lordraika wrote:

osuu~
random mod from nowhere, jst to check hows it goin'
since this song is simply beautiful~

Column |1-7|

Mod

[Hard]

00:05:243 (5243|4,5703|3,5856|4,6162|5,6315|4,7080|3) - move them 1 column to the left, since its not the same again with
00:02:794 (2794|4,3254|3,3407|4,3713|5,3866|4,4631|3) -

00:07:999 (7999|4) - might wnt to consider connecting this kind of LN

00:10:141 - this part deserve chord rather than this 00:09:988 (9988|4,9988|0) -

00:16:723 (16723|5) - THIS... should end at least from here 00:16:723 (16723|5) -

00:18:866 (18866|2) - also its better to remove this and leave this part blank...

00:19:937 (19937|4) - move to 3 , (really i dont feel like wnt to press this WHILE holding the essential LN )

00:22:386 - add 1 note at 1, no kick here~

00:23:917 (23917|4,24070|5) - swap their column

00:24:223 (24223|3) - end this on red line

00:28:050 - and 00:28:356 - deserve 1 note for the soft hat sound...

00:28:662 - add 1 more note at 4 (soft hat and soft key sound)

00:29:580 (29580|0,29580|4) - move to 2 and 6 only to 6

00:30:192 (30192|5) - end this at 00:30:805 -

00:32:794 (32794|3) - this one should absolutely start from 00:32:641 - remain, try to hear more carefully .. toeng~

00:39:529 (39529|2) - remove change to note.

00:39:376 (39376|4) - move to 6 , i suggest this >>> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1715358 Good Idea! re-arrange

00:41:672 (41672|2) - move to 5 remain, melody
00:52:080 (52080|4) - to 3

01:04:019 (64019|3) - end this at 01:04:478 - or extend it till 01:05:243 - re-arrange

01:22:692 (82692|1) - remove, the sound is not start from here... u Sureeeeeee ?~

02:01:570 (121570|3) - shouldnt this one at column 6? therefore u might wnt to make this into normal notes > 02:01:264 (121264|5) -

thts it for now

i jst hope other player can enjoy the rest of the pattern ( BGM violin, soft piano , hi hat , clap , beat ) all in one...
u should try to score S too... see if there are some parts tht is not enjoyable... if there are, then change it XD

Thts all...
good luck~ ^^

PROGUY wrote:

Hi there.
Here's my check as requested.

[General]
- Please check if you have the artist's actual name (in Japanese) for the Artist metadata. It's Hiroyuki Sawano, Because "Surname ~ Family Name" right ?
- Suggestion: It would've been awesome if you could use that video you linked for your mapset.

[Normal]
02:24:147 (144147|0) Move to 02:24:070 or 02:24:223. if I change this, it'll not fit with the kick o.o ...
02:56:213 (176213|0,176366|1) This part is very tricky to press for one hand in a Normal. I suggest moving either note to a column used by the right hand for balance.

[Hard]
00:45:657 (45657|2) AiMod said this isn't snapped.

lordraika wrote:

Yo,
I can help and will help u on tht video ( if you want to ) XD

ArcherLove wrote:

PROGUY wrote:

[General]
- Please check if you have the artist's actual name (in Japanese) for the Artist metadata. It's Hiroyuki Sawano, Because "Surname ~ Family Name" right ?

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Metadata
Eastern artists must be written in the proper 'surname firstname' format (e.g. Japanese/Chinese/Korean). For artists which have a preferred romanisation, use this one. If you're unsure of your artist's name, then check previously ranked maps, Google, Wikipedia, or ask a BAT for help.

PROGUY wrote:

Hi there.
Here's my check as requested.

[Eltie's Easy]
00:22:692 (22692|2) Move to 6th column. FIX
00:27:590 (27590|1) Move to 5th column. FIX
00:47:182 (47182|1) ^ FIX
01:53:458 (113458|3) Move to 3rd column. FIX
03:06:315 (186315|5) Move to 3rd or 5th column. FIX

PROGUY wrote:

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Metadata
Eastern artists must be written in the proper 'surname firstname' format (e.g. Japanese/Chinese/Korean). For artists which have a preferred romanisation, use this one. If you're unsure of your artist's name, then check previously ranked maps, Google, Wikipedia, or ask a BAT for help.

That, and you have to put the proper Japanese name in the Artist box (not Romanised Artist).

PROGUY wrote:

Okay, but you still haven't done what I've said regarding the Artist.

PROGUY wrote:

Found something on recheck.

[Hard]
00:18:713 Move the inherited point to 00:18:866 or remove it. This is because 00:18:866 (18866|2) looks weird in-game with the x0.7 speed change.
03:37:846 (217846|5) Move to 03:37:999.

PROGUY wrote:

Alright, this looks good for a bubble. Good luck!

ArcherLove wrote:

thanks !! you Aii- and ichia7x for testplay !!

and @ajee = okay kill me if you can :p