Mili - Nine Point Eight · forum

OblivioN

OblivioN 2014-09-10T16:42:16+00:00

sorry for delay
From Lazy modding team(¦3[____]

General

Turn off the widescreen support in Easy ,because you haven't make storyboard for the beatmaphttp://puu.sh/bteoH/98e22dfe14.png

Easy

00:06:592 (5,2) - make the tail of 00:06:592 (5) - with the head of 00:08:788 (2) - be a good stack
SPOILER
00:19:031 (1,2) - - take care of them tails if you accept the suggestion.Don't fogot fix the stack 00:20:129 (2,1) - http://puu.sh/btpqC/2a8d1ffd72.png

00:34:397 (2) - ummm……actually，I don't think it‘s a good shape……because the 00:34:397 (2) - overlap with 00:32:568 (4) - makes people feeling insouciant

how do you feeling about this shape? ：

SPOILER

here the code that I think it would be helpful & won't spent much time:

159,231,32202,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,168,32568,2,0,L|317:157,1,70.0000005960464,2|0,3:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
344,256,33299,1,2,3:0:0:0:
277,328,33665,6,0,P|254:297|253:249,1,70.0000005960464,4|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
236,169,34397,2,0,P|248:129|244:69,1,70.0000005960464,2|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
346,118,35129,2,0,P|384:92|420:90,1,70.0000005960464,4|2,2:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
418,186,35861,2,0,P|451:213|468:244,1,70.0000005960464,4|2,2:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:

00:42:446 (2) - missing a obviously beat at 00:43:178 try this rhythm:
00:48:300 how about normal-hitnormal finish？
01:11:714 (1) - it's nearly touch the scorebar

Normal

00:18:300 (3,3) - try make a pretty stack
00:34:397 (2,1) - ^
00:36:593 (1) - sounds odd……try lengthen the tail to 00:37:324
00:42:447 (1) - ^ to 00:43:178
00:48:300 (2) - hitnormal finish
01:05:313 (1) - oh……I think the slider is hard for newbie……
01:14:733 (1) - drum？
01:28:727 (1) - ;w; same opinion with 01:05:313 (1)
01:33:666 (1,2) - why not only a slider from 01:33:666 to 01:34:214 ？I'd ignore the weak beat（01:33:849）and mix（following） with vocal here.
02:00:739 (3,5) - stack

Hard

in fact……the soft clap before 00:13:178 sounds odd……;w; I advice that try to found another suitable hitsound
00:34:946 drum whistle？
01:10:618 (2,4) - do a pretty stack ~
01:14:733 (1) - drum whistle？

HanzeR's Insane

a beautiful diff ;w;that I 'm useless ;w;
00:17:202 (5,5) - stack
00:42:080 (2,3) - why overlap here ？【curious】a bit unbefitting……
02:25:617 (1) - maybe use whistle to instead of clap will sounds comfortable

could I skip the Reunion? ;w; I had watched the diff very much time ……but I can't understand many things…… ;w; so that I can't make suggestions in this diff any more ;w; sorry

take my star and good luck

JeZag

518 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

JeZag 2014-09-10T19:34:54+00:00

OblivioN wrote:
sorry for delay
From Lazy modding team(¦3[____]

General
Turn off the widescreen support in Easy ,because you haven't make storyboard for the beatmap fixed
http://puu.sh/bteoH/98e22dfe14.png
Easy
00:06:592 (5,2) - make the tail of 00:06:592 (5) - with the head of 00:08:788 (2) - be a good stack
SPOILER
fixed
00:19:031 (1,2) - - take care of them tails if you accept the suggestion.Don't fogot fix the stack 00:20:129 (2,1) - fixedhttp://puu.sh/btpqC/2a8d1ffd72.png
00:34:397 (2) - ummm……actually，I don't think it‘s a good shape……because the 00:34:397 (2) - overlap with 00:32:568 (4) - makes people feeling insouciant how do you feeling about this shape? ：
SPOILER
fixed
here the code that I think it would be helpful & won't spent much time:
159,231,32202,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,168,32568,2,0,L|317:157,1,70.0000005960464,2|0,3:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
344,256,33299,1,2,3:0:0:0:
277,328,33665,6,0,P|254:297|253:249,1,70.0000005960464,4|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
236,169,34397,2,0,P|248:129|244:69,1,70.0000005960464,2|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
346,118,35129,2,0,P|384:92|420:90,1,70.0000005960464,4|2,2:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
418,186,35861,2,0,P|451:213|468:244,1,70.0000005960464,4|2,2:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
00:42:446 (2) - missing a obviously beat at 00:43:178 try this rhythm: it's made to fit an earlier slider >w< will change if ppl can't read it right
00:48:300 how about normal-hitnormal finish？changed
01:11:714 (1) - it's nearly touch the scorebar fixed
Normal
00:18:300 (3,3) - try make a pretty stack fixed
00:34:397 (2,1) - ^ fixed
00:36:593 (1) - sounds odd……try lengthen the tail to 00:37:324 it's on purpose to fit the piano
00:42:447 (1) - ^ to 00:43:178 ^
00:48:300 (2) - hitnormal finish fixed
01:05:313 (1) - oh……I think the slider is hard for newbie…… dang, will change if moar mods bring it up (remapping will be hard)
01:14:733 (1) - drum？I personally never end spinners with loud hitsounds ;w;
01:28:727 (1) - ;w; same opinion with 01:05:313 (1) will change if need to
01:33:666 (1,2) - why not only a slider from 01:33:666 to 01:34:214 ？I'd ignore the weak beat（01:33:849）and mix（following） with vocal here.thinking about it
02:00:739 (3,5) - stack fixed

Hard
in fact……the soft clap before 00:13:178 sounds odd……;w; I advice that try to found another suitable hitsound no hitsound at all now... w/e
00:34:946 drum whistle？too powerful so soft whistle instead
01:10:618 (2,4) - do a pretty stack ~ changed
01:14:733 (1) - drum whistle？I personally never end spinners with loud hitsounds ;w;

take my star and good luck

Thanks for the mod and the star *o*

Nozhomi

Global Moderator

4,568 posts

Joined May 2013

Nozhomi 2014-09-11T01:27:52+00:00

Hi~ From Strawberry Mousse Modding Queue.
Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why to improve my futur mods.
If you've any question, ask me in-game.

- General :

I found your Green for combo color kind of too much "fluorescent". This one http://puu.sh/btZIK/231e697754.png looks better imo.

- Reunion :

00:04:946 (4,5) - Maybe blanket them ?
00:08:422 (5) - I would see more something like this http://puu.sh/btZYC/32a4861b19.jpg. Flow is much better.
00:25:068 (5,6,7,1) - I would move then to stack 00:23:605 (2,6,1) - .
00:27:813 (4) - If you move a little the anchor point, everything would be perfect http://puu.sh/bu0Ke/4df789875e.jpg.
00:27:629 (3,5) - Stack them correctly.
00:30:739 (1,2) - Bad blanket.
00:35:679 (2,5) - Why not stack them (stack slider end) ?
00:36:958 (1,1,2) - Bad blanket.
00:39:153 (4,1) - ^
00:50:861 (5) - Move slider end to 220:287 to improve flow.

- HanzeR's Insane :

Your stack leniency is maybe too low. Check it with a BAT probably.
00:34:489 (3) - It's maybe me, but I think this circle is just overmapped, and also not really fun to play.
00:42:080 (2,3) - Maybe can you change this to avoid this little overlap ?
01:46:653 (4,1) - You can make it perfectly http://puu.sh/bu21d/c502fe546d.jpg.
Pro diff.

- Hard :

CS3.5 fit better with this objet density.
00:17:568 - NC should be here.
00:19:031 - NC here too.
00:27:813 (3,4) - You could improve this blanket a little.
00:32:203 (1,3) - This overlap looks not so good here.
01:51:227 - NC
01:56:897 (1,2,3) - Stack them properly.
02:07:324 - NC here too no ?

- Normal :

From start to 00:13:178 - I didn't understand how you did your NC here.
00:33:666 (1,2) - Inconsistant DS here.
00:35:861 (4,1) - Blanket them no ?
00:43:910 (3,4) - Bad blanket?
00:43:544 (2,5) - What do you think about stack them?
01:03:483 (2,1) - I would make it like this to get better flow http://puu.sh/bu5qQ/6b233a4be8.jpg.
01:09:885 (1,2) - Bad flow. Make similar flow like 01:08:422 (1,2) - .
01:29:275 - For me, this big tic should be played, so maybe change your rhythm for this http://puu.sh/bu5F3/8aa385e114.jpg.
01:57:446 (3,2) - Little overlap.
02:13:178 (1,3) - Stack them, don't go ruin flow at the end.

- Easy :

00:04:397 - NC ?
00:10:251 - ^
00:19:031 (1,2) - Bad blanket.
00:30:739 - Feel strange to not play this white tic, because it sounds important here.
01:35:129 (1) - Flow could be better if you do something like this http://puu.sh/bu6cQ/1bf46424ad.jpg.

That's all, I hope it help you.
Good luck Mukyu~

HanzeR

921 posts

Joined May 2012

HanzeR 2014-09-11T02:52:50+00:00

OblivioN wrote:
HanzeR's Insane
a beautiful diff ;w;that I 'm useless ;w; <3
00:17:202 (5,5) - stack this is really annoying to fix lol and it would look off
00:42:080 (2,3) - why overlap here ？【curious】a bit unbefitting…… i like the way it looks
02:25:617 (1) - maybe use whistle to instead of clap will sounds comfortable clap sounds neat here i think

Nozhomi wrote:
- HanzeR's Insane :
Your stack leniency is maybe too low. Check it with a BAT probably. its fine :p
00:34:489 (3) - It's maybe me, but I think this circle is just overmapped, and also not really fun to play. its maybe overmapped but i like it
00:42:080 (2,3) - Maybe can you change this to avoid this little overlap ? i like it
01:46:653 (4,1) - You can make it perfectly http://puu.sh/bu21d/c502fe546d.jpg. fixed
Pro diff.<3

thx mods

SPOILER

osu file format v13

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 50495
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.2
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Nine Point Eight
TitleUnicode:Nine Point Eight
Artist:Mili
ArtistUnicode:Mili
Creator:JeZag
Version:HanzeR's Insane
Source:Deemo
Tags:vocal piano winek baraatje123 rayark hamoloid
BeatmapID:361650
BeatmapSetID:131147

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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8.5
SliderMultiplier:1.76
SliderTickRate:1

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JeZag

518 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

JeZag 2014-09-12T00:03:13+00:00

Nozhomi wrote:
Hi~ From Strawberry Mousse Modding Queue.
Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why to improve my futur mods.
If you've any question, ask me in-game.

- General :
I found your Green for combo color kind of too much "fluorescent". This one http://puu.sh/btZIK/231e697754.png looks better imo.
- Reunion :
00:04:946 (4,5) - Maybe blanket them ?
00:08:422 (5) - I would see more something like this http://puu.sh/btZYC/32a4861b19.jpg. Flow is much better.
00:25:068 (5,6,7,1) - I would move then to stack 00:23:605 (2,6,1) - .
00:27:813 (4) - If you move a little the anchor point, everything would be perfect http://puu.sh/bu0Ke/4df789875e.jpg.
00:27:629 (3,5) - Stack them correctly.
00:30:739 (1,2) - Bad blanket.
00:35:679 (2,5) - Why not stack them (stack slider end) ?
00:36:958 (1,1,2) - Bad blanket.
00:39:153 (4,1) - ^
00:50:861 (5) - Move slider end to 220:287 to improve flow.
- HanzeR's Insane :
Your stack leniency is maybe too low. Check it with a BAT probably.
00:34:489 (3) - It's maybe me, but I think this circle is just overmapped, and also not really fun to play.
00:42:080 (2,3) - Maybe can you change this to avoid this little overlap ?
01:46:653 (4,1) - You can make it perfectly http://puu.sh/bu21d/c502fe546d.jpg.
Pro diff.
- Hard :
CS3.5 fit better with this objet density.
00:17:568 - NC should be here.
00:19:031 - NC here too.
00:27:813 (3,4) - You could improve this blanket a little.
00:32:203 (1,3) - This overlap looks not so good here.
01:51:227 - NC
01:56:897 (1,2,3) - Stack them properly.
02:07:324 - NC here too no ?
- Normal :
From start to 00:13:178 - I didn't understand how you did your NC here.
00:33:666 (1,2) - Inconsistant DS here.
00:35:861 (4,1) - Blanket them no ?
00:43:910 (3,4) - Bad blanket?
00:43:544 (2,5) - What do you think about stack them?
01:03:483 (2,1) - I would make it like this to get better flow http://puu.sh/bu5qQ/6b233a4be8.jpg.
01:09:885 (1,2) - Bad flow. Make similar flow like 01:08:422 (1,2) - .
01:29:275 - For me, this big tic should be played, so maybe change your rhythm for this http://puu.sh/bu5F3/8aa385e114.jpg.
01:57:446 (3,2) - Little overlap.
02:13:178 (1,3) - Stack them, don't go ruin flow at the end.
- Easy :
00:04:397 - NC ?
00:10:251 - ^
00:19:031 (1,2) - Bad blanket.
00:30:739 - Feel strange to not play this white tic, because it sounds important here.
01:35:129 (1) - Flow could be better if you do something like this http://puu.sh/bu6cQ/1bf46424ad.jpg.

That's all, I hope it help you.
Good luck Mukyu~

EVERYTHING FIXED BC I CANT MAP orz
thx for the great mod >w<

Nuolong

1,032 posts

Joined August 2014

Nuolong 2014-09-13T21:29:15+00:00

From modding queue 2 rules broke~~Only HanzeR's

Mod

******b
00:35:861 (1,2,3,4) - This looks abnormal. Doesn't look like you for this when it's a stream. Make an abstract M for McDonalds instead.
00:35:861 (1) - to x:452, y:140
00:35:952 (2) - to x:408, y:108
00:36:044 (3) - to x:360, y:108
00:36:135 (4) - to x:328, y:136
Above~An example, do that or something like that
******e
00:38:788 (3,4) - too normal
01:31:288 (5) - ctrl+h and to x:484, y:156
******b
01:37:507 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Too perfect do something like:
01:37:507 (1) - to x:376 y:328
01:37:599 (2) - to 416 352
01:37:690 (3) - 464 368
01:37:781 (4) - 460 324
01:37:873 (5) - 488 296
01:37:964 (6) - 496 252
Above~An example, do that or something like that
******e
01:59:641 (1) - 208 332
01:59:733 (2) - 232 288
01:59:824 (3) - 264 320
01:59:916 (4) - 288 284
02:20:495 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Spread these out more and faster

Think my mod is not worthy? Don't give me kudos.

Good Luck w/ your first beatmap!

And HanzeR just Good Luck! lol

HanzeR

921 posts

Joined May 2012

HanzeR 2014-09-13T23:32:03+00:00

NolanM wrote:
From modding queue 2 rules broke~~Only HanzeR's

Mod
******b
00:35:861 (1,2,3,4) - This looks abnormal. Doesn't look like you for this when it's a stream. Make an abstract M for McDonalds instead.
00:35:861 (1) - to x:452, y:140
00:35:952 (2) - to x:408, y:108
00:36:044 (3) - to x:360, y:108
00:36:135 (4) - to x:328, y:136
Above~An example, do that or something like that i like the way it flows there
******e
00:38:788 (3,4) - too normal ?_?
01:31:288 (5) - ctrl+h and to x:484, y:156 doesnt feel like there needs to be a jump here
******b
01:37:507 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Too perfect do something like:
01:37:507 (1) - to x:376 y:328
01:37:599 (2) - to 416 352
01:37:690 (3) - 464 368
01:37:781 (4) - 460 324
01:37:873 (5) - 488 296
01:37:964 (6) - 496 252
Above~An example, do that or something like that changed differently
******e
01:59:641 (1) - 208 332
01:59:733 (2) - 232 288
01:59:824 (3) - 264 320
01:59:916 (4) - 288 284
02:20:495 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Spread these out more and faster why?

Think my mod is not worthy? Don't give me kudos.

Good Luck w/ your first beatmap!
And HanzeR just Good Luck! lol

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256,192,145617,5,8,0:0:0:0:

thanks for the mod!!

[ Setsuna ]

422 posts

Joined October 2013

[ Setsuna ] 2014-09-14T05:36:34+00:00

came from my modding queue :3

I'm only going to do 4 difficulties, as I suck at Easy I won't be doing that. lol this is the only song I haven't 95%+ in deemo

Reunion

00:06:410 (4,5) - Consider blanketing the 5 to the 4
not a mod but, LOL @ the "You Ready?" at 00:12:263 (4)
00:18:300 (3) - Put this closer to the stream, as it will be hard for players
00:30:190 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Ugly stream, use slider to stream converter
00:32:568 (2,3) - Blanketed wrong.
00:56:349 (5) - Read the second mod

So In the Kiai time's I see you using the basic clap pattern, cept with whistle.

02:02:934 (5) - NC

HanzeR's Insane

00:12:446 (1) - You could make this longer if you just put a inherited point to increase slider speed.
00:35:861 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This might rek a few people, might wanna make it easier
01:26:531 (2) - This jump is too far
01:37:507 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - This stream is too hard
01:43:910 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - This kills my eyes. (Combo Color)
02:25:617 (1) - No NC

Hard

gwad can you teach me how to map like this

Normal

00:25:251 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - This. Don't start beats on red ticks, red ticks are fillers, white ticks are important.
01:32:385 (2,1) - Blanket 1 to 2's curve

JeZag

518 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

JeZag 2014-09-14T13:23:18+00:00

[ Setsuna ] wrote:
came from my modding queue :3

I'm only going to do 4 difficulties, as I suck at Easy I won't be doing that. lol this is the only song I haven't 95%+ in deemo

Reunion
00:06:410 (4,5) - Consider blanketing the 5 to the 4 Fixed
not a mod but, LOL @ the "You Ready?" at 00:12:263 (4) Used to crack me up too xD
00:18:300 (3) - Put this closer to the stream, as it will be hard for players Fixed
00:30:190 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Ugly stream, use slider to stream converter On purpose (meant to be 2 sliders to change direction
00:32:568 (2,3) - Blanketed wrong. Fixed
00:56:349 (5) - Read the second mod Fixed

So In the Kiai time's I see you using the basic clap pattern, cept with whistle.
idk what I did but it sounds pretty good with the custom hit sounds xD

02:02:934 (5) - NC Fixed

Hard
gwad can you teach me how to map like this
With love, patience, and TONS of remapping

Normal
00:25:251 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - This. Don't start beats on red ticks, red ticks are fillers, white ticks are important. remapping will be a pain to do and besides; I mapped that way to match the vocals x.x
01:32:385 (2,1) - Blanket 1 to 2's curve Fixed

Thanks for ze mod! >w<

pooptartsonas

128 posts

Joined January 2012

pooptartsonas 2014-09-21T20:56:07+00:00

Hi, here for the m4m! And Deemo!

[Reunion]

00:06:958 (5) - Could be blanketed better (the tail)
00:11:349 (5) - Remove whistle from tail, and
00:12:080 (3) - remove whistle, to stay consistent? The music changes and I kinda get what you're going for but it sounds like a lot of whistles, maybe just remove one of them?
00:16:653 (3,1) - Overlap is not exact, move the later slider to x101 y333
00:32:935 (3) - Maybe rotate by -10 degrees and reblanket to put some space between it and the slider two before it
00:40:618 (1) - Try moving to x488 y128?
00:42:812 (2) - Move to x133 y33 for perfect overlap (I guess move the whole pattern over by 1 so the triangles
00:46:288 (1) - Try x62 y254
00:52:507 (5) - Try x67 y51
00:57:629 (3,4) - Better blanket
01:26:349 (1) - I think the hitsounds should be quieter than they were at the beginning here; even though there's additional singing and guitar I think quieter hitsounds would fit the hushed vocals. Then I think you can increase it at 01:32:202 (3) and then possibly again at 01:35:129 (3)
01:26:897 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Just saying that this is so nice for the music
01:32:751 (5,6) - I'm not a fan of the flow here. I don't really know what the best way to be to fix it is but what I did was rotate these two notes by 60 degrees and place them (with the same orientation) so the circle is at x179 y116 and forms a triangle. It's not that bad though so maybe not idk, it just felt a little awkward for me playing through.
01:35:129 (3) - Move red point to x178 y111 for better blanket

[HanzeR's Insane]

This is a lot different from how I map so I don't know if I'll be able to help much on making it flow well, I'll look for what I can though.

00:12:446 (1,2,3) - This is confusing, the two notes after the slider look like 1/4 notes. I read them as 1/4 even though I know the song. Maybe stack them or something? I don't think it's a problem once the rhythm starts going, ie I think 00:14:275 (5,6) is fine.
00:14:641 (1,4) - This blanket is pretty off
00:19:031 (1) - ^
00:22:690 (3,1) - Not egregious but still off a bit
00:53:605 (4,1) - ^
01:04:031 (4) - Move this note farther away from the slider?
01:45:556 (1,2,1,2) - Highly reccommend not having the spacing get so high at the end of this stream, I had trouble playing it even when I knew it was coming and when I did FC it I usually got 100s due to notelocking I believe.
01:46:836 (1) - Move last point to x277 y127 for better blanket

[Hard]

00:02:385 (4) - Move middle tick to x98 y298?
00:02:934 (1,2) - Could make 2 blanket in 1 better
00:08:239 (5,3) - These two aren't perfect copies of each other so they don't overlap perfectly
00:10:800 (2) - Make this overlap with 3 from the next combo?
00:20:861 (2) - Move to x327 y159 for perfect overlap
00:25:252 (2) - Move to x211 y219 for perfect overlap
00:32:935 (3,4) - Tail could be blanketed better
00:35:495 (2) - Move to x168 y208 for perfect overlap
01:05:129 (3) - Move to x226 y193 for perfect overlap
01:56:349 (5,6) - Blanket better

Really pretty diff!

[Normal]

00:06:592 (5) - Remove whistle from tail?
00:19:763 (2) - Move to x272 y118 for perfect overlap
00:21:959 (1) - Move to x418 y237 for perfect overlap
00:55:618 (1) - Make this overlap with 00:58:178 (1) maybe? They're pretty far apart in time but why not

[Easy]

00:02:934 (2) - Move the second to last tick to x363 y218 and the last tick to x421 y295 and it blankets better
00:24:153 (3,1) - Wrap 3 tighter around the 1 so the blanket is better maybe
01:12:446 (2) - Move to x76 y172 for perfect overlap (or move the slider to x76 y171 is better to maintain the square I guess)

Good luck with the map! Have a star!

JeZag

518 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

JeZag 2014-09-22T02:23:49+00:00

pooptartsonas wrote:
Hi, here for the m4m! And Deemo!

[Reunion]

00:06:958 (5) - Could be blanketed better (the tail) fixed
00:11:349 (5) - Remove whistle from tail, and patterns i create are too hard to follow x.x
00:12:080 (3) - remove whistle, to stay consistent? The music changes and I kinda get what you're going for but it sounds like a lot of whistles, maybe just remove one of them? fixed
00:16:653 (3,1) - Overlap is not exact, move the later slider to x101 y333 fixed orz didnt see that one
00:32:935 (3) - Maybe rotate by -10 degrees and reblanket to put some space between it and the slider two before it was on purpose (see how 00:32:203 (1,2,3) form a neat triangle? :>
00:40:618 (1) - Try moving to x488 y128? on purpose to be in between 00:40:251 (4) (which i shifted up a bit for perfect stack anyway )
00:42:812 (2) - Move to x133 y33 for perfect overlap (I guess move the whole pattern over by 1 so the triangles look better) fixed orz something else i missed
00:46:288 (1) - Try x62 y254 shifted a bit
00:52:507 (5) - Try x67 y51 changed for better flow :>
00:57:629 (3,4) - Better blanket orz had this one coming CHANGED
01:26:349 (1) - I think the hitsounds should be quieter than they were at the beginning here; even though there's additional singing and guitar I think quieter hitsounds would fit the hushed vocals. Then I think you can increase it at 01:32:202 (3) and then possibly again at 01:35:129 (3) fixed with even more gradual increases in audio
01:26:897 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Just saying that this is so nice for the music this was something i decided to keep from my original diff. before the remap because i liked it so much <3
01:32:751 (5,6) - I'm not a fan of the flow here. I don't really know what the best way to be to fix it is but what I did was rotate these two notes by 60 degrees and place them (with the same orientation) so the circle is at x179 y116 and forms a triangle. It's not that bad though so maybe not idk, it just felt a little awkward for me playing through. Remapped my own personal favorite way >.<
01:35:129 (3) - Move red point to x178 y111 for better blanket kept the anchor, but fixed the blanket

[Hard]

00:02:385 (4) - Move middle tick to x98 y298? meant to make a triangle spread with 00:02:934 (1)
00:02:934 (1,2) - Could make 2 blanket in 1 better fixed and remapped
00:08:239 (5,3) - These two aren't perfect copies of each other so they don't overlap perfectly fixed
00:10:800 (2) - Make this overlap with 3 from the next combo? fixed, but inb4 some mod complains that 00:11:714 (1,2,3,4) aren't straight anymore :<
00:20:861 (2) - Move to x327 y159 for perfect overlap fixed
00:25:252 (2) - Move to x211 y219 for perfect overlap fixed
00:32:935 (3,4) - Tail could be blanketed better fixed
00:35:495 (2) - Move to x168 y208 for perfect overlap fixed
01:05:129 (3) - Move to x226 y193 for perfect overlap fixed
01:56:349 (5,6) - Blanket better fixed SO MUCH CARELESSNESS orz

[Normal]

00:06:592 (5) - Remove whistle from tail? fixed
00:19:763 (2) - Move to x272 y118 for perfect overlap fixed
00:21:959 (1) - Move to x418 y237 for perfect overlap fixed
00:55:618 (1) - Make this overlap with 00:58:178 (1) maybe? They're pretty far apart in time but why not lol challenge accpeted

[Easy]

00:02:934 (2) - Move the second to last tick to x363 y218 and the last tick to x421 y295 and it blankets better fixed
00:24:153 (3,1) - Wrap 3 tighter around the 1 so the blanket is better maybe fixed
01:12:446 (2) - Move to x76 y172 for perfect overlap (or move the slider to x76 y171 is better to maintain the square I guess) fixed

Great nazi mod! Didnt even notice most of these

HanzeR

921 posts

Joined May 2012

HanzeR 2014-09-23T01:45:58+00:00

pooptartsonas wrote:
[HanzeR's Insane]

This is a lot different from how I map so I don't know if I'll be able to help much on making it flow well, I'll look for what I can though.

00:12:446 (1,2,3) - This is confusing, the two notes after the slider look like 1/4 notes. I read them as 1/4 even though I know the song. Maybe stack them or something? I don't think it's a problem once the rhythm starts going, ie I think 00:14:275 (5,6) is fine. ok
00:14:641 (1,4) - This blanket is pretty off fixed
00:19:031 (1) - ^ fixed
00:22:690 (3,1) - Not egregious but still off a bit fixed
00:53:605 (4,1) - ^ fixed
01:04:031 (4) - Move this note farther away from the slider? i think its fine
01:45:556 (1,2,1,2) - Highly reccommend not having the spacing get so high at the end of this stream, I had trouble playing it even when I knew it was coming and when I did FC it I usually got 100s due to notelocking I believe. reduced a bit
01:46:836 (1) - Move last point to x277 y127 for better blanket ok

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180,36,121836,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,184,122019,1,4,3:0:0:0:
16,64,122202,1,6,2:0:0:0:
152,120,122385,1,2,2:0:0:0:
64,140,122568,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,100,122751,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,296,122934,6,0,P|104:308|48:240,1,176,4|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
264,256,123483,2,0,L|360:264,1,88,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,328,123849,2,0,P|396:332|460:280,1,176,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,196,124306,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,208,124397,6,0,L|492:116,1,88,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,32,124763,1,2,3:0:0:0:
388,160,124946,2,0,B|292:148|292:148|244:112,1,132,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,104,125312,2,0,P|204:124|192:172,1,88,2|8,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
240,220,125678,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,95,125861,6,0,L|131:276,1,176,4|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
204,320,126410,2,0,P|219:272|204:230,1,88,0|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,352,126775,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,344,126958,2,0,L|388:336,1,88,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,220,127324,2,0,P|452:212|404:280,1,132,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,328,127690,5,2,0:0:0:0:
508,128,127873,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,192,128056,1,4,0:0:0:0:
444,64,128239,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,168,128422,2,0,L|184:156,1,132,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,96,128788,6,0,P|112:136|124:192,1,88,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,284,129153,1,2,3:0:0:0:
108,256,129336,2,0,L|12:272,1,88,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,304,129702,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,168,129885,1,2,3:0:0:0:
240,364,130068,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,216,130251,6,0,P|412:228|440:264,1,88,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,348,130617,1,2,3:0:0:0:
276,244,130800,2,0,L|308:52,1,176,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,20,131349,2,0,P|464:44|464:72,1,44,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,88,131531,2,0,P|318:116|298:136,1,44,0|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
184,60,131714,6,0,P|116:56|80:116,1,132,4|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,104,132080,2,0,L|16:208,1,88,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,364,132446,1,4,0:0:0:0:
112,204,132629,1,0,0:0:0:0:
0,292,132812,1,2,0:0:0:0:
124,124,132995,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,308,133178,6,0,P|296:328|364:316,1,88,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,160,133544,2,0,P|111:167|67:220,1,88,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,104,133910,2,0,P|337:72|337:2,1,88,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,172,134275,2,0,P|228:212|284:196,1,132,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,88,134641,6,0,P|184:76|156:76,1,44,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,108,135007,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,92,135190,2,0,L|80:188,1,88,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,332,135739,2,0,L|161:277,1,44,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,208,136105,5,2,0:0:0:0:
68,280,136288,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,260,136470,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,260,136653,2,0,P|28:276|12:308,1,88,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,344,137202,2,0,L|296:332,1,44,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,260,137568,5,2,0:0:0:0:
336,244,137751,1,2,0:0:0:0:
260,208,137934,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,304,138117,2,0,L|484:292,1,88,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,224,138666,2,0,L|212:216,1,44,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,136,139031,5,2,0:0:0:0:
420,120,139214,1,2,0:0:0:0:
452,204,139397,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,128,139580,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,84,139763,5,2,0:0:0:0:
432,100,139946,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,200,140129,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,52,140312,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,240,140495,6,0,P|184:236|168:224,1,44,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,196,140861,2,0,P|171:173|168:153,1,44,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,140,141227,2,0,P|208:112|220:96,1,44,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,112,141592,2,0,P|282:95|302:92,1,44,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,136,141958,2,0,P|348:140|363:152,1,44,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,200,142324,2,0,P|360:222|363:242,1,44,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,264,142690,2,0,P|307:291|296:307,1,44,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,284,143056,6,0,P|217:300|197:303,1,44,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,244,143422,2,0,P|148:239|132:228,1,44,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,160,143788,2,0,P|131:137|128:117,1,44,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,88,144153,2,0,P|200:60|212:44,1,44,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,72,144519,2,0,P|306:55|326:52,1,44,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,128,144885,2,0,P|387:132|404:144,1,44,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,224,145251,2,0,P|392:246|395:266,1,44,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,145617,5,8,0:0:0:0:

- Ruu -

- Ruu - 2014-09-28T01:24:01+00:00

mod it because love the song

Normal

• 00:36:593 (1) - end the slider at here? 00:37:324

HanzeR's Insane

• 01:13:178 (1,2,3,4) - make them like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2078908
• 01:28:544 (3) - move to x268 y168 looks better on it

Reunion

• 00:32:842 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - rip hue
• 00:32:842 (1,2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2078917 ... delete the 2nd slider, move the first slider on 00:32:934
• 00:33:300 (4) - remove the circle
• 00:33:666 (1) - remove the slider
• 00:32:934 (1,2,3) - make them like this?

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2078932
• 00:33:666 (3) - add finish

i'm sorry if my mod doesn't really helpful, still newbie at modding :'<
Good luck /o/

JeZag

518 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

JeZag 2014-09-28T02:39:02+00:00

Every mod is a chance for correction \o/

- Ruu - wrote:
Normal
• 00:36:593 (1) - end the slider at here? 00:37:324 On purpose, just like 00:42:447 (1)

Reunion
• 00:32:842 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - rip hue WTF I DONT REMEMBER DOING THIS fixed lol
stoopid errors
• 00:32:842 (1,2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2078917 ... delete the 2nd slider, move the first slider on 00:32:934
• 00:33:300 (4) - remove the circle
• 00:33:666 (1) - remove the slider
should all be fixed now (IDK how it happened >.<)
• 00:32:934 (1,2,3) - make them like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2078932 mapped to match vocaloids
• 00:33:666 (3) - add finish soft finish should be enough ^^

i'm sorry if my mod doesn't really helpful, still newbie at modding :'<
Good luck /o/

Thanks for the mod and your time

HanzeR

921 posts

Joined May 2012

HanzeR 2014-10-01T01:36:26+00:00

- Ruu - wrote:
mod it because love the song
HanzeR's Insane
• 01:13:178 (1,2,3,4) - make them like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2078908
• 01:28:544 (3) - move to x268 y168 looks better on it

no changes thx

JeZag

518 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

JeZag 2014-10-01T01:59:00+00:00

oops...

AppLoad

AppLoad 2014-10-01T13:53:36+00:00

Hi JeZag. Mod from my modding queue, thanks for mod) Go~

Hard
00:25:252 (2) - Maybe change the end of slider?
00:57:813 (2) - Move from under the slider.
01:06:410 (2,3) - I don't like this, especially 01:06:958 (3) this slider. Maybe made Reverse Selection and move this slider in another place or anything else?
01:12:446 (3,4) - These sliders located farther the preceding note. Maybe make them nearer?
02:05:130 (3) - ^

HanzeR's Insane
00:21:958 (1) - Maybe change the end of slider and make it near to next slider?
01:37:781 (1,2,3) - Maybe a bit compressed this moment? For example
01:48:849 (1) - Delete NC here, 01:49:763 (2) - Add here, and delete here 01:50:495 (1).

Reunion
00:30:464 (7) - This object comes out from stream or not?
00:40:251 (4) - Maybe make this slider so?
00:53:422 (4,5,6) - I think it will look better

It's all, nice song - nice map. Good Luck. Go to rank)

HanzeR

921 posts

Joined May 2012

HanzeR 2014-10-02T00:18:53+00:00

[AppLoad] wrote:
Hi JeZag. Mod from my modding queue, thanks for mod) Go~
HanzeR's Insane
00:21:958 (1) - Maybe change the end of slider and make it near to next slider?
01:37:781 (1,2,3) - Maybe a bit compressed this moment? For example
01:48:849 (1) - Delete NC here, 01:49:763 (2) - Add here, and delete here 01:50:495 (1).

no change thx

JeZag

518 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

JeZag 2014-10-02T00:49:32+00:00

[AppLoad] wrote:
Hard
00:25:252 (2) - Maybe change the end of slider? knew this was coming sooner or later x.x changed
00:57:813 (2) - Move from under the slider. fixed
01:06:410 (2,3) - I don't like this, especially 01:06:958 (3) this slider. Maybe made Reverse Selection and move this slider in another place or anything else? On puropse; no change
01:12:446 (3,4) - These sliders located farther the preceding note. Maybe make them nearer? This gap is the same as a gap before it; no change
02:05:130 (3) - ^ seems like a big gap but it is actually constant with the other sliders; no change

Reunion
00:30:464 (7) - This object comes out from stream or not? It is part of the stream, no change
00:40:251 (4) - Maybe make this slider so? On purpose (although it looks better like that, it doesnt quite play out so well)
00:53:422 (4,5,6) - I think it will look betterLooks better, so changed

It's all, nice song - nice map. Good Luck. Go to rank)

Thanks for le mod

tutuhaha

3,000 posts

Joined October 2010

tutuhaha 2014-10-03T02:18:20+00:00

[Reunion]
00:04:031 (5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2094883
00:09:885 (5) - ctrl+g
00:25:068 (5) - delete？
00:27:446 (2) - maybe move this to x416 y160
00:36:135 (x) - well, I hope you can find a way to add note on here
00:40:983 (2,3) - ctrl+g with BOTH note
00:41:349 (4) - and then move this one on x132 y132
00:48:208 (x) - miss rhythm I think
00:27:446 (2) - ...I am really sure this rhythm will work better than what you doing now
osu.ppy.sh/ss/2094891
00:56:166 (4,5) - I think the space was too large and doesn't make sense...I think...make be try the space shorter than 00:55:617 (1,2,3) -
01:06:775 (4) - ctrl+g
01:37:599 (x) - add note
01:37:781 (x) - ^ i hope you can do that
02:03:483 (3,4) - ctrl+g
02:08:788 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - I really like this part, you doing really good job about rhythm and composing <3
02:12:080 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - some part like this, I am not really sure about that. Actually, I think there has too many unnecessary rhythm on this diff, like this, I only can hear about 1/2 rhythm.........

[HanzeR's Insane]
02:25:251 (7) - ctrl+g
00:14:275 (5,6) - this will be make sense if it put in 00:14:641
00:21:227 (5) - move to x88 y168
00:31:836 (4) - well..I think should end the 00:32:111
00:37:324 (3) - ..end at 00:37:599 will be more funny I think xP
01:44:092 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - .....I hope you find enough test play for this part...and now I dont think this should happen on the easier Insane.........
01:56:349 (5) - move to x284 y236
02:02:934 (1) - use 1/4 rhythm please........
02:12:995 (6) - move to x224 y224?
02:17:568 (1,2) - use the same distance with 02:19:031 (1,2) -

[Hard]
HR+1
00:29:092 (x) - add rhythm?
00:45:373 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I like this part <3
01:08:056 (3) - end at 01:08:330
01:52:142 (4) - delete whistle
02:06:227 (1,2,3,4,5) - unnecessary note :<....
really good hard when I begin to play, but I felt werid begin with 01:51:227 (1) - ..........maybe just because I am a bad player...but it felt werid when you change the distance without change the slider Velocity

[Easy]
SliderMultiplier:0.700000005960464
just change it to 0.7

JeZag

518 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

JeZag 2014-10-03T22:16:16+00:00

tutuhaha wrote:
[Reunion]
00:04:031 (5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2094883 I want to keep consistent DS and (half assed) flow
00:09:885 (5) - ctrl+g ^^^
00:25:068 (5) - delete？Nah xD
00:27:446 (2) - maybe move this to x416 y160 I was thinking about flow into 00:27:813 (4) rather then flow out of 00:26:898 (5) ._.
00:36:135 (x) - well, I hope you can find a way to add note on here xD yes i did
00:40:983 (2,3) - ctrl+g with BOTH note I like this design.. changed
00:41:349 (4) - and then move this one on x132 y132
00:48:208 (x) - miss rhythm I think changed
00:27:446 (2) - ...I am really sure this rhythm will work better than what you doing now let a mapper overmap once in a while xD
osu.ppy.sh/ss/2094891
00:56:166 (4,5) - I think the space was too large and doesn't make sense...I think...make be try the space shorter than 00:55:617 (1,2,3) - I <3 my jumps x.x
01:06:775 (4) - ctrl+g nah, I like the flow personally
01:37:599 (x) - add note mhm fixed
01:37:781 (x) - ^ i hope you can do that going to map the whole entire next part x.x so going to include this too i guess
02:03:483 (3,4) - ctrl+g like it better... fixed
02:08:788 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - I really like this part, you doing really good job about rhythm and composing <3 thx <3
02:12:080 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - some part like this, I am not really sure about that. Actually, I think there has too many unnecessary rhythm on this diff, like this, I only can hear about 1/2 rhythm......... xD apparently I love overmapping

[Hard]
HR+1 meh fixed
00:29:092 (x) - add rhythm? changed
00:45:373 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I like this part <3 <3 me too
01:08:056 (3) - end at 01:08:330 fixed
01:52:142 (4) - delete whistle idk where you mean (two whistles on both ends)
02:06:227 (1,2,3,4,5) - unnecessary note :<.... xD I can delete if others find this annoying too
really good hard when I begin to play, but I felt werid begin with 01:51:227 (1) - ..........maybe just because I am a bad player...but it felt werid when you change the distance without change the slider Velocity too bad im too much of a lazy asse to remap with faster SV xD

[Easy]
SliderMultiplier:0.700000005960464
just change it to 0.7
I honestly dont know how it got there.... fixed

thx for the mod

I Want a Cuddle

I Want a Cuddle 2014-10-10T18:33:04+00:00

[Easy]
00:07:324 (1) - I'd move this to x:224 y:304
00:54:153 (1) - Modify this slider, make it curve.
01:14:641 (5) - Delete this note
01:14:732 (1) - Move this slider to 01:14:641 and adjust the end.
01:38:056 (5,1) - The same. Delete the note and move the slider.
01:57:080 (1) - Move this. It's out of the map
02:05:861 (1) - ^
02:08:787 (1) - ^
02:14:641 (5,1) - The same note and slider. Imo i don't like it

[Normal]
00:04:031 (1,2) - Improve here. Don't do the same.
00:12:812 - Here. i'd prefer this: http://prntscr.com/4uvjh5
00:27:629 - I feel like i need something here.
00:48:300 (2) - Move this to: x:256 y:304
00:57:812 - Make a new note here.
01:36:592 (1) - Move this. Out of the map.
01:59:275 - Make a new note here.

[Hard]
00:34:580 (3,2) - Overlapping looks bad here.
01:00:008 (1) - Out of the map
01:56:349 (5) - Out of the map
WOW. I really like this DIFF. *here's a star*

[HanzeR's Insane]
00:01:471 (1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Improve this whole part. It looks good but it's boring and repetitive.
00:16:105 (1) - Don't end the slider at blue tick. Sounds bad.
00:21:958 (1) - The same.
00:34:489 (3) - Delete this note.
00:35:861 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Make the stream with the same distance snapping.
00:50:769 (4) - Delete this note.
00:54:153 (1) - Meh, slider ending in a blue tick.
01:11:349 (5,6) - Modify it. Looks bad and it doesn't fit with the music imo.
01:37:507 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Overmapping and if you're gonna make a stream, use the same distance snapping.
01:39:153 (5) - Move this to x:256 y:116
From 01:44:092 to 01:45:830 - A lot of overmapping, try to do this with sliders. It'll improve the map alot.
01:50:769 (2) - Delete this.
01:59:458 (5) - Move this to x:64 y:272
02:04:306 (4) - Delete this.
02:08:422 (5) - Move this to x:344 y:192
02:20:495 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Dont be repetitive.

HanzeR

921 posts

Joined May 2012

HanzeR 2014-10-10T19:03:54+00:00

tutuhaha wrote:
[HanzeR's Insane]
02:25:251 (7) - ctrl+g nothx
00:14:275 (5,6) - this will be make sense if it put in 00:14:641 ?
00:21:227 (5) - move to x88 y168 ok
00:31:836 (4) - well..I think should end the 00:32:111 lol cool idea ... maybe
00:37:324 (3) - ..end at 00:37:599 will be more funny I think xP
01:44:092 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - .....I hope you find enough test play for this part...and now I dont think this should happen on the easier Insane......... i like it
01:56:349 (5) - move to x284 y236 fixed
02:02:934 (1) - use 1/4 rhythm please........ maybe
02:12:995 (6) - move to x224 y224? fixed
02:17:568 (1,2) - use the same distance with 02:19:031 (1,2) - fixed

I Want a Cuddle wrote:
[HanzeR's Insane]
00:01:471 (1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Improve this whole part. It looks good but it's boring and repetitive.
00:16:105 (1) - Don't end the slider at blue tick. Sounds bad.
00:21:958 (1) - The same.
00:34:489 (3) - Delete this note.
00:35:861 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Make the stream with the same distance snapping.
00:50:769 (4) - Delete this note.
00:54:153 (1) - Meh, slider ending in a blue tick.
01:11:349 (5,6) - Modify it. Looks bad and it doesn't fit with the music imo.
01:37:507 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Overmapping and if you're gonna make a stream, use the same distance snapping.
01:39:153 (5) - Move this to x:256 y:116
From 01:44:092 to 01:45:830 - A lot of overmapping, try to do this with sliders. It'll improve the map alot.
01:50:769 (2) - Delete this.
01:59:458 (5) - Move this to x:64 y:272
02:04:306 (4) - Delete this.
02:08:422 (5) - Move this to x:344 y:192
02:20:495 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Dont be repetitive.

no changes thx for mods

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JeZag

518 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

JeZag 2014-10-10T21:16:26+00:00

I Want a Cuddle wrote:
[Easy]
00:07:324 (1) - I'd move this to x:224 y:304 ruins the blanket x.x
00:54:153 (1) - Modify this slider, make it curve. it is curved right now; no change
01:14:641 (5) - Delete this note personally like a note before sliders due to no hit sound; no change
01:14:732 (1) - Move this slider to 01:14:641 and adjust the end. ^^^ no change
01:38:056 (5,1) - The same. Delete the note and move the slider. ^^^
01:57:080 (1) - Move this. It's out of the map fixed
02:05:861 (1) - ^ this shouldnt be off the map; test played it and its on the editor grid; no change
02:08:787 (1) - ^ ^^^
02:14:641 (5,1) - The same note and slider. Imo i don't like it again with no hitsounds on a spinner :<

[Normal]
00:04:031 (1,2) - Improve here. Don't do the same. meh... changed
00:12:812 - Here. i'd prefer this: http://prntscr.com/4uvjh5 i didnt map like that for the other piano parts earlier so not going to now (just fo consistency and note density)
00:27:629 - I feel like i need something here. don't wanna stress out normal diff. too much
00:48:300 (2) - Move this to: x:256 y:304 i see that you're suggesting symmetry, but i was mapping a triangle between 00:47:203 (2,1,2)
00:57:812 - Make a new note here. Following lyrics, not rhythm
01:36:592 (1) - Move this. Out of the map. fixed
01:59:275 - Make a new note here. Following lyrics, not really rhythm

[Hard]
00:34:580 (3,2) - Overlapping looks bad here. if its a hard diff, i'm assuming players can read it (besides, it does follow the rhythm and lyrics)
01:00:008 (1) - Out of the map fixed
01:56:349 (5) - Out of the map fixed
WOW. I really like this DIFF. *here's a star* thanks *o*

thx for the mod ^_^

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2014-10-12T18:13:19+00:00

mom help im becoming a tsundere

Overall:
00:12:446 - ex. . . excuse me?

Re. . . reunion?:
02:16:105 (1,2,3) - Like, I can sort of get why the other jumps exist, but these just don't flow very nicely compared to the last ones
02:17:568 (1,2,3) - ^

Actually really nice. The hitsound style isn't really my cup of tea, but like, it's consistent and creative where it needs to be, so whatever.

HAnz:
00:14:275 (5,6) - but why
01:26:349 (1) - this jump doesn't have to be as big as it is.
01:37:781 (1,2,3) - ??????????????????
01:44:092 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - OK THESE COMBOS LIKE you don't need all of that NC

Hard:
Ye

Normal:
combocolors??????

Easy:
COMBOCLOLROS???

yeah uh i could bubble this after you fix these

JeZag

518 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

JeZag 2014-10-12T20:12:13+00:00

CDFA wrote:
mom help im becoming a tsundere

Overall:
00:12:446 - ex. . . excuse me? 'Tis one of the things you get used to once you map the map ;w;

Re. . . reunion?:
02:16:105 (1,2,3) - Like, I can sort of get why the other jumps exist, but these just don't flow very nicely compared to the last ones seemed fine to me when I mapped it.... fixed anyhow
02:17:568 (1,2,3) - ^ fixed too

Actually really nice. The hitsound style isn't really my cup of tea, but like, it's consistent and creative where it needs to be, so whatever. I started this mapset not knowing how to hitsound, and this is how it turned out xD

HAnz:
00:14:275 (5,6) - but why
01:26:349 (1) - this jump doesn't have to be as big as it is.
01:37:781 (1,2,3) - ??????????????????
01:44:092 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - OK THESE COMBOS LIKE you don't need all of that NC

Hard:
Ye
This be my fav. diff

Normal:
combocolors?????? Originally I wanted to vary colors to represent intensity but it didn't work orz fixed

Easy:
COMBOCLOLROS??? fixed

yeah uh i could bubble this after you fix these

Thanks for the mod >w<
Just waiting on HanzeR now~

HanzeR

921 posts

Joined May 2012

HanzeR 2014-10-12T20:23:16+00:00

CDFA wrote:
HAnz:
00:14:275 (5,6) - but why the guitar note is repeated >_>
01:26:349 (1) - this jump doesn't have to be as big as it is. changed
01:37:781 (1,2,3) - ?????????????????? changed
01:44:092 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - OK THESE COMBOS LIKE you don't need all of that NC removed combos by 1/2

thxs mod

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480,208,124397,6,0,L|492:116,1,88,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,32,124763,1,2,3:0:0:0:
388,160,124946,2,0,B|292:148|292:148|244:112,1,132,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,104,125312,2,0,P|204:124|192:172,1,88,2|8,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
240,220,125678,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,95,125861,6,0,L|131:276,1,176,4|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
204,320,126410,2,0,P|219:272|204:230,1,88,0|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,352,126775,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,344,126958,2,0,L|388:336,1,88,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,220,127324,2,0,P|452:212|404:280,1,132,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,328,127690,5,2,0:0:0:0:
508,128,127873,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,192,128056,1,4,0:0:0:0:
444,64,128239,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,168,128422,2,0,L|184:156,1,132,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,96,128788,6,0,P|112:136|124:192,1,88,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,284,129153,1,2,3:0:0:0:
108,256,129336,2,0,L|12:272,1,88,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,304,129702,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,168,129885,1,2,3:0:0:0:
240,364,130068,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,216,130251,6,0,P|412:228|440:264,1,88,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,348,130617,1,2,3:0:0:0:
276,244,130800,2,0,L|308:52,1,176,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,20,131349,2,0,P|464:44|464:72,1,44,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,88,131531,2,0,P|318:116|298:136,1,44,0|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
184,60,131714,6,0,P|116:56|80:116,1,132,4|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,104,132080,2,0,L|16:208,1,88,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,364,132446,1,4,0:0:0:0:
112,204,132629,1,0,0:0:0:0:
0,292,132812,1,2,0:0:0:0:
124,124,132995,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,308,133178,6,0,P|296:328|364:316,1,88,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,160,133544,2,0,P|111:167|67:220,1,88,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,104,133910,2,0,P|337:72|337:2,1,88,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,172,134275,2,0,P|228:212|284:196,1,132,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,88,134641,6,0,P|184:76|156:76,1,44,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,108,135007,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,92,135190,2,0,L|80:188,1,88,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,332,135739,2,0,L|161:277,1,44,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,208,136105,5,2,0:0:0:0:
68,280,136288,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,260,136470,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,260,136653,2,0,P|28:276|12:308,1,88,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,344,137202,2,0,L|296:332,1,44,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,260,137568,5,2,0:0:0:0:
340,240,137751,1,2,0:0:0:0:
260,208,137934,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,304,138117,2,0,L|484:292,1,88,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,224,138666,2,0,L|212:216,1,44,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,136,139031,5,2,0:0:0:0:
420,120,139214,1,2,0:0:0:0:
452,204,139397,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,128,139580,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,84,139763,5,2,0:0:0:0:
432,100,139946,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,200,140129,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,52,140312,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,240,140495,6,0,P|184:236|168:224,1,44,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,196,140861,2,0,P|171:173|168:153,1,44,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,140,141227,2,0,P|208:112|220:96,1,44,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,112,141592,2,0,P|282:95|302:92,1,44,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,136,141958,2,0,P|348:140|363:152,1,44,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,200,142324,2,0,P|360:222|363:242,1,44,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,264,142690,2,0,P|307:291|296:307,1,44,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,284,143056,6,0,P|217:300|197:303,1,44,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,244,143422,2,0,P|148:239|132:228,1,44,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,160,143788,2,0,P|131:137|128:117,1,44,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,88,144153,2,0,P|200:60|212:44,1,44,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,72,144519,2,0,P|306:55|326:52,1,44,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,128,144885,2,0,P|387:132|404:144,1,44,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,224,145251,2,0,P|392:246|395:266,1,44,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,145617,5,8,0:0:0:0:

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2014-10-13T19:33:32+00:00

Forum PM me after you change HanzeR's stuff (Unless you already did. I copy-pasted HanzeR's diff into the .osu and it says "Update to Latest" so sorry if I'm wrong, lol

)

EDIT: Here we go

JeZag

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JeZag 2014-10-14T21:26:29+00:00

Thanks for the bubble!
So close to rank (than I have ever been) >w<

zxhzxhz

70 posts

Joined November 2012

zxhzxhz 2014-10-27T01:22:35+00:00

nice map~~hope your map ranked earily

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i played:

JeZag

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JeZag 2014-10-27T01:29:35+00:00

zxhzxhz wrote:
nice map~~hope your map ranked earily
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i played:

Any day now >w<
lool

Lin-Kun

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Lin-Kun 2014-11-01T17:30:28+00:00

Woop! a VERY late+short mod from my Q!

MOD!

Hard
00:13:544 (2) to 00:17:202 (3) - They're all in the same area O.o Move it around a bit?
01:03:483 (4,1) - Awkward Stack
01:30:739 (1,2) - idk why i don't like stacking the ends of sliders...
02:05:130 (3) - Doesn't this look a bit far away from 02:04:398 (1,2)?

Easy
One thing i notice is that... well... easy is 90% slider. Lots of sliders in an easy mode is normal, but this is ALOT
00:01:471 (1) - the curvy part at the end of this slider looks kinda... awkwardly small... (Same for the other sliders like this) I just think they show up too much
00:43:909 (3) - Maybe this can blanket both 00:42:446 (2,1)? (I tried, it's actually kinda hard... Kudosu if you do)
01:10:251 (3) - Maybe this can blanket slider before or hit circle after somehow
01:37:324 (4) - ctrl-g this and move (5)?

actually had a hard time finding flaws O.O i think your map is great

JeZag

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JeZag 2014-11-06T16:15:55+00:00

Lin-Kun wrote:
Woop! a VERY late+short mod from my Q!

MOD!
Hard
00:13:544 (2) to 00:17:202 (3) - They're all in the same area O.o Move it around a bit?
01:03:483 (4,1) - Awkward Stack
01:30:739 (1,2) - idk why i don't like stacking the ends of sliders...
02:05:130 (3) - Doesn't this look a bit far away from 02:04:398 (1,2)?

Easy
One thing i notice is that... well... easy is 90% slider. Lots of sliders in an easy mode is normal, but this is ALOT
00:01:471 (1) - the curvy part at the end of this slider looks kinda... awkwardly small... (Same for the other sliders like this) I just think they show up too much
00:43:909 (3) - Maybe this can blanket both 00:42:446 (2,1)? (I tried, it's actually kinda hard... Kudosu if you do)
01:10:251 (3) - Maybe this can blanket slider before or hit circle after somehow
01:37:324 (4) - ctrl-g this and move (5)?
actually had a hard time finding flaws O.O i think your map is great

Nothing here is game-breaking or experience-ruining enough to pop a bubble, but if another mod comes in that forces a bubble, pop, I will let you know the things I take into account! Thanks for the mod

pishifat

osu! Paragon

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pishifat 2014-11-29T01:09:45+00:00

mod coming soon

JeZag

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JeZag 2014-11-29T01:30:02+00:00

~~MY ANUS IS READY~~
take your time owo

pishifat

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pishifat 2014-12-01T06:35:02+00:00

hi

asdf = minor/suggestion
asdf = come on do it
asdf = umm really ok

popping because of multiple unrankable issues and overall quality concerns

[general]

remove soft-sliderslide2.wav since it's not used in any difficulty
offset should be 1467 (-4)

[reunion]

a lot of your comboing in this diff makes little sense. i've already explained why in-game, which i think you understood and agreed with. do this stuff and everything will be fine (be sure to fix the colorhaxing afterwards):
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1. 00:24:336 (1,4) - swap ncs
2. 00:24:336 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - uhm are your new combos supposed to be following vocal or musical phrasing? it seems like neither right now. immediately after this you apply newcombos on each downbeat so it would make sense to do so here too.
3. 00:36:593 (7,1) - swap ncs
4. 00:46:105 (4,1) - swap ncs
5. 00:47:203 (5,1) - swap ncs. 00:47:935 (3,4,1) - does this thing right
6. 00:56:531 (1,7) - swap ncs
7. 00:59:641 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - treat this section the same way you treated 01:01:105 (1,2,3,4,1) - . there's too much broken combo stuff to explain with words here so um screenshot fun
8. 01:02:569 (1,5) - swap ncs
9. 01:07:873 (1) - remove nc. if you want to keep this separated in order to not have a 10 object combo, swap the nc with 01:08:056 (3) - instead.
10. 01:11:714 (5,1) - swap ncs
11. 01:14:275 (1) - remove nc
12. 01:32:019 (1,3) - swap ncs
13. 01:33:483 (1,3) - swap ncs
14. 01:35:038 (1,2) - swap ncs
15. 01:38:056 (11,1) - swap ncssssss
16. 01:46:105 (9) - could nc here to keep the streamcomboconsistencystuff, although not necessary
17. 01:48:849 (3) - should nc here so the SV change is apparent
18. 01:51:043 (1,3) - swap ncs
19. 01:55:251 (1,5) - swap ncs
20. 01:55:983 (1,5) - swap ncs
21. 01:59:641 (1,5) - swap ncs
22. 02:00:373 (1,5) - swap ncs
23. 02:02:568 (1,5) - swap ncs
24. 02:11:349 (1,5) - swap ncs
25. 02:12:080 (1,5) - swap ncs
26. 02:12:812 (1,5) - swap ncs
27. 02:14:276 (1) - nc not necessary
28. 02:17:568 (5) - nc is necessary
29. 02:25:617 (7) - nc is recommended
you've got a few objects that touch the default skin's hp bar (which you usually wanna avoid ya know). here's a list of those. moving them slightly lower shouldn't be an issue since none are in inconvenient positions
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1. 01:12:446 (1) - so close to user interface
2. 01:28:361 (4) - lower due to hp bar
3. 01:38:605 (1) - lower due to hp bar
4. 01:57:630 (3) - 2close2ui
5. 02:11:166 (4) - aye hp bar
6. 02:13:544 (6) - aye hp bar aye aye
and here's other stuff:
00:17:019 (4) - seems like this would work a lot better if 4 were moved higher and to the left. follows a much more circular path rather than the awkward linear thing you've got going on right now.
00:17:934 (2) - aesthetically speaking, this slider is pretty eh. could easily be better if it were angled less, like this for example.
01:09:703 (4,6) - 01:09:885 (5,1) - these overlaps would look a lot nicer if they weren't sort of slightly touching as they are now. dedication to the overlaps is better.
01:11:166 (4) - similar to the awkward linear movement pointed out at 00:17:019 (4) - , this would play a bit better if 4 were moved more to the right/up.
01:31:836 - there's a pretty unique sound in instrumentals here and strong vocal which could be accented a lot better with a clickable object rather than a sliderend. converting 01:31:653 (4) - into two circles would be good.
01:37:141 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - hitsound volume here should be higher. i know you're trying to do a volume increase thing, but starting at 25% seems too quiet for what's going on here. doing something like this would work fine (despite going higher than the target volume)
01:51:043 (1,2,3) - spacing inconsistency uh yea
01:51:215 - kiai is unsnapped. you can tell where it should be.
02:06:592 (3,4) - two finishes right after each other sounds pretty ugh. your hitsounds on the normal diff would work there.

just as a last note, you might want to re-draw some of your sliders like 01:51:227 (3) - 02:06:775 (4) - 01:59:092 (3) - etc so they use the newer slider algorithm. right now they're are super grossly bendy, which you can see if you try moving their middle anchors. if you feel like making your map perfect you could fix all of those up. most people don't really notice them so it's not too big of a deal tho. there's also some rhythms and patterns i'm not a huge fan of, but eh they're acceptable i guess

[hanzer]

hitsound volume could use some adjustment. the 15% intro is too low, 33% kiais are too low, and 20% mid-section is too low. the outro should use the same volume as the mid-section (or at least quieter than the kiai). 01:37:507 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - needs to be waaaaay louder
01:30:739 (4) - pretty sure there should be a new combo here since this is the only 2 measure combo

spicy

[hard]

you've got some pretty extreme jumps for a hard diff like... everywhere. it makes it hard to tell which positions are following distance snap and which are just jumps. the most extreme example of this would be 01:49:763 (1,2,3,4,1) - since they're literally spaced the same distance for 1/1 and 1/2 gaps. this same sort of broken spacing applies to everywhere in the difficulty since you've got jumps that extend past 3x distance snap at times. in most cases, it's common to keep distance snap for jumps on a hard at a max of maybe a bit higher than 2x, but more than that just makes for jumps harder than what the actual difficulty is. unfortunately, fixing this would require some remapping, so... sorry bout that :/ it just is too much.
00:01:471 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - whole section has a lot more object density than it really should. it's pretty much the same as the section starting at 00:13:178 (1) - yet the music is waaaaaaaaaaay different. you'll probably want to reconsider the rhythm you use at the beginning. i mean -- the "reunion" difficulty even has less movement than this, which is not right at all. you'll probably want to create less intense rhythms here.
same nc-swapping from "reunion" would apply here too. they should be recognizeable enough so i don't have to point them out specifically.
objects that should be lowered becuase they touch the hp bar:
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1. 01:52:142 (4) -
2. 02:01:288 (4) -
3. 02:09:337 (3) -
01:02:202 (3,4) - pretty hardcore double here. delete whichever object doesn't have the hitsounds cuz uh i dont even need to say
01:13:910 (1) - umm i don't think this new combo is necessary
01:40:983 - doing that break extension thing to this downbeat would be cool.
02:06:592 (3,4) - see reunion
02:14:642 (5) - centering this with the spinner would be nice. its current slightly-offset position is pretty gross when compared to the perfectly centered spinner

well, other than the jumps being too extreme and those minor things, the map is... well alright. using the same slider velocity all the way through is pretty weird when the song is so dynamic, so i'd really say to lower it at places like the intro and 01:26:349 - , which really messes up a lot of what you've mapped unfortunately. the rhythms are fine for the most part, although you use a lot more 1/2 sliders than i'd really expect to be necessary in a hard diff for this song. hopefully some mods will help with that kind of stuff, and if not, i can look into it with you. the amount of stacks you use is also concerning, which some scrubby testplayers of mine were able to confirm by sucking balls at reading everything, so if you're feeling cheeky you can adjust some of those too. also just a general thing: you'll want to avoid over-curving these 1/2 beat objects like 00:18:666 (5) - . just looks better if not curved to that degree

[normal]

similar to the hard diff, there's some rhythm issues in the intro here. it's not actually as bad as the hard diff's stuff though, this is just a lot of issues with polarity. that issue can be found in the multiple 3/2 beat gaps here, which could easily be fixed by rethinking your rhythm to only include 1 beat and 1/2 beat gaps in the intro. something like this or this or anything in between would work, just try to avoid the 3/2 beat gaps.
00:06:592 (5) - well uh there's no sound in the music for this slider's head, which is really nonrepresntative of the music for obvious reasons.
00:24:886 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - something you'd really want to avoid in normal diffs is spamming 1/2 sliders. i know you're trying to cover the important beats, which is fine, but using more 1/2 gaps would be less uncomfortable to play. i don't want to make your map for you or anything, but just as an example, doing something like this covers the important beats in teh song without abusing 1/2 sliders like you currently are. you're really lacking in 1/2 gaps between objects, which could easily be used to make the section play a whole lot better. you're also missing some pretty important beats like 00:32:751 - 00:34:214 - which you had managed to map right before this, so #consistency yea. alsooooooo this same issue appears at the slower mid-section of the song, so i'd really suggest changing stuff up there too so there's less 1/2 sliders there.
00:35:861 (4) - using a rhythm to cover the drum roll into 1 would fit a lot nicer.
00:36:592 (1,2) - adding an object at 00:37:324 - could easily fix the polarity issue present here (explaination somewhere up there^). fits the music really well since there's a strong snare hit there
00:38:056 (3) - should be extended in the same way as 00:36:592 (1) - since it's the same exact thing in the song
00:42:446 (1,2) - you already know
00:43:910 (3) - yeah...
00:57:081 (1,2) - yeaheyeayeayea
00:58:178 (1,2) - combos should be swapped
00:58:544 (2,3) - yeayeayaeyaeyaeya
00:59:642 (1,2) - combos shoudl be swappedddd
01:03:483 (2) - uh maybe it's just me, but angling this so sharply doesn't really fit that well. there's nothing in the song worth doing that for, so just bending it less would be fine
01:05:313 (1) - multiple repeats on a 1/2 slider in lower difficulties is something you really don't want to do ever since it's impossible to read the second repeat. just use a different rhythm and it should be fine.
01:04:398 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - i have no idea what you're thinking with the new combos here. just putting them on the downbeats would be better than these weird places that aren't following musical or vocal prhasign
01:09:519 - add an object for the polaritieszzzzfsfsf.
01:10:983 - ^
01:08:422 (1,2) - swap ncs
01:09:885 (1,2) - ^
01:11:349 (1,2) - ^
01:14:733 (1) - really trivial thing, but putting a 1/2 space between object/spinner is better than a 1/4 space on normal/easy diffs for reading purposes. doesn't affect anything you're mapping so yea
01:26:349 (1,2) - look waht we have here. in case somehow it wasn't clear, you should avoid the 3/2 gap in ways explained eariler
01:34:763 (1) - the downbeat here would be a lot better suited to have a clickable object instead of a sliderend. also maybe pay attention to the comboing in that screenshot maybemaybe
01:38:147 (1) - spinner length should be the same as hard? or hard's should be the same as this, i dunno. just whatever you want that's consistent will work fine. if you make it the same as hard, be sure to include the break extension thing too
01:52:141 (3) - same thing as 01:05:313 (1) -
01:57:080 (1) - similar thing to 01:03:483 (2) -
01:59:092 (5,1) - ayyyyyyye
02:00:008 (2,1) - exactly overlapping a sliderbody is usually not great. variable placements are much more readable and less repetitive.
02:03:849 (3) - ok this one really can't just be me, it's angled way too sharply.
02:06:410 - you reallyyyyyyyyyyyy need to map this beat. just do it
02:14:733 (1) - same stupid thing mentioned earlier about 1/2 gap instead of 1/4

there's a couple more new combo spots which i didn't mention cuz i think you should know where i'd point them out by now. if not, i'll just point them out whenever i check the map again. there's some pretty blatant rhythm issues here though, which will require some adjustment. sorry. there's also some more catmull sliders like 01:08:788 (2) - which could be re-drawn to be less gross but nobody really seems to care about them anymore. also be sure to avoid those 3/2 gaps if possible

[easy]

00:21:226 (3) - ctrl+ging this object seems like it works a lot better. the weird motion between the tail of 2 and head of 3 is really unappealing when there's an effortless alternative available
00:21:958 (1,2) - not important at all, but rotating these counter-clockwise allows for some pretty easy stacking with 00:21:226 (3) - and 00:24:153 (3) -
00:24:885 (1,2,1,2,3) - rhythm here is uh... really awkward. the music is pretty much the same here as it is at 00:31:104 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - , which does it much better. replicating a rhythm like that would be good. 2 beat sliders like 00:31:104 (2) - are your friend in this section especially
00:25:982 (2) - the reverse on this is unsnapped by 2 milliseconds, which is... uh... bad. resnapping shouldn't be hard tho.
00:38:787 (1) - like 2 pixels from being offscreen. you should reallllllllly move this upwards
01:05:129 (3) - 01:59:275 (3) - uh...what's with the hitsounds on these? they're not in any other difficulty and they don't follow anything specifically in the music soooo kill them
01:14:732 (1) - the length of the spinner here is too short for an easy. extending the break or whatever it's called (note the nc) works to give the same effect. extending the spinner to go through another measure like 02:14:733 (1) - also works, but if you choose that, do it on all of your own difficulties too for #consistency. if hanzer doesn't really want to do it on his diff that's fine.
01:52:324 (3) - would be nice to not have 01:52:690 - as a slider end. rethinking the rhythm there to have the downbeat be a clickable object would be veeery good. anything like 02:02:934 (1,2,3,4) -
01:54:153 (1,2,3,1) - supernazi but these should all have equal spacing between sliderbodies.
02:02:202 (4) - better to make this into a 1/1 slider. will cover that note on next white tick + no more bad polarity, which is even more of an issue on an easy diff
02:14:733 (1) - same thing as normal. would apply to that other spinner too if you decide to keep it as a spinner

better than normal/hard at least. getting this diff to a ready-state shouldn't be as problematic

sorry to say, but i don't think that this map should have been bubbled. there's some pretty clear rhythmic issues in the lower difficulties that need adjustment along with some other minor things in all of jezag's diffs. anyway, i really think this should get a few more mods before pushing it forward again, specifically focusing on the non-hanzer difficulties. i'll try to get some quality modders to take a look at it as well, since it's also my responsibility to get this rebubbled, but you should try to get some too. i haven't looked at hitsounds closely, but will do when re-checking eventually

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