Easy
00:17:779 (2) - move to x376 y40, it flows better
00:21:471 (2) - try curving like this
00:29:779 (1) - can blanket around 00:28:856 (2) - like this
00:31:625 (2) - can also blanket ^
just watch for some blankets ;w;
00:57:933 (4) - try to avoid ending sliders on a large white tick, sliders should usually only start on it, not end on it. ill stop mentioning these so you should watch out xD
NC's usually start on a large white tick, since its the strongest beat, it usually shouldnt start anywhere else unless its after a break or spinner, that doesnt mean on each strong beat though, only when its reasonable (or you would have like an nc after every note almost lol) idk maybe you already know that >< but i think there were a few mistakes in the beginning?
01:00:241 (1,2) - flow is a bit weird, try this
01:08:548 (2) - move to x124 y76
01:58:394 (1) - looks weird when it overlaps with previous slider
02:27:933 (1) - personal opinion: i dont like more than 1 repeat xD
03:45:471 (1) - this area is a bit undermapped >< ??
seems like the kiai time is too little, i think there was an area near the middle which could also be kiai ;w; (maybe at 01:28:856?
Normal
01:14:779 (1) - feels weird to start on a red tick
01:16:625 (1,2) - ^ , the arrangement is also kind of weird
you could take out 01:22:856 (1) - and move 01:23:087 (2) - to where it is
02:51:471 (1,2) - ^
01:25:856 (1) - i dont think there should be weird sv changes in normal xD
02:54:471 (1) - ^
01:38:087 (3,4,5,6) - sort of messy
01:43:856 (1) - maybe have it like this
03:12:356 (1) - ^
(did you just copy a part of the song and flipped it ? xD)
04:10:856 (1) - dont think NC is needed
04:17:548 (1) - ^
04:17:779 (1) - ^
04:18:241 (1) - ^
so many NC's at the end lol
Hard
beginning has too many NC
00:14:548 (1,2,1) - arrangement is confusing
00:28:856 (3,4,5,6,7) - i think its too hard for hard >_>
00:28:856 (3) - move to x272 y204 or something close to that
00:42:933 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - again so many NC, also i dont know why there is a space here
when the rhythm is consistent? it can get really confusing
00:57:702 (1) - ^
01:30:702 (1) - ^
01:34:394 (1) - ^
02:12:010 (1) - ^
yeah..ill stop mentioning these ><''
01:16:625 (1,2,3,4,5) - confusing 'jumps' dont stack the notes
01:37:164 (1) - woah okay the spacing here is just way too off xD try keeping it even, you most likely did it on purpose but its still pretty confusing to play
02:09:471 (1) - i think you should only cross over sliders when the one crossing over is longer, idk if that makes sense lol
02:18:702 (1) - the stacking of the notes makes the jump unclear
02:57:471 (1,2,3,4) - i think you should use DS for these
i think the main problem in this level is the spacing , since at times you arrange them in such a way that its hard to tell wether its a 1/2,1/4,1/3 etc// but other than that its all good
thats all, hoped that helped >< and good luck with your beatmap
00:17:779 (2) - move to x376 y40, it flows better
00:21:471 (2) - try curving like this
00:29:779 (1) - can blanket around 00:28:856 (2) - like this
00:31:625 (2) - can also blanket ^
just watch for some blankets ;w;
00:57:933 (4) - try to avoid ending sliders on a large white tick, sliders should usually only start on it, not end on it. ill stop mentioning these so you should watch out xD
NC's usually start on a large white tick, since its the strongest beat, it usually shouldnt start anywhere else unless its after a break or spinner, that doesnt mean on each strong beat though, only when its reasonable (or you would have like an nc after every note almost lol) idk maybe you already know that >< but i think there were a few mistakes in the beginning?
01:00:241 (1,2) - flow is a bit weird, try this
01:08:548 (2) - move to x124 y76
01:58:394 (1) - looks weird when it overlaps with previous slider
02:27:933 (1) - personal opinion: i dont like more than 1 repeat xD
03:45:471 (1) - this area is a bit undermapped >< ??
seems like the kiai time is too little, i think there was an area near the middle which could also be kiai ;w; (maybe at 01:28:856?
Normal
01:14:779 (1) - feels weird to start on a red tick
01:16:625 (1,2) - ^ , the arrangement is also kind of weird
you could take out 01:22:856 (1) - and move 01:23:087 (2) - to where it is
02:51:471 (1,2) - ^
01:25:856 (1) - i dont think there should be weird sv changes in normal xD
02:54:471 (1) - ^
01:38:087 (3,4,5,6) - sort of messy
01:43:856 (1) - maybe have it like this
03:12:356 (1) - ^
(did you just copy a part of the song and flipped it ? xD)
04:10:856 (1) - dont think NC is needed
04:17:548 (1) - ^
04:17:779 (1) - ^
04:18:241 (1) - ^
so many NC's at the end lol
Hard
beginning has too many NC
00:14:548 (1,2,1) - arrangement is confusing
00:28:856 (3,4,5,6,7) - i think its too hard for hard >_>
00:28:856 (3) - move to x272 y204 or something close to that
00:42:933 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - again so many NC, also i dont know why there is a space here
when the rhythm is consistent? it can get really confusing
00:57:702 (1) - ^
01:30:702 (1) - ^
01:34:394 (1) - ^
02:12:010 (1) - ^
yeah..ill stop mentioning these ><''
01:16:625 (1,2,3,4,5) - confusing 'jumps' dont stack the notes
01:37:164 (1) - woah okay the spacing here is just way too off xD try keeping it even, you most likely did it on purpose but its still pretty confusing to play
02:09:471 (1) - i think you should only cross over sliders when the one crossing over is longer, idk if that makes sense lol
02:18:702 (1) - the stacking of the notes makes the jump unclear
02:57:471 (1,2,3,4) - i think you should use DS for these
i think the main problem in this level is the spacing , since at times you arrange them in such a way that its hard to tell wether its a 1/2,1/4,1/3 etc// but other than that its all good
thats all, hoped that helped >< and good luck with your beatmap