Komatsu Mikako & Ishihara Kaori - Dazzling · forum

mercury2004

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mercury2004 2014-09-14T17:16:45+00:00

ระวังเรื่อง sbload ล่ะ ตอนนี้มันทะลุจอมากๆ ตัดๆหน่อยก็ดีเผื่อไว้. โพสไว้กันลืม

Last edited by mercury2004 2014-09-15T13:11:21+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

P A N

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Topic Starter

P A N 2014-09-15T11:53:35+00:00

กำเอา translate ออกไปเดี๋ยวเขาจับได้

Asagi

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Asagi 2014-09-15T13:04:44+00:00

ok

P A N

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Topic Starter

P A N 2014-09-15T13:27:49+00:00

Asagi wrote:

ok

oh no asagi please ;w;

Asagi

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Asagi 2014-09-17T18:19:50+00:00

P A N pls
IRC mod on Insane

Log

2014-09-18 01:10 Asagi: wanna IRC mod? :v
2014-09-18 01:10 Asagi: or youre gonna sleep soon? rip
2014-09-18 01:10 P A N: mp
2014-09-18 01:10 P A N: no
2014-09-18 01:10 P A N: today my mom are sleeping
2014-09-18 01:10 Asagi: wow
2014-09-18 01:10 Asagi: so play all you want?
2014-09-18 01:11 P A N: did you redl for SB?
2014-09-18 01:11 Asagi: not yet
2014-09-18 01:12 P A N: wat
2014-09-18 01:12 Asagi: wait
2014-09-18 01:12 Asagi: reDLing
2014-09-18 01:12 Asagi: RIP DL speed
2014-09-18 01:13 P A N: ok
2014-09-18 01:13 P A N: rip
2014-09-18 01:13 Asagi: damn i wanna mod a map HAHAHA
2014-09-18 01:13 P A N: I love to love ru
2014-09-18 01:13 Asagi: i dont feel playing eroge today
2014-09-18 01:14 Asagi: dunno why
2014-09-18 01:14 Asagi: welp
2014-09-18 01:15 P A N: I see
2014-09-18 01:15 P A N: mod my map
2014-09-18 01:15 Asagi: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/419451 Miuna Shiodome (cv. Mikako Komatsu) & Sayu Hisanuma (cv. Kaori Ishihara) - Dazzling [Insane]]
2014-09-18 01:15 Asagi: this?
2014-09-18 01:16 Asagi: just minor suggestion tho, so better if IRC, but dunno haha
2014-09-18 01:16 Asagi: damn the title is too long hahaha
2014-09-18 01:17 P A N: LOL
2014-09-18 01:17 P A N: can't be help
2014-09-18 01:17 Asagi: and....
2014-09-18 01:17 Asagi: youre still working on the SB?
2014-09-18 01:17 Asagi: wtf
2014-09-18 01:18 P A N: no
2014-09-18 01:18 P A N: finished
2014-09-18 01:18 P A N: but SB stuff will come back soon
2014-09-18 01:19 Asagi: but you always check it hahaha
2014-09-18 01:20 Asagi: improving it or something?
2014-09-18 01:20 P A N: no
2014-09-18 01:20 P A N: enjoy it indeed
2014-09-18 01:20 Asagi: hahaha
2014-09-18 01:20 Asagi: okay time to start the IRC :v
2014-09-18 01:21 Asagi: it will not take so long, i guess
2014-09-18 01:22 P A N: I want to see your face
2014-09-18 01:22 P A N: when mod my map
2014-09-18 01:22 P A N: I mean share cam
2014-09-18 01:22 P A N: vid*
2014-09-18 01:22 Asagi: pls
2014-09-18 01:22 Asagi: like uhhhmmm
2014-09-18 01:22 P A N: hmm
2014-09-18 01:22 Asagi: modding via voice chat or something
2014-09-18 01:22 Asagi: but thats farking wtf
2014-09-18 01:22 P A N: no voice
2014-09-18 01:23 Asagi: pls
2014-09-18 01:23 Asagi: but you dont have cam
2014-09-18 01:23 P A N: lol yea
2014-09-18 01:23 Asagi: so yeah, im gonna start it really lol
2014-09-18 01:23 Asagi: just minor cleaning on the patterns
2014-09-18 01:23 P A N: oh ok
2014-09-18 01:24 P A N: ahaha
2014-09-18 01:24 P A N: you
2014-09-18 01:24 Asagi: 00:06:474 (2,3,4,5) - 
2014-09-18 01:24 Asagi: not sure if 2 and 4 are pairs
2014-09-18 01:24 Asagi: same as 3 and 5
2014-09-18 01:24 Asagi: or you can make them equal spacing, it looks better, i guess http://puu.sh/bCTi3.jpg
2014-09-18 01:26 Asagi: 00:18:894 (4) - why this kind of curve is kinda, disturbing me HAHAHA
2014-09-18 01:27 P A N: oh come on XD
2014-09-18 01:27 P A N: it's call blanket
2014-09-18 01:27 Asagi: hahaha
2014-09-18 01:27 Asagi:  i mean
2014-09-18 01:27 Asagi: the curve is too much
2014-09-18 01:27 Asagi: i mean, even 1 grid, is kinda making the curve a bit errr dunno
2014-09-18 01:27 Asagi: weird for me hahaha
2014-09-18 01:27 Asagi: or its just your style, im not used to it :v
2014-09-18 01:28 Asagi: 00:23:480 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - make this a perfect hexagon at least
2014-09-18 01:29 Asagi: 00:26:920 - i think starting the stream here fits better
2014-09-18 01:30 P A N: hey it's not hexagon
2014-09-18 01:30 Asagi: as you can hear on what kind of instrument is that
2014-09-18 01:30 Asagi: wat wat
2014-09-18 01:32 Asagi: it has 6 sides lol
2014-09-18 01:33 P A N: hm but it is just random
2014-09-18 01:33 P A N: lol
2014-09-18 01:34 Asagi: just make it like this http://puu.sh/bCTYV.jpg 
2014-09-18 01:34 Asagi: come on, it looks cleaner now HAHAHA
2014-09-18 01:37 Asagi: back to osu chat
2014-09-18 01:37 Asagi: lol
2014-09-18 01:37 P A N: hi
2014-09-18 01:37 Asagi: you said it was random :v but atleast make it look good like this http://puu.sh/bCUff.jpg
2014-09-18 01:38 P A N: wow
2014-09-18 01:38 P A N: how can you did that
2014-09-18 01:38 Asagi: dafaq? is it really hard to fix? LOL
2014-09-18 01:38 Asagi: idk if sarcasm or not XD
2014-09-18 01:39 P A N: kind of
2014-09-18 01:39 P A N: no no
2014-09-18 01:39 P A N: I tried it
2014-09-18 01:39 P A N: but it's hard
2014-09-18 01:39 P A N: so I lazy
2014-09-18 01:39 Asagi: wat
2014-09-18 01:39 Asagi: i just moved it a little bit LOL
2014-09-18 01:40 P A N: hmm let's see
2014-09-18 01:40 P A N: I'm symmetry master
2014-09-18 01:40 P A N: let me try
2014-09-18 01:40 Asagi: 00:51:952 (1) - on this part, the blue-green and purple NC part
2014-09-18 01:40 Asagi: i think you should slow that part down
2014-09-18 01:40 Asagi: i mean, compare to the previous/next part of the song
2014-09-18 01:40 Asagi: its kinda different, its much softer
2014-09-18 01:41 P A N: that would be a huge change
2014-09-18 01:41 Asagi: totally, but...
2014-09-18 01:41 Asagi: just make it exact on the last part that you will not change
2014-09-18 01:44 Asagi: and same as this 01:42:398 (1) - 
2014-09-18 01:44 Asagi: but the changes you will do makes the playing feels better
2014-09-18 01:45 Asagi: because its totally fit the song
2014-09-18 01:45 P A N: hmm
2014-09-18 01:45 Asagi: btw, nice NC coordination haha
2014-09-18 01:45 Asagi: i just noticed
2014-09-18 01:47 P A N: you make me think another idea
2014-09-18 01:47 P A N: about NC
2014-09-18 01:47 Asagi: pls no
2014-09-18 01:48 Asagi: its good, pls no change the colors ;w;
2014-09-18 01:48 P A N: omg
2014-09-18 01:48 Asagi: 01:11:442 (7,1) - the slider looks so... how should i call it
2014-09-18 01:48 Asagi: a bit boring i guess
2014-09-18 01:49 P A N: please
2014-09-18 01:49 P A N: straight slider fit with 01:11:442 -
2014-09-18 01:49 Asagi: try to curve (7) i guess, so it looks more appealing http://puu.sh/bCV7l.jpg
2014-09-18 01:49 P A N: 's sound
2014-09-18 01:49 Asagi: pls
2014-09-18 01:50 P A N: :(
2014-09-18 01:50 Asagi: well dont change if you dont want ;w;
2014-09-18 01:51 P A N: fucking hexagon
2014-09-18 01:51 Asagi: WAT
2014-09-18 01:51 Asagi: you still cant fix it? wtf
2014-09-18 01:51 P A N: fixing
2014-09-18 01:51 P A N: I knew the problem now
2014-09-18 01:51 Asagi: lol
2014-09-18 01:51 Asagi: and 01:32:652 (3,4,5,1) - make this a perfect triangle at least
2014-09-18 01:52 P A N: 00:24:627 (2) - 's head is not stack with blabla's tail
2014-09-18 01:52 P A N: so
2014-09-18 01:52 P A N: It can be perfect hexagon just one timeline
2014-09-18 01:52 P A N: I should I say
2014-09-18 01:52 P A N: nvm
2014-09-18 01:52 P A N: what should I say*
2014-09-18 01:52 Asagi: wtf hahaha
2014-09-18 01:53 P A N: one time
2014-09-18 01:53 P A N: I mean
2014-09-18 01:53 P A N: fux
2014-09-18 01:53 Asagi: you mean, the head of 00:24:627 (2) -  is not stacked with the tail of this ? 00:23:098 (3) - 
2014-09-18 01:53 P A N: sure
2014-09-18 01:53 P A N: exactly
2014-09-18 01:53 P A N: that's why
2014-09-18 01:53 Asagi: wat
2014-09-18 01:53 P A N: it can't be double perfect hexagon
2014-09-18 01:53 Asagi: they are not so noticable anyway
2014-09-18 01:54 Asagi: they are quite far lol
2014-09-18 01:54 P A N: well yea
2014-09-18 01:54 P A N: btw that slow part
2014-09-18 01:54 P A N: I don't want to use the SV that lower than 0.75
2014-09-18 01:54 P A N: so :X
2014-09-18 01:54 Asagi: maybe use at least .65 or something
2014-09-18 01:55 Asagi: oh wait
2014-09-18 01:55 P A N: that part is already 0.75
2014-09-18 01:55 Asagi: maybe just reduce the spacing
2014-09-18 01:56 Asagi: like you did here 02:32:843 (1) - 
2014-09-18 01:59 Asagi: maybe just that it
2014-09-18 01:59 P A N: but that part
2014-09-18 01:59 P A N: is more calm than 00:51:952 -
2014-09-18 01:59 Asagi: the last part is really good lol
2014-09-18 01:59 P A N: turn off all = this map shit
2014-09-18 01:59 Asagi: im not saying totally like that
2014-09-18 01:59 Asagi: i mean. just reduce the spacing a bit
2014-09-18 02:00 P A N: which
2014-09-18 02:00 Asagi: the 1st part 
2014-09-18 02:00 Asagi: 00:51:952 (1) - 
2014-09-18 02:01 P A N: let's see
2014-09-18 02:01 P A N: hmmm
2014-09-18 02:07 Asagi: damn, if i have better earphones, i can mod some rhythms too
2014-09-18 02:07 Asagi: fuck me
2014-09-18 02:09 P A N: XD
2014-09-18 02:10 Asagi: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/395611 Mizukara wo Enshutsu Suru Otome no Kai - Girlish Lover(Asterisk Remix.) [Extra]]
2014-09-18 02:10 Asagi: this map is OP
2014-09-18 02:10 Asagi: really fuckin good
2014-09-18 02:11 P A N: ok I give up
2014-09-18 02:11 Asagi: wat
2014-09-18 02:12 P A N: hard to fix
2014-09-18 02:12 P A N: that slow part
2014-09-18 02:13 Asagi: dont mind too much i guess
2014-09-18 02:14 P A N: I tried
2014-09-18 02:14 P A N: but it's hard XD
2014-09-18 02:14 Asagi: rip in peace in peace

Good Luck ~~hentai~~ baka :3

Gero

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Joined March 2012

Gero 2014-09-23T02:42:29+00:00

~~I'll will mod this tomorrow, be patient ~~~

EDIT: OMFG I totally forgot this... thanks for reminding me @PAN.

Last edited by Gero 2014-10-11T04:33:37+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

10nya

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Joined February 2011

10nya 2014-09-24T12:44:07+00:00

Asagi wrote:

ok

\^^/

Gero

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Joined March 2012

Gero 2014-10-22T06:14:57+00:00

Hi PAN con queso o/

General

Inside of the "SB" folder there is a ".OSB" that is kinda unnecessary so would be ideal if you remove it from there..
Disable the "letterbox during breaks" for every difficulty since it looks bad with the storyboard.
Your preview time is unsnapped so wouldn't hurt if you fix it.

Storyboard

02:32:843 - I'm not sure about who has been mapped this part to both difficulties that are collabs, so it would be much better if you added the name to this part.
00:03:035 - hmmm... what do you think to Increase the scale effect here to avoid empty spaces like this one, I know isn't noticeable in game but it's just for precaution. (this applies for all "white" effects)
00:51:952 - the change from one image to another is kinda noticeable so it's recommendable if you try to redoing both effects to avoid such problems. (for both girls of course)
01:56:156 - What about to do the same thing here as you did previously 01:05:710 - about white effect.
02:46:601 - Same as above.
02:51:187 - oh please don't, these effects are weird for me and kinda annoying to watch to be honest so what about the reduction of the pulses? because here it isn't a change of the instrumental or vocal for doing an effect like this.

Normal Collab

Your settings seems more like an easy difficulty so maybe that can cause problems for the spread so would be better if you change it to something like this:

AR + 2
HP + 2
OD + 2

00:12:206 (1) - I'm pretty sure that you forgot to add a whistle on the head of the slider, you should try it because sounds nice with the background.
00:13:735 (2) - Same as above.
00:16:601 (3,1,3) - What do you think to use finish instead whistle? it doesn't fits well imo. (the same thing for the copy paste)
01:16:219 (3,1) - This is just a personal suggestion but I think that would be better if you avoid such overlaps like these sliders since it can be kinda confusing to play.
01:29:786 (4,1) - Nazi* try to do a better blanket here.
01:33:608 - Missing clap here?
01:36:665 - Clap instead whistle would be nice.
01:57:493 (3,1,1) - Finish on the head?
02:38:958 (1,1) - ^
03:24:818 (2,3) - ^ and sampleset drum in this 03:25:964 (4) - circle?
02:37:047 (2) - This circle in my opinion is pretty close to the HP bar so I recommend moving this a couple of grids down to avoid problems in the future.
03:10:869 (1) - I know you're following the voice but would be nice if you change the rhythm for something like this, this could be fit better with the voice and the instrumental to be honest, you should try it.

Hard Collab

OD - 1

00:12:015 - considers the possibility to add a note here with finish/whistle since I think it's kinda necessary to click something here.
00:47:366 - ^
00:11:442 (3,2) - Nazi* stack both objects correctly.
00:54:245 (3,1) - ^
00:33:034 (2,3) - this jump flows kinda weird, maybe it's just me but I think that would be much better if you move it to the correct place.
00:38:958 (3,1) - Somehow looks messy and a bit unreadable for a hard difficulty so would be nice if you move this slider 00:39:722 (1) - to X: 100 Y: 152 it's just a example so you can do something different here.

Insane

00:39:340 (1,1) - Just a small thing but would be better if you finish this slider in the previous tick since it doesn't follow nothing and feels weird when I play it or something like this 01:29:786 (5) - it works well.
00:22:525 (6) - Missing whistle?
01:23:576 - To maintain consistency with 00:20:805 (6,7,8,9) - I recommend you to add an circle here 01:23:576 (3) - also use the same hitsounds in this part.
02:38:958 - Finish?

call me back when you're done to apply the changes ~

Xinely

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Joined April 2012

Xinely 2014-10-22T06:32:34+00:00

@ PAN : can you add hitsounds that Gero mention in my part? they need fixed in much parts, i'm lazy to give the code one by one lol

anyway thanks 4 mod gero /3/

Asagi

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Asagi 2014-10-22T10:45:28+00:00

~~finally~~

P A N

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Topic Starter

P A N 2014-10-22T17:35:34+00:00

my part including insane are fixed except

Insane: 01:23:576 - To maintain consistency with 00:20:805 (6,7,8,9) - I recommend you to add an circle here 01:23:576 (3) - also use the same hitsounds in this part. I try to listen it carefully and I figured it out that they are different rhythm (if my ear still great) so I want to keep it like that.

I will contact with my Gder and collab first since I want to know that are they really want to fix (SB too, I'm not good at this so I need helper to fix your mod)
thanks gero :3

Hinsvar

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Hinsvar 2014-10-24T07:38:14+00:00

Gero wrote:
Normal Collab

02:37:047 (2) - This circle in my opinion is pretty close to the HP bar so I recommend moving this a couple of grids down to avoid problems in the future. Done.
03:10:869 (1) - I know you're following the voice but would be nice if you change the rhythm for something like this, this could be fit better with the voice and the instrumental to be honest, you should try it. Uh, I thought my rhythm already looks like that? o.o

Thanks!

moe

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P A N

2,349 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

P A N 2014-10-25T05:20:12+00:00

updated hinsvar part, fix SB and lyrics file plus fixed mochi part.

KSHR

Global Moderator

1,668 posts

Joined July 2010

KSHR 2014-10-27T09:15:27+00:00

I'd like to fix hitsounds in my part. Fix the following instead of me, PAN!

02:08:576 - Add an extra green line with SC:2 at 70%.
02:09:722 - Remove a clap from this slider head.
02:10:487 - Reduce to 70%.
02:16:888 - ^

Thanks!

Also check them before pushing this map forward, Gero!

Fycho

Global Moderator

2,479 posts

Joined August 2012

Fycho 2014-10-28T03:18:21+00:00

shoot a star for Miuna ♥, hold on

P A N

2,349 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

P A N 2014-10-28T09:19:03+00:00

KSHR wrote:
I'd like to fix hitsounds in my part. Fix the following instead of me, PAN!

02:08:576 - Add an extra green line with SC:2 at 70%.
02:09:722 - Remove a clap from this slider head.
02:10:487 - Reduce to 70%.
02:16:888 - ^

Thanks!

Also check them before pushing this map forward, Gero!

ok!

Fycho wrote:
shoot a star for Miuna ♥, hold on

not for me? ;A; thank you ><

Gero

4,438 posts

Joined March 2012

Gero 2014-10-30T00:13:20+00:00

Recheck ~

General

Enable the epilepsy option because the map contains flashes/pulses and things like that.
You have an inconsistency in the preview time/kiai time so be carefully about it.
I guess you should to add "Kanari" to tags because him/her did the storyboard.
you have some unused image files in your folder so would be nice if you consider removing "1-fade.png" and "2-fade.png" because them are unnecessary.

Storyboard

Clean.

Normal Collab

Gero wrote:
Your settings seems more like an easy difficulty so maybe that can cause problems for the spread so would be better if you change it to something like this:

AR + 2
HP + 2
OD + 2

01:05:710 - You have 2 lines at the same time so consider removing one of these two to prevent problems in the future.
01:05:810 - Snap this one to 01:05:805 - wouldn't hurt.
01:38:194 - Dunno if this intentional but you've missed adding an clap here.

Hard Collab

Gero wrote:
OD - 1

01:02:652 (1,1,1,1) - I can't see a valid reason to do a spam of NC here, maybe you should try the same thing that you did at Insane.
02:15:646 (4) - Missing clap.
02:35:901 - What about to use an drum-whistle here?
03:17:175 (1) - Finish at the head of the slider? sounds too odd without it to be honest.

Insane

Clean.

that's all, call me back when you're done ~

P A N

2,349 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

P A N 2014-10-30T04:22:09+00:00

since mochi allow me to fix his part and the normal just minor stuff so I think it's fine to fix.
all fixed! thank you! >o<

Gero

4,438 posts

Joined March 2012

Gero 2014-10-30T07:52:59+00:00

Bubbled ~

P A N

2,349 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

P A N 2014-10-30T07:57:38+00:00

thank you!

Lanturn

osu! Alumni

3,912 posts

Joined March 2012

Lanturn 2014-11-05T00:00:54+00:00

ATTEMPT 3! 18 days late \o/

Gonna have to pop this due to ~~use of copyrighted Pocky material~~ way to many general changes that need to be fixed (new rule). I won't be able to rank this, only rebubble. Kiai changes / metadata field / Timing.

[General]

Artist: 小松未可子&石原夏織
Romanised: Komatsu Mikako & Ishihara Kaori

Tags: Everything that was removed from the artist field like Miuna and it's japanese kanji counterpart.
P_A_N - so your name is easily found. Consider PAN as well.
Nagiasu A lull in the Sea <-- english title

Kiai:
Insane:
02:05:232 - remove this kiai burst as it isn't in your collabs.

Normal:
01:56:156 - Kiai starts and ends at the same time Unrankable http://puu.sh/cDtXW.png

Hard:
01:17:939 - Burst not on the other diffs. Consider removing this.

You should sync all of the Kiai up since you were involved in all of the diffs. I'll have to recheck this after (check aibat after yourself if you want to make sure I didn't miss anything)

Timing:
The ending has incorrect bpm adjustments for the final spinner, and as such, the final spinner doesn't actually hit the final piano key. This is what I came up with but I highly suggest getting a double check as I'm not that great at timing. Don't forget to resnap the spinner and green lines afterwards.

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SB:
There is a spare .osb file in your SB folder? This needs to be deleted.
I feel like the collab name at 02:32:843 - needs it's opacity to be higher. It's almost impossible to see Hinsvar or Momochikun's name. (unless the fade out thing wasn't intentional, in that case it needs to be fixed) I highly suggest showing the names at all times and being easily visible.

[Normal Collab]
Xinely

00:17:557 (4) - Move this a few nudges down for DS / blankets
00:39:722 - to 00:51:952 - This normal whistles really don't fit in my opinion. They're definitely too loud first of all and are extremely surprising. Consider remaking the hitsounds closer to P A N's for this section on the other diffs or later on at 01:30:168 - | If you really want to keep the whistles, I highly suggest lowering the volume a bit at the very least.
01:25:391 (3) - Missing whistle?

KSHR

01:55:582 (2) - I highly suggest turning this into a circle placed at 01:55:773 - This lead-in-like 1/2 note is a bit awkward to play. The dominant note feels better at 01:55:773 - and it gives off the same effect the 1/2 slider does.

Hinsvar

02:32:843 (1) - You should really move this out of the corner. You could easily blanket it around the 02:33:608 (2) - or something and have it closer to the center. This makes it more noticable after the break.
03:26:347 (1) - Remove this whistle from the end of this spinner or swap it to a S (not SC:1) whistle. The kick sound is really out of place.

[Hard Collab]

P A N

01:46:219 (3) - This would look a lot nicer blanketed. I'm assuming this was suggested before, but even I think it would be better off with a blanket.
03:11:633 (3,4) - This would be better of swapped. Going Slider / Circle would fit better to match the background sounds. Also note that 03:11:824 - doesn't have much for notice besides that kick for hitsounds. If that's the case and you want to follow it, then I'd remove the whistle as it fits better following the guitar instead of the drum kick.
03:26:347 (1) - Remove this whistle from the end of this spinner or swap it to a S (not SC:1) whistle. The kick sound is really out of place.

Momochikun

01:08:767 (1) - Shouldn't this be a finish?
01:25:582 (1,2,3,4) - This flow/rhythm is extremely awkward to play. There definitely needs to be some sort of 2/1 space here. The (2) flow breaks, and feels extremely hidden. I can never seem to read it correctly, even when I'm expecting it. A suggestion is to delete (3) and move the (2) to around where 01:24:054 (1) - 's head is or something similar. This will make the judgement of the spacing here easier to read. or consider moving (4) (now (3)) around so the (2,4) can stack on each other.
02:58:257 (3,4) - Missing claps? This really feels odd without them.
03:03:799 (2,3) - Hitsound suggestion: try a clap on the tail of (2) (remove normal sampleset) and head of (3), and leave the whistle on the tail of (3)

A few patterns on this caught me off guard on the first couple plays, but I was able to adjust to them fine coming back for my third attempt at modding this lol.

[Insane]
Damn. As much as I want to give suggestsions, I don't really have any. Very nice difficulty.

Anyways. Give me a shout whenever for a rebubble. Sorry for the huge delay (and pretty lame mod if you ask me despite all that waiting)

P A N

2,349 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

P A N 2014-11-05T09:23:00+00:00

Lanturn wrote:
ATTEMPT 3! 18 days late \o/

Gonna have to pop this due to ~~use of copyrighted Pocky material~~ way to many general changes that need to be fixed (new rule). I won't be able to rank this, only rebubble. Kiai changes / metadata field / Timing.

[General]

Artist: 小松未可子&石原夏織 ok
Romanised: Komatsu Mikako & Ishihara Kaori ok

Tags: Everything that was removed from the artist field like Miuna and it's japanese kanji counterpart.
P_A_N - so your name is easily found. Consider PAN as well. ok
Nagiasu A lull in the Sea <-- english title add

Kiai:
Insane:
02:05:232 - remove this kiai burst as it isn't in your collabs. removed

Normal:
01:56:156 - Kiai starts and ends at the same time Unrankable http://puu.sh/cDtXW.png removed

Hard:
01:17:939 - Burst not on the other diffs. Consider removing this. removed

You should sync all of the Kiai up since you were involved in all of the diffs. I'll have to recheck this after (check aibat after yourself if you want to make sure I didn't miss anything)

Timing:
The ending has incorrect bpm adjustments for the final spinner, and as such, the final spinner doesn't actually hit the final piano key. This is what I came up with but I highly suggest getting a double check as I'm not that great at timing. Don't forget to resnap the spinner and green lines afterwards. added
206347,480,4,2,2,80,1,0
206587,705.882352941176,4,2,2,80,1,0
206939,882.352941176471,4,2,2,80,1,0
207380,789.473684210526,4,2,2,80,1,0
207774,857.142857142857,4,2,2,80,1,0
208202,967.741935483871,4,2,2,80,1,0
SB:
There is a spare .osb file in your SB folder? This needs to be deleted.
I feel like the collab name at 02:32:843 - needs it's opacity to be higher. It's almost impossible to see Hinsvar or Momochikun's name. (unless the fade out thing wasn't intentional, in that case it needs to be fixed) I highly suggest showing the names at all times and being easily visible. soon

[Hard Collab]

P A N
01:46:219 (3) - This would look a lot nicer blanketed. I'm assuming this was suggested before, but even I think it would be better off with a blanket. ok
03:11:633 (3,4) - This would be better of swapped. Going Slider / Circle would fit better to match the background sounds. Also note that 03:11:824 - doesn't have much for notice besides that kick for hitsounds. If that's the case and you want to follow it, then I'd remove the whistle as it fits better following the guitar instead of the drum kick. I don't know what the thing I follow called, maybe whistle? i follow the soft sound there.
03:26:347 (1) - Remove this whistle from the end of this spinner or swap it to a S (not SC:1) whistle. The kick sound is really out of place. ok
Anyways. Give me a shout whenever for a rebubble. Sorry for the huge delay (and pretty lame mod if you ask me despite all that waiting)

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2014-11-05T10:38:34+00:00

fixed all thanks lanturn~

~

osu file format v13

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Creator:P A N
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Fycho

Global Moderator

2,479 posts

Joined August 2012

Fycho 2014-11-05T13:21:04+00:00

Well I am here to give some suggestions about insane diff (mainly hitsounds since the current hitsounds are not well set).
[Insane]

00:03:035 -80% volume is really noisy for the beginning, try 50% instead
00:15:264 -60% at here
Your volume setting is very unsuitable in the diff, try the setting below(just a reference, you can also set it by yourself):
SPOILER
1. 00:27:493 -50% ,
2. 00:39:340 -60%,
3. 00:39:722 -60%,
4. 01:04:181 -50%,
5. 01:17:939 60%,
6. 01:30:168 -60%,
7. 01:54:627 -50%,
8. 02:08:385 -70%,
9. 02:32:843 -60%,
10. 02:45:455 -40%,
11. 02:46:601 – 60%,
12. 02:52:716 -60%,
13. 02:58:449 -60%,
14. 03:14:117 -60%
00:05:327 (4) -00:06:856 (4) –remove whistles for consistency with 00:08:385 (4) –and 00:03:799 -?
00:17:557 (4) –remove whistle as it’s not a kick-drum in music, constant kick-drum hitsounds feel noisy imo.
00:20:901 (7) –Normal sampleset will sound better, and don’t forget reduce the volume of 00:20:805 (6,7,8) –
00:26:920 -30% volume is too low, I recommend you increase it to 40% and remove whistle at blue ticks00:27:015 (3,5,7) –
00:42:206 (5) –move to (95,289)? Flow will be better imo.
00:46:028 (2,3) –they are too curve somehow comparing with these 00:44:117 (1,6) –curved sliders, which leads to a bad looking/feeling when playing
00:58:066 (1) –how about to curving in the other direction? http://puu.sh/cyCUP/1ed4faa434.jpg, downbeat is at00:58:066 -, so changing anti-clock flow into clock flow plays much better.
01:05:901 (2,3) –how about adding clap on these two? It’s snare drums in music
01:10:296 (1) –hitsounds wrongly added. it should be whistle not clap, it’s a kick-drum.
01:17:939 –reduce volume to 60% of it I guess
01:56:347 (2,3) –clap on them
01:27:111 (1,3) –better to avoid the overlapping here
02:03:608 (5) –missing NC I guess.
02:05:232 –the kiai fountain is really not need here, referring to01:14:882 –
02:08:194 (9,10) –add clap on the two circle, they are snare drums, same as 02:08:003 -, btw don’t forget to reduce volume for 02:08:003 (7,8,9,10) –(50~60%)
02:19:085 (1)- add whistle on head then remove clap
02:19:468 (2) –add clap on head then remove whistle, if you listen music carelly you’ll find which kind of drum it is.
02:20:041 (4,5) –remove whistles and add claps.
02:20:423 (6,7) –remove the hitsound, but you can add finish at 02:20:614 (7) –then reduce volume to about 30%
02:51:187 (1) –whistle, not clap
03:08:958 (4) –remove clap, clap is overused here

and sorry as I am busy these days can't check the whole map, you can call lauturn for rebubble, I may do a full check later if I am free, good luck.

P A N

2,349 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

P A N 2014-11-05T16:47:30+00:00

alright!

@Lanturn : I'm not sure did you mean

because I haven't found .osb file in my SB folder. if yes, I will delete it.
completely fixed/updated hard, waiting for kshr and hinsvar for normal diff
I feel like the collab name at 02:32:843 - needs it's opacity to be higher. It's almost impossible to see Hinsvar or Momochikun's name. (unless the fade out thing wasn't intentional, in that case it needs to be fixed) I highly suggest showing the names at all times and being easily visible. ehh I don't see any problem here.

@Fycho : all fixed except some:

00:05:327 (4) -00:06:856 (4) –remove whistles for consistency with 00:08:385 (4) –and 00:03:799 -? I add whistle on two notes you mentioned instead.
00:58:066 (1) –how about to curving in the other direction? http://puu.sh/cyCUP/1ed4faa434.jpg, downbeat is at00:58:066 -, so changing anti-clock flow into clock flow plays much better. tried completely redo on that part.
01:10:296 (1) –hitsounds wrongly added. it should be whistle not clap, it’s a kick-drum. hmm I really can't tell you why I added clap there but I think it's really fit because I tried add whistle instead but it gave me less feeling than clap.

thanks guys! :3

KSHR

Global Moderator

1,668 posts

Joined July 2010

KSHR 2014-11-06T00:45:26+00:00

Lanturn wrote:
[Normal Collab]
KSHR
01:55:582 (2) - I highly suggest turning this into a circle placed at 01:55:773 - This lead-in-like 1/2 note is a bit awkward to play. The dominant note feels better at 01:55:773 - and it gives off the same effect the 1/2 slider does.
Indeed, fixed as you suggested!

Additionally, rearranged 01:50:041 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - .
Thanks, Lanturn!

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Lanturn

osu! Alumni

3,912 posts

Joined March 2012

Lanturn 2014-11-06T20:00:22+00:00

A few more general changes like kiai problems and an extra.osb

Good luck o/

Re-Bubbled

Tari

osu! Alumni

1,671 posts

Joined July 2012

Tari 2014-11-19T01:40:59+00:00

Yo yo yo

[Normal]

00:03:035 - Maybe its just me, but the hitsounds here sound really loud, they are way too stronger than the music here, which is just instrumental. I think you can come lower the volume down to at least 60%
00:17:557 (4) - Whistle at the start sounds nice to me.
01:25:391 (3) - You missed a clap at the end.
02:14:499 (1) - I feel the slider here looks rather strange, I know you are aiming for a curve here, but I think if you improve the curve this will look much much better.
02:40:487 (2) - Fix the stacking, so it stacks with 02:38:576 (4) - , and well makes the map look cleaner overall here, just my personal thought on how this should be.

[Hard]

00:26:920 (5) - I really feel its unnecessary for ending the slider here, there is still the instruments going a better transition would be easier shown by if you reversed this all way to blue tick.
00:58:066 (1) - The finish with the strong beat is so weird with stacking, I feel with such a strong beat, there should be some movement with the cursor. perhaps unstack and move it down from previous circle?
01:23:098 (2) - I felt this was a jump, could you place them farther to make them more readable?
01:26:729 (4) - Move closer? or make them overlap more, so I don't think this begins 1 tick later.
01:54:627 (1,2,3,4,5) - Better to curve it to the right more and center, even if it looks symmetrical. It will look nicer centered and placed in the right direction.
02:35:710 (1) - So weird to click here, would just remove the note here and add a note at the white tick at the end of this slider or downbeat. feels more natural.

[Insane]

00:43:735 (4) - I would like this to blanket slightly better, just saying. cause your mapping really focuses on blankets and such, just want to clean this part up.
01:06:283 (5,6) - For here, increasing SV changes, work way better, for 5 , increase to 1.20 and 6 increase to 1.40 , I feel you get a better effect here from the sliders if done so.
01:56:729 (5,6) - ^
01:07:429 (2) - Fix the stacking, so it better fits 01:05:710 (1) -
01:33:417 (2) - I would move this down more to make this slightly overlap, you can obviously make it more readable, if you do so.
02:52:716 (1) - Same ^
03:16:410 (4) - Why didn't you blanket this one? seems unusual to your style. same for 03:16:792 (5) -
02:20:614 (7) - I would add a new combo here, to fit better with the downbeat.

Rest looks fine.

The map is quite nice.

P A N

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P A N 2014-11-19T12:28:13+00:00

Tari wrote:
Yo yo yo

[Normal]

00:03:035 - Maybe its just me, but the hitsounds here sound really loud, they are way too stronger than the music here, which is just instrumental. I think you can come lower the volume down to at least 60%
00:17:557 (4) - Whistle at the start sounds nice to me.
01:25:391 (3) - You missed a clap at the end.
02:14:499 (1) - I feel the slider here looks rather strange, I know you are aiming for a curve here, but I think if you improve the curve this will look much much better.
02:40:487 (2) - Fix the stacking, so it stacks with 02:38:576 (4) - , and well makes the map look cleaner overall here, just my personal thought on how this should be.
[Hard]

01:54:627 (1,2,3,4,5) - Better to curve it to the right more and center, even if it looks symmetrical. It will look nicer centered and placed in the right direction. mhmm I kind of not understand here but I think current pattern doesn't hurt much as you said, already symmetry.
[Insane]

01:06:283 (5,6) - For here, increasing SV changes, work way better, for 5 , increase to 1.20 and 6 increase to 1.40 , I feel you get a better effect here from the sliders if done so. I think if hear it carefully, the vocal is not stronger imo but if on 01:07:047 (1) , yes. but it is calm song so I think keep SV consistent is better.
01:56:729 (5,6) - ^ same

Rest looks fine.

The map is quite nice.

hard,insane all fixed except mod I mentioned. normal will fix soon!

Hinsvar

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Hinsvar 2014-11-19T13:01:48+00:00

Tari wrote:
[Normal]

02:40:487 (2) - Fix the stacking, so it stacks with 02:38:576 (4) - , and well makes the map look cleaner overall here, just my personal thought on how this should be.

Try playing this part. You'll notice that (4) already disappears fully even before (2) appears. Thus, it won't make a difference, and I'm sure we're supposed to judge maps based on how the objects are while playing instead of when we look at the editor

Just my two cents!

KSHR

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KSHR 2014-11-20T09:55:46+00:00

02:14:499 (1) - I feel the slider here looks rather strange, I know you are aiming for a curve here, but I think if you improve the curve this will look much much better.
Fixed and sent PAN a forum pm with the fixed code.

Thanks!

P A N

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Topic Starter

P A N 2014-11-20T10:24:13+00:00

alright! thank you for you all guys to fix mod and tari :3 updated and ready to go!

10nya

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10nya 2014-11-20T13:43:31+00:00

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