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yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

yf_bmp 2014-09-21T05:16:15+00:00

all done

OblivioN

OblivioN 2014-09-21T07:44:46+00:00

hi——YYYYYYY——FFFFFFFFF————————
有些摸不动orz

Flask's Insane

00:06:051 (3) - 我觉得还是在00:06:257 结束跟bgm好一些
00:20:230 (1) - 延长到00:20:538感觉不错，和00:24:134 (3,4) - 的感觉一样，可以拉成和01:17:764 (3) - 一样形状的slider试试看
00:25:880 (4) - 个人觉得这个note可以删;w;因为不是很明显，
00:33:380 (1,2,3,4) - 稍微跟一下vocal？:
00:40:572 (3) - 为什么不和00:39:750 (9,1) - 这里的节奏一样呢？;w;
01:21:071 (1) - 怪怪的……这里和01:22:116 (1) - 是不一样的……所以end在01:21:321 比较好

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2014-09-21T11:23:17+00:00

As mapper's request to mod FFFFFlask's Diff

[Flask's Insane]

00:12:010 (1) - soft addition and whistle
00:13:038 (1) - I recommend to end this at 00:13:449 - , I played twice and always miss the tail on the slider... sad
00:15:298 (5) - NC?
00:17:969 (5,6,7) - feel the flow is not very good while playing, recommend to move 6 down a little
00:24:750 (5) - missing finish
00:26:188 (6,7,8) - change in this way? http://puu.sh/bHPFZ/f1223276ff.jpg
00:31:942 (2) - stack at the tail of 00:31:531 (1) - ? feeling better to catch the following pattern
00:39:339 (7) - a 1/4 slider instead?
00:39:956 (1) - here should be a S:C3 finish i think...
00:40:777 (4) - ^
00:43:243 (1) - add S:C3 finish here? as 00:39:956 (1) - you added.
00:44:065 (4) - ^
00:56:394 (1) - whistle?
01:16:942 (5) - also normal sampleset and soft addition, just as 01:16:531 (4) -
01:19:819 (3,4,5,6,7) - imo it's not necessary to make them like this... a heat here at 01:20:230 - is also obvious for me, and 01:20:332 - is with no beat, so just make a 5-note stream is ok. 这里就是个五连节奏为什么偏偏要搞四连还把滑条结束在一个没音的地方
01:21:071 (1) - a bad 3/4 slider, the music is very simple with 1/2, better change it.
01:21:843 (3) - whistle
01:23:071 (3) - ^

Good luck.

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-09-28T18:45:29+00:00

[General]

BGE調成了1366*768: http://puu.sh/bPENg/82745d20d1.jpg
Title錯了中間沒空格的 Source: https://itunes.apple.com/jp/album/hua-x ... =890776282
```
Title: 花雪(TVsize)
Romanized Title: Hanayuki(TVsize)
```

[Flask]

Disable Widescreen Support.
00:06:462 - 我覺得前面幾個音量可以少一點 40-50%
00:12:010 (1) - soft-whistle as it sounds similar to 00:10:367 and 00:11:188 .
00:16:942 (1) - Intentional whistle? Finish fits better in my point of view.
00:20:230 (1) - Whistle on head?
00:21:873 (3) - 這whistle違和
00:24:750 (5) - Kinda hollow hitsounds here, maybe a finish here?
00:43:551 - Missing finish as of 00:39:956 (1) .
01:03:586 - Normal sampleset for the obvious drum in the music with a lower volume, say 60%?
01:20:127 (6) - 為甚麼ignore了白線的重音? 雙數連打而音樂不是這樣會很奇怪
01:21:071 (1) - 結尾在紅線舒服很多起碼是有音的
01:21:843 (3,3) - Whistle with lower volume to match with the piano, it sounds like missing something now.

[Insane]

01:19:819 - Redundant green line.
00:11:805 (4) - 這跳有點太過份重音在白線吧我覺得在00:12:010 (1) 跳比較合理
00:44:065 - Finish
00:44:887 - ^
01:07:490 - 降低一下音量音樂裡01:07:695更大聲
01:12:010 - Finish? Sounds similar to 01:11:188 .
01:20:024 - Lower the volume.

[Hard]

HP6 這難度完全不難
01:07:490 - 同insane
01:12:010 - Maybe a finish.

[Easy]

這啥奇葩三圍? AR3 HP2 please.
00:00:504 (1) - Whistle on head.
00:02:147 (3) - Whistle on tail.
00:03:791 (1) - Whistle on head.
00:05:435 (2) - ^
00:08:723 (2) - Normal sampleset on tail.
00:42:832 (4) - 這drum sampleset是故意放的嗎? 我感覺normal比較突出
00:45:709 - Normal sampleset.
00:47:969 (1,2,3) - Missing normal samplesets on tails.
00:46:325 (1,2,1) - 突然轉換音軌從白線轉到紅線然後在00:48:997 (2)又回到鼓點建議00:46:120加圓圈然後http://puu.sh/bRuon/7632e9384e.jpg
00:51:257 (1,2) - 這裡也搞錯了重音 00:52:079比前面的白線更重 http://puu.sh/bRwmM/da154da8bf.jpg
01:16:942 - Maybe a whistle for the piano.
01:17:764 (1,2) - Whistle on tail.
01:19:408 (1) - Whistle with lower volume, say, 45%.

MirinH

726 posts

Joined January 2013

MirinH 2014-09-29T06:34:34+00:00

IamKwaN wrote:
[Easy]
這啥奇葩三圍? AR3 HP2 please. ar3太快，hp2ok
00:00:504 (1) - Whistle on head. k
00:02:147 (3) - Whistle on tail. k
00:03:791 (1) - Whistle on head. k
00:05:435 (2) - ^ k
00:08:723 (2) - Normal sampleset on tail. k
00:42:832 (4) - 這drum sampleset是故意放的嗎? 我感覺normal比較突出这里bgm更像drum
00:45:709 - Normal sampleset. k
00:47:969 (1,2,3) - Missing normal samplesets on tails.
00:46:325 (1,2,1) - 突然轉換音軌從白線轉到紅線然後在00:48:997 (2)又回到鼓點建議00:46:120加圓圈然後http://puu.sh/bRuon/7632e9384e.jpg 听不到节奏
00:51:257 (1,2) - 這裡也搞錯了重音 00:52:079比前面的白線更重 http://puu.sh/bRwmM/da154da8bf.jpg 同上，完全听不出
01:16:942 - Maybe a whistle for the piano. k
01:17:764 (1,2) - Whistle on tail. k
01:19:408 (1) - Whistle with lower volume, say, 45%. k

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yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

yf_bmp 2014-09-30T11:08:53+00:00

Minakami Yuki

Minakami Yuki wrote:
As mapper's request to mod FFFFFlask's Diff

[Flask's Insane]
00:12:010 (1) - soft addition and whistle k
00:13:038 (1) - I recommend to end this at 00:13:449 - , I played twice and always miss the tail on the slider... sad 这种先不改了
00:15:298 (5) - NC? OK
00:17:969 (5,6,7) - feel the flow is not very good while playing, recommend to move 6 down a little应该是有意排成直线的打起来其实也还好先不改了
00:24:750 (5) - missing finish k
00:26:188 (6,7,8) - change in this way? http://puu.sh/bHPFZ/f1223276ff.jpg 这个不了因为后面的蓝线没有音
00:31:942 (2) - stack at the tail of 00:31:531 (1) - ? feeling better to catch the following pattern 感觉不叠会好点因为00:39:956 (1,2) - 后面像这种很多都是不叠的但是往下了一些
00:39:339 (7) - a 1/4 slider instead? 玛雅
00:39:956 (1) - here should be a S:C3 finish i think... 应该是有意的随音乐而刻意更换音效组所以不改了下面3个也是
00:40:777 (4) - ^
00:43:243 (1) - add S:C3 finish here? as 00:39:956 (1) - you added.
00:44:065 (4) - ^
00:56:394 (1) - whistle? k
01:16:942 (5) - also normal sampleset and soft addition, just as 01:16:531 (4) - 如果跟随音乐的话这里不加会比较好
01:19:819 (3,4,5,6,7) - imo it's not necessary to make them like this... a heat here at 01:20:230 - is also obvious for me, and 01:20:332 - is with no beat, so just make a 5-note stream is ok. 这里就是个五连节奏为什么偏偏要搞四连还把滑条结束在一个没音的地方我也觉得尽量根据F酱的习惯改了
01:21:071 (1) - a bad 3/4 slider, the music is very simple with 1/2, better change it. 我也这么觉得
01:21:843 (3) - whistle 太多whistle的话音效带来的意境就没了
01:23:071 (3) - ^

Good luck.

Oblivion

OblivioN wrote:
hi——YYYYYYY——FFFFFFFFF————————
有些摸不动orz
Flask's Insane
00:06:051 (3) - 我觉得还是在00:06:257 结束跟bgm好一些应该是有意延音所以不改了
00:20:230 (1) - 延长到00:20:538感觉不错，和00:24:134 (3,4) - 的感觉一样，可以拉成和01:17:764 (3) - 一样形状的slider试试看这里一部分都是1/2节奏我觉得是故意的不出现3/4节奏而后面那个是为了承上启下而设的3/4节奏
00:25:880 (4) - 个人觉得这个note可以删;w;因为不是很明显，先不改了
00:33:380 (1,2,3,4) - 稍微跟一下vocal？: 也先不改了这种变动排列的不是很重要的就不改了
00:40:572 (3) - 为什么不和00:39:750 (9,1) - 这里的节奏一样呢？;w; 我和他irc过这里改了一小下
01:21:071 (1) - 怪怪的……这里和01:22:116 (1) - 是不一样的……所以end在01:21:321 比较好这个改了

IamKwaN wrote:
[General]
BGE調成了1366*768: http://puu.sh/bPENg/82745d20d1.jpg 些些君妈
Title錯了中間沒空格的 Source: https://itunes.apple.com/jp/album/hua-x ... =890776282 K
Title: 花雪(TVsize)
Romanized Title: Hanayuki(TVsize)
[Flask]
Disable Widescreen Support.
00:06:462 - 我覺得前面幾個音量可以少一點 40-50% K
00:12:010 (1) - soft-whistle as it sounds similar to 00:10:367 and 00:11:188 .
00:16:942 (1) - Intentional whistle? Finish fits better in my point of view. 有点不合曲算了
00:20:230 (1) - Whistle on head? 好
00:21:873 (3) - 這whistle違和其实我觉得加上更好
00:24:750 (5) - Kinda hollow hitsounds here, maybe a finish here? 加了
00:43:551 - Missing finish as of 00:39:956 (1) . 加了
01:03:586 - Normal sampleset for the obvious drum in the music with a lower volume, say 60%? 这里加了normal 但是没改60 因为前后这种音效都是80
01:20:127 (6) - 為甚麼ignore了白線的重音? 雙數連打而音樂不是這樣會很奇怪这里模仿F酱改了下
01:21:071 (1) - 結尾在紅線舒服很多起碼是有音的对的
01:21:843 (3,3) - Whistle with lower volume to match with the piano, it sounds like missing something now. 决定还是不改这里加了太多whistle会影响意境
[Insane]
01:19:819 - Redundant green line. 音量改了下没删
00:11:805 (4) - 這跳有點太過份重音在白線吧我覺得在00:12:010 (1) 跳比較合理好好好
00:44:065 - Finish 两个都改了但下面的是drum sampleset
00:44:887 - ^
01:07:490 - 降低一下音量音樂裡01:07:695更大聲好
01:12:010 - Finish? Sounds similar to 01:11:188 . 音乐里没有不改了
01:20:024 - Lower the volume. 好
[Hard]
HP6 這難度完全不難 好
01:07:490 - 同insane okk
01:12:010 - Maybe a finish. 不了

新的normal已完成
updated all diffs

IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2014-10-01T15:42:48+00:00

Easy 最後轉盤加whistle
Normal 有unsnapped check AImod 順便00:10:983 (2,3) - stack
Insane 多餘綠線

IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2014-10-02T05:22:23+00:00

Beep!

Zero__wind

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Zero__wind 2014-10-02T08:59:02+00:00

I'm a bit worried about the timing of the ending part
I tried to work out a better one and you can try it
the below is the timingpoint codes at the ending of Insane diff, you can just copy paste them to replace the current ones.

81051,495.867768595041,4,2,1,60,1,0
81051,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,60,0,0
81546,566.037735849057,4,2,1,60,1,0
81546,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,60,0,0
82112,618.556701030928,4,2,1,60,1,0
82730,674.157303370787,4,2,1,60,1,0
82730,-200,4,2,1,60,0,0

yf_bmp

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yf_bmp 2014-10-02T09:55:35+00:00

updated

Zero__wind

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Zero__wind 2014-10-02T12:03:45+00:00

no kd

General
soft-hitnormal2.wav这个该死的音效有10ms的延迟最近见到有几张图都因为这个被un了我帮你弄好了用这个替换掉你原来的音效 http://puu.sh/bWgZC/e2892cbf73.wav
bg不是五个角色一人一张真是差评
交换combo color 2和3 这样两个相似的青色就可以岔开了
Flask's Insane里面01:22:579 - 这根绿线没snap好
所有diff都加1500ms的leadin比较好现在只有500左右太少了

Flask's Insane
00:09:956 (2) - 尾巴用clap更合曲
00:16:942 (1) - 头上应该继续finish吧 whistle也留着跟00:15:298 - 一样
00:18:380 (7,1) - 我怎么觉得你都是在三连开头的地方NC的这里也换一下？
00:27:421 (5) - 感觉扔太远建议往回挪点儿比如到(480,208) 毕竟这只是个不怎么重要的拍子
00:33:175 (9) - clap跟鼓？
00:39:750 (9) - 头上finish跟鼓？
00:43:243 (1,2) - 还是继续用00:39:956 (1,2) - 这个节奏打击感比较好
00:45:093 (2) - 可以考虑删掉然后适当增大一点距离
01:03:380 - 这里真奇怪在editor里听着特别吵但是打图的时候很正常 orz 算了不管了

Insane
00:19:408 (5) - soft whistle? 钢琴
00:41:291 (7,9) - 也都drum sample？
00:44:579 (7,9) - ^
00:42:216 (3) - 像00:40:572 (3) - 一样用drum finish？
00:46:120 (4) - ^
00:48:586 (3) - 去掉whistle？不知道在跟什么音而且和前面那个连着不太好听
01:05:846 (5,6) - 这个跳有点太远不自然可以考虑把01:06:051 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,1,2) - 拉着一起挪到(200,328) 或者把01:06:051 (6,7) - 从8的头上拿下来做成大概下面这样

SPOILER

Hard
fine, maybe AR7, 因为N才4啊
音效看着上面有想改的自己改吧

Normal
好

AL's Easy
00:58:038 (1) - 头上应该finish 保持和后面的01:11:188 (1) - 一致
01:01:325 (1) - 头上加finish会比较合曲或许可以降一点音量不然好像有点吵 01:14:476 (1) - 这里也一样
00:59:682 (3) - 这个不止是折返点尾巴实际上也应该finish，和01:12:832 (2,3) - 一样
01:04:613 (1,2) - 这两个也和01:06:257 (3) - 一样需要在头上finish
别的没什么

美丽

yf_bmp

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yf_bmp 2014-10-02T12:45:26+00:00

Zero__wind wrote:
Flask's Insane
00:45:093 (2) - 可以考虑删掉然后适当增大一点距离这个没改

好其他全部fix 谢谢11 特别是timing

MirinH

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MirinH 2014-10-02T19:11:44+00:00

包子美丽

Zero__wind

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Zero__wind 2014-10-09T03:22:23+00:00

我每次删掉你这图redl的时候就弹到这首歌，真是揪心
顺便我才发现这曲子竟然是ゆうゆ作的醉了

the tag "Otsubo Yuka" should be spelled as Ootsubo Yuka instead
combo color不能调一下吗之前提过的
nothing else

EDIT: fixed above
Rebubbled.
another source for metadata btw http://hanayamata.com/news/detail.php?id=1011985

to next BAT: hope the timing at end could be doublechecked before qualifying

good luck

smallboat

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smallboat 2014-10-11T07:26:03+00:00

IRC with mapper to disuss some things , looks the timing is fine.

Qualified ~ !

IRC

2014-10-11 14:56 smallboat: title有專輯證明?
2014-10-11 14:56 yf_bmp: 官网上是这样的
2014-10-11 14:57 smallboat: Hanayuki(TVsize)  括弧跟英文部空一格嗎
2014-10-11 14:57 yf_bmp: http://puu.sh/c7NFU/c1e730a40a.png
2014-10-11 14:57 yf_bmp: 没有空格
2014-10-11 14:57 smallboat: 哦好
2014-10-11 14:58 smallboat: 那我總體檢查一下
2014-10-11 14:58 yf_bmp: en
2014-10-11 15:05 smallboat: 感覺好像沒啥問題~
2014-10-11 15:05 yf_bmp: 嗯嗯 被挑了两遍(
2014-10-11 15:05 yf_bmp: 窝待会改下Flask的ar好不好
2014-10-11 15:06 smallboat: 行
2014-10-11 15:07 yf_bmp: 我上传咯?
2014-10-11 15:07 smallboat: 快好了等會
2014-10-11 15:07 smallboat: F醬的AR
2014-10-11 15:07 smallboat: 你要調幾
2014-10-11 15:08 yf_bmp: 8.8
2014-10-11 15:08 yf_bmp: 现在有点难读了
2014-10-11 15:10 smallboat: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/500486 smileY inc. - Hanayuki(TVsize) [Insane]]
2014-10-11 15:11 smallboat: 00:06:257 (3) - 不是很確定這樣遮能不能讀到沒有折返的
2014-10-11 15:11 yf_bmp: 嗯?
2014-10-11 15:11 yf_bmp: 没有设定折返应该没有关系?
2014-10-11 15:12 smallboat: 應該行  只是說一下  
2014-10-11 15:12 yf_bmp: 算了 出于安全我改下?
2014-10-11 15:12 smallboat: 恩好
2014-10-11 15:13 yf_bmp: 00:06:051 (2) - 我叠在00:06:873 (6) - 上了
2014-10-11 15:13 smallboat: 好
2014-10-11 15:15 smallboat: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/505285 smileY inc. - Hanayuki(TVsize) [Flask's Insane]]
2014-10-11 15:16 smallboat: 00:50:846 (1) - 應該能讀  這個我就給過
2014-10-11 15:16 yf_bmp: 我也觉得 毕竟这明显没折返....
2014-10-11 15:16 yf_bmp: 应该没事 算了不改了
2014-10-11 15:16 smallboat: ok能up了
2014-10-11 15:17 yf_bmp: 哦对了 hard和insane的最后一个短滑条没对好音 所以我改了1/12滑条
2014-10-11 15:17 yf_bmp: bpm因为100都不到 1/12应该没事
2014-10-11 15:17 smallboat: ok 行
2014-10-11 15:19 smallboat: 我等下重下再小瞄一下
2014-10-11 15:19 yf_bmp: 好了
2014-10-11 15:19 yf_bmp: 嗯
2014-10-11 15:19 yf_bmp: 谢谢~~~
2014-10-11 15:21 smallboat: no problem