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Sub Focus ft. Kele - Turn It Around

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smallboat
Improve some NC setting and kiaitime adjust,everything looks fine on all diffs are okay imo.

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2014-10-22 18:48 Secretpipe: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/445515 Sub Focus ft. Kele - Turn It Around]
2014-10-22 18:50 smallboat: well,this song time have bit long,need a bit time :3
2014-10-22 18:50 smallboat: right :3
2014-10-22 18:53 Secretpipe: oh oki :3
2014-10-22 18:59 Secretpipe: can you quick check it now ? :3
2014-10-22 18:59 smallboat: now?
2014-10-22 19:00 Secretpipe: yeah owo
2014-10-22 19:01 smallboat: I try it
2014-10-22 19:01 Secretpipe: :D
2014-10-22 19:04 smallboat: combo color not consistent in kin's easy diff o/
2014-10-22 19:04 smallboat: select widescreen support in NNsane
2014-10-22 19:04 Secretpipe: BUT
2014-10-22 19:05 Secretpipe: I CHANGED COLOURS FOR KIN D:
2014-10-22 19:05 Secretpipe: oh yeah
2014-10-22 19:05 Secretpipe: I think I understad why
2014-10-22 19:05 Secretpipe: lol
2014-10-22 19:05 smallboat: :D
2014-10-22 19:05 Secretpipe: there's no SB
2014-10-22 19:05 Secretpipe: so I should disable it
2014-10-22 19:05 Secretpipe: I'll remove for all diffs
2014-10-22 19:05 smallboat: okay :3
2014-10-22 19:07 Secretpipe: updated
2014-10-22 19:07 smallboat: ur kiai time need to keep consistent
2014-10-22 19:07 smallboat: in ur diff
2014-10-22 19:08 Secretpipe: kiai are inconsistent
2014-10-22 19:08 Secretpipe: but it doesn't matter
2014-10-22 19:10 smallboat: nono ,is say you do your diff, the kiai need to keep consistent,really ><
2014-10-22 19:11 smallboat: because your diff kiai time (normal and hard),are not in the same kiai
2014-10-22 19:11 Secretpipe: where ?
2014-10-22 19:11 Secretpipe: oh
2014-10-22 19:11 Secretpipe: lemme see
2014-10-22 19:13 Secretpipe: done
2014-10-22 19:14 smallboat: Vass light have a aimod error
2014-10-22 19:14 smallboat: unsnapped
2014-10-22 19:16 Secretpipe: Crashed lol
2014-10-22 19:17 smallboat: Okay,General check are done, I'm start checking diff now :3
2014-10-22 19:18 Secretpipe: crashed again D:
2014-10-22 19:18 Secretpipe: Can't resnap
2014-10-22 19:18 smallboat: lol
2014-10-22 19:18 smallboat: sad
2014-10-22 19:18 Secretpipe: well updating
2014-10-22 19:21 smallboat: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/445934 Sub Focus ft. Kele - Turn It Around [Kin's Easy]]
2014-10-22 19:21 smallboat: 01:26:488 (3) - Forgot add NC?
2014-10-22 19:21 smallboat: 01:34:074 (3) - Same
2014-10-22 19:22 Secretpipe: k done
2014-10-22 19:22 smallboat: 01:43:384 (5,1) - Feel swap NC better
2014-10-22 19:23 smallboat: okay easy check done
2014-10-22 19:23 Secretpipe: done
2014-10-22 19:26 smallboat: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/445516 Sub Focus ft. Kele - Turn It Around [Normal]]
2014-10-22 19:26 smallboat: 01:37:522 (2) - remove the whistle?
2014-10-22 19:26 smallboat: in end
2014-10-22 19:27 Secretpipe: lolz I added it before and wasn"t dure
2014-10-22 19:27 Secretpipe: removed!
2014-10-22 19:28 smallboat: 02:20:626 (1,1) - this space...
2014-10-22 19:28 smallboat: lol
2014-10-22 19:29 smallboat: need to space 2 beat
2014-10-22 19:30 smallboat: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2159409
2014-10-22 19:30 smallboat: try it
2014-10-22 19:30 Secretpipe: this is not the easiest diff of the mapset
2014-10-22 19:30 Secretpipe: it's fine
2014-10-22 19:31 smallboat: but the QAT will notice this
2014-10-22 19:32 Secretpipe: well , last time , my normal was like this and they didn't mention it
2014-10-22 19:32 Secretpipe: also , there's an easy so it's fine
2014-10-22 19:33 Secretpipe: wait a sec , I'll be backs oon
2014-10-22 19:33 Secretpipe: also , write mod in the chat , I'll fix it in some min :3
2014-10-22 19:35 smallboat: okay
2014-10-22 19:36 Secretpipe: I mean, continue to write
2014-10-22 19:36 Secretpipe: I'll asnwer
2014-10-22 19:36 smallboat: okay I know
2014-10-22 19:38 smallboat: well,if you don't fix that things,I am really worry the QAT will pick here
2014-10-22 19:41 Secretpipe: oki
2014-10-22 19:41 smallboat: ex:https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/3335365
2014-10-22 19:42 smallboat: Easy 4 beat normal 2 beat
2014-10-22 19:42 smallboat: He is so notice that~~~~
2014-10-22 19:44 smallboat: 02:50:281 (5) - This finish hs have a bit noisy,if want to use it,turn down a bit volume?
2014-10-22 19:44 smallboat: hard in the same reason
2014-10-22 19:45 smallboat: normal check done
2014-10-22 19:46 Secretpipe: hmmm
2014-10-22 19:46 Secretpipe: wait
2014-10-22 19:46 smallboat: ?
2014-10-22 19:49 smallboat: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/445517 Sub Focus ft. Kele - Turn It Around [Vass' Light]]
2014-10-22 19:49 smallboat: seems so a lot NC problem
2014-10-22 19:50 smallboat: I post time point add the NC
2014-10-22 19:50 smallboat: 00:35:798 (4) -
2014-10-22 19:50 smallboat: 00:41:315 (6) -
2014-10-22 19:51 smallboat: 00:46:833 (4) -
2014-10-22 19:54 smallboat: 00:54:419 (2) - the slider end i suggest reduce the red line feel better
2014-10-22 19:55 smallboat: 00:56:488 (5) - NC
2014-10-22 19:55 smallboat: 00:59:246 (5) -
2014-10-22 19:55 Secretpipe: notthing for the hard ?
2014-10-22 19:55 smallboat: light diff first
2014-10-22 19:55 Secretpipe: oh k
2014-10-22 19:56 Secretpipe: gonna fix in a sec
2014-10-22 19:57 smallboat: 01:42:005 (1) - Same as 00:54:419
2014-10-22 19:59 smallboat: 02:46:833 (6) - NC
2014-10-22 19:59 smallboat: 02:49:591 (5) -
2014-10-22 19:59 smallboat: 02:52:350 (5) -
2014-10-22 20:00 smallboat: 03:03:902 (2) - this is a stream,miss a red note here
2014-10-22 20:01 Secretpipe: Nice catch
2014-10-22 20:01 smallboat: lol
2014-10-22 20:02 Secretpipe: btw
2014-10-22 20:02 Secretpipe: fixed all NC issues
2014-10-22 20:02 Secretpipe: except slider end
2014-10-22 20:02 Secretpipe: I'll let it
2014-10-22 20:02 smallboat: sure
2014-10-22 20:03 smallboat: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/445966 Sub Focus ft. Kele - Turn It Around [Hard]]
2014-10-22 20:03 smallboat: Your NC set good
2014-10-22 20:03 Secretpipe: o/
2014-10-22 20:04 smallboat: but the light diff NC I don't like...XD
2014-10-22 20:04 Secretpipe: xD
2014-10-22 20:05 smallboat: 00:56:660 (1) - Feel change 2 notes will play better
2014-10-22 20:08 Secretpipe: Nah , sorry , I wanted to emphasize the synth here :3
2014-10-22 20:08 smallboat: OKAY
2014-10-22 20:12 smallboat: 02:20:108 (3,4) -
2014-10-22 20:12 smallboat: Keep the same DS ?
2014-10-22 20:12 smallboat: Have bit hard to read.
2014-10-22 20:13 smallboat: 02:37:177 (6) - Missed a NC
2014-10-22 20:13 Secretpipe: it's a stack lol
2014-10-22 20:13 smallboat: LOL
2014-10-22 20:14 Secretpipe: nc fixed
2014-10-22 20:15 smallboat: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/445515 Sub Focus ft. Kele - Turn It Around [NNsane]]
2014-10-22 20:19 smallboat: 00:43:039 (2) - Feel missed a voice (?
2014-10-22 20:19 smallboat: *note
2014-10-22 20:19 smallboat: 00:41:660 (2) - same
2014-10-22 20:20 Secretpipe: nah
2014-10-22 20:20 Secretpipe: it'd feel overmapped
2014-10-22 20:20 Secretpipe: already talked with natteke about this
2014-10-22 20:22 Secretpipe: Update ? :D
2014-10-22 20:23 smallboat: another diff check done
2014-10-22 20:23 smallboat: okay
2014-10-22 20:24 smallboat: maybe it is fine
2014-10-22 20:26 Secretpipe: :'D
2014-10-22 20:38 smallboat: okay update it let me see again
2014-10-22 20:38 Secretpipe: updating
2014-10-22 20:39 Secretpipe: done
Topic Starter
Secretpipe
It's happening AAAAH
smallboat
Bg size change by mapper, so rebub it.
Aka
hi, as requested


kin's

・i am not a fan of stack in the easiest diff, ugh.. up to you but i'd unstack a half of those. like these, which are repeating one after another, like these 00:45:453 (3,4,1,2) - .
00:34:419 (3,4) - for example this one. the construction of the pattern will move a bit down from the left upper corner where your whole beginning is
01:13:384 (2,3) - and this one, too. since the music intonation goes different there
・01:40:626 (1,2) - wouldnt start like this after a break. and this is about starting with the circle. usually, as i noticed after watchnig replays of the newbie players, its hard for them to carry 2 approach circles and its hard to get into rhythm again. i'd recommend to change the rhythm there to this
OR. since the vocals are mainly emphasized there would be nice to start object with them after that spinner break which could mess up


normal

・00:33:039 (1) - on reverse, 00:34:074 (2) - , 00:34:419 (3) - head, 00:49:936 (2) - head and on sounds like these at the beginning i'd really like to hear whistles, since these sounds are pretty loud and as i hear emphasized most of all in this part. up to you though
・01:59:591 (2) - i'd change this to note-slider. cause atm slider end on a downbeat and the sound is pretty strong. its noticeable and does feel awkward during the gameplay
02:07:867 (2) - this one is okay cause nothing really loud and ~hard~ stands for this part
・02:20:626 (1,1) - this is considered as not enough recovery time after spinner. Normal difficulty needs at least 2 beats for ~160 bpm, so this is NOT acceptable and will be unqualified because of tis reason. better try to map this part
・02:41:315 (3,6) - this is not really noticeable during the gameplay but for the aethtetic sake i'd recommend you to move the (3) a bit upper, it would look neater
・02:43:729 (2,3) - again about the downbeat. also i can hear a long sound starting from 02:44:074 - there and i bet you hear that this one is way longer than previous. so if i were you i'd change this rhythm to note-slider thing


hard

・the beginning part of this diff (till kiai) is harder than vass' light and her diff is considered as a light insane. it is also harder than kiai in YOUR diff. there is a pretty constant 1/2 rhythm which doesnt make it look like an actual hard. the normal diff barely has 1/2 sliders/notes and there you have some triplets, which is strange as well..
02:05:453 - starting from there, 02:05:453 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 02:10:971 (1,2,3,4) - things like that increases your star rating of the diff A LOT, just replace it with sliders and you will see that rating falls fast as hell
the last kiai look like an insane and harder than light insane as well.. meh, it could be just me, but this is my opinion which i'd like to share

i wanted to mention something from all diffs but its 4am and i chose wrong time for writing such stuff.. D: im sorry
g-good luck i suppose?
Kin

Aka wrote:

hi, as requested


kin's

・i am not a fan of stack in the easiest diff, ugh.. up to you but i'd unstack a half of those. like these, which are repeating one after another, like these 00:45:453 (3,4,1,2) - . I can't hear other thing than stack >_<
00:34:419 (3,4) - for example this one. the construction of the pattern will move a bit down from the left upper corner where your whole beginning is
01:13:384 (2,3) - and this one, too. since the music intonation goes different there tbh, I think the stack sounds good with the melody
・01:40:626 (1,2) - wouldnt start like this after a break. and this is about starting with the circle. usually, as i noticed after watchnig replays of the newbie players, its hard for them to carry 2 approach circles and its hard to get into rhythm again. i'd recommend to change the rhythm there to this
OR. since the vocals are mainly emphasized there would be nice to start object with them after that spinner break which could mess up melody is emphasized, not the vocal >_< also, unstacked
rtohjrt
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TitleUnicode:Turn It Around
Artist:Sub Focus ft. Kele
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128,308,122695,6,0,P|100:236|128:136,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,92,123729,6,0,B|204:104|204:104|252:100,1,80,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
400,84,124764,2,0,P|464:104|488:200,2,160,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,152,126833,5,0,1:0:0:0:
112,84,127522,2,0,P|48:104|24:200,2,160,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,108,129246,6,0,B|224:120|224:120|268:116,1,80,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
424,100,130281,2,0,P|448:174|431:252,2,160,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,176,132350,5,0,1:0:0:0:
144,252,133040,2,0,P|120:188|144:88,2,160,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,316,134764,6,0,B|228:300|228:300|272:296,1,80,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
428,288,135798,2,0,B|436:208|436:208|416:120,1,160
296,28,137177,2,0,B|288:108|288:108|308:196,1,160,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
336,260,138212,6,0,P|400:272|480:244,2,120,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,139591,12,0,143384,0:0:0:0:
344,72,144764,6,0,P|384:56|428:52,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,104,145798,2,0,P|248:176|168:208,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,208,146833,6,0,B|80:172|80:172|72:128,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,276,147867,1,8,0:0:0:0:
136,276,148212,2,0,P|176:308|352:276,1,240,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,212,149591,6,0,P|436:220|468:244,2,80,0|8|0,0:2|0:0|0:2,0:2:0:0:
316,208,150626,2,0,B|276:204|240:228|240:228|208:216|208:216|144:216,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,120,152005,6,0,P|32:72|44:36,2,80,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,192,153040,2,0,P|108:188|160:200,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,220,153729,2,0,B|256:148|256:148|256:64|256:64,2,160,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,344,155798,6,0,P|88:296|84:256,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,196,156488,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,124,156833,2,0,P|160:84|248:96,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,136,157867,6,0,B|356:148|356:148|408:148,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,192,158557,2,0,P|472:240|460:280,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,328,159246,2,0,P|340:316|260:356,2,160,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,269,160971,6,0,P|472:230|464:192,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,124,161660,2,0,B|384:112|384:112|344:80,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,40,162350,2,0,P|216:32|156:88,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,160,163384,6,0,B|87:164|87:164|35:159,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,148,164419,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,148,164764,2,0,P|288:152|348:208,1,160
364,280,165798,5,8,0:0:0:0:
216,340,166488,2,0,P|176:348|128:336,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,312,167177,2,0,B|84:232|84:232|80:152,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,76,168212,6,0,P|104:52|144:48,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,92,169246,2,0,P|332:100|376:92,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,72,169936,2,0,P|476:120|468:224,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,280,170971,5,0,0:0:0:0:
416,280,171315,2,0,B|336:260|336:260|256:272,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,288,172350,2,0,P|132:292|80:272,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,132,173384,6,0,P|52:84|72:32,2,80,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,204,174419,2,0,P|132:196|180:208,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,236,175108,5,0,0:0:0:0:
244,236,175453,2,0,P|320:256|397:237,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,172,176488,5,0,0:0:0:0:
396,108,176833,2,0,P|318:89|242:109,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,152,177867,2,0,L|160:240,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,360,178902,6,0,L|270:281,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,204,179591,2,0,B|364:216|364:216|396:176|456:192,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,268,180626,5,0,0:0:0:0:
408,344,180971,2,0,P|332:360|240:344,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,316,182005,5,0,0:0:0:0:
176,316,182350,2,0,P|132:256|180:168,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,140,183384,6,0,L|312:136,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,180,184074,2,0,L|460:176,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,184764,12,0,187522,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
Secretpipe

Aka wrote:

hi, as requested


normal

・00:33:039 (1) - on reverse, 00:34:074 (2) - , 00:34:419 (3) - head, 00:49:936 (2) - head and on sounds like these at the beginning i'd really like to hear whistles, since these sounds are pretty loud and as i hear emphasized most of all in this part. up to you though okay done
・01:59:591 (2) - i'd change this to note-slider. cause atm slider end on a downbeat and the sound is pretty strong. its noticeable and does feel awkward during the gameplay I think the rhythm is well respected here. You're totally right! Fixed!
02:07:867 (2) - this one is okay cause nothing really loud and ~hard~ stands for this part
・02:20:626 (1,1) - this is considered as not enough recovery time after spinner. Normal difficulty needs at least 2 beats for ~160 bpm, so this is NOT acceptable and will be unqualified because of tis reason. better try to map this part Deleted the spinner and decided to add some objects!
・02:41:315 (3,6) - this is not really noticeable during the gameplay but for the aethtetic sake i'd recommend you to move the (3) a bit upper, it would look neater I think it's fine imo :3
・02:43:729 (2,3) - again about the downbeat. also i can hear a long sound starting from 02:44:074 - there and i bet you hear that this one is way longer than previous. so if i were you i'd change this rhythm to note-slider thing Done. I also added two triangles! It's better for the esthetism :D


hard

・the beginning part of this diff (till kiai) is harder than vass' light and her diff is considered as a light insane. it is also harder than kiai in YOUR diff. there is a pretty constant 1/2 rhythm which doesnt make it look like an actual hard. the normal diff barely has 1/2 sliders/notes and there you have some triplets, which is strange as well..
02:05:453 - starting from there, 02:05:453 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 02:10:971 (1,2,3,4) - things like that increases your star rating of the diff A LOT, just replace it with sliders and you will see that rating falls fast as hell
the last kiai look like an insane and harder than light insane as well.. meh, it could be just me, but this is my opinion which i'd like to share

As I told you in chat today , I remade the spacing in the kiai of the hard and you tell me that it should be fine now so... fixed :D

i wanted to mention something from all diffs but its 4am and i chose wrong time for writing such stuff.. D: im sorry
g-good luck i suppose?
Thanks a bunch for modding :D
Asphyxia
Pang! Pew! (҂`з´).っ︻デ═一

Re-Bubbled~
Umi
We changed Vass_Bass difficulty's name and also some kiai time through irc, this set is good to go ~

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2014-10-30 12:16 Umi: hum
2014-10-30 12:17 Secretpipe: hum
2014-10-30 12:17 Umi: Vass diff c'est une hard ?
2014-10-30 12:17 Secretpipe: On peut dire ca
2014-10-30 12:17 Secretpipe: Hard/Light Insane
2014-10-30 12:17 Secretpipe: Hard+ gere
2014-10-30 12:17 Secretpipe: genre*
2014-10-30 12:17 Umi: dans ce cas rename as Vass's Hard
2014-10-30 12:17 Umi: enfin
2014-10-30 12:18 Umi: je sais pas comment il veut l'appeller
2014-10-30 12:18 Secretpipe: C'est rankable Vass' Light
2014-10-30 12:18 Umi: voit avec lui
2014-10-30 12:18 Umi: ça indique pas vraiment quelle genre de difficulté c'est
2014-10-30 12:18 Secretpipe: Ca a déja été rank plein de fois
2014-10-30 12:19 Umi: ouais mais y'a cb de temps ?
2014-10-30 12:19 Umi: http://puu.sh/cw9sq/7b640d7b89.png
2014-10-30 12:19 Secretpipe: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/123409
2014-10-30 12:19 Secretpipe: 25 juillet
2014-10-30 12:19 Secretpipe: 2014 lel
2014-10-30 12:20 Umi: y'a 4 mois quand meme
2014-10-30 12:20 Secretpipe: 2014
2014-10-30 12:20 Secretpipe: 201444444
2014-10-30 12:20 Secretpipe: we're still in 2014
2014-10-30 12:21 Secretpipe: Atta , j'demande a TicClick
2014-10-30 12:21 Umi: light ça indique rien xD
2014-10-30 12:21 Umi: a la limite light insane
2014-10-30 12:21 Umi: mais juste light j'approuve pas
2014-10-30 12:21 Secretpipe: AAAH
2014-10-30 12:21 Secretpipe: jdemande a un QAT
2014-10-30 12:22 Secretpipe: http://puu.sh/cw9yq.jpg
2014-10-30 12:23 Umi: je parle avec lui 2sec
2014-10-30 12:24 Secretpipe: Sure o/
2014-10-30 12:28 Umi: mouais il dit que c'est ok
2014-10-30 12:28 Secretpipe: YES
2014-10-30 12:28 Secretpipe: ACTION dies
2014-10-30 12:28 Umi: mais bon tu traduis light ça veut juste dire léger
2014-10-30 12:28 Secretpipe: ah
2014-10-30 12:28 Secretpipe: C'est un jeu JAP GOD DAMNIT
2014-10-30 12:28 Secretpipe: ACTION dies
2014-10-30 12:29 Secretpipe: la plupart croient que light c'est ce qui brille dehors au dessus de leurs tete
2014-10-30 12:29 Umi: bon quick recheck
2014-10-30 12:30 Secretpipe: yay
2014-10-30 12:36 Umi: pas de kiai sur l'insane ?
2014-10-30 12:36 Secretpipe: nah
2014-10-30 12:36 Secretpipe: Ca gene pas
2014-10-30 12:36 Umi: une raison particuliere ?
2014-10-30 12:37 Secretpipe: bah c'est son choix mais j'peux en ajouter lel
2014-10-30 12:38 Umi: bah honnetement ouais faudrait
2014-10-30 12:38 Umi: pour le refrain
2014-10-30 12:38 Umi: ça parait logique
2014-10-30 12:38 Secretpipe: sure
2014-10-30 12:38 Umi: comme sur tes diff
2014-10-30 12:42 Umi: sur tes diff secret
2014-10-30 12:42 Umi: le kiai devrait commencer 00:55:108 -
2014-10-30 12:42 Secretpipe: oui xD
2014-10-30 12:42 Secretpipe: done
2014-10-30 12:42 Umi: pas la 00:54:936 -
2014-10-30 12:42 Secretpipe: j'up la
2014-10-30 12:42 Secretpipe: sur ma hard c'est comme ca pourtant
2014-10-30 12:42 Umi: bah pas sur la normal
2014-10-30 12:43 Umi: sur la hard
2014-10-30 12:43 Umi: 00:54:936 -
2014-10-30 12:43 Secretpipe: bizarre
2014-10-30 12:43 Secretpipe: moi j'ai fait sur le modele de l ahard
2014-10-30 12:43 Umi: décoche kiai sur c'te green kine
2014-10-30 12:43 Umi: line*
2014-10-30 12:44 Umi: tien ssi ça peut t'aider
2014-10-30 12:44 Umi: http://puu.sh/cwaqi/6601bd6b68.png
2014-10-30 12:44 Secretpipe: tu veux que je fasse comme ton screen ? xD
2014-10-30 12:45 Umi: c'pas unrankable d'avoir des kiai differents mais bon c'est toujours mieux quand tout est consistant
2014-10-30 12:45 Umi: nan lol
2014-10-30 12:45 Secretpipe: aaaah
2014-10-30 12:45 Secretpipe: I'm fucking confused xD
2014-10-30 12:45 Umi: c'est tes kiai actuel
2014-10-30 12:45 Secretpipe: oi
2014-10-30 12:45 Secretpipe: oui
2014-10-30 12:45 Umi: ça serait mieux qu'ils soient tous pareil tu penses pas ?
2014-10-30 12:45 Secretpipe: Ouais
2014-10-30 12:46 Secretpipe: j'vais fix sur la easy then
2014-10-30 12:46 Secretpipe: J'ai la permission
2014-10-30 12:46 Umi: la easy est ok
2014-10-30 12:46 Secretpipe: Et pour la Vass' Light , jje laisse comme c'est
2014-10-30 12:46 Secretpipe: Et la NNsae j'ai fait comme les autres
2014-10-30 12:47 Secretpipe: nan je laisse la Easy comme ca xD
2014-10-30 12:47 Secretpipe: le kiai c'est bon lol
2014-10-30 12:47 Umi: oui oui
2014-10-30 12:47 Secretpipe: XD
2014-10-30 12:47 Umi: c'est la normal est hard qu'il faut changer
2014-10-30 12:47 Umi: et*
2014-10-30 12:47 Secretpipe: aaaaah
2014-10-30 12:47 Secretpipe: okaaaaay
2014-10-30 12:47 Umi: le début du tout premier kiai est pas bon
2014-10-30 12:50 Secretpipe: done
2014-10-30 12:52 Umi: je vais etre chiant mais pour la diff de vass ça passe vraiment pas pour moi surtout que kin vient juste de me mp pour la meme chose
2014-10-30 12:53 Secretpipe: ?
2014-10-30 12:53 Umi: light ne représente pas une difficulté
2014-10-30 12:53 Secretpipe: Mais c'est rankable
2014-10-30 12:53 Secretpipe: xD
2014-10-30 12:53 Secretpipe: Faut te mettre a la place du mapper xD
2014-10-30 12:53 Secretpipe: Elle a voulu ca xD
2014-10-30 12:54 Umi: je veux l'opinion d'une deuxieme QAT
2014-10-30 12:54 Umi: d'un*
2014-10-30 12:54 Secretpipe: xD
2014-10-30 12:54 Secretpipe: Asphyxia est connecté
2014-10-30 12:57 Secretpipe: convaincul?
2014-10-30 12:57 Secretpipe: Vass est la aussi si tu veux
2014-10-30 12:57 Umi: attend je lui parle
2014-10-30 12:58 Secretpipe: Sure o/
2014-10-30 13:04 Umi: bon je vais prendre une douche le temps que asphyxia finisse
2014-10-30 13:04 Umi: il parle avec toi la nan ? ou alors avec vass_bass
2014-10-30 13:06 Secretpipe: les deux xD
2014-10-30 13:06 Secretpipe: sure
2014-10-30 13:30 Umi: voila re
2014-10-30 13:30 Secretpipe: AH
2014-10-30 13:30 Secretpipe: JE TE CHERCHAIS
2014-10-30 13:30 Secretpipe: xD
2014-10-30 13:30 Secretpipe: Je pleurais
2014-10-30 13:30 Secretpipe: lol
2014-10-30 13:30 Umi: lol
2014-10-30 13:30 Umi: alors ?
2014-10-30 13:33 Secretpipe: va voir :p
2014-10-30 13:33 Umi: oh cool
2014-10-30 13:37 Umi: ok on est bon

Qualified!
Andrus
Grats :D
Kin
Hey

00:49:591 (2) -



(Vass's diff)
(standard screen, no widescreen)
TicClick
5:4 is not a standard aspect ratio (but 4:3 and 16:9 are) and is not supported; therefore that slider doesn't count as an offscreen object
Topic Starter
Secretpipe
Then it has no problems !
Wheeeee~
jyu
omg congratz!!
Vass_Bass
gratzi
Tsubajashi
Nice Map! :D
Love it! <3
Mafumafu
Yeah! ReGratz in advance!😜
Aleks719
Heya, i'm here for... meh, you know for what. Anyway, map is good, all should be fixed and repaired fast


RED - unrankable, normal - comments / recommendations

General
Strange and inconsistant usage of spinners. they are presenting in hardest and easiest diffs only. would be cool to add one somewhere else if possible!

NNsane
00:54:936 - kiai starts from nothing. Start it from 00:55:108 please for consistency with other diffs. Also it looks better.
01:14:764 - missed note, huh?
01:50:798 (1) - remove nc for consistency with 01:39:246 (1) - this combo?
03:07:177 (8) - you can't set 5% volume for whole object (unhearable object). put your 5% to the end or few ms later after start of slider? Beat on the start is pretty hearable in track

Hard
01:02:695 (2) - slider is offscreen
02:52:350 (1,2) - problem with hitsounding (misplaced clap)
03:07:177 (3) - same as in NNsane

Normal
03:07:177 (1) - same as in NNsane
Neil Watts
#ranking2014 >:(

good luck
Aka

Aleks719 wrote:

Hard
01:02:695 (2) - slider is offscreen
lol you kiddin me secret, i told you about this slider last time you pmd me
sigh :(
Topic Starter
Secretpipe
Cant remember :/
grumd
once a year grumd mod confirmed

nnsane

i'd make od8. 7 is like a free SS, the rhythm is simple and bpm is static. 8 is at least a bit challenging.
00:57:867 - i don't like how the sound on the slider body (that fast shit) is not emphasized in any way in any diff. it's very clear and hearable, it should be in the map! i'd recommend this simple solution: http://puu.sh/cEv8Z.jpg it's not directly like in the music, but every note of the triple has a sound under it in music and this pattern at least underlines the sound you hear.
same goes for all patterns like that later. there are plently of them.
01:40:281 (3,4,5) - maybe think about placing (4) in the middle between them? spacing is screwed
01:46:833 (4,1) - this totally looks like 1/1, not 1/2. place them closer PLSPLSPLS
02:09:591 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - to keep the nice pattern, do this http://puu.sh/cEvCK.jpg
02:23:384 (1,2,3,4) - this is a start of a kiai and a start of a very major and fast part of the song. but it plays plain boring in the beginning. a 1/1 stack, then two sliders one near each other... that's too easy to play and doesn't feel like a kiai start. it needs to be a BOOM moment. i'd make it like that: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2207761
02:49:246 (5) - your curved sliders never were like this. they were a lot more straight, this curve is weird. make it smoother: http://puu.sh/cExc0.jpg

light insane

hp drain is lower than in hard diff. +1 hp pls
probably +1 od too
00:54:936 - i'd end the slider here. the blue tick has no sound and it even plays weird, but this point has a sound on it.
02:48:815 (2,3) - this is actually very tricky and i'm not sure this will play well. 02:48:729 - you have a sound in the music at this point, so it's better to add a note here and make a triple. blue tick sound is not that loud as the red tick one.
02:54:246 - same here
03:03:902 - yeah. i don't really like the idea to play this as double circles. if you want such a rhythm, better make it with a slider. otherwise the red tick sound feels too missing.

hard

01:02:695 (2) - u mad pipe? it's still offscreen :c
01:27:005 (1,2,3) - idk if that tiny jump is really needed. maybe you'll keep standard spacing?
01:38:040 (1,2,3) - same here. this part is already emphasized by a triple; no need to add a jump over it
01:38:384 (4) - and yeah, not sure about this jump too
01:40:281 (1) - a bit uneven spacing, 1.7x will be better
actually, in this part i'd keep all the spacings usual. jumps here are not needed, because it's the calm part of the song and you didn't have much jumps in other parts. it just doesn't feel right. i'm talking about jumps like 01:42:005 (1,2,1) - 01:44:074 (4,5) - 01:49:591 (6,7) - <- especially this last one
01:59:591 (1,4,5,1) - here, i'd better make a jump between 5 and 1 to emphasize the downbeat. http://puu.sh/cEyjZ.jpg
02:45:453 (1) - wow. 1.25x. unexpected. even that light insane was slower at this part. well, i'll take as an excuse that you don't have streams here. but the diff spead is questionable.
i'd make it 1.15x at maximum, even 1.0x is better. seriously.

normal

ar6 please. it's WAY too slow here. very far away from ar8 in hard and very close to ar3.5 in easy. it's even too slow for that high sv.
01:13:040 (3) - if you're using these triples for synth sound (as you did before), then you don't need it here. instead it's needed here 01:12:177 -
01:47:522 (1) - i just love how you make these round sliders on the word "around"
02:20:626 (1,2,3,4) - no hitsounds here? sorry? it needs some normal sampleset ok.
02:42:350 (5) - forgot a clap?
02:45:798 (3,4) - spacing error
02:47:177 (5,1) - yea same
lol this part is like a disaster in terms of hitsounds. i don't understand what's happening haha

easy

00:48:902 (3,1) - bad blanket :3 red point should be moved a bit higher.
01:42:005 (3) - the rhythm looks a lot better like this: http://puu.sh/cEzn0.jpg
02:59:591 (2,1) - bad blanket :3
Vass_Bass
you're kiddin', guys
grumd

Vass_Bass wrote:

you're kiddin', guys
he asked me to mod it, that's what i'm doing
Topic Starter
Secretpipe

Aleks719 wrote:

Heya, i'm here for... meh, you know for what. Anyway, map is good, all should be fixed and repaired fast


RED - unrankable, normal - comments / recommendations

General
Strange and inconsistant usage of spinners. they are presenting in hardest and easiest diffs only. would be cool to add one somewhere else if possible! Well , I didn't try to add some consistency with spinners . I added them when I found it fitted perfectly.

NNsane
00:54:936 - kiai starts from nothing. Start it from 00:55:108 please for consistency with other diffs. Also it looks better. sure
01:14:764 - missed note, huh? not really but I could add one yeah. Fixed.
01:50:798 (1) - remove nc for consistency with 01:39:246 (1) - this combo?
03:07:177 (8) - you can't set 5% volume for whole object (unhearable object). put your 5% to the end or few ms later after start of slider? Beat on the start is pretty hearable in track okay o/

Hard
01:02:695 (2) - slider is offscreen Okay fixed.
02:52:350 (1,2) - problem with hitsounding (misplaced clap) You're totally right! Nice catch!
03:07:177 (3) - same as in NNsane Done

Normal
03:07:177 (1) - same as in NNsane Done

Thank you so much for modding Owleks o/
Topic Starter
Secretpipe

grumd wrote:

once a year grumd mod confirmed

nnsane

i'd make od8. 7 is like a free SS, the rhythm is simple and bpm is static. 8 is at least a bit challenging. oki
00:57:867 - i don't like how the sound on the slider body (that fast shit) is not emphasized in any way in any diff. it's very clear and hearable, it should be in the map! i'd recommend this simple solution: http://puu.sh/cEv8Z.jpg it's not directly like in the music, but every note of the triple has a sound under it in music and this pattern at least underlines the sound you hear.
same goes for all patterns like that later. there are plently of them.
Basically , I added a whistle. Otherwise , I don't think there's a rhtyhm issue although your idea is good. Also , I didnt wanted to break Natteke / Nemis style here :3
01:40:281 (3,4,5) - maybe think about placing (4) in the middle between them? spacing is screwed Done
01:46:833 (4,1) - this totally looks like 1/1, not 1/2. place them closer PLSPLSPLS It'll break the placement with 01:48:212 (2,3,4) - den
02:09:591 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - to keep the nice pattern, do this http://puu.sh/cEvCK.jpg oki done
02:23:384 (1,2,3,4) - this is a start of a kiai and a start of a very major and fast part of the song. but it plays plain boring in the beginning. a 1/1 stack, then two sliders one near each other... that's too easy to play and doesn't feel like a kiai start. it needs to be a BOOM moment. i'd make it like that: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2207761 done too
02:49:246 (5) - your curved sliders never were like this. they were a lot more straight, this curve is weird. make it smoother: http://puu.sh/cExc0.jpg done

light insane

hp drain is lower than in hard diff. +1 hp pls done
probably +1 od too done
00:54:936 - i'd end the slider here. the blue tick has no sound and it even plays weird, but this point has a sound on it. You're right although I didn't want to change cause of Vass style.I hope she's not gonna hit me ;~;
02:48:815 (2,3) - this is actually very tricky and i'm not sure this will play well. 02:48:729 - you have a sound in the music at this point, so it's better to add a note here and make a triple. blue tick sound is not that loud as the red tick one. Sure , I hope Vass wont hit me here too xD
02:54:246 - same here ^
03:03:902 - yeah. i don't really like the idea to play this as double circles. if you want such a rhythm, better make it with a slider. otherwise the red tick sound feels too missing. ^

hard

01:02:695 (2) - u mad pipe? it's still offscreen :c changed in previous mod
01:27:005 (1,2,3) - idk if that tiny jump is really needed. maybe you'll keep standard spacing? Just wanted to add a little bit difficulty :D
01:38:040 (1,2,3) - same here. this part is already emphasized by a triple; no need to add a jump over it It's fine
01:38:384 (4) - and yeah, not sure about this jump too Spaced the triplet. Now the spacing is correct!
01:40:281 (1) - a bit uneven spacing, 1.7x will be better done
actually, in this part i'd keep all the spacings usual. jumps here are not needed, because it's the calm part of the song and you didn't have much jumps in other parts. it just doesn't feel right. i'm talking about jumps like 01:42:005 (1,2,1) - 01:44:074 (4,5) - 01:49:591 (6,7) - <- especially this last one
01:59:591 (1,4,5,1) - here, i'd better make a jump between 5 and 1 to emphasize the downbeat. http://puu.sh/cEyjZ.jpg Nah , the esthetism would be broken then owo.
02:45:453 (1) - wow. 1.25x. unexpected. even that light insane was slower at this part. well, i'll take as an excuse that you don't have streams here. but the diff spead is questionable.
i'd make it 1.15x at maximum, even 1.0x is better. seriously. Prefered to put 1.15 instead of 1.0 cause it'd be really disturbing to change all notes although I just changed all notes xD

normal

ar6 please. it's WAY too slow here. very far away from ar8 in hard and very close to ar3.5 in easy. it's even too slow for that high sv. done
01:13:040 (3) - if you're using these triples for synth sound (as you did before), then you don't need it here. instead it's needed here 01:12:177 - variety.png
01:47:522 (1) - i just love how you make these round sliders on the word "around" <3
02:20:626 (1,2,3,4) - no hitsounds here? sorry? it needs some normal sampleset ok. added some
02:42:350 (5) - forgot a clap? added one
02:45:798 (3,4) - spacing error done
02:47:177 (5,1) - yea same done
lol this part is like a disaster in terms of hitsounds. i don't understand what's happening haha :C

easy

00:48:902 (3,1) - bad blanket :3 red point should be moved a bit higher. done
01:42:005 (3) - the rhythm looks a lot better like this: http://puu.sh/cEzn0.jpg done
02:59:591 (2,1) - bad blanket :3 :3
THANKS A BUNCH <3<3<3<3<3
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Topic Starter
Secretpipe
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Secretpipe wrote:

grumd wrote:

easy

00:48:902 (3,1) - bad blanket :3 red point should be moved a bit higher. done
01:42:005 (3) - the rhythm looks a lot better like this: http://puu.sh/cEzn0.jpg done I don't want to fix this, it doesn't goes with my pattern, it's irregular since this whole part is on the melody, and now, only this slider on vocal 01:42:005 (3) - .
02:59:591 (2,1) - bad blanket :3 :3
THANKS A BUNCH <3<3<3<3<3
please, never fix without asking me >_<

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56,132,173384,6,0,P|52:84|72:32,2,80,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,204,174419,2,0,P|132:196|180:208,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,236,175108,5,0,0:0:0:0:
244,236,175453,2,0,P|320:256|397:237,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,172,176488,5,0,0:0:0:0:
396,108,176833,2,0,P|318:89|242:109,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,152,177867,2,0,L|160:240,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,360,178902,6,0,L|270:281,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,204,179591,2,0,B|366:217|366:217|396:184|442:190,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,268,180626,5,0,0:0:0:0:
408,344,180971,2,0,P|332:360|240:344,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,316,182005,5,0,0:0:0:0:
176,316,182350,2,0,P|132:256|180:168,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,140,183384,6,0,L|312:136,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,180,184074,2,0,L|460:176,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,184764,12,0,187522,0:0:0:0:

thanks

edit2 : failed code
Shiro

Kin wrote:

please, never fix without asking me >_<

If it's possible to re unqualifie it :
It is. Sorry but fixing people's maps without their agreement is not allowed. This is going to need to be requalified again. D:
-Anime-_old_1
i really like this
Sakura
And here i thought mapper had been given full permission to change stuff...
Sigh...
Edit:
Kin according to secretpipe you allowed him to:
Topic Starter
Secretpipe
You said you were ok *shrugs*

you diff has been updated anyway.

EDIT : Do NOT blame Sakura. She did well her job. It was my fault , I didn't ask Kin again for fixing his diff

Also , I'm not involved into this map anymore. If some BAT want to push it forward , it'll helps me!
Kin
It was just a misunderstand between Secret and me
Shiro
okay let's get this back to where it was
also fixed the offset while at it
Lust
log
14:32 Secretpipe: mao is checking
14:32 Secretpipe: hope no shit later
14:36 Lust: ye
14:36 Secretpipe: well , Shiro can rerank I heard
14:38 Lust: its up to you lol
14:41 Secretpipe: Well , Mao is checking , If I need you I'll tell u
14:41 Lust: sounds good to me bud
14:42 Secretpipe: \o/
15:39 Secretpipe: shiro just bubbled
15:39 Secretpipe: I'd like you to instarank cause just changed timing lolz
15:39 Lust: mao didnt bubble?
15:39 Lust: ohhhh
15:39 Secretpipe: shiro did
15:39 Lust: give me a few moments
15:39 Secretpipe: hmkay
15:41 Secretpipe: Well , not forcing you but mom want me to shut the PC huehue
15:43 Lust: aw snap well alright
15:43 Lust: could you possibly wait until tomorrow then?
15:43 Secretpipe: hot here tomorrow
15:43 Secretpipe: cause of studies
15:43 Secretpipe: have to focus
15:44 Lust: ahhhh when will you be back?
15:45 Secretpipe: next week end
15:45 Secretpipe: but it's perfect now
15:45 Lust: alright one sec
15:46 Secretpipe: shiro rebbubled w/o check I think
15:47 Lust: alright ill qualify it then
15:47 Secretpipe: yaaaay
15:47 Secretpipe: je just rechecked the timing
15:47 Secretpipe: you need to redl
15:47 Secretpipe: WAIT
15:47 Secretpipe: need to fix letterboxed
15:48 Lust: i was just about to say
15:48 Lust: lol
15:48 Secretpipe: xD
15:50 Secretpipe: done
15:52 Lust: since you extended your kiai further than the rest of the diffs i think this leaves room for a neat trick
15:52 *Lust is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/530068 Sub Focus ft. Kele - Turn It Around [Hard]]
15:52 Lust: 02:45:274 (4) - end the first kiai here
15:52 Secretpipe: huh?
15:52 Lust: 02:45:446 (1) - start the next one here
15:52 Lust: will make for a cool effect
15:52 Secretpipe: only in hard?
15:52 Secretpipe: a fountain
15:52 Lust: no for the easy and normal as well
15:52 Lust: yeah
15:52 Lust: i mean
15:52 Secretpipe: okay
15:52 Lust: not the easy
15:52 Lust: just the normal and hard
15:53 Lust: the gders dont have to do this since theirs are different

What we fixed:
  1. Disabled letterboxing
  2. Added a kiai fountain in secretpipe's diffs (the gders have a different ending place for the kiai, so not applied to theirs)

Post in the thread when you are ready.
Topic Starter
Secretpipe
I think my body is reggie
Natteke
http://puu.sh/cLmJN/351c5a3979.osu

Changed hitsounds on Nemis' kiai part as well as well as hitsounds on my part (02:10:964 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - )

This should make the map a bit more fun to play if you're using default hitsounds :)
Topic Starter
Secretpipe
Updated.

Waiting for Lust now~
grumd

Stuff like this needs to get straight. Sad thing there was something misunderstood.
Hope this gets requalified soon!
Lust
Re-qualified, sorry for the delay!
Timorisu
rererererererereregrats
jyu
finally
re-gratz!!
Akasha-
WOW, congrats Secretpipe :3
Lanturn
<3 <3

Congrats Secretpipe!

I swear I was supposed to mod this but I completely forgot ;_;

I'm only a couple week late...
Mao
Nice, gratz!
Topic Starter
Secretpipe
Thanks guys :D
Veemon
congratz!!
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