right all updated~, that leaves... TheVileOne... I'll call him :3
Ethercastle wrote:
From my queue~
[General]
Tag conflict ?
Too much hitsounding in the kiai part, sorta noisy. I think it's okay
May consider a different whistle for sc1? current one doesn't fit well. out of ideas, any suggestions?
[Refrain]
Kiai is full of 3/4 rhythms so mapping with 1/2s might not be the best idea imo. Fixed the first kiai (2nd kiai already 3/4 notes)
00:10:077 (4,5,1,2) - 5 is pretty confusing given that previous objects were following the vocal. Would recommend something like this: No, sorry i like it this way00:31:213 (2,3,4) - Doesn't stack well. Consider reducing the length of 2 to 1/2? Fits the instrument better. Fixed
00:35:963 (4,5) - triplet might be better here Fixed
00:34:713 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - suggesting this pattern Fixed 00:44:713 (3) - 1/2 slider might be better, vocal isn't dotted. Fixed
01:05:213 (1,2,3,4) - would suggest just following the vocal. this pattern is way too different from other parts of the map Fixed
01:17:213 (3) - vocal starts at the previous blue line so maybe a different pattern? Fixed
01:18:713 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - feels kinda weird when playing Changed a little I guess
01:26:713 - maybe a note here Nope, I like it being empty
01:28:713 (5,6,7,8) - suggesting jumps due to the drums and the loud vocal Fixed
01:30:213 (1,2,3,4) - don't like the stream, a slider might be better Why? stream is just fine
01:32:713 (2,3,4,5,6) - suggesting this Fixed
01:34:463 (9,10,1) - following previous suggesting. 9 doesn't fit well as slider end don't match well against a strong beat. Suggesting this Fixed
01:36:713 (6,7) - following the vocal and make it one slider Fixed
01:39:213 (6) - similar. Don't like slider end for this strong beat No problem i think ?
tellertheworld wrote:
[Refrain]open00:24:610 (2) - try to put in 00:24:588 - Fixed
01:38:713 (5) - move note Y:+1 Fixed
not important
01:12:713 - slider here (2/4) Fixed
01:12:963 (1) - delete
01:13:088 (2) - ^
^ both of them changed into different patterns
good~ like it
01:26:963 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
(quick mod)
nice song and nothing important problem~
Good luck for you
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ok :3 and here's the code:Ethercastle wrote:
From my queue~
[Luxo's Normal]
Just a quick look and some nazi
1.8 SV may be too high for a normal maybe, but I think is ok also in this way
00:05:791 (2) - one more repeat might be better no
00:10:077 (3) - ^ ^
00:41:963 (3,4) - pattern may be confusing for new players I don't think so
00:49:963 (3,4) - ^ ok, here I changed
01:25:963 - may add a note here no there's no need of it
Love this song ^ ^ Good luck~
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312,256,33963,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,228,34213,2,0,P|392:300|288:344,1,180,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,256,35213,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,220,37213,5,8,0:0:0:0:
412,128,37713,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,308,38213,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,220,38713,2,0,P|200:220|168:248,2,90,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,308,39463,2,0,P|136:320|84:232,1,180
72,172,40213,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,52,40713,5,4,0:0:0:0:
336,176,41213,2,0,B|368:124|360:68|360:68|416:64|432:32,1,180,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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272,328,42713,2,0,B|232:348|184:332|184:332|136:348|92:328,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,252,43463,2,0,B|148:176|96:144|96:144|112:104|152:88,2,180,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,220,44713,5,0,0:0:0:0:
68,40,45213,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,100,45713,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,40,46213,1,8,0:0:0:0:
492,56,46463,2,0,B|464:136|388:128|388:128|388:184,1,180
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300,204,48963,5,0,0:0:0:0:
252,128,49213,2,0,B|160:128|160:128|136:80|84:76,1,180,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,24,49963,2,0,P|3:65|10:109,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,236,50713,2,0,P|164:288|284:304,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,228,51463,2,0,P|320:224|368:300,1,180
428,360,52213,1,8,0:0:0:0:
484,288,52463,1,0,0:0:0:0:
476,200,52713,5,0,0:0:0:0:
344,80,53213,2,0,L|252:80,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,192,53963,2,0,L|204:192,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,192,54463,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,180,54713,2,0,B|376:272|296:280|296:280|288:308|296:336,2,180,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,52,56213,2,0,L|256:152,2,90,8|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,148,57213,6,0,B|108:200|160:228|160:228|208:224|248:260,2,180,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,204,58463,2,0,P|68:264|112:292,1,90
136,348,58963,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,372,59213,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,348,59463,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,240,59963,2,0,P|468:192|452:140,2,90,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,192,60713,6,0,P|384:112|496:84,2,180,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,244,61963,2,0,L|196:244,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,192,62463,2,0,P|128:112|16:84,1,180
44,164,63213,2,0,L|200:56,2,180,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,332,64713,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,224,65213,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,332,65713,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,152,66213,2,0,P|376:108|332:80,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,168,66713,2,0,P|260:112|288:16,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,86,67463,2,0,L|152:116,1,180
76,132,68213,1,8,0:0:0:0:
164,288,68713,5,0,0:0:0:0:
344,288,69213,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,132,69713,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,88,70213,2,0,L|256:200,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,300,70963,2,0,L|124:208,2,90,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,352,71713,2,0,L|304:352,2,90,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,264,72463,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,196,72713,6,0,P|320:208|424:124,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,56,73713,2,0,P|184:24|96:80,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,112,74463,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,172,74713,2,0,B|160:208|216:192|216:192|224:240|268:260,2,180,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,104,75963,2,0,P|32:152|32:192,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,180,76713,6,0,B|268:184|268:80|372:60,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,216,77713,2,0,B|392:212|392:316|288:336,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,336,78463,2,0,L|128:336,1,90
224,180,79213,2,0,L|324:180,2,90,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,180,80213,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,60,80713,6,0,P|292:40|360:68,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,128,81463,2,0,P|352:148|468:124,1,180
508,52,82213,1,8,0:0:0:0:
460,224,82713,2,0,P|372:206|283:221,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,300,83463,2,0,P|180:316|60:300,1,180
16,228,84213,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,184,84713,6,0,P|244:132|316:200,2,180,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,352,86213,2,0,L|256:252,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,172,86713,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,88,86963,2,0,P|160:48|80:56,2,135,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,184,88088,2,0,B|124:240|124:240|72:260|64:316,1,135,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,328,88713,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,88838,12,4,90713,0:0:0:0:
432,72,91213,5,8,0:0:0:0:
284,172,91713,2,0,L|188:172,1,90
160,88,92213,2,0,L|60:88,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,172,92713,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,324,93213,1,8,0:0:0:0:
316,340,93713,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,336,93963,2,0,P|384:284|332:252,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,108,94713,6,0,B|256:160|204:172|204:172|188:224|112:236,2,180,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,80,95963,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,132,96213,2,0,P|56:168|48:208,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,276,96713,2,0,B|59:336|118:360|118:360|150:330|209:354,2,180,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,256,98213,2,0,L|328:256,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,204,98713,6,0,P|372:128|268:68,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,236,99713,2,0,P|236:320|348:360,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,276,100463,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,188,100713,2,0,B|298:163|298:163|274:161|274:161|268:136|268:136|240:134|240:134|234:109|234:109|206:111|206:111|204:86|204:86|180:88|180:88|180:88,2,180,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,204,101963,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,116,102213,2,0,P|456:136|480:192,2,90,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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260,204,103963,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,268,104213,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,104713,12,4,106713,0:0:0:0:
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84,112,108213,2,0,P|104:60|144:32,2,90,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,272,109213,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,272,109713,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,96,110213,2,0,P|256:88|192:104,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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344,172,111963,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,220,112213,2,0,P|448:272|444:320,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,288,112713,2,0,B|296:268|252:312|252:312|212:304|168:336,2,180,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,200,113963,2,0,P|280:204|232:224,2,90,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,136,114713,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,40,115213,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,136,115713,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,232,116213,2,0,L|256:124,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,96,116713,2,0,P|256:56|168:128,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,176,117463,2,0,P|92:128|92:80,1,90
256,172,118213,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,72,118713,5,0,0:0:0:0:
436,248,119213,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,232,119713,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,72,120213,1,8,0:0:0:0:
76,248,120713,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,120963,12,2,124213,0:0:0:0:
And once again, thanks.Ethercastle wrote:
[Hard]
Same suggestion on rhymic variety. too much 1/2 spamming imo
00:15:434 (7) - make a proper blanket
00:35:213 (6,7) - ^ Fixed
00:53:963 (5,1) - nc on 5 Fixed
00:53:963 (5,1,2,3) - correct spacing Fixed
01:01:213 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ Fixed
01:07:963 (1,2,3) - suggest equal spacing Fixed
01:11:213 (1,2,3,4,5) - suggest this Fixed 01:16:713 (2,3,4) - move 3 right to the blue line? Fixed
01:20:713 (1,2,3) - correct spacing Fixed
01:33:713 (8,1) - blanket issue
01:46:213 (2,3) - ^ Fixed
02:00:463 (6,1) - ^ Fixed
Other tweaks made.wcx19911123 wrote:
here's your ticket
[TVO's Normal]
00:33:713 (2,1) - hope you can try to make this jump much smaller or use normal spacing, this diff is near an usual Easy diff imo, the spacing is confusing for newbies to play Ichanged the pattern. There is still a 1.45x gap here. I feel there should be a gap because it's more visually appealing and the flow is better.
00:35:713 (2,1) - ^ Due to the previous pattern change, it's not 1.43.
00:37:713 (2,1) - ^ Eh I changed the pattern, but I don't think the distance snap changed much. In order to keep symmetry it needs to be spaced kind of wide. I'm open for suggestions though.
00:39:713 (2,1) - ^ My previous pattern change made this a normal spacing.
00:56:213 (3,4,1) - I strongly suggest you to change this pattern into a single repeat slider, the current one is too hard to play for this diff I strongly disagree. For what it is, I wanted these objects like this.
01:08:213 (3,4,1) - ^, there's some similar patterns after these 2, I won't repeat my suggestions but hope you to consider changing them
01:17:213 (2,3) - just please don't make such a huge jump in a Normal(well this's an Easy diff in my eye) diff, this is really hard to read/play I disagree. You would need to barely passing the map to not have enough momentum to get the cursor across the screen. I tried it. You would need to be hitting 50s at the speed it would take to miss hitting this. There's no objects in the way and the approach circles are clearly visible.
01:29:088 (3,4) - I suggest make them into a slider, cuz you didn't use any 1/4 rhythm before but here comes 1/4 note immediately.. the rhythm is hard to read ._. Bleh... You're asking me to change things I like about my map.
Ethercastle wrote:
From my queue~
[General]
[TVO's Normal]
I'll be honest that I don't like inconsistent spacing in easy/normal. But seems it's just your style so, I will respect it ^ ^ (Still I would recommend that you keep other spacing constant) i.e. no 1.1x followed by a 1.3x. Other than that just some suggestions A lot of the spacing is for symmetry and some is for flow. And really the default snap is 1.18 in my map. If there is 1.10 it's either because it's a mistake or I'm worried about breaking one of my patterns if I change it.
00:09:005 (2,3,4) - spacing is off a bit Fixed00:32:713 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - well won't recommend this. although you set new combos, still feel that equal spacing might be better, even for normalIt should be better now. The flow wants a larger space here. I don't feel like it should be the same spacing.
00:40:713 (1,2,3,4) - fix the square >< I think fixed. I had to adjust the spacing of the part after, because it brought the space too close
01:07:213 (2) - make it horizontal? That would interfere with the blanket.
01:08:213 (3,4,1) - rotate this clockwise by a bit to flow better into the square I don't feel like spending the time trying to do this. It's good enough the way it is.
01:10:213 (4) - and this anticlockwise
01:22:213 (4,5,1) - and clockwise No ^
01:29:088 (3,4,5) - suggest equal spacing Intentional. 4,5 doesn't need to be 1.18.
01:31:213 (2,3,4,1) - ^ and for 2 make a better blanket Tweaked. I don't really know how to make the blanket better, but I tried.
01:32:713 (3) - curve downward instead of upward? looks nicer i think I changed this.
01:36:713 (4) - rotate clockwise a bit Yes
Love this song ^ ^ Good luck~
^ did this[Cray_ wrote:
First i think you need to change the offset of 00:24:213 to 00:24:226 timing is much better this way
2014-08-20 19:39 Genocide: ayok ngemod
2014-08-20 19:39 gokugohan12468: oh...
2014-08-20 19:39 Genocide: 00:19:758 (1) - 00:22:110 (1) - jadiin satu aja ya spin nya
2014-08-20 19:39 gokugohan12468: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/313188 fripSide - endless memory ~refrain as Da Capo~ [Gohancide's Futsuu]]
2014-08-20 19:39 Genocide: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/313188 fripSide - endless memory ~refrain as Da Capo~ [Gohancide's Futsuu]]
2014-08-20 19:40 gokugohan12468: fine
2014-08-20 19:40 gokugohan12468: trus?
2014-08-20 19:40 Genocide: bentar
2014-08-20 19:41 Genocide: 00:46:463 (17) - hapus? agak kepanjangan
2014-08-20 19:41 Genocide: 00:52:213 (30,31) - ctrl + g
2014-08-20 19:41 gokugohan12468: okay
2014-08-20 19:42 gokugohan12468: fine
2014-08-20 19:42 Genocide: 01:15:713 (10) - apus? gk ada suaranya juga disana
2014-08-20 19:43 Genocide: 01:25:713 (34,37) - ctrl + g
2014-08-20 19:44 gokugohan12468: fine
2014-08-20 19:44 gokugohan12468: trus?
2014-08-20 19:45 Genocide: 01:53:463 (23) - delete
2014-08-20 19:45 Genocide: 01:54:713 (27) - D
2014-08-20 19:45 Genocide: suaranya keras dia
2014-08-20 19:45 gokugohan12468: big D?
2014-08-20 19:46 Genocide: iya big D
2014-08-20 19:46 Genocide: 01:55:713 (29) - kat
2014-08-20 19:46 Genocide: 01:56:963 (32) - pindahin ke 01:57:088 (32) -
2014-08-20 19:47 gokugohan12468: 01:55:963 itu boleh dak diadd kat?
2014-08-20 19:47 gokugohan12468: yg pindahkan, nope
2014-08-20 19:48 Genocide: 01:55:963 (30) - enak juga pake kat
2014-08-20 19:49 gokugohan12468: fine~
2014-08-20 19:49 Genocide: jadinya dari 01:55:713 ke 01:56:213 k k d
2014-08-20 19:49 Genocide: 01:55:713 (29) - ke 01:56:213 (31) - k k d
2014-08-20 19:50 gokugohan12468: nope
2014-08-20 19:50 Genocide: k d aja ?
2014-08-20 19:50 Genocide: loh?
2014-08-20 19:50 gokugohan12468: k k d saja
2014-08-20 19:50 gokugohan12468: sudah fine
2014-08-20 19:50 gokugohan12468: bagus
2014-08-20 19:50 Genocide: iya bener kkd napa nope :D
2014-08-20 19:51 gokugohan12468: dak jadi
2014-08-20 19:51 Genocide: XD
2014-08-20 19:51 gokugohan12468: ku pikir k d
2014-08-20 19:51 Genocide: ok waktunya mapping
2014-08-20 19:51 gokugohan12468: sudah?
2014-08-20 19:51 Genocide: sudah
2014-08-20 19:51 Genocide: saveloged!