Hi! There is Regraz's mod! From the queue!~
There is a few points of my mod:
In all, this is a nice map for new mappers, but there are also something which can be improved a lot. Find some experienced mapper or look at some excellent maps for patterns & structure, and this will be a nice map!
Finally, good luck on your ranking!
Thanks for reading this! If you have something that you dont understand, feel free to send me a forum-pm and I will try my best to explain it to you clearly!
There is a few points of my mod:
- Thank you for requesting a mod from me! Note that I am still learning modding skills, so I am sorry if I cannot provide help to you!
- Mod is just a kind of suggestion, so feel free if you dont want to make change.
- I hope you can reply to my mod since it can help me know the other mappers' ideas and I can also learn something new.
- Bond means highly suggest.
- This is the 10th map I mod since I used modding framework version 3 (mfv3)
Easy
Rhythm:
- 00:31:775 Why empty? There is a vocal here.
Structure: - 00:11:775 (1) - It is not recommend to use this kind of long slider, it covers too many beats and also not flow-friendly.
- 00:15:041 (3) - Oops, this slider is too sharp, consider using a elbow-shape instead of this.
- 00:26:877 (6) - ^ Also the flow of 00:25:245 (4,5,6) - is not good :3
- 00:33:816 (3,4,1) - Improve this blanket
- 00:41:571 (1,2,3,4) - This is kinda old style and not recommend such shape. Also, overlaps seems not neat to some extent.
- 01:04:020 (1,2,3) - Try this shape? http://puu.sh/bJbMo/91a6343d62.jpg Also adjust the two notes after the slider.
- 01:10:551 (1,2,3) - blanket can be improved. http://puu.sh/bJbOO/20d96a0531.jpg
- 02:06:061 (1) - This is creative! However, this kind of slider shouldnt appear in Easy, it makes the newbie players confused.
- 02:55:857 (1,3) - Overlap seems not good.
- 02:57:489 (3,1) - ^
Hitsounds - The clap you used in non-KIAI part is a little loud, consider reducing the volumn by 10%
- 00:11:775 (1) - If you continue wanting to use this kind of slider, add a clap here.
- 01:07:286 (1) - remove whistle on the slider body, it sounds weird.
- 02:13:408 (3) - ^
Generally, this diff need more work, especially in flow and structure.
kuroan's Normal
Rhythm:
- 01:30:959 (3) - Better to use a 1/1 slider here to cover the vocal.
- 01:53:408 Add a note :3
- 02:20:483 (3,4) - it seems that you follow the vocal, but the rhythm change is really hard for newbie players....
Structure:
Same issues wont be repeated by many times? - 00:30:143 (5,6) - Better if you make these 2 sliders more smooth :3
- 00:31:775 (1,3) - avoid overlap
- 00:32:184 (2,4) - ^
- 00:34:633 (1) - Lower the position of this slider, it touches the healthbar.
- 00:37:490 (5) - Make this slider more smooth, now it is too curve :3
- 00:38:714 (2,3) - You can improve this blanket http://puu.sh/bJgqd/d02053754b.jpg
- 00:42:796 (4,5) - ^
- 00:54:224 (1,2,3) - Why not make a perfect triangle here?, For example: http://puu.sh/bJgvo/a822fcb3c7.jpg
- 01:08:510 (2) - Lower its position.
- 01:41:163 (2) - For a better flow, move to 31|119
- 01:43:204 (1,2,3) - Dont use 3 same sliders, they break the flow. I recommend to use a oval flow here.
- 02:54:224 (2) - Oops...
Hitsounds - None
Others: - 02:44:224 (1) - too short for Normal.
- 02:59:122 (1) - end at 03:00:551
Yeah, more work should be done as to rhythm and flow.
Setsu's Hard
Rhythm:
- 00:35:449 (3) - Better change this ito a reverse slider to follow the vocal.
- 00:39:939 (2,3,4) - Seems missing some notes
Structure: - 00:19:735 (4) - Ctrl+G
- 00:29:531 (3,2) - slightly overlap
- 00:31:775 (1,2) - Improve this blanket.
- 00:55:041 (2) - Too close to its previous slider.
- 01:40:755 (2,3) - flow not good imo.
Hitsounds - 01:05:449 (5,6) - Better add hitsound to emphasize the vocal.
Others: - 01:00:755 (5) - NC
- 02:10:959 (1,2,1) - Dont spam NC
Much better than Easy and Normal, improve some blanket issues and this will be a good work.
Insane
- You can call this a custom diff name such as: Otome
Rhythm: - 01:38:918 (1,2,3) - Suggestion: http://puu.sh/bK0Y9/eba089f10c.jpg
- 02:34:224 (7) - Guess it is not a good idea to put a vocal on a slider end. Trying to put vocal at slider head, in order to provide more hit-feel.
Structure: - Fine generally, but lack of recreation, so consider using some patterns to make this map more recreational.
Hitsounds - 01:40:755 (3) - Wrong position clap.
Others: - 01:55:449 (8) - NC
- 02:24:020 (7) - NC
- 02:33:000 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Combo is little long in this part, consider using some NCs.
Overall fine, but I guess it is better to use some creative patterns, or this map will be a kinda boring at some degree.
In all, this is a nice map for new mappers, but there are also something which can be improved a lot. Find some experienced mapper or look at some excellent maps for patterns & structure, and this will be a nice map!
Finally, good luck on your ranking!
Thanks for reading this! If you have something that you dont understand, feel free to send me a forum-pm and I will try my best to explain it to you clearly!