Gray Veyron
Thanks.Gray Veyron wrote:
Hey, From my queue!firetruck, so many diffs,I'll mod the first three diff instead.
Here's my die-hard mod ;__;[> General <][> Easy <]
- - Why should you add bladedance when you've used another one for a space(blade dance)? It's counted on the title. Some sources list it without space and some with, so I want users to be able to find it either way. I included tags blade dance because some users may search for the full title of the anime "seirei tsuki no blade dance" in quotation marks, so this is to help them find it.
- - Remove anime from tags? It'll be counted on the genre later. I know there are other maps are doing it, but i think it's much pressure when adding it there. Is it unrankable to do this? I think I want to keep it because some users don't know how to search properly by genre and will just put "anime" as search query, so I want them to be able to find the map that way.
[> Normal <]
- 00:02:247 (3,2) - Almost an overlap, I know you want to do it for blanket or some reason, imo, it doesn't fit well here. I don't think overlap is problem here. It fits fine to me.
- 00:04:813 (3,1) - I think the flow broke a bit here, since the slider's position is away-off and nothing front of it, just behind it. I'll just say; Curve on the straight slider for blanket reasons. No, I think this flows well and gives stronger emphasis to (1).
- 00:06:739 (2,3) - Too straightic, make a Wave or a Claw formation here. uhh.. what? I think straight sliders play fine here?
- 00:18:289 (1,2,3) - Make a Cycle formation here. ? I think it's fine as it is now.
- 00:22:781 (4,5,1) - Instead of stacking on Easy diffs, make a triangle formation here. I think stack is not a problem for 1/1 here because I only use it in those parts of the phrase near the end with the claps and vocal "hai hai" and I think it matches the song well.
- 00:25:348 (4,5,1) - ^ ^
- 00:29:199 (2,3) - Try reposition this slider a little and direct to the slider (3)'s head. It's fine.
- 00:33:049 (4,5,1) - Same as 00:22:781 (4,5,1) - Same.
- 00:35:616 (4,5,1) - ^ ^
- 00:49:749 (3) - Remove the Finish here, the beat is not likely strong enough here. Where? If you mean 00:50:375 then I think those finishes fit well since there is cymbal in the music.
- 00:50:375 (3) - I don't think you need a reverse here, reduce and add a 1/1 slider next to this slider. It doesn't really make a difference to me.. But is there any reason why 2/1 + 1/1 would be better? I think the current rhythm is fine too, and simpler to play.
- 01:00:001 (2,3,4,1) - Same as 00:22:781 (4,5,1) -, How about a diamond formation here. Same
- 01:10:910 (2,3) - Same as 00:06:739 (2,3) - ?
- 01:18:610 (2,3) - ^ ^
- - Nothing to say here. Great~
[> Hard <]
- 00:02:888 (1,2) - This overlap looks beutiful to you, but to me, Not very much. Make a Wave formation or blanket. It's fine.
- 00:04:172 (3,4,5,1) - Making a diamond formation looks fitting here, It's a little symmetry, but just give it a try > http://puu.sh/b7k13/be4c9b34fd.png Stack is better for emphasizing the vocals imo.
- 00:06:418 (3) - Curve this slider downgrid? or make the formation like you did already here 00:08:985 (3,4) - Current shape/positioning flows better.
- 00:17:327 (4,5,6,1) - Same as 00:04:172 (3,4,5,1) - Same.
- 00:18:931 (2,3) - Reposition the slider (3) front of the slider (2)'s tail. Makes no difference to me.
- 00:25:349 (5,6,3) - Stack everything in, Or is it impossible? It's not possible, and (5) is already not visible by the time (3) renders, so it doesn't matter.
- 00:33:690 (1,2) - Make a symmetry here? No..?
- 00:37:862 (4,2) - Overlap, or on purpose? It looks alright.
- 00:40:749 (4) - Same reason as the previous diff, Are you letting the finish hitsound follow the vocal? well, the vocal is a little weak with the beat here, It might not fit on the song track at all. Same.
- 00:45:241 (4,5,1) - Same as 00:33:690 (1,2) - No, current pattern flows better.
- 01:00:482 (3) - Curve like 00:59:359 (1) - ? a bit of symmetry if so. No.
- 01:17:327 (1,2) - Same as 00:33:690 (1,2) - No.
- 01:25:027 (1,2) - Same as 00:02:888 (1,2) - Same.
- - Another great diff, nop nop!
- - AiMod is such a soab on the spacings you have >_>
- 00:00:642 (2,5) - Stack slider tail on head. sure
- 00:03:530 (3,4,5) - Make a Squared Cycle formation here, just curve the slider (4) downright grid. A little nice flow it would be. I like the current flow (the intention is to feel dance-like)
- 00:05:134 (8,1,2) - Maybe AiMod is right, this spacing looks a bit confusing, since you're using 1.4x or 1.5x spacing between circle (8) and slider (1). Try fixing that, There are more of them on other parts of the song track, find it yourself, I'm avoiding big mods. Not sure what you want me to do here, I think it plays fine too, but do you have a suggestion?
- 00:09:947 (6,7) - Make a triangle formation here, since you never did this on other tracks. Stack is better for emphasis.
- 00:16:364 (2,3,4) - Balance the triangle here, it looks weird when the spacing is fine but the pattern is not. Made an equilateral triangle.
- 00:25:027 (1,2,3) - Try this pattern a bit, It might look okay when a little jump is there > http://puu.sh/b7lOL/d778b07a0c.png I prefer the current smoother flow, and not make such a huge jump to the next (1).
- 00:30:482 (8,9,1,2) - Make symmetry here? Curve or uncurve, it's still well-flowed. No. It goes against my slider shape pattern (straight sliders on those strong claps at the end of the phrase, curve sliders for those parts with more motion in the music.
- 00:35:295 (1,1) - Same as 00:00:642 (2,5) - ok
- 00:43:637 (4,1) - Overlap, or on purpose? Why is it necessary to avoid overlap?
- 00:53:584 (4,1) - Same as 00:30:482 (8,9,1,2) - Not sure what you mean for this.. But I don't think symmetry is needed here.
- 00:59:359 (1,2,3) - Balance this Cycle formation. ok
- 01:03:771 (7) - I still think this reversed slider doesn't fit the song track here, reduce, and add 1/2 slider or two stacked circles. I think current rhythm fits better than those you suggested.
- 01:14:760 (1,5) - Why not stack the slider (5)'s head on the slider (1)'s tail? It would be a triangle formation, and avoiding the overlap with 01:15:081 (2,3) - Stacked with (2,3) instead, because it flows smoother.
- 01:22:461 (1,2) - Same reason, Make a Claw or Wave formation here. I don't know what that means.
- - Pretty much challenging, but i'm not amazing with the spacing(Jumps aren't included) you have there. gg
Good quality of the mapset ~ \(^o^/)