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xtrem3x
Request via .... PM or form? .-.

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General:

all diffs with same kiai time pls .-.

don = d
kat = k
Big Don = D
Big Kat = K

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Kantan:

Good .-.

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Futsuu:

01:14:950 (191) - change to D
01:25:984 (214) - ^

01:39:088 (245) - change to k

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Muzukashii:

01:26:501 (314,316,318) - change to k

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Sala-fan's Oni:

00:05:186 - change to k (?)

00:07:255 (1,1,1) - k d k
00:10:358 (1,1,1) - k d k

00:49:498 - change to k

01:28:398 (1,1) - k d

01:39:088 (1,1,1) - same k d k

01:42:537 - change to D

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Inner Oni:

00:16:220 - change to k
00:17:082 - ^
00:18:979 - ^
00:26:651 (139,140,141, 142) - ddkk

01:30:295 to 01:31:157 - add 2 or 3 notes .-.

01:41:674 - k

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Zetera
00:49:498 - change to k Denied. I used the same triple formations all the time, this would make it inconsistent. Also, I don't think it follows any certain point in the music.

Thanks for your mod. The rest of the diff belongs to Stefan.
Topic Starter
Charlotte

xtrem3x wrote:

Request via .... PM or form? .-.

_____________________________________________________

General:

all diffs with same kiai time pls .-.

don = d
kat = k
Big Don = D
Big Kat = K

_____________________________________________________

Kantan:

Good .-.

_____________________________________________________

Futsuu:

01:14:950 (191) - change to D fixed
01:25:984 (214) - ^ fixed

01:39:088 (245) - change to k fixed

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Muzukashii:

01:26:501 (314,316,318) - change to k fixed

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Sala-fan's Oni:

00:05:186 - change to k (?)

00:07:255 (1,1,1) - k d k
00:10:358 (1,1,1) - k d k

00:49:498 - change to k

01:28:398 (1,1) - k d

01:39:088 (1,1,1) - same k d k

01:42:537 - change to D

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Inner Oni:

00:16:220 - change to k fixed
00:17:082 - ^ fixed
00:18:979 - ^ fixed
00:26:651 (139,140,141, 142) - ddkk fixed

01:30:295 to 01:31:157 - add 2 or 3 notes .-. okay,add note.

01:41:674 - k fixed

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Thank you mod :)
Ginshu
Hi~ :)

Mod as your requested

d= don
k= kat
D= big don
K= big kat


Kantan
> 00:02:082 (1,2,3) - d D d
> 01:13:915 (116,117) - d k

Futsuu
> 00:02:082 (1) - d
> 01:15:295 (192) - delete

Muzukashii
> 00:02:082 (1) - d
> 00:32:772 (99) - k
> 00:38:289 (120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127,128,129,130,131,132) -

> 01:10:984 (241) - d

Sala-fan's oni
> 00:02:427 (1) - K
> 00:35:617 (51) - k
> 00:55:035 - add d
> 00:55:427 (29) - k
> 00:58:061 (39) - k
> 01:01:078 (52) - k
> 01:25:726 (185) - k

Inner Oni
> 00:02:082 (1,2,3,4) - d K D d
> 00:11:220 (43,44) - k k
> 00:14:324 (55) - k
> 00:20:531 (97) - k
> 00:24:496 (125) - D
> 00:25:358 (129) - k
> 00:27:255 (143) - k
> 01:04:775 (367) - k

Good Luck ;)
Zetera

LNP- wrote:

Sala-fan's oni
> 00:02:427 (1) - K
> 00:35:617 (51) - k
> 00:55:035 - add d
> 00:55:427 (29) - k No, I will use consistent kdkdk-patterns.
> 00:58:061 (39) - k ^
> 01:01:078 (52) - k ^
> 01:25:726 (185) - k

00:55:035 - was fixed. everything else belongs to Stefan.
Topic Starter
Charlotte

LNP- wrote:

Hi~ :)

Mod as your requested

d= don
k= kat
D= big don
K= big kat


Kantan
> 00:02:082 (1,2,3) - d D d changed d D K
> 01:13:915 (116,117) - d k keep

Futsuu
> 00:02:082 (1) - d fixed
> 01:15:295 (192) - delete keep

Muzukashii
> 00:02:082 (1) - d fixed
> 00:32:772 (99) - k keep
> 00:38:289 (120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127,128,129,130,131,132) - keep

> 01:10:984 (241) - d keep

Sala-fan's oni
> 00:02:427 (1) - K
> 00:35:617 (51) - k
> 00:55:035 - add d
> 00:55:427 (29) - k
> 00:58:061 (39) - k
> 01:01:078 (52) - k
> 01:25:726 (185) - k

Inner Oni
> 00:02:082 (1,2,3,4) - d K D d changed d D K d
> 00:11:220 (43,44) - k k keep
> 00:14:324 (55) - k ^
> 00:20:531 (97) - k ^
> 00:24:496 (125) - D ^
> 00:25:358 (129) - k ^
> 00:27:255 (143) - k ^
> 01:04:775 (367) - k fixed

Good Luck ;)
Thank you mod :)
Ilikecheese
Inner Oni

The kiai aside, the rest of the map was a tad to easy for me :P so I thought it could use some notes

00:11:824 - add k
00:12:082 - change k
00:12:255 (51,52,53,54,55,56,57) - dddkkkk
00:12:945 (58,59,60) - kdk
00:13:289 - add d
00:24:324 (123,124) - change to k
00:24:669 - add k
00:47:275 - add d
00:48:007 - ^
00:56:015 - add k
00:56:211 - delete note
01:01:078 - add d
01:01:242 - change to k
01:40:036 - add d
01:40:122 - change to k
01:40:295 - add d
01:40:381 - ^
01:40:553 - add k
01:40:639 - ^
01:40:726 - ^
01:40:984 - ^

Sala-fan's Oni
This map was pretty even and flowed well, boring, but i'd rather not start adding notes to this map.
01:25:810 (186) - overlapped don, delete.

00:36:105 - here you have 1/3s but it should be 1/4. re-snap pl0x.

Muzukashii
00:03:634 (6) - move this to 00:04:324
00:36:105 - same as Oni, should be 1/4
01:05:987 (220) - delete
01:10:812 - I was thinking that here, you should delete some of these short streams, its not kiai and furthermore its a muzukashii.
01:14:950 - again with the 1/3 ~ to 1/4 snapped notes
Topic Starter
Charlotte

Ilikecheese wrote:

Inner Oni

The kiai aside, the rest of the map was a tad to easy for me :P so I thought it could use some notes

00:11:824 - add k
00:12:082 - change k
00:12:255 (51,52,53,54,55,56,57) - dddkkkk
00:12:945 (58,59,60) - kdk
00:13:289 - add d
00:24:324 (123,124) - change to k
00:24:669 - add k
00:47:275 - add d
00:48:007 - ^
00:56:015 - add k
00:56:211 - delete note
01:01:078 - add d
01:01:242 - change to k
01:40:036 - add d
01:40:122 - change to k
01:40:295 - add d
01:40:381 - ^
01:40:553 - add k
01:40:639 - ^
01:40:726 - ^
01:40:984 - ^

Almost fixed

Sala-fan's Oni
This map was pretty even and flowed well, boring, but i'd rather not start adding notes to this map.
01:25:810 (186) - overlapped don, delete.

00:36:105 - here you have 1/3s but it should be 1/4. re-snap pl0x.

Muzukashii
00:03:634 (6) - move this to 00:04:324 add 1/3 note.
00:36:105 - same as Oni, should be 1/4 keep
01:05:987 (220) - delete keep
01:10:812 - I was thinking that here, you should delete some of these short streams, its not kiai and furthermore its a muzukashii. keep
01:14:950 - again with the 1/3 ~ to 1/4 snapped notes keep
Thank you mod :)
Zetera
Fixed everything, even Stefan's stupid mistake. And I wonder why I always miss..
Kurokotei
Hi! Here is the mod you requested via PM!

[General]

01:07:957 - to 01:09:433 - I would recommend to add some sv changes to have this slowdown in a more progressive way, would fit the song better imo (except in Oni diff, they are already here)

[Kantan]

  1. 00:10:358 (10) - delete? It'll give a little break and the k in the next pattern is emphasized
  2. 00:55:231 (79,80) - change these to k? it'll make a reverse pattern with 00:53:149 (75,76,77) -
  3. 00:57:888 (84,85) - how about k k d (1/1)? reverse pattern + to keep rhythm consistency

[Futsuu]

  1. 00:14:151 (32) - I don't think it's needed, remove? like this the transition is better between Kantan and Futsuu
  2. 00:15:186 (35) - ^
  3. 00:16:910 (40) - ^
  4. 00:17:945 (43) - ^
  5. 00:19:669 (48) - ^
  6. 00:20:703 (51) - ^
  7. 00:22:427 (56) - ^
  8. 00:23:462 (59) - ^
  9. 00:25:186 (64) - ^
  10. 00:26:220 (67) - ^
    etc... until 00:35:876 (95) -
  11. 01:03:109 (158,159,160) - ddd? it's easier + sounds good too
  12. 01:04:321 (163,164,165) - kkk? easier imo
  13. 01:06:745 (170,171,172) - ^

[Muzukashii]

  • Everything seems fine! *throws a star*

[PuzzleMaster-NutritiousGuy's Oni *runs*]

  1. 00:30:358 (28) - change to D? like this the next k is emphasized since the pitch is pretty high
  2. 00:33:117 (40) - d? same reason as above
  3. 01:41:415 - add a d here? I think the sound in the back is lound enough to be mapped

[Inner Oni]

  1. 00:20:703 (107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114) - ddk kkddk would flow better imo
  2. 00:24:496 (134) - change to d?
    I really like the Kiai, it's really fun to play!

That's all! Good luck!
Stefan

xtrem3x wrote:

Sala-fan's Oni:

00:05:186 - change to k (?) I see nothing which sounds higher to add k here.

00:07:255 (1,1,1) - k d k There is a higher beat on 00:07:600 (1) where k is good.
00:10:358 (1,1,1) - k d k Wouldn't fit much imo

01:28:398 (1,1) - k d Following the terrible piano play here

01:39:088 (1,1,1) - same k d k Won't change since I didn't in the first as well.

01:42:537 - change to D Why? I already used on 00:13:807 (1) K.

LNP- wrote:

Sala-fan's oni
> 00:02:427 (1) - K I guess to have a bit consistency with the Inner Oni Difficulty would be good. Added.
> 00:35:617 (51) - k Sala-, that's your part. :|
> 01:25:726 (185) - k d is fine here.

Sayaka- wrote:

[PuzzleMaster-NutritiousGuy's Oni *runs*]
u wot

  1. 01:41:415 - add a d here? I think the sound in the back is lound enough to be mapped I like the transision ooo o o ooo more.
Thanks for the mods.

Sala- wrote:

Fixed everything, even Stefan's stupid mistake. And I wonder why I always miss..
ehehehehhhh /slaps Sala
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Topic Starter
Charlotte

Sayaka- wrote:

Hi! Here is the mod you requested via PM!

[General]

01:07:957 - to 01:09:433 - I would recommend to add some sv changes to have this slowdown in a more progressive way, would fit the song better imo (except in Oni diff, they are already here)

[Kantan]

  1. 00:10:358 (10) - delete? It'll give a little break and the k in the next pattern is emphasized fixed
  2. 00:55:231 (79,80) - change these to k? it'll make a reverse pattern with 00:53:149 (75,76,77) - fixed
  3. 00:57:888 (84,85) - how about k k d (1/1)? reverse pattern + to keep rhythm consistency sorry.1/1-triplet is long.keep

[Futsuu]

  1. 00:14:151 (32) - I don't think it's needed, remove? like this the transition is better between Kantan and Futsuu
  2. 00:15:186 (35) - ^
  3. 00:16:910 (40) - ^
  4. 00:17:945 (43) - ^
  5. 00:19:669 (48) - ^
  6. 00:20:703 (51) - ^
  7. 00:22:427 (56) - ^
  8. 00:23:462 (59) - ^
  9. 00:25:186 (64) - ^
  10. 00:26:220 (67) - ^
    etc... until 00:35:876 (95) -
  11. 01:03:109 (158,159,160) - ddd? it's easier + sounds good too
  12. 01:04:321 (163,164,165) - kkk? easier imo keep.
  13. 01:06:745 (170,171,172) - ^

    Almost fixed

[Muzukashii]

  • Everything seems fine! *throws a star*

[PuzzleMaster-NutritiousGuy's Oni *runs*]

  1. 00:30:358 (28) - change to D? like this the next k is emphasized since the pitch is pretty high
  2. 00:33:117 (40) - d? same reason as above
  3. 01:41:415 - add a d here? I think the sound in the back is lound enough to be mapped

[Inner Oni]

  1. 00:20:703 (107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114) - ddk kkddk would flow better imo fixed
  2. 00:24:496 (134) - change to d? fixed
    I really like the Kiai, it's really fun to play! Thank you

That's all! Good luck!
Thank you mod :)
PatZar
hi from PM request

Inner
01:38:915 (577,579) - ctrl + g
01:39:605 and 01:39:691 - don

[Sala-fan's Oni]
00:10:358 (1,1) - kk
00:17:945 (1,1) - how about kd? 00:18:117 (1) - drum
00:32:600 - d? because 00:35:358 (49) -

no comment =w=b

nothing i can be mentioned

the map set good already =w=b
good luck!
Topic Starter
Charlotte

Genocide wrote:

hi from PM request

Inner
01:38:915 (577,579) - ctrl + g changed 01:38:398 (574,575,576,577,578,579,580) - ddkkddd
01:39:605 and 01:39:691 - don keep

[Sala-fan's Oni]
00:10:358 (1,1) - kk
00:17:945 (1,1) - how about kd? 00:18:117 (1) - drum
00:32:600 - d? because 00:35:358 (49) -

no comment =w=b

nothing i can be mentioned

the map set good already =w=b
good luck!
Thank you mod :)
Nardoxyribonucleic
Hi, here comes a taiko mod as requested.

  • [Kantan]
  1. 00:02:427 (2,3) - consider changing it to K d ? This could fit the strong snare sound at 00:02:427 (2) -
  2. 00:23:117 (28) - k would be better since the sound is similar to 00:20:358 (24) -
  3. 00:34:151 (44) - same as ^
  4. 01:20:467 (127) - I think you may have missed the finish here ?
  5. 01:25:984 (137) - ^
  • [Futsuu]
  1. 00:02:427 (2,3) - same as Kantan
  2. 00:03:807 - The current pattern sounds strange to me because it is a bit unnatural. You may try this: (cursor at 00:04:151 - )
  3. 00:23:634 (52) - maybe d as you did at 00:34:669 (76) - ? It would be more consistent imo.
  4. From 00:35:876 to 00:41:393 - , I think you need to make this part similar to the 2nd part of this kiai in terms of note density for the sake of a better flow. Here is a suggestion: (cursor at 00:38:634 - )
  5. 01:02:200 - adding d here could make it more coherent to 00:59:602 (132) -
  6. 01:12:881 (168) - d would be better since the music is the same as 01:10:122 (162) -
  7. From 01:14:950 to 01:20:467 - same as the part from 00:35:876 to 00:41:393 -
  8. 01:32:019 (209,210) - d k could follow the pitch of the music better.
  9. 01:34:777 (215,216) - ^
  • [Muzukashii]
  1. 00:02:427 (2,3) - K k would be better for the strong snare at 00:02:427 (2) -
  2. 00:09:669 (26,27,28,29,30,31) - ddd kkd would be nice if you want to follow the background musical pitch.
  3. 00:11:220 and 00:11:393 - you may add d for better consistency.
  4. 00:52:316 (178) - k could fit the pitch of the music there.
  5. From 01:12:191 to 01:14:605 - , I would propose a shorter pattern like this: (cursor at 01:12:191 - )
  6. 01:14:950 (264) - I think you may have missed the finish here ?
  7. 01:20:467 (290) - ^
  8. 01:22:651 (300) - move to 01:22:622 (300) - . The note is wrongly snapped.
  9. 01:25:984 (317) - same as 01:14:950 (264) -
  10. 01:30:639 - add d and change 01:30:812 (334) - to follow the background music ?
  11. 01:35:295 (346) - k would be better since the sound is similar to 01:32:536 (339) -
  • [Sala-fan's Oni]
  1. 00:10:358 (1) - k would be better if you want to follow the pitch of the background music.
  2. 00:16:220 (1) - consider changing this note to D ? It has the lowest pitch among 00:15:876 (1,1,1) -
  3. 01:04:548 - consider adding a don here ? A ddk triplet could suit the music there while increasing the difficulty by a bit.
  4. 01:06:139 (81,82,83) - I think kkd could fit the stressed sound at 01:06:139 - in a way better.
  5. 01:06:972 - same as 01:04:548 -
  6. 01:39:088 (1) - same as 00:10:358 (1) -
  • [Inner Oni]
  1. 00:02:427 (2,3) - same as Muzukashii
  2. 00:06:220 (16,17,18,19,20,21) - ddk ddd and add k at 00:07:772 - ? Again, this could follow the pitch of the music nicely.
  3. 00:08:548 - consider adding a don here for the hit-hat sound ?
  4. 00:15:531 (73,74,75,76,77) - ddkdk could follow the relatively high-pitched music at 00:15:876 (77) -
  5. 00:21:738 (115) - k would be better for pattern consistency as 00:16:220 (78,97) -
  6. 00:27:255 (153) - ^
  7. 00:28:634 (161) - k could follow the relatively high-pitched sound there.
  8. 00:35:531 (208) - same as 00:21:738 (115) -
  9. 00:52:316 (322) - same as Muzukashii
  10. 01:00:586 (354) - maybe k here for pattern consistency ?
  11. 01:04:548 - consider adding d here for a harder pattern which fits the music ?
  12. 01:30:812 (551) - same as Muzukashii
  13. 01:32:019 (555,559) - you may swap these notes to d k as 01:33:053 - has a higher pitch.
  14. 01:34:777 (564,565) - similar to ^ , d k would be better imo.
That's all and good luck~ :D
Topic Starter
Charlotte

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Hi, here comes a taiko mod as requested.

  • [Kantan]
  1. 00:02:427 (2,3) - consider changing it to K d ? This could fit the strong snare sound at 00:02:427 (2) -
  2. 00:23:117 (28) - k would be better since the sound is similar to 00:20:358 (24) -
  3. 00:34:151 (44) - same as ^
  4. 01:20:467 (127) - I think you may have missed the finish here ?
  5. 01:25:984 (137) - ^

    All fixed
  • [Futsuu]
  1. 00:02:427 (2,3) - same as Kantan
  2. 00:03:807 - The current pattern sounds strange to me because it is a bit unnatural. You may try this: (cursor at 00:04:151 - )
  3. 00:23:634 (52) - maybe d as you did at 00:34:669 (76) - ? It would be more consistent imo.
  4. From 00:35:876 to 00:41:393 - , I think you need to make this part similar to the 2nd part of this kiai in terms of note density for the sake of a better flow. Here is a suggestion: (cursor at 00:38:634 - )
  5. 01:02:200 - adding d here could make it more coherent to 00:59:602 (132) -
  6. 01:12:881 (168) - d would be better since the music is the same as 01:10:122 (162) -
  7. From 01:14:950 to 01:20:467 - same as the part from 00:35:876 to 00:41:393 -
  8. 01:32:019 (209,210) - d k could follow the pitch of the music better.
  9. 01:34:777 (215,216) - ^

    All fixed
  • [Muzukashii]
  1. 00:02:427 (2,3) - K k would be better for the strong snare at 00:02:427 (2) -
  2. 00:09:669 (26,27,28,29,30,31) - ddd kkd would be nice if you want to follow the background musical pitch.
  3. 00:11:220 and 00:11:393 - you may add d for better consistency.
  4. 00:52:316 (178) - k could fit the pitch of the music there.
  5. From 01:12:191 to 01:14:605 - , I would propose a shorter pattern like this: (cursor at 01:12:191 - )
  6. 01:14:950 (264) - I think you may have missed the finish here ?
  7. 01:20:467 (290) - ^
  8. 01:22:651 (300) - move to 01:22:622 (300) - . The note is wrongly snapped.
  9. 01:25:984 (317) - same as 01:14:950 (264) -
  10. 01:30:639 - add d and change 01:30:812 (334) - to follow the background music ?
  11. 01:35:295 (346) - k would be better since the sound is similar to 01:32:536 (339) -

    Almost fixed
  • [Sala-fan's Oni]
  1. 00:10:358 (1) - k would be better if you want to follow the pitch of the background music.
  2. 00:16:220 (1) - consider changing this note to D ? It has the lowest pitch among 00:15:876 (1,1,1) -
  3. 01:04:548 - consider adding a don here ? A ddk triplet could suit the music there while increasing the difficulty by a bit.
  4. 01:06:139 (81,82,83) - I think kkd could fit the stressed sound at 01:06:139 - in a way better.
  5. 01:06:972 - same as 01:04:548 -
  6. 01:39:088 (1) - same as 00:10:358 (1) -
  • [Inner Oni]
  1. 00:02:427 (2,3) - same as Muzukashii
  2. 00:06:220 (16,17,18,19,20,21) - ddk ddd and add k at 00:07:772 - ? Again, this could follow the pitch of the music nicely.
  3. 00:08:548 - consider adding a don here for the hit-hat sound ?
  4. 00:15:531 (73,74,75,76,77) - ddkdk could follow the relatively high-pitched music at 00:15:876 (77) -
  5. 00:21:738 (115) - k would be better for pattern consistency as 00:16:220 (78,97) -
  6. 00:27:255 (153) - ^
  7. 00:28:634 (161) - k could follow the relatively high-pitched sound there.
  8. 00:35:531 (208) - same as 00:21:738 (115) -
  9. 00:52:316 (322) - same as Muzukashii
  10. 01:00:586 (354) - maybe k here for pattern consistency ?
  11. 01:04:548 - consider adding d here for a harder pattern which fits the music ?
  12. 01:30:812 (551) - same as Muzukashii
  13. 01:32:019 (555,559) - you may swap these notes to d k as 01:33:053 - has a higher pitch.
  14. 01:34:777 (564,565) - similar to ^ , d k would be better imo.

    Almost fixed
That's all and good luck~ :D
Thank you mod :)
Stefan
Gonna check asap, thanks for the mod, Nardo!
Zetera
Oh, I am sorry, I wasn't told before that we have mods to be fixed.

Ahem..

Fixed all points that belong to my part in Dialga's mod.
Also from Genocide's.
Nardo: I fixed all points, but I will wait for more suggestions on the triplets in the 2nd Kiai, if others don't like them, they will be gone again.


Some words from my side: I think the SB needs quite a bit of improvements, the transitions are kinda weird, also my name seems to fade out in my 1st part for no reason. Besides that, I think the font is not really what should be there, but I already suggested a pokemon-BW-font to the creator of the Storyboard. If it will not be fixed, then I guess we have to delete it/find another person to improve it. (No Kds, even though it would be worth 2..)
Neku Okazaki
Hi o/, mod request via pm

[Kantan]
00:15:876 (17,18) - kk Is better in my opinion
00:26:910 (33) - k to continue with pattern
00:40:014 (53) - Unsnaped
00:59:602 (86) - Delete, because this part have high bpm, this make the part more easy for a kantan
01:01:242 (89) - Move to 01:01:570 - ^
01:02:200 (91) - Delete to make this part more easy, only if you do that^
01:04:321 (94) - Make d, is better for this part in my opinion
01:04:624 (95) - Delete to make it more easy
01:07:654 (101) - ^
01:11:157 (106) - Have a sound more hight than 01:10:812 (105) - , change it to k
01:14:260 (112) - Delete, isnt necessary for a kantan
01:14:950 (118) - Unsnaped
01:19:777 (125) - Unsnaped
01:21:847 (129) - Unsnaped
01:37:019 (152) - Have an high sound, change to k

This is really hard for a kantan, because put a lot of objects in the part where the bpm changes.

[Futsuu]
00:35:876 (78,79) - This have the same sound, do k
00:40:013 (85) - Unsnaped
01:04:472 (146) - Change to k, to make it more easy, like the kantan
01:04:927 (148) - If you like, you can put a d in this part
01:19:778 (181) - Unsnaped
01:21:847 (186) - Unsnaped
01:26:501 (195,197) - Move 1/2 to 01:27:019 (196) - , is better imo
01:29:260 (201,203) - ^
01:39:949 (228) - Unsnaped

I see good the rest :O, take my star :'D
Topic Starter
Charlotte

Neku okazaki wrote:

Hi o/, mod request via pm

[Kantan]
00:15:876 (17,18) - kk Is better in my opinion
00:26:910 (33) - k to continue with pattern
00:40:014 (53) - Unsnaped
00:59:602 (86) - Delete, because this part have high bpm, this make the part more easy for a kantan
01:01:242 (89) - Move to 01:01:570 - ^
01:02:200 (91) - Delete to make this part more easy, only if you do that^
01:04:321 (94) - Make d, is better for this part in my opinion
01:04:624 (95) - Delete to make it more easy
01:07:654 (101) - ^
01:11:157 (106) - Have a sound more hight than 01:10:812 (105) - , change it to k
01:14:260 (112) - Delete, isnt necessary for a kantan
01:14:950 (118) - Unsnaped
01:19:777 (125) - Unsnaped
01:21:847 (129) - Unsnaped
01:37:019 (152) - Have an high sound, change to k

This is really hard for a kantan, because put a lot of objects in the part where the bpm changes.

Almost fixed

[Futsuu]
00:35:876 (78,79) - This have the same sound, do k
00:40:013 (85) - Unsnaped
01:04:472 (146) - Change to k, to make it more easy, like the kantan
01:04:927 (148) - If you like, you can put a d in this part
01:19:778 (181) - Unsnaped
01:21:847 (186) - Unsnaped
01:26:501 (195,197) - Move 1/2 to 01:27:019 (196) - , is better imo
01:29:260 (201,203) - ^
01:39:949 (228) - Unsnaped

Almost fixed

I see good the rest :O, take my star :'D
Thank you mod :)
Akiyama Mizuki
hi from pm request

General : Artist should be 増田順一
find another information for title, this may be also japanese

Kantan
SPOILER
01:00:914 (88,89) - k - To keep consistency with 00:54:839 (77,78,79) -
01:37:019 (155) - D - there's crash

Futsuu
SPOILER
00:04:496 (7) - k - because of background sound

Muzukashii
SPOILER
00:04:496 (11) - Same as Futsuu
00:31:393 (99,101) - reverse - pitch is lower later

Oni
SPOILER
00:04:151 (1,1,1) - 1/3 dddk like Muzukashii would work
01:34:088 - There definitely is a sound, so add a note

Inner Oni
SPOILER
00:04:496 (11) - k
01:37:019 (572) - D - there's crash

Seems okayish
Topic Starter
Charlotte

bbj0920 wrote:

hi from pm request

General : Artist should be 増田順一
find another information for title, this may be also japanese All diff changed.

Kantan
SPOILER
01:00:914 (88,89) - k - To keep consistency with 00:54:839 (77,78,79) - keep
01:37:019 (155) - D - there's crash fixed

Futsuu
SPOILER
00:04:496 (7) - k - because of background sound fixed

Muzukashii
SPOILER
00:04:496 (11) - Same as Futsuu fixed
00:31:393 (99,101) - reverse - pitch is lower later fixed

Oni
SPOILER
00:04:151 (1,1,1) - 1/3 dddk like Muzukashii would work
01:34:088 - There definitely is a sound, so add a note

Inner Oni
SPOILER
00:04:496 (11) - fixed
01:37:019 (572) - D - there's crash fixed

Seems okayish
Thank you mod :)
Julie
[Kantan]
00:59:602 - add d?

[Futsuu]
01:06:442 - add k?

[Muzukashii]
00:04:151 (8,9,10,11) - really hard for muzukashii, not because is 1/3...but....aaaaaa dddk xD, make it at least dddd or kkkk, I don't think I ever seen dddk in muzukashii xD
00:36:105 (114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121) ,
00:38:864 (127,128,129,130,131,132,133,134) ,
00:41:220 (138,139,140,141,142,143,144) and 00:43:002 (146) - I don't know why this is 1/3 while you did 1/4 on your other mapset, mostly inner oni you didn't have a choice but to map this part more then the muzukashii. And buy hearing it, 1/3 is kinda off xD. Should be snap like that So like those not snap on white tick, move it on the next tick.
00:38:031 (123) - this should be here 00:38:117 and 00:43:548 (149) - should be 00:43:634
01:14:950 (266) to 01:25:065 (313) - same reason as the 1st thing point out in muzukashii xD (I'm suprise no one point that out lolol, it look weird but is on the sound your trying to map, try testing it, is easier to aim accuracy even though it white blue red white...white blue red white, because of the song sound :3)

[Inner Oni]
00:11:134 (44) - delete no sound and 00:11:220 (44,45,46) - ddk
00:20:358 (107) - k
00:19:324 (100) , 00:22:082 (118) , 00:30:358 (175) and 00:33:117 (192) - K so is less repetitif and doesn't have the same pitch like example 00:27:600 (156)
00:48:007 - no note? is the same as 00:46:910 (308,309,310,311), is not really as close as this new timing 00:48:373 (311) , and not having a note there feel like losing rhythm xD
00:56:015 (337) and 00:58:928 (349) - k
01:07:048 (397) - d
01:10:295 (414) and 01:13:053 (429) - delete like you add no note here 01:07:503
01:20:036 (484) - move to 01:19:950 ?
01:20:726 (489) - move to 01:20:639

Woah this look amazing :D
good job \o/
Topic Starter
Charlotte

Julie wrote:

[Kantan]
00:59:602 - add d?

[Futsuu]
01:06:442 - add k?

[Muzukashii]
00:04:151 (8,9,10,11) - really hard for muzukashii, not because is 1/3...but....aaaaaa dddk xD, make it at least dddd or kkkk, I don't think I ever seen dddk in muzukashii xD
00:36:105 (114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121) ,
00:38:864 (127,128,129,130,131,132,133,134) ,
00:41:220 (138,139,140,141,142,143,144) and 00:43:002 (146) - I don't know why this is 1/3 while you did 1/4 on your other mapset, mostly inner oni you didn't have a choice but to map this part more then the muzukashii. And buy hearing it, 1/3 is kinda off xD. Should be snap like that So like those not snap on white tick, move it on the next tick.
00:38:031 (123) - this should be here 00:38:117 and 00:43:548 (149) - should be 00:43:634
01:14:950 (266) to 01:25:065 (313) - same reason as the 1st thing point out in muzukashii xD (I'm suprise no one point that out lolol, it look weird but is on the sound your trying to map, try testing it, is easier to aim accuracy even though it white blue red white...white blue red white, because of the song sound :3)

All fixed.changed many Kiai time

[Inner Oni]
00:11:134 (44) - delete no sound and 00:11:220 (44,45,46) - ddk
00:20:358 (107) - k
00:19:324 (100) , 00:22:082 (118) , 00:30:358 (175) and 00:33:117 (192) - K so is less repetitif and doesn't have the same pitch like example 00:27:600 (156)
00:48:007 - no note? is the same as 00:46:910 (308,309,310,311), is not really as close as this new timing 00:48:373 (311) , and not having a note there feel like losing rhythm xD
00:56:015 (337) and 00:58:928 (349) - k
01:07:048 (397) - d
01:10:295 (414) and 01:13:053 (429) - delete like you add no note here 01:07:503
01:20:036 (484) - move to 01:19:950 ?
01:20:726 (489) - move to 01:20:639

Almost fixed

Woah this look amazing :D
good job \o/
Thank you mod :)
Shiki_nyan
Here comes a mod from quest +w+
kantan
High quality kantan diff..I think it's a good map!

futsuu
01:12:881 (169) - move to 01:12:708 -
add a note at 01:12:708 (169) -
High quality too! good map!

muzukashii
I can't find any note need to be fixed..good map.. Muzukashii diff should be make like that.

Sala-fan'Oni
00:07:169 - add a d plz
00:53:149 (22) - I think it should be a D
good map too.

Inner oni
I think you are ready to rank.

Good maps. :)
Topic Starter
Charlotte

Shiki_nyan wrote:

Here comes a mod from quest +w+
kantan
High quality kantan diff..I think it's a good map!

futsuu
01:12:881 (169) - move to 01:12:708 - keep
add a note at 01:12:708 (169) - keep
High quality too! good map!

muzukashii
I can't find any note need to be fixed..good map.. Muzukashii diff should be make like that.

Sala-fan'Oni
00:07:169 - add a d plz
00:53:149 (22) - I think it should be a D
good map too.

Inner oni
I think you are ready to rank.

Good maps. :)
Thank you mod :)
toara_fict
Hi M4M request. from PM
[ about]
  1. d is don note
  2. k is kat note
  3. D is Finish don note
  4. K is Finish kat note

  5. Purple is UnRankable , Please change
  6. Green is I would strongly recommend
  7. black is Pointed out that

[ General]
  1. Re-check 'Widescreen support'
  2. 難易度の差が Kantan << Futsuu <<<<<<<<<<<< Muzu << GD Oni くらいになってる気がするのでMuzuの難易度を下げるとかした方がいい気がします_(:3JL
  3. Muzuで単発ここ拾ってあげたいって部分が多くあるのにこk単発で拾わないのにここは2連打いれるんだってところが多々あるなあと思いました_(:3JL
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

[ Inner Oni]
  1. 00:11:824 (49,50) - change k d or d d ? ( kk kk って感じじゃないと思いました :3 )
  2. 01:06:215 - add k here ? ( kiaiだし入れてもいいと思います )
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

大雑把な指摘しかできなくてごめんなさい_(:3JL Good Luck.
-Sh1n1-
Hi~~ Charlotte u.u sorry for the long delay :(

[About]

  1. d is don note
  2. k is kat note
  3. D is finish don note
  4. K is finish kat note
[Inner Oni]

  1. 00:09:669 (33,34,35) - Do you want to start with a triplet? 00:09:755 (34) - should be at 00:09:927 - imo.
  2. 00:34:496 (201,202,203,204,205,206,207,208,209) - What do you think about this pattern? :kdddkkdkd
  3. 01:01:570 (363) - change to k for consistency
[Sala-fan's Oni]

  1. 00:04:410 (1) - Why? delete.
  2. 00:26:738 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - 00:29:496 (21,22,23,24,25,26,27) - 00:32:255 (35,36,37,38,39,40,41) - not consistency.
  3. 3 Steps for this point
    -00:49:310 (9) - move to 00:49:404 -
    -add a k
    -00:49:873 (11) - change to k (consistency with 00:52:628 (19,20,21,22) - )
[Muzukashii]

  1. 00:04:151 (8,9,10,11) - Yes, there is a sound but is not nesesarilly to put in this way because is too hard for Muzu imo, I think that is better ddk in 1/4
  2. 00:41:048 (137,138,139,140,141,142,143,144,145,146,147,148,149) - what kind of sound is k following? because here: ( 00:43:807 (150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157,158,159,160,161,162) - ) is totally diferent, It can be confusing.
  3. 01:14:950 - ^ the same at the second long kiai, consistency please :3
Kantan and Futsuu are pretty good. I want to see your second mapset ranked.

Good Luck. ¡Star Star Star :3 !
Topic Starter
Charlotte

toara_fict wrote:

Hi M4M request. from PM
[ about]
  1. d is don note
  2. k is kat note
  3. D is Finish don note
  4. K is Finish kat note

  5. Purple is UnRankable , Please change
  6. Green is I would strongly recommend
  7. black is Pointed out that

[ General]
  1. Re-check 'Widescreen support' all diff unchecked
  2. 難易度の差が Kantan << Futsuu <<<<<<<<<<<< Muzu << GD Oni くらいになってる気がするのでMuzuの難易度を下げるとかした方がいい気がします_(:3JL
  3. Muzuで単発ここ拾ってあげたいって部分が多くあるのにこk単発で拾わないのにここは2連打いれるんだってところが多々あるなあと思いました_(:3JL

    Muzuの2連をいくらか減らしてみました。
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[ Inner Oni]
  1. 00:11:824 (49,50) - change k d or d d ? ( kk kk って感じじゃないと思いました :3 ) d d取り入れてみました
  2. 01:06:215 - add k here ? ( kiaiだし入れてもいいと思います ) fixed
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大雑把な指摘しかできなくてごめんなさい_(:3JL Good Luck.
Thank you mod :)
Topic Starter
Charlotte

-Sh1n1- wrote:

Hi~~ Charlotte u.u sorry for the long delay :(

[About]

  1. d is don note
  2. k is kat note
  3. D is finish don note
  4. K is finish kat note
[Inner Oni]

  1. 00:09:669 (33,34,35) - Do you want to start with a triplet? 00:09:755 (34) - should be at 00:09:927 - imo.
  2. 00:34:496 (201,202,203,204,205,206,207,208,209) - What do you think about this pattern? :kdddkkdkd
  3. 01:01:570 (363) - change to k for consistency

    All fixed
[Sala-fan's Oni]

  1. 00:04:410 (1) - Why? delete.
  2. 00:26:738 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - 00:29:496 (21,22,23,24,25,26,27) - 00:32:255 (35,36,37,38,39,40,41) - not consistency.
  3. 3 Steps for this point
    -00:49:310 (9) - move to 00:49:404 -
    -add a k
    -00:49:873 (11) - change to k (consistency with 00:52:628 (19,20,21,22) - )
[Muzukashii]

  1. 00:04:151 (8,9,10,11) - Yes, there is a sound but is not nesesarilly to put in this way because is too hard for Muzu imo, I think that is better ddk in 1/4 fixed
  2. 00:41:048 (137,138,139,140,141,142,143,144,145,146,147,148,149) - what kind of sound is k following? because here: ( 00:43:807 (150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157,158,159,160,161,162) - ) is totally diferent, It can be confusing.
  3. 01:14:950 - ^ the same at the second long kiai, consistency please :3
Kantan and Futsuu are pretty good. I want to see your second mapset ranked.

Good Luck. ¡Star Star Star :3 !
Thank you mod :)
Zetera
Sala-fan'Oni
00:07:169 - add a d plz
00:53:149 (22) - I think it should be a D Can't agree with that, sorry. (Reference: 00:56:407 (33,44) - )
good map too.

[Sala-fan's Oni]

  1. 00:04:410 (1) - Why? delete.
  2. 00:26:738 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - 00:29:496 (21,22,23,24,25,26,27) - 00:32:255 (35,36,37,38,39,40,41) - not consistency.
  3. 3 Steps for this point
    -00:49:310 (9) - move to 00:49:404 -
    -add a k
    -00:49:873 (11) - change to k (consistency with 00:52:628 (19,20,21,22) - )
Good point. I made the 1st and the 3rd the same, the beats in the background are slightly different for the 2nd pattern (If I am not mistaken).

Thank both of you for the mods.
Kin
Hi ~

M4M here ~

[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:14:151 (63,64,65) - I'd suggest to use kkd instead of ddd. The reason is to make a difference with this note 00:14:324 (65) - and those one
  2. 00:14:151 (63,64) - . Because there's an additionnal melody here 00:14:324 (65) - .
  3. 00:19:324 (99) - Just me, but I prefer a D instead of K. It will make a difference with this one 00:18:979 (98) - .
  4. 00:22:082 (117) - ^. Also this one is a less high pitched.
  5. 00:22:945 (122,123,124) - Same reason as simular pattern said earlier : I'd suggest to use kkd instead of ddd.
  6. 00:25:186 (138,139,140) - 00:28:462 (160,161,162) - ^
  7. 00:33:979 (196,197,198) - ^
  8. 00:30:358 (174) - Just me, but I prefer a D instead of K.
  9. 00:33:117 (191) - ^ both are less high pitched.
  10. 00:36:134 (212,213,214,215) - reverse this pattern ? (dkkd) It goes better with the melody since this note 00:36:220 (213) - is higher pitched.
  11. 00:37:514 (224,225,226,227,228,229,230) - how about kkdkddk ?
  12. 01:03:715 (374,375,376) - I think kdk goes better with the melody.
  13. 01:18:657 (471,472,473,474) - maybe it's just me, but dkdk sounds better to me.
  14. 01:22:105 (501,502,503,504,505,506,507) - how about kkdkddk ?
  15. 01:34:605 (566,567) - change as k d ? changing 566 as k will mark 567 with the additional with the additional melody sound which is on it.
  16. 01:42:019 (596) - add a don ?
[Sala-fan's Oni]
  1. 00:10:186 (1) - change this one as k ? I think it sounds better with this k 00:10:531 (1) -
  2. 00:16:565 (1) - D instead of K ? This one 00:16:220 (1) - is higher pitched than this one 00:16:565 (1) - . So I think it'd be better to change it as D.
  3. 00:17:945 (1) - how about this one as k ?
  4. 00:37:945 (65,66,67) - change as kkd ? I can't really explain why, but sounds better to me.
  5. 00:46:565 (6,7,8) - change as kkd ? I think it sound better since this "stream" go to high pitched to low pitched.
  6. 01:03:260 (63,64,65) - maybe it's just me, but dkd sounds better with the melody.
  7. 01:38:915 (1) - change this one as k ? I think it sounds better with this k 01:39:260 (1) -
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:02:427 (2) - since you used a big K on this one, then add one to this one 00:04:496 (10) - ?
  2. 00:38:117 (121) - I think this note should be there 00:38:462 - .
  3. 00:38:893 (124) - change this one as k ? I higher pitched than those one 00:38:634 (123,125) - .
  4. 00:43:635 (144) - I think this note should be there 00:43:979 -
  5. 01:07:351 (225,226) - since 226 is higher pitched than 225, change 225 as d ?
  6. 01:17:191 (269) - I think this note should be there 01:17:536 - .
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:26:910 (58) - change this one as k ? It sound better with the melody.
  2. 00:55:427 (120) - maybe just me but I prefer this note here 00:55:035 - .
  3. 01:03:109 - 01:07:957 - To me, this part is almost Muzukashii.
  4. how about delete those 2 notes ? 01:08:305 (159,161) - . It might be too hard on futsuu to tap 1/1 on bpm change.
[Kantan]
  1. 00:14:841 (16) - change this one as k for the melody ?
  2. 00:15:876 (17) - 00:26:910 (33) - ^
that's all from me \o

good luck ~
Arrival
Your mod request !

[Kantan]
00:58:581 (84) - k ? to be consistent with 00:57:147 (82) - . If yes, put a k here too : 00:59:930 (86) -
01:10:122 (106) - k ? I think it would suit better and would avoid too much repetition with d.

[Futsuu]
00:46:738 - Add a note here ?
From 00:53:149 (113) - to 01:03:109 (140) - : I think this part really lacks of kats, and it makes it a bit monotonous. Consider adding kats like here 00:53:994 (116) - or here 00:55:623 (121) - but above all here : 00:59:930 (132) - and here 01:01:242 (136) -
01:38:743 (225) - k ? I think it would sound nice, and it'd diversify the patterns.

[Muzukashii]
00:37:772 (119,120,121,122) - I'd see more a kddk here. Same here : 00:43:290 (142,143,144,145) -
01:01:242 (201) - k ?
01:38:743 (348) - k ? Same as in Futsuu.
01:14:433 (258) - d ?

[Sala-fan's Oni]
00:21:738 (1) - Finisher ?
00:43:634 (99) - add a d here ? It avoids too much repetition of dk,dk,dk and emphasize the next part. This is just my personnal opinion.

That's all.

[Inner Oni]
00:32:427 (185) - k ?
00:37:514 (220) - What about this ? Listen carefully, I think it sounds better. http://puu.sh/d2tzG/b58d18327c.png
01:41:415 (587) - k ?

Very nice mapset ! Hope to see it ranked !
Topic Starter
Charlotte

Kin wrote:

Hi ~

M4M here ~

[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:14:151 (63,64,65) - I'd suggest to use kkd instead of ddd. The reason is to make a difference with this note 00:14:324 (65) - and those one
  2. 00:14:151 (63,64) - . Because there's an additionnal melody here 00:14:324 (65) - .
  3. 00:19:324 (99) - Just me, but I prefer a D instead of K. It will make a difference with this one 00:18:979 (98) - .
  4. 00:22:082 (117) - ^. Also this one is a less high pitched.
  5. 00:22:945 (122,123,124) - Same reason as simular pattern said earlier : I'd suggest to use kkd instead of ddd.
  6. 00:25:186 (138,139,140) - 00:28:462 (160,161,162) - ^
  7. 00:33:979 (196,197,198) - ^
  8. 00:30:358 (174) - Just me, but I prefer a D instead of K.
  9. 00:33:117 (191) - ^ both are less high pitched.
  10. 00:36:134 (212,213,214,215) - reverse this pattern ? (dkkd) It goes better with the melody since this note 00:36:220 (213) - is higher pitched.
  11. 00:37:514 (224,225,226,227,228,229,230) - how about kkdkddk ?
  12. 01:03:715 (374,375,376) - I think kdk goes better with the melody.
  13. 01:18:657 (471,472,473,474) - maybe it's just me, but dkdk sounds better to me.
  14. 01:22:105 (501,502,503,504,505,506,507) - how about kkdkddk ?
  15. 01:34:605 (566,567) - change as k d ? changing 566 as k will mark 567 with the additional with the additional melody sound which is on it.
  16. 01:42:019 (596) - add a don ?

    Almost fixed
[Sala-fan's Oni]
  1. 00:10:186 (1) - change this one as k ? I think it sounds better with this k 00:10:531 (1) -
  2. 00:16:565 (1) - D instead of K ? This one 00:16:220 (1) - is higher pitched than this one 00:16:565 (1) - . So I think it'd be better to change it as D.
  3. 00:17:945 (1) - how about this one as k ?
  4. 00:37:945 (65,66,67) - change as kkd ? I can't really explain why, but sounds better to me.
  5. 00:46:565 (6,7,8) - change as kkd ? I think it sound better since this "stream" go to high pitched to low pitched.
  6. 01:03:260 (63,64,65) - maybe it's just me, but dkd sounds better with the melody.
  7. 01:38:915 (1) - change this one as k ? I think it sounds better with this k 01:39:260 (1) -
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:02:427 (2) - since you used a big K on this one, then add one to this one 00:04:496 (10) - ? keep
  2. 00:38:117 (121) - I think this note should be there 00:38:462 - . ^
  3. 00:38:893 (124) - change this one as k ? I higher pitched than those one 00:38:634 (123,125) - . ^
  4. 00:43:635 (144) - I think this note should be there 00:43:979 - ^
  5. 01:07:351 (225,226) - since 226 is higher pitched than 225, change 225 as d ? fixed
  6. 01:17:191 (269) - I think this note should be there 01:17:536 - . keep
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:26:910 (58) - change this one as k ? It sound better with the melody.
  2. 00:55:427 (120) - maybe just me but I prefer this note here 00:55:035 - .
  3. 01:03:109 - 01:07:957 - To me, this part is almost Muzukashii.
  4. how about delete those 2 notes ? 01:08:305 (159,161) - . It might be too hard on futsuu to tap 1/1 on bpm change.

    All fixed
[Kantan]
  1. 00:14:841 (16) - change this one as k for the melody ?
  2. 00:15:876 (17) - 00:26:910 (33) - ^
All fixed.but,There are many 1/1-kdd

that's all from me \o

good luck ~
Thank you mod :)
Topic Starter
Charlotte

Arrival wrote:

Your mod request !

[Kantan]
00:58:581 (84) - k ? to be consistent with 00:57:147 (82) - . If yes, put a k here too : 00:59:930 (86) -
01:10:122 (106) - k ? I think it would suit better and would avoid too much repetition with d.

All fixed

[Futsuu]
00:46:738 - Add a note here ?
From 00:53:149 (113) - to 01:03:109 (140) - : I think this part really lacks of kats, and it makes it a bit monotonous. Consider adding kats like here 00:53:994 (116) - or here 00:55:623 (121) - but above all here : 00:59:930 (132) - and here 01:01:242 (136) -
01:38:743 (225) - k ? I think it would sound nice, and it'd diversify the patterns.

Almost fixed

[Muzukashii]
00:37:772 (119,120,121,122) - I'd see more a kddk here. Same here : 00:43:290 (142,143,144,145) - keep
01:01:242 (201) - k ? fixed
01:38:743 (348) - k ? Same as in Futsuu. ^
01:14:433 (258) - d ? keep

[Sala-fan's Oni]
00:21:738 (1) - Finisher ?
00:43:634 (99) - add a d here ? It avoids too much repetition of dk,dk,dk and emphasize the next part. This is just my personnal opinion.

That's all.

[Inner Oni]
00:32:427 (185) - k ? fixed
00:37:514 (220) - What about this ? Listen carefully, I think it sounds better. http://puu.sh/d2tzG/b58d18327c.png keep
01:41:415 (587) - k ? fixed

Very nice mapset ! Hope to see it ranked !
Thank you mod :)
Zetera
[Sala-fan's Oni]
  1. 00:10:186 (1) - change this one as k ? I think it sounds better with this k 00:10:531 (1) -
  2. 00:16:565 (1) - D instead of K ? This one 00:16:220 (1) - is higher pitched than this one 00:16:565 (1) - . So I think it'd be better to change it as D.
  3. 00:17:945 (1) - how about this one as k ?
  4. 00:37:945 (65,66,67) - change as kkd ? I can't really explain why, but sounds better to me. Yeah, why not.
  5. 00:46:565 (6,7,8) - change as kkd ? I think it sound better since this "stream" go to high pitched to low pitched. ^
  6. 01:03:260 (63,64,65) - maybe it's just me, but dkd sounds better with the melody. Nah, maybe not dkd, but ddk.
[Sala-fan's Oni]
00:21:738 (1) - Finisher ?
00:43:634 (99) - add a here ? It avoids too much repetition of dk,dk,dk and emphasize the next part. This is just my personnal opinion. Good one, fixed.
Kurosanyan
http://puu.sh/dr1td.rar <-- If you want to add or just look at the Ura Oni I did.
I'll post my mod tomorrow since I spent the whole night mapping this instead of modding.
Grimbow
Hi! From mod queue o/

d - Small don
D - Big don
k - Small kat
K - Big kat

Black means something that I think needs changed
Orange is just a suggestion

[Futsuu]

00:26:393 (57) - Change this note to a d or 00:25:876 (56) - to a k, they both have the same sound in the song
01:27:536 (194) - Move this note to 01:27:364 - and add a d at 01:27:191 -? This section feels a little awkward to me and I think this suggestion fills it in a bit better
01:30:295 (200) - Move this to 01:30:122 - and add another d at 01:29:950 - for the same reasons as above

[Muzukashii]

00:22:945 (68,69) - ctrl+g, I think having the d on the synth noise here makes more sense
01:38:570 (347,348) - ctrl+g, kdkkk feels a lot better here imo, but that could just be me!
01:39:088 (350) - If you take my previous suggestion, you might also want to change this to a k. This suggestion doesn't really matter too much though

All the Oni's are really good fun, nice mapset! :) Good luck with the rank and have a star! (∩`-´)⊃━.*・。゚
Topic Starter
Charlotte

Kurosanyan wrote:

http://puu.sh/dr1td.rar <-- If you want to add or just look at the Ura Oni I did.
I'll post my mod tomorrow since I spent the whole night mapping this instead of modding.
I have confirmed Ura Oni.but,sorrry.I no need Ura Oni.because,I feel 6diff=many.so 5diff keep.
My Inner Oni=Kiai time is hard.other easy? so advice please :?
Ura Oni=nice map 8-)
Topic Starter
Charlotte

Grimbow wrote:

Hi! From mod queue o/

d - Small don
D - Big don
k - Small kat
K - Big kat

Black means something that I think needs changed
Orange is just a suggestion

[Futsuu]

00:26:393 (57) - Change this note to a d or 00:25:876 (56) - to a k, they both have the same sound in the song 57 changed d
01:27:536 (194) - Move this note to 01:27:364 - and add a d at 01:27:191 -? This section feels a little awkward to me and I think this suggestion fills it in a bit better fixed
01:30:295 (200) - Move this to 01:30:122 - and add another d at 01:29:950 - for the same reasons as above fixed

[Muzukashii]

00:22:945 (68,69) - ctrl+g, I think having the d on the synth noise here makes more sense fixed
01:38:570 (347,348) - ctrl+g, kdkkk feels a lot better here imo, but that could just be me! fixed
01:39:088 (350) - If you take my previous suggestion, you might also want to change this to a k. This suggestion doesn't really matter too much though fixed

All the Oni's are really good fun, nice mapset! :) Good luck with the rank and have a star! (∩`-´)⊃━.*・。゚
Thank you mod :)
Kurosanyan

Charlotte wrote:

Kurosanyan wrote:

http://puu.sh/dr1td.rar <-- If you want to add or just look at the Ura Oni I did.
I'll post my mod tomorrow since I spent the whole night mapping this instead of modding.
I have confirmed Ura Oni.but,sorrry.I no need Ura Oni.because,I feel 6diff=many.so 5diff keep.
My Inner Oni=Kiai time is hard.other easy? so advice please :?
Ura Oni=nice map 8-)
Well, I'll make my own mapset and rank it later then. As I did for Tewi-Ma Park.

[General]
  1. BG's position on the collab is different because of the SB you might consider changing it's position and then fix the SB's position too.
  2. Please change the BG because 4:3 looks bad on widescreen with the SB.

  3. 00:53:149 - Put the preview point here?
  4. I think OD6 is too high for the Inner, considering the SR and the BPM. Make it 5,5? Also you should have a different OD on each map.
    Try 3,5 -> 4 -> 4,5 -> 5 -> 5,5 or 3 -> 3,5 -> 4,5 -> 5 -> 5,5 ?
  5. Fix Unicode Artist on Sala and Stefan's Oni. It looks the same but it seems there's an invisible character at the end.
[Kantan]
  1. 00:02:082 (1,2) - d k instead of d K or remove those notes? It's a bit awkward for a beginner to start the map with d K d.
  2. 01:32:191 (146,147) - Try this instead?

    Even if it's on 1/2, it's easier to play and fits better imo.
    If you want to avoid 1/2, you should try this then:
  3. 01:34:950 (152,153) - ^
[Futsuu]
  1. Consider adding a bit more 1/2?
  2. 00:24:496 (53) - Remove? You have a monotonous part with no break for 16 stanza, that's way too much, it needs a break.
  3. 00:35:531 (76) - ^
  4. 00:53:782 (115) - Remove? It doesn't fit to the music (since it's x xx and not x x x). If you don't want to, consider k instead.
  5. 00:56:962 (125) - ^
  6. Move 01:06:897 (152) - to 01:07:200 - It doesn't fit at all here. I missed when I played the map. If you refuse, consider removing it.
  7. If you move the note to 01:07:200 - you should add a k at 01:04:775 -
  8. 01:05:230 - Add a k for consistency.
  9. 01:05:533 (148) - Move to 01:05:684 - to follow the music?
  10. 01:07:957 (156) - Move to 01:08:131 - if you followed my previous suggestion.
  11. 01:09:433 (158,159,160,161,162) -
  12. 01:12:191 (164,165,166,167,168) - ^
  13. 01:25:984 (191,192,193) - Here this rhythm doesn't really fit. Try putting notes on the white ticks instead.
  14. 01:28:743 (198,199,200) - ^
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:02:772 (3) - d? k doesn't fit.
  2. 00:40:789 (132) - If, and only if, you want to make your Muzukashii easier, remove this note and 01:19:863 (278) - too. That would make a better diff spread, but I don't think it's really needed to fix this.
  3. 00:45:100 (150) - Remove for a break and consistency with the rest of the kiai.
  4. 00:53:571 (177,178,179) - k kk? Easier to play for a Muzu and fits better imo.
  5. 01:08:480 (229) - Remove to make the bpm change easier to read?
  6. 01:24:174 (297) - Same as before.
  7. 01:42:019 - Add a d?
[Stefan]
  1. 00:04:410 (1,1) - It should probably be 1/3.
  2. 00:12:514 - Add a d to follow the drum roll or add a d at 00:12:686 - ?
  3. 01:09:433 - ~ 01:14:950 - Please no. :( This is way too tricky to play for this diff. If you want to keep the finish spam, to make it easier to play you should:
    01:11:157 (111) - 01:13:915 (126) - Change these to d and
    01:11:674 (114) - 01:12:019 (116) - 01:14:433 (129) - 01:14:777 (131) - Remove these.
[Sala]
  1. 00:40:876 (82) - Delete and put a d at 00:40:789 - ?
  2. 00:53:149 (22) - D or 00:53:888 (24) - k? (Or both) It sounds better imo.
  3. 00:56:407 (33) - 00:57:055 (35) - ^
  4. Same for the next parts.
[Inner Oni]
  1. Nothing to say. This is really different to my mapping style but I think it looks fun to play and I don't see any real issue.
Topic Starter
Charlotte

Kurosanyan wrote:

[General]
  1. BG's position on the collab is different because of the SB you might consider changing it's position and then fix the SB's position too.
  2. Please change the BG because 4:3 looks bad on widescreen with the SB.

  3. 00:53:149 - Put the preview point here? keep.now preview point=other std ranked map
  4. I think OD6 is too high for the Inner, considering the SR and the BPM. Make it 5,5? Also you should have a different OD on each map.
    Try 3,5 -> 4 -> 4,5 -> 5 -> 5,5 or 3 -> 3,5 -> 4,5 -> 5 -> 5,5 ? okay,changed OD 3<4<4.5<5<5.5
  5. Fix Unicode Artist on Sala and Stefan's Oni. It looks the same but it seems there's an invisible character at the end. fixed
[Kantan]
  1. 00:02:082 (1,2) - d k instead of d K or remove those notes? It's a bit awkward for a beginner to start the map with d K d.
  2. 01:32:191 (146,147) - Try this instead?

    Even if it's on 1/2, it's easier to play and fits better imo.
    If you want to avoid 1/2, you should try this then:
  3. 01:34:950 (152,153) - ^

    All fixed
[Futsuu]
  1. Consider adding a bit more 1/2?
  2. 00:24:496 (53) - Remove? You have a monotonous part with no break for 16 stanza, that's way too much, it needs a break.
  3. 00:35:531 (76) - ^
  4. 00:53:782 (115) - Remove? It doesn't fit to the music (since it's x xx and not x x x). If you don't want to, consider k instead.
  5. 00:56:962 (125) - ^
  6. Move 01:06:897 (152) - to 01:07:200 - It doesn't fit at all here. I missed when I played the map. If you refuse, consider removing it.
  7. If you move the note to 01:07:200 - you should add a k at 01:04:775 -
  8. 01:05:230 - Add a k for consistency.
  9. 01:05:533 (148) - Move to 01:05:684 - to follow the music?
  10. 01:07:957 (156) - Move to 01:08:131 - if you followed my previous suggestion.
  11. 01:09:433 (158,159,160,161,162) -
  12. 01:12:191 (164,165,166,167,168) - ^
  13. 01:25:984 (191,192,193) - Here this rhythm doesn't really fit. Try putting notes on the white ticks instead.
  14. 01:28:743 (198,199,200) - ^

    Almost fixed
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:02:772 (3) - d? k doesn't fit.
  2. 00:40:789 (132) - If, and only if, you want to make your Muzukashii easier, remove this note and 01:19:863 (278) - too. That would make a better diff spread, but I don't think it's really needed to fix this.
  3. 00:45:100 (150) - Remove for a break and consistency with the rest of the kiai.
  4. 00:53:571 (177,178,179) - k kk? Easier to play for a Muzu and fits better imo.
  5. 01:08:480 (229) - Remove to make the bpm change easier to read?
  6. 01:24:174 (297) - Same as before.
  7. 01:42:019 - Add a d?

    Almost fixed
[Stefan]
  1. Currently modding, will edit the post when I'm done.
Thank you mod :)
Kurosanyan
Updated my post with Oni's mod. Didn't find anything to say on the Inner.
Zetera
[Sala]

  1. 00:40:876 (82) - Delete and put a d at 00:40:789 - ? I made a triple out of it.
  2. 00:53:149 (22) - D or 00:53:888 (24) - k? (Or both) It sounds better imo. Changed the K's into D's.
  3. 00:56:407 (33) - 00:57:055 (35) - ^
  4. Same for the next parts.
Thanks for modding the mapset.
Yauxo
Hey there o/ Coming from your request via PM.
Please note that Iam a Taiko beginner and can only mod as much. If I happen to suggest derpy things or nothing at all, plase forgive me .-.

[General]
■ Second Kiai should start at 01:04:321 - imo

[Kantan]
■ 00:32:772 (40) - k maybe? Sound sounds still pretty highpitch to me
■ 01:01:242 (87) - would feel like a k to me
■ 01:03:412 (91) - k here to have a similar rhythm as 01:00:586 (85,86,87) - ?
■ 01:28:398 (138) - k to "fresh" up the wave of d a little bit?

[Futsuu]
■ 00:02:082 (1) - k here? I think that'd support 00:02:772 (3) - more
■ 00:23:117 (50,51) - k these? They have the same pitch as 00:19:841 (43,44) - (unless this is a pattern thing that I dont know about .-.)
■ 00:24:496 (53) - add k? Youve mapped this beat before, so I think this one shouldnt be left out
■ 00:35:531 (77) - ^
■ 00:49:498 (105) - k?
■ 00:52:733 (112) - k?
■ 00:56:015 (121) - k? basically any that fit into this scheme. The transition into the next downbeat would be better like this imo
■ 01:30:812 (201) - k? To be the same as 01:33:570 (207,208,209) -

■ I also feel like you could add some more notes here and there to make it a little bit more difficult. The spread would probably allow it. 01:01:078 (132) - Adding a note in these kinds of patterns wouldnt be too mad imo

[Muzukashii]
■ 00:16:220 (46) - k?
■ 00:18:979 (55) - k?
■ 00:21:738 (64) - ^ same thing as these 2 aboves, same scheme for upcoming patterns like this
■ 00:24:841 (76,78) - I think these two as k would do well with how you designed 00:25:703 (79,80,81,82) -

■ And it gets pretty confusing for me from this point on, I used to map Taiko differently, apparently I did it wrong D:

Gl with that, maybe it helps a little /o/
Topic Starter
Charlotte

Yauxo wrote:

Hey there o/ Coming from your request via PM.
Please note that Iam a Taiko beginner and can only mod as much. If I happen to suggest derpy things or nothing at all, plase forgive me .-.

[General]
■ Second Kiai should start at 01:04:321 - imo keep

[Kantan]
■ 00:32:772 (40) - k maybe? Sound sounds still pretty highpitch to me fixed
■ 01:01:242 (87) - would feel like a k to me keep
■ 01:03:412 (91) - k here to have a similar rhythm as 01:00:586 (85,86,87) - ? keep
■ 01:28:398 (138) - k to "fresh" up the wave of d a little bit? fixed

[Futsuu]
■ 00:02:082 (1) - k here? I think that'd support 00:02:772 (3) - more keep
■ 00:23:117 (50,51) - k these? They have the same pitch as 00:19:841 (43,44) - (unless this is a pattern thing that I dont know about .-.) changed k (50 only)
■ 00:24:496 (53) - add k? Youve mapped this beat before, so I think this one shouldnt be left out keep
■ 00:35:531 (77) - ^ ^
■ 00:49:498 (105) - k? ^
■ 00:52:733 (112) - k? ^
■ 00:56:015 (121) - k? basically any that fit into this scheme. The transition into the next downbeat would be better like this imo ^
■ 01:30:812 (201) - k? To be the same as 01:33:570 (207,208,209) - fixed

■ I also feel like you could add some more notes here and there to make it a little bit more difficult. The spread would probably allow it. 01:01:078 (132) - Adding a note in these kinds of patterns wouldnt be too mad imo keep

[Muzukashii]
■ 00:16:220 (46) - k? keep
■ 00:18:979 (55) - k? fixed
■ 00:21:738 (64) - ^ same thing as these 2 aboves, same scheme for upcoming patterns like this fixed
■ 00:24:841 (76,78) - I think these two as k would do well with how you designed 00:25:703 (79,80,81,82) - keep

■ And it gets pretty confusing for me from this point on, I used to map Taiko differently, apparently I did it wrong D:

Gl with that, maybe it helps a little /o/
Thank you mod :)
Stefan
god no ;w;

Please don't hate me guys that I don't reply on everything..

Genocide: Denied everything since these suggestions doesn't fit with the rhythm building from me.
Nardoxyribonucleic: Similar to Genocide's mod I denied everything due rhythm-related reasons.
bbj0920: 00:04:151 (1,1,1) is a good idea, personally I wonder if this is really fine for the Muzukashii Difficulty but that's up to the mapper, changed. And there is no note at 01:34:088, I better leave this blank.
Shiki_nyan: This section does not provide imo Doubles, no change.
-Sh1n1-: Has been fixed by bbj0920's Mod.
Kin: Denied everything, except of 00:17:945 (1) which I deny due the very low sound everything has already been mentioned.
Arrival: The finisher on 00:21:738 (1) would work a bit weird to me.. denied here.
Kurosanyan:

Kurosanyan wrote:

[Stefan]
  1. 00:04:410 (1,1) - It should probably be 1/3. Fixed already
  2. 00:12:514 - Add a d to follow the drum roll or add a d at 00:12:686 - ? I am really divided by this.. on the one side yes there is a beat which could be mapped. But then I like the transistion from ooo to o o and back to ooo ooo. No change here for the moment, maybe I am going to add it later then.
  3. 01:09:433 - ~ 01:14:950 - Please no. :( This is way too tricky to play for this diff. If you want to keep the finish spam, to make it easier to play you should:
    01:11:157 (111) - 01:13:915 (126) - Change these to d and
    01:11:674 (114) - 01:12:019 (116) - 01:14:433 (129) - 01:14:777 (131) - Remove these. On personal sight I'd find it only then really tricky (to read) with a low SV in this section. However your suggestion is pretty nice and can be used, changed.
Thank you all!
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Aldwych
Hi! Interesting map.

U just suggest you to change that "Sala-" tag into "Sala" even if Sala- is the correct nickname, it doesn't match any of his maps (maybe SQL request fault?).
snowball112
Hey ^^ mod from pm req.

Kantan
- 01:06:745 (97,98,99,100,101) dkkdd or dkkkd? I think 01:06:745 (97,98,99) sounds the same as 01:04:321 (92,93,94), so it might be good to use the same pattern for consistency in the easy diff in my opinion.

- I feel like it might sound better to change the part of 00:53:149 (72) until 00:59:930 (84).
- at the beginning you could remove 00:53:571 (73) and 00:55:231 (76) and change 00:53:994 (74) to k and 00:55:623 (77) to d. This is because 00:57:147 (80) is similar to 00:53:994 (74) but you use k for 00:57:147 (80) and because 01:01:242 (87) is similar to 00:55:623 (77) and you use d for 01:01:242 (87).
- 00:58:581 (82) d? Same as 01:01:242 (87).
- add a d at 00:59:602? Would sound good in my opinion.

- 01:11:157 (106) d? It sounds the same as 01:13:915 (111) and in my opinion k would be better.
Futsuu
- Similar to Kantan, maybe use fewer notes at the beginning of the speedup and more later? You could for example:
- Remove 00:52:108 (108)
- 00:54:416 (114) ^
- 00:55:035 (116) ^
- Add a note at 00:58:928.
- 01:01:570 (133) ^
This may sound better for the speedup unless you made it so that there are more notes in the slower part intentionally to be easier for newer players.

Hope this helps and good luck ^^
Aldwych
Double post coz after playing oni & muzukashii it's really enjoyable, auto like + 5 stars.
Hope to see this wonder rank asap. Call me for a mod if you want.
Topic Starter
Charlotte

snowball112 wrote:

Hey ^^ mod from pm req.

Kantan
- 01:06:745 (97,98,99,100,101) dkkdd or dkkkd? I think 01:06:745 (97,98,99) sounds the same as 01:04:321 (92,93,94), so it might be good to use the same pattern for consistency in the easy diff in my opinion. change dkkdd

- I feel like it might sound better to change the part of 00:53:149 (72) until 00:59:930 (84).
- at the beginning you could remove 00:53:571 (73) and 00:55:231 (76) and change 00:53:994 (74) to k and 00:55:623 (77) to d. This is because 00:57:147 (80) is similar to 00:53:994 (74) but you use k for 00:57:147 (80) and because 01:01:242 (87) is similar to 00:55:623 (77) and you use d for 01:01:242 (87). fixed
- 00:58:581 (82) d? Same as 01:01:242 (87). fixed
- add a d at 00:59:602? Would sound good in my opinion. keep

- 01:11:157 (106) d? It sounds the same as 01:13:915 (111) and in my opinion k would be better. fixed
Futsuu
- Similar to Kantan, maybe use fewer notes at the beginning of the speedup and more later? You could for example:
- Remove 00:52:108 (108) fixed
- 00:54:416 (114) ^ fixed
- 00:55:035 (116) ^ keep
- Add a note at 00:58:928. ^
- 01:01:570 (133) ^ ^
This may sound better for the speedup unless you made it so that there are more notes in the slower part intentionally to be easier for newer players.

Hope this helps and good luck ^^
Thank you mod :)
Aldwych
Triple post coz modding request from queue :

[General]

I think your futsuu is not enough hard, i mean the difference stars / objects between futsuu - kantan and muzukashii - futsuu is much different :
- K -> F : 70 objs & 0.6 stars.
- F -> M : 120 objects & 1.43 stars.

Imo, Ono won't let this qualifiy if he see this, so maybe 20 ~ 30 objs on the futsuu could be good.

[Kantan]

00:14:841 & 00:17:600 & 00:20:358 etc... : I don't understand on how you decide to put a k or d, i though it was d k d k d etc.. but no, even on the sound. Maybe a rework on when use d and when use k could be interesting.
00:24:496 & 00:38:772 (28 & 40) : I also don't understand why these k here? This create a disorder with the other triplet pattern imo. And soundly there no difference.
00:53:994 : Interesting here you used 2 k moreover when the previous pattern are d d d k so on this part maybe follow a d d d k here should be better.
01:02:503 : Hmmm. maybe a d here in order to follow the d d before (aka 00:58:581).
01:06:745 : BPM 196 with quint... well ye. Maybe remove 01:07:654.
01:11:501 : I'm pretty sure a k would be much better.
01:13:570 : If you didn't change the previous quint, at least chang this pattern as dkkdd.
01:39:777 : Try a k here.

[Futsuu]

Maybe take in consider what i said on the general part.

00:14:324 : this should be d k k and not k d k imo.
00:17:082 : here d k d.
00:24:151 : Here i would like to see a kdd (1/2 separator), so you'll add 2 d, cause we have a stream here, so adding notes could be good.
00:25:358 : try to change with d k k.
00:28:114 : and here k d k.
00:35:186 : Here i would like to see a kdd (1/2 separator) (same as 00:24:151 so).
00:53:782 : Add a k here could be interesting to play.
00:54:416 : ^
01:27:016 : Maybe change it to k.

The futsuu here makes me confuse, cause i think you got trouble to put correctly the d and k on the first part (imo), also some parts are much much hard than others which is special.

[Muzukashii]

00:22:427 : Using dk kd dk on muzukashii is really technical imo. You should turn in to dk dk dk, plus you never used kd on the other pattern of the first part.
00:40:703 : Why not triplet here?
01:15:898 : a k sounds good here, but i also agree that we need some breaks.
01:16:846 : Here you turned into a 1/2 pattern combo which is weird to hear, i think you can make 3/4 pattern here.
01:19:777 : ^
01:24:174 : a k sounds good here, but i also agree that we need some breaks.

[Sala-fan's Oni]

God i don't want to mod this one, it's a good one. :'(

{Sala-}

Even if i talked with Charlotte about Sala- instead of Sala on tags, i would like your version on :
I just suggest you to change that "Sala-" tag into "Sala" even if Sala- is the correct nickname, it doesn't match any of his maps (maybe SQL request fault?).
00:24:841 : You can turn this one to k, sounds good.
00:38:031 : I didn't find the utility of k here instead of d.

{Stefan}

01:10:122 : I know you use k for the main sound here, but how about turn this one to a k too?

Nothing more, i just found in love of your Oni, and the using of increasing a decreasing speed is well used (hi gezo).

[Inner Oni]

00:46:393 : Interesting the break here instead of d.
01:41:157 : Here, the stream pattern is not enough, i should extend it in order to make dddkddkkk.

Hope it can help you, gl hf for rank. :D
Zetera
{Sala-}

Even if i talked with Charlotte about Sala- instead of Sala on tags, i would like your version on :
I just suggest you to change that "Sala-" tag into "Sala" even if Sala- is the correct nickname, it doesn't match any of his maps (maybe SQL request fault?).
Where exactly is the expression "Sala" used? Haven't seen that yet.
If we want to refer to other maps, we can only look at TwoThirds - Breathe, which uses the name "Sala" in the diff but uses "sala-" as a tag.
Nevertheless, it is just a tag. I don't see any big problem in altering the name there. Tags are originally used as a help on searching the forums for beatmaps (also works ingame), over here it might be easier to type "Sala-" and to find a lot of results simultaneously, so you might just as well let the tag be "Sala-". Personally, I don't mind changing anything here.

00:24:841 : You can turn this one to k, sounds good.
00:38:031 : I didn't find the utility of k here instead of d. Actually, it follows a system. (Remember poems with various types of rhymes (aabb, abab, abba). Mine follows abba.) If you can't see it, I can clarify this as well.
Topic Starter
Charlotte

Aldwych wrote:

Triple post coz modding request from queue :

[General]

I think your futsuu is not enough hard, i mean the difference stars / objects between futsuu - kantan and muzukashii - futsuu is much different :
- K -> F : 70 objs & 0.6 stars.
- F -> M : 120 objects & 1.43 stars.

Imo, Ono won't let this qualifiy if he see this, so maybe 20 ~ 30 objs on the futsuu could be good.

That's right...Kantan<Futsuu<<<Muzukashii.If have more idea,tell me

[Kantan]

00:14:841 & 00:17:600 & 00:20:358 etc... : I don't understand on how you decide to put a k or d, i though it was d k d k d etc.. but no, even on the sound. Maybe a rework on when use d and when use k could be interesting.
00:24:496 & 00:38:772 (28 & 40) : I also don't understand why these k here? This create a disorder with the other triplet pattern imo. And soundly there no difference. fixed
00:53:994 : Interesting here you used 2 k moreover when the previous pattern are d d d k so on this part maybe follow a d d d k here should be better. Good~
01:02:503 : Hmmm. maybe a d here in order to follow the d d before (aka 00:58:581). fixed
01:06:745 : BPM 196 with quint... well ye. Maybe remove 01:07:654. fixed
01:11:501 : I'm pretty sure a k would be much better. fixed
01:13:570 : If you didn't change the previous quint, at least chang this pattern as dkkdd. fixed
01:39:777 : Try a k here. fixed

[Futsuu]

Maybe take in consider what i said on the general part.

00:14:324 : this should be d k k and not k d k imo.
00:17:082 : here d k d.
00:24:151 : Here i would like to see a kdd (1/2 separator), so you'll add 2 d, cause we have a stream here, so adding notes could be good.
00:25:358 : try to change with d k k.
00:28:114 : and here k d k.
00:35:186 : Here i would like to see a kdd (1/2 separator) (same as 00:24:151 so).
00:53:782 : Add a k here could be interesting to play. fixed,but...pattern is long?
00:54:416 : ^ ^
01:27:016 : Maybe change it to k.

All fixed

The futsuu here makes me confuse, cause i think you got trouble to put correctly the d and k on the first part (imo), also some parts are much much hard than others which is special.

[Muzukashii]

00:22:427 : Using dk kd dk on muzukashii is really technical imo. You should turn in to dk dk dk, plus you never used kd on the other pattern of the first part. fixed
00:40:703 : Why not triplet here? keep,I here doublet
01:15:898 : a k sounds good here, but i also agree that we need some breaks. keep
01:16:846 : Here you turned into a 1/2 pattern combo which is weird to hear, i think you can make 3/4 pattern here. keep
01:19:777 : ^ keep
01:24:174 : a k sounds good here, but i also agree that we need some breaks. keep

[Sala-fan's Oni]

God i don't want to mod this one, it's a good one. :'(

{Sala-}

Even if i talked with Charlotte about Sala- instead of Sala on tags, i would like your version on :
I just suggest you to change that "Sala-" tag into "Sala" even if Sala- is the correct nickname, it doesn't match any of his maps (maybe SQL request fault?).
00:24:841 : You can turn this one to k, sounds good.
00:38:031 : I didn't find the utility of k here instead of d.

{Stefan}

01:10:122 : I know you use k for the main sound here, but how about turn this one to a k too?

Nothing more, i just found in love of your Oni, and the using of increasing a decreasing speed is well used (hi gezo).

[Inner Oni]

00:46:393 : Interesting the break here instead of d. fixed,but,pattern is long :D
01:41:157 : Here, the stream pattern is not enough, i should extend it in order to make dddkddkkk. Good~

Hope it can help you, gl hf for rank. :D
Thank you mod :)
10nya
konnichiwa~

[General]
  1. clear
[Kantan]
  1. Kantan diff is less using this kind of pattern


    usually, Kantan uses pattern like this

  2. 00:46:910 (65 until 73) - : since this diff is kantan and I found your kantan is a bit hard since there's nonstop beat, how about reduce them here? As beginner player, I would hard to catch 66 67 68 because of different BPM and it'll made Kantan player will confuse, how about remove these notes to make Kantan player more easy to play?
    1. 00:47:641 (66) -
    2. 00:50:678 (70) -

    or you can remove
    1. 00:47:641 (66) -
    2. 00:49:123 (68) -
    3. 00:50:678 (70) -
    4. 00:52:316 (72) -
  3. 00:53:994 (74) - until 00:59:275 (84) - : I found this pattern is too hard for kantan players because of the BPM change and nonstop beat on white-tick, usually, Kantan diff is really rare to use 1/1 notes, since this diff is Kantan, how about remove:
    1. 00:54:416 (75) -
    2. 00:55:231 (77) -
    3. 00:58:581 (83) -
[Futsuu]
  1. I found this Futsuu is a bit hard than normal Futsuu, you used many 1/2 notes which is not really good in Futsuu diff, usually Futsuu uses this kind of pattern
    and some 1/2.
  2. 00:15:876 (34) - : supposed this one to be k ? It has the same sound as 00:14:841 (32,33) - so change this into k will make the rhythm good and catchable for players. You also used k on here 00:26:910 (59) - so why not? (:
  3. Nice Futsuu, though there's a lot of 1/2 notes in high BPM
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:37:772 (119,120) - : supposed to be d k? It'll have same sound as 00:36:393 (114,115) - since the sound is same and it's more fit
  2. 00:38:117 (121) - : move this to 00:38:462 - , if you hear the song on 50% playback, there's nothing at 00:38:117 - here but there's sound on 00:38:462 - so move this will better (:
  3. 00:54:839 (181,182,183) - : this part is somehow too plain for me while there's sound here, how about add d on each red lines? like this

    (Make 182,183 as kat and add dons in each red lines ><)
  4. 01:31:157 (324,325) - : change this to k d? It'll make interesting rhythm and it's more fit, imo ><
[Sala-fan's Oni]
  1. 00:46:818 - : since the beat is nonstop from 00:46:565 (6) - till 00:46:910 (1) - , how about add d here? Well, personally I feel strange when there's a beat at here and suddenly there's no notes, i was wished a kkkkd or kkddk here ): If you do so then please remove finish on 00:46:910 -
  2. the rest is good, only that part is a bit awkward for me ;w;
[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:35:531 (209) - : k on here doesn't support anything imo, change this to d will better
  2. 01:01:242 (361) - : too bad the pattern stopped here): how about change this into kdd or kkd? it'll fit better :)
  3. nice diff :3
that's all for me, sorry for the bad english, if there's anything you don't understand please chat me in-game ;w;/
good luck!
ak74
Sorry Charlotte,I come so laaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaate
Really sorry that I just busy doing my own map.
I've shooted a star on your another map,excuse me ;w;

[Kantan]
01:39:777 (157) - What about K?


[Futsuu]
00:02:082 (1) - delete this? looks a little strange,just look...
00:56:015 (123) - k?
01:02:503 (139) - too keep consistency,k


[Muzukashii]
tbh the star of 3.43 may be too hard for the thread?try to push it down a little.

00:02:082 (1) - same as Futsuu if you choose to fix it

00:35:876 —— 00:46:910 , Kiai is really a bit hard.
What about this?
If you choose to fix it like ^,please do the same on latter patterns.

00:46:220 (150) - delete
00:46:651 (152,153) - delete

00:53:149 —— 01:03:109 , 1/4 ●● like 00:53:888 (174,175) - is too hard as a Muzu,why not just use 1/2?

01:04:775 (211) - delete
01:05:987 (217) - delete
01:06:897 (222) - delete and 01:07:048 (223) - d

01:09:433 —— 01:14:950 , try to decrease the number of 1/2 ●●●●●●●
01:14:950 —— 01:25:984 , the same as 00:35:876 —— 00:46:910

01:42:019 (355) - delete?


[Sala-fan's Oni]
The map sounds really cool...
00:21:479 (1,1) - delete,a little unreasonable
00:35:789 (55) - delete,to make a buffer

patterns in kiai like 00:41:651 (87,88,89,90) - ,may be a small clash for former patterns of the same music

00:52:628 (19) - d


[Inner Oni]
The map plays hard enough.
It deserves a Inner Oni,but the star is a problem,and sorry that I haven't know how to rise it yet :|

00:02:082 (1) - the same as Futsuu

00:32:082 (186,187,188,189) - too keep consistency,you can change it into long patterns like you did.

Kiai is really cool and I can mod few things...really sorry :|
I haven't mod Inners for a long time...






Overall,a nice map.
Good luck!
:)
Topic Starter
Charlotte

10nya wrote:

konnichiwa~

[General]
  1. clear
[Kantan]
  1. Kantan diff is less using this kind of pattern


    usually, Kantan uses pattern like this

  2. 00:46:910 (65 until 73) - : since this diff is kantan and I found your kantan is a bit hard since there's nonstop beat, how about reduce them here? As beginner player, I would hard to catch 66 67 68 because of different BPM and it'll made Kantan player will confuse, how about remove these notes to make Kantan player more easy to play?
    1. 00:47:641 (66) -
    2. 00:50:678 (70) -

    or you can remove
    1. 00:47:641 (66) -
    2. 00:49:123 (68) -
    3. 00:50:678 (70) -
    4. 00:52:316 (72) -
  3. 00:53:994 (74) - until 00:59:275 (84) - : I found this pattern is too hard for kantan players because of the BPM change and nonstop beat on white-tick, usually, Kantan diff is really rare to use 1/1 notes, since this diff is Kantan, how about remove:
    1. 00:54:416 (75) - fixed
    2. 00:55:231 (77) -
    3. 00:58:581 (83) -
    BPM change & nonstop...but,have 1/1 break time so keep
[Futsuu]
  1. I found this Futsuu is a bit hard than normal Futsuu, you used many 1/2 notes which is not really good in Futsuu diff, usually Futsuu uses this kind of pattern
    and some 1/2.
  2. 00:15:876 (34) - : supposed this one to be k ? It has the same sound as 00:14:841 (32,33) - so change this into k will make the rhythm good and catchable for players. You also used k on here 00:26:910 (59) - so why not? (: fixed
  3. Nice Futsuu, though there's a lot of 1/2 notes in high BPM
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:37:772 (119,120) - : supposed to be d k? It'll have same sound as 00:36:393 (114,115) - since the sound is same and it's more fit keep
  2. 00:38:117 (121) - : move this to 00:38:462 - , if you hear the song on 50% playback, there's nothing at 00:38:117 - here but there's sound on 00:38:462 - so move this will better (: ^
  3. 00:54:839 (181,182,183) - : this part is somehow too plain for me while there's sound here, how about add d on each red lines? like this

    (Make 182,183 as kat and add dons in each red lines ><) okay.add d.
  4. 01:31:157 (324,325) - : change this to k d? It'll make interesting rhythm and it's more fit, imo >< keep
[Sala-fan's Oni]
  1. 00:46:818 - : since the beat is nonstop from 00:46:565 (6) - till 00:46:910 (1) - , how about add d here? Well, personally I feel strange when there's a beat at here and suddenly there's no notes, i was wished a kkkkd or kkddk here ): If you do so then please remove finish on 00:46:910 -
  2. the rest is good, only that part is a bit awkward for me ;w;
[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:35:531 (209) - : k on here doesn't support anything imo, change this to d will better fixed
  2. 01:01:242 (361) - : too bad the pattern stopped here): how about change this into kdd or kkd? it'll fit better :) ^
  3. nice diff :3
that's all for me, sorry for the bad english, if there's anything you don't understand please chat me in-game ;w;/
good luck!
Thank you mod :)
Topic Starter
Charlotte

ak74qbz95xm8 wrote:

Sorry Charlotte,I come so laaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaate
Really sorry that I just busy doing my own map.
I've shooted a star on your another map,excuse me ;w;

[Kantan]
01:39:777 (157) - What about K? keep


[Futsuu]
00:02:082 (1) - delete this? looks a little strange,just look... fixed
00:56:015 (123) - k? ^
01:02:503 (139) - too keep consistency,k ^


[Muzukashii]
tbh the star of 3.43 may be too hard for the thread?try to push it down a little.3.43→3.12

00:02:082 (1) - same as Futsuu if you choose to fix it fixed

00:35:876 —— 00:46:910 , Kiai is really a bit hard.
What about this?
If you choose to fix it like ^,please do the same on latter patterns.

00:46:220 (150) - delete
00:46:651 (152,153) - delete

00:53:149 —— 01:03:109 , 1/4 ●● like 00:53:888 (174,175) - is too hard as a Muzu,why not just use 1/2?

01:04:775 (211) - delete
01:05:987 (217) - delete
01:06:897 (222) - delete and 01:07:048 (223) - d

01:09:433 —— 01:14:950 , try to decrease the number of 1/2 ●●●●●●●
01:14:950 —— 01:25:984 , the same as 00:35:876 —— 00:46:910

01:42:019 (355) - delete?

kiai time=some delete so other keep


[Sala-fan's Oni]
The map sounds really cool...
00:21:479 (1,1) - delete,a little unreasonable
00:35:789 (55) - delete,to make a buffer

patterns in kiai like 00:41:651 (87,88,89,90) - ,may be a small clash for former patterns of the same music

00:52:628 (19) - d


[Inner Oni]
The map plays hard enough.
It deserves a Inner Oni,but the star is a problem,and sorry that I haven't know how to rise it yet :|

00:02:082 (1) - the same as Futsuu fixed

00:32:082 (186,187,188,189) - too keep consistency,you can change it into long patterns like you did. ^

Kiai is really cool and I can mod few things...really sorry :|
I haven't mod Inners for a long time...

Thank you mod :)






Overall,a nice map.
Good luck!
:)
Zetera
[10nya]

[Sala-fan's Oni]
  1. 00:46:818 - : since the beat is nonstop from 00:46:565 (6) - till 00:46:910 (1) - , how about add d here? Well, personally I feel strange when there's a beat at here and suddenly there's no notes, i was wished a kkkkd or kkddk here ): If you do so then please remove finish on 00:46:910 - I'd rather keep the finish's.
  2. the rest is good, only that part is a bit awkward for me ;w;
[ask74qbz95xm8]

[Sala-fan's Oni]

00:35:789 (55) - delete,to make a buffer

patterns in kiai like 00:41:651 (87,88,89,90) - ,may be a small clash for former patterns of the same music I actually want it to be such a clash.

00:52:628 (19) - d Not sure why I should change that. Thus: no change.
JUDYDANNY
Hi,sorry I'm very late :? :?
Here's a Taiko Mod via Charlotte’s Request.
My mod is for suggetions. if you dont like, ignore please.
~Taiko~
d is Red Note.
k is Blue Note.
and, D ,K is finisher .. .
“+ ?” is I like pattern (※example→ add? , remove?
Big text is strong suggestion.

[Kantan]
  1. on 00:46:910 (65) - ~~~ 01:01:897 (88) – ‘s part, I think needs more break.
    00:47:641 (66) - , 00:49:123 (68) -, 00:50:678 (70) -, 00:52:316 (72) –
    And,, 00:53:994 (74) - , 00:55:231 (76) - , 00:56:777 (79) - . 00:57:147 (80) -.
    気合からの落差にぴったりな上、1/1を超える休憩も暫くないのでもう1ランク下の密度でも聞いてみていいと思いました。
  2. on 01:25:984 (127) - ~ 01:31:501 (137) – ‘s part , same as ,, 00:53:994 (74) -~~.
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:04:324 (5) – delete? そもそもこの音、エラー気味なので取る必要もあまり感じませんが,,Futsuuなら取る必要性は低いでしょう。
  2. 00:05:876 (8,10) - ^? 5を削除するなら…
    1/1ストリームの開始が急すぎる気がします、少しタメ作ってからでも問題ない盛り上がりだと思います。 00:12:427 (23,24) – ここも繋がってないですし
  3. 00:27:600 (32,33,34,35,36) – dkddkだったのかな?一番最初は..? よくわからないdkdk?kになってるのでddkdkでもう一度いきませんか?
  4. 00:20:358 (15) – k?  作曲者の意図でしょうが、なぜか地味に音の下がり具合が他と違うので、これを使って変化付けはっきりするのはどうでしょうか?
    *00:21:393 (17,18,19,20,21,22) - kkD~kkd, 00:32:427 (42,43,44,45,46,47) – kdD,~kdd 的なリンク付けになれそうな気がしました
  5. 01:07:048 (125,126) - kk? 難易度は増すと思いますが、聞き比べると、1つ前の小節のk kkk がいい味出しててこちらの方がしっくりきました。
  6. 01:09:043 (131) – add d?
  7. 01:25:984 (187,188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198) –
    最初の気合同様、1/1のリズム構成でいきませんか?本来休憩箇所のようなパートがとても難易度高くなってます。
    音が鮮明に聞こえない以上Futsuuの難易度として取るべきでないリズム難だと思います.
    e.g https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2464037
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:06:220 (13,14,15,16,17) – ddd-d-d-k >> d-d-ddd-k? or d-d-d-ddk? Futsuuの提案に似たものです。
  2. 00:12:772 (35) – add don,
  3. 00:18:979 (55) – d?
  4. 00:30:014 (93) - ^
  5. 00:37:772 (118) – don? このkiaiパートの色パターンなんですが、変えすぎてしまって音取が非常に不安定に感じました、00:35:876 (112,113,114,115) –d-d-d-k(or d)を基盤にして、そこから00:13:807 (38) -~のパートの音取ような変化形をそのままつかってあげれば、現状よりは聞こえが良くなると思います。
  6. 00:40:272 (127) - ^
  7. 01:14:950 (253) - ~~ same as above.
  8. 00:50:275 (1,2,4) – delete?
  9. 00:56:015 (178) – delete? 割と主観ですが 消してもいいかな~って聞いてみて思いました
  10. 01:01:897 (194) - からですが、00:59:275 (185,186,187,188) – と同じにしませんか? 休憩の意図は分かるのですが、曲調考えると詰めるべきだと思います。
  11. 01:42:019 (346) – delete
[Sala-fan's Oni]
  1. 00:37:945 (64,65,66,67) – kkd-k >>k-ddk ? *not sounds> sounds.
  2. 00:41:048 (83) – k ,I think this note needs to follow that splash sound.
  3. 00:49:873 (11) – Don , I don’t understand why put K ..
  4. That's all! good~ :D
[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:56:211 (340) – delete, 00:59:101 (352) – ここと比較してパーカッション類の音に変化があるのでいいと思います
  2. 01:04:018 (379) – k? , 次の380のdで音の落差が表現できると思います
  3. 01:04:775 (385) - d? 高い音ですが、その後のk-kの余韻の意識づけに合うのでよいと思います
  4. 01:41:329 (593,594) - swap?
  5. 部分部分に色パターン変化ありきで,そこに面白みがあっていい感じでした :)
モッドとか久しぶりなんで全然役に立たなかったらごめんなさい!><
That’s all! I thank you for reading it through ;)
Good Luck! :D
Topic Starter
Charlotte

JUDYDANNY wrote:

Hi,sorry I'm very late :? :?
Here's a Taiko Mod via Charlotte’s Request.
My mod is for suggetions. if you dont like, ignore please.
~Taiko~
d is Red Note.
k is Blue Note.
and, D ,K is finisher .. .
“+ ?” is I like pattern (※example→ add? , remove?
Big text is strong suggestion.

[Kantan]
  1. on 00:46:910 (65) - ~~~ 01:01:897 (88) – ‘s part, I think needs more break.
    00:47:641 (66) - , 00:49:123 (68) -, 00:50:678 (70) -, 00:52:316 (72) –
    And,, 00:53:994 (74) - , 00:55:231 (76) - , 00:56:777 (79) - . 00:57:147 (80) -.
    気合からの落差にぴったりな上、1/1を超える休憩も暫くないのでもう1ランク下の密度でも聞いてみていいと思いました。okay.1ランク下の密度に変更しました。
  2. on 01:25:984 (127) - ~ 01:31:501 (137) – ‘s part , same as ,, 00:53:994 (74) -~~. fixed
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:04:324 (5) – delete? そもそもこの音、エラー気味なので取る必要もあまり感じませんが,,Futsuuなら取る必要性は低いでしょう。okay.delete
  2. 00:05:876 (8,10) - ^? 5を削除するなら… okay.delete
    1/1ストリームの開始が急すぎる気がします、少しタメ作ってからでも問題ない盛り上がりだと思います。 00:12:427 (23,24) – ここも繋がってないですし 確かにその通りですね。
  3. 00:27:600 (32,33,34,35,36) – dkddkだったのかな?一番最初は..? よくわからないdkdk?kになってるのでddkdkでもう一度いきませんか? okay.changed ddkdk
  4. 00:20:358 (15) – k?  作曲者の意図でしょうが、なぜか地味に音の下がり具合が他と違うので、これを使って変化付けはっきりするのはどうでしょうか? okay.
    *00:21:393 (17,18,19,20,21,22) - kkD~kkd, 00:32:427 (42,43,44,45,46,47) – kdD,~kdd 的なリンク付けになれそうな気がしました
  5. 01:07:048 (125,126) - kk? 難易度は増すと思いますが、聞き比べると、1つ前の小節のk kkk がいい味出しててこちらの方がしっくりきました。fixed
  6. 01:09:043 (131) – add d? fixed
  7. 01:25:984 (187,188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198) –
    最初の気合同様、1/1のリズム構成でいきませんか?本来休憩箇所のようなパートがとても難易度高くなってます。
    音が鮮明に聞こえない以上Futsuuの難易度として取るべきでないリズム難だと思います. そうですね、1/1のリズム構成に変更します。fixed
    e.g https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2464037
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:06:220 (13,14,15,16,17) – ddd-d-d-k >> d-d-ddd-k? or d-d-d-ddk? Futsuuの提案に似たものです。d-d-ddd-kを採用します
  2. 00:12:772 (35) – add don, fixed
  3. 00:18:979 (55) – d? ^
  4. 00:30:014 (93) - ^ ^
  5. 00:37:772 (118) – don? このkiaiパートの色パターンなんですが、変えすぎてしまって音取が非常に不安定に感じました、00:35:876 (112,113,114,115) –d-d-d-k(or d)を基盤にして、そこから00:13:807 (38) -~のパートの音取ような変化形をそのままつかってあげれば、現状よりは聞こえが良くなると思います。
  6. 00:40:272 (127) - ^
  7. 01:14:950 (253) - ~~ same as above. d-d-d-k(or d)主体のリズムに変更しました。
  8. 00:50:275 (1,2,4) – delete? fixed
  9. 00:56:015 (178) – delete? 割と主観ですが 消してもいいかな~って聞いてみて思いました keepで
  10. 01:01:897 (194) - からですが、00:59:275 (185,186,187,188) – と同じにしませんか? 休憩の意図は分かるのですが、曲調考えると詰めるべきだと思います。 そうですね。詰めました。
  11. 01:42:019 (346) – delete fixed
[Sala-fan's Oni]
  1. 00:37:945 (64,65,66,67) – kkd-k >>k-ddk ? *not sounds> sounds.
  2. 00:41:048 (83) – k ,I think this note needs to follow that splash sound.
  3. 00:49:873 (11) – Don , I don’t understand why put K ..
  4. That's all! good~ :D
[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:56:211 (340) – delete, 00:59:101 (352) – ここと比較してパーカッション類の音に変化があるのでいいと思います
  2. 01:04:018 (379) – k? , 次の380のdで音の落差が表現できると思います
  3. 01:04:775 (385) - d? 高い音ですが、その後のk-kの余韻の意識づけに合うのでよいと思います
  4. 01:41:329 (593,594) - swap?

    All fixed
  5. 部分部分に色パターン変化ありきで,そこに面白みがあっていい感じでした :)
モッドとか久しぶりなんで全然役に立たなかったらごめんなさい!>< いいアイデアありがとうございました。
That’s all! I thank you for reading it through ;)
Good Luck! :D
Thank you mod :)
Coro
Taiko mod~
All are suggestion unless in red.

[Kantan]
no problems here

[Futsuu]
no problems here

[Muzukashii]
00:05:876 - I know you want a break but here is very awkward since the bass is very obvious, maybe put a d back

[Sala-fan's Oni ]
00:53:149 (22) - change to K? the crash here is pretty high pitched
00:56:407 (33) - ^
00:59:275 (44) - ^

[Inner Oni]
00:12:427 (52,53) - this fits the drums better if it is kk, I think

go for rank~
Topic Starter
Charlotte

Coro wrote:

Taiko mod~
All are suggestion unless in red.

[Kantan]
no problems here

[Futsuu]
no problems here

[Muzukashii]
00:05:876 - I know you want a break but here is very awkward since the bass is very obvious, maybe put a d back fixed

[Sala-fan's Oni ]
00:53:149 (22) - change to K? the crash here is pretty high pitched
00:56:407 (33) - ^
00:59:275 (44) - ^

[Inner Oni]
00:12:427 (52,53) - this fits the drums better if it is kk, I think fixed

go for rank~
Thank you mod :)
Zetera
[JUDYDANNY]


[Sala-fan's Oni]
  1. 00:37:945 (64,65,66,67) – kkd-k >>k-ddk ? *not sounds> sounds. Fixed by using a pattern that I used a bit later (00:40:703 (80,81,82,83,84) - )
  2. 00:41:048 (83) – k ,I think this note needs to follow that splash sound. Fixed for both this and the new pattern.
  3. 00:49:873 (11) – Don , I don’t understand why put K ..Also fixed, guess this was left forgotten by other modders.


[Coro]


[Sala-fan's Oni ]
00:53:149 (22) - change to K? the crash here is pretty high pitched They originally were Ks, but modders thought Ds were better.
00:56:407 (33) - ^ ^
00:59:275 (44) - ^^
Himesaka Noa
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:34:151 (71) - k? It is same melody as 00:30:358 (63,64,65,66).
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:56:015 (180) - I think it is not bad pattern to change to k.
  2. 01:26:846 (303) - It would more fits to move to 01:26:674.
  3. 01:29:605 (313) - Same as above. Move to 01:29:433.
  4. 01:29:777 (314) - How about change to k?
[Sala-fan's Oni]
  1. 00:30:358 (28) - It is lower pitch than similar parts. How about change to D?
  2. 00:33:117 (41) - Same as above
Sorry for late and short mod DX
Topic Starter
Charlotte

Underflow wrote:

[Futsuu]
  1. 00:34:151 (71) - k? It is same melody as 00:30:358 (63,64,65,66). fixed
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:56:015 (180) - I think it is not bad pattern to change to k. fixed
  2. 01:26:846 (303) - It would more fits to move to 01:26:674. keep now
  3. 01:29:605 (313) - Same as above. Move to 01:29:433. keep now
  4. 01:29:777 (314) - How about change to k? keep
[Sala-fan's Oni]
  1. 00:30:358 (28) - It is lower pitch than similar parts. How about change to D?
  2. 00:33:117 (41) - Same as above
Sorry for late and short mod DX
Thank you mod :)
Stefan
so... many... mods... will... reply... later....
Zetera
I followed Underflow's suggestions, they sound interesting.
MMzz
[Sala- fan's Oni]
01:16:846 (136,137,138,139,140,141) - This pattern doesn't work too well. It is going against the music with the double pattern (01:17:277 (138,139) - ) so the rhythm is really hard to feel. I would just move 01:17:277 (138) - back to 01:17:191. This makes the rhythm more accurate to the music and establishes a better feeling rhythm. Making the rhythm too tricky here isn't very necessary because of how the music is going.
01:20:036 (151) - Do the same with this note.
01:22:708 - Add a note here (kat preferably) for the rhythm again, and for the sake of consistency.
01:25:467 - ^



I like the set overall, I just think the rhythm issues I pointed out in the Oni are pretty crucial. The rest of the set looks good to me. OD6 in the Inner Oni is an interesting choice to go with the speed changes. (RIP ACCURACY) A nice little challenge. I also thought OD 4 was a very smart move in the Muzukashii because of the complicated kiai rhythm. Although, you might want to get some more opinions on the kiai in Muzukashii before getting it ranked. Some people might disagree with the complex rhythm. (I think its ok though) The speed changes were mapped very well in each difficulty, I'm very impressed by that.
Topic Starter
Charlotte

MMzz wrote:

[Sala- fan's Oni]
01:16:846 (136,137,138,139,140,141) - This pattern doesn't work too well. It is going against the music with the double pattern (01:17:277 (138,139) - ) so the rhythm is really hard to feel. I would just move 01:17:277 (138) - back to 01:17:191. This makes the rhythm more accurate to the music and establishes a better feeling rhythm. Making the rhythm too tricky here isn't very necessary because of how the music is going.
01:20:036 (151) - Do the same with this note.
01:22:708 - Add a note here (kat preferably) for the rhythm again, and for the sake of consistency.
01:25:467 - ^



I like the set overall, I just think the rhythm issues I pointed out in the Oni are pretty crucial. The rest of the set looks good to me. OD6 in the Inner Oni is an interesting choice to go with the speed changes. (RIP ACCURACY) A nice little challenge. I also thought OD 4 was a very smart move in the Muzukashii because of the complicated kiai rhythm. Although, you might want to get some more opinions on the kiai in Muzukashii before getting it ranked. Some people might disagree with the complex rhythm. (I think its ok though) The speed changes were mapped very well in each difficulty, I'm very impressed by that.
Thank you comment. & OD changed
Stefan
I swear I will check It in some hours, I am really sorry, Charlotte. D:
Darkravens23
Super random mod after the Super Bowl.

Kantan
00:58:928 (75) - d
01:00:914 (79) - remove and put d in 01:01:570 (80)
Mapped like it supposed to be. Good job.

Futsuu
00:08:462, 00:08:634 - bit much with that ones, but don't suit with the repeat later, I didn't found a good solution for that :/ (maybe just remove?)
00:46:220 (93) - k
01:25:812 (188) - k
Also here well done.

Muzukashii
00:40:703 (130,131) - do a triplet, sounds more difficult but is easier to play, but it is an unimportant note set for the song. you have decide what is more improtant, play flow or song fidelity.
01:19:777 (275,276) - ^
Good Muzu, I like it.

Sala-fan's Oni
Für die ganzen Doubles gehört ihr euch eig gesteinigt aber der Song gibt das her :D
Die Doubles im letzten Kiai Part würde ich aber etwas minimieren, sprich einfach normale viertel abstände machen (01:17:277 (138,139) bei dem z.b und ein paar bei den folgenden).
Ich kann euch ne Liste machen was ich gut und was ich nicht so gut finde, aber das ist alles ne Sache des Mapping-Styles und welche Musikspur man grad folgt, Beispiel: Sala mappt bis 01:09:433 einem Spaceglocken-Instrument oder so und schmückt das mit paar Triplets. Danach betont Stefan diesen lauten Sound was ich aber ziemlich geil finde, aber man könnte hier auch einfach dieser Spaceglocke folgen, würde die Beatmap insgesamt glaub ich auch schwerer machen. Wie gesagt leider hab ich heute kein Foto Mod für euch.

Inner Oni
Yeah not easy, so obvious. The Kiai sections make me sweat. Hard for me to do any kind of mod in that sections. The not Kiai parts, are good mapped. It suits very well to the song, so no change here.

I hope this helps you somehow and good luck ;)
Topic Starter
Charlotte

Darkravens23 wrote:

Super random mod after the Super Bowl.

Kantan
00:58:928 (75) - d why..d?
01:00:914 (79) - remove and put d in 01:01:570 (80) keep.
Mapped like it supposed to be. Good job.

Futsuu
00:08:462, 00:08:634 - bit much with that ones, but don't suit with the repeat later, I didn't found a good solution for that :/ (maybe just remove?) umm...keep now
00:46:220 (93) - k ^
01:25:812 (188) - k ^
Also here well done.

Muzukashii
00:40:703 (130,131) - do a triplet, sounds more difficult but is easier to play, but it is an unimportant note set for the song. you have decide what is more improtant, play flow or song fidelity. fixed
01:19:777 (275,276) - ^ fixed
Good Muzu, I like it.

Sala-fan's Oni
Für die ganzen Doubles gehört ihr euch eig gesteinigt aber der Song gibt das her :D
Die Doubles im letzten Kiai Part würde ich aber etwas minimieren, sprich einfach normale viertel abstände machen (01:17:277 (138,139) bei dem z.b und ein paar bei den folgenden).
Ich kann euch ne Liste machen was ich gut und was ich nicht so gut finde, aber das ist alles ne Sache des Mapping-Styles und welche Musikspur man grad folgt, Beispiel: Sala mappt bis 01:09:433 einem Spaceglocken-Instrument oder so und schmückt das mit paar Triplets. Danach betont Stefan diesen lauten Sound was ich aber ziemlich geil finde, aber man könnte hier auch einfach dieser Spaceglocke folgen, würde die Beatmap insgesamt glaub ich auch schwerer machen. Wie gesagt leider hab ich heute kein Foto Mod für euch.

Inner Oni
Yeah not easy, so obvious. The Kiai sections make me sweat. Hard for me to do any kind of mod in that sections. The not Kiai parts, are good mapped. It suits very well to the song, so no change here.

I hope this helps you somehow and good luck ;)
Thank you mod :)
Stefan
Yeah, again me being a lazy ass to reply on every singe word. So I make it short

Aldwych: Nope. I get your point why but I focus here on the main sound here to 100%.
ak74qbz95xm8: the 00:21:393 (1,1,1) triplet fits because of the keyboard sound which is quite noticeable.

MMzz wrote:

[Sala- fan's Oni]
01:16:846 (136,137,138,139,140,141) - This pattern doesn't work too well. It is going against the music with the double pattern (01:17:277 (138,139) - ) so the rhythm is really hard to feel. I would just move 01:17:277 (138) - back to 01:17:191. This makes the rhythm more accurate to the music and establishes a better feeling rhythm. Making the rhythm too tricky here isn't very necessary because of how the music is going. V
01:20:036 (151) - Do the same with this note. Done here
01:22:708 - Add a note here (kat preferably) for the rhythm again, and for the sake of consistency. uh.. I was actually about to leave a little break here since 01:22:708 (and 01:25:467 for the upcoming suggestion) sounds both empty to me and I perfered to leave them unmapped. Will think about it.
01:25:467 - ^ dududududududu



I like the set overall, I just think the rhythm issues I pointed out in the Oni are pretty crucial. The rest of the set looks good to me. OD6 in the Inner Oni is an interesting choice to go with the speed changes. (RIP ACCURACY) A nice little challenge. I also thought OD 4 was a very smart move in the Muzukashii because of the complicated kiai rhythm. Although, you might want to get some more opinions on the kiai in Muzukashii before getting it ranked. Some people might disagree with the complex rhythm. (I think its ok though) The speed changes were mapped very well in each difficulty, I'm very impressed by that.
Thanks!

updaterino
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260,196,99605,5,8,0:0:0:0:
260,196,99691,5,8,0:0:0:0:
260,196,99777,5,8,0:0:0:0:
260,196,99950,5,0,0:0:0:0:
260,196,100036,5,0,0:0:0:0:
260,196,100122,5,0,0:0:0:0:
260,196,100295,5,0,0:0:0:0:
260,196,100467,5,8,0:0:0:0:
260,196,100812,5,0,0:0:0:0:
260,196,100984,5,0,0:0:0:0:
260,196,101070,5,0,0:0:0:0:
260,196,101157,5,0,0:0:0:0:
260,196,101329,5,0,0:0:0:0:
260,196,101501,5,0,0:0:0:0:
260,196,101674,5,0,0:0:0:0:
260,196,101760,5,0,0:0:0:0:
260,196,101846,5,8,0:0:0:0:
260,196,102019,5,0,0:0:0:0:
260,196,102105,5,0,0:0:0:0:
260,196,102191,5,8,0:0:0:0:
260,196,102364,5,0,0:0:0:0:
260,196,102536,1,12,0:0:0:0:

EDIT: I won't forget ya, DarkRavens but will read later. D:
Nwolf
stefan move bg up pls

[Sala-fan's Oni]

Stefan is yellow and Sala isn't

00:02:082 (1,1) - Delete first note to emphasis the 2nd note
00:13:031 (1,1) - Move 1/2 further (resulting in kdd) since it fits sound more, currently it sounds a bit weird.
00:17:945 (1) - Change to kat to emphasis pitch going down here (00:18:117 (1) - )
00:23:462 (1,1) - Why is this different from ^
00:25:358 (3,16) - Should be kat since 00:30:876 (30,43) - these are
00:41:738 (87,91,95,105,109,2) - These kill the music. A lot, the kats make this go too 1/1. They should all be deleted or made into 4-plets OR they should be made into dons while the note before gets made to a kat.


For the other diffs: I would like to go into more detail since I love the Inner Oni (except a few flaws idc), but...

[Timestamp: 01:11:846]

Kantan


Futsuu


Muzukashii


[Timestamp: 00:54:839]

Kantan


Futsuu


Muzukashii


(yes I suck at making equally long pictures ;w;)

As you can see, spread is quite unbalanced. In Muzukashii you could move a few notes out of the kiai into that BPM change part (not a lot) while in Futsuuz you delete notes in the BPM change part and add a few into the kiai.
Another critical spot is 01:25:984 - to 01:42:536 - here btw, at some spots Kantan equals Futsuu, at some spots Futsuu equals Muzukashii and the difference between Muzukashii and Oni stays huge.

[Inner Oni]

00:12:600 - Add a note (01:41:329 (593) - )
00:37:514 (225) - Could be changed to don to keep up the emphasis of the lead instrument
00:37:858 (229) - Should be deleted to keep rhythm clearer and to avoid playing too much against the melody
00:39:841 (246) - Change to kat for lead instrument emphasis (00:39:324 (241,243) - )
00:43:376 (277) - Same as before
00:46:134 (301) - ^
01:04:548 (382) - Sounds better 01:04:245 - here imo
01:07:275 - Missing note?
01:15:295 (443) - Don for lead instrument emphasis
01:16:070 (450,451) - Change to dk for same reason as above
01:16:760 (456,457,458) - Change 456/457 to dk and delete 458 for reasons mentioned before in the mod
01:19:691 (482) - Delete
01:22:450 (506) - ^
01:23:743 (517) - Kat
01:25:381 (531) - Kat
01:25:984 (537,538,539,540,541,542,543,544,545,546,547,548,549,550,551,552,553,554,555,556,557) - Remap this part to be more similar to 00:03:117 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - (with other 1/2 fitting the different instruments tho) and to be more different from 01:31:846 (558,559,560,561,562,563,564,565,566,567,568,569,570,571,572,573) -
01:35:122 - Missing note?
01:35:639 - Missing note?


Else the Inner Oni looks reeeeeeeeally good. Gonna check this more properly as soon as spread issues have been fixed~
Zetera
00:41:738 (87,91,95,105,109,2) - These kill the music. A lot, the kats make this go too 1/1. They should all be deleted or made into 4-plets OR they should be made into dons while the note before gets made to a kat. Changed from dk to kd (Would really like to keep the double rhythm since it's.. exotic?)

The other suggestion has been implemented.
Topic Starter
Charlotte

Nwolf wrote:

stefan move bg up pls

[Sala-fan's Oni]

Stefan is yellow and Sala isn't

00:02:082 (1,1) - Delete first note to emphasis the 2nd note
00:13:031 (1,1) - Move 1/2 further (resulting in kdd) since it fits sound more, currently it sounds a bit weird.
00:17:945 (1) - Change to kat to emphasis pitch going down here (00:18:117 (1) - )
00:23:462 (1,1) - Why is this different from ^
00:25:358 (3,16) - Should be kat since 00:30:876 (30,43) - these are
00:41:738 (87,91,95,105,109,2) - These kill the music. A lot, the kats make this go too 1/1. They should all be deleted or made into 4-plets OR they should be made into dons while the note before gets made to a kat.


For the other diffs: I would like to go into more detail since I love the Inner Oni (except a few flaws idc), but...

[Timestamp: 01:11:846]

Kantan


Futsuu


Muzukashii


[Timestamp: 00:54:839]

Kantan


Futsuu


Muzukashii


(yes I suck at making equally long pictures ;w;)

As you can see, spread is quite unbalanced. In Muzukashii you could move a few notes out of the kiai into that BPM change part (not a lot) while in Futsuuz you delete notes in the BPM change part and add a few into the kiai.
Another critical spot is 01:25:984 - to 01:42:536 - here btw, at some spots Kantan equals Futsuu, at some spots Futsuu equals Muzukashii and the difference between Muzukashii and Oni stays huge.

Timestamp=bit changed

[Inner Oni]

00:12:600 - Add a note (01:41:329 (593) - ) fixed
00:37:514 (225) - Could be changed to don to keep up the emphasis of the lead instrument keep
00:37:858 (229) - Should be deleted to keep rhythm clearer and to avoid playing too much against the melody umm...okay fixed
00:39:841 (246) - Change to kat for lead instrument emphasis (00:39:324 (241,243) - ) fixed
00:43:376 (277) - Same as before fixed
00:46:134 (301) - ^ fixed
01:04:548 (382) - Sounds better 01:04:245 - here imo umm...okay fixed
01:07:275 - Missing note? I think no need.
01:15:295 (443) - Don for lead instrument emphasis fixed
01:16:070 (450,451) - Change to dk for same reason as above fixed
01:16:760 (456,457,458) - Change 456/457 to dk and delete 458 for reasons mentioned before in the mod fixed
01:19:691 (482) - Delete fixed
01:22:450 (506) - ^ fixed
01:23:743 (517) - Kat fixed
01:25:381 (531) - Kat fixed
01:25:984 (537,538,539,540,541,542,543,544,545,546,547,548,549,550,551,552,553,554,555,556,557) - Remap this part to be more similar to 00:03:117 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - (with other 1/2 fitting the different instruments tho) and to be more different from 01:31:846 (558,559,560,561,562,563,564,565,566,567,568,569,570,571,572,573) - must necessarily change?
01:35:122 - Missing note? fixed
01:35:639 - Missing note? fixed

Almost change. but,I like old Inner Oni (kiai)

Else the Inner Oni looks reeeeeeeeally good. Gonna check this more properly as soon as spread issues have been fixed~
Thank you mod :)
mliencheng
[ Kantan]


  • Seems fine, nothing found to be modded
[ Futsuu]

  1. 01:09:950 move to 01:10:122 , and 01:10:984 move to 01:10:812 ?
  2. 01:12:708 move to 01:12:536 , and 01:13:226 move to 01:12:881
  3. 01:13:743 move to 01:13:570
  4. Personally I prefer easy diffs to follow more the main sound (same as bpm) rather than background sounds
[ Muzukashii]

  1. 00:17:427(51,52) ctrl+G
  2. 00:17:945 k
  3. 00:27:945(87,88,89,90) ctrl+G
  4. To show contrast with previous low pitch notes
[ Sala-fan's Oni]

  1. I suggest to remove the 1/3 notes at 00:04:151 , It suits Inner more better, Oni just have to follow the main sounds, don't persist too much on unapparent instrumental sounds
  2. If you really want to follow the sounds mentioned above, 00:08:462 the triplet here could be changed to kkk since the same unapparent sound at 00:10:876 is also kkk
  3. 01:21:415 k for consistency
  4. 01:24:174 k for consistency
  5. 01:25:726 k
[ Inner Oni]

  1. 00:35:100(209,210) ctrl+G , 00:35:186 is high pitch compared with previous notes
Sorry for the late mod, I was quite busy with exams :(
Topic Starter
Charlotte

mliencheng wrote:

[ Kantan]


  • Seems fine, nothing found to be modded
[ Futsuu]

  1. 01:09:950 move to 01:10:122 , and 01:10:984 move to 01:10:812 ?
  2. 01:12:708 move to 01:12:536 , and 01:13:226 move to 01:12:881
  3. 01:13:743 move to 01:13:570
  4. Personally I prefer easy diffs to follow more the main sound (same as bpm) rather than background sounds nice idea.I try to think again.but,keep now
[ Muzukashii]

  1. 00:17:427(51,52) ctrl+G fixed
  2. 00:17:945 k keep
  3. 00:27:945(87,88,89,90) ctrl+G fixed
  4. To show contrast with previous low pitch notes
[ Sala-fan's Oni]

  1. I suggest to remove the 1/3 notes at 00:04:151 , It suits Inner more better, Oni just have to follow the main sounds, don't persist too much on unapparent instrumental sounds
  2. If you really want to follow the sounds mentioned above, 00:08:462 the triplet here could be changed to kkk since the same unapparent sound at 00:10:876 is also kkk
  3. 01:21:415 k for consistency
  4. 01:24:174 k for consistency
  5. 01:25:726 k
[ Inner Oni]

  1. 00:35:100(209,210) ctrl+G , 00:35:186 is high pitch compared with previous notes fixed
Sorry for the late mod, I was quite busy with exams :(
Thank you mod :)
TKS
i'm always wondering about the metadata of pokemon... where did you take a metadata from? i googled and English version seems available on only iTunes.
official website has more priority than the consistency of ranked maps imo. in this case, i think that we can be treated iTunes as an official. is there any objection?

Title : 戦闘!伝説のポケモン
Romanised Title : Battle! (Legendary Pokemon)
add tags : Go Ichinose 一之瀬剛 ポケモン ポケットモンスター Pocket Monsters ブラック ホワイト

idk that we should use a latin alphabet like "é"

Edit:
arigato Dake-sama!
DakeDekaane
Summoned by TKS-sama =w=

I'll be confirming what he said, as for the Japanese name, we have this:
While for the English title, the album was released only on iTunes, so there's no other source which would conflict with it.

I don't remember where did I got the romanisation/translation for mine, but since we already have an official one, better use that.
Topic Starter
Charlotte
Title : 戦闘!伝説のポケモン
Romanised Title : Battle! (Legendary Pokemon)
add tags : Go Ichinose 一之瀬剛 ポケモン ポケットモンスター Pocket Monsters ブラック ホワイト

fixed.

Thank you TKS & Dake.
TKS
[ General]
  1. 01:03:109 - このKIAIは必要? だとしても01:04:321 - から開始させるべきだと思うのですが。
[ Kantan]
  1. 00:16:565 (17) - 00:22:082 (25) - 何故finisher? 1/1の3連打で毎度finisherを置くと相当叩きづらいと思うのですが。。
  2. 00:23:117 (26) - 流れを見る限り d だと思います。不自然な配置だと感じました。
  3. 01:00:914 (78) - BPMが依然として変更されているパートで3連打を置くのは無意味だと思います。
  4. 01:13:915 (101) - 01:14:605 (103) - 全体的に複雑な配置が多いですが、あまりにも酷なパターンだと思います。可能ならどちらかを消してください。

  5. 主観ですが、Kantanとして複雑な配置(dkkkddのような2打目が逆色)が多いように感じます。また、00:16:220 (16) - のようなノーツも可能であれば削除して3連打を解消するべきだと感じました。
[ Futsuu]
  1. 00:24:151 (48,49,50) - バックの音、ドラム音か何かに合わせての3連打だと思いますが、kdd という音取りは中途半端に感じます。00:21:393 (42,43) - のような音取りにただノーツを追加したんだと思いますが、その場合強調されるべき音の00:24:496 (50) - ですが、直前の00:24:324 (49) - にも d が配置されているせいでパターンの意味が薄れています。全体的なメロディを意識して00:24:496 (50) - は k で良いと思います。
  2. 00:35:531 (75) - ^
  3. 00:46:738 - 音があるので k を置いた方が前パートとの整合性が取れて良いと思いますが。
  4. 00:48:748 - 3連打は不必要だと思います。00:49:123 - から1/1で dkD のようなメインメロディに合わせた単純な配置で良いと思います。
  5. 上記をそのままfixした場合、00:52:733 (107) - も k に変えてください。
  6. 00:53:994 (109) - ドラムの音を意識し始めた配置だと思うのですが、 k に変更して、00:54:416 (110) - を削除するべきだと思います。BPMが頻繁に変わる譜面はプレイヤーのレベル問わず難しいものだと思うのですが、この一帯の配置が不安定でFutsuuのレベルには適していないと思います。もっとBPMの変化を意識したマッピングをすべきです。
  7. 00:56:015 (114) - 00:56:777 (115) - 00:57:518 (116) - 上記理由で削除。
  8. 00:57:888 - から他のパートとの統一感のために ddd k を追加。
  9. 01:04:018 (134) - 消して休憩を作るべきだと感じました。
[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:02:427 - ~00:08:289 - 他の譜面はこれ以降のパートよりも休憩が多い気がするのですが、なぜMuzukashiiのみこのパートの方が休憩が少ないのですか?
  2. 00:13:807 - ~00:35:876 - このパート一帯に置かれている1/2の2連打に統一感がなさすぎるように思えたのですが何か意図はありますか?
  3. 00:17:427 (51,52) - 前後に dd があるので変化を持たせたい場合でも dk で十分だと思います。
  4. 00:27:945 (87) - 前パートと同様 d で良いと思います。
  5. 00:34:669 (110) - 前パートでは k なのですが、00:31:738 (100,101) - と同じ dd にした理由はあるのですか?
  6. 00:37:255 (117,118,119,120,121,122) - 音楽に合っていません。下記のような音取りに変更すべきだと思います。
  7. 00:55:623 (179,180) - を1/2で左に移動させて kdddd、あるいはそこからノーツを消して k ddd にして00:56:015 (181) - は孤立させるべきだと思います。
  8. 00:56:407 - ~00:59:275 - 同じパターンを繰り返してください。
  9. 01:09:605 (233) - 叩きづらいので消しても良いと思います。01:12:364 - に何も置いてないならなおさら。
  10. 01:39:950 (344) - なぜ d
[ Sala-fan's Oni]
  • Stefan's part.
  1. 00:24:410 - consider adding d here. 5plet would make more stable sound.
  2. 00:24:755 (1) - also, remove this one? i think 00:24:841 (1) - should be changed to K yeah it's Sala-'s part. and he/she did it at 00:27:600 (14) - and more. please consider it for Sala- :3
  3. 01:17:191 (138,139) - swap them. there is no high-pitched sound like you focused on 01:15:208 (129) - 01:15:898 (132) - 01:16:588 (135) -
  4. 01:19:950 (151,152) - the same.
  5. 01:25:898 (186) - almost the same as 00:24:755 - .


    Sala-'s part.
  6. 00:35:876 (55) - add finisher in the same way as 00:41:393 (85) - . finisher also would work for changing the flow of song.
  7. 00:52:628 (19) - unnecessary 1/4 twins here. should be moved to 00:52:524 -
  8. 01:25:984 (1) - add finisher in the same way as 01:28:743 (1) -
[ Inner Oni]
  1. 00:14:151 (63,64,65) - 00:25:186 (138,139,140) - 他の部分は ddk なのにこれらのみ kkd なのは何故? k の音は耳に残りやすいのでより一層不自然さを際立てています。
  2. 00:18:376 (94) - 削除。他の部分は5連打までなのに、何故この部分だけ長いパターンなのかわかりませんでした。
  3. 00:26:996 - 何か置いてストリームを作るべきでは。。。
  4. 00:28:979 - 00:31:738 - 00:34:496 - 上記と似た提案ですが、ストリームに適した音がこれと言って無い場所にストリームが作られていて、ストリームに適したわかりやすい音がある場所にストリームが無いのは何故ですか?
good luck!
Topic Starter
Charlotte

TKS wrote:

[ General]
  1. 01:03:109 - このKIAIは必要? だとしても01:04:321 - から開始させるべきだと思うのですが。考え直してみて必要ないと判断したので,削除しました。
[ Kantan]
  1. 00:16:565 (17) - 00:22:082 (25) - 何故finisher? 1/1の3連打で毎度finisherを置くと相当叩きづらいと思うのですが。 finisherをいくつか削除しました。
  2. 00:23:117 (26) - 流れを見る限り d だと思います。不自然な配置だと感じました。 fixed
  3. 01:00:914 (78) - BPMが依然として変更されているパートで3連打を置くのは無意味だと思います。確かに...削除しました。
  4. 01:13:915 (101) - 01:14:605 (103) - 全体的に複雑な配置が多いですが、あまりにも酷なパターンだと思います。可能ならどちらかを消してください。 (103)を削除しました。

  5. 主観ですが、Kantanとして複雑な配置(dkkkddのような2打目が逆色)が多いように感じます。また、00:16:220 (16) - のようなノーツも可能であれば削除して3連打を解消するべきだと感じました。 いくつか3連打と2打目が逆色のパターンを削りました。
[ Futsuu]
  1. 00:24:151 (48,49,50) - バックの音、ドラム音か何かに合わせての3連打だと思いますが、kdd という音取りは中途半端に感じます。00:21:393 (42,43) - のような音取りにただノーツを追加したんだと思いますが、その場合強調されるべき音の00:24:496 (50) - ですが、直前の00:24:324 (49) - にも d が配置されているせいでパターンの意味が薄れています。全体的なメロディを意識して00:24:496 (50) - は k で良いと思います。 fixed
  2. 00:35:531 (75) - ^ ^
  3. 00:46:738 - 音があるので k を置いた方が前パートとの整合性が取れて良いと思いますが。気づきませんでした。fixed
  4. 00:48:748 - 3連打は不必要だと思います。00:49:123 - から1/1で dkD のようなメインメロディに合わせた単純な配置で良いと思います。fixed
  5. 上記をそのままfixした場合、00:52:733 (107) - も k に変えてください。^
  6. 00:53:994 (109) - ドラムの音を意識し始めた配置だと思うのですが、 k に変更して、00:54:416 (110) - を削除するべきだと思います。BPMが頻繁に変わる譜面はプレイヤーのレベル問わず難しいものだと思うのですが、この一帯の配置が不安定でFutsuuのレベルには適していないと思います。もっとBPMの変化を意識したマッピングをすべきです。BPMの変化を意識したマッピング...参考になります。fixed
  7. 00:56:015 (114) - 00:56:777 (115) - 00:57:518 (116) - 上記理由で削除。fixed
  8. 00:57:888 - から他のパートとの統一感のために ddd k を追加。 統一感を意識するというのを今後のmappingでも活かせていけたらと思います。fixed
  9. 01:04:018 (134) - 消して休憩を作るべきだと感じました。 fixed
[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:02:427 - ~00:08:289 - 他の譜面はこれ以降のパートよりも休憩が多い気がするのですが、なぜMuzukashiiのみこのパートの方が休憩が少ないのですか?
  2. 00:13:807 - ~00:35:876 - このパート一帯に置かれている1/2の2連打に統一感がなさすぎるように思えたのですが何か意図はありますか?
  3. 00:17:427 (51,52) - 前後に dd があるので変化を持たせたい場合でも dk で十分だと思います。
  4. 00:27:945 (87) - 前パートと同様 d で良いと思います。
  5. 00:34:669 (110) - 前パートでは k なのですが、00:31:738 (100,101) - と同じ dd にした理由はあるのですか?

    ここのパートのkdをdkに変更し、統一感を持たせるため同じ配置に変更しました。変化付けで色を変えていたため意図は特にないです。
  6. 00:37:255 (117,118,119,120,121,122) - 音楽に合っていません。下記のような音取りに変更すべきだと思います。


    ここのパートの指摘は自分のなかでかなりしっかりくる提案です。非常に参考になりました。fixed
  7. 00:55:623 (179,180) - を1/2で左に移動させて kdddd、あるいはそこからノーツを消して k ddd にして00:56:015 (181) - は孤立させるべきだと思います。kddddに変更しました。
  8. 00:56:407 - ~00:59:275 - 同じパターンを繰り返してください。fixed
  9. 01:09:605 (233) - 叩きづらいので消しても良いと思います。01:12:364 - に何も置いてないならなおさら。^
  10. 01:39:950 (344) - なぜ d ? kに変更しました。
[ Sala-fan's Oni]
  • Stefan's part.
  1. 00:24:410 - consider adding d here. 5plet would make more stable sound.
  2. 00:24:755 (1) - also, remove this one? i think 00:24:841 (1) - should be changed to K yeah it's Sala-'s part. and he/she did it at 00:27:600 (14) - and more. please consider it for Sala- :3
  3. 01:17:191 (138,139) - swap them. there is no high-pitched sound like you focused on 01:15:208 (129) - 01:15:898 (132) - 01:16:588 (135) -
  4. 01:19:950 (151,152) - the same.
  5. 01:25:898 (186) - almost the same as 00:24:755 - .


    Sala-'s part.
  6. 00:35:876 (55) - add finisher in the same way as 00:41:393 (85) - . finisher also would work for changing the flow of song.
  7. 00:52:628 (19) - unnecessary 1/4 twins here. should be moved to 00:52:524 -
  8. 01:25:984 (1) - add finisher in the same way as 01:28:743 (1) -
[ Inner Oni]
  1. 00:14:151 (63,64,65) - 00:25:186 (138,139,140) - 他の部分は ddk なのにこれらのみ kkd なのは何故? k の音は耳に残りやすいのでより一層不自然さを際立てています。ddkに変更しました。
  2. 00:18:376 (94) - 削除。他の部分は5連打までなのに、何故この部分だけ長いパターンなのかわかりませんでした。削除しました。
  3. 00:26:996 - 何か置いてストリームを作るべきでは。。。 ストリームに変更しました
  4. 00:28:979 - 00:31:738 - 00:34:496 - 上記と似た提案ですが、ストリームに適した音がこれと言って無い場所にストリームが作られていて、ストリームに適したわかりやすい音がある場所にストリームが無いのは何故ですか?Kiai timeに少し難しめのパターンを入れてたのですが削除したためです。
good luck!
非常にわかりやすく、また的確なmoddingありがとうございました :)
Zetera
  • Sala-'s part.
  1. 00:35:876 (55) - add finisher in the same way as 00:41:393 (85) - . finisher also would work for changing the flow of song. Fixed.
  2. 00:52:628 (19) - unnecessary 1/4 twins here. should be moved to 00:52:524 - Also fixed.
  3. 01:25:984 (1) - add finisher in the same way as 01:28:743 (1) - That's also Stefan's part, not mine. :P
Stefan

Nwolf wrote:

stefan move bg up pls

[Sala-fan's Oni]

Stefan is yellow and Sala isn't

00:02:082 (1,1) - Delete first note to emphasis the 2nd note Okay.
00:13:031 (1,1) - Move 1/2 further (resulting in kdd) since it fits sound more, currently it sounds a bit weird. Done.
00:17:945 (1) - Change to kat to emphasis pitch going down here (00:18:117 (1) - ) Sounds awkward to me.
00:23:462 (1,1) - Why is this different from ^ Sounds higher than the notes above.

mliencheng wrote:

[ Sala-fan's Oni]

  1. I suggest to remove the 1/3 notes at 00:04:151 , It suits Inner more better, Oni just have to follow the main sounds, don't persist too much on unapparent instrumental sounds it's not that long and plays fine.
  2. If you really want to follow the sounds mentioned above, 00:08:462 the triplet here could be changed to kkk since the same unapparent sound at 00:10:876 is also kkk I actually focused on the Main sound (noticeable from 00:13:807 -) but without some varierty it might gets repetitive while the song isn't so repetitive at all.
  3. 01:21:415 k for consistency uh.. it's there.
  4. 01:24:174 k for consistency wut
  5. 01:25:726 k ?!

TKS wrote:

[ Sala-fan's Oni]
  • Stefan's part.
  1. 00:24:410 - consider adding d here. 5plet would make more stable sound. legit enough.
  2. 00:24:755 (1) - also, remove this one? i think 00:24:841 (1) - should be changed to K yeah it's Sala-'s part. and he/she did it at 00:27:600 (14) - and more. please consider it for Sala- :3 Well, true.
  3. 01:17:191 (138,139) - swap them. there is no high-pitched sound like you focused on 01:15:208 (129) - 01:15:898 (132) - 01:16:588 (135) - what. it's almost the exact one like the examples above.
  4. 01:19:950 (151,152) - the same. ^
  5. 01:25:898 (186) - almost the same as 00:24:755 - . ~
thanks
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Nardoxyribonucleic
Hi, here is the recheck as requested.

  • [Kantan]
  1. 00:08:289 (5) - consider adding finish here for the stressed background sound ?
  • [Futsuu]
  1. 00:10:358 (18) - consider removing this note for a 4/1 break ? As the pattern is quite consecutive, a longer break here could allow more time for the 1/2 ddd at 00:11:048 (19,20,21) -
  2. 00:47:641 (99) and 00:49:498 (102) - delete , and then change 00:49:123 (101) - to k ? Similar reason as ^ , the map lacks 4/1 breaks.
  3. 00:50:678 (104) - you may also delete this note if you apply ^ for break consistency.
  4. 01:04:321 (135) - d would be better as it has the same pitch as 01:06:745 (143) -
  5. 01:14:605 (162) - maybe k for pattern consistency as 01:11:846 (156) - ?
  6. 01:26:674 (186) and 01:28:398 (189) - delete ? Same as 00:47:641 (99) -
  7. 01:29:433 (191) - same as 00:50:678 (104) -
  8. 01:38:570 (212) - move to 01:38:915 - and change to k ? This would be simpler and more intuitive to play imo.
  • [Muzukashii]

    Consider OD-1 for a better spread ?
  1. 00:50:678 (161) - d would be better for pattern consistency as 00:47:641 (154) -
  2. 00:57:055 (180) - I think it is a bit risky to use 1/4 dk in Muzukashii. Consider changing the note to k to make it easier to follow like 00:53:888 (169,170) - ? You may also change the colour of surrounding notes like this for a better flow: (cursor at 00:56:777 - )
  3. 00:59:275 (185,186,187,188,189,190) - same as ^
  4. 01:01:897 (192,193,194,195,196,197) - ^
  5. From 01:25:984 to 01:31:501 - I would suggest deleting some notes here in order to fit the calm music after kiai and make a better spread from Futsuu to Oni. Currently the note density here is almost the same as Inner Oni.
  • [Sala-fan's Oni]

    Uncheck widescreen support.
  1. 00:24:841 (1) - maybe K as you did at 00:27:600 (14) - for pattern consistency ?
  • [Inner Oni]
  1. 00:08:289 (24) - same as Kantan
  2. 00:34:669 (204,205) - consider swapping these notes to kd ? It would be more consistent with the previous patterns, and the flow could be improved imo.
  3. 00:35:531 (211) - maybe k for pattern consistency as 00:27:255 (154,173,192) - ?
  4. 00:50:678 (318) - same as Muzukashii
You may call me back after applying the mods~ :D
Zetera
  • [Sala-fan's Oni]

    Uncheck widescreen support. Our difficulty has a Storyboard, which means that we need that widescreen support iirc.
  1. 00:24:841 (1) - maybe K as you did at 00:27:600 (14) - for pattern consistency ? Fixed.
Thank you for the recheck!
Topic Starter
Charlotte

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Hi, here is the recheck as requested.

  • [Kantan]
  1. 00:08:289 (5) - consider adding finish here for the stressed background sound ? fixed
  • [Futsuu]
  1. 00:10:358 (18) - consider removing this note for a 4/1 break ? As the pattern is quite consecutive, a longer break here could allow more time for the 1/2 ddd at 00:11:048 (19,20,21) -
  2. 00:47:641 (99) and 00:49:498 (102) - delete , and then change 00:49:123 (101) - to k ? Similar reason as ^ , the map lacks 4/1 breaks.
  3. 00:50:678 (104) - you may also delete this note if you apply ^ for break consistency.
  4. 01:04:321 (135) - d would be better as it has the same pitch as 01:06:745 (143) -
  5. 01:14:605 (162) - maybe k for pattern consistency as 01:11:846 (156) - ?
  6. 01:26:674 (186) and 01:28:398 (189) - delete ? Same as 00:47:641 (99) -
  7. 01:29:433 (191) - same as 00:50:678 (104) -
  8. 01:38:570 (212) - move to 01:38:915 - and change to k ? This would be simpler and more intuitive to play imo.
okay,all fixed.need brake time for Futsuu.

  • [Muzukashii]

    Consider OD-1 for a better spread ? fixed.
  1. 00:50:678 (161) - d would be better for pattern consistency as 00:47:641 (154) - fixed
  2. 00:57:055 (180) - I think it is a bit risky to use 1/4 dk in Muzukashii. Consider changing the note to k to make it easier to follow like 00:53:888 (169,170) - ? You may also change the colour of surrounding notes like this for a better flow: (cursor at 00:56:777 - )
  3. 00:59:275 (185,186,187,188,189,190) - same as ^
  4. 01:01:897 (192,193,194,195,196,197) - ^ umm....1/4-dk is little hard & risky.okay,changed kk
  5. From 01:25:984 to 01:31:501 - I would suggest deleting some notes here in order to fit the calm music after kiai and make a better spread from Futsuu to Oni. Currently the note density here is almost the same as Inner Oni. okay, changed pattern
  • [Inner Oni]
  1. 00:08:289 (24) - same as Kantan
  2. 00:34:669 (204,205) - consider swapping these notes to kd ? It would be more consistent with the previous patterns, and the flow could be improved imo.
  3. 00:35:531 (211) - maybe k for pattern consistency as 00:27:255 (154,173,192) - ?
  4. 00:50:678 (318) - same as Muzukashii

    all fixed.
You may call me back after applying the mods~ :D
Thank you mod :)
Nardoxyribonucleic
There are enough breaks in lower difficulties now, and the patterns look fine to me.

Bubbled~
Nwolf
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Charlotte log
12:40 Charlotte: hello~.IRC=OK~
12:42 Nwolf: haii
12:43 Nwolf: gimme a sec ok
12:46 Nwolf: ok so the main reason why I wanted to talk to you in IRC is because of some issues I have with the Futsuu
12:46 Nwolf: 00:35:876 - 00:46:910 - mainly this part
12:47 Nwolf: which is quite similar in Kantan/Futsuu
12:47 Nwolf: while Futsuu-Muzu is huge gap, with Muzu-Oni being kinda similar again
12:49 Nwolf: I know that 3/4 notes are nothing for a Futsuu which probably caused this trouble, after looking at the Muzu I would like to suggest adding notes (Futsuu) in 1/1 spots like 00:36:910 -
12:49 Charlotte: = Futsuu<<<Muzu?
12:49 Nwolf: yeah, sth like Kantan<Futsuu<<<Muzu<Oni
12:51 Nwolf: In Futsuu: 00:36:910 - 00:38:462 - these and all similar spots could have added notes while in Muzu
12:52 Nwolf: 00:36:910 (115,116) - These notes and all similar ones should be moved to 00:38:289 - so there's consistent breaks between Futsuu/Muzu
12:52 Charlotte: 00:36:910 - add note?
12:52 Nwolf: yes
12:52 Nwolf: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3030655 this for Futsuu
12:53 Nwolf: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3030657 and this Muzu
12:55 Charlotte: Futsuu=fixed
12:56 Charlotte: In Futsuu 00:42:417 - & 00:43:994 - add notes?
12:56 Nwolf: yeah
12:57 Charlotte: Muzukashii=I think fine now...so keep...?
12:59 Nwolf: the main purpose for the changes I suggest for Muzu is that it would be better if the 1/2s are at the same spot
12:59 Nwolf: 00:38:289 - also there's 1/2 in the sound you're mapping here C:
13:00 Charlotte: 00:35:876 (111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120) - same pattern so need change?
13:01 Nwolf: how does it look right now
13:03 Charlotte: okay. fixed.
13:04 Nwolf: in both kiais? C:
13:04 Charlotte: yes
13:05 Nwolf: ok, can you upload
13:06 Charlotte: wait a moment.
13:06 Charlotte: In futsuu 00:39:681 - add k?
13:07 Nwolf: yes
13:08 Charlotte: first kiai & second kiai ?
13:08 Nwolf: yeah they are the same
13:10 Charlotte: In Muzukashii 00:45:186 (145,146) - delete?
13:12 Nwolf: Oni adds more notes in that spot too so I wouldn't mind if you keep it
13:13 Charlotte: keep?
13:15 Nwolf: yeah
13:16 Charlotte: but,http://puu.sh/hjez6.jpg
13:16 Charlotte: kkd d dk ×2
13:19 Nwolf: you could delete 00:45:358 - this note
13:19 Nwolf: so it becomes more intense while still being somewhat in the middle between Futsuu/Oni
13:20 Charlotte: okay.
13:22 Charlotte: upload?
13:22 Nwolf: yeah
13:23 Charlotte: done
13:26 Charlotte: In futsuu 01:22:551 - change to d?
13:28 Nwolf: 01:19:777 (176) - not this?
13:30 Charlotte: not this=no need?
13:31 Charlotte: 01:19:777 (176) - I change to d
13:31 Nwolf: ok
13:32 Nwolf: Muzu: 00:55:427 (174) - Delete this or 00:55:035 (172) -
13:35 Charlotte: 172 delete
13:39 Nwolf: 00:58:234 - 00:58:408 - add notes here and 01:00:914 - 01:01:078 - here
13:41 Charlotte: fixed
13:46 Nwolf: 01:06:290 (211) - Delete this too (Muzu)
13:48 Nwolf: 7-plet is kinda evil
13:51 Nwolf: 01:10:467 (227) - don 01:11:846 (233) - kat 01:13:226 (238) - don 01:14:605 (244) - kat feels better imo
13:52 Charlotte: 01:06:290 - no change.
13:53 Charlotte: I think nice pattern...
13:53 Nwolf: 01:05:684 (207) - change this to don then :C
13:53 Nwolf: think it's too hard cause it's high BPM here
13:54 Charlotte: ddkdkdk? It's ok fixed.
13:54 Nwolf: k
13:55 Charlotte: 227 233 238 244.probably fine now. so no change
13:55 Nwolf: kk
13:57 Nwolf: 01:27:881 (291) - 01:30:984 (299) - These should be delete tho because Futsuu uses 4/1 breaks here
13:58 Charlotte: 00:46:910 (152,153,154,155,156,157,158,159,160,161,162,163,164,165) - & 01:25:984 (291,292,293,294,295,296,297,298,299,300,301,302,303,304) - same pattern.so keep
13:59 Nwolf: do it in both parts then
14:00 Nwolf: C:
14:00 Charlotte: 01:27:872 - really no need?
14:01 Nwolf: 2/1 -> 1/2 isn't really a good move imo
14:03 Charlotte: umm...okay.fixed
14:03 Nwolf: kk
14:04 Nwolf: I think the rest will be on the Oni with Sala, just one more thing in Inner
14:04 Nwolf: actually no nvm that
14:05 Nwolf: gonna try to talk with Sala now
14:05 Nwolf: can you update C:
14:06 Charlotte: done
14:07 Nwolf: ok

Sala- log (german)
14:05 Nwolf: Du menschliches Individuum!!!
14:37 Sala-: WTFFF
14:37 Sala-: gehts um Legendary battle?
14:37 Nwolf: ja
14:37 Nwolf: IRC oder post?
14:38 Sala-: Mir egal, ich bin jetzt da, war nur gerade essen.
14:38 Sala-: VOn mir aus IRC
14:39 Nwolf: äääh du übernimmst für Stefan, oder
14:39 Sala-: Yes
14:40 Nwolf: 00:19:496 (1,1) - I cry :C
14:41 Nwolf: ich versteh den Sinn und ich finds trotzdem nicht wirklich toll
14:41 Sala-: Was genau? Dass das ein Triple ist?
14:43 Nwolf: ja
14:43 Nwolf: ich find es zerstört die emphasis in dem Teil
14:43 Sala-: Ich schätze er wollte von den doubles wegkommen und hat sie zu triples gemacht, damit sich Spannung aufbaut
14:43 Sala-: Die Musik ist immerhin nicht komplett gleich
14:44 Nwolf: man könnte auch big kats auf alle machen
14:44 Nwolf: 00:21:393 (1,1,1) - weil spätestens hier es einfach nur blöd ist und den gegenteiligen Effekt erzeugt
14:45 Nwolf: mal sehen ob stefan in skype reagiert ;w;
14:46 Sala-: ich hoffs :c
14:46 Sala-: Sonst mach ich einfach doubles draus
14:46 Sala-: Also wie davor
14:46 Nwolf: wär mir lieber
14:46 Nwolf: wie gesagt, man kann big kats verwenden um Spannung aufzubauen
14:47 Nwolf: ...obwohl ne das wär auch nicht gut blah
14:47 Sala-: Find ich auch nicht :c
14:49 Nwolf: 00:36:565 (58,61) - y u no big kats
14:49 Nwolf: www#
14:50 Sala-: Fand das zu übertrieben
14:50 Nwolf: k
14:50 Nwolf: da ja eure Oni noch zum spread gehört...
14:50 Nwolf: 00:43:548 (98,99,100,101) - würde vielleicht kein 5-plet hier machen
14:50 Sala-: Dann kommen die jetzigen nicht zu Geltung
14:51 Sala-: Hm, nen Ersatzvorschlag
14:51 Nwolf: 00:43:634 (99) - löschen
14:51 Nwolf: passt zu den doublet patterns im rest der kiai
14:51 Sala-: True
14:52 Nwolf: 01:01:734 (55,56,57) - :C
14:53 Nwolf: 56 weg und 57 big kat
14:53 Sala-: Damit bin ich auch nicht so zufrieden mittlerweile
14:53 Sala-: Changed
14:53 Nwolf: vielleicht sogar 55 weg idk
14:53 Sala-: joa
14:53 Sala-: Hast du die anderen Diffs eigentlich schon durch?
14:54 Nwolf: ja
14:54 Sala-: Nice
14:54 Sala-: Dann bekomm ich ja bald +1 Score BLBLBLBLBLLB
14:54 Sala-: jk
14:54 Nwolf: 01:08:131 (93) - kat wegen 01:05:684 (77) -
14:55 Sala-: Nice catch
14:55 Nwolf: oha jetzt kommt ja schon wieder Stefan-Teil
14:55 Sala-: Merkt man direkt
14:55 Nwolf: 01:10:295 (105) - 01:13:053 (118) - müssen weg
14:56 Nwolf: piano emphasis komplett weg
14:56 Nwolf: und zu den crashes passt es auch nicht
14:56 Sala-: Er hat sich auf was anderes fokussiert
14:56 Sala-: Ja die Crashes
14:56 Sala-: Die sind da aber leiser, also hast du recht
14:56 Nwolf: die sind da überhaupt nicht :C
14:57 Nwolf: die dons sind piano
14:57 Nwolf: die kats sind crash
14:57 Sala-: Er hats genau so gemacht wie am Anfang
14:57 Sala-: Aber da hört man besser woran er sich orientiert, später nicht so
14:58 Nwolf: idk 01:09:605 (101,104) - müssten dann ja eigentlich weg sein
14:58 Nwolf: ich hab das als piano=don, crash=big kat verstanden
14:58 Nwolf: mit ausnahme von den 4 Noten
14:58 Nwolf: *2
15:00 Sala-: Der Fokus liegt eher in dem Walzerrhythmus
15:00 Sala-: Also 1/3
15:00 Sala-: Äh 3/4*
15:02 Sala-: Und dann liegen die Crashes immer auf der 1
15:02 Sala-: Werden dann so besser betont, auf das Piano wurde garnicht geachtet
15:04 Nwolf: nyaaaa
15:04 Sala-: Ich versuch ihn mal anzurufen
15:04 Nwolf: kk
15:04 Sala-: Sieht aber nicht so aus als würde er reagieren..
15:05 Nwolf: jop
15:05 Nwolf: warten bis er wiederkommt??? Charlotte ist noch ca. 3 Stunden online und qualify reset ist... auch erst in 3 Stunden
15:06 Sala-: Nah lass einfach beides betonen.
15:06 Nwolf: k
15:06 Nwolf: weniger Noten yay \o/
15:07 Sala-: Sollen dann 01:11:674 - und 01:12:019 - noch ds haben?
15:07 Nwolf: 01:31:674 (1,1,1) - random hi-hat triplet ftw
15:07 Nwolf: ne das wär nicht gut für spread
15:08 Sala-: Hier auch doubles?
15:08 Sala-: Oder nur 01:31:760 - weg?
15:09 Nwolf: entweder doublets oder nur die 1/4 note weg und 01:31:501 (1) - zu nem kantan machen
15:10 Sala-: hab jetzt k d d k
15:13 Nwolf: 01:34:260 (1,1,1,1) - hier auch?
15:13 Sala-: Yes
15:15 Nwolf: 01:41:760 (1) - 01:42:105 (1) - würde ich hinter die kats verschieben
15:15 Nwolf: ich glaub das passt besser zur Musik
15:15 Nwolf: vielleicht als kkd damit es zum Rest der map passt
15:16 Sala-: Ich sehe mehr ddks tho :c
15:18 Nwolf: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3031184 würde besser zum piano passen imo
15:18 Sala-: True
15:24 Nwolf: ach moment
15:24 Nwolf: spread
15:24 Sala-: Also Stefan will das Piano nicht betonen
15:24 Nwolf: tut er da aber mit kats???
15:24 Nwolf: aber
15:24 Nwolf: 01:40:812 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2) - vergleich mal mit Muzu
15:26 Sala-: Ist nur schade um die Consistency
15:34 Nwolf: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3031253
15:36 Nwolf: 00:21:393 (1,1,1,1) - wegen der 1/4 addition, ich wäre okay wenn die don triplets bleiben aber das hier sollte K d K sein
15:37 Nwolf: ist immernoch eine Note mehr
15:37 Nwolf: (und auch das Letzte für den mod
15:37 Sala-: Hätte aber ganz gut zu 00:24:151 (1,1,1,1,1) - gepasst
15:38 Nwolf: das bereitet auf deinen Teil vor :P
15:38 Nwolf: oder man macht die big kats 00:15:876 (1,1) - hier weg
15:38 Sala-: Nah hab jetzt Ks gemacht
15:38 Nwolf: kk
15:39 Nwolf: daaaann kannst du Charlotte die .osu geben
15:39 Nwolf: C:
Nwolf
Double post ftw


Spread should be fine now.

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