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wowaka - World's End Dancehall (ROCKETMAN Remix) [Osu|Taiko]

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Mira-san
1,038 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
Mira-san

Aka wrote:

okay, recheck or something like that


fr33z3r's

・00:39:033 (4,1,2) - turn off the grid snap thing and move 00:40:086 (1) - to x:256 y:93 ; 00:40:437 (2) - to x:205 y:170 to make this pattenr be perfectly symmetrical
・00:28:507 (3,4) - meh, could you make their placement be more like walking? i mean, some of newbie guys could think that they need to click on (4) cause it goes almost like by the arc of (2), so would be better to make something like this
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and maybe a bit changing the placement of next one
・00:45:700 (1) - 01:19:384 (1) - 03:56:577 (1) - finisher?
・00:55:524 (1) - either remove the nc there or add here 00:34:823 (3) -
・02:06:402 (3,1) - spacing thing. you could move (3)'s end a bit down to fix it
・02:54:823 (1,2) - told you about these, the numbers are those yellow ones in the upper right corner, click one first slider, click on these numbers, use which i gave you ( (1) x:83 y:183; (2) x:302 y334)


update the rest of diffs please LOL neonat's is not updated
Updated everything including this diff.
blaterwolf
267 posts
Joined November 2013
blaterwolf
Fr33z3R's

00:54:296 (1,2) - wait this is weird , plz check this this is fatal error am i right or it was intended?

no kds duh

le shoots stars again just joking XD
Mira-san
1,038 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
Mira-san

SkyBearer245 wrote:

Fr33z3R's

00:54:296 (1,2) - wait this is weird , plz check this this is fatal error am i right or it was intended?

no kds duh

le shoots stars again just joking XD
Not intentional. Fixed. :o
Moo-Chan
409 posts
Joined November 2013
Moo-Chan
why is this not ranked yet
Mira-san
1,038 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
Mira-san

Moo-Chan wrote:

why is this not ranked yet
I wonder as well.
Aka
1,777 posts
Joined January 2012
Aka
because i am dumb and cant get my ass there finally to finish the recheck and bubble it. slap me hard next time you see me online and if im not modding this set
theramdans
1,251 posts
Joined September 2012
theramdans

Aka wrote:

because i am dumb and cant get my ass there finally to finish the recheck and bubble it. slap me hard next time you see me online and if im not modding this set
I am watching you O.O
Mira-san
1,038 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
Mira-san
Here's an invisible qualify icon: /o/ \o\

Congrats myself. I've been waiting for this day.
Asagi
1,020 posts
Joined March 2013
Asagi
bubble pop bubble pop bubble QUALIFIED unqualified bubble pop bubble pop

rinse and repeat
Aka
1,777 posts
Joined January 2012
Aka
actually i have no idea why you all are complaining about "why is it not qualifiyed back yet" instead of trying to do what i asked to

Aka wrote:

the diff is better than it was but imo it needs some additional modding on rhythm in some parts and hitsounding cause i am not really sure about it. gather 1-2 quality mods and it should be pretty much enough. since the whole diff is remapped, gathering more mods shouldnt hurt and would be better.
talking about Easy diff.


anyway im rechecking atm, so this post will be edited


neonat's

・01:15:173 (3,4) - this rhythm does feel weird cause before and after youve been using another rhythm for such parts: 00:35:875 (3) - 00:41:489 (3) - 01:09:559 (3) - 02:33:770 (3) - or 00:47:103 (3,4) - 00:52:717 (3,4) - 01:12:366 (3,4) - 02:44:998 (3,4,5) - . i'd really you to use one of those since they play more comfortable and follows the long sound 01:15:700 -
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・01:24:296 (4) - minor but touches the hp bar a bit lol


insane

・04:15:875 (5) - barely touches the hp bar but still.
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ai's

・00:12:016 (1,2,3) - any reason for a note on the blue tick? tbh i hear nothing there and 1/2 rhythm feels better, since you have 00:13:419 (1) - 00:14:823 (1) - 00:16:051 (9,1) - 00:17:630 (1) - 00:19:033 (1) - 00:20:437 (1) - 1/2. i understand this 00:23:068 (1,2,3) - but dont the first one
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・00:56:226 (1,2,3) - the 1.80x is pretty much unexpectable, i do disagree with such pattern without marking the sv change :\ i'd recommend to place nc on 00:56:577 (2) -
・01:36:226 (1) - 03:06:051 (1) - i guess finisher would fit there well? D:
・03:21:489 (1) - some naziminor stuff about circle barely touching the hp bar, just to make it neat
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so, poke me when ez applied more mods
Last edited by Aka , edited 2 times in total.
neonat
Beatmap Nominator
3,528 posts
Joined April 2012
neonat
Errrrrr I guess if there is no other actual mods by others for easy by Saturday I could give my take on it too
guineaQ
1,588 posts
Joined December 2013
guineaQ
because I can.

just simple check on Easy
no kds for sake of world pce

[Easy]
00:43:244 (2,3) - Inconsistent DS
02:11:314 (2) - I would line this up vertically
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yeah I think that's it
aigoh
398 posts
Joined February 2014
aigoh
Hi Mira! As I promised on my queue.

[General]
*It’s Been a Year. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-zpfihjNhyI #dedication
*I only scanned through the hitsounds, seeing that other modders have modded it before, several times. They all were consistent and sounded good in all difficulties.

[insane]
* HP drain rate is the same as Al’s Extra. Maybe cut it down to 6.5?

[*Timing/composition/flow]
*00:23:068 (8) – move this to 117, 320 for better flow

[*Aesthetics/ patterns]
* 01:47:805 (2) –02:30:612 (5) - 04:11:314 (4) – (Just my opinion. I’m a very paranoid person lol) These are VERY close to the HP bar, that rather or not the note touches the HP bar could become subjective. I suggest moving these down a bit so that it’s CLEARLY not touching the HP bar.
* 02:02:893 (1) - 02:27:805 (5) - 03:20:612 (5) - 03:46:051 (4) - 04:15:875 (5) - these do touch the HP bar. You must change this.


[Al’s Extra]
I can’t testplay this b/c I’m noob. Just one suggestion:
[*Aesthetics/ patterns]
*03:21:489 (1) – 03:32:366 (6) - touches HP bar
Mira-san
1,038 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
Mira-san

mangocurry wrote:

Hi Mira! As I promised on my queue.

[General]
*It’s Been a Year. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-zpfihjNhyI #dedication
*I only scanned through the hitsounds, seeing that other modders have modded it before, several times. They all were consistent and sounded good in all difficulties.

[insane]
* HP drain rate is the same as Al’s Extra. Maybe cut it down to 6.5?

[*Timing/composition/flow]
*00:23:068 (8) – move this to 117, 320 for better flow

[*Aesthetics/ patterns]
* 01:47:805 (2) –02:30:612 (5) - 04:11:314 (4) – (Just my opinion. I’m a very paranoid person lol) These are VERY close to the HP bar, that rather or not the note touches the HP bar could become subjective. I suggest moving these down a bit so that it’s CLEARLY not touching the HP bar.
* 02:02:893 (1) - 02:27:805 (5) - 03:20:612 (5) - 03:46:051 (4) - 04:15:875 (5) - these do touch the HP bar. You must change this.


[Al’s Extra]
I can’t testplay this b/c I’m noob. Just one suggestion:
[*Aesthetics/ patterns]
*03:21:489 (1) – 03:32:366 (6) - touches HP bar
Changed everything except the HPDR. noep. :P I also did the mod for AI (I have his permission).

Thanks! ;)
neonat
Beatmap Nominator
3,528 posts
Joined April 2012
neonat
No longer touches the HP bar and rhythm changed

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Creator:Mira-san
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Mira-san
1,038 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
Mira-san
Everything is updated. :|
Artavia
454 posts
Joined May 2011
Artavia
Go-Go, Ranked! lol


[Fr33z3R's Easy]

00:41:840 (4) - I think symmetry with (2) slider better.

01:37:279 (2,4,2,4,2,4,2,4) - Add Clap

01:49:910 (4) - Remove slider-whistle

01:51:665 (1) - I can't understand your intention. If I were you, will not be used the spinner.

03:01:490 (2,5) - same as 01:37:279

03:21:490 (1) - same as 01:51:665

03:23:244 - 03:45:349 - I think break time is a bad idea. add patterns.
Ciyus Miapah
3,011 posts
Joined June 2013
Ciyus Miapah
as your request:

[easy]
00:07:805 (3,5,3) - need some slider art in here
00:40:086 (1,2) - i like this http://puu.sh/csAIq/b356fc4c36.jpg
00:51:665 (2,4) - just little curve like this, i think straight slider is boring http://puu.sh/csALQ/9d7c271800.jpg
00:54:121 (1,2) - then fix overlap in circle 1, and just do the same for slider 2
01:27:805 (1,2,3) - add whistle in head (for slider 3, add whistle to all notes, including slider tick)
01:47:454 (1,2,3,4) - since its nice vocal song, im suggest to make interesting slider in here: ex -> http://puu.sh/csB8f/a17816aba4.jpg
03:17:279 (1,2,3,4) - ^ do the same since this is Copy paste
02:57:630 (1,2,3) - im just listening hitsound in this notes, same like 01:27:805 (1,2,3) . i think use whistle is better
03:22:893 - 03:42:542 - i think i like to add pattern in here, cause Slow part is the best in easy diff. but is up to you
i conclude this map is good, but some pattern too repetitive, ah but its okay for beginner players

[extra]
00:40:612 (3,4) - why i didnt like this??
01:07:454 (5,6,7) - this is so plain slider pattern, hard to read, and i think better this pattern like this http://puu.sh/csBHk/070ac05bde.jpg
01:09:823 (2,3) - i dont understand this, you just overmapping this map before and you undermapping this part?
01:14:033 (2,3) - ^
^im just suggest try some slider pattern who related to that circle pattern, so some player will be understand

01:24:296 (6,7) - maybe try this pattern, is up to you http://puu.sh/csBSB/f20588c810.jpg (same like 01:26:226 (1) - pattern)
01:44:296 (6) - better make two sliders that make this
01:45:524 (7,8) - strong triplet in here
01:58:068 (5,6,7) - lol
02:39:647 (2,3) - still dont understand :D
02:40:787 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - better this pattern than 02:39:647 (2,3) pattern
02:46:665 (2,3) - ^
03:01:138 - circle here (fucking nazi)
im just tell some suggestion, just eat my mod and spew it if you dont like it xD

just rank this map, people is boring see this map at top page on pending maplist. /me runs
neonat
Beatmap Nominator
3,528 posts
Joined April 2012
neonat
Why did you post that on my thread lol. You know we're pals for life >.< I won't leave you :c
Lach
1,118 posts
Joined November 2012
Lach
This was unqualified to fix a single hitsound. What the fuck, guys?

p/3386873
Mira-san
1,038 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
Mira-san

Lach wrote:

This was unqualified to fix a single hitsound. What the fuck, guys?

p/3386873
it seems that people wanted to see more changes to the map. jajajaja
neonat
Beatmap Nominator
3,528 posts
Joined April 2012
neonat
SPOILER
osu file format v13

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124,252,222191,1,8,0:0:0:0:
164,172,222542,21,4,0:0:0:0:
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236,188,236577,5,4,0:0:0:0:
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148,360,241489,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,257980,12,4,259033,0:0:0:0:
Mira-san
1,038 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
Mira-san

Fort wrote:

as your request:

I have freezer's permission
[easy]
00:07:805 (3,5,3) - need some slider art in here | lolz
00:40:086 (1,2) - i like this http://puu.sh/csAIq/b356fc4c36.jpg | dun
00:51:665 (2,4) - just little curve like this, i think straight slider is boring http://puu.sh/csALQ/9d7c271800.jpg | applied on one slider only fr variation
00:54:121 (1,2) - then fix overlap in circle 1, and just do the same for slider 2 | wot
01:27:805 (1,2,3) - add whistle in head (for slider 3, add whistle to all notes, including slider tick) | mm done
01:47:454 (1,2,3,4) - since its nice vocal song, im suggest to make interesting slider in here: ex -> http://puu.sh/csB8f/a17816aba4.jpg | changed
03:17:279 (1,2,3,4) - ^ do the same since this is Copy paste | did not change this for some variation in style
02:57:630 (1,2,3) - im just listening hitsound in this notes, same like 01:27:805 (1,2,3) . i think use whistle is better | ^
03:22:893 - 03:42:542 - i think i like to add pattern in here, cause Slow part is the best in easy diff. but is up to you | meh lolz
i conclude this map is good, but some pattern too repetitive, ah but its okay for beginner players | ahahahah

[extra]
I ALSO HAVE AI'S PERMISSION. HUE
00:40:612 (3,4) - why i didnt like this?? | fixd the distance lol
01:07:454 (5,6,7) - this is so plain slider pattern, hard to read, and i think better this pattern like this http://puu.sh/csBHk/070ac05bde.jpg | I think its not really hard to read, but your idea is nice too.
01:09:823 (2,3) - i dont understand this, you just overmapping this map before and you undermapping this part? | fixed this part
01:14:033 (2,3) - ^ | ^
^im just suggest try some slider pattern who related to that circle pattern, so some player will be understand

01:24:296 (6,7) - maybe try this pattern, is up to you http://puu.sh/csBSB/f20588c810.jpg (same like 01:26:226 (1) - pattern) | eeeeeee
01:44:296 (6) - better make two sliders that make this | I bet AI wouldn't want too many 1/4s
01:45:524 (7,8) - strong triplet in here | nani #wibu
01:58:068 (5,6,7) - lol | has been part of the map since day 1 (remap)
02:39:647 (2,3) - still dont understand :D | it's intended and suggested by a lot of ppl orz
02:40:787 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - better this pattern than 02:39:647 (2,3) pattern | ^
02:46:665 (2,3) - ^ | ^
03:01:138 - circle here (fucking nazi) | nani
im just tell some suggestion, just eat my mod and spew it if you dont like it xD | ehehehehe

just rank this map, people is boring see this map at top page on pending maplist. /me runs
Thanks!

Artavia wrote:

Go-Go, Ranked! lol


[Fr33z3R's Easy]

00:41:840 (4) - I think symmetry with (2) slider better.

01:37:279 (2,4,2,4,2,4,2,4) - Add Clap

01:49:910 (4) - Remove slider-whistle

01:51:665 (1) - I can't understand your intention. If I were you, will not be used the spinner.

03:01:490 (2,5) - same as 01:37:279

03:21:490 (1) - same as 01:51:665

03:23:244 - 03:45:349 - I think break time is a bad idea. add patterns.
Applied all except the break parts and something. ya.

Thank you!

guineaQ wrote:

because I can.

just simple check on Easy
no kds for sake of world pce

[Easy]
00:43:244 (2,3) - Inconsistent DS
02:11:314 (2) - I would line this up vertically
SPOILER

yeah I think that's it
dun all lolz

Aka wrote:

actually i have no idea why you all are complaining about "why is it not qualifiyed back yet" instead of trying to do what i asked to

Aka wrote:

the diff is better than it was but imo it needs some additional modding on rhythm in some parts and hitsounding cause i am not really sure about it. gather 1-2 quality mods and it should be pretty much enough. since the whole diff is remapped, gathering more mods shouldnt hurt and would be better.
talking about Easy diff.


anyway im rechecking atm, so this post will be edited


neonat's

・01:15:173 (3,4) - this rhythm does feel weird cause before and after youve been using another rhythm for such parts: 00:35:875 (3) - 00:41:489 (3) - 01:09:559 (3) - 02:33:770 (3) - or 00:47:103 (3,4) - 00:52:717 (3,4) - 01:12:366 (3,4) - 02:44:998 (3,4,5) - . i'd really you to use one of those since they play more comfortable and follows the long sound 01:15:700 -
SPOILER
・01:24:296 (4) - minor but touches the hp bar a bit lol


insane

・04:15:875 (5) - barely touches the hp bar but still.
SPOILER


ai's

・00:12:016 (1,2,3) - any reason for a note on the blue tick? tbh i hear nothing there and 1/2 rhythm feels better, since you have 00:13:419 (1) - 00:14:823 (1) - 00:16:051 (9,1) - 00:17:630 (1) - 00:19:033 (1) - 00:20:437 (1) - 1/2. i understand this 00:23:068 (1,2,3) - but dont the first one
SPOILER
・00:56:226 (1,2,3) - the 1.80x is pretty much unexpectable, i do disagree with such pattern without marking the sv change :\ i'd recommend to place nc on 00:56:577 (2) -
・01:36:226 (1) - 03:06:051 (1) - i guess finisher would fit there well? D:
・03:21:489 (1) - some naziminor stuff about circle barely touching the hp bar, just to make it neat
SPOILER


so, poke me when ez applied more mods
everything applied for AI also insane
Aka
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Joined January 2012
Aka
okay uwu

bubbled ~
Frim4503
2,067 posts
Joined July 2013
Frim4503
hope this will be last bubble :)
and next time is ranked :D
guineaQ
1,588 posts
Joined December 2013
guineaQ
Let's move this out of pending4ever, like for real this time
Mira-san
1,038 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
Mira-san

guineaQ wrote:

Let's move this out of pending4ever, like for real this time

Frim4503 wrote:

hope this will be last bubble :)
and next time is ranked :D
Hopefully. :>

Otherwise:
._.




theramdans
1,251 posts
Joined September 2012
theramdans
omgomgogogmogmgomg
last bubble please
aaaaaaaaaa uheuheuehe <3333333
Dreamcast
101 posts
Joined April 2012
Dreamcast
Seems you did a complete restart on this map. I really liked the way it was mapped before tho (I still own that old file hahah)
Hope this gets ranked soon! I loved this song back then.

So gl :3
Mira-san
1,038 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
Mira-san

Dreamcast wrote:

Seems you did a complete restart on this map. I really liked the way it was mapped before tho (I still own that old file hahah)
Hope this gets ranked soon! I loved this song back then.

So gl :3
Oh really? I wanted to have the very first version or atleast a very early version of the map. Please share it with me heheheheh.
Hinsvar
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Hinsvar
Yo; was told by TicClick to take a look at this so yeah.

*Bolded = Unrankable or very, very strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.

>Fr33z3R's Easy
  1. 00:04:998 (4,5,1) - Make them look like this or this so this pattern will look tidier and have a better flow?
  2. 00:28:858 (4,1) - Swap NC? I'm pretty sure the current combo pattern is a little inconsistent.
  3. 00:40:437 (2,4) - Try to make (2)'s head not touch (4)'s tail? That'd look nicer.
  4. 01:20:787 (2,3) - 1.25x DS? It's admittedly just a bit inconsistent from the usual 1.3x, but it'd be nice to fix it.
  5. 01:46:051 (3,4) - Don't you think they look too close to each other, compared to 01:47:103 (4,1)?
  6. 02:04:296 (1,2) - The blanket can be made more perfect; maybe something like this?
  7. 02:12:717 (1,2,3) - What's with the little spacing inconsistencies here lol
  8. 03:57:980 (2,3) - Same case as 01:46:051 (3,4).
>neonat's Normal
  1. 00:08:858 (5,1,2) - Try to make the blanket here perfect to the point where (5) is perfectly in the middle of (1,2)?
  2. 00:29:209 - No object? The instrument here is stronger compared to 00:29:384; it'd be weird to skip such a strong sound.
  3. 00:55:524 (3,4,5) - Make something like this so they'll look neater?
  4. 01:48:858 (3) - Not quite sure about this slider... It might confuse typical Normal players, you know.
  5. 02:09:910 (1,2) - Make them look more symmetrical for design reasons?
  6. 03:07:454 (5,6,7) - Try making them positioned like this? Looks less cluttered and nicer to see.
  7. 03:17:980 (3) - Same as 01:48:858 (3).
  8. 03:27:103 (4,5) - What's with the sudden spacing decrease?
  9. 03:42:542 (1,2,3,4,5) - The SB is still gray here... What's with the green combo color?
  10. 03:57:103 (3,4) - Again, consider making the blanket better? It looks like it can still be improved a lot.
  11. 04:07:805 (1) - Try rotating 75 degrees clockwise then move to (439,214) for a better flow from 04:07:103 (7)?
>Hard
  1. 00:07:103 - Consider mapping this since there's a noticeable percussion instrument sound? (Applies to similar parts. Dunno why; they just sound weird if skipped.)
  2. 00:16:752 (3,4) - Try to make them have the same curve? It feels weird to see one more curved than the other...
  3. 00:44:823 (3,4) - lol spacing inconsistency
  4. 00:57:980 (5,6) - ^ (Maybe you should check your entire map for stuff like this. Minor spacing inconsistencies that are not necessary might lead to the design looking a bit wonky, just saying.)
  5. 02:56:577 (2) - Not interested in adding a repeat and make this closer to 02:56:928 (3)? Would fit the instruments better that way.
  6. 04:18:331 (1) - ^ (Similar.)
>Insane
  1. 00:09:559 (2) - Make it like this? More comfortable to play this way.
  2. 00:35:875 (1,2,3) - I don't really recommend this rhythm since it can confuse players and make them think that the rhythm probably looks like this. Try adding a circle at 00:36:051 to make a triplet if you want. (Applies to similar cases.)
  3. 00:56:051 (3) - NC this to indicate the change of spacing (and to denote that the pattern is completely different from 00:55:524 (1,2) with all the 1/4 jumps)?
  4. 01:07:454 (7,8,9) - Are you sure these 1/4 jumps are going to be easily readable? Their existence in the Insane diff is fine, but their positioning is a little questionable. Also, I can't really see any sense on the clap hitsounding, honestly... Try removing the claps on the blue ticks and add one at 01:07:630 instead?
  5. 01:29:910 (6,7,8,9) - I am really unsure about this. There are nothing that can be mapped on the ticks (except on the first white tick of these two beats), and they just don't fit, especially if you compare the hitsounding with the relatively silent music... Please consider changing them to something way less intense, at least.
  6. 01:33:244 (7) - Don't you think a whistle is a bit too much for this part?
  7. 01:53:244 (2,3) - Try not to stack them if possible? I'm not sure if it's just me or something, but it just feels awkward, as if there was supposed to be a triplet here due to the stacking...
  8. 02:37:279 (7,8,9) - Actually, this is quite the difficulty jump if you compare this to Hard. Seriously reconsider this and maybe reduce the spacing by a lot at the very least.
  9. 02:59:735 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 01:29:910 (6,7,8,9).
  10. 03:37:279 (2) - This can be hard to see because it's stacked below 03:36:577 (1) and it's quite blending with the background. Maybe remove this and add a repeat to 03:36:577 (1) instead?
  11. 03:42:542 - 03:45:261 - Why are the objects here colored not with the gray colours? They just don't synchronize well with the background here you know...
>AI's Extra
  1. What's with the spacing inconsistency for triplets, like 00:21:665 (1,2,3), 00:22:366 (5,6,7), and 00:26:577 (3,4,5), for example? The music doesn't really offer anything new to justify such a variance. It's still okay to keep them, I guess, it just feels a little unfitting.
  2. 00:03:244 (1,2) - Not sure about the usage of a 1/2 slider here... That just felt pretty unnecessary and awkward, honestly. Try just making a 1/1 slider at 00:03:244 - 00:03:595?
  3. 00:04:121 (1,2) - Similar thing as the suggestion above. Consider just making a 1/2 slider at 00:04:121 - 00:04:296.
  4. 00:56:226 (1) - NC this to indicate the velocity change?
  5. 03:22:893 - 03:44:647 - Uh, try replacing the green color here with another gray one, like the other diffs? Definitely goes well with the SB, IMO.
  6. 04:18:858 (2) - Flip this slider horizontally for a better flow here?
...I'm honestly not even sure on rebubbling this. I believe the map can still be improved a little. Get 1-2 detailed mod(s) or something like that, then get back to me for another bubble (sorry guys ;_;).

Good luck on the way! 8-)
Myxo
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Myxo

Mira-san wrote:

guineaQ wrote:

Let's move this out of pending4ever, like for real this time

Frim4503 wrote:

hope this will be last bubble :)
and next time is ranked :D
Hopefully. :>

Otherwise:
._.




Seems like it is not :(
Wow, it takes ages to rank this mapset... You can try to call me when it's bubbled again, finally all issues should be fixed.
-Anonymous-_old_1
-Anonymous-_old_1
awesome map i hope it will be ranked soon :3
WillTai
52 posts
Joined June 2012
WillTai
[General]
Great flow and patterns!

[Hard]

00:07:103 - Perhaps add a single circle here to map the beat that appears. A possible placement is on top of the start of the slider that appears immediately afterwards.
00:09:910 - Same as above
00:11:314 - ^

02:37:454 (4,5) - Replace with a repeating slider

02:47:805 (1,2,3,4,5) - - Possible opportunity to utilize a jump pattern. Done by removing (2) and (3) and replacing them with single circles on the white tick. Delete (4) as well for consistent spacing.

03:21:489 (3,4,5) - Split the slider (3) into two individual circles and convert (5) into a circle. Reason for doing so is to highlight the dun dun dun sound. Possible jump pattern.

Keep up the great work! :D
Mira-san
1,038 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
Mira-san

Desperate-kun wrote:

._.





Seems like it is not :(

Wow, it takes ages to rank this mapset... You can try to call me when it's bubbled again, finally all issues should be fixed.
me





Aaaaanyway..

I will do the mods FOR ALL THE DIFFS except neonat's Normal. *I have AI and Fr33z3R's permission, and I am modding this since they can't mod it or just don't have the time to do so.

Hinsvar wrote:

Yo; was told by TicClick to take a look at this so yeah.

*Bolded = Unrankable or very, very strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.

>Fr33z3R's Easy
  1. 00:04:998 (4,5,1) - Make them look like this or this so this pattern will look tidier and have a better flow?
  2. 00:28:858 (4,1) - Swap NC? I'm pretty sure the current combo pattern is a little inconsistent.
  3. 00:40:437 (2,4) - Try to make (2)'s head not touch (4)'s tail? That'd look nicer.
  4. 01:20:787 (2,3) - 1.25x DS? It's admittedly just a bit inconsistent from the usual 1.3x, but it'd be nice to fix it.
  5. 01:46:051 (3,4) - Don't you think they look too close to each other, compared to 01:47:103 (4,1)?
  6. 02:04:296 (1,2) - The blanket can be made more perfect; maybe something like this?
  7. 02:12:717 (1,2,3) - What's with the little spacing inconsistencies here lol
  8. 03:57:980 (2,3) - Same case as 01:46:051 (3,4).
Applied all except the (2) (4) tail. hao2doothat.

>Hard
  1. 00:07:103 - Consider mapping this since there's a noticeable percussion instrument sound? ( Applies to similar parts. Dunno why; they just sound weird if skipped.)
  2. 00:16:752 (3,4) - Try to make them have the same curve? It feels weird to see one more curved than the other...
  3. 00:44:823 (3,4) - lol spacing inconsistency
  4. 00:57:980 (5,6) - ^ (Maybe you should check your entire map for stuff like this. Minor spacing inconsistencies that are not necessary might lead to the design looking a bit wonky, just saying.)
  5. 02:56:577 (2) - Not interested in adding a repeat and make this closer to 02:56:928 (3)? Would fit the instruments better that way.
  6. 04:18:331 (1) - ^ (Similar.)
Done everything. Big(?) spacing changes here. Checked the spacing for all notes except the ones from kiai time heauehau

>Insane
  1. 00:09:559 (2) - Make it like this? More comfortable to play this way.
  2. 00:35:875 (1,2,3) - I don't really recommend this rhythm since it can confuse players and make them think that the rhythm probably looks like this. Try adding a circle at 00:36:051 to make a triplet if you want. (Applies to similar cases.)
  3. 00:56:051 (3) - NC this to indicate the change of spacing (and to denote that the pattern is completely different from 00:55:524 (1,2) with all the 1/4 jumps)?
  4. 01:07:454 (7,8,9) - Are you sure these 1/4 jumps are going to be easily readable? Their existence in the Insane diff is fine, but their positioning is a little questionable. Also, I can't really see any sense on the clap hitsounding, honestly... Try removing the claps on the blue ticks and add one at 01:07:630 instead?
  5. 01:29:910 (6,7,8,9) - I am really unsure about this. There are nothing that can be mapped on the ticks (except on the first white tick of these two beats), and they just don't fit, especially if you compare the hitsounding with the relatively silent music... Please consider changing them to something way less intense, at least.
  6. 01:33:244 (7) - Don't you think a whistle is a bit too much for this part?
  7. 01:53:244 (2,3) - Try not to stack them if possible? I'm not sure if it's just me or something, but it just feels awkward, as if there was supposed to be a triplet here due to the stacking...
  8. 02:37:279 (7,8,9) - Actually, this is quite the difficulty jump if you compare this to Hard. Seriously reconsider this and maybe reduce the spacing by a lot at the very least.
  9. 02:59:735 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 01:29:910 (6,7,8,9).
  10. 03:37:279 (2) - This can be hard to see because it's stacked below 03:36:577 (1) and it's quite blending with the background. Maybe remove this and add a repeat to 03:36:577 (1) instead?
  11. 03:42:542 - 03:45:261 - Why are the objects here colored not with the gray colours? They just don't synchronize well with the background here you know...
Done everything except the before-kiai 1/4 sliders and the 00:36:138 (2,3) - patterns. For the 1/4s meh it's like the last challenge for the diff lolz. I don't know how I will map the latter part as there are people who would prefer triplets or this. (the style I used here is similar to the original World's End Dancehall map created by NatsumeRin.)

>AI's Extra
  1. What's with the spacing inconsistency for triplets, like 00:21:665 (1,2,3), 00:22:366 (5,6,7), and 00:26:577 (3,4,5), for example? The music doesn't really offer anything new to justify such a variance. It's still okay to keep them, I guess, it just feels a little unfitting.
  2. 00:03:244 (1,2) - Not sure about the usage of a 1/2 slider here... That just felt pretty unnecessary and awkward, honestly. Try just making a 1/1 slider at 00:03:244 - 00:03:595?
  3. 00:04:121 (1,2) - Similar thing as the suggestion above. Consider just making a 1/2 slider at 00:04:121 - 00:04:296.
  4. 00:56:226 (1) - NC this to indicate the velocity change?
  5. 03:22:893 - 03:44:647 - Uh, try replacing the green color here with another gray one, like the other diffs? Definitely goes well with the SB, IMO.
  6. 04:18:858 (2) - Flip this slider horizontally for a better flow here?
Applied all except the NC mod and the triplet spacing. IMO the SV change is not noticeable until 00:56:577 (1) - . Yeah

...I'm honestly not even sure on rebubbling this. I believe the map can still be improved a little. Get 1-2 detailed mod(s) or something like that, then get back to me for another bubble (sorry guys ;_;).

Good luck on the way! 8-)
Plz. rebubble quik. :^)

WillTai wrote:

[General]
Great flow and patterns!

[Hard]

00:07:103 - Perhaps add a single circle here to map the beat that appears. A possible placement is on top of the start of the slider that appears immediately afterwards.
00:09:910 - Same as above
00:11:314 - ^

02:37:454 (4,5) - Replace with a repeating slider

02:47:805 (1,2,3,4,5) - - Possible opportunity to utilize a jump pattern. Done by removing (2) and (3) and replacing them with single circles on the white tick. Delete (4) as well for consistent spacing.

03:21:489 (3,4,5) - Split the slider (3) into two individual circles and convert (5) into a circle. Reason for doing so is to highlight the dun dun dun sound. Possible jump pattern.

Keep up the great work! :D
All done except the last 2 suggestions (the first 3 were in Hinsvar's mod). For the 5th suggestion, I just don't feel like it lol. For the 6th one, converting the slider into circles can confuse the players about when to hit the note on the blue tick. lolz.

Thanks!
Last edited by Mira-san , edited 1 time in total.
Ciyus Miapah
3,011 posts
Joined June 2013
Ciyus Miapah
rank this fucking map pls XDD
NachtHemdPlaya
12 posts
Joined September 2013
NachtHemdPlaya
i cri evrytim
Pho
1,785 posts
Joined November 2013
Pho
Free mod on my own decision. Pls let this make this map move on to rank ~

Trifle: Just small things you might want to consider.
Preference: Just my humble opinion on stuff.
Written in bold: Fix this up as soon as possible.

[Fr33zer's Easy]
  1. Note density/pressure is relatively high at times. I mean it's fine if it were for a normal diff, but new players might get problems even if it goes well with the rhythm. Better ask a BAT (Desperate?) about this again.
  2. 00:00:787 (1,2,3) - Flow is not very good here, please ctrl+j slider 2 and rearrange for a better flow
  3. 00:04:998 (4,5,1,2) - This whole part here flows really bad for an easy diff, and it also overlaps. You need to make it play more smoothly. Here's a suggestion: http://puu.sh/cGN7G/570fcc5b30.jpg
  4. 00:09:209 (5,1) - NC at 5 already? Is more consistent.
  5. 00:23:244 (1) - Maybe ctrl+h this slider so it has a better transition to the next slider.
  6. 00:24:647 (2,3,1) - Strange, why does this not lie on the y-axis? Would look neater.
  7. 00:40:437 (2,4) - Haow2avoid overlap: http://puu.sh/cGO5D/0d7b64cc54.jpg
  8. 01:18:682 (4,1) - This needs to be blanketed better: http://puu.sh/cGNXT/261702dd5e.jpg
  9. 01:27:454 - Add Finish HS here.
  10. 01:34:121 (5,1) - Just how to make it flow better: http://puu.sh/cGOgW/51a21f30d9.jpg
  11. 01:40:437 (3,4,1) - Minor spacing error here.
  12. 01:47:454 - Aren't you missing a finish HS here? Can hear a gong in the background
  13. 02:04:296 (1,2) - Spacing error, this should not be 1.0xDS but 1.3xDS, which you used consistently through the map. Please fix.
    Also why is 02:04:296 (1) - ending on the blue tick? I think that's random mistake, should be in the white tick.
  14. 02:58:331 (2,3) - This somehow flows weird, Make it smoother. Example: http://puu.sh/cGOQX/6ac55e139b.jpg
  15. 03:06:051 - Finish HS for the gong? Also at 03:17:279 -
  16. 03:54:823 (4,1,2) - Try to make it more symmetrical to the y axis
  17. 03:56:577 (1,3) - Just ctrl+j slider 1 and reposition it a bit. http://puu.sh/cGP8s/cde0ee0a64.jpg
  18. Nice one, I like the symmetry here. Still feel that it needs more polishment. :|
[Normal]
  1. Better blankets at the following sections would be nice: 00:38:331 (2,3)
  2. 02:31:489 (4,1) - Could be more parallel. :V
  3. 03:57:103 (3,4) - Better blanket between both sliders http://puu.sh/cGPUd/837a57e835.jpg
  4. 04:14:472 (2,3,4,1) - That circle pattern is pretty broken, please make it look neater: Copypaste 04:14:823 (3) - and rotate it by 120/240°, that should do the trick.
  5. This diff's almost fine to go.
[Hard]
  1. 00:31:840 (1) - You miss NC here.
  2. 00:33:770 (3,4) - Make three into a backslider, has a better synergy to the music: http://puu.sh/cGQwh/c3bfe54ffd.jpg
  3. There are some minor spacing errors, would be neat if you could fix some of them: 00:36:577 (3,4,5) - 00:42:191 (2) - 01:34:121 (4,5,6) - 00:51:314 (1,2,3) - 01:11:665 02:07:454 (2,3,4) - 02:45:700 (2,3,4) - 03:01:665 (5,6,7) - 03:03:945 (4,5,6,7) - (or it's intended? idk) 03:57:454 (4,5,1) -
  4. 01:06:752 (1,2,3,4) - Lol, that synergy to the music xD Would still recommend to make it move to the left-side as that's the position of the next slider.
  5. 01:13:595 (8,1) - Imperfect diamond pattern, would be great if you could fix it.
  6. 01:39:033 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Idk why you suddenly decided to go with 1.2xDS instead of 1.3xDS in here, but you should better fix it.
  7. 01:44:823 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - ^
  8. 01:46:051 - The next three combo's are filled with pure 1/2 beat sliders. Is a bit repititive, so might be nice if you can arrange it with some circles inbetween.
  9. 01:50:261 (1,2) - Idk about these sliders... there reverse arrow don't end on a beat that is relatable to the music :/ Same with 03:20:086 (1,2) -
  10. 01:50:261 (1,2,3,4,5) - So what DS where you using here? It differs quite a lot in this combo, try to keep it consistent.
  11. 02:23:244 (1,2,3) - Preference: In comparison to the 1/1 beat circle'streams' this has a very high DS, considering that the music is still quiet at this part. I'd map them with the same DS.
  12. 03:14:648 (3,4,5,6,7) - I'd rather go with a more oval flow here: http://puu.sh/cGQQO/ff96ffe438.jpg
  13. 03:44:998 (6,1) - Check the stack here again.
  14. Just minor issues here, otherwise this is good to go. :)
Insane diffs will be done later, just wait for it~
Mira-san
1,038 posts
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Topic Starter
Mira-san
As seen on OWC 2014 :^)

neonat
Beatmap Nominator
3,528 posts
Joined April 2012
neonat

Hinsvar wrote:

Yo; was told by TicClick to take a look at this so yeah.

*Bolded = Unrankable or very, very strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.

>neonat's Normal
  1. 00:08:858 (5,1,2) - Try to make the blanket here perfect to the point where (5) is perfectly in the middle of (1,2)? adjusted in a way
  2. 00:29:209 - No object? The instrument here is stronger compared to 00:29:384; it'd be weird to skip such a strong sound. 00:29:384 is still the highlight main beat of this part, will keep to this tune
  3. 00:55:524 (3,4,5) - Make something like this so they'll look neater? for the sake of 00:54:998 (2,4,5)
  4. 01:48:858 (3) - Not quite sure about this slider... It might confuse typical Normal players, you know. it was for the repetitive vocal but I'll consider
  5. 02:09:910 (1,2) - Make them look more symmetrical for design reasons? I overlapped them equally didn't I?
  6. 03:07:454 (5,6,7) - Try making them positioned like this? Looks less cluttered and nicer to see. k
  7. 03:17:980 (3) - Same as 01:48:858 (3).^
  8. 03:27:103 (4,5) - What's with the sudden spacing decrease? wasn't intended
  9. 03:42:542 (1,2,3,4,5) - The SB is still gray here... What's with the green combo color? k then
  10. 03:57:103 (3,4) - Again, consider making the blanket better? It looks like it can still be improved a lot. edited the shapes
  11. 04:07:805 (1) - Try rotating 75 degrees clockwise then move to (439,214) for a better flow from 04:07:103 (7)? already changed the flow from before

Pho wrote:

Free mod on my own decision. Pls let this make this map move on to rank ~

Trifle: Just small things you might want to consider.
Preference: Just my humble opinion on stuff.
Written in bold: Fix this up as soon as possible.

[Normal]
  1. Better blankets at the following sections would be nice: 00:38:331 (2,3) I think I'll keep this
  2. 02:31:489 (4,1) - Could be more parallel. :V ^
  3. 03:57:103 (3,4) - Better blanket between both sliders http://puu.sh/cGPUd/837a57e835.jpg fixed from previous
  4. 04:14:472 (2,3,4,1) - That circle pattern is pretty broken, please make it look neater: Copypaste 04:14:823 (3) - and rotate it by 120/240°, that should do the trick. can't really do much due to the constant spacing
  5. This diff's almost fine to go.
Normal
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