wowaka - World's End Dancehall (ROCKETMAN Remix) [Osu|Taiko]‬ · forum‬

Frostmourne

osu! Alumni

Joined November 2009

Frostmourne 2014-09-12T15:10:47+00:00

General
seems good ヾ(@^▽^@)ノ

Fr33z3R's Easy
AR 3-3.5 could do great job here. 4 is too fast imo.
mostly about new combo at some positions that I find a bit strange.
01:09:910 (1) - remove NC
01:21:138 (1) - remove NC
03:29:910 (1) - remove NC
03:32:717 (1) - remove NC
03:38:331 (1) - remove NC
03:52:366 (1) - remove NC
04:13:068 (2,3) - finish should be swapped here like you did on 04:07:454 (2,3) -
04:17:630 (1) - remove NC
mostly about 1 combo and NC again afterwards. It can destroy the HP drain the most. I highly suggest you fix all of them if possible. Don't forget to be aware of colorhax you did there too.

neonat's Normal
00:55:173 (2) - there is still significant vocal on 00:54:998 like what you have done placing sliders on such 00:49:384 (2) - 00:52:191 (2) - so keep it similar to the previous you did so it won't confuse players for Normal diff one.

SPOILER

Great vocal followed diff.

Hard
AR 7.5 feels better so please give it a try
the rest is fine~

AI's Extra
HP-7 could be better on this because it has a number of NCs. The HP drain could be harsh in some parts.
You could rename the diff to "AI's Insane" as it doesn't play much differently from Insane and the star rating shows that it should be an Insane.
From 01:22:191 (1) - to 01:23:331 (2) -
I highly suggest you change to this way. The end of sliders for 01:22:542 (4) - and 01:23:068 (8) - have really strong beats on there. Making it able to be hit by using a circle and placing using triplet on such points will tend to be much more easier to read as 01:22:191 (1,2,3) - suggested in the first time.

SPOILER

I hope you get what I mean from the picture... If not, I will elaborate.
02:33:770 (7,8,9,10) - spacings there are quite hard to read in some parts, example, 02:33:770 (7,8) - between these should be far more than 02:34:121 (9,10) - if you see the timeline of beat placement.
I suggest you add a new combo on 02:33:770 (7) - and move it to around x:232 y:236

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02:40:086 (5,6,7) - similar to above, I would move these to where 02:38:682 (4,5,6) - is placed. It will be much better spacing to read imo.
02:52:366 (4,5,6,7) - similar to 01:22:191 (1) - to 01:23:331 (2) -
Something like this

SPOILER

03:22:191 (4) - this really needs NC because spacing is changed drastically with the rhythm you used.
03:22:542 (3,1) - jump too far? just in my opinion..

Insane
03:21:489 (1) - you may try this rhythm instead. The current one is a bit hard to read because it actually has no sound on 03:21:928 so I suggest you try this rhythm to see if you would like to change it or not.

SPOILER

03:22:893 (1) - the music itself doesn't guide that obviously that it is going to be this slower. I suggest you make a stop jump and then place a slider later this way.
Players would tend to react in time and get understood to the change from combo color change between these two notes 03:22:893 (1,2) -
so they will not tend to slip on the suddenly slow slider like I did in test play.

SPOILER

Feel free to ask TicClick for a rebubble and I will rank afterwards, just to make sure everything is rechecked carefully ( ´ ▽ ` )ﾉ

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,547 posts

Joined April 2012

neonat 2014-09-12T15:47:15+00:00

SPOILER

osu file format v13

[General]
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Title:World's End Dancehall (ROCKETMAN Remix)
TitleUnicode:ワールズエンド・ダンスホール (ROCKETMAN Remix)
Artist:wowaka
ArtistUnicode:wowaka
Creator:Mira-san
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120,288,254823,2,0,P|176:272|219:202,1,120.000000596046,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,128,255524,2,0,P|155:95|81:105,1,120.000000596046,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,144,256226,86,0,P|-2:200|33:267,1,120.000000596046,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,308,256928,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,364,257279,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,316,257630,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,257980,12,4,259033,0:0:0:0:

Kyouren

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Kyouren 2014-09-13T08:07:34+00:00

Ranked plz~

TicClick

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TicClick 2014-09-13T11:34:07+00:00

что ты тут делаешь?

Mira-san

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Mira-san 2014-09-13T14:54:25+00:00

None of these 'updates' are submitted properly. Hahaha.

The maps change, but the first post doesn't.

This is so fun.

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TicClick 2014-09-13T15:14:52+00:00

[AI's Extra]

01:11:314 (4) - missing clap
01:14:296 (4,5,6,7) - mapped to nothing; you could use a slider or something if you wanted to follow that wwwwhew sound from the track
"02:40:086 (5,6,7) - similar to above, I would move these to where 02:38:682 (4,5,6) - is placed. It will be much better spacing to read imo" < I'd apply
02:53:068 (9,10) - fix the spacing! 9 should be stacked under 02:52:542 (5) -
03:00:437 - custom colours are broken on the second kiai, there should be no grey! Use blue instead, and also fix the next section (only grey) and the section after the next one (pale green/pale purple)
03:17:103 (7) - missing clap?
03:32:717 (2) - add new combo, remove it from 03:32:542 (1) -
03:41:138 (5) - new combo?

REGARDING 01:22:191 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) and 02:52:016 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the most preferable way to map it is just to follow the music WITHOUT using 1/4th short sliders, as they aren't necessary this time. Seriously, consider using this (example — Mira's Insane):

Mira-san

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Mira-san 2014-09-14T05:34:44+00:00

TicClick wrote:
[AI's Extra]
01:11:314 (4) - missing clap
01:14:296 (4,5,6,7) - mapped to nothing; you could use a slider or something if you wanted to follow that wwwwhew sound from the track
"02:40:086 (5,6,7) - similar to above, I would move these to where 02:38:682 (4,5,6) - is placed. It will be much better spacing to read imo" < I'd apply
02:53:068 (9,10) - fix the spacing! 9 should be stacked under 02:52:542 (5) -
03:00:437 - custom colours are broken on the second kiai, there should be no grey! Use blue instead, and also fix the next section (only grey) and the section after the next one (pale green/pale purple)
03:17:103 (7) - missing clap?
03:32:717 (2) - add new combo, remove it from 03:32:542 (1) -
03:41:138 (5) - new combo?
REGARDING 01:22:191 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) and 02:52:016 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the most preferable way to map it is just to follow the music WITHOUT using 1/4th short sliders, as they aren't necessary this time. Seriously, consider using this (example — Mira's Insane):

Applied lolzozlozlzo

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DakeDekaane 2014-09-14T08:35:56+00:00

Doing a check for Taiko diffs requested by TicClick.

Honestly, the diffs arent bad, good work Stefan, buuut I really think you should tone them down, they're considerably harder than they should be, so they could benefit of some note removal.

[

Muzukashii]
Muzukashii is full of long of 1/2 patterns mixed with 1/4 triples which fits more an Oni, also the song doesn't sound too complex to deserve this difficulty level.

00:00:787 - 00:12:016 - This part is really similar in both difficulties, while this is not a bad thing, but consider removing some notes as it feels a bit overloaded, as it's relatively calm.

00:12:016 - 00:23:244 - This part could be easier, use some patterns similar to this one, they'd follow better the drums and give some small breaks.

00:23:244 - Here you could just remove the notes in spots like 00:25:875 (109), but may be not so needed as music is stronger here.

00:34:472 - 00:45:700 - In this section you could focus a bit more on vocals than complementing them with the drums, i.e, remove some notes that are mapped on the drums and leave more vocals here. This helps to not make 00:34:472 - 00:56:928 - mapped in a very similar way, which may be a bit boring while playing.
00:44:647 (189,190,191,192,193) - Deleting dons here would help a lot to make vocals feel stronger, due being more isolated.

01:19:384 - tbh I liked this part, I don't think there's too many problems if we leave it like this, but I'd suggest to remove 01:24:472 (369) - to give some small break after those patterns.
01:30:086 (1) - I think this spinner isn't really needed, a pause would help to create some tension before the kiai, same with 02:59:910 (1).

The kiai is actually nice, just a few suggestions.
01:32:893 (13,15) - Removing these could be nice to emphasize vocals
01:38:858 (39) - ^
01:44:121 (64,66) - ^

Repeat the suggestions for similar sections.

[

Oni]
Oni has a lot of consecutive 1/2 notes, while some of them aren't bad, putting some 1/1 gaps could help a bit here.
Also I think SV 1.60 is forcing difficulty, 1.40 should be better here.
00:00:787 - 00:06:402 - This section is really weird when you pass to the next where drums begins, as it's harder, while the song is calmer, some deletions could be nice here.
00:14:559 (61,62) - 00:17:366 (81,82) - I consider this optional, you could remove these to not make this pattern too long.
00:20:173 (101,102,103) - ^
In fact, you could delete notes in similar spots.

00:22:279 (117) - The stream in the music begins in the red tick so yeah, better removing this.
00:34:472 - 00:45:700 - Something similar as I said in Muzukashii, focus a bit more on vocals, you could remove notes like 00:36:577 (223) and follow a similar structure for this spot.
00:45:700 - 00:56:928 - You could remove notes like 00:47:805 (293,297) - to emphasize vocals a bit more.
00:50:524 (313,318,319,320) - ^
00:53:331 (334,335,339) - ^
01:30:086 (1) - Same as in Muzukashii, and for 02:59:910 (1).

Kiai was nice here too, and again, some note removal suggestions.
01:32:893 (18) -
01:34:296 (27,28,29) -
01:36:051 (39) -
01:38:507 (55) -
01:39:296 (59) -
01:39:910 (63,64,65,66) -
01:44:121 (97) -
01:45:524 (106,107) -
01:50:524 (135) -
01:51:226 (139,140) -

02:15:524 (166) - I'm pretty sure we're not allowing finisher on streams unless its ...oxxxxO, so please fix it.

Repeat the suggestions for similar sections.

You should consider all this I posted, so the map could represent better the song with some of the new breaks the diffs will get, and fit better without being too difficult. Good luck.

Stefan

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Stefan 2014-09-14T15:23:36+00:00

DakeDekaane wrote:
Doing a check for Taiko diffs requested by TicClick.

Honestly, the diffs arent bad, good work Stefan, buuut I really think you should tone them down, they're considerably harder than they should be, so they could benefit of some note removal.

[ Muzukashii]
Muzukashii is full of long of 1/2 patterns mixed with 1/4 triples which fits more an Oni, also the song doesn't sound too complex to deserve this difficulty level.

00:00:787 - 00:12:016 - This part is really similar in both difficulties, while this is not a bad thing, but consider removing some notes as it feels a bit overloaded, as it's relatively calm. Did stuff here.

00:12:016 - 00:23:244 - This part could be easier, use some patterns similar to this one, they'd follow better the drums and give some small breaks. So simple the idea, so great the effect. Changed this secting

00:23:244 - Here you could just remove the notes in spots like 00:25:875 (109), but may be not so needed as music is stronger here. Yes, did that here.

00:34:472 - 00:45:700 - In this section you could focus a bit more on vocals than complementing them with the drums, i.e, remove some notes that are mapped on the drums and leave more vocals here. This helps to not make 00:34:472 - 00:56:928 - mapped in a very similar way, which may be a bit boring while playing. Ehrrrruhmmmm... I think it's clearer now what I intended to focus.
00:44:647 (189,190,191,192,193) - Deleting dons here would help a lot to make vocals feel stronger, due being more isolated. Yes Yes Yes, done here.

01:19:384 - tbh I liked this part, I don't think there's too many problems if we leave it like this, but I'd suggest to remove 01:24:472 (369) - to give some small break after those patterns. Good thing for the vocal.
01:30:086 (1) - I think this spinner isn't really needed, a pause would help to create some tension before the kiai, same with 02:59:910 (1). Hard decision but yes, agree.

The kiai is actually nice, just a few suggestions.
01:32:893 (13,15) - Removing these could be nice to emphasize vocals hmhmhm I think I will remove 01:33:244 (15) instead. But I will think about your suggestion to remove this one as well.
01:38:858 (39) - ^ Done.
01:44:121 (64,66) - ^ Same like 01:32:893 (13,15).

Repeat the suggestions for similar sections.

[ Oni]
Oni has a lot of consecutive 1/2 notes, while some of them aren't bad, putting some 1/1 gaps could help a bit here.
Also I think SV 1.60 is forcing difficulty, 1.40 should be better here. I partly agree, 1.60x is pretty cool for Kiai so I will keep it there. For the rest it will be 1.40x.
00:00:787 - 00:06:402 - This section is really weird when you pass to the next where drums begins, as it's harder, while the song is calmer, some deletions could be nice here. Done here.
00:14:559 (61,62) - 00:17:366 (81,82) - I consider this optional, you could remove these to not make this pattern too long. I don't agree here. That's a fairly appropriate lenght of combos.
00:20:173 (101,102,103) - ^ ^
In fact, you could delete notes in similar spots.

00:22:279 (117) - The stream in the music begins in the red tick so yeah, better removing this. Removed.
00:34:472 - 00:45:700 - Something similar as I said in Muzukashii, focus a bit more on vocals, you could remove notes like 00:36:577 (223) and follow a similar structure for this spot. Good, remove some notes, made some changes and yep.. replied on the things below.
00:45:700 - 00:56:928 - You could remove notes like 00:47:805 (293,297) - to emphasize vocals a bit more.
00:50:524 (313,318,319,320) - ^
00:53:331 (334,335,339) - ^
01:30:086 (1) - Same as in Muzukashii, and for 02:59:910 (1). ~

Kiai was nice here too, and again, some note removal suggestions.
01:32:893 (18) - ~
01:34:296 (27,28,29) - No. They're pretty fine here
01:36:051 (39) - ~
01:38:507 (55) - ~
01:39:296 (59) - Removed 01:38:858 instead.
01:39:910 (63,64,65,66) - nope.
01:44:121 (97) - ~
01:45:524 (106,107) - Triplet fits well with vocal/music in general.
01:50:524 (135) - Removed 01:50:086 instead.
01:51:226 (139,140) - Sounds quite empty then.

02:15:524 (166) - I'm pretty sure we're not allowing finisher on streams unless its ...oxxxxO, so please fix it. changed to ddkkddkkkkD.

Repeat the suggestions for similar sections.

You should consider all this I posted, so the map could represent better the song with some of the new breaks the diffs will get, and fit better without being too difficult. Good luck.

Thanks. http://puu.sh/byQri/cf10dbed40.rar

Mira-san

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Mira-san 2014-09-15T01:32:59+00:00

aha haha

Finally, I've seen this happen again.

TicClick

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TicClick 2014-09-15T05:47:12+00:00

Rebubbled again! I hope Taiko is alright now.

Squigly

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Squigly 2014-09-15T16:36:39+00:00

ranked soon hopefully V:

Frostmourne

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Frostmourne 2014-09-15T18:56:21+00:00

Still wonder why this happens though.. http://puu.sh/bAkBS.png

I was concerned about the difficulty spread but after investigating once again, Easy is pretty much easier than Normal although the star rating doesn't look that way. Hard is not completely harder apart from Normal so I have some confidence to rank it, and hopefully it won't get in trouble afterwards.

Tell me when you are done updating that above screenshot to make everything consistent throughout the whole mapset.

Mira-san

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Mira-san 2014-09-16T09:43:13+00:00

Frostmourne wrote:
Still wonder why this happens though.. http://puu.sh/bAkBS.png
Tell me when you are done updating that above screenshot to make everything consistent throughout the whole mapset.

Fixed.

Frostmourne wrote:
I was concerned about the difficulty spread but after investigating once again, Easy is pretty much easier than Normal although the star rating doesn't look that way. Hard is not completely harder apart from Normal so I have some confidence to rank it, and hopefully it won't get in trouble afterwards.

Considering how this map got un-qualified due to "map icons", it looks like we're going to have a problem.

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Stefan 2014-09-16T09:53:29+00:00

Frostmourne wrote:
Still wonder why this happens though.. http://puu.sh/bAkBS.png

Can anyone slap this Ste...fa...an guy...... Ugh

About the Easy Diff: 1.99 is pretty high actually but it isn't actually unrankable because the rule says to not left out a Difficulty between the spread. So you have NNHII atm which shouldn't be unrankable but then check carefully about the Easy Diff.

EDIT: Checked the Easy Diff. @Fr33z3R: In my opinion - and you do NOT have to agree with me - you could lower the density of the hitobjects. Sometimes it feels a bit overfilled compared with other parts and let it looks a bit too hasty. And if you changes to your Diff, please add clap on 00:11:665 (2). Otherwise, Mira-san should do that instead.

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Frostmourne 2014-09-16T15:53:52+00:00

aha.. feel free to take an opinion from Stefan and consider whether you would like to reduce or not. I suggest you reduce the note density though but not a must. Icons here are arranged in consecutive order so it's fine unlike the one Mira-San gave out as it stepped over a Normal icon.

Let me know ~~

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Mira-san 2014-09-16T23:41:14+00:00

~~I will try to work on that sometime today.~~ Nah. I don't want to change a lot of things.

@Frostmourne: "Mira-'s'an" or just Mira would do. /me runs

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neonat

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neonat 2014-09-17T00:40:44+00:00

mira-San

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Mira-san 2014-09-17T01:35:30+00:00

neonat wrote:
mira-San

aaaaaaaaaaa

edit:

Stefan

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Stefan 2014-09-17T11:58:31+00:00

Glad to be your 200th. Is it bad that I find my own Taiko Diffs well made this time? lol

Mira-san

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Mira-san 2014-09-17T12:08:20+00:00

Stefan wrote:

Glad to be your 200th. Is it bad that I find my own Taiko Diffs well made this time? lol

Yay. \o/ Not really.

blaterwolf

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blaterwolf 2014-09-18T03:19:03+00:00

popped again lol

edit:

Frostmourne wrote:
Easy is pretty much easier than Normal although the star rating doesn't look that way.

#Fr33z3R
#neonat
#PoppedAgain

neonat

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neonat 2014-09-18T04:01:12+00:00

Really now.

Frostmourne

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Frostmourne 2014-09-18T10:30:06+00:00

Congratulation for your first qualify

!
Good luck for getting it ranked safely~~~~

Gravey-

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Gravey- 2014-09-18T10:35:22+00:00

Congratz!~

Such

tho~

TicClick

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TicClick 2014-09-18T10:38:26+00:00

yay finally
thank you for your patience, Mira-san!

Asagi

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Asagi 2014-09-18T10:38:31+00:00

PUTANG INA MO GRATZ!!!
NARANK N RIN HAHAHA

Frostmourne

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Frostmourne 2014-09-18T10:41:04+00:00

Oh snap

I found some mistake after looking at it again when something is wrongly snapped at 04:16:314 (1) - (AI's Extra)
will re-rank quickly after it gets fixed

Stefan

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Stefan 2014-09-18T10:41:58+00:00

Congrats Mira-san!

It has been a Long road

Hanjamon

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Hanjamon 2014-09-18T10:46:09+00:00

Congratz to all ^^

R.I.P score

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neonat 2014-09-18T10:46:51+00:00

Hanjamon wrote:
Congratz to all ^^

R.I.P score

Mine too lols

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sheela 2014-09-18T10:54:11+00:00

Yay! Congrats Mira-san!

Stefan

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Stefan 2014-09-18T10:54:33+00:00

Frostmourne wrote:

haha I love you for that .gif

Mira-san

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Mira-san 2014-09-18T10:57:04+00:00

SPOILER

It got unqualified but whatever.

Thank you everyone! (Everyone on the 'Special Thanks' box) and everyone who atleast posted in this thread.

Thank you to those who accepted testplays before (even the crappy ones before).: Lots of ppl. (Mekakushi Dan Members, Sinch, etc.)

Thank you to those who supported this map since I started making this map from the worst to 'atleast decent'.: guineaQ, Asagi, Kamidachi, and basically everyone on the front page.

And thank you to those who contributed a lot. As in a lot. Just to make this map better (at the final moment).: TicClick

Thank you for ranking this map and responded whenever I asked.: Frostmourne

Frostmourne wrote:

Now let the 1-week trial begin.

Lach

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Lach 2014-09-18T11:03:38+00:00

Some people, when given an empty canvas decide to make everything overlap. Why is that, hmm?

Also, normal-hitnormal.wav, and soft-hitnormal.wav have a 10ms delay. Might as well get that fixed now. Overall the oriental hitsounds sound extremely out of place in this map, as the song is not oriental-sounding in the slightest. Here's a new one anyway http://puu.sh/bDTki/2ff9f91294.wav

In the insane,

00:36:051 - there's no reason for there not be a circle here. As this is the only time it is done, and all the repetitions to follow use a triplet.
02:57:630 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this combo is entirely wrong. Starting from 02:57:454 - , I think it would be better as this, or this.

Frostmourne

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Frostmourne 2014-09-18T11:27:46+00:00

Lach wrote:
Some people, when given an empty canvas decide to make everything overlap. Why is that, hmm?

Also, normal-hitnormal.wav, and soft-hitnormal.wav have a 10ms delay. Might as well get that fixed now. Overall the oriental hitsounds sound extremely out of place in this map, as the song is not oriental-sounding in the slightest

In the insane,

00:36:051 - there's no reason for there not be a circle here. As this is the only time it is done, and all the repetitions to follow use a triplet.
02:57:630 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this combo is entirely wrong. Starting from 02:57:454 - , I think it would be better as this, or this.

As for the response to Lach, there are a plenty of maps using this bamboo-ish hitsound and have never been a problem so I don't get how this becomes a problem.
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/162371
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/57923
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/58785
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/100040
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/113686

00:36:051 - This is up to the mapper to follow the vocal if he/she wants when music calls it.
02:57:630 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - it follows stanza

Note that this can be unqualified again so input here is welcome.

Kishidle

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Kishidle 2014-09-18T11:30:05+00:00

Congrats future-san owo

Mira-san

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Mira-san 2014-09-18T11:32:54+00:00

VoidNoodle wrote:
Congrats future-san owo

Thanks!

Frostmourne wrote:
Lach wrote:
Some people, when given an empty canvas decide to make everything overlap. Why is that, hmm?

Also, normal-hitnormal.wav, and soft-hitnormal.wav have a 10ms delay. Might as well get that fixed now. Overall the oriental hitsounds sound extremely out of place in this map, as the song is not oriental-sounding in the slightest

In the insane,

00:36:051 - there's no reason for there not be a circle here. As this is the only time it is done, and all the repetitions to follow use a triplet.
02:57:630 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this combo is entirely wrong. Starting from 02:57:454 - , I think it would be better as this, or this.
As for the response to Lach, there are a plenty of maps using this bamboo-ish hitsound and have never been a problem so I don't get how this becomes a problem.
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/162371
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/57923
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/58785
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/100040
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/113686

00:36:051 - This is up to the mapper to follow the vocal if he/she wants when music calls it.
02:57:630 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - it follows stanza

Note that this can be unqualified again so input here is welcome.

As for this, in case this map DOES get unqualified, I will carry out the changes Lach gave me.

Thanks!

Frostmourne

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Frostmourne 2014-09-18T11:39:47+00:00

I and Mira-san decided to take an opportunity on this for getting more mods.

My apologies for those who have taken scores orz..

Also this map will be handled by another BATs from now. Good luck Mira-san ~

Lach

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Lach 2014-09-18T11:41:32+00:00

Frostmourne wrote:
Lach wrote:
Some people, when given an empty canvas decide to make everything overlap. Why is that, hmm?

Also, normal-hitnormal.wav, and soft-hitnormal.wav have a 10ms delay. Might as well get that fixed now. Overall the oriental hitsounds sound extremely out of place in this map, as the song is not oriental-sounding in the slightest

In the insane,

00:36:051 - there's no reason for there not be a circle here. As this is the only time it is done, and all the repetitions to follow use a triplet.
02:57:630 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this combo is entirely wrong. Starting from 02:57:454 - , I think it would be better as this, or this.
As for the response to Lach, there are a plenty of maps using this bamboo-ish hitsound and have never been a problem so I don't get how this becomes a problem.
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/162371
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/57923
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/58785
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/100040
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/113686

00:36:051 - This is up to the mapper to follow the vocal if he/she wants when music calls it.
02:57:630 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - it follows stanza

Note that this can be unqualified again so input here is welcome.

If it were up to me, none of those maps would be using this bad sample. Sadly it has become so widespread that it's difficult to make sure everyone isn't using it. A 10ms delay on the primary sample (the one used upwards of 1000 times throughout a map) causes problems with player timing quickly.

Of course the two phrasing points I mentioned can be taken or left, it's no big deal. I just thought it played awkwardly as it is. Up to Mira-san.

Last edited by Frostmourne 2014-09-18T11:43:47+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Stefan

Global Moderator

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Joined January 2011

Stefan 2014-09-18T11:47:49+00:00

I just noticed I forgot to tell to adding my old username (TheNutritiousGuy) and its Abbreviation (TNG) as tags.. <_<

Can you add them quick?

Mira-san

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Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Mira-san 2014-09-18T12:49:57+00:00

Stefan wrote:
I just noticed I forgot to tell to adding my old username (TheNutritiousGuy) and its Abbreviation (TNG) as tags.. <_<

Can you add them quick?

Sure thing.

guineaQ

1,589 posts

Joined December 2013

guineaQ 2014-09-19T14:03:10+00:00

Incoming shat/ragestorm

EDIT: NO KDS ~~don't ask me why~~

hu3z3r'sFr33z3r's Easy

[General]
Yo NC is really funky

New C-C-Combo

I'm just gonna tell you to NC every TWO offbeats for easy, seems like you NCing EVERY THREE OBJECTS
which doesn't make sense imo

00:03:244 (1) - remove
00:03:594 (2) - add
00:04:998 (1) - remove
00:07:805 (1) - remove
00:10:612 (1) - remove
00:30:612 (1) - remove
00:32:016 (1) - remove
00:33:419 (3) - add
00:34:472 (1) - leave this one cus it's the start of the verse
00:35:875 (1) - remove
00:47:103 (1) - remove
00:49:910 (1) - remove
00:52:717 (1) - remove
00:55:524 (1) - remove
00:56:928 (2) - add
01:24:998 (1) - remove
Let's stick with NCing every two offbeats since one line of chorus is basically two offbeats
01:32:016 (1) - remove
01:49:559 (1) - remove
01:50:612 (2) - add
02:46:402 (1,2,1,2) - ill leave this one since there is quite a vocal pitch change
02:52:016 (1,2,1,2,3) - same reason
03:10:261 (1) - remove
03:35:524 (1) - remove
03:55:875 (1) - remove
04:00:787 (1) - remove
04:06:402 (1) - remove
04:12:016 (1) - remove

Patterns & Cyanide & Cancer lololol

00:00:787 (1) - Is it necessary to start with reverse slider?
00:07:454 (3,1) - inconsistent spacing imo (is 0.7x difference negligible? ~~looks negligible~~)
00:23:244 (1) - I don't think opening up with reverse slider is gut idea
01:27:805 (1) - blanket isn't perfect
01:35:524 (3) - yuuuh ^^
02:04:296 (1) - ^^ derp
02:08:156 (2,4) - inconsistent spacing in easy?
02:15:524 (5) - x:208 y:108

Hitsound

00:00:787 (1) - whistle on beginning
00:01:840 (2) - remove
00:02:191 (3) - whistle on beginning
00:04:998 (1) - whistle
00:05:700 (3) - whistle on beginning
00:24:296 - why u no hitsound
00:26:402 - you hitsounded the slider at the first slider, but not here?
00:27:805 - ^^
00:37:980 (2) - whistle at the end since you seem to put whistle where the vocal pitch gets high (pls consistency pls)
01:19:384 (1,3) - slider tick HS, without it sounds empty (cus u did it once, you should keep doing it)
01:24:647 (2) - add clap
01:46:051 (1) - consistency pls
01:46:051 (1) - finish at the end
02:04:296 (1) - slider tick HS, again, u already did it once, so keep doing it for consistency
02:07:103 (1,3) - ^^
02:12:717 (1,3) - ^^
02:53:770 (1,3) - add whistles
03:33:419 (3,4) - add whistles
03:39:033 (3) - clap at the end just doesn't sound right to me
03:52:016 (2) - clap
03:53:419 (4) - clap
03:59:384 (1,1) - tick HS
04:03:945 (2) - clap
04:04:647 (4) - welp this whistle-clap is random
04:04:998 (1,1) - tick HS
04:10:612 (1,1) - CONSISTENCY PLS (well you are inconsistently consistent wtf)
04:13:068 (2) - clappu
04:16:226 (1,3) - yeeeehehhhhhhhhh

neormalneonat's Normal

this hitsound

stuffu

00:29:209 - da emptiness is very stronk
01:12:366 (3) - wtf is this 3/4 slider doing in normalu, stuffs ending or starting in blue tick can confuse the living oblivion out of newbies playing normals
01:48:858 (3) - this is just personal, i don't like using double reverse cus it can really throw some ppl off
02:46:402 (1) - WHYYYY
03:42:542 (1,2,3,4,5) - combo color to grayish?
03:44:647 (5) - I would personally make it that it's 1/1 slider and a circle at the end for emphasis (than u can use cyan for combo color for the last circle)
03:57:103 (3) - this one is like living embodiment of awkwardness

hitu soundo

00:06:402 (1) - remove clap, claps sound weird on offbeats
00:07:805 (4) - ^^ and add clap in the middle
00:09:209 (1) - pls
00:10:612 (3) - plsu
00:23:244 (1) - clap at the end
00:24:296 (3) - clap
00:24:647 (4) - clap at the end
00:25:699 (6) - clap
00:26:051 (1) - same issue, just repeat using claps every 2nd 4th white tick every offbeat
00:27:454 (4,6) - claps
00:28:507 (6) - no real cymbal crash here to support a finish, remove
00:29:910 (2) - claps
00:30:261 (3,5) - claps
00:31:665 (1,3) - claps
02:26:752 (1) - to 02:59:384 (6) - why are u using normal instead of soft?

Gonna finish the rest little by little

Last edited by guineaQ 2014-09-20T00:43:55+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

TicClick

Global Moderator

4,466 posts

Joined February 2011

TicClick 2014-09-19T18:36:57+00:00

remember not to overmod this okay thank you

Taskmaster

761 posts

Joined July 2013

Taskmaster 2014-09-19T18:44:32+00:00

Unranked again =w=

guineaQ

1,589 posts

Joined December 2013

guineaQ 2014-09-20T00:06:39+00:00

TicClick wrote:
remember not to overmod this okay thank you

relaxyou dont have to, its mostly NC hitsound focused mod.~~maybe it wasn't necessary to do this mod oh welp~~

Natsu

8,100 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2014-09-20T00:34:51+00:00

aw that priority, poke me when you feel ready

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,547 posts

Joined April 2012

neonat 2014-09-20T03:34:01+00:00

SPOILER

osu file format v13

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Mira-san

1,038 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Mira-san 2014-09-20T04:04:33+00:00

Updated. Feels ready. Hahahaha

Mira-san

1,038 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Mira-san 2014-09-20T04:08:51+00:00

DOUBLE POST. my bad.

guineaQ wrote:
Incoming shat/ragestorm

EDIT: NO KDS ~~don't ask me why~~ | why /me runs

~~hu3z3r's~~Fr33z3r's Easy
[General]
Yo NC is really funky | ya

New C-C-Combo

I'm just gonna tell you to NC every TWO offbeats for easy, seems like you NCing EVERY THREE OBJECTS
which doesn't make sense imo
00:03:244 (1) - remove
00:03:594 (2) - add
00:04:998 (1) - remove
00:07:805 (1) - remove
00:10:612 (1) - remove
00:30:612 (1) - remove
00:32:016 (1) - remove
00:33:419 (3) - add
00:34:472 (1) - leave this one cus it's the start of the verse
00:35:875 (1) - remove
00:47:103 (1) - remove
00:49:910 (1) - remove
00:52:717 (1) - remove
00:55:524 (1) - remove
00:56:928 (2) - add
01:24:998 (1) - remove
Let's stick with NCing every two offbeats since one line of chorus is basically two offbeats
01:32:016 (1) - remove
01:49:559 (1) - remove
01:50:612 (2) - add
02:46:402 (1,2,1,2) - ill leave this one since there is quite a vocal pitch change
02:52:016 (1,2,1,2,3) - same reason
03:10:261 (1) - remove
03:35:524 (1) - remove
03:55:875 (1) - remove
04:00:787 (1) - remove
04:06:402 (1) - remove
04:12:016 (1) - remove

Patterns & Cyanide & Cancer lololol
00:00:787 (1) - Is it necessary to start with reverse slider?
00:07:454 (3,1) - inconsistent spacing imo (is 0.7x difference negligible? ~~looks negligible~~)
00:23:244 (1) - I don't think opening up with reverse slider is gut idea
01:27:805 (1) - blanket isn't perfect
01:35:524 (3) - yuuuh ^^
02:04:296 (1) - ^^ derp
02:08:156 (2,4) - inconsistent spacing in easy?
02:15:524 (5) - x:208 y:108

Hitsound
00:00:787 (1) - whistle on beginning
00:01:840 (2) - remove
00:02:191 (3) - whistle on beginning
00:04:998 (1) - whistle
00:05:700 (3) - whistle on beginning
00:24:296 - why u no hitsound
00:26:402 - you hitsounded the slider at the first slider, but not here?
00:27:805 - ^^
00:37:980 (2) - whistle at the end since you seem to put whistle where the vocal pitch gets high (pls consistency pls)
01:19:384 (1,3) - slider tick HS, without it sounds empty (cus u did it once, you should keep doing it)
01:24:647 (2) - add clap
01:46:051 (1) - consistency pls
01:46:051 (1) - finish at the end
02:04:296 (1) - slider tick HS, again, u already did it once, so keep doing it for consistency
02:07:103 (1,3) - ^^
02:12:717 (1,3) - ^^
02:53:770 (1,3) - add whistles
03:33:419 (3,4) - add whistles
03:39:033 (3) - clap at the end just doesn't sound right to me
03:52:016 (2) - clap
03:53:419 (4) - clap
03:59:384 (1,1) - tick HS
04:03:945 (2) - clap
04:04:647 (4) - welp this whistle-clap is random
04:04:998 (1,1) - tick HS
04:10:612 (1,1) - CONSISTENCY PLS (well you are inconsistently consistent wtf)
04:13:068 (2) - clappu
04:16:226 (1,3) - yeeeehehhhhhhhhh

Applied everything except the tick hitsound etc. Yeah.

Thanks!

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,547 posts

Joined April 2012

neonat 2014-09-20T04:22:08+00:00

guineaQ wrote:
~~neormal~~neonat's Normal
this hitsound

I don't really agree with the changes in beats, or the combo colour change. the repeat slider with more than 1 repeat occurs just around 3 times, where I think it fits fine, with the music the player can get the idea that there will be more than 1 repeat.

hitu soundo
00:06:402 (1) - remove clap, claps sound weird on offbeats
00:07:805 (4) - ^^ and add clap in the middle just added the clap, didn't remove the other
00:09:209 (1) - pls not needed
00:10:612 (3) - plsu
00:23:244 (1) - clap at the end all the clap suggestions from here onwards, I didn't want to add in because I'm fine with the whistles already, adding clap would just makes things louder than what I wanted
00:24:296 (3) - clap
00:24:647 (4) - clap at the end
00:25:699 (6) - clap
00:26:051 (1) - same issue, just repeat using claps every 2nd 4th white tick every offbeat
00:27:454 (4,6) - claps
00:28:507 (6) - no real cymbal crash here to support a finish, remove changed to the drum hitsound finish instead
00:29:910 (2) - claps
00:30:261 (3,5) - claps
00:31:665 (1,3) - claps
02:26:752 (1) - to 02:59:384 (6) - why are u using normal instead of soft? changed to soft

I changed the shape of 02:52:016 (1,2,3) on my own accord to make 02:52:016 (1,2) look neater

FrzR

2,237 posts

Joined October 2012

FrzR 2014-09-20T08:16:32+00:00

Almost there. ;w;)

Inb4 Nazi mods keeping the map pending.

I've become really passive about the map. My internet isn't so good these days. </3

Natsu

8,100 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2014-09-20T09:46:58+00:00

Hi Mira-Ssan

General:

fine

Ai's Extra

00:06:928 maybe add a circle following the vocals, since you was mapping them, for example here 00:04:823 (1) - that's why I feel weird that you ignored that one
00:10:875 (3) - remove this circle? since there is nothing in the music, that's why I dont feel that you have valid reasons to have it there, also is the calm part of the song
00:56:226 (1,2,3) - mmm the spacing between 1/2 gap and 1/4 gap look like the same, there is not way to the player notice this in the first play IMO, make the spacing difference more noticeable
01:34:647 (1,2) - this rhythm doesn't fit the song, since you are mapping the important beats as slider tails (also this is breaking your combo pattern), try this:
01:36:226 (6,1) - swap NC, since this 01:36:226 is the place where it should be, following your every 1 stanza pattern and the music
01:37:630 looks like you are missing a NC here~
01:43:945 (4) - this extended slider doesn't fit the song, since there is nothing in the music at 01:44:209 -, but yes in 01:44:121
01:50:963 (1) - remove this NC, doesn't make much sense to just have 2 objects in the same one.
03:14:998 (1) - remove this NC too is totally breaking your combo pattern, plus this part can be easy readed without it

Insane:

00:03:595 (1,2,3) - the spacing here looks kinda weird to me, use the same spacing between them?
00:35:875 (5) - you are missing a NC here, following your pattern
00:51:314 (1,2) - this doesn't play nicely, I meant the circle after the slider look like missplaced, try something like this instead:
SPOILER
00:52:717 (5) - missing NC here too
00:55:524 (7) - ^
00:59:735 (6) - ^
01:05:349 (6) - ^
01:09:384 (6) - this rhythm kinda doesn't fit the song and also is breaking your combo pattern, try this:
01:15:349 (7) - add NC and remove NC from 01:16:051 (1) - then add NC in 01:16:577 (4) - for moments your combo pattern mess up tho D:
01:22:717 (1) - 01:23:244 (1) - remove both NC? ot kinda fit the vocals like it is, so up to you
01:32:016 missing NC here too
01:43:244 (7,1) - swap NC following stanzas and the music
01:45:349 (1) - remove NC is not really necessary
01:48:156 (1) - same as above
01:51:314 (1,2) - swap nc for the same reason as 01:43:244
02:28:156 (6) - add NC here and remove it from 02:28:858 (1) - then add NC here 02:29:559 (4) -
02:33:770 (1) - this slider totally take me offguard when playing >:, if you really want to keep it extended add a circle in 02:34:121 to fit the drums and vocals
02:43:595 (7,1) - swap NC to be consistent with your every 1 stanza pattern, also with this one 02:40:787 (1,2) -
02:52:717 (1) - remove NC
02:56:051 (1) - with this pattern you are not following the music and vocals line properly IMO, try this instead:
02:56:752 (1) - remove NC
03:01:840 (6) - I think you are missing a NC here too
03:13:068 (7) - ^
03:18:595 (1,2) - swap NC, similar to other cases
03:25:349 (1,2) - ^
03:27:103 (4) - I guess you are missing NC here too
03:29:910 (5) - ^
03:32:366 (1,2) - swap NC
03:38:331 (5) - missing NC here too
03:43:068 (1) - personally I dont see a reason to have this NC here
aw mostly NCs lol

Hard:

00:03:244 (1,1) - Idont see a valid reason to have that combo spam, just remove the one at 00:04:121 (1) - .
00:23:156 (1,2) - swap NC to be consistent with what you did in 00:20:349 (5,1) -
01:53:419 remove this green line, since it's unnecesary
02:14:647 (6,7) - if you CTRL G this, the pattern will flow better IMO
03:20:086 (1,2) - about this sliders there is nothing in the music at the blue tick in the repeat, I highly suggest you to consider changing the rhythm here, same goes for this first kiai 01:50:261 (1,2) -
03:22:893 missing finish~

Normal:

hitsound volume at the beginning is too loud, consider to reduce, since is the clam part of the song
01:12:366 (3) - following the vocals like this isnot ok for a normal diff in my opinion, maybe end the slider in 01:12:717 - or change the rhythm to something more suitable for a normal diff, this one is good too 00:54:121 (1) -
01:27:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and 01:30:963 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - looks like really difficult to play for a non experienced player, consider to remove some circles to leave a bit of rest to the player, there are more similar cases that I'll like if you can remove some beats
03:41:138 - the number of repeats of this slider is really hard to guess, consider using another rhythm

Easy:

hitsound volume at the beginning is too loud, consider to reduce, since is the clam part of the song
02:06:051 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Check your spacing here, is really inconsistent
03:25:700 (1,2,3) - spacing ~
03:28:858 (2,3) - ^
there are more cases when your spacing is not consistent, will be nice if you take a look at this :3
01:01:489 (1,2) - I guess is a better idea to remove this objects and leave all as a break, will be less stressful for newplayers
03:20:086 (1,3) - finish are really overused here, remove some
also take a look at some combos, some look inconsistent to me

remember these are suggestions :3, just bring me reasons if you don't agree with something, call me back after you check this

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,547 posts

Joined April 2012

neonat 2014-09-20T10:44:38+00:00

Natsu wrote:
Hi Mira-Ssan

Normal:

hitsound volume at the beginning is too loud, consider to reduce, since is the clam part of the song changed to 50%, I think the audio here really does help quite a lot in keeping the beat though
01:12:366 (3) - following the vocals like this isnot ok for a normal diff in my opinion, maybe end the slider in 01:12:717 - or change the rhythm to something more suitable for a normal diff, this one is good too 00:54:121 (1) - I guess I can't fully follow the vocals then, changed it to a full 1/1 beat slider
01:27:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and 01:30:963 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - looks like really difficult to play for a non experienced player, consider to remove some circles to leave a bit of rest to the player, there are more similar cases that I'll like if you can remove some beats I will take a look at all those parts in question some changed at 01:29:033 - 01:32:016 - 01:41:489 - 02:58:858 - 03:15:875 and 03:18:682
03:41:138 - the number of repeats of this slider is really hard to guess, consider using another rhythm
remember these are suggestions :3, just bring me reasons if you don't agree with something, call me back after you check this

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192,184,189559,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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448,160,200787,2,0,P|500:172|508:236,1,120.000000596046,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,268,201314,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,296,201489,2,0,B|404:324|368:304|324:324,1,120.000000596046
236,292,202191,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,356,202542,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,304,202893,21,4,0:0:0:0:
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244,84,206226,5,0,0:0:0:0:
244,84,206402,1,8,0:0:0:0:
120,28,206928,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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124,112,207805,2,0,P|99:142|44:152,1,90.0000038802622,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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296,312,209910,2,0,L|360:300,1,45.0000019401311,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,272,210261,2,0,L|424:280,2,45.0000019401311,2|4|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,224,210963,2,0,L|216:168,1,90.0000038802622,0|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,52,211840,5,0,0:0:0:0:
160,52,212016,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,84,212542,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,84,212717,2,0,P|344:100|384:72,1,90.0000038802622,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,16,213419,2,0,P|464:12|508:60,1,90.0000038802622
480,132,214121,86,0,L|480:240,1,90.0000038802622,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,268,214647,1,4,0:0:0:0:
484,312,214823,2,0,P|460:344|412:348,1,90.0000038802622,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,332,215349,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,304,215524,2,0,P|284:292|236:308,2,90.0000038802622,4|4|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,236,216577,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,236,216928,6,0,P|404:192|368:104,1,135.000005820393,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,108,217630,2,0,P|280:120|232:104,1,90.0000038802622,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,20,218331,2,0,P|268:12|316:24,2,90.0000038802622,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,80,219384,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,156,219735,86,0,L|164:244,1,90.0000038802622,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,276,220437,2,0,L|156:348,1,90.0000038802622,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,340,221138,2,0,L|40:288,1,45.0000019401311,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,260,221489,2,0,L|36:200,2,45.0000019401311,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
124,252,222191,1,8,0:0:0:0:
164,172,222542,21,4,0:0:0:0:
280,36,223244,1,4,0:0:0:0:
164,172,223945,1,4,0:0:0:0:
252,156,224296,1,4,0:0:0:0:
332,192,224647,2,0,B|404:180|452:216|516:192,1,180.000007760524,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,188,236577,5,4,0:0:0:0:
296,116,236928,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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324,196,237980,2,0,P|324:264|480:296,1,240.000001192092,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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340,356,240787,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,360,241489,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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136,240,243068,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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188,32,246402,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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_AI

225 posts

Joined February 2013

_AI 2014-09-20T10:59:51+00:00

Natsu wrote:
Hi Mira-Ssan

General:

fine
Ai's Extra

00:06:928 maybe add a circle following the vocals, since you was mapping them, for example here 00:04:823 (1) - that's why I feel weird that you ignored that one
00:10:875 (3) - remove this circle? since there is nothing in the music, that's why I dont feel that you have valid reasons to have it there, also is the calm part of the song
00:56:226 (1,2,3) - mmm the spacing between 1/2 gap and 1/4 gap look like the same, there is not way to the player notice this in the first play IMO, make the spacing difference more noticeable
01:34:647 (1,2) - this rhythm doesn't fit the song, since you are mapping the important beats as slider tails (also this is breaking your combo pattern), try this:
01:36:226 (6,1) - swap NC, since this 01:36:226 is the place where it should be, following your every 1 stanza pattern and the music
01:37:630 looks like you are missing a NC here~
01:43:945 (4) - this extended slider doesn't fit the song, since there is nothing in the music at 01:44:209 -, but yes in 01:44:121
01:50:963 (1) - remove this NC, doesn't make much sense to just have 2 objects in the same one.
03:14:998 (1) - remove this NC too is totally breaking your combo pattern, plus this part can be easy readed without it

remember these are suggestions :3, just bring me reasons if you don't agree with something, call me back after you check this

Everything Done!

Natsu

8,100 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2014-09-20T11:41:02+00:00

we fixed some spacing in IRC and other tiny stuff.

Lets give this another try :3 GL

Mira-san

1,038 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Mira-san 2014-09-20T11:41:28+00:00

Natsu wrote:
we fixed some spacing in IRC and other tiny stuff.

Lets give this another try :3 GL

Thanks!

Natsu

8,100 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2014-09-27T03:59:02+00:00

mapper changed the size of some files in SB

Rebubbled

Dare

73 posts

Joined January 2014

Dare 2014-09-27T16:38:48+00:00

please rank put it into qualified already ; ; this map is just so soothing to play :>

guineaQ

1,589 posts

Joined December 2013

guineaQ 2014-09-27T22:35:19+00:00

#Mira-sanmosthatedmapper2014

theramdans

1,253 posts

Joined September 2012

theramdans 2014-09-28T05:20:24+00:00

Quali this before my Hysteria please

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,547 posts

Joined April 2012

neonat 2014-09-28T22:33:11+00:00

I'm forever involved in maps that either have highest priority in Pending or are in Pending for over a year

guineaQ

1,589 posts

Joined December 2013

guineaQ 2014-09-29T00:36:41+00:00

neonat wrote:
I'm forever involved in maps that either have highest priority in Pending or are in Pending for over a year

There is no escaping the curse

Stefan

Global Moderator

10,425 posts

Joined January 2011

Stefan 2014-09-29T07:33:17+00:00

neonat wrote:
I'm forever involved in maps that either have highest priority in Pending or are in Pending for over a year

Story of my ~~life~~ maps.

_AI

225 posts

Joined February 2013

_AI 2014-09-29T09:07:18+00:00

Since a long time ago.... ;; quickly!

Mira-san

1,038 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Mira-san 2014-09-29T09:38:20+00:00

Caaaan't be helped.

I can't find anyone who will qualify this. ._.

Shpoo

5 posts

Joined January 2013

Shpoo 2014-10-03T17:28:51+00:00

Hard

Log

00:28:507 (5,6,1) - These notes may disturb playing
01:37:630 (1,3) - overlap
01:39:384 (3,4) - overlap
01:41:840 (1,3) - overlap

Hi~I am a new modder, maybe my suggestion is useless but I will make progress!
Maybe these overlap notes are on the basis of your style but I really feel uncomfortable!

And you are a really good mapper, I will support you!

Aka

1,777 posts

Joined January 2012

Aka 2014-10-04T15:27:27+00:00

wow aka

selfreminder

Mira-san

1,038 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Mira-san 2014-10-05T13:50:21+00:00

Shpoo wrote:
Hard
Log
00:28:507 (5,6,1) - These notes may disturb playing
01:37:630 (1,3) - overlap
01:39:384 (3,4) - overlap
01:41:840 (1,3) - overlap
Hi~I am a new modder, maybe my suggestion is useless but I will make progress!
Maybe these overlap notes are on the basis of your style but I really feel uncomfortable!
And you are a really good mapper, I will support you!

Thank you for the mod but I don't think I will apply those. Hahaha ;w;
My apologies.

blaterwolf

267 posts

Joined November 2013

blaterwolf 2014-10-07T01:15:51+00:00

what is this star thing~

FrzR

2,237 posts

Joined October 2012

FrzR 2014-10-07T02:15:56+00:00

Hi~ Just a little heads up on my diff. I've been informed that my diff is prolly "too normal" to be easy. Just want some opinions on that. I tried nerfing my map. But couldn't reduce the stars that much. ;w;)

NachtHemdPlaya

12 posts

Joined September 2013

NachtHemdPlaya 2014-10-07T09:24:46+00:00

Fr33z3R wrote:
Hi~ Just a little heads up on my diff. I've been informed that my diff is prolly "too normal" to be easy. Just want some opinions on that. I tried nerfing my map. But couldn't reduce the stars that much. ;w;)

it just feels like normal with lower ar, od, hp

i recommend removing 40% of the circles and some sliders and changing CS to 2

i think im going to mod that for you today

our goal is 1,2 - 1,5 rating

Mira-san

1,038 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Mira-san 2014-10-07T09:51:14+00:00

<5 days left. RIP

FrzR

2,237 posts

Joined October 2012

FrzR 2014-10-07T11:03:53+00:00

NachtHemdPlaya wrote:
Fr33z3R wrote:
Hi~ Just a little heads up on my diff. I've been informed that my diff is prolly "too normal" to be easy. Just want some opinions on that. I tried nerfing my map. But couldn't reduce the stars that much. ;w;)

it just feels like normal with lower ar, od, hp

i recommend removing 40% of the circles and some sliders and changing CS to 2

i think im going to mod that for you today

our goal is 1,2 - 1,5 rating

Please do. Time to nerf this diff lol

NachtHemdPlaya

12 posts

Joined September 2013

NachtHemdPlaya 2014-10-07T11:35:02+00:00

had some problems because removing the circles made the map offbeat style and removing the sliders made the map rather empty and unbalanced so i had to move many things around

Easy:
change CS to 2

map changes:

SPOILER

Remove following objects (not the NC marked ones lol):
00:01:840 (2) -
00:03:244 (3) -
00:05:349 (4) -
00:06:752 (1) -
00:07:103 (5) - NC
00:07:454 (2) -
00:08:858 (4) -
00:09:559 (1) -
00:09:910 (4) - NC
00:10:261 (2) -
00:11:665 (3) -
00:25:349 (3) -
00:29:209 (2,4) -
00:32:016 (1,1,1) -
00:34:823 (6) - NC
00:37:980 (2) -
00:40:086 (1,4) -
00:45:700 (1) -
00:46:051 (4) - NC
00:47:103 (2) -
00:48:507 (1) -
00:48:858 (3) - NC
00:51:665 (1) -
00:52:016 (4) - NC
00:55:173 (2) -
01:07:103 (2,4) - i know its catchy but it has to be done
01:08:156 (1) -
01:08:507 (3) - NC
01:15:875 (2) -
01:21:138 (2,4) -
01:24:998 (1) -
01:27:103 (4) -
01:28:858 (2,4) -
01:30:963 (2) -
01:41:840 (1) -
01:42:191 (2) - NC
01:41:138 (2) -
01:48:507 (2) -
01:50:612 (1) -
02:06:051 (2) -
02:08:156 (2,4) -
02:10:963 (2) -
02:13:770 (2,4) -
02:29:559 (1,3,1) -
02:32:717 (3) - NC
02:33:419 (2) -
02:35:173 (1) -
02:36:928 (5) -
02:39:384 (2,1) -
02:44:998 (2,1) -
02:49:209 (1) -
02:49:559 (3) - NC
02:51:665 (3) -
02:54:121 (2,1) -
02:58:682 (2) -
03:00:787 (2) -
03:04:647 (2,4) -
03:07:454 (2,1) -
03:12:366 (1,3) -
03:18:682 (2) -
03:20:787 (2) -
03:23:945 (3,5,4) -
03:28:507 (1) -
03:28:858 (5) - NC
03:33:419 (3,1) -
03:40:086 (1,3) -
03:48:507 (2) -
03:52:016 (2,4) -
03:55:875 (3,5) -
04:00:437 (2,4) -
04:03:946 (2,4,2,4) -
04:11:665 (2,4) -
04:17:279 (2) -

Move following objects to:
00:34:823 (6) - 00:34:472 (6) -
00:39:033 (2) - 00:38:682 (2) -
00:40:437 (4) - 00:40:086 (4) -
00:43:244 (1) - 00:42:893 (1) -
00:46:051 (1) - 00:45:700 (1) -
00:47:454 (2) - 00:47:103 (2) -
00:48:858 (1) - 00:48:507 (1) -
00:53:068 (2) - 00:52:717 (2) -
01:08:507 (3) - 01:08:156 (3) -
01:09:910 (2) - 01:09:559 (2) -
01:16:928 (1) - 01:16:577 (1) -
01:42:191 (1) - 01:41:840 (1) -
01:50:612 (1) - 01:50:963 (1) - and make it circle
02:34:121 (2) - 02:33:770 (2) -
02:35:524 (3) - 02:35:173 (3) -
02:49:559 (1) - 02:49:209 (1) -
03:10:963 (5) - 03:11:314 (5) -

transform following objects (dont forget NC):
00:49:910 (2) - make it circle
00:52:016 (1) - make it circle
01:13:419 (4) - make it circle
01:32:016 (3) - remove reverse
01:34:823 (2) - make it circle
01:35:524 (3) - remove reverse
01:38:331 (2) - remove reverse
01:44:296 (1) - remove reverse
02:37:279 (5) - remove reverse
02:42:893 (4) - remove reverse
02:47:805 (1,2) - make it circle
02:55:875 (4) - remove reverse
03:01:840 (3) - remove reverse
03:13:419 (7) - remove reverse
03:16:577 (3) - remove reverse
03:21:489 (3) - remove reverse
03:50:261 (2) - remove reverse
03:57:980 (1,2) - make it circle
04:09:910 (2) - make it circle
04:14:823 (1) - make it circle

this makes the map 1.40 stars, if you are statisfied with these changes u can take the mapcode below so that you dont have to do it all by yourself
redoing the distance spacing is recommended

SPOILER

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[Metadata]
Title:World's End Dancehall (ROCKETMAN Remix)
TitleUnicode:ワールズエンド・ダンスホール (ROCKETMAN Remix)
Artist:wowaka
ArtistUnicode:wowaka
Creator:Mira-san
Version:Fr33z3R's Easy
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FrzR

2,237 posts

Joined October 2012

FrzR 2014-10-07T13:03:03+00:00

NachtHemdPlaya wrote:

had some problems because removing the circles made the map offbeat style and removing the sliders made the map rather empty and unbalanced so i had to move many things around

Easy:
change CS to 2

map changes:

SPOILER

Remove following objects (not the NC marked ones lol):
00:01:840 (2) -
00:03:244 (3) -
00:05:349 (4) -
00:06:752 (1) -
00:07:103 (5) - NC
00:07:454 (2) -
00:08:858 (4) -
00:09:559 (1) -
00:09:910 (4) - NC
00:10:261 (2) -
00:11:665 (3) -
00:25:349 (3) -
00:29:209 (2,4) -
00:32:016 (1,1,1) -
00:34:823 (6) - NC
00:37:980 (2) -
00:40:086 (1,4) -
00:45:700 (1) -
00:46:051 (4) - NC
00:47:103 (2) -
00:48:507 (1) -
00:48:858 (3) - NC
00:51:665 (1) -
00:52:016 (4) - NC
00:55:173 (2) -
01:07:103 (2,4) - i know its catchy but it has to be done
01:08:156 (1) -
01:08:507 (3) - NC
01:15:875 (2) -
01:21:138 (2,4) -
01:24:998 (1) -
01:27:103 (4) -
01:28:858 (2,4) -
01:30:963 (2) -
01:41:840 (1) -
01:42:191 (2) - NC
01:41:138 (2) -
01:48:507 (2) -
01:50:612 (1) -
02:06:051 (2) -
02:08:156 (2,4) -
02:10:963 (2) -
02:13:770 (2,4) -
02:29:559 (1,3,1) -
02:32:717 (3) - NC
02:33:419 (2) -
02:35:173 (1) -
02:36:928 (5) -
02:39:384 (2,1) -
02:44:998 (2,1) -
02:49:209 (1) -
02:49:559 (3) - NC
02:51:665 (3) -
02:54:121 (2,1) -
02:58:682 (2) -
03:00:787 (2) -
03:04:647 (2,4) -
03:07:454 (2,1) -
03:12:366 (1,3) -
03:18:682 (2) -
03:20:787 (2) -
03:23:945 (3,5,4) -
03:28:507 (1) -
03:28:858 (5) - NC
03:33:419 (3,1) -
03:40:086 (1,3) -
03:48:507 (2) -
03:52:016 (2,4) -
03:55:875 (3,5) -
04:00:437 (2,4) -
04:03:946 (2,4,2,4) -
04:11:665 (2,4) -
04:17:279 (2) -

Move following objects to:
00:34:823 (6) - 00:34:472 (6) -
00:39:033 (2) - 00:38:682 (2) -
00:40:437 (4) - 00:40:086 (4) -
00:43:244 (1) - 00:42:893 (1) -
00:46:051 (1) - 00:45:700 (1) -
00:47:454 (2) - 00:47:103 (2) -
00:48:858 (1) - 00:48:507 (1) -
00:53:068 (2) - 00:52:717 (2) -
01:08:507 (3) - 01:08:156 (3) -
01:09:910 (2) - 01:09:559 (2) -
01:16:928 (1) - 01:16:577 (1) -
01:42:191 (1) - 01:41:840 (1) -
01:50:612 (1) - 01:50:963 (1) - and make it circle
02:34:121 (2) - 02:33:770 (2) -
02:35:524 (3) - 02:35:173 (3) -
02:49:559 (1) - 02:49:209 (1) -
03:10:963 (5) - 03:11:314 (5) -

transform following objects (dont forget NC):
00:49:910 (2) - make it circle
00:52:016 (1) - make it circle
01:13:419 (4) - make it circle
01:32:016 (3) - remove reverse
01:34:823 (2) - make it circle
01:35:524 (3) - remove reverse
01:38:331 (2) - remove reverse
01:44:296 (1) - remove reverse
02:37:279 (5) - remove reverse
02:42:893 (4) - remove reverse
02:47:805 (1,2) - make it circle
02:55:875 (4) - remove reverse
03:01:840 (3) - remove reverse
03:13:419 (7) - remove reverse
03:16:577 (3) - remove reverse
03:21:489 (3) - remove reverse
03:50:261 (2) - remove reverse
03:57:980 (1,2) - make it circle
04:09:910 (2) - make it circle
04:14:823 (1) - make it circle

this makes the map 1.40 stars, if you are statisfied with these changes u can take the mapcode below so that you dont have to do it all by yourself
redoing the distance spacing is recommended

SPOILER

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: wowaka - World's End Dancehall (ROCKETMAN Remix).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2012
PreviewTime: 90606
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 765,20941,56730,68309,90590,122871,142520,157958,169187,180415,202871,225327,259209
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:World's End Dancehall (ROCKETMAN Remix)
TitleUnicode:ワールズエンド・ダンスホール (ROCKETMAN Remix)
Artist:wowaka
ArtistUnicode:wowaka
Creator:Mira-san
Version:Fr33z3R's Easy
Source:
Tags:genjitsutouhi-p vocaloid miku hatsune megurine luka fr33z3r _ai neonat stefan thenutritiousguy TNG ryo fukawa DANCE REMIX vol.1
BeatmapID:251111
BeatmapSetID:88911

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:2
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3.5
SliderMultiplier:0.700000005960464
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Miku.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,12216,21864
2,57128,60109
2,62742,65372
2,113268,122916
2,135724,142565
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Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\sbguestdiff.png",320,240
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 F,0,13397,14099,0,1
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 F,0,14099,21467,1
 F,0,21467,22169,1,0
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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56753,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
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202893,-100,4,2,0,40,0,0
222543,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
259209,-100,4,2,0,5,0,0


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Combo2 : 90,220,160
Combo3 : 225,110,225
Combo4 : 25,125,255
Combo5 : 200,10,200
Combo6 : 230,50,50
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I tried your mapcode. But dunno. It looks rekt. Yes the stars dropped but the DS is broken in this mapcode of yours. Did you just remove the circles and stuff without readjusting? ;w;) I guess I'll just do this myself. Sorry and thanks for your effort though.

Aka

1,777 posts

Joined January 2012

Aka 2014-10-07T14:12:44+00:00

Fr33z3R wrote:
Hi~ Just a little heads up on my diff. I've been informed that my diff is prolly "too normal" to be easy. Just want some opinions on that. I tried nerfing my map. But couldn't reduce the stars that much. ;w;)

yes, that's exactly what got after looking on this diff.
also after looking through the other maps with the same bpm i came to the conclusion that 1.3-1.2 DS would suit there more. atm it feels just huge. if i were you i'd change AR to simple 3.0 and replaced everything by 1.3 DS. CS is fine as 3 imo. that 0.3 star difference is not normal, the current rhythm is mostly 1/1 with lots of circles so would be better if you could replace most of circles by 1/1 sliders, 2/1 sliders.
the rhythm like you did there
・ 00:40:086 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - is good, exactly what should be all over the diff. though i'd like to suggest some changes.
00:40:086 (1,2,3,4) - this part sounds the same like this one 00:45:700 (1,2,3,4) - so you could make same objects like there, i mean, that (2) reverse slider doesn't really fit, the intonation is not relly suitable for a reverse slider. you could also make something like this but if you didnt do such thing things before, don't

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00:42:542 (4) - wouldnt recommend finishing a slider there, more logical is to start an object there, circle/slider.
so my whole suggestion to this 00:40:086 (1,2,3,4) - part is this:

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・i wanted to remake a rhythm of the first part to make something like an example, tell me what you think about this one. you had everything by 1/1 all the way and this is what i'd like the diff look like. there are less notes, more sliders and more long sliders.

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・00:28:858 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - like this

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・01:14:121 (1,2) - this is kind of out of rhythm again, and that's again because you ended a slider on the downbeat 01:13:419 (4) - . 01:08:156 (1,2,3) - this pattern too, basically i feel like it would be better if you swapped your circle and 2 sliders, like this http://puu.sh/c2VdL/046f7bea21.jpg.
also those circles which go after this pattern doesnt really suit the part well. starting there till 01:16:928 (1) - there, i'd suggest to make something like this:

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・04:03:595 (1,2,3,4) - wouldn't really recommend to start from lots of circles, i dont like the idea of 3+ circle in Easy at all but ohwell
・03:21:489 (4,2) - 00:48:858 (2,4) - such overlaps give a feeling of something messy, with a low ar its not really neat

i don't know this is enough, caught some random moments which caught my eye. hope it would somehow help to improve this diff :\

i'll look on the whole mapset a bit later so do not kd this post whoever had a thought to do so lol

Last edited by TicClick 2014-10-12T13:37:10+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

NachtHemdPlaya

12 posts

Joined September 2013

NachtHemdPlaya 2014-10-07T14:53:35+00:00

Fr33z3R wrote:

NachtHemdPlaya wrote:

had some problems because removing the circles made the map offbeat style and removing the sliders made the map rather empty and unbalanced so i had to move many things around

Easy:
change CS to 2

map changes:

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Remove following objects (not the NC marked ones lol):
00:01:840 (2) -
00:03:244 (3) -
00:05:349 (4) -
00:06:752 (1) -
00:07:103 (5) - NC
00:07:454 (2) -
00:08:858 (4) -
00:09:559 (1) -
00:09:910 (4) - NC
00:10:261 (2) -
00:11:665 (3) -
00:25:349 (3) -
00:29:209 (2,4) -
00:32:016 (1,1,1) -
00:34:823 (6) - NC
00:37:980 (2) -
00:40:086 (1,4) -
00:45:700 (1) -
00:46:051 (4) - NC
00:47:103 (2) -
00:48:507 (1) -
00:48:858 (3) - NC
00:51:665 (1) -
00:52:016 (4) - NC
00:55:173 (2) -
01:07:103 (2,4) - i know its catchy but it has to be done
01:08:156 (1) -
01:08:507 (3) - NC
01:15:875 (2) -
01:21:138 (2,4) -
01:24:998 (1) -
01:27:103 (4) -
01:28:858 (2,4) -
01:30:963 (2) -
01:41:840 (1) -
01:42:191 (2) - NC
01:41:138 (2) -
01:48:507 (2) -
01:50:612 (1) -
02:06:051 (2) -
02:08:156 (2,4) -
02:10:963 (2) -
02:13:770 (2,4) -
02:29:559 (1,3,1) -
02:32:717 (3) - NC
02:33:419 (2) -
02:35:173 (1) -
02:36:928 (5) -
02:39:384 (2,1) -
02:44:998 (2,1) -
02:49:209 (1) -
02:49:559 (3) - NC
02:51:665 (3) -
02:54:121 (2,1) -
02:58:682 (2) -
03:00:787 (2) -
03:04:647 (2,4) -
03:07:454 (2,1) -
03:12:366 (1,3) -
03:18:682 (2) -
03:20:787 (2) -
03:23:945 (3,5,4) -
03:28:507 (1) -
03:28:858 (5) - NC
03:33:419 (3,1) -
03:40:086 (1,3) -
03:48:507 (2) -
03:52:016 (2,4) -
03:55:875 (3,5) -
04:00:437 (2,4) -
04:03:946 (2,4,2,4) -
04:11:665 (2,4) -
04:17:279 (2) -

Move following objects to:
00:34:823 (6) - 00:34:472 (6) -
00:39:033 (2) - 00:38:682 (2) -
00:40:437 (4) - 00:40:086 (4) -
00:43:244 (1) - 00:42:893 (1) -
00:46:051 (1) - 00:45:700 (1) -
00:47:454 (2) - 00:47:103 (2) -
00:48:858 (1) - 00:48:507 (1) -
00:53:068 (2) - 00:52:717 (2) -
01:08:507 (3) - 01:08:156 (3) -
01:09:910 (2) - 01:09:559 (2) -
01:16:928 (1) - 01:16:577 (1) -
01:42:191 (1) - 01:41:840 (1) -
01:50:612 (1) - 01:50:963 (1) - and make it circle
02:34:121 (2) - 02:33:770 (2) -
02:35:524 (3) - 02:35:173 (3) -
02:49:559 (1) - 02:49:209 (1) -
03:10:963 (5) - 03:11:314 (5) -

transform following objects (dont forget NC):
00:49:910 (2) - make it circle
00:52:016 (1) - make it circle
01:13:419 (4) - make it circle
01:32:016 (3) - remove reverse
01:34:823 (2) - make it circle
01:35:524 (3) - remove reverse
01:38:331 (2) - remove reverse
01:44:296 (1) - remove reverse
02:37:279 (5) - remove reverse
02:42:893 (4) - remove reverse
02:47:805 (1,2) - make it circle
02:55:875 (4) - remove reverse
03:01:840 (3) - remove reverse
03:13:419 (7) - remove reverse
03:16:577 (3) - remove reverse
03:21:489 (3) - remove reverse
03:50:261 (2) - remove reverse
03:57:980 (1,2) - make it circle
04:09:910 (2) - make it circle
04:14:823 (1) - make it circle

this makes the map 1.40 stars, if you are statisfied with these changes u can take the mapcode below so that you dont have to do it all by yourself
redoing the distance spacing is recommended

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osu file format v13

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328,192,259033,5,4,0:0:0:0:

I tried your mapcode. But dunno. It looks rekt. Yes the stars dropped but the DS is broken in this mapcode of yours. Did you just remove the circles and stuff without readjusting? ;w;) I guess I'll just do this myself. Sorry and thanks for your effort though.

yes i didnt change DS because i actually suck at mapping but i told that mira
just wanted to reduce the objects so it can be actually called easy diff
and i also didnt pay attention to the rhythm so i know its messed up now, but better than nothing, right?

Aka

1,777 posts

Joined January 2012

Aka 2014-10-07T15:18:30+00:00

NachtHemdPlaya wrote:
and i also didnt pay attention to the rhythm so i know its messed up now, but better than nothing, right?

we need it rankable, not "better than nothing". a messy rhythm is not what we call "rankable" or "appropriate"

Eni

1,437 posts

Joined May 2013

Eni 2014-10-07T23:52:02+00:00

This reminds me of p/2806425

theramdans

1,253 posts

Joined September 2012

theramdans 2014-10-08T08:44:04+00:00

AR 3 with 1.3 DS
wow it is exactly the same settings for my ver of the easy diff of this mapset (it gave me 1.48 star)

Mira-san

1,038 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Mira-san 2014-10-08T14:57:12+00:00

SB elements are improved, again.

=>New guest diff images.
=>Changed "A guest diff by" to "Guest diff by"

FrzR

2,237 posts

Joined October 2012

FrzR 2014-10-09T06:01:09+00:00

Diff finished. I already sent my diff to Mira-san to be added in the mapset. yay~

NachtHemdPlaya

12 posts

Joined September 2013

NachtHemdPlaya 2014-10-10T11:09:33+00:00

Fr33z3R wrote:
Diff finished. I already sent my diff to Mira-san to be added in the mapset. yay~

looks very good, i hope this will get ranked soon

theramdans

1,253 posts

Joined September 2012

theramdans 2014-10-10T12:48:14+00:00

freezer rly takes my suggestions into account \o/
1.99 > 1.54 omg so pro
dem symmetry instarank pls o3o

good luck!!!

guineaQ

1,589 posts

Joined December 2013

guineaQ 2014-10-11T15:31:47+00:00

Holding my urge to mod this

Mira-san

1,038 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Mira-san 2014-10-12T13:48:31+00:00

oooooooo birthday wish: get this map ranked 12th of October RIP

Eni

1,437 posts

Joined May 2013

Eni 2014-10-12T16:02:28+00:00

...................

Aka

1,777 posts

Joined January 2012

Aka 2014-10-12T19:59:03+00:00

no kd this post since tic kd'd previous ._.

general stuff

・seems like normal-hitwhistle2.wav is unused?
・the preview point is unsnapped

fr33z3r's

AR -0.5? i thought you agreed with AR3
・00:04:998 (1) - not sure if the nc there is necessary. either delete this one, or add there 00:08:858 (4) - . but i'd suggest deleting the nc
・00:11:314 (3) - on tail, 00:23:244 (1) - on head, 01:41:840 (1) - on head, 01:51:665 (1) - , 02:15:524 (3) - , 03:11:665 (2) - on head, 03:21:490 (1) - , 04:02:191 (1) - on head, 04:07:805 (1) - on head add finishers, other diffs have them all btw
・00:28:507 (3) - would be better if you had a clickable object on the downbeat, placing there 2 circles would make that transfer from one music part to another more comfortable and make that downbeat emphasized, yeah (i know that i said to simplify the diff as much as you can but in this case it is pretty much acceptable and fitting!)

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・00:31:665 (4) - i suppose there 00:33:068 (6) - and there should be nc?
・00:45:700 (1,2,3,4) - the pattern like this looks good if it is placed in the middle of the screen, the way you placed it there gives a kind of not neat thing. so could you move it in the middle?

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・00:48:858 (2) - if there 00:47:454 (4,1,2) - would be a visual triangle pattern i would be ok with it but for smoother flow its better to move this slider a bit down so (1) stands by the arc of (2) and provides more natural flow

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・01:43:244 (3,4,1) - at least move them so triangle looks neater please

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03:13:069 (4,5,1) -
・02:04:296 (1,3) - avoid this overlap, its kinda visible during the gameplay
03:56:577 (1,3) -
・02:45:349 (4,1,2) - a bit nazi but you could round those sliders less and make the blanket be perfect there
・02:52:016 (5) - nc, 02:53:419 (1) - remove? to make the ncing be consistent
・02:54:823 (1,2) - fix the spacing and that symmetry misplacing by changing the placement of the previous pattern and replacing this pattern like: (1) 83|183; (2) 302|334
・04:13:419 (1) - spacing issue

the diff is better than it was but imo it needs some additional modding on rhythm in some parts and hitsounding cause i am not really sure about it. gather 1-2 quality mods and it should be pretty much enough. since the whole diff is remapped, gathering more mods shouldnt hurt and would be better.
also one thing more from me, as the hitsounding is raw a bit, i think adding a normal sampleset on each object 1/1 before the clap would sound better. like 01:44:647 (1) - 01:46:051 (3) - 01:47:454 (1) - 01:48:858 (3) - on heads of these sliders etc, i guess you got the principle

neonat's

・the clap hitsounding in the ending of the beginning part (lol) sound kind of random. the clap fits on a sound like this 00:06:752 - , so i'd suggest to remove the claps from the heads of these sliders: 00:07:805 (4) - , 00:09:209 (1) - 00:10:612 (3) - .
・00:54:121 (1) - spacing issue
・01:19:384 (1,2,3,4) - could you choose one shape for these sliders and make them neat? the current placing/several curve shapes makes this part a bit messy imo

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・01:36:752 (2,3,4,5,6) - again about neat placement

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・01:39:735 (2,3,4,5) - the pattern is damn really clamped, could you widen it a bit?

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・02:58:858 - not sure if there should be a note since you went full nonsto in this part before?
・03:01:665 (4,5,6,7) - a thing like this could be pretty hard to control imo, with 2 1/1 slider like you did there 03:07:279 (4,5,6) - would be a kind of easier

hard

・01:22:191 (1,3) - mm can you take (3) out of the (1)'s end?

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03:10:612 (2,3) - this one as well, also the flow would be better if this slider was placed more to the right
・01:44:823 (1,2,3,4,5) - are you sure about 1.40 there? this part could be a bit hard to control, since you also have 1.15sv, ugh
・02:09:735 (8) - idk if this is intentional or not, either make it 1.30 or vise versa, so it will be 1.30 prev 1.40 next. minor stuff though

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・02:49:910 (4,5,1) - such thing is really confusing, during the testplay i barely saw that (1) has a reverse, i dont want to say that this thing is unrankable but it may be pretty questionable, a also asked some more bats about this so its not only my imo. so would really like you to aviod this stack
・03:17:279 (1,2,3) - sudden 1.0? o.o you could make them 1.3 so (3)'s end would be stacked, m?

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・03:22:893 (1) - finish there fits pretty good
・04:18:331 (1,2) - to make obvious that (2) is longer than (1) i'd place a note at the end cause really, there was just one reverse and there are 3, might be unpredictable from one sight, coulld be just my imo but that's what i think about this part, if you ask me

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insane

・00:34:472 (1) - um, if you had 0.70x stream would be nice to make this slider be 0.70x too
・00:37:454 (2) - not sure if the note for triplet fits there, there is nothing in music for this and before, you have 00:36:138 (2,3) - 00:38:682 (1,2) - 00:41:489 (1,2) - 00:42:893 (1,2) - such rhythm mostly
・01:29:910 (6,7,8,9) - 02:59:735 (1,2,3,4) - even extra doesnt have anything there D: ugh, well, overall i consider this part lound and would really like you to either delete the whistles from the blue ticks or delete this
・02:12:717 (1) - dont silence the beat by the head of spinner, please, move it 1/4 later and add a note here
・02:42:191 (1,2,3) - unstack (3) please, this polarity thing is a pain in this part and hardly readable, making it flow like there02:40:787 (1,2,3) - would be great
・02:52:542 (5) - ummmmmmmmm i'd place this circle upper, it would flow better imo, somewhere there

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・03:07:454 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is reeeeeeally low spaced, incriease the spacing for this pattern, its a kiai part with 1.25x after all
・03:59:735 (2,3,4,5,6) - making this rhombus flow to right would feel really cooler, by just swapping (3) (6)

neonat

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neonat 2014-10-13T04:29:43+00:00

Aka wrote:
neonat's

・the clap hitsounding in the ending of the beginning part (lol) sound kind of random. the clap fits on a sound like this 00:06:752 - , so i'd suggest to remove the claps from the heads of these sliders: 00:07:805 (4) - , 00:09:209 (1) - 00:10:612 (3) - . k
・00:54:121 (1) - spacing issue fixed
・01:19:384 (1,2,3,4) - could you choose one shape for these sliders and make them neat? the current placing/several curve shapes makes this part a bit messy imo adjusted
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・01:36:752 (2,3,4,5,6) - again about neat placement changed it my way
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・01:39:735 (2,3,4,5) - the pattern is damn really clamped, could you widen it a bit? widened then
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・02:58:858 - not sure if there should be a note since you went full nonsto in this part before? it was part of the change I made to split things up to make it easier to handle it all
・03:01:665 (4,5,6,7) - a thing like this could be pretty hard to control imo, with 2 1/1 slider like you did there 03:07:279 (4,5,6) - would be a kind of easier adjust the pattern here

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Mira-san

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Mira-san 2014-10-13T12:12:30+00:00

Aka wrote:
no kd this post since tic kd'd previous ._. | ok

hard

・01:22:191 (1,3) - mm can you take (3) out of the (1)'s end?
SPOILER
03:10:612 (2,3) - this one as well, also the flow would be better if this slider was placed more to the right
・01:44:823 (1,2,3,4,5) - are you sure about 1.40 there? this part could be a bit hard to control, since you also have 1.15sv, ugh
・02:09:735 (8) - idk if this is intentional or not, either make it 1.30 or vise versa, so it will be 1.30 prev 1.40 next. minor stuff though
SPOILER
・02:49:910 (4,5,1) - such thing is really confusing, during the testplay i barely saw that (1) has a reverse, i dont want to say that this thing is unrankable but it may be pretty questionable, a also asked some more bats about this so its not only my imo. so would really like you to aviod this stack
・03:17:279 (1,2,3) - sudden 1.0? o.o you could make them 1.3 so (3)'s end would be stacked, m?
SPOILER
・03:22:893 (1) - finish there fits pretty good
・04:18:331 (1,2) - to make obvious that (2) is longer than (1) i'd place a note at the end cause really, there was just one reverse and there are 3, might be unpredictable from one sight, coulld be just my imo but that's what i think about this part, if you ask me
SPOILER

Applied everything. Remapped some parts.
insane

・00:34:472 (1) - um, if you had 0.70x stream would be nice to make this slider be 0.70x too
・00:37:454 (2) - not sure if the note for triplet fits there, there is nothing in music for this and before, you have 00:36:138 (2,3) - 00:38:682 (1,2) - 00:41:489 (1,2) - 00:42:893 (1,2) - such rhythm mostly
・01:29:910 (6,7,8,9) - 02:59:735 (1,2,3,4) - even extra doesnt have anything there D: ugh, well, overall i consider this part lound and would really like you to either delete the whistles from the blue ticks or delete this | i didn't delete this one, i just removed the hitsounds.
・02:12:717 (1) - dont silence the beat by the head of spinner, please, move it 1/4 later and add a note here
・02:42:191 (1,2,3) - unstack (3) please, this polarity thing is a pain in this part and hardly readable, making it flow like there02:40:787 (1,2,3) - would be great
・02:52:542 (5) - ummmmmmmmm i'd place this circle upper, it would flow better imo, somewhere there
SPOILER
・03:07:454 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is reeeeeeally low spaced, incriease the spacing for this pattern, its a kiai part with 1.25x after all
・03:59:735 (2,3,4,5,6) - making this rhombus flow to right would feel really cooler, by just swapping (3) (6)

all applied

thenck. C:

FrzR

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FrzR 2014-10-13T12:14:03+00:00

Aka wrote:
no kd this post since tic kd'd previous ._.

general stuff

・seems like normal-hitwhistle2.wav is unused?
・the preview point is unsnapped

fr33z3r's

AR -0.5? i thought you agreed with AR3 -Sorry, kinda slipped that one. Fixed
・00:04:998 (1) - not sure if the nc there is necessary. either delete this one, or add there 00:08:858 (4) - . but i'd suggest deleting the nc -Fixed, deleted nc.
・00:11:314 (3) - on tail, 00:23:244 (1) - on head, 01:41:840 (1) - on head, 01:51:665 (1) - , 02:15:524 (3) - , 03:11:665 (2) - on head, 03:21:490 (1) - , 04:02:191 (1) - on head, 04:07:805 (1) - on head add finishers, other diffs have them all btw -I'm horrible with hitsounds sorry. Thanks, added.
・00:28:507 (3) - would be better if you had a clickable object on the downbeat, placing there 2 circles would make that transfer from one music part to another more comfortable and make that downbeat emphasized, yeah (i know that i said to simplify the diff as much as you can but in this case it is pretty much acceptable and fitting!) -Changed slider to 2 circles
SPOILER
・00:31:665 (4) - i suppose there 00:33:068 (6) - and there should be nc? -Fixed
・00:45:700 (1,2,3,4) - the pattern like this looks good if it is placed in the middle of the screen, the way you placed it there gives a kind of not neat thing. so could you move it in the middle? -Moved
SPOILER
・00:48:858 (2) - if there 00:47:454 (4,1,2) - would be a visual triangle pattern i would be ok with it but for smoother flow its better to move this slider a bit down so (1) stands by the arc of (2) and provides more natural flow -Moved
SPOILER
・01:43:244 (3,4,1) - at least move them so triangle looks neater please -Moved
SPOILER
03:13:069 (4,5,1) - Moved
・02:04:296 (1,3) - avoid this overlap, its kinda visible during the gameplay -Fixed
03:56:577 (1,3) - Fixed
・02:45:349 (4,1,2) - a bit nazi but you could round those sliders less and make the blanket be perfect there -lol, Fixed
・02:52:016 (5) - nc, 02:53:419 (1) - remove? to make the ncing be consistent -Fixed
・02:54:823 (1,2) - fix the spacing and that symmetry misplacing by changing the placement of the previous pattern and replacing this pattern like: (1) 83|183; (2) 302|334 -Fixed, sort of. Can't get those numbers accurately :/
・04:13:419 (1) - spacing issue -Fixed

the diff is better than it was but imo it needs some additional modding on rhythm in some parts and hitsounding cause i am not really sure about it. gather 1-2 quality mods and it should be pretty much enough. since the whole diff is remapped, gathering more mods shouldnt hurt and would be better.
also one thing more from me, as the hitsounding is raw a bit, i think adding a normal sampleset on each object 1/1 before the clap would sound better. like 01:44:647 (1) - 01:46:051 (3) - 01:47:454 (1) - 01:48:858 (3) - on heads of these sliders etc, i guess you got the principle -Added

Thanks a lot. owo)b

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Mira-san

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Mira-san 2014-10-13T12:51:19+00:00

Hype.

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Frim4503

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Frim4503 2014-10-13T17:56:42+00:00

i think this map
will taking forever to get ranked

Stefan

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Stefan 2014-10-13T17:58:30+00:00

Frim4503 wrote:
i think this map
will taking forever to get ranked

I think it won't.

FrzR

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FrzR 2014-10-13T23:42:30+00:00

Frim4503 wrote:
i think this map
will taking forever to get ranked

You and your avatar. :I

theramdans

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theramdans 2014-10-14T04:38:02+00:00

when
*shots kudos

blaterwolf

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blaterwolf 2014-10-15T02:27:27+00:00

Fr33z3R wrote:
Frim4503 wrote:
i think this map
will taking forever to get ranked
You and your avatar. :I

le shooting stars

Mira-san

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Mira-san 2014-10-15T03:27:05+00:00

theramdans wrote:
when
*shots kudos

SkyBearer245 wrote:
le shooting stars

Pls shoot 100000 stars pls.

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