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JeZag

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

JeZag 2014-10-02T00:49:32+00:00

[AppLoad] wrote:
Hard
00:25:252 (2) - Maybe change the end of slider? knew this was coming sooner or later x.x changed
00:57:813 (2) - Move from under the slider. fixed
01:06:410 (2,3) - I don't like this, especially 01:06:958 (3) this slider. Maybe made Reverse Selection and move this slider in another place or anything else? On puropse; no change
01:12:446 (3,4) - These sliders located farther the preceding note. Maybe make them nearer? This gap is the same as a gap before it; no change
02:05:130 (3) - ^ seems like a big gap but it is actually constant with the other sliders; no change

Reunion
00:30:464 (7) - This object comes out from stream or not? It is part of the stream, no change
00:40:251 (4) - Maybe make this slider so? On purpose (although it looks better like that, it doesnt quite play out so well)
00:53:422 (4,5,6) - I think it will look betterLooks better, so changed

It's all, nice song - nice map. Good Luck. Go to rank)

Thanks for le mod

tutuhaha

3,000 posts

Joined October 2010

tutuhaha 2014-10-03T02:18:20+00:00

[Reunion]
00:04:031 (5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2094883
00:09:885 (5) - ctrl+g
00:25:068 (5) - delete？
00:27:446 (2) - maybe move this to x416 y160
00:36:135 (x) - well, I hope you can find a way to add note on here
00:40:983 (2,3) - ctrl+g with BOTH note
00:41:349 (4) - and then move this one on x132 y132
00:48:208 (x) - miss rhythm I think
00:27:446 (2) - ...I am really sure this rhythm will work better than what you doing now
osu.ppy.sh/ss/2094891
00:56:166 (4,5) - I think the space was too large and doesn't make sense...I think...make be try the space shorter than 00:55:617 (1,2,3) -
01:06:775 (4) - ctrl+g
01:37:599 (x) - add note
01:37:781 (x) - ^ i hope you can do that
02:03:483 (3,4) - ctrl+g
02:08:788 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - I really like this part, you doing really good job about rhythm and composing <3
02:12:080 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - some part like this, I am not really sure about that. Actually, I think there has too many unnecessary rhythm on this diff, like this, I only can hear about 1/2 rhythm.........

[HanzeR's Insane]
02:25:251 (7) - ctrl+g
00:14:275 (5,6) - this will be make sense if it put in 00:14:641
00:21:227 (5) - move to x88 y168
00:31:836 (4) - well..I think should end the 00:32:111
00:37:324 (3) - ..end at 00:37:599 will be more funny I think xP
01:44:092 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - .....I hope you find enough test play for this part...and now I dont think this should happen on the easier Insane.........
01:56:349 (5) - move to x284 y236
02:02:934 (1) - use 1/4 rhythm please........
02:12:995 (6) - move to x224 y224?
02:17:568 (1,2) - use the same distance with 02:19:031 (1,2) -

[Hard]
HR+1
00:29:092 (x) - add rhythm?
00:45:373 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I like this part <3
01:08:056 (3) - end at 01:08:330
01:52:142 (4) - delete whistle
02:06:227 (1,2,3,4,5) - unnecessary note :<....
really good hard when I begin to play, but I felt werid begin with 01:51:227 (1) - ..........maybe just because I am a bad player...but it felt werid when you change the distance without change the slider Velocity

[Easy]
SliderMultiplier:0.700000005960464
just change it to 0.7

JeZag

518 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

JeZag 2014-10-03T22:16:16+00:00

tutuhaha wrote:
[Reunion]
00:04:031 (5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2094883 I want to keep consistent DS and (half assed) flow
00:09:885 (5) - ctrl+g ^^^
00:25:068 (5) - delete？Nah xD
00:27:446 (2) - maybe move this to x416 y160 I was thinking about flow into 00:27:813 (4) rather then flow out of 00:26:898 (5) ._.
00:36:135 (x) - well, I hope you can find a way to add note on here xD yes i did
00:40:983 (2,3) - ctrl+g with BOTH note I like this design.. changed
00:41:349 (4) - and then move this one on x132 y132
00:48:208 (x) - miss rhythm I think changed
00:27:446 (2) - ...I am really sure this rhythm will work better than what you doing now let a mapper overmap once in a while xD
osu.ppy.sh/ss/2094891
00:56:166 (4,5) - I think the space was too large and doesn't make sense...I think...make be try the space shorter than 00:55:617 (1,2,3) - I <3 my jumps x.x
01:06:775 (4) - ctrl+g nah, I like the flow personally
01:37:599 (x) - add note mhm fixed
01:37:781 (x) - ^ i hope you can do that going to map the whole entire next part x.x so going to include this too i guess
02:03:483 (3,4) - ctrl+g like it better... fixed
02:08:788 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - I really like this part, you doing really good job about rhythm and composing <3 thx <3
02:12:080 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - some part like this, I am not really sure about that. Actually, I think there has too many unnecessary rhythm on this diff, like this, I only can hear about 1/2 rhythm......... xD apparently I love overmapping

[Hard]
HR+1 meh fixed
00:29:092 (x) - add rhythm? changed
00:45:373 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I like this part <3 <3 me too
01:08:056 (3) - end at 01:08:330 fixed
01:52:142 (4) - delete whistle idk where you mean (two whistles on both ends)
02:06:227 (1,2,3,4,5) - unnecessary note :<.... xD I can delete if others find this annoying too
really good hard when I begin to play, but I felt werid begin with 01:51:227 (1) - ..........maybe just because I am a bad player...but it felt werid when you change the distance without change the slider Velocity too bad im too much of a lazy asse to remap with faster SV xD

[Easy]
SliderMultiplier:0.700000005960464
just change it to 0.7
I honestly dont know how it got there.... fixed

thx for the mod

I Want a Cuddle

I Want a Cuddle 2014-10-10T18:33:04+00:00

[Easy]
00:07:324 (1) - I'd move this to x:224 y:304
00:54:153 (1) - Modify this slider, make it curve.
01:14:641 (5) - Delete this note
01:14:732 (1) - Move this slider to 01:14:641 and adjust the end.
01:38:056 (5,1) - The same. Delete the note and move the slider.
01:57:080 (1) - Move this. It's out of the map
02:05:861 (1) - ^
02:08:787 (1) - ^
02:14:641 (5,1) - The same note and slider. Imo i don't like it

[Normal]
00:04:031 (1,2) - Improve here. Don't do the same.
00:12:812 - Here. i'd prefer this: http://prntscr.com/4uvjh5
00:27:629 - I feel like i need something here.
00:48:300 (2) - Move this to: x:256 y:304
00:57:812 - Make a new note here.
01:36:592 (1) - Move this. Out of the map.
01:59:275 - Make a new note here.

[Hard]
00:34:580 (3,2) - Overlapping looks bad here.
01:00:008 (1) - Out of the map
01:56:349 (5) - Out of the map
WOW. I really like this DIFF. *here's a star*

[HanzeR's Insane]
00:01:471 (1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Improve this whole part. It looks good but it's boring and repetitive.
00:16:105 (1) - Don't end the slider at blue tick. Sounds bad.
00:21:958 (1) - The same.
00:34:489 (3) - Delete this note.
00:35:861 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Make the stream with the same distance snapping.
00:50:769 (4) - Delete this note.
00:54:153 (1) - Meh, slider ending in a blue tick.
01:11:349 (5,6) - Modify it. Looks bad and it doesn't fit with the music imo.
01:37:507 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Overmapping and if you're gonna make a stream, use the same distance snapping.
01:39:153 (5) - Move this to x:256 y:116
From 01:44:092 to 01:45:830 - A lot of overmapping, try to do this with sliders. It'll improve the map alot.
01:50:769 (2) - Delete this.
01:59:458 (5) - Move this to x:64 y:272
02:04:306 (4) - Delete this.
02:08:422 (5) - Move this to x:344 y:192
02:20:495 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Dont be repetitive.

HanzeR

921 posts

Joined May 2012

HanzeR 2014-10-10T19:03:54+00:00

tutuhaha wrote:
[HanzeR's Insane]
02:25:251 (7) - ctrl+g nothx
00:14:275 (5,6) - this will be make sense if it put in 00:14:641 ?
00:21:227 (5) - move to x88 y168 ok
00:31:836 (4) - well..I think should end the 00:32:111 lol cool idea ... maybe
00:37:324 (3) - ..end at 00:37:599 will be more funny I think xP
01:44:092 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - .....I hope you find enough test play for this part...and now I dont think this should happen on the easier Insane......... i like it
01:56:349 (5) - move to x284 y236 fixed
02:02:934 (1) - use 1/4 rhythm please........ maybe
02:12:995 (6) - move to x224 y224? fixed
02:17:568 (1,2) - use the same distance with 02:19:031 (1,2) - fixed

I Want a Cuddle wrote:
[HanzeR's Insane]
00:01:471 (1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Improve this whole part. It looks good but it's boring and repetitive.
00:16:105 (1) - Don't end the slider at blue tick. Sounds bad.
00:21:958 (1) - The same.
00:34:489 (3) - Delete this note.
00:35:861 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Make the stream with the same distance snapping.
00:50:769 (4) - Delete this note.
00:54:153 (1) - Meh, slider ending in a blue tick.
01:11:349 (5,6) - Modify it. Looks bad and it doesn't fit with the music imo.
01:37:507 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Overmapping and if you're gonna make a stream, use the same distance snapping.
01:39:153 (5) - Move this to x:256 y:116
From 01:44:092 to 01:45:830 - A lot of overmapping, try to do this with sliders. It'll improve the map alot.
01:50:769 (2) - Delete this.
01:59:458 (5) - Move this to x:64 y:272
02:04:306 (4) - Delete this.
02:08:422 (5) - Move this to x:344 y:192
02:20:495 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Dont be repetitive.

no changes thx for mods

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JeZag

518 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

JeZag 2014-10-10T21:16:26+00:00

I Want a Cuddle wrote:
[Easy]
00:07:324 (1) - I'd move this to x:224 y:304 ruins the blanket x.x
00:54:153 (1) - Modify this slider, make it curve. it is curved right now; no change
01:14:641 (5) - Delete this note personally like a note before sliders due to no hit sound; no change
01:14:732 (1) - Move this slider to 01:14:641 and adjust the end. ^^^ no change
01:38:056 (5,1) - The same. Delete the note and move the slider. ^^^
01:57:080 (1) - Move this. It's out of the map fixed
02:05:861 (1) - ^ this shouldnt be off the map; test played it and its on the editor grid; no change
02:08:787 (1) - ^ ^^^
02:14:641 (5,1) - The same note and slider. Imo i don't like it again with no hitsounds on a spinner :<

[Normal]
00:04:031 (1,2) - Improve here. Don't do the same. meh... changed
00:12:812 - Here. i'd prefer this: http://prntscr.com/4uvjh5 i didnt map like that for the other piano parts earlier so not going to now (just fo consistency and note density)
00:27:629 - I feel like i need something here. don't wanna stress out normal diff. too much
00:48:300 (2) - Move this to: x:256 y:304 i see that you're suggesting symmetry, but i was mapping a triangle between 00:47:203 (2,1,2)
00:57:812 - Make a new note here. Following lyrics, not rhythm
01:36:592 (1) - Move this. Out of the map. fixed
01:59:275 - Make a new note here. Following lyrics, not really rhythm

[Hard]
00:34:580 (3,2) - Overlapping looks bad here. if its a hard diff, i'm assuming players can read it (besides, it does follow the rhythm and lyrics)
01:00:008 (1) - Out of the map fixed
01:56:349 (5) - Out of the map fixed
WOW. I really like this DIFF. *here's a star* thanks *o*

thx for the mod ^_^

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2014-10-12T18:13:19+00:00

mom help im becoming a tsundere

Overall:
00:12:446 - ex. . . excuse me?

Re. . . reunion?:
02:16:105 (1,2,3) - Like, I can sort of get why the other jumps exist, but these just don't flow very nicely compared to the last ones
02:17:568 (1,2,3) - ^

Actually really nice. The hitsound style isn't really my cup of tea, but like, it's consistent and creative where it needs to be, so whatever.

HAnz:
00:14:275 (5,6) - but why
01:26:349 (1) - this jump doesn't have to be as big as it is.
01:37:781 (1,2,3) - ??????????????????
01:44:092 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - OK THESE COMBOS LIKE you don't need all of that NC

Hard:
Ye

Normal:
combocolors??????

Easy:
COMBOCLOLROS???

yeah uh i could bubble this after you fix these

JeZag

518 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

JeZag 2014-10-12T20:12:13+00:00

CDFA wrote:
mom help im becoming a tsundere

Overall:
00:12:446 - ex. . . excuse me? 'Tis one of the things you get used to once you map the map ;w;

Re. . . reunion?:
02:16:105 (1,2,3) - Like, I can sort of get why the other jumps exist, but these just don't flow very nicely compared to the last ones seemed fine to me when I mapped it.... fixed anyhow
02:17:568 (1,2,3) - ^ fixed too

Actually really nice. The hitsound style isn't really my cup of tea, but like, it's consistent and creative where it needs to be, so whatever. I started this mapset not knowing how to hitsound, and this is how it turned out xD

HAnz:
00:14:275 (5,6) - but why
01:26:349 (1) - this jump doesn't have to be as big as it is.
01:37:781 (1,2,3) - ??????????????????
01:44:092 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - OK THESE COMBOS LIKE you don't need all of that NC

Hard:
Ye
This be my fav. diff

Normal:
combocolors?????? Originally I wanted to vary colors to represent intensity but it didn't work orz fixed

Easy:
COMBOCLOLROS??? fixed

yeah uh i could bubble this after you fix these

Thanks for the mod >w<
Just waiting on HanzeR now~

HanzeR

921 posts

Joined May 2012

HanzeR 2014-10-12T20:23:16+00:00

CDFA wrote:
HAnz:
00:14:275 (5,6) - but why the guitar note is repeated >_>
01:26:349 (1) - this jump doesn't have to be as big as it is. changed
01:37:781 (1,2,3) - ?????????????????? changed
01:44:092 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - OK THESE COMBOS LIKE you don't need all of that NC removed combos by 1/2

thxs mod

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256,192,145617,5,8,0:0:0:0:

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2014-10-13T19:33:32+00:00

Forum PM me after you change HanzeR's stuff (Unless you already did. I copy-pasted HanzeR's diff into the .osu and it says "Update to Latest" so sorry if I'm wrong, lol

)

EDIT: Here we go

JeZag

518 posts

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JeZag 2014-10-14T21:26:29+00:00

Thanks for the bubble!
So close to rank (than I have ever been) >w<

zxhzxhz

70 posts

Joined November 2012

zxhzxhz 2014-10-27T01:22:35+00:00

nice map~~hope your map ranked earily

SPOILER

i played:

JeZag

518 posts

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JeZag 2014-10-27T01:29:35+00:00

zxhzxhz wrote:
nice map~~hope your map ranked earily
SPOILER
i played:

Any day now >w<
lool

Lin-Kun

88 posts

Joined June 2014

Lin-Kun 2014-11-01T17:30:28+00:00

Woop! a VERY late+short mod from my Q!

MOD!

Hard
00:13:544 (2) to 00:17:202 (3) - They're all in the same area O.o Move it around a bit?
01:03:483 (4,1) - Awkward Stack
01:30:739 (1,2) - idk why i don't like stacking the ends of sliders...
02:05:130 (3) - Doesn't this look a bit far away from 02:04:398 (1,2)?

Easy
One thing i notice is that... well... easy is 90% slider. Lots of sliders in an easy mode is normal, but this is ALOT
00:01:471 (1) - the curvy part at the end of this slider looks kinda... awkwardly small... (Same for the other sliders like this) I just think they show up too much
00:43:909 (3) - Maybe this can blanket both 00:42:446 (2,1)? (I tried, it's actually kinda hard... Kudosu if you do)
01:10:251 (3) - Maybe this can blanket slider before or hit circle after somehow
01:37:324 (4) - ctrl-g this and move (5)?

actually had a hard time finding flaws O.O i think your map is great

JeZag

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JeZag 2014-11-06T16:15:55+00:00

Lin-Kun wrote:
Woop! a VERY late+short mod from my Q!

MOD!
Hard
00:13:544 (2) to 00:17:202 (3) - They're all in the same area O.o Move it around a bit?
01:03:483 (4,1) - Awkward Stack
01:30:739 (1,2) - idk why i don't like stacking the ends of sliders...
02:05:130 (3) - Doesn't this look a bit far away from 02:04:398 (1,2)?

Easy
One thing i notice is that... well... easy is 90% slider. Lots of sliders in an easy mode is normal, but this is ALOT
00:01:471 (1) - the curvy part at the end of this slider looks kinda... awkwardly small... (Same for the other sliders like this) I just think they show up too much
00:43:909 (3) - Maybe this can blanket both 00:42:446 (2,1)? (I tried, it's actually kinda hard... Kudosu if you do)
01:10:251 (3) - Maybe this can blanket slider before or hit circle after somehow
01:37:324 (4) - ctrl-g this and move (5)?
actually had a hard time finding flaws O.O i think your map is great

Nothing here is game-breaking or experience-ruining enough to pop a bubble, but if another mod comes in that forces a bubble, pop, I will let you know the things I take into account! Thanks for the mod

pishifat

osu! Paragon

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Joined August 2013

pishifat 2014-11-29T01:09:45+00:00

mod coming soon

JeZag

518 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

JeZag 2014-11-29T01:30:02+00:00

~~MY ANUS IS READY~~
take your time owo

pishifat

osu! Paragon

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pishifat 2014-12-01T06:35:02+00:00

hi

asdf = minor/suggestion
asdf = come on do it
asdf = umm really ok

popping because of multiple unrankable issues and overall quality concerns

[general]

remove soft-sliderslide2.wav since it's not used in any difficulty
offset should be 1467 (-4)

[reunion]

a lot of your comboing in this diff makes little sense. i've already explained why in-game, which i think you understood and agreed with. do this stuff and everything will be fine (be sure to fix the colorhaxing afterwards):
SPOILER
1. 00:24:336 (1,4) - swap ncs
2. 00:24:336 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - uhm are your new combos supposed to be following vocal or musical phrasing? it seems like neither right now. immediately after this you apply newcombos on each downbeat so it would make sense to do so here too.
3. 00:36:593 (7,1) - swap ncs
4. 00:46:105 (4,1) - swap ncs
5. 00:47:203 (5,1) - swap ncs. 00:47:935 (3,4,1) - does this thing right
6. 00:56:531 (1,7) - swap ncs
7. 00:59:641 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - treat this section the same way you treated 01:01:105 (1,2,3,4,1) - . there's too much broken combo stuff to explain with words here so um screenshot fun
8. 01:02:569 (1,5) - swap ncs
9. 01:07:873 (1) - remove nc. if you want to keep this separated in order to not have a 10 object combo, swap the nc with 01:08:056 (3) - instead.
10. 01:11:714 (5,1) - swap ncs
11. 01:14:275 (1) - remove nc
12. 01:32:019 (1,3) - swap ncs
13. 01:33:483 (1,3) - swap ncs
14. 01:35:038 (1,2) - swap ncs
15. 01:38:056 (11,1) - swap ncssssss
16. 01:46:105 (9) - could nc here to keep the streamcomboconsistencystuff, although not necessary
17. 01:48:849 (3) - should nc here so the SV change is apparent
18. 01:51:043 (1,3) - swap ncs
19. 01:55:251 (1,5) - swap ncs
20. 01:55:983 (1,5) - swap ncs
21. 01:59:641 (1,5) - swap ncs
22. 02:00:373 (1,5) - swap ncs
23. 02:02:568 (1,5) - swap ncs
24. 02:11:349 (1,5) - swap ncs
25. 02:12:080 (1,5) - swap ncs
26. 02:12:812 (1,5) - swap ncs
27. 02:14:276 (1) - nc not necessary
28. 02:17:568 (5) - nc is necessary
29. 02:25:617 (7) - nc is recommended
you've got a few objects that touch the default skin's hp bar (which you usually wanna avoid ya know). here's a list of those. moving them slightly lower shouldn't be an issue since none are in inconvenient positions
SPOILER
1. 01:12:446 (1) - so close to user interface
2. 01:28:361 (4) - lower due to hp bar
3. 01:38:605 (1) - lower due to hp bar
4. 01:57:630 (3) - 2close2ui
5. 02:11:166 (4) - aye hp bar
6. 02:13:544 (6) - aye hp bar aye aye
and here's other stuff:
00:17:019 (4) - seems like this would work a lot better if 4 were moved higher and to the left. follows a much more circular path rather than the awkward linear thing you've got going on right now.
00:17:934 (2) - aesthetically speaking, this slider is pretty eh. could easily be better if it were angled less, like this for example.
01:09:703 (4,6) - 01:09:885 (5,1) - these overlaps would look a lot nicer if they weren't sort of slightly touching as they are now. dedication to the overlaps is better.
01:11:166 (4) - similar to the awkward linear movement pointed out at 00:17:019 (4) - , this would play a bit better if 4 were moved more to the right/up.
01:31:836 - there's a pretty unique sound in instrumentals here and strong vocal which could be accented a lot better with a clickable object rather than a sliderend. converting 01:31:653 (4) - into two circles would be good.
01:37:141 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - hitsound volume here should be higher. i know you're trying to do a volume increase thing, but starting at 25% seems too quiet for what's going on here. doing something like this would work fine (despite going higher than the target volume)
01:51:043 (1,2,3) - spacing inconsistency uh yea
01:51:215 - kiai is unsnapped. you can tell where it should be.
02:06:592 (3,4) - two finishes right after each other sounds pretty ugh. your hitsounds on the normal diff would work there.

just as a last note, you might want to re-draw some of your sliders like 01:51:227 (3) - 02:06:775 (4) - 01:59:092 (3) - etc so they use the newer slider algorithm. right now they're are super grossly bendy, which you can see if you try moving their middle anchors. if you feel like making your map perfect you could fix all of those up. most people don't really notice them so it's not too big of a deal tho. there's also some rhythms and patterns i'm not a huge fan of, but eh they're acceptable i guess

[hanzer]

hitsound volume could use some adjustment. the 15% intro is too low, 33% kiais are too low, and 20% mid-section is too low. the outro should use the same volume as the mid-section (or at least quieter than the kiai). 01:37:507 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - needs to be waaaaay louder
01:30:739 (4) - pretty sure there should be a new combo here since this is the only 2 measure combo

spicy

[hard]

you've got some pretty extreme jumps for a hard diff like... everywhere. it makes it hard to tell which positions are following distance snap and which are just jumps. the most extreme example of this would be 01:49:763 (1,2,3,4,1) - since they're literally spaced the same distance for 1/1 and 1/2 gaps. this same sort of broken spacing applies to everywhere in the difficulty since you've got jumps that extend past 3x distance snap at times. in most cases, it's common to keep distance snap for jumps on a hard at a max of maybe a bit higher than 2x, but more than that just makes for jumps harder than what the actual difficulty is. unfortunately, fixing this would require some remapping, so... sorry bout that :/ it just is too much.
00:01:471 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - whole section has a lot more object density than it really should. it's pretty much the same as the section starting at 00:13:178 (1) - yet the music is waaaaaaaaaaay different. you'll probably want to reconsider the rhythm you use at the beginning. i mean -- the "reunion" difficulty even has less movement than this, which is not right at all. you'll probably want to create less intense rhythms here.
same nc-swapping from "reunion" would apply here too. they should be recognizeable enough so i don't have to point them out specifically.
objects that should be lowered becuase they touch the hp bar:
SPOILER
1. 01:52:142 (4) -
2. 02:01:288 (4) -
3. 02:09:337 (3) -
01:02:202 (3,4) - pretty hardcore double here. delete whichever object doesn't have the hitsounds cuz uh i dont even need to say
01:13:910 (1) - umm i don't think this new combo is necessary
01:40:983 - doing that break extension thing to this downbeat would be cool.
02:06:592 (3,4) - see reunion
02:14:642 (5) - centering this with the spinner would be nice. its current slightly-offset position is pretty gross when compared to the perfectly centered spinner

well, other than the jumps being too extreme and those minor things, the map is... well alright. using the same slider velocity all the way through is pretty weird when the song is so dynamic, so i'd really say to lower it at places like the intro and 01:26:349 - , which really messes up a lot of what you've mapped unfortunately. the rhythms are fine for the most part, although you use a lot more 1/2 sliders than i'd really expect to be necessary in a hard diff for this song. hopefully some mods will help with that kind of stuff, and if not, i can look into it with you. the amount of stacks you use is also concerning, which some scrubby testplayers of mine were able to confirm by sucking balls at reading everything, so if you're feeling cheeky you can adjust some of those too. also just a general thing: you'll want to avoid over-curving these 1/2 beat objects like 00:18:666 (5) - . just looks better if not curved to that degree

[normal]

similar to the hard diff, there's some rhythm issues in the intro here. it's not actually as bad as the hard diff's stuff though, this is just a lot of issues with polarity. that issue can be found in the multiple 3/2 beat gaps here, which could easily be fixed by rethinking your rhythm to only include 1 beat and 1/2 beat gaps in the intro. something like this or this or anything in between would work, just try to avoid the 3/2 beat gaps.
00:06:592 (5) - well uh there's no sound in the music for this slider's head, which is really nonrepresntative of the music for obvious reasons.
00:24:886 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - something you'd really want to avoid in normal diffs is spamming 1/2 sliders. i know you're trying to cover the important beats, which is fine, but using more 1/2 gaps would be less uncomfortable to play. i don't want to make your map for you or anything, but just as an example, doing something like this covers the important beats in teh song without abusing 1/2 sliders like you currently are. you're really lacking in 1/2 gaps between objects, which could easily be used to make the section play a whole lot better. you're also missing some pretty important beats like 00:32:751 - 00:34:214 - which you had managed to map right before this, so #consistency yea. alsooooooo this same issue appears at the slower mid-section of the song, so i'd really suggest changing stuff up there too so there's less 1/2 sliders there.
00:35:861 (4) - using a rhythm to cover the drum roll into 1 would fit a lot nicer.
00:36:592 (1,2) - adding an object at 00:37:324 - could easily fix the polarity issue present here (explaination somewhere up there^). fits the music really well since there's a strong snare hit there
00:38:056 (3) - should be extended in the same way as 00:36:592 (1) - since it's the same exact thing in the song
00:42:446 (1,2) - you already know
00:43:910 (3) - yeah...
00:57:081 (1,2) - yeaheyeayeayea
00:58:178 (1,2) - combos should be swapped
00:58:544 (2,3) - yeayeayaeyaeyaeya
00:59:642 (1,2) - combos shoudl be swappedddd
01:03:483 (2) - uh maybe it's just me, but angling this so sharply doesn't really fit that well. there's nothing in the song worth doing that for, so just bending it less would be fine
01:05:313 (1) - multiple repeats on a 1/2 slider in lower difficulties is something you really don't want to do ever since it's impossible to read the second repeat. just use a different rhythm and it should be fine.
01:04:398 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - i have no idea what you're thinking with the new combos here. just putting them on the downbeats would be better than these weird places that aren't following musical or vocal prhasign
01:09:519 - add an object for the polaritieszzzzfsfsf.
01:10:983 - ^
01:08:422 (1,2) - swap ncs
01:09:885 (1,2) - ^
01:11:349 (1,2) - ^
01:14:733 (1) - really trivial thing, but putting a 1/2 space between object/spinner is better than a 1/4 space on normal/easy diffs for reading purposes. doesn't affect anything you're mapping so yea
01:26:349 (1,2) - look waht we have here. in case somehow it wasn't clear, you should avoid the 3/2 gap in ways explained eariler
01:34:763 (1) - the downbeat here would be a lot better suited to have a clickable object instead of a sliderend. also maybe pay attention to the comboing in that screenshot maybemaybe
01:38:147 (1) - spinner length should be the same as hard? or hard's should be the same as this, i dunno. just whatever you want that's consistent will work fine. if you make it the same as hard, be sure to include the break extension thing too
01:52:141 (3) - same thing as 01:05:313 (1) -
01:57:080 (1) - similar thing to 01:03:483 (2) -
01:59:092 (5,1) - ayyyyyyye
02:00:008 (2,1) - exactly overlapping a sliderbody is usually not great. variable placements are much more readable and less repetitive.
02:03:849 (3) - ok this one really can't just be me, it's angled way too sharply.
02:06:410 - you reallyyyyyyyyyyyy need to map this beat. just do it
02:14:733 (1) - same stupid thing mentioned earlier about 1/2 gap instead of 1/4

there's a couple more new combo spots which i didn't mention cuz i think you should know where i'd point them out by now. if not, i'll just point them out whenever i check the map again. there's some pretty blatant rhythm issues here though, which will require some adjustment. sorry. there's also some more catmull sliders like 01:08:788 (2) - which could be re-drawn to be less gross but nobody really seems to care about them anymore. also be sure to avoid those 3/2 gaps if possible

[easy]

00:21:226 (3) - ctrl+ging this object seems like it works a lot better. the weird motion between the tail of 2 and head of 3 is really unappealing when there's an effortless alternative available
00:21:958 (1,2) - not important at all, but rotating these counter-clockwise allows for some pretty easy stacking with 00:21:226 (3) - and 00:24:153 (3) -
00:24:885 (1,2,1,2,3) - rhythm here is uh... really awkward. the music is pretty much the same here as it is at 00:31:104 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - , which does it much better. replicating a rhythm like that would be good. 2 beat sliders like 00:31:104 (2) - are your friend in this section especially
00:25:982 (2) - the reverse on this is unsnapped by 2 milliseconds, which is... uh... bad. resnapping shouldn't be hard tho.
00:38:787 (1) - like 2 pixels from being offscreen. you should reallllllllly move this upwards
01:05:129 (3) - 01:59:275 (3) - uh...what's with the hitsounds on these? they're not in any other difficulty and they don't follow anything specifically in the music soooo kill them
01:14:732 (1) - the length of the spinner here is too short for an easy. extending the break or whatever it's called (note the nc) works to give the same effect. extending the spinner to go through another measure like 02:14:733 (1) - also works, but if you choose that, do it on all of your own difficulties too for #consistency. if hanzer doesn't really want to do it on his diff that's fine.
01:52:324 (3) - would be nice to not have 01:52:690 - as a slider end. rethinking the rhythm there to have the downbeat be a clickable object would be veeery good. anything like 02:02:934 (1,2,3,4) -
01:54:153 (1,2,3,1) - supernazi but these should all have equal spacing between sliderbodies.
02:02:202 (4) - better to make this into a 1/1 slider. will cover that note on next white tick + no more bad polarity, which is even more of an issue on an easy diff
02:14:733 (1) - same thing as normal. would apply to that other spinner too if you decide to keep it as a spinner

better than normal/hard at least. getting this diff to a ready-state shouldn't be as problematic

sorry to say, but i don't think that this map should have been bubbled. there's some pretty clear rhythmic issues in the lower difficulties that need adjustment along with some other minor things in all of jezag's diffs. anyway, i really think this should get a few more mods before pushing it forward again, specifically focusing on the non-hanzer difficulties. i'll try to get some quality modders to take a look at it as well, since it's also my responsibility to get this rebubbled, but you should try to get some too. i haven't looked at hitsounds closely, but will do when re-checking eventually

bye

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RIP x.x
It'll take a while to respond to this mod QQ
thx for the pro mod and I'll have a more polished map ~~in a couple years~~ soon!

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JeZag 2014-12-02T00:53:41+00:00

2/6 done almost there TwT (Easy, Insane, GD)
Still have hard & normal to go

pishifat wrote:
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asdf = minor/suggestion
asdf = come on do it
asdf = umm really ok

popping because of multiple unrankable issues and overall quality concerns

[general]
remove soft-sliderslide2.wav since it's not used in any difficulty fixed
offset should be 1467 (-4)
fixed

[reunion]
a lot of your comboing in this diff makes little sense. i've already explained why in-game, which i think you understood and agreed with. do this stuff and everything will be fine (be sure to fix the colorhaxing afterwards):
SPOILER
00:24:336 (1,4) - swap ncs
00:24:336 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - uhm are your new combos supposed to be following vocal or musical phrasing? it seems like neither right now. immediately after this you apply newcombos on each downbeat so it would make sense to do so here too.
00:36:593 (7,1) - swap ncs
00:46:105 (4,1) - swap ncs
00:47:203 (5,1) - swap ncs. 00:47:935 (3,4,1) - does this thing right
00:56:531 (1,7) - swap ncs
00:59:641 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - treat this section the same way you treated 01:01:105 (1,2,3,4,1) - . there's too much broken combo stuff to explain with words here so um screenshot fun
01:02:569 (1,5) - swap ncs
01:07:873 (1) - remove nc. if you want to keep this separated in order to not have a 10 object combo, swap the nc with 01:08:056 (3) - instead.
01:11:714 (5,1) - swap ncs
01:14:275 (1) - remove nc
01:32:019 (1,3) - swap ncs
01:33:483 (1,3) - swap ncs
01:35:038 (1,2) - swap ncs
01:38:056 (11,1) - swap ncssssss
01:46:105 (9) - could nc here to keep the streamcomboconsistencystuff, although not necessary
01:48:849 (3) - should nc here so the SV change is apparent
01:51:043 (1,3) - swap ncs
01:55:251 (1,5) - swap ncs
01:55:983 (1,5) - swap ncs
01:59:641 (1,5) - swap ncs
02:00:373 (1,5) - swap ncs
02:02:568 (1,5) - swap ncs
02:11:349 (1,5) - swap ncs
02:12:080 (1,5) - swap ncs
02:12:812 (1,5) - swap ncs
02:14:276 (1) - nc not necessary
02:17:568 (5) - nc is necessary
02:25:617 (7) - nc is recommended
fixed all of this (i hope)
you've got a few objects that touch the default skin's hp bar (which you usually wanna avoid ya know). here's a list of those. moving them slightly lower shouldn't be an issue since none are in inconvenient positions
SPOILER
01:12:446 (1) - so close to user interface
01:28:361 (4) - lower due to hp bar
01:38:605 (1) - lower due to hp bar
01:57:630 (3) - 2close2ui
02:11:166 (4) - aye hp bar
02:13:544 (6) - aye hp bar aye aye
i think they are better than before -_-'
and here's other stuff:
00:17:019 (4) - seems like this would work a lot better if 4 were moved higher and to the left. follows a much more circular path rather than the awkward linear thing you've got going on right now. fixed
00:17:934 (2) - aesthetically speaking, this slider is pretty eh. could easily be better if it were angled less, like this for example. fixed
01:09:703 (4,6) - 01:09:885 (5,1) - these overlaps would look a lot nicer if they weren't sort of slightly touching as they are now. fixeddedication to the overlaps is better.
01:11:166 (4) - similar to the awkward linear movement pointed out at 00:17:019 (4) - , this would play a bit better if 4 were moved more fixedto the right/up.
01:31:836 - there's a pretty unique sound in instrumentals here and strong vocal which could be accented a lot better with a clickable object rather than a sliderend. converting 01:31:653 (4) - into two circles would be good. fixed
01:37:141 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - hitsound volume here should be higher. i know you're trying to do a volume increase thing, but starting at 25% seems too quiet for what's going on here. doing something like this would work fine (despite going higher than the target volume) fixed
01:51:043 (1,2,3) - spacing inconsistency uh yea fixed
01:51:215 - kiai is unsnapped. you can tell where it should be. LOL fixed
02:06:592 (3,4) - two finishes right after each other sounds pretty ugh. your hitsounds on the normal diff would work there.
fixed
just as a last note, you might want to re-draw some of your sliders like 01:51:227 (3) - 02:06:775 (4) - 01:59:092 (3) - etc so they use the newer slider algorithm. right now they're are super grossly bendy, which you can see if you try moving their middle anchors. if you feel like making your map perfect you could fix all of those up. most people don't really notice them so it's not too big of a deal tho. there's also some rhythms and patterns i'm not a huge fan of, but eh they're acceptable i guess to be fixed

[hanzer]
hitsound volume could use some adjustment. the 15% intro is too low, 33% kiais are too low, and 20% mid-section is too low. the outro should use the same volume as the mid-section (or at least quieter than the kiai). 01:37:507 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - needs to be waaaaay louder
01:30:739 (4) - pretty sure there should be a new combo here since this is the only 2 measure combo
spicy

UNTOUCHED BY JEZAG SO FAR
[hard]
you've got some pretty extreme jumps for a hard diff like... everywhere. it makes it hard to tell which positions are following distance snap and which are just jumps. the most extreme example of this would be 01:49:763 (1,2,3,4,1) - since they're literally spaced the same distance for 1/1 and 1/2 gaps. this same sort of broken spacing applies to everywhere in the difficulty since you've got jumps that extend past 3x distance snap at times. in most cases, it's common to keep distance snap for jumps on a hard at a max of maybe a bit higher than 2x, but more than that just makes for jumps harder than what the actual difficulty is. unfortunately, fixing this would require some remapping, so... sorry bout that :/ it just is too much.
00:01:471 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - whole section has a lot more object density than it really should. it's pretty much the same as the section starting at 00:13:178 (1) - yet the music is waaaaaaaaaaay different. you'll probably want to reconsider the rhythm you use at the beginning. i mean -- the "reunion" difficulty even has less movement than this, which is not right at all. you'll probably want to create less intense rhythms here.
same nc-swapping from "reunion" would apply here too. they should be recognizeable enough so i don't have to point them out specifically.
objects that should be lowered becuase they touch the hp bar:
SPOILER
01:52:142 (4) -
02:01:288 (4) -
02:09:337 (3) -
01:02:202 (3,4) - pretty hardcore double here. delete whichever object doesn't have the hitsounds cuz uh i dont even need to say GG fixed this tho
01:13:910 (1) - umm i don't think this new combo is necessary
01:40:983 - doing that break extension thing to this downbeat would be cool.
02:06:592 (3,4) - see reunion
02:14:642 (5) - centering this with the spinner would be nice. its current slightly-offset position is pretty gross when compared to the perfectly centered spinner
well, other than the jumps being too extreme and those minor things, the map is... well alright. using the same slider velocity all the way through is pretty weird when the song is so dynamic, so i'd really say to lower it at places like the intro and 01:26:349 - , which really messes up a lot of what you've mapped unfortunately. the rhythms are fine for the most part, although you use a lot more 1/2 sliders than i'd really expect to be necessary in a hard diff for this song. hopefully some mods will help with that kind of stuff, and if not, i can look into it with you. the amount of stacks you use is also concerning, which some scrubby testplayers of mine were able to confirm by sucking balls at reading everything, so if you're feeling cheeky you can adjust some of those too. also just a general thing: you'll want to avoid over-curving these 1/2 beat objects like 00:18:666 (5) - . just looks better if not curved to that degree

[normal]
similar to the hard diff, there's some rhythm issues in the intro here. it's not actually as bad as the hard diff's stuff though, this is just a lot of issues with polarity. that issue can be found in the multiple 3/2 beat gaps here, which could easily be fixed by rethinking your rhythm to only include 1 beat and 1/2 beat gaps in the intro. something like this or this or anything in between would work, just try to avoid the 3/2 beat gaps.
00:06:592 (5) - well uh there's no sound in the music for this slider's head, which is really nonrepresntative of the music for obvious reasons.
00:24:886 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - something you'd really want to avoid in normal diffs is spamming 1/2 sliders. i know you're trying to cover the important beats, which is fine, but using more 1/2 gaps would be less uncomfortable to play. i don't want to make your map for you or anything, but just as an example, doing something like this covers the important beats in teh song without abusing 1/2 sliders like you currently are. you're really lacking in 1/2 gaps between objects, which could easily be used to make the section play a whole lot better. you're also missing some pretty important beats like 00:32:751 - 00:34:214 - which you had managed to map right before this, so #consistency yea. alsooooooo this same issue appears at the slower mid-section of the song, so i'd really suggest changing stuff up there too so there's less 1/2 sliders there.
00:35:861 (4) - using a rhythm to cover the drum roll into 1 would fit a lot nicer.
00:36:592 (1,2) - adding an object at 00:37:324 - could easily fix the polarity issue present here (explaination somewhere up there^). fits the music really well since there's a strong snare hit there
00:38:056 (3) - should be extended in the same way as 00:36:592 (1) - since it's the same exact thing in the song
00:42:446 (1,2) - you already know
00:43:910 (3) - yeah...
00:57:081 (1,2) - yeaheyeayeayea
00:58:178 (1,2) - combos should be swapped
00:58:544 (2,3) - yeayeayaeyaeyaeya
00:59:642 (1,2) - combos shoudl be swappedddd
01:03:483 (2) - uh maybe it's just me, but angling this so sharply doesn't really fit that well. there's nothing in the song worth doing that for, so just bending it less would be fine
01:05:313 (1) - multiple repeats on a 1/2 slider in lower difficulties is something you really don't want to do ever since it's impossible to read the second repeat. just use a different rhythm and it should be fine.
01:04:398 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - i have no idea what you're thinking with the new combos here. just putting them on the downbeats would be better than these weird places that aren't following musical or vocal prhasign
01:09:519 - add an object for the polaritieszzzzfsfsf.
01:10:983 - ^
01:08:422 (1,2) - swap ncs
01:09:885 (1,2) - ^
01:11:349 (1,2) - ^
01:14:733 (1) - really trivial thing, but putting a 1/2 space between object/spinner is better than a 1/4 space on normal/easy diffs for reading purposes. doesn't affect anything you're mapping so yea
01:26:349 (1,2) - look waht we have here. in case somehow it wasn't clear, you should avoid the 3/2 gap in ways explained eariler
01:34:763 (1) - the downbeat here would be a lot better suited to have a clickable object instead of a sliderend. also maybe pay attention to the comboing in that screenshot maybemaybe
01:38:147 (1) - spinner length should be the same as hard? or hard's should be the same as this, i dunno. just whatever you want that's consistent will work fine. if you make it the same as hard, be sure to include the break extension thing too
01:52:141 (3) - same thing as 01:05:313 (1) -
01:57:080 (1) - similar thing to 01:03:483 (2) -
01:59:092 (5,1) - ayyyyyyye
02:00:008 (2,1) - exactly overlapping a sliderbody is usually not great. variable placements are much more readable and less repetitive.
02:03:849 (3) - ok this one really can't just be me, it's angled way too sharply.
02:06:410 - you reallyyyyyyyyyyyy need to map this beat. just do it
02:14:733 (1) - same stupid thing mentioned earlier about 1/2 gap instead of 1/4
there's a couple more new combo spots which i didn't mention cuz i think you should know where i'd point them out by now. if not, i'll just point them out whenever i check the map again. there's some pretty blatant rhythm issues here though, which will require some adjustment. sorry. there's also some more catmull sliders like 01:08:788 (2) - which could be re-drawn to be less gross but nobody really seems to care about them anymore. also be sure to avoid those 3/2 gaps if possible

[easy]
TL;DR Everything fixed lol
00:21:226 (3) - ctrl+ging this object seems like it works a lot better. the weird motion between the tail of 2 and head of 3 is really unappealing when there's an effortless alternative available
00:21:958 (1,2) - not important at all, but rotating these counter-clockwise allows for some pretty easy stacking with 00:21:226 (3) - and 00:24:153 (3) -
00:24:885 (1,2,1,2,3) - rhythm here is uh... really awkward. the music is pretty much the same here as it is at 00:31:104 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - , which does it much better. replicating a rhythm like that would be good. 2 beat sliders like 00:31:104 (2) - are your friend in this section especially can't nazi fix because rotating 00:21:954 (1,2) the right amount to make it nice triangles and stuff is off the screen to make 00:24:149 (3) stack and I'm sorta lazy and don't want to muddle things around... ._.
00:25:982 (2) - the reverse on this is unsnapped by 2 milliseconds, which is... uh... bad. resnapping shouldn't be hard tho.
00:38:787 (1) - like 2 pixels from being offscreen. you should reallllllllly move this upwards
01:05:129 (3) - 01:59:275 (3) - uh...what's with the hitsounds on these? they're not in any other difficulty and they don't follow anything specifically in the music soooo kill them
01:14:732 (1) - the length of the spinner here is too short for an easy. extending the break or whatever it's called (note the nc) works to give the same effect. extending the spinner to go through another measure like 02:14:733 (1) - also works, but if you choose that, do it on all of your own difficulties too for #consistency. if hanzer doesn't really want to do it on his diff that's fine.
01:52:324 (3) - would be nice to not have 01:52:690 - as a slider end. rethinking the rhythm there to have the downbeat be a clickable object would be veeery good. anything like 02:02:934 (1,2,3,4) -
01:54:153 (1,2,3,1) - supernazi but these should all have equal spacing between sliderbodies.
02:02:202 (4) - better to make this into a 1/1 slider. will cover that note on next white tick + no more bad polarity, which is even more of an issue on an easy diff
02:14:733 (1) - same thing as normal. would apply to that other spinner too if you decide to keep it as a spinner
better than normal/hard at least. getting this diff to a ready-state shouldn't be as problematic

sorry to say, but i don't think that this map should have been bubbled. there's some pretty clear rhythmic issues in the lower difficulties that need adjustment along with some other minor things in all of jezag's diffs. anyway, i really think this should get a few more mods before pushing it forward again, specifically focusing on the non-hanzer difficulties. i'll try to get some quality modders to take a look at it as well, since it's also my responsibility to get this rebubbled, but you should try to get some too. i haven't looked at hitsounds closely, but will do when re-checking eventually

bye

Last edited by JeZag 2014-12-02T01:49:17+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

HanzeR

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HanzeR 2014-12-02T01:36:12+00:00

All fixed

faito jezag~!

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448,20,131345,2,0,P|464:44|464:72,1,44,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,88,131527,2,0,P|318:116|298:136,1,44,0|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
184,60,131710,6,0,P|116:56|80:116,1,132,4|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,104,132076,2,0,L|16:208,1,88,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,364,132442,1,4,0:0:0:0:
112,204,132625,1,0,0:0:0:0:
0,292,132808,1,2,0:0:0:0:
124,124,132991,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,308,133174,6,0,P|296:328|364:316,1,88,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,160,133540,2,0,P|111:167|67:220,1,88,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,104,133906,2,0,P|337:72|337:2,1,88,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,172,134271,2,0,P|228:212|284:196,1,132,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,88,134637,6,0,P|184:76|156:76,1,44,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,108,135003,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,92,135186,2,0,L|80:188,1,88,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,332,135735,2,0,L|161:277,1,44,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,208,136101,5,2,0:0:0:0:
68,280,136284,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,260,136466,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,260,136649,2,0,P|28:276|12:308,1,88,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,344,137198,2,0,L|296:332,1,44,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,260,137564,5,2,0:0:0:0:
340,240,137747,1,2,0:0:0:0:
260,208,137930,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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268,224,138662,2,0,L|212:216,1,44,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,136,139027,5,2,0:0:0:0:
420,120,139210,1,2,0:0:0:0:
452,204,139393,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,128,139576,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,84,139759,5,2,0:0:0:0:
432,100,139942,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,200,140125,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,52,140308,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,240,140491,6,0,P|184:236|168:224,1,44,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,196,140857,2,0,P|171:173|168:153,1,44,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,140,141223,2,0,P|208:112|220:96,1,44,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,112,141588,2,0,P|282:95|302:92,1,44,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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344,200,142320,2,0,P|360:222|363:242,1,44,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,264,142686,2,0,P|307:291|296:307,1,44,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,284,143052,6,0,P|217:300|197:303,1,44,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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360,128,144881,2,0,P|387:132|404:144,1,44,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,145613,5,8,0:0:0:0:

Bara-

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Bara- 2014-12-04T06:59:46+00:00

My name is in the tags for the hitsounds right?
Maybe also add to description?
Also, if you changed the hitsounds completely, you may delete me from tags xD

JeZag

518 posts

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Topic Starter

JeZag 2014-12-04T22:06:35+00:00

baraatje123 wrote:
My name is in the tags for the hitsounds right?
Maybe also add to description?
Also, if you changed the hitsounds completely, you may delete me from tags xD

Yah changed the hitsounds >.>
gonna change the tags later

FlobuFlobs

603 posts

Joined June 2011

FlobuFlobs 2014-12-05T00:54:00+00:00

well you asked for a testplay

ive tested reunion

Personaly, the spacing between the jumps is way too high, its a smooth calm song with low bpm and those jumps are like x2 ~ x3 spaced? i would decrease the spacing

its just over emphasizing stuff

also xD

00:10:247 (1,2,3) - whats up with this spacing ?

01:14:637 - 01:26:345 - you should probably map it like the beginning, it the exactly same part of the song
same with 02:15:003 -

Some slidershapes are unintuitiv like 02:07:686 (2) - 02:11:710 (1) - 02:12:442 (1) -

i wouldnt make a jump part out if 02:20:491 -

Some jump pattern are really hard to play cuz weird flow
00:46:832 (4,5,1) - triangle flow here then a flowbreak 00:47:199 (1,2) - here and the slider is even poiting to the wrong direction of the next objects
it makes you thing the next object after 00:47:381 (2) - is somewhere on the right side

Well, its late but i will testplay the other diff tommorow

JeZag

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Topic Starter

JeZag 2014-12-05T01:06:01+00:00

ty for the testplay ^_^
I can't tell that its over mapped and stuff because I know where everything is when i test play it ._.
Also I can't even tell when readability is bad because ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
xD

JeZag

518 posts

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Topic Starter

JeZag 2014-12-05T01:30:46+00:00

JeZag wrote:
ty for the testplay ^_^
I can't tell that its over mapped and stuff because I know where everything is when i test play it ._.
Also I can't even tell when readability is bad because ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
xD

EDIT: some fixes

FlobuFlobs wrote:
well you asked for a testplay

ive tested reunion

Personaly, the spacing between the jumps is way too high, its a smooth calm song with low bpm and those jumps are like x2 ~ x3 spaced? i would decrease the spacing
I made spacing huge because I wanted ppl to feel excited just like I do when playing deemo with super fast approach rates owo

its just over emphasizing stuff

also xD

00:10:247 (1,2,3) - whats up with this spacing ? same as beginning spacing

01:14:637 - 01:26:345 - you should probably map it like the beginning, it the exactly same part of the song
same with 02:15:003 -
the problem with mapping slow like the beginning sorta kills the mood that its at in the beginning
besides, this part is relatively easier than the rest of the song, to recreate a more peaceful mood

Some slidershapes are unintuitiv like 02:07:686 (2) - 02:11:710 (1) - 02:12:442 (1) - changed lol

i wouldnt make a jump part out if 02:20:491 - i sorta did something about that but its still a bit of a jump; besides its supposed to mapt he piano

Some jump pattern are really hard to play cuz weird flow
00:46:832 (4,5,1) - triangle flow here then a flowbreak 00:47:199 (1,2) - here and the slider is even poiting to the wrong direction of the next objects
it makes you thing the next object after 00:47:381 (2) - is somewhere on the right side I'll think about this a bit; never thought like this before o.o

Well, its late but i will testplay the other diff tommorow

HanzeR

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HanzeR 2014-12-13T22:50:55+00:00

rebubble plz

pishifat

osu! Paragon

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pishifat 2014-12-13T23:03:38+00:00

jezag plz

JeZag

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JeZag 2014-12-14T04:39:49+00:00

Working on the new diff T^T
and life is giving me no time to work on it
RIP maybe I can pick this up after January SAT
Back in pending ^__^ mostly because I can't wait a month

123alert

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123alert 2015-01-02T21:06:13+00:00

JeZag pls

Birdy

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Birdy 2015-01-06T02:23:56+00:00

By pishifat's recommendation.

[General]
02:14:729 (1) - (The four easiest diffs) Should start 1/4 later. It appears a tad too soon after the last hitobject.
01:38:143 (1) - Same.

[Easy]
00:13:174 (1) - End point x292 y92, middle point x328 y52 for better blanket.
00:30:369 (1) - I think the bar start should have its own hitobject, and not a sliderend.

Rhythm suggestion.

00:35:125 (3) - Should be a little higher for a better flow. x400 y88 works fine IMO, for example.
01:32:198 (1) - I feel like the slider track should not overlap the next slider's end.

[Normal]
00:26:162 (4) - The slider should not end on the beat which should be clickable.

Rhythm suggestion.

00:28:723 (3) - Extend by 1/2.
00:30:735 (1,2,3) - This rhythm again doesn't really work. You should use something similar to the 00:32:198 (4,5,6,7) here too.
00:54:149 (1,2,3) - Replace (2) with a 1/1 slider and put a circle where (3) currently ends. That would fit the vocals better (and I'm fairly sure you want to match the vocals more than the beat).
01:11:345 (2) - Should be moved 1/2 forward.
01:57:076 (1) - Would be better reversed. Adjusting the next objects might take time, but I'd say it's worth it.

[Intermediate]
00:17:198 (3,1) - The order should be reversed. The repeat slider is pushing the next object 1/2 late, which is why the reversed order should match the music way better.
00:24:515 (4) - Replace with a 1/2 slider and a circle. The new section at the current sliderend should start with a clickable hitobject.
00:56:710 (4) - Replace with circles in the start and the end. Again, the current sliderend is at a point where there's already a bar start.
01:01:101 (4) - Refer to the second thing mentioned (Replace with a 1/2 slider and a circle etc.).
01:02:564 (4) - ^
01:37:686 (3) - First, Ctrl+G. Then shorten by 1/2 and add a circle to the end. Normal has just fine finish there, not sure why did you put a long slider here in a supposedly tougher difficulty.
01:56:710 (4) - Refer to the second thing mentioned (Replace with a 1/2 slider and a circle etc.).
02:08:418 (4) - ^

[Hard]
00:35:857 (3,4,1) - The jump should be kept consistent. The distance between 3,4 is shorter than 4,1.
01:27:625 (2,3) - The order should be reversed. The 3,4 should be same as with 01:26:345 (1,2) to match the piano, this one doesn't really fit it.
02:05:492 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Think about these streams. They don't really fit a Hard difficulty, especially since there's really nothing in the music supporting this fast buttonsmashing.

[Hanzer's Insane]
Could use the same kind of combo colour system as other diffs (one scheme in choruses, one in verses).
00:34:485 (3) - This doesn't fit the pattern or the music?!?
01:44:088 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Probably a tad controversial stream because the music definitely isn't in 1/4. I don't know what to do with this section tbh. Needs some heavy pondering.

[Reunion]
01:43:906 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same stream again. I guess this should be discussed with someone from QAT maybe.
02:20:491 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I heavily dislike this, but that might be just my opinion. Back and forth jump patterns always work well, so maybe consider that. I like the overall flowyness of this difficulty, and here it's just ruined IMO.

JeZag

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JeZag 2015-01-06T03:31:53+00:00

Static Noise Bird wrote:
By pishifat's recommendation.

[General]
02:14:729 (1) - (The four easiest diffs) Should start 1/4 later. It appears a tad too soon after the last hitobject. Fixed
01:38:143 (1) - Same. Fixed
There was another slider in normal, intermediate, hard like that so i fixed that too

[Easy]
00:13:174 (1) - End point x292 y92, middle point x328 y52 for better blanket. Oh gosh that was a bad blanket
00:30:369 (1) - I think the bar start should have its own hitobject, and not a sliderend. Fixed (my own way)
Rhythm suggestion.
00:35:125 (3) - Should be a little higher for a better flow. x400 y88 works fine IMO, for example. Fixed
01:32:198 (1) - I feel like the slider track should not overlap the next slider's end. Fixed

[Normal]
00:26:162 (4) - The slider should not end on the beat which should be clickable. Fixed
Rhythm suggestion.
00:28:723 (3) - Extend by 1/2. Fixed
00:30:735 (1,2,3) - This rhythm again doesn't really work. You should use something similar to the 00:32:198 (4,5,6,7) here too. Fixed
00:54:149 (1,2,3) - Replace (2) with a 1/1 slider and put a circle where (3) currently ends. That would fit the vocals better (and I'm fairly sure you want to match the vocals more than the beat). Fixed
01:11:345 (2) - Should be moved 1/2 forward. Fixed
01:57:076 (1) - Would be better reversed. Adjusting the next objects might take time, but I'd say it's worth it. Fixed

[Intermediate]
00:17:198 (3,1) - The order should be reversed. The repeat slider is pushing the next object 1/2 late, which is why the reversed order should match the music way better. Fixed; plays tons better
00:24:515 (4) - Replace with a 1/2 slider and a circle. The new section at the current sliderend should start with a clickable hitobject. Fixed
00:56:710 (4) - Replace with circles in the start and the end. Again, the current sliderend is at a point where there's already a bar start. Fixed
01:01:101 (4) - Refer to the second thing mentioned (Replace with a 1/2 slider and a circle etc.). Fixed
01:02:564 (4) - ^ Fixed
01:37:686 (3) - First, Ctrl+G. Then shorten by 1/2 and add a circle to the end. Normal has just fine finish there, not sure why did you put a long slider here in a supposedly tougher difficulty. Fixed
01:56:710 (4) - Refer to the second thing mentioned (Replace with a 1/2 slider and a circle etc.). Fixed
02:08:418 (4) - ^ Fixed

[Hard]
00:35:857 (3,4,1) - The jump should be kept consistent. The distance between 3,4 is shorter than 4,1. fixed
01:27:625 (2,3) - The order should be reversed. The 3,4 should be same as with 01:26:345 (1,2) to match the piano, this one doesn't really fit it. fixed
02:05:492 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Think about these streams. They don't really fit a Hard difficulty, especially since there's really nothing in the music supporting this fast buttonsmashing. fixed

[Hanzer's Insane]
Could use the same kind of combo colour system as other diffs (one scheme in choruses, one in verses). Finished haxing
00:34:485 (3) - This doesn't fit the pattern or the music?!?
01:44:088 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Probably a tad controversial stream because the music definitely isn't in 1/4. I don't know what to do with this section tbh. Needs some heavy pondering.

[Reunion]
01:43:906 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same stream again. I guess this should be discussed with someone from QAT maybe.
02:20:491 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I heavily dislike this, but that might be just my opinion. Back and forth jump patterns always work well, so maybe consider that. I like the overall flowyness of this difficulty, and here it's just ruined IMO. fixed

Thanks for the mod x.x

Last edited by JeZag 2015-01-08T00:08:27+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Okoratu

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Okoratu 2015-01-07T02:50:35+00:00

reminder thing stuff thing yes

Eni

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Eni 2015-01-08T05:22:53+00:00

Hi from my queue
testing http://waa.ai/46ff

[Easy]

00:27:808 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Check your New Combos here. It is a bit longer than the rest..
00:20:125 (2,1) - Avoid stacking here as the AR makes Slider 1's Approach Circle appear before the End of Slider 2. Alternatively, you can adjust the pattern of 00:21:954 (1,2,3) - so it flows instead of stacks. You should be able to maintain your Distance Snap without changing anything major via this method.

~
00:55:613 (2,1) - Slider 2 points directly at Slider 1, which may be confusing for the novice player. I did a quick check of your Normal and did not see many similar patterns featured there ( I only saw 00:53:052 (2,1) - ), so it does not make since to introduce this pattern to the player in Easy. Instead of blanketing the Slider 3 at 00:56:345 (3) -, you need to make it more playable by increasing the horizontal distance spacing between the objects so the player has a clear path from Slider 2 to Slider 3. You may need to adjust your next pattern to fit the new Distance Snap.
01:08:784 (2) - Most of the Approach Circle is cut off here, which should be avoided in the Easy difficulty. Try to raise the Slider a bit so the Approach Circle is more visible.
01:14:637 (1) - Instead of going back to the previous for a stack, try using x:204 y:24 instead for a continuous square motion.
01:30:735 (3,1) - Similar to mentioned above, you should not use such pattern in Easy because the next Slider is shown before the previous ends. In this case, Slider 1 shows before Slider 3's repeat occurs. I strongly recommend that you Ctrl+H the next pattern ( 01:31:832 (4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - ) and move as you see fit to flow with Slider 3 and make it more playable. An example is below.

~

[Normal]

00:01:467 - to 00:24:881 - Try using a bigger variety of sliders (e.g: add another vertex, add a red vertex, etc.)
00:20:126 (3,1) - Stack these objects. Adjust Slider 5 if needed.
00:45:370 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Remove the other two New Combos? I think consistency is more important than emphasis here.
01:13:174 (1) - Instead of "blanketing" or "stacking" this object, I suggest that you try something completely different: flow it!

~
02:00:004 (1,1) - Don't overlap like this in lower difficulties, it is confusing in which the player thinks they have already played the part.
02:03:845 (3) - The sharp curve here occurs too soon. You must make it more readable like e.g: 02:07:320 (1) -.

[Intermediate]

01:56:527 - Relatively bad overlap here with Slider 3 and Slider 2. I suggest that you alter the pattern to stack or change it to something else.
02:01:466 (1) - x:194 y:210 to stack with 02:02:564 (5) -, 02:04:210 (4) -.

~~okoratu will probably mod the higher difficulties~~ I looked through them and saw nothing in particular, good job.

Good overall, Good luck

HanzeR

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HanzeR 2015-01-08T07:48:20+00:00

@SNB -- found no issues other than combo colors (jezag fixed this) . I think it's fine to approximate the stream like that, it would be fcking hard as fck to play otherwise because i don't think the solo was timed to a metronome and wouldn't be fair to players at all.

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