From my queue~
[General]
Tag conflict
Too much hitsounding in the kiai part, sorta noisy.
May consider a different whistle for sc1? current one doesn't fit well.
[Refrain]
Kiai is full of 3/4 rhythms so mapping with 1/2s might not be the best idea imo.
00:10:077 (4,5,1,2) - 5 is pretty confusing given that previous objects were following the vocal. Would recommend something like this:00:31:213 (2,3,4) - Doesn't stack well. Consider reducing the length of 2 to 1/2? Fits the instrument better.
00:35:963 (4,5) - triplet might be better here
00:34:713 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - suggesting this pattern 00:44:713 (3) - 1/2 slider might be better, vocal isn't dotted.
01:05:213 (1,2,3,4) - would suggest just following the vocal. this pattern is way too different from other parts of the map
01:17:213 (3) - vocal starts at the previous blue line so maybe a different pattern?
01:18:713 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - feels kinda weird when playing
01:26:713 - maybe a note here
01:28:713 (5,6,7,8) - suggesting jumps due to the drums and the loud vocal
01:30:213 (1,2,3,4) - don't like the stream, a slider might be better
01:32:713 (2,3,4,5,6) - suggesting this 01:34:463 (9,10,1) - following previous suggesting. 9 doesn't fit well as slider end don't match well against a strong beat. Suggesting this 01:36:713 (6,7) - following the vocal and make it one slider 01:39:213 (6) - similar. Don't like slider end for this strong beat
[Hard]
Same suggestion on rhymic variety. too much 1/2 spamming imo
00:15:434 (7) - make a proper blanket
00:35:213 (6,7) - ^
00:53:963 (5,1) - nc on 5
00:53:963 (5,1,2,3) - correct spacing
01:01:213 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:07:963 (1,2,3) - suggest equal spacing
01:11:213 (1,2,3,4,5) - suggest this 01:16:713 (2,3,4) - move 3 right to the blue line?
01:20:713 (1,2,3) - correct spacing
01:33:713 (8,1) - blanket issue
01:46:213 (2,3) - ^
02:00:463 (6,1) - ^
[Luxo's Normal]
Just a quick look and some nazi
1.8 SV may be too high for a normal
00:05:791 (2) - one more repeat might be better
00:10:077 (3) - ^
00:41:963 (3,4) - pattern may be confusing for new players
00:49:963 (3,4) - ^
01:25:963 - may add a note here
[TVO's Normal]
I'll be honest that I don't like inconsistent spacing in easy/normal. But seems it's just your style so, I will respect it ^ ^ (Still I would recommend that you keep other spacing constant) i.e. no 1.1x followed by a 1.3x. Other than that just some suggestions
00:09:005 (2,3,4) - spacing is off a bit
00:32:713 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - well won't recommend this. although you set new combos, still feel that equal spacing might be better, even for normal
00:40:713 (1,2,3,4) - fix the square ><
01:07:213 (2) - make it horizontal?
01:08:213 (3,4,1) - rotate this clockwise by a bit to flow better into the square
01:10:213 (4) - and this anticlockwise
01:22:213 (4,5,1) - and clockwise
01:29:088 (3,4,5) - suggest equal spacing
01:31:213 (2,3,4,1) - ^ and for 2 make a better blanket
01:32:713 (3) - curve downward instead of upward? looks nicer i think
01:36:713 (4) - rotate clockwise a bit
Love this song ^ ^ Good luck~
[General]
Tag conflict
Too much hitsounding in the kiai part, sorta noisy.
May consider a different whistle for sc1? current one doesn't fit well.
[Refrain]
Kiai is full of 3/4 rhythms so mapping with 1/2s might not be the best idea imo.
00:10:077 (4,5,1,2) - 5 is pretty confusing given that previous objects were following the vocal. Would recommend something like this:00:31:213 (2,3,4) - Doesn't stack well. Consider reducing the length of 2 to 1/2? Fits the instrument better.
00:35:963 (4,5) - triplet might be better here
00:34:713 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - suggesting this pattern 00:44:713 (3) - 1/2 slider might be better, vocal isn't dotted.
01:05:213 (1,2,3,4) - would suggest just following the vocal. this pattern is way too different from other parts of the map
01:17:213 (3) - vocal starts at the previous blue line so maybe a different pattern?
01:18:713 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - feels kinda weird when playing
01:26:713 - maybe a note here
01:28:713 (5,6,7,8) - suggesting jumps due to the drums and the loud vocal
01:30:213 (1,2,3,4) - don't like the stream, a slider might be better
01:32:713 (2,3,4,5,6) - suggesting this 01:34:463 (9,10,1) - following previous suggesting. 9 doesn't fit well as slider end don't match well against a strong beat. Suggesting this 01:36:713 (6,7) - following the vocal and make it one slider 01:39:213 (6) - similar. Don't like slider end for this strong beat
[Hard]
Same suggestion on rhymic variety. too much 1/2 spamming imo
00:15:434 (7) - make a proper blanket
00:35:213 (6,7) - ^
00:53:963 (5,1) - nc on 5
00:53:963 (5,1,2,3) - correct spacing
01:01:213 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:07:963 (1,2,3) - suggest equal spacing
01:11:213 (1,2,3,4,5) - suggest this 01:16:713 (2,3,4) - move 3 right to the blue line?
01:20:713 (1,2,3) - correct spacing
01:33:713 (8,1) - blanket issue
01:46:213 (2,3) - ^
02:00:463 (6,1) - ^
[Luxo's Normal]
Just a quick look and some nazi
1.8 SV may be too high for a normal
00:05:791 (2) - one more repeat might be better
00:10:077 (3) - ^
00:41:963 (3,4) - pattern may be confusing for new players
00:49:963 (3,4) - ^
01:25:963 - may add a note here
[TVO's Normal]
I'll be honest that I don't like inconsistent spacing in easy/normal. But seems it's just your style so, I will respect it ^ ^ (Still I would recommend that you keep other spacing constant) i.e. no 1.1x followed by a 1.3x. Other than that just some suggestions
00:09:005 (2,3,4) - spacing is off a bit
00:40:713 (1,2,3,4) - fix the square ><
01:07:213 (2) - make it horizontal?
01:08:213 (3,4,1) - rotate this clockwise by a bit to flow better into the square
01:10:213 (4) - and this anticlockwise
01:22:213 (4,5,1) - and clockwise
01:29:088 (3,4,5) - suggest equal spacing
01:31:213 (2,3,4,1) - ^ and for 2 make a better blanket
01:32:713 (3) - curve downward instead of upward? looks nicer i think
01:36:713 (4) - rotate clockwise a bit
Love this song ^ ^ Good luck~