smileY inc. - Hanayuki(TVsize) · forum

GGFFQQ55

Joined March 2013

GGFFQQ55 2014-09-14T15:03:24+00:00

啊，实在是摸不动啊，就说几个小地方吧ww

easy

00:19:408 (4,1) - blanket一下好看些

00:35:024 (3,1) - ez的话这样的反向flow。。。我不太确定诶

normal

00:58:038 (1) - blanket

hard

00:07:079 (1) - 捏的有点难看orz

00:07:695 (2) - 00:08:723 (1) - 这两根直线有点破坏flow，建议改成弯♂的

00:08:723 (1) - 对于hard，这样的梗会不会有点难啊0.0?

01:24:419 (2) - 用六分之一滑条？

insane

00:00:298 这里开始有个短短的八分之一应该是，可以试试折返？

00:09:956 (5,6,1) - 这里我打的时候被坑了，节奏很难读

00:28:449 (1,2,3,4) - 容易读成三连节奏

00:24:545 (6) - 比较容易断

00:38:106 (1) - 这里的描点出了网格了，没问题吗OAO？

00:45:709 (3) - 这里也是

01:24:419 (2) - 同hard

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美丽，图太好了摸不动啊orz

NightNine_old

67 posts

Joined May 2012

NightNine_old 2014-09-14T15:13:46+00:00

摸摸摸~~
[General]
title:(TVsize)→(TV Size)

[Easy]
00:15:298 no clap
00:16:120 add clap 为了和后面一致
00:20:230 (1) - clap
00:21:462 (2) - No clap
00:22:695 clap
00:36:545 clap
00:41:599 (1) - NC

[Normal]
建议Ar+1 Sv→1.10

[Hard]
感觉明显右手比左手偏难不少可以适当减少点连打梗
比如00:15:093 (5,6,1) - 这段本身比较舒缓 6加的就感觉有点牵强，00:18:381

(5,6,1) - 同
主要是和NM的分度有点大了，图本还是不错的。

[Insane]
00:09:236 (2) - 建议去掉
三连是不是略多了例如00:28:860 (2,3) -
00:26:188 (5,6) - 感觉可以考虑类似单个note+1/4slider 适当替换一下
00:59:682 (7) - 加一点点向上的弧度更好一些吧
好了电池美丽...先到这吧QvQ

sodarose

607 posts

Joined July 2011

sodarose 2014-09-14T15:24:17+00:00

[AL's Easy]
00:17:764 (2) - 拉到00:18:586如何？
00:46:325 (1) - 这根滑条拉到00:46:942止，和00:43:243 (1) - 这个一样，00:47:558 (2) - 这个放到00:47:353看看节奏会不会好一点

[Ts8zs' Normal]
AImod：没对齐时间轴
感觉SV可以加大一点，现在的SV和easy一样不好区分
00:34:408 (2,3) - 这两个反过来，00:34:408 (2) - 拉到00:34:819，00:35:230 (3) - 从00:35:024开始拉到00:35:640
[Hard]
00:51:051 这里有个音要不要加个note？

看不出什么问题了orz

MirinH

726 posts

Joined January 2013

MirinH 2014-09-14T16:07:15+00:00

A i k a wrote:
[AL's Easy]
00:39:956 (1,2,3,4,1) - 这段我感觉怎么玩都怪怪的，换repeat滑条到普通滑条应该没事的。现在感觉那里太乱了。这个真的只能这样跟啊跟滑条我也想但是那是nm梗QAQ
其他都做得蛮好的。

GGFFQQ55 wrote:
easy

00:19:408 (4,1) - blanket一下好看些？？

00:35:024 (3,1) - ez的话这样的反向flow。。。我不太确定诶可以

NightNine wrote:
[Easy]
00:15:298 no clap 咦我这曲是全曲24clap这样不好吧
00:16:120 add clap 为了和后面一致 ^
00:20:230 (1) - clap ^
00:21:462 (2) - No clap ^
00:22:695 clap ^
00:36:545 clap ^
00:41:599 (1) - NC ok

sodarose wrote:
[AL's Easy]
00:17:764 (2) - 拉到00:18:586如何？ 00:18:380有一个vocal sound一直跟白线不觉得太单调Orz
00:46:325 (1) - 这根滑条拉到00:46:942止，和00:43:243 (1) - 这个一样，00:47:558 (2) - 这个放到00:47:353看看节奏会不会好一点爷爷你mod前自己肯定没试

thx for modding

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yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

yf_bmp 2014-09-14T23:47:59+00:00

NightNine wrote:
title:(TVsize)→(TV Size)

必须使用官方标题不然是unrankable的qwq

摸周末一并查

MirinH

726 posts

Joined January 2013

MirinH 2014-09-15T01:32:52+00:00

咦，这个yf怎么给我kds，黄书快来deni

ts8zs

2,123 posts

Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2014-09-15T03:01:08+00:00

remap 3 times orz

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280,264,26805,6,0,P|272:216|320:128,1,143.999995605469
352,104,27627,2,0,P|304:111|257:103,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,88,28243,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,72,28449,2,0,P|112:64|65:72,2,95.9999970703126,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,88,29476,2,0,P|208:128|176:192,1,95.9999970703126
160,216,30093,6,0,P|200:216|264:248,1,95.9999970703126
336,288,30914,2,0,P|379:268|427:266,1,95.9999970703126
472,272,31531,2,0,P|456:208|464:168,1,95.9999970703126
472,136,32147,2,0,L|376:152,1,95.9999970703126
288,120,32969,6,0,L|192:136,2,95.9999970703126,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,152,33997,2,0,P|348:194|339:240,1,95.9999970703126
248,208,34819,2,0,P|238:254|259:296,1,95.9999970703126
304,320,35435,2,0,L|368:328,1,47.9999985351563
216,368,36257,2,0,L|152:376,1,47.9999985351563
120,376,36668,6,0,P|112:336|128:280,1,95.9999970703126
152,248,37284,2,0,P|165:202|157:155,1,95.9999970703126
128,120,37901,2,0,L|136:72,1,47.9999985351563
224,104,38517,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,96,38928,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,32,39339,2,0,P|416:88|400:152,1,95.9999970703126
392,168,39956,6,0,L|320:192,2,71.9999978027344,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,176,40777,2,0,P|456:240|448:272,1,95.9999970703126
392,344,41599,2,0,P|424:360|464:360,2,71.9999978027344,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,320,42420,2,0,P|304:327|259:311,1,95.9999970703126
184,256,43243,6,0,P|168:288|168:328,2,71.9999978027344,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,216,44064,2,0,P|223:171|216:124,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,64,44887,2,0,P|200:32|256:40,1,95.9999970703126
304,96,45709,2,0,P|360:128|416:120,1,95.9999970703126
440,120,46325,6,0,P|467:158|472:206,1,95.9999970703126
376,200,47147,2,0,P|380:247|360:290,1,95.9999970703126
280,232,47969,2,0,P|260:275|221:302,1,95.9999970703126
176,312,48586,2,0,L|80:304,2,95.9999970703126,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,352,49819,2,0,L|296:360,1,95.9999970703126
320,320,50435,2,0,L|416:328,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,240,51257,2,0,L|280:232,1,95.9999970703126
256,192,51873,12,0,53928,0:0:0:0:
96,112,54750,6,0,L|192:104,1,95.9999970703126
272,152,55572,2,0,L|368:144,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,88,56394,2,0,P|464:136|456:192,1,95.9999970703126
432,272,57216,2,0,P|428:319|443:364,1,95.9999970703126
352,344,58038,6,0,B|304:328|256:352|256:352|216:320,1,143.999995605469
184,288,58860,2,0,P|240:256|320:248,1,143.999995605469
368,248,59682,2,0,B|352:200|376:152|376:152|344:112,1,143.999995605469
312,88,60504,2,0,P|256:120|216:120,1,95.9999970703126
160,48,61325,6,0,P|128:112|156:185,1,143.999995605469
176,216,62147,2,0,P|196:283|164:345,1,143.999995605469
120,368,62969,2,0,L|32:344,2,71.9999978027344,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,352,64202,6,0,L|360:328,1,95.9999970703126
288,256,65024,2,0,L|384:232,1,95.9999970703126
312,160,65846,2,0,L|408:136,1,95.9999970703126
416,40,66668,6,0,P|472:64|504:144,2,143.999995605469,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,48,68312,2,0,L|224:64,1,95.9999970703126
136,32,69134,2,0,P|128:72|152:128,1,95.9999970703126
56,136,69956,2,0,P|72:180|110:208,1,95.9999970703126
40,272,70777,6,0,P|76:301|123:307,1,95.9999970703126
248,240,71805,2,0,L|200:248,1,47.9999985351563
288,136,72627,2,0,L|240:144,2,47.9999985351563,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,136,73243,2,0,P|328:88|352:40,2,95.9999970703126,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,104,74476,6,0,P|424:176|368:224,1,143.999995605469
280,208,75504,2,0,P|229:256|230:326,1,143.999995605469
320,296,76531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,328,76942,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,232,77353,6,0,L|416:136,1,95.9999970703126
320,168,78175,2,0,L|344:72,1,95.9999970703126
248,104,78997,2,0,L|272:8,1,95.9999970703126
256,192,79613,12,0,84419,0:0:0:0:

我觉着吧这个和SV貌似没啥关系Orz
http://puu.sh/bzyUI/22db528399.zip

Awaken

858 posts

Joined February 2012

Awaken 2014-09-15T11:41:21+00:00

ohmygod 怎么会有这么好听的歌

Koihik

40 posts

Joined January 2013

Koihik 2014-09-15T15:36:09+00:00

hello , from #modreq

Insane

00:10:264 (6) - 着实也是蛮坑的...
00:39:956 (1) - 这个滑条比其他那3个都弯,排版换一下吧
01:06:565 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 感觉有点扭曲....
01:19:716 - 这里感觉应该有个note
01:21:980 (3,4) - 换成滑条比较好吧?
01:24:419 (2) - 可以换成一个1/12滑条?

好

Lurei

667 posts

Joined March 2014

Lurei 2014-09-16T01:20:17+00:00

Came from mod queue.
Oh, god. Too much chinese I can't read... x.x

[AL's Easy]

00:30:093 (1) - Change the curve of direction and move it to x:104|y:124 to improve flow and to avoid overlap with 00:30:914 (2)
Approximate example
The only thing I can say of this diff is that many sliders overlap. My suggestion above gives you a nice example. If possible, remove those overlaps.

[Ts8zs's Normal]

Check AiMod for unsnapped notes. To solve this, just drag them in the timeline upside.
00:23:517 (1,2) - You better make a better blanket of those. Coordinates I found for this were: x:132|y:140

[Hard]

00:33:380 (1,2) - Stack the sliders or move (2) somewhere else. Because those overlaps are just too... not nice.
00:35:024 (1,2) - ^^
00:36:668 (1,2) -
00:50:640 (4,1) - ^^ (By now you know I talk of every overlap like this, right? So, I won't mention those anymore.)

[Insane]

Same overlaps as Hard are also present here...
01:00:093 (1,2,3,4) - Such Slider Velocity change comes uncalled for, even more because it feels unfitting here. Make the change less sudden by using a minor value, or even better, don't change the SV at all.
01:13:243 (1,2,3,4) - ^^

Sorry I can't give a nice mod. I'm feeling a little dense after playing with editor a while.
Anyway, this is a nice mapset. I wish you good luck!

MirinH

726 posts

Joined January 2013

MirinH 2014-09-17T08:36:35+00:00

LixRei wrote:
[AL's Easy]

00:30:093 (1) - Change the curve of direction and move it to x:104|y:124 to improve flow and to avoid overlap with 00:30:914 (2) I think those overlaps are easy to read and it looks fine while you playing it，so sry I won't change it
Approximate example
The only thing I can say of this diff is that many sliders overlap. My suggestion above gives you a nice example. If possible, remove those overlaps. ^

btw thx for modding

Agorate

73 posts

Joined August 2013

Agorate 2014-09-18T16:14:49+00:00

~
http://puu.sh/bE8F0/f40d6bb903.osu

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

yf_bmp 2014-09-20T07:53:01+00:00

A i k a

A i k a wrote:
摸佛摸

[Hard]
00:10:161 - 这里是有很强的节奏，为什么不加点什么呢？ umh..主要我是为了突出鼓点
00:10:264 (1,2) - 这样的话不是很简单读图。^

其他没了，做得蛮好的。

[Insane]
wa

好厉害。
找不到错误 -w- orz

[后语]
摸有点短但是真的找不到多少错误了～ ~谢

GGFFQQ55

GGFFQQ55 wrote:
hard

00:07:079 (1) - 捏的有点难看orz 咦还好嘛

00:07:695 (2) - 00:08:723 (1) - 这两根直线有点破坏flow，建议改成弯♂的还行

00:08:723 (1) - 对于hard，这样的梗会不会有点难啊0.0? 其实还好 BPM放在这里

01:24:419 (2) - 用六分之一滑条？太坑了...

insane

00:00:298 这里开始有个短短的八分之一应该是，可以试试折返？懒改红线了orz 反正效果都差不多

00:09:956 (5,6,1) - 这里我打的时候被坑了，节奏很难读好这里改成滑条了

00:28:449 (1,2,3,4) - 容易读成三连节奏不改啦

00:24:545 (6) - 比较容易断唉还好吧

00:38:106 (1) - 这里的描点出了网格了，没问题吗OAO？没问题显示没出界就行

00:45:709 (3) - 这里也是 ^

01:24:419 (2) - 同hard 同

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美丽，图太好了摸不动啊orz orz

NightNine

NightNine wrote:
摸摸摸~~
[General]
title:(TVsize)→(TV Size) 前面提到了
[Hard]
感觉明显右手比左手偏难不少可以适当减少点连打梗 bpm低啦没关系的
比如00:15:093 (5,6,1) - 这段本身比较舒缓 6加的就感觉有点牵强，00:18:381

(5,6,1) - 同
主要是和NM的分度有点大了，图本还是不错的。会补一个normal

[Insane]
00:09:236 (2) - 建议去掉音乐本身有的啦
三连是不是略多了例如00:28:860 (2,3) - 跟音乐
00:26:188 (5,6) - 感觉可以考虑类似单个note+1/4slider 适当替换一下有点突然
00:59:682 (7) - 加一点点向上的弧度更好一些吧这里小改了下后面的note
好了电池美丽...先到这吧QvQ

soradose

没改这里本来就是停顿的w

Koihik

Koihik wrote:
hello , from #modreq

Insane

00:10:264 (6) - 着实也是蛮坑的... 嗯, 这里有改
00:39:956 (1) - 这个滑条比其他那3个都弯,排版换一下吧这个不了
01:06:565 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 感觉有点扭曲.... 当然是刻意的
01:19:716 - 这里感觉应该有个note 这里挺密集的鼓点这个不太明显加上还要动排版懒改了orz
01:21:980 (3,4) - 换成滑条比较好吧? 算了热
01:24:419 (2) - 可以换成一个1/12滑条? 改1/8了
好

LixRei

LixRei wrote:
[Hard]

00:33:380 (1,2) - Stack the sliders or move (2) somewhere else. Because those overlaps are just too... not nice.
00:35:024 (1,2) - ^^
00:36:668 (1,2) -
00:50:640 (4,1) - ^^ (By now you know I talk of every overlap like this, right? So, I won't mention those anymore.)
orz I thought they are beautiful imo
[Insane]

Same overlaps as Hard are also present here...
01:00:093 (1,2,3,4) - Such Slider Velocity change comes uncalled for, even more because it feels unfitting here. Make the change less sudden by using a minor value, or even better, don't change the SV at all.
01:13:243 (1,2,3,4) - ^^
I thought these sv changes are fit to lead to the next part

Sorry I can't give a nice mod. I'm feeling a little dense after playing with editor a while.
Anyway, this is a nice mapset. I wish you good luck! thank you!!!111

thank you all for your mod!!

uploaded all diffs

Awaken

858 posts

Joined February 2012

Awaken 2014-09-20T09:55:24+00:00

As requested.

Mod Info :
Red : Unrankable issues
Thick black : Highly recommend to fix
Normal black : Just my opinion and suggestions

[General]

S:C3 hitsound patterns are not used, you need to delete them.
Please disable Widescreen Support in Easy, Normal, Hard diffs.

[AL's Easy]

00:28:449 (3) - why not try a blanket like moving it to (381,46)? Both pattern and flow would be better. Of course if you adjust it, don't forget to do the same with 00:30:093 (1) -
00:46:325 (1) - object on the red tick here is really not a good idea. You almost follow the vocal, but you did the rhythm with a Finish sound suddenly here, so I really advise you to change it to white tick. Also it's not the same as 00:39:956 (1,2,3,4,1) - these, in these objects, there are the drum sound to support the rhythm, but this one doesn't.
00:51:257 (1) - btw this is fine because vocal is here. So I think in Easy diff, be sure what you're following is necessary. It would give players a kind of clear feeling.
00:54:750 (1,2) - Both of these two sliders are two curve, not only it's not beautiful, but it will also influence the feeling of playing..I really recommend you to adjust it to straight a bit.
01:09:545 (3,4,1) - Flow here is really able to improve like this.
SPOILER
00:05:435 (2) - Consider adding whistle on the reverse? After I saw your way adding whistles in the quiet part then I think you shouldn't ignore the hitsound here.
00:31:942 (3,1) - Clearly they can be a nice symmetry like this, current looks a bit weird, it's not fot the better flow, also not for a blanket. And it's not hard to change either I think.
SPOILER
00:36:668 (1) - Add a finish here because there is a really heavy sound? And turn down the volume a bit at the same time.
00:47:969 (1) - well, this object is at the red tick, so I think if no hitsound here, that would be a little weird, so what about adding a whistle on head?
01:11:188 (1) - Do you forget a finish here? I saw you added at the same rhythm 01:06:257 (3) -

[Ts8zs' Normal]

Generally some hitsound suggestions
00:06:462 (1) - Consider adding clap+finish on head? I heard a heavy drum and it's really fit if you added a clap.
00:07:490 (2) - No hitsound is really a bit weird..what about adding whistle on tail? That would sound better than now.
00:09:134 (4) - Same as above, suggest adding whistle on tail. I think the music is not quiet both of these two places.
00:12:216 (4) - Add clap on head? The clap here is almost the same as the drum sound.
00:13:038 (5) - Same as above.
00:28:449 (4) - I suggest adding whistle on head because I saw you've added the whistle in the same rhythm ahead.
00:31:531 (3) - Same as above
00:38:517 (4) - Add drum-clap with this circle? A heavy drum appeard.
00:45:709 (4) - Actually I can't hardly hear the finish here, so I will suggest adding clap with this.
01:09:134 (3,4,1) - Not regular enough, 01:09:956 (4,1) - they're not blanket perfectly, so it cause that the pattern doesn't look nice.
01:10:777 (1,2) - well, the sound on 01:11:188 and 01:12:010 are the same. But you add finish ahead and add clap with the next one, I would really hope that you can add finish both of them, that sounds amazing.

[Hard]

00:40:777 (2,3) - the rhythm is a bit hard to read...I highly suggest that shortened 1/4 with 00:40:777 (2) - and start the reverse 00:41:291 (3) - on the white tick, blue tick on a slider head is a bit weird..
00:44:065 (2,3) - Same as above
01:24:335 (2) - I suggest making a 1/8 slider reverse to fill with the rhythm and turn down the volume a bit or make a slider like Insane, because current circle is a bit slower than the music, that may influence the playing and easy to make a 100. Also the music is also like a 1/8 sound more. And imo, a slider reverse is really fit with the end. it's up to you
00:20:230 (1) - Add a whistle or a finish with a low volume on head? I heard a heavy vocal here and it's the start of the sentence so I think it's needed.
00:39:339 (4) - umm..this is buffer here..maybe add whistle or clap here? although there's almost no diffences at all but I still think if you can add a hitsound here, that would be better than none.
01:02:969 (1) - Add whistle here? It seems that it's like 01:16:120 (1) - a bit and you added here. So I'll suggest this.

[Insane]

Just some feeling of testplay and
00:11:805 (4,5,1) - it'ssss really too farrrrr. If you don't really want to make them closer then I suggest that adjust this slider 00:11:188 (3) - to be curver and that would be a better flow and easier to get to beat.
01:11:805 (3) - put it further like (0,234)? I got to know that it destroyed the flow a bit.. In kiai you the flow is like "running" but the distance here is a little close.
00:26:394 (7) - A heavy drum and why isn't there any hitsound? o,o Try adding clap or whistle for the drum.
00:39:134 (5,8) - Consider adding whistle on both of these two circles? Because finish here is really not clear..So maybe just add whistle to strengthen the hitsound here? I'm not sure about this either so up to you..
00:46:531 (2) - I recommend ctrl+g more, because 00:46:325 (1) - is a heavy sound and you added finish, so why not try making a big distance between the two objects because of the finish sound?

Good luck.

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

yf_bmp 2014-09-20T13:16:04+00:00

Awaken wrote:
As requested.

Mod Info :
Red : Unrankable issues
Thick black : Highly recommend to fix
Normal black : Just my opinion and suggestions
[General]

S:C3 hitsound patterns are not used, you need to delete them. F酱在做我先看看他用了没
Please disable Widescreen Support in Easy, Normal, Hard diffs.
done
[Hard]
00:40:777 (2,3) - the rhythm is a bit hard to read...I highly suggest that shortened 1/4 with 00:40:777 (2) - and start the reverse 00:41:291 (3) - on the white tick, blue tick on a slider head is a bit weird.. OK
00:44:065 (2,3) - Same as above OK
01:24:335 (2) - I suggest making a 1/8 slider reverse to fill with the rhythm and turn down the volume a bit or make a slider like Insane, because current circle is a bit slower than the music, that may influence the playing and easy to make a 100. Also the music is also like a 1/8 sound more. And imo, a slider reverse is really fit with the end. it's up to you OK
00:20:230 (1) - Add a whistle or a finish with a low volume on head? I heard a heavy vocal here and it's the start of the sentence so I think it's needed. OK
00:39:339 (4) - umm..this is buffer here..maybe add whistle or clap here? although there's almost no diffences at all but I still think if you can add a hitsound here, that would be better than none. OK
01:02:969 (1) - Add whistle here? It seems that it's like 01:16:120 (1) - a bit and you added here. So I'll suggest this. OK
[Insane]
Just some feeling of testplay and
00:11:805 (4,5,1) - it'ssss really too farrrrr. If you don't really want to make them closer then I suggest that adjust this slider 00:11:188 (3) - to be curver and that would be a better flow and easier to get to beat. flow美丽不改了
01:11:805 (3) - put it further like (0,234)? I got to know that it destroyed the flow a bit.. In kiai you the flow is like "running" but the distance here is a little close. 重音是在后面所以后面一个跳
00:26:394 (7) - A heavy drum and why isn't there any hitsound? o,o Try adding clap or whistle for the drum. KK
00:39:134 (5,8) - Consider adding whistle on both of these two circles? Because finish here is really not clear..So maybe just add whistle to strengthen the hitsound here? I'm not sure about this either so up to you.. 起低音烘托效果
00:46:531 (2) - I recommend ctrl+g more, because 00:46:325 (1) - is a heavy sound and you added finish, so why not try making a big distance between the two objects because of the finish sound? flow美丽

Good luck.

谢摸11

MirinH

726 posts

Joined January 2013

MirinH 2014-09-20T16:21:51+00:00

Awaken wrote:
[AL's Easy]
00:28:449 (3) - why not try a blanket like moving it to (381,46)? Both pattern and flow would be better. Of course if you adjust it, don't forget to do the same with 00:30:093 (1) - Nah,I think thats ok
00:46:325 (1) - object on the red tick here is really not a good idea. You almost follow the vocal, but you did the rhythm with a Finish sound suddenly here, so I really advise you to change it to white tick. Also it's not the same as 00:39:956 (1,2,3,4,1) - these, in these objects, there are the drum sound to support the rhythm, but this one doesn't. In 00:46:325 (1) - I followed the guitar and the vocal is 1/2 so I can't really follow the vocal
00:51:257 (1) - btw this is fine because vocal is here. So I think in Easy diff, be sure what you're following is necessary. It would give players a kind of clear feeling. Umm
00:54:750 (1,2) - Both of these two sliders are two curve, not only it's not beautiful, but it will also influence the feeling of playing..I really recommend you to adjust it to straight a bit. Fixed
01:09:545 (3,4,1) - Flow here is really able to improve like this. Fixed
SPOILER
00:05:435 (2) - Consider adding whistle on the reverse? After I saw your way adding whistles in the quiet part then I think you shouldn't ignore the hitsound here. Sure,Fixed
00:31:942 (3,1) - Clearly they can be a nice symmetry like this, current looks a bit weird, it's not fot the better flow, also not for a blanket. And it's not hard to change either I think. Fixed
SPOILER
00:36:668 (1) - Add a finish here because there is a really heavy sound? And turn down the volume a bit at the same time. ok
00:47:969 (1) - well, this object is at the red tick, so I think if no hitsound here, that would be a little weird, so what about adding a whistle on head? ok
01:11:188 (1) - Do you forget a finish here? I saw you added at the same rhythm 01:06:257 (3) - sure finish added
[notice]

thx

osu file format v13

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54031
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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ts8zs

2,123 posts

Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2014-09-21T04:57:27+00:00

hitsound reseted :3

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yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

yf_bmp 2014-09-21T05:16:15+00:00

all done

OblivioN

OblivioN 2014-09-21T07:44:46+00:00

hi——YYYYYYY——FFFFFFFFF————————
有些摸不动orz

Flask's Insane

00:06:051 (3) - 我觉得还是在00:06:257 结束跟bgm好一些
00:20:230 (1) - 延长到00:20:538感觉不错，和00:24:134 (3,4) - 的感觉一样，可以拉成和01:17:764 (3) - 一样形状的slider试试看
00:25:880 (4) - 个人觉得这个note可以删;w;因为不是很明显，
00:33:380 (1,2,3,4) - 稍微跟一下vocal？:
00:40:572 (3) - 为什么不和00:39:750 (9,1) - 这里的节奏一样呢？;w;
01:21:071 (1) - 怪怪的……这里和01:22:116 (1) - 是不一样的……所以end在01:21:321 比较好

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2014-09-21T11:23:17+00:00

As mapper's request to mod FFFFFlask's Diff

[Flask's Insane]

00:12:010 (1) - soft addition and whistle
00:13:038 (1) - I recommend to end this at 00:13:449 - , I played twice and always miss the tail on the slider... sad
00:15:298 (5) - NC?
00:17:969 (5,6,7) - feel the flow is not very good while playing, recommend to move 6 down a little
00:24:750 (5) - missing finish
00:26:188 (6,7,8) - change in this way? http://puu.sh/bHPFZ/f1223276ff.jpg
00:31:942 (2) - stack at the tail of 00:31:531 (1) - ? feeling better to catch the following pattern
00:39:339 (7) - a 1/4 slider instead?
00:39:956 (1) - here should be a S:C3 finish i think...
00:40:777 (4) - ^
00:43:243 (1) - add S:C3 finish here? as 00:39:956 (1) - you added.
00:44:065 (4) - ^
00:56:394 (1) - whistle?
01:16:942 (5) - also normal sampleset and soft addition, just as 01:16:531 (4) -
01:19:819 (3,4,5,6,7) - imo it's not necessary to make them like this... a heat here at 01:20:230 - is also obvious for me, and 01:20:332 - is with no beat, so just make a 5-note stream is ok. 这里就是个五连节奏为什么偏偏要搞四连还把滑条结束在一个没音的地方
01:21:071 (1) - a bad 3/4 slider, the music is very simple with 1/2, better change it.
01:21:843 (3) - whistle
01:23:071 (3) - ^

Good luck.

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-09-28T18:45:29+00:00

[General]

BGE調成了1366*768: http://puu.sh/bPENg/82745d20d1.jpg
Title錯了中間沒空格的 Source: https://itunes.apple.com/jp/album/hua-x ... =890776282
```
Title: 花雪(TVsize)
Romanized Title: Hanayuki(TVsize)
```

[Flask]

Disable Widescreen Support.
00:06:462 - 我覺得前面幾個音量可以少一點 40-50%
00:12:010 (1) - soft-whistle as it sounds similar to 00:10:367 and 00:11:188 .
00:16:942 (1) - Intentional whistle? Finish fits better in my point of view.
00:20:230 (1) - Whistle on head?
00:21:873 (3) - 這whistle違和
00:24:750 (5) - Kinda hollow hitsounds here, maybe a finish here?
00:43:551 - Missing finish as of 00:39:956 (1) .
01:03:586 - Normal sampleset for the obvious drum in the music with a lower volume, say 60%?
01:20:127 (6) - 為甚麼ignore了白線的重音? 雙數連打而音樂不是這樣會很奇怪
01:21:071 (1) - 結尾在紅線舒服很多起碼是有音的
01:21:843 (3,3) - Whistle with lower volume to match with the piano, it sounds like missing something now.

[Insane]

01:19:819 - Redundant green line.
00:11:805 (4) - 這跳有點太過份重音在白線吧我覺得在00:12:010 (1) 跳比較合理
00:44:065 - Finish
00:44:887 - ^
01:07:490 - 降低一下音量音樂裡01:07:695更大聲
01:12:010 - Finish? Sounds similar to 01:11:188 .
01:20:024 - Lower the volume.

[Hard]

HP6 這難度完全不難
01:07:490 - 同insane
01:12:010 - Maybe a finish.

[Easy]

這啥奇葩三圍? AR3 HP2 please.
00:00:504 (1) - Whistle on head.
00:02:147 (3) - Whistle on tail.
00:03:791 (1) - Whistle on head.
00:05:435 (2) - ^
00:08:723 (2) - Normal sampleset on tail.
00:42:832 (4) - 這drum sampleset是故意放的嗎? 我感覺normal比較突出
00:45:709 - Normal sampleset.
00:47:969 (1,2,3) - Missing normal samplesets on tails.
00:46:325 (1,2,1) - 突然轉換音軌從白線轉到紅線然後在00:48:997 (2)又回到鼓點建議00:46:120加圓圈然後http://puu.sh/bRuon/7632e9384e.jpg
00:51:257 (1,2) - 這裡也搞錯了重音 00:52:079比前面的白線更重 http://puu.sh/bRwmM/da154da8bf.jpg
01:16:942 - Maybe a whistle for the piano.
01:17:764 (1,2) - Whistle on tail.
01:19:408 (1) - Whistle with lower volume, say, 45%.

MirinH

726 posts

Joined January 2013

MirinH 2014-09-29T06:34:34+00:00

IamKwaN wrote:
[Easy]
這啥奇葩三圍? AR3 HP2 please. ar3太快，hp2ok
00:00:504 (1) - Whistle on head. k
00:02:147 (3) - Whistle on tail. k
00:03:791 (1) - Whistle on head. k
00:05:435 (2) - ^ k
00:08:723 (2) - Normal sampleset on tail. k
00:42:832 (4) - 這drum sampleset是故意放的嗎? 我感覺normal比較突出这里bgm更像drum
00:45:709 - Normal sampleset. k
00:47:969 (1,2,3) - Missing normal samplesets on tails.
00:46:325 (1,2,1) - 突然轉換音軌從白線轉到紅線然後在00:48:997 (2)又回到鼓點建議00:46:120加圓圈然後http://puu.sh/bRuon/7632e9384e.jpg 听不到节奏
00:51:257 (1,2) - 這裡也搞錯了重音 00:52:079比前面的白線更重 http://puu.sh/bRwmM/da154da8bf.jpg 同上，完全听不出
01:16:942 - Maybe a whistle for the piano. k
01:17:764 (1,2) - Whistle on tail. k
01:19:408 (1) - Whistle with lower volume, say, 45%. k

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152,364,69545,2,0,L|164:284,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,380,70777,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,328,71188,6,0,P|368:308|448:324,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,208,72832,2,0,B|340:168|340:168|332:128,1,80,0|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,128,73654,2,0,B|244:166|244:166|252:206,1,80,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,280,74476,6,0,P|220:268|156:284,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,340,75709,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,272,76120,2,0,P|16:232|28:184,2,80,0|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,232,77353,1,8,0:0:0:0:
164,192,77764,6,0,B|204:184|204:184|248:192,1,80,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,272,78586,2,0,B|204:280|204:280|165:272,1,80,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,79408,12,0,81071,0:0:0:0:

yf_bmp

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yf_bmp 2014-09-30T11:08:53+00:00

Minakami Yuki

Minakami Yuki wrote:
As mapper's request to mod FFFFFlask's Diff

[Flask's Insane]
00:12:010 (1) - soft addition and whistle k
00:13:038 (1) - I recommend to end this at 00:13:449 - , I played twice and always miss the tail on the slider... sad 这种先不改了
00:15:298 (5) - NC? OK
00:17:969 (5,6,7) - feel the flow is not very good while playing, recommend to move 6 down a little应该是有意排成直线的打起来其实也还好先不改了
00:24:750 (5) - missing finish k
00:26:188 (6,7,8) - change in this way? http://puu.sh/bHPFZ/f1223276ff.jpg 这个不了因为后面的蓝线没有音
00:31:942 (2) - stack at the tail of 00:31:531 (1) - ? feeling better to catch the following pattern 感觉不叠会好点因为00:39:956 (1,2) - 后面像这种很多都是不叠的但是往下了一些
00:39:339 (7) - a 1/4 slider instead? 玛雅
00:39:956 (1) - here should be a S:C3 finish i think... 应该是有意的随音乐而刻意更换音效组所以不改了下面3个也是
00:40:777 (4) - ^
00:43:243 (1) - add S:C3 finish here? as 00:39:956 (1) - you added.
00:44:065 (4) - ^
00:56:394 (1) - whistle? k
01:16:942 (5) - also normal sampleset and soft addition, just as 01:16:531 (4) - 如果跟随音乐的话这里不加会比较好
01:19:819 (3,4,5,6,7) - imo it's not necessary to make them like this... a heat here at 01:20:230 - is also obvious for me, and 01:20:332 - is with no beat, so just make a 5-note stream is ok. 这里就是个五连节奏为什么偏偏要搞四连还把滑条结束在一个没音的地方我也觉得尽量根据F酱的习惯改了
01:21:071 (1) - a bad 3/4 slider, the music is very simple with 1/2, better change it. 我也这么觉得
01:21:843 (3) - whistle 太多whistle的话音效带来的意境就没了
01:23:071 (3) - ^

Good luck.

Oblivion

OblivioN wrote:
hi——YYYYYYY——FFFFFFFFF————————
有些摸不动orz
Flask's Insane
00:06:051 (3) - 我觉得还是在00:06:257 结束跟bgm好一些应该是有意延音所以不改了
00:20:230 (1) - 延长到00:20:538感觉不错，和00:24:134 (3,4) - 的感觉一样，可以拉成和01:17:764 (3) - 一样形状的slider试试看这里一部分都是1/2节奏我觉得是故意的不出现3/4节奏而后面那个是为了承上启下而设的3/4节奏
00:25:880 (4) - 个人觉得这个note可以删;w;因为不是很明显，先不改了
00:33:380 (1,2,3,4) - 稍微跟一下vocal？: 也先不改了这种变动排列的不是很重要的就不改了
00:40:572 (3) - 为什么不和00:39:750 (9,1) - 这里的节奏一样呢？;w; 我和他irc过这里改了一小下
01:21:071 (1) - 怪怪的……这里和01:22:116 (1) - 是不一样的……所以end在01:21:321 比较好这个改了

IamKwaN wrote:
[General]
BGE調成了1366*768: http://puu.sh/bPENg/82745d20d1.jpg 些些君妈
Title錯了中間沒空格的 Source: https://itunes.apple.com/jp/album/hua-x ... =890776282 K
Title: 花雪(TVsize)
Romanized Title: Hanayuki(TVsize)
[Flask]
Disable Widescreen Support.
00:06:462 - 我覺得前面幾個音量可以少一點 40-50% K
00:12:010 (1) - soft-whistle as it sounds similar to 00:10:367 and 00:11:188 .
00:16:942 (1) - Intentional whistle? Finish fits better in my point of view. 有点不合曲算了
00:20:230 (1) - Whistle on head? 好
00:21:873 (3) - 這whistle違和其实我觉得加上更好
00:24:750 (5) - Kinda hollow hitsounds here, maybe a finish here? 加了
00:43:551 - Missing finish as of 00:39:956 (1) . 加了
01:03:586 - Normal sampleset for the obvious drum in the music with a lower volume, say 60%? 这里加了normal 但是没改60 因为前后这种音效都是80
01:20:127 (6) - 為甚麼ignore了白線的重音? 雙數連打而音樂不是這樣會很奇怪这里模仿F酱改了下
01:21:071 (1) - 結尾在紅線舒服很多起碼是有音的对的
01:21:843 (3,3) - Whistle with lower volume to match with the piano, it sounds like missing something now. 决定还是不改这里加了太多whistle会影响意境
[Insane]
01:19:819 - Redundant green line. 音量改了下没删
00:11:805 (4) - 這跳有點太過份重音在白線吧我覺得在00:12:010 (1) 跳比較合理好好好
00:44:065 - Finish 两个都改了但下面的是drum sampleset
00:44:887 - ^
01:07:490 - 降低一下音量音樂裡01:07:695更大聲好
01:12:010 - Finish? Sounds similar to 01:11:188 . 音乐里没有不改了
01:20:024 - Lower the volume. 好
[Hard]
HP6 這難度完全不難 好
01:07:490 - 同insane okk
01:12:010 - Maybe a finish. 不了

新的normal已完成
updated all diffs

IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2014-10-01T15:42:48+00:00

Easy 最後轉盤加whistle
Normal 有unsnapped check AImod 順便00:10:983 (2,3) - stack
Insane 多餘綠線

IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2014-10-02T05:22:23+00:00

Beep!

Zero__wind

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Zero__wind 2014-10-02T08:59:02+00:00

I'm a bit worried about the timing of the ending part
I tried to work out a better one and you can try it
the below is the timingpoint codes at the ending of Insane diff, you can just copy paste them to replace the current ones.

81051,495.867768595041,4,2,1,60,1,0
81051,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,60,0,0
81546,566.037735849057,4,2,1,60,1,0
81546,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,60,0,0
82112,618.556701030928,4,2,1,60,1,0
82730,674.157303370787,4,2,1,60,1,0
82730,-200,4,2,1,60,0,0

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yf_bmp 2014-10-02T09:55:35+00:00

updated

Zero__wind

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Zero__wind 2014-10-02T12:03:45+00:00

no kd

General
soft-hitnormal2.wav这个该死的音效有10ms的延迟最近见到有几张图都因为这个被un了我帮你弄好了用这个替换掉你原来的音效 http://puu.sh/bWgZC/e2892cbf73.wav
bg不是五个角色一人一张真是差评
交换combo color 2和3 这样两个相似的青色就可以岔开了
Flask's Insane里面01:22:579 - 这根绿线没snap好
所有diff都加1500ms的leadin比较好现在只有500左右太少了

Flask's Insane
00:09:956 (2) - 尾巴用clap更合曲
00:16:942 (1) - 头上应该继续finish吧 whistle也留着跟00:15:298 - 一样
00:18:380 (7,1) - 我怎么觉得你都是在三连开头的地方NC的这里也换一下？
00:27:421 (5) - 感觉扔太远建议往回挪点儿比如到(480,208) 毕竟这只是个不怎么重要的拍子
00:33:175 (9) - clap跟鼓？
00:39:750 (9) - 头上finish跟鼓？
00:43:243 (1,2) - 还是继续用00:39:956 (1,2) - 这个节奏打击感比较好
00:45:093 (2) - 可以考虑删掉然后适当增大一点距离
01:03:380 - 这里真奇怪在editor里听着特别吵但是打图的时候很正常 orz 算了不管了

Insane
00:19:408 (5) - soft whistle? 钢琴
00:41:291 (7,9) - 也都drum sample？
00:44:579 (7,9) - ^
00:42:216 (3) - 像00:40:572 (3) - 一样用drum finish？
00:46:120 (4) - ^
00:48:586 (3) - 去掉whistle？不知道在跟什么音而且和前面那个连着不太好听
01:05:846 (5,6) - 这个跳有点太远不自然可以考虑把01:06:051 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,1,2) - 拉着一起挪到(200,328) 或者把01:06:051 (6,7) - 从8的头上拿下来做成大概下面这样

SPOILER

Hard
fine, maybe AR7, 因为N才4啊
音效看着上面有想改的自己改吧

Normal
好

AL's Easy
00:58:038 (1) - 头上应该finish 保持和后面的01:11:188 (1) - 一致
01:01:325 (1) - 头上加finish会比较合曲或许可以降一点音量不然好像有点吵 01:14:476 (1) - 这里也一样
00:59:682 (3) - 这个不止是折返点尾巴实际上也应该finish，和01:12:832 (2,3) - 一样
01:04:613 (1,2) - 这两个也和01:06:257 (3) - 一样需要在头上finish
别的没什么

美丽

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yf_bmp 2014-10-02T12:45:26+00:00

Zero__wind wrote:
Flask's Insane
00:45:093 (2) - 可以考虑删掉然后适当增大一点距离这个没改

好其他全部fix 谢谢11 特别是timing

MirinH

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MirinH 2014-10-02T19:11:44+00:00

包子美丽

Zero__wind

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Zero__wind 2014-10-09T03:22:23+00:00

我每次删掉你这图redl的时候就弹到这首歌，真是揪心
顺便我才发现这曲子竟然是ゆうゆ作的醉了

the tag "Otsubo Yuka" should be spelled as Ootsubo Yuka instead
combo color不能调一下吗之前提过的
nothing else

EDIT: fixed above
Rebubbled.
another source for metadata btw http://hanayamata.com/news/detail.php?id=1011985

to next BAT: hope the timing at end could be doublechecked before qualifying

good luck

smallboat

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smallboat 2014-10-11T07:26:03+00:00

IRC with mapper to disuss some things , looks the timing is fine.

Qualified ~ !

IRC

2014-10-11 14:56 smallboat: title有專輯證明?
2014-10-11 14:56 yf_bmp: 官网上是这样的
2014-10-11 14:57 smallboat: Hanayuki(TVsize)  括弧跟英文部空一格嗎
2014-10-11 14:57 yf_bmp: http://puu.sh/c7NFU/c1e730a40a.png
2014-10-11 14:57 yf_bmp: 没有空格
2014-10-11 14:57 smallboat: 哦好
2014-10-11 14:58 smallboat: 那我總體檢查一下
2014-10-11 14:58 yf_bmp: en
2014-10-11 15:05 smallboat: 感覺好像沒啥問題~
2014-10-11 15:05 yf_bmp: 嗯嗯 被挑了两遍(
2014-10-11 15:05 yf_bmp: 窝待会改下Flask的ar好不好
2014-10-11 15:06 smallboat: 行
2014-10-11 15:07 yf_bmp: 我上传咯?
2014-10-11 15:07 smallboat: 快好了等會
2014-10-11 15:07 smallboat: F醬的AR
2014-10-11 15:07 smallboat: 你要調幾
2014-10-11 15:08 yf_bmp: 8.8
2014-10-11 15:08 yf_bmp: 现在有点难读了
2014-10-11 15:10 smallboat: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/500486 smileY inc. - Hanayuki(TVsize) [Insane]]
2014-10-11 15:11 smallboat: 00:06:257 (3) - 不是很確定這樣遮能不能讀到沒有折返的
2014-10-11 15:11 yf_bmp: 嗯?
2014-10-11 15:11 yf_bmp: 没有设定折返应该没有关系?
2014-10-11 15:12 smallboat: 應該行  只是說一下  
2014-10-11 15:12 yf_bmp: 算了 出于安全我改下?
2014-10-11 15:12 smallboat: 恩好
2014-10-11 15:13 yf_bmp: 00:06:051 (2) - 我叠在00:06:873 (6) - 上了
2014-10-11 15:13 smallboat: 好
2014-10-11 15:15 smallboat: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/505285 smileY inc. - Hanayuki(TVsize) [Flask's Insane]]
2014-10-11 15:16 smallboat: 00:50:846 (1) - 應該能讀  這個我就給過
2014-10-11 15:16 yf_bmp: 我也觉得 毕竟这明显没折返....
2014-10-11 15:16 yf_bmp: 应该没事 算了不改了
2014-10-11 15:16 smallboat: ok能up了
2014-10-11 15:17 yf_bmp: 哦对了 hard和insane的最后一个短滑条没对好音 所以我改了1/12滑条
2014-10-11 15:17 yf_bmp: bpm因为100都不到 1/12应该没事
2014-10-11 15:17 smallboat: ok 行
2014-10-11 15:19 smallboat: 我等下重下再小瞄一下
2014-10-11 15:19 yf_bmp: 好了
2014-10-11 15:19 yf_bmp: 嗯
2014-10-11 15:19 yf_bmp: 谢谢~~~
2014-10-11 15:21 smallboat: no problem