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Good luck guys~
whoa boobs
[General]
[Easy]Hinsvar wrote:
@Xinely & Konei: Change the Artist (the unicode one) column accordingly, please (look at my diffs' metadata)! Also, turn off the Widescreen Storyboard, and to Konei, change the lead-in to 1500, just for the sake of consistency
- 00:16:347 (4) - Maybe NC here for the new phrase, remove on 00:16:711 (1).
- 00:23:256 (2) - Consider removing the whistle on the tail as the piano sound lands on a red tick it really isn't emphasizing anything.
- 00:24:347 (3) - Remove whistle for same reason as mentioned above.
- 00:32:711 (4) - Move this just a bit closer to (3) so you're not deviating too much from 1.2x spacing.
- 00:39:256 (1) - The clap on the tail isn't following anything nor is there one here for Extra. I would remove it.
- 01:12:711 (1) - Change the spinner to a soft sampleset. Having it as normal makes the end sound not really fitting with where it lands in the music.
- 00:00:711 (1) - It would be a much nicer effect if you used a soft sample-set on the head and tail seeing as there's no background music here.
- 00:22:165 (2,4) - See if you can make some adjustments to avoid the overlapping between these two.
- 00:39:984 (2) - Having this slider begin on the red tick would make your rhythm more consistent for this musical section, fits nicely with the powerful vocal on 00:39:802, and creates a 1/1 gap that puts good emphasis on the finish for (3). If you prefer to leave this, add a clap to the tail.
- 00:41:802 (5) - Use a finish here for the cymbal crash.
- 00:58:893 (6) - Missed a clap on the tail?
- 00:20:893 (3,1) - Shift (1) down a little to avoid the slight unnecessary touching between these two.
- 00:36:711 (3) - I would prefer you use a circle and 1/1 slider to cover the distinct vocal and piano sound on 00:36:893.
- 00:38:165 (2) - Perhaps use the whistle on the tail instead of the head because of the piano being stronger there.
- 01:05:438 (1,3) - Would look neat if you curved these the same.
- 01:12:711 (1) - Change the spinner to a soft sampleset. Same reason as Easy.
Quite challenging for a Hard as far I know but it fits the spread and is still very fun to play with nice flow!
- 00:10:165 (1,2) - Hmm maybe make these two seperate combos? It would follow the same idea as 00:07:256 (1,1) where you used two separate combos for the different slider velocities (if that was your intention). It would be nice to keep these two parts consistent as they play the same.
- 00:19:802 (3) - Perhaps add a whistle here to emphasize the faint piano sound? It suppose it would be consistent with 00:16:893 (3).
- 00:23:802 (2,3) - I didn't really like the stack here. With how all of the previous stacks were backed by vocals, I was expecting and would prefer some movement between these two to keep flowing with the music. It would be especially fitting with the sounds you can hear at this part. Try this or something similar plays really well:
- 00:29:438 (3) - Missed a clap on the head.
- 00:40:165 (1) - This NC doesn't feel necessary in my opinion, it doesn't follow a distinct/strong musical emphasis or pattern so consider removing it.
- 00:41:438 (1,1) - Not a fan of the NC spam here. Consider just following your combo patterning normally for this part or at least just remove NC on 00:41:802 (1). It's also possible for players to misinterpret it for a 1/2 slider with faster SV because at a first glimpse it appears with an NC and greater length (the common indicator).
- 00:57:074 (2,3) - A better rhythm that fits more nicely with this section would be to switch these two on the timeline and use a whistle on the head of the new (3) and remove it from the tail.
- 01:12:711 (1) - Change the spinner to a soft sampleset. Same reason as Easy.
Wow this difficulty is great, awesome stuff.
- 00:18:893 (1) - Perhaps add a soft-whistle addition to the head to catch the piano sound?
- 00:19:984 (4,5) - The jump size here feels a bit excessive considering how the music plays and comparing it to the spacings you've used for this section. Consider using less spacing between these two. Maybe you could try a placement like this?
- 00:30:529 (1) - Same as 00:18:893 (1).
- 01:05:984 (2) - Consider moving this circle to or somewhere around x:128 y:224. The motion to this circle coming out of the previous slider is rather sharp and uncomfortable.This would make it flow very well and blanket nicely.
- 00:34:165 (1) - This NC isn't really attached to any strong musical emphasis so it doesn't seem necessary. Consider removing it.
- 00:34:347 (2) - I would use a whistle here to catch the piano sound and remove on 00:34:165 (1) to fit the music better.
- 00:37:074 (1) - Same case as 00:34:165 (1).
- 00:39:620 (3) - It would fit the piano better if you remove the whistle from the head and added it to the tail because of how it sounds stronger there.
- 00:46:074 (2) - Consider just using a circle here. A 1/4 slider isn't bringing out anything in the music and just a circle plays much more intuitively.
- 00:58:529 (1) - I think removing the NC here would fit the combo patterning for this part.
- 01:11:256 (1) - Hmm, you used consistent spacing for this stream. Maybe move this up a bit so it's 0.6x?
- 01:12:711 (1) - Change the spinner to a soft sampleset. Same reason as Easy.
Good luck guys~