even have
2015-01-05 19:49 Okoratu: I called my retarded hard Advanced
2015-01-05 19:49 Okoratu: because it was 2 sophisticated to be a normal
2015-01-05 19:49 JeZag: yeah i have naming troubles >.<
2015-01-05 19:50 JeZag: that was one wacky update
2015-01-05 19:50 Okoratu: all i know
2015-01-05 19:50 Okoratu: is i own pishi some mods
2015-01-05 19:50 Okoratu: or something
2015-01-05 19:50 Okoratu: or used to
2015-01-05 19:50 Okoratu: so he summoned me to this mapset
2015-01-05 19:50 JeZag: i see >w< gotta thank him for that
2015-01-05 19:50 JeZag: this diff has no mods
2015-01-05 19:50 JeZag: so expect some rocky and shady flow
2015-01-05 19:50 JeZag: and rhythm
2015-01-05 19:51 Okoratu: can't you like get rid of edgy things before
2015-01-05 19:51 Okoratu: whatever
2015-01-05 19:51 Okoratu:

2015-01-05 19:51 JeZag: time?
2015-01-05 19:51 JeZag:

2015-01-05 19:52 Okoratu: i think pishi bashed your comboing
2015-01-05 19:52 Okoratu: i see this making sense now
2015-01-05 19:52 JeZag: xD i hope i learned from his super mod
2015-01-05 19:53 Okoratu: \:D/
2015-01-05 19:53 JeZag: is it alright?
2015-01-05 19:53 JeZag: :<
2015-01-05 19:53 Okoratu: [http://puu.sh/e7YKT/c1ebd32175.png \:D/]
2015-01-05 19:54 JeZag: -O-
2015-01-05 19:54 Okoratu: it's a guideline so you may break it
2015-01-05 19:54 Okoratu: it will look incredibly lazy though
2015-01-05 19:54 JeZag: idk i wanted to make the "extra" extra special
2015-01-05 19:54 Okoratu: one question
2015-01-05 19:55 JeZag: and also im super laZy
2015-01-05 19:55 JeZag: go ahead
2015-01-05 19:55 Okoratu: why is Hanzer's diff not color Haxed
2015-01-05 19:55 Okoratu: while your diffs seem to be
2015-01-05 19:55 JeZag: :<
2015-01-05 19:55 JeZag: idk i never bothered to ask
2015-01-05 19:55 JeZag: i can hax it for him tho
2015-01-05 19:55 Okoratu: ask him
2015-01-05 19:55 Okoratu: before
2015-01-05 19:55 JeZag: tbh im too afraid to touch other ppls gd
2015-01-05 19:55 Okoratu: ask him
2015-01-05 19:55 Okoratu: before
2015-01-05 19:55 JeZag: because ppl are like "i see that you updated my diff"
2015-01-05 19:55 Okoratu: what is so unclear
2015-01-05 19:55 Okoratu: i dunno
2015-01-05 19:56 JeZag: yeah imma just send a forum pm
2015-01-05 19:56 JeZag: or get him irc
2015-01-05 20:02 Okoratu: wait hanzer diff is colorhaxed
2015-01-05 20:02 JeZag: is it?
2015-01-05 20:02 JeZag: it seems random to me
2015-01-05 20:02 Okoratu: nvm
2015-01-05 20:02 Okoratu: i am retarded
2015-01-05 20:02 JeZag: jk that would be me
2015-01-05 20:02 JeZag: im always retarded
2015-01-05 20:03 Okoratu: was looking at reuninion because i thought hanzer would have highest diff
2015-01-05 20:03 JeZag: xD i wanted the personal pride
2015-01-05 20:03 JeZag: of beating his star difficulty
2015-01-05 20:03 JeZag: bsides dont want another "insane"
2015-01-05 20:05 Okoratu: dunno for the Intermediate from just playing it once i would say slightly higher ar but people are always mad at me for suggesting higher ar
2015-01-05 20:05 Okoratu: so maybe "that will be just fine"
2015-01-05 20:05 JeZag: xD
2015-01-05 20:06 JeZag: im afraid of making the normal to intermediate jump too big
2015-01-05 20:06 JeZag: i really need the oppinion of a new player
2015-01-05 20:07 JeZag: but imo the normal to intermediate AR jump would be too much it was any more
2015-01-05 20:07 Okoratu: wait a moment
2015-01-05 20:07 Okoratu: it's 6.5
2015-01-05 20:07 Okoratu: nvm should be fine
2015-01-05 20:07 Okoratu: lmao
2015-01-05 20:08 JeZag: kk
2015-01-05 20:08 Okoratu: [http://puu.sh/e80P1/421d90f992.png just remembering that i did this to my own advanced]
2015-01-05 20:08 JeZag: is it:
2015-01-05 20:08 JeZag: normal < advanced < hard
2015-01-05 20:08 Okoratu: ye
2015-01-05 20:09 JeZag: ok better do some renaming again
2015-01-05 20:09 JeZag: ಠ益ಠ
2015-01-05 20:09 Okoratu: at leat i thought it was
2015-01-05 20:09 Okoratu: dunno i have no ranked sets kappa
2015-01-05 20:10 JeZag: all the ranked sets with advanced
2015-01-05 20:10 JeZag: are BMS
2015-01-05 20:10 JeZag: and dont follow the regular names -_-'
2015-01-05 20:10 Okoratu: yes
2015-01-05 20:10 Okoratu: i just needed a name which would indicate it's harder than normal
2015-01-05 20:10 Okoratu: and i thought Advanced < Hard
2015-01-05 20:11 JeZag: i think advanced = hard in bms
2015-01-05 20:11 JeZag: but it seems like charles445 does normal < advanced < hard
2015-01-05 20:12 Okoratu: http://puu.sh/e81l5/6d8884f402.png
2015-01-05 20:12 Okoratu: did u find that too
2015-01-05 20:12 JeZag: https://osu.ppy.sh/b/103565
2015-01-05 20:12 JeZag: ^
2015-01-05 20:12 Okoratu: 2011
2015-01-05 20:12 JeZag: i kno
2015-01-05 20:12 JeZag:

2015-01-05 20:12 Okoratu: Maddy
2015-01-05 20:12 Okoratu: did Beginner Standard Advanced Hyper Another
2015-01-05 20:12 Okoratu: where Another supposedly is insane
2015-01-05 20:13 JeZag: i always though hyper was insane
2015-01-05 20:13 JeZag: w/e
2015-01-05 20:14 JeZag: would you suggest renaming "intermediate" to "advanced"?
2015-01-05 20:14 Okoratu: a spread must reflect the difficulty of each diff through their names and the hardest in the set can have a custom name
2015-01-05 20:14 Okoratu: using common sense i arrive at no you don't have to rename
2015-01-05 20:15 Okoratu: because Intermediate is clearly something harder than Normal
2015-01-05 20:15 JeZag: :>
2015-01-05 20:15 Okoratu: and hard is something harder than Intermediate
2015-01-05 20:15 JeZag: i hope i dont get language busted by some other BAT >o<
2015-01-05 20:15 Okoratu: language busted ?
2015-01-05 20:16 JeZag: idk maybe intermediate
2015-01-05 20:16 JeZag: is too harsh or lenient or something
2015-01-05 20:16 JeZag: or not official enough
2015-01-07 19:13 JeZag: can i has a mod?
2015-01-07 19:13 Okoratu: it's 1 am
2015-01-07 19:13 JeZag: >.<
2015-01-07 19:14 JeZag: later then
2015-01-07 20:15 Okoratu: a
2015-01-07 20:16 JeZag: ay
2015-01-07 20:19 Okoratu: is snb's hearing broken or something
2015-01-07 20:19 JeZag: maybe he (she?) has bad speakers
2015-01-07 20:20 Okoratu: 00:28:174 (2,3) -
2015-01-07 20:20 Okoratu: this annoyed me
2015-01-07 20:20 Okoratu: greatly
2015-01-07 20:20 Okoratu: like
2015-01-07 20:20 Okoratu: yea
2015-01-07 20:20 Okoratu: why
2015-01-07 20:20 JeZag: in intermediate?
2015-01-07 20:20 Okoratu: yes
2015-01-07 20:20 Okoratu: strong vocals on both sliderends
2015-01-07 20:20 Okoratu: just
2015-01-07 20:20 Okoratu: ugh
2015-01-07 20:20 JeZag: i was following the drum part
2015-01-07 20:21 Okoratu: vocals are much more obvious imo
2015-01-07 20:21 Okoratu: and the red tick thing is even held for 1/1
2015-01-07 20:21 JeZag: i guess i wanted to make it sorta different from the other diffs
2015-01-07 20:21 JeZag: bc sometimes things get boring
2015-01-07 20:22 Okoratu: k
2015-01-07 20:23 Okoratu: you will surely hear similar things from pishi check then
2015-01-07 20:23 Okoratu: lel
2015-01-07 20:23 JeZag: :<
2015-01-07 20:23 JeZag: only time can tell
2015-01-07 20:23 Okoratu: 00:45:918 (2) - having vocal on white tick here is also ugh
2015-01-07 20:24 JeZag: i can remap that part easy
2015-01-07 20:24 Okoratu: and you also have strong drum on white tick and
2015-01-07 20:24 Okoratu: yea
2015-01-07 20:26 Okoratu: also i really think you should be able to click 00:38:601 -
2015-01-07 20:26 Okoratu: similarly to 00:39:332 (3,1) -
2015-01-07 20:26 Okoratu: :/
2015-01-07 20:27 JeZag: might be hard to do 39:332 without making it seem "hard"
2015-01-07 20:27 JeZag: also i wanted 00:38:052 (1)
2015-01-07 20:27 JeZag: to reflect 00:36:588 (1) -
2015-01-07 20:28 Okoratu: oh it's symmetry
2015-01-07 20:28 Okoratu: hail symmetry
2015-01-07 20:28 Okoratu: x.x
2015-01-07 20:28 JeZag: yeh i tried ;-;
2015-01-07 20:28 Okoratu: you often times just use 1/1 patterns sometime to remove some of the pressure from the player or something
2015-01-07 20:29 Okoratu: i like that
2015-01-07 20:29 Okoratu: but on the other hand then 00:57:076 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - felt like they would do 1/2 things too much
2015-01-07 20:30 JeZag: oh brb in 10 mins x.x
2015-01-07 20:30 JeZag: i get what you mean tho
2015-01-07 20:30 Okoratu: dunno how much sense replacing 00:59:637 (4) - with just one circle makes
2015-01-07 20:30 Okoratu: and how important that one whistle is to you
2015-01-07 20:38 JeZag: ok im back ._.
2015-01-07 20:39 Okoratu: 02:13:906 (4,5) - i think rotating t hings here a bit to make edge in flow less harsh would be flowyier
2015-01-07 20:39 Okoratu: yes
2015-01-07 20:39 JeZag: i thought it would be importent for flow
2015-01-07 20:39 JeZag: but it certainly wont be missed if it were gone
2015-01-07 20:39 Okoratu: which one
2015-01-07 20:39 Okoratu: first or 2nd
2015-01-07 20:40 Okoratu: i suggested to take 00:59:637 (4) - our for a circle because
2015-01-07 20:40 JeZag: 0:59:637
2015-01-07 20:40 Okoratu: 01:05:857 (1,2) - is kind of similar in terms of vocal thing
2015-01-07 20:40 Okoratu: (and it's in middle)
2015-01-07 20:41 Okoratu: 01:00:552 (3,2) -

2015-01-07 20:41 JeZag: :O
2015-01-07 20:41 Okoratu: last thing is overlap thing
2015-01-07 20:41 Okoratu: yes
2015-01-07 20:41 Okoratu: xD
2015-01-07 20:42 Okoratu: also for a blanket only diff a lot of these are off
2015-01-07 20:42 JeZag: yeah i mapped this in a rush x.x
2015-01-07 20:42 JeZag: isnt as polished as other diffs
2015-01-07 20:42 Okoratu: like 00:22:503 (2,3) - are not even perfectly parallel
2015-01-07 20:42 Okoratu: why would kjdsghfal;
2015-01-07 20:42 JeZag: now they are

2015-01-07 20:43 Okoratu: a lot of other things are just slightly offfff you could be good with not having me recheck every damn detail of every blanket at nearly 3 am
2015-01-07 20:43 Okoratu: and just go over this on your own
2015-01-07 20:43 Okoratu: maybe
2015-01-07 20:43 Okoratu: idk
2015-01-07 20:43 JeZag: yeah
2015-01-07 20:43 JeZag: k
2015-01-07 20:43 JeZag: take your time

2015-01-07 20:43 JeZag: you can make a forum post
2015-01-07 20:43 Okoratu: sometimes i don't understand how you rhythm
2015-01-07 20:44 JeZag: sometimes i dont either
2015-01-07 20:44 JeZag: drunk mapping
2015-01-07 20:44 JeZag: also i tried to make this diff focus on other instruments/parts
2015-01-07 20:44 JeZag: not found in the other difficulties
2015-01-07 20:45 Okoratu: good for consistency with set
2015-01-07 20:45 Okoratu: i bet it looks like a gd by someone else
2015-01-07 20:45 JeZag: xD
2015-01-07 20:45 Okoratu: xD
2015-01-07 20:45 JeZag: "creativity"
2015-01-07 20:46 Okoratu: that's all i have for now before sleeping
2015-01-07 20:46 Okoratu: a forum post together with this log might appear randomly tomorrow
2015-01-07 20:46 JeZag: gnight
2015-01-07 20:50 Okoratu: so yeah
2015-01-07 20:50 Okoratu: gn
2015-01-09 20:21 JeZag: are you going to post the irc?
2015-01-09 20:21 Okoratu: nearly forgot about that
2015-01-09 20:21 Okoratu: lol
2015-01-09 20:21 JeZag: >w<
2015-01-09 20:22 JeZag: i need to give kudosu to something
2015-01-09 20:38 Okoratu: 00:01:467 (1) - is dis missing clap on head
2015-01-09 20:38 JeZag: lol
2015-01-09 20:38 JeZag: i updated that
2015-01-09 20:38 JeZag: or i will
2015-01-09 20:39 JeZag: here comes a new wave of updates
2015-01-09 20:40 JeZag: you dont need to mod right now
2015-01-09 20:40 JeZag: especially if you're tired
2015-01-09 20:40 JeZag:

2015-01-09 20:40 JeZag: make a forum post sometime
2015-01-09 20:40 Okoratu: my circumstances today are special
2015-01-09 20:40 Okoratu: today
2015-01-09 20:40 Okoratu: i napped from 3pm to 8pm
2015-01-09 20:40 Okoratu: now it's 3 am and i am awake like yes
2015-01-09 20:40 JeZag: i'm thankful to have your time ^_^
2015-01-09 20:43 Okoratu: 00:02:381 - missing a whistle
2015-01-09 20:43 Okoratu: or no
2015-01-09 20:43 Okoratu: wait
2015-01-09 20:43 Okoratu: i stupid nvm
2015-01-09 20:43 Okoratu: or not
2015-01-09 20:43 Okoratu: idk
2015-01-09 20:43 JeZag: i think i used some whistle in other diffs
2015-01-09 20:43 Okoratu: sometimes you do whistles on sliderends and others you don't
2015-01-09 20:43 JeZag: oh yeah
2015-01-09 20:43 JeZag: i alternated based on the piano
2015-01-09 20:43 Okoratu: like 00:09:332 (2) -
2015-01-09 20:44 Okoratu: 00:07:869 (3) -
2015-01-09 20:44 JeZag: should i be consistent?
2015-01-09 20:44 Okoratu: dunno
2015-01-09 20:44 JeZag: my rule was whistle when there is a slider after
2015-01-09 20:44 JeZag: because there are moving notes thus the whistle emphasis
2015-01-09 20:45 Okoratu: 00:02:015 (2) - and 00:04:942 (2) - only don't have whistle on end
2015-01-09 20:45 JeZag: yeah because 00:02:564 (3) - and 00:05:491 (3) - are single hit circles
2015-01-09 20:45 Okoratu: i thought hitsounding was about making sense with song and not empathising movement
2015-01-09 20:46 JeZag: i meant moving piano notes in the song x.x
2015-01-09 20:46 JeZag: but idk how music works
2015-01-09 20:46 Okoratu: i'm not the music expert either
2015-01-09 20:46 Okoratu: and when it comes to whistles
2015-01-09 20:46 JeZag: yeah adding a whistle doesn't change much so it wont hurt to add it
2015-01-09 20:46 Okoratu: i'm kinda clueless how to do those
2015-01-09 20:46 JeZag: i can sorta whistle
2015-01-09 20:46 Okoratu: like there are so many things you could place whistles on
2015-01-09 20:47 JeZag: but i hate the normal whistle hitsounds
2015-01-09 20:47 Okoratu: claps and finishes are easier to comprehend
2015-01-09 20:47 JeZag: ^
2015-01-09 20:47 JeZag: i just soft whistle to emphasize certain beats in the music
2015-01-09 20:47 JeZag: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/143491
2015-01-09 20:48 JeZag: this was actually my guide for making hitsounds for my map
2015-01-09 20:48 JeZag: a while ago
2015-01-09 20:48 JeZag: the person is real good at making the hitsounds go with the song
2015-01-09 20:48 Okoratu: might be good at hitsounding
2015-01-09 20:48 Okoratu: but
2015-01-09 20:48 Okoratu: mili in artist and tags
2015-01-09 20:48 Okoratu: good
2015-01-09 20:49 Okoratu: also t/234576/start=75
2015-01-09 20:49 Okoratu: this will probably reranked faster than your your set hits ranking
2015-01-09 20:49 JeZag: T-T
2015-01-09 20:49 Okoratu: so you would have to wait for a week until it leaves qualified
2015-01-09 20:50 JeZag: well thats bc the mania mapper is pro mapper
2015-01-09 20:50 JeZag: and im sucky
2015-01-09 20:50 Okoratu: the mapper of that mania set told me not to rank your set
2015-01-09 20:50 JeZag: :O
2015-01-09 20:50 Okoratu: as he saw me modding the intermediate diff
2015-01-09 20:50 JeZag: bc im bad or in the spirit of competition?
2015-01-09 20:51 Okoratu: because he would then have to wait for a week with his basically ready set
2015-01-09 20:51 Okoratu: and i dunno what piishihihih is gonna do
2015-01-09 20:51 JeZag: wait so two of the same song cant be in qualified
2015-01-09 20:51 JeZag: at once?
2015-01-09 20:51 Okoratu: or when he will take a look at it
2015-01-09 20:51 Okoratu: yes
2015-01-09 20:51 JeZag: i can wait a week
2015-01-09 20:51 Okoratu: even if they are the same game mode
2015-01-09 20:51 Okoratu: i thought so
2015-01-09 20:51 JeZag: *different?
2015-01-09 20:51 Okoratu: i mean different yes
2015-01-09 20:55 Okoratu: 00:18:113 (2) - i don't really like how this skips instuments btw
2015-01-09 20:55 Okoratu: but you constantly do that
2015-01-09 20:55 JeZag: so you prefer split to 1/2 and circle?
2015-01-09 20:56 Okoratu: i would prefer cuz guitar
2015-01-09 20:56 JeZag: i'd have to redo alot
2015-01-09 20:56 JeZag: 00:15:186 (2) -
2015-01-09 20:56 JeZag: 00:21:040 (2) -
2015-01-09 20:56 JeZag: ;-;
2015-01-09 20:56 Okoratu: 00:21:040 (2) -
2015-01-09 20:56 JeZag: i was mapping to the drums rather than guitar
2015-01-09 20:56 Okoratu: well current thing is consistent in skipping uitar
2015-01-09 20:56 Okoratu: guitar
2015-01-09 20:57 JeZag: for the guitar you can go to hard plssssssssss
2015-01-09 20:57 JeZag: ACTION hugs intermediate diff
2015-01-09 20:57 Okoratu: that's 4 sliders
2015-01-09 20:57 Okoratu: but whatsoever lol
2015-01-09 20:58 JeZag: if i emphasized guitar now
2015-01-09 20:58 Okoratu: i got to that thing because apparently 00:17:564 (1) - repat of this maps guitar right
2015-01-09 20:58 Okoratu: 00:14:637 (1) -
2015-01-09 20:58 JeZag: oh
2015-01-09 20:58 JeZag: that was following drums
2015-01-09 20:59 Okoratu: it's also following part of guitar
2015-01-09 20:59 JeZag: or maybe what i thought the drums would sound like x.x
2015-01-09 20:59 Okoratu: but i get the idea
2015-01-09 20:59 JeZag: there are parts later where i followed drums
2015-01-09 20:59 JeZag: like the place where it completely defied the vocal part
2015-01-09 20:59 JeZag: and pishi might not like
2015-01-09 21:01 Okoratu: any things happened to the part in first kiai where i thought that you could use a 1/1 break to remove some pressure from players
2015-01-09 21:01 JeZag: im still thinking about how to map drums
2015-01-09 21:02 Okoratu: 01:50:857 (4,2) - is that thing avoidable anyhow
2015-01-09 21:02 Okoratu: because that's what people will notice when playing
2015-01-09 21:03 Okoratu: 01:50:125 (2,2) - doesn't matter that much
2015-01-09 21:06 Okoratu: is argument
2015-01-09 21:06 Okoratu: sense
2015-01-09 21:07 Okoratu: 00:24:881 (5) - shouldn't this better be soft finish instead of drum claps
2015-01-09 21:08 Okoratu: 00:30:003 (2) - missing clap on head ?
2015-01-09 21:10 JeZag: sorry x.x
2015-01-09 21:11 JeZag: gtg but i copy pasted this chat
2015-01-09 21:11 JeZag: afk orz
2015-01-09 21:11 Okoratu: lolk
2015-01-10 20:26 Okoratu: efklgrdgj
2015-01-10 20:26 Okoratu: my keyboard died today
2015-01-10 20:26 JeZag: hey
2015-01-10 20:26 JeZag: owo
2015-01-10 20:27 Okoratu: rest in pepperoni
2015-01-10 20:27 JeZag: w8
2015-01-10 20:27 JeZag: let me update
2015-01-10 20:27 JeZag: jk
2015-01-10 20:27 JeZag: i already did
2015-01-10 20:27 Okoratu: im writing mouse only via windows screenwriter
2015-01-10 20:27 JeZag: OH
2015-01-10 20:27 Okoratu: k
2015-01-10 20:27 JeZag: like the one for access convenience?
2015-01-10 20:27 Okoratu: yes
2015-01-10 20:28 Okoratu: i click each key
2015-01-10 20:28 JeZag: >.>
2015-01-10 20:28 Okoratu: lol
2015-01-10 20:28 Okoratu: so
2015-01-10 20:28 JeZag: i dont feel your pain but i can sympatize
2015-01-10 20:28 Okoratu: what did you do
2015-01-10 20:28 JeZag: lol copy and paste will be a pain
2015-01-10 20:28 JeZag: some remapping
2015-01-10 20:28 Okoratu: to intermediate thing
2015-01-10 20:28 JeZag: i redid the part during kiai
2015-01-10 20:28 JeZag: that was sorta overmapped
2015-01-10 20:29 JeZag: idk if its any better now tho
2015-01-10 20:29 Okoratu: just saying
2015-01-10 20:29 Okoratu: that the stream mentioned by snb
2015-01-10 20:29 Okoratu: really does stupid non 1/4 stuff
2015-01-10 20:30 JeZag: like the music or the map
2015-01-10 20:30 Okoratu: music is stupidly offbeat
2015-01-10 20:30 JeZag: god damnit all
2015-01-10 20:31 JeZag: y the soloist gotta do dis
2015-01-10 20:31 JeZag: do i need to time it if there are still other instruments in tempo?
2015-01-10 20:34 Okoratu: would ask pishi
2015-01-10 20:34 Okoratu: if he is able to fix the np3
2015-01-10 20:34 Okoratu: mp3
2015-01-10 20:35 Okoratu: 00:30:003 (2) -
2015-01-10 20:36 Okoratu: still missing the clap
2015-01-10 20:36 Okoratu: ?
2015-01-10 20:36 JeZag: oh yeah
2015-01-10 20:36 JeZag: there was a reason
2015-01-10 20:36 JeZag: 00:29:271 (1) -
2015-01-10 20:36 JeZag: slider tail already has a whistle
2015-01-10 20:36 JeZag: i didnt want to spam it
2015-01-10 20:36 Okoratu: just
2015-01-10 20:36 Okoratu: listen
2015-01-10 20:36 Okoratu: to
2015-01-10 20:37 Okoratu: the sound
2015-01-10 20:37 Okoratu: there
2015-01-10 20:37 Okoratu: dafuq
2015-01-10 20:37 JeZag: * 00:29:271 (1) - has clap
2015-01-10 20:37 JeZag: you win
2015-01-10 20:37 JeZag: ._.
2015-01-10 20:38 Okoratu: even if last sliderend has a clap its so strssed
2015-01-10 20:38 JeZag: yeh
2015-01-10 20:42 Okoratu: i dunno what else to say about it
2015-01-10 20:44 Okoratu: it looks better than your hard
2015-01-10 20:44 JeZag: well hard was mapped when i just started
2015-01-10 20:44 JeZag: tbh i prefer to call them "different"
2015-01-10 20:45 JeZag: with no distinguishment about which is "better"
2015-01-10 20:45 Okoratu: i think the hard lacks a lot of hitsounds
2015-01-10 20:45 JeZag: i sorta got better at hitsounding over time too
2015-01-10 20:45 Okoratu: in certain parts
2015-01-10 20:45 JeZag: and i havent redone any hitsounds yet
2015-01-10 20:46 Okoratu: the intermediate is better in terms of looks
2015-01-10 20:46 JeZag: completely understandible
2015-01-10 20:50 Okoratu: do you have logs
2015-01-10 20:50 Okoratu: of these 4 conversations
2015-01-10 20:50 JeZag: yeah
2015-01-10 20:51 Okoratu: cuz in my current state its painful to post these
2015-01-10 20:51 JeZag: xD i can post them but can you comment so i can give kudosu?
2015-01-10 20:51 Okoratu: would it be k to post that i ircd
2015-01-10 20:52 Okoratu: and you post logs in next post
2015-01-10 20:52 JeZag: yeah
2015-01-10 20:53 JeZag: pretty sure you can edit it in after you regain functionality
2015-01-10 20:53 JeZag: but for now i can post the logs

Thanks for the hard work =w=

Last edited by JeZag 2015-01-12T17:31:59+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

HanzeR

921 posts

Joined May 2012

HanzeR 2015-01-11T06:03:20+00:00

bubble plz

pishifat

osu! Paragon

3,818 posts

Joined August 2013

pishifat 2015-01-11T06:36:40+00:00

ok

wait no

HanzeR

921 posts

Joined May 2012

HanzeR 2015-01-11T07:45:40+00:00

pishifat wrote:
ok

wait no

omg

mean ;_;

sheela

2,651 posts

Joined October 2011

sheela 2015-01-11T16:29:41+00:00

Hey JeZag!

Easy

00:41:710 (1,2) - The new combo should be switched to get the consistency.
01:30:735 (3) - I think putting the curve to down and blanketing with (2) may result a better flow for (3,4).
SPOILER

There's something wrong with my puush, so I can't upload a smaller image.
01:40:979 - Placing the break here seems to be weird, since I don't see a link with the music. You can just return the break to the object before it.
01:51:223 (1) - If you remove the node in the middle, it would improve a tiny bit the flow to (2). It'll also shoot to (2) instead of (3).

Pretty difficulty you got there!

Normal

00:05:857 (2) - This slider seems to sound pretty weird. You should follow the rhythm like the other sliders like 00:04:393 (1) . Since there's no beat on 00:06:588 -, I don't think an object should be on that beat.
00:11:710 (2) - I'd remove the repeat and extend to 00:12:442 and remove the circle on 00:12:808 (3) . I think the circle isn't need. It makes it awkward for me to hear it, and the beats stop on 00:12:442 .
00:23:784 (4) - The whistle should be a drum whistle, and the one on tail of 00:23:053 (3) should be removed. It sounds weird.
01:32:198 (1,2) - This rhythm sounds really weird to me. It doesn't follow the vocal in my opinion. Try putting the slider first then the circle after 1/2 a beat. It would sound better. This also goes for 01:33:662 (1,2) -, but the rhythm suggested isn't good. Maybe extend the slider so it could be a 3/1 slider?
01:49:759 (1,2) - Lower the volume for these notes. The beats in the music aren't loud, and the hitsounds are too loud for it.

Intermediate

00:14:637 (1,2) - The beat on 00:14:820 should be clickable with 00:15:369 . I think the correct rhythm would go like this: it hits the guitar notes.
SPOILER
This also goes for 00:20:491 (1,2,3) .
00:57:259 (2,3,4,5) - To me, it seems too much for this difficulty. You should do should like you did to 01:08:784 .
01:32:198 (1) - Curve it to the opposite direction, so the 2nd node can be on x:23 y:153. This will shoot to the next slider, instead so returning to the previous one, so it can make a minor improvement in the cursor's movement.
01:40:979 - Same suggestion in the Normal mod, and this goes through the mapset.
01:49:759 (1,2) - Add finishes to keep the consistency through the mapset.

Hard

00:07:137 (1) - The downbeat should have something to click on, so placing the tail won't be right. I suggest to start the slider on that beat, and a circle on 00:07:137 so it won't be awkward.
00:22:503 (2) - The tail is off-field, but I don't see the problem. Else, just in case, rotate the slider to avoid it.
00:36:223 (1,2,3,4,5) - It feels that this stream is more in the "Insane-type". What I meant is that the stream seems to be harder than Insane. Maybe remove the circle before the the slider? This also goes to 02:11:345 (1,2,3,4,5) .
01:08:052 (3,4) - The distance must be reduced in order to avoid the confusion.
01:51:223 (1) - After clicking (6), the process to (1) is uncomfortable due to the distance. I suggest that you add some distance between 01:50:857 (6,1) .

Reunion

00:11:345 (5) - The slider seems to be too far from the previous slider, compared to the others like 00:09:332 (4,5) . I suggest you move it to x:232 y:348 to get a better flow and get the blanket with the tail and (4).
00:19:943 (5,6) - I would switch the places for these circles for a better movement, but it's the fault of my skills, so you don't have to follow this.
01:25:979 (3,1) - Try adding space between them, so it could make a jump? It would emphasize the strong beat. Or, extend it to the blue tick to get that long note that starts from 01:25:979 .
01:43:906 - The stream isn't fitting with the music, due to multiple time signature. But, keep it there, and we'll see in the future.

I don't have anything to say for HanzeR's difficulty, it's perfect.

Anyways, your difficulties are really pretty! The pattern and such are, simple but beautiful. I'd like to give a star for this map! Good luck for the ranking process! Ask me if you have questions.

JeZag

518 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

JeZag 2015-01-12T03:47:32+00:00

sheela901 wrote:
Hey JeZag!
Easy
00:41:710 (1,2) - The new combo should be switched to get the consistency. Oops
01:30:735 (3) - I think putting the curve to down and blanketing with (2) may result a better flow for (3,4). Like it. Fixed
SPOILER

There's something wrong with my puush, so I can't upload a smaller image.
01:40:979 - Placing the break here seems to be weird, since I don't see a link with the music. You can just return the break to the object before it. fixed
01:51:223 (1) - If you remove the node in the middle, it would improve a tiny bit the flow to (2). It'll also shoot to (2) instead of (3). fixed
Pretty difficulty you got there! Thx >w<
Normal
00:05:857 (2) - This slider seems to sound pretty weird. You should follow the rhythm like the other sliders like 00:04:393 (1) . Since there's no beat on 00:06:588 -, I don't think an object should be on that beat. fixed. I was mapping to a previous mapping rhythm
00:11:710 (2) - I'd remove the repeat and extend to 00:12:442 and remove the circle on 00:12:808 (3) . I think the circle isn't need. It makes it awkward for me to hear it, and the beats stop on 00:12:442 . fixed. I hope polarity wont be a problem though
00:23:784 (4) - The whistle should be a drum whistle, and the one on tail of 00:23:053 (3) should be removed. It sounds weird. Agreed; Im no pro myself
01:32:198 (1,2) - This rhythm sounds really weird to me. It doesn't follow the vocal in my opinion. Try putting the slider first then the circle after 1/2 a beat. It would sound better. This also goes for 01:33:662 (1,2) -, but the rhythm suggested isn't good. Maybe extend the slider so it could be a 3/1 slider? I like your idea! Remapped
01:49:759 (1,2) - Lower the volume for these notes. The beats in the music aren't loud, and the hitsounds are too loud for it. Other diffs have it too but i changed a bit; RIP headphone users kappa
Intermediate
00:14:637 (1,2) - The beat on 00:14:820 should be clickable with 00:15:369 . I think the correct rhythm would go like this: it hits the guitar notes.
SPOILER
This part is mapped to the drums, not guitar (mostly because I didnt want players to get too comfortable :>
This also goes for 00:20:491 (1,2,3) . ^^^^
00:57:259 (2,3,4,5) - To me, it seems too much for this difficulty. You should do should like you did to 01:08:784 . I wanted certain emphasis here; besides I did the same thing later anyway :<
01:32:198 (1) - Curve it to the opposite direction, so the 2nd node can be on x:23 y:153. This will shoot to the next slider, instead so returning to the previous one, so it can make a minor improvement in the cursor's movement. Yeah yeah before i was going from 01:31:832 (3,1) instead of other way around
01:40:979 - Same suggestion in the Normal mod, and this goes through the mapset. ofc
01:49:759 (1,2) - Add finishes to keep the consistency through the mapset. fixed
Hard
00:07:137 (1) - The downbeat should have something to click on, so placing the tail won't be right. I suggest to start the slider on that beat, and a circle on 00:07:137 so it won't be awkward. I saw this happening eventually ._.
00:22:503 (2) - The tail is off-field, but I don't see the problem. Else, just in case, rotate the slider to avoid it. oops fixed
00:36:223 (1,2,3,4,5) - It feels that this stream is more in the "Insane-type". What I meant is that the stream seems to be harder than Insane. Maybe remove the circle before the the slider? This also goes to 02:11:345 (1,2,3,4,5) . I'll wait to see what others think
01:08:052 (3,4) - The distance must be reduced in order to avoid the confusion. nerfed .-.
01:51:223 (1) - After clicking (6), the process to (1) is uncomfortable due to the distance. I suggest that you add some distance between 01:50:857 (6,1) .so... its too easy? buffed
Reunion
00:11:345 (5) - The slider seems to be too far from the previous slider, compared to the others like 00:09:332 (4,5) . I suggest you move it to x:232 y:348 to get a better flow and get the blanket with the tail and (4). fixed my own way
00:19:943 (5,6) - I would switch the places for these circles for a better movement, but it's the fault of my skills, so you don't have to follow this. That looks harder and weirder o.O
01:25:979 (3,1) - Try adding space between them, so it could make a jump? It would emphasize the strong beat. Or, extend it to the blue tick to get that long note that starts from 01:25:979 . Liked the idea of extending it
01:43:906 - The stream isn't fitting with the music, due to multiple time signature. But, keep it there, and we'll see in the future. I agree (mostly as a lazy person)
I don't have anything to say for HanzeR's difficulty, it's perfect.

Anyways, your difficulties are really pretty! The pattern and such are, simple but beautiful. I'd like to give a star for this map! Good luck for the ranking process! Now if I were only this good on my first try x.x
Ask me if you have questions.

Thx for the mod

LordRaika

Elite Mapper

1,438 posts

Joined September 2013

LordRaika 2015-01-13T02:45:47+00:00

Hitsound Mod request from my Modding Queue

osuu~ ^^/
Here is my check as request :

Hitsound Mod AND....

[General Stuff first,]

Glad that i've checked them XD

01:43:906 - the electric guitar stream from this part, on 'Reunion" and "HanzeR's Insane"
the fact is they are not 1/4 , This map got disqualify once because i mapped full 1/4 there....
its actually starting from 1/2 to 1/6 to 1/8 to 1/6 and there was like twice of 1/8 , then back again.... which is absurb...
yeah as mapper our very first reason is to make it simple by making consistent 1/4 , but some people are jst being to nerd...
ask a STD BAT or QAT first before they disagree on this XD

[Hitsound]

I like how you guys can change sampleset manually into drum with the current timing of Soft...
but i got some tips to improve on what you've hitsound so far.... by simply add this :

Download and rename this as drum-hitwhistle.wav and This , rename as drum-hitnormal.wav, this will take immediate effect here : 00:13:540 - , 00:14:271 - and similar part ^^ , see if u like them....
For additional, u can add this by renaming into drum-hitfinish.wav and will automatically fix this part : 00:18:662 - and 00:18:845 - this is suggest having the drum-finish as well, because both are the same sound.... if u think finish is not enough, u can add whistle as well, assuming you add the custom hitsound above ^^
Also at "Reunion" , if u did follow and use the drum-hitnormal above ^ , u can add new timing here : 00:30:186 - till 00:30:735 - into D:C1 with 52% volume ^^b and hear the awesome and simple effect.
01:37:320 - same ^ , with D:C1

and at the first glance i really really didnt hear anything need to be mod further on hitsound at Reunion ^^
beside on HanzeR's Insane some chorus got soo many soft finish spam XD hehe... not really a problem thou....

GL for ranked ^^b
really doesnt find anything weird, because u guys really add the hitsound, i jst help with custom to enhance it~

JeZag

518 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

JeZag 2015-01-13T03:27:37+00:00

LordRaika wrote:
Hitsound Mod request from my Modding Queue

osuu~ ^^/
Here is my check as request :

Hitsound Mod AND....
[General Stuff first,]
Glad that i've checked them XD
01:43:906 - the electric guitar stream from this part, on 'Reunion" and "HanzeR's Insane"
the fact is they are not 1/4 , This map got disqualify once because i mapped full 1/4 there....
its actually starting from 1/2 to 1/6 to 1/8 to 1/6 and there was like twice of 1/8 , then back again.... which is absurb...
yeah as mapper our very first reason is to make it simple by making consistent 1/4 , but some people are jst being to nerd...
ask a STD BAT or QAT first before they disagree on this XD

I got the great PishiBat to edit in notes there... now they can't say it's not a straight stream >:D

[Hitsound]
I like how you guys can change sampleset manually into drum with the current timing of Soft...
but i got some tips to improve on what you've hitsound so far.... by simply add this :
Download and rename this as drum-hitwhistle.wav and This , rename as drum-hitnormal.wav, this will take immediate effect here : 00:13:540 - , 00:14:271 - and similar part ^^ , see if u like them....
For additional, u can add this by renaming into drum-hitfinish.wav and will automatically fix this part : 00:18:662 - and 00:18:845 - this is suggest having the drum-finish as well, because both are the same sound.... if u think finish is not enough, u can add whistle as well, assuming you add the custom hitsound above ^^
Also at "Reunion" , if u did follow and use the drum-hitnormal above ^ , u can add new timing here : 00:30:186 - till 00:30:735 - into D:C1 with 52% volume ^^b and hear the awesome and simple effect.
01:37:320 - same ^ , with D:C1

and at the first glance i really really didnt hear anything need to be mod further on hitsound at Reunion ^^
beside on HanzeR's Insane some chorus got soo many soft finish spam XD hehe... not really a problem thou....

GL for ranked ^^b
really doesnt find anything weird, because u guys really add the hitsound, i jst help with custom to enhance it~

~~Gonna edit later with actual edits hehe~~
Changes have been changed =w=

Pappy

1,020 posts

Joined August 2013

Pappy 2015-01-22T22:32:50+00:00

Uhh look plz

JeZag wrote:
LordRaika wrote:
Glad that i've checked them XD
01:43:906 - the electric guitar stream from this part, on 'Reunion" and "HanzeR's Insane"
the fact is they are not 1/4 , This map got disqualify once because i mapped full 1/4 there....
its actually starting from 1/2 to 1/6 to 1/8 to 1/6 and there was like twice of 1/8 , then back again.... which is absurb...
yeah as mapper our very first reason is to make it simple by making consistent 1/4 , but some people are jst being to nerd...
ask a STD BAT or QAT first before they disagree on this XD

I got the great PishiBat to edit in notes there... now they can't say it's not a straight stream >:D

But...Changing this stream into 1/4 won't move drums? This can be confusing on easier difficulties D: Or I am wrong?

Mod as requested!

General

My favourite song from Deemo ;w;
01:38:021 - Why this line is snapped on 1/12? D: To avoid some mod posts which says it's unsnapped snap it to 01:38:052
Why not to add 533 Audio Lead-In? It'll create 2 seconds before playing map (AiBat says that 2 seconds is minimum)
01:49:759 (1,2) - 00:49:759 (1,2) - Whistles instead of finishes? Sounds too noisy/

Easy

02:20:491 - Unused green line, remove it.
01:43:906 - ^
01:44:637 - ^
01:45:003 - ^
01:45:369 - ^
01:49:576 - ^
It's fine diff

Normal

02:20:491 - Unused green line, remove it.
01:43:906 - ^
01:44:637 - ^
01:45:003 - ^
01:45:369 - ^
01:49:576 - ^
00:19:027 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Strange rhytm used here, I suggest to place sliders at 1st and 3rd white ticks.
01:33:662 (3) - This will work better as normal curved slider.

Intermediate

This is my favourite diff from this mapset TwT Keep your works as this!
00:56:710 (4) - Stack at the tail of (1)?
02:20:491 - Unused green line, remove it.
01:43:906 - ^
01:44:637 - ^
01:45:003 - ^
01:45:369 - ^
01:49:576 - ^

Hard

02:07:321 (1,2) - RIP my combo eh, too far.
You used nice rhytm, nice usage of jumps, the only problem is asthetics - I can't help you with this. :<

HanzeR's Insane

Typical HanzeR, funny map. uh sorry but can't find problems D:

Reunion

00:20:126 (6,1) - You used strange rhytm here, try to do something like this, plays better \o/
00:24:332 (6,7,8) - Change it into stream please, I can't do 3x300 on this pattern >w<
00:32:199 (1,2) - What do you think about this rhytm? It can emphasize rhytm better.
00:31:649 (4,5) - (5) is too far from (4) for me, it's not a moment for doing high jump... D:

00:35:125 (5,6,7,8,9) - What do you think about this placement? Here's code if you want this:

uwu

233,281,35125,5,0,0:0:0:0:
106,240,35308,1,0,0:0:0:0:
233,64,35491,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,173,35674,1,0,0:0:0:0:
106,106,35857,1,0,0:0:0:0:

00:50:857 (5,6) - Uh there's no any beat at blue and red lines, consider delete second slider and replace first with circle, plays better.
00:53:235 (3,4,5,6,7) - Strange rhytm you used here, triplet definietly sounds better when starts at 00:53:601 so I suggest doing this.
01:45:734 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - Move all these notes to x:204|y:200 together for better stream shape
01:51:040 (7,8) - I suggest to remove it, leaving blank space plays and sounds better

02:01:466 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try this pattern, looks/plays better. :3

380,236,121466,53,0,0:0:0:0:
285,90,121649,1,0,0:0:0:0:
458,81,121832,1,0,0:0:0:0:
289,195,122015,37,0,0:0:0:0:
368,40,122198,1,0,0:0:0:0:
462,185,122381,1,0,0:0:0:0:

That's all, lovely mapset! o3o You should focus more on astetic in all diffs, Reunion is the only diff with other problems.

01:26:345 - Only I hear here "fuck" instead of "look"? xDD
This song have scary lirycs uhh ;_;

JeZag

518 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

JeZag 2015-01-23T03:13:43+00:00

Pappy wrote:
Uhh look plz
LordRaika wrote:
Glad that i've checked them XD
01:43:906 - the electric guitar stream from this part, on 'Reunion" and "HanzeR's Insane"
the fact is they are not 1/4 , This map got disqualify once because i mapped full 1/4 there....
its actually starting from 1/2 to 1/6 to 1/8 to 1/6 and there was like twice of 1/8 , then back again.... which is absurb...
yeah as mapper our very first reason is to make it simple by making consistent 1/4 , but some people are jst being to nerd...
ask a STD BAT or QAT first before they disagree on this XD

I got the great PishiBat to edit in notes there... now they can't say it's not a straight stream >:D
But...Changing this stream into 1/4 won't move drums? This can be confusing on easier difficulties D: Or I am wrong?
I don't get what you mean by "move drums" :<
The added drums are there so BATs can't complain, yet soft enough so it doesn't really take much out on the guitar solo for the diffs without a stream (easy normal intermediate and hard)

Mod as requested!

General
My favourite song from Deemo ;w; Mine too owo
01:38:021 - Why this line is snapped on 1/12? D: To avoid some mod posts which says it's unsnapped snap it to 01:38:052 Oops
Why not to add 533 Audio Lead-In? It'll create 2 seconds before playing map (AiBat says that 2 seconds is minimum) Fixed
01:49:759 (1,2) - 00:49:759 (1,2) - Whistles instead of finishes? Sounds too noisy/ I think it sounds nice but I'll ask around for second opinions too

Easy
02:20:491 - Unused green line, remove it.
01:43:906 - ^
01:44:637 - ^
01:45:003 - ^
01:45:369 - ^
01:49:576 - ^
It's fine diff
Oopsies most of these were from laziness after hitsound copy lol

Normal
02:20:491 - Unused green line, remove it.
01:43:906 - ^
01:44:637 - ^
01:45:003 - ^
01:45:369 - ^
01:49:576 - ^ All fixed
00:19:027 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Strange rhytm used here, I suggest to place sliders at 1st and 3rd white ticks. No change because this was meant to be like rhythm in 00:13:174 (1,2,3)
01:33:662 (3) - This will work better as normal curved slider. I personally can't tell nor do I care much so changed lel

Intermediate
This is my favourite diff from this mapset TwT Keep your works as this! It's my most recently mapped, so its bound to be better >w<
00:56:710 (4) - Stack at the tail of (1)? Personally I don't like stacking ever (at least immediately afterwards) because I think it's easier to read a bit further away. Feel free to correct me though
02:20:491 - Unused green line, remove it.
01:43:906 - ^
01:44:637 - ^
01:45:003 - ^
01:45:369 - ^
01:49:576 - ^ All fixed

Hard
02:07:321 (1,2) - RIP my combo eh, too far. ehehehe
You used nice rhytm, nice usage of jumps, the only problem is asthetics - I can't help you with this. :< I wish my map were beautiful then I wouldn't need so many mods x_x
Reunion
00:20:126 (6,1) - You used strange rhytm here, try to do something like this, plays better \o/ I use strange rhythms to spice ppls lives (anyway this is supposed to be the "extra")
00:24:332 (6,7,8) - Change it into stream please, I can't do 3x300 on this pattern >w< I'll wait to see how the "pros" react :3
00:32:199 (1,2) - What do you think about this rhytm? It can emphasize rhytm better. It emphasizes the rhythm, but I was emphasizing the lyrics x_x
00:31:649 (4,5) - (5) is too far from (4) for me, it's not a moment for doing high jump... D: There are even bigger jumps in this diff >:D So no nerf pl0x
I also think it looks rather big because 00:31:284 (3,4) is sorta anti-jump
00:35:125 (5,6,7,8,9) - What do you think about this placement? Good pattern, but rearranged to make flow better IMO
Here's code if you want this:
uwu
233,281,35125,5,0,0:0:0:0:
106,240,35308,1,0,0:0:0:0:
233,64,35491,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,173,35674,1,0,0:0:0:0:
106,106,35857,1,0,0:0:0:0:
00:50:857 (5,6) - Uh there's no any beat at blue and red lines, consider delete second slider and replace first with circle, plays better. But the extra diff challenge doh.... I'll see how the 9k pros react
00:53:235 (3,4,5,6,7) - Strange rhytm you used here, triplet definietly sounds better when starts at 00:53:601 so I suggest doing Seems legit so changed BUT no slider rather jumps to emphasize the drum part (and to make it harder :3)this.
01:45:734 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - Move all these notes to x:204|y:200 together for better stream shape LoL I originally wanted 01:45:369 (1,2,3,4,5) - to be a consistant curve then 01:45:734 (5,6,7,8,1) be same curve but smooth change works better so changed
01:51:040 (7,8) - I suggest to remove it, leaving blank space plays and sounds better sometimes silence is the best note, even in an extra so changed -w-
02:01:466 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try this pattern, looks/plays better. :3
380,236,121466,53,0,0:0:0:0:
285,90,121649,1,0,0:0:0:0:
458,81,121832,1,0,0:0:0:0:
289,195,122015,37,0,0:0:0:0:
368,40,122198,1,0,0:0:0:0:
462,185,122381,1,0,0:0:0:0:
idk because I wanted to emphasize 02:01:466 (1,4) hence bigger jumps but I'll keep this in mind!
That's all, lovely mapset! o3o You should focus more on astetic in all diffs, Reunion is the only diff with other problems.

01:26:345 - Only I hear here "fuck" instead of "look"? xDD Gratz now whenever I get here that's all I can hear too TwT
This song have scary lirycs uhh ;_;

Thanks for the mod! I wish i were artzy though OTZ

Nathan

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Nathan 2015-01-25T17:35:18+00:00

[HanZer's Insane]

00:21:954 (1,2) - Spacing is a bit weird compared to 00:16:101 (1,2) and 00:19:027 (1,2)
00:38:784 (3,4) - Move this somewhere else as a pair so 00:38:784 (3) isn't covered by 00:38:052 (1)
00:42:076 (2) - Bump this up a tiny bit with 00:41:710 (1) so it looks neater without the tiny overlap onto 00:42:442 (3)
01:42:259 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - fun pattern owo

[Reunion]

00:01:467 (1,2,3,4) - This sequence is repeated 8 times throughout the start, it's fine but some reverse sliders or something like that would be nice for variety ._.
00:24:881 (1) - Use finish instead?
01:08:418 (3) - Why not add finish on the head if you used it on 00:24:515 (7)
01:56:893 (3) - Add clap?
02:08:601 (5) - ^

You can have a star since I didn't find much I guess :c

JeZag

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JeZag 2015-01-25T23:25:04+00:00

sukiNathan wrote:
[Reunion]
00:01:467 (1,2,3,4) - This sequence is repeated 8 times throughout the start, it's fine but some reverse sliders or something like that would be nice for variety
There'se tons more variety later and this is the "extra" diff so I wanted to model some of the consistency found in Deemo
._.
00:24:881 (1) - Use finish instead? In the music, there is a cymbals crash, so I put a finish at 00:24:515 and 00:24:881 (don't wanna finish spam this early on
01:08:418 (3) - Why not add finish on the head if you used it on 00:24:515 (7) no cymbals crash here so nah
01:56:893 (3) - Add clap? clap doesn't fit as well as the whistle hitsound IMO
02:08:601 (5) - ^ ^
You can have a star since I didn't find much I guess :c

Thanks for the mod! owo

cytusmusic

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cytusmusic 2015-01-27T02:56:47+00:00

i don't know how to mod just a quick question uwu

[reunion]

01:43:906 -- this stream is hard to play, the electric guitar solo doesn't match up well with it and the background rhythm isn't really audible.
01:49:942 (1,2) -- why are these two notes here? they don't seem to have any place in the song.

HanzeR

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HanzeR 2015-01-27T04:25:34+00:00

sukiNathan wrote:
[HanZer's Insane]
00:21:954 (1,2) - Spacing is a bit weird compared to 00:16:101 (1,2) and 00:19:027 (1,2)
00:38:784 (3,4) - Move this somewhere else as a pair so 00:38:784 (3) isn't covered by 00:38:052 (1)
00:42:076 (2) - Bump this up a tiny bit with 00:41:710 (1) so it looks neater without the tiny overlap onto 00:42:442 (3)
01:42:259 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - fun pattern owo
[Reunion]
00:01:467 (1,2,3,4) - This sequence is repeated 8 times throughout the start, it's fine but some reverse sliders or something like that would be nice for variety ._.
00:24:881 (1) - Use finish instead?
01:08:418 (3) - Why not add finish on the head if you used it on 00:24:515 (7)
01:56:893 (3) - Add clap?
02:08:601 (5) - ^
You can have a star since I didn't find much I guess :c

Didn't make any change ty

Pappy

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Pappy 2015-01-27T15:14:25+00:00

Oh also I saw some tags that you can use.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

The company that made Deemo is named Rayark games, not Rayark. So you should add games.
The song comes from Collection 1: Deemo selection. So suggested tags: collection, collection_1 and selection.
Rayark Games made also Cytus, older brother of Deemo. Why not add Cytus in tags?

Why Winek in tags? He made any diff?

EDIT: Forgot to say no kds it. ;;

Last edited by Pappy 2015-01-27T16:08:58+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

JeZag

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JeZag 2015-01-27T15:55:35+00:00

Pappy wrote:
Oh also I saw some tags that you can use.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
The company that made Deemo is named Rayark games, not Rayark. So you should add games.
The song comes from Collection 1: Deemo selection. So suggested tags: collection, collection_1 and selection.
Rayark Games made also Cytus, older brother of Deemo. Why not add Cytus in tags?
Why Winek in tags? He made any diff?

Check the credits

cytusmusic wrote:
i don't know how to mod just a quick question uwu

[reunion]

01:43:906 -- this stream is hard to play, the electric guitar solo doesn't match up well with it and the background rhythm isn't really audible.
If there were another, more enjoyable way to map this, I would definitely do it but for now, there seems to be a guitar stream here and so I mapped it :< [btw I kno that 01:43:906 (1) might be an awk start to the stream, but it fits the guitar, so tap the slider with the less dominant key first then stream or whatever]
01:49:942 (1,2) -- why are these two notes here? they don't seem to have any place in the song.
I'm guessing that you're referring to 01:49:759 (1,2) instead of 01:51:223 (1,2) (which happens to be where your link is redirected ) Anyway, there are two cymbal clashes in the background, not the music, that I'm mapping

Gratz on your first mod -w-

pishifat

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pishifat 2015-02-23T11:24:25+00:00

3 years later and the offbeat stream at 01:43:906 (1) - is now rankable

JeZag wrote:
so I guess I'm finally ready for a re-mod =o=

[general]

letterboxing during breaks just cuts off bg girl's face so maybe don't do that
winek being an inspiration isn't really a reason to include him in the tags. you don't see hanzer putting fanzhen in all his maps' tags right yea no
preview point unsnapped :/
um the "wav" folder in your beatmap folder... do something about it. right now the hitsounds inside aren't used cuz they're in that folder. if you do plan on using them, they blend so much with the song that they provide no feedback at all, so that wouldn't really work. deleting the drum-hitnormal file and allowing the default drum hitnormal to be used would fix that
kiai in reunion/easy are different from normal/intermediate/hard. needs to be the same for all diffs except the gd
should be using the standard silent hitsound instead of those weird ones you're using now. get it here
OD on normal/intermediate/hard should be increased by 1. reunion could also be 8

[easy]

00:02:930 (2,1) - 00:17:198 (2,3) - 01:10:247 (3,1) - 02:13:174 (3,4) - spacing inconsistencies
01:08:052 (1,2) - probably should swap new combos. it's acceptable at like 00:41:710 (1,2) - since vocal phrases are separated on the place you have a new combo, but in this instance that's not a thing. also it's the same as 02:08:052 (4,1) - musically (despite pitch whatever) and combos are good there so
01:14:637 (1) - don't need the new combo since you don't include one on 02:14:637 (5) - 01:38:052 (5) - which are the same sort of thing. other diffs don't include new combos on this either. dunno why spinner should indicate new combo or not
01:38:235 (1) - 5% volume on this spinner makes no sense. here music is continuing and you've just got silent spinner on a loud part. leaving it at 40% volume is k
01:51:223 (1,2,3,4) - spacing is so broken damn
02:14:820 (1) - would make sense to increase volume to like 20% and have a whistle. piano sound yes

[normal]

00:16:102 (1,2) - 01:57:991 (3,1) - spacing inconsistencies
00:39:881 (2,4) - stackign of these = super confusing. just anything so they aren't stacked would work
01:14:820 (1) - 01:38:235 (1) - 02:14:820 (1) - same as easy. silent spinner stuff pointless. also whistle on the first and last ones piano
01:06:223 (2,3,1) - arrangement of stuff here is also unnecessarily confusing. like anything where things aren't spaced so they're almost on top of each other is fine
01:32:198 (1,2,3) - adjusting your spacing to look like it did with the regular slider velocity would just work better (that would be 1.4x spacing) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2802702

[intermediate]

spinners
01:01:466 (1,2) - 01:03:479 (3,4) - spacing inconsistencies
00:58:906 - seems really weird to not cover this. it's like reflective with 00:57:442 - which you have covered. second kiai also covers both. i dunno what you'd do about a pattern there but something should happen. a possibility
01:26:339 - should probably snap the unsnappedline
01:50:857 (4,1) - stacking is kind of not great when you're breaking spacing like this :/ would be better to just ignore the stack completely since it's not gonna be noticeable ingame and use 1.5x spacing like the other 1/1 gaps before this
01:58:174 (4) - rhythm here just seems weird cuz of the passive end. something like this would work. removing the reverse on 4, moving 1 back by 1/2 and stacking a circle on 2.

[hard]so i said before that there were a lot of jump related issues before. you made a diff so the gap between normal and hard isn't huge, but that doesnt change how unintuitive/inappropriate some jumps are still. i'll be posting what i think about certain jumps (like increase/decrease spacing) as well as screenshots of possible changes. you dont need to do what the screenshots show, just anythign that would solve the problem. those are just exampels okokokok

spinnerssssss
previous mod wrote:
00:01:471 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - whole section has a lot more object density than it really should. it's pretty much the same as the section starting at 00:13:178 (1) - yet the music is waaaaaaaaaaay different. the "reunion" difficulty even has less movement than this, which is not right at all. you'll probably want to create less intense rhythms here.
this still applies. overmapping in a hard diff while insanes don't is just not a thing
00:13:174 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - so much congestion here that it's a major pain to read. like you're sticking everything in 1/4 of the playfield and every object overlaps. some major rearranging needs to be done. would also be good to include spacing variation of some sort since you start doing that everywhere after these objects :/
00:17:564 (1,2) - would be easier to read that this is a jump by moving 1 further away from 00:17:198 (3) - . right now it just looks like a 1/1 gap cuz everything prior to this was distance snapped. remap the intro bit up to here if you really need to cuz it's worse than like everything that comes afterwards
00:24:881 (1) - you've got rhythmic gaps during the four measures starting here, then the four measures starting at 00:30:735 (1) - have no gaps at all. makes no sense since the song is the exact same in both places
00:25:247 (2,3) - would be easier to read that this isn't a jump by moving 3's head further from 2's tail. like 1.4x spacing is good so it's the same as the previous 1/1 gap
00:35:857 (3,4,1) - large jumps between multiple circles on hards uh not gonna go well. something like this would work, or anything that
00:36:223 (1,5) - should swap new comboz
00:43:540 (5,1) - if your comboing around here is supposed to be following vocal phrases, combos here should be swapped
00:50:491 (2,3) - these kind of 1/4 jumps in hard diffs not gonna work. needs to be consistent spacing for the entire 1/4 crap
00:53:418 (3,4) - spacing should be reduced. something like this would work well.
01:02:747 (1,3) - new combos should be swapped
01:02:747 (1,2,3) - pretty sure you didnt intend for these to underlap with 01:02:198 (3) - . stack is evil. something should be moved
01:02:931 (3,4) - spacing shoudl be reduced. something like this is possible
01:10:248 (1,2,3) - something about spacing toolarge. moving 01:09:699 (3,1) - to the right and getting rid of 01:10:613 (2) - with a reverse on 1 is an alternative
01:12:259 (2,3) - 01:12:991 (4,1) - jumps that rely entirely on momentum change don't really work very well. like anything else would work. literally anything
01:27:259 (1,3) - shoudl swap new comboz
01:28:723 (1,2) - zzzz^ if you were trying to follow vocal phrases it doesn't work when you start doing downbeat comboing right afterwards :/
01:32:564 (2) - would be cooler if more to the left to avoid overlap with 4
01:35:674 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - pretty much all the spacing here is too much. i can't say it any other way
01:56:162 (2,3,4,5) - spacing should be reduced. stacking 2 and 4 may not work. having 4 closer to 5 would be more practical. or somthing like this which is like move everything
02:02:565 (4) - 02:03:296 (2) - 02:03:845 (4) - 3 objects stacked in the same place so soon after each otehr super confusing. anything else would be better with less object congestion. extremely large spacing around all of this doesn't help either
02:10:796 (3,4) - spacing something between 4 and stream too large this
02:11:345 (1,5) - should swap new combos
02:13:174 (1,2,3,4) - so um most people i ask say this is pretty hard to read and combobreaking on the last objects is not so good. anything that gives the same effect as this just without the overlapping slider ends would be great. pattern is too cool to rank

variation in slider velocity, even if slight, could also help at times since you use the exact same thing throughout the whole song :/
[reunion]

00:45:369 (1) - if this section's comboing is following the vocals, new combos should be on 00:46:466 (3) - and 00:47:564 (3) - instead of 00:46:101 (1) - and 00:47:199 (1) -
00:56:710 (8) - should probably new combo for the major sv change
01:26:345 (1,2,3,4) - spacing here seems weird. if you wanted a jump from 3->4, make that clearer. constant spacing between them is also ok
02:17:564 (1) - would work better as a straight slider cuz curve of 3 makes everything look gross.
00:36:588 (1) - drums go into a half bpm sort of thing here, so lowering sv is expected. can just lower the sv multiplier to 1.25x and recalculate slider lengths, then you'll be good without any remapping bs. if you wanted to go lower though please do

[]

so all the diffs are good except hard. apply whatever you want and we'll see what needs to be changed from there

JeZag

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JeZag 2015-02-24T22:08:41+00:00

Thx for the mod
Just give me a couple days for me to recover =o=

pishifat wrote:
3 years later and the offbeat stream at 01:43:906 (1) - is now rankable
JeZag wrote:
so I guess I'm finally ready for a re-mod
[general]
letterboxing during breaks just cuts off bg girl's face so maybe don't do that fixed
winek being an inspiration isn't really a reason to include him in the tags. you don't see hanzer putting fanzhen in all his maps' tags right yea no fixed
preview point unsnapped :/ fixed
um the "wav" folder in your beatmap folder... do something about it. right now the hitsounds inside aren't used cuz they're in that folder. if you do plan on using them, they blend so much with the song that they provide no feedback at all, so that wouldn't really work. deleting the drum-hitnormal file and allowing the default drum hitnormal to be used would fix that fixed
kiai in reunion/easy are different from normal/intermediate/hard. needs to be the same for all diffs except the gd fixed
should be using the standard silent hitsound instead of those weird ones you're using now. get it here fixed
OD on normal/intermediate/hard should be increased by 1. reunion could also be 8 fixed
[easy]
00:02:930 (2,1) - 00:17:198 (2,3) - 01:10:247 (3,1) - 02:13:174 (3,4) - spacing inconsistencies oops fixed
01:08:052 (1,2) - probably should swap new combos. it's acceptable at like 00:41:710 (1,2) - since vocal phrases are separated on the place you have a new combo, but in this instance that's not a thing. also it's the same as 02:08:052 (4,1) - musically (despite pitch whatever) and combos are good there so fixed
01:14:637 (1) - don't need the new combo since you don't include one on 02:14:637 (5) - 01:38:052 (5) - which are the same sort of thing. other diffs don't include new combos on this either. dunno why spinner should indicate new combo or not idk so fixed
01:38:235 (1) - 5% volume on this spinner makes no sense. here music is continuing and you've just got silent spinner on a loud part. leaving it at 40% volume is k fixed
01:51:223 (1,2,3,4) - spacing is so broken damn oops fixed
02:14:820 (1) - would make sense to increase volume to like 20% and have a whistle. piano sound yes im going to have to ask you later about this
[normal]
00:16:102 (1,2) - 01:57:991 (3,1) - spacing inconsistencies oopsies fixed
00:39:881 (2,4) - stackign of these = super confusing. just anything so they aren't stacked would work fixed
01:14:820 (1) - 01:38:235 (1) - 02:14:820 (1) - same as easy. silent spinner stuff pointless. also whistle on the first and last ones piano i'm going to have to ask for clarification again
01:06:223 (2,3,1) - arrangement of stuff here is also unnecessarily confusing. like anything where things aren't spaced so they're almost on top of each other is fine fixed
01:32:198 (1,2,3) - adjusting your spacing to look like it did with the regular slider velocity would just work better (that would be 1.4x spacing) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2802702 fixed
[intermediate]
spinners going to need to ask
01:01:466 (1,2) - 01:03:479 (3,4) - spacing inconsistencies oops
00:58:906 - seems really weird to not cover this. it's like reflective with 00:57:442 - which you have covered. second kiai also covers both. i dunno what you'd do about a pattern there but something should happen. a possibility give me a while to figure what to do with this
01:26:339 - should probably snap the unsnappedline fixed
01:50:857 (4,1) - stacking is kind of not great when you're breaking spacing like this :/ would be better to just fixedignore the stack completely since it's not gonna be noticeable ingame and use 1.5x spacing like the other 1/1 gaps before this
01:58:174 (4) - rhythm here just seems weird cuz of the passive end. something like this would work. removing the reverse on 4, moving 1 back by 1/2 and stacking a circle on 2. fixed
[reunion]
00:45:369 (1) - if this section's comboing is following the vocals, new combos should be on 00:46:466 (3) - and 00:47:564 (3) - instead of 00:46:101 (1) - and 00:47:199 (1) - fixed
00:56:710 (8) - should probably new combo for the major sv change fixed
01:26:345 (1,2,3,4) - spacing here seems weird. if you wanted a jump from 3->4, make that clearer. constant spacing between them is also ok completely unintended so fixed
02:17:564 (1) - would work better as a straight slider cuz curve of 3 makes everything look gross. I'll reconsider
00:36:588 (1) - drums go into a half bpm sort of thing here, so lowering sv is expected. can just lower the sv multiplier to 1.25x and recalculate slider lengths, then you'll be good without any remapping bs. if you wanted to go lower though please dofixed
[]

so all the diffs are good except hard. apply whatever you want and we'll see what needs to be changed from there

Hard diff is gross right now x_x
I'm probably going to do some mass remapping later, but real life is too hard
Also, Imma need to ask you what you mean by the spinner sounds
Thx for the mod and I'll ask for more after a while

HanzeR

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HanzeR 2015-03-05T06:16:45+00:00

This map needs to get ranked

pishifat

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pishifat 2015-03-05T10:20:00+00:00

oh hey that's a really good idea!!

JeZag

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Topic Starter

JeZag 2015-03-05T15:29:11+00:00

Sorry, I'm sort of dead IRL
Everything is fixed as of now BESIDES hard, which I can't find time to remap x.x

Manimani_old_1

Manimani_old_1 2015-03-28T12:57:14+00:00

some suggestion>.<
[easy]
02:10:247 (2) - blanket with end of 02:08:783 (1) ?
[hard]
00:55:247 (3) - blanket with 00:54:698 (2) ?
[reunion]
00:11:345 (5) - how about that?
02:07:321 (1) - blanket with end of 02:08:052 (3) ?

hope this map get ranked>.<

JeZag

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JeZag 2015-03-29T22:15:59+00:00

Thanks for the mod! It's going to be a while until this is ranked though.... I'm sort of dead
It would really be nice if somebody made a hard GD, but o well

HanzeR

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HanzeR 2015-03-30T23:04:16+00:00

*HanzeR uses revive on JeZag*

JeZag

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JeZag 2015-03-30T23:23:51+00:00

HanzeR wrote:
*HanzeR uses revive on JeZag*

It is not very effective...

dw guiz I have Okoratu working with me on a colab hard to ease my IRL arrow in the knee

HanzeR

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HanzeR 2015-09-13T18:25:20+00:00

6 months ago

JeZag

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JeZag 2015-09-13T19:49:03+00:00

HanzeR wrote:
6 months ago

A little BAT once told me that the drum section "doesn't work" because its untimed, while the stream is snapped, which is an "unrankable" feature. Should I just bug other BATs?
QQ

Okoayu

Nomination Assessment Team

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Okoayu 2015-09-13T22:35:45+00:00

what exactly is a BAT we got rid of that term more than 6 months ago are you from the past
didn't we also hax the damn mp3 in order to avoid that???

pishifat

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pishifat 2015-09-13T22:44:01+00:00

my b

JeZag

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JeZag 2015-09-14T01:04:01+00:00

Okoratu wrote:
what exactly is a BAT we got rid of that term more than 6 months ago are you from the past
didn't we also hax the damn mp3 in order to avoid that???

I feel so old god damn

So how 2 rank this? ><

pishifat

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pishifat 2015-09-14T02:17:06+00:00

JeZag wrote:
So how 2 rank this? ><

how2rank

JeZag wrote:
A little BAT once told me that the drum section "doesn't work" because its untimed, while the stream is snapped, which is an "unrankable" feature. Should I just bug other BATs?
QQ

pretty sure the stream it's fine, but it's the guitar past 02:20:491 (1) - that's fucked. if you wanted to be super safe, you could end the insanes where the other diffs end... or you could not and i'll bubble anyway idc qats can deal with it

replace your two sliderslides with this http://up.ppy.sh/files/blank.wav (you said you fixed this from the last mod but you didnt pls)
both kiais on normal, intermediate, and hard end later than they should. same goes for second kiai on easy.... this was also in the last mod cmon dood

easy:
01:54:149 (1) - will need a "clearer sliderbody." just make that little corner visible and it's 100% rankable

normal:
02:06:406 - should be mapped just like every other measure that's covering this tick in the kiai
00:31:284 (3) - 01:03:479 (2) - 02:00:004 (1) - same thing as the sliderbody on normal -- make the corner bs more visible and it's k

intermediate:
00:58:540 (1,2) - triggered me then i noticed i mentioned it in the last mod and you said youd fix it bUT YOU DIDNT
01:14:637 (6) - 02:04:393 (1) - yeah uh dont stack these 2hidden for this level of difficulty

hard:
01:49:759 (4,5,6) - combo consistency tho 00:49:759 (1,2,1,2,3) -

hanzer:
smd

reunion:
00:50:857 (5,6) - hardcore 1/4 when there isnt even 1/2 here not gonna work. a 1/2 slider is the most you can do probably, or what you did before the second kiai 01:50:857 (6) - with just a circle and 1/1 gap
theres like a whole section unsanpped wtf open aimod

there's some other stuff that i dont really like but i dont really care at this point either. if it gets dq'd for anything (if you can mange to find another bn lol), we can deal with it then

JeZag

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JeZag 2015-09-14T03:00:50+00:00

pishifat wrote:
JeZag wrote:
So how 2 rank this? ><
how2rank
JeZag wrote:
A little BAT once told me that the drum section "doesn't work" because its untimed, while the stream is snapped, which is an "unrankable" feature. Should I just bug other BATs?
QQ
pretty sure the stream it's fine, but it's the guitar past 02:20:491 (1) - that's fucked. if you wanted to be super safe, you could end the insanes where the other diffs end... or you could not and i'll bubble anyway idc qats can deal with it

replace your two sliderslides with this http://up.ppy.sh/files/blank.wav (you said you fixed this from the last mod but you didnt pls)
both kiais on normal, intermediate, and hard end later than they should. same goes for second kiai on easy.... this was also in the last mod cmon dood

easy:
01:54:149 (1) - will need a "clearer sliderbody." just make that little corner visible and it's 100% rankable

normal:
02:06:406 - should be mapped just like every other measure that's covering this tick in the kiai
00:31:284 (3) - 01:03:479 (2) - 02:00:004 (1) - same thing as the sliderbody on normal -- make the corner bs more visible and it's k

intermediate:
00:58:540 (1,2) - triggered me then i noticed i mentioned it in the last mod and you said youd fix it bUT YOU DIDNT
01:14:637 (6) - 02:04:393 (1) - yeah uh dont stack these 2hidden for this level of difficulty

hard:
01:49:759 (4,5,6) - combo consistency tho 00:49:759 (1,2,1,2,3) -

hanzer:
smd

reunion:
00:50:857 (5,6) - hardcore 1/4 when there isnt even 1/2 here not gonna work. a 1/2 slider is the most you can do probably, or what you did before the second kiai 01:50:857 (6) - with just a circle and 1/1 gap
theres like a whole section unsanpped wtf open aimod

there's some other stuff that i dont really like but i dont really care at this point either. if it gets dq'd for anything (if you can mange to find another bn lol), we can deal with it then

Everything has been dealt with and I realized how shit I am at catching mistakes along the way. Cheers!

pishifat

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pishifat 2015-09-14T04:32:17+00:00

on intermediate, you forgot a new combo on 00:58:540 (5) - when fixing the thing and now your colorhax are broken
and you also forgot the second stack thing on this diff gg

alsooo you only replaced the first sliderslide, whereas sliderslide2 also needs to be using hte other file

alsoooo your kiais are all messed up still pleaseeeeeeeeeee

JeZag

518 posts

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Topic Starter

JeZag 2015-09-14T19:40:49+00:00

pishifat wrote:
on intermediate, you forgot a new combo on 00:58:540 (5) - when fixing the thing and now your colorhax are broken
and you also forgot the second stack thing on this diff gg

alsooo you only replaced the first sliderslide, whereas sliderslide2 also needs to be using hte other file

alsoooo your kiais are all messed up still pleaseeeeeeeeeee

I hate this gammeeeeeeeeeee

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