Much better !
I still have a few things to say about it (no time for a full mod), these are the major things I noticed:
00:35:369 (1,2) - kinda confusing, this 3/4 is the first appearance in the whole map so the spacing makes it looks like it's 1/2 before the next slider, you should compress this one and maybe the next few ones to make sure the player knows that 3/4 is a rhythm that is used
00:40:895 (3,2) - weirdly overlapping, this threw me off when playing
00:42:316 (3,4,5,6,1) - really weird rhythm, I'm not sure where it comes from, but it's confusing to play
00:50:132 (5,6) - kinda hidden again
00:59:369 (1) - this slider hides this stream 01:00:317 (3,4,5,6,1) - Q.Q
01:05:369 (5) - hidden under another circle/hitburst
02:37:898 (1,2,3) - super weird spacing
03:13:899 (3,4) - 03:15:162 (3,4) - these really really really really should be circles with jumps if you did that that part would be so awesome
03:40:268 (3) - this is minor but point this upwards to stay consistent with 03:39:952 (2) - it will be more intuitive
06:12:483 (6) - this doesnt make sense, theres nothing like this in the song
06:27:483 (5) - same, also hidden under hitbursts
06:52:061 (1) - should be 1/2 to stay consistent
07:02:453 (2) - hidden under 07:02:346 (1) -
07:52:596 (2) - this slider is hella weird, im not sure what it follows
etc
i wish you had focused more on each particular song instead of going for a fairly blanket drum rhythm for the whole map, it makes it repetitive =(