Yuutosan wrote:

Halo AL
maaf ya agak telat

[General]
Clean

[Elite Easy]
00:59:121 - add note . loud sound
01:08:917 (68917|4,69835|5) - move both ke kanan by 1?
01:28:815 (88815|3,88968|1) - ^ , picth 01:28:968 (88968|1) - sama kaya 01:28:509 (88509|2)
01:37:999 (97999|2,98764|1) - move both kekiri by 1.. open up pattern 01:38:764 (98764|1) - pitchnya sama kaya 01:40:448 (100448|0)
02:02:488 (122488|2) - move to 2
03:13:356 (193356|4,193815|6) - ctrl j (picth)
03:45:499 (225499|3) - lift up sampai 03:47:488 , agar konsisten dengan diff yang lain.

English please orz ...

[Normal]
00:55:448 (55448|3) - move ke 3 , clean patern
00:55:448 (55448|3) - kmu bisa tambah satu note lg, karena disana suaranya kuat bgt. saranku di 7
01:04:019 (64019|0,64019|3) - salah satu dari ini pindahin ke 01:04:631 . karena lbh cocok disana klo utk 2 noted. kaya ini 01:08:917 (68917|0,68917|4) -
01:13:815 (73815|0,73815|5) , etc biarin deh karena suara keras
01:25:448 (85448|5) - move to 7
01:30:805 (90805|5) - ^ clean pattern
01:41:366 (101366|2) - add note di 3 , suaranya kenceng
01:55:754 (115754|4) - move ke 6 ? lbh nyaman
02:30:346 (150346|4) - missing clap?
02:31:723 (151723|2) - remove clap. pindahin clapnya ksini 02:31:570 (151570|3)
03:37:692 (217692|2) - move ke 2

[Hard]
00:36:162 - add note di 3. sama kaya 00:36:468 (36468|6,36468|3) - ngga pas sama nada ~
00:59:121 - add note di 7 . suaranya kenceng
01:25:760 - add note di satu. loud sound , sama kya 01:25:448 (85448|4,85448|6) terus..
01:26:060 - add note di 3 . loud sound jg sama kaya sblmnya
02:24:147 (144147|0) - ??? . salah tempat? move ke 02:24:223 - play with 75% playback first pls~
02:48:866 (168866|5) - move ke 7
02:52:539 (172539|5) - move ke 7
02:58:968 (178968|3) - move ke 3
03:23:305 (203305|2,203917|2) - make these open up. move both to the left by 1
03:41:213 (221213|5) - move ke 7, avoiding note sblmnya. agar gk terlalu rapat
03:44:427 (224427|4,224886|3,225039|4,225346|5) - hmm. kayanya lebh bagus klo pkai normal note.. coba punyaku > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1650349 re-arrange

Ok that is all =w=b good luck ya

Yuutosan wrote:

Halo AL
maaf ya agak telat

[General]
Clean

[Elite Easy]
00:59:121 - add note . loud sound OK
01:08:917 (68917|4,69835|5) - move both ke kanan by 1?Nope =w=
01:28:815 (88815|3,88968|1) - ^ , picth 01:28:968 (88968|1) - sama kaya 01:28:509 (88509|2) OK
01:37:999 (97999|2,98764|1) - move both kekiri by 1.. open up pattern 01:38:764 (98764|1) - pitchnya sama kaya 01:40:448 (100448|0) OK
02:02:488 (122488|2) - move to 2 OK
03:13:356 (193356|4,193815|6) - ctrl j (picth) Nope I looked it for many times and it's the good one the 2nd sound is higher not lower
03:45:499 (225499|3) - lift up sampai 03:47:488 , agar konsisten dengan diff yang lain. OK
Edit :
sry i didnt realize that this diff isnt AL's. lolol.

Translated by AL

00:59:121 - add note . loud sound
01:08:917 (68917|4,69835|5) - move both to the right by 1?
01:28:815 (88815|3,88968|1) - ^ , picth 01:28:968 (88968|1) - it's the same like 01:28:509 (88509|2)
01:37:999 (97999|2,98764|1) - move both to the left by 1.. open up pattern 01:38:764 (98764|1) - pitch, same like 01:40:448 (100448|0)
02:02:488 (122488|2) - move to 2
03:13:356 (193356|4,193815|6) - ctrl j (picth)
03:45:499 (225499|3) - end it here -> 03:47:488 , for consistency with other diff.

THX for translate =w=b

mike91lau wrote:

BAT please ranked this map
i cannot wait -3-

ArcherLove wrote:

well ~ BATs really busy :3

NaxelCL wrote:

Mania mod! from my queue : t/211443

[General]
Cleaned.

[Normal]
00:22:846 - move to 5 Re-arrange
00:27:284 - move to 4 ^
00:27:590 - move to 7 not fit with music
00:42:437 - move the hold to 4
00:46:876 - move the hold to 6 or 00:47:335 move this hold to 7 I try to re-arrange it
00:49:631 - suggestion : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1661164 - more confortable to play Nice idea! but re-arrange it
00:52:846 - suggestion : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1661166 - same
00:56:366- move to 2 I'm trying to fit this note to the music ~
01:01:264 - suggestion : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1661168 - not need to add much LN in notes of not need LN. I'm sorry I have to reject this nice Idea too
01:06:162 - suggestion : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1661170 - same
01:08:917 - Eliminated one LN
01:11:366 - eliminated the note in 4 remain because fit the music ~
* think you need eliminated all ln double not recomended in normal , and one more thing not add notes in under of the LN or note normal but hey~ it's not Easy, but Normal :3 I'm sure this will be a good chart for normal~ but not the best!

Good Luck , like the other diffs , i'm check this NM , of i'm found seriously problems , recommended , reached more mods in NM.

GL!~~

Pew wrote:

Hihihihi

Hitsound mod ;-;

Easy

Not many notes so some stuff here will be different from the other 2 diff.

00:02:794 (2794|2) - Add whistle
00:17:488 (17488|2,18407|2) - Add whistle (consistent with the other 2 diff)
00:18:713 (18713|4) - Add Clap ^
00:22:386 (22386|1) - Add whistle
00:27:284 (27284|0) - Add whistle
00:29:733 (29733|3) - Add whistle (3 bass beats and you only had 2 whistles on it)
00:32:182 (32182|2) - Add whistle
00:36:774 (36774|5) - Change to whistle
00:37:080 (37080|5) - Add whistle
00:41:978 (41978|2) - Add whistle
00:46:876 (46876|0) - Add whistle
00:46:876 (46876|0) - Whistle or Clap here imo
01:12:590 (72590|4) - Add Whistle
01:14:733 (74733|1,75039|1) - Add Whistle
01:17:182 (77182|3) - Consistency with the previous set of 2 notes at ^
01:25:448 (85448|0) - Change to whistle for a smoother progression
01:57:897 (117897|5) - Add Whistle
03:05:243 (185243|5,185703|3,186162|6) - Add Whistle (Same as the other 2 diff)
03:07:692 (187692|2,188152|0,188611|4) - ^
03:10:141 (190141|1,190601|3,191060|6) - ^

Normal

00:02:182 (2182|4) - Add whistle, The first 3 melodic phrases are the same in rhythm but with slight descending pitches but the hitsound doesn't follow
00:02:794 (2794|5) - Add 1 note here and whistle hitsound. ^
00:07:080 (7080|4) - Add whistle. ^

00:07:692 (7692|1) - Add whistle, It doesn't make sense where a accented beat with no hitsound followed by hitsounded notes with weaker beats
00:11:978 (11978|4) - Add whistle, similar to the beginning hitsound patterns

00:12:590 (12590|5) - Add whistle. ^
00:14:427 (14427|4) - Add whistle ^
00:16:876 (16876|4) - Add whistle ^
00:17:488 (17488|1) - Add whistle ^

00:22:386 (22386|3) - Add whistle, Strong beat
00:27:284 (27284|3) - Add whistle. ^
00:32:182 (32182|3) - Add whistle ^

00:36:774 (36774|3) - Change to whistle, Beat isn't that strong to have a clap, also a smoother progression to the subsequent hitsounds in the next bar
00:37:080 (37080|3) - Add whistle, so it follows the progression made from the last whistle lol

00:41:978 (41978|3) - Add whistle, Strong beat
00:46:876 (46876|3) - Add whistle, ^
00:51:774 (51774|5) - Add whistle, ^
00:53:458 (53458|6) - Remove clap, weak beat
00:56:672 (56672|3) - Add whistle, strong beat

02:24:147 (144147|0) - Remove hitsound, subsequent beat is too strong for this finish
03:02:948 (182948|4) - Remove hitsound, Too strong here

03:05:243 (185243|5,185703|4,186162|6,187692|4,188152|3,188611|5,190141|3,190601|2,191060|4) - Reoccurring theme from the beginning so add whistle for all (similar to your beginning hitsound patterns)

Hard

If you agree with the hitsound mod i said in the normal difficulty then implement the same hitsound from normal into hard
So here's time reference if you need it (reasoning in normal)

00:02:182- Add whistle
00:02:794 - Add 1 note here and whistle hitsound
00:07:080 - Add whistle

00:07:692 - Add whistle
00:11:978 - Add whistle

00:12:590 - Add whistle
00:14:427 - Add whistle
00:16:876 - Add whistle
00:17:488 - Add whistle

00:22:386 - Add whistle
00:27:284 - Add whistle.
00:32:182 - Add whistle

00:36:774 - Change to whistle
00:37:080 - Add whistle

00:41:978 - Add whistle
00:46:876 - Add whistle
00:51:774 - Add whistle
00:53:458 - Remove clap
00:56:672 - Add whistle

02:24:147 - Remove
03:02:948 - Remove

03:05:243 - Add whistle

Pew wrote:

Hihihihi

Hitsound mod ;-;

Easy

Not many notes so some stuff here will be different from the other 2 diff.

00:02:794 (2794|2) - Add whistle
00:17:488 (17488|2,18407|2) - Add whistle (consistent with the other 2 diff)
00:18:713 (18713|4) - Add Clap ^
00:22:386 (22386|1) - Add whistle
00:27:284 (27284|0) - Add whistle
00:29:733 (29733|3) - Add whistle (3 bass beats and you only had 2 whistles on it)
00:32:182 (32182|2) - Add whistle
00:36:774 (36774|5) - Change to whistle
00:37:080 (37080|5) - Add whistle
00:41:978 (41978|2) - Add whistle
00:46:876 (46876|0) - Add whistle
00:46:876 (46876|0) - Whistle or Clap here imo
01:12:590 (72590|4) - Add Whistle
01:14:733 (74733|1,75039|1) - Add Whistle
01:17:182 (77182|3) - Consistency with the previous set of 2 notes at ^
01:25:448 (85448|0) - Change to whistle for a smoother progression
01:57:897 (117897|5) - Add Whistle
03:05:243 (185243|5,185703|3,186162|6) - Add Whistle (Same as the other 2 diff)
03:07:692 (187692|2,188152|0,188611|4) - ^
03:10:141 (190141|1,190601|3,191060|6) - ^

Normal

00:02:182 (2182|4) - Add whistle, The first 3 melodic phrases are the same in rhythm but with slight descending pitches but the hitsound doesn't follow
00:02:794 (2794|5) - Add 1 note here and whistle hitsound. ^
00:07:080 (7080|4) - Add whistle. ^

00:07:692 (7692|1) - Add whistle, It doesn't make sense where a accented beat with no hitsound followed by hitsounded notes with weaker beats
00:11:978 (11978|4) - Add whistle, similar to the beginning hitsound patterns

00:12:590 (12590|5) - Add whistle. ^
00:14:427 (14427|4) - Add whistle ^
00:16:876 (16876|4) - Add whistle ^
00:17:488 (17488|1) - Add whistle ^

00:22:386 (22386|3) - Add whistle, Strong beat
00:27:284 (27284|3) - Add whistle. ^
00:32:182 (32182|3) - Add whistle ^

00:36:774 (36774|3) - Change to whistle, Beat isn't that strong to have a clap, also a smoother progression to the subsequent hitsounds in the next bar
00:37:080 (37080|3) - Add whistle, so it follows the progression made from the last whistle lol

00:41:978 (41978|3) - Add whistle, Strong beat
00:46:876 (46876|3) - Add whistle, ^
00:51:774 (51774|5) - Add whistle, ^
00:53:458 (53458|6) - Remove clap, weak beat
00:56:672 (56672|3) - Add whistle, strong beat

02:24:147 (144147|0) - Remove hitsound, subsequent beat is too strong for this finish
03:02:948 (182948|4) - Remove hitsound, Too strong here

03:05:243 (185243|5,185703|4,186162|6,187692|4,188152|3,188611|5,190141|3,190601|2,191060|4) - Reoccurring theme from the beginning so add whistle for all (similar to your beginning hitsound patterns)

Hard

If you agree with the hitsound mod i said in the normal difficulty then implement the same hitsound from normal into hard
So here's time reference if you need it (reasoning in normal)

00:02:182- Add whistle
00:02:794 - Add 1 note here and whistle hitsound
00:07:080 - Add whistle

00:07:692 - Add whistle
00:11:978 - Add whistle

00:12:590 - Add whistle
00:14:427 - Add whistle
00:16:876 - Add whistle
00:17:488 - Add whistle

00:22:386 - Add whistle
00:27:284 - Add whistle.
00:32:182 - Add whistle

00:36:774 - Change to whistle
00:37:080 - Add whistle

00:41:978 - Add whistle
00:46:876 - Add whistle
00:51:774 - Add whistle
00:53:458 - Remove clap
00:56:672 - Add whistle

02:24:147 - Remove
03:02:948 - Remove

03:05:243 - Add whistle

lordraika wrote:

osuu~
random mod from nowhere, jst to check hows it goin'
since this song is simply beautiful~

Column |1-7|

Mod

[Hard]

00:05:243 (5243|4,5703|3,5856|4,6162|5,6315|4,7080|3) - move them 1 column to the left, since its not the same again with
00:02:794 (2794|4,3254|3,3407|4,3713|5,3866|4,4631|3) -

00:07:999 (7999|4) - might wnt to consider connecting this kind of LN

00:10:141 - this part deserve chord rather than this 00:09:988 (9988|4,9988|0) -

00:16:723 (16723|5) - THIS... should end at least from here 00:16:723 (16723|5) -

00:18:866 (18866|2) - also its better to remove this and leave this part blank...

00:19:937 (19937|4) - move to 3 , (really i dont feel like wnt to press this WHILE holding the essential LN )

00:22:386 - add 1 note at 1, no kick here~

00:23:917 (23917|4,24070|5) - swap their column

00:24:223 (24223|3) - end this on red line

00:28:050 - and 00:28:356 - deserve 1 note for the soft hat sound...

00:28:662 - add 1 more note at 4 (soft hat and soft key sound)

00:29:580 (29580|0,29580|4) - move to 2 and 6 only to 6

00:30:192 (30192|5) - end this at 00:30:805 -

00:32:794 (32794|3) - this one should absolutely start from 00:32:641 - remain, try to hear more carefully .. toeng~

00:39:529 (39529|2) - remove change to note.

00:39:376 (39376|4) - move to 6 , i suggest this >>> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1715358 Good Idea! re-arrange

00:41:672 (41672|2) - move to 5 remain, melody
00:52:080 (52080|4) - to 3

01:04:019 (64019|3) - end this at 01:04:478 - or extend it till 01:05:243 - re-arrange

01:22:692 (82692|1) - remove, the sound is not start from here... u Sureeeeeee ?~

02:01:570 (121570|3) - shouldnt this one at column 6? therefore u might wnt to make this into normal notes > 02:01:264 (121264|5) -

thts it for now

i jst hope other player can enjoy the rest of the pattern ( BGM violin, soft piano , hi hat , clap , beat ) all in one...
u should try to score S too... see if there are some parts tht is not enjoyable... if there are, then change it XD

Thts all...
good luck~ ^^

PROGUY wrote:

Hi there.
Here's my check as requested.

[General]
- Please check if you have the artist's actual name (in Japanese) for the Artist metadata. It's Hiroyuki Sawano, Because "Surname ~ Family Name" right ?
- Suggestion: It would've been awesome if you could use that video you linked for your mapset.

[Normal]
02:24:147 (144147|0) Move to 02:24:070 or 02:24:223. if I change this, it'll not fit with the kick o.o ...
02:56:213 (176213|0,176366|1) This part is very tricky to press for one hand in a Normal. I suggest moving either note to a column used by the right hand for balance.

[Hard]
00:45:657 (45657|2) AiMod said this isn't snapped.

lordraika wrote:

Yo,
I can help and will help u on tht video ( if you want to ) XD

ArcherLove wrote:

PROGUY wrote:

[General]
- Please check if you have the artist's actual name (in Japanese) for the Artist metadata. It's Hiroyuki Sawano, Because "Surname ~ Family Name" right ?

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Metadata
Eastern artists must be written in the proper 'surname firstname' format (e.g. Japanese/Chinese/Korean). For artists which have a preferred romanisation, use this one. If you're unsure of your artist's name, then check previously ranked maps, Google, Wikipedia, or ask a BAT for help.

PROGUY wrote:

Hi there.
Here's my check as requested.

[Eltie's Easy]
00:22:692 (22692|2) Move to 6th column. FIX
00:27:590 (27590|1) Move to 5th column. FIX
00:47:182 (47182|1) ^ FIX
01:53:458 (113458|3) Move to 3rd column. FIX
03:06:315 (186315|5) Move to 3rd or 5th column. FIX

PROGUY wrote:

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Metadata
Eastern artists must be written in the proper 'surname firstname' format (e.g. Japanese/Chinese/Korean). For artists which have a preferred romanisation, use this one. If you're unsure of your artist's name, then check previously ranked maps, Google, Wikipedia, or ask a BAT for help.

That, and you have to put the proper Japanese name in the Artist box (not Romanised Artist).

PROGUY wrote:

Okay, but you still haven't done what I've said regarding the Artist.

PROGUY wrote:

Found something on recheck.

[Hard]
00:18:713 Move the inherited point to 00:18:866 or remove it. This is because 00:18:866 (18866|2) looks weird in-game with the x0.7 speed change.
03:37:846 (217846|5) Move to 03:37:999.

PROGUY wrote:

Alright, this looks good for a bubble. Good luck!

ArcherLove wrote:

thanks !! you Aii- and ichia7x for testplay !!

and @ajee = okay kill me if you can :p