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Alplaza

42 posts

Joined December 2012

Alplaza 2014-08-17T08:42:07+00:00

Your map is nearly rankable so there's really no help .

Normal

01:11:087 (4) - redraw
02:21:480 (1) - reverse
02:22:425 (2,3,4) - re-place
02:34:236 (4) - move to (184,136)

Nwolf

2,607 posts

Joined September 2012

Nwolf 2014-08-17T11:27:37+00:00

-insert mod here as soon as tacos are updated-

Celizavia

568 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Celizavia 2014-08-19T13:15:32+00:00

Update. Wait for konpaku sariel's reply

Nekomata

807 posts

Joined December 2013

Nekomata 2014-08-19T20:21:00+00:00

NM from queue.

bold - recommended
italic - optional, personal taste

Easy

00:57:386 (2) - remove this
00:57:622 (3) - move to 00:57:386 (keep length)
01:12:976 - map note
01:42:268 (3,4,5) - use repeat slider
02:09:669 (1,2) - stack onto 02:10:142 (3)
02:22:425 (2,3,4) - use repeat slider

Normal

00:57:622 (2,3,4) - remove 00:58:094 (4), or replace these three with a repeat slider
01:03:763 (5) - move this to 01:04:000 (shorten as necessary)
01:03:291 - map note
01:03:763 - map note
01:10:850 - map note
01:14:393 (2) - this can repeat again
02:47:464 (1,2) - stack onto 02:47:937 (3)?
02:58:803 (5,6) - stack onto 02:59:275 (7)?

Hard

00:21:952 (4) - clap
00:26:204 (3) - remove clap
00:31:874 to 00:46:519 - clap rhythm
00:39:433 - map this note (+nc)?
00:39:669 (1) - (remove nc if mapped above) make into half beat repeat slider. http://puu.sh/aZobg.png
01:04:472 - map for clap here
01:04:945 (2) - remove clap (it does not fit here), or map so that you can clap here 01:05:417
02:03:055 to 02:07:307 - clap rhythm
02:32:819 to 02:39:197 - clap rhythm
02:45:338 (3) - remove clap
02:51:716 (1) - remove clap
02:53:606 (4) - remove clap
01:43:921 to 01:54:551 - clap rhythm
02:55:496 - clap rhythm
for the remove claps, I would personally map it in a way so that the proper claps are mapped

Kyouren

5,656 posts

Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2014-08-22T05:23:51+00:00

Celizavia, can you add clap in my part?

No change in remove clap rhythm~

Nwolf

2,607 posts

Joined September 2012

Nwolf 2014-08-22T16:34:09+00:00

HERE I AM

[Sariel's Futsuu]

00:21:716 - Somehow I would like to see a don here
01:18:645 (199,206,220,227) - Delete those to give more vocal emphasis?
01:40:378 (258,261,262) - Also delete those, the part is quite calm. No need to follow vocals imo. And while you are at it, 01:39:905 (257,263) - Make these finishers due to the song supporting this quite well.
01:39:905 (257) - And then this big note for the drums
01:41:795 (263,265) - ^
01:48:173 - If you added the other one (first suggestion), add note here too
02:37:071 (406) - Why not kat?
02:56:913 (461,468,483,490) - Same as 199,206,220,227

Hm, while I think the Futsuu is a bit hard, it fits into the spread considering that Muzukashii has long 1/2 stuff. Also kinda like how it is mapped!

[lZenxl's Muzukashii]

00:05:181 (16) - Delete this note, the 1/2 is too long
00:12:504 (47) - Kat cause snare
00:12:740 (48) - ^
00:19:826 (73,74,75,76) - While they do follow the music... it's weird. Maybe map something else here, doesn't go well with the rest.
00:26:204 (102) - Why big note
00:27:386 (106,107,108,109) - -----^
00:30:456 (119) - Think kat fits the pitch nicely
00:33:055 (129) - This note is kinda too much...
00:37:779 (144) - ^
00:40:378 (152) - Big note doesn't fit
00:41:323 (155) - ^
01:05:181 (15,16,17,18) - Stuff
01:07:071 (23) - idk kat maybe, fits vocals
01:11:559 (43) - weird big note again
02:07:543 (222) - Again, delete for shorter 1/2
02:12:031 (241) - Big note :<
02:13:212 (246,247,248,249) - Stuff
02:20:535 (279,280,281,282,283) -
02:34:472 (325) - Delete
02:51:008 (383,384,385,386) -

Main problem I have with this diff are the long 1/2s... but hitsounding is pretty nice

[lZenxl's Oni]

00:16:283 (76,77) - Try kats, think it fits drums fine
00:19:472 (93) - Move to 00:19:590 - cause the doublet doesn't really make sense
00:26:204 (129) - Big note from muzu again
00:59:512 (290) - nyaaaa delete it, vocal break ;w;
01:13:449 (357) - big note same as muzu
01:45:575 (513) - nya
01:52:189 (547) - Somehow expected this to be a kat
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1954553 muzu --- https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1954558 oni: Difference is too big imo
02:34:708 (746) - big note again
02:47:464 (804) - kat

Good luck!

Senritsu

2,197 posts

Joined October 2011

Senritsu 2014-08-24T06:10:12+00:00

Nwolf wrote:
-insert mod here as soon as tacos are updated-

and i don't even know what diff should i mod, bcs you said to me that i only mod 2 lols

Celizavia

568 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Celizavia 2014-08-24T07:17:27+00:00

Senritsu wrote:
and i don't even know what diff should i mod, bcs you said to me that i only mod 2 lols

well its up to you lol

Celizavia

568 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Celizavia 2014-08-24T07:52:38+00:00

Nekomata wrote:
NM from queue.

bold - recommended
italic - optional, personal taste

Easy
00:57:386 (2) - remove this no, its weird to have a weird breaks before spinner
00:57:622 (3) - move to 00:57:386 (keep length) nope
01:12:976 - map note
01:42:268 (3,4,5) - use repeat slider to confusing to the new players
02:09:669 (1,2) - stack onto 02:10:142 (3) i don't really reccomend to stack at the easy diff
02:22:425 (2,3,4) - use repeat slider nope
Normal
00:57:622 (2,3,4) - remove 00:58:094 (4), or replace these three with a repeat slider nope
01:03:763 (5) - move this to 01:04:000 (shorten as necessary) ^
01:03:291 - map note
01:03:763 - map note
01:10:850 - map note okay
01:14:393 (2) - this can repeat again ^
02:47:464 (1,2) - stack onto 02:47:937 (3)? nope
02:58:803 (5,6) - stack onto 02:59:275 (7)? ^
Hard
00:21:952 (4) - clap done
00:26:204 (3) - remove clap
00:31:874 to 00:46:519 - clap rhythm
00:39:433 - map this note (+nc)?
00:39:669 (1) - (remove nc if mapped above) make into half beat repeat slider. http://puu.sh/aZobg.png
01:04:472 - map for clap here okay
01:04:945 (2) - remove clap (it does not fit here), or map so that you can clap here 01:05:417
02:03:055 to 02:07:307 - clap rhythm
02:32:819 to 02:39:197 - clap rhythm
02:45:338 (3) - remove clap
02:51:716 (1) - remove clap
02:53:606 (4) - remove clap
01:43:921 to 01:54:551 - clap rhythm
02:55:496 - clap rhythm
for the remove claps, I would personally map it in a way so that the proper claps are mappedimo thos claps are suited in there becuz is for emphasized the rhtym, plus a map without hitsounds is boring

thanks for the mod!

rew0825

1,290 posts

Joined March 2013

rew0825 2014-08-24T09:58:32+00:00

Hi

[Sariel's Fuutsu]
00:19:590 (39) - move to 00:19:826
01:39:197 (255) - d

[lZenxl's Muzukashii]
01:19:118 (73) - k
02:34:472 (325) - d

[lZenxl's Oni]
01:44:630 (508) - k
03:09:669 (925) - move to 03:09:787

*0* Good Beatmap

Good luck

Nwolf

2,607 posts

Joined September 2012

Nwolf 2014-08-24T17:36:36+00:00

Senritsu wrote:
Nwolf wrote:
-insert mod here as soon as tacos are updated-
and i don't even know what diff should i mod, bcs you said to me that i only mod 2 lols

wait wat did I miss something XD

Senritsu

2,197 posts

Joined October 2011

Senritsu 2014-08-25T07:37:50+00:00

i only requote you :b

Edit : Celizavia, ntar kalo taikonya udh diupdate, PM gw ya

Last edited by Senritsu 2014-08-28T08:15:15+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

AxelHino

1,734 posts

Joined July 2011

AxelHino 2014-08-27T08:51:06+00:00

Hi~

From my mod queue~

Sariel's Futsuu

00:29:393 (64) 00:30:811 (68) - i'm a bit concerned that the 1/4 notes in those sections might get tricky for players. But they do fit the song (and i can't really think of anything to make it easier AND fit the song), so i think they're okay. (same goes for other 1/4 parts)
00:35:417 (81) - try deleting this note so that players have time to rest. with constant 1/1 notes it might get a bit tiring.
01:41:795 (263) - change to D for emphasis on cymbals in the music
01:42:740 (265) - ^
01:43:212 (266) - change to K (same reason as above)
01:43:685 (268) - change to D (same reason)
This is a very clear structured and straight-forward map! (not to mention hard lol) Nice job on this one~ :3

lZenxl's Muzukashii

00:19:118 (72) - delete to give break
00:19:826 (74) - change to k. it would be too hard for players
00:20:181 (76) - ^
00:26:677 (105) - delete to give break
00:27:386 (107) - change to k like above
00:27:740 (109) - ^
00:35:181 - end slider here
00:35:417 - add d for bigger emphasis on vocals
00:35:653 - ^
00:42:267 (161) - delete slider. i think you're following the claps in the music but i don't think a slider would fit.
00:42:267 - add d for emphasis on vocals
00:42:740 - ^
00:42:976 - ^
00:43:212 - ^
00:47:464 (174) - change to d. might get too hard for players
00:48:409 (178) - ^
00:51:244 (188) - ^
00:51:480 (189,190) - ctrl+g. vocal pitch goes down and it works well for variation.
00:52:189 (192) - change to d. might get too hard
01:04:472 (12) - delete. might get tiring
01:04:945 (14) - ^
01:05:181 (15) - change to k for same reason as above
01:05:535 (17) - ^
01:12:031 (45) - delete
01:12:504 (47) - delete
01:12:740 (48) - change to k like above
01:13:094 (50) - ^
01:43:685 (150) - change to d. dons on a downbeat will sound well imo
01:50:299 (173) - delete slider.
01:50:299 - add k
01:50:535 - add d
01:50:771 - add k
01:51:008 - add 1/4 triplet (kkk) ending in 01:51:244
02:12:504 (243) - delete.
02:12:976 (245) - delete
02:13:212 (246) - change to k. might get too hard
02:13:567 (248) - ^
02:14:157 (251) - delete. the notes are too long and might tire players.
02:20:063 (277) - delete
02:20:535 (279) - delete
02:20:771 (280) - change to k. too hard
02:21:126 (282) - ^
02:50:299 (381) - delete
02:50:771 (383) - delete
02:51:008 (384) - cahnge to k like above.
02:51:362 (386) - ^

Seriously, this is hard enough to be an oni. remember that players need to rest as well~

lZenxl's Oni

Can't seem to point out things that are out of place. it think it's good considering the difficulty spread

that's it for me, guess. all the diffs are relatively hard so idk what the tBATs will think. consider making it easier.

sorry if i'm being picky tho

AruOtta

1,303 posts

Joined May 2012

AruOtta 2014-08-28T00:07:32+00:00

Hey, testplay from my queue

No Kudosu

Easy

Here are the problems I found whe playing :
00:39:433 (1,2) - These sliders are a bit strange o.o
00:41:795 (4,1) - The distance between these 2 objects is too huge
02:37:543 (1,1) - The distance in the timeline between the spinner and the slider is too short, it's too much hard for beginner

Normal

00:39:669 (1) - This slider is starting on a red tick, so it's a bit hard for beginner (I sliderbroke in NC)
02:01:874 (1) - ^
00:56:441 (1,2,3,4) - Since there is only 3 beats for 00:55:496 (2,3,4), you should remove the (4) because I missed the note :<
02:37:543 (1,1) - The distance in the timeline between the spinner and the slider is too short, it's too much hard for beginner

Hard Collab

No problems found for this one c:

All the diffs are very fun to play \:D/

Good luck for rank :3

Evening

2,464 posts

Joined December 2012

Evening 2014-08-30T06:02:58+00:00

i don't really feel like applying mods now ( this week or so ) ( it's not that the mods are bad, I'm just lazy )
Fix the mods for me if you want, will intend to fix them when i really feel like it orz

aigoh

398 posts

Joined February 2014

aigoh 2014-08-30T14:04:12+00:00

Hey, from modding queue!
I don't see any problem with normal and easy.

[hard]
00:37:071 (6) - ctrl + G?
00:39:433 (6,1) - stack
01:37:543 (2,3) - DS
01:38:015 (3,4) - curve these!
01:42:740 (1,1) - NC
01:47:937 (1,2) - Ctrl + J, and then Ctrl + H
01:48:645 (1) - move to 01:48:882
01:49:354 (2) - delete
02:49:590 (3) - haha, is this for Nana? :3
03:05:889 (3) - reduce the slider length so that it ends at 03:06:362
03:06:598 -^ and then I'd add a slider that ends at 03:06:834
03:10:614 - I'd add a slider at the "yesss" part, haha. It should end at 03:11:323
and the spinner should end at 03:10:141 if you're adding this slider.

Celizavia

568 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Celizavia 2014-08-31T02:15:29+00:00

lZenxl wrote:
i don't really feel like applying mods now ( this week or so ) ( it's not that the mods are bad, I'm just lazy )
Fix the mods for me if you want, will intend to fix them when i really feel like it orz

You say it, hiyahhh (=ﾟωﾟ)ﾉ

first time modding a taiko stuff :3

AxelHino wrote:
Hi~ From my mod queue~

lZenxl's Muzukashii
00:19:118 (72) - delete to give break okay
00:19:826 (74) - change to k. it would be too hard for players ^
00:20:181 (76) - ^ ^
00:26:677 (105) - delete to give break nope
00:27:386 (107) - change to k like above fixed
00:27:740 (109) - ^ ^
00:35:181 - end slider here o..okay then
00:35:417 - add d for bigger emphasis on vocals i agree with u on this one tho, i'll add it first and see if lxenxl agrees
00:35:653 - ^ ^
00:42:267 (161) - delete slider. i think you're following the claps in the music but i don't think a slider would fit. ._.
00:42:267 - add d for emphasis on vocals
00:42:740 - ^
00:42:976 - ^
00:43:212 - ^
00:47:464 (174) - change to d. might get too hard for players i like this rhtym
00:48:409 (178) - ^ ^
00:51:244 (188) - ^ ^
00:51:480 (189,190) - ctrl+g. vocal pitch goes down and it works well for variation. okay then
00:52:189 (192) - change to d. might get too hard
01:04:472 (12) - delete. might get tiring ^
01:04:945 (14) - ^ ^
01:05:181 (15) - change to k for same reason as above okay then
01:05:535 (17) - ^ okey
01:12:031 (45) - delete
01:12:504 (47) - delete
01:12:740 (48) - change to k like above
01:13:094 (50) - ^
01:43:685 (150) - change to d. dons on a downbeat will sound well imo
01:50:299 (173) - delete slider.
01:50:299 - add k
01:50:535 - add d
01:50:771 - add k
01:51:008 - add 1/4 triplet (kkk) ending in 01:51:244
02:12:504 (243) - delete.
02:12:976 (245) - delete
02:13:212 (246) - change to k. might get too hard
02:13:567 (248) - ^
02:14:157 (251) - delete. the notes are too long and might tire players.
02:20:063 (277) - delete
02:20:535 (279) - delete
02:20:771 (280) - change to k. too hard
02:21:126 (282) - ^
02:50:299 (381) - delete
02:50:771 (383) - delete
02:51:008 (384) - cahnge to k like above.
02:51:362 (386) - ^

Seriously, this is hard enough to be an oni. remember that players need to rest as well~
as the rest i would just left it to lzenxl cuz im sorta uncertain :\

lZenxl's Oni
Can't seem to point out things that are out of place. it think it's good considering the difficulty spread

that's it for me, guess. all the diffs are relatively hard so idk what the tBATs will think. consider making it easier.

sorry if i'm being picky tho

thanks for the mod (=ﾟωﾟ)ﾉ

mangocurry wrote:
Hey, from modding queue!
I don't see any problem with normal and easy. yeyy
[hard]
00:37:071 (6) - ctrl + G? fixed
00:39:433 (6,1) - stack i dont think that i wanna do a stacking at this area
01:37:543 (2,3) - DS
01:38:015 (3,4) - curve these! nope
01:42:740 (1,1) - NC
01:47:937 (1,2) - Ctrl + J, and then Ctrl + H
01:48:645 (1) - move to 01:48:882
01:49:354 (2) - delete
02:49:590 (3) - haha, is this for Nana? :3
03:05:889 (3) - reduce the slider length so that it ends at 03:06:362
03:06:598 -^ and then I'd add a slider that ends at 03:06:834
03:10:614 - I'd add a slider at the "yesss" part, haha. It should end at 03:11:323
and the spinner should end at 03:10:141 if you're adding this slider.

thanks for the mod miaw (=ﾟωﾟ)ﾉ

Kyouren

5,656 posts

Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2014-08-31T08:27:25+00:00

Thanks for mod~

Goku's Part

352,88,101795,5,4,0:0:0:0:
148,88,102740,5,4,0:0:0:0:
352,88,103212,5,4,0:0:0:0:
148,88,103685,5,4,0:0:0:0:
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@Celizavia: I think you map need Bubble, so Called a BAT~

Fumika

1,425 posts

Joined November 2011

Fumika 2014-08-31T10:22:47+00:00

From my test play queue, This will be my suggestion. (I will point the problem in my opinion)

Standard

Taiko

Offset +3 please

[list:1337]For Standard diff

First thing is spacing... 00:38:015 (1,2,3,4,5) - like WHAT (In Hard diff), Did you use any distance spacing? nah, just pointing.Your pattern is kinda easy to play but you need to make it more harder IMO.~~Add the album name to the source?~~

[list:1337]For Taiko diff

everything is quite decentRECOMMEND to use 1.4 slider velocity for this slow BPM song.Add more pattern might be good (Like this 00:16:047 (74,75,76,77,78,79,80) - ddkkddk)I hope this could help you perhaps.No kudos for this please!

Kyouren

5,656 posts

Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2014-08-31T10:54:36+00:00

I trying playing this map and RESULT:

SPOILER

Celizavia

568 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Celizavia 2014-08-31T11:03:14+00:00

Fumika wrote:
From my test play queue, This will be my suggestion. (I will point the problem in my opinion)

Standard
Taiko

Offset +3 please
[list:1337]For Standard diff
First thing is spacing... 00:38:015 (1,2,3,4,5) - like WHAT (In Hard diff), Did you use any distance spacing? nah, just pointing.Your pattern is kinda easy to play but you need to make it more harder IMO.~~Add the album name to the source?~~
[list:1337]For Taiko diff
everything is quite decentRECOMMEND to use 1.4 slider velocity for this slow BPM song.Add more pattern might be good (Like this 00:16:047 (74,75,76,77,78,79,80) - ddkkddk)I hope this could help you perhaps.No kudos for this please!

thanks for your testplay

for the offset i think i already good with it

gokugohan12468 wrote:
I trying playing this map and RESULT:

SPOILER

yeyy

Jere-Chan

70 posts

Joined December 2013

Jere-Chan 2014-08-31T17:35:03+00:00

Hi! found this on my mod que but i dont think you need another mod lol... (you got 12 pages of posts) so im sorry D:

Celizavia

568 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Celizavia 2014-09-04T15:06:23+00:00

Arrgh please fix the mod (=ﾟωﾟ)ﾉ
New Orange Caramell song damn. ~~New beatmap coming soon i guess~~

Evening

2,464 posts

Joined December 2012

Evening 2014-09-07T04:55:17+00:00

Fumika wrote:
From my test play queue, This will be my suggestion. (I will point the problem in my opinion)

Standard
Taiko

Offset +3 please
[list:1337]For Standard diff
First thing is spacing... 00:38:015 (1,2,3,4,5) - like WHAT (In Hard diff), Did you use any distance spacing? nah, just pointing.Your pattern is kinda easy to play but you need to make it more harder IMO.~~Add the album name to the source?~~
[list:1337]For Taiko diff
everything is quite decentRECOMMEND to use 1.4 slider velocity for this slow BPM song. Hmm, I personally don't really like too slow of a scroll speed to read long 1/4 streams since it's rather confusing, will keep at 1.6Add more pattern might be good (Like this 00:16:047 (74,75,76,77,78,79,80) - ddkkddk)Hmm, I prefer a more simplistic approach, wouldn't want to variate the patterning too much

I hope this could help you perhaps.No kudos for this please!

was really busy, now I'm at my holidays, probably will have more time on osu hh

Update thingy

osu file format v13

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256,208,178330,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,208,178567,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,208,178803,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,208,179039,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,208,179275,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,208,179866,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,208,180220,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,208,180456,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,208,180575,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,208,180693,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,208,180929,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,208,181165,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,200,181283,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,208,181401,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,208,181638,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,208,182346,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,208,183763,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,208,184000,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,208,184236,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,208,190378,1,12,0:0:0:0:

MidSoul

290 posts

Joined July 2012

MidSoul 2014-09-09T12:45:29+00:00

hi / , taiko modding queue : request from Celizavia. thanks~

[Sariel's Fuutsu]
・Fuutsu..Futsuu ?
・its good pattern map for sound, but please make a little more intervals somewhere for novice.

01:00:220 - spinner?

01:17:937 (198) - delete
01:18:645 (201) - delete
01:19:826 (205) - del
01:20:535 (208) - del
01:25:496 (219) - delete
01:26:204 (222) - delete
01:27:386 (226) - del
01:28:094 (229) - del
01:45:811 (273) - del
02:05:181 (323) - del
02:56:204 (461) - delete
02:56:913 (464) - delete
02:58:094 (468) - del
02:58:803 (471) - del
03:03:763 (483) - delete
03:04:472 (486) - delete
03:05:653 (490) - del
03:06:362 (493) - del

・for futsuu difficulty, shouldnot all of them but.. plz.

[lZenxl's Muzukashii]
・this map really easy to read as pattern map, but please make a little more intervals somewhere for player.

00:26:204 (102) - remove finisher
01:11:559 (43) - rem finisher
02:12:031 (241) - same as ^
02:34:708 (326) - ^
02:57:386 (409) - ^
03:04:945 (440) - ^
03:08:724 (456) - ^
03:09:197 (458) - ^

00:42:267 (162) - this slider end to 00:42:740 - and d d or d k

01:09:197 (32,33) - remove finisher
01:20:299 (78,79,80) - rem finisher
01:27:858 (108,109,110) - same as ^
02:58:567 (414,415,416) - ^
03:02:110 (429,430,431) - ^
03:04:945 (440) - ^
03:06:126 (445,446,447) - ^
03:08:724 (456) - ^
03:09:197 (458) - ^

[lZenxl's Oni]
・more interval anywhere.
00:13:921 (64) - rem finisher
00:26:204 (129) - rem finisher
01:26:204 (425) - ^
01:18:645 (384) - ^
03:02:582 (885) - ^
03:04:472 (897) - ^

01:24:551 (414) - del

02:28:094 (714,,,718) - don't follow this back clap?

have to get more modding for taiko. its like not taiko map, something converted.

Norman

Norman 2014-09-14T11:37:47+00:00

Hello, Celizavia

Artist : 오렌지캬라멜 (because that means "Orange Caramel")
Title : 까탈레나 (because that means "Catallena")

SPOILER

xxdeathx

2,661 posts

Joined July 2013

xxdeathx 2014-09-15T08:34:53+00:00

Winning in my queue:

[Easy]

00:16:756 (1,2) - blanket like this
SPOILER
http://puu.sh/bzO1X/a057ffc9d8.png
00:22:425 (3) - remove the extra slider point
01:47:937 (1) - all these sliders with one curve can be made with only 1 middle slider point

[Normal]

Use CS3 or 3.5 for normal
00:46:519 (8,1) - can blanket
00:51:716 (2,3) - 00:54:078 (4,1) - ^
02:56:204 (2,4) - try to make these congruent
01:49:354 (2,4) - not exactly stacked

A little better than hard but still...

[Hard]
This diff is quite messy and has a multitude of other problems, so I'll try to give you the general ideas to help you improve it overall.

There are aesthetic issues like ugly sliders, overlaps, and imperfect blankets, hard to read parts, and bad flow at some areas. This is a little subjective but your map needs a consistent style and every few seconds I see you using new types of patterns that aren't consistent with your other style.

Difficulty settings too high. HP7 and OD7 is only for insanes. Use 5-6 for both. Also AR7 because AR8 is for high bpm hards or low bpm insane.
00:26:204 (3) - don't overlap ends
00:29:039 (3,4,5,6) - spaced doubles are confusing and should only be in insanes. stack them for hards.
00:38:488 (3,4) - What's with this spacing? use same spacing for same timing
00:38:961 (5,6,1) - this is extremely confusing because the 1/1 beat is stacked but then a 1/2 beat after is a jump. You should adhere to time distance spacing rule. This makes the map easier to read.
00:39:669 (1) - again, don't overlap slider ends. there's a time and place when this is done well, but it is not here. you have a lot of these that you shouldn't use.
00:45:575 (3,4) - avoid overlap like previous objects
00:45:102 (2,3,4) - remove finishes, you use them when there is a cymbal crashing sound, not here
00:46:992 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1) - this whole section is pretty messy. All the objects are close together and it's hard to keep track of them the way they are arranged
02:20:063 (4,5) - you can curve these sliders so that they blanket the circle

After 02:34:000 the map is a lot neater. Still some issues but you can see the sliders are parallel and blanketing stuff, or curved nicely anyways.

I'm afraid this mapset has way too many problems inherently, and mods can't fix those. You should get more experience with mapping and modding and then come back to see how you can improve your map. A lot of the things I mentioned in hard can apply to easy and normal too.

Celizavia

568 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Celizavia 2014-09-15T10:42:38+00:00

xxdeathx wrote:
Winning in my queue:

[Easy]
00:16:756 (1,2) - blanket like this fixed
SPOILER
http://puu.sh/bzO1X/a057ffc9d8.png
00:22:425 (3) - remove the extra slider point
01:47:937 (1) - all these sliders with one curve can be made with only 1 middle slider point
i dont see the point of deleting a slider point as an issue but, fixed
[Normal]
Use CS3 or 3.5 for normal okay, fixed
00:46:519 (8,1) - can blanket yes
00:51:716 (2,3) - 00:54:078 (4,1) - ^ ^
02:56:204 (2,4) - try to make these congruent fixed
01:49:354 (2,4) - not exactly stacked
changed the patterns
A little better than hard but still...

[Hard]
This diff is quite messy and has a multitude of other problems, so I'll try to give you the general ideas to help you improve it overall.

There are aesthetic issues like ugly sliders, overlaps, and imperfect blankets, hard to read parts, and bad flow at some areas. This is a little subjective but your map needs a consistent style and every few seconds I see you using new types of patterns that aren't consistent with your other style.
Difficulty settings too high. HP7 and OD7 is only for insanes. Use 5-6 for both. Also AR7 because AR8 is for high bpm hards or low bpm insane. alright, fixed
00:26:204 (3) - don't overlap ends okay
00:29:039 (3,4,5,6) - spaced doubles are confusing and should only be in insanes. stack them for hards. fixed
00:38:488 (3,4) - What's with this spacing? use same spacing for same timing okay
00:38:961 (5,6,1) - this is extremely confusing because the 1/1 beat is stacked but then a 1/2 beat after is a jump. You should adhere to time distance spacing rule. This makes the map easier to read. ^
00:39:669 (1) - again, don't overlap slider ends. there's a time and place when this is done well, but it is not here. you have a lot of these that you shouldn't use. ^
00:45:575 (3,4) - avoid overlap like previous objects^
00:45:102 (2,3,4) - remove finishes, you use them when there is a cymbal crashing sound, not here its a clap, it matches the hoi hoi hoi sound
00:46:992 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1) - this whole section is pretty messy. All the objects are close together and it's hard to keep track of them the way they are arranged alright fixed
02:20:063 (4,5) - you can curve these sliders so that they blanket the circle
After 02:34:000 the map is a lot neater. Still some issues but you can see the sliders are parallel and blanketing stuff, or curved nicely anyways.

I'm afraid this mapset has way too many problems inherently, and mods can't fix those. You should get more experience with mapping and modding and then come back to see how you can improve your map. A lot of the things I mentioned in hard can apply to easy and normal too.

thanks for the mod!

Norman wrote:
Hello, Celizavia

Artist : 오렌지캬라멜 (because that means "Orange Caramel")
Title : 까탈레나 (because that means "Catallena")

SPOILER

thanks for the metadata!

Yuthuil

476 posts

Joined April 2014

Yuthuil 2014-09-23T15:14:53+00:00

Hi random mod

Easy:

00:16:756 (1,2) - Blanketing correctly is really important. If not blanketed properly, it can look seriously ugly.
00:18:645 (3,4) - Blanket.
00:20:535 (1) - end point x20 y80
00:21:953 (2,3) - I think three would look better as a blanket, since at this time of the song it doesn't go too well.
00:25:260 (3) - really bad note placement. I think you should remove 00:24:787 (2) and put 3 in it's place, then flip it vertically, http://puu.sh/bKHb4/e402f6ab36.jpg
If you follow my above suggestion, then you could add a circle here 00:25:732 this rythm fits better imo
00:29:984 (3) - move to x320 y216, then move 00:30:929 (4) - back to it's original position, basically fix stuff that are affected by the change afterwards. (nice pattern btw)
00:35:181 (1,2) - extremely bad note placement, breaks the flow and all.
00:41:323 (3,4) - bad note placement due to 00:40:378 (2). I think you'll have to remove 00:40:378 (2) and reshape it.
00:45:102 (4) - clone this of 00:43:212 (2) - since it looks better imo
00:50:771 (1,2) - try this, http://puu.sh/bKHFM/477e3c6320.jpg it's because of one's shape that you can't do it properly at first.
00:57:386 (2,3) - I thought that red ticks weren't allowed in easy. anyway for me it feel weird since this is the only 1/2 part in the whole 1/1 stuff
01:03:527 (2,3) - blanket these two properly.
01:06:362 (1) - this is not nice imo
01:15:338 (4) - I think this'd sound better if it was ended on 01:15:811 here.
01:34:236 (5) - not nice imo try this http://puu.sh/bKI4H/ea1941fbb5.jpg <--- still doesn't look good but better than before imo
01:36:126 (1) - leaves little time for reaction in easy.
01:42:268 (3,4,5) - try to remember this is easy. use a turn back slider instead.
01:43:212 (1,2) - blanket
01:50:772 (4) - stack properly with 01:49:354 (2) -
01:50:772 (4,1) - this is horrible imo
01:55:023 (1,2,3) - If you blanketed these into each other it'd look way better imo
02:11:559 (4,1) - circle placement is not nice imo
02:22:425 (2,3,4) - turn back slider

Overall: I'll be frank, this difficulty is not good.

Normal:

I think you need to neaten so many things up, it doesn't look inviting to play at all.

Hard:

00:29:984 (8) - remove third turn back imo...
I don't this diff is good either but it is better than normal and easy. i think note placement needs work on here. http://puu.sh/bKJ37/f35c47641d.jpg

Evening

2,464 posts

Joined December 2012

Evening 2014-09-27T02:05:49+00:00

MidSoul wrote:
hi / , taiko modding queue : request from Celizavia. thanks~

[Sariel's Fuutsu]
・Fuutsu..Futsuu ?
・its good pattern map for sound, but please make a little more intervals somewhere for novice.

01:00:220 - spinner?

01:17:937 (198) - delete
01:18:645 (201) - delete
01:19:826 (205) - del
01:20:535 (208) - del
01:25:496 (219) - delete
01:26:204 (222) - delete
01:27:386 (226) - del
01:28:094 (229) - del
01:45:811 (273) - del
02:05:181 (323) - del
02:56:204 (461) - delete
02:56:913 (464) - delete
02:58:094 (468) - del
02:58:803 (471) - del
03:03:763 (483) - delete
03:04:472 (486) - delete
03:05:653 (490) - del
03:06:362 (493) - del

・for futsuu difficulty, shouldnot all of them but.. plz.

[lZenxl's Muzukashii]
・this map really easy to read as pattern map, but please make a little more intervals somewhere for player.

00:26:204 (102) - remove finisher This vocal feels very strong, I would like to emphasize this
01:11:559 (43) - rem finisher ^
02:12:031 (241) - same as ^ ^
02:34:708 (326) - ^ To follow 02:32:819 (318) -
02:57:386 (409) - ^ To follow 02:55:496 (402) -
03:04:945 (440) - ^ To follow 03:03:055 (433) -
03:08:724 (456) - ^ Removed, don't really think that i need that much finishers at the back
03:09:197 (458) - ^ ^

00:42:267 (162) - this slider end to 00:42:740 - and d d or d k Fixed

01:09:197 (32,33) - remove finisher Emphasis on vocal here ( The finishers are acting as a follow up before the big don)
01:20:299 (78,79,80) - rem finisher ^
01:27:858 (108,109,110) - same as ^ ^
02:58:567 (414,415,416) - ^ ^
03:02:110 (429,430,431) - ^ ^
03:04:945 (440) - ^ I think i explained this before
03:06:126 (445,446,447) - ^ ^
03:08:724 (456) - ^ I think i explained this before
03:09:197 (458) - ^I think i explained this before

[lZenxl's Oni]
・more interval anywhere.
00:13:921 (64) - rem finisher Removed
00:26:204 (129) - rem finisher Emphasis on Vocal
01:26:204 (425) - ^ This is to follow up to the triple finisher later on
01:18:645 (384) - ^ ^
03:02:582 (885) - ^ Emphasis on vocal
03:04:472 (897) - ^ ^

01:24:551 (414) - del for vocals here

02:28:094 (714,,,718) - don't follow this back clap? Fixed this

have to get more modding for taiko. its like not taiko map, something converted.

Thanks for mod o/

lol why am i getting so frustrated about getting mods every 1 week

Updates
Oni
http://puu.sh/bPlft/d19db841ba.osu
Muzu
http://puu.sh/bPlfT/aa11d68485.osu

Konpaku Sariel

778 posts

Joined October 2010

Konpaku Sariel 2014-09-27T12:17:26+00:00

about my GD.. don't recommand that delete notes or make more easy

it seems has many notes
but this song is very slow (bpm127)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rmKSiG0zlag

Kyouren

5,656 posts

Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2014-09-27T14:00:55+00:00

Celizavia: Can you fixed my part? (xxdeathx's mod)

snowball112

363 posts

Joined February 2013

snowball112 2014-09-29T13:37:50+00:00

Hey ^^ Mod from queue, #late.

-Remove "Catallena" from the tags since it's the title.

Sariel's Futsuu

-Maybe include a few more 2/1 spacings between 00:01:638 (1) and 00:14:393 (27) in the intro? For example, you could remove 00:04:000 (6) and 00:05:889 (10) and make 00:04:472 (7) a kat, Simliar with 00:11:559 (21) and 00:13:449 (24) and make 00:12:031 (22) a kat as well. This might be better to have some more difference in spacing between the intro and the following kiai as well as putting more emphasis on the clap in the music.

-Remove either of 00:23:370 (48,49), preferably 00:23:842 (49). You could give players a really short break here between the longer patterns and put more emphasis on the continueing vocals at 00:24:315 (50) in my opinion.

-Maybe remove 00:28:803 (62). This would create a short break before the part of the kiai where you create different spacings by putting notes on the blue tick. This might be better for newer players to be able to prepare better for the change in spacing. Similar with the following:
- 00:55:260 (134)
- 00:57:149 (141)
- 01:14:157 (187)
- 02:03:291 (316)
- 02:05:181 (323)
- 02:22:189 (373)
- 02:52:425 (450)

-Remove 00:32:110 (71). Even though there are vocals at this point, it may be better to use only the 1/2 00:32:346 (72,73,74) to emphasize these here.

-I feel that you may want to include a bit of 1/1 in the pattern of 00:38:488 (89,90,91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99). Maybe remove 00:39:669 (93) to space things out a bit?

-Maybe remove 01:03:291 (153) and 01:10:850 (176) to avoid longer patterns? These notes don't really do much in my opinion. Highly optional though, you could also go with removing every other instead of every suggestion if you think that the map might get too easy. Similar with the following:
- 01:18:645 (201)
- 01:10:850 (176)
- 02:11:323 (339)
- 02:18:882 (362)
- 02:49:118 (439)
- 02:56:913 (464)
- 02:58:803 (471)
- 03:04:472 (486)
- 03:06:362 (493)

-Remove 01:20:535 (208) and 01:26:204 (222) and 01:28:094 (229). These notes don't really emphasize much in my opinion, so you could leave them out.

-Remove 01:34:708 (244) and 01:36:598 (248) and turn 01:35:181 (245) into a kat, similar to the first point.

-Maybe remove 01:45:811 (273) and 01:50:535 (287) as well?

Konpaku Sariel wrote:
about my GD.. don't recommand that delete notes or make more easy
it seems has many notes
but this song is very slow (bpm127)

I have seen this, but some spacings might be good for the pattern changes with the use of notes on blue ticks. Also, I feel that leaving out a bit of the notes you have right now can make other parts of the songs stand out more in my opinion as explained above

Good luck with your map ^^

Konpaku Sariel

778 posts

Joined October 2010

Konpaku Sariel 2014-10-02T12:12:15+00:00

update

http://puu.sh/bWhFR/c7610a9793.osu

Celizavia

568 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Celizavia 2014-10-04T10:23:58+00:00

fixed all mods

NeviltiS

100 posts

Joined February 2014

NeviltiS 2014-10-06T13:35:06+00:00

Hi~ from my queue.

[Sariel's Futsuu]
00:16:047 (31) - remove?
02:38:488 (399) - k?

[lZenxl's Muzukashii]
01:38:724 (140) - k?
01:55:496 (185,187,194,196) - remove? (I thinks it should take high and low speed pace.)
02:39:433 (337) - move to 02:39:315?

[lZenxl's Oni]
00:53:015 (259) - d?
02:39:433 (773) - move to 02:39:315?

Good luck!

Beautiful

86 posts

Joined October 2013

Beautiful 2014-10-07T02:55:20+00:00

I love this ,

please rank ;

Konpaku Sariel

778 posts

Joined October 2010

Konpaku Sariel 2014-10-07T06:23:34+00:00

lzenxl's oni

00:06:598 (27,28,29,30,31,32) - kkd kkd
00:14:157 (65,66,67,68,69) - kkd kkd

how about this patterns

OblivioN

OblivioN 2014-10-10T03:15:18+00:00

sry, i don't like this song

taken my star and good luck ☆

rew0825

1,290 posts

Joined March 2013

rew0825 2014-10-15T11:41:07+00:00

Hi from my request

[

Sariel's Fuutsu]

00:25:968 (54) - k
00:28:803 (62,63) - ctrl+g and 00:29:393 (64,65,66) - k k d
00:30:456 (67,68) - ctrl+g
01:04:236 (155) - k
01:04:708 (156) - d
01:11:795 (178) - k
01:12:267 (179) - d
01:25:023 (215) - k
01:26:913 (222) - k
02:03:291 (317,318) - ctrl+g and 02:03:882 (319,320,321) - k k d
02:05:181 (324,325) - ctrl+g and 02:05:771 (326,327,328) - k k d
02:09:197 (335) - move to 02:09:078
03:06:362 (490) - d
03:09:433 (499) - move to 03:09:551
03:09:669 (500) - move to 03:10:141

[

lZenxl's Muzukashii]

1/2 is so long , Please some Delete

00:19:118 (72) - Delete
00:24:551 (94) - Delete
00:26:677 (103) - Delete
00:33:055 (127) - Delete
00:34:000 (130) - Delete
00:34:708 (132) - This slider end at 00:35:181 and 00:35:417 , 00:35:653 - Add note
00:36:834 (138) - Delete
00:37:779 (141) - Delete
00:42:267 (156) - This slider end at 00:42:740 and 00:42:976 , 00:43:212 - Add note
00:44:393 (160) - Delete
00:56:441 (201) - k
00:58:330 (208) - k
00:59:275 (212) - d
01:04:472 (12) - Delete
01:07:071 (22,23) - ctrl+g
01:09:905 (34) - Delete
01:12:031 (43) - Delete
01:19:118 (73) - k
01:19:590 (75,76) - ctrl+g
01:23:842 (90) - Delete
01:26:677 (103) - k
01:27:149 (105,106) - ctrl+g
01:35:181 (128) - This slider end at 01:35:653 and 01:36:126 - Add note
01:50:299 (170) - This slider end at 01:50:771 and 01:51:008 , 01:51:244 - Add note
01:52:425 (177) - Delete
02:07:543 (218) - Delete
02:10:378 (228) - Delete
02:12:504 (237) - Delete
02:14:157 (244) - Delete
02:17:937 (259) - Delete
02:20:063 (268) - Delete
02:33:055 (309) - Delete
02:34:472 (314) - Delete
02:36:362 (321) - Delete
02:44:393 (341) - Delete
02:48:173 (357) - Delete
02:50:299 (366) - Delete
02:58:330 (397) - Delete
03:02:110 (413) - Delete
03:03:291 (416) - Delete
03:05:889 (425) - Delete
03:10:378 (443) - move to 03:10:614

[

lZenxl's Oni]

Same Muzukashii , Some Delete

00:03:763 (12) - Delete
00:05:653 (22) - Delete
00:11:323 (48) - Delete
00:13:212 (58) - Delete
00:16:992 (77) - Delete
00:19:118 (86) - Delete
00:26:677 (125) - Delete
00:34:000 (160) - Delete
00:35:889 (170) - Delete
00:39:669 (189) - Delete
00:43:449 (205) - Delete
00:59:512 (279) - Delete
01:04:472 (299,300) - Delete
01:09:905 (324) - Delete
01:24:551 (399) - Delete
01:43:921 (488,489) - Delete
01:45:811 (496) - Delete
01:51:480 (525) - Delete
02:12:504 (617) - Delete
02:17:937 (641,642) - Delete
02:18:763 (644) - move to 02:18:527
02:20:417 (652,653) - Delete
02:26:204 (680) - Delete
02:28:094 (688) - Delete
02:29:984 (696) - Delete
02:31:874 (704) - Delete
02:34:945 (718) - Delete
02:48:173 (777,778) - Delete
03:02:819 (854) - Delete
03:10:378 (895) - move to 03:10:614

Good luck

Celizavia

568 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Celizavia 2014-10-15T13:24:45+00:00

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Vertify

228 posts

Joined May 2013

Vertify 2014-10-17T10:07:37+00:00

M4M =D

[General]

Easy difficulty Circle Size needs to be 2. It's the same as normal- makes no sense.
For easy and normals, you want to focus on keeping DS equal as possible. For [Hards], you still want equal DS in relation to their combo (some of them)

[Easy]

00:27:150 (5,1) - Spacing is too far. Shouldn't be a jump (if that was intentional).
00:20:534 (1,2) - Blanket the (2)? Suggestion for change: If blanketing (2) > remove repeater tick and place a single on top of (2) in place
00:35:181 (1,2) - Spacing is too close
00:37:071 (3) - For consistency, no reason for this to be overlapped by (2); move this away (with equal DS as its previous notes in the combo)
00:41:323 (3) - Fix this DS [between (4) and (5)]
00:41:795 (4,1) - You mad lol? There shouldn't be any jumps in an Easy. If anything - only during a pause (but that itself isn't really a 'jump') xD
00:54:551 (1,2) - Spacing too far
01:03:527 (2,3) - Can be blanket'ed' better
01:07:779 (2,3) - Spacing too far
01:47:465 (7,1,2) - Fix spacing
01:56:913 (3,4) - Can be blanket'ed' better
02:10:141 (3,4) - No need for an overlap (you haven't done any till until now; for consistency purposes?)
02:11:559 (4,1) - ^ Same as above
02:34:708 (3,4) - Blanket this.
02:52:661 (2,1) - Space these out

[Hard]
1. 00:17:464 (4) - Fix DS (make Prev and Next equal)
2. 00:24:551 (3,4,5) - Really awkward to play when there hasn't been a set Distance Snap
  The whole map (spacing wise) needs to be fixed. It's too hard to follow the flow when they're all different (excluding jumps of course). Won't point them out anymore.
3. 01:07:071 (2,3) - Space these apart - no reason to put these notes close together
4. 01:08:724 (6,7,8) - ^ same
5. 01:52:897 (5,6) - Curve the slider - rotate it by -15 and adjust it back upwards so there's better cursor flow.
6. 02:49:590 (3,4) - Curve (4) in line with (3) - neatness and flow

Good work.

Celizavia

568 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Celizavia 2014-10-17T14:55:20+00:00

Vertify wrote:
M4M =D

[General]

Easy difficulty Circle Size needs to be 2. It's the same as normal- makes no sense. alralright, changed into 2,5 instead since 2 is too big imo
For easy and normals, you want to focus on keeping DS equal as possible. For [Hards], you still want equal DS in relation to their combo (some of them)
[Easy]

00:27:150 (5,1) - Spacing is too far. Shouldn't be a jump (if that was intentional). i looked at Aimod and it says no DS problem, so it should be fine
00:20:534 (1,2) - Blanket the (2)? Suggestion for change: If blanketing (2) > remove repeater tick and place a single on top of (2) in place i'll keep this
00:35:181 (1,2) - Spacing is too close ^
00:37:071 (3) - For consistency, no reason for this to be overlapped by (2); move this away (with equal DS as its previous notes in the combo) i was just stack the sliders end
00:41:323 (3) - Fix this DS [between (4) and (5)] again, no DS prob at my Aimod
00:41:795 (4,1) - You mad lol? There shouldn't be any jumps in an Easy. If anything - only during a pause (but that itself isn't really a 'jump') xD
00:54:551 (1,2) - Spacing too far
01:03:527 (2,3) - Can be blanket'ed' better okay
01:07:779 (2,3) - Spacing too far
01:47:465 (7,1,2) - Fix spacing
01:56:913 (3,4) - Can be blanket'ed' better
02:10:141 (3,4) - No need for an overlap (you haven't done any till until now; for consistency purposes?)
02:11:559 (4,1) - ^ Same as above
02:34:708 (3,4) - Blanket this.
02:52:661 (2,1) - Space these out

[Hard]

00:17:464 (4) - Fix DS (make Prev and Next equal) any suggetion?
00:24:551 (3,4,5) - Really awkward to play when there hasn't been a set Distance Snap eh, yes i did
The whole map (spacing wise) needs to be fixed. It's too hard to follow the flow when they're all different (excluding jumps of course). Won't point them out anymore.
01:07:071 (2,3) - Space these apart - no reason to put these notes close together fixed
01:08:724 (6,7,8) - ^ same
01:52:897 (5,6) - Curve the slider - rotate it by -15 and adjust it back upwards so there's better cursor flow.
02:49:590 (3,4) - Curve (4) in line with (3) - neatness and flow
Good work.

thanks for the mods!

Birdy

5,739 posts

Joined April 2011

Birdy 2014-10-17T21:10:52+00:00

Here we go.

[Easy]
00:23:842 (4) - Starting from here, the clap hitsounds seem to be inconsistent. Please check 'em and fix 'em.
00:35:181 (1) - This slider seems to use the old curving system, please remove it and replace it with a new one for better design.
00:37:071 (3) - Please. This is not a good design.
00:45:102 (4) - Make (2)'s pattern a little more symmetrical, remove this slider and copy and flip that one here.
00:46:992 (1) - There seems to be an unnecessary point near the end of the slider, please remove it to keep the slider 100% straight.
01:07:779 (2) - Again, hitsound inconsistencies continue, but this time there are extra sounds instead of missing sounds.
01:47:937 (1) - Move the middle sliderpoint a few squares down to make the blanket prettier.
01:50:772 (4) - Stack with the (2).
01:50:772 (4) - The shape could blanket the circle in the middle (the next 1).
02:06:362 (1) - Distance inconsistency. Please resnap using the 0,8 distance snap you've been using through the map previously.
02:10:142 (3,4,1) - Overlapping should be avoided.

[Normal]
The break time here compared to Easy and Hard is really odd.
Please make the hitsounds more consistent.
00:52:661 (3,4) - Slight overlapping, move (4) a little upwards.
00:56:441 (1,2,3,4) - Remove the repeat from the slider and move 2,3,4 to start 1/2 earlier.
01:02:110 (3) - Touching (1), again, move the slider end a little upwards.
01:03:763 (5) - Should start 1/2 later (remember to distance snap afterwards).
01:05:417 (6) - Remove.
02:04:472 (1,2) - Overlapping should be avoided.
The ending has really weird slider shapes that you should change. Pretty much all of them.

[Hard]
Please make the hitsounds more consistent (especially in the 3rd kiai I remember some really weird hitsounding parts).
00:26:204 (3) - Should end 1/2 earlier, and also should not overlap itself and the previous slider.
00:29:039 (3,4,5,6) - Please don't make one stack with both 1/2 and 1/4. I'm pretty sure that's unrankable.
00:39:669 (1) - Don't make it overlap itself.
00:48:882 (1) - ^
00:51:125 (2,3,4) - Please don't make one stack with both 1/2 and 1/4 etc. etc.
00:52:070 (2,3,4) - ^
01:05:889 (3) - Slightly touches (2), please move this a little bit away from it.
01:32:346 (1) - Loops should have a hole in the middle. Not sure if this is unrankable, I mean, it's still pretty possible to read, but it's definitely not a good design. Remember this guide whenever looking for good designs for sliders.
01:36:126 (1) - Don't make it overlap itself.
01:38:015 (3) - Remove the red point from the slider end.
01:45:575 (5) - And don't make this overlap itself.
02:05:181 (4,5) - This part makes absolutely no sense beat-wise.
02:45:338 (3) - Please remove the red point.

Vertify

228 posts

Joined May 2013

Vertify 2014-10-17T22:03:18+00:00

I think you misunderstood me about spacing. I screened some pictures: NO KD!

SPOILER

This is what you want for majority of your mapping > equal distance. You had this DS consistent for awhile and then you start to go everywhere.
________________________

1.18 > 1.10 (Yes, it's noticeable)
________________________

Another one 1.40 > 1.22. (If it was an intended jump it doesn't need tp be.

Celizavia

568 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Celizavia 2014-10-18T08:17:38+00:00

Static Noise Bird wrote:
Here we go.

[Easy]
00:23:842 (4) - Starting from here, the clap hitsounds seem to be inconsistent. Please check 'em and fix 'em. alright, fixed
00:35:181 (1) - This slider seems to use the old curving system, please remove it and replace it with a new one for better design. ^
00:37:071 (3) - Please. This is not a good design. ^
00:45:102 (4) - Make (2)'s pattern a little more symmetrical, remove this slider and copy and flip that one here. ^
00:46:992 (1) - There seems to be an unnecessary point near the end of the slider, please remove it to keep the slider 100% straight.
01:07:779 (2) - Again, hitsound inconsistencies continue, but this time there are extra sounds instead of missing sounds.
01:47:937 (1) - Move the middle sliderpoint a few squares down to make the blanket prettier.
01:50:772 (4) - Stack with the (2).
01:50:772 (4) - The shape could blanket the circle in the middle (the next 1).
02:06:362 (1) - Distance inconsistency. Please resnap using the 0,8 distance snap you've been using through the map previously.
02:10:142 (3,4,1) - Overlapping should be avoided.

[Normal]
The break time here compared to Easy and Hard is really odd.
Please make the hitsounds more consistent.
00:52:661 (3,4) - Slight overlapping, move (4) a little upwards. fixed
00:56:441 (1,2,3,4) - Remove the repeat from the slider and move 2,3,4 to start 1/2 earlier.
01:02:110 (3) - Touching (1), again, move the slider end a little upwards. fixed
01:03:763 (5) - Should start 1/2 later (remember to distance snap afterwards).
01:05:417 (6) - Remove.
02:04:472 (1,2) - Overlapping should be avoided.
The ending has really weird slider shapes that you should change. Pretty much all of them.

[Hard]
Please make the hitsounds more consistent (especially in the 3rd kiai I remember some really weird hitsounding parts).
00:26:204 (3) - Should end 1/2 earlier, and also should not overlap itself and the previous slider. fixed
00:29:039 (3,4,5,6) - Please don't make one stack with both 1/2 and 1/4. I'm pretty sure that's unrankable. ^
00:39:669 (1) - Don't make it overlap itself.^
00:48:882 (1) - ^ ^
00:51:125 (2,3,4) - Please don't make one stack with both 1/2 and 1/4 etc. etc. ^
00:52:070 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
01:05:889 (3) - Slightly touches (2), please move this a little bit away from it.^
01:32:346 (1) - Loops should have a hole in the middle. Not sure if this is unrankable, I mean, it's still pretty possible to read, but it's definitely not a good design. Remember this guide whenever looking for good designs for sliders.
01:36:126 (1) - Don't make it overlap itself. ^
01:38:015 (3) - Remove the red point from the slider end.
01:45:575 (5) - And don't make this overlap itself.
02:05:181 (4,5) - This part makes absolutely no sense beat-wise.
02:45:338 (3) - Please remove the red point.

thanks for the mod! fixed

Kyouren

5,656 posts

Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2014-10-25T13:32:38+00:00

Nothing to say~

Goku's Part

osu file format v13

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Countdown: 0
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100,72,136283,2,0,P|88:132|56:164,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,311,136756,2,0,P|96:272|77:237,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,232,137228,2,0,L|240:256,2,40,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,332,137700,6,0,P|300:336|400:284,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,172,138409,2,0,P|416:116|328:52,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,96,139118,2,0,L|144:144,3,80,8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,252,140063,2,0,P|152:332|224:352,2,160,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,228,141244,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,228,141480,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,228,141716,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,112,141952,2,0,L|364:40,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,56,142425,6,0,P|492:152|404:348,1,320,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,336,143606,2,0,L|192:288,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,180,144078,2,0,P|192:96|176:88,1,80
84,108,144551,2,8,P|88:180|116:200,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,284,145023,2,4,L|224:360,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,320,145496,6,0,P|392:280|400:256,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,160,145968,2,0,P|376:100|352:88,1,80
248,76,146441,2,0,P|192:92|176:136,1,80
116,208,146913,2,0,P|64:136|68:120,2,80,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,308,147622,6,0,L|264:352,3,80,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,352,148567,2,0,L|460:308,3,80,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,196,149512,2,0,L|372:120,3,80,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,124,150456,2,0,L|196:192,3,80,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,200,151401,6,0,P|64:52|160:96,1,320,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,168,152582,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,136,152819,2,0,P|280:284|184:240,1,320,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,168,154000,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,168,154236,2,0,P|136:144|16:164,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,276,154945,6,0,L|84:368,1,80
148,256,155417,2,0,B|216:352|216:352|296:248,1,240
408,276,156362,2,0,L|344:360,2,80,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,160,157071,2,0,L|344:80,2,80,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,192,157779,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,192,158015,2,0,P|140:176|104:68,2,160,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,244,159197,2,0,P|232:273|207:346,2,160,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,152,160378,6,8,P|344:112|212:104,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,152,161086,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,152,161323,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,152,161559,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,268,161795,2,8,P|212:256|328:328,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,288,162504,2,8,L|440:184,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,92,162976,2,8,P|352:72|240:128,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,128,163685,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,128,163921,1,8,0:0:0:0:
76,228,164157,6,4,P|144:256|252:212,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,264,164866,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,264,164984,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,264,165102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,284,165338,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,284,165575,2,0,P|428:268|496:304,1,120
486,292,166047,6,0,B|508:236|480:204|464:184|464:164|480:148|496:128,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,60,166756,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,40,166874,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,52,166992,1,8,0:0:0:0:
424,52,167228,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,88,167464,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,88,167700,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,152,167937,6,0,P|104:124|88:32,2,160,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,240,169118,2,8,L|312:320,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,312,169590,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,240,169826,2,0,B|424:184|408:144|408:144|376:120|364:88|360:56|400:24,1,240,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,84,170771,2,0,P|352:116|344:176,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,180,171480,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,244,171716,6,0,B|268:284|372:244|372:244|452:248,1,240,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,168,172661,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,96,172897,2,0,P|320:84|252:156,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,140,173606,2,0,P|200:200|352:152,1,240,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,264,174551,2,0,L|440:292,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,216,175023,1,8,0:0:0:0:
496,144,175260,1,8,0:0:0:0:
488,64,175496,1,8,0:0:0:0:
412,88,175732,6,0,P|328:48|256:68,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,92,176441,2,0,L|140:164,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,236,176913,2,0,P|188:260|300:200,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,252,177622,2,0,L|424:324,2,80,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,176,178330,2,0,P|376:128|268:72,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,128,179039,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,88,179275,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,144,179512,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,220,179748,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,252,179984,6,0,P|184:308|160:336,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,352,180456,2,0,L|4:308,1,80
96,248,180929,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,248,181165,6,0,P|60:204|120:44,2,240,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,156,182819,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,172,183055,2,0,L|368:224,1,80
392,104,183527,2,0,L|312:44,2,80,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,204,184236,2,0,P|464:248|448:308,1,80
356,344,184708,6,0,P|316:320|196:336,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,272,185417,2,0,L|88:168,1,80
208,164,185889,2,0,P|232:216|212:288,2,120,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,186834,12,0,190614,0:0:0:0:

PatZar

3,079 posts

Joined March 2013

PatZar 2014-11-19T13:27:20+00:00

let me random post

[Hard's Collab]
tbh i just want to mod gokugohan's part , but ya nvm

at second kiai, it's too bored for me

00:34:236 - nc
from 00:34:236 - to 00:35:653 - http://puu.sh/cX4lA/0238f0880c.png ?
00:39:669 (1) - you missed the important beat , just use 1/1 slider and 00:40:141 - HN
00:40:850 (4) - 1/2 slider and 00:41:323 - HN is better
01:13:449 - to 01:15:338 - add something , IT'S too boring you know ,01:15:338 - start spinner here
01:17:464 - to 01:31:622 - add something, what a large break
01:36:126 (1) - you missed the important beat just 1/1 slider and 01:37:071 - HN
01:38:015 (3) - 1/2 slider and 01:38:488 - HN for consistent for above ^^
01:52:897 (5) - nc? it's too long imo
02:24:551 (4) - x76-y64
02:37:071 (4) - nc?

need more works

try to use any technique mapping for flow and anything it's makes better and enjoyable

Nardoxyribonucleic

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3,009 posts

Joined May 2011

Nardoxyribonucleic 2014-11-19T15:25:18+00:00

Hi, here comes a taiko mod as requested in my queue.

[Sariel's Fuutsu]

Please rename the diff as "Sariel's Futsuu". Also, it is recommended to change the OD to 4 to lower the difficulty. OD 5 is just too harsh for beginners.

00:24:315 (51) - considering changing it to D ? It would be consistent to 00:16:756 (32) -
00:28:567 (62) - maybe k here for snare consistency ?
00:45:102 (108,109,111) - changing these notes to k could follow the vocal at 00:45:102 (108,109) - and the high-pitched sound at 00:46:519 - nicely.
00:55:023 (131) - same as 00:28:567 (62) -
01:02:110 (145) - same as 00:24:315 (51) -
01:09:669 (166) - same as 00:24:315 (51) -
01:13:921 (177) - same as 00:28:567 (62) -
01:17:464 (186,193) - delete ? The current 1/2 pattern is quite long imo.
01:25:968 (212,219) - delete ? Similar to ^
01:45:811 (265) - consider deleting this note ? Vocal is absent here.
01:51:008 (282,286) - maybe k here for the relatively high-pitched vocal ?
01:53:134 (288,289,291) - same as 00:45:102 (108,109,111) -
01:55:023 (292) - maybe D as you did at 00:46:992 (112) - ?
02:03:055 (306) - same as 00:28:567 (62) -
02:10:141 (324) - same as 00:24:315 (51) -
02:11:086 (326) - delete ? Similar reason as 01:45:811 (265) -
02:17:700 (348) - same as 00:24:315 (51) -
02:18:645 (350) - same as 02:11:086 (326) -
02:21:952 (361) - same as 00:28:567 (62) -
02:32:819 (384) - maybe D for the presence of the cymbal ?
02:47:937 (425) - same as 00:24:315 (51) -
02:48:882 (427) - same as 02:11:086 (326) -
02:52:425 (440) - you may delete this note to cut down the 1/2 pattern.
02:55:732 (449,456) - same as 01:17:464 (186,193) -
03:04:236 (475,482) - same as 01:25:968 (212,219) -

Some of the 1/2 patterns are too long, so you may consider shortening them a bit to make the diff Futsuu-like.

[lZenxl's Muzukashii]

00:18:409 (69,70) - consider swapping these notes to d k ? The vocal pitch at 00:18:645 (70) - is higher than 00:18:409 (69) -
00:29:984 (117) - please remove the finish sound here for pattern consistency throughout the diff.
00:30:456 (119) - maybe k as you did at 00:22:897 (87) - ?
00:33:055 (129) - As vocal is absent, delete this note ? There is no need to have such a long 1/2 pattern in the relatively calm part.
00:37:779 (146) - ^
00:40:378 (156,159) - consider removing the finish sound here ? A bit overemphasized imo.
00:44:393 (168) - Again, this note could be removed to emphasize the neighbouring vocal.
00:45:102 (171,172,173,174) - K K D K would be better if you want to follow the drop in vocal pitch while following the high-pitched sound at 00:46:519 (174) -
00:47:346 (176,180) - k ? The vocal pitch is the same as 00:47:464 (177,181) -
00:51:126 (190,194) - same as ^
00:59:039 (220) - d ? The vocal pitch is lower than 00:58:803 (219,221) -
00:59:748 (222,223) - k d would be better if you want to follow the vocal.
01:03:763 (9,10) - same as 00:18:409 (69,70) -
01:09:197 (32,33) - consider removing the finish sound here ? A bit overemphasized imo.
01:21:716 (84,85,86,87) - d kkk would be much better if you want to follow the vocal pitch.
01:30:456 (119) - k ? The vocal pitch is the same as 01:30:220 (118) -
01:39:197 (142) - k could follow the clapping sound there.
01:52:897 (179,180) - d K ? Same as 00:45:102 (171,172,173,174) -
02:07:071 (220) - d ? The vocal pitch is lower than 02:06:834 (219,221) -
02:07:543 (222) - Again, this note could be deleted to shorten the 1/2 pattern.
02:15:575 (257) - d could represent the drop in vocal pitch nicely.
02:19:354 (274,275) - same as 00:18:409 (69,70) -
02:33:055 (319,323,325,331) - consider deleting these notes ? A bit unnecessary imo.
02:45:811 (361,362) - same as 00:18:409 (69,70) -
02:47:464 (368,369) - consider removing the finish sound here ? A bit overemphasized imo.
02:49:590 (378,379) - same as 00:18:409 (69,70) -
02:59:984 (420) - d could represent the drop in vocal pitch nicely.
03:02:819 (432) - delete ? Similar reason as 02:33:055 (319,323,325,331) -

[lZenxl's Oni]

00:01:638 (1) - please make it consistent to Muzukashii. (either d or D for both diffs)
00:09:197 (39) - ^
00:14:393 (66) - move to 00:14:275 - and add d at 00:14:512 - ? This could follow the background instrument in a way better.
00:19:945 (96) - k ? The sound is quite similar to 00:20:299 (99) -
00:21:244 (104) - maybe k for the high-pitched vocal ?
00:23:842 (116) - k could follow both the vocal and the snare sound nicely.
00:27:267 - you may add d here to map the beat.
00:38:960 (193) - k could follow both the vocal and the snare sound nicely. Also, this could fit your alternate snare pattern in this part.
00:48:291 (238,239,240) - since the vocal pattern is the same as 00:47:346 (234,235,236) - , changing it to kk k could improve consistency.
00:49:236 (242) - K ? The vocal is higher-pitched than 00:48:882 (241,243) -
00:52:071 (255,256,257) - same as 00:48:291 (238,239,240) -
00:53:842 (265,266) - k k would be better for the clapping sounds.
00:59:630 - consider adding k here ? The current 1/2 pattern is a bit monotonous because of its length and repetitiveness.
01:06:598 (324) - k would be nice for the relatively high-pitched vocal imo.
01:07:189 - adding a don here could result in a smoother flow if you change ^
01:08:134 - maybe d here for the drum beat ?
01:24:551 (416) - This note could be deleted in order to give a short break here.
01:29:748 (446,447,448) - kkk would be nice since the vocal pitch is constant.
01:39:197 (483,484) - k K ? Similar to Muzukashii
01:53:134 (553,554,556) - K ? ^
02:00:693 (579,580,581,582,583,584,585,586,587,588,589,590,591) - kddkddkdkdddk could follow the snares in a way better imo.
02:08:015 (616,617) - d k would be better to follow the increase in vocal pitch.
02:14:630 (650) - Again, k here for the relatively high-pitched vocal ?
02:16:165 - same as 01:08:134 -
02:32:110 (739,740,741,742) - you may change this to kkd k to suit the snares.
02:38:960 (772) - K could accompany the high-pitched vocal there.
02:42:622 - add k here ? Similar to 00:59:630 -
02:44:866 (796) - Again, k here for the relatively high-pitched vocal ?

That's all and good luck~

kazumikos

393 posts

Joined February 2010

kazumikos 2014-11-20T18:50:06+00:00

oh I had mapped like 50% of this song when I noticed your map
It seems a bit too late though but I'm still gonna try

Do you need a (standard) guest diff? xD

Sieg

3,981 posts

Joined February 2012

Sieg 2014-11-22T04:49:12+00:00

Hello

[General]

Combo color 1 and 2 way too similar, consider to change one of them. Something like (255, 105, 180) would work well.

[Useful links]

Guide 1 - Making common sliders neat - http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/208596
Guide 2 - Making delicious sliders - http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/37194
Guide 3 - Analyzing flow in beatmaps - http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/86329&start=0

[Easy]

00:41:795 (4) - uh.. Why there is just 7% volume on end. You can remove both 45% and 7% points and set end to soft sample with clap. That will fit better to rhythm.
00:50:771 (1,2) - Since you tend to make blanket you can fix this one. http://puu.sh/cZHMC/5d7fa208c3.jpg
00:55:496 (2,1) - Move 00:56:441 (1) - a bit up, to remove this tiny overlap. http://puu.sh/cZHQb/477cf16bd7.jpg
00:58:330 (1) - There should be 1 full measure of recovery time -> 1500 ms for spinners on Easy.
^ Also applies to:
01:36:126 (1) // 02:37:543 (1) -
01:02:110 (1,2) - Make them similar. http://puu.sh/d0wkZ/d1b58ad5df.jpg
01:07:779 (2) - Slider shape have questionable quality. You can use (guide_2) to find out how to make proper wave slider.
01:12:504 (3,1) - Fix distance snap.
01:46:756 (6) - I definitely can hear a clap. Maybe cover this by repeat slider like 01:45:102 (4) -
01:55:023 (1,2,3) - Make them by copy-paste. Also it seems that they was supposed to be blankets but atm they not.
02:10:141 (1,2) - Remove overlap.
02:23:370 (4,1) - ^And this 1 only overlap of such type for whole diff. Unsuitable for Easy.
02:32:819 (1,2,3,4) - Check DS here.
02:53:606 (1) - 68.204 to remove overlap. Also don't forget to rearrange 02:54:551 (2,3) -

[Normal]

00:29:984 (1) - There should be 2 beats recovery time -> 750 ms for spinners on Normal.
^ Also applies to:
00:58:331 (1) // 01:36:126 (1) // 02:36:598 (1) -
00:35:181 (1,2,3) - You should fix flow (guide_3)
here, it's quite unpleasant to play.
01:05:889 (1,2) - Do not stack under slider on Normal, it's have no clear path to play and confusing for newbie players.
01:48:882 (2,1) - Fix distance snap.
01:52:661 (1) - This spot can play better if you split this slider to 1 repeat + 1 note.
^ Also applies to:
02:23:370 (5) -
02:02:582 (1,2,1,2) - This pattern transfer is poorly done. This can be fixed by blanketing (guide_1) or making good transfer flow (guide_3) or making symmetrical transfer.
02:14:393 (1) - Slider shape have questionable quality. You can use (guide_2) to find out how to make proper wave slider.
^ Also applies to:
02:46:047 (3) // 02:50:299 (5) -
02:16:283 (4) - Short 2 repeat sliders shouldn't happen in Normal in general. They hard to react for newbie players.
02:46:047 (3,1) - Fix distance snap.
A bit rude diff. I guess you should really look on "Guide 1 - Making common sliders neat" and check trough this diff, there is a ton spots that can be improved.

[Hard Collab]

00:29:039 (3,4,5,6) - There is no background in music for these doubles, consider to change them.
^ Also applies to most of your doubles made.
00:53:842 (2,3) - I see no reason to overlap them like this, make DS a bit more.
00:54:551 (1) - This slider plays better as 1 repeat.
^ Also applies to:
00:56:441 (1) // 01:07:779 (5) // 02:19:118 (3) -
01:07:071 (2,3,4) - Fix distance snap.
02:45:338 (3) - Slider shape have questionable quality. You can use (guide_2) to find out how to make proper wave slider.
03:05:889 (3) - Repeat should be on 03:06:362 (3) - to follow music and lyrics.
I like second part more. Still both need some more work. Also don't forget to check useful links listed above.

Good Luck!

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Nwolf wrote:

Senritsu wrote:

Nekomata wrote:

Senritsu wrote:

Nwolf wrote:

Easy

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lZenxl wrote:

AxelHino wrote:

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Fumika wrote:

gokugohan12468 wrote:

Fumika wrote:

xxdeathx wrote:

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