Kodora wrote:

Hello, mod as promiced.

[Hard]

Such low OD makes setting and the whole diff too unbalanced; raise it by 2 ticks. k

1. 00:28:229 (4) - Finish to the end of slider no. too loud
2. 00:31:703 (2) - try replace it with slider? Sounds better imo no. stress the vocal.
   
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3. 00:33:361 (5) - Begin NC here instead of 00:33:598 (1) - follow new part of music k
4. 00:33:756 - Decrease volume to 60% here. 70% sounds a bit too loud. k
5. 00:58:703 (3) - Add finish to the end of slider sure
6. 01:09:124 (1) - Add finish ok
7. 01:19:229 (1) - Forgotten clap at reverse add~
8. 01:21:756 (5) - You forgot clap at the end of slider add~
9. 01:22:387 (6) - ^ ^

[Normal]

Raise OD by 1 tick to have diff more balanced k

1. 00:33:756 - Decrease volume to 60% here. 70% sounds a bit too loud. k
2. 00:53:966 (1,2) - This looks pretty challenging for a Normal diff. How about just unstack them? It's Normal diff. not too difficult.
3. 01:09:124 (1,2) - ^ ^
4. 01:11:966 (2) - add clap here follow lyrics? k
5. 01:16:703 (1,1) - This spinnerspam playes bad, annoying and feels not really good for a normal diff, please map second spinner orz. condider. not bad atm.
6. 01:21:756 (1) - Clap to the end of slider k
7. 01:23:019 (3,4) - ^ ^

[Easy]

Change CS and AR to 3. Using very huge circles compare with too low AR makes diff just unreadable for players with any skill level. sure

1. 00:03:440 (2) - Remove first whistle, i dont think that it really needs here. yep
2. 00:10:861 (1) - Please change this to slider, spinnerspam here looks horrible. alright
3. 00:27:440 (4,5) - If you will not change AR please unstack this notes: beginners do not know how to remove hitbursts, so stacked notes will be problem for them.
   
   This diff is full of stacks, i wont mentiore all of them but i keep this suggestion to all of them. I unstack all the notes in this map~ should be fine now.
   
4. 01:16:703 (1,1) - same as at 00:10:861 (1) consider.

Good luck <3

1. 00:44:808 (2) 乾脆從00:44:492開始然後兩次折返

1. 00:42:598 (3) 這個跟音樂 00:43:861 (1) 跟鼓點 00:44:808 (2) 跟vocal 我能說不難讀嗎...
   其他倒沒甚麼問題

1. 00:08:492 (5,6) 沒有blanket好
2. 00:10:387 (3,4) 移到x236, y312 變成一個三角形
3. 00:23:177 (4) 往上一格
   00:24:282 (3) 這個也跟著調
   00:24:440 (4) 稍微移到x200, y120
4. 00:29:335 (3) 其實我覺得這個換成slider好點，因為vocal是長音
5. 00:30:440 (4) 往上移到x464, y84
   00:30:756 (5) 移到 x408, y140
6. 00:32:492 (4) 換成slider 00:32:808 這裡也加個，vocal很明顯可是這裡是空的，導致接下來很難接，倒不如加上2個slider還比較好讀
7. 00:33:124 (2) 真心難讀 對hard來說
8. 00:35:335 (2) 這也是同樣的問題，vocal明明有卻斷掉了
9. 00:36:598 (3) ^
   00:46:387 (1,3) 壓到了，稍微調一下吧
   
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10. 01:09:124 (1,2,3,4) 這4個真的是非常凶殘，妳可能沒有發現從kiai開始，1個note以上的地方妳幾乎都是疊起來，到了這裡忽然4個note又加大間距，自然就突然變難了
11. 01:28:545 (2,3) ctrl+G

1. 00:02:808 (4) +whistle
2. 00:06:756 (1) 這個drum好怪 ._.
3. 00:52:545 (6) 玩了很多次覺得這個6卡手，所以我稍微換了下位子和後面的跳法，看看就好
   
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4. 01:05:492 (1) 移到 01:04:545 (4) 感覺好點

kuroanchan wrote:

I love this song <3
Good Luck~!

Just some suggestion... (actually only DS i guess LOL)
[Easy]
for DS(distance spacing) i recommend between 0.79~0.80/0.81
make it more neat
like..
00:05:966 (2) - move to x: 92 y: 220
00:06:598 (3) - move to x: 184 y: 308
00:07:229 (1) - move to x: 252 y: 200
00:24:914 (2) - move to x:196 y: 208
.... etc
and the rest is up to you because too many i think

[Normal]
for DS don't make it too far D: like..0.98~1.00/1.01 is enough xD
for spin(beat suggestion becuase too hard for normal):
00:51:124 (1) - it's should be start at 00:51:203 (1) - and end at 00:53:019
01:12:756 (1) - it's should be start at 01:12:835 (1) - and end at 01:13:782
01:16:703 (1) - it's should be start at 01:16:782 (1) - and end at 01:18:835
01:19:229 (1) - it's should be start at 01:19:308 (1) - and end at 01:21:361
01:24:282 (1) - it's should be start at 01:24:361 (1) - and end at 01:26:729

i hope this wouldl help you because that's all just suggestion, and this is the first time i'm modding ><
i try my best for this map!!
waiting for ranked ><

Atrue wrote:

[D.N.Angel]
General
Please change the diff's name to D.N.Angel's Insane.. This diff was created at about a year ago, so it works like this. I'll call Midasman change the diff name. Well, it's a pity that I can't use "D.N.Angel" for my GDs anymore ... /.\
Good diff, well made~
Placement
00:53:492 (1,2,3) - Just 1 thing when testplaying I feel not so good. The direction of the stream may imply the direction to next note, but it's a sharp turn instead.. ( anyhow I think the turn is not that reasonable, it's more like a pause but not big movement) So just suggest that you can stack the notes here to avoid some more indication about direction. Example:

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(x:106 y:324)

// I personally thought that it should work like this in order to fit the song well. Also it's not a big problem to play just a triplet with a little moving. I wanna keep this as my best solution.

That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting.
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Atrue wrote:

Hello~
From googledocs request.

[Notion]
This color means it is a suggestion. I prefer to do this, but you can either choose to fix or not.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.

[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.

[Easy]
General
Fine~
Placement
00:47:019 (4) - Move it a little to compromise the distance and blanket. Example:

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64,244,46071,2,2,L|116:312,1,80
244,308,47019,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,376,47650,2,0,P|380:296|352:228,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

fix
Hitsound
00:52:703 - Same suggestion as Normal diff. fix

[Normal]
General
Well done~ Some little thing to say.
Beats
Hmm just not sure about the distance between spinner's end with next note.. I think is ok and it would be a big sacrifice if you change the spinners. Consider if you get some more ideas about it. fix
Hitsound
00:52:703 - Just make it about 75% or 80% to emphasize the spinner's end, quite a strong sound here. fix

[Hard]
General
Good job, nothing too much to say.
Beats
01:16:703 - Recommend that use a note to emphasize the vocal and drum here, and start the spinner 1/4 later. Example:

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fix
Hitsound
00:53:966 - Here the raise of volume is not that reasonable, or kinda abrupt imo. In higher diff, it has a process of increasing, which made it not so abrupt, but here you didn't use a increase or it's not suitable for a increase, so here is abrupt. Maybe you can raise the volume 00:52:703 , which may not so abrupt to raise the volume. Here you can use 80%, then 00:53:492 is 65% to make a small contrast with kiai. fix
NCs
01:15:756 - An NC is more suitable here imo, and it can well make the rhythm more obvious and emphasized.. And it can also avoid that the length of the combo is too long fix

That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting.
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Zero__wind wrote:

D.N.Angel's Insane
00:06:282 - add a circle here and stack it at the end of the previous slider? sounds like a better rhythm to me // k
00:36:756 (4) - redundant whistle? a bit too much to me, and inconsistent with the former phrase // hmm, but I think it fits the vocal better.
00:43:861 (1) - I still feel that this slider should be shortened to a 1/1 slider, (like I've said about a year ago lol) because the jump between 00:43:861 (1,2) - is way too unnatural in this soft part, comparing with other notes till 00:48:598 (3) - // changed this part.

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Zero__wind wrote:

这是传说中的recheck么 棒棒的

General
TItle a bit wrong, should be changed to BELOVED×SURVIVAL 【小写x 两边没有空格】ok
for referrence: http://vgmdb.net/album/38485 http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Brothers_Conflict
preview time unsnapped, [;z reset it to around 00:53:808 - in all diffs set to 53414

Easy
00:33:756 (1) - try normal sample with soft finish on head? x
00:46:071 (3) - better remove the sliderwhistle, it doesn't sound good k
00:53:966 (1) - why not finish on this downbeat k
01:01:545 (3) - move the finish from its end to the reversing point and it would match with the music better k
01:10:387 (2) - a finish on head is worth considering too loud x

Normal
00:33:124 (4) - same as Easy x
00:53:966 (1,2) - a bit confusing after a spinner and dosen't play really good, consider something like the below?

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good
01:01:545 (1,2) - move the finish from 1 to 2 to match with the music k
01:09:124 (1,2) - try to unstack them? I think this is a bit confusing to new players, also you need a finish on 1 k
01:27:124 (1,2) - also these k

Hard
00:19:861 (1) - may consider a finish on head k
00:33:124 (1,2) - this stack and blue tick slider is way too consuding imo, I recommend a rhythm like the pic below, you can place them differently as you like

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I think it's fine. No change
01:24:282 (1) - add a finish for the downbeat? k


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