Memme - Plasma Gun [OsuMania|CatchTheBeat] · forum

Kurokami

osu! Alumni

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Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2014-09-23T21:55:44+00:00

Oh crap, I still have to finish this. Anyway it looks like I have nothing to do in the next few days.

PatZar

3,079 posts

Joined March 2013

PatZar 2014-09-26T06:54:13+00:00

for ntr's overdose , use HP6
it's LIKE HP10 ;w;

and for rain GJ

no kd as always

because idiot mod from me

Sey

1,406 posts

Joined October 2010

Sey 2014-09-26T07:51:28+00:00

HP6 is too low for an Overdose and destroys the spread. Don't change it to that..
@Genocide: I saw you suggesting wrong spread settings more than once already. Use this as a guideline in future, please: t/151744

PatZar

3,079 posts

Joined March 2013

PatZar 2014-09-26T08:47:53+00:00

@sey, hp7.5 seems like hp10 on that diff @ @
and this t/170570 on Priti's Deluge HP is 6, and fine for me

Sey

1,406 posts

Joined October 2010

Sey 2014-09-26T09:04:52+00:00

Genocide wrote:
@sey, hp7.5 seems like hp10 on that diff @ @
and this t/170570 on Priti's Deluge HP is 6, and fine for me

Then better hand out some logic suggestions to make this difficulty suitable to HP 7,5 instead of just lowering it. This won't solve the actual problem in the difficulty itself. The HP spread needs to make sense with the previous HP's due to a proper spread going from low to high HP.

Why do you link an example of a beatmap that is in graveyard? This cannot be seen as any compare and the spread there is bad as well. For this map your argument is invalid.

Also you should be aware that any setup guideline for CTB isn't introduced for too long yet. It might be the case that very old CTB mapsets neglected this.

This discussion won't continue in this Thread. If you want to talk about this poke me ingame but leave the Thread as it is now, please.

Arzenvald

4,033 posts

Joined July 2013

Arzenvald 2014-09-28T10:04:44+00:00

http://puu.sh/bR28x.rar update with hitsound.. >w<

Gravey-

1,491 posts

Joined July 2013

Gravey- 2014-09-30T08:23:14+00:00

Hi MOD here as requested in my Queue~ (~*w*)~
[4K MOD]

|1|2|3|4|

Usagi's 4K NM

00:42:833 Add note to 1 (Pattern)
00:42:999 Add note to 3 (Pattern)

4K HD

00:03:666 (3666|2) - Move to 2 (Pattern)
00:10:333 Add note to 1
00:50:666 (50666|0) - Remove not necessary
00:56:499 Add note to 2

Nice map!
Good luck!~ =w=)b

Rinzler

766 posts

Joined November 2012

Rinzler 2014-09-30T13:53:35+00:00

Hi, mod requested from PM owo)/

Column Format
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

[Usagi's 4K NM]

SPOILER

00:05:666 (5666|2) - move to 4
00:07:666 (7666|2) - move to 4
00:07:833 (7833|3) - move to 3
00:07:999 (7999|2) - move to 4
^Alasan : Biar sama kaya pattern sebelumnya
00:56:166 - add note, ada beat

[4K HD]

SPOILER

00:23:666 (23666|0,23666|2,23833|0,23833|2) - why 2 notes ?
00:29:333 (29333|1) - move to 3

Great Map !
Good Luck for Rank ~

Ichigaki

1,767 posts

Joined February 2013

Topic Starter

Ichigaki 2014-09-30T15:07:31+00:00

ExUsagi tell me that i can answer the mod for him

[GraveChaos] wrote:
Hi MOD here as requested in my Queue~ (~*w*)~
[4K MOD]

|1|2|3|4|
Usagi's 4K NM
00:42:833 Add note to 1 (Pattern)
00:42:999 Add note to 3 (Pattern)
Denied all
4K HD
00:03:666 (3666|2) - Move to 2 (Pattern)
00:10:333 Add note to 1
00:50:666 (50666|0) - Remove not necessary
00:56:499 Add note to 2
Mostly fixed

Nice map!
Good luck!~ =w=)b

Thanks~

[-Rinzler-] wrote:
Hi, mod requested from PM owo)/

Column Format
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

[Usagi's 4K NM]
SPOILER
00:05:666 (5666|2) - move to 4
00:07:666 (7666|2) - move to 4
00:07:833 (7833|3) - move to 3
00:07:999 (7999|2) - move to 4
^Alasan : Biar sama kaya pattern sebelumnya
00:56:166 - add note, ada beat
Fixed all[/color]

[4K HD]
SPOILER
00:23:666 (23666|0,23666|2,23833|0,23833|2) - why 2 notes ? Only first 2 notes that changed
00:29:333 (29333|1) - move to 3 Moved

Great Map !
Good Luck for Rank ~

Thanks~

autofanboy

Elite Mapper / osu!trivium Champion

1,578 posts

Joined January 2011

autofanboy 2014-09-30T15:27:33+00:00

Yo!
Mod requested from AFB's CtB Modding Queue

[General]

The colors of the hitcircle/slider combos are confusing if the player enabled background. At opposite, the 3rd combo (black) is hard to view if the player turned off background. Therefore, change the colors of the combos.

[

Salad]

00:04:833 (1) - Remove NC and NC at 00:05:333 (2)
00:06:333 (1) - Remove NC
00:06:832 (1) - ^
00:07:666 - This part feels empty, so consider adding a note here to fill it up
00:09:333 (3,4) - Repeating the same pattern like 00:07:999 (1,2,3,4) for 4 times is pretty boring. Try to make (3,4) different from (1,2) to have more creativeness
00:10:666 (5) - (Suggestion) NC
00:13:333 (1) - I would like to see there is a jump after the previous combo (2) since it is the start of kiai time, so move 00:12:666 (2) to x:328 and 00:13:333 (1) to x:24 in order to create a little dash here
00:14:666 (3) - Move this to x:496 if you applied the previous mod
00:15:333 (4) - Move to x:240?
00:19:999 (1) - Remove NC and NC at 00:20:165 (2) instead
00:21:833 - Feeling empty right here after catching some triplets, recommended adding a note here
00:23:999 (1) - x:288
00:25:666 (3) - NC
00:29:333 (3) - ^
00:34:666 (1) - Move this note farther from the previous combo (3) in order to have a difference when a big stanza is completed
00:47:333 (6) - NC
00:47:999 (1) - Stacked with the previous note
00:52:666 (6,7) - Change these notes into triplets like you did in 00:47:333 (6,7) in order to keep consistency with them
00:56:916 (3,4,5) - Consider making it like *this

In my opinion some of the distances between notes are too big and patterns are a bit complicated.

[

Kuroichi's Platter]

00:03:499 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern is boring, consider adding a circle at 00:05:333
00:04:833 (5,6) - 1. If you applied the previous mod, NC 00:05:333; or 2. If you didn't apply the previous mod, NC 00:05:499 (6)
00:10:666 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern is too hard as a Platter, reduce the difficulty
00:17:999 (7) - NC
00:18:499 - Add a note here
00:23:166 (1) - Remove NC and NC at 00:23:499 (5)
00:29:249 (6) - Better not to break the stream here, move it to x:336

Platter is well-made, just some little issues.

[

Rain]

Consider HP 6.7 to set as a middle between Platter and Overdose
00:11:333 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Reduce the distance between them, this kind of streams should not require dash-holding, for me I would consider such patterns Overdose-like
00:15:499 - Add note, it is quite empty
00:16:666 (4,5) - *example
00:23:999 (8) - NC
00:28:166 (8) - ^
00:31:666 (1) - Remove NC and NC at 00:31:999 (2) instead
00:35:999 (5) - NC
00:38:666 (5) - ^
00:40:999 (3) - NC
00:42:249 (1) - Remove NC
00:45:166 (6) - x:144 to create a HDash before Kiai Time
00:50:749 (1,2,3,4) - *this would be a great idea
00:52:666 (3,4) - Move much farther until there are HDashes between triplets

So little patterns are made in the diff, try to create more patterns to apply in Rain.

Good luck for rank!
-AFB

Kurokami

osu! Alumni

4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2014-09-30T21:31:54+00:00

Seems like the other half of the Platter is missing. o.o Or you was just unable to suggest there something? :3

Ichigaki

1,767 posts

Joined February 2013

Topic Starter

Ichigaki 2014-10-04T10:29:05+00:00

alienflybot wrote:
Yo!
Mod requested from AFB's CtB Modding Queue

[General]
The colors of the hitcircle/slider combos are confusing if the player enabled background. At opposite, the 3rd combo (black) is hard to view if the player turned off background. Therefore, change the colors of the combos. Have any suggest for this?

[ Salad]
00:04:833 (1) - Remove NC and NC at 00:05:333 (2)
00:06:333 (1) - Remove NC
00:06:832 (1) - ^
00:07:666 - This part feels empty, so consider adding a note here to fill it up
00:09:333 (3,4) - Repeating the same pattern like 00:07:999 (1,2,3,4) for 4 times is pretty boring. Try to make (3,4) different from (1,2) to have more creativeness
00:10:666 (5) - (Suggestion) NC
00:13:333 (1) - I would like to see there is a jump after the previous combo (2) since it is the start of kiai time, so move 00:12:666 (2) to x:328 and 00:13:333 (1) to x:24 in order to create a little dash here
00:14:666 (3) - Move this to x:496 if you applied the previous mod
00:15:333 (4) - Move to x:240?
00:19:999 (1) - Remove NC and NC at 00:20:165 (2) instead
00:21:833 - Feeling empty right here after catching some triplets, recommended adding a note here
00:23:999 (1) - x:288
00:25:666 (3) - NC
00:29:333 (3) - ^
00:34:666 (1) - Move this note farther from the previous combo (3) in order to have a difference when a big stanza is completed
00:47:333 (6) - NC
00:47:999 (1) - Stacked with the previous note
00:52:666 (6,7) - Change these notes into triplets like you did in 00:47:333 (6,7) in order to keep consistency with them
00:56:916 (3,4,5) - Consider making it like *this

In my opinion some of the distances between notes are too big and patterns are a bit complicated. I'll a bit remap this soon

[ Kuroichi's Platter]
00:03:499 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern is boring, consider adding a circle at 00:05:333
00:04:833 (5,6) - 1. If you applied the previous mod, NC 00:05:333; or 2. If you didn't apply the previous mod, NC 00:05:499 (6)
00:10:666 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern is too hard as a Platter, reduce the difficulty
00:17:999 (7) - NC
00:18:499 - Add a note here
00:23:166 (1) - Remove NC and NC at 00:23:499 (5)
00:29:249 (6) - Better not to break the stream here, move it to x:336

Platter is well-made, just some little issues.

[ Rain]
Consider HP 6.7 to set as a middle between Platter and Overdose
00:11:333 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Reduce the distance between them, this kind of streams should not require dash-holding, for me I would consider such patterns Overdose-like
00:15:499 - Add note, it is quite empty
00:16:666 (4,5) - *example
00:23:999 (8) - NC
00:28:166 (8) - ^
00:31:666 (1) - Remove NC and NC at 00:31:999 (2) instead
00:35:999 (5) - NC
00:38:666 (5) - ^
00:40:999 (3) - NC
00:42:249 (1) - Remove NC
00:45:166 (6) - x:144 to create a HDash before Kiai Time
00:50:749 (1,2,3,4) - *this would be a great idea
00:52:666 (3,4) - Move much farther until there are HDashes between triplets

So little patterns are made in the diff, try to create more patterns to apply in Rain.

Good luck for rank!
-AFB

Thanks for your mod. I'm really really sorry that i forgot to answer your mod

, but srsly, i accepted nearly all mods from you

bank78952

bank78952 2014-10-05T10:34:06+00:00

Hi o/
from PM request :v
*you map is so really good i'll only mod if i can mod it
a few mod from me
[NTR8's Overdose]
00:11:999 (6) Finish at last of slider
00:13:416 move to 00:13:333
00:15:499 can add note here
00:39:999 (4) delete slider and add note here
00:48:749 can add note here
sorry for my mod is not help you
and here my star

*edit

rew0825

1,290 posts

Joined March 2013

rew0825 2014-10-08T10:55:38+00:00

Hi from my request

[

Salad]

00:46:499 (5) - x:328
00:46:666 (1) - x:424
00:52:999 (7) - move this tail to right
00:55:833 (4) - x:200
00:56:916 (3) - I'm not sure in Salad can hava Hdash if not , move to x:352

[

Kurokami's Platter]

00:10:666 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I'm think It's hard in Platter , Change to this
00:10:833 (2) - x:344
00:10:999 (3) - x:320
00:11:166 (4) - ctrl+g
00:19:666 (7) - move tail to left

[

Rain]

00:52:166 (1) - move tail to right

Good luck

Ichigaki

1,767 posts

Joined February 2013

Topic Starter

Ichigaki 2014-10-08T12:39:59+00:00

-B a n k- wrote:
Hi o/
from PM request :v
*you map is so really good i'll only mod if i can mod it
a few mod from me
[NTR8's Overdose]
00:11:999 (6) Finish at last of slider
00:13:416 move to 00:13:333
00:15:499 can add note here
00:39:999 (4) delete slider and add note here
00:48:749 can add note here
sorry for my mod is not help you
and here my star *edit

I'll applied this if NTR8 if can't do it

rew0825 wrote:
Hi from my request

[ Salad]
00:46:499 (5) - x:328
00:46:666 (1) - x:424
00:52:999 (7) - move this tail to right
00:55:833 (4) - x:200
00:56:916 (3) - I'm not sure in Salad can hava Hdash if not , move to x:352

[ Kurokami's Platter]
00:10:666 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I'm think It's hard in Platter , Change to this
00:10:833 (2) - x:344
00:10:999 (3) - x:320
00:11:166 (4) - ctrl+g
00:19:666 (7) - move tail to left

[ Rain]
00:52:166 (1) - move tail to right

Good luck

Applied all

Thanks everyone

Kurokami

osu! Alumni

4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2014-10-08T13:18:06+00:00

Kurokami's Platter? What...o.o Yhe Platter is a collab now and I own only the second half.

Ichigaki

1,767 posts

Joined February 2013

Topic Starter

Ichigaki 2014-10-08T13:40:22+00:00

Kurokami wrote:
Kurokami's Platter? What...o.o Yhe Platter is a collab now and I own only the second half.

Lol, maybe he forgot my nick :'(

StickyPicky

509 posts

Joined October 2012

StickyPicky 2014-10-08T14:04:16+00:00

-B a n k- wrote:
Hi o/
from PM request :v
*your map is really good i'll only mod if i can mod it
a few mod from me
[NTR8's Overdose]
00:11:999 (6) Finish at last of slider okie
00:13:416 move to 00:13:333 hmm nope
00:15:499 can add note here added
00:39:999 (4) delete slider and add note here okie
00:48:749 can add note here okie
sorry for my mod it might not help you
so here's my star *edit

thanks ~

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Plasmagun.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 13333
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.999999

[Metadata]
Title:Plasma Gun
TitleUnicode:Plasma Gun
Artist:Memme
ArtistUnicode:Memme
Creator:ichia7x
Version:NTR8's Overdose
Source:O2Jam U
Tags:[Shana_Lesus] Simple_Star ExUsagi Fullerene- lZenxl Kurokami newtoniorock8 collab
BeatmapID:501454
BeatmapSetID:173247

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7.5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:9
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.9
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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[Colours]
Combo1 : 29,29,29
Combo2 : 18,167,184
Combo3 : 148,165,248

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ArcherLove

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Joined March 2013

ArcherLove 2014-10-11T13:31:44+00:00

oh ready for last check, nothing to do here :u

GAMI

582 posts

Joined February 2014

GAMI 2014-10-24T00:06:53+00:00

maaf untuk sementara hanya rain doang, nti yang lain saya post

RAIN

Trying to use AR9 for speed bpm song, it's weird actually...(well like you editing std diff)

00:07:999 (1) - trying to make red jumps in here for beginning
00:12:666 (3,4,5,6) - ctrl+g
00:09:333 (3,4) - make a bit distance of it
00:17:166 (1,2,3,4) - red jumps please, it will make fun
00:29:083 (2,3,4) - streamnya agak jelek, usahain ganti wall stream
00:29:332 (1,2,3,4) - red jumps aja deh biar agak menyenangkan
00:34:499 (5) - buat agar lebih dekat
00:41:499 (9) - NC, make red jumps disini
00:40:999 (3) - ^
00:44:499 (2,3,4,5,6) - easy red jumps
00:47:333 (4,5) - ctrl+g

Ichigaki

1,767 posts

Joined February 2013

Topic Starter

Ichigaki 2014-10-24T00:28:22+00:00

Thanks for your mod

Manuxz

642 posts

Joined July 2012

Manuxz 2014-11-15T18:11:51+00:00

Hi ichia7x o.o/

Mod from: Manuxz's CTB & Standard Modding Queue OuO

Sorry for the delay uwu

Salad

00:04:333 (5) - Move at x:148 to improve the symmetry
00:07:666 (7) - Move at x:338 ^
00:08:499 (2) - Move at x:136 ^
00:10:749 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Personally I think you could improve the symmetry of this stream, although ... it is also just a whim of mine XD Anyway not bad
00:19:999 (8) - Feel that circle something away from 00:19:833 (7,1) - My recommendation is that you move (8) at x:485
00:25:666 (1,2,3) - Here symmetry has again failed u_u Move (1) at x:291, (2) x:206, (3) x:122
00:29:166 (2) - ORZ T_T Move at x:148 xd
00:34:666 (1) - Best in x:304
00:34:666 (1,2,3,4) - You could try this --> http://puu.sh/cRTDV/49c19624fd.jpg Maybe :p To give some variety
00:47:333 (1) - Ctrl+H and move at x:48 (The same place as before but improves the flow) :v

Kuroichi's Platter

00:14:999 (3) - Move at x:180 XD
00:21:333 (1,2,3) - Ctrl+H pls *-* It is so great XD
00:32:916 - Consider adding a circle here goes very well with the music
00:42:999 (2,3,4,5,6) - I think you should do the following. Deletes (2), (3) and add circle in 00:42:999 - then add a slider with reverse in 00:43:166 - . And maybe add circle in 00:43:583 -
00:47:999 (1,2) - You could try this --> http://puu.sh/cRUEe/e1a19e35f6.jpg
00:48:499 (3,4) - Here the same as above --> http://puu.sh/cRUIS/ff39bcbb1f.jpg

It is generally good, except that the last kiai almost everything is located on the right side of the grid which is not bad but maybe that could be changed.

Rain

Nice diff

NTR's Overdose

00:11:916 (6,1) - Try this that the tail of (6) finish in x:267, y:268 and move (1) at x:220 --> http://puu.sh/cRVMz/64271fc9ea.jpg xd

My humble contribution to your great Overdose NTR o3o

Good luck to the guys map :3

Ichigaki

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Joined February 2013

Topic Starter

Ichigaki 2014-11-15T21:09:58+00:00

Thanks a lot Manuxz, i'll reply later because i'm not in home right now~

EDIT : All mod in Salad and my part in Platter mostly applied. Thanks again~

Last edited by Ichigaki 2014-11-17T09:09:40+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Kurokami

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Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2014-11-15T23:48:20+00:00

Change the first part of Platter then poke me to make changes on my half. :3

Vhy

678 posts

Joined November 2012

Vhy 2014-11-19T10:12:44+00:00

...
...
kuro's diff is in everywhere!!

[Salad]
00:04:499 (6) - untuk section ini klo kmu bener2 ngikutin melody dari musik nya, harus nya note ini kmu taruh di 00:04:666 biar beat nya masuk. trus jgn lupa pattern nya d atur lg
00:07:499 (6,7) - swap posisi mreka jd slider dlu baru circle. klo d tanya knp ini agak susah ngejelasin nya dan mgkn kmu ga bakal ngerti. inti nya movement lebih bagus sih hue
00:17:166 (2,1) - oke ritme dsni kerasa sudden soal nya dr kmu bikin 1/1 slider 3x reverse ke 1/4 slider, plus kmu kasih distance yg lumayan. saran sih 00:17:166 (2) mending di pisah soal nya toh klo kbnykan reverse jd agak huehue gtu. trus klo kmu pengen pertahanin ritme 00:18:666 (1) seenggak nya kecilin lg distance nya jd 1.5x
00:20:666 (4) - kasih reverse? itu suara wiuwiu apalah masih kedengeran di 00:20:833 walaupun kecil
00:29:166 (2) - nazi but, x:136 biar ga terlalu mepet + kasih movement dikit ke note sesudah nya
00:34:666 (1) - try this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2255799
00:37:333 (1) - nah ini flow bisa lebih natural klo kmu bkin slider ini simpel ngarah ke kiri trus lekuk ke atas aja sih
00:38:833 (2,3,4,5,1) - mgkn bisa d bikin equal smua distance nya?
00:54:999 (2,3,4) - ini pattern kaya nya kurang layak buat salad deh. distance antara (2,3) trus bentuk slider yg (3) bikin agak susah ngebaca nya walaupun sbnr nya gmpg sih. tp untuk most beginner ini pattern bisa bkin random miss

oke di salad ini kmu kbnykan pake 1/4 slider plus reverse. lebih disarankan buat ganti mreka jd triplet searah kaya di 00:52:165 (2,3,4) biar ngga kerasa tertekan movement nya soal nya kbnykan 1/4 slider itu kmu apply di bagian continuous pattern kaya 00:51:333 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3). well inti nya bbrp di bagian itu seenggak nya bisa di improve dikit sih

[Kuroichi's Salad]
~~lol pls change the diff name cz it's too kawaii that i can't stand it hueee. i prefer the diff name like kamichi's salad. but wait, it's still too cute noooooo!!~~

ichia7x's part

cek AiMod itu ad 3 unsnapped slider tolong di fix
00:03:499 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - ritme ngga masuk ama musik nya. pattern cmn di bolak balik. apalagi untuk bagian awal gini rasanya terlalu ngebosenin. maaf yah tp saran ku ya klo bisa remap bagian ini c:
00:10:666 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - nah ini stream ngga suitable bgt ama platter. permasalahan nya di distance dari setiap slider itu lebih jauh kebanding dari panjang dari slider itu sndri. yg bikin lebih galau ya yg 00:10:999 (3,4,5) ini. solusi ku ya 00:10:666 (1,2,3,5,6,7) kmu ubah smua arah nya. klo emg setuju kmu bisa atur slider di 00:11:833 (8) sndri lah. oh ya jgn lupa NC nya di 00:11:333 (5) owo
00:21:999 (4,5) - ctrl+g tiap slider? improve dkit movement nya
00:27:666 (2) - x:376 buat kasih movement antara note sebelum dan sesudah

Kurokami's part

00:28:999 (3,4,5,6) - lol why you spam clap here. it does nothing to do with the song here.
00:39:666 (1) - separate this into circle first and then a 1/1 slider? i bet you know why :3

hmm kuro, im expecting the last kiai here to have a more movement. from what i found a big distance here is only a HDash but no jump till the end of the map. i mean from your kiai untill the end i can pass it without using any dash except for the red fruit. consider adding some jump and increase the distance of some triplet maybe?

[Rain]
00:03:333 (3,4) - swap di timeline? imo lebih masuk ritme nya kalo slider dlu
00:04:666 - kasih note dsni? kalo di bikin empty kerasa aneh aja
00:06:333 (5,6) - kasi HDash dsni soal nya kmu bisa denger suara melody lg high pitch di (6). pindah (6) ke x:480 sekalian biar kasih jump ke 00:06:833 (1)
00:07:667 (3) - jdiin lurus ke kanan trus pindah ke x:272 biar movemet nya balance
00:12:416 - kasih note dsni?
00:15:666 (6) - coba d pisah jd 2 note trus kasi HDash di note pertama soal nya high pitch di 00:15:833
00:16:166 (2) - x:232
00:20:999 (6,7) - HDash? alasan sama kaya 00:15:666 (6)
00:23:166 (3) - ctrl+h trus pindah ke x:256?
00:28:166 (1,2,3,4,1) - ok stream nya ngga natural sm skali soal nya kmu taruh 00:29:332 (1) di sebelah kiri (4). saran ya dipindah ke sebelah kanannya aja sih tp kaya nya ngga mgkn jg kmu bakal mindah 00:29:332 (1) soal nya dia simetri ama slider selanjutnya. coba dbkin kaya gini http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2255920
00:34:499 (5,1) - x:392, x:136
00:47:333 (4,5) - HDash ok2 aja dsni tp flow nya bkin galau bgt. tolong d bikin kaya 00:52:666 (3,4) pls
00:56:915 (3,4,5) - bkin HDash? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2255924

[NTR8's Overdose]
00:09:999 (3,4) - could you rotate them vertically more? the current is kinda quite wide for a straight stream after a HDash. well i dont really know wether they're easy or hard to catch for pros, but at least it reduce the difficultness a bit
00:10:999 (1) - oh wait. you misplaced this? shouln't this merged with 00:11:083 (1,2,3) instead? if so then remove the NC at 00:11:083 (1)
00:12:166 (1) - x:72?
00:12:666 (1) - remove the finish at end slider
00:13:333 - why you leave this empty? this is a big white tick as you know this is a new stanza and it's represent the new music begin here so yea it definitely need a note. and also to emphasize it, you can add a finish on this note and add a HDash on previous note
00:15:833 (4,1,2,3,4) - try this pattern instead? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2256048. it's good to keep having a movement at this section tho

the rest looks acceptable. and nice diff

good luck

Ichigaki

1,767 posts

Joined February 2013

Topic Starter

Ichigaki 2014-11-20T12:32:48+00:00

Vhy wrote:
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kuro's diff is in everywhere!!

[Salad]
00:04:499 (6) - untuk section ini klo kmu bener2 ngikutin melody dari musik nya, harus nya note ini kmu taruh di 00:04:666 biar beat nya masuk. trus jgn lupa pattern nya d atur lg
00:07:499 (6,7) - swap posisi mreka jd slider dlu baru circle. klo d tanya knp ini agak susah ngejelasin nya dan mgkn kmu ga bakal ngerti. inti nya movement lebih bagus sih hue
00:17:166 (2,1) - oke ritme dsni kerasa sudden soal nya dr kmu bikin 1/1 slider 3x reverse ke 1/4 slider, plus kmu kasih distance yg lumayan. saran sih 00:17:166 (2) mending di pisah soal nya toh klo kbnykan reverse jd agak huehue gtu. trus klo kmu pengen pertahanin ritme 00:18:666 (1) seenggak nya kecilin lg distance nya jd 1.5x
00:20:666 (4) - kasih reverse? itu suara wiuwiu apalah masih kedengeran di 00:20:833 walaupun kecil
00:29:166 (2) - nazi but, x:136 biar ga terlalu mepet + kasih movement dikit ke note sesudah nya
00:34:666 (1) - try this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2255799
00:37:333 (1) - nah ini flow bisa lebih natural klo kmu bkin slider ini simpel ngarah ke kiri trus lekuk ke atas aja sih
00:38:833 (2,3,4,5,1) - mgkn bisa d bikin equal smua distance nya?
00:54:999 (2,3,4) - ini pattern kaya nya kurang layak buat salad deh. distance antara (2,3) trus bentuk slider yg (3) bikin agak susah ngebaca nya walaupun sbnr nya gmpg sih. tp untuk most beginner ini pattern bisa bkin random miss

oke di salad ini kmu kbnykan pake 1/4 slider plus reverse. lebih disarankan buat ganti mreka jd triplet searah kaya di 00:52:165 (2,3,4) biar ngga kerasa tertekan movement nya soal nya kbnykan 1/4 slider itu kmu apply di bagian continuous pattern kaya 00:51:333 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3). well inti nya bbrp di bagian itu seenggak nya bisa di improve dikit sih

[Kuroichi's Salad]
~~lol pls change the diff name cz it's too kawaii that i can't stand it hueee. i prefer the diff name like kamichi's salad. but wait, it's still too cute noooooo!!~~

ichia7x's part

cek AiMod itu ad 3 unsnapped slider tolong di fix
00:03:499 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - ritme ngga masuk ama musik nya. pattern cmn di bolak balik. apalagi untuk bagian awal gini rasanya terlalu ngebosenin. maaf yah tp saran ku ya klo bisa remap bagian ini c:
00:10:666 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - nah ini stream ngga suitable bgt ama platter. permasalahan nya di distance dari setiap slider itu lebih jauh kebanding dari panjang dari slider itu sndri. yg bikin lebih galau ya yg 00:10:999 (3,4,5) ini. solusi ku ya 00:10:666 (1,2,3,5,6,7) kmu ubah smua arah nya. klo emg setuju kmu bisa atur slider di 00:11:833 (8) sndri lah. oh ya jgn lupa NC nya di 00:11:333 (5) owo
00:21:999 (4,5) - ctrl+g tiap slider? improve dkit movement nya
00:27:666 (2) - x:376 buat kasih movement antara note sebelum dan sesudah

[Rain]
00:03:333 (3,4) - swap di timeline? imo lebih masuk ritme nya kalo slider dlu
00:04:666 - kasih note dsni? kalo di bikin empty kerasa aneh aja
00:06:333 (5,6) - kasi HDash dsni soal nya kmu bisa denger suara melody lg high pitch di (6). pindah (6) ke x:480 sekalian biar kasih jump ke 00:06:833 (1)
00:07:667 (3) - jdiin lurus ke kanan trus pindah ke x:272 biar movemet nya balance
00:12:416 - kasih note dsni?
00:15:666 (6) - coba d pisah jd 2 note trus kasi HDash di note pertama soal nya high pitch di 00:15:833
00:16:166 (2) - x:232
00:20:999 (6,7) - HDash? alasan sama kaya 00:15:666 (6)
00:23:166 (3) - ctrl+h trus pindah ke x:256?
00:28:166 (1,2,3,4,1) - ok stream nya ngga natural sm skali soal nya kmu taruh 00:29:332 (1) di sebelah kiri (4). saran ya dipindah ke sebelah kanannya aja sih tp kaya nya ngga mgkn jg kmu bakal mindah 00:29:332 (1) soal nya dia simetri ama slider selanjutnya. coba dbkin kaya gini http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2255920
00:34:499 (5,1) - x:392, x:136
00:47:333 (4,5) - HDash ok2 aja dsni tp flow nya bkin galau bgt. tolong d bikin kaya 00:52:666 (3,4) pls
00:56:915 (3,4,5) - bkin HDash? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2255924

good luck

I don't need to answer this because your mod is mostly applied. ><

Kurokami

osu! Alumni

4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2014-11-20T13:04:03+00:00

I applied everything and changed the spacing during the kiai on Platter. File sent to ichia7x in-game.

StickyPicky

509 posts

Joined October 2012

StickyPicky 2014-11-20T13:26:31+00:00

Manuxz wrote:
NTR's Overdose

00:11:916 (6,1) - Try this that the tail of (6) finish in x:267, y:268 and move (1) at x:220 --> http://puu.sh/cRVMz/64271fc9ea.jpg xd moved tail of (6)

My humble contribution to your great Overdose NTR o3o

thanks `

Vhy wrote:
[NTR8's Overdose]
00:09:999 (3,4) - could you rotate them vertically more? the current is kinda quite wide for a straight stream after a HDash. well i dont really know wether they're easy or hard to catch for pros, but at least it reduce the difficultness a bit
00:10:999 (1) - oh wait. you misplaced this? shouln't this merged with 00:11:083 (1,2,3) instead? if so then remove the NC at 00:11:083 (1) fixed
00:12:166 (1) - x:72? moved at x:216
00:12:666 (1) - remove the finish at end slider okie
00:13:333 - why you leave this empty? this is a big white tick as you know this is a new stanza and it's represent the new music begin here so yea it definitely need a note. and also to emphasize it, you can add a finish on this note and add a HDash on previous note added note
00:15:833 (4,1,2,3,4) - try this pattern instead? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2256048. it's good to keep having a movement at this section tho

the rest looks acceptable. and nice diff

good luck

thanks `

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Creator:ichia7x
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Source:O2Jam U
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Badis

416 posts

Joined November 2010

Badis 2014-11-25T10:41:25+00:00

Hi o/ from my queue gonna mod rain and overdose one

NTR8's Overdose
Best run : 99.78 % , FC
excellent map I have a lot of pleasure to try it , but there is some part that might be changed thats why I'm here hue hue
00:04:166 (2) - closer to 3 please , thats a PAIN to catch that one
00:04:666 (1) - closer to 3 too , thats the limit and it need an excellent timing well thats a pain too

00:09:166 (1) - here is the transition between spacings , good idea but I think if X=512 it will be more clear and give moar intensity :p
00:13:666 (4) - a little little little little little little litte...closer to 5 and its perfect

00:12:666 (1) - I think it should be smaller but thats a detail in my opinion ^^
the refrain is so good I feel the difficulty the technique the intensity , well job mate
00:23:166 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - I think this part is too chaotic in my opinion , what about something like this ? : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2277245
00:24:999 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - spacings , yay c:
00:27:666 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacings...ok whatever
00:30:500 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - spacings...oh dude thats too repetitive :c (I think you get it the issue lel )
00:33:999 (4) - closer to 3 please , but not too much for the flow

00:34:333 (3,4,5,6,7) - isn't enough clean , distance between circles aren't equal each other or maybe its in purpose I don't know
00:36:666 (3,4) - I think the flow is better like this

00:39:666 (3) - should be smaller , requires a excellent precision there I don't really like it
00:40:166 - lack a circle there
00:49:999 (7) - what about same X as 5 ?

00:51:166 (1,2,3) - closer to 4
00:51:999 (2,3,4,5) - I don't find it very clean meh
00:56:333 (3) - closer to 2 thats a important HD should be catched easily

Rain
Nothing important I noticed thats really a good diff there in my opinion thats already ready for ranking
BUT , I think some HR master will try to fc this on hardrock , I tried with my modest skill and this is what I got
http://puu.sh/d4P1y/998736e699.osr
I suggest you to change some part to make the pattern less ridiculous on hardrock

Thats all I have to say

bye o/

Zan-

1,589 posts

Joined February 2012

Zan- 2014-11-29T00:36:27+00:00

from my queue

click

[Usagi's NM]
00:49:166 (49166|0) - move to 2
00:51:666 (51666|2,51999|1) - move to left by 1 coloumn
00:56:166 (56166|0) - move to 2

[7K NM]
really. good.

[4K HD]
00:11:999 - add note
00:12:333 - ^

not really suggested:
00:43:666 - add note to 3
00:43:749 - add note to 4
:U

[Shana's 7K HD]
it hould be HD+++

[Fullerene's 4K MX]
00:13:333 (13333|2) - move to 2

[7K MX]
00:33:083 (33083|5) - move to 4

[Kuroichi's Platter]
i only can FC this :U

SPOILER

gl~

Skalim

311 posts

Joined December 2012

Skalim 2014-11-30T15:40:36+00:00

Hi ^^, Mod by request.

[General]
BPM: OK
Offset: OK
AImod: OK
Song Setup: Optional Widescreen Support

Column: 1-2-3-4-5-6-7

[Usagi's 4K NM]
00:19:833 (19833|3) - erase this, unnecesary jack for the pitch
00:19:666 - add 1 note for follow the pattern of behind

[4K HD]
00:19:166 (19166|1) - why that jack? move?
00:19:499 (19499|2) - ^
00:19:833 (19833|1) - ^ move to 1° i think
00:20:833 (20833|0) - ^
00:35:416 - add 1 note, here continue the stream
00:35:583 - ^

[Fullerene's 4K MX]
No issues for now

[S.Star's 4K SHD]
00:17:583 - add 1 note in 2° column, i feel a stream sound here
00:17:666 (17666|1) - move this to 3° column

[7K NM]
No issues for the moment

[Shana's 7K HD]
00:17:999 - i suggest add 1 note here, strong pitch here
00:47:333 - you can perfectly add 1 note here, same sound what the next pattern
00:47:833 (47833|4) - move to the 3° column and add 1 note in 1° column

[7K MX]
00:15:499 - add 1 note in 2° column like the patterns of behind
00:15:583 (15583|2) - unnecessary note, no sound here
00:15:833 (15833|1) - move to the 1° column
00:20:166 (20166|1) - move to 3° columnpor jack pitch
00:45:833 (45833|0) - move to the 2° column
00:45:666 (45666|1) - move to the 3° column for no make interference with the next pattern

[lZenxl's 7K SHD]
00:13:833 (13833|1,13833|0) - move all 1 right for jack pitch
00:13:916 (13916|2,13916|3) - move all 1 left, ^

ok i think is all for now, a short mod for a short map ^^
Remember, a mod is just a suggerence

Deep Sea

1,947 posts

Joined June 2013

Deep Sea 2014-11-30T15:45:01+00:00

Skalim wrote:
Hi ^^, Mod by request.

[General]
BPM: OK
Offset: OK
AImod: OK
Song Setup: Optional Widescreen Support
Column: 1-2-3-4-5-6-7
[Usagi's 4K NM]
00:19:833 (19833|3) - erase this, unnecesary jack for the pitch
00:19:666 - add 1 note for follow the pattern of behind

[4K HD]
00:19:166 (19166|1) - why that jack? move?
00:19:499 (19499|2) - ^
00:19:833 (19833|1) - ^ move to 1° i think
00:20:833 (20833|0) - ^
00:35:416 - add 1 note, here continue the stream
00:35:583 - ^

[Fullerene's 4K MX]
No issues for now

[S.Star's 4K SHD]
00:17:583 - add 1 note in 2° column, i feel a stream sound here
00:17:666 (17666|1) - move this to 3° column

[7K NM]
No issues for the moment

[Shana's 7K HD]
00:17:999 - i suggest add 1 note here, strong pitch here
00:47:333 - you can perfectly add 1 note here, same sound what the next pattern
00:47:833 (47833|4) - move to the 3° column and add 1 note in 1° column

[7K MX]
00:15:499 - add 1 note in 2° column like the patterns of behind
00:15:583 (15583|2) - unnecessary note, no sound here
00:15:833 (15833|1) - move to the 1° column
00:20:166 (20166|1) - move to 3° columnpor jack pitch
00:45:833 (45833|0) - move to the 2° column
00:45:666 (45666|1) - move to the 3° column for no make interference with the next pattern

[lZenxl's 7K SHD]
00:13:833 (13833|1,13833|0) - move all 1 right for jack pitch
00:13:916 (13916|2,13916|3) - move all 1 left, ^

ok i think is all for now, a short mod for a short map ^^
Remember, a mod is just a suggerence

All fixed, Thanks

Update

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AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 13333
Countdown: 0
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Bruce

1,076 posts

Joined January 2013

Bruce 2014-12-14T15:36:33+00:00

Skalim wrote:
Hi ^^, Mod by request.

[S.Star's 4K SHD]
00:17:583 - add 1 note in 2° column, i feel a stream sound here
00:17:666 (17666|1) - move this to 3° column All ok

ok i think is all for now, a short mod for a short map ^^
Remember, a mod is just a suggerence

Thanks Skalim~

Arzenvald

4,033 posts

Joined July 2013

Arzenvald 2014-12-14T15:41:00+00:00

omg sorry for really long delay

Skalim wrote:
Hi ^^, Mod by request.

[General]
BPM: OK
Offset: OK
AImod: OK
Song Setup: Optional Widescreen Support // lemme ichi handle this
Column: 1-2-3-4-5-6-7
[Usagi's 4K NM]
00:19:833 (19833|3) - erase this, unnecesary jack for the pitch
00:19:666 - add 1 note for follow the pattern of behind

// all done

ok i think is all for now, a short mod for a short map ^^
Remember, a mod is just a suggerence

thanks uncle.. ;w; oh man when you'll able to play with us again.. ;w;

Zan - wrote:
from my queue

[Usagi's NM]
00:49:166 (49166|0) - move to 2
00:51:666 (51666|2,51999|1) - move to left by 1 coloumn
00:56:166 (56166|0) - move to 2
// no change at all.. ^^;

gl~

thanks guys!

Blocko

osu! Alumni

742 posts

Joined February 2014

Blocko 2014-12-14T21:41:34+00:00

Yo, ichi!
Sorry for the 2 1/2 week delay, but here's my mod as requested.

[General]
OK!

4K Column wrote:
1|2|3|4

[Usagi's 4K NM]
00:11:999 (11999|1) - Move to 1 for a better pattern flow
00:39:999 - Add a note here for the kick
00:49:166 (49166|0) - Move to 2, same reason as above
00:55:999 to 00:57:333 - Pattern suggestion: http://puu.sh/duMcQ/4dda6f39ba.jpg This incorporates the kicks/finishes with the claps as a < and > pattern for the left and right hand.

[4K HD]
00:15:999 (15999|3) - Move to 2 for the instrument's pitch
00:18:166 (18166|3) - Move to 2 for comfortability
00:23:833 (23833|0) - ^
00:31:499 (31499|0) - ^
00:50:833 (50833|2) - ^

[Fullerene's 4K MX]
- Couldn't really find anything to suggest but one.
00:32:833 (32833|3) - Move to 3 so it feels like the pattern is going down with the pitch.

[S.Star's 4K SHD]
00:19:833 (19833|0) - Move to 2 for a better pattern synergy
00:35:499 (35499|0) - Move to 3, same reason as above
00:44:499 (44499|2) - Move to 1 so the 3rd column doesn't act as a 'pseudo mini-jack' or something along those lines
00:52:999 (52999|3) - A 4-chord might be a bit much based on density. Remove?

7K Column wrote:
1|2|3|4|5|6|7

[7K NM]
00:04:166 (4166|0,4333|3,4499|6) - Ctrl + H for the pitch
00:20:999 (20999|6) - Move to 6 for a better flow of pattern
00:32:666 (32666|6) - Remove? You didn't have 2-chord kicks up until this point.

[Shana's 7K HD]
- This mod is mostly about fixing some chord inconsistencies in the map. You're free to apply or deny any these.
00:17:999 - Add a note here for the kick
00:18:666 - Add a note here (preferably at 7) to emphasize the crash
00:19:999 - Add note here for crash
00:21:333 - Same suggestion as above
00:21:999 - And another here
00:22:666 - And here
00:45:333 - Here, too
00:47:833 (47833|4) - Move to 3 since you didn't have a mini-jack earlier
00:50:499 (50499|3) - Move to 7 to avoid shielding and to represent the pitch better
00:51:499 (51499|0) - Move to 2 for comfortability
00:53:333 - Add note on 7 for the crash

[7K MX]
00:05:497 (5497|1,5499|1) - Remove 1 note here for obvious reasons (stacked notes). Also, snap 'em back up.
00:15:666 (15666|2) - Move to 4, the mini-jack doesn't really connect with the sound heard here.
00:28:333 (28333|4,28666|6) - Move both to 6 for a better flow in pattern
00:34:999 (34999|5) - Move to 5 for comfortability
00:45:666 (45666|5) - Move to 4, same reason as above
00:45:833 (45833|0,45916|1) - You could turn this into a mini-jack since it'll match the sound heard quite well.

[lZenxl's 7K SHD]
00:04:999 - Maybe you could add a note at 4 so it can act as a kick. Same suggestion on 00:05:333 -
00:18:666 - Add one note here for the crash
00:21:333 - Same suggestion as above
00:23:999 - Here, too
00:24:499 - Add a note for the kick. Same goes for 00:26:666 - and 00:27:166 - and 00:29:333 - and 00:29:833 -
00:45:333 - Add one note here for the crash
00:47:999 - On here as well
00:56:666 (56666|4,56666|5,56749|1,56749|2,56833|5,56833|4,56916|2,56916|1,56999|5,56999|4) - Ctrl + H so it acts like it's reversing roles for the left and right hand

Mod's kinda short for each diffs, but I hope it helps!
Good luck.

Bruce

1,076 posts

Joined January 2013

Bruce 2014-12-15T09:13:49+00:00

Blocko wrote:
Yo, ichi!
Sorry for the 2 1/2 week delay, but here's my mod as requested.

[General]
OK!

4K Column wrote:
1|2|3|4
[S.Star's 4K SHD]
00:19:833 (19833|0) - Move to 2 for a better pattern synergy
00:35:499 (35499|0) - Move to 3, same reason as above
00:44:499 (44499|2) - Move to 1 so the 3rd column doesn't act as a 'pseudo mini-jack' or something along those lines All ok
00:52:999 (52999|3) - A 4-chord might be a bit much based on density. Remove? Make a little change

Mod's kinda short for each diffs, but I hope it helps!
Good luck.

Thanks mod

Change: http://puu.sh/dvsXV/a9275329dc.osu

Deep Sea

1,947 posts

Joined June 2013

Deep Sea 2014-12-17T11:33:55+00:00

Thanks for mod Blocko, all fixed

Update

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Plasmagun.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 13333
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 3
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
SpecialStyle: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.11
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1.999999

[Metadata]
Title:Plasma Gun
TitleUnicode:Plasma Gun
Artist:Memme
ArtistUnicode:Memme
Creator:Ichigaki
Version:Shana's 7K HD
Source:O2Jam U
Tags:ichia7x [Shana_Lesus] Simple_Star ExUsagi Fullerene- lZenxl Kurokami newtoniorock8 collab
BeatmapID:452124
BeatmapSetID:173247

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:7
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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//Storyboard Sound Samples
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Kamikaze

2,898 posts

Joined November 2012

Kamikaze 2014-12-23T20:16:04+00:00

/late

THOSE WHO REQUEST SHALL GET THEIR SALVATION

General outline of what my mods contain:
>My thoughts about mapset
>Some advices
>Harsh opinions about map if I feel like it needs more work
>Complaining about mapstyle (sometimes even shouting)
>Commenting on 90% of things I mention
>Funny maymay arrows
>w33d
>Random images
>All the bad shit you may not expect
Keep in mind that all harsh things I say, not because I hate stuff, but because I care about every single map I mod and want to help you get it ranked. I'm voicing all of my opinions without restraint. Please don't rage at me because of this, I don't mean to offend you in any way. Also do note that I'm still learning, so I might misunderstand some things. and I'm terrible at naming instruments orz

Unrankable stuff
Highly recommended various stuff
Rest of shite

Post for reference with "linear spread" thing I mention

4K

why do you hurt me

Columns are: |1|2|3|4|

[Tertel's NM]
=w=)b

00:02:999 - Why do you map that tick every 4/1 instead of 2/1 (for example 00:03:666 - missing)? I'd say to delete all of those since it's a beginning and would be better if kept simple (notes in question: 00:02:999 (2999|0,4333|0,5666|3,7666|3) - )
00:08:333 (8333|2,9666|2) - Those LN's fit better into map's flow as normal notes or 2-chords
00:10:833 - Add here
00:11:499 - Add here
00:11:999 - This fits better with actual sounds imo:

00:22:499 (22499|3,22833|2,23166|1,23499|0) - Those LN's feel 1/2 too early for some reason
00:24:499 - Add on 3rd for bass
00:34:999 (34999|3,35333|1) - Notes like these with LN's on NM? Imo it's too confusing to catch
00:44:166 (44166|3) - end on 00:44:833 -
00:45:999 - Kick or something
00:48:666 - ^
00:51:333 - ^

[HD]
HP 7,5
That's a steep jump from NM. 1,38 stars from it in fact. Also since MX is 4,15, you'd need to make this HD around 3,1 star to make spread linear and rankable
Object isn't snapped! 00:05:000
Object isn't snapped! 00:05:167

00:11:249 - Why sudden stop in 1/4? It's still going on
00:11:583 - ^
00:34:833 - Technically this 1/4 stream should start here. Also since you'll have to nerf it a little I suggest following:
1) Either remove any doubles in this stream
2) Or nerf it completely and add some LN's
00:46:333 (46333|1,46416|0,46499|2,46583|1) - No need to LN those, change to normal notes

[thesaltmemeguy's MX]
where's my reference chart you fag
Hitsounds are kinda broken, fix that

Dude nice ~~meme~~ chart, nothing wrong to my eye

[S.Star's MX]
Boost HP to 8,5 maybe? It's quite short song so it won't really hurt

00:23:583 (23583|3,23583|2,23666|1,23666|0) - Wouldn't it be better to Ctrl+H this? Seems a bit weird now
00:47:999 (47999|2,47999|3,48083|0,48083|1,48166|2,48166|3) - This needs Ctrl+H tho, 00:47:999 (47999|2,47999|3) - isn't the same as 00:47:916 (47916|2,47916|3) -. Optionally you could do something like this:

00:49:499 (49499|0,49499|1,49583|0,49583|1,49666|3,49666|2) - Consider Ctrl+H on this for better hand ballance
00:49:833 (49833|1,49833|3,49916|1,49916|3,49999|0,49999|2) - If you accept this^ then Ctrl+H this for keeping the flow
00:55:749 - Add here

7K

ayyy lmoa

Columns are: |1|2|3|4|5|6|7

[NM]
00:06:999 (6999|1,7166|2) - Whistles?
00:07:833 (7833|4) - ^
00:43:666 - This maybe?

00:44:833 - Add on 4th for faint bass
00:52:666 - I think it's be better/easier to read as stairs - first being 765 and second being 123 or something like that

[Shana-nyan's HD]
Whoopsy ayyyy lmoa

Same issue as 4K, jump from NM is almost 1,6 star and you have next diff just 0,6 higher. That means you'll have to nerf this diff to around 3,1-3,2 star in order to get a linear spread which is really what you need to rank this.

00:03:999 (3999|0) - I see your idea for keeping pattern on one side, but putting this on 5th will make this pattern flow smoother
00:13:583 (13583|2) - Delete //For all suggestions on this sound: I know it's there, but it's a very little sound and I think it'll be better if you keep rhythm with next triplet in HD diff. Just easier to understand for players
00:16:249 (16249|3) - ^
00:18:749 - Trill is prolonged rather forcefully to my eye. This would be better to play imo:

00:25:499 - Missed a few synths there
00:45:583 (45583|2) - Delete
00:48:249 (48249|2) - Delete
00:50:916 (50916|2) - ^
00:52:666 (52666|4,52999|2) - Imo those LN's are ruining the little double stair pattern. Delete them and make stair more spaced, to make them better to play
00:53:583 (53583|2) - Delete

[MX]
Object isn't snapped! 00:23:250
Again, star diff progression is quite bad and considering that SHD is indeed much harder here, you should boost this diff by 0,2 stars

For some reason I don't want to touch this diff ;A;

[xXx_-w33d-_Z3NX3R1N0_-420-_xXx SHD]
The amount of $w3g in this is as expected quite high

whoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooopsy

I'll focus on density and consistency on intruments since ExPew said it's the main/only reason your maps are sometimes considered unrankable
00:02:666 - 5 is a bit much, nerf it to 3
00:10:749 - Missed a thing, dunno if intentional, but should be added
00:17:333 - I feel like those beats are a lil' bit overchorded, just normal bass here
00:34:666 - This part is what I don't like about this map. The repetition is fine until you get to 4th, 5th time it's repeated and it repeats itself 8 times. Add more variety in this part //I admit that this is my personal feedback and this fits technically, but I think that it's very painful for players and needs revising
00:42:666 - Nerf to 4 or 5 chords (counting LN's as normal notes since they're basically taps) and add some variation in them //Example below

00:53:833 (53833|6,53833|1,53833|0,53833|5,53916|1,53916|0,53916|5,53916|6) - Only jack in this section lol, to be honest I think you should do more of them on this sound, fits a bit better than what you currently have
00:56:166 (56166|5,56166|4,56249|1,56249|2,56333|4,56333|5) - Ctrl+H

Good luck! o/

Deep Sea

1,947 posts

Joined June 2013

Deep Sea 2014-12-23T22:46:32+00:00

All fixed, thanks for mod Kaminyan

Update

osu file format v13

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 13333
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 3
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SpecialStyle: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1.999999

[Metadata]
Title:Plasma Gun
TitleUnicode:Plasma Gun
Artist:Memme
ArtistUnicode:Memme
Creator:Ichigaki
Version:Shana's 7K HD
Source:O2Jam U
Tags:ichia7x [Shana_Lesus] Simple_Star ExUsagi Fullerene- lZenxl Kurokami newtoniorock8 collab
BeatmapID:452124
BeatmapSetID:173247

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Evening

2,464 posts

Joined December 2012

Evening 2014-12-24T13:52:59+00:00

-Kamikaze- wrote:
/late

THOSE WHO REQUEST SHALL GET THEIR SALVATION

General outline of what my mods contain:
>My thoughts about mapset
>Some advices
>Harsh opinions about map if I feel like it needs more work
>Complaining about mapstyle (sometimes even shouting)
>Commenting on 90% of things I mention
>Funny maymay arrows
>w33d
>Random images
>All the bad shit you may not expect
Keep in mind that all harsh things I say, not because I hate stuff, but because I care about every single map I mod and want to help you get it ranked. I'm voicing all of my opinions without restraint. Please don't rage at me because of this, I don't mean to offend you in any way. Also do note that I'm still learning, so I might misunderstand some things. and I'm terrible at naming instruments orz

Unrankable stuff
Highly recommended various stuff
Rest of shite

Post for reference with "linear spread" thing I mention

4K
why do you hurt me
Columns are: |1|2|3|4|

[Tertel's NM]
=w=)b

00:02:999 - Why do you map that tick every 4/1 instead of 2/1 (for example 00:03:666 - missing)? I'd say to delete all of those since it's a beginning and would be better if kept simple (notes in question: 00:02:999 (2999|0,4333|0,5666|3,7666|3) - )
00:08:333 (8333|2,9666|2) - Those LN's fit better into map's flow as normal notes or 2-chords
00:10:833 - Add here
00:11:499 - Add here
00:11:999 - This fits better with actual sounds imo:

00:22:499 (22499|3,22833|2,23166|1,23499|0) - Those LN's feel 1/2 too early for some reason
00:24:499 - Add on 3rd for bass
00:34:999 (34999|3,35333|1) - Notes like these with LN's on NM? Imo it's too confusing to catch
00:44:166 (44166|3) - end on 00:44:833 -
00:45:999 - Kick or something
00:48:666 - ^
00:51:333 - ^

[HD]
HP 7,5
That's a steep jump from NM. 1,38 stars from it in fact. Also since MX is 4,15, you'd need to make this HD around 3,1 star to make spread linear and rankable
Object isn't snapped! 00:05:000
Object isn't snapped! 00:05:167

00:11:249 - Why sudden stop in 1/4? It's still going on
00:11:583 - ^
00:34:833 - Technically this 1/4 stream should start here. Also since you'll have to nerf it a little I suggest following:
1) Either remove any doubles in this stream
2) Or nerf it completely and add some LN's
00:46:333 (46333|1,46416|0,46499|2,46583|1) - No need to LN those, change to normal notes

[thesaltmemeguy's MX]
where's my reference chart you fag
Hitsounds are kinda broken, fix that

Dude nice ~~meme~~ chart, nothing wrong to my eye

[S.Star's MX]
Boost HP to 8,5 maybe? It's quite short song so it won't really hurt

00:23:583 (23583|3,23583|2,23666|1,23666|0) - Wouldn't it be better to Ctrl+H this? Seems a bit weird now
00:47:999 (47999|2,47999|3,48083|0,48083|1,48166|2,48166|3) - This needs Ctrl+H tho, 00:47:999 (47999|2,47999|3) - isn't the same as 00:47:916 (47916|2,47916|3) -. Optionally you could do something like this:

00:49:499 (49499|0,49499|1,49583|0,49583|1,49666|3,49666|2) - Consider Ctrl+H on this for better hand ballance
00:49:833 (49833|1,49833|3,49916|1,49916|3,49999|0,49999|2) - If you accept this^ then Ctrl+H this for keeping the flow
00:55:749 - Add here

7K
ayyy lmoa
Columns are: |1|2|3|4|5|6|7

[NM]
00:06:999 (6999|1,7166|2) - Whistles?
00:07:833 (7833|4) - ^
00:43:666 - This maybe?

00:44:833 - Add on 4th for faint bass
00:52:666 - I think it's be better/easier to read as stairs - first being 765 and second being 123 or something like that

[Shana-nyan's HD]
Whoopsy ayyyy lmoa

Same issue as 4K, jump from NM is almost 1,6 star and you have next diff just 0,6 higher. That means you'll have to nerf this diff to around 3,1-3,2 star in order to get a linear spread which is really what you need to rank this.

00:03:999 (3999|0) - I see your idea for keeping pattern on one side, but putting this on 5th will make this pattern flow smoother
00:13:583 (13583|2) - Delete //For all suggestions on this sound: I know it's there, but it's a very little sound and I think it'll be better if you keep rhythm with next triplet in HD diff. Just easier to understand for players
00:16:249 (16249|3) - ^
00:18:749 - Trill is prolonged rather forcefully to my eye. This would be better to play imo:

00:25:499 - Missed a few synths there
00:45:583 (45583|2) - Delete
00:48:249 (48249|2) - Delete
00:50:916 (50916|2) - ^
00:52:666 (52666|4,52999|2) - Imo those LN's are ruining the little double stair pattern. Delete them and make stair more spaced, to make them better to play
00:53:583 (53583|2) - Delete

[MX]
Object isn't snapped! 00:23:250
Again, star diff progression is quite bad and considering that SHD is indeed much harder here, you should boost this diff by 0,2 stars

For some reason I don't want to touch this diff ;A;

[xXx_-w33d-_Z3NX3R1N0_-420-_xXx SHD]
The amount of $w3g in this is as expected quite high

whoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooopsy

I'll focus on density and consistency on intruments since ExPew said it's the main/only reason your maps are sometimes considered unrankable ayy lmao
00:02:666 - 5 is a bit much, nerf it to 3 i think i'll just nerf to 4, 3 is like eeeh
00:10:749 - Missed a thing, dunno if intentional, but should be added oks fixed
00:17:333 - I feel like those beats are a lil' bit overchorded, just normal bass here nerfed that shit
00:34:666 - This part is what I don't like about this map. The repetition is fine until you get to 4th, 5th time it's repeated and it repeats itself 8 times. Add more variety in this part //I admit that this is my personal feedback and this fits technically, but I think that it's very painful for players and needs revising Hi i realised this pattern is actually disgusting now, i honestly don't know why i mapped this lel ( no sarcarsm btw )
Remapped this whole shit so it's like LN omg short lns hnnng
00:42:666 - Nerf to 4 or 5 chords (counting LN's as normal notes since they're basically taps) and add some variation in them //Example below
i think my pattern here is abit stupid, remapped this into 3 note jacks
00:53:833 (53833|6,53833|1,53833|0,53833|5,53916|1,53916|0,53916|5,53916|6) - Only jack in this section lol, to be honest I think you should do more of them on this sound, fits a bit better than what you currently have Added 2 more jacks in this section and redid some patterns also so they play better
00:56:166 (56166|5,56166|4,56249|1,56249|2,56333|4,56333|5) - Ctrl+H conflicts with brocko's mod lmao, didn't actually ctrl h this though
Good luck! o/

Blocko wrote:
Yo, ichi!
Sorry for the 2 1/2 week delay, but here's my mod as requested.

[General]
OK!

4K Column wrote:
1|2|3|4
[Usagi's 4K NM]
00:11:999 (11999|1) - Move to 1 for a better pattern flow
00:39:999 - Add a note here for the kick
00:49:166 (49166|0) - Move to 2, same reason as above
00:55:999 to 00:57:333 - Pattern suggestion: http://puu.sh/duMcQ/4dda6f39ba.jpg This incorporates the kicks/finishes with the claps as a < and > pattern for the left and right hand.

[4K HD]
00:15:999 (15999|3) - Move to 2 for the instrument's pitch
00:18:166 (18166|3) - Move to 2 for comfortability
00:23:833 (23833|0) - ^
00:31:499 (31499|0) - ^
00:50:833 (50833|2) - ^

[Fullerene's 4K MX]
- Couldn't really find anything to suggest but one.
00:32:833 (32833|3) - Move to 3 so it feels like the pattern is going down with the pitch.

[S.Star's 4K SHD]
00:19:833 (19833|0) - Move to 2 for a better pattern synergy
00:35:499 (35499|0) - Move to 3, same reason as above
00:44:499 (44499|2) - Move to 1 so the 3rd column doesn't act as a 'pseudo mini-jack' or something along those lines
00:52:999 (52999|3) - A 4-chord might be a bit much based on density. Remove?

7K Column wrote:
1|2|3|4|5|6|7
[7K NM]
00:04:166 (4166|0,4333|3,4499|6) - Ctrl + H for the pitch
00:20:999 (20999|6) - Move to 6 for a better flow of pattern
00:32:666 (32666|6) - Remove? You didn't have 2-chord kicks up until this point.

[Shana's 7K HD]
- This mod is mostly about fixing some chord inconsistencies in the map. You're free to apply or deny any these.
00:17:999 - Add a note here for the kick
00:18:666 - Add a note here (preferably at 7) to emphasize the crash
00:19:999 - Add note here for crash
00:21:333 - Same suggestion as above
00:21:999 - And another here
00:22:666 - And here
00:45:333 - Here, too
00:47:833 (47833|4) - Move to 3 since you didn't have a mini-jack earlier
00:50:499 (50499|3) - Move to 7 to avoid shielding and to represent the pitch better
00:51:499 (51499|0) - Move to 2 for comfortability
00:53:333 - Add note on 7 for the crash

[7K MX]
00:05:497 (5497|1,5499|1) - Remove 1 note here for obvious reasons (stacked notes). Also, snap 'em back up.
00:15:666 (15666|2) - Move to 4, the mini-jack doesn't really connect with the sound heard here.
00:28:333 (28333|4,28666|6) - Move both to 6 for a better flow in pattern
00:34:999 (34999|5) - Move to 5 for comfortability
00:45:666 (45666|5) - Move to 4, same reason as above
00:45:833 (45833|0,45916|1) - You could turn this into a mini-jack since it'll match the sound heard quite well.

[lZenxl's 7K SHD]
00:04:999 - Maybe you could add a note at 4 so it can act as a kick. Same suggestion on 00:05:333 -
00:18:666 - Add one note here for the crash
00:21:333 - Same suggestion as above
00:23:999 - Here, too
00:24:499 - Add a note for the kick. Same goes for 00:26:666 - and 00:27:166 - and 00:29:333 - and 00:29:833 -
00:45:333 - Add one note here for the crash
00:47:999 - On here as well
00:56:666 (56666|4,56666|5,56749|1,56749|2,56833|5,56833|4,56916|2,56916|1,56999|5,56999|4) - Ctrl + H so it acts like it's reversing roles for the left and right hand Err did everything, do i have to reply to everything ( i like adding notes c: )

Mod's kinda short for each diffs, but I hope it helps!
Good luck.

Skalim wrote:
Hi ^^, Mod by request.

[General]
BPM: OK
Offset: OK
AImod: OK
Song Setup: Optional Widescreen Support
Column: 1-2-3-4-5-6-7
[Usagi's 4K NM]
00:19:833 (19833|3) - erase this, unnecesary jack for the pitch
00:19:666 - add 1 note for follow the pattern of behind

[4K HD]
00:19:166 (19166|1) - why that jack? move?
00:19:499 (19499|2) - ^
00:19:833 (19833|1) - ^ move to 1° i think
00:20:833 (20833|0) - ^
00:35:416 - add 1 note, here continue the stream
00:35:583 - ^

[Fullerene's 4K MX]
No issues for now

[S.Star's 4K SHD]
00:17:583 - add 1 note in 2° column, i feel a stream sound here
00:17:666 (17666|1) - move this to 3° column

[7K NM]
No issues for the moment

[Shana's 7K HD]
00:17:999 - i suggest add 1 note here, strong pitch here
00:47:333 - you can perfectly add 1 note here, same sound what the next pattern
00:47:833 (47833|4) - move to the 3° column and add 1 note in 1° column

[7K MX]
00:15:499 - add 1 note in 2° column like the patterns of behind
00:15:583 (15583|2) - unnecessary note, no sound here
00:15:833 (15833|1) - move to the 1° column
00:20:166 (20166|1) - move to 3° columnpor jack pitch
00:45:833 (45833|0) - move to the 2° column
00:45:666 (45666|1) - move to the 3° column for no make interference with the next pattern

[lZenxl's 7K SHD]
00:13:833 (13833|1,13833|0) - move all 1 right for jack pitch
00:13:916 (13916|2,13916|3) - move all 1 left, ^ o ok jacked it

ok i think is all for now, a short mod for a short map ^^
Remember, a mod is just a suggerence

Thx for mods \o/

Everytime i look at my previous stuff i think that it's rather shit

Updates:
http://puu.sh/dHLI3/235df4992b.osu

btw since i changed my username errr you don't really have to add z3nx to tags if you don't want, and i'm keeping my diff name as lZenxl's 7K SHD since that was the username i used when mapping this hue

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