GeneralI really suggest you add in some time into the AudioLeadIn in Notepad for all difficulties, to ensure there is 2000ms of time before first object
Easy00:14:684 (1,2,3) - can you make this pattern more identical in shape,00:14:684 (1,3) don't really curve around the circle the same way
01:01:313 (1) - this curve seems off, the middle of the curve looks too angular, it's starting to look like a V
01:02:856 (3) - this is quite an unexpected change in rhythm for Easy, wouldn't really recommend it, I don't know if putting a NC would do any good either
01:05:084 (2,3) - improve the blanket
01:27:370 (3,1) - spacing error, they are too close to each other, it's 0.7x instead of the usual 1.0
01:46:227 (2,3) - would be better if the blanket was nicer
01:57:541 (1,2) - ^
02:15:027 (2) - changing this to a slider that ends at 02:15:199 would fit the song better, the rhythm feels incomplete right now
03:34:570 (4,1) - I think you should improve this blanket
03:55:141 (4,1) - ^
04:17:427 (1) - add a finish at the start of the slider to go along with the cymbals in the song
It's not Easy trying to come up with a decent rhythm for an Easy for this song that can keep inventing itself and be refreshing yet simple enough for players, I can see quite an effort to do so here though, so that's a good point
Normal00:17:427 (1) - finish on start of slider
00:18:456 (2) - finish on end of slider
00:20:170 (1,3) - finish
00:21:541 (5) - finish on start of slider
00:39:370 (1) - ^
00:40:741 (3) - ^
00:42:113 (1) - finish
00:57:199 (3,4,5) - I think this can be arranged better,especially between 00:57:199 (3,4)
01:00:456 (4) - place it higher to be in line with the end of 00:59:941 (3) for smoother transition
01:02:684 (3) - move it to 01:02:513 - it will honestly sound more fitting to the music, it's currently following nothing in the music
01:35:599 (1,2,3) - you should keep the flow going in the direction of the curve, instead of putting the next circle and slider shifting more to the right:
02:00:284 (1,1) - why the NCs?
02:26:341 (3,4) - use the same shapes
02:46:227 (3) - this note is extra, and there is nothing here in the music that is strong, you should remove it
02:54:284 (5,6) - swapping places so slider comes before circle would suit the held vocals better over here
04:01:656 (3) - extend the slider to end at 04:02:170 so that the rhythm here wouldn't sound so strange as the objects end where the song stops for awhile and the strong beat is mapped to, making the silence less awkward
04:22:056 (4,5) - slider before circle, so the slider goes along with the prolonged music at 04:22:056
Hard00:19:484 (3,4) - would be better if they didn't overlap
00:19:827 (4,1) - don't let them touch each other
00:21:370 (5,1) - don't let them touch each other
00:25:656 (2) - shouldn't the NC start here on the downbeat
00:37:141 (2) - stack it with 00:35:941 (2) would be better as it won't overlap 00:36:456 (3) as well
00:39:370 (1,1,1,3,1) - finish on the start of all these sliders
00:43:484 (1) - reduce the volume for the end of this slider, which should be more silent and less noisy
01:02:513 (4) - NC for the change in rhythm
01:05:599 (5) - either here or 01:05:256 (4) place a NC, currently the combo use seems weird in the Hard overall, and this is one of them
01:36:799 (4,1) - don't overlap them
01:41:256 (1,2) - looks too close to each other, almost touching, don't really look pleasing
01:48:970 (4) - this isn't good, the slider ends on an on-beat which starts a line in the vocal, which would fit nicely with a slider start instead
02:10:913 (6) - slider too curved, looks squeezed, doesn't look well, may affect flow as well
02:16:399 (4,1) - either place it closer so they overlap more or space them away, this near-yet-not-touching looks bad
02:28:913 (3) - NC like the previous identical pattern before this
02:33:884 (3,1) - don't overlap
02:37:141 (6) - just to inform you this differs from the way you used NC for this kind of rhythm
03:48:627 (1,3) - don't overlap
03:57:199 (3,4,5,6,7) - space 03:57:884 (7) equally from both the other stacks
04:00:970 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - why is this one combo and 01:04:056 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) not just 1 combo either? Another example of inconsistencies in combo use
04:17:427 (1) - finish on start of slider
04:20:170 (1) - ^
04:21:370 (6) - according to previous patterns wouldn't this be the NC instead
NC seems to keep changing in pattern here, it makes things confusing and messy
Collab Insane01:04:399 (2,4) - blanket better
01:33:541 (1,1) - let them be closer to each other, such kick sliders make it easy to break combo, and this spacing just makes it even more difficult
01:40:913 (3,4,5) - they are not in a straight line
03:12:970 (2,3) - these 2 objects are on nothing in the music, music only starts at 03:13:141 which is where the objects should start too as well, the 1st 2 circles should not be there
The change in difficulty from Hard is very high, with suddenly streams and slider streams jumps and much much wider jumps that occur almost all the time, when it was almost non-existent in Hard. With this jump in difficulty, this gap is too wide, it won't bode well when in the ranking process
Extra01:05:427 (3) - this slider starts off-beat and it's super obvious it is not on the music and sounds really bad. Anything that holds quite long should have been at 01:05:256 and not at 01:05:427 when there is nothing, this part of the rhythm has to change
02:10:484 - you should have a note here
02:24:456 (1,2) - you can't tell which end is the start if it's on HD, like hiding objects underneath others, it can be unrankable (or is, idk)
02:25:827 (3) - straighten the slider:
02:47:256 (2,3,4) - better alignment and use a spacing that looks less weird please
03:15:713 - since the break doesn't start here, add a note or you'll lose the effect
04:09:884 (4,6) - don't overlap
Overall, hitsounds can be improved in all difficulties, as well as the use of combo
Good Luck