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Komatsu Mikako & Ishihara Kaori - Dazzling

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Fycho
Global Moderator
2,480 posts
Joined August 2012
Fycho
shoot a star for Miuna ♥, hold on
P A N
2,349 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
P A N

KSHR wrote:

I'd like to fix hitsounds in my part. Fix the following instead of me, PAN!

  1. 02:08:576 - Add an extra green line with SC:2 at 70%.
  2. 02:09:722 - Remove a clap from this slider head.
  3. 02:10:487 - Reduce to 70%.
  4. 02:16:888 - ^

Thanks!


Also check them before pushing this map forward, Gero!
ok!

Fycho wrote:

shoot a star for Miuna ♥, hold on
not for me? ;A; thank you ><
Gero
4,438 posts
Joined March 2012
Gero
Recheck ~

General

  1. Enable the epilepsy option because the map contains flashes/pulses and things like that.
  2. You have an inconsistency in the preview time/kiai time so be carefully about it.
  3. I guess you should to add "Kanari" to tags because him/her did the storyboard.
  4. you have some unused image files in your folder so would be nice if you consider removing "1-fade.png" and "2-fade.png" because them are unnecessary.
Storyboard

  1. Clean.
Normal Collab

Gero wrote:

Your settings seems more like an easy difficulty so maybe that can cause problems for the spread so would be better if you change it to something like this:

AR + 2
HP + 2
OD + 2
  1. 01:05:710 - You have 2 lines at the same time so consider removing one of these two to prevent problems in the future.
  2. 01:05:810 - Snap this one to 01:05:805 - wouldn't hurt.
  3. 01:38:194 - Dunno if this intentional but you've missed adding an clap here.
Hard Collab

Gero wrote:

OD - 1
  1. 01:02:652 (1,1,1,1) - I can't see a valid reason to do a spam of NC here, maybe you should try the same thing that you did at Insane.
  2. 02:15:646 (4) - Missing clap.
  3. 02:35:901 - What about to use an drum-whistle here?
  4. 03:17:175 (1) - Finish at the head of the slider? sounds too odd without it to be honest.
Insane

  1. Clean.
that's all, call me back when you're done ~
P A N
2,349 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
P A N
since mochi allow me to fix his part and the normal just minor stuff so I think it's fine to fix.
all fixed! thank you! >o<
Gero
4,438 posts
Joined March 2012
Gero
Bubbled ~
P A N
2,349 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
P A N
thank you!
Lanturn
osu! Alumni
3,912 posts
Joined March 2012
Lanturn
ATTEMPT 3! 18 days late \o/

Gonna have to pop this due to use of copyrighted Pocky material way to many general changes that need to be fixed (new rule). I won't be able to rank this, only rebubble. Kiai changes / metadata field / Timing.

[General]

Artist: 小松未可子&石原夏織
Romanised: Komatsu Mikako & Ishihara Kaori

Tags: Everything that was removed from the artist field like Miuna and it's japanese kanji counterpart.
P_A_N - so your name is easily found. Consider PAN as well.
Nagiasu A lull in the Sea <-- english title

Kiai:
Insane:
02:05:232 - remove this kiai burst as it isn't in your collabs.

Normal:
01:56:156 - Kiai starts and ends at the same time Unrankable http://puu.sh/cDtXW.png

Hard:
01:17:939 - Burst not on the other diffs. Consider removing this.

You should sync all of the Kiai up since you were involved in all of the diffs. I'll have to recheck this after (check aibat after yourself if you want to make sure I didn't miss anything)

Timing:
The ending has incorrect bpm adjustments for the final spinner, and as such, the final spinner doesn't actually hit the final piano key. This is what I came up with but I highly suggest getting a double check as I'm not that great at timing. Don't forget to resnap the spinner and green lines afterwards.
206347,480,4,2,2,80,1,0
206587,705.882352941176,4,2,2,80,1,0
206939,882.352941176471,4,2,2,80,1,0
207380,789.473684210526,4,2,2,80,1,0
207774,857.142857142857,4,2,2,80,1,0
208202,967.741935483871,4,2,2,80,1,0


SB:
There is a spare .osb file in your SB folder? This needs to be deleted.
I feel like the collab name at 02:32:843 - needs it's opacity to be higher. It's almost impossible to see Hinsvar or Momochikun's name. (unless the fade out thing wasn't intentional, in that case it needs to be fixed) I highly suggest showing the names at all times and being easily visible.

[Normal Collab]
Xinely
  1. 00:17:557 (4) - Move this a few nudges down for DS / blankets
  2. 00:39:722 - to 00:51:952 - This normal whistles really don't fit in my opinion. They're definitely too loud first of all and are extremely surprising. Consider remaking the hitsounds closer to P A N's for this section on the other diffs or later on at 01:30:168 - | If you really want to keep the whistles, I highly suggest lowering the volume a bit at the very least.
  3. 01:25:391 (3) - Missing whistle?
KSHR
  1. 01:55:582 (2) - I highly suggest turning this into a circle placed at 01:55:773 - This lead-in-like 1/2 note is a bit awkward to play. The dominant note feels better at 01:55:773 - and it gives off the same effect the 1/2 slider does.
Hinsvar
  1. 02:32:843 (1) - You should really move this out of the corner. You could easily blanket it around the 02:33:608 (2) - or something and have it closer to the center. This makes it more noticable after the break.
  2. 03:26:347 (1) - Remove this whistle from the end of this spinner or swap it to a S (not SC:1) whistle. The kick sound is really out of place.

[Hard Collab]

P A N
  1. 01:46:219 (3) - This would look a lot nicer blanketed. I'm assuming this was suggested before, but even I think it would be better off with a blanket.
  2. 03:11:633 (3,4) - This would be better of swapped. Going Slider / Circle would fit better to match the background sounds. Also note that 03:11:824 - doesn't have much for notice besides that kick for hitsounds. If that's the case and you want to follow it, then I'd remove the whistle as it fits better following the guitar instead of the drum kick.
  3. 03:26:347 (1) - Remove this whistle from the end of this spinner or swap it to a S (not SC:1) whistle. The kick sound is really out of place.
Momochikun
  1. 01:08:767 (1) - Shouldn't this be a finish?
  2. 01:25:582 (1,2,3,4) - This flow/rhythm is extremely awkward to play. There definitely needs to be some sort of 2/1 space here. The (2) flow breaks, and feels extremely hidden. I can never seem to read it correctly, even when I'm expecting it. A suggestion is to delete (3) and move the (2) to around where 01:24:054 (1) - 's head is or something similar. This will make the judgement of the spacing here easier to read. or consider moving (4) (now (3)) around so the (2,4) can stack on each other.
  3. 02:58:257 (3,4) - Missing claps? This really feels odd without them.
  4. 03:03:799 (2,3) - Hitsound suggestion: try a clap on the tail of (2) (remove normal sampleset) and head of (3), and leave the whistle on the tail of (3)
A few patterns on this caught me off guard on the first couple plays, but I was able to adjust to them fine coming back for my third attempt at modding this lol.

[Insane]
Damn. As much as I want to give suggestsions, I don't really have any. Very nice difficulty.


Anyways. Give me a shout whenever for a rebubble. Sorry for the huge delay (and pretty lame mod if you ask me despite all that waiting)
P A N
2,349 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
P A N

Lanturn wrote:

ATTEMPT 3! 18 days late \o/

Gonna have to pop this due to use of copyrighted Pocky material way to many general changes that need to be fixed (new rule). I won't be able to rank this, only rebubble. Kiai changes / metadata field / Timing.

[General]

Artist: 小松未可子&石原夏織 ok
Romanised: Komatsu Mikako & Ishihara Kaori ok

Tags: Everything that was removed from the artist field like Miuna and it's japanese kanji counterpart.
P_A_N - so your name is easily found. Consider PAN as well. ok
Nagiasu A lull in the Sea <-- english title add

Kiai:
Insane:
02:05:232 - remove this kiai burst as it isn't in your collabs. removed

Normal:
01:56:156 - Kiai starts and ends at the same time Unrankable http://puu.sh/cDtXW.png removed

Hard:
01:17:939 - Burst not on the other diffs. Consider removing this. removed

You should sync all of the Kiai up since you were involved in all of the diffs. I'll have to recheck this after (check aibat after yourself if you want to make sure I didn't miss anything)

Timing:
The ending has incorrect bpm adjustments for the final spinner, and as such, the final spinner doesn't actually hit the final piano key. This is what I came up with but I highly suggest getting a double check as I'm not that great at timing. Don't forget to resnap the spinner and green lines afterwards. added
206347,480,4,2,2,80,1,0
206587,705.882352941176,4,2,2,80,1,0
206939,882.352941176471,4,2,2,80,1,0
207380,789.473684210526,4,2,2,80,1,0
207774,857.142857142857,4,2,2,80,1,0
208202,967.741935483871,4,2,2,80,1,0


SB:
There is a spare .osb file in your SB folder? This needs to be deleted.
I feel like the collab name at 02:32:843 - needs it's opacity to be higher. It's almost impossible to see Hinsvar or Momochikun's name. (unless the fade out thing wasn't intentional, in that case it needs to be fixed) I highly suggest showing the names at all times and being easily visible. soon

[Hard Collab]

P A N
  1. 01:46:219 (3) - This would look a lot nicer blanketed. I'm assuming this was suggested before, but even I think it would be better off with a blanket. ok
  2. 03:11:633 (3,4) - This would be better of swapped. Going Slider / Circle would fit better to match the background sounds. Also note that 03:11:824 - doesn't have much for notice besides that kick for hitsounds. If that's the case and you want to follow it, then I'd remove the whistle as it fits better following the guitar instead of the drum kick. I don't know what the thing I follow called, maybe whistle? i follow the soft sound there.
  3. 03:26:347 (1) - Remove this whistle from the end of this spinner or swap it to a S (not SC:1) whistle. The kick sound is really out of place. ok
Anyways. Give me a shout whenever for a rebubble. Sorry for the huge delay (and pretty lame mod if you ask me despite all that waiting)
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Xinely
fixed all thanks lanturn~

~
osu file format v13

[General]
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Countdown: 0
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[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Dazzling
TitleUnicode:Dazzling
Artist:Komatsu Mikako & Ishihara Kaori
ArtistUnicode:小松未可子&石原夏織
Creator:P A N
Version:Normal Collab
Source:凪のあすから
Tags:xinely kshr xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx hinsvar momochikun nagi no asukara kanari Komatsu Mikako & Ishihara Kaori p_a_n
BeatmapID:394023
BeatmapSetID:160595

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OverallDifficulty:3
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SliderTickRate:1

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Fycho
Global Moderator
2,480 posts
Joined August 2012
Fycho
Well I am here to give some suggestions about insane diff (mainly hitsounds since the current hitsounds are not well set).
[Insane]
  1. 00:03:035 -80% volume is really noisy for the beginning, try 50% instead
  2. 00:15:264 -60% at here
  3. Your volume setting is very unsuitable in the diff, try the setting below(just a reference, you can also set it by yourself):
    SPOILER
    1. 00:27:493 -50% ,
    2. 00:39:340 -60%,
    3. 00:39:722 -60%,
    4. 01:04:181 -50%,
    5. 01:17:939 60%,
    6. 01:30:168 -60%,
    7. 01:54:627 -50%,
    8. 02:08:385 -70%,
    9. 02:32:843 -60%,
    10. 02:45:455 -40%,
    11. 02:46:601 – 60%,
    12. 02:52:716 -60%,
    13. 02:58:449 -60%,
    14. 03:14:117 -60%
  4. 00:05:327 (4) -00:06:856 (4) –remove whistles for consistency with 00:08:385 (4) –and 00:03:799 -?
  5. 00:17:557 (4) –remove whistle as it’s not a kick-drum in music, constant kick-drum hitsounds feel noisy imo.
  6. 00:20:901 (7) –Normal sampleset will sound better, and don’t forget reduce the volume of 00:20:805 (6,7,8) –
  7. 00:26:920 -30% volume is too low, I recommend you increase it to 40% and remove whistle at blue ticks00:27:015 (3,5,7) –
  8. 00:42:206 (5) –move to (95,289)? Flow will be better imo.
  9. 00:46:028 (2,3) –they are too curve somehow comparing with these 00:44:117 (1,6) –curved sliders, which leads to a bad looking/feeling when playing
  10. 00:58:066 (1) –how about to curving in the other direction? http://puu.sh/cyCUP/1ed4faa434.jpg, downbeat is at00:58:066 -, so changing anti-clock flow into clock flow plays much better.
  11. 01:05:901 (2,3) –how about adding clap on these two? It’s snare drums in music
  12. 01:10:296 (1) –hitsounds wrongly added. it should be whistle not clap, it’s a kick-drum.
  13. 01:17:939 –reduce volume to 60% of it I guess
  14. 01:56:347 (2,3) –clap on them
  15. 01:27:111 (1,3) –better to avoid the overlapping here
  16. 02:03:608 (5) –missing NC I guess.
  17. 02:05:232 –the kiai fountain is really not need here, referring to01:14:882 –
  18. 02:08:194 (9,10) –add clap on the two circle, they are snare drums, same as 02:08:003 -, btw don’t forget to reduce volume for 02:08:003 (7,8,9,10) –(50~60%)
  19. 02:19:085 (1)- add whistle on head then remove clap
  20. 02:19:468 (2) –add clap on head then remove whistle, if you listen music carelly you’ll find which kind of drum it is.
  21. 02:20:041 (4,5) –remove whistles and add claps.
  22. 02:20:423 (6,7) –remove the hitsound, but you can add finish at 02:20:614 (7) –then reduce volume to about 30%
  23. 02:51:187 (1) –whistle, not clap
  24. 03:08:958 (4) –remove clap, clap is overused here
and sorry as I am busy these days can't check the whole map, you can call lauturn for rebubble, I may do a full check later if I am free, good luck.
P A N
2,349 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
P A N
alright!

@Lanturn : I'm not sure did you mean
because I haven't found .osb file in my SB folder. if yes, I will delete it.
completely fixed/updated hard, waiting for kshr and hinsvar for normal diff
I feel like the collab name at 02:32:843 - needs it's opacity to be higher. It's almost impossible to see Hinsvar or Momochikun's name. (unless the fade out thing wasn't intentional, in that case it needs to be fixed) I highly suggest showing the names at all times and being easily visible. ehh I don't see any problem here.

@Fycho : all fixed except some:
  1. 00:05:327 (4) -00:06:856 (4) –remove whistles for consistency with 00:08:385 (4) –and 00:03:799 -? I add whistle on two notes you mentioned instead.
  2. 00:58:066 (1) –how about to curving in the other direction? http://puu.sh/cyCUP/1ed4faa434.jpg, downbeat is at00:58:066 -, so changing anti-clock flow into clock flow plays much better. tried completely redo on that part.
  3. 01:10:296 (1) –hitsounds wrongly added. it should be whistle not clap, it’s a kick-drum. hmm I really can't tell you why I added clap there but I think it's really fit because I tried add whistle instead but it gave me less feeling than clap.
thanks guys! :3
KSHR
Global Moderator
1,668 posts
Joined July 2010
KSHR

Lanturn wrote:

[Normal Collab]
KSHR
  1. 01:55:582 (2) - I highly suggest turning this into a circle placed at 01:55:773 - This lead-in-like 1/2 note is a bit awkward to play. The dominant note feels better at 01:55:773 - and it gives off the same effect the 1/2 slider does.
Indeed, fixed as you suggested!
Additionally, rearranged 01:50:041 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - .
Thanks, Lanturn!


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256,184,72780,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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416,359,137175,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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316,264,178449,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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Lanturn
osu! Alumni
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Lanturn
A few more general changes like kiai problems and an extra.osb

Good luck o/

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Tari
osu! Alumni
1,671 posts
Joined July 2012
Tari
Yo yo yo


[Normal]

  1. 00:03:035 - Maybe its just me, but the hitsounds here sound really loud, they are way too stronger than the music here, which is just instrumental. I think you can come lower the volume down to at least 60%
  2. 00:17:557 (4) - Whistle at the start sounds nice to me.
  3. 01:25:391 (3) - You missed a clap at the end.
  4. 02:14:499 (1) - I feel the slider here looks rather strange, I know you are aiming for a curve here, but I think if you improve the curve this will look much much better.
  5. 02:40:487 (2) - Fix the stacking, so it stacks with 02:38:576 (4) - , and well makes the map look cleaner overall here, just my personal thought on how this should be.
[Hard]

  1. 00:26:920 (5) - I really feel its unnecessary for ending the slider here, there is still the instruments going a better transition would be easier shown by if you reversed this all way to blue tick.
  2. 00:58:066 (1) - The finish with the strong beat is so weird with stacking, I feel with such a strong beat, there should be some movement with the cursor. perhaps unstack and move it down from previous circle?
  3. 01:23:098 (2) - I felt this was a jump, could you place them farther to make them more readable?
  4. 01:26:729 (4) - Move closer? or make them overlap more, so I don't think this begins 1 tick later.
  5. 01:54:627 (1,2,3,4,5) - Better to curve it to the right more and center, even if it looks symmetrical. It will look nicer centered and placed in the right direction.
  6. 02:35:710 (1) - So weird to click here, would just remove the note here and add a note at the white tick at the end of this slider or downbeat. feels more natural.
[Insane]

  1. 00:43:735 (4) - I would like this to blanket slightly better, just saying. cause your mapping really focuses on blankets and such, just want to clean this part up.
  2. 01:06:283 (5,6) - For here, increasing SV changes, work way better, for 5 , increase to 1.20 and 6 increase to 1.40 , I feel you get a better effect here from the sliders if done so.
  3. 01:56:729 (5,6) - ^
  4. 01:07:429 (2) - Fix the stacking, so it better fits 01:05:710 (1) -
  5. 01:33:417 (2) - I would move this down more to make this slightly overlap, you can obviously make it more readable, if you do so.
  6. 02:52:716 (1) - Same ^
  7. 03:16:410 (4) - Why didn't you blanket this one? seems unusual to your style. same for 03:16:792 (5) -
  8. 02:20:614 (7) - I would add a new combo here, to fit better with the downbeat.
Rest looks fine.

The map is quite nice.
P A N
2,349 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
P A N

Tari wrote:

Yo yo yo


[Normal]

  1. 00:03:035 - Maybe its just me, but the hitsounds here sound really loud, they are way too stronger than the music here, which is just instrumental. I think you can come lower the volume down to at least 60%
  2. 00:17:557 (4) - Whistle at the start sounds nice to me.
  3. 01:25:391 (3) - You missed a clap at the end.
  4. 02:14:499 (1) - I feel the slider here looks rather strange, I know you are aiming for a curve here, but I think if you improve the curve this will look much much better.
  5. 02:40:487 (2) - Fix the stacking, so it stacks with 02:38:576 (4) - , and well makes the map look cleaner overall here, just my personal thought on how this should be.
[Hard]

  1. 01:54:627 (1,2,3,4,5) - Better to curve it to the right more and center, even if it looks symmetrical. It will look nicer centered and placed in the right direction. mhmm I kind of not understand here but I think current pattern doesn't hurt much as you said, already symmetry.
[Insane]

  1. 01:06:283 (5,6) - For here, increasing SV changes, work way better, for 5 , increase to 1.20 and 6 increase to 1.40 , I feel you get a better effect here from the sliders if done so. I think if hear it carefully, the vocal is not stronger imo but if on 01:07:047 (1) , yes. but it is calm song so I think keep SV consistent is better.
  2. 01:56:729 (5,6) - ^ same

Rest looks fine.

The map is quite nice.
hard,insane all fixed except mod I mentioned. normal will fix soon!
Hinsvar
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Tari wrote:

[Normal]

  1. 02:40:487 (2) - Fix the stacking, so it stacks with 02:38:576 (4) - , and well makes the map look cleaner overall here, just my personal thought on how this should be.
Try playing this part. You'll notice that (4) already disappears fully even before (2) appears. Thus, it won't make a difference, and I'm sure we're supposed to judge maps based on how the objects are while playing instead of when we look at the editor :P

Just my two cents!
KSHR
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  1. 02:14:499 (1) - I feel the slider here looks rather strange, I know you are aiming for a curve here, but I think if you improve the curve this will look much much better.
    Fixed and sent PAN a forum pm with the fixed code.

Thanks!
P A N
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alright! thank you for you all guys to fix mod and tari :3 updated and ready to go!
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go
Asagi
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Soon™

I hope that tomorrow thingy doesnt happen again
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Ahhh almost time! Looking forward to seeing this ranked :3
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Remove the extra .osb file.
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Dazzling map!

Have this!
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Congratz!
P A N
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thank you <3
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wow
nice map
wow
gratz
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yey gz
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Congratz!+
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Gratz!!
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Congrats! Awesome mapset PAN and friends :3
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Hi there, quick unrank because of the spinner in normal - the volume is messed up, and this can be fixed really easily. (Either use a constant or decreasing volume, but not such spikes)

Other mentionable things

- Are so many KIAI-flashes needed? Some are okay, but it's quite a bunch you've got there.
- We suggest you to raise the OD in all maps (+0.5 on normal, +1 on hard, +1 on insane) to get better spread settings.
- Remove the eptileptic warning, it's not really needed.

Rest is fine, cool mapset actually!

Lanturn
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Hey PAN, sorry about completely missing the timing at the end there.

The main problem with the spinner in Normal is that you have green lines overlapping with the red ones. So the volume constantly jumps between 20/30% to 80%



The best solution is to get rid of the green lines selected in the picture above completely and if you want, you can slightly lower the red timing volume like Irre is saying or just leave it at 80% like Hard/Insane. If you do make changes to the red timing volume, then please do it on all diffs as well.


Sorry for the inconvenience :(
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That was unexpected

#rekt
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Ohhhhh orz
P A N
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mhmm I think the kial fountain is fit with music so I don't want to reduce them.
about OD, imo I think they are already fit with calm music (3,5,7) or it maybe don't fit somehow? >_> I need more opinion.
other are fixed, thank you Irre.
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pan #rekt
Natsu
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We did a small IRC

  1. raised OD in every diff, Normal 3.5, Hard 6 and Insane 8
  2. We removed some kiai flash that was overdone
  3. some NC in hard diff for consistency
  4. and we fixed some nazi things


SPOILER
2014-11-22 23:16 P A N: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/419451 Komatsu Mikako & Ishihara Kaori - Dazzling]
2014-11-22 23:16 P A N: XD
2014-11-22 23:16 Natsu: dling hahah
2014-11-22 23:17 P A N: hehe
2014-11-22 23:27 Natsu: ah you wanted why the od have to be up right?
2014-11-22 23:30 P A N: yep
2014-11-22 23:30 P A N: why OD 8
2014-11-22 23:31 P A N: isn't it already hard with hr :X
2014-11-22 23:31 Natsu: since you are using AR9 the hit window of OD7 doesn't fit the ar
2014-11-22 23:31 Natsu: AR -2 respect to OD is bad, that's why AR9 - OD8 is nice
2014-11-22 23:32 P A N: i get it
2014-11-22 23:33 P A N: 8 6 4 then
2014-11-22 23:34 P A N: or 4 is too much for normal >_>
2014-11-22 23:34 Natsu: yes!!! 4 is common for normal diff lol
2014-11-22 23:34 Natsu: try 3.5 if you feel is better
2014-11-22 23:34 Natsu: that's what Irre suggest as well
2014-11-22 23:35 P A N: if you say 4 is common for normal diff
2014-11-22 23:35 P A N: it's ok then
2014-11-22 23:35 Natsu: use 3.5 to be safe 
2014-11-22 23:36 P A N: what about 7.5 5.5 3.5
2014-11-22 23:37 Natsu: 3.5 6 8, od8 more pp ljk
2014-11-22 23:38 Natsu: about the kiai flash there are some that doesn't fit and feel overdone :l
2014-11-22 23:38 P A N: which?
2014-11-22 23:38 Natsu: I can make some suggestions tho
2014-11-22 23:39 Natsu: 01:05:710 (1) -  this one is great but
2014-11-22 23:39 Natsu: 01:07:047 (3) -  this one doesn't
2014-11-22 23:39 Natsu: 01:57:493 (3) -  remove this one as well
2014-11-22 23:40 Natsu: 02:47:939 (3) -  ^
2014-11-22 23:40 Natsu: normal diff ^
2014-11-22 23:45 P A N: alright
2014-11-22 23:45 P A N: updated
2014-11-22 23:45 Natsu: wait let me check hard and insane, normal diff seems really nice <3
2014-11-22 23:46 Natsu: btw did u fixed the spinner thing?
2014-11-22 23:46 P A N: yep
2014-11-22 23:46 P A N: the volume on spinner
2014-11-22 23:46 Natsu: kk
2014-11-22 23:52 Natsu: wait me a bit I'll post in a moment and rebubbled it
2014-11-22 23:53 P A N: yeaa :3
2014-11-22 23:53 Natsu: need to pvp first lol
2014-11-22 23:53 P A N: pvp?
2014-11-22 23:53 P A N: D:
2014-11-22 23:54 Natsu: player vs player in some rpg
2014-11-22 23:54 P A N: lol i see
2014-11-23 00:35 Natsu: k back lol
2014-11-23 00:41 Natsu: pan xD!!!!!
2014-11-23 00:41 P A N: yea hi
2014-11-23 00:41 P A N: XD
2014-11-23 00:41 Natsu: 00:25:009 (2,3) -  fix this blanket in hard lol, is really off hahaha
2014-11-23 00:43 P A N: :'(
2014-11-23 00:43 P A N: fixed
2014-11-23 00:44 Natsu: 01:05:327 (1,2) - swap NC like the other diffs?
2014-11-23 00:44 Natsu: 01:05:710 (2) -  make more sense having one here with the stanza
2014-11-23 00:44 P A N: fixed
2014-11-23 00:45 Natsu: kawaii
2014-11-23 00:54 Natsu: 01:21:952 (5,7) -  blanket pls this is not kawaii
2014-11-23 00:55 P A N: fixed
2014-11-23 00:55 Natsu: 01:32:843 (4,1) -  stack this properly, god naztu is nazi :D
2014-11-23 00:56 P A N: :D
2014-11-23 00:57 Natsu: 02:36:665 (1) -  why this NC?
2014-11-23 00:58 P A N: I love it
2014-11-23 00:58 P A N: well, I think it fit with vocal
2014-11-23 00:58 P A N: lol
2014-11-23 00:59 Natsu: if u love it keep it lol, and love me too
2014-11-23 00:59 P A N: ok i love you
2014-11-23 00:59 Natsu: wait need to check general stuff
2014-11-23 01:00 Natsu: k upload it
2014-11-23 01:03 P A N: k

GL with Re-Rank
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thanks :3
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We fixed somes Rythm/pattern/NC through an IRC

Log
2014-11-23 09:24 Umi: hello PAN 
2014-11-23 09:54 P A N: hello
2014-11-23 09:54 P A N: HELLOOOO
2014-11-23 09:54 Umi: oh u there finally
2014-11-23 09:54 P A N: yes ><
2014-11-23 09:55 Umi: well having my breakfast first, then what about an irc after ? :3
2014-11-23 09:55 P A N: okkk
2014-11-23 09:55 Umi: i'll call u back
2014-11-23 09:55 P A N: ok thank you
2014-11-23 10:02 Umi: k rdy ? 
2014-11-23 10:03 P A N: so fast
2014-11-23 10:03 Umi: yeah lol it was already ready, just had to eat it :p
2014-11-23 10:03 Umi: also i'm leaving soon
2014-11-23 10:03 Umi: that's why
2014-11-23 10:03 P A N: I SEE
2014-11-23 10:03 Umi: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/394023 Komatsu Mikako & Ishihara Kaori - Dazzling [Normal Collab]]
2014-11-23 10:04 Umi: 00:04:563 (1) - and 00:07:620 (1) - delete this both NC not needed
2014-11-23 10:05 P A N: ok
2014-11-23 10:06 Umi: 00:47:175 (2) - whistle on the end ?
2014-11-23 10:06 P A N: not too often right?
2014-11-23 10:07 Umi: yeah it really need something here imo
2014-11-23 10:07 Umi: but*
2014-11-23 10:07 Umi: 01:30:168 - also for this part i'd reduce the volum to 60%
2014-11-23 10:08 Umi: clap is too noisy
2014-11-23 10:09 P A N: ok
2014-11-23 10:10 Umi: 02:41:060 (3,4) - how about stack, it'll look and play better 
2014-11-23 10:10 P A N: mhmm
2014-11-23 10:10 P A N: it easiest diff so
2014-11-23 10:10 P A N: I don't want to stack
2014-11-23 10:10 P A N: >_>
2014-11-23 10:10 Umi: well k 
2014-11-23 10:11 Umi: then why 03:10:869 (5,1) -  ;p
2014-11-23 10:11 Umi: so better to unstack this for the consistency
2014-11-23 10:12 P A N: mhmmm
2014-11-23 10:14 P A N: I will ask hinsvar
2014-11-23 10:14 P A N: about that
2014-11-23 10:14 Umi: k do it
2014-11-23 10:14 Umi: i'm leaving in 20min 
2014-11-23 10:23 Umi: ok so let's continue 
2014-11-23 10:23 Umi: hinsvar told me that he unstack the last one
2014-11-23 10:23 P A N: oh lol
2014-11-23 10:23 P A N: he told me to fix too
2014-11-23 10:24 Umi: next is 
2014-11-23 10:24 Umi: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/396695 Komatsu Mikako & Ishihara Kaori - Dazzling [Hard Collab]]
2014-11-23 10:24 Umi: 00:09:913 (3,1) - blanket is kinda massed here 
2014-11-23 10:24 Umi: try to do like this more or less
2014-11-23 10:25 Umi: http://puu.sh/d23xO/fe9e647287.jpg
2014-11-23 10:25 Umi: the (1) less curved
2014-11-23 10:27 P A N: ok
2014-11-23 10:28 Umi: 00:26:538 (3,4) - move this 2 note to x:436,y:132
2014-11-23 10:28 Umi: and then ctrl g on 00:26:920 (5) - so the end of this slider go toward 00:27:493 (1) - 
2014-11-23 10:30 P A N: oh yea nice
2014-11-23 10:30 P A N: 0.0
2014-11-23 10:30 Umi: :3
2014-11-23 10:30 Umi: 00:33:226 (3) - 
2014-11-23 10:30 Umi: how about ctrl g on this 
2014-11-23 10:30 Umi: it'll flow better don't u think ?
2014-11-23 10:32 P A N: mhmm sec
2014-11-23 10:32 P A N: trying
2014-11-23 10:33 P A N: yea fixed
2014-11-23 10:33 P A N: for cyambal too
2014-11-23 10:33 Umi: k 
2014-11-23 10:33 Umi: yup it give a little jump
2014-11-23 10:33 Umi: rpetty nice
2014-11-23 10:33 Umi: pretty*
2014-11-23 10:34 Umi: 00:37:812 (3,4,1) - well it play nice but isn't thoses jump too big ? 
2014-11-23 10:34 Umi: let me try a pattern
2014-11-23 10:35 P A N: ok
2014-11-23 10:35 P A N: i agreed but I can't think out of pattern
2014-11-23 10:35 P A N: lol
2014-11-23 10:35 Umi: how about this 
2014-11-23 10:35 Umi: first http://puu.sh/d23Vt/8ce42d064c.jpg
2014-11-23 10:36 Umi: 00:36:665 (1) -  is stack with 00:35:136 (1) - 
2014-11-23 10:36 Umi: and then 
2014-11-23 10:36 Umi: http://puu.sh/d23WU/acb922e148.jpg
2014-11-23 10:38 Umi: u have to replace a bit 00:38:767 (2,3) - 
2014-11-23 10:40 P A N: mhmm
2014-11-23 10:40 P A N: confuse ahaha
2014-11-23 10:40 P A N: code please if possible? >_>
2014-11-23 10:40 Umi: yeah sure
2014-11-23 10:42 Umi: http://puu.sh/d24bX/9cab0d139a.txt
2014-11-23 10:42 Umi: well sadly i have to go
2014-11-23 10:43 Umi: i'll finish this tonight if you're here see if u liek the pattern
2014-11-23 10:43 P A N: ;w;
2014-11-23 10:43 P A N: c u soon
2014-11-23 10:43 P A N: ><
2014-11-23 10:44 Umi: yup see ya 
2014-11-23 21:11 Umi: ok i'm back, poke when you're here o/
2014-11-23 21:12 P A N: ACTION poke poke
2014-11-23 21:12 Umi: oh okay
2014-11-23 21:12 Umi: then let's finish this
2014-11-23 21:12 P A N: okkkk
2014-11-23 21:12 P A N: Im surprise that I can stay till you are back ahaha
2014-11-23 21:13 P A N: I just gonna sleep but I watch something so not yet
2014-11-23 21:13 P A N: im lucky
2014-11-23 21:13 Umi: lol
2014-11-23 21:13 Umi: ok so, did u use the code that i gave u ?
2014-11-23 21:13 P A N: sure
2014-11-23 21:13 Umi: good
2014-11-23 21:14 Umi: 00:39:722 - 
2014-11-23 21:14 Umi: same reflexion as normal diff 
2014-11-23 21:14 Umi: use 60% volum
2014-11-23 21:14 P A N: ok
2014-11-23 21:15 P A N: 00:51:952 (1) -
2014-11-23 21:15 P A N: woops
2014-11-23 21:15 P A N: finish? XD
2014-11-23 21:15 Umi: well yeah why not but with low volum
2014-11-23 21:15 Umi: like 40% ~
2014-11-23 21:16 P A N: ok
2014-11-23 21:16 Umi: 01:00:933 (8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 
2014-11-23 21:16 Umi: for this whole part i'll give u another code
2014-11-23 21:16 Umi: see if u like it 
2014-11-23 21:16 Umi: ACTION working on right now
2014-11-23 21:17 P A N: ><
2014-11-23 21:17 P A N: btw I just fixed on 01:42:398 (1) - too
2014-11-23 21:17 P A N: 60% and finish stuff
2014-11-23 21:17 Umi: k =w=b
2014-11-23 21:21 Umi: here we go http://puu.sh/d2GqM/230afe83d2.txt
2014-11-23 21:25 P A N: mhmmm
2014-11-23 21:25 Umi: i was kinda disapointed that u didn't do a star's pattern
2014-11-23 21:26 P A N: LOL
2014-11-23 21:26 Umi: you went for it but at the end u end it to something else ><
2014-11-23 21:31 P A N: your code 01:04:945 - is 1/2 slider right?
2014-11-23 21:31 Umi: I didn't change anything here
2014-11-23 21:31 Umi: i just chnaged 01:00:933 (8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 
2014-11-23 21:31 Umi: changed*
2014-11-23 21:31 Umi: the rest is the same
2014-11-23 21:32 P A N: oh yea
2014-11-23 21:32 P A N: that's mochi
2014-11-23 21:32 P A N: baka me
2014-11-23 21:32 Umi: x)
2014-11-23 21:32 Umi: well actually i'd prefer 2 note instead of 01:04:754 (4) - 
2014-11-23 21:33 P A N: ikr
2014-11-23 21:33 P A N: so I wonder
2014-11-23 21:33 P A N: is it place like that since beginning
2014-11-23 21:34 Umi: like this http://puu.sh/d2HBv/aee9bfd49d.jpg
2014-11-23 21:35 Umi: and so if you do 01:04:945 (5,6,1) - stack them but well since it's momochikun's part dunno
2014-11-23 21:38 P A N: they are mochi's style
2014-11-23 21:38 P A N: untidy style
2014-11-23 21:39 Umi: kk
2014-11-23 21:39 P A N: his style is really bother me
2014-11-23 21:39 P A N: lol
2014-11-23 21:40 Umi: well won't say that i don't like, but the way how he use the rythm is totally different than me
2014-11-23 21:40 P A N: exactly
2014-11-23 21:41 P A N: well what do you think if we leave it like that
2014-11-23 21:41 P A N: that 01:04:754 (4,5,1,2,3) - thing
2014-11-23 21:41 Umi: yeah just leave it 
2014-11-23 21:43 Umi: ok i'm done with the hard
2014-11-23 21:43 P A N: ok
2014-11-23 21:43 P A N: done with rest of it are fine or enough with this
2014-11-23 21:43 P A N: LOL
2014-11-23 21:44 P A N: done mean*
2014-11-23 21:44 Umi: lol ~
2014-11-23 21:44 Umi: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/419451 Komatsu Mikako & Ishihara Kaori - Dazzling [Insane]]
2014-11-23 21:44 Umi: 00:26:538 (1) -  useless NC '-'
2014-11-23 21:45 Umi: ah and before 00:22:716 (1,2) - switch NC here
2014-11-23 21:45 Umi: for the consistency
2014-11-23 21:48 P A N: about the second isn't it already consistent? >_>
2014-11-23 21:48 P A N: and maybe I should add finish on 1 as well
2014-11-23 21:48 Umi: nop NC on the big whitetick
2014-11-23 21:48 Umi: should be*
2014-11-23 21:49 Umi: ah 
2014-11-23 21:49 Umi: nvm
2014-11-23 21:49 Umi: my bad
2014-11-23 21:49 Umi: yeah it's good, stupid me ..
2014-11-23 21:49 P A N: >_>
2014-11-23 21:49 P A N: lol
2014-11-23 21:50 Umi: from 00:51:952 -  to 01:03:799 - 
2014-11-23 21:50 Umi: i don't think all those NC are needed though .. 
2014-11-23 21:50 P A N: b-b-but I really love that NC... ;w;
2014-11-23 21:50 Umi: it's fun i agree but u should better delte them
2014-11-23 21:50 P A N: ;w;
2014-11-23 21:51 Umi: hmm
2014-11-23 21:51 P A N: ; A ;
2014-11-23 21:51 Umi: k keep them 
2014-11-23 21:51 Umi: but so didn't u miss one there 01:03:417 (3) - ?
2014-11-23 21:52 P A N: I didn't add it because it's kind of same stanza
2014-11-23 21:52 Umi: kk
2014-11-23 21:52 P A N: you didn't angry right? :(
2014-11-23 21:52 Umi: i'm not lol
2014-11-23 21:53 Umi: i thinki it's cool yeah but NC in general shouldn't be use like this that's all :)
2014-11-23 21:54 P A N: ;w;
2014-11-23 21:54 P A N: somehow it help hr players too
2014-11-23 21:54 P A N: >_>
2014-11-23 21:54 Umi: 02:42:015 (5,1) - NC switch 
2014-11-23 21:54 Umi: because of the finish
2014-11-23 21:54 P A N: woops ok
2014-11-23 21:55 Umi: 03:18:512 (7,1) - same x)
2014-11-23 21:56 Umi: 03:21:570 (7,1) - and again
2014-11-23 21:56 Umi: that's what u did at the begining so do it at the end too 
2014-11-23 22:01 P A N: alright
2014-11-23 22:02 Umi: ok noting to say about the structure, play really good
2014-11-23 22:02 Umi: nothing*
2014-11-23 22:03 Umi: you can update 
2014-11-23 22:05 P A N: mhmm
2014-11-23 22:05 P A N: 02:54:054 (5) -
2014-11-23 22:05 P A N: need nc?
2014-11-23 22:06 Umi: ah yeah indeed i missed this one
2014-11-23 22:10 P A N: alright
2014-11-23 22:10 P A N: updated
2014-11-23 22:10 Umi: kay ~

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