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1. 00:48:814 - 00:48:995 - delete Kiai mode since it's activated for less than 15 seconds
2. 00:49:537 - 00:49:627 - Same thing here.
3. 00:49:627 - the inheriting timing section is not snapped
4. The offset is on negative. (I didn't know it was possible) please fix it

1. 00:22:790 (3,1) - Stack (it doesn't look so beautiful like that)
2. 01:03:272 (3) - X: 232 Y: 196

1. 00:15:561 (1,2) - Stack

nadapan wrote:

From my Modding Queue

[General]

1. 00:48:814 - 00:48:995 - delete Kiai mode since it's activated for less than 15 seconds
2. 00:49:537 - 00:49:627 - Same thing here. its fine to have kiais under 15 seconds.
3. 00:49:627 - the inheriting timing section is not snapped its snapped to the 1/8th beat o3o
4. The offset is on negative. (I didn't know it was possible) please fix itintentional to capture the down beat before the song starts. having negative offset isnt a bad thing o-o

[Normal]

1. 00:22:790 (3,1) - Stack (it doesn't look so beautiful like that) yes?
2. 01:03:272 (3) - X: 232 Y: 196 not the flow i want and i want a bit of overlap o3o i like it lol

[Hard]

1. 00:15:561 (1,2) - Stack changed up the second slider and some stuff after that

Good Luck

1. 00:06:886 (1) - move back to blue tick, move end back to red tick, add note at white tick 00:07:609 -
2. 00:20:983 - add note
3. 00:21:344 (1) - move end back to blue tick
4. 00:41:585 (1,2) - they sound strange. maybe only use red and white tick for this part
5. 00:44:477 (1,2,1) - remove some hitsound
6. 00:49:537 (5) - feels empty after this note. maybe change it to slider
7. 01:19:537 (2) - remove reverse part
8. 01:24:597 (4) - replace with circle, do what you like after

okdesu wrote:

from Endless modding queue~

suggestion
should fix
must fix

[Normal]

1. 00:06:886 (1) - move back to blue tick, move end back to red tick, add note at white tick 00:07:609 - following guitar and i need simple rhythms for a normal
2. 00:20:983 - add note did somethning here~
3. 00:21:344 (1) - move end back to blue tick guitar ends on white tick
4. 00:41:585 (1,2) - they sound strange. maybe only use red and white tick for this part following strongest vocals. sounds weird cuz i missed 1 of the vocals. ill consider changing the rhythm as i go along tho
5. 00:44:477 (1,2,1) - remove some hitsound for buildup for kiai
6. 00:49:537 (5) - feels empty after this note. maybe change it to slider aaa i would be i dont want to fill it with 3/4 rhythms
7. 01:19:537 (2) - remove reverse part to keep tempo
8. 01:24:597 (4) - replace with circle, do what you like after dont want so many hitcircles o3o

gl (｀・ω・´)ｼｬｷｰﾝ

1. 00:48:814 - 00:49:537 - 00:50:260 - Omg, many Kiai fountains very close from each other. They actually blinded me a little... Please, only use the fountain at 00:50:260 instead.

1. Before saying my suggestions, some recomendation. In a single normal diff you should either stack notes 1/2 a beat apart or a whole beat apart, so as to not confuse players. Otherwise, they'll hit the stocked note earlier or later than what they should.
2. 00:00:742 (1) - Maybe center this one?
3. 00:09:055 (4) - This one should be a little more upside and to the right to make a better blanket (aproximately x:488|y:188)
4. 00:14:838 (4) - ^^ (x:216|y:328)
5. 00:22:790 (3,1) - The way those overlap isn't that appealing.
6. 00:35:079 (4,1) - ^^
7. 00:41:585 (1,2) - ^^
8. 01:09:778 (4,1) - ^^
9. 01:22:067 (1) - Such SV change in a large sliders will most likely make normal players lose combo by trying to complete slider at the same speed as the others. Better make the SV change a little less sudden by using a higher value (I'll leave this to your criteria).

1. 00:03:814 (8) - I don't hear nothing here... what does this note follow?
2. 00:06:705 (6) - ^^
3. 00:09:687 (7) - ^^
4. 00:15:561 (1,2) - Hm... can't you arrange those in a way they won't overlap like they're doing now?
5. 00:24:055 (4) - Another note off-place.
6. 00:29:838 (5) - ^^
7. 00:35:621 (6) - ^^
8. 01:05:802 (4,5) - I don't like that much the overlaps (I'm just like that).
9. 01:22:067 (1,1,2) - ^^

LixRei wrote:

Came from mod queue. Hi there!

[Overview]

1. 00:48:814 - 00:49:537 - 00:50:260 - Omg, many Kiai fountains very close from each other. They actually blinded me a little... Please, only use the fountain at 00:50:260 instead.CHOCOLATE FOUNTAINS FOR EVERYONE

[Normal]

1. Before saying my suggestions, some recomendation. In a single normal diff you should either stack notes 1/2 a beat apart or a whole beat apart, so as to not confuse players. Otherwise, they'll hit the stocked note earlier or later than what they should. AAAA i had this in mind but accidentally placed one that was 1/2 beat anyways. fixed~
2. 00:00:742 (1) - Maybe center this one? ok
3. 00:09:055 (4) - This one should be a little more upside and to the right to make a better blanket (aproximately x:488|y:188)
4. 00:14:838 (4) - ^^ (x:216|y:328)
5. 00:22:790 (3,1) - The way those overlap isn't that appealing. the overlaps here and below, i love like my children ><
6. 00:35:079 (4,1) - ^^
7. 00:41:585 (1,2) - ^^
8. 01:09:778 (4,1) - ^^
9. 01:22:067 (1) - Such SV change in a large sliders will most likely make normal players lose combo by trying to complete slider at the same speed as the others. Better make the SV change a little less sudden by using a higher value (I'll leave this to your criteria). fixxed

[Hard]

1. 00:03:814 (8) - I don't hear nothing here... what does this note follow? these triplets here are to maintain a sense of rhythm. if i were to only place a note on the 1/8th before the white tick and the white tick, it would be extremely confusing. i also feel only 1 note on the white tick doesnt represent the guitar well at all. so for the sake of the players' sanity i made it a triplet. same goes for all the others below~
2. 00:06:705 (6) - ^^
3. 00:09:687 (7) - ^^
4. 00:15:561 (1,2) - Hm... can't you arrange those in a way they won't overlap like they're doing now? ye they are ugly huh. changed
5. 00:24:055 (4) - Another note off-place.
6. 00:29:838 (5) - ^^
7. 00:35:621 (6) - ^^
8. 01:05:802 (4,5) - I don't like that much the overlaps (I'm just like that). this one is also my child :O
9. 01:22:067 (1,1,2) - ^^

I refrained from pointing out weird sliders (you said in the past you like them). ~
Well, this is a nice mapset, generally talking.
Good luck!

xxdeathx wrote:

IRC mod woo

SPOILER

15:38 *xxdeathx is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/498560 Nanjou Yoshino - Kimi ga Emu Yuugure [Hard]]
15:40 Kihhou: ~
15:40 xxdeathx: negative offset :O
15:40 Kihhou: hold on did you just start modding?
15:40 xxdeathx: well since you're already editing your map i'll just tell you stuff on irc
15:41 Kihhou: kk~
15:41 Kihhou: (stole arnefm's timing shhhh)
15:41 xxdeathx: well there are some QAT out there against having negative offsets
15:41 xxdeathx: and i think they're avoidable too
15:42 xxdeathx: 00:01:103 offset works too
15:42 Kihhou: then i gotta have 2 red timing points ;-;
15:42 xxdeathx: it's fine to have objects before offset
15:42 xxdeathx: naw you don't
15:42 xxdeathx: look at rail wars op
15:42 xxdeathx: i had a 1/8 slider before offset
15:43 Kihhou: doesnt that make that slider have 100% volume?
15:43 Kihhou: or does it inherit the red timing point?
15:43 xxdeathx: idk actually o.o
15:43 Kihhou: D:
15:43 Kihhou: eh ill change for now then
15:43 Kihhou: see what bats say
15:44 xxdeathx: yeah you could ask someone else for confirmation
15:44 xxdeathx: i'm fairly sure it inherits the red timing point
15:44 xxdeathx: ok the big things i noticed
15:44 xxdeathx: sliders are way slower relative to the distance spacing
15:45 xxdeathx: if you look at the 1/4 notes they're using 2.0x spacing
15:45 xxdeathx: which is like big jumps
15:45 Kihhou: i guess but imo its fitting ><
15:45 Kihhou: like i tried fast sv and uh
15:46 Kihhou: it matched the music horribly loool
15:46 Kihhou: and unless i want overlaps, i gotta do high distance snaps
15:46 xxdeathx: this is a little too slow though ._.
15:47 xxdeathx: i mean i've seen easies with faster sliders than this
15:47 Kihhou: higher bpm tho
15:47 xxdeathx: longer sliders i mean*
15:47 xxdeathx: also since this is a hard you might as well maintain distance snap
15:48 xxdeathx: with the 1/2 notes
15:48 Kihhou: i think i have 1.8x constant o-o
15:48 Kihhou: oh jk
15:48 Kihhou: 1.8x for kiai
15:48 Kihhou: 2.0 for non kiai
15:48 xxdeathx: actually it's all over the place
15:49 Kihhou: ?
15:49 Kihhou: example? o3o
15:49 xxdeathx: 00:07:971 (3) - 1.5x here
15:49 Kihhou: ohhh 1/2s i thought you meant 1/4th
15:49 Kihhou: s
15:49 Kihhou: hmmm not sure why that is
15:49 xxdeathx: referring to time in low bpm is confusing ;w;
15:50 Kihhou: ill look over distances
15:50 xxdeathx: 00:11:224 (3,4,5) -
15:50 xxdeathx: a little weird because 00:11:495 (4) - isn't spaced evenly between the objects
15:51 xxdeathx: usually people would stack 00:11:495 (4,5) -
15:51 Kihhou: had that stacked before but the autostacking made it look weird so i changed the direction
15:52 Kihhou: sorta manually lol
15:52 Kihhou: maybe i should restack
15:52 xxdeathx: id
15:52 xxdeathx: idk
15:52 xxdeathx: depends on how it looks in game
15:52 xxdeathx: i'd go for even spacing or the stack i mentioned earlier
15:53 xxdeathx: 00:15:199 (6,1) - blanket is a little off
15:53 xxdeathx: you know how to fix them right?
15:53 Kihhou: http://puu.sh/bADJF/b73a6baccb.jpg
15:53 Kihhou: this is manual stack
15:53 Kihhou: i mean
15:53 Kihhou: autostack o-o
15:54 Kihhou: has a bit of curve from one to the next so it looks weird to me ><
15:54 Kihhou: yes gotchu
15:54 xxdeathx: o.o that skin
15:54 xxdeathx: ok i see the autostack moves things
15:55 Kihhou: shhh secret skin ~ lol
15:57 xxdeathx: 01:13:392 (1,2,3) - this kind of pattern is always unintuitive to me
15:57 xxdeathx: like the 1/1 note is stacked but then a 1/2 not stacked follows
15:59 xxdeathx: but i suppose it usually makes sense in the music
16:01 Kihhou: hmmm
16:03 xxdeathx: one last thing
16:03 Kihhou: yeah i think ill keep as is actually >< i tried it as you said and its more engaging but doesnt follow the music as well as it does atm
16:03 xxdeathx: okay
16:04 xxdeathx: 01:23:513 (1) - remove nc here and add nc 01:24:958 (6) - to stay consistent with nc every measure
16:05 Kihhou: ill remove nc but keep the last note as is
16:06 Kihhou: cuz i dont wanna mess up the triangle lol
16:06 Kihhou: that last notes gonna look like a weirdo in that pattern
16:06 xxdeathx: okay
16:06 *xxdeathx is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/498604 Nanjou Yoshino - Kimi ga Emu Yuugure [Normal]]
16:07 Kihhou: and i think i fixed all ds
16:07 xxdeathx: great
16:12 xxdeathx: normal looks good o.o
16:12 xxdeathx: 01:25:320 (1) - this starts later than hard though
16:12 Kihhou: wooo~
16:12 Kihhou: ye cuz of the stupid new rule :c
16:13 Kihhou: spinner has to start 1/2 beat after last note i dont even know why
16:13 xxdeathx: i thought this was about notes after spinner not before
16:13 Kihhou: like there isnt even anything at the start of the spinner why make that rule ><
16:13 Kihhou: thats 2/1 after spinner
16:13 Kihhou: its also 1/2 before
16:13 Kihhou: sad life
16:13 xxdeathx: since when did they have a rule about spinners coming after notes?
16:14 Kihhou: idk but everytime i make an easy they tell me to do it lol
16:14 Kihhou: think it happened in yanagi
16:14 xxdeathx: o.o i forgot this is low bpm
16:14 xxdeathx: so a 1/2 beat is longer
16:16 Kihhou: oh i tell a lie it didnt happen for yanaginagi
16:16 Kihhou: was for something else
16:16 Kihhou: that i dont remember o3o
16:16 xxdeathx: o.o i was looking through recently dqed maps
16:16 xxdeathx: and it was all "this note is too soon after a spinner"
16:16 Kihhou: ye that too
16:16 Kihhou: lol
16:17 Kihhou: i had to take out a note because of that on mukai
16:17 xxdeathx: ;w;
16:17 xxdeathx: okay that's it from me
16:17 Kihhou: thanks luv~
16:17 xxdeathx: /savelog
16:17 xxdeathx: ?
16:18 Kihhou: ?
16:18 xxdeathx: can i post log
16:18 Kihhou: ye

Knotts wrote:

From my queue~

Hard

1. 00:29:296 (4) - Ctrl + H would make this look nicer imo
2. 00:44:477 (1) - It get's noticeably louder here so I'd up the volume.
3. 00:57:127 (3,4) - Meh, stack error
4. 01:11:585 (4) - Whistle on the middle and tail

Normal

1. 00:29:296 (4,3) - I'm sure you can find a way to stack these.
2. 00:24:235 - Unused green line
3. 00:49:627 - ^
4. 01:01:465 (3,1,3) - These are some ugly overlaps adjusted blanket to adjust overlap~

Cool song, I really like it. Good luck

Kamio Misuzu wrote:

ganbare~！

I'll mod this map tomorrow

Kamio Misuzu wrote:

[Hard]

00:11:224 (3,4,5) - try this arrange：delete 4, then ctrl+g oooo thats so much better lol thankyou

00:12:307 - this break seems a little unnatural, try to add a note here? fits imo o3o

00:24:055 (4,5) - delete

00:25:681 (5,6) - change into a 1/2 slider rather follow the guitar thingyy

00:26:946 - 00:27:036 - add notes?

[Normal]

00:19:898 (4,5,6) - let 4 end at 00:20:621 - and add a note at 00:20:982 - , then delete 6 wanted held notes here

00:41:585 (1) - change this into slider+note, slider end at 00:42:307 - vocals too strong to ignore here imo

00:48:995 (4,5) - try this arrange

SPOILER

need hitsound at 00:49:356 - D:

01:21:886 (6) - delete ooooyes thats a lot better


nothing else

EDIT: there are some issues in aimod, but i dont know why... kiai fountain spam huahua

ganbare~！

pishifat wrote:

i like slow maps. that is a lie but i'm here anyway <3

spinnerbonus.wav u so fancy. audioleadin 700 u so fancy. 1/4 in normal u so fancy. pinky out
this map is fancy.

general

1. your kiai spam is inconsistent :/ what
2. your combo colors are inconsistent :/ the crap

hard

1. 00:18:272 (5,6,1) - not really a fan of how these are supposed to line up with the slider body of 1, yet they don't cuz of the angle 1 has. doing something similar to 00:26:946 (8,9,1) - looks a lot better imo. i could also argue uber flow things but i won't even though i am
2. 00:22:428 (2) - lack of whistle here is inconsistent with the whistle on 00:10:862 (2) - . you're putting them on all the strong guitar noises but not this one wat iforgot why i did that lol
3. 00:42:308 (3) - not really sure why there's a whistle on the head here. you've only been putting whistles to emphasize the guitar stuff, which is not on either position here. there's a piano sound on teh head, which you ignored every measure prior to this so uh off with your head im hilarious:/
4. 00:44:476 - green line here might be better at 35% so the difference between here and kiai is more boooooom and less not boom
5. 00:44:476 (1,2,4,5) - the way you're spamming whistles throughout this measure harms my cochlea. like the tail of 1 has the same sound as every other measure, which you ignored, then the head of 2 is cool, but your hitsounds empahsize the reverse and tail just as much as that, then you've got 4 and 5, which are pick up notes that should definitely not be emphasized as much as 00:47:368 (1) - . maybe i just don't understand it but just having the whistle on 2's head only there would be best. oh yeh huh.. goodnight cochlea. i did, somethings here. uh. too much to mention lol weird stuff
6. 00:47:368 (1) - i think this should be a finish instead of a whistle like all your other downbeats right
7. 00:48:452 (2) - should probably have a whistle because super illogically loud high pitch piano. only time in the song so kinda good to bring it out aye didnt even notice that was there lol
8. 01:25:139 (1) - could do that high-tech fade out thing that people do since the song itself does a fade out any gotta follllllllow the musics sss
9. 01:23:513 (2) - not a fan of the most passive slider hitsounding on all of osu here. 01:23:693 - seems like it is in dire need of a keyboard click and my keyboard is left unstroked. please let me stroke my keyboard by doing something like this. you even managed to make this an active hitsound in the normal diff so you kinda have no excuse as to why it is passive here :I if you do apply i'll mourn the loss of the overlap cry with me THATS WHY IT FELT SO TERRIBLE PLAYING IT. waw u are good. did some stuff
10. 01:24:958 (8) - missed opportunity for a triple makes me sad :c nobody else likes the triples on this diff probably but triples are the only thing that makes the map good. anyway tho this isn't really important just thought was worth mentioning wheredidthistripletcomefromwat

normal

1. hitsound stuff would apply here too i guess cuz copy paste hitsounds are things
2. 00:03:633 (5,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Spacing
3. 00:21:344 (1,2,3) - Triangles can be classified according to the relative lengths of their sides: In an equilateral triangle all sides have the same length. An equilateral triangle is also a regular polygon with all angles measuring 60°.[1] uhh. ye-yes?
4. 00:56:766 (2,3) - plays rather unnaturally becuase of the song's gap here. if you were to have a flow break like you did at 01:07:609 (1,2,3) - i think it would be a lot more appropriate. swing set yo oop didnt recheck that
5. 01:23:513 (1) - uh what's with the NC here. hard has the same super long slider yet no NC on the object after it. if you really wanna keep it for whatever reason, do the new combo in hard too consistency hurray took out nc

minimodcomplete

Piyoko_9796 wrote:

I'm sorry that I still can't mod your map as quick as possible coz the network were not cooprerating QAQ

I will try my best to post my mod before October

suggestion

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Piyoko_9796 wrote:

Piyoko_9796 wrote:

I'm sorry that I still can't mod your map as quick as possible coz the network were not cooprerating QAQ

I will try my best to post my mod before October

Finally, I finished my mod

Here you are.
I have a long time didn't mod for anyone and I know that I'm not a gd modder ;w;
forgive me for my poor english and bad mod_(:3JL)_

[General]
cb1 and cb3 color are too similar hmmmfixed

[Hard]

00:01:826 (2,3,4,5) - it seems that the flow angel is too narrow,maybe 00:02:187 (3,4,5) - Ctrl J was trying for that flow o3o
00:07:971 (3,4) - Ctrl G for rhythm im not sure what this means o-o
00:09:597 (6) - del i dont wanna add 2 note streams to a hard diff
00:11:223 (3,4) - maybe it will be better that change it to changed this rhythm . kept the pause tho since theres nothing on the red tick tail of the slider you showed

suggestion

00:20:621 (6,7,1) - i think it will be more pretty if they have the same ds adjusted spacing but kept ds the same for consistency
00:22:428 (2) - x:128 y:152 the pause is where theres no instrumentals atm o3o that would misplace the "antijump" ish part
00:32:187 (5) - better move a little far away from00:32:910 (1) - ,coz it block the reverse arrow not fully blocked. should be fine
00:34:356 (3,4,5) - change it to

suggestion

imo my rhythms better
00:36:886 (2,3,4) -

suggestion

following guitar
00:41:224 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5) -

suggestion

guitar again o3o
00:45:560 (2,3,4) -

suggestion

why? o-o

(*)Add some little jumps in the kiai to show the rhythm in a more lively way
it seem to be bored to keep a same ds in the main part well it is a hard diff, not insane lol and i dont wanna make it too hard since this is only a normal-hard spread at 84 bpm

00:52:248 (5) - Ctrl G * not going for rotation here
00:53:151 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -

suggestion

too many huge jumps lol
00:56:766 (2) - 00:57:850 (4) - place these note at the next note head to give prominence to the rhythm*

suggestion

^dont want jumps
00:59:477 (2,3) - x:60 y:284 ^
01:02:187 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) -

suggestion

^
01:06:525 (6,7) - * ??? lol
01:10:501 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -

suggestion

^
01:25:319 (1) - end at 01:27:849 - following guitar


[Normal]

00:19:898 (4,5) - Ctrl G for rhythm00:20:621 - note plays on that tho o-o
00:38:693 (1) - the flow looks stuck...

suggestion

? o-o the bow and arrow sliders?
00:47:006 (1,2) -

suggestion

why o-o
01:22:067 (1) - 2 kinds of SV speed change is the enough for Normal there isnt much of a rule on this and it fits well and its not hard to read since the sliders so long
01:24:597 (1,1) - del01:24:597 (1) - for new babies have enough time to prepare for the spinner,and 01:25:319 (1) - strat at 01:24:958 - ,end at 01:27:849 - 1/2 spacing is enough o-o and spinner following guitar

you seem pretty focused on rotational flow o3o flow breaks are good for emphasis ~

ColdTooth wrote:

Hiii, from my queue

[Normal]

00:21:163 (6) - I would remove this since it can lead to difficulty, and it is a normal. hmmm thats.. interesting. i like the rhythm atm but ill highly consider this. i do see what you mean. ill leave as is for now though

00:22:789 (3,1) - The transition here can be quick, and quite confusing same as other 1/1 spacing overlaps o-o

01:03:272 (3) - Try blanketing 01:01:826 (1) - 's starting point i like the overlap as is

01:04:718 (1,2) - These two don't look blanketed. I used 1/16th oop. fixed. i think

01:09:778 (4) - Shorten this to a 1/2 slider for better flow i disagree o-o

01:13:392 (1) - this has better flow IMO it does but an upward arc and antiflow matches the emphasis and music imo


[Hard]

00:32:910 (1) - Try to blanket 00:32:187 (5) - 's endpoint dont wanna blanket there o3o

nothing else found

No kds if the mod wasn't helpful

Good luck on rank

DraQeu wrote:

Hi from my mod queue

[General]

Nothing really

[Hard]

00:13:754 (2,3,4) - Try this rhythm? http://puu.sh/bN1O4.png theres an instrument at 00:14:115 - so id rather hit that
00:18:091 (1,2) - Try this rhythm? http://puu.sh/bN2uV.png this confuses me o-o the notes on the 1/8th and then the blue tick?
01:06:886 (8,1) - Try this rhythm? http://puu.sh/bN1Wn.png id rather hit the note at 01:08:151 -

[Normal]

Is fine for my eye



Good luck with your beatmap

PuttyoU wrote:

from my queues~
sorry for late

[Hard]

1. 00:05:440 (3) - I think this slider isn't a straight. I want few curve. ye
2. 00:11:946 (5) - Um~,slider is best in there. slider end here 00:12:307 - did something here
3. 00:49:537 (1) - rhythm suggestion. I like it. id rather follow the sound for muuuch better buildup o3o
   
4. 01:21:344 (6) - suggestion i dont like stacking notes like that,, or the flow ._."
   

[Normal]

1. 00:20:621 (5) - It's strange feeling to me.slider change to note. changed something else
2. 00:41:584 (1,2,3) - This rhythm doesn't fit. I porpose the rhythm. it does fit imo. follows strong finish hit and then strongest vocals
   
3. 00:48:814 (3,4,5) - ^ . (3)Clap (4)Finish (5)head & tail : Finish i like my rhythm o-o
   
4. 01:00:380 (2,3) - stack oop
5. 01:23:513 (2,3) - I think there is a little difficult.change reverse slider.it isnt too hard imo and its nicer this way

That's all
Good song & map

Good luck!!

1. 00:48:813 - This kiai point is out of place, a bit unnecessary. Remove it.
2. 00:49:536 - Same.
3. 00:01:103 - I would start mapping here. In case you won't do it, I guess (not sure though) notes before offset make the map unrankeable. Idk if rule has changed, this was just a comment I wanted to do.

1. Try to avoid changing SV in Normal / Easy diffs. SV changes are better for players who have some experience playing Hard / Insane. One SV is ok.
2. Maybe AR:4? It's pretty slow this song.
3. 00:02:368 (3) - Why not something like this for a better flow? http://puu.sh/bPObS/24894265a6.jpg If you do that, move (4) to x:88 y:44.
4. 00:21:343 (1) - You've been using curve sliders in that pattern, so, this straight slider it's a bit out of place for me. Try something like this, you won't need to move (2), DS will still be ok.
5. 00:54:596 (3) - Ctrl+J and move it to x:480 y:68.
6. 01:24:596 (1) - I know your intention was adding NC since that stanza. But, since this is the ending (before spinner), I would remove it.

1. 00:03:813 (8) - Listen carefully with 25% playback rate. There's no music here. So, consider removing this note.
2. 00:06:705 (6) - Same here, please do it in all cases.
3. 01:11:042 (2) - What about moving it to x:160 y:164? Nice blanket, nice stack, and nice little jump. Is just a suggestion though.

Inyuschan wrote:

From my queue.

General:

1. 00:48:813 - This kiai point is out of place, a bit unnecessary. Remove it. kiai fountain
2. 00:49:536 - Same. ^
3. 00:01:103 - I would start mapping here. In case you won't do it, I guess (not sure though) notes before offset make the map unrankeable. Idk if rule has changed, this was just a comment I wanted to do. bnotes before an offset isnt unrankable. i follow vocals for a lot of the song so i felt following that one vocal is fitting.

Normal:

1. Try to avoid changing SV in Normal / Easy diffs. SV changes are better for players who have some experience playing Hard / Insane. One SV is ok.the 2nd SV change is a small change and the slider is huge, making it a lot easier to read with no problems.
2. Maybe AR:4? It's pretty slow this song. ok
3. 00:02:368 (3) - Why not something like this for a better flow? http://puu.sh/bPObS/24894265a6.jpg If you do that, move (4) to x:88 y:44. im looking for a direction change onto 00:03:272 (4) - for more emphasis.
4. 00:21:343 (1) - You've been using curve sliders in that pattern, so, this straight slider it's a bit out of place for me. Try something like this, you won't need to move (2), DS will still be ok. different sounds in the music
5. 00:54:596 (3) - Ctrl+J and move it to x:480 y:68. 00:55:681 (4) - want antiflow here again. more emphasis and very fitting imo
6. 01:24:596 (1) - I know your intention was adding NC since that stanza. But, since this is the ending (before spinner), I would remove it.consistency with hard diff. its not too important tho

Hard:

1. 00:03:813 (8) - Listen carefully with 25% playback rate. There's no music here. So, consider removing this note. i know theres nothing there orz i wrote it on the song description hoping people would read aaaaaaaaaaaa ;-;
2. 00:06:705 (6) - Same here, please do it in all cases. ^
3. 01:11:042 (2) - What about moving it to x:160 y:164? Nice blanket, nice stack, and nice little jump. Is just a suggestion though. ye. changed the whole rhythm here to keep it from having a jump. keeping DS this entire mapset

We could say this mapset needs a lot of work, so, try to look for more mods. However, patterns and sliders in general are good, keep improving. how so? o-o in which aspect?

Good luck~

1. Yeah, add tv size to tags, some full song lovers will be mad if tv size song doesn't include it in tags.

1. 00:26:404 (7) - Why no whistle for the sound :< 00:32:187 / 00:37:970 / 00:40:862 / 00:43:753 too
2. 00:54:597 (5,6) - This rhythm was quite awkward to play, try to make a 1/1 slider instead, it can follow the song more accurate. and then add a circle at 00:55:139 - I wanted to follow the vocal at 00:55:139 with 1/1 slider but we will lose a clap at the white tick so
3. 00:57:127 (3) - A whistle on head probably fits there
4. 01:12:669 (6) - whistle and clap at the same place is okay I guess
5. 01:13:392 - Increase the volume by 10? currently the hitsounds are too silent for me,_,
6. 01:17:368 (2,3) - well you can try to add whistle on both circle and head or either.
7. 01:21:886 (7) - I would like to add some hitsound to fit the bell sound.
8. 01:24:958 (1,2,3) - A triplet is uncomfortable for me, the sound is not that strong for 3 circles and stacking on 01:24:235 (5) - head doesn't fit, I would use a reversed 1/4 slider (in this case it called 1/8?) and unstack from the head.
   
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   those triplets at beginning part are ruining this relax song

• 
  apply hitsounds to this diff too if you changed what I suggested for Insane diff.

1. 00:19:898 (4,5) - what, this rhythm doesn't fit the song at all, the vocals that you followed by both slider end can be ignored for better rhythm in Normal diff.
2. 01:00:380 (2) - the flow 00:58:934 (1) - => this and this => 01:01:465 (3,1) - could have been improved, dunno like this works much better :
   
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3. 01:03:272 (3) - This overlapping looks quite bad :/
4. 01:13:392 (1) - The curve looks too over, you can re-curve for more soft, and there's no blanket stuff to affect the slider so
   
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   looks kinda hard for the easiest diff, because of the bpm easiest diff should have been more easier imo.

Delis wrote:

[■ General]

1. Yeah, add tv size to tags, some full song lovers will be mad if tv size song doesn't include it in tags.

[■ Hard]

1. 00:26:404 (7) - Why no whistle for the sound :< 00:32:187 / 00:37:970 / 00:40:862 / 00:43:753 too
2. 00:54:597 (5,6) - This rhythm was quite awkward to play, try to make a 1/1 slider instead, it can follow the song more accurate. and then add a circle at 00:55:139 - I wanted to follow the vocal at 00:55:139 with 1/1 slider but we will lose a clap at the white tick so ye~ changed the rhythm here a bit. by 1/1 i think you mean 1/2? ._." confusing half bpm lol
3. 00:57:127 (3) - A whistle on head probably fits there i dont like the sound of that whistle sound here in kiai :c not soft enough imo
4. 01:12:669 (6) - whistle and clap at the same place is okay I guess oo that sounds very nice o:
5. 01:13:392 - Increase the volume by 10? currently the hitsounds are too silent for me,_,
6. 01:17:368 (2,3) - well you can try to add whistle on both circle and head or either. same as 00:57:127 (3) -
7. 01:21:886 (7) - I would like to add some hitsound to fit the bell sound. ummm im not sure what you mean here o-o im not very good at hearing the music so im not sure where the bell is >.<
8. 01:24:958 (1,2,3) - A triplet is uncomfortable for me, the sound is not that strong for 3 circles and stacking on 01:24:235 (5) - head doesn't fit, I would use a reversed 1/4 slider (in this case it called 1/8?) and unstack from the head.
   
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   those triplets at beginning part are ruining this relax song orz am i the only one that thinks triplets are relaxing to play D:

[■ Normal]

• 
  apply hitsounds to this diff too if you changed what I suggested for Insane diff.

1. 00:19:898 (4,5) - what, this rhythm doesn't fit the song at all, the vocals that you followed by both slider end can be ignored for better rhythm in Normal diff. im not too sure on what to do here for the first slider orz i guess i can make it 1/2 slider to hit the other vocal. for the second slider i think it finds the fading guiter -> vocal well so ill leave that as is
2. 01:00:380 (2) - the flow 00:58:934 (1) - => this and this => 01:01:465 (3,1) - could have been improved, dunno like this works much better : wanted a direction change because i felt the vocal was extra strong at 01:01:465 (3) -
   
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3. 01:03:272 (3) - This overlapping looks quite bad :/bu--but i love this overlap ;-;
4. 01:13:392 (1) - The curve looks too over, you can re-curve for more soft, and there's no blanket stuff to affect the slider so
   
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   looks kinda hard for the easiest diff, because of the bpm easiest diff should have been more easier imo.

1. are you sure about spinnerbonus.wav? it's really really hurting my ears. >-<
   might be just me, tho. cause tinnitus. still, I'm sure you can find one that's better matching!
2. cause you follow vocals and not the beat, I just want to mention that I'm not really comfortable with that so if I sound rude or sth I'm sorry!! XD

1. cause there is no Easy I think you could lower diff settings slightly. like lower HP and OD by 0.5 - 1
   just saying cause there are many objects beginners could miss and some rhythms they might not understand, which leads me to the next point ~
2. stacks! I'm totally fine with them most times, but you have some stacks that are 1/1 apart and some are 1/4 which might cause some confusion
   I'd prefer if you unstack 1/1 because stacks usually make newer players panic and so they hit objects too early. if they are 1/1 they miss, but 1/4 are most likely fine, so ~ well, think about it, at least!
3. 00:02:368 (3,4,5,1) - not a huge fan of the movement from 3 to 4, you could improve this by alternating the pattern slightly
   screen

   
4. 00:11:224 (3,4) - I'm not familiar with the language so I might be completely wrong here, but this sounds a little off to me
   maybe a different rhythm works better?
   or
   
5. 00:37:970 (4,1) - are you sure you want this abrupt movement here? doesn't match with the calm nature of the song, imo
   there are several more parts where the flow gets kind of broken but this is the "most extreme" one, I think..
6. 00:40:862 (3,4) - not sure here, what you're mapping to. there are no vocals (you're main focus), and only on 3 is a bit.. I think you could use this time really well to give players a really short break, but that's up to you ofc! (not actually insert a break, but you know.. one beat to rest a tiny little bit)
7. 00:48:814 (3,4,5) - now this is really confusing for beginner players, cause the first one's stacked and it's even 1/4.. I'd prefer if you alternate it like this:
   
   if you don't wanna change the rhythm, please think about unstacking 3+4, it makes the pattern way more readavle for less experienced players!
8. 00:55:681 (4) - was this placed above 00:54:597 (3) - originally and moved because it touched the healthbar? cause atm the movement is really meh. ;-;
   you could have moved 4 to 220|72 and the following 00:56:043 (1,2,3) - further to the bottom left instead
   at least to me it does look more appealing
9. 01:01:826 (1,2,3) - pattern looks great, but playwise I prefer if you move 3 further to the left and 01:04:718 (1,2) - further bottom/left
   like this

   
   well, not exactly like this cause it goes off screen but I think it explains what I mean xD
10. 01:24:597 (1,1) - usually I like beats on downbeats, but in this case it sounds better if the spinner starts at 01:24:958, because the rest of the spinner follows the vocal, so.. yah. replace slider with single circle and move spinner to downbeat?

1. 00:10:862 (2,3,4) - they rhythm/vocals match better with these objects, imo:
   
   just try it and go with what sounds better to you!
2. 00:15:561 (1,2) - while I love the shape of 2, this does look extremely forced. forced as in it doesn't match the rest of the diff. (also the movement to 00:17:730 (3) - could be improved), sooo I'm not sure what to do about this.
   looks better to me already, but I think you can come up with something much better matching

   
3. 00:25:319 (4) - sliderend feels off, I think it matches better with beat and vocals if you leave it unmapped
   
4. 00:50:801 - actually missing an object here.
5. 01:06:525 (6,7) - stack interrupts flow here, consider unstacking them, please. that makes the movement so much more natural!