:> Some suggestions.
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- The transition between 00:23:295 (3) - and 00:23:469 (1) - is pretty big, just saying. in the majority of cases, the player will end up with a 100/slidebreak because of the massive spacing and ankward movement. Consider making it more simple to play. For example, making 00:23:295 (3) - only a circle would be nice.
- 00:31:966 (15) - I recognize where you want to place the slider's end, but the curve of the slider itself looks ugly :<. Try to move this slider end elsewhere.
- 00:45:665 (1,2,3,4,5) - WHOA
- 00:52:255 (3) - I think nobody would ever able to read this on sightread. I mean, try it yourself, you'll se that the jump between 00:52:255 (3) - and 00:52:428 (1) - is pretty big and unintuitive.
- 01:05:434 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - This is also pretty unintuitive :/.
- 01:40:983 (3) - Here, i will take a moment. Unlike 00:23:295 (3) - , this is just a circle , and that makes the pattern more simple to read and play. Hope you have understood.
- 01:49:654 (15) - just like i said a few lines above, i don't particulary like the slider body :/
- 02:22:428 (3) - maybe a little hard to read, but not that pain.
- 03:52:168 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Think how difficult is for the player to click on the circle and then on the slider with that distance between, for example, 03:52:168 (2) - and 03:52:255 (3) - . Just reduce a bit the distance between the circle and the slider.
- 03:56:071 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I can understand this, the vocals get more acute, so increasing the spacing too,but honestly ii think these are just too much to handle.
- 04:49:827 (1) - BIGGER WHOA
- 05:00:925 (2,3,4,5,1) - Gratz if you manage to get the map ranked with these,i'm thinking of how much players will be able to FC. Oh well, it will be fun >.<!