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Ringating

Joined August 2013

Ringating 2014-07-17T03:16:22+00:00

was working on a reply to ur pm request but then I saw you got a new bg already

however...

so I went through with the mod anyway.

used same 1080p image lanturn did and drew in the pinkeye w/ white, then applied a slight color smoothing filter to get rid of really minor compression artifacts. png does have some merit, though. if you look at the logo, you can see it is blurrier in jpg than png. also i losslessly compressed the png version so it's 1.1 mb, only ~330 kb larger than max quality jpg (795 kb). not that it's necessarily worth the extra data just for the logo, I'm just playing devil's advocate }:|

anyway, here are the images:

jpg

png

no kudosu

Setz

1,419 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Setz 2014-07-17T04:03:23+00:00

thank you again. yeah, after I PM'd you, Lanturn gave me another image through IRC which didn't have the eye problem. Which is the one that I uploaded.

I like the one you posted though, i can notice the removal of the compression artifacts from the image, it looks pretty clean now, so I will use yours. For some reason the .jpg isnt loading fully, even when i try to save, it only shows 10% of the upper part of the image. I might just end up using the .png

again, thank you very much, I feel bad since this is the third time I ask you for BG improvement help. I am no good with image editing at all.

Midge

475 posts

Joined December 2012

Midge 2014-07-30T03:30:38+00:00

I don't understand how this isn't ranked yet :c

Setz

1,419 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Setz 2014-07-30T04:01:07+00:00

I am just waiting on Chewin's mod, i know BATs have stuff to do so I don't want to bother him.

Let's just hope it is to his liking once he mods it

Ozato Fumika

Beatmap Nominator

3,379 posts

Joined July 2013

Ozato Fumika 2014-08-01T12:36:41+00:00

hmm...

Xiaolin

1,857 posts

Joined April 2013

Xiaolin 2014-08-02T18:07:54+00:00

Chewin has been active for 11 days </3
Also.. I finally got Akaza Akari nendoroid ~ o3o

Good luck with rank ~ <33

Setz

1,419 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Setz 2014-08-03T15:59:54+00:00

Lapis Aoki wrote:
Chewin has been active for 11 days </3
Also.. I finally got Akaza Akari nendoroid ~ o3o

Good luck with rank ~ <33

Yeah, he sent me a forum PM 3 days ago saying he has been on vacation, and that he was going to try to mod the map that day since he was leaving again the enxt day, but I guess he couldn't get to it. so we just have to wait now. I am just happy knowing that a BAT will eventually take a serious look at the map.

also, i am super jealous of that akari nendoroid

Chewin

osu! Alumni

4,082 posts

Joined December 2010

Chewin 2014-08-21T20:19:51+00:00

Hello!
Finally, I'm here! I'm really sorry you waited for a so long time. I really didn't have computer because I was not at home. But well, I didn't forget it. Here's my mod for you (:

General Stuff

01:15:768 Remove this useless red line
The Tag must be No_Dap, remove the "No Dap"

No Dap's Easy

00:23:876 (1) - This slider is actually placed out of the screen. Care. Try to move the whole 00:22:903 (2,3,1) pattern some grid left-up to fix that. It's unrankable D:
00:40:092 (2) - You can listen that the long vocal starts from 00:40:579. Considering this I will apply this other rhythm that would fill the vocal much better: http://puu.sh/b28RB.jpg
00:45:281 (2,3) - Same here
Very cool map

Normal

00:34:254 (1) - First of all you need to increase the volume of this green line till 50% at least. It's too silenced. Second this spinner is too long and actually the next element 00:36:849 (1) is placed too early after it and, being just a Normal diff, this is not really appriopriated. I'd suggest to apply this rhythm: http://puu.sh/b2a8S.jpg
00:56:146 (3) - This circle makes everything too hard. Just remove it pls and maybe add new combo on 00:56:308 (4) - new rhythm

Hard

00:01:660 (5) - New Combo, too long actually
00:03:119 (11) - Add New Combo, and remove from 00:03:606 (1)
00:04:254 (4) - New combo here
00:51:119 (1) - To keep the same spacing of the previous elements move this circle a bit further from previous slider. It would make the flow better
01:22:064 (4) - Do the same thing here and on the next elements as well like I have always said for the first part before
01:32:766 (1) - This spinner should start 1/2 later on the white tick

Akariiin!

00:02:795 (4) - Try to stack this better
00:07:660 (3,4) - These two sliders flow bad IMO. What about copying 00:07:011 (1,2) and pastying them in this way? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1951592 More enjoyable to play in my honest opinion :3
00:20:633 (3,4) - I think these two slider are actually bad readable. What about moving them in this other way? Would make it easier to read: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1951606 Much better, honestly ><
00:25:822 (3,4) - I'd fix this one as well, still for the same reason. Try to find a new way by yourself imitating the suggestion before :3
00:29:389 (2,4) - CTRL + G them for a better flow? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1951615
00:32:308 (3,4) - Change them in this way: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1951622 it would make have the 00:32:146 (2,3) the same flow of 00:33:443 (6,7)
00:33:930 (8,1) - Pls no, this jump is pretty confusing and bad to play. This big spacing is not needed imo, maybe yes for the faster rhyhm ok but please, reduce it a bit and place them with having a better gameplay flow. Ther next 00:55:011 (1) is much better with playing! Fun and flowing.
00:50:470 (3,4) - Still unnecessary jump
00:58:417 (6,7) - Switch them for a better gameplay: http://puu.sh/b2cxO.jpg
01:01:335 (1,2) - Still a suggestion for a better flow during gameplay: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1951642
01:10:903 (2,3,4) - I'm not sure about this pattern. It has a bad flow in playing. Actually I don't have idea for it sorry çç but you can try to find something else by yourself ;3
01:14:795 (2) - Give this slider the same curve of previous ones
01:28:712 (5) - First of all set NC here. Still, bad slider there, move it: http://puu.sh/b2d9j.jpg copying the previous (3). Don't forget to remove nc from 01:29:037 (1) -
01:29:523 (1) - Applying previous you don't need new combo here
01:32:280 (6,7) - You could restart the star pattern here, stacking the (6) with (1) and (7) with (2)
01:32:766 (1) - 1/2 later

The gameplay of the last diff is a bit meh, I wanna recheck this after my changes and see if it gets some improvements.
If yes I'm going to finally bubby this.

Setz

1,419 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Setz 2014-08-21T22:41:50+00:00

Chewin wrote:
Hello!
Finally, I'm here! I'm really sorry you waited for a so long time. I really didn't have computer because I was not at home. But well, I didn't forget it. Here's my mod for you (: No problem, I was just happy enough knowing I would finally get a BAT mod, thank you very much for your time, I know the m4m I did with you wasnt too useful to you, so I really appreciate this.

General Stuff
01:15:768 Remove this useless red line I am not sure about this, I had charles time the song for me ,and he suggested i should have that line there with the BPM change. He posted in the first page, if you need reference.
The Tag must be No_Dap, remove the "No Dap" Done.

Normal
00:34:254 (1) - First of all you need to increase the volume of this green line till 50% at least. It's too silenced. Second this spinner is too long and actually the next element 00:36:849 (1) is placed too early after it and, being just a Normal diff, this is not really appriopriated. I'd suggest to apply this rhythm: http://puu.sh/b2a8S.jpg Done.
00:56:146 (3) - This circle makes everything too hard. Just remove it pls and maybe add new combo on 00:56:308 (4) - new rhythm Done.

Hard
00:01:660 (5) - New Combo, too long actually
00:03:119 (11) - Add New Combo, and remove from 00:03:606 (1)
00:04:254 (4) - New combo here
00:51:119 (1) - To keep the same spacing of the previous elements move this circle a bit further from previous slider. It would make the flow better
01:22:064 (4) - Do the same thing here and on the next elements as well like I have always said for the first part before
01:32:766 (1) - This spinner should start 1/2 later on the white tick Done for everything in this diff.

Akariiin!
00:02:795 (4) - Try to stack this better Done.
00:07:660 (3,4) - These two sliders flow bad IMO. What about copying 00:07:011 (1,2) and pastying them in this way? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1951592 More enjoyable to play in my honest opinion :3 Done.
00:20:633 (3,4) - I think these two slider are actually bad readable. What about moving them in this other way? Would make it easier to read: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1951606 Much better, honestly >< Done, it plays better now actually, very good suggestion
00:25:822 (3,4) - I'd fix this one as well, still for the same reason. Try to find a new way by yourself imitating the suggestion before :3 Done, did somehting similar following your previous suggestion.
00:29:389 (2,4) - CTRL + G them for a better flow? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1951615 Done.
00:32:308 (3,4) - Change them in this way: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1951622 it would make have the 00:32:146 (2,3) the same flow of 00:33:443 (6,7) Done.
00:33:930 (8,1) - Pls no, this jump is pretty confusing and bad to play. This big spacing is not needed imo, maybe yes for the faster rhyhm ok but please, reduce it a bit and place them with having a better gameplay flow. Ther next 00:55:011 (1) is much better with playing! Fun and flowing. Changed this whole section, I think it flows better now. hopefully.
00:50:470 (3,4) - Still unnecessary jump Fixed.
00:58:417 (6,7) - Switch them for a better gameplay: http://puu.sh/b2cxO.jpg I ended up changing this whole pattern entirely. I think this plays better, and isnt so so similar to the pattern after this when the music repeats.
01:01:335 (1,2) - Still a suggestion for a better flow during gameplay: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1951642 Done.
01:10:903 (2,3,4) - I'm not sure about this pattern. It has a bad flow in playing. Actually I don't have idea for it sorry çç but you can try to find something else by yourself ;3 I ended up just making regular circular flow here. got rid of the jump.
01:14:795 (2) - Give this slider the same curve of previous ones This is already the case... 01:14:795 (2) - is a copy paste of 01:14:470 (1) -
01:28:712 (5) - First of all set NC here. Still, bad slider there, move it: http://puu.sh/b2d9j.jpg copying the previous (3). Don't forget to remove nc from 01:29:037 (1) - Done.
01:29:523 (1) - Applying previous you don't need new combo here Done.
01:32:280 (6,7) - You could restart the star pattern here, stacking the (6) with (1) and (7) with (2) Done.
01:32:766 (1) - 1/2 later Done.

I hope the changes made to the highest diff are to your liking. I have to wait till I can tell no dap about the mod, so all changes are updated for all the diffs except his easy.

Chewin

osu! Alumni

4,082 posts

Joined December 2010

Chewin 2014-08-21T22:56:29+00:00

didn't notice the bpm change on the red line soz

Ozato Fumika

Beatmap Nominator

3,379 posts

Joined July 2013

Ozato Fumika 2014-08-22T01:24:40+00:00

fixed everything. Thanks

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Setz

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Topic Starter

Setz 2014-08-22T02:31:05+00:00

updated with No Dap's changes.

Chewin

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Chewin 2014-08-23T11:44:50+00:00

akarin:

00:32:308 (3) - you said fixed but you didn't
00:45:930 (1,3) - To have a better gameplay move the (1) some grid up and blanket the 00:46:578 (3) - with it: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1957074 much cooler
00:50:470 (3,4) - you said fixed but you didn't, move them in this way: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1957077 (you need it because all this low part has been mapped with a costant spacing, I don't see reason to put that jump there)

wow this map got a lot of improvements with those changes (: good job.

That's it. I hope my mod and this recheck have been helpful to you (: Send me PM when you have fixed.

Setz

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Setz 2014-08-23T17:55:30+00:00

Chewin wrote:
akarin:

00:32:308 (3) - you said fixed but you didn't Didn't realize you told me to ctrl+g the 3 as well ,sorry, fixed.
00:45:930 (1,3) - To have a better gameplay move the (1) some grid up and blanket the 00:46:578 (3) - with it: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1957074 much cooler Done.
00:50:470 (3,4) - you said fixed but you didn't, move them in this way: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1957077 (you need it because all this low part has been mapped with a costant spacing, I don't see reason to put that jump there) I thought you meant to get rid of the jump between 4 and 5. fixed now.

wow this map got a lot of improvements with those changes (: good job.

That's it. I hope my mod and this recheck have been helpful to you (: Send me PM when you have fixed.

thank you very much for your help chewin

I sent you a PM.

Chewin

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Chewin 2014-08-24T00:06:04+00:00

Okay, good luck! Bubbie~

Lanturn

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Lanturn 2014-08-24T00:08:35+00:00

Go go go!

Toy

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Toy 2014-08-24T00:52:50+00:00

ITS ABOUT TIME SETZ

Setz

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Setz 2014-08-24T08:42:28+00:00

thanks guys, and toy, I worked my ass off to get this far. this one's been quite the struggle.

Midge

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Midge 2014-08-27T16:24:59+00:00

Fight me, setz. ;c

UnitedWeSin

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UnitedWeSin 2014-08-28T08:25:43+00:00

Hey.

Lots of improvement here. Just a few optional stuffs, no KD.

[Insane]

00:14:957 (8,9) - What do you think about Ctrl+G? Feels nicer to crisscross the square imo.
00:23:876 (3) - After a second look there I thought you might enjoy the way this plays if you turn it 90 degrees. I like the flow line to change on the slider. Up to you, try it out.
Example
00:58:741 (1) - It flows better at (181,86) tbh since it continues in the pattern from 00:58:092 (4,5,6,7). Maybe you can try it.
Example
00:59:876 (1,2) - Switch NC's? Like 01:10:092 (4,5).
01:11:714 (1) - Ctrl+G? So fun. ww
01:16:890 - Triplet totally isn't overmapped. ;_; It works really well as a reflection of the 01:06:524 (1) pattern as well. I was surprised you didn't take that suggestion lol. But yea totally up to you.
01:22:874 (3) - It needs moved down a bit so it's centered in between the other sliders. Maybe rotate it by -3 degrees as well.
Nazi

Placed at (215,314)

[Hard]

01:20:123 (2,3,4) - Didn't mention this before, but repeating sliders beginning in 1/2 (red tick) can be confusing to play. Here you can try this rhythm instead:
Example

I think it might be nicer to play for the Hard diff since the melody streaming doesn't start until 01:20:284 and it makes it so all the repeating sliders have the same number of repeats.

[Normal]

01:06:524 (5) - Seems like it would be better to have something hitting on the downbeat 01:06:687 since it's such an important beat, if it falls in the middle of the slider like this it can feel weak. Maybe you'd like to hit for the vocals at 01:06:524 but honestly the pattern can play better if you skip over that hit. Maybe try a more simple rhythm like this:
Example

This will have the weak beat 01:06:524 be in the middle of the slider instead of the strong downbeat.
Maybe if you don't like that you can try:
01:17:693 (1,2) - Switch NC is better here?

[No Dap's Easy]

00:48:524 (2,3) - Strange how there are no finishes on the heads of these slider when it's the exact same music as 00:27:768 (2,1). I guess I need an answer for that.
01:26:118 (1) - 1 grid left or rotate a bit? The blanket is kinda funky.

The map is really fun to play.

Let me know when you're ready.

Ozato Fumika

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Ozato Fumika 2014-08-28T15:10:49+00:00

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Setz

1,419 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Setz 2014-08-28T17:15:23+00:00

UnitedWeSin wrote:
Hey.
Lots of improvement here. Just a few optional stuffs, no KD.

[Insane]
00:14:957 (8,9) - What do you think about Ctrl+G? Feels nicer to crisscross the square imo. Done
00:23:876 (3) - After a second look there I thought you might enjoy the way this plays if you turn it 90 degrees. I like the flow line to change on the slider. Up to you, try it out.
Example

Done.
00:58:741 (1) - It flows better at (181,86) tbh since it continues in the pattern from 00:58:092 (4,5,6,7). Maybe you can try it.
Example
Done. I had to shift the following slider around some as a result, so please take a look at that and let me know if it is okay.
00:59:876 (1,2) - Switch NC's? Like 01:10:092 (4,5). Done.
01:11:714 (1) - Ctrl+G? So fun. ww Done
01:16:890 - Triplet totally isn't overmapped. ;_; It works really well as a reflection of the 01:06:524 (1) pattern as well. I was surprised you didn't take that suggestion lol. But yea totally up to you. after listening to this part again, this suggestion actually makes sense, lol I am sorry about before. changed.
01:22:874 (3) - It needs moved down a bit so it's centered in between the other sliders. Maybe rotate it by -3 degrees as well.
Nazi

Placed at (215,314)
Done.
[Hard]
01:20:123 (2,3,4) - Didn't mention this before, but repeating sliders beginning in 1/2 (red tick) can be confusing to play. Here you can try this rhythm instead:
Example

I think it might be nicer to play for the Hard diff since the melody streaming doesn't start until 01:20:284 and it makes it so all the repeating sliders have the same number of repeats.
Done.
[Normal]
01:06:524 (5) - Seems like it would be better to have something hitting on the downbeat 01:06:687 since it's such an important beat, if it falls in the middle of the slider like this it can feel weak. Maybe you'd like to hit for the vocals at 01:06:524 but honestly the pattern can play better if you skip over that hit. Maybe try a more simple rhythm like this:
Example

This will have the weak beat 01:06:524 be in the middle of the slider instead of the strong downbeat.
Maybe if you don't like that you can try:
Took the first suggestion.
01:17:693 (1,2) - Switch NC is better here? Done.
The map is really fun to play.
Let me know when you're ready.

thank you very much again, very helpful, much like your previous mod. all changes are uploaded, and I pm'd you.

UnitedWeSin

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Joined July 2012

UnitedWeSin 2014-08-29T02:49:09+00:00

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00:59:552 (3,4,5,1) - Adjust a bit to maintain 00:59:227 (2,1) blanket? I thought it was important in the pattern:
Example

Don't worry about 00:59:714 (4) being stacked 01:00:524 (2) 's tail. Worry about flow first.

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01:20:284 (2,3,4) - I don't think you should do that. The way you did it is really difficult to read for a Hard diff since there is a large 1/4 jump between each slider, and it's not at all natural to click in 1/4(blue tick) at 01:20:526. Plays much more natural to have two 1/4 sliders with two repeats each, that way the player just clicks in 1/1(white ticks) and it's intuitive to play.

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