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[General Sanders]
Your normal diff, is very bland, it's 1 minute of 1 monotonous pattern, a little 1/2 slider spree for 3 seconds then
another monotonous pattern >.>
[Kenters's's's izi]
00:09:288 (1) - Hmm, i feel this introductory slider is out of touch with the theme of the start, it just coasts through the vocals and doesnt fit anything apart from the beginning beat. Ok, I got a fantastic idea for this, right so your cool slider 00:11:619 (4) bring the curvy part out a bit more, shrink the first slider to a smaller size and add an extra note, you with me? Then you can blanket the extra note for a really nice effect while staying true to the song itself. I put a gif together explaining it, play attention to the first 4 notes you see, and replicate something similar to that
00:16:279 (3) - This note looks cramped together and the end of the slider hits the rest of the slider in quite an ugly way, I suggest bringing the end out a bit more so it creates a nicer looking pattern.
00:29:094 (2,3) - Create some kind of blanket perhaps? The 3rd slider feels displaced imo making the flow like just sliders rather than an array of connecting sliders.
00:33:755 (2,3) - Why not blanket more of the slider? I can create a cool looking slider imo but some people may be iffy with the design and curve, I think it looks nice but it is open to suggestion.
00:37:250 (1) - The curve in the middle of this slider leans to the right too much, I suggest making the curve less deep and moving it one of two squares diagonally up and left.
00:37:250 (1) - ^^^^ but the slider head. :3 and also ^ because the curve white tick thing in the slider is too high up.
01:09:871 (1) - I'm not sure why but I dont like this slider it's huge and looks so awkward, too long and straight (oh god...) but make more curves on it :3
01:11:619 (2) -
This is unrankable since part of it goes off the screen. (In play mode it is like 1 pixel away but brushes the accuracy thing at the bottom)01:16:279 (2) -
^01:33:172 (1) - This curve is overkill on a slider like this, a more suble curve will suit it much better. If you like this curve make sure the end is inline with the head of the slider.
01:34:920 (2) - On the topic of the curve this missed a nice blanket with the curve.
01:36:667 (4) - Ok this is definately off the screen I also tested in playmode, you'll need to move this up
01:49:483 (3) - Same as the 2nd suggestion
01:49:483 (3) - Add a curve on the longer straight part, make it an obtuse angle in the slider it looks nice imo ;o
[Normerrrl]
Like in the generic, the repetitive things it's quite everywhere I suggest I remap of quite large chunks of this map for example: 00:09:288 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - This likely needs large change or remap.
Since I half modded it some time I will be more general
00:27:929 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This is too "I can click with little effort" it follows too much of regular beat, it's a normal you can spice things up
00:36:376 (4) - Move this down a touch and curve more?
00:42:492 (2,3) - Slider 3 is closer to the head of slider 2 than the end making a lopsided look, move it a tiny bit right.
00:46:570 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Again very bland and just the same thing over and over, I know it follows a beat but to a new player it could strike as boring and lacking a sort of spice a song like this needs.
01:05:211 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - >.>
Well you get the idea :3 If you disagree with all of this it's ok I guess :s
[ColdToof's (get it) Herd (ahaha)]
00:12:492 (2) - Curve this more for a nice flow into the next slider, which will also make both slider sort of congruent.
00:16:279 (1,2) - Why are these two sliders different curve lengths it looks inconsistent imo, I can see why it's done but I think it's a tad redundant
00:37:104 (6,1) - Bad transition to the large slider, the 6th note looks too intrusive onto the sliders path.
00:40:745 (3,1) - The new combo note sounds too sudden and doesn't map to anything new from what the slider mapped.
00:56:473 (2,4) - Add a note inbetween here for better consistency, your type of tripletish combo things just ends here for some reason.
01:07:541 (1) - Ok, for here make this slider a 1/2 and reverse it, it will sound better due to you using a similar if not same beat after the next slider, it will coincide with the music to sound sxc.
01:23:269 (1) - This slider doesn't do it for me, it looks so out of place and the curves arent the best, they look a tad choppy. I suggest a revise on this slider.
01:26:182 (1,3) - Make this sliders identical to one another for a nicer look to the general pattern.
01:29:677 (3) - Put the red tick in the centre of the slider so both sides are evenly spread.
01:55:308 (3) - I got a nice suggestion, indent the middle part of this slider for a nicer look overall to the slider.
[Fluttrs tryhard diff. I mean Insane]
00:13:949 (1,2,3,4) - Slider 1 isnt the same distance apart, fix it pls ;.-;;-;-;p--;
00:27:929 (1,2) - These sliders dont blanket properly, slider 1 isn't curved enough and is too far up from the one behind it.
00:33:755 (1,2) - Unnecessary jump is unnecessary.
00:40:745 (6) - Curve the straight part for a consistent slider curve it inwards though, it looks nicer.
00:44:094 (1) - No dont do this with the end of a slider it's like it's a broken slide, pls let is flow off rather than fall off.
00:50:939 (1,2,1) - Make 1 and 2 a drum finish, then the new combo slider head a normal finish
00:52:395 (1,2) - Make these symetrically blanket note 5, so the slider heads and end are inline with eachother
00:58:949 (4) - Move the red slider tick thing right, so you have room for a proper blanket.
01:00:405 (2) - This is too far out in comparison with the previous two, snap it back please.
01:37:687 (5) - New note make it a triangle shape and put a normal clap on for dat consistency and pattern
01:39:434 (5) - Overmap here, delete the note there is nothing thats been added from the music.
01:47:153 (5) - Add a finish here you've done it before why not now?
01:55:308 (6) - Please no, make it like one of those modern sliders that curve and have those V shapes on them, look at coldtooths for das inspiration.
02:03:755 (2) - Move to the left a tad so it is blanketed correctly be the incoming longer slider.
Great maps! Love them keep up the work and get a fast bubble then a faster rank! <3