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Kyouren

Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2014-06-23T04:02:35+00:00

Fixed -Famous- and -Bakari-'s Mod

Here my Part!
Enjoy playing it~

352,88,101795,5,4,0:0:0:0:
148,88,102740,1,4,0:0:0:0:
352,88,103212,1,4,0:0:0:0:
148,88,103685,1,4,0:0:0:0:
36,132,103921,6,2,P|84:172|136:168,1,80
188,252,104393,2,0,P|196:192|172:152,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,72,104866,2,0,L|368:72,1,80
344,192,105338,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,192,105575,2,0,P|431:213|346:244,2,240,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,196,107228,5,0,0:0:0:0:
224,196,107464,2,0,L|188:88,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,196,107937,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,196,108173,2,0,L|196:104,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,168,108645,6,0,P|72:240|136:308,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,320,109354,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,320,109590,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,312,109826,2,0,P|408:251|388:177,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,112,110535,6,0,P|212:80|120:120,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,220,111244,2,0,L|104:332,2,80,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,232,111952,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,220,112189,2,0,L|448:304,2,80,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,108,112897,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,76,113134,2,0,P|152:44|60:84,2,160,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,156,114315,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,244,114551,2,0,L|384:320,3,40,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,108,115260,5,8,0:0:0:0:
436,108,115496,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,60,115732,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,60,115968,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,180,116204,5,8,0:0:0:0:
332,180,116441,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,120,116677,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,120,116913,2,8,P|148:112|72:244,2,240,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,192,118567,5,8,0:0:0:0:
200,192,118803,2,8,L|260:256,1,80
376,256,119275,2,8,L|430:197,1,80
376,92,119748,2,8,P|308:76|212:92,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,140,120456,1,8,0:0:0:0:
36,236,120693,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,308,120929,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,220,121165,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,140,121401,6,0,P|140:112|192:104,1,80
300,104,121874,2,0,P|338:113|366:141,1,80
256,192,122346,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,122582,2,0,L|256:284,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,308,123055,2,0,P|92:284|100:172,2,160,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,288,124236,1,4,0:0:0:0:
380,288,124472,1,4,0:0:0:0:
260,288,124708,1,4,0:0:0:0:
380,288,124945,1,4,0:0:0:0:
372,168,125181,6,0,P|336:136|276:132,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,132,125653,2,0,B|140:128|96:72|96:72|96:228,2,240,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,136,127307,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,136,127543,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,136,127779,6,8,L|360:108,2,80,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,244,128488,2,8,P|128:240|104:220,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,176,128960,2,8,L|24:88,1,80
108,80,129433,1,8,0:0:0:0:
108,80,129669,5,8,0:0:0:0:
224,112,129905,1,8,0:0:0:0:
136,196,130141,2,4,L|96:288,2,80,8|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,112,130850,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,80,131086,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,112,131323,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,184,131559,6,0,P|376:192|464:124,2,160,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,224,132740,2,0,P|144:244|100:344,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,240,133449,1,0,0:0:0:0:
12,240,133685,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,128,133921,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,128,134157,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,124,134393,6,0,P|192:64|224:44,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,64,134866,2,0,B|344:144|308:176|308:176|356:240,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,212,135575,2,0,B|236:179|236:179|200:147|220:67,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,72,136283,2,0,P|88:132|56:164,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,311,136756,2,0,P|96:272|77:237,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,232,137228,2,0,L|240:256,2,40,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,332,137700,6,0,P|300:336|400:284,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,172,138409,2,0,P|416:116|328:52,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,96,139118,2,0,L|144:144,3,80,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,252,140063,2,0,P|152:332|224:352,2,160,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,228,141244,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,228,141480,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,228,141716,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,112,141952,2,0,L|364:40,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,56,142425,6,0,P|492:152|404:348,1,320,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,336,143606,2,0,L|192:288,1,80
224,180,144078,2,0,P|192:96|176:88,1,80
84,108,144551,2,0,P|88:180|116:200,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,284,145023,2,0,L|224:360,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,320,145496,6,0,P|392:280|400:256,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,160,145968,2,0,P|376:100|352:88,1,80
248,76,146441,2,0,P|192:92|176:136,1,80
116,208,146913,2,0,P|64:136|68:120,2,80,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,308,147622,2,0,L|264:352,3,80,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,352,148567,2,0,L|460:308,3,80,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,196,149512,2,0,L|372:120,3,80,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,124,150456,2,0,L|196:192,3,80,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,200,151401,6,0,P|64:52|160:96,1,320,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,168,152582,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,136,152819,2,0,P|280:284|184:240,1,320,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,168,154000,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,168,154236,2,0,P|136:144|16:164,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,276,154945,6,0,L|84:368,1,80
148,256,155417,2,0,B|216:352|216:352|296:248,1,240
408,276,156362,2,0,L|344:360,2,80,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,160,157071,2,0,L|344:80,2,80,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,192,157779,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,192,158015,2,0,P|140:176|104:68,2,160,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,244,159197,2,0,P|232:273|207:346,2,160,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,152,160378,6,8,P|344:112|212:104,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,152,161086,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,152,161323,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,152,161559,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,268,161795,2,8,P|212:256|328:328,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,288,162504,2,8,L|440:184,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,92,162976,2,8,P|352:72|240:128,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,128,163685,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,128,163921,1,8,0:0:0:0:
76,228,164157,6,4,P|144:256|252:212,1,160,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,204,164866,2,0,P|364:144|388:120,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,136,165338,2,0,B|504:204|436:288|436:288|400:360|436:360,2,240,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,64,166992,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,64,167228,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,88,167464,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,88,167700,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,152,167937,6,0,P|104:124|88:32,2,160,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,240,169118,2,0,L|312:320,1,80
416,264,169590,2,0,B|400:180|456:104|456:104|284:104,1,320,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,120,170771,2,0,P|88:152|80:212,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,312,171480,2,0,B|160:352|264:312|264:312|344:316,1,240,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,208,172425,6,0,L|408:92,1,80
288,92,172897,2,0,P|212:80|144:152,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,152,173606,2,0,P|76:212|228:164,1,240,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,244,174551,2,0,L|408:272,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,176,175023,1,8,0:0:0:0:
476,176,175260,1,8,0:0:0:0:
476,176,175496,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,96,175732,6,0,P|304:56|232:76,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,120,176441,2,0,L|80:192,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,284,176913,2,0,P|188:308|300:248,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,272,177622,2,0,L|468:344,2,80,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,152,178330,2,0,P|368:100|268:96,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,172,179039,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,172,179275,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,172,179512,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,172,179748,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,280,179984,6,0,P|248:336|224:364,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,356,180456,2,0,L|24:312,1,80
96,248,180929,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,248,181165,6,0,P|60:204|120:44,2,240,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,156,182819,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,172,183055,2,0,L|368:224,1,80
392,104,183527,2,0,L|312:44,2,80,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,204,184236,2,0,P|464:248|448:308,1,80
356,344,184708,6,0,P|316:320|196:336,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,272,185417,2,0,L|88:168,1,80
200,144,185889,2,0,L|208:248,2,80,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,152,186598,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,186834,12,0,190614,0:0:0:0:

Good Luck~

Celizavia

568 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Celizavia 2014-06-26T05:15:11+00:00

thanks for -bakari- and -famous- mod!
fixed some of them, updated

wasonz

714 posts

Joined July 2013

wasonz 2014-06-30T14:37:37+00:00

From my queue

I don't skip anyone

btw

IZenxl's Muzu : by IZenxl
IZenxl's Oni : by IZenxl

edit to

lZenxl's Muzukashii : by lZenxl
lZenxl's Oni : by lZenxl

lZenxl's Muzu

Change Diff name to lZenxl's Muzukashii please ...

01:38:724 (140) - d
01:53:606 (181) - K

~~this mod break you pattern hahaha~~
01:53:606 (181) - kkk
02:32:582 (312) - k
02:32:700 (313) - add k

Great Muzukashii

lZenxl's Oni

00:12:031 (53,54,55,56,57) - dkkkd
00:19:708 (94,95,96,97,98,99) - My suggestion

00:27:267 (134,135,136,137,138,139,140,141) - My suggestion

00:46:519 (234) - K
00:53:015 (261,262,263,264,265,266,267,268) - My suggestion

01:38:488 (479,482) - k
01:38:488 (479,482) - kkk like muzu^
02:32:700 (730) - add k
03:10:378 (922) - D

Good luck !!

I like this song ~

- H i N a -

- H i N a - 2014-07-01T07:01:41+00:00

Hi! From my queue

Easy

00:33:291 (2,3) - Distance is unsnapped

Normal

00:37:071 (6) - Add NC

00:44:630 (6) - Add NC

00:44:630 (6) - Add note

01:51:717 (4) - Add NC

02:11:559 (4) - Add NC

I think you can add note in 02:13:449 to 02:13:921

02:44:157 (4) - Add NC

03:00:456 (5) - Add NC

Collab

00:23:842 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Distance is unsnapped

00:24:551 (3,4,5) - I think it's too diffcult for this diff. please make it easier

01:06:362 (4) - I think do like this is better

01:08:724 - add a note

01:54:551 (8) - I think do like this is better

Good Luck

Kyouren

5,583 posts

Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2014-07-01T08:26:30+00:00

No change, Thanks^^

Hegatrek

17 posts

Joined August 2013

Hegatrek 2014-07-01T15:44:40+00:00

Hi, from my modding queue, for M4M ( I mod first ) (t/221655)

Easy

It feels like normal

00:39:433 (1) - This is not okay, i failed this part when i tested her, and i don't hear anything that is in rythm with these 3 notes, plus it's a normal map, you should delete this combo

00:40:378 (4) - ^

00:57:386 (2) - Don't stick them together, space them a little

02:54:787 (3) - Delete

Normal

00:23:370 (3) - Move there 00:23:251

00:39:433 (1) - Delete

01:45:102 (3) - Don't stick them together, space them a little

02:01:874 - Add a note

02:03:291 - Delete

02:03:528 (2) - Don't stick them together, space them a little

There mate, hope it helped !

Celizavia

568 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Celizavia 2014-07-02T02:23:52+00:00

Hegatrek wrote:
Hi, from my modding queue, for M4M ( I mod first ) (t/221655)

Easy

It feels like normal i decided to make the diff not very easy tho, like a easy+ thingy

00:39:433 (1) - This is not okay, i failed this part when i tested her, and i don't hear anything that is in rythm with these 3 notes, plus it's a normal map, you should delete this combo fixed

00:40:378 (4) - ^ ^

00:57:386 (2) - Don't stick them together, space them a little

02:54:787 (3) - Delete

Normal

00:23:370 (3) - Move there 00:23:251

00:39:433 (1) - Delete

01:45:102 (3) - Don't stick them together, space them a little

02:01:874 - Add a note

02:03:291 - Delete

02:03:528 (2) - Don't stick them together, space them a little

There mate, hope it helped !

mostly fixed all, just lazy to put what fixed or not :p

- H i N a - wrote:
Hi! From my queue

Easy

00:33:291 (2,3) - Distance is unsnapped eh? its fine

Normal

00:37:071 (6) - Add NC

00:44:630 (6) - Add NC no~

00:44:630 (6) - Add note

01:51:717 (4) - Add NC

02:11:559 (4) - Add NC

I think you can add note in 02:13:449 to 02:13:921

02:44:157 (4) - Add NC

03:00:456 (5) - Add NC

Collab

00:23:842 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Distance is unsnapped

00:24:551 (3,4,5) - I think it's too diffcult for this diff. please make it easier i like the rhtym

01:06:362 (4) - I think do like this is better

01:08:724 - add a note

01:54:551 (8) - I think do like this is better

Good Luck

thanks for the mod!

[I]MMoRTal[S] wrote:
From my queue

I don't skip anyone

btw

IZenxl's Muzu : by IZenxl
IZenxl's Oni : by IZenxl

edit to

lZenxl's Muzukashii : by lZenxl why? its not a unrankable issue right?
lZenxl's Oni : by lZenxl

thanks for the mod !

Soldsaga KunG

282 posts

Joined May 2013

Soldsaga KunG 2014-07-02T13:22:24+00:00

Taiko Mod

d = don
D = Big Don
k = kat
K = Big Kat
> = change from

Futsuu

00:29:512 (63,64) - k
00:56:913 (136) - k
01:13:921 (181) and 01:14:393 (182) - > alternate
01:23:606 (210) - k
02:03:055 (312) and 02:03:527 (313) - > alternate
02:04:945 (318) - k
02:08:488 (328,329,330) - k
02:21:952 (364) and 02:22:425 (365) - > alternate
02:23:842 (370) and 02:24:197 (371) - > alternate

Good Luck

The Girls

128 posts

Joined August 2013

The Girls 2014-07-03T23:48:38+00:00

Hoi Hoi Hoi! Bow down to Nana

Have you considered naming your 3 Osu! levels, Raina, Lizzy and Nana? That would be adorable.

Easy

SPOILER

Perhaps, reduce the number of spinners. Spinners are actually one of the hardest to master and it certainly does beginners no justice if you have eight of them. An alternate is to decrease the overall difficulty even more, but that probably would be overkill.

00:41:795 (3) - Its spaced too close to the previous note, please consider distance snapping it farther.

00:43:212 (1, 2) - Same as above.

02:03:527 (2, 3, 4) - Hidden notes that follow a slider are usually difficult for a beginner to pick up on, especially if there is a rhythm to it---which is hard to predict. I would suggest just move the triple 1/2 notes right next to the sliders just so there is no confusion.

03:02:582 (3, 1) - The gap between the two is too large for the beatspace allowed. It would not abide time-space equality.

Normal

SPOILER

00:23:134 (2,3) - I feel like you would retain the melody better if you made the time between beats 2 and 3 1/4 note. That's how it is sung in the melody. Someone who has listened to this song a few times would most certainly intuitively hit 2 and 3 faster than what you have there. Of course make sure its spaced correctly if you choose to do so.

00:37:543 (3,1) - Nana holds the note on Beat 3 and there is no beat in the song that follows. For the song to seem consistent, consider removing the 3rd beat and making the next combo's Beat 1 start where the original 3rd beat was.

00:55:496 (2, 3, 4) - Try placing the 3 beats 3/8 of a Beat away from each other. It is more consistent with how its sung. I've included a image of what it should look like. Please look at all the other "Hoi hoi hoi" parts that have the same issue.

01:11:086 (4) - Reshape the random curve towards the beginning. You can try adding another point to the corner to create a linear slider.

01:41:795 (1, 2, 3, 4) - There should be a Beat between 1 and 2. Melody congruity with what Nana actually sings.

Collab

SPOILER

00:23:134 (8) - The slider length should be shortened to 1/8 length. Melody congruity to what Nana sings.

00:31:874 (1, 2, 3, 4) - I can't seem to figure out what base rhythm you are drawing from to beatmap this section. With a fast song like this, its best to stick to clear melodies or base beats in order to not confuse the player. Same thing happens again at 00:35:889

I'm having a lot of trouble seeing the time-space equality for this difficulty. Please try to use distance snap to aid for more consistency. What I'm talking about is that fact that 8th notes between these two sections have very difficult spaces between them. Example - 00:57:386 and 01:09:669

01:32:346 - I'm not sure about these shapes for rankability. If someone also mentions it, you should changing it, otherwise, forget what I said.

For collab difficulties, You should check out Three Magic - 3L // cRyo and see their storyboarding. They put background images for what does which map. I think that would be pretty cool.

Overall, I'm looking forward for you to make this map rankable

I love After School so much ^^ When I finish my Flashback maps Please come mod it :3

EXC4L1BUR123

15 posts

Joined April 2012

EXC4L1BUR123 2014-07-04T13:52:11+00:00

Excalibur Mod!

[General]

The spinners are a bit long, so make the slider length shorter and map the parts where the spinners were reduced.

[collab]

00:16:283 (1) - Move this slider down and make em look like this: (http://puu.sh/9WucX/e55a7d58f5.jpg)

00:18:645 (1,2,3,4) - Blanket them like these:(http://puu.sh/9WugZ/4a83f3eea0.jpg) * for 4:(http://puu.sh/9Wuj9/cea857c1a5.jpg)

00:25:496 - Add NC

00:29:984 - Remove NC

00:42:470 (1,2,3,4) - Make em look like this: (http://puu.sh/9WuvB/cbc1faa9cb.jpg)

00:51:716 (4) - Move 4 to down so that it would make a pattern like in the previous combo.

01:06:362 (4) - Change this:(http://puu.sh/9WuTp/766c104723.jpg) and make it a new combo

01:09:905 (2,4,6) - remove the sound addition(finish)

01:39:905 (5) - Do not stack this at the tail of the slider. Move it anywhere you want to.

01:47:937 (3,4) - ctrl+< and move it above the tail of the previous slider.

02:10:141 (3) - remove all of the sound addition(finish) in the slider.

02:59:039 (6,7,8,9) - scatter them around like this:(http://puu.sh/9WvUs/ec00642546.jpg)

How's my mod?

Good luck editing!

Kyouren

5,583 posts

Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2014-07-04T14:03:53+00:00

Hei, Celizavia^^

Can you change my part?

02:10:141 (3) - delete finsih~

Thanks^^

Celizavia

568 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Celizavia 2014-07-04T15:08:52+00:00

Hoi Hoi Hoi! Bow down to Nana

Have you considered naming your 3 Osu! levels, Raina, Lizzy and Nana? That would be adorable. but its kinda confusing for players tho imo

Easy

SPOILER

Perhaps, reduce the number of spinners. Spinners are actually one of the hardest to master and it certainly does beginners no justice if you have eight of them. An alternate is to decrease the overall difficulty even more, but that probably would be overkill. i just realized that xD well maybe my map can be the guide to new players to leard spinners lol.. fixed

00:41:795 (3) - Its spaced too close to the previous note, please consider distance snapping it farther.fixed

00:43:212 (1, 2) - Same as above. fixed

02:03:527 (2, 3, 4) - Hidden notes that follow a slider are usually difficult for a beginner to pick up on, especially if there is a rhythm to it---which is hard to predict. I would suggest just move the triple 1/2 notes right next to the sliders just so there is no confusion. fixed

03:02:582 (3, 1) - The gap between the two is too large for the beatspace allowed. It would not abide time-space equality. nah i dont think so

Normal

SPOILER

00:23:134 (2,3) - I feel like you would retain the melody better if you made the time between beats 2 and 3 1/4 note. That's how it is sung in the melody. Someone who has listened to this song a few times would most certainly intuitively hit 2 and 3 faster than what you have there. Of course make sure its spaced correctly if you choose to do so. fixed

00:37:543 (3,1) - Nana holds the note on Beat 3 and there is no beat in the song that follows. For the song to seem consistent, consider removing the 3rd beat and making the next combo's Beat 1 start where the original 3rd beat was.

00:55:496 (2, 3, 4) - Try placing the 3 beats 3/8 of a Beat away from each other. It is more consistent with how its sung. I've included a image of what it should look like. Please look at all the other "Hoi hoi hoi" parts that have the same issue.

01:11:086 (4) - Reshape the random curve towards the beginning. You can try adding another point to the corner to create a linear slider. i liked this lol

01:41:795 (1, 2, 3, 4) - There should be a Beat between 1 and 2. Melody congruity with what Nana actually sings.fixed

Collab

SPOILER

00:23:134 (8) - The slider length should be shortened to 1/8 length. Melody congruity to what Nana sings.

00:31:874 (1, 2, 3, 4) - I can't seem to figure out what base rhythm you are drawing from to beatmap this section. With a fast song like this, its best to stick to clear melodies or base beats in order to not confuse the player. Same thing happens again at 00:35:889

I'm having a lot of trouble seeing the time-space equality for this difficulty. Please try to use distance snap to aid for more consistency. What I'm talking about is that fact that 8th notes between these two sections have very difficult spaces between them. Example - 00:57:386 and 01:09:669

01:32:346 - I'm not sure about these shapes for rankability. If someone also mentions it, you should changing it, otherwise, forget what I said.

For collab difficulties, You should check out Three Magic - 3L // cRyo and see their storyboarding. They put background images for what does which map. I think that would be pretty cool.

Overall, I'm looking forward for you to make this map rankable

I love After School so much ^^ When I finish my Flashback maps Please come mod it :3

thanks for mod!

Excalibur Mod!

[General]

The spinners are a bit long, so make the slider length shorter and map the parts where the spinners were reduced.

[collab]

00:16:283 (1) - Move this slider down and make em look like this: (http://puu.sh/9WucX/e55a7d58f5.jpg)

00:18:645 (1,2,3,4) - Blanket them like these:(http://puu.sh/9WugZ/4a83f3eea0.jpg) * for 4:(http://puu.sh/9Wuj9/cea857c1a5.jpg)

00:25:496 - Add NC

00:29:984 - Remove NC

00:42:470 (1,2,3,4) - Make em look like this: (http://puu.sh/9WuvB/cbc1faa9cb.jpg)

00:51:716 (4) - Move 4 to down so that it would make a pattern like in the previous combo.

01:06:362 (4) - Change this:(http://puu.sh/9WuTp/766c104723.jpg) and make it a new combo

01:09:905 (2,4,6) - remove the sound addition(finish)

01:39:905 (5) - Do not stack this at the tail of the slider. Move it anywhere you want to.

01:47:937 (3,4) - ctrl+< and move it above the tail of the previous slider.

02:10:141 (3) - remove all of the sound addition(finish) in the slider.

02:59:039 (6,7,8,9) - scatter them around like this:(http://puu.sh/9WvUs/ec00642546.jpg)

How's my mod?

Good luck editing!

fixed few of it, thanks!

[-Sophie-]_old

[-Sophie-]_old 2014-07-05T07:22:24+00:00

[General]
I can't mod taiko, sozzle
[Easy]
00:19:826 - 00:20:299 - Fill in this gap
00:57:386 (2,3,4) - Sounds off
02:13:921 (3) - Sounds odd
[Normal]
00:17:937 (3) - Sounds off
00:21:008 (2) - Too long
00:56:441 - This is too long, the oi oi oi should match the notes like you have in others
[Collab]
00:18:409 - Add note here
00:42:740 (1,2,3,4) - Sounds off, maybe just slider no notes
01:54:315 (7) - Shouldn't lead up to the slider
03:05:889 - Remove that note and change slider EG ;

Enjoy! I snapped to this song ;D

Celizavia

568 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Celizavia 2014-07-05T09:52:07+00:00

[General]
I can't mod taiko, sozzle
[Easy]
00:19:826 - 00:20:299 - Fill in this gap nope
00:57:386 (2,3,4) - Sounds off fixed
02:13:921 (3) - Sounds odd nah
[Normal]
00:17:937 (3) - Sounds off nah
00:21:008 (2) - Too long nope
00:56:441 - This is too long, the oi oi oi should match the notes like you have in others fixed
[Collab]
00:18:409 - Add note here done
00:42:740 (1,2,3,4) - Sounds off, maybe just slider no notes this too
01:54:315 (7) - Shouldn't lead up to the slider
03:05:889 - Remove that note and change slider EG ;

Enjoy! I snapped to this song ;D

thanks for the mod, updated

Kyouren

5,583 posts

Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2014-07-05T10:49:05+00:00

Change~

Hai, Celizavia, Can you add this bookmarks:

SPOILER

Bookmarks:16283,16756,31874,61638,77228,92346,99905,101795,130141,142425,142543,145260,160378,164157,175496,186834,190614

Here my parts!
Enjoy playing it~

SPOILER

80,244,16283,6,0,P|120:128|144:128,1,160
168,88,17228,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,72,17464,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,72,17700,2,0,P|344:72|368:112,1,80
400,144,18173,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,264,18409,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,264,18645,6,0,P|312:304|280:296,2,80,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,208,19354,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,144,19590,2,0,P|256:160|256:200,1,80
248,248,20063,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,192,20535,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,320,21008,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,328,21244,2,0,P|312:344|352:336,2,80,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,320,21952,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,240,22189,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,156,22425,2,0,P|156:100|164:100,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,56,22897,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,96,23133,2,0,P|328:96|352:40,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,104,23842,6,0,L|448:196,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,292,24315,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,304,24551,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,244,24669,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,316,24787,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,276,25023,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,192,25260,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,112,25496,5,0,0:0:0:0:
240,76,25732,2,0,L|348:76,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,184,26204,2,0,P|216:240|304:192,1,320
296,72,27386,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,72,27622,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,80,28094,38,0,P|416:64|384:88,1,80
376,160,28567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,160,28803,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,240,29039,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,240,29157,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,240,29393,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,240,29512,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,160,29748,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,172,29984,2,0,P|148:144|96:52,3,160,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,76,31874,6,0,P|236:76|220:100,1,40
340,120,32346,2,8,P|364:112|372:96,2,40,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,184,32819,2,0,P|308:216|340:216,1,40
420,264,33291,2,8,P|444:256|452:240,2,40,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,212,33763,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,168,34236,6,2,B|336:128|336:128|208:128,1,160
144,128,35181,2,2,B|64:128|64:128|0:176,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,176,35889,1,0,0:0:0:0:
0,256,36126,2,0,P|0:280|32:296,1,40
120,248,36598,2,0,P|120:280|96:304,1,40
212,212,37071,6,0,P|216:152|232:144,2,80,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,112,38015,5,0,0:0:0:0:
407,80,38134,1,0,0:0:0:0:
430,47,38252,1,0,0:0:0:0:
469,58,38370,1,0,0:0:0:0:
469,98,38488,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,176,38724,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,176,38961,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,224,39669,6,0,P|192:256|232:232,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,152,40378,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,120,40850,2,0,P|104:168|104:264,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,344,41795,2,0,P|240:336|240:312,2,40,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,344,42267,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,224,42740,6,0,B|312:140|312:140|392:160,1,160
384,336,43685,2,0,B|464:352|464:352|496:280,1,160
320,40,44630,6,0,L|288:120,1,80
200,128,45102,2,0,L|160:48,1,80
72,56,45575,2,0,L|48:136,1,80
72,216,46047,2,0,P|104:224|96:264,1,80
32,328,46519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,328,46756,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,336,46992,6,8,L|256:328,1,40,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,280,47346,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,280,47464,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,208,47700,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,120,47937,6,0,P|272:112|272:104,1,40
136,80,48291,1,8,0:0:0:0:
136,80,48409,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,144,48645,1,8,0:0:0:0:
120,240,48882,6,0,P|120:200|96:248,2,120,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,240,49826,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,112,50063,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,136,50300,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,256,50771,6,8,L|376:248,1,40,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,200,51125,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,200,51243,1,8,0:0:0:0:
316,136,51479,1,8,0:0:0:0:
440,40,51716,6,0,P|392:32|392:24,1,40
248,40,52070,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,40,52188,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,40,52424,1,8,0:0:0:0:
120,136,52661,6,0,P|80:216|104:280,2,160,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,40,53842,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,40,54078,1,8,0:0:0:0:
488,256,54551,6,0,P|440:288|432:280,3,80,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,280,55496,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,280,55614,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,280,55850,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,280,55968,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,280,56204,1,8,0:0:0:0:
136,216,56441,6,0,P|176:184|216:192,3,80,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,57386,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,128,57504,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,128,57740,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,128,57858,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,128,58094,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,58330,12,0,61165,0:0:0:0:
88,80,61638,5,0,0:0:0:0:
88,80,61874,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,80,62110,2,8,P|256:80|280:128,2,80,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,168,62819,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,280,63055,2,8,P|192:304|152:288,2,80,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,264,63763,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,336,64000,6,0,P|-32:240|40:120,1,240
88,232,64945,2,0,P|152:144|96:16,1,240
112,28,65889,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,48,66362,2,0,L|392:88,4,40,0|0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,48,67071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,48,67307,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,240,67779,2,0,L|292:220,3,80,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,208,68724,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,208,68960,1,8,0:0:0:0:
60,208,69197,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,120,69669,5,4,0:0:0:0:
264,120,69905,1,4,0:0:0:0:
384,120,70141,2,12,P|432:120|456:168,2,80,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,208,70850,1,4,0:0:0:0:
424,320,71086,2,12,P|368:344|328:328,2,80,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,304,71794,1,4,0:0:0:0:
184,312,72031,2,0,P|120:296|104:256,2,80,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,192,72976,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,73449,12,0,77228,0:0:0:0:
320,136,92346,6,0,B|232:136|112:240|264:264|328:208|216:136|120:136,2,320,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,280,94708,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,280,94945,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,288,95417,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,288,95653,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,192,96126,6,0,P|292:112|228:200,1,320
60,188,97543,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,28,98015,2,0,B|264:152|264:152|260:156,1,160
84,196,98960,2,0,L|256:224,1,160
241,221,99905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,88,101795,5,4,0:0:0:0:
148,88,102740,1,4,0:0:0:0:
352,88,103212,1,4,0:0:0:0:
148,88,103685,1,4,0:0:0:0:
36,132,103921,6,2,P|84:172|136:168,1,80
188,252,104393,2,0,P|196:192|172:152,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,72,104866,2,0,L|368:72,1,80
344,192,105338,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,192,105575,2,0,P|431:213|346:244,2,240,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,196,107228,5,0,0:0:0:0:
224,196,107464,2,0,L|188:88,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,196,107937,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,196,108173,2,0,L|196:104,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,168,108645,6,0,P|72:240|136:308,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,320,109354,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,320,109590,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,312,109826,2,0,P|408:251|388:177,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,112,110535,6,0,P|212:80|120:120,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,220,111244,2,0,L|104:332,2,80,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,232,111952,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,220,112189,2,0,L|448:304,2,80,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,108,112897,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,76,113134,2,0,P|152:44|60:84,2,160,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,152,114315,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,244,114551,2,0,L|388:320,2,40,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
508,192,115023,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,112,115260,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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You parts and my part~

Celizavia

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Celizavia 2014-07-05T11:29:25+00:00

gokugohan12468 wrote:

Change~

Hai, Celizavia, Can you add this bookmarks:

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Bookmarks:16283,16756,31874,61638,77228,92346,99905,101795,130141,142425,142543,145260,160378,164157,175496,186834,190614

Here my parts!
Enjoy playing it~

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180,208,68724,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,208,68960,1,8,0:0:0:0:
60,208,69197,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,120,69669,5,4,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,73449,12,0,77228,0:0:0:0:
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352,88,103212,1,4,0:0:0:0:
148,88,103685,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,186834,12,0,190614,0:0:0:0:

You parts and my part~

thanks! updated

Famous

404 posts

Joined April 2011

Famous 2014-07-05T12:31:22+00:00

So... here we go again! xD

Easy

00:20:536 (1,3) - Overlap doesn't look really nice there. But I guess it's okay.

00:46:520 (3,1) - Wrong spacing.

00:55:732 (2) - I think you should move that slider a little bit more down, so easy player can read it better.

00:57:386 (2,3,4) - 1 circle and 1 reversed slider would fit better here.

Picutre

01:14:393 (2,3,4) - Replace it in a reversed slider.

01:32:346 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing is different, but I guess that's okay.

01:45:102 (4,5,6) - Reversed slider maybe?

02:55:496 (1,3) - Try to make them less overlap.

Normal

00:37:071 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Two options:

Picture

or

I recommend the second one, because it's a little bit easier.

01:11:087 (4) - That slider doesn't look nice. Try that.

Picture

02:05:417 (3,4,5) - Confusing.

Collab

00:24:551 (3,4,5) - It's STILL too confusing! I said that already the last time. You should stack these, it's too hard to read.

01:47:228 (1,2,3,4) - A little bit confusing. But I guess it's okay.

03:05:889 (3,1) - Picutre.

Picutre

I hope I could help you.

Kyouren

5,583 posts

Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2014-07-05T12:49:32+00:00

I see, but sorry~ (no change for me)

Gaia

2,808 posts

Joined May 2013

Gaia 2014-07-05T20:01:05+00:00

From my Queue & 'cuz you're awesome

[General]
Yeah forgive me for skipping all of taiko lmao. I played for fun tho? (and failed so miserably LOL)
You have a map skin... But it's the default osu skin? lol? (And it only applies to normal and collab, easy has no skin)

[Easy]
00:16:756 (1,2) - blanket this more?
00:29:984 (3) - I'd rotate this 180 degrees then Ctrl + G, so it goes more in a circle
00:31:874 - This is a down beat (start of a measure) I don't think you should ignore it
00:33:291 (2) - maybe (204, 220) so it connects smoother?
00:34:236 (3) - bad blanket? copy 00:33:291 (2) - and paste right there :p
00:48:882 (3) - Isn't parallel with the other 2 sliders
00:51:717 (2) - shift it down a lil bit?
00:55:732 (2) - I wouldn't even use 1/2 notes in Easys.. so yeah
00:57:386 (2,3,4) - Same as above
00:58:330 (1) - Might be just be but I feel this spinner is kinda random
01:03:527 (2,3) - Blanket?
01:14:393 (2,3,4) - from now on I won't talk about these 1/2 notes but yea I wouldn't use them
01:15:338 (5) - the reverse lands on a upbeat where the music doesn't really match imo
01:55:968 (2) - Blanket better
02:03:528 (2,3,4) - I wouldn't stack in an easy but up to u (not to mention the triplet)
02:05:417 (2,3,4) - ^
02:44:157 (1,2) - something like this maybe? http://puu.sh/9Y7i0/de8637c803.jpg
02:47:464 (4) - yeah I wouldn't stack ever in an easy
02:48:882 (2) - Blanket more?

[Normal]
00:50:771 (1) - stack better
00:55:496 (2,3,4) - should match 00:57:622 (2,3,4) - Take out or add another one (I'd take out so not overmapped)
02:05:180 (2,3,4,5) - spread them all out? It's pretty confusing the way you have it rn
02:47:464 (1,2) - I'd do this? http://puu.sh/9Y7XT/a2b74c5b49.jpg
03:06:362 (4,5) - blanket?

Personally I think notes placed awkwardly.. Maybe you could watch Auto-kun play and just listen to where you're putting your beats down? Well that's what I did for my map lol.

[Collab]
00:23:133 (8) - This should end on a blue tick o: Since this is supposed to be insane(I think?) you should follow the music more
00:24:787 (5,6) - The spacing between these 2 are the same between 00:24:669 (4,5) - even though they're 1/4 of a beat different (Misleading!)
00:29:039 (4,5,6,7) - tbh I don't think doubles suit the rhythm here
00:31:874 (1,2,3,4) - Sounds off too
00:36:126 (4,5) - ^
00:38:015 (1,2,3,4,5) - random stream imo, careful not to overmap
00:42:267 - if you really want a stream.. I'd say around here (The clapping in the background)
00:52:424 (4) - Follow your pattern.. Move this out?
00:55:496 (2,3,4,5) - again sounds off to me
01:04:000 (1,2) - blanket better
01:48:173 (4) - Don't stack 2 identical sliders together :]
01:50:535 (1,2) - blanket?
01:55:260 (1,2,3,4) - you had doubles before but now you've spread them all out nice and even, very misleading :] Besides, doubles fit music more
02:55:732 (1) - the *dooo doo? (lmao o-o) starts 1/2 a note before, so i'd start my slider there (and shift couple notes after too)
02:58:567 - The *nooon? (idk lol) sound starts here, so i'd change the slider into a circle to utilize that
03:00:456 (2) - a triple suits this slider more
03:06:834 (1) - I think you can do something a lot more exciting rather than this spinner

Again, listen to the rhythms, cuz I think it sounds kinda off (Auto-kun lol)

music lesson lol

Oh yeah, you said you wanted me to teach you on hitsounds right? lmao ok let me give you some suggestions (and a quick music lesson?)
In a measure there are 4 beats -> http://puu.sh/9Y9ZR/bdbf2901d8.jpg I want to focus on the 1st (big white tick) and the 2nd and the 4th
If you listen to the break time, so there's no hitsounds (looking at ur collab rn), what do you notice beside the vocals? The drums. You should really utilize the drums and they can make your map a lot more interesting . They hit every 2 and 4, so put a snare (or any drum) sound (i.e. http://puu.sh/9YatP/d7244c4f44.wav) everytime you hear the drums
The beginning of a measure is also important. It's usually a heavy note (one that's stressed/accented/special?) so you should really make it stand out! look around for cool hitsounds and plug in what you think would suit your song best!

Anyways that's all from me :] Good luck with your map!

p.s. is this korean? lol i can't tell at all LOL

Arlecchino

1,240 posts

Joined October 2013

Arlecchino 2014-07-05T22:50:33+00:00

Hi~
From my Queue

[General]
who's gokuhan ? you can remove it.. since there is gokugohan12468.. you can add gokuhan if
gokugohan have a ranked map and he change the username, so you can add new username and old username

remove widescreen etc since you dont have any SB
and try to use different combo color (cari yang beda warna dasar'a)

[Easy]
00:16:756 (1,2) - blanketing ?
00:20:536 (1,3) - overlapped
00:32:346 (1) - blanket properly
00:34:236 (3) - ^
00:36:126 (2) - ^
00:47:937 (2,3) - repaire the paralel
00:50:771 (1) - blanket can be improved
00:57:386 (2,3) - 1/2 slider.. it's easy diff
01:03:527 (2) - blanket properly
01:07:779 (2) - ^
01:07:779 (2,1) - overlapped
01:35:181 (6) - blanket can be improved
01:41:323 (2) - ^
01:49:354 (3,5) - overlapped
01:53:134 (1,1) - ^
02:06:362 (1) - blanket ?
02:12:504 (1) - blanketing here.. so isnt be overlapped
02:13:921 (3) - blanket properly
02:23:370 (5) - blanket can be improved
02:32:819 (1) - blanket properly,make slider more curved to blanket.. also in all part which like this
02:32:819 (1) - blanket can be improved
03:06:834 (1) - ^

[Normal]
Open AiMod check distance snap.. Fix it
00:16:283 (1,3) - overlapped
00:25:496 (3) - the tail overlapped with 00:23:842 (1) - it's not important but.. better you move it
01:46:047 (6) - blanket can be improved
01:46:992 (7,5) - overlapped
02:47:937 (3) - blanket properly
03:06:834 (5,6) - blanket properly

ahh.. sumaannne.. bored..
pass collab it's 3 minutes song.. i'm feel so sleepy cuz i'm modding at 05:00 am
abis sahur...
saran di normal mending banyakin 1/1 atau 1/2 slider.. terlalu banyak circle itu..
ya gk tau sih.. bagiku itu agak susah buat normal diff.. karna ini map anyar bukan map jadul xD
kalo map jadul kebanyakan circle semua

PS: good luck~ hope this helped..

chaee

chaee 2014-07-06T01:24:26+00:00

m4m From: chaee's queue [NM 4/4] Status: CLOSED

thanks for your mod

[Normal]

00:17:937 (3) - make this slider longer
00:18:645 (4) - replace with a straight slider
00:20:063 (1) - i think this curve here is too large.
00:21:008 (2) - add a note here and move 00:21:480 (2) - to the next white tick
00:25:496 (3) - too curved. straighten a bit maybe?
00:26:677 (5) - remove this note here
00:32:583 (2) - ^
00:37:543 (3) - remove this and move 00:37:780 (1) - in its place
00:44:630 (6,7) - fix blanket
00:50:771 (1) - stack with 00:48:882 (5) - 's head and curve more to compliment 00:51:716 (2) -
00:52:661 (3) - move this closer to 00:51:716 (2) - 's end
00:54:078 (4) - here feels empty add a note
00:58:094 (4) - remove
01:03:528 (4) - add a note and move slider down
01:07:307 (2) - ^
01:11:087 (4) - ^
01:20:299 (2) - remove
01:24:551 (6) - there shouldn't be a break here
01:39:905 (1,2,3,4) - you could replace these with smaller sliders..
01:44:157 (2) - move up
01:57:622 (4) - remove
01:58:331 (1) - add a note here and move everything else down some
02:01:874 (6) - remove
02:16:047 (3) - ^
02:23:370 (5) - slider should end here
02:33:055 (2) - remove
02:36:126 (1) - add a note here and move spinner down by one beat
02:47:464 (1,2,3) - fix blanket if note space out the notes
02:49:354 (4) - add a note and move slider down
02:51:244 (6) - there's a beat here add a note
02:58:803 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - these blankets are ugly please fix
03:04:945 (3) - stack on 03:04:000 (2) - 's head

Celizavia

568 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Celizavia 2014-07-06T10:01:22+00:00

chaee

chaee wrote:
m4m From: chaee's queue [NM 4/4] Status: CLOSED

thanks for your mod

[Normal]

00:17:937 (3) - make this slider longer nope
00:18:645 (4) - replace with a straight slider ^
00:20:063 (1) - i think this curve here is too large. fixed
00:21:008 (2) - add a note here and move 00:21:480 (2) - to the next white tick nope
00:25:496 (3) - too curved. straighten a bit maybe? fixed
00:26:677 (5) - remove this note here fixed
00:32:583 (2) - ^ nope
00:37:543 (3) - remove this and move 00:37:780 (1) - in its place fixed
00:44:630 (6,7) - fix blanket it just cant move ;-;
00:50:771 (1) - stack with 00:48:882 (5) - 's head and curve more to compliment 00:51:716 (2) - this is good
00:52:661 (3) - move this closer to 00:51:716 (2) - 's end fixed
00:54:078 (4) - here feels empty add a note fixed
00:58:094 (4) - remove nope
01:03:528 (4) - add a note and move slider down okay
01:07:307 (2) - ^ nah
01:11:087 (4) - ^ ^
01:20:299 (2) - remove ^
01:24:551 (6) - there shouldn't be a break here its okay tho
01:39:905 (1,2,3,4) - you could replace these with smaller sliders.. done
01:44:157 (2) - move up
01:57:622 (4) - remove
01:58:331 (1) - add a note here and move everything else down some
02:01:874 (6) - remove
02:16:047 (3) - ^
02:23:370 (5) - slider should end here
02:33:055 (2) - remove
02:36:126 (1) - add a note here and move spinner down by one beat
02:47:464 (1,2,3) - fix blanket if note space out the notes
02:49:354 (4) - add a note and move slider down
02:51:244 (6) - there's a beat here add a note
02:58:803 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - these blankets are ugly please fix not to me
03:04:945 (3) - stack on 03:04:000 (2) - 's head

fixed some, thanks

-[ Asuna ]-

-[ Asuna ]- wrote:
Hi~
From my Queue

[General]
who's gokuhan ? you can remove it.. since there is gokugohan12468.. you can add gokuhan if
gokugohan have a ranked map and he change the username, so you can add new username and old username well, gokugohan12468 itself that wanted to put the gokuhan into the tags

remove widescreen etc since you dont have any SB done
and try to use different combo color (cari yang beda warna dasar'a)i think its good now

[Easy]
00:16:756 (1,2) - blanketing ?
00:20:536 (1,3) - overlapped purposely
00:32:346 (1) - blanket properly
00:34:236 (3) - ^
00:36:126 (2) - ^
00:47:937 (2,3) - repaire the paralel
00:50:771 (1) - blanket can be improved
00:57:386 (2,3) - 1/2 slider.. it's easy diff
01:03:527 (2) - blanket properly
01:07:779 (2) - ^
01:07:779 (2,1) - overlapped
01:35:181 (6) - blanket can be improved
01:41:323 (2) - ^
01:49:354 (3,5) - overlapped
01:53:134 (1,1) - ^
02:06:362 (1) - blanket ?
02:12:504 (1) - blanketing here.. so isnt be overlapped
02:13:921 (3) - blanket properly
02:23:370 (5) - blanket can be improved
02:32:819 (1) - blanket properly,make slider more curved to blanket.. also in all part which like this
02:32:819 (1) - blanket can be improved
03:06:834 (1) - ^

[Normal]
Open AiMod check distance snap.. Fix it blame it on my editor </3
00:16:283 (1,3) - overlapped
00:25:496 (3) - the tail overlapped with 00:23:842 (1) - it's not important but.. better you move it
01:46:047 (6) - blanket can be improved fixed
01:46:992 (7,5) - overlapped ^
02:47:937 (3) - blanket properly ^
03:06:834 (5,6) - blanket properly

ahh.. sumaannne.. bored..
pass collab it's 3 minutes song.. i'm feel so sleepy cuz i'm modding at 05:00 am
abis sahur...
saran di normal mending banyakin 1/1 atau 1/2 slider.. terlalu banyak circle itu..
ya gk tau sih.. bagiku itu agak susah buat normal diff.. karna ini map anyar bukan map jadul xD
kalo map jadul kebanyakan circle semua

PS: good luck~ hope this helped..

yg aku ngga tandain artinya dah fixed, thanks ya

Gaia

Gaia wrote:
From my Queue & 'cuz you're awesome <333

[General]
Yeah forgive me for skipping all of taiko lmao. I played for fun tho? (and failed so miserably LOL) LOL ME TOO
You have a map skin... But it's the default osu skin? lol? (And it only applies to normal and collab, easy has no skin) deleted the skin becuz im bored lmao

[Easy]
00:16:756 (1,2) - blanket this more?
00:29:984 (3) - I'd rotate this 180 degrees then Ctrl + G, so it goes more in a circle
00:31:874 - This is a down beat (start of a measure) I don't think you should ignore it
00:33:291 (2) - maybe (204, 220) so it connects smoother?
00:34:236 (3) - bad blanket? copy 00:33:291 (2) - and paste right there :p
00:48:882 (3) - Isn't parallel with the other 2 sliders
00:51:717 (2) - shift it down a lil bit?
00:55:732 (2) - I wouldn't even use 1/2 notes in Easys.. so yeah
00:57:386 (2,3,4) - Same as above
00:58:330 (1) - Might be just be but I feel this spinner is kinda random
01:03:527 (2,3) - Blanket?
01:14:393 (2,3,4) - from now on I won't talk about these 1/2 notes but yea I wouldn't use them
01:15:338 (5) - the reverse lands on a upbeat where the music doesn't really match imo
01:55:968 (2) - Blanket better
02:03:528 (2,3,4) - I wouldn't stack in an easy but up to u (not to mention the triplet)
02:05:417 (2,3,4) - ^
02:44:157 (1,2) - something like this maybe? http://puu.sh/9Y7i0/de8637c803.jpg
02:47:464 (4) - yeah I wouldn't stack ever in an easy
02:48:882 (2) - Blanket more?

[Normal]
00:50:771 (1) - stack better
00:55:496 (2,3,4) - should match 00:57:622 (2,3,4) - Take out or add another one (I'd take out so not overmapped)
02:05:180 (2,3,4,5) - spread them all out? It's pretty confusing the way you have it rn
02:47:464 (1,2) - I'd do this? http://puu.sh/9Y7XT/a2b74c5b49.jpg
03:06:362 (4,5) - blanket?

Personally I think notes placed awkwardly.. Maybe you could watch Auto-kun play and just listen to where you're putting your beats down? Well that's what I did for my map lol.

[Collab]
00:23:133 (8) - This should end on a blue tick o: Since this is supposed to be insane(I think?) you should follow the music more
00:24:787 (5,6) - The spacing between these 2 are the same between 00:24:669 (4,5) - even though they're 1/4 of a beat different (Misleading!)
00:29:039 (4,5,6,7) - tbh I don't think doubles suit the rhythm here
00:31:874 (1,2,3,4) - Sounds off too
00:36:126 (4,5) - ^
00:38:015 (1,2,3,4,5) - random stream imo, careful not to overmap
00:42:267 - if you really want a stream.. I'd say around here (The clapping in the background)
00:52:424 (4) - Follow your pattern.. Move this out?
00:55:496 (2,3,4,5) - again sounds off to me
01:04:000 (1,2) - blanket better
01:48:173 (4) - Don't stack 2 identical sliders together :]
01:50:535 (1,2) - blanket?
01:55:260 (1,2,3,4) - you had doubles before but now you've spread them all out nice and even, very misleading :] Besides, doubles fit music more
02:55:732 (1) - the *dooo doo? (lmao o-o) starts 1/2 a note before, so i'd start my slider there (and shift couple notes after too)
02:58:567 - The *nooon? (idk lol) sound starts here, so i'd change the slider into a circle to utilize that
03:00:456 (2) - a triple suits this slider more
03:06:834 (1) - I think you can do something a lot more exciting rather than this spinner

Again, listen to the rhythms, cuz I think it sounds kinda off (Auto-kun lol)

Oh yeah, you said you wanted me to teach you on hitsounds right? lmao ok let me give you some suggestions (and a quick music lesson?)
In a measure there are 4 beats -> http://puu.sh/9Y9ZR/bdbf2901d8.jpg I want to focus on the 1st (big white tick) and the 2nd and the 4th
If you listen to the break time, so there's no hitsounds (looking at ur collab rn), what do you notice beside the vocals? The drums. You should really utilize the drums and they can make your map a lot more interesting . They hit every 2 and 4, so put a snare (or any drum) sound (i.e. http://puu.sh/9YatP/d7244c4f44.wav) everytime you hear the drums
The beginning of a measure is also important. It's usually a heavy note (one that's stressed/accented/special?) so you should really make it stand out! look around for cool hitsounds and plug in what you think would suit your song best! LOVE YOUUU

Anyways that's all from me :] Good luck with your map!
p.s. is this korean? lol i can't tell at all LOL

lol, i somehow already fixed almost all before u mod this, thanks again!

-Famous-

-Famous- wrote:
So... here we go again! xD yeyeah

Easy

00:20:536 (1,3) - Overlap doesn't look really nice there. But I guess it's okay.

00:46:520 (3,1) - Wrong spacing.editor </3

00:55:732 (2) - I think you should move that slider a little bit more down, so easy player can read it better.

00:57:386 (2,3,4) - 1 circle and 1 reversed slider would fit better

01:14:393 (2,3,4) - Replace it in a reversed slider.

01:32:346 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing is different, but I guess that's okay.

01:45:102 (4,5,6) - Reversed slider maybe?

02:55:496 (1,3) - Try to make them less overlap.

Normal

00:37:071 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Two options:

or

I recommend the second one, because it's a little bit easier.

01:11:087 (4) - That slider doesn't look nice. Try that.

02:05:417 (3,4,5) - Confusing.

Collab

00:24:551 (3,4,5) - It's STILL too confusing! I said that already the last time. You should stack these, it's too hard to read. its hard </3

01:47:228 (1,2,3,4) - A little bit confusing. But I guess it's okay.

03:05:889 (3,1) - Picutre.

I hope I could help you.

thanks for mod! same issues with gaia's mod lol

Kyouren

5,583 posts

Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2014-07-06T10:13:32+00:00

Gaia wrote:
From my Queue & 'cuz you're awesome

[Collab]
01:48:173 (4) - Don't stack 2 identical sliders together :]. No
01:50:535 (1,2) - blanket? No
01:55:260 (1,2,3,4) - you had doubles before but now you've spread them all out nice and even, very misleading :] Besides, doubles fit music more No. this is orange caramell song this (La La La, you know)
02:55:732 (1) - the *dooo doo? (lmao o-o) starts 1/2 a note before, so i'd start my slider there (and shift couple notes after too) Okay~
02:58:567 - The *nooon? (idk lol) sound starts here, so i'd change the slider into a circle to utilize that No
03:00:456 (2) - a triple suits this slider more No
03:06:834 (1) - I think you can do something a lot more exciting rather than this spinner ???

Again, listen to the rhythms, cuz I think it sounds kinda off (Auto-kun lol)

music lesson lol
Oh yeah, you said you wanted me to teach you on hitsounds right? lmao ok let me give you some suggestions (and a quick music lesson?)
In a measure there are 4 beats -> http://puu.sh/9Y9ZR/bdbf2901d8.jpg I want to focus on the 1st (big white tick) and the 2nd and the 4th
If you listen to the break time, so there's no hitsounds (looking at ur collab rn), what do you notice beside the vocals? The drums. You should really utilize the drums and they can make your map a lot more interesting . They hit every 2 and 4, so put a snare (or any drum) sound (i.e. http://puu.sh/9YatP/d7244c4f44.wav) everytime you hear the drums
The beginning of a measure is also important. It's usually a heavy note (one that's stressed/accented/special?) so you should really make it stand out! look around for cool hitsounds and plug in what you think would suit your song best!

Anyways that's all from me :] Good luck with your map!
p.s. is this korean? lol i can't tell at all LOL

Thanks for Mod~

Here my part!
Enjoy playing it~

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172,156,182819,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,172,183055,2,0,L|368:224,1,80
392,104,183527,2,0,L|312:44,2,80,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,204,184236,2,0,P|464:248|448:308,1,80
356,344,184708,6,0,P|316:320|196:336,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,272,185417,2,0,L|88:168,1,80
208,164,185889,2,0,P|232:216|212:288,2,120,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,186834,12,0,190614,0:0:0:0:

Joon

1,359 posts

Joined June 2009

Joon 2014-07-06T13:17:55+00:00

hi

Hit Sound modding

[Easy]
00:16:756 (1) - start notes add finish
00:24:315 (1) - add finish
00:34:236 (3) - end notes add clap
00:35:181 (1) - end notes remove clap
00:37:071 (3) - 3st notes add clap
00:41:795 (3) - end notes add clap
00:46:992 (1) - start notes add finish
00:52:662 (3) - end notes add clap
00:54:551 (1) - 3st notes add whistle
00:55:732 (2) - remove clap and add whistle
00:57:386 (2,3) - ^
01:02:110 (1) - 1st notes add finish
01:09:669 (1) - 1st notes remove clap and add finish
01:14:393 (2,3,4) - add whistle
01:15:338 (5) - 3st notes add finish
01:34:236 (5) - start notes remove clap
01:46:047 (7) - 2,3st notes add clap
01:47:465 (1) - remove clap
01:49:827 (4) - 3st notes add clap
01:50:772 (5) - 1st notes add clap
01:55:023 (1) - start notes add finish
02:02:583 (1) - ^
02:10:142 (3) - 1st notes remove clap and finish
02:17:701 (1) - 1st notes add finish
02:24:787 (6) - add finish
02:44:157 (1) - start notes remove clap and add finish
02:55:496 (1) - start notes add finish
03:03:055 (1) - ^

[Normal]
00:16:756 (2) - 1st notes add finish
00:23:134 (2) - remove clap
00:24:315 (2) - 1st notes add finish
00:29:039 (2) - add whistle
00:34:236 (1) - 3st notes add clap
00:41:795 (6) - ^
00:46:992 (1) - 1st notes add finish
00:57:622 (2,3,4) - change whistle
01:02:110 (3) - 1st notes add finish
01:09:669 (3) - ^
01:14:394 (2,3,4) - add whistle
01:46:992 (7) - add clap
01:47:465 (1,2,3,4,5) - remove clap
01:49:827 (1) - end notes add clap
01:50:535 (2) - add clap
01:58:331 (1) - end notes add clap
01:59:039 (2) - add clap
01:59:276 (3) - ^
01:59:984 (4) - ^
02:00:220 (5) - 1,4st notes add clap
02:01:874 (6,7) - add clap
02:10:141 (3) - 1st notes add finish
02:17:700 (3) - ^
02:44:157 (1) - start notes add finish
02:47:937 (3) - 1st notes add finish
02:52:661 (2) - add whistle
02:55:023 (4) - end notes add finish
03:03:055 (1) - start notes add finish

[Collab]
00:16:283 (1) - end notes add finish
00:24:315 (2) - add finish
01:02:110 (3) - 1st notes add finish
01:09:905 (2) - remove finish
01:10:850 (4) - ^
01:11:794 (6) - ^
01:13:449 (1) - add finish
01:43:921 (1) - remove whistle
02:02:582 (4) - start notes add finish
02:04:472 (7) - remove finish
02:04:945 (9) - ^
02:08:488 (2) - remove clap
02:09:433 (4,1) - ^
02:13:449 (3,4,5,6) - add clap
02:10:141 (3) - 1st notes add finish
02:17:700 (1) - ^
02:32:819 (3) - start notes add finish
02:46:992 (4,5,6,7) - add clap
02:47:937 (1) - 1st notes add finish

good luck

KUURAhoshi

585 posts

Joined January 2014

KUURAhoshi 2014-07-07T01:52:56+00:00

Hello Celizavia !
I have check some your beatmap (masih ngantuk hoam)

But, for now i only can mod some.
About your tags.. I think you must add this :
orang caramel kpop k-pop korean

Normal diff, too many hit circle XD
Consider reducing it

And, you must add 1/1 and 1/2 slider (like what -[ Asuna ]- wrote before)
Your normal diff is too hard (i think)
So, please fix it

Hope this help

(w jarang2 lho mod lagu seperti ini, cuma w penasaran, pengen nyoba juga

)

Alepat

161 posts

Joined October 2011

Alepat 2014-07-07T05:23:18+00:00

Hi :3 I come to make a mod to the Taiko Diffs (Blue & Alepat Modding Team)
Taiko Fuutsu
The combo is very repetitive, lacks a bit of imagination, but is well done, just found this

SPOILER

01:30:929 (235) - Create DON note
01:31:165 (236) - Erase
01:31:283 (236) - Create KAT note
01:31:401 (237) - Erase

Taiko Muzu
Worked well, looks like a Oni combined with Muzu, but left me a little uncomfortable in the part of the Kiais, this would be a suggestion

SPOILER

00:19:826 (77) - KAT to DON
00:20:181 (79) - ^^^^^^
00:27:386 (112) - ^^^^^^
00:27:740 (114) - ^^^^^^
01:05:181 (15) - ^^^^^^
01:05:535 (17) - ^^^^^^
01:08:015 (27) - ^^^^^^
01:08:252 (28) - ^^^^^^
01:08:488 (29) - ^^^^^^
01:38:960 (141) - ^^^^^^
01:39:197 (142) - ^^^^^^
01:39:433 (143) - DON to KAT
02:20:771 (275) - KAT to DON
02:21:126 (277) - ^^^^^^
02:51:008 (377) - ^^^^^^
02:51:362 (379) - ^^^^^^

Taiko Oni
Honestly, in some parts lack imagination and fill with 1 single color, looks more like an insane style of Standard mode

SPOILER

00:12:504 (57) - Erase
00:12:622 (57) - Create DON note
00:20:181 (98) - Erase
00:20:299 (98) - KAT to DON
00:27:740 (137) - Erase
00:27:858 (137) - KAT to DON
00:27:976 (138) - Erase (probably)

00:35:063 (171) - a 00:35:653 (176) - lack imagination in combos
00:53:370 (263) - KAT to DON
00:53:724 (266) - erase
01:55:023 (556) - a 02:02:110 (580) - Redo with more imagination, that resembles the muzu

Well, that's all I'm saying, it's an honor to be of help

(sorry if misspelled, the translator does not help me at all <.<)

Celizavia

568 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Celizavia 2014-07-07T06:41:09+00:00

Joon wrote:
hi

Hit Sound modding

[Easy]
00:16:756 (1) - start notes add finish
00:24:315 (1) - add finish
00:34:236 (3) - end notes add clap
00:35:181 (1) - end notes remove clap
00:37:071 (3) - 3st notes add clap
00:41:795 (3) - end notes add clap
00:46:992 (1) - start notes add finish
00:52:662 (3) - end notes add clap
00:54:551 (1) - 3st notes add whistle
00:55:732 (2) - remove clap and add whistle
00:57:386 (2,3) - ^
01:02:110 (1) - 1st notes add finish
01:09:669 (1) - 1st notes remove clap and add finish
01:14:393 (2,3,4) - add whistle
01:15:338 (5) - 3st notes add finish
01:34:236 (5) - start notes remove clap
01:46:047 (7) - 2,3st notes add clap
01:47:465 (1) - remove clap
01:49:827 (4) - 3st notes add clap
01:50:772 (5) - 1st notes add clap
01:55:023 (1) - start notes add finish
02:02:583 (1) - ^
02:10:142 (3) - 1st notes remove clap and finish
02:17:701 (1) - 1st notes add finish
02:24:787 (6) - add finish
02:44:157 (1) - start notes remove clap and add finish
02:55:496 (1) - start notes add finish
03:03:055 (1) - ^

[Normal]
00:16:756 (2) - 1st notes add finish
00:23:134 (2) - remove clap
00:24:315 (2) - 1st notes add finish
00:29:039 (2) - add whistle
00:34:236 (1) - 3st notes add clap
00:41:795 (6) - ^
00:46:992 (1) - 1st notes add finish
00:57:622 (2,3,4) - change whistle
01:02:110 (3) - 1st notes add finish
01:09:669 (3) - ^
01:14:394 (2,3,4) - add whistle
01:46:992 (7) - add clap
01:47:465 (1,2,3,4,5) - remove clap
01:49:827 (1) - end notes add clap
01:50:535 (2) - add clap
01:58:331 (1) - end notes add clap
01:59:039 (2) - add clap
01:59:276 (3) - ^
01:59:984 (4) - ^
02:00:220 (5) - 1,4st notes add clap
02:01:874 (6,7) - add clap
02:10:141 (3) - 1st notes add finish
02:17:700 (3) - ^
02:44:157 (1) - start notes add finish
02:47:937 (3) - 1st notes add finish
02:52:661 (2) - add whistle
02:55:023 (4) - end notes add finish
03:03:055 (1) - start notes add finish

[Collab]
00:16:283 (1) - end notes add finish
00:24:315 (2) - add finish
01:02:110 (3) - 1st notes add finish
01:09:905 (2) - remove finish
01:10:850 (4) - ^
01:11:794 (6) - ^
01:13:449 (1) - add finish
01:43:921 (1) - remove whistle
02:02:582 (4) - start notes add finish
02:04:472 (7) - remove finish
02:04:945 (9) - ^
02:08:488 (2) - remove clap
02:09:433 (4,1) - ^
02:13:449 (3,4,5,6) - add clap
02:10:141 (3) - 1st notes add finish
02:17:700 (1) - ^
02:32:819 (3) - start notes add finish
02:46:992 (4,5,6,7) - add clap
02:47:937 (1) - 1st notes add finish

good luck

will check your mod later, thank you so much

Kazamastar11 wrote:
Hello Celizavia !
I have check some your beatmap (masih ngantuk hoam)

But, for now i only can mod some.
About your tags.. I think you must add this :
orange caramel ngga, soalnya udah ada di artist kpop k-pop done korean di genre ntar ada

Normal diff, too many hit circle XD
Consider reducing it
And, you must add 1/1 and 1/2 slider (like what -[ Asuna ]- wrote before)
Your normal diff is too hard (i think)
So, please fix it
thats whats challenging means right?
Hope this help

(w jarang2 lho mod lagu seperti ini, cuma w penasaran, pengen nyoba juga )

makasih modnya!

Joon

1,359 posts

Joined June 2009

Joon 2014-07-07T14:46:14+00:00

OMG Celizavia~
You can tell it.

00:16:756 (1) - start notes add finish

^In this case, it is not the whole.

^This will select all.

BUT

^Like this selection.

Did you understand?

You will once again need to set the Hit sound.

-Nya-

2,133 posts

Joined December 2011

-Nya- 2014-07-07T15:20:15+00:00

Hello, Celizavia!

Here's my mod:

SPOILER

Easy:
Consider adding hitcircles here: 00:41:323
00:42:740
00:44:630

Furthermore, slider 00:41:795 is too close to slider 00:40:378 (Check distance snap; it must always be activated in Easy and Normal diffs)

SPOILER

Normal:
Distance snap! Check out AiMod (Ctrl+Shift+A)
Especially where this slider: 01:03:763 is too far from this hitcircle: 01:03:527
The same goes for this hitcircle: 01:05:417; it's too far away from this point: 01:05:181.
You have to bring them closer, otherwise they break the flow.

You have kiai time at this point: 02:22:425. Consider removing it.

SPOILER

Collab:
The kiai time~ 02:22:425. Consider removing it.

I don't really like the short sliders at these points: 00:31:874
00:32:346
00:32:819
00:33:291
00:36:126
BUT I like the use of the short sliders here: 00:50:771 and here: 00:51:716

The multiple hitcircles from here: 00:38:015 to here: 00:38:488 is a bit confusing.
This is all my opinion.

Overall, it's a great map!

Please reply.
Good Luck!

Rakuen

1,654 posts

Joined March 2013

Rakuen 2014-07-07T15:53:30+00:00

( =`･ω･´) AIRakuen 愛楽園 (Mod/GD/M4M)

[Easy]
Need same DS (distance snap) for the whole map for ranked
00:20:536 (1) - Keep 0.8x DS
^ If reverse slider is pointed to the previous note, new players may make mistake and press the reverse arrow or can't hit the slider properly
00:20:536 (1,2,3) - Try to make the pattern arranged properly, for example:

Image

00:25:260 (3,4) - If you want to keep the pattern, blanket it like this:

Image

00:31:874 - Missing beat here, put something hittable here
00:32:346 (1) - The flow is not linked from 00:30:929 (4) - (cursor are moving from anticlockwise to clockwise direction)
00:33:291 (2) - Please remain 0.8x DS
00:33:882 - At this point you can see 00:33:291 (2) - and 00:35:181 (1) - are stacked, make it separated if possible
00:35:181 (1) - Please remain same DS
00:41:795 (3) - DS, or something is missing at 00:41:323 -
00:43:212 (1) - DS
00:51:717 (2) - If possible make it stack on 00:50:299 (4) - , would be more neater
00:50:771 (1,2) - For pattern like this you can use copy and paste of 00:50:771 (1) - and then use rotate function
00:58:330 (1) - Let spinner stops at 01:01:047 - to follow vocal
01:03:527 (2) - DS is important
01:04:472 (3) - As you can see this slider is not properly arranged (blanket), refer the approach circle:

Image

01:17:228 - I prefer a hit here
01:32:346 (1,2,3,4) - DS
01:49:354 (3) - Blanket it properly, refer approach circle:

Image

02:09:669 (1) - This is called jump, the spacing is over 2x DS (which is not allowed in Easy)

[Normal]
Normally I prefer CS (circle size) 3 because most mappers use CS 4 for Hard and Insane diffs
Constant DS is also important in Normal too, try to fix all of them
My idea is refer some experienced mappers and see how they map Normal diffs, might be a great help
00:37:543 (3) - No jump please
00:38:724 (4,5) - Not suitable (distance)
00:39:669 (1) - ^

[Collab]
Diff name not rankable, need to indicate the difficulty of the map. Try to use Hard Collab

Notice:
I'm not sure of it but if possible don't give 1 mapper 2 times kudosu in a same map, except they are really really helpful

Celizavia

568 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Celizavia 2014-07-08T06:53:32+00:00

LizeKotze

LizeKotze wrote:
Hello, Celizavia!

Here's my mod:
SPOILER
Easy:
Consider adding hitcircles here: 00:41:323
00:42:740
00:44:630

Furthermore, slider 00:41:795 is too close to slider 00:40:378 (Check distance snap; it must always be activated in Easy and Normal diffs)
fixed all
SPOILER
Normal:
Distance snap! Check out AiMod (Ctrl+Shift+A) checked
Especially where this slider: 01:03:763 is too far from this hitcircle: 01:03:527
The same goes for this hitcircle: 01:05:417; it's too far away from this point: 01:05:181.
You have to bring them closer, otherwise they break the flow.

You have kiai time at this point: 02:22:425. Consider removing it. nah

SPOILER
Collab:
The kiai time~ 02:22:425. Consider removing it.nope

I don't really like the short sliders at these points: 00:31:874
00:32:346
00:32:819
00:33:291
00:36:126
BUT I like the use of the short sliders here: 00:50:771 and here: 00:51:716

The multiple hitcircles from here: 00:38:015 to here: 00:38:488 is a bit confusing.
This is all my opinion.

Overall, it's a great map!
Please reply.
Good Luck!

Rakuen wrote:
( =`･ω･´) AIRakuen 愛楽園 (Mod/GD/M4M)

[Easy]
Need same DS (distance snap) for the whole map for ranked fixed all ds
00:20:536 (1) - Keep 0.8x DS
^ If reverse slider is pointed to the previous note, new players may make mistake and press the reverse arrow or can't hit the slider properly
00:20:536 (1,2,3) - Try to make the pattern arranged properly, for example:
Image
00:25:260 (3,4) - If you want to keep the pattern, blanket it like this:
Image
00:31:874 - Missing beat here, put something hittable here okay
00:32:346 (1) - The flow is not linked from 00:30:929 (4) - (cursor are moving from anticlockwise to clockwise direction)
00:33:291 (2) - Please remain 0.8x DS
00:33:882 - At this point you can see 00:33:291 (2) - and 00:35:181 (1) - are stacked, make it separated if possible
00:35:181 (1) - Please remain same DS
00:41:795 (3) - DS, or something is missing at 00:41:323 -
00:43:212 (1) - DS
00:51:717 (2) - If possible make it stack on 00:50:299 (4) - , would be more neater
00:50:771 (1,2) - For pattern like this you can use copy and paste of 00:50:771 (1) - and then use rotate function
00:58:330 (1) - Let spinner stops at 01:01:047 - to follow vocal
01:03:527 (2) - DS is important
01:04:472 (3) - As you can see this slider is not properly arranged (blanket), refer the approach circle:
Image
01:17:228 - I prefer a hit here yep
01:32:346 (1,2,3,4) - DS
01:49:354 (3) - Blanket it properly, refer approach circle:
Image
02:09:669 (1) - This is called jump, the spacing is over 2x DS (which is not allowed in Easy)

[Normal]
Normally I prefer CS (circle size) 3 because most mappers use CS 4 for Hard and Insane diffs the rank criteria says normal must have 2,25. i have no choice except to harden the diffs
Constant DS is also important in Normal too, try to fix all of them fixed
My idea is refer some experienced mappers and see how they map Normal diffs, might be a great help
00:37:543 (3) - No jump please
00:38:724 (4,5) - Not suitable (distance)
00:39:669 (1) - ^

[Collab]
Diff name not rankable, need to indicate the difficulty of the map. Try to use Hard Collab done

Notice:
I'm not sure of it but if possible don't give 1 mapper 2 times kudosu in a same map, except they are really really helpful

Kyouren

5,583 posts

Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2014-07-08T07:04:11+00:00

For Celizavia: Fixed all Joon's mod, plz~

Celizavia

568 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Celizavia 2014-07-08T10:09:35+00:00

gokugohan12468 wrote:
For Celizavia: Fixed all Joon's mod, plz~

Sabar ya, disini internet lagi masalah, udah Di fix kok tinggal update aja

edit: updated

Evening

2,464 posts

Joined December 2012

Evening 2014-07-09T10:35:09+00:00

[I]MMoRTal[S] wrote:
From my queue

I don't skip anyone

btw

IZenxl's Muzu : by IZenxl
IZenxl's Oni : by IZenxl

edit to

lZenxl's Muzukashii : by lZenxl
lZenxl's Oni : by lZenxl

lZenxl's Muzu
Change Diff name to lZenxl's Muzukashii please ... okays owo/!

01:38:724 (140) - d okays owo/!
01:53:606 (181) - K okays, added K on the fourth one also

~~this mod break you pattern hahaha~~
01:53:606 (181) - kkk Nah, I prefer a finish
02:32:582 (312) - k The snares here are the same, I'll keep the dons
02:32:700 (313) - add k ^

Great Muzukashii Thanks owo/!

lZenxl's Oni
00:12:031 (53,54,55,56,57) - dkkkd Nah, I prefer kkdkk, fits the claps more
00:19:708 (94,95,96,97,98,99) - My suggestion Okays owo/!
00:27:267 (134,135,136,137,138,139,140,141) - My suggestion Hmm, this is a rather long stream, not changing since I want to make the pattern simpler
00:46:519 (234) - K Okays owo/!
00:53:015 (261,262,263,264,265,266,267,268) - My suggestion Same reason as the 3rd mod
01:38:488 (479,482) - k Following the drums here, I would like to keep all of them as dons owo/!
01:38:488 (479,482) - kkk like muzu^
02:32:700 (730) - add k Fixed
03:10:378 (922) - D I would prefer a double kat here since the pitch doesn't change

Good luck !! I like this song ~

Alepat wrote:
Hi :3 I come to make a mod to the Taiko Diffs (Blue & Alepat Modding Team)
Taiko Fuutsu
The combo is very repetitive, lacks a bit of imagination, but is well done, just found this
SPOILER
01:30:929 (235) - Create DON note
01:31:165 (236) - Erase
01:31:283 (236) - Create KAT note
01:31:401 (237) - Erase
Taiko Muzu
Worked well, looks like a Oni combined with Muzu, but left me a little uncomfortable in the part of the Kiais, this would be a suggestion
SPOILER

00:19:826 (77) - KAT to DON
00:20:181 (79) - ^^^^^^
00:27:386 (112) - ^^^^^^
00:27:740 (114) - ^^^^^^
01:05:181 (15) - ^^^^^^
01:05:535 (17) - ^^^^^^
01:08:015 (27) - ^^^^^^
01:08:252 (28) - ^^^^^^ Not changing this for vocals
01:08:488 (29) - ^^^^^^
01:38:960 (141) - ^^^^^^
01:39:197 (142) - ^^^^^^
01:39:433 (143) - DON to KAT
02:20:771 (275) - KAT to DON
02:21:126 (277) - ^^^^^^
02:51:008 (377) - ^^^^^^
02:51:362 (379) - ^^^^^^ Fixed all unless specified
Taiko Oni
Honestly, in some parts lack imagination and fill with 1 single color, looks more like an insane style of Standard mode
SPOILER
00:12:504 (57) - Erase
00:12:622 (57) - Create DON note I'm fixing 1/4 patterns in which they end on 1/2 so that it's easier to read/play
00:20:181 (98) - Erasev
00:20:299 (98) - KAT to DON Following the sound in the music here, no change
00:27:740 (137) - Erase ^
00:27:858 (137) - KAT to DON ^
00:27:976 (138) - Erase (probably)

00:35:063 (171) - a 00:35:653 (176) - lack imagination in combos I prefer simplicity, after all, this song is really cheerful, I don't like to overcomplicate long patterns
00:53:370 (263) - KAT to DON Same idea here, I prefer to use an even number of kats/dons if there's a colour switch in between the streams
00:53:724 (266) - erase Thanks for pointing this out!
01:55:023 (556) - a 02:02:110 (580) - Redo with more imagination, that resembles the muzu
I don't think variation is going to help much if there's too much, I strongly believe that this pattern is rather nice and fitting for this section in both muzu and Oni
Well, that's all I'm saying, it's an honor to be of help (sorry if misspelled, the translator does not help me at all <.<)

Thanks for MOD!

Soz for late orz

Use latest update

Last edited by Evening 2014-07-09T13:22:24+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Charlotte

1,905 posts

Joined December 2013

Charlotte 2014-07-09T10:43:27+00:00

Hi from Charlotte's　Taiko Modding Queue (second mod)

d
k
D(big d)
K(big k)

Sariel's Fuutsu

OD5→4 HP6→5 SV1.6→1.4

01:53:606 (298,299,300) - change k
02:34:945 (400) - ^
02:37:543 (407,408,409) - ^ (be better?)

lZenxl's Muzu

SV1.9→1.4 or 1.6

lZenxl's Oni

00:53:015 (261) - change d
03:03:291 (882) - ^
03:04:000 (887) - ^

Good luck

Sauziteoi

205 posts

Joined February 2013

Sauziteoi 2014-07-09T12:06:24+00:00

Mod request From 5's Modding Team
(Sorry for my poor English...)
I hope i could help you

[Easy]
Should keep a distance of 0.8 to 1.2 in easy difficulty

00:18:645 (3,4) - make this blanket better
00:20:063 - add a note here
00:20:536 (1,3) - Beginners maybe can't read this
00:21:953 (2,3) - make this blanket better
00:25:260 (3,4) - make this blanket better
00:27:150 (5,2) - this two sliders are too close
00:30:929 (4,5) - 1.6 distance between slider4 and note5 is too far in Easy difficulty.
00:33:291 (2,1) - suggest↓
Suggestion
00:35:181 (1,3) - this two sliders are too close
00:39:433 (1,2) - maybe too strange?
00:50:299 (4,2) - move the note4 to (X:216, Y:152)
00:51:717 (2,3) - this two sliders are too close
01:09:197 (3) - Beginners maybe can't read this, suggest↓
Suggestion
01:13:449 (1,2,3,4,5) - suggest↓
Suggestion
01:34:236 (5,6) - make this blanket better
01:42:268 (3,4,5) - keep the distance as same
01:49:827 (4,5) - make this blanket better
01:55:023 (1,3) - move the slider to (X:95, Y:185)
02:32:819 (1,2) - make this blanket better
02:44:157 (1,3) - make this blanket better
02:47:464 (4) - Beginners maybe can't read this
02:57:386 (3) - move the slider to (X:416, Y:120)
02:59:275 (1,2) - make this blanket better
03:03:055 (1) - 2.1 distance between slider4 and note5 is even far in Easy difficulty.

[Normal]
Circle Size 4 maybe a little small

00:18:645 (4,1) - this two sliders are too close
00:21:008 (2,1) - Suggest↓
Suggestion
00:23:842 (1,2) - Suggest↓
Suggestion
00:44:630 (6,7) - this two sliders are too close
00:48:882 (5,1) - this two sliders are too close
00:51:716 (2,3) - make this blanket better
01:03:527 (4,5) - Suggest↓
Suggestion

change to
01:09:669 (3,4) - Suggest↓
Suggestion
01:27:622 (1,2) - make this blanket better
01:59:039 (2) - move the note to (X:304, Y:179)
02:39:905 (1,2) - make this blanket better
03:00:456 (1,2,3,4) - too close and make the blanket better

[Hard Collab]
you can keep more distance in the Hard difficulty
Use clap sound too frequently, a bit noisy

00:16:283 (1,2) - Time is long distance but the The length of short distance
00:18:173 (5,6) - Time is short distance but the The length of far distance
00:18:645 (1,2,3) - too close
00:29:984 (9) - Suggest↓
Suggestion

change to
00:33:291 (4,5) - too close
00:36:126 (4,5) - Suggest↓
Suggestion

change to
00:46:992 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Suggest↓
Suggestion
change to
00:50:771 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - the same as ↑
00:56:204 (6,1) - make this blanket better
01:03:055 (5,6) - too close
01:06:362 (4) - Suggest↓
Suggestion
the slider4 change to
01:47:464 (2,4) - Don‘t Completly coverage the slider
01:48:645 (1) - Suggest↓
Suggestion

change to
02:43:685 (8,9,1) - make this blanket better
02:52:897 (2,3) - make this blanket better

Good luck

Evening

2,464 posts

Joined December 2012

Evening 2014-07-09T13:21:50+00:00

Charlotte wrote:
Hi from Charlotte's　Taiko Modding Queue (second mod)

d
k
D(big d)
K(big k)

Sariel's Fuutsu

OD5→4 HP6→5 SV1.6→1.4

01:53:606 (298,299,300) - change k
02:34:945 (400) - ^
02:37:543 (407,408,409) - ^ (be better?)

lZenxl's Muzu

SV1.9→1.4 or 1.6 Fixed

lZenxl's Oni

00:53:015 (261) - change d The drum goes from high pitch to lower pitch, I would prefer a kat here
03:03:291 (882) - ^ I prefer a 2 don 3 kat pattern as it's easier to play
03:04:000 (887) - ^

Good luck

Thanks for 2nd mod owo/!

MUZU : http://puu.sh/a3Bdf/d465ba0d4b.osu
ONI : http://puu.sh/a3BeH/6c55fb838e.osu

Rirakusu

218 posts

Joined November 2013

Rirakusu 2014-07-09T13:25:46+00:00

From my modding queue

sorry for the long wait.

Easy

1. 00:26:205 (4) - Move it a little more to the right so that it doesn't creates a 'small overlap' with 00:25:260 (3) -

2. 00:31:874 (5,1) - It's always said that stacks aren't encouraged in Easy. Plus this is a slow song (BPM 127) you should able to put it away

3. This is...erm...you can put 00:33:291 (2) 's tail on 00:35:181 (1) 's head.

Sample

4. 00:46:992 (1) - Move this a little higher to avoid that little overlap with 00:45:102 (2) - which looks a little strange (and ugly for some)

5. 00:50:299 (4,2) - Well please put them together, but not that semi-stack people don't like. Circle on slider's head.

6. 00:54:551 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - This part is like...try not to overlap. A reminder is you can just make it simpler by using longer sliders. (Try to figure it out

)

7. 01:07:779 (2,3) - Same as 2.

8. Huh? 01:14:393 (2,3,4) - You can use a reversed slider (or a V-shaped slider to take over them). No need for stressing on circles for Easy Diff.

9. 01:42:268 (3,4,5) - Same as 8.

10. 01:45:102 (4,5,6) - Same as 9. (You might keep either 8 or 9 or this one for creating a variety of patterns and avoid a boring map).

11. 01:49:827 (4) - Face it towards the sky to avoid overlapping (knew what I mean)?

12. 01:54:551 (4) - A little lower so that tiny-overlap can be solved.

13. 01:55:023 (1,3) - Just like 3.

14. 02:03:528 (2,3,4), 02:22:425 (2,3,4) and 02:05:417 (2,3,4) and 02:11:559 (4,5,6) - Well...like 10.

15. 02:46:047 (3,4) - Copying and pasting? I hope not. But it's like 7.

Normal

Generally...Perhaps you can remove the tiny-overlaps all over the map? Using a larger DS will help in that. (Perhaps using 0.9 or 1.0 will look quite nice)

1. 00:39:669 (1,2,3,4) - I think you can make a tiny (non-jump) square out of these

2. 00:48:882 (5,1) - Fix it like 3. in Easy.

3. 00:52:661 (3,4) - You can create a blanket out of these notes

4. 02:22:425 (2,3,4) - Small triangle possible here!

5. 02:36:126 (1) - I don't think you should use a spinner here...map the vocals using sliders

6. 02:58:803 (1,2,3,4) - After fixing overlaps, try to make this blanket better

Finished! (You might don't want to change some of the mods above, but that's up to you

I respect your decisions).

P/s: Please edit your post in my modding queue to say that this request is completed!

Celizavia

568 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Celizavia 2014-07-09T15:38:42+00:00

SPOILER

ItItS wrote:
Mod request From 5's Modding Team
(Sorry for my poor English...)
I hope i could help you

[Easy]
Should keep a distance of 0.8 to 1.2 in easy difficulty whoa, that's is tooo far for a beginner,even the rank criteria suggected that we should put 0,8 or 1,0 as DS in Easy
00:18:645 (3,4) - make this blanket better okay
00:20:063 - add a note here ^
00:20:536 (1,3) - Beginners maybe can't read this ^
00:21:953 (2,3) - make this blanket better ^
00:25:260 (3,4) - make this blanket better ^
00:27:150 (5,2) - this two sliders are too close nope it isnt
00:30:929 (4,5) - 1.6 distance between slider4 and note5 is too far in Easy difficulty. fixed
00:33:291 (2,1) - suggest↓
Suggestion
00:35:181 (1,3) - this two sliders are too close
00:39:433 (1,2) - maybe too strange?
00:50:299 (4,2) - move the note4 to (X:216, Y:152) i prefer this
00:51:717 (2,3) - this two sliders are too close fixed
01:09:197 (3) - Beginners maybe can't read this, suggest↓ fixed
Suggestion
01:13:449 (1,2,3,4,5) - suggest↓
Suggestion
01:34:236 (5,6) - make this blanket better
01:42:268 (3,4,5) - keep the distance as same
01:49:827 (4,5) - make this blanket better
01:55:023 (1,3) - move the slider to (X:95, Y:185)
02:32:819 (1,2) - make this blanket better
02:44:157 (1,3) - make this blanket better
02:47:464 (4) - Beginners maybe can't read this okay
02:57:386 (3) - move the slider to (X:416, Y:120)
02:59:275 (1,2) - make this blanket better
03:03:055 (1) - 2.1 distance between slider4 and note5 is even far in Easy difficulty.fixed
[Normal]
Circle Size 4 maybe a little small thats the problem, i think i have some issues in the diff spread. i juat cant get my diffs any mush harder since the ranking crit demans a normal diffs must be in 2,50 star difficulties
00:18:645 (4,1) - this two sliders are too close nope its not
00:21:008 (2,1) - Suggest↓ o...kayy
Suggestion
00:23:842 (1,2) - Suggest↓
Suggestion
00:44:630 (6,7) - this two sliders are too close its fine
00:48:882 (5,1) - this two sliders are too close ^
00:51:716 (2,3) - make this blanket better
01:03:527 (4,5) - Suggest↓
Suggestion

change to
01:09:669 (3,4) - Suggest↓
Suggestion
01:27:622 (1,2) - make this blanket better
01:59:039 (2) - move the note to (X:304, Y:179)
02:39:905 (1,2) - make this blanket better
03:00:456 (1,2,3,4) - too close and make the blanket better
[Hard Collab]
you can keep more distance in the Hard difficulty
Use clap sound too frequently, a bit noisy
00:16:283 (1,2) - Time is long distance but the The length of short distance
00:18:173 (5,6) - Time is short distance but the The length of far distance
00:18:645 (1,2,3) - too close
00:29:984 (9) - Suggest↓
Suggestion

change to
00:33:291 (4,5) - too close
00:36:126 (4,5) - Suggest↓
Suggestion

change to
00:46:992 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Suggest↓
Suggestion
change to
00:50:771 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - the same as ↑
00:56:204 (6,1) - make this blanket better
01:03:055 (5,6) - too close
01:06:362 (4) - Suggest↓
Suggestion
the slider4 change to
01:47:464 (2,4) - Don‘t Completly coverage the slider
01:48:645 (1) - Suggest↓
Suggestion

change to
02:43:685 (8,9,1) - make this blanket better
02:52:897 (2,3) - make this blanket better
Good luck

SPOILER

jinhang_ang wrote:
From my modding queue sorry for the long wait.

Easy

1. 00:26:205 (4) - Move it a little more to the right so that it doesn't creates a 'small overlap' with 00:25:260 (3) -

2. 00:31:874 (5,1) - It's always said that stacks aren't encouraged in Easy. Plus this is a slow song (BPM 127) you should able to put it away slow bpm doesnt mean its a slow song.

3. This is...erm...you can put 00:33:291 (2) 's tail on 00:35:181 (1) 's head.
Sample

4. 00:46:992 (1) - Move this a little higher to avoid that little overlap with 00:45:102 (2) - which looks a little strange (and ugly for some)

5. 00:50:299 (4,2) - Well please put them together, but not that semi-stack people don't like. Circle on slider's head.

6. 00:54:551 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - This part is like...try not to overlap. A reminder is you can just make it simpler by using longer sliders. (Try to figure it out )

7. 01:07:779 (2,3) - Same as 2.

8. Huh? 01:14:393 (2,3,4) - You can use a reversed slider (or a V-shaped slider to take over them). No need for stressing on circles for Easy Diff.

9. 01:42:268 (3,4,5) - Same as 8.

10. 01:45:102 (4,5,6) - Same as 9. (You might keep either 8 or 9 or this one for creating a variety of patterns and avoid a boring map).

11. 01:49:827 (4) - Face it towards the sky to avoid overlapping (knew what I mean)? what sky? *look up*

12. 01:54:551 (4) - A little lower so that tiny-overlap can be solved.

13. 01:55:023 (1,3) - Just like 3.

14. 02:03:528 (2,3,4), 02:22:425 (2,3,4) and 02:05:417 (2,3,4) and 02:11:559 (4,5,6) - Well...like 10.

15. 02:46:047 (3,4) - Copying and pasting? I hope not. But it's like 7.

Normal

Generally...Perhaps you can remove the tiny-overlaps all over the map? Using a larger DS will help in that. (Perhaps using 0.9 or 1.0 will look quite nice)

1. 00:39:669 (1,2,3,4) - I think you can make a tiny (non-jump) square out of these

2. 00:48:882 (5,1) - Fix it like 3. in Easy.

3. 00:52:661 (3,4) - You can create a blanket out of these notes

4. 02:22:425 (2,3,4) - Small triangle possible here!

5. 02:36:126 (1) - I don't think you should use a spinner here...map the vocals using sliders

6. 02:58:803 (1,2,3,4) - After fixing overlaps, try to make this blanket better

Finished! (You might don't want to change some of the mods above, but that's up to you I respect your decisions).

P/s: Please edit your post in my modding queue to say that this request is completed!

Totoro le Pacha

241 posts

Joined March 2012

Totoro le Pacha 2014-07-10T00:55:48+00:00

Hi ! Quick mod from my queue ~

[Muzukashii]
Try to avoid the sliders in the taiko diff.
00:47:346 (178,179, 182, 183 ) - All the 1/4 dk aren't allowed in a Muzu. Try kk instead.
01:01:165 (1) - Remove that spinners. He's short, and he has nothing to do here
02:00:693 (197) - Ugly slider. Remove it. Too long, too useless. Map instead.
02:35:653 (325) - Same, slider's are ugly in a taiko diff. And you putting too many ones.

A fun map to play !

[Oni]
01:55:023 (556,557,558,559,560,561,562,563,564,565,566,567) - Why not put patterns like this ? http://puu.sh/a4r8V/62ca765444.jpg
02:02:819 (15) - k ?

Very good map ! Srsly. My suggestions on this map are facultative.

Good continuation

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