Tsukuyomi wrote:

because map is too long, i can't point out all problems
so i just point out some examples and you need to find similar problems yourself

00:36:050 (3,4) - this is 1/4,but 00:36:366 (5,1) - is 1/2, it's really confusing because they have similar spacing, which you should avoid in the whole map
plz increase the spacing of 00:36:366 (5,1) -, till people can easily know which is 1/4 jump

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00:57:682 (5) - it is kinda umcomfortable, i think 2 notes here is better, empty after a slider in such a tight-rhythm song is not very good, because people need not to hit the end of the slider, so peoople will feel an empty of 1/1 after a slider will be a bit longer than note when playing

01:00:682 (1) - move it far away is better because of the empty.but i think put stream 01:00:366 here fits the song better?

01:36:050 (1,2,3) - 6 notes here fit the music better,i prefer patter like this I changed the entire pattern

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03:20:261 (9,10) - increase spacing a bit ? make it easier to read I made it a little bit

04:25:629 (4,5) - increase spacing is better,finish here is loud,and try this flow,i think it is nice ^

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05:13:945 why not map here? Because it follows the music

05:20:577 (6) - no hit no fun I made a hit but not like your picture

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06:21:050 (5) - idk why you use this rhythm here,it is strange,a note at06:21:050 and a repeat at 06:21:208 is better

06:48:568 (1) - put it far away is more exciting

07:37:761 (6,8) - ctrl g fit the music better Yes, but it's too weird to play imo =/

07:39:476 add a note here? It doesn't fit the music =3

10:41:690 (1,2,3,4,5) - use notes to replace them is better I see no interest to make circle to replace slider here '-'

10:44:190 (6,7) - it is weak，use stream here

11:12:090 (1) - 11:37:690 rhythm is a mess imo,you should consider more about this part,music here is different from other parts obiviously I don't see why you think it's messy, it just fit the music xD

11:37:690 - 11:44:090 long stream patterns here is better imo But it doesn't fit the music =/

12:09:690 - 12:16:090 same here music here is especial，you should not use general patterns you used before,which is very boring and not fit. I consider this part as a pause, that's why it's boring x3

15:01:703 (1,2,1,2) - slider pattern is weak,use note pattern is better imo Why ? I think this patern isn't weak xD
http://puu.sh/7G3k5.zip

17:09:803 (2) - use 3/4 slider here and move 17:10:103 (3) - to 17:10:103 3/4 slider for this part is bad

18:29:953 (6) - you should NC here,it is too hard to read
and i think you'd better move 18:30:015 (2) - a bit away from 18:29:828 (5) - ,don't stack them perfectly I changed the patern

18:39:453 finish here is loud,if you put slider's head here it will be awesome,but slider's end here is awful I changed the volume for the slider's end (60%)

some parts lack of representability,and some rhythm problems consist in some parts
it can beimproved
good luck

Mao wrote:

M4M, sorry for the little delay :c

IRC

2014-04-25 17:41 Mao: just going to point out basic things I guess
2014-04-25 17:41 Mao: lemme check general stuff
2014-04-25 17:41 Mao: THIS MAPSET NEEDS AT LEAST ONE NORMAL OR EASY DIFF
2014-04-25 17:41 Mao: NOT
2014-04-25 17:42 Mao: BECAUSE IT'S FOR APPROVAL
2014-04-25 17:42 Mao: STOP FOOLING ME AIMOD ;W;
2014-04-25 17:42 Kenterz9: FUCK YOU AIMOD xD
2014-04-25 17:42 Mao: lol dat timeline
2014-04-25 17:42 Mao: lemme search for unsnapped inherited points!
2014-04-25 17:43 Kenterz9: Also It's fucking impossible to upload it xDDDD
2014-04-25 17:44 Mao: well not going to find a lot
2014-04-25 17:44 Mao: since it's basically a pretty awesome map
2014-04-25 17:44 Kenterz9: Thanks =3333
2014-04-25 17:46 Mao: and if I'd point out every nitpick we will be still here tomorrow xDD
2014-04-25 17:46 Kenterz9: True xD
2014-04-25 17:47 Mao: 00:31:787 (5,6,1) - This sounds a bit weird to me, I guess you wanted to emphasize the slider a bit more with 00:31:866 (6) - but since there's basically nothing it sounds a bit strange to me
2014-04-25 17:47 Mao: removing 00:31:866 (6) - could help
2014-04-25 17:48 Kenterz9: Same for 00:32:182 (2) ?
2014-04-25 17:49 Mao: nope
2014-04-25 17:49 Mao: fits there
2014-04-25 17:49 Mao: there's something on the blue one
2014-04-25 17:49 Mao: 01:03:208 (1,2,3) - This is the same as 01:00:682 (1,2,3) -
2014-04-25 17:50 Mao: why isn't it mapped the same way? :c
2014-04-25 17:50 Mao: i personally think 01:00:682 (1,2,3) - sounds a lot better
2014-04-25 17:51 Kenterz9: Okay done
2014-04-25 17:51 Mao: btw make your sliders symmetrical, if you CTRL+H you see they aren't
2014-04-25 17:51 Mao: ACTION runs
2014-04-25 17:52 Mao: 01:09:524 (1) - Just want to note this is pretty awsesome <3
2014-04-25 17:52 Kenterz9: <3
2014-04-25 17:56 Mao: 02:57:761 (12,13) -
2014-04-25 17:56 Mao: are these supposed to be stacked?
2014-04-25 17:56 Mao: this is pretty weird to me and confused me
2014-04-25 17:57 Mao: I was like OMG STACK IN THE STREAM WTF
2014-04-25 17:57 Mao: xD
2014-04-25 17:57 Kenterz9: Done x3
2014-04-25 17:58 Mao: was this on purpose?
2014-04-25 17:58 Kenterz9: Nope
2014-04-25 17:59 Mao: 03:08:892 (5,6) - Making these a bit curved fitting with 03:08:261 (1) - could be cool
2014-04-25 17:59 Mao: just a little suggestion here
2014-04-25 18:00 Kenterz9: Seems better =3
2014-04-25 18:01 Mao: 03:16:471 (5,6,7) - This seems a bit overmapped, I mean all the beats you've mapped are there but the music makes a little kind of stop here, I'd suggest you to do this ->http://puu.sh/8mXSz.jpg
2014-04-25 18:02 Kenterz9: Okay done
2014-04-25 18:03 Mao: 03:35:103 (2) - 1/4 at the end of sliders flows better if it follows the slider path of the previous object, I'd suggest you to put it to 259|180. Well, I don't know, it's my preference since I altap this and feel more comfortable if it follows the cursor
2014-04-25 18:04 Kenterz9: Okay
2014-04-25 18:04 Mao: 03:38:498 (6) - pssssht, 1/4 not stacked properly looks terrifying
2014-04-25 18:06 Kenterz9: Done =3
2014-04-25 18:06 Mao: 04:13:945 (1) - This is so barely noticeable, I think a normal curved slider could do it as well
2014-04-25 18:07 Kenterz9: Done
2014-04-25 18:08 Mao: fuuuck I hit the stop button xD
2014-04-25 18:09 Kenterz9: xDDDD
2014-04-25 18:09 Mao: 04:51:998 (2) - This didn't really fit to me, you can keep it if you want to sicne it's kinda nitpicky I guess but I'd shorten it to 1/2
2014-04-25 18:09 Mao: :c
2014-04-25 18:11 Kenterz9: Okay
2014-04-25 18:11 Mao: 05:13:235 (10) - The whole stream is 0,50 DS, why is the next note 0,45 away? looks a bit sloppy if you ask me
2014-04-25 18:11 Mao: no wai
2014-04-25 18:11 Mao: t
2014-04-25 18:11 Mao: it isn't
2014-04-25 18:12 Mao: but the low distance there looks weird
2014-04-25 18:12 Mao: for some reason
2014-04-25 18:12 Mao: xD
2014-04-25 18:12 Mao: is the purpose of the stream to decrease spacing?
2014-04-25 18:12 Kenterz9: No xD
2014-04-25 18:13 Mao: *cough*use convert slider to stream*cough*
2014-04-25 18:14 Kenterz9: wut
2014-04-25 18:15 Mao: there's a tool that converts slider to perfect spaced streams :c
2014-04-25 18:15 Mao: decreases the amount of work
2014-04-25 18:15 Mao: increases my lazyness
2014-04-25 18:16 Mao: if you don't know it compose -> convert slider to stream
2014-04-25 18:16 Mao: if a slider is marked :C
2014-04-25 18:16 Kenterz9: OH OKAYYY
2014-04-25 18:17 Mao: there's also create polygon circles
2014-04-25 18:17 Mao: :c
2014-04-25 18:17 Kenterz9: I didn't know this xDD
2014-04-25 18:17 Kenterz9: It's gonna be better with these tools xD
2014-04-25 18:19 Mao: 07:38:404 (9) - Maybe a NC here since the comobo is longer than your others + the emphasis is higher here
2014-04-25 18:19 Mao: :b
2014-04-25 18:19 Mao: 07:52:119 (2) -
2014-04-25 18:20 Mao: Lemme give you my scheme for perfect S-Sliders
2014-04-25 18:20 Mao: xD
2014-04-25 18:20 Mao: this one is weird
2014-04-25 18:20 Mao: lol
2014-04-25 18:20 Kenterz9: Okay done xD
2014-04-25 18:20 Kenterz9: And the NC was already here I think xD
2014-04-25 18:20 Mao: http://puu.sh/8kr9c.jpg
2014-04-25 18:21 Mao: http://puu.sh/8mZ0Q.png
2014-04-25 18:21 Kenterz9: WHAT IS THIS WEIRD SKIN ? xD
2014-04-25 18:21 Mao: what's wrong with my skin
2014-04-25 18:21 Mao: pretty normal skin
2014-04-25 18:21 Mao: one of the skins most players use
2014-04-25 18:21 Mao: xDD
2014-04-25 18:21 Mao: just my weird markings
2014-04-25 18:21 Kenterz9: xD
2014-04-25 18:22 Kenterz9: Oh okay x3
2014-04-25 18:22 Mao: the colored lines aren't part of the skin
2014-04-25 18:22 Mao: I hope you know xD
2014-04-25 18:22 Mao: I shouldn't let the map play when we write
2014-04-25 18:22 Mao: xDD
2014-04-25 18:22 Kenterz9: So you don't do it with a "red point" at the middle ?
2014-04-25 18:23 Mao: nope
2014-04-25 18:23 Mao: but you can do
2014-04-25 18:23 Mao: but please make the lines parallel
2014-04-25 18:23 Mao: and the last anchor point on the tail's centre
2014-04-25 18:23 Mao: x-x
2014-04-25 18:24 Kenterz9: Yes it was a big mistake here xD
2014-04-25 18:24 Mao: 08:05:404 (9,10) - didn't expect these, expected the triangular moevement to be continued
2014-04-25 18:25 Kenterz9: I didn't know why I made it like this, done xD
2014-04-25 18:25 Mao: 08:21:047 (5) - There's actually nothing on the 1/3 tick this ends on. It should be a 1/6 slider
2014-04-25 18:25 Mao: http://puu.sh/8mZh2.jpg
2014-04-25 18:28 Kenterz9: It's okay if I make a 1/2 slider ?
2014-04-25 18:29 Mao: 1/2?
2014-04-25 18:29 Mao: o:
2014-04-25 18:29 Mao: 1/2 wouldn't fit in the gap lol
2014-04-25 18:30 Kenterz9: http://puu.sh/8mZxT.jpg
2014-04-25 18:30 Mao: well I'm confused
2014-04-25 18:30 Mao: do what you think is roght
2014-04-25 18:30 Mao: xDDDDD
2014-04-25 18:30 Mao: *i
2014-04-25 18:30 Kenterz9: Okay xD
2014-04-25 18:31 Mao: 09:29:619 (4) - Why aren't your distances constant here? didn't you use distance snap? :C
2014-04-25 18:32 Mao: same goes for all the others here without constant spacing
2014-04-25 18:32 Mao: since this should be spaced constantly
2014-04-25 18:32 Mao: the DS is so low, so it'd look way better with consistency
2014-04-25 18:32 Kenterz9: OKay
2014-04-25 18:33 jiggly puff break *^*
2014-04-25 18:33 Kenterz9: xDD
2014-04-25 18:34 Mao: 10:29:890 - add a note here, this gap feels empty
2014-04-25 18:34 Mao: you can add one at the following blue tick as well
2014-04-25 18:36 Kenterz9: Done
2014-04-25 18:37 Mao: 11:08:490 (4) - I don't know, this feels like it wants to be a 3/4 slider
2014-04-25 18:37 Mao: basically due to the others being 3/4
2014-04-25 18:37 Mao: end this part with a 3/4 please before going to the 1/2 one
2014-04-25 18:37 Mao: in the new tact
2014-04-25 18:38 Kenterz9: Okay
2014-04-25 18:39 Mao: 11:23:290 (1) - Place at 128|148 for consitent spacing + equal triangle
2014-04-25 18:39 Kenterz9: Dooone
2014-04-25 18:42 Mao: my osu just crashed
2014-04-25 18:42 Mao:
2014-04-25 18:43 Kenterz9: xD
2014-04-25 18:43 Mao: 12:40:090 (1) - http://puu.sh/8n0k4.jpg
2014-04-25 18:43 Mao: if I try to overlay a circular slider here
2014-04-25 18:43 Mao: it doesn't really fit your shape
2014-04-25 18:44 Mao: I'd suggest you to make some adjustments to make it as circluar as possible
2014-04-25 18:45 Kenterz9: Done =P
2014-04-25 18:45 Mao: lavender town comes <3
2014-04-25 18:45 Mao: it's over
2014-04-25 18:45 Mao: :c
2014-04-25 18:45 Mao: 14:11:841 (4,5,1) - I'd suggest you to place them in a curve
2014-04-25 18:46 Mao: the stack behind the tail played a bit weird to me
2014-04-25 18:46 Mao: since I singletap and didn't remember it was 1/3
2014-04-25 18:46 Mao: xD
2014-04-25 18:46 Kenterz9: I know, what about this ? http://puu.sh/8n0to.jpg
2014-04-25 18:46 Mao: seems okay to me
2014-04-25 18:47 Kenterz9: Okay =3
2014-04-25 18:47 Mao: 14:41:396 (1) - 20%? =.=
2014-04-25 18:47 Mao: soooooo quiet
2014-04-25 18:48 Kenterz9: Okay then 40 %
2014-04-25 18:48 Mao: 15:03:578 (4) - 1/4 not stacked properly :c
2014-04-25 18:48 Mao: 15:05:978 (5) - ^
2014-04-25 18:48 Mao: 15:08:378 (5) - ^
2014-04-25 18:49 Kenterz9: Done
2014-04-25 18:49 Mao: 15:25:253 (1) - The distance from the previous is object is way smaller than the spacing of the stream, maybe adjusting it to the streams spacing could work here
2014-04-25 18:50 Kenterz9: Done
2014-04-25 18:52 Mao: 16:54:653 (3,4) - This was really bad readable due to being behind the previous sliders. Another point is that this is the same as 16:54:053 (1,2) - for me
2014-04-25 18:52 Mao: in terms of that insturment fade out at least
2014-04-25 18:52 Mao: so a 1/2 slider would fit better imo
2014-04-25 18:53 Kenterz9: Done
2014-04-25 18:54 Mao: btw why is the thx for playing in at 3/4 of the map? xDD
2014-04-25 18:54 Kenterz9: Because it's like if you think it's the end, but it's not the end, and then the 240 BPM part comes xDDD
2014-04-25 18:55 Mao: 18:30:453 (1) - bad transition due to too low distance. man it's a 240 bpm stream, keep your spacing consistent here xD
2014-04-25 18:56 Mao: 18:50:578 (1) - the histounding here felt a bit empty to me, maybe adding a whistle at the end could give it more resonance
2014-04-25 18:58 Kenterz9: Done
2014-04-25 18:59 Mao: 19:04:703 (1,2,1) - Maaaaybe it's just me but I expected them a bit faster. It was like OMG 240 fast part and then omg this is so slow x-x
2014-04-25 18:59 Mao: I know the part is slower
2014-04-25 18:59 Mao: but I expected them to be faster
2014-04-25 18:59 Mao: no need to fix
2014-04-25 18:59 Mao: xD
2014-04-25 19:00 Mao: 19:18:703 (2) - Spacing is pretty high here, makes the transition feel a bit bad to me ;w;
2014-04-25 19:00 Mao: you've used 0,8 or 0,9 for others
2014-04-25 19:00 Mao: maybe here as well
2014-04-25 19:00 Mao: ?
2014-04-25 19:01 Kenterz9: Okay
2014-04-25 19:02 Mao: 19:54:453 (1,2,3,4) - A square could be cool here! You can use "Create Polygon Circles"
2014-04-25 19:03 Kenterz9: Done
2014-04-25 19:04 Mao: 20:54:431 (1) - the song starting here has weird rhythm lol
2014-04-25 19:06 Mao: 20:55:598 (4) - Make this longer by one tick to fit the instrument -> http://puu.sh/8n1F6.jpg
2014-04-25 19:06 Mao: was weird to me, since the instrument was later than the slider's end
2014-04-25 19:06 Mao: OR
2014-04-25 19:06 Mao: you place a circle at the blue tick
2014-04-25 19:07 Mao: 20:56:431 (5) - http://puu.sh/8n1JW.jpg
2014-04-25 19:08 Mao: 20:57:098 (1) - http://puu.sh/8n1OG.jpg
2014-04-25 19:08 Mao: the rhythm here is complicated and weird to map
2014-04-25 19:08 Mao: x.x
2014-04-25 19:08 Mao: so much land on the blue tick
2014-04-25 19:08 Mao: I think the finishes are a bit to much as well
2014-04-25 19:09 Mao: whistles could be better
2014-04-25 19:09 Mao: I'd consider you to remap this part since it's so weird in terms of rhythm
2014-04-25 19:10 Kenterz9: I don't feel like it's a weird rythm o.o
2014-04-25 19:10 Mao: but if you listen to the instrument everything lands on the blue tick and the instrument is the strongest here
2014-04-25 19:10 Mao: so it felt weird in test play to have something else mapped :/
2014-04-25 19:11 Mao: well, it's your decision
2014-04-25 19:11 Mao: if you like it, keep it ^-^
2014-04-25 19:11 Mao: 22:18:764 (7,8,9,10) - I'd tend to make the spacing a bit higher here since the doubles were so fast
2014-04-25 19:11 Mao: and surprised me a bit
2014-04-25 19:12 Kenterz9: May I use sliders ?
2014-04-25 19:13 Mao: yeah, that could work as well D
2014-04-25 19:13 Mao: osu hates your map btw, always trys to crash xDD
2014-04-25 19:13 Kenterz9: I know xD
2014-04-25 19:14 Mao: 22:54:347 (1,2) - is this stack on purpose? a bit confusing especially since it starts on a blue tick and then stacked
2014-04-25 19:14 Mao: was abit weird
2014-04-25 19:15 Kenterz9: No it's also a mistake xD
2014-04-25 19:15 Mao: don't you notice while playtesting? =.=
2014-04-25 19:15 Mao: xD
2014-04-25 19:15 Kenterz9: No xDDDDD
2014-04-25 19:15 Mao: why didn't any modder told you this before
2014-04-25 19:15 Mao: xDDD
2014-04-25 19:16 Kenterz9: I dunno ._.
2014-04-25 19:16 Mao: 24:41:194 (1) - Keep the distance from the stream? :c
2014-04-25 19:18 Kenterz9: Okay
2014-04-25 19:18 Mao: rest of the map is pretty amazing
2014-04-25 19:18 Mao: there just one thing that bothers me
2014-04-25 19:19 Kenterz9: wat ?
2014-04-25 19:19 Mao: why are your 1/16 and 1/8 sliders so quiet? the basically give no feedback. I had no idea when to click the next one and slider-broke
2014-04-25 19:19 Mao: this is a thing you really need to fix in my eyes
2014-04-25 19:19 Mao: since it decreases the playabilty of these parts by a lot
2014-04-25 19:20 Mao: maybe increase the volume for them by 20% :c
2014-04-25 19:20 Mao: but especially where there are more than 1 followng each other you really need the feedback of it :/
2014-04-25 19:21 Kenterz9: Maybe but it's going to take forever because it's lagging so much when I try to change inherited points xDD
2014-04-25 19:21 Mao: well I guess that's it
2014-04-25 19:21 Mao: I hope I was able to help you \:D/
2014-04-25 19:21 Mao: gonna post now
2014-04-25 19:22 Mao: oh and one thing, the first half of your maps could take some more whistles as well
2014-04-25 19:22 Kenterz9: Okay so much thanks OwO
2014-04-25 19:22 Mao: some real whistles
2014-04-25 19:22 Mao: not custom ones
2014-04-25 19:22 Mao: you actually used them in the second half b:
2014-04-25 19:22 Mao: but really enjoyed your hitsounding and the whole flow
2014-04-25 19:22 Mao: was really nice to play
2014-04-25 19:22 Kenterz9: Okay I'll see =D
2014-04-25 19:22 Kenterz9: Thanks >w<

Awesome Mapset deserves it

Desperate-kun wrote:

Damn this is not your scheme for s-sliders stupid twin thing go away







btw star

1. 00:24:287 - Il y a une note ici! Peut-être rajoute là sur la tête de 00:24:366 (2)?
2. 01:07:629 (3) - A vrai dire la musique fait plutôt ça ici:
   
3. 01:36:366 (3) - Change ce slider en 2 notes? Ca colle plus avec le "ah ah ah ah" de la musique. Tu as une note pour chaque "ah".
4. 02:36:682 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Si on suit bien la musique le rythme adapté ne devrait pas plutôt être:
   
5. 04:31:550 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Rythmiquement, 04:31:550 (1,2,3,4,5,6) et 04:32:892 (1,2,3,4,5) sont les mêmes mais bizarrement les rythmes que tu as utilisés sont différents. 04:33:208 (3,4) sont plus court que 04:31:945 (3,4) de 1/4 et 04:32:577 (5,6) est devenu un simple 1/2 beat long slider. Je pense que tu aurais du utiliser un rythme similaire à 04:31:550 (1,2,3,4,5,6) pour 04:32:892 (1,2,3,4,5).
6. 10:44:490 - Il y a une note ici, en plein sur le white tic! C'est pas vraiment le genre de note qu'il faut ignorer.

1. 00:13:945 (1,2) - Ce jump est beaucoup trop abusé. C'est normal de faire augmenter en difficulté tes jumps ici mais celui est beaucoup trop difficile comparé aux autres. En plus le fait que la musique devient de plus en plus intense rend incohérent le fait que le jump suivant 00:14:577 (3,5) est plus simple (si, si, même avec le 1/4 ce jump est quand même plus simple).
   Comme alternative je te propose ça:
   
   SPOILER

   
   1 est stacké sur 3 et 2 est stacké sur 4/5. Je trouve que ça va bien avec les stacks de 00:12:682 (1,2,3,4).
2. 00:30:682 (2,4) - Mauvais stack!
3. 00:31:471 (4,1,4) - Allons, dans les 2 cas tu as deux beats puissants les uns a la suite des autres et tu les mets dans des sliders? La musique crie JUMP ici! Change ses sliders en 2 notes avec un bon jump entre les notes! Ou à la limite garde le slider mais met un jump entre ce slider et l'objet qui le précède. On dirait que tu as ignoré ces powerful beats dans cette partie de la map. a partir de 01:00:682 tu le fait bien mieux dans cette partie-là.
4. 00:33:682 (3,1) - Cette blanket est très mal faite... C'est aussi la seule que je mentionnerait (même si j'en voie d'autres genre 05:42:682 (2,3)) car c'est la seule que j'ai remarquée en jouant.
5. 03:29:735 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Beaucoup de problème avec cette section. Tout d'abord, les 1/4 dans la musique commencent à 03:30:050 (3) donc ton stream devrait commencer là. De plus dans ton stream tu utilises des slider 1/4 a une distance x1 ce que tu ne fais NULLE PART AILLEURS DANS TA MAP DE 20 MINUTES. Tu as toujours des jumps entre les sliders 1/4. Attention je n'ai rien contre varier les patterns mais utiliser une fois ce pattern particulier alors que tu l'utilise nulle part ailleurs c'est confus, et je l'ai remarqué lors de mon play! Ca m'a beaucoup surpris sur le coup voilà pourquoi j'insiste. Enfin bon, les 2 trucs combiné je conseil un léger remap ici.
6. 04:03:998 (1,2,3,4) - Pourquoi décaler 1 et 3 mais pas 2 et 4? Soit tu décales personne, soit tu décalle 3 et 4 de la même façon mais si t'en décale qu'un et pas l'autre ca fait vraiment bizarre. Ca m'a vraiment perturbé et fait break mon combo d'ailleurs.
7. 07:50:297 (1,2,3,4,5) - C'est pas une bonne idée. Je sais que des mappeurs le font mais le genre de mappeurs qui font ça ben... Toute la map est comme ça! Toi, ta map a un certain style et voir ce pattern dedans, non seulement il n'a pas vraiment l'air à sa place mais en plus il sera assez confus. La encore ce pattern n'est utilisé qu'une seule fois durant tout le marathon! Il n'a pas vraiment ça place ici. Mais bon, voilà une alternative avec un pattern similaire mais beaucoup plus simple à anticiper et à jouer:
   
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8. 09:43:547 - MUST... RESIST... SLEPPzzzzzzz
9. 10:40:090 (1,2,3) - Evite ce genre de pattern tant qu'on est dans la partie calme de la chanson.
10. 10:43:490 (2,3,4,5) - NOPE!!!!!!! Tiens et je vais rajouter des points d'exclamation bonus!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Tu ne fais pas jouer des 1/8 comme ça au joueurs! Retire les notes a la fin et ajoute un reverse aux 2 sliders mais ne fait pas ça. Tu te rend compte que pour jouer ça il faut reacher la touche que l'on a enfoncée sur le slider puis appuyer sur la touche pour la note avec 1/8 de battement de marge!!!!! C'est de la folie même a 150 BPM! En plus en faisant ça 10:43:890 (4,5,6,7,8,9) deviendra moins confus comme pattern.
11. 10:46:090 (5,1) - Limite... Je serais plus tenter d'enlever un reverse pour éviter la transition 1/8 plutôt méchante mais vu que la c'est sur la tête d'un slider c'est moins grave. (Oh, et l'argument du "je veux suivre le rythme a la perfection n'est pas bon, car quand tu joues c'est littéralement impossible de différencier si un slider 1/8 a un reverse de plus ou de moins qu'un autre.)
12. 11:14:190 (2,4) - T'aurais pu stack quand même! Et si t'as des problèmes de décalage à cause de ça diminue ton stack leninancy.
13. 13:03:690 (7,1) - NON!!!!!!!! Dans ce cas la retire simplement un reverse de 7. Et si tu as des doutes fait tester la partie de ta map avec des 1/8 à divers personnes et demandent leurs ceux qu'ils en pensent. Je t'assure que c'est pas agréable!
14. 16:05:753 (4,1) - ^ et 16:10:553 (4,1) et 16:12:953 (7,1) et 17:49:953 (5,1) et 25:13:694 (3,4) et 25:34:194 (3,1) et 26:03:194 (3,4)
15. 16:25:253 (1,2,3,4,1) - OUI, VOILA, COMME CA, EXACTEMENT!!!!!
16. 17:22:253 (4,5) - overlap caca
17. 18:00:00 -
    
    SPOILER

    
    Euh... mais la map est loin d'être finie! Et si c'est un piège ça sert a rien. Il y a un timer qui indique combien de temps il reste dans la map en haut à droite donc les gens voient tout de suite que la map est pas finie?
18. 20:30:00 - A vrai dire ca aurait été un parfait endroit pour la finir le marathon. La "vraie fin" est beaucoup moins intense. Enfin bon, je dis pas de delete ce qu'il y a après, c'était juste une remarque.
19. 20:54:431 (1) - Pourquoi kiai time? Le kiai time est censé rendre la partie epic de la chanson encore plus epic. Mais là... Il y a rien a rendre epic. Au contraire, on veux se détendre après les 1/8 a 250 BPM on veux pas les notes flashy du kiai!
20. 20:55:098 (3,4) - Les overlaps en dessous c'est moche! Surtout que t'as juste a rotate 4 légèrement et c'est fix.
21. 21:03:098 (3,4) - Bon ok, j'ai pas réussi a me retenir de pas la pointer cette blanket.
22. 25:44:861 (10,1) - /me ASSASSINE TOUTES TA FAMILLE
23. 26:03:861 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - C'est beau mais c'est pute! J'admire le raisonnement du "je vais mettre HP5 pour que les moins bons ne failent pas ma map.... enfin jusqu'au stream final après 25 minutes de jeu HIHIHIHI". Enfin bon je te conseille de mettre des NC au milieu des 2 streams (26:04:444 (8) et 26:06:027 (8))

1. 14:10:507 (4) - Peut-être qu'il vaux mieux avoir le NC au moment de l’accélération?

1. 13:31:290 (3) - whistle a la fin.... Fallait bien que je comble cette section d'une façon ou d'une autre.

rezoons wrote:

Bon, j'ai besoin de kudo! Du coup j'ai décider d'utiliser la façon la plus compliquée que je conaisse pour en chopper un: modder un marathon de 24 minutes! Fuck Yeah! Mais bon, entre temps drafura m'a shoot une star donc j'ai plus besoin du kudo maintenant mais bon je t'avais dit que je modderais alors ben j'ai quand même tenu ma promesse. Par contre entre temps je suis tombé malade. La je suis sous medoc et ça va mieux. Alors commençons le mod.

(P.S. attention je me comporte bizarrement sur la fin du mod. C'est juste les medocs qui perdent leurs effets, le fait que j'ai pas dormit depuis 27h et le fait que j'ai pris du vin ce matin, le tout combiné.)

Mais avant a mon impression de ta map: On dirait un mélange du kenterz que j'ai moddé la dernière fois et de chinese mapping. Le résultat est plutôt original et c'est plutôt une bonne chose. L’intérêt des marathons c'est l'originalité avant tout et je pense que ta map mérite clairement d'être approved. Sachant que je considère que les 3/4 des marathons qui ont été approved récemment ne le méritent pas ca veux dire quelque chose!
Enusite ta map a quand même encore besoin de quelques mods mais lorsqu'elle aura été bien polished ca sera de la bombe!

[General]
Tout d'abord, si ça t’intéresse j'ai le replay de ma partie ou j'ai testée ta map. Vu que je suppose que t'as pas du avoir une tonne de testplay complet ça peux peut-être t’intéresser.
Voila le replay: http://puu.sh/8ts0P.osr fait sur la dernière version de ta map qui était celle-là: http://puu.sh/8ts1Y.txt (c'est pour au cas où tu es fait des changements entre temps)

Tu sais que pour les approval tu n'es pas obligé d'apeller ta diff marathon? Je dis pas que "marathon" c'est pourri mais je te de dit d'y réfléchir au cas où tu aurais idée d'un nom cool!

Pourquoi HP5 avec OD8? Ca va pas ensemble! Je comprend de mettre un faible HP pour éviter les fails à la 18eme minutes à cause de quelques miss mais le fait que tu choisisse OD8 ça fait bizarre. Parce que tu demandes quand même un certain niveau de précision et tu augmentes la difficulté des streams. Sachant que tu as une map pleine de stream c'est assez contradictoire avec le faible HP. En gros je te conseille de prendre HP5 OD7 ou HP6 OD8 (je trouve que c'est lui qui colle le mieux au marathon) mais je trouve que HP5 OD8 c'est vraiment bizarre.

C'est quoi ces tags? Regarde les autres marathons qui sont des compilations de chansons! Ils ont beaucoup plus de tags! Bon je ne dit pas d'ajouter TOUT les titres des chansons mais au moins les trucs les plus connus pour que les gens aient le plus de chance de tomber sur ta map. Aussi ajouter red green blue gold silver cristal puisque c'est de ces jeux que sont extraites les musiques remixées.

J'ai trouvé le timing légèrement off a différents endroits. Genre 08:33:261 (1) . En ralentissant on entend bien que les notes sont bien trop tôt par rapport au beat. Le BPM a l'air d'être bon dans l’ensemble de la map mais je te conseille vivement de faire check tout les offsets. Ça m'ettonnerait qu'ils soient tous correct.

[Poké-Marathon]
Rhythm

1. 00:24:287 - Il y a une note ici! Peut-être rajoute là sur la tête de 00:24:366 (2)?
2. 01:07:629 (3) - A vrai dire la musique fait plutôt ça ici:
   
3. 01:36:366 (3) - Change ce slider en 2 notes? Ca colle plus avec le "ah ah ah ah" de la musique. Tu as une note pour chaque "ah".
4. 02:36:682 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Si on suit bien la musique le rythme adapté ne devrait pas plutôt être:
   
5. 04:31:550 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Rythmiquement, 04:31:550 (1,2,3,4,5,6) et 04:32:892 (1,2,3,4,5) sont les mêmes mais bizarrement les rythmes que tu as utilisés sont différents. 04:33:208 (3,4) sont plus court que 04:31:945 (3,4) de 1/4 et 04:32:577 (5,6) est devenu un simple 1/2 beat long slider. Je pense que tu aurais du utiliser un rythme similaire à 04:31:550 (1,2,3,4,5,6) pour 04:32:892 (1,2,3,4,5).
6. 10:44:490 - Il y a une note ici, en plein sur le white tic! C'est pas vraiment le genre de note qu'il faut ignorer.

Placement/Aesthetic

1. 00:13:945 (1,2) - Ce jump est beaucoup trop abusé. C'est normal de faire augmenter en difficulté tes jumps ici mais celui est beaucoup trop difficile comparé aux autres. En plus le fait que la musique devient de plus en plus intense rend incohérent le fait que le jump suivant 00:14:577 (3,5) est plus simple (si, si, même avec le 1/4 ce jump est quand même plus simple).
   Comme alternative je te propose ça:
   
   SPOILER

   
   1 est stacké sur 3 et 2 est stacké sur 4/5. Je trouve que ça va bien avec les stacks de 00:12:682 (1,2,3,4).
2. 00:30:682 (2,4) - Mauvais stack!
3. 00:31:471 (4,1,4) - Allons, dans les 2 cas tu as deux beats puissants les uns a la suite des autres et tu les mets dans des sliders? La musique crie JUMP ici! Change ses sliders en 2 notes avec un bon jump entre les notes! Ou à la limite garde le slider mais met un jump entre ce slider et l'objet qui le précède. On dirait que tu as ignoré ces powerful beats dans cette partie de la map. a partir de 01:00:682 tu le fait bien mieux dans cette partie-là.
4. 00:33:682 (3,1) - Cette blanket est très mal faite... C'est aussi la seule que je mentionnerait (même si j'en voie d'autres genre 05:42:682 (2,3)) car c'est la seule que j'ai remarquée en jouant.
5. 03:29:735 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Beaucoup de problème avec cette section. Tout d'abord, les 1/4 dans la musique commencent à 03:30:050 (3) donc ton stream devrait commencer là. De plus dans ton stream tu utilises des slider 1/4 a une distance x1 ce que tu ne fais NULLE PART AILLEURS DANS TA MAP DE 20 MINUTES. Tu as toujours des jumps entre les sliders 1/4. Attention je n'ai rien contre varier les patterns mais utiliser une fois ce pattern particulier alors que tu l'utilise nulle part ailleurs c'est confus, et je l'ai remarqué lors de mon play! Ca m'a beaucoup surpris sur le coup voilà pourquoi j'insiste. Enfin bon, les 2 trucs combiné je conseil un léger remap ici.
6. 04:03:998 (1,2,3,4) - Pourquoi décaler 1 et 3 mais pas 2 et 4? Soit tu décales personne, soit tu décalle 3 et 4 de la même façon mais si t'en décale qu'un et pas l'autre ca fait vraiment bizarre. Ca m'a vraiment perturbé et fait break mon combo d'ailleurs.
7. 07:50:297 (1,2,3,4,5) - C'est pas une bonne idée. Je sais que des mappeurs le font mais le genre de mappeurs qui font ça ben... Toute la map est comme ça! Toi, ta map a un certain style et voir ce pattern dedans, non seulement il n'a pas vraiment l'air à sa place mais en plus il sera assez confus. La encore ce pattern n'est utilisé qu'une seule fois durant tout le marathon! Il n'a pas vraiment ça place ici. Mais bon, voilà une alternative avec un pattern similaire mais beaucoup plus simple à anticiper et à jouer:
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 09:43:547 - MUST... RESIST... SLEPPzzzzzzz
9. 10:40:090 (1,2,3) - Evite ce genre de pattern tant qu'on est dans la partie calme de la chanson.
10. 10:43:490 (2,3,4,5) - NOPE!!!!!!! Tiens et je vais rajouter des points d'exclamation bonus!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Tu ne fais pas jouer des 1/8 comme ça au joueurs! Retire les notes a la fin et ajoute un reverse aux 2 sliders mais ne fait pas ça. Tu te rend compte que pour jouer ça il faut reacher la touche que l'on a enfoncée sur le slider puis appuyer sur la touche pour la note avec 1/8 de battement de marge!!!!! C'est de la folie même a 150 BPM! En plus en faisant ça 10:43:890 (4,5,6,7,8,9) deviendra moins confus comme pattern.
11. 10:46:090 (5,1) - Limite... Je serais plus tenter d'enlever un reverse pour éviter la transition 1/8 plutôt méchante mais vu que la c'est sur la tête d'un slider c'est moins grave. (Oh, et l'argument du "je veux suivre le rythme a la perfection n'est pas bon, car quand tu joues c'est littéralement impossible de différencier si un slider 1/8 a un reverse de plus ou de moins qu'un autre.)
12. 11:14:190 (2,4) - T'aurais pu stack quand même! Et si t'as des problèmes de décalage à cause de ça diminue ton stack leninancy.
13. 13:03:690 (7,1) - NON!!!!!!!! Dans ce cas la retire simplement un reverse de 7. Et si tu as des doutes fait tester la partie de ta map avec des 1/8 à divers personnes et demandent leurs ceux qu'ils en pensent. Je t'assure que c'est pas agréable!
14. 16:05:753 (4,1) - ^ et 16:10:553 (4,1) et 16:12:953 (7,1) et 17:49:953 (5,1) et 25:13:694 (3,4) et 25:34:194 (3,1) et 26:03:194 (3,4)
15. 16:25:253 (1,2,3,4,1) - OUI, VOILA, COMME CA, EXACTEMENT!!!!!
16. 17:22:253 (4,5) - overlap caca
17. 18:00:00 -
    
    SPOILER

    
    Euh... mais la map est loin d'être finie! Et si c'est un piège ça sert a rien. Il y a un timer qui indique combien de temps il reste dans la map en haut à droite donc les gens voient tout de suite que la map est pas finie?
18. 20:30:00 - A vrai dire ca aurait été un parfait endroit pour la finir le marathon. La "vraie fin" est beaucoup moins intense. Enfin bon, je dis pas de delete ce qu'il y a après, c'était juste une remarque.
19. 20:54:431 (1) - Pourquoi kiai time? Le kiai time est censé rendre la partie epic de la chanson encore plus epic. Mais là... Il y a rien a rendre epic. Au contraire, on veux se détendre après les 1/8 a 250 BPM on veux pas les notes flashy du kiai!
20. 20:55:098 (3,4) - Les overlaps en dessous c'est moche! Surtout que t'as juste a rotate 4 légèrement et c'est fix.
21. 21:03:098 (3,4) - Bon ok, j'ai pas réussi a me retenir de pas la pointer cette blanket.
22. 25:44:861 (10,1) - /me ASSASSINE TOUTES TA FAMILLE
23. 26:03:861 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - C'est beau mais c'est pute! J'admire le raisonnement du "je vais mettre HP5 pour que les moins bons ne failent pas ma map.... enfin jusqu'au stream final après 25 minutes de jeu HIHIHIHI". Enfin bon je te conseille de mettre des NC au milieu des 2 streams (26:04:444 (8) et 26:06:027 (8))

NC

1. 14:10:507 (4) - Peut-être qu'il vaux mieux avoir le NC au moment de l’accélération?

Hitsound

1. 13:31:290 (3) - whistle a la fin.... Fallait bien que je comble cette section d'une façon ou d'une autre.

Bon, si j'avais des étoiles je t'en aurais filé... Mais bon, j'en ai pas. C'est même pour ça que j'ai mod mais dans le coeur je te soutien a fond pour ce marathon, c'est vraiment un excellent boulot!

rezoons wrote:

Par contre entre temps je suis tombé malade. La je suis sous medoc et ça va mieux. Alors commençons le mod...

... Mais avant a mon impression de ta map: On dirait un mélange du kenterz que j'ai moddé la dernière fois et de chinese mapping

Tu te rend compte que pour jouer ça il faut reacher la touche que l'on a enfoncée sur le slider puis appuyer sur la touche pour la note avec 1/8 de battement de marge!!!!!

26:03:861 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - C'est beau mais c'est pute! J'admire le raisonnement du "je vais mettre HP5 pour que les moins bons ne failent pas ma map.... enfin jusqu'au stream final après 25 minutes de jeu HIHIHIHI".

72,184,1563861,5,4,0:0:0:0:
48,232,1563944,1,0,0:0:0:0:
44,284,1564027,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,328,1564111,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,344,1564194,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,336,1564277,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,292,1564361,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,240,1564444,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,1564527,1,4,0:0:0:0:
260,176,1564611,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,184,1564694,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,228,1564777,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,276,1564861,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,308,1564944,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,316,1565027,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,292,1565111,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,240,1565194,6,0,B|200:200|188:164|188:164|144:184,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,188,1565527,1,8,0:0:0:0:
52,176,1565611,1,0,0:0:0:0:
28,136,1565694,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,84,1565777,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,52,1565861,1,4,0:0:0:0:
128,56,1565944,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,92,1566027,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,112,1566111,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,108,1566194,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,80,1566277,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,32,1566361,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,8,1566444,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,24,1566527,5,4,0:0:0:0:

Cherry Blossom wrote:

rezoons wrote:

Par contre entre temps je suis tombé malade. La je suis sous medoc et ça va mieux. Alors commençons le mod...

... Mais avant a mon impression de ta map: On dirait un mélange du kenterz que j'ai moddé la dernière fois et de chinese mapping

T'es sûr que t'as pas choppé une allergie contre le chinese mapping ?
/me runs

rezoons wrote:

Ah la la, j'ai dormi 15 heures cette nuit et je suis guéri maintenant. Je viens de relire mon mod et OUAH! Faut vraiment que j’arrête de mod des marathons après avoir fait une nuit blanche et en étant sous médoc... A la fin on dirait vraiment que mon cerveau implose.

Tu te rend compte que pour jouer ça il faut reacher la touche que l'on a enfoncée sur le slider puis appuyer sur la touche pour la note avec 1/8 de battement de marge!!!!!

Cette phrase ne veux rien dire! Je sais même pas comment j'ai fait pour écrire ça et ne pas le remarquer quand je me suis relu! Enfin bon, tu as du comprendre l'idée ^^'

Autre chose:

26:03:861 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - C'est beau mais c'est pute! J'admire le raisonnement du "je vais mettre HP5 pour que les moins bons ne failent pas ma map.... enfin jusqu'au stream final après 25 minutes de jeu HIHIHIHI".

Ce que je voulais dire, c'est que l'idée d'un stream pareil ne va pas avec l'lidée de l'HP5! Mais si tu met HP6 tu n'as pas de raison de changer le stream! Surtout qu'il était plus beau avant.
Enfin bon, voilà le code de ton précédant stream final:

SPOILER

72,184,1563861,5,4,0:0:0:0:
48,232,1563944,1,0,0:0:0:0:
44,284,1564027,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,328,1564111,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,344,1564194,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,336,1564277,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,292,1564361,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,240,1564444,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,1564527,1,4,0:0:0:0:
260,176,1564611,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,184,1564694,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,228,1564777,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,276,1564861,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,308,1564944,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,316,1565027,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,292,1565111,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,240,1565194,6,0,B|200:200|188:164|188:164|144:184,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,188,1565527,1,8,0:0:0:0:
52,176,1565611,1,0,0:0:0:0:
28,136,1565694,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,84,1565777,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,52,1565861,1,4,0:0:0:0:
128,56,1565944,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,92,1566027,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,112,1566111,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,108,1566194,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,80,1566277,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,32,1566361,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,8,1566444,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,24,1566527,5,4,0:0:0:0:

et si tu le reprend n'oublie pas de remettre des NC sur 26:04:444 (8) et 26:06:027 (8).

au cas où tu veuilles le reprendre. Et pour la difficulté ne t'en fait pas. Dis toi que Blue Dragon a fait un marathon de 17 minutes http://osu.ppy.sh/b/112922 et il a mappé les 20 dernières secondes 10000000x plus dur que le reste de la map. Ce qui est très RAGEANT! mais comparé à ça, ton stream de fin plus espacé c'est rien. Au contraire c'est une bonne façon de finir la map avec un pattern légèrement plus dur (et pas débilement plus dur comme dans le cas de BD) que les gens ont peu de chance de fail s'ils ont survécu au reste du marathon avec HP6.

En tout cas vu que le kudo en fait il me sert plus à rien vu que draf m'a filé une étoile pour comblé le SP qu'il me manquait ben autant te le donner tu le mérite. Grace à toi j'ai un magnifique marathon de chanson pokemon de difficulté pile poil adapté à mon niveau. Un mod et une étoile c'est le minimum que je puisse faire pour te remercier. (Pokemon rouge est même le tout premier jeux vidéo que j'ai joué de ma vie, alors autant dire que de réécouter toutes ces chansons ça a un super effet nostalgique ^^)

HeatKai wrote:

somewhere around 6000x combo and 7687x (exactly before the break) and 9270x too! , auto gets a 100. It's on 1/6 or 1/8 part i forgot, but yeah check it :3 probably stacked between sliders repeat.

I salute your patience to map this! good luck on the map!

SPOILER

Irreversible wrote:

Well I know I should mod this but my osu keeps crashing while modding it .. i really don't know why, I think it's the size >.< . . I'm sorry for it orz

Takuneru wrote:

This map is seriously awesome ! You must have spent a lot of time on this. Only 2 weeks xD
Good luck Kenterz. Such quality must be approved soon
I shared it to some friends, they loved it as well :3
I could mod, but I don't really know how to, and while playing it I didn't see anything that particularly bothered me.

neonat wrote:

pew pew

Athrun_Yamato wrote:

This needs to be ranked.

Kethsar wrote:

This was the last thing I expected to see when looking for this song. I really hope you manage to get this approved. I can't wait to try the map.

Kenterz wrote:

Athrun_Yamato wrote:

This needs to be ranked.

Kethsar wrote:

This was the last thing I expected to see when looking for this song. I really hope you manage to get this approved. I can't wait to try the map.

BATs are busy, and when I try to ask someone, they don't want to mod it :c

Lemme take 1 year like Kusaregedou to Chocolate (」・ω・)」

Athrun_Yamato wrote:

The next thing i want to say is...
Is it actually possible to play the whole song...

Eyes will be broken T_T

Kenterz wrote:

Athrun_Yamato wrote:

The next thing i want to say is...
Is it actually possible to play the whole song...

Eyes will be broken T_T

Yes it's possible xD I made it 3 times and Mao and rezoons too (also tellertheworld's friend)

Kethsar wrote:

Okay! So I managed to get a copy of the album in FLAC. I would like for you to replace the audio file you ripped from Youtube with this one converted from FLAC, please.

Download

CrazyrabbitKGE wrote:

01:09:524 (1,2) - not using red points actually look better imo. It's not the goal of this slider to be like this, so not fixed x.x
01:18:366 (1) - remove the second point at least. Okay, I see, it looks better :3
01:24:840 (2) - what about placing 2 closer to 1? (making a nice diamond shape for the sake of aesthetics) I want to keep the jump, sorry =/
01:39:366 (4) - move 4 a bit down (spacing) Okay
01:53:103 (3) - x:340 y:156 Same as above... I don't very like "diamond shapes" =/
01:53:261 (4) - x:260 y:204
01:53:419 (5) - x:336 y:64
01:53:577 (6) - x:256 y:112
01:53:735 (1) - x:252 y:24
01:55:629 (5,6,7) - place them somewhere else (don't look nice)
02:07:945 (3) - x:460 y:248 I want to follow the curve of (2), so not fixed
02:09:366 (2,3,4,5,6) - bad positioning (consider changing them)
02:15:524 (3) - move it one or two grids down Fixed
02:16:471 (1) - 2 grids left? Fixed
02:32:261 (4) - 2 grids up Fixed
02:47:261 (3) - isn't it too high? Yep, Fixed
03:01:471 (6) - x:188 y:160 Fixed
03:01:629 (7) - x:132 y:348? Nope =/
03:01:787 (1) - 2 grids up only 1
03:05:419 (7) - too high? (stands out weirdly) I wanted the distance between 03:04:629 (3,5,7) to be equal
03:06:682 (7) - x:48 y:24. maybe you will need to rotate the slider as well, though. Nope, sorry
03:32:103 (6) - random spacing considering 03:31:629 (3,4,5) ? Nope, I made a pattern with 2 lines (03:31:629 (3,4) and 03:31:945 (5,6))

sorry it's... a bit to long for me *dies*

CDFA wrote:

im fucking baked as shit hahahhahahahhaa

Marathon:
00:32:735 (7) - It'd make more sense to have this spaced out as 2-5 is below, so it looks like a pretty pattern rather than just random.
01:20:892 (1) - Pretty easy to avoid this overlap, and it'd be cool if you did
02:39:524 (3) - I know it's gonna fuck up all of the patterns and shit but this would look nicer with (1) and (2) as a triangle.
03:09:524 (1) - eeee use a red point for this slider
03:33:840 (3) - Add clap on beginning of slider
04:01:314 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - aaAAAAAAAa my clusterphobia is attacking. It's a nice pattern and I love how you don't overdo it, but the biggest issue is that it's so centered on just a small portion of the playfield. Even a simple CTRL+H on one of the patterns would help a LOT.
05:09:524 (1,2,3,4) - so like what is this supposed to be Like a random jump... I tried something better ^^
06:07:156 (4) - I know this goes with the music and that's cool and all but in terms of flow this just stops it completely.
07:14:940 (2) - slight overlap issue oh no
07:25:440 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - CLOSING IN AAaAaAA But it looks nice when played
07:42:797 (4) - WOAH SLOW DOWN THERE PARTNER I've been ok with a lot of big jumps in the map but this one caught me super off guard
08:55:119 (6) - so close aaa
10:41:690 (1) - rip in peace pattern you almost existed with (4)
10:55:690 (4) - ^
12:09:690 - Why is this section so empty? The beat doesn't really drop or anything and im still wanting to have the momentum that is built up in the rest of the map.
16:17:153 (2) - pattern bby
17:04:853 (3) - This curve is so slight that it looks like a mistake rather than an actual red pointed slider
17:27:653 (1) - Maybe just don't have a spinner here? It seems kind of weird to have seeing as it ends on a random part that doesn't have a strong beat (Granted, the people who made the medley also make a shit transition, but eh) But it ends when the music start to be repeated (about the pattern)... I'm sorry but I'll keep it
18:30:453 - LIKE I KNOW LIKE woohoo yay it's super fun and loud and stuff but the hitnormals are sort of droning on because they're too loud. Either turn down the volume on them, or try finding an alternative to a hitnormal for that section. I want to keep the histounds because this part is epic =/
20:27:453 (1) - Add a whistle ayy
20:51:764 - For some reason I feel like the offset is a little ahead here. Don't change it, but it might be worth getting someone to double check (even in a playtest or something)
22:47:097 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2) - Clusterphooooo
24:51:861 - where's the notes aaa its ok you can come out its ok
25:12:861 (4) - patterns how i miss you

LMAO NIGGAS MAKE A 26 MIN LONG MEDLEY AND THEN END IT BY FADING OUT LMAOOO

this is actually a really good map

1. Weedscreen support please ! <3 and go fix SB images if you do

1. 00:33:622 (3,1) - Ce blanket peut être encore meilleur.
2. 00:52:096 (2,3) - J'irai curv un de ces deux sliders pour améliorer le flow !
3. 01:47:359 (1,2) - Symétrie please. T'as un slider droit et un slider un peu rotated !
4. 01:53:517 (6,1) - Blanket my dear !
   click

   
5. 01:58:727 (1,2) - Go me blanket ça !
6. 02:14:359 (3,4) - Pareil !
7. 02:17:517 (1,2) - Pareil x)
8. 02:30:622 (3,6) - Fix le bad overlap ici ?
9. 02:34:096 (1,2) - Le flow est bizarre ici. La transition est un peu floue selon moi.
10. 04:20:201 (1) - La forme de ce slider peutt être améliorée !
11. 05:00:938 (2) - Ca fait un peu Miss You ce slider xD
12. 05:20:832 (7) - Un petit NC ici serait cool . Le player va pouvoir souffler un peu xD
13. 05:51:148 (1) - Fais juste un slider droit ?
14. 06:07:727 (1) - Go me blanket ça Si tu le fais pas, move le de quelques grids car le flow est bizarre.
15. 06:30:148 (1) - Un ptit Ctrl+G pour pimenter la difficulté ?
16. 06:35:990 (4) - Réduis la courbe
17. 06:41:398 (6,7,1) - A bit ugly imo ;w;
18. 07:04:059 (1) - Change la shape du slider !
19. 08:01:059 (6) - Garde le même spacing avec les notes du petit stream !
20. 09:00:094 (4) - Rallonge le et delete le cercle après !
21. 09:01:809 (5) - Curv le comme le (4) ?
22. 10:22:430 (1,2,3,4) - Espace les un peu ! Ca fait gangbang de slider
23. 10:59:630 (2,4) - Stack moi ça
24. J'continue après ! NEED A BREAK

Secretpipe wrote:

AAAH

Mon café est prêt , mes anti dépress aussi.
Qu'est ce qui manque ? Ah oui , des vitamines !

heeeeeeere we goooooo~

[26 MINUTES MARATHON LMAO]

1. Weedscreen support please ! <3 and go fix SB images if you do

Nope sorry, ça fait des trucs trop moche après :c

1. 00:33:622 (3,1) - Ce blanket peut être encore meilleur. Yep
2. 00:52:096 (2,3) - J'irai curv un de ces deux sliders pour améliorer le flow ! Okey
3. 01:47:359 (1,2) - Symétrie please. T'as un slider droit et un slider un peu rotated ! Fixed
4. 01:53:517 (6,1) - Blanket my dear ! Merci pour la photo mais je sais ce que c'est un blanket xDDDD
   
   click

   
5. 01:58:727 (1,2) - Go me blanket ça ! k
6. 02:14:359 (3,4) - Pareil ! k
7. 02:17:517 (1,2) - Pareil x) Nan là je veux pas blanket... Bon j'ai changé le pattern xD
8. 02:30:622 (3,6) - Fix le bad overlap ici ? ça ce voit pas en play xD Bon ok Fixed
9. 02:34:096 (1,2) - Le flow est bizarre ici. La transition est un peu floue selon moi. Moi j'aime bien D:
10. 04:20:201 (1) - La forme de ce slider peutt être améliorée ! Oui bon je l'ai fait à l'arrache le truc xD Fixed
11. 05:00:938 (2) - Ca fait un peu Miss You ce slider xD Ah ?
12. 05:20:832 (7) - Un petit NC ici serait cool . Le player va pouvoir souffler un peu xD FUUUCK CA VA CHANGER TOUT MES BEAU NC ._. Ah nan en fait c'est bon xD
13. 05:51:148 (1) - Fais juste un slider droit ? Why not
14. 06:07:727 (1) - Go me blanket ça Si tu le fais pas, move le de quelques grids car le flow est bizarre. Okay
15. 06:30:148 (1) - Un ptit Ctrl+G pour pimenter la difficulté ? Yep
16. 06:35:990 (4) - Réduis la courbe Fixed
17. 06:41:398 (6,7,1) - A bit ugly imo ;w; imo it seems fine =/
18. 07:04:059 (1) - Change la shape du slider ! Okay
19. 08:01:059 (6) - Garde le même spacing avec les notes du petit stream ! Fixé
20. 09:00:094 (4) - Rallonge le et delete le cercle après ! Nan ici le rythme correspond =/
21. 09:01:809 (5) - Curv le comme le (4) ? Done
22. 10:22:430 (1,2,3,4) - Espace les un peu ! Ca fait gangbang de slider J'ai essayé de follow la musique, on a 4 fois le même pattern, donc j'ai voulu que le joueur bouge pas trop le curseur et mettre 4 fois les même sliders proches
23. 10:59:630 (2,4) - Stack moi ça Nan j'aime pas ça <3
24. J'continue après ! NEED A BREAK

1. 14:00:336 (2) - Ctrl+g moi ça
2. 14:05:336 (7) - Tu peux le blanket ?
3. 14:47:781 (5,6) - Swap them ! En gros met le 5 a la place du 6 et vice versa. Ca rend beaucoup mieux franchement
4. 14:55:336 (3) - Améliore le shape ou espace les points parce que c'est trop sérré xD
5. 15:13:493 (2,3) - Blanket !
6. 16:33:293 (5,1) - Un peu bizarre comme pattern mais je suppose que c'est rankable
7. 17:08:393 (1) - Ctrl+g imo
8. 18:37:393 (1,2,3) - Le flow est bizarre ici. Réarrange tes notes ?
9. 20:06:393 (1,2,3) - Je sais pas si c'est une bonne idée de stack 3 sliders comme ça xD
10. 20:06:393 (1,2,3) - wtf meloetta , c'est pas que pour rubis et saphir ? XD
11. 21:40:704 (5) - Ctrl+J t Ctrl+H ?
12. 22:21:371 (2,3,4,5) - Garde le même spacing. N'éloigne pas le (5)
13. 24:02:468 (1) - Remove NC
14. 24:26:967 (4,5,6,7) - Espace les un peu ces notes !

1. Rien d'autre a dire ! Très bon mapset ! Un très grand bravo !

Secretpipe wrote:

Bon, je continue xD

1. 14:00:336 (2) - Ctrl+g moi ça Mouais je pensais faire une répétition du mouvement 3 fois.. En plus ça colle avec le spacing, donc je vois pas de raison de changer x3
2. 14:05:336 (7) - Tu peux le blanket ? Mais le slider il a pas du tout une gueule à blanket xD Bon j'ai changé le slider de place parce que c'est vrai, il respecte pas le "flow" :3
3. 14:47:781 (5,6) - Swap them ! En gros met le 5 a la place du 6 et vice versa. Ca rend beaucoup mieux franchement Ah oué pour la transition épique c'est parfait. Je sais pas où t'as ces idées, mais elles sont franchements bonnes xD
4. 14:55:336 (3) - Améliore le shape ou espace les points parce que c'est trop sérré xD Okay si tu veux, apparament t'aime pas trop ce slider xD
5. 15:13:493 (2,3) - Blanket ! YEAH
6. 16:33:293 (5,1) - Un peu bizarre comme pattern mais je suppose que c'est rankable J'ai stack le (2) avec la tête de (5) (oui c'est moche en français) donc je pense que c'est moins le bordel. Après si c'est pas trop rankable, un BAT le dira, si y'en a un :'(
7. 17:08:393 (1) - Ctrl+g imo Ici, j'ai voulu créer une sorte de flow construit sur la transition entre 17:08:393 (1,2), donc je peux pas changer D=
8. 18:37:393 (1,2,3) - Le flow est bizarre ici. Réarrange tes notes ? Fixé
9. 20:06:393 (1,2,3) - Je sais pas si c'est une bonne idée de stack 3 sliders comme ça xD Nan ici fallait dire "20:06:143 (4,5) - CTRL + G imo" xDD Nan pareil qu'au dessus, je verrai si c'est rankable :3
10. 20:06:393 (1,2,3) - wtf meloetta , c'est pas que pour rubis et saphir ? XD Trompé de coordonnées temporelles xD Nan mais on va dire qu'on est dans Rubis Oméga et Saphir Alpha xD (en plus c'est pas Rubis/Saphir, c'est Rouge/Bleu/Jaune Or/Argent/Cristal)
11. 21:40:704 (5) - Ctrl+J t Ctrl+H ? Nan je change le slider, il est pas beau =P
12. 22:21:371 (2,3,4,5) - Garde le même spacing. N'éloigne pas le (5) Mais après le (5) il est à moitié dans (4), et donc j'aime pas trop moi Dx
13. 24:02:468 (1) - Remove NC Nan ici ça correponds, j'en met un à chaque son de "cloche" :3
14. 24:26:967 (4,5,6,7) - Espace les un peu ces notes ! J'ai espacé les 2 sliders mais pas les notes, elles sont bien stackées comme ça \:D/

1. Rien d'autre a dire ! Très bon mapset ! Un très grand bravo !

Call me if you need stars !

Kethsar wrote:

I'm not sure what happens, but 16:26:093 (4) - causes Autoplay to get a 100 and lose its 100% accuracy. You may need to fix that before this map can be ranked.

Takuneru wrote:

This map is just awesome. I've had so much fun playing it on CTB :3
Let me shoot a kudosu for you, Kenterz!
This needs to be approved already

Secretpipe wrote:

Have 8 stars !

I hope lfj-sempai will notice you now

1. 00:20:201 (1) - Déplaces-le à x:282 y:244 pour le mettre plus aligné avec les deux sliders précédents. (N'actionne pas le Grid Snap, ça va t'aider)
2. 00:23:359 (3) - Je ne suis vraiment pas sûr avec la courbe à la fin. Ça serait pas mieux de le mettre en ligne droit? Juste comme ça:
   
   Example

   
3. 00:24:227 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Ce pattern devrait être retravailler afin de le mettre plus circulaire. Par exemple, à la fin j'y ai mis un slider en forme ovale. Ce que tu pourrais faire pour l'améliorer, c'est de retravailler le pattern en ayant le slider en background pour te guider.
   
   Example

   
4. 00:34:096 (1) - Je suis sûr quand n'activant pas le Grid Snap, tu peux facilement améliorer ce blanket, tout comme celui à 00:34:569 (2) -
5. 00:52:096 (2) - Ce slider détruit complêtement le flow, tu vois. Pour avoir un meilleur flow avec les précédents et les suivants, le mieux serait de faire ça:
   
   Example

   
6. 00:56:201 (3,4,5,6) - Enfait, ces objets ne suivent pas la musique, il faut quelque chose d'autre pour améliorer. Par exemple, je te recommande ceci:
   
7. 00:57:622 (5) - Fait en sorte que le spacing soit consistent avec le précédent et le suivant, il est décalé d'environ 0.10x
8. 01:47:359 (1) - Ce slider est proche d'overlapper le slider précédent. Faudrais le mettre un petit peu plus vers le haut.
9. 01:51:306 - Eum, je crois fortement que ce reverse n'as pas besoin de clap. Supprime-le.
10. 03:20:517 (10) - Pourquoi pas un nouveau combo ici?
11. 05:05:675 (1) - Ajuste le blanket ici c:
12. 07:50:237 - Premièrement, ajoute un nouveau combo ici, il en manque un. Deuxièmement, je ne te suggère pas de commencer un stream en mettant le premier objet en dessous de la fin d'un slider.
13. 10:29:630 - Ce clap là, je ne le "feel" vraiment pas, surtout pas à cette place.. tu devrais penser à le supprimer.
14. 10:38:230 (6,1,2) - J'aime pas vraiment l'effet que ça fait. Ça ne suit pas vraiment la chanson, ce qui est étrange à entendre.. Je te suggère de faire quelque chose du genre:
    
15. 12:49:630 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Pour cette partie là, je ne suis pas vraiment sûr si les sliders qui sont sur les tiks bleus devraient être positionnés ainsi.. Tu pourrais pas faire quelque chose qui pourrait suivre mieux la musique?

Gabe wrote:

Oh damn, baby gurl. this is insane.
Des ajustements devront être fait sur le storyboard. 06:48:883 - Je ne suis par sur que tu veux voir ça: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1891859 Fixé

Comme d'hab, tout ce à quoi je ne marque rien est fixé

Super Marathooooon

1. 00:20:201 (1) - Déplaces-le à x:282 y:244 pour le mettre plus aligné avec les deux sliders précédents. (N'actionne pas le Grid Snap, ça va t'aider)
2. 00:23:359 (3) - Je ne suis vraiment pas sûr avec la courbe à la fin. Ça serait pas mieux de le mettre en ligne droit? Juste comme ça:
   
   Example

   
3. 00:24:227 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Ce pattern devrait être retravailler afin de le mettre plus circulaire. Par exemple, à la fin j'y ai mis un slider en forme ovale. Ce que tu pourrais faire pour l'améliorer, c'est de retravailler le pattern en ayant le slider en background pour te guider.
   
   Example

   
4. 00:34:096 (1) - Je suis sûr quand n'activant pas le Grid Snap, tu peux facilement améliorer ce blanket, tout comme celui à 00:34:569 (2) -
5. 00:52:096 (2) - Ce slider détruit complêtement le flow, tu vois. Pour avoir un meilleur flow avec les précédents et les suivants, le mieux serait de faire ça:
   
   Example

   
6. 00:56:201 (3,4,5,6) - Enfait, ces objets ne suivent pas la musique, il faut quelque chose d'autre pour améliorer. Par exemple, je te recommande ceci:
   
7. 00:57:622 (5) - Fait en sorte que le spacing soit consistent avec le précédent et le suivant, il est décalé d'environ 0.10x
8. 01:47:359 (1) - Ce slider est proche d'overlapper le slider précédent. Faudrais le mettre un petit peu plus vers le haut.
9. 01:51:306 - Eum, je crois fortement que ce reverse n'as pas besoin de clap. Supprime-le.
10. 03:20:517 (10) - Pourquoi pas un nouveau combo ici? Je trouve pas ça cohérent, et ça casse la logique des couleurs dans la map (vu que le tout dernier circle fini avec la couleur du combo 1
11. 05:05:675 (1) - Ajuste le blanket ici c:
12. 07:50:237 - Premièrement, ajoute un nouveau combo ici, il en manque un. Deuxièmement, je ne te suggère pas de commencer un stream en mettant le premier objet en dessous de la fin d'un slider.
13. 10:29:630 - Ce clap là, je ne le "feel" vraiment pas, surtout pas à cette place.. tu devrais penser à le supprimer.
14. 10:38:230 (6,1,2) - J'aime pas vraiment l'effet que ça fait. Ça ne suit pas vraiment la chanson, ce qui est étrange à entendre.. Je te suggère de faire quelque chose du genre:
    
15. 12:49:630 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Pour cette partie là, je ne suis pas vraiment sûr si les sliders qui sont sur les tiks bleus devraient être positionnés ainsi.. Tu pourrais pas faire quelque chose qui pourrait suivre mieux la musique? Nan ici ça suit très bien la musique, y'a 2 mélodie : une qui se trouve sur les tick blancs et une autre, celle que je suis. Je trouve que le positionnement des slider est sympa, je verrai si j'ai d'autres plaintes :3

Ça fait quand même une semaine que t'attends après mon mod, biensur, je n'ai pas finis, mais je te donne ce que j'ai pour l'instant. Je ne vais pas tarder à revenir pour continuer, on peut même se faire une soirée modding, si jamais! D'accord

Sinon, ta map est super simple, tu devrais facilement être capable de chopper quelques personnes pour le ranking D: Mais ils veulent pas... J'ai juste réussi à convaincre Atrue (j'ai un ticket pour quand il reviendra)

Bonne chance :3

paseli wrote:

Mod from modding queue~

You want to kill me, right? YEAH xD

I don't write things I fix

00:33:622 (3,1,2) - check blanket
02:49:569 (3,5) - not perfectly stacked yet
03:45:148 (5) - I'd delete the HS here
04:16:885 (3,4,5) - this looks pretty clumpy, use a bigger distance here (jsut a small one is fine)
04:26:201 (6,7,8,9,1) - also clumpy, make it flatter http://puu.sh/aSa9j/177a70bdf6.jpg
06:20:675 (4,5) - i think these should be circles to put a better emphasis to the kicks I think they are good here
07:52:594 (3,4) - reposition 3 at x:512 y:252 for better flow
08:10:916 (1) - improve blanket
08:34:487 (4) - position at x:380 y:216 for blanket
08:26:344 (1,2,3) - this is somewhat flow breaking, try to find a solution similar to 08:31:059 (5,6,1) -
09:13:487 (3,1) - check blankets again
10:22:430 (1,2,3,4) - why not increasing distances successively between these backsliders a bit? it would build up a bit more pressure here
10:26:830 (6,1) - check blankets
10:40:030 (1,2) - position slider 1 more appropriately to slider 2's approach circle http://puu.sh/aSbmo/506db58f4d.jpg
12:41:230 (3,1) - i'd prefer to blanket here
13:06:830 (6,7) - why is this not a backslider? Because it's on a white tick, and start the slider at a blue tick is weird if I put the circle in 13:06:430 (5)
14:47:336 (3,4,5,6,1) - i feel like oval flow would fit in much better here Someone suggested to make a jump here, it fits good to me =/
15:40:343 (4,1,2,3,4) - the star isn't properly shaped yet, reposition 15:40:943 (2) - at x:328, y:332, 15:41:093 (3) - at x:436, y:312
15:44:393 (1,2) - this should be a semicircle i suppose. fix the blanket of slider 1
16:33:593 (1,2) - the flow between these should be more aligned
16:56:693 (2,3) - shape's still improvable http://puu.sh/aScgc/f21934921b.jpg
17:22:193 (4,5) - check blanket
19:17:143 (4,1) - blanket here would be good
21:15:704 (1,2,3) - check blankets again
22:04:371 (3,4) - for consistency, i think it's better to make this a slider
23:16:743 (4) - better make this a round slider too like 23:15:387 (2) -

Pure nostalgia. It still needs some fine-tuning, but then it's good to go.
This may be one of the best marathon 2014. Good luck to get this ranked! Thank you so much <3

Greetings,
paseli

1. Some overlaps.
2. Overmapped notes.
3. Some stacks.
4. We added some notes. (1 or 2 circles missing before)
5. Fixed minor blankets
6. And minor things again !

10:10 Secretpipe: yo pd
10:10 Kenterz: Hey poisson rouge :3
10:10 *Kenterz runs
10:10 Secretpipe: o/
10:11 Kenterz: Je fini mon mod et on fais l'IRC ?
10:12 Secretpipe: me presse pas o.o
10:12 Kenterz: Mais je te pose juste la question xD
10:12 Secretpipe: hue
10:12 Secretpipe: xD
10:20 Secretpipe: bon pd
10:20 Secretpipe: it's time
10:20 Secretpipe: mais un moment
10:21 Secretpipe: j'vais téléphone
10:21 Kenterz: Okey xD
10:21 Secretpipe: j'arrive Skype
10:36 Secretpipe: bon
10:36 Secretpipe: j'suis la
10:38 Kenterz: Attend j'ai clear Atama no Taisou O.o
10:39 Kenterz: Voilà, my body is Red-y
10:42 Secretpipe: :o
10:42 *Secretpipe is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/370440 hapi - THE MEDLEY OF POKEMON RGBY+GSC]
10:43 Secretpipe: 00:20:201 (1) - 
10:43 Secretpipe: un peu plus a gauche
10:43 Secretpipe: pour etre aligné
10:44 Secretpipe: 00:24:306 (3,4) - 
10:44 Secretpipe: La transition ici est bizarre
10:44 Secretpipe: surtout le (')
10:44 Secretpipe: (4)*
10:46 Kenterz: http://puu.sh/bfcI7.jpg
10:48 Secretpipe: 00:30:306 (1) - 
10:48 Secretpipe: je l'aurai fait plus droit
10:48 Secretpipe: pour la transition avec 00:30:622 (2) - 
10:48 Secretpipe: genre tu  peux faire un slider droit
10:48 Secretpipe: et un mini overlap
10:49 Kenterz: http://puu.sh/bfcNE.jpg
10:49 Secretpipe: bien
10:49 Kenterz: http://puu.sh/bfcOu.jpg
10:49 Secretpipe: 00:31:096 (3) - 
10:49 Secretpipe: blanket plz
10:51 Secretpipe: 00:45:306 (5) - Reverse
10:52 Secretpipe: C'est meilleur pour le flow
10:54 Secretpipe: 00:57:938 - 
10:54 Secretpipe: Tu as oublié une note important la
10:54 Secretpipe: importante
10:55 Kenterz: http://puu.sh/bfd2l.jpg
10:56 Secretpipe: http://puu.sh/bfd5i.jpg
10:56 Secretpipe: un peu comme ça
10:57 Secretpipe: 01:02:359 (4) - J'aurai genre rotate parce que le curseur par de l'écran après
10:57 Secretpipe: rotate le de sorte que ca blanket 01:01:885 (2) - 
10:57 Secretpipe: et que ca se dirige vers 01:02:675 (5) - 
10:58 Kenterz: http://puu.sh/bfdaz.jpg
10:59 Kenterz: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1986582
11:00 Kenterz: http://puu.sh/bfdfs.jpg
11:00 Secretpipe: okay o/
11:00 Secretpipe: 01:11:596 (4) - ca passe mal pour le flow la
11:01 Secretpipe: met un double a la place !
11:01 Secretpipe: le stack pas si tu agree
11:01 Kenterz: http://puu.sh/bfdjH.jpg
11:02 Secretpipe: non
11:02 Secretpipe: faut que les notes
11:02 Secretpipe: aillent vers 01:11:832 (5) - 
11:02 Secretpipe: mais si ca se joue mieux
11:02 Secretpipe: comme tu veux
11:03 Kenterz: http://puu.sh/bfdnj.jpg
11:03 Secretpipe: 01:24:622 (1,2,3,4,5) -  meh  where's star ? :(
11:05 Kenterz: http://puu.sh/bfdrQ.jpg
11:05 Secretpipe: bien
11:05 Secretpipe: :3
11:07 Secretpipe: 01:31:569 (3) -  tu peux curve 
11:07 Secretpipe: 01:32:043 (4) - 
11:07 Secretpipe: avec ca
11:07 Secretpipe: réflechis
11:07 Secretpipe: huehue :3
11:08 Secretpipe: 02:22:727 (2) - Courbe le vers (3)
11:09 Secretpipe: 02:47:675 (5,4) - Mineur mais tu peux stack
11:10 Secretpipe: 03:11:043 (4) - 
11:10 Secretpipe: Tu aurais pu la mettre dans la continuité du slider
11:11 Secretpipe: 03:11:043 (4) - 
11:11 Secretpipe: Tu aurais pu la mettre dans la continuité du slider
11:12 Secretpipe: 03:50:990 (1) -  tu pourrais delete et rajouter deux notes au dessus de 03:51:148 (2) - 
11:12 Secretpipe: ca fait triplet
11:13 Kenterz: http://puu.sh/bfdLn.jpg
11:13 Secretpipe: 03:53:675 (3) - Courbe le , le flow est moisi la è_é
11:14 Secretpipe: bien
11:23 Secretpipe: 04:54:306 (1) - 
11:23 Secretpipe: Ca fait overmapped
11:24 Secretpipe: 04:57:701 (5) -  Ca aussi
11:24 Secretpipe: tu vois ?
11:24 Secretpipe: okay
11:24 Secretpipe: fix :D
11:25 Kenterz: Nan c'est moi qui ai fix xD
11:25 Secretpipe: 05:35:517 (5,3) - Stack plz 
11:25 Secretpipe: 05:51:464 (2) - Continuité du slider la aussi
11:26 Secretpipe: 06:07:096 (4) - je percois pas le rythme la
11:26 Secretpipe: stop le a 06:07:411 - 
11:26 Secretpipe: et add une note a 06:07:569 - 
11:27 Secretpipe: 06:07:096 (4) - met un clap sur la queue
11:31 Secretpipe: 08:51:201 (3,4) - Overlap hurts <.<
11:32 Kenterz: Ok
11:32 Secretpipe: 08:51:630 (5,6) - 
11:32 Secretpipe: 08:58:916 (1) - T'aurais pu le curv come le (6) , genre copie (6) et rotate de 180 degrés
11:35 Secretpipe: 11:34:030 (5) - Réduis la courbe pour que le blanket soit meileur
11:36 Kenterz: Fixé
11:36 Secretpipe: k
11:37 Kenterz: 11:36:030 - 
11:37 Kenterz: Une note en plus ?
11:37 Secretpipe: no
11:37 Kenterz: Quoique non xD
11:37 Kenterz: 12:21:230 (2,3,4) - 
11:38 Secretpipe: 12:35:630 (2,3) - les deux sliders sont différents la
11:38 Secretpipe: why
11:38 Secretpipe: lol
11:39 Secretpipe: 14:00:336 (2) -  reverse 
11:39 Secretpipe: ?
11:40 Secretpipe: flow O/
11:40 Kenterz: nope
11:40 Secretpipe: 14:56:003 (1,2) -  flow moisi la
11:41 Secretpipe: straight sliders who broke the flow ftw O/////
11:42 Kenterz: http://puu.sh/bfeSA.jpg
11:42 Secretpipe: 15:54:593 (6) -  NC
11:42 Secretpipe: pour le distinguer
11:42 Secretpipe: mouais
11:43 Kenterz: http://puu.sh/bfeVC.jpg
11:43 Secretpipe: no
11:43 Kenterz: http://puu.sh/bfeX1.jpg
11:43 Secretpipe: bien
11:44 Secretpipe: 16:38:093 (3,1) - Réduis la courbe , ugly ;_;
11:45 Kenterz: Je pense que ça ira mieux comme ça http://puu.sh/bff0H.jpg
11:49 Secretpipe: 17:39:768 (6) - 
11:49 Secretpipe: double here
11:49 Secretpipe: 17:57:393 (2) - pas unrankable mais bizarre
11:49 Secretpipe: fix plz
11:50 Secretpipe: 17:58:393 (4) - NC here pour le distinguer et pour faire comme tu fais avant
11:51 Kenterz: http://puu.sh/bffhs.jpg
11:51 Kenterz: NC fixed
11:51 Secretpipe: better
11:51 Secretpipe: 19:11:643 (2) - Un peu haut plac
11:51 Secretpipe: cé*
11:53 Kenterz: Fixed 
11:54 Secretpipe: 21:35:704 (6) - NC
11:54 Secretpipe: 21:37:038 (11) - ^
12:00 Secretpipe: 25:50:467 (1,2) - La c'est bizarre
12:01 Secretpipe: C'est vraiment moche désolé
12:01 Secretpipe: xD
12:01 Secretpipe: bah
12:01 Secretpipe: haut placé
12:01 Secretpipe: +overlap
12:01 Secretpipe: +no curve
12:01 Kenterz: ta mère :c
12:01 *Kenterz runs
12:01 Secretpipe: shitpattern
12:01 Secretpipe: :(
12:01 Secretpipe: xD
12:01 Kenterz: http://puu.sh/bffJe.jpg
12:01 Secretpipe: mais baisse le (1)
12:02 Kenterz: Oui il est à 16 en y
12:02 Secretpipe: quand même
12:02 Secretpipe: hue
12:02 Secretpipe: update now
12:02 Secretpipe: LOL
12:21 Kenterz: Upload fini :3
12:35 Kenterz: Je mange
12:40 Secretpipe: re
12:42 Secretpipe: c'bon
12:42 Secretpipe: j'vais bub

Irreversible wrote:

woow you did it

1263,315.797784152215,4,2,1,80,1,0
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1404039,361.44578313253,4,2,3,60,1,0
1412713,375,4,2,3,60,1,0
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1434488,666.666666666667,4,2,1,80,1,0
1459821,333.333333333333,4,2,1,80,1,0

Shiro wrote:

Timing is wrong.

SPOILER

1263,315.797784152215,4,2,1,80,1,0
399168,327.868852459016,4,2,1,80,1,0
401790,342.857142857143,4,2,1,80,1,0
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408861,400,4,2,1,80,1,0
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610726,312.5,4,2,1,80,1,0
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611954,240,4,2,1,80,1,0
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900577,300,4,2,1,80,1,0
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1434488,666.666666666667,4,2,1,80,1,0
1459821,333.333333333333,4,2,1,80,1,0

The map isn't ready to be ranked, either. I'll drop a mod on this some time this week-end; I've already spent 2 hours on this timing, and I might spend around 8 or more modding the whole difficulty. This is heavily unpolished and has big gameplay issues that need to be addressed. Please take the time to adjust the map to this new timing before I mod it.

Sorry I'm making you wait the mod like this with a comment that looks rather offensive, but I will need a whole day free to mod this. No BAT touch this until I have modded it, please.

1. 00:02:210 (4,4) - These two sliders break the comboing. For consistency and respect to the song, the new combos should be on the big white tick (just like 00:01:263 (1) - ) but because you have a sliderend there, you can't add them at these points, which forces you to add them on the note after which is wrong and inconsistent.
2. 00:05:052 (1) - You could have made an effort and blanket this with 00:04:105 (2) - .
3. 00:08:526 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Inconsistent 1/4 spacing. This matters more than you may think (see below), but make the spacing on the 1/4 consistent (I'd suggest 0.5x rather than 1x for the beginning). This goes for the entire section until the break.
4. 00:14:526 (3,4,5,6) - First of all, (4) is not needed and doesn't follow anything in the song. Second of all, this pattern is hella confusing, difficult to play and unintuitive because of the massive 1/4 jump that you force and that doesn't fit at all. You should focus on the 1/2 drum kicks then go back to 1/4 if you wish, but this jump is not fitting and should be remove. Also, remove (6) to focus on the kicks as I said. Also 00:14:526 (3,5) - should continue the circle motion, which was fairly decent, instead of breaking it for the sake of unfitting 1/4.
5. 00:14:526 (3,5) - Same as above. This 1/4 does not fit. Also, this kind of pattern 00:16:737 (2,3,4) - looks and plays atrociously bad. What's the point of only stacking two of the beats ? It's confusing because of the spacing (which looks like 1/2) and uneven movement for something that is supposedly not uneven. If it's meant to be uneven, use a 1/4 slider then a circle, but not three circles.
6. 00:17:684 (9,1) - Because of the very inconsistent spacing before, there is no way to tell whether this is a normal 1/2 or another randomly spaced 1/4. That is why making the 1/4 spacing consistent is crucial to this first part.
7. 00:17:684 (9,1,2,3,4) - This is wrong in every possible way. First of all, the new combo should be on (9). Second of all, you are using offbeat sliders (sliders that start on a red tick) on a part of the song with heavily accentuated white ticks, which you have ignored because they are sliderends. This plays completely off because of that. You're clicking on nothing in the song and ignore the actual strong beats. Also, of course, 00:18:789 (4) - ruins the comboing (the new combo should be on its end).
8. 00:19:263 (1) - See ^. This new combo is misplaced. And make 00:19:263 (1,2,3) - a perfect triangle or something.
9. 00:20:210 (1) - to 00:22:263 (5) - first of all, the rhythm is wrong. It should be circle-circle-1/2slider repeat. The rhythm is made of 4 beats: 00:20:210 (1,2,3) - three strong ones, then one weak one. You have the first strong beat and the weak beat emphasized with circles, the second strong beat emphasized with a slider head, but the third strong beat is skipped because of the slider end, which plays awfully wrong. You should change the rhythm into that, then add a jump after the sliderend to separate the rhythm better.
10. 00:24:632 (4) - Common sense requires this to be 3/4 long, and not 1/1, just like 00:24:316 (3) - .
    For the whole section above: it's the introduction and you're already using heavy 1/4, sliderjumps, confusing streams, and everything that i counterintuitive and difficult to play. For an introduction, especially to a marathon, you should have done something a bit easier to let the player warm up.
11. 00:30:632 (2,3) - Wrong blanket.
12. 00:31:421 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This could use sliders. There are very clear strong beats in the song but you're not trying to emphasize them because everything is circles. I'll help you and point out the weaker beats that you can use sliderends on: 00:31:737 (6) - 00:32:211 (4) - 00:32:684 (7) -
13. 00:32:132 (3) - This 1/4 is nowhere to be found in the song.
14. 00:32:842 (1,2) - On the other hand, this goes over two very strong beats and ignores one because of a sliderend. You should have done the same as 00:30:316 (1,2) - . Also for the whole 00:32:842 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - you decided to completely ignore the song and use random slider composition instead ?
15. 00:33:632 (3,1,2) - Wrong blankets, again.
16. 00:36:000 (3,4,5) - I already pointed this pattern out and I will point it out again. You're not even consistent with yourself: one time you decide to add a confusing counterintuitive jumpstack1/4thing and then it's regular 1/4: 00:36:632 (1,2,3) - . Also if you wanted to be consistent with yourself this one should be a 3/4 slider then a 1/2 slider, not 1/2-1/4-1/2.
17. 00:37:737 (5,1) - Oh hey, this slider is pretty cool for once. It goes well with the emphasized beats in the song and the slight jump after it fits the variations of volume on the notes.
18. 00:39:158 (1,2,3,4,5) - And THAT is why the pattern I pointed out 00:39:158 (1,2,3) - is confusing and unintuitive. This looks like 00:39:790 (4) - is 1/4 after 00:39:474 (3) - in every possible way you could ever look at it: same pattern as 00:39:158 (1,2,3) - (the 1/4 use on (2) is overmapped, btw), slightly higher jump than (1,2), and a clear build up in the song. Except it's 1/2.
19. 00:39:790 (4,5,6) - This rhythm is wrong either way. The strong beats are 00:39:790 - 00:40:027 - 00:40:264 - and these are what should have been clicked. This would have been a perfect place to use 1/2 sliders that are 1/4 apart, not your weird rhythm. Also, space them properly or add a jump after them, because 00:40:106 (6,1) - looks like they are 1/4 apart because of the unnecessary jump on 00:39:869 (5,6) - and the confusing spacing on 00:39:158 (1,2,3,4,5) - right before.
20. 00:41:053 (4,1) - I wouldn't consider this rankable in this context. There is no back-and-forth of any kind in the song at this moment that could justify and overlapping pattern like this.
    00:42:316 (3,4,5) - THIS is what you should have done at 00:39:790 (4,5,6) - (minus the weird 1/4 slider, but that's my personal taste). THIS is cool.
21. 00:44:211 (1,2,3,4) - Same as above. There is no back-and-forth of any kind at this point. Also, don't shorten the second one if you're going to use a pattern that is not directly sightreadable. This is counterintuitive and wrong. I don't mind the 1/4 sliderjumps at this point, they are correct, but don't hide one of them under another slider for the sake of having a confusing pattern that doesn't even fit.
22. 00:46:422 (5,1,2,3,4) - Abusive 1/4, wrong pattern, again.
23. 00:49:895 (4,6) - These are dangerously overlapping. Try to move (6) around to remove the confusing overlap.
24. 00:56:843 (1,2,3) - *sigh*
25. 00:57:790 (6,7,1) - Unnecessary and confusing anti-jumps. What are they even for ? They don't make sense.
26. 00:58:422 (2,3,4) - *siigh*
27. 01:00:948 (2,3) - This plays horribly because of the amazing lack of flow and counterintuitiveness of this movement. Also the slider is mostly hidden under 01:00:475 (5) - .
28. 01:01:422 (1,2,3,4,5) - Seems that you chose to completely ignore the song for some random slider composition here again. Don't you think there's something wrong if you end up using a finish hitsound on a passive sliderend ? 01:03:948 (4,1,2,3,4) - Same goes for this.
    note: at this point I gave up on trying to understand your comboing and give pointers to fix it. Rhythms are wrong most of the time and make proper comboing impossible.
29. 01:09:475 (1,2) - These sliders are hideous. Why do they go back on themselves like that ?
30. 01:16:107 (2,3,4) - THIS is a case when this pattern fits because there is no important beat on the end of 01:16:107 (2) - and the slight jump emphasizes 01:16:343 (3) - *siiigh*
31. 01:16:738 (5,1,2) - This is a correct use of this pattern, for once, and not just because you don't want an overlap. The end of 01:16:738 (5) - is clearly not emphasized in the song, while the slight jump emphasizes 01:16:975 (1) - which is good. 01:19:265 (5,1,2) - Same here.
32. 01:24:002 (3) - If you want to be consistent with what you did just before, you should extend this slider.
33. 01:26:212 (2,3,4) - *siiiigh*
34. 01:28:896 (2,3) - That doesn't fit. Why not use a triple here like you did at 01:18:791 (2,3,4) - ? That would be the best way to go. Why do you keep changing the rhythms you use if the song's rhythms don't change at all ?
35. 01:34:107 (3,4,5) - *siiiiigh* also this should have an extended (3/4) slider to stay consistent with 01:33:475 (1,2) -
36. 01:36:633 (5,6,1) - Why does the spacing change like this ? This is really confusing.
37. 01:49:107 (2,1) - Please stack properly.
38. 01:52:423 (1) - This slider shouldn't be extended. There is a clear beat at 01:52:581 - while there is absolutely none on the 1/4 beat, so a triple wouldn't work either. And it's not consistent with 01:47:371 (1,2) - .
39. 01:59:924 (2) - Inconsistent and overmapped 1/4. Check 01:50:529 (3,4) - and do the same rhythm, since it's the exact same rhythm in the song.
40. 02:02:371 (7) - This should be a circle. Follow the song. Also it would be more consistent with 01:50:529 (3,4) - kinda.
41. 02:07:266 (5,1,2) - *siiiiiigh*
42. 02:11:055 (4) - Inconsistent, again. This part is full 1/2, there is no need for any 1/4.
43. 02:11:687 (2,3,4) - *siiiiiiigh*
44. 02:13:187 (4) - Overmapped 1/4, again.
45. 02:14:529 - why are you skipping this obvious note in the song that you never skipped before ?
46. 02:14:371 (3,4,5) - *siiiiiiiigh*
47. 02:21:793 (3,4,5) - This rhythm doesn't exist in the song and is confusing. You've only used 1/4 slider for jump triples in this part of the song like 02:20:056 (1,2) - . It should be a 5-note stream, which would be fitting, consistent with 02:19:266 (3,4,5,6) - and less confusing.
48. 02:38:214 (3,4,5) - *siiiiiiiiigh*
49. 02:39:477 (3,4,5) - *siiiiiiiiiigh*
50. 02:40:425 (1,2,3) - *siiiiiiiiiiigh* also this 1/4 is overmapped
51. 02:41:688 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - overmapped 1/4
52. 02:42:319 (7,8,9) - *siiiiiiiiiiiigh* also this 1/4 is overmapped
53. 02:43:267 (2,3) - All three notes of this triple (starting with the sliderend) should be emphasized. They stand out in the song as the first 1/4 notes in a while at this point (not in the map, alas), and should be emphasized in the map as well.
54. 02:44:530 (2,3,4) - Same here !
55. 02:45:477 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why is there a stream here ? I can't hear anything streamy in the song.
56. 02:47:688 (5,1,2) - *siiiiiiiiiiiiigh*
57. 02:49:425 (2) - Overmapped.
58. 02:54:004 (7,1,2) - *siiiiiiiiiiiiigh*
    note: at this point I also gave up on pointing out overmapped 1/4. The map is full of them.
59. 02:55:267 (8,1,2) - *siiiiiiiiiiiiiigh*
60. 03:01:741 (1,2,3) - *siiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh* AND the comboing is wrong, which probably lead to you having to use a sliderend as first object of this and lead to the use of this terrible pattern
61. 03:02:688 (6) - I'm not sure if this is in the song or not, but either way, it's confusing and quite unnecessary.
62. 03:09:794 (2,3,4) - *siiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh*
63. 03:12:320 (2,3,4) - *siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh* seriously. This looks like 1/2 and SHOULD be 1/2. Why do you add unnecessary 1/4 everywhere ? This is horribly confusing.
64. 03:23:689 (2,3,4) - *siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh*
65. 03:30:005 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - This is mapped over a silence in the song and it's a stream with a slider to make it extra confusing.
66. 03:33:479 (1,2,3) - *siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh*
67. 03:54:005 (4,5,6) - *siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh*
68. 03:57:795 (2,3,4) - *siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh*
69. 03:59:058 (2,3,4) - *siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh*
70. 04:00:637 (4,5,6) - *siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh*
71. 04:06:953 (3,4,5) - *siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh*
72. 04:08:216 (4,5,6) - *siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh*
    note: I completely gave up at this point.

Shiro wrote:

Here's the mod. Do not kd this post as it's a continuation of the previous one.

Marathon

1. 00:02:210 (4,4) - These two sliders break the comboing. For consistency and respect to the song, the new combos should be on the big white tick (just like 00:01:263 (1) - ) but because you have a sliderend there, you can't add them at these points, which forces you to add them on the note after which is wrong and inconsistent.
2. 00:05:052 (1) - You could have made an effort and blanket this with 00:04:105 (2) - .
3. 00:08:526 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Inconsistent 1/4 spacing. This matters more than you may think (see below), but make the spacing on the 1/4 consistent (I'd suggest 0.5x rather than 1x for the beginning). This goes for the entire section until the break.
4. 00:14:526 (3,4,5,6) - First of all, (4) is not needed and doesn't follow anything in the song. Second of all, this pattern is hella confusing, difficult to play and unintuitive because of the massive 1/4 jump that you force and that doesn't fit at all. You should focus on the 1/2 drum kicks then go back to 1/4 if you wish, but this jump is not fitting and should be remove. Also, remove (6) to focus on the kicks as I said. Also 00:14:526 (3,5) - should continue the circle motion, which was fairly decent, instead of breaking it for the sake of unfitting 1/4.
5. 00:14:526 (3,5) - Same as above. This 1/4 does not fit. Also, this kind of pattern 00:16:737 (2,3,4) - looks and plays atrociously bad. What's the point of only stacking two of the beats ? It's confusing because of the spacing (which looks like 1/2) and uneven movement for something that is supposedly not uneven. If it's meant to be uneven, use a 1/4 slider then a circle, but not three circles.
6. 00:17:684 (9,1) - Because of the very inconsistent spacing before, there is no way to tell whether this is a normal 1/2 or another randomly spaced 1/4. That is why making the 1/4 spacing consistent is crucial to this first part.
7. 00:17:684 (9,1,2,3,4) - This is wrong in every possible way. First of all, the new combo should be on (9). Second of all, you are using offbeat sliders (sliders that start on a red tick) on a part of the song with heavily accentuated white ticks, which you have ignored because they are sliderends. This plays completely off because of that. You're clicking on nothing in the song and ignore the actual strong beats. Also, of course, 00:18:789 (4) - ruins the comboing (the new combo should be on its end).
8. 00:19:263 (1) - See ^. This new combo is misplaced. And make 00:19:263 (1,2,3) - a perfect triangle or something.
9. 00:20:210 (1) - to 00:22:263 (5) - first of all, the rhythm is wrong. It should be circle-circle-1/2slider repeat. The rhythm is made of 4 beats: 00:20:210 (1,2,3) - three strong ones, then one weak one. You have the first strong beat and the weak beat emphasized with circles, the second strong beat emphasized with a slider head, but the third strong beat is skipped because of the slider end, which plays awfully wrong. You should change the rhythm into that, then add a jump after the sliderend to separate the rhythm better.
10. 00:24:632 (4) - Common sense requires this to be 3/4 long, and not 1/1, just like 00:24:316 (3) - .
    For the whole section above: it's the introduction and you're already using heavy 1/4, sliderjumps, confusing streams, and everything that i counterintuitive and difficult to play. For an introduction, especially to a marathon, you should have done something a bit easier to let the player warm up.
11. 00:30:632 (2,3) - Wrong blanket.
12. 00:31:421 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This could use sliders. There are very clear strong beats in the song but you're not trying to emphasize them because everything is circles. I'll help you and point out the weaker beats that you can use sliderends on: 00:31:737 (6) - 00:32:211 (4) - 00:32:684 (7) -
13. 00:32:132 (3) - This 1/4 is nowhere to be found in the song.
14. 00:32:842 (1,2) - On the other hand, this goes over two very strong beats and ignores one because of a sliderend. You should have done the same as 00:30:316 (1,2) - . Also for the whole 00:32:842 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - you decided to completely ignore the song and use random slider composition instead ?
15. 00:33:632 (3,1,2) - Wrong blankets, again.
16. 00:36:000 (3,4,5) - I already pointed this pattern out and I will point it out again. You're not even consistent with yourself: one time you decide to add a confusing counterintuitive jumpstack1/4thing and then it's regular 1/4: 00:36:632 (1,2,3) - . Also if you wanted to be consistent with yourself this one should be a 3/4 slider then a 1/2 slider, not 1/2-1/4-1/2.
17. 00:37:737 (5,1) - Oh hey, this slider is pretty cool for once. It goes well with the emphasized beats in the song and the slight jump after it fits the variations of volume on the notes.
18. 00:39:158 (1,2,3,4,5) - And THAT is why the pattern I pointed out 00:39:158 (1,2,3) - is confusing and unintuitive. This looks like 00:39:790 (4) - is 1/4 after 00:39:474 (3) - in every possible way you could ever look at it: same pattern as 00:39:158 (1,2,3) - (the 1/4 use on (2) is overmapped, btw), slightly higher jump than (1,2), and a clear build up in the song. Except it's 1/2.
19. 00:39:790 (4,5,6) - This rhythm is wrong either way. The strong beats are 00:39:790 - 00:40:027 - 00:40:264 - and these are what should have been clicked. This would have been a perfect place to use 1/2 sliders that are 1/4 apart, not your weird rhythm. Also, space them properly or add a jump after them, because 00:40:106 (6,1) - looks like they are 1/4 apart because of the unnecessary jump on 00:39:869 (5,6) - and the confusing spacing on 00:39:158 (1,2,3,4,5) - right before.
20. 00:41:053 (4,1) - I wouldn't consider this rankable in this context. There is no back-and-forth of any kind in the song at this moment that could justify and overlapping pattern like this.
    00:42:316 (3,4,5) - THIS is what you should have done at 00:39:790 (4,5,6) - (minus the weird 1/4 slider, but that's my personal taste). THIS is cool.
21. 00:44:211 (1,2,3,4) - Same as above. There is no back-and-forth of any kind at this point. Also, don't shorten the second one if you're going to use a pattern that is not directly sightreadable. This is counterintuitive and wrong. I don't mind the 1/4 sliderjumps at this point, they are correct, but don't hide one of them under another slider for the sake of having a confusing pattern that doesn't even fit.
22. 00:46:422 (5,1,2,3,4) - Abusive 1/4, wrong pattern, again.
23. 00:49:895 (4,6) - These are dangerously overlapping. Try to move (6) around to remove the confusing overlap.
24. 00:56:843 (1,2,3) - *sigh*
25. 00:57:790 (6,7,1) - Unnecessary and confusing anti-jumps. What are they even for ? They don't make sense.
26. 00:58:422 (2,3,4) - *siigh*
27. 01:00:948 (2,3) - This plays horribly because of the amazing lack of flow and counterintuitiveness of this movement. Also the slider is mostly hidden under 01:00:475 (5) - .
28. 01:01:422 (1,2,3,4,5) - Seems that you chose to completely ignore the song for some random slider composition here again. Don't you think there's something wrong if you end up using a finish hitsound on a passive sliderend ? 01:03:948 (4,1,2,3,4) - Same goes for this.
    note: at this point I gave up on trying to understand your comboing and give pointers to fix it. Rhythms are wrong most of the time and make proper comboing impossible.
29. 01:09:475 (1,2) - These sliders are hideous. Why do they go back on themselves like that ? Because it follow the little voice. I don't think they are ugly
30. 01:16:107 (2,3,4) - THIS is a case when this pattern fits because there is no important beat on the end of 01:16:107 (2) - and the slight jump emphasizes 01:16:343 (3) - *siiigh*
31. 01:16:738 (5,1,2) - This is a correct use of this pattern, for once, and not just because you don't want an overlap. The end of 01:16:738 (5) - is clearly not emphasized in the song, while the slight jump emphasizes 01:16:975 (1) - which is good. 01:19:265 (5,1,2) - Same here.
32. 01:24:002 (3) - If you want to be consistent with what you did just before, you should extend this slider.
33. 01:26:212 (2,3,4) - *siiiigh*
34. 01:28:896 (2,3) - That doesn't fit. Why not use a triple here like you did at 01:18:791 (2,3,4) - ? That would be the best way to go. Why do you keep changing the rhythms you use if the song's rhythms don't change at all ?
35. 01:34:107 (3,4,5) - *siiiiigh* also this should have an extended (3/4) slider to stay consistent with 01:33:475 (1,2) -
36. 01:36:633 (5,6,1) - Why does the spacing change like this ? This is really confusing.
37. 01:49:107 (2,1) - Please stack properly.
38. 01:52:423 (1) - This slider shouldn't be extended. There is a clear beat at 01:52:581 - while there is absolutely none on the 1/4 beat, so a triple wouldn't work either. And it's not consistent with 01:47:371 (1,2) - .
39. 01:59:924 (2) - Inconsistent and overmapped 1/4. Check 01:50:529 (3,4) - and do the same rhythm, since it's the exact same rhythm in the song.
40. 02:02:371 (7) - This should be a circle. Follow the song. Also it would be more consistent with 01:50:529 (3,4) - kinda.
41. 02:07:266 (5,1,2) - *siiiiiigh*
42. 02:11:055 (4) - Inconsistent, again. This part is full 1/2, there is no need for any 1/4.
43. 02:11:687 (2,3,4) - *siiiiiiigh*
44. 02:13:187 (4) - Overmapped 1/4, again.
45. 02:14:529 - why are you skipping this obvious note in the song that you never skipped before ?
46. 02:14:371 (3,4,5) - *siiiiiiiigh*
47. 02:21:793 (3,4,5) - This rhythm doesn't exist in the song and is confusing. You've only used 1/4 slider for jump triples in this part of the song like 02:20:056 (1,2) - . It should be a 5-note stream, which would be fitting, consistent with 02:19:266 (3,4,5,6) - and less confusing.
48. 02:38:214 (3,4,5) - *siiiiiiiiigh*
49. 02:39:477 (3,4,5) - *siiiiiiiiiigh*
50. 02:40:425 (1,2,3) - *siiiiiiiiiiigh* also this 1/4 is overmapped
51. 02:41:688 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - overmapped 1/4
52. 02:42:319 (7,8,9) - *siiiiiiiiiiiigh* also this 1/4 is overmapped
53. 02:43:267 (2,3) - All three notes of this triple (starting with the sliderend) should be emphasized. They stand out in the song as the first 1/4 notes in a while at this point (not in the map, alas), and should be emphasized in the map as well.
54. 02:44:530 (2,3,4) - Same here !
55. 02:45:477 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why is there a stream here ? I can't hear anything streamy in the song.
56. 02:47:688 (5,1,2) - *siiiiiiiiiiiiigh*
57. 02:49:425 (2) - Overmapped.
58. 02:54:004 (7,1,2) - *siiiiiiiiiiiiigh*
    note: at this point I also gave up on pointing out overmapped 1/4. The map is full of them.
59. 02:55:267 (8,1,2) - *siiiiiiiiiiiiiigh*
60. 03:01:741 (1,2,3) - *siiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh* AND the comboing is wrong, which probably lead to you having to use a sliderend as first object of this and lead to the use of this terrible pattern
61. 03:02:688 (6) - I'm not sure if this is in the song or not, but either way, it's confusing and quite unnecessary.
62. 03:09:794 (2,3,4) - *siiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh*
63. 03:12:320 (2,3,4) - *siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh* seriously. This looks like 1/2 and SHOULD be 1/2. Why do you add unnecessary 1/4 everywhere ? This is horribly confusing.
64. 03:23:689 (2,3,4) - *siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh*
65. 03:30:005 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - This is mapped over a silence in the song and it's a stream with a slider to make it extra confusing.
66. 03:33:479 (1,2,3) - *siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh*
67. 03:54:005 (4,5,6) - *siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh*
68. 03:57:795 (2,3,4) - *siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh*
69. 03:59:058 (2,3,4) - *siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh*
70. 04:00:637 (4,5,6) - *siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh*
71. 04:06:953 (3,4,5) - *siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh*
72. 04:08:216 (4,5,6) - *siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh*
    note: I completely gave up at this point.

Rhythms in this are incorrect most of the time and a majority of the map is overmapped. Rather than post a million times the same thing and sighing more than my lungs can handle, I'll just explain things to you directly. Please hit me up when I'm online, I'll make a stream and explain things there.

Kenterz wrote:

(mother of mod #3 ?)

Yales wrote:

Why is it not ranked yet ?
Because you're not Chinese ?????????

Kenterz wrote:

Yales wrote:

Why is it not ranked yet ?
Because you're not Chinese ?????????

Probably, but it's mainly because there's a lot of gameplay issues, I'll try to fix them with Shiro this week end :3

Yuzu- wrote:

How come I never knew of this before?

Have my SP increase cookies~

Athrun_Yamato wrote:

Soon...

Shiro wrote:

Much better !
I still have a few things to say about it (no time for a full mod), these are the major things I noticed:
00:35:369 (1,2) - kinda confusing, this 3/4 is the first appearance in the whole map so the spacing makes it looks like it's 1/2 before the next slider, you should compress this one and maybe the next few ones to make sure the player knows that 3/4 is a rhythm that is used
00:40:895 (3,2) - weirdly overlapping, this threw me off when playing
00:42:316 (3,4,5,6,1) - really weird rhythm, I'm not sure where it comes from, but it's confusing to play
00:50:132 (5,6) - kinda hidden again
00:59:369 (1) - this slider hides this stream 01:00:317 (3,4,5,6,1) - Q.Q
01:05:369 (5) - hidden under another circle/hitburst
02:37:898 (1,2,3) - super weird spacing
03:13:899 (3,4) - 03:15:162 (3,4) - these really really really really should be circles with jumps if you did that that part would be so awesome
03:40:268 (3) - this is minor but point this upwards to stay consistent with 03:39:952 (2) - it will be more intuitive
06:12:483 (6) - this doesnt make sense, theres nothing like this in the song
06:27:483 (5) - same, also hidden under hitbursts
06:52:061 (1) - should be 1/2 to stay consistent
07:02:453 (2) - hidden under 07:02:346 (1) -
07:52:596 (2) - this slider is hella weird, im not sure what it follows

All fixed

etc
i wish you had focused more on each particular song instead of going for a fairly blanket drum rhythm for the whole map, it makes it repetitive =(
It's quite hard to map, there's quite only the drums I can follow :c

Shiro wrote:

ill give this a chance and return the bubble
good luck

Sayaka- wrote:

Tu m'as pas credit pour la technique du SV x0.25 D: *fuit*

Secretpipe wrote:

100th post!

It means I can check again ?

Jenny wrote:

100th reply != 100th post

Anyways, I guess you don't feel like having more general indepth criticism? :V

CDFA wrote:

bug me about this when I have time

Like don't count on me because like I literally have 0 free time but like if i happen to be online

D e s wrote:

I love this <3 Goodluck on approval!

[Toy] wrote:

oh god please

Kenterz wrote:

[Toy] wrote:

oh god please

Sieg wrote:

yo, brought here by CDFA's claps
Your very first offset is way too late and should be around 1242 also bpm for first offset should be 190, this can be not 100% accurate (but still more accurate that current one) because it's late already and I'm kinda tired. I didn't check rest offsets too :] Just note that you need timing check here from somebody who is capable. GL.