Jerry why did you have to show me the lyrics
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Kantan]
00:40:965 (2,1,1) - Maybe change to d d k? Using the same pattern (d k d) 3 times while the song is not exactly the same feels weird D:
01:02:184 (1,2) - Change both of these to small k to follow 01:08:038 (1,2) (Also have cymbal but you used small notes :3) Also K K D 1/1 in Kantan is a little hard D:
01:08:038 - Delete this note maybe? You don't have a note at 02:08:404 and it makes the cymbal sound more obvious :33
A really relaxing map with many breaks for players to enjoy the music while playing, nice job here =w=b
[
Futsuu]
00:50:660 (6,7) - I notice that you only use 1/2 dd or kk, but dk fits drum sounds much much more and its still ok for futsuu so maybe change it to dk? (´・ω・`)
01:50:660 (3,4) - ^
02:13:160 (2,3,1,2,1) - two big notes inside 1/1 look strange ;w;
[
Muzu]
01:18:831 - I don't know what are you mapping this to. Maybe delete it? Mapping to a almost silent sound is a bad idea for relaxing part D:
01:24:684 - ^
02:18:831 - ^
01:47:001 - Maybe delete this note since this is the only note that has no drums in this kiai~
[
Oni]
00:36:026 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - ddddkkd sounds better orz
01:40:599 (1,2,3,1) - change to d kkd to maintain the current pattern you have here? nothing in the music has changed orz
[
Oni's
Jerry]
Map the whole song like all the other difficulties please, I don't see why not to.
00:21:940 - This note is pretty strange considering that all the similar notes to this like 00:19:013 and 00:16:087 are at the end of a 1/4 cluster but this doesn't, which is probably why you mapped it to a big note here and not the latter two. But if I'm a player I'll be like "Why the hell is this is a big note while the previous patterns which have the exact same melody isn't"
tl;dr make this a small kat for the sake of consistency
00:35:111 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,1,1,2,1,1,1,2,1) - wow this was totally expected
00:50:477 (1,2) - Maybe change both of these to kats since the only stuff audible here is teh piano and its pitch is pretty high here?
01:07:306 (2,3,4,5,1,2,1,1,1,2,1,1,1,2,3,4,1) - wow this was totally expected too
01:13:160 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - This is just no. Mapping a 1/3 stream while the whole song is in 1/2 and 1/4 is just baka mapping like what i do. Putting 1/3 here has nothing to do with the song and just makes the map harder for no support from the music, so please just change it to normal ddddkkkkd ;w;01:48:282 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - kkkkkkd gives people an impression that the song is going downwards (in pitch, mood, or whatever) but it isn't the case here so tbh it doesn't flow that well with the song ;w;
*ahem* i don't know what to suggest though *cough* #nubmodderThat's all I think...?
Sorry for the short mod but the set is pretty solid as it is now especially the lower difficulties, I really enjoyed playing them!
Good luck for rank!