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Charlotte
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年4月20日 at 0:03:32

Artist: Junichi Masuda
Title: Battle! (Legendary Pokemon)
Source: Pokemon: Black/White
Tags: Go Ichinose 一之瀬剛 ポケモン ポケットモンスター Pocket Monsters ブラック ホワイト game freak nintendo sala- stefan thenutritiousguy tng
BPM: 174
Filesize: 2746kb
Play Time: 01:42
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (1.95 stars, 228 notes)
  2. Inner Oni (4.15 stars, 594 notes)
  3. Kantan (1.39 stars, 141 notes)
  4. Muzukashii (2.66 stars, 336 notes)
  5. Sala-fan's Oni (3.92 stars, 476 notes)
Download: Junichi Masuda - Battle! (Legendary Pokemon)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Kantan - Completed
Futsuu - Completed
Muzukashii - Completed
Sala-fan's Oni - Completed
Inner Oni - Completed

http://puu.sh/hsMs3.osu (old Inner Oni)

SB by Ichigaki

Dake's mapset
Sakary
accepting GDs?
Topic Starter
Charlotte

Hi_Hello wrote:

accepting GDs?
sorry.not accept><
NeviltiS
Hi~ from PM

[General]
Romanised Title:e of pokemon is missing.

[Kantan]
good~

[Futsuu]
00:21:738 (49) - k?
01:30:812 - add d?

[Muzukashii]
00:35:186 (105) - k?
01:08:131 - add k?

[Oni]
00:46:479 (194,195,196,197,198,199) - dkkd D?(No.198 remove)
01:41:157 (424,425) - Looking at 01:38:398~, thought that it is good to put a little more notes.

Good luck! :)
Topic Starter
Charlotte

NeviltiS wrote:

Hi~ from PM

[General]
Romanised Title:e of pokemon is missing.

[Kantan]
good~

[Futsuu]
00:21:738 (49) - k? fixed
01:30:812 - add d? fixed

[Muzukashii]
00:35:186 (105) - k? keep
01:08:131 - add k? fixed

[Oni]
00:46:479 (194,195,196,197,198,199) - dkkd D?(No.198 remove) fixed
01:41:157 (424,425) - Looking at 01:38:398~, thought that it is good to put a little more notes. fixed
Good luck! :)
Thank you mod :)
Hanjamon
Hi Charlotte~ here mod as you requested

  • d=Don
    D=Big Don
    k=Katsu
    K=Big Katsu
[General]

  • The correct artist should be Junichi Masuda like the ranked ver. of Dake https://osu.ppy.sh/s/65923 xD

    Disable ''widescreen support'' in all diffs, is not necessary unless you are using a SB
[Kantan]

  • I recommend use 1,20 sv and OD 3 due to bpm changes

    00:57:518 - remove? maybe will be hard for a kantan that pattern due to transition of the bpm
    01:07:654 - ^? same reason
    01:42:536 - add a note here? (D) feels a bit weird here without note
[Futsuu]

  • same as Kantan, I recommend use 1,20 sv

    01:32:536 (219,220) - control+g here? (k d) in the note 220 the sounds is more low
    01:42:536 - same suggestion as the Kantan, add note here?
[Muzukashii]

  • 01:32:536 (313,314) - same as the Futsuu, control+g?
    01:37:191 (325) - change to k?
    01:42:536 - same as the other diffs, add note here?
[Oni]

  • Fix the BG in Oni, is not well situated ;w;

    00:03:462 - i think here is better a 1/3 pattern, follows better the song imo (maybe dkkd is good)
    01:32:536 (394,396) - same as the other diffs, control+g?
    01:38:570 (412,415,418,419) - change these notes to k? (ddk ddk ddkkd) sounds better for me ;w;
    01:42:536 - same as the others diffs, add note here?
I can't find nothing more for suggest, is a good map add more notes in the oni or make a inner oni ;W; , good luck Charlotte ^^
Topic Starter
Charlotte

Hanjamon wrote:

Hi Charlotte~ here mod as you requested

  • d=Don
    D=Big Don
    k=Katsu
    K=Big Katsu
[General]

  • The correct artist should be Junichi Masuda like the ranked ver. of Dake https://osu.ppy.sh/s/65923 xD fixed

    Disable ''widescreen support'' in all diffs, is not necessary unless you are using a SB fixed
[Kantan]

  • I recommend use 1,20 sv and OD 3 due to bpm changes changed SV1.2 OD4 keep.

    00:57:518 - remove? maybe will be hard for a kantan that pattern due to transition of the bpm fixed
    01:07:654 - ^? same reason fixed
    01:42:536 - add a note here? (D) feels a bit weird here without note fixed
[Futsuu]

  • same as Kantan, I recommend use 1,20 sv keep.Practice in front of Muzukashii

    01:32:536 (219,220) - control+g here? (k d) in the note 220 the sounds is more low fixed
    01:42:536 - same suggestion as the Kantan, add note here? fixed
[Muzukashii]

  • 01:32:536 (313,314) - same as the Futsuu, control+g? fixed
    01:37:191 (325) - change to k? fixed
    01:42:536 - same as the other diffs, add note here? fixed
[Oni]

  • Fix the BG in Oni, is not well situated ;w; fixed

    00:03:462 - i think here is better a 1/3 pattern, follows better the song imo (maybe dkkd is good) Hmm,keep.
    01:32:536 (394,396) - same as the other diffs, control+g? fixed
    01:38:570 (412,415,418,419) - change these notes to k? (ddk ddk ddkkd) sounds better for me ;w; fixed
    01:42:536 - same as the others diffs, add note here? fixed
I can't find nothing more for suggest, is a good map add more notes in the oni or make a inner oni ;W; , good luck Charlotte ^^
Thank you mod. :)
Racoon-
Hello~ From My Queue~

d = Don
k = Kat
D = Big Don
K = Big Kat
( ) = Reason

Kantan
00:07:945 k ? (Melody)
00:27:600 ^
00:34:151 D ? (Beat)
01:25:984 ^

Futsuu
00:11:220 , 00:11:393 Add Note ? (00:08:289 = Same Rhythm)
00:29:151 k ? (00:28:117)
00:36:105(91,92) Remove ? (This rhythm is hard to Futsuu)
00:38:864(98,99) ^
01:15:180(181,182) ^
01:17:938(188,189) ^

Musukashii
00:43:462 d ? (00:40:703, 00:46:220)

Good Luck~
Topic Starter
Charlotte

- Racoon - wrote:

Hello~ From My Queue~

d = Don
k = Kat
D = Big Don
K = Big Kat
( ) = Reason

Kantan
00:07:945 k ? (Melody)
00:27:600 ^
00:34:151 D ? (Beat)
01:25:984 ^

sorry.all keep.

Futsuu
00:11:220 , 00:11:393 Add Note ? (00:08:289 = Same Rhythm) keep
00:29:151 k ? (00:28:117) keep
00:36:105(91,92) Remove ? (This rhythm is hard to Futsuu) 92 delete
00:38:864(98,99) ^ 99 delete
01:15:180(181,182) ^ 182 delete
01:17:938(188,189) ^ 189 delete

Musukashii
00:43:462 d ? (00:40:703, 00:46:220) keep

Good Luck~
Thank you mod :)
K-2
Hi~

Kantan
00:15:876 (17) - k
00:20:358 (24) - k
00:21:393 (25) - k
00:26:910 (33) - k
00:30:358 (39,40,41,42,43,44) - How about D k k d k d?
00:35:186 (47) - k

Futsuu
00:15:876 (32) - same as Kantan
00:20:358 (45) - same as Kantan
00:21:393 (48,49) - k d
00:26:910 (64) - same as Kantan
00:31:393 (77) - k
00:31:910 (79) - d
00:32:427 (80,81) - k d
00:35:186 (88) - k
01:11:501 (171) - k
01:32:019 (214) - d
01:33:053 (216) - k

Muzukashii
00:13:807 (35,36,37,38,39,40,41) - K dd dk dk?
00:15:876 (42) - same as Kantan
00:16:565 (44,45,46,47,48,49,50) - K dd dk dd?
00:21:393 (60) - same as Kantan
00:24:841 (71,72,73,74,75,76,77) - K dd dk dk?
00:26:910 (78) - k
00:52:524 (169) - k
01:06:745 (212,213,214,215,216) - How about kdkkk d?

Oni
00:13:807 (44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52) - K ddd d k ddk?
00:15:876 (53) - same as Kantan
00:16:565 (55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63) - K ddd d k ddd?
00:21:393 (75) - same as Kantan
00:24:841 (90,91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98) - K ddd d k ddk?
00:26:910 (99) - same as Kantan
01:07:654 (276) - d

I generally mod according to main sound.
Fix or not is your decision
I wish you make your map ranked! Go!
Topic Starter
Charlotte

Lunaris Filia wrote:

Hi~

Kantan
00:15:876 (17) - k keep
00:20:358 (24) - k fixed
00:21:393 (25) - k fixed
00:26:910 (33) - k keep
00:30:358 (39,40,41,42,43,44) - How about D k k d k d? changed D k k d k k
00:35:186 (47) - k fixed


Futsuu
00:15:876 (32) - same as Kantan keep
00:20:358 (45) - same as Kantan fixed
00:21:393 (48,49) - k d fixed
00:26:910 (64) - same as Kantan keep
00:31:393 (77) - k fixed
00:31:910 (79) - d fixed
00:32:427 (80,81) - k d keep
00:35:186 (88) - k fixed
01:11:501 (171) - k fixed
01:32:019 (214) - d fixed
01:33:053 (216) - k fixed

Muzukashii
00:13:807 (35,36,37,38,39,40,41) - K dd dk dk? changed D dd dk dk
00:15:876 (42) - same as Kantan keep
00:16:565 (44,45,46,47,48,49,50) - K dd dk dd? changed D dd dk dd
00:21:393 (60) - same as Kantan fixed
00:24:841 (71,72,73,74,75,76,77) - K dd dk dk? changed D dd dk dk
00:26:910 (78) - k keep
00:52:524 (169) - k fixed
01:06:745 (212,213,214,215,216) - How about kdkkk d? fixed

Oni
00:13:807 (44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52) - K ddd d k ddk? changed D ddd d k ddk
00:15:876 (53) - same as Kantan keep
00:16:565 (55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63) - K ddd d k ddd? changed D ddd d k ddd
00:21:393 (75) - same as Kantan fixed
00:24:841 (90,91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98) - K ddd d k ddk? changed D ddd d k ddk
00:26:910 (99) - same as Kantan keep
01:07:654 (276) - d keep.why d?

I generally mod according to main sound.
Fix or not is your decision
I wish you make your map ranked! Go!
Thank you mod :)
Nofool
Hi Charlotte, mod requested via pm.
I hope it'll be usefull :c

General : Maybe you could ask someone to help you about the main bpm time signature, i mean there are a lot of important notes that are not on the big white lines, especially noticable in the Kantan.
Im not saying the bpm is wrong, just the big white lines positioning, just an esthetics problem so it's not that important.

[Oni]
mmm i'm not really a fan of that style as i would've mapped it totaly differently bu np.
The diff is really airy while there are a lot of beats x_x that's not a problem but i think there are some moments that could sounds better with more notes.
- 00:05:531 maybe add something ? that break feels a bit weird while playing imo.
- 00:09:324 ^.
Not sure if these 1/3 are really or for this part but well x_x if you keep them :
- 00:38:462 add k ? fits the melody (as you mostly follow it if im right), it looks like you put nothing there on purpose but i don't really see why x_x.
- 00:41:220 ^.
- 00:43:979 ^.
- 00:49:873 from here, there are some notes that sounds a bit out of rhythm, they are not but it sounds so because there are too isolated imo :
- 00:52:316 add d here and also at 00:52:733 - ? that k sounds weird alone.
- 00:54:839 do something similar to 00:57:888 - ? i mean use ddddd d d instead of k d d ? ^ same reason.
- 01:04:169 add d here ? better getting a d here if you follow the melody (even if you want a break here, the bpm is slow enough).
But well i got a big changes suggestion for this part. Just change the break and add notes to follow the melody well :
- 01:06:593 add d.
- 01:07:957 try something like that ?
cursor is at 01:08:654 -.
- 01:12:364 add d.
- 01:13:398 (302) del.
- 01:14:777 add d.
If you did the changes and think that there are not enough break, you can also remove 01:10:295 (286) and 01:13:053 (300) -.
- 01:17:536 refer to 00:38:462 -.
- 01:23:053 ^.
- 01:26:329 (386,387,388) mm was a bit weird to play (i know what you follow but it sounds not high enough i think), maybe use the normal rhythm could be better, idk what to suggest tho.
- 01:29:260 (392,393,394) ^.
- 01:38:053 add d ?
- 01:40:812 ^.

[Muzukashii]
- move 00:05:876 (12) to 00:05:531 - ? or do what i suggested for the oni ?
- 00:38:462 refer to the Oni.
- 00:41:220 ^.
- 00:43:979 ^.
- 00:52:316 refer to the Oni.
- 00:53:571 do something similar to 00:56:777 (180,181,182,183,184,185) - ? more or less as i suggested in the Oni.
- del 01:13:053 (142,144) and then add d at 01:13:743 and at 01:14:088 - ? Try it, it should fits more the melody and be a bit more consistent (shorter patterns).
- 01:17:536 refer to the Oni, same for the rest of the kiai.
- 01:26:329 (301,302,303) like for the Oni ;_; feels a bit weird to me, maybe add d at 01:26:329 and at 01:27:364 - ? sounds good i think if you wanna keep that xx/xy style, you can also do something similar on The Oni at least.

[Futsuu]
Maybe try these changes on your kiais (this example is for the first one, different timings for the second obviously):
- 00:37:255 (93,94,92) why not ddk in 1/3 ?
- 00:40:014 ^. + del 00:40:703 (100) -.
- 00:42:772 ^. + del 00:43:462 (106) + add k at 00:43:979 -.
- 00:45:531 ^. + del 00:46:220 (111) -.
- 00:52:316 refer to the Oni.
- 00:53:571 add d here and at 00:53:994 and then del the one you had between both ? easier to read/fits more drums.
- 00:55:623 ^.

[Kantan]
- 00:52:524 (76) move to 00:52:316 - ? easier to read.
- 00:53:571 add d here and at 00:53:994 and then remove 00:53:782 (78) and 00:54:416 (79) - ? easier to read again as it is a kantan.
- 00:55:819 refer to - 00:52:524 (76) -.
- add d at 01:26:674 -, - 01:27:364 -, - 01:28:053 and then del 01:27:019 (138) - ? i think that's easier again, just following the main rhythm.
- 01:29:433 ^ do something similar (i mean something like xxx x x xxx instead of xxx x xxx).
- 01:32:191 ^.
- 01:34:950 ^.
_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

Good luck'
Topic Starter
Charlotte

Nofool wrote:

Hi Charlotte, mod requested via pm.
I hope it'll be usefull :c

General : Maybe you could ask someone to help you about the main bpm time signature, i mean there are a lot of important notes that are not on the big white lines, especially noticable in the Kantan.
Im not saying the bpm is wrong, just the big white lines positioning, just an esthetics problem so it's not that important.

[Oni]
mmm i'm not really a fan of that style as i would've mapped it totaly differently bu np.
The diff is really airy while there are a lot of beats x_x that's not a problem but i think there are some moments that could sounds better with more notes.
- 00:05:531 maybe add something ? that break feels a bit weird while playing imo.
- 00:09:324 ^.
Not sure if these 1/3 are really or for this part but well x_x if you keep them :
- 00:38:462 add k ? fits the melody (as you mostly follow it if im right), it looks like you put nothing there on purpose but i don't really see why x_x.
- 00:41:220 ^.
- 00:43:979 ^.
- 00:49:873 from here, there are some notes that sounds a bit out of rhythm, they are not but it sounds so because there are too isolated imo :
- 00:52:316 add d here and also at 00:52:733 - ? that k sounds weird alone.
- 00:54:839 do something similar to 00:57:888 - ? i mean use ddddd d d instead of k d d ? ^ same reason.
- 01:04:169 add d here ? better getting a d here if you follow the melody (even if you want a break here, the bpm is slow enough).
But well i got a big changes suggestion for this part. Just change the break and add notes to follow the melody well :
- 01:06:593 add d.
- 01:07:957 try something like that ?
cursor is at 01:08:654 -.
- 01:12:364 add d.
- 01:13:398 (302) del.
- 01:14:777 add d.
If you did the changes and think that there are not enough break, you can also remove 01:10:295 (286) and 01:13:053 (300) -. keep.
- 01:17:536 refer to 00:38:462 -.
- 01:23:053 ^.
- 01:26:329 (386,387,388) mm was a bit weird to play (i know what you follow but it sounds not high enough i think), maybe use the normal rhythm could be better, idk what to suggest tho. changed d d d→dd dd dd
- 01:29:260 (392,393,394) ^. ^
- 01:38:053 add d ?
- 01:40:812 ^.

All fixed

[Muzukashii]
- move 00:05:876 (12) to 00:05:531 - ? or do what i suggested for the oni ?
- 00:38:462 refer to the Oni.
- 00:41:220 ^.
- 00:43:979 ^.
- 00:52:316 refer to the Oni.
- 00:53:571 do something similar to 00:56:777 (180,181,182,183,184,185) - ? more or less as i suggested in the Oni.
- del 01:13:053 (142,144) and then add d at 01:13:743 and at 01:14:088 - ? Try it, it should fits more the melody and be a bit more consistent (shorter patterns).
- 01:17:536 refer to the Oni, same for the rest of the kiai.
- 01:26:329 (301,302,303) like for the Oni ;_; feels a bit weird to me, maybe add d at 01:26:329 and at 01:27:364 - ? sounds good i think if you wanna keep that xx/xy style, you can also do something similar on The Oni at least. same as Oni

All fixed

[Futsuu]
Maybe try these changes on your kiais (this example is for the first one, different timings for the second obviously):
- 00:37:255 (93,94,92) why not ddk in 1/3 ? sorry.i don't know; ;
- 00:40:014 ^. + del 00:40:703 (100) -. ^
- 00:42:772 ^. + del 00:43:462 (106) + add k at 00:43:979 -. ^
- 00:45:531 ^. + del 00:46:220 (111) -. ^
- 00:52:316 refer to the Oni. fixed
- 00:53:571 add d here and at 00:53:994 and then del the one you had between both ? easier to read/fits more drums. fixed
- 00:55:623 ^. fixed

[Kantan]
- 00:52:524 (76) move to 00:52:316 - ? easier to read.
- 00:53:571 add d here and at 00:53:994 and then remove 00:53:782 (78) and 00:54:416 (79) - ? easier to read again as it is a kantan.
- 00:55:819 refer to - 00:52:524 (76) -.
- add d at 01:26:674 -, - 01:27:364 -, - 01:28:053 and then del 01:27:019 (138) - ? i think that's easier again, just following the main rhythm.
- 01:29:433 ^ do something similar (i mean something like xxx x x xxx instead of xxx x xxx).
- 01:32:191 ^.
- 01:34:950 ^.

All fixed
_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

Good luck'
Thank you mod :)
Xakyrie
Hi Charlotte, here's your mod request via forum PM. I'll try to simplify as much as possible for you.

[General]
  1. 01:03:109 - The second kiai seems to fit more if it starts here.
  2. An Ura Oni seems fitting for this song, especially considering the way your Oni is currently mapped. I recommend you really think about this if you like the way your Oni is mapped!
[Oni]
  1. 00:02:082 (1,2,3) - The third note sounds better as a don finisher. (1,2) as kat finishers sounds a lot better, like O O O
  2. 00:04:151 (8,9) - You could map in between these notes with kats in 1/6. It sounds better with the music.
  3. 00:08:289 (22) - This section to 00:35:876 - is undermapped...there's lots of stuff to map to if you want to make the Oni more interesting.
  4. 00:08:807 - Add two dons here for a ooo
  5. 00:09:151 - Same as above, or just one don here for a o o o
  6. 00:09:669 - This kind of density is good, you should try it for other sections of the song too.
  7. 00:11:738 - This area is not so dense but it feels like it should be.
  8. 00:13:807 - It's a bit inconsistent here. Try mapping the big finishes more similarly, like 00:14:669 (50,51) - or 00:15:186 (52,53,54). There's just a lot of different stuff going on.
  9. 00:35:876 (136) - I don't think I'm hearing wrong, but most of your kiai is mapped in 1/6, which doesn't really follow the music. Parts like 00:37:945 (138,139,140,141,142) - and 00:46:479 (193,194,195,196,197) - are mapped fine since they are in 1/4. If you want to follow the big finishes in the song, it's in 1/3.
  10. 00:55:035 - A note here would sound nice. 00:55:427 - and 00:55:623 - as well since it follows your pattern.
  11. 00:55:819 (222) - This is following the melody of the song. Try moving this to 00:56:015. It sounds better with what you're trying to follow in the music.
  12. 00:56:407 (223) - Previous 3 suggestions above apply here as well and the following sections similar to it.
  13. 01:03:109 (244) - to 01:14:777 (312) - this is mapped really well! You should use this section as a guide to mapping the other parts.
  14. 01:14:950 (313) - Same suggestion as the previous kiai.
  15. 01:38:398 (429,430,431,432,433,434,435,436,437,438,439) - For a section that's less dense than the rest of the map, this is really unfitting. Try to remove some notes so it's consistent with the rest of this section. If you want to make the end more dense like this, try adding more notes starting at 01:37:019 (424).
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:02:427 (2,3) - These sound better as finishers.
  2. 00:15:876 (42) - Definitely sounds better as a kat. Like 00:18:634 (51) and 00:21:393 (60).
  3. 00:20:358 (57) - ^
  4. 00:23:117 (66) - ^
  5. 00:24:238 (70,71) - Remove these? It sounds better without.
  6. 00:26:910 (80) - Sounds much better as a kat.
  7. 00:32:427 (98,99) - Reverse these two so it's consistent with other sections. They also sound better reversed.
  8. 00:35:186 (107) - Again, kat is more fitting.
  9. 00:42:082 (138,139) - Reverse so it's consistent. Applies to 00:42:772 (141,142) - as well.
  10. 00:43:462 (144) - Change to don for consistency. It also plays and sounds better.
  11. 00:46:565 (159) - You could add two dons after this note for a triplet ooo. It's very fitting.
  12. 00:55:623 - A note here and at 00:56:015 is more consistent with your patterns. Remove 00:55:819 (184) - as well since it follows a different beat than the rest of the section.
  13. 00:57:888 (191) - Add notes here like the previous section for better consistency.
  14. 01:01:078 - Add a note here as well like previous sections. Each speedup should follow the same pattern.
  15. 01:23:915 (299) - This should be a don.
  16. 01:24:605 (302,303,304) - All reversed. Should be a o o o for consistency.
  17. 01:25:381 (306) - Kat for consistency.
  18. 01:25:553 (307) - Remove? This is difficult for a muzu. A better pattern would be a 5-plet don stream. Change 01:25:639 (308) - to a don, and add notes in between to 01:25:984 (309).
  19. 01:27:881 - Adding a note here would help make this section more playable. Make sure the two notes here are the same colour, like o o or o o
  20. 01:30:812 - Add a note here so the following note isn't too hard to predict.
  21. 01:38:484 (345) - Remove this. The triple don feels unfitting here.
  22. Quite clean. Just needs a little more polishing.
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:02:772 - A really strong sound. I see why you didn't include a note but I don't know if this should go ignored.
  2. 00:11:048 (21) - For consistency, try making this a o o o
  3. 00:35:876 (90,91,92) - If anything, I think this kind of pattern (following 1/3 then last note snapped in 1/4) is far too difficult to read in a futsuu. The gap between the last two notes is a transition between different beats, something that should be avoided. Even if it may feel boring, consistency is extremely important in easier difficulties. Use simplified versions like 00:37:255 (93,94,95).
  4. 00:38:634 (96,97,98) - ^ The above applies to all beats like this.
  5. 00:51:899 (123,124,125,126) - To be consistent with the previous section, this should be o o o__ o Basically, move (124,125) left two ticks.
  6. 00:55:623 (134,135) - Move these left two ticks for consistency reasons.
  7. 00:56:962 - Add a note here so it's consistent with the previous sections, and make sure the 3 notes here are the same colour (eg: o o o) Every two bars from 00:53:149 (127) - should be consistent, until 01:01:897 (151).
  8. 01:14:950 (186,187,188) - My previous suggestions for the kiai still apply here.
  9. Try to keep your mapping consistent for each section that's repeated so it's easier for players to understand the map.
[Kantan]
  1. 00:02:772 - Again as suggested before in the futsuu, I don't think this should go ignored. Just make this a don finisher and the previous note as well so it's easy to play (O O O).
  2. 00:03:807 (3) - to 00:08:289 - I highly suggest moving all the notes in this section onto the big white ticks. Not only is the sound the strongest on these ticks, but it's a perfect lead in to the following pattern.
  3. 00:30:876 (40) - I would remove this. I don't think the increase in difficulty is necessary; the variation is enough. 00:31:910 (41) - as well.
  4. 00:51:899 (73) - Remove.
  5. 00:58:234 - Add a note for consistency. 00:59:602 - and 01:02:200 - as well.
  6. 01:37:364 (158) - Remove for consistency.
You should try to review your Oni. I think you could definitely make it much more enjoyable, and there's so much you can do with this song!
Topic Starter
Charlotte

Xakyrie wrote:

Hi Charlotte, here's your mod request via forum PM. I'll try to simplify as much as possible for you.

[General]
  1. 01:03:109 - The second kiai seems to fit more if it starts here. fixed
  2. An Ura Oni seems fitting for this song, especially considering the way your Oni is currently mapped. I recommend you really think about this if you like the way your Oni is mapped!
[Oni]
  1. 00:02:082 (1,2,3) - The third note sounds better as a don finisher. (1,2) as kat finishers sounds a lot better, like O O O
  2. 00:04:151 (8,9) - You could map in between these notes with kats in 1/6. It sounds better with the music.
  3. 00:08:289 (22) - This section to 00:35:876 - is undermapped...there's lots of stuff to map to if you want to make the Oni more interesting.
  4. 00:08:807 - Add two dons here for a ooo
  5. 00:09:151 - Same as above, or just one don here for a o o o
  6. 00:09:669 - This kind of density is good, you should try it for other sections of the song too.
  7. 00:11:738 - This area is not so dense but it feels like it should be.
  8. 00:13:807 - It's a bit inconsistent here. Try mapping the big finishes more similarly, like 00:14:669 (50,51) - or 00:15:186 (52,53,54). There's just a lot of different stuff going on.
  9. 00:35:876 (136) - I don't think I'm hearing wrong, but most of your kiai is mapped in 1/6, which doesn't really follow the music. Parts like 00:37:945 (138,139,140,141,142) - and 00:46:479 (193,194,195,196,197) - are mapped fine since they are in 1/4. If you want to follow the big finishes in the song, it's in 1/3.
  10. 00:55:035 - A note here would sound nice. 00:55:427 - and 00:55:623 - as well since it follows your pattern.
  11. 00:55:819 (222) - This is following the melody of the song. Try moving this to 00:56:015. It sounds better with what you're trying to follow in the music.
  12. 00:56:407 (223) - Previous 3 suggestions above apply here as well and the following sections similar to it.
  13. 01:03:109 (244) - to 01:14:777 (312) - this is mapped really well! You should use this section as a guide to mapping the other parts.
  14. 01:14:950 (313) - Same suggestion as the previous kiai.
  15. 01:38:398 (429,430,431,432,433,434,435,436,437,438,439) - For a section that's less dense than the rest of the map, this is really unfitting. Try to remove some notes so it's consistent with the rest of this section. If you want to make the end more dense like this, try adding more notes starting at 01:37:019 (424).

    Almost fixed.kiai time is 1/3→changed 1/4.Oni→changed Inner Oni.
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:02:427 (2,3) - These sound better as finishers.
  2. 00:15:876 (42) - Definitely sounds better as a kat. Like 00:18:634 (51) and 00:21:393 (60).
  3. 00:20:358 (57) - ^
  4. 00:23:117 (66) - ^
  5. 00:24:238 (70,71) - Remove these? It sounds better without.
  6. 00:26:910 (80) - Sounds much better as a kat.
  7. 00:32:427 (98,99) - Reverse these two so it's consistent with other sections. They also sound better reversed.
  8. 00:35:186 (107) - Again, kat is more fitting.
  9. 00:42:082 (138,139) - Reverse so it's consistent. Applies to 00:42:772 (141,142) - as well.
  10. 00:43:462 (144) - Change to don for consistency. It also plays and sounds better.
  11. 00:46:565 (159) - You could add two dons after this note for a triplet ooo. It's very fitting.
  12. 00:55:623 - A note here and at 00:56:015 is more consistent with your patterns. Remove 00:55:819 (184) - as well since it follows a different beat than the rest of the section.
  13. 00:57:888 (191) - Add notes here like the previous section for better consistency.
  14. 01:01:078 - Add a note here as well like previous sections. Each speedup should follow the same pattern.
  15. 01:23:915 (299) - This should be a don.
  16. 01:24:605 (302,303,304) - All reversed. Should be a o o o for consistency.
  17. 01:25:381 (306) - Kat for consistency.
  18. 01:25:553 (307) - Remove? This is difficult for a muzu. A better pattern would be a 5-plet don stream. Change 01:25:639 (308) - to a don, and add notes in between to 01:25:984 (309).
  19. 01:27:881 - Adding a note here would help make this section more playable. Make sure the two notes here are the same colour, like o o or o o
  20. 01:30:812 - Add a note here so the following note isn't too hard to predict.
  21. 01:38:484 (345) - Remove this. The triple don feels unfitting here.
  22. Quite clean. Just needs a little more polishing.

    All fixed
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:02:772 - A really strong sound. I see why you didn't include a note but I don't know if this should go ignored.
  2. 00:11:048 (21) - For consistency, try making this a o o o
  3. 00:35:876 (90,91,92) - If anything, I think this kind of pattern (following 1/3 then last note snapped in 1/4) is far too difficult to read in a futsuu. The gap between the last two notes is a transition between different beats, something that should be avoided. Even if it may feel boring, consistency is extremely important in easier difficulties. Use simplified versions like 00:37:255 (93,94,95).
  4. 00:38:634 (96,97,98) - ^ The above applies to all beats like this.
  5. 00:51:899 (123,124,125,126) - To be consistent with the previous section, this should be o o o__ o Basically, move (124,125) left two ticks.
  6. 00:55:623 (134,135) - Move these left two ticks for consistency reasons.
  7. 00:56:962 - Add a note here so it's consistent with the previous sections, and make sure the 3 notes here are the same colour (eg: o o o) Every two bars from 00:53:149 (127) - should be consistent, until 01:01:897 (151).
  8. 01:14:950 (186,187,188) - My previous suggestions for the kiai still apply here.
  9. Try to keep your mapping consistent for each section that's repeated so it's easier for players to understand the map.

    All fixed
[Kantan]
  1. 00:02:772 - Again as suggested before in the futsuu, I don't think this should go ignored. Just make this a don finisher and the previous note as well so it's easy to play (O O O).
  2. 00:03:807 (3) - to 00:08:289 - I highly suggest moving all the notes in this section onto the big white ticks. Not only is the sound the strongest on these ticks, but it's a perfect lead in to the following pattern.
  3. 00:30:876 (40) - I would remove this. I don't think the increase in difficulty is necessary; the variation is enough. 00:31:910 (41) - as well.
  4. 00:51:899 (73) - Remove.
  5. 00:58:234 - Add a note for consistency. 00:59:602 - and 01:02:200 - as well.
  6. 01:37:364 (158) - Remove for consistency.

    Almost fixed
You should try to review your Oni. I think you could definitely make it much more enjoyable, and there's so much you can do with this song!
Thank you mod :) I changed a lot :)
neonat
Futsuu

00:03:634 (6) - I suggest you remove this and add notes to 00:04:151 and 00:04:324 - the drum cymbals are too strong to ignore at the start of the song, you should map to them
00:15:876 (35,36) - change to kat? Or at least the first one? To highlight the how 00:15:876 (35) is higher pitch overall to 00:16:565 (37) - Either make it similar to 00:24:151 (59,60) or 00:21:393 (51,52)
00:58:581 (146) - sounds better as kat
01:34:777 (231,232) - d k instead k d because it's the same music pattern as 01:32:019 (225,226)

Where is Oni ?.?

Inner Oni

00:11:565 - I feel there should be a note here to lead in to 00:11:738 (46)
00:30:014 (161) - change to kat like 00:32:772 (178) because unlike all the rest before this, the pitch goes down. So since only these 2 share that kind of pitch change, they should be similar
00:58:581 (331) - should be k like 00:55:623 (319)

These are what concerned me the most, good luck
Topic Starter
Charlotte

neonat wrote:

Futsuu

00:03:634 (6) - I suggest you remove this and add notes to 00:04:151 and 00:04:324 - the drum cymbals are too strong to ignore at the start of the song, you should map to them fixed
00:15:876 (35,36) - change to kat? Or at least the first one? To highlight the how 00:15:876 (35) is higher pitch overall to 00:16:565 (37) - Either make it similar to 00:24:151 (59,60) or 00:21:393 (51,52) keep
00:58:581 (146) - sounds better as kat keep
01:34:777 (231,232) - d k instead k d because it's the same music pattern as 01:32:019 (225,226) fixed

Where is Oni ?.? GD.wip

Inner Oni

00:11:565 - I feel there should be a note here to lead in to 00:11:738 (46) fixed
00:30:014 (161) - change to kat like 00:32:772 (178) because unlike all the rest before this, the pitch goes down. So since only these 2 share that kind of pitch change, they should be similar fixed
00:58:581 (331) - should be k like 00:55:623 (319) fixed

These are what concerned me the most, good luck
Thank you mod :)
Zetera
Hi there, here is your requested mod.

[Kantan]

|00:22:082 (28) - should be a D (00:13:807 (16) - , 00:16:565 (20) - , etc.)
|00:32:772 (43) - d for consistency, you used following colours in previous triples: d d d, k d d, k d d, k k d.
|00:35:531 (47) - k, same reason as above.
|01:14:950 (119) - D to make the pattern's end similar to 00:35:186 (46,47,48) - .
|01:37:364 (159) - feels pretty redundant, consider deleting it (would be an overmapped pattern otherwise)

[Futsuu]

|00:22:082 (54) - I think I start to understand what you did there. But somehow I don't approve of it. ._. (if you fixed the problem in Kantan, fix it here and probably in every other difficulty.)
|00:32:427 (84,85,86,92,93,94) - Also the same as in the Kantan, make those and 00:21:393 (52,53,54,60,61,62) - similar please.
|00:57:147 (144,146) - swap these colours.
|01:07:351 (172) - k (consistent to 01:04:321 (162,163,164,165,166) - )
|01:20:467 (203) - D (00:41:048 (105,106,107) - )

[Muzukashii]

|00:22:082 - See, here you have a D instead of a d. Should be consistent in all diffs.
|00:28:634 (86) and 00:34:151 (104) - I think a k fits better here.

[Inner Oni]

* Great Kiai idea!

|00:42:341 (255,256,257,258) - This pattern doesn't exactly fit, it differs from all others. It was also not used in the 3rd kiai. Better use one of the previous/later patterns.)
|00:55:819 (324) - extremely confusing and should be put just to fulfill the double-pattern. just delete this.
|01:01:570 to 01:02:806 - is really low in objects for an Inner Oni. You might want to fill this part up like the rest of the song's section.

Oni will be, as said per PM, collabed by Stefan and me.

Good luck!
Topic Starter
Charlotte

Sala- wrote:

Hi there, here is your requested mod.

[Kantan]

|00:22:082 (28) - should be a D (00:13:807 (16) - , 00:16:565 (20) - , etc.) fixed
|00:32:772 (43) - d for consistency, you used following colours in previous triples: d d d, k d d, k d d, k k d. fixed
|00:35:531 (47) - k, same reason as above. fixed
|01:14:950 (119) - D to make the pattern's end similar to 00:35:186 (46,47,48) - . fixed
|01:37:364 (159) - feels pretty redundant, consider deleting it (would be an overmapped pattern otherwise) fixed

[Futsuu]

|00:22:082 (54) - I think I start to understand what you did there. But somehow I don't approve of it. ._. (if you fixed the problem in Kantan, fix it here and probably in every other difficulty.) fixed
|00:32:427 (84,85,86,92,93,94) - Also the same as in the Kantan, make those and 00:21:393 (52,53,54,60,61,62) - similar please. fixed
|00:57:147 (144,146) - swap these colours.
|01:07:351 (172) - k (consistent to 01:04:321 (162,163,164,165,166) - ) fixed
|01:20:467 (203) - D (00:41:048 (105,106,107) - ) fixed

[Muzukashii]

|00:22:082 - See, here you have a D instead of a d. Should be consistent in all diffs. fixed
|00:28:634 (86) and 00:34:151 (104) - I think a k fits better here. fixed

[Inner Oni]

* Great Kiai idea!

|00:42:341 (255,256,257,258) - This pattern doesn't exactly fit, it differs from all others. It was also not used in the 3rd kiai. Better use one of the previous/later patterns.) kdkd→changed kdkk
|00:55:819 (324) - extremely confusing and should be put just to fulfill the double-pattern. just delete this. fixed
|01:01:570 to 01:02:806 - is really low in objects for an Inner Oni. You might want to fill this part up like the rest of the song's section. add note.

Oni will be, as said per PM, collabed by Stefan and me.

Good luck!
Thank you mod :)
rew0825
Hi from my mod request :)

[ Kantan]
  1. 00:32:772 (44) - d and 00:33:117 (45) - K
  2. 01:12:191 (112) - D
  3. 01:14:605 (117,118) - ctrl+g
  4. 01:25:639 (136,137) - ctrl+g
  5. 01:33:915 (146,147) - ctrl+g

[ Futsuu]
  1. 00:03:117 (4) - Delete
  2. 00:04:151 (6) - k , 00:04:324 (7) - Delete and 00:04:496 (7) - move to 00:04:841
  3. 00:07:255 (13) - move to 00:06:910
  4. 01:04:472 (161) - move to 01:04:775
  5. 01:14:950 (188,189,190) - k k d

[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:05:186 (11) - k
  2. 00:38:031 (119) - Delete
  3. 00:38:462 (120) - Delete
  4. 00:40:789 (130) - Delete
  5. 00:41:220 (131) - Delete
  6. 00:43:548 (141) - Delete
  7. 00:43:979 (142) - Delete
  8. 00:46:307 (152) - Delete
  9. 01:17:536 (264) - Delete
  10. 01:20:295 (276) - Delete
  11. 01:23:053 (288) - Delete
  12. 01:26:501 (304,306,308) - k k k

Good luck :)
Topic Starter
Charlotte

rew0825 wrote:

Hi from my mod request :)

[ Kantan]
  1. 00:32:772 (44) - d and 00:33:117 (45) - K
  2. 01:12:191 (112) - D
  3. 01:14:605 (117,118) - ctrl+g
  4. 01:25:639 (136,137) - ctrl+g
  5. 01:33:915 (146,147) - ctrl+g

[ Futsuu]
  1. 00:03:117 (4) - Delete
  2. 00:04:151 (6) - k , 00:04:324 (7) - Delete and 00:04:496 (7) - move to 00:04:841
  3. 00:07:255 (13) - move to 00:06:910
  4. 01:04:472 (161) - move to 01:04:775
  5. 01:14:950 (188,189,190) - k k d

[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:05:186 (11) - k
  2. 00:38:031 (119) - Delete
  3. 00:38:462 (120) - Delete
  4. 00:40:789 (130) - Delete
  5. 00:41:220 (131) - Delete
  6. 00:43:548 (141) - Delete
  7. 00:43:979 (142) - Delete
  8. 00:46:307 (152) - Delete
  9. 01:17:536 (264) - Delete
  10. 01:20:295 (276) - Delete
  11. 01:23:053 (288) - Delete
  12. 01:26:501 (304,306,308) - k k k

Good luck :)
I changed a little. Thank you mod :)
xtrem3x
Request via .... PM or form? .-.

_____________________________________________________

General:

all diffs with same kiai time pls .-.

don = d
kat = k
Big Don = D
Big Kat = K

_____________________________________________________

Kantan:

Good .-.

_____________________________________________________

Futsuu:

01:14:950 (191) - change to D
01:25:984 (214) - ^

01:39:088 (245) - change to k

_____________________________________________________

Muzukashii:

01:26:501 (314,316,318) - change to k

_____________________________________________________

Sala-fan's Oni:

00:05:186 - change to k (?)

00:07:255 (1,1,1) - k d k
00:10:358 (1,1,1) - k d k

00:49:498 - change to k

01:28:398 (1,1) - k d

01:39:088 (1,1,1) - same k d k

01:42:537 - change to D

_____________________________________________________

Inner Oni:

00:16:220 - change to k
00:17:082 - ^
00:18:979 - ^
00:26:651 (139,140,141, 142) - ddkk

01:30:295 to 01:31:157 - add 2 or 3 notes .-.

01:41:674 - k

_____________________________________________________

Zetera
00:49:498 - change to k Denied. I used the same triple formations all the time, this would make it inconsistent. Also, I don't think it follows any certain point in the music.

Thanks for your mod. The rest of the diff belongs to Stefan.
Topic Starter
Charlotte

xtrem3x wrote:

Request via .... PM or form? .-.

_____________________________________________________

General:

all diffs with same kiai time pls .-.

don = d
kat = k
Big Don = D
Big Kat = K

_____________________________________________________

Kantan:

Good .-.

_____________________________________________________

Futsuu:

01:14:950 (191) - change to D fixed
01:25:984 (214) - ^ fixed

01:39:088 (245) - change to k fixed

_____________________________________________________

Muzukashii:

01:26:501 (314,316,318) - change to k fixed

_____________________________________________________

Sala-fan's Oni:

00:05:186 - change to k (?)

00:07:255 (1,1,1) - k d k
00:10:358 (1,1,1) - k d k

00:49:498 - change to k

01:28:398 (1,1) - k d

01:39:088 (1,1,1) - same k d k

01:42:537 - change to D

_____________________________________________________

Inner Oni:

00:16:220 - change to k fixed
00:17:082 - ^ fixed
00:18:979 - ^ fixed
00:26:651 (139,140,141, 142) - ddkk fixed

01:30:295 to 01:31:157 - add 2 or 3 notes .-. okay,add note.

01:41:674 - k fixed

_____________________________________________________

Thank you mod :)
Ginshu
Hi~ :)

Mod as your requested

d= don
k= kat
D= big don
K= big kat


Kantan
> 00:02:082 (1,2,3) - d D d
> 01:13:915 (116,117) - d k

Futsuu
> 00:02:082 (1) - d
> 01:15:295 (192) - delete

Muzukashii
> 00:02:082 (1) - d
> 00:32:772 (99) - k
> 00:38:289 (120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127,128,129,130,131,132) -

> 01:10:984 (241) - d

Sala-fan's oni
> 00:02:427 (1) - K
> 00:35:617 (51) - k
> 00:55:035 - add d
> 00:55:427 (29) - k
> 00:58:061 (39) - k
> 01:01:078 (52) - k
> 01:25:726 (185) - k

Inner Oni
> 00:02:082 (1,2,3,4) - d K D d
> 00:11:220 (43,44) - k k
> 00:14:324 (55) - k
> 00:20:531 (97) - k
> 00:24:496 (125) - D
> 00:25:358 (129) - k
> 00:27:255 (143) - k
> 01:04:775 (367) - k

Good Luck ;)
Zetera

LNP- wrote:

Sala-fan's oni
> 00:02:427 (1) - K
> 00:35:617 (51) - k
> 00:55:035 - add d
> 00:55:427 (29) - k No, I will use consistent kdkdk-patterns.
> 00:58:061 (39) - k ^
> 01:01:078 (52) - k ^
> 01:25:726 (185) - k

00:55:035 - was fixed. everything else belongs to Stefan.
Topic Starter
Charlotte

LNP- wrote:

Hi~ :)

Mod as your requested

d= don
k= kat
D= big don
K= big kat


Kantan
> 00:02:082 (1,2,3) - d D d changed d D K
> 01:13:915 (116,117) - d k keep

Futsuu
> 00:02:082 (1) - d fixed
> 01:15:295 (192) - delete keep

Muzukashii
> 00:02:082 (1) - d fixed
> 00:32:772 (99) - k keep
> 00:38:289 (120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127,128,129,130,131,132) - keep

> 01:10:984 (241) - d keep

Sala-fan's oni
> 00:02:427 (1) - K
> 00:35:617 (51) - k
> 00:55:035 - add d
> 00:55:427 (29) - k
> 00:58:061 (39) - k
> 01:01:078 (52) - k
> 01:25:726 (185) - k

Inner Oni
> 00:02:082 (1,2,3,4) - d K D d changed d D K d
> 00:11:220 (43,44) - k k keep
> 00:14:324 (55) - k ^
> 00:20:531 (97) - k ^
> 00:24:496 (125) - D ^
> 00:25:358 (129) - k ^
> 00:27:255 (143) - k ^
> 01:04:775 (367) - k fixed

Good Luck ;)
Thank you mod :)
Ilikecheese
Inner Oni

The kiai aside, the rest of the map was a tad to easy for me :P so I thought it could use some notes

00:11:824 - add k
00:12:082 - change k
00:12:255 (51,52,53,54,55,56,57) - dddkkkk
00:12:945 (58,59,60) - kdk
00:13:289 - add d
00:24:324 (123,124) - change to k
00:24:669 - add k
00:47:275 - add d
00:48:007 - ^
00:56:015 - add k
00:56:211 - delete note
01:01:078 - add d
01:01:242 - change to k
01:40:036 - add d
01:40:122 - change to k
01:40:295 - add d
01:40:381 - ^
01:40:553 - add k
01:40:639 - ^
01:40:726 - ^
01:40:984 - ^

Sala-fan's Oni
This map was pretty even and flowed well, boring, but i'd rather not start adding notes to this map.
01:25:810 (186) - overlapped don, delete.

00:36:105 - here you have 1/3s but it should be 1/4. re-snap pl0x.

Muzukashii
00:03:634 (6) - move this to 00:04:324
00:36:105 - same as Oni, should be 1/4
01:05:987 (220) - delete
01:10:812 - I was thinking that here, you should delete some of these short streams, its not kiai and furthermore its a muzukashii.
01:14:950 - again with the 1/3 ~ to 1/4 snapped notes
Topic Starter
Charlotte

Ilikecheese wrote:

Inner Oni

The kiai aside, the rest of the map was a tad to easy for me :P so I thought it could use some notes

00:11:824 - add k
00:12:082 - change k
00:12:255 (51,52,53,54,55,56,57) - dddkkkk
00:12:945 (58,59,60) - kdk
00:13:289 - add d
00:24:324 (123,124) - change to k
00:24:669 - add k
00:47:275 - add d
00:48:007 - ^
00:56:015 - add k
00:56:211 - delete note
01:01:078 - add d
01:01:242 - change to k
01:40:036 - add d
01:40:122 - change to k
01:40:295 - add d
01:40:381 - ^
01:40:553 - add k
01:40:639 - ^
01:40:726 - ^
01:40:984 - ^

Almost fixed

Sala-fan's Oni
This map was pretty even and flowed well, boring, but i'd rather not start adding notes to this map.
01:25:810 (186) - overlapped don, delete.

00:36:105 - here you have 1/3s but it should be 1/4. re-snap pl0x.

Muzukashii
00:03:634 (6) - move this to 00:04:324 add 1/3 note.
00:36:105 - same as Oni, should be 1/4 keep
01:05:987 (220) - delete keep
01:10:812 - I was thinking that here, you should delete some of these short streams, its not kiai and furthermore its a muzukashii. keep
01:14:950 - again with the 1/3 ~ to 1/4 snapped notes keep
Thank you mod :)
Zetera
Fixed everything, even Stefan's stupid mistake. And I wonder why I always miss..
Kurokotei
Hi! Here is the mod you requested via PM!

[General]

01:07:957 - to 01:09:433 - I would recommend to add some sv changes to have this slowdown in a more progressive way, would fit the song better imo (except in Oni diff, they are already here)

[Kantan]

  1. 00:10:358 (10) - delete? It'll give a little break and the k in the next pattern is emphasized
  2. 00:55:231 (79,80) - change these to k? it'll make a reverse pattern with 00:53:149 (75,76,77) -
  3. 00:57:888 (84,85) - how about k k d (1/1)? reverse pattern + to keep rhythm consistency

[Futsuu]

  1. 00:14:151 (32) - I don't think it's needed, remove? like this the transition is better between Kantan and Futsuu
  2. 00:15:186 (35) - ^
  3. 00:16:910 (40) - ^
  4. 00:17:945 (43) - ^
  5. 00:19:669 (48) - ^
  6. 00:20:703 (51) - ^
  7. 00:22:427 (56) - ^
  8. 00:23:462 (59) - ^
  9. 00:25:186 (64) - ^
  10. 00:26:220 (67) - ^
    etc... until 00:35:876 (95) -
  11. 01:03:109 (158,159,160) - ddd? it's easier + sounds good too
  12. 01:04:321 (163,164,165) - kkk? easier imo
  13. 01:06:745 (170,171,172) - ^

[Muzukashii]

  • Everything seems fine! *throws a star*

[PuzzleMaster-NutritiousGuy's Oni *runs*]

  1. 00:30:358 (28) - change to D? like this the next k is emphasized since the pitch is pretty high
  2. 00:33:117 (40) - d? same reason as above
  3. 01:41:415 - add a d here? I think the sound in the back is lound enough to be mapped

[Inner Oni]

  1. 00:20:703 (107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114) - ddk kkddk would flow better imo
  2. 00:24:496 (134) - change to d?
    I really like the Kiai, it's really fun to play!

That's all! Good luck!
Stefan

xtrem3x wrote:

Sala-fan's Oni:

00:05:186 - change to k (?) I see nothing which sounds higher to add k here.

00:07:255 (1,1,1) - k d k There is a higher beat on 00:07:600 (1) where k is good.
00:10:358 (1,1,1) - k d k Wouldn't fit much imo

01:28:398 (1,1) - k d Following the terrible piano play here

01:39:088 (1,1,1) - same k d k Won't change since I didn't in the first as well.

01:42:537 - change to D Why? I already used on 00:13:807 (1) K.

LNP- wrote:

Sala-fan's oni
> 00:02:427 (1) - K I guess to have a bit consistency with the Inner Oni Difficulty would be good. Added.
> 00:35:617 (51) - k Sala-, that's your part. :|
> 01:25:726 (185) - k d is fine here.

Sayaka- wrote:

[PuzzleMaster-NutritiousGuy's Oni *runs*]
u wot

  1. 01:41:415 - add a d here? I think the sound in the back is lound enough to be mapped I like the transision ooo o o ooo more.
Thanks for the mods.

Sala- wrote:

Fixed everything, even Stefan's stupid mistake. And I wonder why I always miss..
ehehehehhhh /slaps Sala
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Topic Starter
Charlotte

Sayaka- wrote:

Hi! Here is the mod you requested via PM!

[General]

01:07:957 - to 01:09:433 - I would recommend to add some sv changes to have this slowdown in a more progressive way, would fit the song better imo (except in Oni diff, they are already here)

[Kantan]

  1. 00:10:358 (10) - delete? It'll give a little break and the k in the next pattern is emphasized fixed
  2. 00:55:231 (79,80) - change these to k? it'll make a reverse pattern with 00:53:149 (75,76,77) - fixed
  3. 00:57:888 (84,85) - how about k k d (1/1)? reverse pattern + to keep rhythm consistency sorry.1/1-triplet is long.keep

[Futsuu]

  1. 00:14:151 (32) - I don't think it's needed, remove? like this the transition is better between Kantan and Futsuu
  2. 00:15:186 (35) - ^
  3. 00:16:910 (40) - ^
  4. 00:17:945 (43) - ^
  5. 00:19:669 (48) - ^
  6. 00:20:703 (51) - ^
  7. 00:22:427 (56) - ^
  8. 00:23:462 (59) - ^
  9. 00:25:186 (64) - ^
  10. 00:26:220 (67) - ^
    etc... until 00:35:876 (95) -
  11. 01:03:109 (158,159,160) - ddd? it's easier + sounds good too
  12. 01:04:321 (163,164,165) - kkk? easier imo keep.
  13. 01:06:745 (170,171,172) - ^

    Almost fixed

[Muzukashii]

  • Everything seems fine! *throws a star*

[PuzzleMaster-NutritiousGuy's Oni *runs*]

  1. 00:30:358 (28) - change to D? like this the next k is emphasized since the pitch is pretty high
  2. 00:33:117 (40) - d? same reason as above
  3. 01:41:415 - add a d here? I think the sound in the back is lound enough to be mapped

[Inner Oni]

  1. 00:20:703 (107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114) - ddk kkddk would flow better imo fixed
  2. 00:24:496 (134) - change to d? fixed
    I really like the Kiai, it's really fun to play! Thank you

That's all! Good luck!
Thank you mod :)
PatZar
hi from PM request

Inner
01:38:915 (577,579) - ctrl + g
01:39:605 and 01:39:691 - don

[Sala-fan's Oni]
00:10:358 (1,1) - kk
00:17:945 (1,1) - how about kd? 00:18:117 (1) - drum
00:32:600 - d? because 00:35:358 (49) -

no comment =w=b

nothing i can be mentioned

the map set good already =w=b
good luck!
Topic Starter
Charlotte

Genocide wrote:

hi from PM request

Inner
01:38:915 (577,579) - ctrl + g changed 01:38:398 (574,575,576,577,578,579,580) - ddkkddd
01:39:605 and 01:39:691 - don keep

[Sala-fan's Oni]
00:10:358 (1,1) - kk
00:17:945 (1,1) - how about kd? 00:18:117 (1) - drum
00:32:600 - d? because 00:35:358 (49) -

no comment =w=b

nothing i can be mentioned

the map set good already =w=b
good luck!
Thank you mod :)
Nardoxyribonucleic
Hi, here comes a taiko mod as requested.

  • [Kantan]
  1. 00:02:427 (2,3) - consider changing it to K d ? This could fit the strong snare sound at 00:02:427 (2) -
  2. 00:23:117 (28) - k would be better since the sound is similar to 00:20:358 (24) -
  3. 00:34:151 (44) - same as ^
  4. 01:20:467 (127) - I think you may have missed the finish here ?
  5. 01:25:984 (137) - ^
  • [Futsuu]
  1. 00:02:427 (2,3) - same as Kantan
  2. 00:03:807 - The current pattern sounds strange to me because it is a bit unnatural. You may try this: (cursor at 00:04:151 - )
  3. 00:23:634 (52) - maybe d as you did at 00:34:669 (76) - ? It would be more consistent imo.
  4. From 00:35:876 to 00:41:393 - , I think you need to make this part similar to the 2nd part of this kiai in terms of note density for the sake of a better flow. Here is a suggestion: (cursor at 00:38:634 - )
  5. 01:02:200 - adding d here could make it more coherent to 00:59:602 (132) -
  6. 01:12:881 (168) - d would be better since the music is the same as 01:10:122 (162) -
  7. From 01:14:950 to 01:20:467 - same as the part from 00:35:876 to 00:41:393 -
  8. 01:32:019 (209,210) - d k could follow the pitch of the music better.
  9. 01:34:777 (215,216) - ^
  • [Muzukashii]
  1. 00:02:427 (2,3) - K k would be better for the strong snare at 00:02:427 (2) -
  2. 00:09:669 (26,27,28,29,30,31) - ddd kkd would be nice if you want to follow the background musical pitch.
  3. 00:11:220 and 00:11:393 - you may add d for better consistency.
  4. 00:52:316 (178) - k could fit the pitch of the music there.
  5. From 01:12:191 to 01:14:605 - , I would propose a shorter pattern like this: (cursor at 01:12:191 - )
  6. 01:14:950 (264) - I think you may have missed the finish here ?
  7. 01:20:467 (290) - ^
  8. 01:22:651 (300) - move to 01:22:622 (300) - . The note is wrongly snapped.
  9. 01:25:984 (317) - same as 01:14:950 (264) -
  10. 01:30:639 - add d and change 01:30:812 (334) - to follow the background music ?
  11. 01:35:295 (346) - k would be better since the sound is similar to 01:32:536 (339) -
  • [Sala-fan's Oni]
  1. 00:10:358 (1) - k would be better if you want to follow the pitch of the background music.
  2. 00:16:220 (1) - consider changing this note to D ? It has the lowest pitch among 00:15:876 (1,1,1) -
  3. 01:04:548 - consider adding a don here ? A ddk triplet could suit the music there while increasing the difficulty by a bit.
  4. 01:06:139 (81,82,83) - I think kkd could fit the stressed sound at 01:06:139 - in a way better.
  5. 01:06:972 - same as 01:04:548 -
  6. 01:39:088 (1) - same as 00:10:358 (1) -
  • [Inner Oni]
  1. 00:02:427 (2,3) - same as Muzukashii
  2. 00:06:220 (16,17,18,19,20,21) - ddk ddd and add k at 00:07:772 - ? Again, this could follow the pitch of the music nicely.
  3. 00:08:548 - consider adding a don here for the hit-hat sound ?
  4. 00:15:531 (73,74,75,76,77) - ddkdk could follow the relatively high-pitched music at 00:15:876 (77) -
  5. 00:21:738 (115) - k would be better for pattern consistency as 00:16:220 (78,97) -
  6. 00:27:255 (153) - ^
  7. 00:28:634 (161) - k could follow the relatively high-pitched sound there.
  8. 00:35:531 (208) - same as 00:21:738 (115) -
  9. 00:52:316 (322) - same as Muzukashii
  10. 01:00:586 (354) - maybe k here for pattern consistency ?
  11. 01:04:548 - consider adding d here for a harder pattern which fits the music ?
  12. 01:30:812 (551) - same as Muzukashii
  13. 01:32:019 (555,559) - you may swap these notes to d k as 01:33:053 - has a higher pitch.
  14. 01:34:777 (564,565) - similar to ^ , d k would be better imo.
That's all and good luck~ :D
Topic Starter
Charlotte

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Hi, here comes a taiko mod as requested.

  • [Kantan]
  1. 00:02:427 (2,3) - consider changing it to K d ? This could fit the strong snare sound at 00:02:427 (2) -
  2. 00:23:117 (28) - k would be better since the sound is similar to 00:20:358 (24) -
  3. 00:34:151 (44) - same as ^
  4. 01:20:467 (127) - I think you may have missed the finish here ?
  5. 01:25:984 (137) - ^

    All fixed
  • [Futsuu]
  1. 00:02:427 (2,3) - same as Kantan
  2. 00:03:807 - The current pattern sounds strange to me because it is a bit unnatural. You may try this: (cursor at 00:04:151 - )
  3. 00:23:634 (52) - maybe d as you did at 00:34:669 (76) - ? It would be more consistent imo.
  4. From 00:35:876 to 00:41:393 - , I think you need to make this part similar to the 2nd part of this kiai in terms of note density for the sake of a better flow. Here is a suggestion: (cursor at 00:38:634 - )
  5. 01:02:200 - adding d here could make it more coherent to 00:59:602 (132) -
  6. 01:12:881 (168) - d would be better since the music is the same as 01:10:122 (162) -
  7. From 01:14:950 to 01:20:467 - same as the part from 00:35:876 to 00:41:393 -
  8. 01:32:019 (209,210) - d k could follow the pitch of the music better.
  9. 01:34:777 (215,216) - ^

    All fixed
  • [Muzukashii]
  1. 00:02:427 (2,3) - K k would be better for the strong snare at 00:02:427 (2) -
  2. 00:09:669 (26,27,28,29,30,31) - ddd kkd would be nice if you want to follow the background musical pitch.
  3. 00:11:220 and 00:11:393 - you may add d for better consistency.
  4. 00:52:316 (178) - k could fit the pitch of the music there.
  5. From 01:12:191 to 01:14:605 - , I would propose a shorter pattern like this: (cursor at 01:12:191 - )
  6. 01:14:950 (264) - I think you may have missed the finish here ?
  7. 01:20:467 (290) - ^
  8. 01:22:651 (300) - move to 01:22:622 (300) - . The note is wrongly snapped.
  9. 01:25:984 (317) - same as 01:14:950 (264) -
  10. 01:30:639 - add d and change 01:30:812 (334) - to follow the background music ?
  11. 01:35:295 (346) - k would be better since the sound is similar to 01:32:536 (339) -

    Almost fixed
  • [Sala-fan's Oni]
  1. 00:10:358 (1) - k would be better if you want to follow the pitch of the background music.
  2. 00:16:220 (1) - consider changing this note to D ? It has the lowest pitch among 00:15:876 (1,1,1) -
  3. 01:04:548 - consider adding a don here ? A ddk triplet could suit the music there while increasing the difficulty by a bit.
  4. 01:06:139 (81,82,83) - I think kkd could fit the stressed sound at 01:06:139 - in a way better.
  5. 01:06:972 - same as 01:04:548 -
  6. 01:39:088 (1) - same as 00:10:358 (1) -
  • [Inner Oni]
  1. 00:02:427 (2,3) - same as Muzukashii
  2. 00:06:220 (16,17,18,19,20,21) - ddk ddd and add k at 00:07:772 - ? Again, this could follow the pitch of the music nicely.
  3. 00:08:548 - consider adding a don here for the hit-hat sound ?
  4. 00:15:531 (73,74,75,76,77) - ddkdk could follow the relatively high-pitched music at 00:15:876 (77) -
  5. 00:21:738 (115) - k would be better for pattern consistency as 00:16:220 (78,97) -
  6. 00:27:255 (153) - ^
  7. 00:28:634 (161) - k could follow the relatively high-pitched sound there.
  8. 00:35:531 (208) - same as 00:21:738 (115) -
  9. 00:52:316 (322) - same as Muzukashii
  10. 01:00:586 (354) - maybe k here for pattern consistency ?
  11. 01:04:548 - consider adding d here for a harder pattern which fits the music ?
  12. 01:30:812 (551) - same as Muzukashii
  13. 01:32:019 (555,559) - you may swap these notes to d k as 01:33:053 - has a higher pitch.
  14. 01:34:777 (564,565) - similar to ^ , d k would be better imo.

    Almost fixed
That's all and good luck~ :D
Thank you mod :)
Stefan
Gonna check asap, thanks for the mod, Nardo!
Zetera
Oh, I am sorry, I wasn't told before that we have mods to be fixed.

Ahem..

Fixed all points that belong to my part in Dialga's mod.
Also from Genocide's.
Nardo: I fixed all points, but I will wait for more suggestions on the triplets in the 2nd Kiai, if others don't like them, they will be gone again.


Some words from my side: I think the SB needs quite a bit of improvements, the transitions are kinda weird, also my name seems to fade out in my 1st part for no reason. Besides that, I think the font is not really what should be there, but I already suggested a pokemon-BW-font to the creator of the Storyboard. If it will not be fixed, then I guess we have to delete it/find another person to improve it. (No Kds, even though it would be worth 2..)
Neku Okazaki
Hi o/, mod request via pm

[Kantan]
00:15:876 (17,18) - kk Is better in my opinion
00:26:910 (33) - k to continue with pattern
00:40:014 (53) - Unsnaped
00:59:602 (86) - Delete, because this part have high bpm, this make the part more easy for a kantan
01:01:242 (89) - Move to 01:01:570 - ^
01:02:200 (91) - Delete to make this part more easy, only if you do that^
01:04:321 (94) - Make d, is better for this part in my opinion
01:04:624 (95) - Delete to make it more easy
01:07:654 (101) - ^
01:11:157 (106) - Have a sound more hight than 01:10:812 (105) - , change it to k
01:14:260 (112) - Delete, isnt necessary for a kantan
01:14:950 (118) - Unsnaped
01:19:777 (125) - Unsnaped
01:21:847 (129) - Unsnaped
01:37:019 (152) - Have an high sound, change to k

This is really hard for a kantan, because put a lot of objects in the part where the bpm changes.

[Futsuu]
00:35:876 (78,79) - This have the same sound, do k
00:40:013 (85) - Unsnaped
01:04:472 (146) - Change to k, to make it more easy, like the kantan
01:04:927 (148) - If you like, you can put a d in this part
01:19:778 (181) - Unsnaped
01:21:847 (186) - Unsnaped
01:26:501 (195,197) - Move 1/2 to 01:27:019 (196) - , is better imo
01:29:260 (201,203) - ^
01:39:949 (228) - Unsnaped

I see good the rest :O, take my star :'D
Topic Starter
Charlotte

Neku okazaki wrote:

Hi o/, mod request via pm

[Kantan]
00:15:876 (17,18) - kk Is better in my opinion
00:26:910 (33) - k to continue with pattern
00:40:014 (53) - Unsnaped
00:59:602 (86) - Delete, because this part have high bpm, this make the part more easy for a kantan
01:01:242 (89) - Move to 01:01:570 - ^
01:02:200 (91) - Delete to make this part more easy, only if you do that^
01:04:321 (94) - Make d, is better for this part in my opinion
01:04:624 (95) - Delete to make it more easy
01:07:654 (101) - ^
01:11:157 (106) - Have a sound more hight than 01:10:812 (105) - , change it to k
01:14:260 (112) - Delete, isnt necessary for a kantan
01:14:950 (118) - Unsnaped
01:19:777 (125) - Unsnaped
01:21:847 (129) - Unsnaped
01:37:019 (152) - Have an high sound, change to k

This is really hard for a kantan, because put a lot of objects in the part where the bpm changes.

Almost fixed

[Futsuu]
00:35:876 (78,79) - This have the same sound, do k
00:40:013 (85) - Unsnaped
01:04:472 (146) - Change to k, to make it more easy, like the kantan
01:04:927 (148) - If you like, you can put a d in this part
01:19:778 (181) - Unsnaped
01:21:847 (186) - Unsnaped
01:26:501 (195,197) - Move 1/2 to 01:27:019 (196) - , is better imo
01:29:260 (201,203) - ^
01:39:949 (228) - Unsnaped

Almost fixed

I see good the rest :O, take my star :'D
Thank you mod :)
Akiyama Mizuki
hi from pm request

General : Artist should be 増田順一
find another information for title, this may be also japanese

Kantan
SPOILER
01:00:914 (88,89) - k - To keep consistency with 00:54:839 (77,78,79) -
01:37:019 (155) - D - there's crash

Futsuu
SPOILER
00:04:496 (7) - k - because of background sound

Muzukashii
SPOILER
00:04:496 (11) - Same as Futsuu
00:31:393 (99,101) - reverse - pitch is lower later

Oni
SPOILER
00:04:151 (1,1,1) - 1/3 dddk like Muzukashii would work
01:34:088 - There definitely is a sound, so add a note

Inner Oni
SPOILER
00:04:496 (11) - k
01:37:019 (572) - D - there's crash

Seems okayish
Topic Starter
Charlotte

bbj0920 wrote:

hi from pm request

General : Artist should be 増田順一
find another information for title, this may be also japanese All diff changed.

Kantan
SPOILER
01:00:914 (88,89) - k - To keep consistency with 00:54:839 (77,78,79) - keep
01:37:019 (155) - D - there's crash fixed

Futsuu
SPOILER
00:04:496 (7) - k - because of background sound fixed

Muzukashii
SPOILER
00:04:496 (11) - Same as Futsuu fixed
00:31:393 (99,101) - reverse - pitch is lower later fixed

Oni
SPOILER
00:04:151 (1,1,1) - 1/3 dddk like Muzukashii would work
01:34:088 - There definitely is a sound, so add a note

Inner Oni
SPOILER
00:04:496 (11) - fixed
01:37:019 (572) - D - there's crash fixed

Seems okayish
Thank you mod :)
Julie
[Kantan]
00:59:602 - add d?

[Futsuu]
01:06:442 - add k?

[Muzukashii]
00:04:151 (8,9,10,11) - really hard for muzukashii, not because is 1/3...but....aaaaaa dddk xD, make it at least dddd or kkkk, I don't think I ever seen dddk in muzukashii xD
00:36:105 (114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121) ,
00:38:864 (127,128,129,130,131,132,133,134) ,
00:41:220 (138,139,140,141,142,143,144) and 00:43:002 (146) - I don't know why this is 1/3 while you did 1/4 on your other mapset, mostly inner oni you didn't have a choice but to map this part more then the muzukashii. And buy hearing it, 1/3 is kinda off xD. Should be snap like that So like those not snap on white tick, move it on the next tick.
00:38:031 (123) - this should be here 00:38:117 and 00:43:548 (149) - should be 00:43:634
01:14:950 (266) to 01:25:065 (313) - same reason as the 1st thing point out in muzukashii xD (I'm suprise no one point that out lolol, it look weird but is on the sound your trying to map, try testing it, is easier to aim accuracy even though it white blue red white...white blue red white, because of the song sound :3)

[Inner Oni]
00:11:134 (44) - delete no sound and 00:11:220 (44,45,46) - ddk
00:20:358 (107) - k
00:19:324 (100) , 00:22:082 (118) , 00:30:358 (175) and 00:33:117 (192) - K so is less repetitif and doesn't have the same pitch like example 00:27:600 (156)
00:48:007 - no note? is the same as 00:46:910 (308,309,310,311), is not really as close as this new timing 00:48:373 (311) , and not having a note there feel like losing rhythm xD
00:56:015 (337) and 00:58:928 (349) - k
01:07:048 (397) - d
01:10:295 (414) and 01:13:053 (429) - delete like you add no note here 01:07:503
01:20:036 (484) - move to 01:19:950 ?
01:20:726 (489) - move to 01:20:639

Woah this look amazing :D
good job \o/
Topic Starter
Charlotte

Julie wrote:

[Kantan]
00:59:602 - add d?

[Futsuu]
01:06:442 - add k?

[Muzukashii]
00:04:151 (8,9,10,11) - really hard for muzukashii, not because is 1/3...but....aaaaaa dddk xD, make it at least dddd or kkkk, I don't think I ever seen dddk in muzukashii xD
00:36:105 (114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121) ,
00:38:864 (127,128,129,130,131,132,133,134) ,
00:41:220 (138,139,140,141,142,143,144) and 00:43:002 (146) - I don't know why this is 1/3 while you did 1/4 on your other mapset, mostly inner oni you didn't have a choice but to map this part more then the muzukashii. And buy hearing it, 1/3 is kinda off xD. Should be snap like that So like those not snap on white tick, move it on the next tick.
00:38:031 (123) - this should be here 00:38:117 and 00:43:548 (149) - should be 00:43:634
01:14:950 (266) to 01:25:065 (313) - same reason as the 1st thing point out in muzukashii xD (I'm suprise no one point that out lolol, it look weird but is on the sound your trying to map, try testing it, is easier to aim accuracy even though it white blue red white...white blue red white, because of the song sound :3)

All fixed.changed many Kiai time

[Inner Oni]
00:11:134 (44) - delete no sound and 00:11:220 (44,45,46) - ddk
00:20:358 (107) - k
00:19:324 (100) , 00:22:082 (118) , 00:30:358 (175) and 00:33:117 (192) - K so is less repetitif and doesn't have the same pitch like example 00:27:600 (156)
00:48:007 - no note? is the same as 00:46:910 (308,309,310,311), is not really as close as this new timing 00:48:373 (311) , and not having a note there feel like losing rhythm xD
00:56:015 (337) and 00:58:928 (349) - k
01:07:048 (397) - d
01:10:295 (414) and 01:13:053 (429) - delete like you add no note here 01:07:503
01:20:036 (484) - move to 01:19:950 ?
01:20:726 (489) - move to 01:20:639

Almost fixed

Woah this look amazing :D
good job \o/
Thank you mod :)
Shiki_nyan
Here comes a mod from quest +w+
kantan
High quality kantan diff..I think it's a good map!

futsuu
01:12:881 (169) - move to 01:12:708 -
add a note at 01:12:708 (169) -
High quality too! good map!

muzukashii
I can't find any note need to be fixed..good map.. Muzukashii diff should be make like that.

Sala-fan'Oni
00:07:169 - add a d plz
00:53:149 (22) - I think it should be a D
good map too.

Inner oni
I think you are ready to rank.

Good maps. :)
Topic Starter
Charlotte

Shiki_nyan wrote:

Here comes a mod from quest +w+
kantan
High quality kantan diff..I think it's a good map!

futsuu
01:12:881 (169) - move to 01:12:708 - keep
add a note at 01:12:708 (169) - keep
High quality too! good map!

muzukashii
I can't find any note need to be fixed..good map.. Muzukashii diff should be make like that.

Sala-fan'Oni
00:07:169 - add a d plz
00:53:149 (22) - I think it should be a D
good map too.

Inner oni
I think you are ready to rank.

Good maps. :)
Thank you mod :)
toara_fict
Hi M4M request. from PM
[ about]
  1. d is don note
  2. k is kat note
  3. D is Finish don note
  4. K is Finish kat note

  5. Purple is UnRankable , Please change
  6. Green is I would strongly recommend
  7. black is Pointed out that

[ General]
  1. Re-check 'Widescreen support'
  2. 難易度の差が Kantan << Futsuu <<<<<<<<<<<< Muzu << GD Oni くらいになってる気がするのでMuzuの難易度を下げるとかした方がいい気がします_(:3JL
  3. Muzuで単発ここ拾ってあげたいって部分が多くあるのにこk単発で拾わないのにここは2連打いれるんだってところが多々あるなあと思いました_(:3JL
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

[ Inner Oni]
  1. 00:11:824 (49,50) - change k d or d d ? ( kk kk って感じじゃないと思いました :3 )
  2. 01:06:215 - add k here ? ( kiaiだし入れてもいいと思います )
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

大雑把な指摘しかできなくてごめんなさい_(:3JL Good Luck.
-Sh1n1-
Hi~~ Charlotte u.u sorry for the long delay :(

[About]

  1. d is don note
  2. k is kat note
  3. D is finish don note
  4. K is finish kat note
[Inner Oni]

  1. 00:09:669 (33,34,35) - Do you want to start with a triplet? 00:09:755 (34) - should be at 00:09:927 - imo.
  2. 00:34:496 (201,202,203,204,205,206,207,208,209) - What do you think about this pattern? :kdddkkdkd
  3. 01:01:570 (363) - change to k for consistency
[Sala-fan's Oni]

  1. 00:04:410 (1) - Why? delete.
  2. 00:26:738 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - 00:29:496 (21,22,23,24,25,26,27) - 00:32:255 (35,36,37,38,39,40,41) - not consistency.
  3. 3 Steps for this point
    -00:49:310 (9) - move to 00:49:404 -
    -add a k
    -00:49:873 (11) - change to k (consistency with 00:52:628 (19,20,21,22) - )
[Muzukashii]

  1. 00:04:151 (8,9,10,11) - Yes, there is a sound but is not nesesarilly to put in this way because is too hard for Muzu imo, I think that is better ddk in 1/4
  2. 00:41:048 (137,138,139,140,141,142,143,144,145,146,147,148,149) - what kind of sound is k following? because here: ( 00:43:807 (150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157,158,159,160,161,162) - ) is totally diferent, It can be confusing.
  3. 01:14:950 - ^ the same at the second long kiai, consistency please :3
Kantan and Futsuu are pretty good. I want to see your second mapset ranked.

Good Luck. ¡Star Star Star :3 !
Topic Starter
Charlotte

toara_fict wrote:

Hi M4M request. from PM
[ about]
  1. d is don note
  2. k is kat note
  3. D is Finish don note
  4. K is Finish kat note

  5. Purple is UnRankable , Please change
  6. Green is I would strongly recommend
  7. black is Pointed out that

[ General]
  1. Re-check 'Widescreen support' all diff unchecked
  2. 難易度の差が Kantan << Futsuu <<<<<<<<<<<< Muzu << GD Oni くらいになってる気がするのでMuzuの難易度を下げるとかした方がいい気がします_(:3JL
  3. Muzuで単発ここ拾ってあげたいって部分が多くあるのにこk単発で拾わないのにここは2連打いれるんだってところが多々あるなあと思いました_(:3JL

    Muzuの2連をいくらか減らしてみました。
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

[ Inner Oni]
  1. 00:11:824 (49,50) - change k d or d d ? ( kk kk って感じじゃないと思いました :3 ) d d取り入れてみました
  2. 01:06:215 - add k here ? ( kiaiだし入れてもいいと思います ) fixed
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

大雑把な指摘しかできなくてごめんなさい_(:3JL Good Luck.
Thank you mod :)
Topic Starter
Charlotte

-Sh1n1- wrote:

Hi~~ Charlotte u.u sorry for the long delay :(

[About]

  1. d is don note
  2. k is kat note
  3. D is finish don note
  4. K is finish kat note
[Inner Oni]

  1. 00:09:669 (33,34,35) - Do you want to start with a triplet? 00:09:755 (34) - should be at 00:09:927 - imo.
  2. 00:34:496 (201,202,203,204,205,206,207,208,209) - What do you think about this pattern? :kdddkkdkd
  3. 01:01:570 (363) - change to k for consistency

    All fixed
[Sala-fan's Oni]

  1. 00:04:410 (1) - Why? delete.
  2. 00:26:738 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - 00:29:496 (21,22,23,24,25,26,27) - 00:32:255 (35,36,37,38,39,40,41) - not consistency.
  3. 3 Steps for this point
    -00:49:310 (9) - move to 00:49:404 -
    -add a k
    -00:49:873 (11) - change to k (consistency with 00:52:628 (19,20,21,22) - )
[Muzukashii]

  1. 00:04:151 (8,9,10,11) - Yes, there is a sound but is not nesesarilly to put in this way because is too hard for Muzu imo, I think that is better ddk in 1/4 fixed
  2. 00:41:048 (137,138,139,140,141,142,143,144,145,146,147,148,149) - what kind of sound is k following? because here: ( 00:43:807 (150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157,158,159,160,161,162) - ) is totally diferent, It can be confusing.
  3. 01:14:950 - ^ the same at the second long kiai, consistency please :3
Kantan and Futsuu are pretty good. I want to see your second mapset ranked.

Good Luck. ¡Star Star Star :3 !
Thank you mod :)
Zetera
Sala-fan'Oni
00:07:169 - add a d plz
00:53:149 (22) - I think it should be a D Can't agree with that, sorry. (Reference: 00:56:407 (33,44) - )
good map too.

[Sala-fan's Oni]

  1. 00:04:410 (1) - Why? delete.
  2. 00:26:738 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - 00:29:496 (21,22,23,24,25,26,27) - 00:32:255 (35,36,37,38,39,40,41) - not consistency.
  3. 3 Steps for this point
    -00:49:310 (9) - move to 00:49:404 -
    -add a k
    -00:49:873 (11) - change to k (consistency with 00:52:628 (19,20,21,22) - )
Good point. I made the 1st and the 3rd the same, the beats in the background are slightly different for the 2nd pattern (If I am not mistaken).

Thank both of you for the mods.
Kin
Hi ~

M4M here ~

[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:14:151 (63,64,65) - I'd suggest to use kkd instead of ddd. The reason is to make a difference with this note 00:14:324 (65) - and those one
  2. 00:14:151 (63,64) - . Because there's an additionnal melody here 00:14:324 (65) - .
  3. 00:19:324 (99) - Just me, but I prefer a D instead of K. It will make a difference with this one 00:18:979 (98) - .
  4. 00:22:082 (117) - ^. Also this one is a less high pitched.
  5. 00:22:945 (122,123,124) - Same reason as simular pattern said earlier : I'd suggest to use kkd instead of ddd.
  6. 00:25:186 (138,139,140) - 00:28:462 (160,161,162) - ^
  7. 00:33:979 (196,197,198) - ^
  8. 00:30:358 (174) - Just me, but I prefer a D instead of K.
  9. 00:33:117 (191) - ^ both are less high pitched.
  10. 00:36:134 (212,213,214,215) - reverse this pattern ? (dkkd) It goes better with the melody since this note 00:36:220 (213) - is higher pitched.
  11. 00:37:514 (224,225,226,227,228,229,230) - how about kkdkddk ?
  12. 01:03:715 (374,375,376) - I think kdk goes better with the melody.
  13. 01:18:657 (471,472,473,474) - maybe it's just me, but dkdk sounds better to me.
  14. 01:22:105 (501,502,503,504,505,506,507) - how about kkdkddk ?
  15. 01:34:605 (566,567) - change as k d ? changing 566 as k will mark 567 with the additional with the additional melody sound which is on it.
  16. 01:42:019 (596) - add a don ?
[Sala-fan's Oni]
  1. 00:10:186 (1) - change this one as k ? I think it sounds better with this k 00:10:531 (1) -
  2. 00:16:565 (1) - D instead of K ? This one 00:16:220 (1) - is higher pitched than this one 00:16:565 (1) - . So I think it'd be better to change it as D.
  3. 00:17:945 (1) - how about this one as k ?
  4. 00:37:945 (65,66,67) - change as kkd ? I can't really explain why, but sounds better to me.
  5. 00:46:565 (6,7,8) - change as kkd ? I think it sound better since this "stream" go to high pitched to low pitched.
  6. 01:03:260 (63,64,65) - maybe it's just me, but dkd sounds better with the melody.
  7. 01:38:915 (1) - change this one as k ? I think it sounds better with this k 01:39:260 (1) -
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:02:427 (2) - since you used a big K on this one, then add one to this one 00:04:496 (10) - ?
  2. 00:38:117 (121) - I think this note should be there 00:38:462 - .
  3. 00:38:893 (124) - change this one as k ? I higher pitched than those one 00:38:634 (123,125) - .
  4. 00:43:635 (144) - I think this note should be there 00:43:979 -
  5. 01:07:351 (225,226) - since 226 is higher pitched than 225, change 225 as d ?
  6. 01:17:191 (269) - I think this note should be there 01:17:536 - .
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:26:910 (58) - change this one as k ? It sound better with the melody.
  2. 00:55:427 (120) - maybe just me but I prefer this note here 00:55:035 - .
  3. 01:03:109 - 01:07:957 - To me, this part is almost Muzukashii.
  4. how about delete those 2 notes ? 01:08:305 (159,161) - . It might be too hard on futsuu to tap 1/1 on bpm change.
[Kantan]
  1. 00:14:841 (16) - change this one as k for the melody ?
  2. 00:15:876 (17) - 00:26:910 (33) - ^
that's all from me \o

good luck ~
Arrival
Your mod request !

[Kantan]
00:58:581 (84) - k ? to be consistent with 00:57:147 (82) - . If yes, put a k here too : 00:59:930 (86) -
01:10:122 (106) - k ? I think it would suit better and would avoid too much repetition with d.

[Futsuu]
00:46:738 - Add a note here ?
From 00:53:149 (113) - to 01:03:109 (140) - : I think this part really lacks of kats, and it makes it a bit monotonous. Consider adding kats like here 00:53:994 (116) - or here 00:55:623 (121) - but above all here : 00:59:930 (132) - and here 01:01:242 (136) -
01:38:743 (225) - k ? I think it would sound nice, and it'd diversify the patterns.

[Muzukashii]
00:37:772 (119,120,121,122) - I'd see more a kddk here. Same here : 00:43:290 (142,143,144,145) -
01:01:242 (201) - k ?
01:38:743 (348) - k ? Same as in Futsuu.
01:14:433 (258) - d ?

[Sala-fan's Oni]
00:21:738 (1) - Finisher ?
00:43:634 (99) - add a d here ? It avoids too much repetition of dk,dk,dk and emphasize the next part. This is just my personnal opinion.

That's all.

[Inner Oni]
00:32:427 (185) - k ?
00:37:514 (220) - What about this ? Listen carefully, I think it sounds better. http://puu.sh/d2tzG/b58d18327c.png
01:41:415 (587) - k ?

Very nice mapset ! Hope to see it ranked !
Topic Starter
Charlotte

Kin wrote:

Hi ~

M4M here ~

[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:14:151 (63,64,65) - I'd suggest to use kkd instead of ddd. The reason is to make a difference with this note 00:14:324 (65) - and those one
  2. 00:14:151 (63,64) - . Because there's an additionnal melody here 00:14:324 (65) - .
  3. 00:19:324 (99) - Just me, but I prefer a D instead of K. It will make a difference with this one 00:18:979 (98) - .
  4. 00:22:082 (117) - ^. Also this one is a less high pitched.
  5. 00:22:945 (122,123,124) - Same reason as simular pattern said earlier : I'd suggest to use kkd instead of ddd.
  6. 00:25:186 (138,139,140) - 00:28:462 (160,161,162) - ^
  7. 00:33:979 (196,197,198) - ^
  8. 00:30:358 (174) - Just me, but I prefer a D instead of K.
  9. 00:33:117 (191) - ^ both are less high pitched.
  10. 00:36:134 (212,213,214,215) - reverse this pattern ? (dkkd) It goes better with the melody since this note 00:36:220 (213) - is higher pitched.
  11. 00:37:514 (224,225,226,227,228,229,230) - how about kkdkddk ?
  12. 01:03:715 (374,375,376) - I think kdk goes better with the melody.
  13. 01:18:657 (471,472,473,474) - maybe it's just me, but dkdk sounds better to me.
  14. 01:22:105 (501,502,503,504,505,506,507) - how about kkdkddk ?
  15. 01:34:605 (566,567) - change as k d ? changing 566 as k will mark 567 with the additional with the additional melody sound which is on it.
  16. 01:42:019 (596) - add a don ?

    Almost fixed
[Sala-fan's Oni]
  1. 00:10:186 (1) - change this one as k ? I think it sounds better with this k 00:10:531 (1) -
  2. 00:16:565 (1) - D instead of K ? This one 00:16:220 (1) - is higher pitched than this one 00:16:565 (1) - . So I think it'd be better to change it as D.
  3. 00:17:945 (1) - how about this one as k ?
  4. 00:37:945 (65,66,67) - change as kkd ? I can't really explain why, but sounds better to me.
  5. 00:46:565 (6,7,8) - change as kkd ? I think it sound better since this "stream" go to high pitched to low pitched.
  6. 01:03:260 (63,64,65) - maybe it's just me, but dkd sounds better with the melody.
  7. 01:38:915 (1) - change this one as k ? I think it sounds better with this k 01:39:260 (1) -
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:02:427 (2) - since you used a big K on this one, then add one to this one 00:04:496 (10) - ? keep
  2. 00:38:117 (121) - I think this note should be there 00:38:462 - . ^
  3. 00:38:893 (124) - change this one as k ? I higher pitched than those one 00:38:634 (123,125) - . ^
  4. 00:43:635 (144) - I think this note should be there 00:43:979 - ^
  5. 01:07:351 (225,226) - since 226 is higher pitched than 225, change 225 as d ? fixed
  6. 01:17:191 (269) - I think this note should be there 01:17:536 - . keep
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:26:910 (58) - change this one as k ? It sound better with the melody.
  2. 00:55:427 (120) - maybe just me but I prefer this note here 00:55:035 - .
  3. 01:03:109 - 01:07:957 - To me, this part is almost Muzukashii.
  4. how about delete those 2 notes ? 01:08:305 (159,161) - . It might be too hard on futsuu to tap 1/1 on bpm change.

    All fixed
[Kantan]
  1. 00:14:841 (16) - change this one as k for the melody ?
  2. 00:15:876 (17) - 00:26:910 (33) - ^
All fixed.but,There are many 1/1-kdd

that's all from me \o

good luck ~
Thank you mod :)
Topic Starter
Charlotte

Arrival wrote:

Your mod request !

[Kantan]
00:58:581 (84) - k ? to be consistent with 00:57:147 (82) - . If yes, put a k here too : 00:59:930 (86) -
01:10:122 (106) - k ? I think it would suit better and would avoid too much repetition with d.

All fixed

[Futsuu]
00:46:738 - Add a note here ?
From 00:53:149 (113) - to 01:03:109 (140) - : I think this part really lacks of kats, and it makes it a bit monotonous. Consider adding kats like here 00:53:994 (116) - or here 00:55:623 (121) - but above all here : 00:59:930 (132) - and here 01:01:242 (136) -
01:38:743 (225) - k ? I think it would sound nice, and it'd diversify the patterns.

Almost fixed

[Muzukashii]
00:37:772 (119,120,121,122) - I'd see more a kddk here. Same here : 00:43:290 (142,143,144,145) - keep
01:01:242 (201) - k ? fixed
01:38:743 (348) - k ? Same as in Futsuu. ^
01:14:433 (258) - d ? keep

[Sala-fan's Oni]
00:21:738 (1) - Finisher ?
00:43:634 (99) - add a d here ? It avoids too much repetition of dk,dk,dk and emphasize the next part. This is just my personnal opinion.

That's all.

[Inner Oni]
00:32:427 (185) - k ? fixed
00:37:514 (220) - What about this ? Listen carefully, I think it sounds better. http://puu.sh/d2tzG/b58d18327c.png keep
01:41:415 (587) - k ? fixed

Very nice mapset ! Hope to see it ranked !
Thank you mod :)
Zetera
[Sala-fan's Oni]
  1. 00:10:186 (1) - change this one as k ? I think it sounds better with this k 00:10:531 (1) -
  2. 00:16:565 (1) - D instead of K ? This one 00:16:220 (1) - is higher pitched than this one 00:16:565 (1) - . So I think it'd be better to change it as D.
  3. 00:17:945 (1) - how about this one as k ?
  4. 00:37:945 (65,66,67) - change as kkd ? I can't really explain why, but sounds better to me. Yeah, why not.
  5. 00:46:565 (6,7,8) - change as kkd ? I think it sound better since this "stream" go to high pitched to low pitched. ^
  6. 01:03:260 (63,64,65) - maybe it's just me, but dkd sounds better with the melody. Nah, maybe not dkd, but ddk.
[Sala-fan's Oni]
00:21:738 (1) - Finisher ?
00:43:634 (99) - add a here ? It avoids too much repetition of dk,dk,dk and emphasize the next part. This is just my personnal opinion. Good one, fixed.
Kurosanyan
http://puu.sh/dr1td.rar <-- If you want to add or just look at the Ura Oni I did.
I'll post my mod tomorrow since I spent the whole night mapping this instead of modding.
Grimbow
Hi! From mod queue o/

d - Small don
D - Big don
k - Small kat
K - Big kat

Black means something that I think needs changed
Orange is just a suggestion

[Futsuu]

00:26:393 (57) - Change this note to a d or 00:25:876 (56) - to a k, they both have the same sound in the song
01:27:536 (194) - Move this note to 01:27:364 - and add a d at 01:27:191 -? This section feels a little awkward to me and I think this suggestion fills it in a bit better
01:30:295 (200) - Move this to 01:30:122 - and add another d at 01:29:950 - for the same reasons as above

[Muzukashii]

00:22:945 (68,69) - ctrl+g, I think having the d on the synth noise here makes more sense
01:38:570 (347,348) - ctrl+g, kdkkk feels a lot better here imo, but that could just be me!
01:39:088 (350) - If you take my previous suggestion, you might also want to change this to a k. This suggestion doesn't really matter too much though

All the Oni's are really good fun, nice mapset! :) Good luck with the rank and have a star! (∩`-´)⊃━.*・。゚
Topic Starter
Charlotte

Kurosanyan wrote:

http://puu.sh/dr1td.rar <-- If you want to add or just look at the Ura Oni I did.
I'll post my mod tomorrow since I spent the whole night mapping this instead of modding.
I have confirmed Ura Oni.but,sorrry.I no need Ura Oni.because,I feel 6diff=many.so 5diff keep.
My Inner Oni=Kiai time is hard.other easy? so advice please :?
Ura Oni=nice map 8-)
Topic Starter
Charlotte

Grimbow wrote:

Hi! From mod queue o/

d - Small don
D - Big don
k - Small kat
K - Big kat

Black means something that I think needs changed
Orange is just a suggestion

[Futsuu]

00:26:393 (57) - Change this note to a d or 00:25:876 (56) - to a k, they both have the same sound in the song 57 changed d
01:27:536 (194) - Move this note to 01:27:364 - and add a d at 01:27:191 -? This section feels a little awkward to me and I think this suggestion fills it in a bit better fixed
01:30:295 (200) - Move this to 01:30:122 - and add another d at 01:29:950 - for the same reasons as above fixed

[Muzukashii]

00:22:945 (68,69) - ctrl+g, I think having the d on the synth noise here makes more sense fixed
01:38:570 (347,348) - ctrl+g, kdkkk feels a lot better here imo, but that could just be me! fixed
01:39:088 (350) - If you take my previous suggestion, you might also want to change this to a k. This suggestion doesn't really matter too much though fixed

All the Oni's are really good fun, nice mapset! :) Good luck with the rank and have a star! (∩`-´)⊃━.*・。゚
Thank you mod :)
Kurosanyan

Charlotte wrote:

Kurosanyan wrote:

http://puu.sh/dr1td.rar <-- If you want to add or just look at the Ura Oni I did.
I'll post my mod tomorrow since I spent the whole night mapping this instead of modding.
I have confirmed Ura Oni.but,sorrry.I no need Ura Oni.because,I feel 6diff=many.so 5diff keep.
My Inner Oni=Kiai time is hard.other easy? so advice please :?
Ura Oni=nice map 8-)
Well, I'll make my own mapset and rank it later then. As I did for Tewi-Ma Park.

[General]
  1. BG's position on the collab is different because of the SB you might consider changing it's position and then fix the SB's position too.
  2. Please change the BG because 4:3 looks bad on widescreen with the SB.

  3. 00:53:149 - Put the preview point here?
  4. I think OD6 is too high for the Inner, considering the SR and the BPM. Make it 5,5? Also you should have a different OD on each map.
    Try 3,5 -> 4 -> 4,5 -> 5 -> 5,5 or 3 -> 3,5 -> 4,5 -> 5 -> 5,5 ?
  5. Fix Unicode Artist on Sala and Stefan's Oni. It looks the same but it seems there's an invisible character at the end.
[Kantan]
  1. 00:02:082 (1,2) - d k instead of d K or remove those notes? It's a bit awkward for a beginner to start the map with d K d.
  2. 01:32:191 (146,147) - Try this instead?

    Even if it's on 1/2, it's easier to play and fits better imo.
    If you want to avoid 1/2, you should try this then:
  3. 01:34:950 (152,153) - ^
[Futsuu]
  1. Consider adding a bit more 1/2?
  2. 00:24:496 (53) - Remove? You have a monotonous part with no break for 16 stanza, that's way too much, it needs a break.
  3. 00:35:531 (76) - ^
  4. 00:53:782 (115) - Remove? It doesn't fit to the music (since it's x xx and not x x x). If you don't want to, consider k instead.
  5. 00:56:962 (125) - ^
  6. Move 01:06:897 (152) - to 01:07:200 - It doesn't fit at all here. I missed when I played the map. If you refuse, consider removing it.
  7. If you move the note to 01:07:200 - you should add a k at 01:04:775 -
  8. 01:05:230 - Add a k for consistency.
  9. 01:05:533 (148) - Move to 01:05:684 - to follow the music?
  10. 01:07:957 (156) - Move to 01:08:131 - if you followed my previous suggestion.
  11. 01:09:433 (158,159,160,161,162) -
  12. 01:12:191 (164,165,166,167,168) - ^
  13. 01:25:984 (191,192,193) - Here this rhythm doesn't really fit. Try putting notes on the white ticks instead.
  14. 01:28:743 (198,199,200) - ^
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:02:772 (3) - d? k doesn't fit.
  2. 00:40:789 (132) - If, and only if, you want to make your Muzukashii easier, remove this note and 01:19:863 (278) - too. That would make a better diff spread, but I don't think it's really needed to fix this.
  3. 00:45:100 (150) - Remove for a break and consistency with the rest of the kiai.
  4. 00:53:571 (177,178,179) - k kk? Easier to play for a Muzu and fits better imo.
  5. 01:08:480 (229) - Remove to make the bpm change easier to read?
  6. 01:24:174 (297) - Same as before.
  7. 01:42:019 - Add a d?
[Stefan]
  1. 00:04:410 (1,1) - It should probably be 1/3.
  2. 00:12:514 - Add a d to follow the drum roll or add a d at 00:12:686 - ?
  3. 01:09:433 - ~ 01:14:950 - Please no. :( This is way too tricky to play for this diff. If you want to keep the finish spam, to make it easier to play you should:
    01:11:157 (111) - 01:13:915 (126) - Change these to d and
    01:11:674 (114) - 01:12:019 (116) - 01:14:433 (129) - 01:14:777 (131) - Remove these.
[Sala]
  1. 00:40:876 (82) - Delete and put a d at 00:40:789 - ?
  2. 00:53:149 (22) - D or 00:53:888 (24) - k? (Or both) It sounds better imo.
  3. 00:56:407 (33) - 00:57:055 (35) - ^
  4. Same for the next parts.
[Inner Oni]
  1. Nothing to say. This is really different to my mapping style but I think it looks fun to play and I don't see any real issue.
Topic Starter
Charlotte

Kurosanyan wrote:

[General]
  1. BG's position on the collab is different because of the SB you might consider changing it's position and then fix the SB's position too.
  2. Please change the BG because 4:3 looks bad on widescreen with the SB.

  3. 00:53:149 - Put the preview point here? keep.now preview point=other std ranked map
  4. I think OD6 is too high for the Inner, considering the SR and the BPM. Make it 5,5? Also you should have a different OD on each map.
    Try 3,5 -> 4 -> 4,5 -> 5 -> 5,5 or 3 -> 3,5 -> 4,5 -> 5 -> 5,5 ? okay,changed OD 3<4<4.5<5<5.5
  5. Fix Unicode Artist on Sala and Stefan's Oni. It looks the same but it seems there's an invisible character at the end. fixed
[Kantan]
  1. 00:02:082 (1,2) - d k instead of d K or remove those notes? It's a bit awkward for a beginner to start the map with d K d.
  2. 01:32:191 (146,147) - Try this instead?

    Even if it's on 1/2, it's easier to play and fits better imo.
    If you want to avoid 1/2, you should try this then:
  3. 01:34:950 (152,153) - ^

    All fixed
[Futsuu]
  1. Consider adding a bit more 1/2?
  2. 00:24:496 (53) - Remove? You have a monotonous part with no break for 16 stanza, that's way too much, it needs a break.
  3. 00:35:531 (76) - ^
  4. 00:53:782 (115) - Remove? It doesn't fit to the music (since it's x xx and not x x x). If you don't want to, consider k instead.
  5. 00:56:962 (125) - ^
  6. Move 01:06:897 (152) - to 01:07:200 - It doesn't fit at all here. I missed when I played the map. If you refuse, consider removing it.
  7. If you move the note to 01:07:200 - you should add a k at 01:04:775 -
  8. 01:05:230 - Add a k for consistency.
  9. 01:05:533 (148) - Move to 01:05:684 - to follow the music?
  10. 01:07:957 (156) - Move to 01:08:131 - if you followed my previous suggestion.
  11. 01:09:433 (158,159,160,161,162) -
  12. 01:12:191 (164,165,166,167,168) - ^
  13. 01:25:984 (191,192,193) - Here this rhythm doesn't really fit. Try putting notes on the white ticks instead.
  14. 01:28:743 (198,199,200) - ^

    Almost fixed
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:02:772 (3) - d? k doesn't fit.
  2. 00:40:789 (132) - If, and only if, you want to make your Muzukashii easier, remove this note and 01:19:863 (278) - too. That would make a better diff spread, but I don't think it's really needed to fix this.
  3. 00:45:100 (150) - Remove for a break and consistency with the rest of the kiai.
  4. 00:53:571 (177,178,179) - k kk? Easier to play for a Muzu and fits better imo.
  5. 01:08:480 (229) - Remove to make the bpm change easier to read?
  6. 01:24:174 (297) - Same as before.
  7. 01:42:019 - Add a d?

    Almost fixed
[Stefan]
  1. Currently modding, will edit the post when I'm done.
Thank you mod :)
Kurosanyan
Updated my post with Oni's mod. Didn't find anything to say on the Inner.
Zetera
[Sala]

  1. 00:40:876 (82) - Delete and put a d at 00:40:789 - ? I made a triple out of it.
  2. 00:53:149 (22) - D or 00:53:888 (24) - k? (Or both) It sounds better imo. Changed the K's into D's.
  3. 00:56:407 (33) - 00:57:055 (35) - ^
  4. Same for the next parts.
Thanks for modding the mapset.
Yauxo
Hey there o/ Coming from your request via PM.
Please note that Iam a Taiko beginner and can only mod as much. If I happen to suggest derpy things or nothing at all, plase forgive me .-.

[General]
■ Second Kiai should start at 01:04:321 - imo

[Kantan]
■ 00:32:772 (40) - k maybe? Sound sounds still pretty highpitch to me
■ 01:01:242 (87) - would feel like a k to me
■ 01:03:412 (91) - k here to have a similar rhythm as 01:00:586 (85,86,87) - ?
■ 01:28:398 (138) - k to "fresh" up the wave of d a little bit?

[Futsuu]
■ 00:02:082 (1) - k here? I think that'd support 00:02:772 (3) - more
■ 00:23:117 (50,51) - k these? They have the same pitch as 00:19:841 (43,44) - (unless this is a pattern thing that I dont know about .-.)
■ 00:24:496 (53) - add k? Youve mapped this beat before, so I think this one shouldnt be left out
■ 00:35:531 (77) - ^
■ 00:49:498 (105) - k?
■ 00:52:733 (112) - k?
■ 00:56:015 (121) - k? basically any that fit into this scheme. The transition into the next downbeat would be better like this imo
■ 01:30:812 (201) - k? To be the same as 01:33:570 (207,208,209) -

■ I also feel like you could add some more notes here and there to make it a little bit more difficult. The spread would probably allow it. 01:01:078 (132) - Adding a note in these kinds of patterns wouldnt be too mad imo

[Muzukashii]
■ 00:16:220 (46) - k?
■ 00:18:979 (55) - k?
■ 00:21:738 (64) - ^ same thing as these 2 aboves, same scheme for upcoming patterns like this
■ 00:24:841 (76,78) - I think these two as k would do well with how you designed 00:25:703 (79,80,81,82) -

■ And it gets pretty confusing for me from this point on, I used to map Taiko differently, apparently I did it wrong D:

Gl with that, maybe it helps a little /o/
Topic Starter
Charlotte

Yauxo wrote:

Hey there o/ Coming from your request via PM.
Please note that Iam a Taiko beginner and can only mod as much. If I happen to suggest derpy things or nothing at all, plase forgive me .-.

[General]
■ Second Kiai should start at 01:04:321 - imo keep

[Kantan]
■ 00:32:772 (40) - k maybe? Sound sounds still pretty highpitch to me fixed
■ 01:01:242 (87) - would feel like a k to me keep
■ 01:03:412 (91) - k here to have a similar rhythm as 01:00:586 (85,86,87) - ? keep
■ 01:28:398 (138) - k to "fresh" up the wave of d a little bit? fixed

[Futsuu]
■ 00:02:082 (1) - k here? I think that'd support 00:02:772 (3) - more keep
■ 00:23:117 (50,51) - k these? They have the same pitch as 00:19:841 (43,44) - (unless this is a pattern thing that I dont know about .-.) changed k (50 only)
■ 00:24:496 (53) - add k? Youve mapped this beat before, so I think this one shouldnt be left out keep
■ 00:35:531 (77) - ^ ^
■ 00:49:498 (105) - k? ^
■ 00:52:733 (112) - k? ^
■ 00:56:015 (121) - k? basically any that fit into this scheme. The transition into the next downbeat would be better like this imo ^
■ 01:30:812 (201) - k? To be the same as 01:33:570 (207,208,209) - fixed

■ I also feel like you could add some more notes here and there to make it a little bit more difficult. The spread would probably allow it. 01:01:078 (132) - Adding a note in these kinds of patterns wouldnt be too mad imo keep

[Muzukashii]
■ 00:16:220 (46) - k? keep
■ 00:18:979 (55) - k? fixed
■ 00:21:738 (64) - ^ same thing as these 2 aboves, same scheme for upcoming patterns like this fixed
■ 00:24:841 (76,78) - I think these two as k would do well with how you designed 00:25:703 (79,80,81,82) - keep

■ And it gets pretty confusing for me from this point on, I used to map Taiko differently, apparently I did it wrong D:

Gl with that, maybe it helps a little /o/
Thank you mod :)
Stefan
god no ;w;

Please don't hate me guys that I don't reply on everything..

Genocide: Denied everything since these suggestions doesn't fit with the rhythm building from me.
Nardoxyribonucleic: Similar to Genocide's mod I denied everything due rhythm-related reasons.
bbj0920: 00:04:151 (1,1,1) is a good idea, personally I wonder if this is really fine for the Muzukashii Difficulty but that's up to the mapper, changed. And there is no note at 01:34:088, I better leave this blank.
Shiki_nyan: This section does not provide imo Doubles, no change.
-Sh1n1-: Has been fixed by bbj0920's Mod.
Kin: Denied everything, except of 00:17:945 (1) which I deny due the very low sound everything has already been mentioned.
Arrival: The finisher on 00:21:738 (1) would work a bit weird to me.. denied here.
Kurosanyan:

Kurosanyan wrote:

[Stefan]
  1. 00:04:410 (1,1) - It should probably be 1/3. Fixed already
  2. 00:12:514 - Add a d to follow the drum roll or add a d at 00:12:686 - ? I am really divided by this.. on the one side yes there is a beat which could be mapped. But then I like the transistion from ooo to o o and back to ooo ooo. No change here for the moment, maybe I am going to add it later then.
  3. 01:09:433 - ~ 01:14:950 - Please no. :( This is way too tricky to play for this diff. If you want to keep the finish spam, to make it easier to play you should:
    01:11:157 (111) - 01:13:915 (126) - Change these to d and
    01:11:674 (114) - 01:12:019 (116) - 01:14:433 (129) - 01:14:777 (131) - Remove these. On personal sight I'd find it only then really tricky (to read) with a low SV in this section. However your suggestion is pretty nice and can be used, changed.
Thank you all!
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Title:Battle! Roaming Legendary Pokemon
TitleUnicode:Battle! Roaming Legendary Pokemon
Artist:Junichi Masuda
ArtistUnicode:増田順一
Creator:Charlotte
Version:Sala-fan's Oni
Source:Pokemon: Black/White
Tags:game freak nintendo sala- stefan
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Aldwych
Hi! Interesting map.

U just suggest you to change that "Sala-" tag into "Sala" even if Sala- is the correct nickname, it doesn't match any of his maps (maybe SQL request fault?).
snowball112
Hey ^^ mod from pm req.

Kantan
- 01:06:745 (97,98,99,100,101) dkkdd or dkkkd? I think 01:06:745 (97,98,99) sounds the same as 01:04:321 (92,93,94), so it might be good to use the same pattern for consistency in the easy diff in my opinion.

- I feel like it might sound better to change the part of 00:53:149 (72) until 00:59:930 (84).
- at the beginning you could remove 00:53:571 (73) and 00:55:231 (76) and change 00:53:994 (74) to k and 00:55:623 (77) to d. This is because 00:57:147 (80) is similar to 00:53:994 (74) but you use k for 00:57:147 (80) and because 01:01:242 (87) is similar to 00:55:623 (77) and you use d for 01:01:242 (87).
- 00:58:581 (82) d? Same as 01:01:242 (87).
- add a d at 00:59:602? Would sound good in my opinion.

- 01:11:157 (106) d? It sounds the same as 01:13:915 (111) and in my opinion k would be better.
Futsuu
- Similar to Kantan, maybe use fewer notes at the beginning of the speedup and more later? You could for example:
- Remove 00:52:108 (108)
- 00:54:416 (114) ^
- 00:55:035 (116) ^
- Add a note at 00:58:928.
- 01:01:570 (133) ^
This may sound better for the speedup unless you made it so that there are more notes in the slower part intentionally to be easier for newer players.

Hope this helps and good luck ^^
Aldwych
Double post coz after playing oni & muzukashii it's really enjoyable, auto like + 5 stars.
Hope to see this wonder rank asap. Call me for a mod if you want.
Topic Starter
Charlotte

snowball112 wrote:

Hey ^^ mod from pm req.

Kantan
- 01:06:745 (97,98,99,100,101) dkkdd or dkkkd? I think 01:06:745 (97,98,99) sounds the same as 01:04:321 (92,93,94), so it might be good to use the same pattern for consistency in the easy diff in my opinion. change dkkdd

- I feel like it might sound better to change the part of 00:53:149 (72) until 00:59:930 (84).
- at the beginning you could remove 00:53:571 (73) and 00:55:231 (76) and change 00:53:994 (74) to k and 00:55:623 (77) to d. This is because 00:57:147 (80) is similar to 00:53:994 (74) but you use k for 00:57:147 (80) and because 01:01:242 (87) is similar to 00:55:623 (77) and you use d for 01:01:242 (87). fixed
- 00:58:581 (82) d? Same as 01:01:242 (87). fixed
- add a d at 00:59:602? Would sound good in my opinion. keep

- 01:11:157 (106) d? It sounds the same as 01:13:915 (111) and in my opinion k would be better. fixed
Futsuu
- Similar to Kantan, maybe use fewer notes at the beginning of the speedup and more later? You could for example:
- Remove 00:52:108 (108) fixed
- 00:54:416 (114) ^ fixed
- 00:55:035 (116) ^ keep
- Add a note at 00:58:928. ^
- 01:01:570 (133) ^ ^
This may sound better for the speedup unless you made it so that there are more notes in the slower part intentionally to be easier for newer players.

Hope this helps and good luck ^^
Thank you mod :)
Aldwych
Triple post coz modding request from queue :

[General]

I think your futsuu is not enough hard, i mean the difference stars / objects between futsuu - kantan and muzukashii - futsuu is much different :
- K -> F : 70 objs & 0.6 stars.
- F -> M : 120 objects & 1.43 stars.

Imo, Ono won't let this qualifiy if he see this, so maybe 20 ~ 30 objs on the futsuu could be good.

[Kantan]

00:14:841 & 00:17:600 & 00:20:358 etc... : I don't understand on how you decide to put a k or d, i though it was d k d k d etc.. but no, even on the sound. Maybe a rework on when use d and when use k could be interesting.
00:24:496 & 00:38:772 (28 & 40) : I also don't understand why these k here? This create a disorder with the other triplet pattern imo. And soundly there no difference.
00:53:994 : Interesting here you used 2 k moreover when the previous pattern are d d d k so on this part maybe follow a d d d k here should be better.
01:02:503 : Hmmm. maybe a d here in order to follow the d d before (aka 00:58:581).
01:06:745 : BPM 196 with quint... well ye. Maybe remove 01:07:654.
01:11:501 : I'm pretty sure a k would be much better.
01:13:570 : If you didn't change the previous quint, at least chang this pattern as dkkdd.
01:39:777 : Try a k here.

[Futsuu]

Maybe take in consider what i said on the general part.

00:14:324 : this should be d k k and not k d k imo.
00:17:082 : here d k d.
00:24:151 : Here i would like to see a kdd (1/2 separator), so you'll add 2 d, cause we have a stream here, so adding notes could be good.
00:25:358 : try to change with d k k.
00:28:114 : and here k d k.
00:35:186 : Here i would like to see a kdd (1/2 separator) (same as 00:24:151 so).
00:53:782 : Add a k here could be interesting to play.
00:54:416 : ^
01:27:016 : Maybe change it to k.

The futsuu here makes me confuse, cause i think you got trouble to put correctly the d and k on the first part (imo), also some parts are much much hard than others which is special.

[Muzukashii]

00:22:427 : Using dk kd dk on muzukashii is really technical imo. You should turn in to dk dk dk, plus you never used kd on the other pattern of the first part.
00:40:703 : Why not triplet here?
01:15:898 : a k sounds good here, but i also agree that we need some breaks.
01:16:846 : Here you turned into a 1/2 pattern combo which is weird to hear, i think you can make 3/4 pattern here.
01:19:777 : ^
01:24:174 : a k sounds good here, but i also agree that we need some breaks.

[Sala-fan's Oni]

God i don't want to mod this one, it's a good one. :'(

{Sala-}

Even if i talked with Charlotte about Sala- instead of Sala on tags, i would like your version on :
I just suggest you to change that "Sala-" tag into "Sala" even if Sala- is the correct nickname, it doesn't match any of his maps (maybe SQL request fault?).
00:24:841 : You can turn this one to k, sounds good.
00:38:031 : I didn't find the utility of k here instead of d.

{Stefan}

01:10:122 : I know you use k for the main sound here, but how about turn this one to a k too?

Nothing more, i just found in love of your Oni, and the using of increasing a decreasing speed is well used (hi gezo).

[Inner Oni]

00:46:393 : Interesting the break here instead of d.
01:41:157 : Here, the stream pattern is not enough, i should extend it in order to make dddkddkkk.

Hope it can help you, gl hf for rank. :D
Zetera
{Sala-}

Even if i talked with Charlotte about Sala- instead of Sala on tags, i would like your version on :
I just suggest you to change that "Sala-" tag into "Sala" even if Sala- is the correct nickname, it doesn't match any of his maps (maybe SQL request fault?).
Where exactly is the expression "Sala" used? Haven't seen that yet.
If we want to refer to other maps, we can only look at TwoThirds - Breathe, which uses the name "Sala" in the diff but uses "sala-" as a tag.
Nevertheless, it is just a tag. I don't see any big problem in altering the name there. Tags are originally used as a help on searching the forums for beatmaps (also works ingame), over here it might be easier to type "Sala-" and to find a lot of results simultaneously, so you might just as well let the tag be "Sala-". Personally, I don't mind changing anything here.

00:24:841 : You can turn this one to k, sounds good.
00:38:031 : I didn't find the utility of k here instead of d. Actually, it follows a system. (Remember poems with various types of rhymes (aabb, abab, abba). Mine follows abba.) If you can't see it, I can clarify this as well.
Topic Starter
Charlotte

Aldwych wrote:

Triple post coz modding request from queue :

[General]

I think your futsuu is not enough hard, i mean the difference stars / objects between futsuu - kantan and muzukashii - futsuu is much different :
- K -> F : 70 objs & 0.6 stars.
- F -> M : 120 objects & 1.43 stars.

Imo, Ono won't let this qualifiy if he see this, so maybe 20 ~ 30 objs on the futsuu could be good.

That's right...Kantan<Futsuu<<<Muzukashii.If have more idea,tell me

[Kantan]

00:14:841 & 00:17:600 & 00:20:358 etc... : I don't understand on how you decide to put a k or d, i though it was d k d k d etc.. but no, even on the sound. Maybe a rework on when use d and when use k could be interesting.
00:24:496 & 00:38:772 (28 & 40) : I also don't understand why these k here? This create a disorder with the other triplet pattern imo. And soundly there no difference. fixed
00:53:994 : Interesting here you used 2 k moreover when the previous pattern are d d d k so on this part maybe follow a d d d k here should be better. Good~
01:02:503 : Hmmm. maybe a d here in order to follow the d d before (aka 00:58:581). fixed
01:06:745 : BPM 196 with quint... well ye. Maybe remove 01:07:654. fixed
01:11:501 : I'm pretty sure a k would be much better. fixed
01:13:570 : If you didn't change the previous quint, at least chang this pattern as dkkdd. fixed
01:39:777 : Try a k here. fixed

[Futsuu]

Maybe take in consider what i said on the general part.

00:14:324 : this should be d k k and not k d k imo.
00:17:082 : here d k d.
00:24:151 : Here i would like to see a kdd (1/2 separator), so you'll add 2 d, cause we have a stream here, so adding notes could be good.
00:25:358 : try to change with d k k.
00:28:114 : and here k d k.
00:35:186 : Here i would like to see a kdd (1/2 separator) (same as 00:24:151 so).
00:53:782 : Add a k here could be interesting to play. fixed,but...pattern is long?
00:54:416 : ^ ^
01:27:016 : Maybe change it to k.

All fixed

The futsuu here makes me confuse, cause i think you got trouble to put correctly the d and k on the first part (imo), also some parts are much much hard than others which is special.

[Muzukashii]

00:22:427 : Using dk kd dk on muzukashii is really technical imo. You should turn in to dk dk dk, plus you never used kd on the other pattern of the first part. fixed
00:40:703 : Why not triplet here? keep,I here doublet
01:15:898 : a k sounds good here, but i also agree that we need some breaks. keep
01:16:846 : Here you turned into a 1/2 pattern combo which is weird to hear, i think you can make 3/4 pattern here. keep
01:19:777 : ^ keep
01:24:174 : a k sounds good here, but i also agree that we need some breaks. keep

[Sala-fan's Oni]

God i don't want to mod this one, it's a good one. :'(

{Sala-}

Even if i talked with Charlotte about Sala- instead of Sala on tags, i would like your version on :
I just suggest you to change that "Sala-" tag into "Sala" even if Sala- is the correct nickname, it doesn't match any of his maps (maybe SQL request fault?).
00:24:841 : You can turn this one to k, sounds good.
00:38:031 : I didn't find the utility of k here instead of d.

{Stefan}

01:10:122 : I know you use k for the main sound here, but how about turn this one to a k too?

Nothing more, i just found in love of your Oni, and the using of increasing a decreasing speed is well used (hi gezo).

[Inner Oni]

00:46:393 : Interesting the break here instead of d. fixed,but,pattern is long :D
01:41:157 : Here, the stream pattern is not enough, i should extend it in order to make dddkddkkk. Good~

Hope it can help you, gl hf for rank. :D
Thank you mod :)
10nya
konnichiwa~

[General]
  1. clear
[Kantan]
  1. Kantan diff is less using this kind of pattern


    usually, Kantan uses pattern like this

  2. 00:46:910 (65 until 73) - : since this diff is kantan and I found your kantan is a bit hard since there's nonstop beat, how about reduce them here? As beginner player, I would hard to catch 66 67 68 because of different BPM and it'll made Kantan player will confuse, how about remove these notes to make Kantan player more easy to play?
    1. 00:47:641 (66) -
    2. 00:50:678 (70) -

    or you can remove
    1. 00:47:641 (66) -
    2. 00:49:123 (68) -
    3. 00:50:678 (70) -
    4. 00:52:316 (72) -
  3. 00:53:994 (74) - until 00:59:275 (84) - : I found this pattern is too hard for kantan players because of the BPM change and nonstop beat on white-tick, usually, Kantan diff is really rare to use 1/1 notes, since this diff is Kantan, how about remove:
    1. 00:54:416 (75) -
    2. 00:55:231 (77) -
    3. 00:58:581 (83) -
[Futsuu]
  1. I found this Futsuu is a bit hard than normal Futsuu, you used many 1/2 notes which is not really good in Futsuu diff, usually Futsuu uses this kind of pattern
    and some 1/2.
  2. 00:15:876 (34) - : supposed this one to be k ? It has the same sound as 00:14:841 (32,33) - so change this into k will make the rhythm good and catchable for players. You also used k on here 00:26:910 (59) - so why not? (:
  3. Nice Futsuu, though there's a lot of 1/2 notes in high BPM
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:37:772 (119,120) - : supposed to be d k? It'll have same sound as 00:36:393 (114,115) - since the sound is same and it's more fit
  2. 00:38:117 (121) - : move this to 00:38:462 - , if you hear the song on 50% playback, there's nothing at 00:38:117 - here but there's sound on 00:38:462 - so move this will better (:
  3. 00:54:839 (181,182,183) - : this part is somehow too plain for me while there's sound here, how about add d on each red lines? like this

    (Make 182,183 as kat and add dons in each red lines ><)
  4. 01:31:157 (324,325) - : change this to k d? It'll make interesting rhythm and it's more fit, imo ><
[Sala-fan's Oni]
  1. 00:46:818 - : since the beat is nonstop from 00:46:565 (6) - till 00:46:910 (1) - , how about add d here? Well, personally I feel strange when there's a beat at here and suddenly there's no notes, i was wished a kkkkd or kkddk here ): If you do so then please remove finish on 00:46:910 -
  2. the rest is good, only that part is a bit awkward for me ;w;
[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:35:531 (209) - : k on here doesn't support anything imo, change this to d will better
  2. 01:01:242 (361) - : too bad the pattern stopped here): how about change this into kdd or kkd? it'll fit better :)
  3. nice diff :3
that's all for me, sorry for the bad english, if there's anything you don't understand please chat me in-game ;w;/
good luck!
ak74
Sorry Charlotte,I come so laaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaate
Really sorry that I just busy doing my own map.
I've shooted a star on your another map,excuse me ;w;

[Kantan]
01:39:777 (157) - What about K?


[Futsuu]
00:02:082 (1) - delete this? looks a little strange,just look...
00:56:015 (123) - k?
01:02:503 (139) - too keep consistency,k


[Muzukashii]
tbh the star of 3.43 may be too hard for the thread?try to push it down a little.

00:02:082 (1) - same as Futsuu if you choose to fix it

00:35:876 —— 00:46:910 , Kiai is really a bit hard.
What about this?
If you choose to fix it like ^,please do the same on latter patterns.

00:46:220 (150) - delete
00:46:651 (152,153) - delete

00:53:149 —— 01:03:109 , 1/4 ●● like 00:53:888 (174,175) - is too hard as a Muzu,why not just use 1/2?

01:04:775 (211) - delete
01:05:987 (217) - delete
01:06:897 (222) - delete and 01:07:048 (223) - d

01:09:433 —— 01:14:950 , try to decrease the number of 1/2 ●●●●●●●
01:14:950 —— 01:25:984 , the same as 00:35:876 —— 00:46:910

01:42:019 (355) - delete?


[Sala-fan's Oni]
The map sounds really cool...
00:21:479 (1,1) - delete,a little unreasonable
00:35:789 (55) - delete,to make a buffer

patterns in kiai like 00:41:651 (87,88,89,90) - ,may be a small clash for former patterns of the same music

00:52:628 (19) - d


[Inner Oni]
The map plays hard enough.
It deserves a Inner Oni,but the star is a problem,and sorry that I haven't know how to rise it yet :|

00:02:082 (1) - the same as Futsuu

00:32:082 (186,187,188,189) - too keep consistency,you can change it into long patterns like you did.

Kiai is really cool and I can mod few things...really sorry :|
I haven't mod Inners for a long time...






Overall,a nice map.
Good luck!
:)
Topic Starter
Charlotte

10nya wrote:

konnichiwa~

[General]
  1. clear
[Kantan]
  1. Kantan diff is less using this kind of pattern


    usually, Kantan uses pattern like this

  2. 00:46:910 (65 until 73) - : since this diff is kantan and I found your kantan is a bit hard since there's nonstop beat, how about reduce them here? As beginner player, I would hard to catch 66 67 68 because of different BPM and it'll made Kantan player will confuse, how about remove these notes to make Kantan player more easy to play?
    1. 00:47:641 (66) -
    2. 00:50:678 (70) -

    or you can remove
    1. 00:47:641 (66) -
    2. 00:49:123 (68) -
    3. 00:50:678 (70) -
    4. 00:52:316 (72) -
  3. 00:53:994 (74) - until 00:59:275 (84) - : I found this pattern is too hard for kantan players because of the BPM change and nonstop beat on white-tick, usually, Kantan diff is really rare to use 1/1 notes, since this diff is Kantan, how about remove:
    1. 00:54:416 (75) - fixed
    2. 00:55:231 (77) -
    3. 00:58:581 (83) -
    BPM change & nonstop...but,have 1/1 break time so keep
[Futsuu]
  1. I found this Futsuu is a bit hard than normal Futsuu, you used many 1/2 notes which is not really good in Futsuu diff, usually Futsuu uses this kind of pattern
    and some 1/2.
  2. 00:15:876 (34) - : supposed this one to be k ? It has the same sound as 00:14:841 (32,33) - so change this into k will make the rhythm good and catchable for players. You also used k on here 00:26:910 (59) - so why not? (: fixed
  3. Nice Futsuu, though there's a lot of 1/2 notes in high BPM
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:37:772 (119,120) - : supposed to be d k? It'll have same sound as 00:36:393 (114,115) - since the sound is same and it's more fit keep
  2. 00:38:117 (121) - : move this to 00:38:462 - , if you hear the song on 50% playback, there's nothing at 00:38:117 - here but there's sound on 00:38:462 - so move this will better (: ^
  3. 00:54:839 (181,182,183) - : this part is somehow too plain for me while there's sound here, how about add d on each red lines? like this

    (Make 182,183 as kat and add dons in each red lines ><) okay.add d.
  4. 01:31:157 (324,325) - : change this to k d? It'll make interesting rhythm and it's more fit, imo >< keep
[Sala-fan's Oni]
  1. 00:46:818 - : since the beat is nonstop from 00:46:565 (6) - till 00:46:910 (1) - , how about add d here? Well, personally I feel strange when there's a beat at here and suddenly there's no notes, i was wished a kkkkd or kkddk here ): If you do so then please remove finish on 00:46:910 -
  2. the rest is good, only that part is a bit awkward for me ;w;
[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:35:531 (209) - : k on here doesn't support anything imo, change this to d will better fixed
  2. 01:01:242 (361) - : too bad the pattern stopped here): how about change this into kdd or kkd? it'll fit better :) ^
  3. nice diff :3
that's all for me, sorry for the bad english, if there's anything you don't understand please chat me in-game ;w;/
good luck!
Thank you mod :)
Topic Starter
Charlotte

ak74qbz95xm8 wrote:

Sorry Charlotte,I come so laaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaate
Really sorry that I just busy doing my own map.
I've shooted a star on your another map,excuse me ;w;

[Kantan]
01:39:777 (157) - What about K? keep


[Futsuu]
00:02:082 (1) - delete this? looks a little strange,just look... fixed
00:56:015 (123) - k? ^
01:02:503 (139) - too keep consistency,k ^


[Muzukashii]
tbh the star of 3.43 may be too hard for the thread?try to push it down a little.3.43→3.12

00:02:082 (1) - same as Futsuu if you choose to fix it fixed

00:35:876 —— 00:46:910 , Kiai is really a bit hard.
What about this?
If you choose to fix it like ^,please do the same on latter patterns.

00:46:220 (150) - delete
00:46:651 (152,153) - delete

00:53:149 —— 01:03:109 , 1/4 ●● like 00:53:888 (174,175) - is too hard as a Muzu,why not just use 1/2?

01:04:775 (211) - delete
01:05:987 (217) - delete
01:06:897 (222) - delete and 01:07:048 (223) - d

01:09:433 —— 01:14:950 , try to decrease the number of 1/2 ●●●●●●●
01:14:950 —— 01:25:984 , the same as 00:35:876 —— 00:46:910

01:42:019 (355) - delete?

kiai time=some delete so other keep


[Sala-fan's Oni]
The map sounds really cool...
00:21:479 (1,1) - delete,a little unreasonable
00:35:789 (55) - delete,to make a buffer

patterns in kiai like 00:41:651 (87,88,89,90) - ,may be a small clash for former patterns of the same music

00:52:628 (19) - d


[Inner Oni]
The map plays hard enough.
It deserves a Inner Oni,but the star is a problem,and sorry that I haven't know how to rise it yet :|

00:02:082 (1) - the same as Futsuu fixed

00:32:082 (186,187,188,189) - too keep consistency,you can change it into long patterns like you did. ^

Kiai is really cool and I can mod few things...really sorry :|
I haven't mod Inners for a long time...

Thank you mod :)






Overall,a nice map.
Good luck!
:)
Zetera
[10nya]

[Sala-fan's Oni]
  1. 00:46:818 - : since the beat is nonstop from 00:46:565 (6) - till 00:46:910 (1) - , how about add d here? Well, personally I feel strange when there's a beat at here and suddenly there's no notes, i was wished a kkkkd or kkddk here ): If you do so then please remove finish on 00:46:910 - I'd rather keep the finish's.
  2. the rest is good, only that part is a bit awkward for me ;w;
[ask74qbz95xm8]

[Sala-fan's Oni]

00:35:789 (55) - delete,to make a buffer

patterns in kiai like 00:41:651 (87,88,89,90) - ,may be a small clash for former patterns of the same music I actually want it to be such a clash.

00:52:628 (19) - d Not sure why I should change that. Thus: no change.
JUDYDANNY
Hi,sorry I'm very late :? :?
Here's a Taiko Mod via Charlotte’s Request.
My mod is for suggetions. if you dont like, ignore please.
~Taiko~
d is Red Note.
k is Blue Note.
and, D ,K is finisher .. .
“+ ?” is I like pattern (※example→ add? , remove?
Big text is strong suggestion.

[Kantan]
  1. on 00:46:910 (65) - ~~~ 01:01:897 (88) – ‘s part, I think needs more break.
    00:47:641 (66) - , 00:49:123 (68) -, 00:50:678 (70) -, 00:52:316 (72) –
    And,, 00:53:994 (74) - , 00:55:231 (76) - , 00:56:777 (79) - . 00:57:147 (80) -.
    気合からの落差にぴったりな上、1/1を超える休憩も暫くないのでもう1ランク下の密度でも聞いてみていいと思いました。
  2. on 01:25:984 (127) - ~ 01:31:501 (137) – ‘s part , same as ,, 00:53:994 (74) -~~.
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:04:324 (5) – delete? そもそもこの音、エラー気味なので取る必要もあまり感じませんが,,Futsuuなら取る必要性は低いでしょう。
  2. 00:05:876 (8,10) - ^? 5を削除するなら…
    1/1ストリームの開始が急すぎる気がします、少しタメ作ってからでも問題ない盛り上がりだと思います。 00:12:427 (23,24) – ここも繋がってないですし
  3. 00:27:600 (32,33,34,35,36) – dkddkだったのかな?一番最初は..? よくわからないdkdk?kになってるのでddkdkでもう一度いきませんか?
  4. 00:20:358 (15) – k?  作曲者の意図でしょうが、なぜか地味に音の下がり具合が他と違うので、これを使って変化付けはっきりするのはどうでしょうか?
    *00:21:393 (17,18,19,20,21,22) - kkD~kkd, 00:32:427 (42,43,44,45,46,47) – kdD,~kdd 的なリンク付けになれそうな気がしました
  5. 01:07:048 (125,126) - kk? 難易度は増すと思いますが、聞き比べると、1つ前の小節のk kkk がいい味出しててこちらの方がしっくりきました。
  6. 01:09:043 (131) – add d?
  7. 01:25:984 (187,188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198) –
    最初の気合同様、1/1のリズム構成でいきませんか?本来休憩箇所のようなパートがとても難易度高くなってます。
    音が鮮明に聞こえない以上Futsuuの難易度として取るべきでないリズム難だと思います.
    e.g https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2464037
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:06:220 (13,14,15,16,17) – ddd-d-d-k >> d-d-ddd-k? or d-d-d-ddk? Futsuuの提案に似たものです。
  2. 00:12:772 (35) – add don,
  3. 00:18:979 (55) – d?
  4. 00:30:014 (93) - ^
  5. 00:37:772 (118) – don? このkiaiパートの色パターンなんですが、変えすぎてしまって音取が非常に不安定に感じました、00:35:876 (112,113,114,115) –d-d-d-k(or d)を基盤にして、そこから00:13:807 (38) -~のパートの音取ような変化形をそのままつかってあげれば、現状よりは聞こえが良くなると思います。
  6. 00:40:272 (127) - ^
  7. 01:14:950 (253) - ~~ same as above.
  8. 00:50:275 (1,2,4) – delete?
  9. 00:56:015 (178) – delete? 割と主観ですが 消してもいいかな~って聞いてみて思いました
  10. 01:01:897 (194) - からですが、00:59:275 (185,186,187,188) – と同じにしませんか? 休憩の意図は分かるのですが、曲調考えると詰めるべきだと思います。
  11. 01:42:019 (346) – delete
[Sala-fan's Oni]
  1. 00:37:945 (64,65,66,67) – kkd-k >>k-ddk ? *not sounds> sounds.
  2. 00:41:048 (83) – k ,I think this note needs to follow that splash sound.
  3. 00:49:873 (11) – Don , I don’t understand why put K ..
  4. That's all! good~ :D
[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:56:211 (340) – delete, 00:59:101 (352) – ここと比較してパーカッション類の音に変化があるのでいいと思います
  2. 01:04:018 (379) – k? , 次の380のdで音の落差が表現できると思います
  3. 01:04:775 (385) - d? 高い音ですが、その後のk-kの余韻の意識づけに合うのでよいと思います
  4. 01:41:329 (593,594) - swap?
  5. 部分部分に色パターン変化ありきで,そこに面白みがあっていい感じでした :)
モッドとか久しぶりなんで全然役に立たなかったらごめんなさい!><
That’s all! I thank you for reading it through ;)
Good Luck! :D
Topic Starter
Charlotte

JUDYDANNY wrote:

Hi,sorry I'm very late :? :?
Here's a Taiko Mod via Charlotte’s Request.
My mod is for suggetions. if you dont like, ignore please.
~Taiko~
d is Red Note.
k is Blue Note.
and, D ,K is finisher .. .
“+ ?” is I like pattern (※example→ add? , remove?
Big text is strong suggestion.

[Kantan]
  1. on 00:46:910 (65) - ~~~ 01:01:897 (88) – ‘s part, I think needs more break.
    00:47:641 (66) - , 00:49:123 (68) -, 00:50:678 (70) -, 00:52:316 (72) –
    And,, 00:53:994 (74) - , 00:55:231 (76) - , 00:56:777 (79) - . 00:57:147 (80) -.
    気合からの落差にぴったりな上、1/1を超える休憩も暫くないのでもう1ランク下の密度でも聞いてみていいと思いました。okay.1ランク下の密度に変更しました。
  2. on 01:25:984 (127) - ~ 01:31:501 (137) – ‘s part , same as ,, 00:53:994 (74) -~~. fixed
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:04:324 (5) – delete? そもそもこの音、エラー気味なので取る必要もあまり感じませんが,,Futsuuなら取る必要性は低いでしょう。okay.delete
  2. 00:05:876 (8,10) - ^? 5を削除するなら… okay.delete
    1/1ストリームの開始が急すぎる気がします、少しタメ作ってからでも問題ない盛り上がりだと思います。 00:12:427 (23,24) – ここも繋がってないですし 確かにその通りですね。
  3. 00:27:600 (32,33,34,35,36) – dkddkだったのかな?一番最初は..? よくわからないdkdk?kになってるのでddkdkでもう一度いきませんか? okay.changed ddkdk
  4. 00:20:358 (15) – k?  作曲者の意図でしょうが、なぜか地味に音の下がり具合が他と違うので、これを使って変化付けはっきりするのはどうでしょうか? okay.
    *00:21:393 (17,18,19,20,21,22) - kkD~kkd, 00:32:427 (42,43,44,45,46,47) – kdD,~kdd 的なリンク付けになれそうな気がしました
  5. 01:07:048 (125,126) - kk? 難易度は増すと思いますが、聞き比べると、1つ前の小節のk kkk がいい味出しててこちらの方がしっくりきました。fixed
  6. 01:09:043 (131) – add d? fixed
  7. 01:25:984 (187,188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198) –
    最初の気合同様、1/1のリズム構成でいきませんか?本来休憩箇所のようなパートがとても難易度高くなってます。
    音が鮮明に聞こえない以上Futsuuの難易度として取るべきでないリズム難だと思います. そうですね、1/1のリズム構成に変更します。fixed
    e.g https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2464037
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:06:220 (13,14,15,16,17) – ddd-d-d-k >> d-d-ddd-k? or d-d-d-ddk? Futsuuの提案に似たものです。d-d-ddd-kを採用します
  2. 00:12:772 (35) – add don, fixed
  3. 00:18:979 (55) – d? ^
  4. 00:30:014 (93) - ^ ^
  5. 00:37:772 (118) – don? このkiaiパートの色パターンなんですが、変えすぎてしまって音取が非常に不安定に感じました、00:35:876 (112,113,114,115) –d-d-d-k(or d)を基盤にして、そこから00:13:807 (38) -~のパートの音取ような変化形をそのままつかってあげれば、現状よりは聞こえが良くなると思います。
  6. 00:40:272 (127) - ^
  7. 01:14:950 (253) - ~~ same as above. d-d-d-k(or d)主体のリズムに変更しました。
  8. 00:50:275 (1,2,4) – delete? fixed
  9. 00:56:015 (178) – delete? 割と主観ですが 消してもいいかな~って聞いてみて思いました keepで
  10. 01:01:897 (194) - からですが、00:59:275 (185,186,187,188) – と同じにしませんか? 休憩の意図は分かるのですが、曲調考えると詰めるべきだと思います。 そうですね。詰めました。
  11. 01:42:019 (346) – delete fixed
[Sala-fan's Oni]
  1. 00:37:945 (64,65,66,67) – kkd-k >>k-ddk ? *not sounds> sounds.
  2. 00:41:048 (83) – k ,I think this note needs to follow that splash sound.
  3. 00:49:873 (11) – Don , I don’t understand why put K ..
  4. That's all! good~ :D
[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:56:211 (340) – delete, 00:59:101 (352) – ここと比較してパーカッション類の音に変化があるのでいいと思います
  2. 01:04:018 (379) – k? , 次の380のdで音の落差が表現できると思います
  3. 01:04:775 (385) - d? 高い音ですが、その後のk-kの余韻の意識づけに合うのでよいと思います
  4. 01:41:329 (593,594) - swap?

    All fixed
  5. 部分部分に色パターン変化ありきで,そこに面白みがあっていい感じでした :)
モッドとか久しぶりなんで全然役に立たなかったらごめんなさい!>< いいアイデアありがとうございました。
That’s all! I thank you for reading it through ;)
Good Luck! :D
Thank you mod :)
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