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- - I'm not sure if your background is okay wtih that size dimention, Although i was thinking 1024x768 is a rankable size.
- - I've seen a FEW storyboard files aren't used on your mapset, so try removing them from your beatmap file.
- 00:11:775 (1) - This looks like a three y/o slider, how about changing it into a Fancy V formation?
- 00:21:571 (1,2) - Why not a double curved sliders for a Circle Formation? Flow would change much, but a lot smoother.
- 00:25:245 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Too straightic and squarely, Curve?
- 00:33:816 (3,4) - Unstack, i don't think beginners are ready for stacking consistencies. If so, it should be VERY clear for beginner players make the notes readable.
- 00:34:224 (4,1) - Recorrect the blanket here, or on purpose?
- 00:38:714 (5,1) - What's with the differing Spacing here? Use only one spacing on easier diffs.
- 00:43:612 (2,3) - Same as 00:33:816 (3,4) -
- 01:30:143 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 00:25:245 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) -
- 01:35:857 (2,3) - Try moving these two circles to y:300, The same flow, but nicer.
- 01:40:347 (1,2,3) - Same as 00:33:816 (3,4) -
- 01:42:796 (3,1) - Spacing issue here.
- 01:48:510 (2,3) - Curve slider (3) to avoid tiny overlaps like this one, Or on purpose?
- 01:52:592 (4,5) - Same as 00:33:816 (3,4) -
- 02:47:693 (3,4,1) - Same as 01:42:796 (3,1) -
- 02:49:326 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same as 00:25:245 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) -
- - Nice, but i think you need a bit of work with the stacks and some straightic flows and patterns, But still great!
- 00:21:571 (1,2,3) - Try a double blanket or a triangle formation here, it'd look nicer.
- 00:33:000 (3,4,5,1) - Make a diamond formation here? Putting slider (1) under the healthbar would look unrankable imo, so here's my suggested diamond formation > http://puu.sh/bFBY8/b434499ece.png
- 00:38:714 (2,3) - Recorrect your blanket here.
- 00:40:347 (4,1,2,3) - Almost the same as 00:33:000 (3,4,5,1) -, and a little blanket on slider to circle.
- 00:44:837 (1,2) - Same as 00:38:714 (2,3) -, just move the tail downgrid.
- 00:54:224 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 00:33:000 (3,4,5,1) -, a blanket here should be fitting for this kind of pattern.
- 01:00:755 (1,2,3) - Make a productive symmetry here, it'll have a better flow if so.
- 01:03:612 (6,1) - Spacing showed up with it's surprise element, which looks unrankable to me, so changing SVs like this would leave other modders to mention this.
- 01:11:775 (2) - I can hear the vocals changes a little 'til the 1/2 beat, but you've made this slider as 1/12 beat, it doesn't make much sense here.
- 01:12:320 (3) - ^
- 01:13:816 (1,2,3) - Same as 00:38:714 (2,3) -
- 01:31:503 (1,2,3) - Make a triangle formation here instead, avoid tiny overlaps like this one.
- 01:33:408 (4,5,6) - Try blanketing a much as you can on this rhythm.
- 01:47:694 (2,3) - ^
- 01:55:041 (4,2) - Stack these two notes, for an Straight Eye formation with slider (1) and slider (3).
- 02:12:592 (1,3) - Overlap head on head, or on purpose?
- 02:17:081 (3,4) - Same as 00:38:714 (2,3) -(?)
- 02:20:483 (1) - Remove NC, still on the same track of vocals.
- 02:23:612 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Why not a Star or a Polygon formation here? the flow here looks really strange.
- 02:34:360 (3,4,5) - Same as 01:11:775 (2) -
- 02:36:265 (1,2) - Double blanket?
- 02:40:891 (2,3) - Same as 01:11:775 (2) -
- 02:47:285 (1,1,1,1) - Such NC like this is too much for the draining HP on the gameplay, which you need to remove one of the NCs here.
- 02:54:224 (2) - Straightic slider, Curve a few?
- - Few unused inherited points you should remove, got them for you > 00:08:510 - / 00:20:347 - / 03:04:836 - / That's all.
- - Nothing much to say, but i think you need to rework with your blankets on the sliders you have, since it doesn't look perfectly blanketed. So just gonna tell this nazi issue, "Fix Your Blankets".
- - Nice diff! Just some of my personal suggestion.
- 00:01:980 (Offset) - Adjust the volume to 40% or 50%, 100% is too loud for this track.
- 00:07:899 (4,5,1,2) - Nazi, the spacing looks a little near, so balance them a little.
- 00:14:633 (1) - Remove NC here, Still on the same track, but i can see you're using it on the first three circles and adding it on the fourth circle on this pattern, But i acually recommend this.
- 00:38:306 (1,2) - Quietly need to shorten the spacing here, this jump is too big for a Hard diff. So i think this matters as an Insane?
- 00:42:592 (2,4) - Recorrect your blanket here.
- 00:50:959 (1,2) - ^, inb4, why the spacing differed here much 'til the next slider?
- 01:03:612 (1,2) - ^
- 01:11:163 (2,3) - Same as 00:38:306 (1,2) -
- 01:38:102 (4,5,6) - Spacing issue.
- 02:51:571 (6,3) - Just saw some cpoy-pasted works on the middle of the track, but nvm, Stack these slider tail and head perfectly.
- 02:58:102 (4,5) - Parallel or double blanket, any choice is okay.
- - Nothing to say here.
Good storyboard and hitsounds! Good luck, MB! o3o/