Moway wrote:
Sorry for delay.
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- 00:20:771 (3,4,5,1) - I feel like this pattern gets a little weird to read for beginners at low AR since (4,5,1) are super close to each other, so I would suggest reworking this a bit. An alternate rhythm would be to replace 00:20:771 (3) with a 1/1 slider, and remove (4). fixed.
- 00:26:924 (4) - Kind of for similar reasons, and also to decrease the 1/2 a bit, I would have this slider end at 00:27:309. I think that bass drum sound is nice to match to the sliderend as well. fixed.
- 00:51:540 (4) - same idea as before. ^
- 00:56:924 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - this part feels too object dense to me for the easiest difficulty. Constant 1/2 rhythms seems a bit much for this type of diff. I would recommend cutting down on some of the 1/2. Here's my suggestions for where to add some 1/1 breaks:
- 00:58:463 (5) - change to a 1/1 slider
- 01:01:924 (5) - change to a 1/1 slider I think this is mapped to the vocal,so beginners can get it.no change sry.
- 01:04:617 (5) - change to a 1/1 slider
- 01:05:001 (6) - remove. Of course, play around with this yourself and see what you come up with. replaced with a note.
- 01:26:924 (1,2,3) - I don't really like this repeating sliders on the easy diff because they differ in number of repeats, which a beginner will very easily miss. The repeats occur so quickly that a beginner will also have trouble timing when to let go of the repeating slider. I would recommend remapping this section into something more readable for a beginner. Here's my suggestion for rhythm, of course it is more plain, but that fits better for an easy diff imo. fixed with a little slider atr.
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Raging Bull wrote:
da x10
Easy:
00:21:540 (5) - Idk, seems weird, the music seems prominent on the 1/2s, so why repeat on blue tick? ;w; Maybe keep simple rhythm in easy? in fact there is drum here,I followed with it.
00:27:694 (5) - ^? Ok I see it is intentional, though I am just pointing out my point of view. It seems weird since 00:18:463 (4), 00:36:924 (4), and, 00:40:001 (4) same rhythm, but mapped to different rhythm. ^
01:03:847 (3) - Actually, how about adding one of those sliders here? The 1/1 seems very empty, but the slider seems to fit well imo. http://puu.sh/cUAYS/a44a19ae86.png it is ok,but I have to do too lot of changes to make this.forgive my laziness
01:20:771 (1,1) - Hmm, I knw you aim for star pattern, but is there a way you can incorporate blanket into this?
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