Komatsu Mikako & Ishihara Kaori - Dazzling · forum

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2014-08-10T10:58:52+00:00

bubbled ~

owait ~~i'm still normal~~ owait i joined the collab TwT

Last edited by Xinely 2014-09-07T07:14:22+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

HabiHolic

5,372 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2014-08-17T05:39:57+00:00

[Normal Collab]

Xinely Part

00:22:716 (3) - It is more than a look. Make a different look
00:48:512 (3) - add whistle. Normal sampleset please
00:51:570 (3) - clap?

KSHR Part

no pick

Hinsvar Part

03:05:901 (2) - clap?

P A N Part

00:03:035 ~ 00:14:882 - The music is less. Hitsound reduce volumes

[Hard Collab]

Momochikun Part

00:28:640 (4) - Ctrl + g Batter
00:33:226 (3) - Bad spacing
00:38:003 (4) - Jump awkward
01:26:156 (4,5) - blanket?

SPOILER

P A N Part

00:03:035 ~ 00:14:882 - The music is less. Hitsound reduce volumes
00:20:423 (1,5) - Swap NC

Meg

1,617 posts

Joined August 2012

Meg 2014-08-28T04:25:08+00:00

Hi from M4M
but my opinion a little ;w;

General

source "凪のあすから"
tags "nagi no asukara"
this song is this anime's character song. so should add.

Insane

01:09:340 (3,4,5,6) - and 01:59:786 (3,4,5,6) - maybe this rhythm is more fit.
02:51:570 (3) - Ctrl+G?

good luck!

P A N

2,346 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

P A N 2014-08-30T17:33:24+00:00

all fixed!

Hollow Wings

1,514 posts

Joined July 2010

Hollow Wings 2014-08-31T07:31:48+00:00

m4m

Insane

seems u do composing randomly and didn't care about blanket works that much, so i think i just skip those nazi issues here ;w;
00:39:149 (1,2) - swap nc setting here, that sv changing really need to be hinted by nc (in mp game i nearly miss that slider's end as well
00:42:398 (6) - try ctrl+g here to give anti-flow to emphasis that beat behind this?
01:35:901 (9) - some kind of same above here
01:04:372 (2,4) - remove the hs of whistle at these two notes here's better imo, set all of those 5 notes with hs may be a bit noisy here. same at 01:54:627 (1,2,3,4,5) -
03:22:334 (1,2,3,4,5) - lol, regular star composing may be really needed here
nice sb with nc setting, take 2 stars

Hard Collab

00:09:913 (3,1) - blanket?
00:30:168 (3,1) - blanket perfect here's better
00:37:238 (2,4) - blanket perfect as well... alright, i should skip these nazi mod in this diff as well ;w;
00:48:894 (6,1) - swap nc setting, or just add nc at 00:48:894 (6) -
02:42:780 (3,1) - nearly touched, maybe spread them
02:58:257 (3,4) - set some hs here, for that electric guitar's beats' really hot, which u r just following here
nice

Normal Collab

00:41:251 (2) - hitnormal sample of normal series sounds of this and other objs behind r a bit too noisy, maybe low down volume of these a bit, for here's a really quiet part of the song
other stuffs r just fine

there're too much good maps should be ranked immediatly, thou i can't do that ;w;

good luck

P A N

2,346 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

P A N 2014-08-31T17:50:26+00:00

mostly fixed, thanks HW :3

koreapenguin

1,747 posts

Joined March 2012

koreapenguin 2014-09-04T14:08:04+00:00

K.Penguin's Mod (m4m)

[Normal]

lost kiai time
00:17:557 (4) - move 144, 236 look so pretty
01:19:276 (3) - 360 312
02:37:429 (3) - del whistle on slider tail, can't hear any sound :/ on tail 02:34:372 (4) - same
02:33:608 (2) - ^ :/
03:28:640 - last green section how about change the S:C2 hear to better than S:C1 whistle

[Hard]

00:03:030 (1) - check ai mod, unsnap is here
00:25:964 (4) - missing new combo if not miss, it new 1/4 beat round was song begining, so you must add NC here. wa hard to explain
00:50:423 (4) - ^same
02:20:232 (4) - bad flow D: so how about this? http://puu.sh/blbhY/a41c06ab9e.jpg or http://puu.sh/blbky/93a7cad6ac.jpg
03:26:442 (1) - add whistle on spinner

Insane

how about use AR8.5?

that's all

mercury2004

615 posts

Joined February 2010

mercury2004 2014-09-13T18:50:44+00:00

irc storyboard mod

SPOILER

17:41 P A N: ช่วยเเบ่งท่อนหน่อยสิ
17:42 P A N: 55
17:42 mercury2004: แป่ว จะคอแลปเลยเรอะ
17:42 mercury2004: เอะ
17:42 mercury2004: แบ่งท่อนเพลงอะนะ
17:42 P A N: งงบางท่อน
17:42 P A N: A・バラバラめくれるノートの。
17:42 P A N: 00:51:761 -
17:43 mercury2004: 00:55:773 (1) - อันนั้น
17:43 mercury2004: จบที่ตรงนี้
17:43 mercury2004: 00:56:347 (2) - เริ่มอันใหม่ตรงนี้
17:44 P A N: 端っこに、綴った気持ちが。ปะ
17:44 mercury2004: 01:00:359 (1) - จบที่อันนี้
17:44 mercury2004: 01:00:933 (2) - เริ่มอันใหม่ที่ตรงนี้
17:45 P A N: อยากทำเปนแบบทีละอันเลยอะ 55
17:45 P A N: バラ
17:45 P A N: ไรงี้
17:45 mercury2004: เอาเล่ย
17:45 mercury2004: แบบลุงอาม
17:45 mercury2004: ลุงอามทำนะ
17:45 P A N: ทีละ 2 ตัวปะ
17:45 P A N: ประโยคเเรก
17:45 mercury2004: ทำตามเพลง
17:46 mercury2004: เอาเป้นว่า
17:46 mercury2004: งง อันไหน
17:46 mercury2004: เดี๋ยวพี่เขียนโรมันจิ แทนให้
17:46 mercury2004: จะง่ายกว่าป่าวหว่า
17:46 P A N: ไม่ 55
17:46 P A N: ผมไม่รู้ยุ่นเลย
17:46 P A N: อ่านไม่ออก
17:46 mercury2004: โรมันจิ
17:46 mercury2004: ก็เป้นตังอังกืดไง
17:46 mercury2004: *ตัวอังกิด
17:46 P A N: ออๆ
17:47 P A N: ได้
17:47 mercury2004: แปะละกันถ้างงอันไหน
17:47 P A N: เอาท่อนมะกี้เลยเเหละ
17:47 P A N: バラバラめくれるノートの
17:47 P A N: 端っこに、綴った気持ちが
17:47 P A N: 風に揺られていた
17:48 mercury2004: bara bara meku reru no o tono
17:49 mercury2004: hashik koni tsuzu tta kimo chiga
17:49 mercury2004: kaze niyu rareteita
17:49 mercury2004: เว้นตามช่องที่มันร้องนะ
17:50 mercury2004: ถ้าเว้นตามยุ่นมันจะเป็น barabara mekureru nooto no
17:50 mercury2004: hashkkoni tsuzutta kimochiga
17:50 mercury2004: kase ni yurareteita
18:03 mercury2004: งั้นระหว่างรอ โหลดรอก่อนละกัน
18:03 mercury2004: ปังมีเวอนี้ป่่ะ
18:03 *mercury2004 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/127892 Halozy - Genryuu Kaiko]
18:04 P A N: ไม่มี
18:04 mercury2004: โหลดอันนั้นก่อน มันมีดิฟเก่าของพี่อยู่
18:04 mercury2004: จะให้เล่นเทียบ ว่าชอบอันไหนมากกว่า
18:05 mercury2004: http://puu.sh/bx5ak.osz อันนี้อันใหม่
18:08 mercury2004: จะพร้อมแล้วเคาะเลยนะ
18:25 P A N: เขาจะเอาเวลาที่ไหนไปดูเนื้อ
18:25 P A N: งง
18:25 mercury2004: เล่นไปดูไป
18:25 mercury2004: พี่ก้ทำนะ
18:25 P A N: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2030080
18:25 mercury2004: เอาหางตาดูโน้ต
18:25 mercury2004: ยังดีกว่า hw เยอะ
18:26 mercury2004: นึกถึง sentimental
18:26 mercury2004: แบบเดียวกันเลย
18:26 mercury2004: ที่แย่กว่าคือ ลายมือแย่มาาก
18:26 P A N: 55
18:27 P A N: 綴
18:27 P A N: อ่านว่าไรอะ
18:30 mercury2004: หืม
18:30 mercury2004: พี่เขียนไปแล้วนิ
18:30 mercury2004: tsuzu
18:31 P A N: ตัวยุ่นไม่ได้เว้นตามที่พี่พิมมาอะ
18:31 P A N: เลยงงๆ
18:31 mercury2004: 00:57:875 (2) -
18:31 mercury2004: นี่ไง
18:40 P A N: 風 = kaze ใช่ปะ
18:40 mercury2004: yes
18:40 P A N: เดี๋ยวท่อนนี่เสด
18:41 P A N: เทสให้
18:41 mercury2004: k
18:41 mercury2004: ฟังของปังมากไป ไปหาเพลงใสๆเล่นมั่งดีกว่า
18:41 mercury2004: ฟังแต่ฮาดรอคมานานละ
18:41 P A N: 555
18:43 *mercury2004 is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/74959 forestpireo - Emotional Blush [Lunatic]]
18:44 mercury2004: มันก็ยัง
18:44 mercury2004: รอคอยู่ดีแฮ
18:48 mercury2004: เล่นอันเวอเก่าก่อนนนะ **
18:49 mercury2004: eartink น่ารำคาญได้ทุกเวลาจริงๆแฮะ
18:58 P A N: 555
18:59 mercury2004: โดนจิ๊บปัดเป่าหายไปละ
19:00 P A N: ลอง redl ได้ปะ
19:00 P A N: เเล้วเช็คเนื้อหน่อย
19:00 P A N: มาดูผมเทสก่อนก็ได้
19:00 mercury2004: ซักครู่
19:00 P A N: ระหว่างรอ
19:00 P A N: อันไหนก่อนนะ
19:00 mercury2004: เค
19:01 mercury2004: อัพใหม่ด่วน
19:01 mercury2004: corrupt beatmap
19:01 mercury2004: โอะั
19:01 mercury2004: ได้ละ
19:01 mercury2004: ไม่ต้องละ
19:02 mercury2004: เวปมันเพี้ยน
19:02 P A N: - -
19:02 mercury2004: เล่นอัน
19:02 mercury2004: ที่เป็นเกสดิฟก่อนนะ
19:03 mercury2004: แล้วค่อยอันใหม่า
19:03 P A N: ชอบเพลงจิง
19:03 mercury2004: แมพนึง ฟังหลายรอบ
19:03 mercury2004: รีแมพอีก
19:04 mercury2004: ฟังแบบ แทบเอียน
19:08 mercury2004: สกิล 3 ปี่ก่อน แมพเป้นแบบนี้ล่ะ
19:08 mercury2004: ลองอันใหม่ดู
19:08 mercury2004: remastered
19:08 P A N: โน็ตชวนหลุดเยอะจิงๆ
19:08 mercury2004: กร้าก
19:08 mercury2004: อันใหม่
19:08 mercury2004: เยอะกว่าเดิม
19:08 mercury2004: แน่นอน
19:12 mercury2004: เหมือนยากขึ้นตามสมัย
19:13 P A N: อืม
19:14 mercury2004: ชอบอันไหนมากกว่า
19:15 P A N: มัน
19:15 P A N: หนุกคนละแบบอะ
19:15 mercury2004: แป่ว
19:15 P A N: เเต่ผมว่าอัน้้รก
19:15 mercury2004: เทียบกันไม่ได้ซะงั้น
19:15 P A N: เเรก
19:15 P A N: มันโดดสบายกว่า
19:15 mercury2004: กร้าก
19:15 mercury2004: อันแรก แทบไม่ได้ใส่โดดเลย
19:15 mercury2004: แต่สมัยนั้นนี่ยากชิโหงแล้ว
19:16 P A N: อืม
19:16 mercury2004: แมพแนวนั้นอะ
19:16 P A N: มันเล่นสบายกว่า
19:16 mercury2004: ว่าไงกับ
19:16 P A N: เเต่ slider เร็วช้า
19:16 mercury2004: สไลเกรียน
19:16 P A N: ถ้าเล่นมันไม่ค่อยรู้สึกอะ
19:16 P A N: มันตามน้ำไปเรื่อยๆ 55
19:16 mercury2004: อะเค
19:16 mercury2004: งั้นดีละ
19:17 mercury2004: ลองทำแบบ ใส่เร็วช้าดู
19:17 mercury2004: ว่าคนเล่นจะว่าไง
19:17 mercury2004: ท่อนจบนี่ 2.0 เลยนะ
19:17 mercury2004: max speed
19:17 mercury2004: อันเร็วอะ
19:17 mercury2004: 03:43:584 (1) -
19:17 P A N: กำ 55
19:17 P A N: อันนั้นโอ
19:17 P A N: ได้ฟิลดี
19:17 mercury2004: 03:54:683 (1) - เล่นแล้ว
19:17 mercury2004: มันขัดมือป่ะ
19:17 P A N: ผมว่าแบบนั้นอะดี
19:18 P A N: เร็วก็เร็วไปเลย
19:18 mercury2004: ตอนแแรก
19:18 mercury2004: จะเอาท่อนจบแบบ hw ละ
19:18 mercury2004: ทำเกรียนหนุกๆ
19:18 mercury2004: ล้มเลิก
19:18 mercury2004: ใส่ 1.3x
19:18 mercury2004: แล้วก็วางเอา
19:18 P A N: 555
19:18 mercury2004: 04:50:521 (1) -
19:18 P A N: ดี*
19:18 P A N: เเต่ผมว่า 2.0 อะดิ
19:18 mercury2004: ไม่งั้นเกรียนเกิน
19:18 P A N: แบบ 03:54:683 (1) -
19:18 mercury2004: ไคแรก
19:18 mercury2004: กับไคสุดท้าย
19:18 P A N: เพราะมันเร็วไปเลยอะ
19:18 mercury2004: สไลพุ่งไม่เท่ากันนะ
19:19 P A N: ได้ฟิลเร็ว
19:19 mercury2004: ไค 1 - 2 ใช้ 1.8
19:19 mercury2004: เพราะ ไค 1-2 ใช้ 1.2x
19:19 mercury2004: ไคสุดท้าน 1.3x
19:19 mercury2004: แต่เวลาเล่นคนไม่ค่อยต่างกันมาก
19:20 P A N: เเล้วบางทีกะไม่ถูก
19:20 P A N: ไหนเร็วช้า
19:20 P A N: เร็วหรือช้าจะมา
19:20 mercury2004: ว่าละ
19:20 mercury2004: มันมีแค่ไค
19:20 mercury2004: ไอเร็วช้าอะ
19:20 mercury2004: พี่ใช้ nc กับ spacing
19:20 mercury2004: โดดใหญ่ๆเวลาจะไว
19:21 mercury2004: 01:40:636 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) -
19:21 mercury2004: เห้นหายทั้งแถบเลยอันนี้
19:21 P A N: โดน anti jump
19:21 mercury2004: ดักเกินไปสินะ
19:21 P A N: มันใกล้กว่าเท่านึงเลย
19:22 mercury2004: 03:40:810 (1) -
19:22 mercury2004: ไอที่ดักจริงๆ
19:22 mercury2004: ไม่มิสเลย
19:22 P A N: 555
19:22 mercury2004: 03:58:151 (5) -
19:22 mercury2004: ดักเทพเลยนะโดดนี้
19:22 mercury2004: ไม่มิสเลย
19:23 mercury2004: โดดติดๆ ดันไม่มิส
19:23 mercury2004: โดดจิ๊บ 2 โน้ตมิส
19:23 mercury2004: จิบไปทำพันธสํญญา มารมิส จากไหนกัน
19:23 P A N: ตั้งหลักได้มั้ง
19:23 P A N: อันนั้นมันหลัง spin ด้วยเเหละ
19:23 mercury2004: 04:04:567 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - นี่ก็ไม่มิส
19:24 mercury2004: ต้องไปหาเหยื่อเทสเพิ่ม
19:25 P A N: เเต่เล่นลื่นดีเเล้ว
19:26 mercury2004: ให้จิ๊บเล่นจะว่าไงดีหว่า
19:26 P A N: เช็คเนื้อผมก่อน
19:26 P A N: 55
19:26 mercury2004: เอ้อ
19:26 mercury2004: ลืมไป
19:26 mercury2004: เค
19:27 mercury2004: โอ้
19:27 mercury2004: ใช้ได้เลย
19:29 mercury2004: ทำให้หมดนะ
19:29 mercury2004: กำลังดีเลว
19:29 mercury2004: *เลย
19:30 P A N: เดี๋ยวสงสัยตรงไหน
19:30 P A N: ถามต่อละกัน
19:30 mercury2004: เค
19:51 P A N: ทำเองชอบเอง
19:51 P A N: 55
19:53 P A N: ร้อง 2 คนสีไรดีฟระ
19:59 *mercury2004 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/154226 paraoka - boot]
19:59 mercury2004: ไรแวะ
19:59 mercury2004: พวกแร้ง 2000
19:59 mercury2004: เล่นไอ้นี่ไม่ผ่าน
19:59 mercury2004: ง่ายตายโหง
20:00 P A N: - -
20:00 P A N: 6000 ก็ผ่านได้เเล้วม้าง
20:01 mercury2004: เพิ่งไปขอเขาเทสมา
20:01 mercury2004: เล่นจบ แล้วมันเล่นไอ้นี่
20:01 mercury2004: กุกบอกว่าเป็น normal extra แมพ
20:01 mercury2004: ไม่ทันจบไค 1
20:01 mercury2004: เฟลติดๆ
20:01 mercury2004: เห็นเลย พวกปั้มแร้ง
20:04 P A N: 555
20:04 mercury2004: ดีที่ไม่ได้บอก
20:04 mercury2004: sentimental = normal extra
20:05 mercury2004: #modhelp
20:05 mercury2004: เหมือนเด็กหัดแมพเถียงกัน
20:08 P A N: หน่า
20:08 P A N: 55
20:19 mercury2004: จะว่าไป
20:19 mercury2004: feedback ในทางแมพปิ้ง
20:19 mercury2004: คืออะไรอะ
20:42 P A N: ไม่ใช่ไอนั้นหรอ
20:42 P A N: แบบ mod ไรไป
20:42 P A N: ขอ feedback ด้วย
20:42 P A N: ไม่เเก้เพราะไร
20:43 mercury2004: ไม่ใช่
20:43 mercury2004: มันบอกว่า
20:43 P A N: จะได้เป็นประสบการณ์
20:43 mercury2004: แมพขาด feedback
20:43 mercury2004: งงเลย
20:43 mercury2004: คืออะไร
20:43 P A N: -*-
20:43 P A N: ボタボタ落とした涙が
20:43 P A N: ตัวไหน
20:43 P A N: ตัวเดียว 2 พยางค์บ้างอะ
20:43 P A N: 揺らした、水面の葉のよう
20:43 mercury2004: ช่วงไหนของเพลง
20:44 P A N: 01:30:168 -
20:44 mercury2004: คนละอันเลยนะ
20:44 P A N: แปป
20:44 P A N: ผิดๆ
20:44 P A N: 01:42:206 -
20:45 mercury2004: 01:42:206 (6) - ボタ
20:45 mercury2004: 01:42:971 (2) - ボタ
20:45 mercury2004: 01:42:971 (2) - 落と
20:46 mercury2004: ผิด
20:46 mercury2004: 01:43:735 (2) - 落と
20:46 mercury2004: 01:44:499 (2) - した
20:47 mercury2004: 01:45:264 (2) - 涙/nami
20:48 mercury2004: 01:46:219 (1) - da が
20:48 mercury2004: 01:46:792 (2) -　　揺ら
20:48 mercury2004: 01:47:557 (2) - した
20:49 mercury2004: 　โอะ
20:49 mercury2004: ประโยคสอง ไม่ตรง
20:49 mercury2004: กอปมาถูกอันป่าว
20:49 P A N: 水面の葉のよう
20:49 P A N: นี่หรอ
20:50 mercury2004: อืม
20:50 P A N: ถูกนา
20:50 mercury2004: suimen no ha na you
20:50 mercury2004: ไม่ก็มันเล่นเสียง
20:51 mercury2004: แปป
20:51 mercury2004: ขอไปดูดิคก่อน
20:51 mercury2004: ว่ามันอ่านแบบอื่นได้ใหม
20:51 P A N: daが หรอ
20:52 mercury2004: 水面の葉のよう
20:52 mercury2004: 水面
20:52 mercury2004: อันนี้ไม่ตรง
20:53 mercury2004: http://puu.sh/bxeBD.png ถุ้ย
20:53 mercury2004: จริงๆด้วย
20:53 mercury2004: อ่านได้สองแบบ
20:53 mercury2004: แต่อันล่างคือที่เขาใช้กัน
20:53 P A N: -0-
20:53 mercury2004: อะเค
20:53 P A N: คือตรงชะ
20:53 mercury2004: 01:48:512 (1) - 水/mina
20:54 mercury2004: 01:49:085 (2) - 面の
20:54 mercury2004: 01:49:850 (2) - 葉の
20:54 mercury2004: 01:50:614 (2) - よう
20:54 mercury2004: อะ
20:55 P A N: เดี๋ยวมห้ kd ด้วย
20:55 mercury2004: savelog ใส่เอาคุโด้ได้เลน
20:55 P A N: หลังทำเสด
20:55 P A N: 55
20:55 mercury2004: นะเนี่ย
20:55 mercury2004: กำลังพิมพอดี
20:55 P A N: คิดเหมือนกัน
20:55 P A N: 555
20:56 mercury2004: มีคำถามอะไรพวกนี้พี่ยังพอตอบได้อยู่ แต่ถ้ายุ่นเหนือเมฆมากๆก็ไม่ไหวนะ
21:19 P A N: http://puu.sh/bxg3l/6462b9d89f.jpg
21:19 P A N: แบบนี้เลยหรอ
21:19 mercury2004: เอ้ย
21:19 mercury2004: อย่าใส่ตังอังกิดสิ
21:19 P A N: 55555
21:19 mercury2004: ใช่ไว้เฉยๆ
21:19 mercury2004: กันงง
21:19 P A N: อย่าตกใจ
21:19 P A N: เเก้ได้
21:19 P A N: da นี่ตัวไหน
21:20 P A N: เอามาให้ก๊อปที
21:20 mercury2004: namida なみだ　涙
21:20 mercury2004: คันจิทั้งตัว
21:20 mercury2004: 3 พยางค
21:20 P A N: เปลี่ยนคันจิ
21:20 P A N: เปน 3 ตัวเเทนปะ
21:20 mercury2004: ตามใจ~
21:20 P A N: 3 ตัวที่พี่ยอกปะ
21:21 P A N: บอก*
21:21 mercury2004: อืม
21:21 P A N: ข้างบนเนี่ย
21:21 mercury2004: เยส
21:21 P A N: ทำไมตามใจอย่างงั้น
21:21 P A N: มันผิดหรอ 55
21:21 mercury2004: ไม่ใช้คันจิ
21:21 mercury2004: ก็อ่านเข้าใจ
21:21 mercury2004: แต่ใช้แล้วสวยกว่า
21:23 P A N: -0-
21:23 mercury2004: พี่เป้นโรคจิตด้วยล่ะ
21:23 mercury2004: ชอบคันจิมาก มีแต่คนเกลียด
21:24 mercury2004: ใส่คันจิก่อนเป้นดี
21:30 P A N: http://puu.sh/bxgpY/a2edd6099a.jpg
21:30 mercury2004: เอ่
21:30 mercury2004: ไม่ค่อยดีแฮะ
21:30 P A N: ทำไมหรอ
21:30 mercury2004: ナミダ
21:30 mercury2004: ใช้อันนี้ดีกว่า
21:30 mercury2004: เพราะ มันอ่านกันแล้ว งง
21:51 P A N: http://puu.sh/bxhaT/fcedc692dd.jpg
21:52 mercury2004: โอเคละ
21:52 P A N: เหนื่อย
21:52 P A N: 55
21:53 mercury2004: เหลืออีก
21:53 mercury2004: กี่นาทีล่ะ
21:53 P A N: - -
21:53 P A N: พึ่งครึ่งนึง
21:53 P A N: 水
21:54 P A N: mina ชะ
21:54 mercury2004: 水面　
21:55 mercury2004: ミナモ
21:57 P A N: ผมใช้ตัวเดียวไปอะ
21:58 mercury2004: ก็ได้
22:00 P A N: 01:51:378 -
22:00 P A N: 01:52:143 -
22:02 mercury2004: ยากแฮะ
22:02 mercury2004: มันแยกได้ทุเรศมาด
22:03 mercury2004: ใส่ 遠く　ทั้งสองอันเลย
22:03 mercury2004: 01:53:098 (1) - まで
22:03 mercury2004: 01:53:671 (2) - 行け
22:07 mercury2004: ดอทก่อน อาจจะตอบช้าหน่อน
22:11 P A N: สรุปไอ
22:11 P A N: 遠く遠く
22:11 P A N: เอาไงอะ
22:11 mercury2004: ใส่ไปเลย
22:11 mercury2004: มันแยกยาก
22:11 P A N: ได้
22:11 mercury2004: มันอ่านว่า tooku tooku
22:11 mercury2004: แต่เพลงมัน
22:11 mercury2004: uto oku tooku
22:12 P A N: 4 ตัวหลังนี่โอเเล้วใช่ปะ
22:12 P A N: ที่พี่บอกมา
22:12 mercury2004: yes
22:24 P A N: 01:52:716 -
22:24 P A N: ถึง 01:52:907 -
22:56 mercury2004: มาละ
23:35 P A N: โหลล
23:35 mercury2004: 3 โหลหน่อยลุง
23:35 mercury2004: 40 บาท
23:35 P A N: กำ
23:35 P A N: ขอตั้งเเต่ตรงนี้อะ 01:52:716 -
23:35 mercury2004: ซักครู่
23:35 P A N: มะกี้ osu re
23:35 mercury2004: ส่อง 7ka อยู่
23:35 P A N: ถึง01:53:863 -
00:06 mercury2004: เอะ
00:06 mercury2004: ให้ไปแล้วหนิ
00:06 mercury2004: ลืมไป หลุดโอสุ
00:06 P A N: 01:52:716 -
00:06 P A N: ตั้งเเต่นี่นะ
00:07 mercury2004: มันเริ่มอันนั้นไม่ได้
00:07 mercury2004: เพราะมันเชื่อมกัย
00:07 mercury2004: 01:52:334 (1) -
00:07 mercury2004: อันนี้อยู่
00:07 P A N: ออๆ
00:14 mercury2004: แปปนะ
00:14 mercury2004: แชทแบบ 4 จอ
00:14 mercury2004: 4 ตาละ
00:15 P A N: 5
00:16 mercury2004: 01:53:098 (1) - まで
00:16 mercury2004: 01:53:671 (2) - 行け
00:16 P A N: เคๆ
00:17 mercury2004: 01:52:334 (1) ตรงนี้มันแบบว่า
00:17 mercury2004: 01:52:334 (1) - to o
00:17 mercury2004: 01:52:907 (2) - ku
00:17 mercury2004: 01:53:098 (1) - made
00:17 mercury2004: 01:53:671 (2,3) - ike
00:17 mercury2004: แล้วตัวยุ่นมันแยกแบบนี้ไม่ได้
00:27 mercury2004: เอาเพลงนี้ ไปร้องกับ 7ka ดู
00:27 mercury2004: ร้อง duet
00:27 mercury2004: ปังจะฟิน
00:27 P A N: อย่าเลย
00:27 mercury2004: ออร่าม่วงกระจาย
00:27 P A N: http://puu.sh/bxqEu/7a04c4d9e7.jpg
00:28 mercury2004: ได้ละมั้ง
00:41 mercury2004: เมะเรื่องมันเกี่ยวกับอะไรอะ อันนี้อะ
00:41 mercury2004: อ่านดูละ เหมือนมันต้องมีอะไรข้างในอีก
00:43 P A N: asukara?
00:43 mercury2004: อืม
00:43 P A N: ก็
00:44 P A N: รู้ยังไงบ้างเเล้วอะ
00:44 mercury2004: รู้แค่ เด็กต่างโรงเรียน / ต่างที่อยู่ด้วย
00:44 mercury2004: พยายามทำความสัมพันท กัน
00:45 P A N: ใช่
00:45 P A N: เเล้วก็ดราม่า
00:45 mercury2004: ป่ะฒ
00:45 mercury2004: ?
00:45 P A N: เเล้วก็รักวงกลม
00:46 mercury2004: อ่านไอที่สรุปมา เหมือนมันไม่มีไร แต่คิดว่ามันต้องมี
00:46 mercury2004: ดราม่าภายในแน่ๆ
00:46 P A N: เยอะ
00:46 P A N: 02:10:487 -
00:47 mercury2004: 02:10:487 (3) - 気づいて3
00:47 mercury2004: 02:10:487 (3) - 気づいて
00:48 P A N: เวน
00:48 P A N: 02:05:136 - อะ
00:49 mercury2004: 02:05:136 (11) - 02:07:812 (6) - だからやめられないよ。
00:49 mercury2004: dakara yamerarenai yo
00:49 P A N: 02:08:003 - 笑って
00:49 P A N: ปะ
00:50 mercury2004: ไม่ใช่จ่ะ
00:50 mercury2004: もっと อันนั้นมัน
00:50 mercury2004: 02:08:003 (7,8) - もっと
00:51 P A N: ก็อันเดียวกัน !
00:51 mercury2004: เหย
00:51 mercury2004: อ่านคนละอย่างเลย
00:51 mercury2004: waratte
00:51 mercury2004: motto
00:52 P A N: ออๆ
00:52 P A N: ดูผิด
00:52 P A N: ผมก็อปผิดอัน
00:52 P A N: 55
00:53 mercury2004: 02:41:060 (1) - 笑って
00:53 mercury2004: อยู่นี่
00:53 mercury2004: แป่ว
00:57 mercury2004: ที่เหลือน่าจะง่ายละ มันตรงๆ
01:06 P A N: 02:20:614 -
01:06 P A N: ไม่ซ้ำหรอ
01:06 P A N: 55
01:07 mercury2004: 02:20:423 (6,7) - やだ
01:07 mercury2004: อันนี้มันปวดแฮะ
01:08 mercury2004: やだな、泣かないで、私まで泣ける ตอนมันร้อง มันเจือกแยก yada nana kana i de, wata shima dena keru
01:08 P A N: -0-
01:08 mercury2004: ซึ่งจริงๆแล้ว มันต้องเป็ย yadana nakanaide watashi made nakeru
01:09 mercury2004: ก็ตามนั้น
01:09 mercury2004: ปังลองดูละกัน
01:10 mercury2004: ได้มีคนเชค
01:10 mercury2004: เรื่องเนื้อยัง
01:10 P A N: ยัง
01:10 mercury2004: ว่าต้นมันถูกใหม
01:10 mercury2004: กำ
01:10 mercury2004: พี่พอเชคได้ แต่ไม่ร้อยเปอ
01:12 mercury2004: kshr ก็คอแลป ลองให้เขาเชคเนื้อดูก่อนน่าจะเวิคนะ
01:15 P A N: ใช่ทักไปเเล้ว
01:15 P A N: เเต่ afk
01:15 P A N: ไว้คราวหลัง
01:19 mercury2004: พี่เชคก็เนื้อถูกอยู่แล้ว

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P A N 2014-09-13T19:05:49+00:00

mercury2004 wrote:
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17:41 P A N: ช่วยเเบ่งท่อนหน่อยสิ
17:42 P A N: 55
17:42 mercury2004: แป่ว จะคอแลปเลยเรอะ
17:42 mercury2004: เอะ
17:42 mercury2004: แบ่งท่อนเพลงอะนะ
17:42 P A N: งงบางท่อน
17:42 P A N: A・バラバラめくれるノートの。
17:42 P A N: 00:51:761 -
17:43 mercury2004: 00:55:773 (1) - อันนั้น
17:43 mercury2004: จบที่ตรงนี้
17:43 mercury2004: 00:56:347 (2) - เริ่มอันใหม่ตรงนี้
17:44 P A N: 端っこに、綴った気持ちが。ปะ
17:44 mercury2004: 01:00:359 (1) - จบที่อันนี้
17:44 mercury2004: 01:00:933 (2) - เริ่มอันใหม่ที่ตรงนี้
17:45 P A N: อยากทำเปนแบบทีละอันเลยอะ 55
17:45 P A N: バラ
17:45 P A N: ไรงี้
17:45 mercury2004: เอาเล่ย
17:45 mercury2004: แบบลุงอาม
17:45 mercury2004: ลุงอามทำนะ
17:45 P A N: ทีละ 2 ตัวปะ
17:45 P A N: ประโยคเเรก
17:45 mercury2004: ทำตามเพลง
17:46 mercury2004: เอาเป้นว่า
17:46 mercury2004: งง อันไหน
17:46 mercury2004: เดี๋ยวพี่เขียนโรมันจิ แทนให้
17:46 mercury2004: จะง่ายกว่าป่าวหว่า
17:46 P A N: ไม่ 55
17:46 P A N: ผมไม่รู้ยุ่นเลย
17:46 P A N: อ่านไม่ออก
17:46 mercury2004: โรมันจิ
17:46 mercury2004: ก็เป้นตังอังกืดไง
17:46 mercury2004: *ตัวอังกิด
17:46 P A N: ออๆ
17:47 P A N: ได้
17:47 mercury2004: แปะละกันถ้างงอันไหน
17:47 P A N: เอาท่อนมะกี้เลยเเหละ
17:47 P A N: バラバラめくれるノートの
17:47 P A N: 端っこに、綴った気持ちが
17:47 P A N: 風に揺られていた
17:48 mercury2004: bara bara meku reru no o tono
17:49 mercury2004: hashik koni tsuzu tta kimo chiga
17:49 mercury2004: kaze niyu rareteita
17:49 mercury2004: เว้นตามช่องที่มันร้องนะ
17:50 mercury2004: ถ้าเว้นตามยุ่นมันจะเป็น barabara mekureru nooto no
17:50 mercury2004: hashkkoni tsuzutta kimochiga
17:50 mercury2004: kase ni yurareteita
18:03 mercury2004: งั้นระหว่างรอ โหลดรอก่อนละกัน
18:03 mercury2004: ปังมีเวอนี้ป่่ะ
18:03 *mercury2004 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/127892 Halozy - Genryuu Kaiko]
18:04 P A N: ไม่มี
18:04 mercury2004: โหลดอันนั้นก่อน มันมีดิฟเก่าของพี่อยู่
18:04 mercury2004: จะให้เล่นเทียบ ว่าชอบอันไหนมากกว่า
18:05 mercury2004: http://puu.sh/bx5ak.osz อันนี้อันใหม่
18:08 mercury2004: จะพร้อมแล้วเคาะเลยนะ
18:25 P A N: เขาจะเอาเวลาที่ไหนไปดูเนื้อ
18:25 P A N: งง
18:25 mercury2004: เล่นไปดูไป
18:25 mercury2004: พี่ก้ทำนะ
18:25 P A N: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2030080
18:25 mercury2004: เอาหางตาดูโน้ต
18:25 mercury2004: ยังดีกว่า hw เยอะ
18:26 mercury2004: นึกถึง sentimental
18:26 mercury2004: แบบเดียวกันเลย
18:26 mercury2004: ที่แย่กว่าคือ ลายมือแย่มาาก
18:26 P A N: 55
18:27 P A N: 綴
18:27 P A N: อ่านว่าไรอะ
18:30 mercury2004: หืม
18:30 mercury2004: พี่เขียนไปแล้วนิ
18:30 mercury2004: tsuzu
18:31 P A N: ตัวยุ่นไม่ได้เว้นตามที่พี่พิมมาอะ
18:31 P A N: เลยงงๆ
18:31 mercury2004: 00:57:875 (2) -
18:31 mercury2004: นี่ไง
18:40 P A N: 風 = kaze ใช่ปะ
18:40 mercury2004: yes
18:40 P A N: เดี๋ยวท่อนนี่เสด
18:41 P A N: เทสให้
18:41 mercury2004: k
18:41 mercury2004: ฟังของปังมากไป ไปหาเพลงใสๆเล่นมั่งดีกว่า
18:41 mercury2004: ฟังแต่ฮาดรอคมานานละ
18:41 P A N: 555
18:43 *mercury2004 is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/74959 forestpireo - Emotional Blush [Lunatic]]
18:44 mercury2004: มันก็ยัง
18:44 mercury2004: รอคอยู่ดีแฮ
18:48 mercury2004: เล่นอันเวอเก่าก่อนนนะ **
18:49 mercury2004: eartink น่ารำคาญได้ทุกเวลาจริงๆแฮะ
18:58 P A N: 555
18:59 mercury2004: โดนจิ๊บปัดเป่าหายไปละ
19:00 P A N: ลอง redl ได้ปะ
19:00 P A N: เเล้วเช็คเนื้อหน่อย
19:00 P A N: มาดูผมเทสก่อนก็ได้
19:00 mercury2004: ซักครู่
19:00 P A N: ระหว่างรอ
19:00 P A N: อันไหนก่อนนะ
19:00 mercury2004: เค
19:01 mercury2004: อัพใหม่ด่วน
19:01 mercury2004: corrupt beatmap
19:01 mercury2004: โอะั
19:01 mercury2004: ได้ละ
19:01 mercury2004: ไม่ต้องละ
19:02 mercury2004: เวปมันเพี้ยน
19:02 P A N: - -
19:02 mercury2004: เล่นอัน
19:02 mercury2004: ที่เป็นเกสดิฟก่อนนะ
19:03 mercury2004: แล้วค่อยอันใหม่า
19:03 P A N: ชอบเพลงจิง
19:03 mercury2004: แมพนึง ฟังหลายรอบ
19:03 mercury2004: รีแมพอีก
19:04 mercury2004: ฟังแบบ แทบเอียน
19:08 mercury2004: สกิล 3 ปี่ก่อน แมพเป้นแบบนี้ล่ะ
19:08 mercury2004: ลองอันใหม่ดู
19:08 mercury2004: remastered
19:08 P A N: โน็ตชวนหลุดเยอะจิงๆ
19:08 mercury2004: กร้าก
19:08 mercury2004: อันใหม่
19:08 mercury2004: เยอะกว่าเดิม
19:08 mercury2004: แน่นอน
19:12 mercury2004: เหมือนยากขึ้นตามสมัย
19:13 P A N: อืม
19:14 mercury2004: ชอบอันไหนมากกว่า
19:15 P A N: มัน
19:15 P A N: หนุกคนละแบบอะ
19:15 mercury2004: แป่ว
19:15 P A N: เเต่ผมว่าอัน้้รก
19:15 mercury2004: เทียบกันไม่ได้ซะงั้น
19:15 P A N: เเรก
19:15 P A N: มันโดดสบายกว่า
19:15 mercury2004: กร้าก
19:15 mercury2004: อันแรก แทบไม่ได้ใส่โดดเลย
19:15 mercury2004: แต่สมัยนั้นนี่ยากชิโหงแล้ว
19:16 P A N: อืม
19:16 mercury2004: แมพแนวนั้นอะ
19:16 P A N: มันเล่นสบายกว่า
19:16 mercury2004: ว่าไงกับ
19:16 P A N: เเต่ slider เร็วช้า
19:16 mercury2004: สไลเกรียน
19:16 P A N: ถ้าเล่นมันไม่ค่อยรู้สึกอะ
19:16 P A N: มันตามน้ำไปเรื่อยๆ 55
19:16 mercury2004: อะเค
19:16 mercury2004: งั้นดีละ
19:17 mercury2004: ลองทำแบบ ใส่เร็วช้าดู
19:17 mercury2004: ว่าคนเล่นจะว่าไง
19:17 mercury2004: ท่อนจบนี่ 2.0 เลยนะ
19:17 mercury2004: max speed
19:17 mercury2004: อันเร็วอะ
19:17 mercury2004: 03:43:584 (1) -
19:17 P A N: กำ 55
19:17 P A N: อันนั้นโอ
19:17 P A N: ได้ฟิลดี
19:17 mercury2004: 03:54:683 (1) - เล่นแล้ว
19:17 mercury2004: มันขัดมือป่ะ
19:17 P A N: ผมว่าแบบนั้นอะดี
19:18 P A N: เร็วก็เร็วไปเลย
19:18 mercury2004: ตอนแแรก
19:18 mercury2004: จะเอาท่อนจบแบบ hw ละ
19:18 mercury2004: ทำเกรียนหนุกๆ
19:18 mercury2004: ล้มเลิก
19:18 mercury2004: ใส่ 1.3x
19:18 mercury2004: แล้วก็วางเอา
19:18 P A N: 555
19:18 mercury2004: 04:50:521 (1) -
19:18 P A N: ดี*
19:18 P A N: เเต่ผมว่า 2.0 อะดิ
19:18 mercury2004: ไม่งั้นเกรียนเกิน
19:18 P A N: แบบ 03:54:683 (1) -
19:18 mercury2004: ไคแรก
19:18 mercury2004: กับไคสุดท้าย
19:18 P A N: เพราะมันเร็วไปเลยอะ
19:18 mercury2004: สไลพุ่งไม่เท่ากันนะ
19:19 P A N: ได้ฟิลเร็ว
19:19 mercury2004: ไค 1 - 2 ใช้ 1.8
19:19 mercury2004: เพราะ ไค 1-2 ใช้ 1.2x
19:19 mercury2004: ไคสุดท้าน 1.3x
19:19 mercury2004: แต่เวลาเล่นคนไม่ค่อยต่างกันมาก
19:20 P A N: เเล้วบางทีกะไม่ถูก
19:20 P A N: ไหนเร็วช้า
19:20 P A N: เร็วหรือช้าจะมา
19:20 mercury2004: ว่าละ
19:20 mercury2004: มันมีแค่ไค
19:20 mercury2004: ไอเร็วช้าอะ
19:20 mercury2004: พี่ใช้ nc กับ spacing
19:20 mercury2004: โดดใหญ่ๆเวลาจะไว
19:21 mercury2004: 01:40:636 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) -
19:21 mercury2004: เห้นหายทั้งแถบเลยอันนี้
19:21 P A N: โดน anti jump
19:21 mercury2004: ดักเกินไปสินะ
19:21 P A N: มันใกล้กว่าเท่านึงเลย
19:22 mercury2004: 03:40:810 (1) -
19:22 mercury2004: ไอที่ดักจริงๆ
19:22 mercury2004: ไม่มิสเลย
19:22 P A N: 555
19:22 mercury2004: 03:58:151 (5) -
19:22 mercury2004: ดักเทพเลยนะโดดนี้
19:22 mercury2004: ไม่มิสเลย
19:23 mercury2004: โดดติดๆ ดันไม่มิส
19:23 mercury2004: โดดจิ๊บ 2 โน้ตมิส
19:23 mercury2004: จิบไปทำพันธสํญญา มารมิส จากไหนกัน
19:23 P A N: ตั้งหลักได้มั้ง
19:23 P A N: อันนั้นมันหลัง spin ด้วยเเหละ
19:23 mercury2004: 04:04:567 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - นี่ก็ไม่มิส
19:24 mercury2004: ต้องไปหาเหยื่อเทสเพิ่ม
19:25 P A N: เเต่เล่นลื่นดีเเล้ว
19:26 mercury2004: ให้จิ๊บเล่นจะว่าไงดีหว่า
19:26 P A N: เช็คเนื้อผมก่อน
19:26 P A N: 55
19:26 mercury2004: เอ้อ
19:26 mercury2004: ลืมไป
19:26 mercury2004: เค
19:27 mercury2004: โอ้
19:27 mercury2004: ใช้ได้เลย
19:29 mercury2004: ทำให้หมดนะ
19:29 mercury2004: กำลังดีเลว
19:29 mercury2004: *เลย
19:30 P A N: เดี๋ยวสงสัยตรงไหน
19:30 P A N: ถามต่อละกัน
19:30 mercury2004: เค
19:51 P A N: ทำเองชอบเอง
19:51 P A N: 55
19:53 P A N: ร้อง 2 คนสีไรดีฟระ
19:59 *mercury2004 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/154226 paraoka - boot]
19:59 mercury2004: ไรแวะ
19:59 mercury2004: พวกแร้ง 2000
19:59 mercury2004: เล่นไอ้นี่ไม่ผ่าน
19:59 mercury2004: ง่ายตายโหง
20:00 P A N: - -
20:00 P A N: 6000 ก็ผ่านได้เเล้วม้าง
20:01 mercury2004: เพิ่งไปขอเขาเทสมา
20:01 mercury2004: เล่นจบ แล้วมันเล่นไอ้นี่
20:01 mercury2004: กุกบอกว่าเป็น normal extra แมพ
20:01 mercury2004: ไม่ทันจบไค 1
20:01 mercury2004: เฟลติดๆ
20:01 mercury2004: เห็นเลย พวกปั้มแร้ง
20:04 P A N: 555
20:04 mercury2004: ดีที่ไม่ได้บอก
20:04 mercury2004: sentimental = normal extra
20:05 mercury2004: #modhelp
20:05 mercury2004: เหมือนเด็กหัดแมพเถียงกัน
20:08 P A N: หน่า
20:08 P A N: 55
20:19 mercury2004: จะว่าไป
20:19 mercury2004: feedback ในทางแมพปิ้ง
20:19 mercury2004: คืออะไรอะ
20:42 P A N: ไม่ใช่ไอนั้นหรอ
20:42 P A N: แบบ mod ไรไป
20:42 P A N: ขอ feedback ด้วย
20:42 P A N: ไม่เเก้เพราะไร
20:43 mercury2004: ไม่ใช่
20:43 mercury2004: มันบอกว่า
20:43 P A N: จะได้เป็นประสบการณ์
20:43 mercury2004: แมพขาด feedback
20:43 mercury2004: งงเลย
20:43 mercury2004: คืออะไร
20:43 P A N: -*-
20:43 P A N: ボタボタ落とした涙が
20:43 P A N: ตัวไหน
20:43 P A N: ตัวเดียว 2 พยางค์บ้างอะ
20:43 P A N: 揺らした、水面の葉のよう
20:43 mercury2004: ช่วงไหนของเพลง
20:44 P A N: 01:30:168 -
20:44 mercury2004: คนละอันเลยนะ
20:44 P A N: แปป
20:44 P A N: ผิดๆ
20:44 P A N: 01:42:206 -
20:45 mercury2004: 01:42:206 (6) - ボタ
20:45 mercury2004: 01:42:971 (2) - ボタ
20:45 mercury2004: 01:42:971 (2) - 落と
20:46 mercury2004: ผิด
20:46 mercury2004: 01:43:735 (2) - 落と
20:46 mercury2004: 01:44:499 (2) - した
20:47 mercury2004: 01:45:264 (2) - 涙/nami
20:48 mercury2004: 01:46:219 (1) - da が
20:48 mercury2004: 01:46:792 (2) -　　揺ら
20:48 mercury2004: 01:47:557 (2) - した
20:49 mercury2004: 　โอะ
20:49 mercury2004: ประโยคสอง ไม่ตรง
20:49 mercury2004: กอปมาถูกอันป่าว
20:49 P A N: 水面の葉のよう
20:49 P A N: นี่หรอ
20:50 mercury2004: อืม
20:50 P A N: ถูกนา
20:50 mercury2004: suimen no ha na you
20:50 mercury2004: ไม่ก็มันเล่นเสียง
20:51 mercury2004: แปป
20:51 mercury2004: ขอไปดูดิคก่อน
20:51 mercury2004: ว่ามันอ่านแบบอื่นได้ใหม
20:51 P A N: daが หรอ
20:52 mercury2004: 水面の葉のよう
20:52 mercury2004: 水面
20:52 mercury2004: อันนี้ไม่ตรง
20:53 mercury2004: http://puu.sh/bxeBD.png ถุ้ย
20:53 mercury2004: จริงๆด้วย
20:53 mercury2004: อ่านได้สองแบบ
20:53 mercury2004: แต่อันล่างคือที่เขาใช้กัน
20:53 P A N: -0-
20:53 mercury2004: อะเค
20:53 P A N: คือตรงชะ
20:53 mercury2004: 01:48:512 (1) - 水/mina
20:54 mercury2004: 01:49:085 (2) - 面の
20:54 mercury2004: 01:49:850 (2) - 葉の
20:54 mercury2004: 01:50:614 (2) - よう
20:54 mercury2004: อะ
20:55 P A N: เดี๋ยวมห้ kd ด้วย
20:55 mercury2004: savelog ใส่เอาคุโด้ได้เลน
20:55 P A N: หลังทำเสด
20:55 P A N: 55
20:55 mercury2004: นะเนี่ย
20:55 mercury2004: กำลังพิมพอดี
20:55 P A N: คิดเหมือนกัน
20:55 P A N: 555
20:56 mercury2004: มีคำถามอะไรพวกนี้พี่ยังพอตอบได้อยู่ แต่ถ้ายุ่นเหนือเมฆมากๆก็ไม่ไหวนะ
21:19 P A N: http://puu.sh/bxg3l/6462b9d89f.jpg
21:19 P A N: แบบนี้เลยหรอ
21:19 mercury2004: เอ้ย
21:19 mercury2004: อย่าใส่ตังอังกิดสิ
21:19 P A N: 55555
21:19 mercury2004: ใช่ไว้เฉยๆ
21:19 mercury2004: กันงง
21:19 P A N: อย่าตกใจ
21:19 P A N: เเก้ได้
21:19 P A N: da นี่ตัวไหน
21:20 P A N: เอามาให้ก๊อปที
21:20 mercury2004: namida なみだ　涙
21:20 mercury2004: คันจิทั้งตัว
21:20 mercury2004: 3 พยางค
21:20 P A N: เปลี่ยนคันจิ
21:20 P A N: เปน 3 ตัวเเทนปะ
21:20 mercury2004: ตามใจ~
21:20 P A N: 3 ตัวที่พี่ยอกปะ
21:21 P A N: บอก*
21:21 mercury2004: อืม
21:21 P A N: ข้างบนเนี่ย
21:21 mercury2004: เยส
21:21 P A N: ทำไมตามใจอย่างงั้น
21:21 P A N: มันผิดหรอ 55
21:21 mercury2004: ไม่ใช้คันจิ
21:21 mercury2004: ก็อ่านเข้าใจ
21:21 mercury2004: แต่ใช้แล้วสวยกว่า
21:23 P A N: -0-
21:23 mercury2004: พี่เป้นโรคจิตด้วยล่ะ
21:23 mercury2004: ชอบคันจิมาก มีแต่คนเกลียด
21:24 mercury2004: ใส่คันจิก่อนเป้นดี
21:30 P A N: http://puu.sh/bxgpY/a2edd6099a.jpg
21:30 mercury2004: เอ่
21:30 mercury2004: ไม่ค่อยดีแฮะ
21:30 P A N: ทำไมหรอ
21:30 mercury2004: ナミダ
21:30 mercury2004: ใช้อันนี้ดีกว่า
21:30 mercury2004: เพราะ มันอ่านกันแล้ว งง
21:51 P A N: http://puu.sh/bxhaT/fcedc692dd.jpg
21:52 mercury2004: โอเคละ
21:52 P A N: เหนื่อย
21:52 P A N: 55
21:53 mercury2004: เหลืออีก
21:53 mercury2004: กี่นาทีล่ะ
21:53 P A N: - -
21:53 P A N: พึ่งครึ่งนึง
21:53 P A N: 水
21:54 P A N: mina ชะ
21:54 mercury2004: 水面　
21:55 mercury2004: ミナモ
21:57 P A N: ผมใช้ตัวเดียวไปอะ
21:58 mercury2004: ก็ได้
22:00 P A N: 01:51:378 -
22:00 P A N: 01:52:143 -
22:02 mercury2004: ยากแฮะ
22:02 mercury2004: มันแยกได้ทุเรศมาด
22:03 mercury2004: ใส่ 遠く　ทั้งสองอันเลย
22:03 mercury2004: 01:53:098 (1) - まで
22:03 mercury2004: 01:53:671 (2) - 行け
22:07 mercury2004: ดอทก่อน อาจจะตอบช้าหน่อน
22:11 P A N: สรุปไอ
22:11 P A N: 遠く遠く
22:11 P A N: เอาไงอะ
22:11 mercury2004: ใส่ไปเลย
22:11 mercury2004: มันแยกยาก
22:11 P A N: ได้
22:11 mercury2004: มันอ่านว่า tooku tooku
22:11 mercury2004: แต่เพลงมัน
22:11 mercury2004: uto oku tooku
22:12 P A N: 4 ตัวหลังนี่โอเเล้วใช่ปะ
22:12 P A N: ที่พี่บอกมา
22:12 mercury2004: yes
22:24 P A N: 01:52:716 -
22:24 P A N: ถึง 01:52:907 -
22:56 mercury2004: มาละ
23:35 P A N: โหลล
23:35 mercury2004: 3 โหลหน่อยลุง
23:35 mercury2004: 40 บาท
23:35 P A N: กำ
23:35 P A N: ขอตั้งเเต่ตรงนี้อะ 01:52:716 -
23:35 mercury2004: ซักครู่
23:35 P A N: มะกี้ osu re
23:35 mercury2004: ส่อง 7ka อยู่
23:35 P A N: ถึง01:53:863 -
00:06 mercury2004: เอะ
00:06 mercury2004: ให้ไปแล้วหนิ
00:06 mercury2004: ลืมไป หลุดโอสุ
00:06 P A N: 01:52:716 -
00:06 P A N: ตั้งเเต่นี่นะ
00:07 mercury2004: มันเริ่มอันนั้นไม่ได้
00:07 mercury2004: เพราะมันเชื่อมกัย
00:07 mercury2004: 01:52:334 (1) -
00:07 mercury2004: อันนี้อยู่
00:07 P A N: ออๆ
00:14 mercury2004: แปปนะ
00:14 mercury2004: แชทแบบ 4 จอ
00:14 mercury2004: 4 ตาละ
00:15 P A N: 5
00:16 mercury2004: 01:53:098 (1) - まで
00:16 mercury2004: 01:53:671 (2) - 行け
00:16 P A N: เคๆ
00:17 mercury2004: 01:52:334 (1) ตรงนี้มันแบบว่า
00:17 mercury2004: 01:52:334 (1) - to o
00:17 mercury2004: 01:52:907 (2) - ku
00:17 mercury2004: 01:53:098 (1) - made
00:17 mercury2004: 01:53:671 (2,3) - ike
00:17 mercury2004: แล้วตัวยุ่นมันแยกแบบนี้ไม่ได้
00:27 mercury2004: เอาเพลงนี้ ไปร้องกับ 7ka ดู
00:27 mercury2004: ร้อง duet
00:27 mercury2004: ปังจะฟิน
00:27 P A N: อย่าเลย
00:27 mercury2004: ออร่าม่วงกระจาย
00:27 P A N: http://puu.sh/bxqEu/7a04c4d9e7.jpg
00:28 mercury2004: ได้ละมั้ง
00:41 mercury2004: เมะเรื่องมันเกี่ยวกับอะไรอะ อันนี้อะ
00:41 mercury2004: อ่านดูละ เหมือนมันต้องมีอะไรข้างในอีก
00:43 P A N: asukara?
00:43 mercury2004: อืม
00:43 P A N: ก็
00:44 P A N: รู้ยังไงบ้างเเล้วอะ
00:44 mercury2004: รู้แค่ เด็กต่างโรงเรียน / ต่างที่อยู่ด้วย
00:44 mercury2004: พยายามทำความสัมพันท กัน
00:45 P A N: ใช่
00:45 P A N: เเล้วก็ดราม่า
00:45 mercury2004: ป่ะฒ
00:45 mercury2004: ?
00:45 P A N: เเล้วก็รักวงกลม
00:46 mercury2004: อ่านไอที่สรุปมา เหมือนมันไม่มีไร แต่คิดว่ามันต้องมี
00:46 mercury2004: ดราม่าภายในแน่ๆ
00:46 P A N: เยอะ
00:46 P A N: 02:10:487 -
00:47 mercury2004: 02:10:487 (3) - 気づいて3
00:47 mercury2004: 02:10:487 (3) - 気づいて
00:48 P A N: เวน
00:48 P A N: 02:05:136 - อะ
00:49 mercury2004: 02:05:136 (11) - 02:07:812 (6) - だからやめられないよ。
00:49 mercury2004: dakara yamerarenai yo
00:49 P A N: 02:08:003 - 笑って
00:49 P A N: ปะ
00:50 mercury2004: ไม่ใช่จ่ะ
00:50 mercury2004: もっと อันนั้นมัน
00:50 mercury2004: 02:08:003 (7,8) - もっと
00:51 P A N: ก็อันเดียวกัน !
00:51 mercury2004: เหย
00:51 mercury2004: อ่านคนละอย่างเลย
00:51 mercury2004: waratte
00:51 mercury2004: motto
00:52 P A N: ออๆ
00:52 P A N: ดูผิด
00:52 P A N: ผมก็อปผิดอัน
00:52 P A N: 55
00:53 mercury2004: 02:41:060 (1) - 笑って
00:53 mercury2004: อยู่นี่
00:53 mercury2004: แป่ว
00:57 mercury2004: ที่เหลือน่าจะง่ายละ มันตรงๆ
01:06 P A N: 02:20:614 -
01:06 P A N: ไม่ซ้ำหรอ
01:06 P A N: 55
01:07 mercury2004: 02:20:423 (6,7) - やだ
01:07 mercury2004: อันนี้มันปวดแฮะ
01:08 mercury2004: やだな、泣かないで、私まで泣ける ตอนมันร้อง มันเจือกแยก yada nana kana i de, wata shima dena keru
01:08 P A N: -0-
01:08 mercury2004: ซึ่งจริงๆแล้ว มันต้องเป็ย yadana nakanaide watashi made nakeru
01:09 mercury2004: ก็ตามนั้น
01:09 mercury2004: ปังลองดูละกัน
01:10 mercury2004: ได้มีคนเชค
01:10 mercury2004: เรื่องเนื้อยัง
01:10 P A N: ยัง
01:10 mercury2004: ว่าต้นมันถูกใหม
01:10 mercury2004: กำ
01:10 mercury2004: พี่พอเชคได้ แต่ไม่ร้อยเปอ
01:12 mercury2004: kshr ก็คอแลป ลองให้เขาเชคเนื้อดูก่อนน่าจะเวิคนะ
01:15 P A N: ใช่ทักไปเเล้ว
01:15 P A N: เเต่ afk
01:15 P A N: ไว้คราวหลัง
01:19 mercury2004: พี่เชคก็เนื้อถูกอยู่แล้ว
this notepad doesnt encode japs correctly.
ไม่แร้งนี่ เซ็งเครียดกินนมแน่ๆ

thanks!
จะมาบอกว่า 2 kds คุ้มเลยยยย 555

mercury2004

615 posts

Joined February 2010

mercury2004 2014-09-13T19:08:39+00:00

เอ้ากำ สองดาว งั้นก็เอาไปอีกดาว แมพดี ไม่เสียดาย~

Meg

1,617 posts

Joined August 2012

Meg 2014-09-14T15:39:13+00:00

yo
checked lyrics SB

log

014-09-15 00:13 iMage--: 01:57:493 - 
2014-09-15 00:13 iMage--: http://puu.sh/byIP2.png　ずっと→きっと
2014-09-15 00:15 P A N: ok
2014-09-15 00:16 iMage--: 02:34:181 (2,1) - 
2014-09-15 00:16 iMage--: 02:35:136 - 
2014-09-15 00:16 iMage--: http://puu.sh/byIZR.png 頭にもくるし
2014-09-15 00:16 iMage--: 苦しい→くるし
2014-09-15 00:17 P A N: okk
2014-09-15 00:31 iMage--: plz wait~
2014-09-15 00:32 P A N: sure
2014-09-15 00:32 P A N: feel free
2014-09-15 00:32 iMage--: ok
2014-09-15 00:32 iMage--: 02:49:277 - 
2014-09-15 00:32 iMage--: http://puu.sh/byK1v.png
2014-09-15 00:33 iMage--: 私達、遊ぼうよ→私達がそうよ
2014-09-15 00:34 iMage--: this song doesn't have lyrics source ;w;
2014-09-15 00:35 iMage--: finished check. good luck~

mercury2004

615 posts

Joined February 2010

mercury2004 2014-09-14T17:16:45+00:00

ระวังเรื่อง sbload ล่ะ ตอนนี้มันทะลุจอมากๆ ตัดๆหน่อยก็ดีเผื่อไว้. โพสไว้กันลืม

Last edited by mercury2004 2014-09-15T13:11:21+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

P A N

2,346 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

P A N 2014-09-15T11:53:35+00:00

กำเอา translate ออกไปเดี๋ยวเขาจับได้

Asagi

1,020 posts

Joined March 2013

Asagi 2014-09-15T13:04:44+00:00

ok

P A N

2,346 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

P A N 2014-09-15T13:27:49+00:00

Asagi wrote:

ok

oh no asagi please ;w;

Asagi

1,020 posts

Joined March 2013

Asagi 2014-09-17T18:19:50+00:00

P A N pls
IRC mod on Insane

Log

2014-09-18 01:10 Asagi: wanna IRC mod? :v
2014-09-18 01:10 Asagi: or youre gonna sleep soon? rip
2014-09-18 01:10 P A N: mp
2014-09-18 01:10 P A N: no
2014-09-18 01:10 P A N: today my mom are sleeping
2014-09-18 01:10 Asagi: wow
2014-09-18 01:10 Asagi: so play all you want?
2014-09-18 01:11 P A N: did you redl for SB?
2014-09-18 01:11 Asagi: not yet
2014-09-18 01:12 P A N: wat
2014-09-18 01:12 Asagi: wait
2014-09-18 01:12 Asagi: reDLing
2014-09-18 01:12 Asagi: RIP DL speed
2014-09-18 01:13 P A N: ok
2014-09-18 01:13 P A N: rip
2014-09-18 01:13 Asagi: damn i wanna mod a map HAHAHA
2014-09-18 01:13 P A N: I love to love ru
2014-09-18 01:13 Asagi: i dont feel playing eroge today
2014-09-18 01:14 Asagi: dunno why
2014-09-18 01:14 Asagi: welp
2014-09-18 01:15 P A N: I see
2014-09-18 01:15 P A N: mod my map
2014-09-18 01:15 Asagi: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/419451 Miuna Shiodome (cv. Mikako Komatsu) & Sayu Hisanuma (cv. Kaori Ishihara) - Dazzling [Insane]]
2014-09-18 01:15 Asagi: this?
2014-09-18 01:16 Asagi: just minor suggestion tho, so better if IRC, but dunno haha
2014-09-18 01:16 Asagi: damn the title is too long hahaha
2014-09-18 01:17 P A N: LOL
2014-09-18 01:17 P A N: can't be help
2014-09-18 01:17 Asagi: and....
2014-09-18 01:17 Asagi: youre still working on the SB?
2014-09-18 01:17 Asagi: wtf
2014-09-18 01:18 P A N: no
2014-09-18 01:18 P A N: finished
2014-09-18 01:18 P A N: but SB stuff will come back soon
2014-09-18 01:19 Asagi: but you always check it hahaha
2014-09-18 01:20 Asagi: improving it or something?
2014-09-18 01:20 P A N: no
2014-09-18 01:20 P A N: enjoy it indeed
2014-09-18 01:20 Asagi: hahaha
2014-09-18 01:20 Asagi: okay time to start the IRC :v
2014-09-18 01:21 Asagi: it will not take so long, i guess
2014-09-18 01:22 P A N: I want to see your face
2014-09-18 01:22 P A N: when mod my map
2014-09-18 01:22 P A N: I mean share cam
2014-09-18 01:22 P A N: vid*
2014-09-18 01:22 Asagi: pls
2014-09-18 01:22 Asagi: like uhhhmmm
2014-09-18 01:22 P A N: hmm
2014-09-18 01:22 Asagi: modding via voice chat or something
2014-09-18 01:22 Asagi: but thats farking wtf
2014-09-18 01:22 P A N: no voice
2014-09-18 01:23 Asagi: pls
2014-09-18 01:23 Asagi: but you dont have cam
2014-09-18 01:23 P A N: lol yea
2014-09-18 01:23 Asagi: so yeah, im gonna start it really lol
2014-09-18 01:23 Asagi: just minor cleaning on the patterns
2014-09-18 01:23 P A N: oh ok
2014-09-18 01:24 P A N: ahaha
2014-09-18 01:24 P A N: you
2014-09-18 01:24 Asagi: 00:06:474 (2,3,4,5) - 
2014-09-18 01:24 Asagi: not sure if 2 and 4 are pairs
2014-09-18 01:24 Asagi: same as 3 and 5
2014-09-18 01:24 Asagi: or you can make them equal spacing, it looks better, i guess http://puu.sh/bCTi3.jpg
2014-09-18 01:26 Asagi: 00:18:894 (4) - why this kind of curve is kinda, disturbing me HAHAHA
2014-09-18 01:27 P A N: oh come on XD
2014-09-18 01:27 P A N: it's call blanket
2014-09-18 01:27 Asagi: hahaha
2014-09-18 01:27 Asagi:  i mean
2014-09-18 01:27 Asagi: the curve is too much
2014-09-18 01:27 Asagi: i mean, even 1 grid, is kinda making the curve a bit errr dunno
2014-09-18 01:27 Asagi: weird for me hahaha
2014-09-18 01:27 Asagi: or its just your style, im not used to it :v
2014-09-18 01:28 Asagi: 00:23:480 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - make this a perfect hexagon at least
2014-09-18 01:29 Asagi: 00:26:920 - i think starting the stream here fits better
2014-09-18 01:30 P A N: hey it's not hexagon
2014-09-18 01:30 Asagi: as you can hear on what kind of instrument is that
2014-09-18 01:30 Asagi: wat wat
2014-09-18 01:32 Asagi: it has 6 sides lol
2014-09-18 01:33 P A N: hm but it is just random
2014-09-18 01:33 P A N: lol
2014-09-18 01:34 Asagi: just make it like this http://puu.sh/bCTYV.jpg 
2014-09-18 01:34 Asagi: come on, it looks cleaner now HAHAHA
2014-09-18 01:37 Asagi: back to osu chat
2014-09-18 01:37 Asagi: lol
2014-09-18 01:37 P A N: hi
2014-09-18 01:37 Asagi: you said it was random :v but atleast make it look good like this http://puu.sh/bCUff.jpg
2014-09-18 01:38 P A N: wow
2014-09-18 01:38 P A N: how can you did that
2014-09-18 01:38 Asagi: dafaq? is it really hard to fix? LOL
2014-09-18 01:38 Asagi: idk if sarcasm or not XD
2014-09-18 01:39 P A N: kind of
2014-09-18 01:39 P A N: no no
2014-09-18 01:39 P A N: I tried it
2014-09-18 01:39 P A N: but it's hard
2014-09-18 01:39 P A N: so I lazy
2014-09-18 01:39 Asagi: wat
2014-09-18 01:39 Asagi: i just moved it a little bit LOL
2014-09-18 01:40 P A N: hmm let's see
2014-09-18 01:40 P A N: I'm symmetry master
2014-09-18 01:40 P A N: let me try
2014-09-18 01:40 Asagi: 00:51:952 (1) - on this part, the blue-green and purple NC part
2014-09-18 01:40 Asagi: i think you should slow that part down
2014-09-18 01:40 Asagi: i mean, compare to the previous/next part of the song
2014-09-18 01:40 Asagi: its kinda different, its much softer
2014-09-18 01:41 P A N: that would be a huge change
2014-09-18 01:41 Asagi: totally, but...
2014-09-18 01:41 Asagi: just make it exact on the last part that you will not change
2014-09-18 01:44 Asagi: and same as this 01:42:398 (1) - 
2014-09-18 01:44 Asagi: but the changes you will do makes the playing feels better
2014-09-18 01:45 Asagi: because its totally fit the song
2014-09-18 01:45 P A N: hmm
2014-09-18 01:45 Asagi: btw, nice NC coordination haha
2014-09-18 01:45 Asagi: i just noticed
2014-09-18 01:47 P A N: you make me think another idea
2014-09-18 01:47 P A N: about NC
2014-09-18 01:47 Asagi: pls no
2014-09-18 01:48 Asagi: its good, pls no change the colors ;w;
2014-09-18 01:48 P A N: omg
2014-09-18 01:48 Asagi: 01:11:442 (7,1) - the slider looks so... how should i call it
2014-09-18 01:48 Asagi: a bit boring i guess
2014-09-18 01:49 P A N: please
2014-09-18 01:49 P A N: straight slider fit with 01:11:442 -
2014-09-18 01:49 Asagi: try to curve (7) i guess, so it looks more appealing http://puu.sh/bCV7l.jpg
2014-09-18 01:49 P A N: 's sound
2014-09-18 01:49 Asagi: pls
2014-09-18 01:50 P A N: :(
2014-09-18 01:50 Asagi: well dont change if you dont want ;w;
2014-09-18 01:51 P A N: fucking hexagon
2014-09-18 01:51 Asagi: WAT
2014-09-18 01:51 Asagi: you still cant fix it? wtf
2014-09-18 01:51 P A N: fixing
2014-09-18 01:51 P A N: I knew the problem now
2014-09-18 01:51 Asagi: lol
2014-09-18 01:51 Asagi: and 01:32:652 (3,4,5,1) - make this a perfect triangle at least
2014-09-18 01:52 P A N: 00:24:627 (2) - 's head is not stack with blabla's tail
2014-09-18 01:52 P A N: so
2014-09-18 01:52 P A N: It can be perfect hexagon just one timeline
2014-09-18 01:52 P A N: I should I say
2014-09-18 01:52 P A N: nvm
2014-09-18 01:52 P A N: what should I say*
2014-09-18 01:52 Asagi: wtf hahaha
2014-09-18 01:53 P A N: one time
2014-09-18 01:53 P A N: I mean
2014-09-18 01:53 P A N: fux
2014-09-18 01:53 Asagi: you mean, the head of 00:24:627 (2) -  is not stacked with the tail of this ? 00:23:098 (3) - 
2014-09-18 01:53 P A N: sure
2014-09-18 01:53 P A N: exactly
2014-09-18 01:53 P A N: that's why
2014-09-18 01:53 Asagi: wat
2014-09-18 01:53 P A N: it can't be double perfect hexagon
2014-09-18 01:53 Asagi: they are not so noticable anyway
2014-09-18 01:54 Asagi: they are quite far lol
2014-09-18 01:54 P A N: well yea
2014-09-18 01:54 P A N: btw that slow part
2014-09-18 01:54 P A N: I don't want to use the SV that lower than 0.75
2014-09-18 01:54 P A N: so :X
2014-09-18 01:54 Asagi: maybe use at least .65 or something
2014-09-18 01:55 Asagi: oh wait
2014-09-18 01:55 P A N: that part is already 0.75
2014-09-18 01:55 Asagi: maybe just reduce the spacing
2014-09-18 01:56 Asagi: like you did here 02:32:843 (1) - 
2014-09-18 01:59 Asagi: maybe just that it
2014-09-18 01:59 P A N: but that part
2014-09-18 01:59 P A N: is more calm than 00:51:952 -
2014-09-18 01:59 Asagi: the last part is really good lol
2014-09-18 01:59 P A N: turn off all = this map shit
2014-09-18 01:59 Asagi: im not saying totally like that
2014-09-18 01:59 Asagi: i mean. just reduce the spacing a bit
2014-09-18 02:00 P A N: which
2014-09-18 02:00 Asagi: the 1st part 
2014-09-18 02:00 Asagi: 00:51:952 (1) - 
2014-09-18 02:01 P A N: let's see
2014-09-18 02:01 P A N: hmmm
2014-09-18 02:07 Asagi: damn, if i have better earphones, i can mod some rhythms too
2014-09-18 02:07 Asagi: fuck me
2014-09-18 02:09 P A N: XD
2014-09-18 02:10 Asagi: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/395611 Mizukara wo Enshutsu Suru Otome no Kai - Girlish Lover(Asterisk Remix.) [Extra]]
2014-09-18 02:10 Asagi: this map is OP
2014-09-18 02:10 Asagi: really fuckin good
2014-09-18 02:11 P A N: ok I give up
2014-09-18 02:11 Asagi: wat
2014-09-18 02:12 P A N: hard to fix
2014-09-18 02:12 P A N: that slow part
2014-09-18 02:13 Asagi: dont mind too much i guess
2014-09-18 02:14 P A N: I tried
2014-09-18 02:14 P A N: but it's hard XD
2014-09-18 02:14 Asagi: rip in peace in peace

Good Luck ~~hentai~~ baka :3

Gero

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Joined March 2012

Gero 2014-09-23T02:42:29+00:00

~~I'll will mod this tomorrow, be patient ~~~

EDIT: OMFG I totally forgot this... thanks for reminding me @PAN.

Last edited by Gero 2014-10-11T04:33:37+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

10nya

2,746 posts

Joined February 2011

10nya 2014-09-24T12:44:07+00:00

Asagi wrote:

ok

\^^/

Gero

4,438 posts

Joined March 2012

Gero 2014-10-22T06:14:57+00:00

Hi PAN con queso o/

General

Inside of the "SB" folder there is a ".OSB" that is kinda unnecessary so would be ideal if you remove it from there..
Disable the "letterbox during breaks" for every difficulty since it looks bad with the storyboard.
Your preview time is unsnapped so wouldn't hurt if you fix it.

Storyboard

02:32:843 - I'm not sure about who has been mapped this part to both difficulties that are collabs, so it would be much better if you added the name to this part.
00:03:035 - hmmm... what do you think to Increase the scale effect here to avoid empty spaces like this one, I know isn't noticeable in game but it's just for precaution. (this applies for all "white" effects)
00:51:952 - the change from one image to another is kinda noticeable so it's recommendable if you try to redoing both effects to avoid such problems. (for both girls of course)
01:56:156 - What about to do the same thing here as you did previously 01:05:710 - about white effect.
02:46:601 - Same as above.
02:51:187 - oh please don't, these effects are weird for me and kinda annoying to watch to be honest so what about the reduction of the pulses? because here it isn't a change of the instrumental or vocal for doing an effect like this.

Normal Collab

Your settings seems more like an easy difficulty so maybe that can cause problems for the spread so would be better if you change it to something like this:

AR + 2
HP + 2
OD + 2

00:12:206 (1) - I'm pretty sure that you forgot to add a whistle on the head of the slider, you should try it because sounds nice with the background.
00:13:735 (2) - Same as above.
00:16:601 (3,1,3) - What do you think to use finish instead whistle? it doesn't fits well imo. (the same thing for the copy paste)
01:16:219 (3,1) - This is just a personal suggestion but I think that would be better if you avoid such overlaps like these sliders since it can be kinda confusing to play.
01:29:786 (4,1) - Nazi* try to do a better blanket here.
01:33:608 - Missing clap here?
01:36:665 - Clap instead whistle would be nice.
01:57:493 (3,1,1) - Finish on the head?
02:38:958 (1,1) - ^
03:24:818 (2,3) - ^ and sampleset drum in this 03:25:964 (4) - circle?
02:37:047 (2) - This circle in my opinion is pretty close to the HP bar so I recommend moving this a couple of grids down to avoid problems in the future.
03:10:869 (1) - I know you're following the voice but would be nice if you change the rhythm for something like this, this could be fit better with the voice and the instrumental to be honest, you should try it.

Hard Collab

OD - 1

00:12:015 - considers the possibility to add a note here with finish/whistle since I think it's kinda necessary to click something here.
00:47:366 - ^
00:11:442 (3,2) - Nazi* stack both objects correctly.
00:54:245 (3,1) - ^
00:33:034 (2,3) - this jump flows kinda weird, maybe it's just me but I think that would be much better if you move it to the correct place.
00:38:958 (3,1) - Somehow looks messy and a bit unreadable for a hard difficulty so would be nice if you move this slider 00:39:722 (1) - to X: 100 Y: 152 it's just a example so you can do something different here.

Insane

00:39:340 (1,1) - Just a small thing but would be better if you finish this slider in the previous tick since it doesn't follow nothing and feels weird when I play it or something like this 01:29:786 (5) - it works well.
00:22:525 (6) - Missing whistle?
01:23:576 - To maintain consistency with 00:20:805 (6,7,8,9) - I recommend you to add an circle here 01:23:576 (3) - also use the same hitsounds in this part.
02:38:958 - Finish?

call me back when you're done to apply the changes ~

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2014-10-22T06:32:34+00:00

@ PAN : can you add hitsounds that Gero mention in my part? they need fixed in much parts, i'm lazy to give the code one by one lol

anyway thanks 4 mod gero /3/

Asagi

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Joined March 2013

Asagi 2014-10-22T10:45:28+00:00

~~finally~~

P A N

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Topic Starter

P A N 2014-10-22T17:35:34+00:00

my part including insane are fixed except

Insane: 01:23:576 - To maintain consistency with 00:20:805 (6,7,8,9) - I recommend you to add an circle here 01:23:576 (3) - also use the same hitsounds in this part. I try to listen it carefully and I figured it out that they are different rhythm (if my ear still great) so I want to keep it like that.

I will contact with my Gder and collab first since I want to know that are they really want to fix (SB too, I'm not good at this so I need helper to fix your mod)
thanks gero :3

Hinsvar

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Hinsvar 2014-10-24T07:38:14+00:00

Gero wrote:
Normal Collab

02:37:047 (2) - This circle in my opinion is pretty close to the HP bar so I recommend moving this a couple of grids down to avoid problems in the future. Done.
03:10:869 (1) - I know you're following the voice but would be nice if you change the rhythm for something like this, this could be fit better with the voice and the instrumental to be honest, you should try it. Uh, I thought my rhythm already looks like that? o.o

Thanks!

moe

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P A N

2,346 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

P A N 2014-10-25T05:20:12+00:00

updated hinsvar part, fix SB and lyrics file plus fixed mochi part.

KSHR

Global Moderator

1,668 posts

Joined July 2010

KSHR 2014-10-27T09:15:27+00:00

I'd like to fix hitsounds in my part. Fix the following instead of me, PAN!

02:08:576 - Add an extra green line with SC:2 at 70%.
02:09:722 - Remove a clap from this slider head.
02:10:487 - Reduce to 70%.
02:16:888 - ^

Thanks!

Also check them before pushing this map forward, Gero!

Fycho

Global Moderator

2,479 posts

Joined August 2012

Fycho 2014-10-28T03:18:21+00:00

shoot a star for Miuna ♥, hold on

P A N

2,346 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

P A N 2014-10-28T09:19:03+00:00

KSHR wrote:
I'd like to fix hitsounds in my part. Fix the following instead of me, PAN!

02:08:576 - Add an extra green line with SC:2 at 70%.
02:09:722 - Remove a clap from this slider head.
02:10:487 - Reduce to 70%.
02:16:888 - ^

Thanks!

Also check them before pushing this map forward, Gero!

ok!

Fycho wrote:
shoot a star for Miuna ♥, hold on

not for me? ;A; thank you ><

Gero

4,438 posts

Joined March 2012

Gero 2014-10-30T00:13:20+00:00

Recheck ~

General

Enable the epilepsy option because the map contains flashes/pulses and things like that.
You have an inconsistency in the preview time/kiai time so be carefully about it.
I guess you should to add "Kanari" to tags because him/her did the storyboard.
you have some unused image files in your folder so would be nice if you consider removing "1-fade.png" and "2-fade.png" because them are unnecessary.

Storyboard

Clean.

Normal Collab

Gero wrote:
Your settings seems more like an easy difficulty so maybe that can cause problems for the spread so would be better if you change it to something like this:

AR + 2
HP + 2
OD + 2

01:05:710 - You have 2 lines at the same time so consider removing one of these two to prevent problems in the future.
01:05:810 - Snap this one to 01:05:805 - wouldn't hurt.
01:38:194 - Dunno if this intentional but you've missed adding an clap here.

Hard Collab

Gero wrote:
OD - 1

01:02:652 (1,1,1,1) - I can't see a valid reason to do a spam of NC here, maybe you should try the same thing that you did at Insane.
02:15:646 (4) - Missing clap.
02:35:901 - What about to use an drum-whistle here?
03:17:175 (1) - Finish at the head of the slider? sounds too odd without it to be honest.

Insane

Clean.

that's all, call me back when you're done ~

P A N

2,346 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

P A N 2014-10-30T04:22:09+00:00

since mochi allow me to fix his part and the normal just minor stuff so I think it's fine to fix.
all fixed! thank you! >o<

Gero

4,438 posts

Joined March 2012

Gero 2014-10-30T07:52:59+00:00

Bubbled ~

P A N

2,346 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

P A N 2014-10-30T07:57:38+00:00

thank you!

Lanturn

osu! Alumni

3,912 posts

Joined March 2012

Lanturn 2014-11-05T00:00:54+00:00

ATTEMPT 3! 18 days late \o/

Gonna have to pop this due to ~~use of copyrighted Pocky material~~ way to many general changes that need to be fixed (new rule). I won't be able to rank this, only rebubble. Kiai changes / metadata field / Timing.

[General]

Artist: 小松未可子&石原夏織
Romanised: Komatsu Mikako & Ishihara Kaori

Tags: Everything that was removed from the artist field like Miuna and it's japanese kanji counterpart.
P_A_N - so your name is easily found. Consider PAN as well.
Nagiasu A lull in the Sea <-- english title

Kiai:
Insane:
02:05:232 - remove this kiai burst as it isn't in your collabs.

Normal:
01:56:156 - Kiai starts and ends at the same time Unrankable http://puu.sh/cDtXW.png

Hard:
01:17:939 - Burst not on the other diffs. Consider removing this.

You should sync all of the Kiai up since you were involved in all of the diffs. I'll have to recheck this after (check aibat after yourself if you want to make sure I didn't miss anything)

Timing:
The ending has incorrect bpm adjustments for the final spinner, and as such, the final spinner doesn't actually hit the final piano key. This is what I came up with but I highly suggest getting a double check as I'm not that great at timing. Don't forget to resnap the spinner and green lines afterwards.

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SB:
There is a spare .osb file in your SB folder? This needs to be deleted.
I feel like the collab name at 02:32:843 - needs it's opacity to be higher. It's almost impossible to see Hinsvar or Momochikun's name. (unless the fade out thing wasn't intentional, in that case it needs to be fixed) I highly suggest showing the names at all times and being easily visible.

[Normal Collab]
Xinely

00:17:557 (4) - Move this a few nudges down for DS / blankets
00:39:722 - to 00:51:952 - This normal whistles really don't fit in my opinion. They're definitely too loud first of all and are extremely surprising. Consider remaking the hitsounds closer to P A N's for this section on the other diffs or later on at 01:30:168 - | If you really want to keep the whistles, I highly suggest lowering the volume a bit at the very least.
01:25:391 (3) - Missing whistle?

KSHR

01:55:582 (2) - I highly suggest turning this into a circle placed at 01:55:773 - This lead-in-like 1/2 note is a bit awkward to play. The dominant note feels better at 01:55:773 - and it gives off the same effect the 1/2 slider does.

Hinsvar

02:32:843 (1) - You should really move this out of the corner. You could easily blanket it around the 02:33:608 (2) - or something and have it closer to the center. This makes it more noticable after the break.
03:26:347 (1) - Remove this whistle from the end of this spinner or swap it to a S (not SC:1) whistle. The kick sound is really out of place.

[Hard Collab]

P A N

01:46:219 (3) - This would look a lot nicer blanketed. I'm assuming this was suggested before, but even I think it would be better off with a blanket.
03:11:633 (3,4) - This would be better of swapped. Going Slider / Circle would fit better to match the background sounds. Also note that 03:11:824 - doesn't have much for notice besides that kick for hitsounds. If that's the case and you want to follow it, then I'd remove the whistle as it fits better following the guitar instead of the drum kick.
03:26:347 (1) - Remove this whistle from the end of this spinner or swap it to a S (not SC:1) whistle. The kick sound is really out of place.

Momochikun

01:08:767 (1) - Shouldn't this be a finish?
01:25:582 (1,2,3,4) - This flow/rhythm is extremely awkward to play. There definitely needs to be some sort of 2/1 space here. The (2) flow breaks, and feels extremely hidden. I can never seem to read it correctly, even when I'm expecting it. A suggestion is to delete (3) and move the (2) to around where 01:24:054 (1) - 's head is or something similar. This will make the judgement of the spacing here easier to read. or consider moving (4) (now (3)) around so the (2,4) can stack on each other.
02:58:257 (3,4) - Missing claps? This really feels odd without them.
03:03:799 (2,3) - Hitsound suggestion: try a clap on the tail of (2) (remove normal sampleset) and head of (3), and leave the whistle on the tail of (3)

A few patterns on this caught me off guard on the first couple plays, but I was able to adjust to them fine coming back for my third attempt at modding this lol.

[Insane]
Damn. As much as I want to give suggestsions, I don't really have any. Very nice difficulty.

Anyways. Give me a shout whenever for a rebubble. Sorry for the huge delay (and pretty lame mod if you ask me despite all that waiting)

P A N

2,346 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

P A N 2014-11-05T09:23:00+00:00

Lanturn wrote:
ATTEMPT 3! 18 days late \o/

Gonna have to pop this due to ~~use of copyrighted Pocky material~~ way to many general changes that need to be fixed (new rule). I won't be able to rank this, only rebubble. Kiai changes / metadata field / Timing.

[General]

Artist: 小松未可子&石原夏織 ok
Romanised: Komatsu Mikako & Ishihara Kaori ok

Tags: Everything that was removed from the artist field like Miuna and it's japanese kanji counterpart.
P_A_N - so your name is easily found. Consider PAN as well. ok
Nagiasu A lull in the Sea <-- english title add

Kiai:
Insane:
02:05:232 - remove this kiai burst as it isn't in your collabs. removed

Normal:
01:56:156 - Kiai starts and ends at the same time Unrankable http://puu.sh/cDtXW.png removed

Hard:
01:17:939 - Burst not on the other diffs. Consider removing this. removed

You should sync all of the Kiai up since you were involved in all of the diffs. I'll have to recheck this after (check aibat after yourself if you want to make sure I didn't miss anything)

Timing:
The ending has incorrect bpm adjustments for the final spinner, and as such, the final spinner doesn't actually hit the final piano key. This is what I came up with but I highly suggest getting a double check as I'm not that great at timing. Don't forget to resnap the spinner and green lines afterwards. added
206347,480,4,2,2,80,1,0
206587,705.882352941176,4,2,2,80,1,0
206939,882.352941176471,4,2,2,80,1,0
207380,789.473684210526,4,2,2,80,1,0
207774,857.142857142857,4,2,2,80,1,0
208202,967.741935483871,4,2,2,80,1,0
SB:
There is a spare .osb file in your SB folder? This needs to be deleted.
I feel like the collab name at 02:32:843 - needs it's opacity to be higher. It's almost impossible to see Hinsvar or Momochikun's name. (unless the fade out thing wasn't intentional, in that case it needs to be fixed) I highly suggest showing the names at all times and being easily visible. soon

[Hard Collab]

P A N
01:46:219 (3) - This would look a lot nicer blanketed. I'm assuming this was suggested before, but even I think it would be better off with a blanket. ok
03:11:633 (3,4) - This would be better of swapped. Going Slider / Circle would fit better to match the background sounds. Also note that 03:11:824 - doesn't have much for notice besides that kick for hitsounds. If that's the case and you want to follow it, then I'd remove the whistle as it fits better following the guitar instead of the drum kick. I don't know what the thing I follow called, maybe whistle? i follow the soft sound there.
03:26:347 (1) - Remove this whistle from the end of this spinner or swap it to a S (not SC:1) whistle. The kick sound is really out of place. ok
Anyways. Give me a shout whenever for a rebubble. Sorry for the huge delay (and pretty lame mod if you ask me despite all that waiting)

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2014-11-05T10:38:34+00:00

fixed all thanks lanturn~

~

osu file format v13

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ArtistUnicode:小松未可子&石原夏織
Creator:P A N
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Fycho

Global Moderator

2,479 posts

Joined August 2012

Fycho 2014-11-05T13:21:04+00:00

Well I am here to give some suggestions about insane diff (mainly hitsounds since the current hitsounds are not well set).
[Insane]

00:03:035 -80% volume is really noisy for the beginning, try 50% instead
00:15:264 -60% at here
Your volume setting is very unsuitable in the diff, try the setting below(just a reference, you can also set it by yourself):
SPOILER
1. 00:27:493 -50% ,
2. 00:39:340 -60%,
3. 00:39:722 -60%,
4. 01:04:181 -50%,
5. 01:17:939 60%,
6. 01:30:168 -60%,
7. 01:54:627 -50%,
8. 02:08:385 -70%,
9. 02:32:843 -60%,
10. 02:45:455 -40%,
11. 02:46:601 – 60%,
12. 02:52:716 -60%,
13. 02:58:449 -60%,
14. 03:14:117 -60%
00:05:327 (4) -00:06:856 (4) –remove whistles for consistency with 00:08:385 (4) –and 00:03:799 -?
00:17:557 (4) –remove whistle as it’s not a kick-drum in music, constant kick-drum hitsounds feel noisy imo.
00:20:901 (7) –Normal sampleset will sound better, and don’t forget reduce the volume of 00:20:805 (6,7,8) –
00:26:920 -30% volume is too low, I recommend you increase it to 40% and remove whistle at blue ticks00:27:015 (3,5,7) –
00:42:206 (5) –move to (95,289)? Flow will be better imo.
00:46:028 (2,3) –they are too curve somehow comparing with these 00:44:117 (1,6) –curved sliders, which leads to a bad looking/feeling when playing
00:58:066 (1) –how about to curving in the other direction? http://puu.sh/cyCUP/1ed4faa434.jpg, downbeat is at00:58:066 -, so changing anti-clock flow into clock flow plays much better.
01:05:901 (2,3) –how about adding clap on these two? It’s snare drums in music
01:10:296 (1) –hitsounds wrongly added. it should be whistle not clap, it’s a kick-drum.
01:17:939 –reduce volume to 60% of it I guess
01:56:347 (2,3) –clap on them
01:27:111 (1,3) –better to avoid the overlapping here
02:03:608 (5) –missing NC I guess.
02:05:232 –the kiai fountain is really not need here, referring to01:14:882 –
02:08:194 (9,10) –add clap on the two circle, they are snare drums, same as 02:08:003 -, btw don’t forget to reduce volume for 02:08:003 (7,8,9,10) –(50~60%)
02:19:085 (1)- add whistle on head then remove clap
02:19:468 (2) –add clap on head then remove whistle, if you listen music carelly you’ll find which kind of drum it is.
02:20:041 (4,5) –remove whistles and add claps.
02:20:423 (6,7) –remove the hitsound, but you can add finish at 02:20:614 (7) –then reduce volume to about 30%
02:51:187 (1) –whistle, not clap
03:08:958 (4) –remove clap, clap is overused here

and sorry as I am busy these days can't check the whole map, you can call lauturn for rebubble, I may do a full check later if I am free, good luck.

P A N

2,346 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

P A N 2014-11-05T16:47:30+00:00

alright!

@Lanturn : I'm not sure did you mean

because I haven't found .osb file in my SB folder. if yes, I will delete it.
completely fixed/updated hard, waiting for kshr and hinsvar for normal diff
I feel like the collab name at 02:32:843 - needs it's opacity to be higher. It's almost impossible to see Hinsvar or Momochikun's name. (unless the fade out thing wasn't intentional, in that case it needs to be fixed) I highly suggest showing the names at all times and being easily visible. ehh I don't see any problem here.

@Fycho : all fixed except some:

00:05:327 (4) -00:06:856 (4) –remove whistles for consistency with 00:08:385 (4) –and 00:03:799 -? I add whistle on two notes you mentioned instead.
00:58:066 (1) –how about to curving in the other direction? http://puu.sh/cyCUP/1ed4faa434.jpg, downbeat is at00:58:066 -, so changing anti-clock flow into clock flow plays much better. tried completely redo on that part.
01:10:296 (1) –hitsounds wrongly added. it should be whistle not clap, it’s a kick-drum. hmm I really can't tell you why I added clap there but I think it's really fit because I tried add whistle instead but it gave me less feeling than clap.

thanks guys! :3

KSHR

Global Moderator

1,668 posts

Joined July 2010

KSHR 2014-11-06T00:45:26+00:00

Lanturn wrote:
[Normal Collab]
KSHR
01:55:582 (2) - I highly suggest turning this into a circle placed at 01:55:773 - This lead-in-like 1/2 note is a bit awkward to play. The dominant note feels better at 01:55:773 - and it gives off the same effect the 1/2 slider does.
Indeed, fixed as you suggested!

Additionally, rearranged 01:50:041 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - .
Thanks, Lanturn!

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Lanturn

osu! Alumni

3,912 posts

Joined March 2012

Lanturn 2014-11-06T20:00:22+00:00

A few more general changes like kiai problems and an extra.osb

Good luck o/

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Tari

osu! Alumni

1,671 posts

Joined July 2012

Tari 2014-11-19T01:40:59+00:00

Yo yo yo

[Normal]

00:03:035 - Maybe its just me, but the hitsounds here sound really loud, they are way too stronger than the music here, which is just instrumental. I think you can come lower the volume down to at least 60%
00:17:557 (4) - Whistle at the start sounds nice to me.
01:25:391 (3) - You missed a clap at the end.
02:14:499 (1) - I feel the slider here looks rather strange, I know you are aiming for a curve here, but I think if you improve the curve this will look much much better.
02:40:487 (2) - Fix the stacking, so it stacks with 02:38:576 (4) - , and well makes the map look cleaner overall here, just my personal thought on how this should be.

[Hard]

00:26:920 (5) - I really feel its unnecessary for ending the slider here, there is still the instruments going a better transition would be easier shown by if you reversed this all way to blue tick.
00:58:066 (1) - The finish with the strong beat is so weird with stacking, I feel with such a strong beat, there should be some movement with the cursor. perhaps unstack and move it down from previous circle?
01:23:098 (2) - I felt this was a jump, could you place them farther to make them more readable?
01:26:729 (4) - Move closer? or make them overlap more, so I don't think this begins 1 tick later.
01:54:627 (1,2,3,4,5) - Better to curve it to the right more and center, even if it looks symmetrical. It will look nicer centered and placed in the right direction.
02:35:710 (1) - So weird to click here, would just remove the note here and add a note at the white tick at the end of this slider or downbeat. feels more natural.

[Insane]

00:43:735 (4) - I would like this to blanket slightly better, just saying. cause your mapping really focuses on blankets and such, just want to clean this part up.
01:06:283 (5,6) - For here, increasing SV changes, work way better, for 5 , increase to 1.20 and 6 increase to 1.40 , I feel you get a better effect here from the sliders if done so.
01:56:729 (5,6) - ^
01:07:429 (2) - Fix the stacking, so it better fits 01:05:710 (1) -
01:33:417 (2) - I would move this down more to make this slightly overlap, you can obviously make it more readable, if you do so.
02:52:716 (1) - Same ^
03:16:410 (4) - Why didn't you blanket this one? seems unusual to your style. same for 03:16:792 (5) -
02:20:614 (7) - I would add a new combo here, to fit better with the downbeat.

Rest looks fine.

The map is quite nice.

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P A N 2014-11-19T12:28:13+00:00

Tari wrote:
Yo yo yo

[Normal]

00:03:035 - Maybe its just me, but the hitsounds here sound really loud, they are way too stronger than the music here, which is just instrumental. I think you can come lower the volume down to at least 60%
00:17:557 (4) - Whistle at the start sounds nice to me.
01:25:391 (3) - You missed a clap at the end.
02:14:499 (1) - I feel the slider here looks rather strange, I know you are aiming for a curve here, but I think if you improve the curve this will look much much better.
02:40:487 (2) - Fix the stacking, so it stacks with 02:38:576 (4) - , and well makes the map look cleaner overall here, just my personal thought on how this should be.
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01:54:627 (1,2,3,4,5) - Better to curve it to the right more and center, even if it looks symmetrical. It will look nicer centered and placed in the right direction. mhmm I kind of not understand here but I think current pattern doesn't hurt much as you said, already symmetry.
[Insane]

01:06:283 (5,6) - For here, increasing SV changes, work way better, for 5 , increase to 1.20 and 6 increase to 1.40 , I feel you get a better effect here from the sliders if done so. I think if hear it carefully, the vocal is not stronger imo but if on 01:07:047 (1) , yes. but it is calm song so I think keep SV consistent is better.
01:56:729 (5,6) - ^ same

Rest looks fine.

The map is quite nice.

hard,insane all fixed except mod I mentioned. normal will fix soon!

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