I didn't forget this time!!!!!
[Normal]
Consider adding some soft hitsounding to the slow part before the first spinner (use uninherited timing sections to lower their volume)
00:02:754 (1,2) - If you were going for a blanket here, it's not quite perfect (scroll to 00:03:299 and you'll notice (1)'s sliderstart is a bit too far in). I'm being super picky here though, so don't worry about it too much.
00:15:188 (1,2) - You should probably decrease the spacing here just a tiny bit so it matches the rest of the map, or at least 00:13:716 (3,4).
00:19:605 (4,5) - This flows awkwardly. Try making (4) face more southwest, so the repeat arrow bounces it back up towards (5).
00:29:360 (1) - Move up a bit more to close the spacing gap?
00:47:581 (1) - This should probably curve upwards instead of downwards to flow better into the next note.
00:49:053 (4,5) - Better than 00:19:605 (4,5), but still feels a bit strange to play, so maybe do something similar.
00:52:918 (1,2) - And now the spacing got smaller instead of bigger??
01:24:391 (4) - Slider is unsnapped by 1ms, just move it back and forth on the timeline to fix.
01:34:697 (1) - This slider turned into a bezier somehow! Note how it has a weird sharp curve on the inside - you should probably remake it
01:39:851 (1) - This slider's a bit lopsided, so I fixed it for you. Open your .osu file in Notepad from the editor, delete the last line and replace it with this:
132,304,99851,6,0,B|196:193|256:492|316:193|380:304,1,287.999991210938,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
[Hard]
Lots of unsnapped stuff here discovered by the new AiMod update! Just click "resnap all notes" in the Timing dropdown menu. (You'll need to fix the spinner at 00:09:299 (1) - afterwards though)
00:20:710 - Feels like there should be a note here somewhere.
00:24:022 (1,2,3,4) - These feel slightly lopsided. Consider making a pentagon with the Polygon Tool so you'll have a perfect pattern spacing, then removing the top point and rearranging the other notes in the timeline.
00:29:912 (1) - I think this would look better if you copied 00:30:464 (2) - and horizontally flipped it.
00:33:961 (4,5,6) - This overlap is a bit weird, you should probably move (6) down and to the right a bit!
00:35:802 (2) - Same as 00:29:912 (1), I caught you copy+paste and flipping
(nothing wrong with it though)
00:38:378 (8) - The editor's note stack is bugged and this isn't stacked perfectly. Highlight the note and press Ctrl+Shift+Down Arrow to move it down one pixel and stack it correctly.
00:44:268 (4) - Same as above, except move it right with the right arrow instead.
00:46:845 (2) - This should be copy+pasted and flipped from 00:46:108 (1) - for better symmetry.
00:51:630 (4) - Move this one grid down and right on the smallest grid snap to fix distance spacing.
00:56:047 (7) - Ctrl+Shift+Right Arrow.
00:58:808 (1) - This looks kinda silly! You should probably move the sliderend more north to make it more readable
(and even blanket the slider before it!)01:01:937 (8) - Ctrl+Shift+Right, then Ctrl+Shift+Down.
01:21:446 (1,2,3,4,5) - You have to be careful with the polygon tool, since it's going to make slightly rotated patterns like this. If you want it to be more straight, highlight these and press Ctrl+Shift+R, then rotate by -2 degrees. Afterwards, switch to Tiny grid snap and resnap them to grid, adjusting their spacing as necessary. At the end, it should look
like this.
01:24:943 (7) - Wiggle this around to fix the distance snap a bit. (You'll probably have to turn off grid snap to get it right)
01:30:832 (7) - Same as above.
01:36:722 (8) - Same (because it's copy+pasted)
[Insane]
00:15:004 (6) - Stack on top of 00:13:716 (1)? No need, it just looks slightly neater.
00:23:470 (4) - Move this a bit to the right to fix the spacing.
01:22:182 (3,4,5,6,7) - This would probably look better if you adjusted (7) to be slightly higher.
01:36:906 (10,11) - Probably move (10) a bit further out so it doesn't overlap (and 8 further the other direction to match)
[Enon's Extra]
00:06:033 (7) - This slider is pretty lopsided too. Protip: press Ctrl+H a lot to make sure your slider's horizontal symmetry is correct.
00:22:458 (8) - Move it a bit closer to (9) to fix distance spacing.
00:30:556 (6) - Same.
00:33:041 (1) - Lopsided! (I'm only pointing out lopsided sliders that are supposed to be centered across the playfield btw, it doesn't usually matter otherwise)
00:57:887 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - I feel like this was a slider-to-stream pattern that also came from a lopsided slider. It's not perfectly centered in any case and probably should be.
I was being extra harsh and pointing out every minor inconsistency that I noticed while playing, so a lot of them don't really need to be changed but I feel like they'd make the map better anyway. Very nice map good luck!