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himmel feat. YooSanHyakurei - Seraphim

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fanzhen0019
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年9月23日 at 11:59:37

Artist: himmel feat. YooSanHyakurei
Title: Seraphim
Tags: himmeltengoku Yonder Voice Empyrean fanzhen0019 musync
BPM: 175
Filesize: 11798kb
Play Time: 05:09
Difficulties Available:
  1. Heaven (4.73 stars, 1246 notes)
Download: himmel feat. YooSanHyakurei - Seraphim
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Thanks to LKs for audio edit!!!
Please reDL if you have downloaded it before 9/23/2014.

Thanks to all modders!

Lyrics
Soar 濃藍の空を
烈風に向かい
怒涛の海渡ってく
Free 勇気はいつでも
真実と共に
正義を謳い奏でる
Through 哀しみの果てに
何が見えるのか
時間（とき）は何も語らない
Faith それでも彼らは
瞳の輝き
失わないのが誇り
此処から見下ろす
大地を流離う者よ
嵐の夜に希望あふれる夢を見るか
暗闇の中光れ
信念の道を辿って
高鳴る心にも翻る自由の旗
孤高の羽根広げ
空の果てへ羽撃いて
雲が流れ流れ
哀楽もめぐりゆく
すべて包み込んだ
ラピスラズリのこの星
生命の火花を
永遠に　見届けよう
Dream of the endless sky
蒼穹に羽音響かせ
何もない此処まで
人間（ひと）の夢が
光のように昇り始めた
現実という壁にぶつかって
それでも立ち上がり明日を拓き続ける
ひとりひとりの戦士
沈黙の情熱をただ
奇跡に変える
色鮮やかな世界に変える…
孤高の羽根広げ
空の果てへ羽撃いて
雲が流れ流れ
哀楽もめぐりゆく
すべて包み込んだ
ラピスラズリのこの星
生命の火花を
永遠に　見届けよう
本能のままに
生きてゆきたいと願った
誇り高きDreamers
空際から見守る
Last edited by fanzhen0019 , edited 38 times in total.
Skystar
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Kiiwa
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支持反震 (っ･ω･)っ

mod in IRC
2014-06-20 23:42 fanzhen0019: hihi
2014-06-20 23:42 bakabaka: hihi
2014-06-20 23:43 fanzhen0019: :D 有空看图嘛
2014-06-20 23:43 bakabaka: 神圖怎看lol
2014-06-20 23:43 bakabaka: 想玩:D
2014-06-20 23:44 fanzhen0019: 凑个数 o.o
2014-06-20 23:44 fanzhen0019: 好不容易凑一个app
2014-06-20 23:44 bakabaka: lol
2014-06-20 23:44 fanzhen0019: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/182520
2014-06-20 23:48 fanzhen0019: ww
2014-06-20 23:51 bakabaka: 現在設定可以調小數點又改掉了呀lol
2014-06-20 23:53 fanzhen0019: 啊
2014-06-20 23:53 fanzhen0019: 我应该改成小数点的ww
2014-06-20 23:56 bakabaka: 可以調成小數點真的有點無言lol
2014-06-20 23:57 bakabaka: 說實在真的沒啥可以mod的 只有一個地方打起來不順的感覺lol
2014-06-20 23:57 fanzhen0019: 嘛 选择更多了
2014-06-20 23:57 fanzhen0019: 恩恩
2014-06-20 23:57 bakabaka: 01:05:159 (1) - 看要不要Ctrl+G
2014-06-20 23:57 bakabaka: 可是BAT更難做了lol
2014-06-20 23:59 fanzhen0019: 哇 这里
2014-06-20 23:59 fanzhen0019: 好好好
2014-06-20 23:59 fanzhen0019: ?!怎么现在又不能小数点了
2014-06-20 23:59 bakabaka: 好像又被改調lol
2014-06-21 00:00 bakabaka: 還有這裡
2014-06-21 00:00 bakabaka: 03:53:759 (3,4) - 沒跟前面的slider疊好的樣子
2014-06-21 00:00 bakabaka: 座標差了1
2014-06-21 00:03 bakabaka: 116,316 這座標才對到:D
2014-06-21 00:03 bakabaka: 就沒了
2014-06-21 00:03 bakabaka: .
2014-06-21 00:03 fanzhen0019: !?
2014-06-21 00:03 fanzhen0019: 感觉没关系
2014-06-21 00:03 bakabaka: 玩的時候有點微妙的疊起來lol
2014-06-21 00:04 fanzhen0019: 噢噢噢 现在按下shift还是能改成小数的
2014-06-21 00:04 bakabaka: 原來如此
Chordzi
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Joined July 2012
Chordzi
来晚咯抱歉小学终于放假惹

01:13:559 (1) - 去掉kiai?
02:17:845 (1) - 03:46:987 (1) - 也许2X会好一点(ps:前面那个auto菌会出100 后面那个又不会了o.o)(ps2:后面那个偷懒不插绿线差评)
04:12:016 (1) - ctrl+g?
05:01:901 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - 感觉间距和flow有点不好 因为这里音量已经开始变小了

先凑个数.-.

fanzhen0019 wrote:

I'm a girl
Chordzi
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Chordzi
哇 卡了
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diff naming suggestion: Made in China
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fanzhen0019
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Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
fanzhen0019

Chordzi wrote:

来晚咯抱歉小学终于放假惹

01:13:559 (1) - 去掉kiai? 好
02:17:845 (1) - 03:46:987 (1) - 也许2X会好一点(ps:前面那个auto菌会出100 后面那个又不会了o.o)(ps2:后面那个偷懒不插绿线差评) 忘了..
04:12:016 (1) - ctrl+g? no
05:01:901 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - 感觉间距和flow有点不好 因为这里音量已经开始变小了 改了

先凑个数.-.
谢谢啦

fanzhen0019 wrote:

I'm a girl
↑!??!?!?
Mao
Elite Mapper II
2,963 posts
Joined December 2012
Mao


By ingame M4M Req~


  1. Unrankable Issue/Highly Suggested
  2. Comment

General
  1. Please use AR9 ;w; The map reads way better with AR9 and I don't see any reason for this using AR9,5.
  2. Your BG is way too large. The recommended sizes are 1024x768 and 1366x768 where this is the largest you can use.
  3. Take a look at AiMod. There are several unsnapped objects within your map.

howtonameit
  1. 00:01:387 (1,1) - Whoa, give the player some time to recover after the spinner. A 1/8 break between it and the Circles feels very weird especially since there's nothing on the yellow tick the spinner ends on. Please let it at least end on the blue tick and make the end quiet since there's basically nothing.
  2. 00:08:930 (2) - The flow into the next objects feels a bit unintuitive due to a pretty rapid movement here. Consider placing it at 183|254.
  3. 00:12:359 (1,3) - Hm, maybe just a personal preference but this would look cooler to me if you'd make them parallel <:
  4. 00:20:930 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - This plays unnatural to me due to the pretty fast wavy movement even though it's such it calm section. Maybe you could try something as seen in the screenshot below.
    Screenshot
  5. 00:29:330 (3) - Move this a bit more to the so that it builds a wavy "S-like" movement with 00:28:987 (2) - .
    Screenshot
  6. 00:32:073 (3,4) - Consider to move 4 a bit lower + rotating it as seen in the Screenshot. This would make the flow better here due to a more fluent movement from the wave Slider 3 into 4.
    Screenshot
  7. 00:35:673 (1,2,3) - <3
  8. 00:40:987 (5,1,2) - If you want to emphasize 1 with a jump, I'd go with something slightly larger here for a bit more emphasis (Screenshot). If this wasn't your though, please keep the spacing constant here ^^"
    Screenshot
  9. 00:49:045 (4) - Due to this being almost on the same y-position (not even 10 difference) as 00:48:873 (3) - it feels like it's slowing the player down. Consider moving it a bit lower (e.g. 156|188).
  10. 00:58:302 (1) - I had problems with reading that. I don't know, but maybe you could place it more left so that it just overlaps 1 by a half in order to make it better readable ;w;
    Screenshot
  11. 01:05:159 (1,1) - How am I supposed to read this properly? The problem is the polarity issue between these two which makes it not good readable since the player doesn't notice it because of the stack. Either unstack it and show the player with a higher distance that 01:05:502 (1) - starts on the white tick or place a Circle at either 01:05:330 - or 01:05:416 - .
  12. 01:10:902 (4) - The stream's flow is kinda broken due to this Circle. It just plays weird to have this kink in it. Consider moving it to 20|65.
  13. 01:13:387 (4,1) - Uhhm, the rhythm here is weird. It feels wrong to have 1 start on the red tick and ignoring the rather strong white tick with that. Please CTRL+G the rhythm. I recommend you to do what I've shown you in the Screenshot below for better readability and playability :/
    Screenshot
  14. 01:27:445 (1,2,1) - First of all keep the spacing of the consistent for better readability. The second thing bothering me here are the transitions of this whole pattern due to it being such a line which feels a bit unnatural to me here. Just a personal preference though I guess.
    Screenshot
  15. 01:34:302 (1,1) - This feels extremely unintuitive to me. The reason is that you've ignored the red tick with strong vocals as well as drums on it. Another weird thing is the slowdown of the SV which doesn't fit here since this sound isn't that different from the others here imo. Please change this for better readability ;w; (Same goes for the following ones as well.)
  16. 01:38:416 (1,2,3,4,1) - The streamshape here feels kinda messy to me due to the transition to 01:38:759 (1) - . This felt a bit odd while playing. I suggest you to use a normal straight stream here for a better overall impression and playability.
    Screenshot
  17. 01:41:502 (1,2) - The rhythm feels weird here due to a pretty strong note in terms of vocals and instruments is being mapped with a Slidertail at 01:42:016 - . Consider either to split 01:41:845 (2) - into two Circles or do what is shown in the Screenshot below.
    Screenshot
  18. 01:43:902 (1,2,3,4,1) - The transition between 01:44:159 (4,1) - plays really harsh and looks like it's just done like this due to the lower Screenborder ¬¬
    Screenshot
  19. 01:56:245 (4) - Consider moving this a bit to the left in order to imrpove the flow from the previous object into this one with creating a kind of cicular/oval shape. Another way I'd personally prefer though would be this. This would make the flow even better as well as the aesthetics imo.
    Screenshot
  20. 02:07:559 (1) - Move this to 142|55 in order to improve the flow due to building a line with 02:07:045 (2,4) - and to make the spacing look even with the previous objects ;3
  21. 02:08:587 (2,3,1) - Maybe you could make some adjustments to get the spacing even.
  22. 02:08:930 (1,1) - The jump here feels kinda unfitting. The reason is that the note at 02:09:787 (1) - is so soft that it doesn't really need a special emphasis via jump. Also you didn't map the jump at 02:07:559 (1,1) - which makes it inconsistent :b
  23. 02:16:987 (2) - Consider rotating this about 20° Selection Centre for a Circular movement for all of the objects (02:16:816 (1,2,1) - ) and to get the spacing even.
    Screenshot
  24. 02:18:016 (1) - Consider to shorten this one to the blue tick for a better playability to the next object.
  25. 02:34:130 (3,1,2) - How about tidying up this pattern a bit as seen in the Screenshot below. That would look way better to me c:
    Screenshot
  26. 02:39:102 (1,2,3,4,5) - This feels a bit messy to me. Why didn't you do a perfect star pattern using create polygon circles here? ;w;
    Screenshot
  27. 02:41:159 (3,4,5) - I feel like 4 and 5 are slowing me down which causes in rather bad flow for me here. Maybe you could try something similiar as in the Screenshot below in order to improve it :3
    Screenshot
  28. 02:45:959 (1,2) - Maybe it's just me but the flow here feels a bit slow which doesn't play that fluent. Consider to rise 02:45:959 (1) - a bit.
    Screenshot
  29. 02:50:073 (1,1) - How about changing the shape of the first slider a bitso that it points onto the second one's head? That would actually play pretty cool here! :D
    Screenshot
  30. 02:53:159 (7,8,9) - Is it just me or does this feel a bit weird? I mean, you didn't do this for the other ones so I was very suprised so that my cursor already wanted to move further.
  31. 02:59:673 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Is there a special reason for the NC-spam here? owo
  32. 03:05:159 (1) - This is just a real personal opinion but the loop looks a bit blocky due to the red anchor point ;w; this would look so much better in my eyes.
    Code
    136,88,185159,6,0,B|96:48|24:72|12:128|12:128|88:184|73:243|37:253|13:238|16:193|54:185|104:224|108:264|108:264|80:308|116:352,1,480
  33. 03:13:387 (1) - Consider centering the penultimate anchorpoint to get a better curve at the end.
    Screenshot
  34. 03:24:359 (1) - Hm, I think a CTRL+J version would fit the previous shapes of the Sliders better here tbh.
  35. 03:29:673 (2) - Maybe you could rotate this about -30° Selection Centre in order to create a circular shape with 03:29:845 (1) - which would improve the flow here a lot.
    Screenshot
  36. 03:44:930 (1,2,3,4) - Please use a higher spacing between them (2,00 or 1,90) for a better readability. These are all so near to each other which ends up in a bad readability.
    Screenshot
  37. 03:47:159 (1) - The transition feels really hard to play. Consider shortening this to the blue tick.
  38. 03:52:130 (3,4,1,2) - I'm not sure if it's just me but the shape these Circles form looks a bit random to me. I don't really know what to suggest here but I'd go for something jumpier for the emphasis at 03:52:473 (1,2) - .
    Screenshot
  39. 04:11:502 (3) - This Slider slows the player down due to it being part of the pattern formed by 04:10:816 (1,2) - which features a faster movement. Please consider to CTRL+G 04:11:502 (3) - for a way better flow.
  40. 04:13:045 (4,5) - CTRL+G this in terms of rhythm. The reason for this are the strong vocals at 04:13:387 - and the hold of the vocals at 04:13:045 - which would be better captured using a Slider (:
  41. 04:15:616 (3) - The huge jump to the previous and the small DS to the following one feels wrong to me due to the emphasis being at 04:15:787 - . So the jump sould be to this object.
    Screenshot
  42. 04:24:702 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe you could change the rhythm here a bit in order to follow that 1/1 Sound in the BG which is kinda similiar to the one mapped with 04:23:845 (7) - .
    Screenshot
  43. 04:31:216 (1,2,1) - Is there a reason for the spacing being uneven here? :<
  44. 04:37:045 (1) - Consider using 1,85 DS since this feels slow compared to your other 1/4 Patterns which makes this play a bit weird to me.
    Screenshot
  45. 04:41:845 (5) - Please shorten this to 1/2. The note you ignoring there is so strong ;__;
  46. 05:03:787 (5) - I don't know, maybe it's just me but I'd map a 1/2 Slider here instead due to the strong note on the red tick :/


  47. Hm, pretty nice diff. I dislike the flow for some parts but it's overall pretty well done. But please change the AR, it makes the map feel empty which souldn't be the case. AR9 is way more fitting ;~;

Please reply! I hope it was helpful and good luck! :3 Take a star (ノ·ω·)ノ︵
Syameimaru-Aya
173 posts
Joined August 2013
Syameimaru-Aya
.是我更新的出了问题还是这次上传的问题。
我总觉得我更新后的红线插错了
((不过意外感觉带感是怎么回事
wo sha bi , dui bu qi .
fanzhen0019
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
1,723 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
fanzhen0019

Mao wrote:



By ingame M4M Req~


  1. Unrankable Issue/Highly Suggested
  2. Comment

General
  1. Please use AR9 ;w; The map reads way better with AR9 and I don't see any reason for this using AR9,5. Lowerd.
  2. Your BG is way too large. The recommended sizes are 1024x768 and 1366x768 where this is the largest you can use.
  3. Take a look at AiMod. There are several unsnapped objects within your map. fixed

howtonameit
  1. 00:01:387 (1,1) - Whoa, give the player some time to recover after the spinner. A 1/8 break between it and the Circles feels very weird especially since there's nothing on the yellow tick the spinner ends on. Please let it at least end on the blue tick and make the end quiet since there's basically nothing. Silenced~
  2. 00:08:930 (2) - The flow into the next objects feels a bit unintuitive due to a pretty rapid movement here. Consider placing it at 183|254. nono..there are almost no stack slider patterns in the whole map like this.
  3. 00:12:359 (1,3) - Hm, maybe just a personal preference but this would look cooler to me if you'd make them parallel <: i think they are parallel now o.o
  4. 00:20:930 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - This plays unnatural to me due to the pretty fast wavy movement even though it's such it calm section. Maybe you could try something as seen in the screenshot below. in fact when hitting this your cursor is nearly in the same point.
    Screenshot
  5. 00:29:330 (3) - Move this a bit more to the so that it builds a wavy "S-like" movement with 00:28:987 (2) - .okay
    Screenshot
  6. 00:32:073 (3,4) - Consider to move 4 a bit lower + rotating it as seen in the Screenshot. This would make the flow better here due to a more fluent movement from the wave Slider 3 into 4. in fact 2 3 4 are symmetrical
    Screenshot
  7. 00:35:673 (1,2,3) - <3 :arrow: :3
  8. 00:40:987 (5,1,2) - If you want to emphasize 1 with a jump, I'd go with something slightly larger here for a bit more emphasis (Screenshot). If this wasn't your though, please keep the spacing constant here ^^" done
    Screenshot
  9. 00:49:045 (4) - Due to this being almost on the same y-position (not even 10 difference) as 00:48:873 (3) - it feels like it's slowing the player down. Consider moving it a bit lower (e.g. 156|188). but for the symmetry i decide not to change it.
  10. 00:58:302 (1) - I had problems with reading that. I don't know, but maybe you could place it more left so that it just overlaps 1 by a half in order to make it better readable ;w; it's too left.. i moved 1grid more anyway
    Screenshot
  11. 01:05:159 (1,1) - How am I supposed to read this properly? The problem is the polarity issue between these two which makes it not good readable since the player doesn't notice it because of the stack. Either unstack it and show the player with a higher distance that 01:05:502 (1) - starts on the white tick or place a Circle at either 01:05:330 - or 01:05:416 - . changed it into a circle
  12. 01:10:902 (4) - The stream's flow is kinda broken due to this Circle. It just plays weird to have this kink in it. Consider moving it to 20|65. just move like a straight line and it works
  13. 01:13:387 (4,1) - Uhhm, the rhythm here is weird. It feels wrong to have 1 start on the red tick and ignoring the rather strong white tick with that. Please CTRL+G the rhythm. I recommend you to do what I've shown you in the Screenshot below for better readability and playability :/ i follow the bass
    Screenshot
  14. 01:27:445 (1,2,1) - First of all keep the spacing of the consistent for better readability. The second thing bothering me here are the transitions of this whole pattern due to it being such a line which feels a bit unnatural to me here. Just a personal preference though I guess. k done
    Screenshot
  15. 01:34:302 (1,1) - This feels extremely unintuitive to me. The reason is that you've ignored the red tick with strong vocals as well as drums on it. Another weird thing is the slowdown of the SV which doesn't fit here since this sound isn't that different from the others here imo. Please change this for better readability ;w; (Same goes for the following ones as well.) listening to the bass as above o.o
  16. 01:38:416 (1,2,3,4,1) - The streamshape here feels kinda messy to me due to the transition to 01:38:759 (1) - . This felt a bit odd while playing. I suggest you to use a normal straight stream here for a better overall impression and playability. okay
    Screenshot
  17. 01:41:502 (1,2) - The rhythm feels weird here due to a pretty strong note in terms of vocals and instruments is being mapped with a Slidertail at 01:42:016 - . Consider either to split 01:41:845 (2) - into two Circles or do what is shown in the Screenshot below. no..
    Screenshot
  18. 01:43:902 (1,2,3,4,1) - The transition between 01:44:159 (4,1) - plays really harsh and looks like it's just done like this due to the lower Screenborder ¬¬ made a curve
    Screenshot
  19. 01:56:245 (4) - Consider moving this a bit to the left in order to imrpove the flow from the previous object into this one with creating a kind of cicular/oval shape. Another way I'd personally prefer though would be this. This would make the flow even better as well as the aesthetics imo. 4=3 rolated 120°
    Screenshot
  20. 02:07:559 (1) - Move this to 142|55 in order to improve the flow due to building a line with 02:07:045 (2,4) - and to make the spacing look even with the previous objects ;3 k
  21. 02:08:587 (2,3,1) - Maybe you could make some adjustments to get the spacing even. k
  22. 02:08:930 (1,1) - The jump here feels kinda unfitting. The reason is that the note at 02:09:787 (1) - is so soft that it doesn't really need a special emphasis via jump. Also you didn't map the jump at 02:07:559 (1,1) - which makes it inconsistent :b changed
  23. 02:16:987 (2) - Consider rotating this about 20° Selection Centre for a Circular movement for all of the objects (02:16:816 (1,2,1) - ) and to get the spacing even. okay
    Screenshot
  24. 02:18:016 (1) - Consider to shorten this one to the blue tick for a better playability to the next object. uh
  25. 02:34:130 (3,1,2) - How about tidying up this pattern a bit as seen in the Screenshot below. That would look way better to me c: good o.o but i may use it in other place
    Screenshot
  26. 02:39:102 (1,2,3,4,5) - This feels a bit messy to me. Why didn't you do a perfect star pattern using create polygon circles here? ;w; ah,it doesnt matter at all..
    Screenshot
  27. 02:41:159 (3,4,5) - I feel like 4 and 5 are slowing me down which causes in rather bad flow for me here. Maybe you could try something similiar as in the Screenshot below in order to improve it :3 ok
    Screenshot
  28. 02:45:959 (1,2) - Maybe it's just me but the flow here feels a bit slow which doesn't play that fluent. Consider to rise 02:45:959 (1) - a bit. good
    Screenshot
  29. 02:50:073 (1,1) - How about changing the shape of the first slider a bitso that it points onto the second one's head? That would actually play pretty cool here! :D cool
    Screenshot
  30. 02:53:159 (7,8,9) - Is it just me or does this feel a bit weird? I mean, you didn't do this for the other ones so I was very suprised so that my cursor already wanted to move further. yes so i changed it :3
  31. 02:59:673 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Is there a special reason for the NC-spam here? owono..
  32. 03:05:159 (1) - This is just a real personal opinion but the loop looks a bit blocky due to the red anchor point ;w; this would look so much better in my eyes. remade it
    Code
    136,88,185159,6,0,B|96:48|24:72|12:128|12:128|88:184|73:243|37:253|13:238|16:193|54:185|104:224|108:264|108:264|80:308|116:352,1,480
  33. 03:13:387 (1) - Consider centering the penultimate anchorpoint to get a better curve at the end. ok
    Screenshot
  34. 03:24:359 (1) - Hm, I think a CTRL+J version would fit the previous shapes of the Sliders better here tbh. too big
  35. 03:29:673 (2) - Maybe you could rotate this about -30° Selection Centre in order to create a circular shape with 03:29:845 (1) - which would improve the flow here a lot. k
    Screenshot
  36. 03:44:930 (1,2,3,4) - Please use a higher spacing between them (2,00 or 1,90) for a better readability. These are all so near to each other which ends up in a bad readability. k
    Screenshot
  37. 03:47:159 (1) - The transition feels really hard to play. Consider shortening this to the blue tick. hold on :3
  38. 03:52:130 (3,4,1,2) - I'm not sure if it's just me but the shape these Circles form looks a bit random to me. I don't really know what to suggest here but I'd go for something jumpier for the emphasis at 03:52:473 (1,2) - . nah
    Screenshot
  39. 04:11:502 (3) - This Slider slows the player down due to it being part of the pattern formed by 04:10:816 (1,2) - which features a faster movement. Please consider to CTRL+G 04:11:502 (3) - for a way better flow. k
  40. 04:13:045 (4,5) - CTRL+G this in terms of rhythm. The reason for this are the strong vocals at 04:13:387 - and the hold of the vocals at 04:13:045 - which would be better captured using a Slider (: hmm..
  41. 04:15:616 (3) - The huge jump to the previous and the small DS to the following one feels wrong to me due to the emphasis being at 04:15:787 - . So the jump should be to this object. done
    Screenshot
  42. 04:24:702 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe you could change the rhythm here a bit in order to follow that 1/1 Sound in the BG which is kinda similiar to the one mapped with 04:23:845 (7) - . i used sliderslide hs
    Screenshot
  43. 04:31:216 (1,2,1) - Is there a reason for the spacing being uneven here? :< o.o?
  44. 04:37:045 (1) - Consider using 1,85 DS since this feels slow compared to your other 1/4 Patterns which makes this play a bit weird to me. okay
    Screenshot
  45. 04:41:845 (5) - Please shorten this to 1/2. The note you ignoring there is so strong ;__; i used the same patterns too..
  46. 05:03:787 (5) - I don't know, maybe it's just me but I'd map a 1/2 Slider here instead due to the strong note on the red tick :/ ;w;


  47. Hm, pretty nice diff. I dislike the flow for some parts but it's overall pretty well done. But please change the AR, it makes the map feel empty which souldn't be the case. AR9 is way more fitting ;~;

Please reply! I hope it was helpful and good luck! :3 Take a star (ノ·ω·)ノ︵
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Irreversible
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Irreversible

Amamiya Yuko wrote:

diff naming suggestion: Made in China
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10:54 fanzhen0019: yeye 看图吗
10:54 384059043: 猴
10:54 384059043: link
10:54 384059043: 下午看
10:55 fanzhen0019: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/182520
10:55 fanzhen0019: hao
11:00 384059043: 反震爷爷啊 IRC mod猴不猴？ 0.0
11:00 fanzhen0019: hao
11:00 fanzhen0019: 等等
11:05 fanzhen0019: 8comon
11:11 fanzhen0019: lai
11:11 384059043: 好
11:11 384059043: 00:24:873 (1) - 
11:11 384059043: 我觉得这个转盘
11:11 384059043: 可以拆成两个
11:11 384059043: 00:26:073 - 
11:11 384059043: 在这里分开来
11:13 fanzhen0019: 好像也行
11:14 fanzhen0019: ok
11:14 384059043: 01:05:159 (6,1) - 这里x和y方向都差了一个像素 虽然玩的时候没啥问题但是还是建议叠好
11:15 fanzhen0019: 挪一下5就行
11:15 384059043: 01:28:987 - 这里的kiai的结束位置
11:15 384059043: 可以移动到01:33:273 - 
11:16 fanzhen0019: 这啥情况
11:16 fanzhen0019: 好像是改绿线删掉了..改回来了
11:16 fanzhen0019: okk
11:17 384059043: 01:33:273 - 这里
11:17 384059043: 貌似复制错了
11:17 384059043: 01:38:930 (2,4) - 
11:17 fanzhen0019: 01:27:787 (1) - 
11:17 384059043: 这里，让4穿过2要好一些
11:17 fanzhen0019: hao
11:18 384059043: 02:17:502 (1) - 我觉得根据音高的话这个滑条速度稍低于02:17:159 (1) - 会好一些
11:19 fanzhen0019: 我感觉这两个属性是一样的
11:19 384059043: 现在这样也没问题啦0w0
11:19 384059043: 02:50:759 (1,1) - 
11:19 fanzhen0019: hao .o
11:20 384059043: 这里我一开始读错了。。
11:20 384059043: 把间距放大一点？
11:21 fanzhen0019: 这里读错会是什么样子o.o
11:21 384059043: 我以为有7次折返。。
11:21 fanzhen0019: ..
11:21 384059043: 因为整张图里的滑条跳挺多的。。
11:21 384059043: 可能是我太noob了orz
11:22 384059043: 03:36:702 (1,2) - 我认为这两个滑条弧度有些大
11:23 fanzhen0019: ok
11:23 fanzhen0019: 改了
11:23 384059043: 美丽
11:23 384059043: 反震爷爷我偶像1111111
11:23 fanzhen0019: 哇
11:23 384059043: star
11:23 fanzhen0019: 谢谢啦!
11:23 384059043: 不用谢OwO

Great map，我偶像 :) star
[Seraphin]
240 posts
Joined October 2012
[Seraphin]
very nice song

image size is way too big~

00:04:816 (3) - (nazi) x72y192 to make it centered between (1) and (2)
00:10:987 (1) - how about just a straight slider? short curved sliders look weird and are confusing for me when I read them (but thats just me...)
00:35:330 (4) - it seems kinda weird to have this be straight when (2) is a curve even though they look like they should be similar (imo)
01:10:645 (1,2,3,4) - maybe redo this so it ends up leading into 01:10:987 (1) - ?
01:44:159 (4) - x60y376 & 01:44:245 (1) - x100y360? i think it plays a bit nicer,, but just suggestion
02:50:073 (1,1) - nice
03:15:787 (3) - down 1?

i want make sb, but can't find lyric zzz
gl

sorry i have no real suggestion
no kudosu plz
fanzhen0019
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
1,723 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
fanzhen0019

[Seraphin] wrote:

very nice song

image size is way too big~

00:04:816 (3) - (nazi) x72y192 to make it centered between (1) and (2) k
00:10:987 (1) - how about just a straight slider? short curved sliders look weird and are confusing for me when I read them (but thats just me...) no :3
00:35:330 (4) - it seems kinda weird to have this be straight when (2) is a curve even though they look like they should be similar (imo) ah..waiting for more comments about this..
01:10:645 (1,2,3,4) - maybe redo this so it ends up leading into 01:10:987 (1) - ? nono
01:44:159 (4) - x60y376 & 01:44:245 (1) - x100y360? i think it plays a bit nicer,, but just suggestion w
02:50:073 (1,1) - nice
03:15:787 (3) - down 1? k

i want make sb, but can't find lyric zzz
gl

sorry i have no real suggestion
no kudosu plz
Thank you!
Helpful=KD
Kiiwa
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Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki


From your ingame request

  1. Grey——Just some complaints.
  2. Black——My personal suggestions.
  3. Bold——Highly recommended.
  4. Red——(Maybe) Unrankable, you have to fix it.

[General]
  1. 没一点点的tag吗。。。

[中国制造]
  1. ar9.3可能有点高，我个人比较建议这图用ar9；
  2. 00:39:777 (1) - default whistle? 还有后面的00:42:520 (1) - 以及其他
  3. 00:40:635 (4,5) - 4这里用note，后面白线1/2slider比较好
  4. 00:57:435 (5,2) - 2也和00:57:606 (1,1) - 一样偏移一点，后面也可以偏一点
  5. 01:54:863 (1,2) - ctrl+g一下？
  6. 02:52:806 (6) - NC？
  7. 02:58:292 (4) - ^
  8. 03:52:292 (4,1,2,1) - 这里打的不是很顺，可以考虑换一下1,2和后面1/4短滑条1,2的位置
  9. 04:13:549 (6) - 改在叠在5的头上吧？
    AIBAT
    Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
    03:02:476 - snap to 03:02:492
    04:09:684 - snap to 04:09:692

Very solid map...
我感觉我就是在鸡蛋里面挑骨头憋出来上面这点东西

反震我偶像
fanzhen my idol
Dark Fang
1,981 posts
Joined February 2011
Dark Fang
[General]

  1. please BG size.
  2. current AR isn't good fit with the song. how about reduce that. i recommend 9~9.1
[you made it]

  1. 01:33:263 (1) - ok. make a little issue. this slider is very invisible by previous notes (at least, on rarely stackable). try to other way from current state. like tilt the slider angle.
  2. 01:34:292 (1) - I think this is unnecessary sv change. how about keep the sv and follow vocal? be honest, that patterns feel not good. yea. if you apply this opinion, others too seem like this pattern.
  3. 01:49:206 (1) - how about stack on 01:49:720 (1) - this slider's head? that will be more playable.IMO
  4. 02:17:835 (1) - eh hm, how about start 1/16 part on here. current state feel strange yea.
  5. 02:59:920 (2,1) - I recommend use NC at each jumpy circles instead slider.
  6. 03:35:320 (1) - please move more left than current. that part's flow too curved.
  7. 03:38:063 - start long slider until 03:38:406 - here instead of circle. it will be more stable if you use long slider. current state is too awkward because previous part is jump part but the beat, that part's beat seems like 03:36:520 (5,6,1) - this part. but placement is --sorry-- non-conscience jump. anyway, you should offer playable way to players.
  8. 03:46:977 (1) - same opinion as 02:17:835 (1) - here
  9. 03:57:606 (3,4) - how about Ctrl + G this? current flow a little awkward between (4) and (5) slider. IMO
take my mod with my bad English... ;w;
fanzhen0019
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
1,723 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
fanzhen0019
Yuki

Minakami Yuki wrote:



From your ingame request

  1. Grey——Just some complaints.
  2. Black——My personal suggestions.
  3. Bold——Highly recommended.
  4. Red——(Maybe) Unrankable, you have to fix it.

[General]
  1. 没一点点的tag吗。。。

[中国制造]
  1. ar9.3可能有点高，我个人比较建议这图用ar9；
  2. 00:39:777 (1) - default whistle? 还有后面的00:42:520 (1) - 以及其他 感觉不用
  3. 00:40:635 (4,5) - 4这里用note，后面白线1/2slider比较好 可
  4. 00:57:435 (5,2) - 2也和00:57:606 (1,1) - 一样偏移一点，后面也可以偏一点 ok
  5. 01:54:863 (1,2) - ctrl+g一下？不用惹
  6. 02:52:806 (6) - NC？k
  7. 02:58:292 (4) - ^ k
  8. 03:52:292 (4,1,2,1) - 这里打的不是很顺，可以考虑换一下1,2和后面1/4短滑条1,2的位置改了
  9. 04:13:549 (6) - 改在叠在5的头上吧？不用
    [AIBAT]Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
    03:02:476 - snap to 03:02:492
    04:09:684 - snap to 04:09:692

Very solid map...
我感觉我就是在鸡蛋里面挑骨头憋出来上面这点东西

反震我偶像
fanzhen my idol

Dark Fang

Dark Fang wrote:

[General]

  1. please BG size. okkkk i'll change it asap
  2. current AR isn't good fit with the song. how about reduce that. i recommend 9~9.1 ok
[you made it]

  1. 01:33:263 (1) - ok. make a little issue. this slider is very invisible by previous notes (at least, on rarely stackable). try to other way from current state. like tilt the slider angle. yes i made it more curve
  2. 01:34:292 (1) - I think this is unnecessary sv change. how about keep the sv and follow vocal? be honest, that patterns feel not good. yea. if you apply this opinion, others too seem like this pattern. i follow bass here.umm i thinkit's acceptable ;__;
  3. 01:49:206 (1) - how about stack on 01:49:720 (1) - this slider's head? that will be more playable.IMO changed
  4. 02:17:835 (1) - eh hm, how about start 1/16 part on here. current state feel strange yea. orz there's a very small lead-in
  5. 02:59:920 (2,1) - I recommend use NC at each jumpy circles instead slider. oh yes!
  6. 03:35:320 (1) - please move more left than current. that part's flow too curved. dpne
  7. 03:38:063 - start long slider until 03:38:406 - here instead of circle. it will be more stable if you use long slider. current state is too awkward because previous part is jump part but the beat, that part's beat seems like 03:36:520 (5,6,1) - this part. but placement is --sorry-- non-conscience jump. anyway, you should offer playable way to players. ah..okay
  8. 03:46:977 (1) - same opinion as 02:17:835 (1) - here same as above
  9. 03:57:606 (3,4) - how about Ctrl + G this? current flow a little awkward between (4) and (5) slider. IMO though 5 is slider,when do this the distance between 4 and 5 will be big
take my mod with my bad English... ;w;

Thank you! It helps a lot!
BeatofIke
4,166 posts
Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
Pretty good map indeed!
Good luck with map! :3
Kiiwa
928 posts
Joined January 2010
Kiiwa
8-)
nice sluider bro
Mao
Elite Mapper II
2,963 posts
Joined December 2012
Mao
Log
2014-08-26 15:34 Mao: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/437671 himmel feat. YooSanHyakurei - Seraphim [Made in China]]
2014-08-26 15:34 Macuilxochitl: yesyes
2014-08-26 15:34 Mao: we need another name for the diff first I guess lol
2014-08-26 15:34 Macuilxochitl: haha yes
2014-08-26 15:35 Mao: sooo, what's the song about?
2014-08-26 15:35 Macuilxochitl: idk since the lyric is in japanese..
2014-08-26 15:35 Mao: where is this song even from
2014-08-26 15:35 Macuilxochitl: song name is seraphim
2014-08-26 15:35 Mao: I can't find anything
2014-08-26 15:35 Macuilxochitl: from a chinese composer
2014-08-26 15:36 Macuilxochitl: will be packed into a chinese mu-game
2014-08-26 15:36 Macuilxochitl: so diff name..
2014-08-26 15:37 Mao: seraphim is plural of Seraph
2014-08-26 15:37 Mao: which is a hebrew Angel or something like this
2014-08-26 15:37 Macuilxochitl: yes
2014-08-26 15:39 Mao: well, let's find some synonyms for angel
2014-08-26 15:39 Mao: something from these might work
2014-08-26 15:39 Macuilxochitl: hard..
2014-08-26 15:39 Mao: I'd go for something like Spirit, Guardian, Seraph or Heaven
2014-08-26 15:40 Macuilxochitl: Heaven
2014-08-26 15:40 Mao: okay
2014-08-26 15:40 Macuilxochitl: soundz kool oo
2014-08-26 15:42 Mao: so then let's get into the diff
2014-08-26 15:42 Macuilxochitl: okkie
2014-08-26 15:42 Mao: 00:27:435 - these hitsounds
2014-08-26 15:42 Mao: they feel so loud and overdone
2014-08-26 15:43 Mao: it sounded so much better before these were added
2014-08-26 15:43 Mao: also they are just used in this section if I'm not mistaken
2014-08-26 15:43 Mao: which makes them also feel pretty out of place
2014-08-26 15:44 Mao: *pretty much
2014-08-26 15:44 Macuilxochitl: a..
2014-08-26 15:45 Mao: also I don't know, they feel so different from your other hitsounding :<
2014-08-26 15:45 Macuilxochitl: hmm
2014-08-26 15:45 Macuilxochitl: since it's an intro
2014-08-26 15:46 Macuilxochitl: so i think it's acceptable if i use some different hs
2014-08-26 15:46 Mao: but then at least tone down the volume a bit
2014-08-26 15:46 Mao: they are extremely loud
2014-08-26 15:46 Macuilxochitl: ah..
2014-08-26 15:46 Macuilxochitl: okay
2014-08-26 15:47 Macuilxochitl: 60
2014-08-26 15:47 Macuilxochitl: %
2014-08-26 15:47 Macuilxochitl: how about 60..?
2014-08-26 15:47 Mao: wait, lemme try something
2014-08-26 15:48 Mao: well, you don't have to turn down the volume for the whole section
2014-08-26 15:48 Mao: just for hitsounds like 00:35:663 (1) - , I'd personally go for 50~60%
2014-08-26 15:48 Mao: just for the ehad here -> http://puu.sh/b8B8U/e76f572715.jpg
2014-08-26 15:48 Mao: like this :V
2014-08-26 15:49 Macuilxochitl: okay :3
2014-08-26 15:49 Macuilxochitl: done
2014-08-26 15:50 Mao: also why are you using AR9,1 lol
2014-08-26 15:50 Mao: this is so barely different from 9
2014-08-26 15:50 Mao: decimal ARs are there to adjust it if it's needed
2014-08-26 15:50 Macuilxochitl: looks cool!
2014-08-26 15:50 Macuilxochitl: haha jok
2014-08-26 15:51 Macuilxochitl: then i can use 9 :)
2014-08-26 15:51 Mao: yep
2014-08-26 15:51 Macuilxochitl: okay done
2014-08-26 15:52 Mao: 00:24:863 (1) - Is it just me, or is the there a sound on the white tick before this ends?
2014-08-26 15:52 Mao: I'd rather shorten this to this white tick in order to cover that by the spinner's end
2014-08-26 15:53 Macuilxochitl: oh good!
2014-08-26 15:53 Macuilxochitl: yesyes :D
2014-08-26 15:54 Mao: 00:35:663 (1,2,3) - I still love that
2014-08-26 15:54 Mao: <3
2014-08-26 15:55 Macuilxochitl: xD yea
2014-08-26 15:57 Mao: btw, where did you actually get this song
2014-08-26 15:58 Mao: if I try to search for it on the internet, I can't find anything else than your osu! thread xD
2014-08-26 15:59 Macuilxochitl: i got it from weibo, a social site like twitter
2014-08-26 15:59 Mao: hm okay :/
2014-08-26 15:59 Mao: since it is pretty risky here
2014-08-26 15:59 Macuilxochitl: the composer posted it on the site and submitted to a music share website
2014-08-26 15:59 Mao: I can't check the metadata properly :<
2014-08-26 16:00 Macuilxochitl: i've checked with the composer
2014-08-26 16:01 Macuilxochitl: he plays osu too haha
2014-08-26 16:01 Macuilxochitl: but not frequently
2014-08-26 16:01 Mao: ooh that's nice
2014-08-26 16:01 Macuilxochitl: the first account in the favorite list
2014-08-26 16:02 Mao: good, so I don't have to worry about the metadata? o3o
2014-08-26 16:03 Macuilxochitl: yes :D
2014-08-26 16:04 Mao: 01:10:635 (1,2,3,4) - Nothing you have to apply but I'd like S:C2 here much more as the sounds in the Music aren't that strong for such loud Hitsounds
2014-08-26 16:04 Mao: but that's just me I guess
2014-08-26 16:05 Mao: also all the others have S:C2 as well
2014-08-26 16:05 Macuilxochitl: maybe i'd better lower the volumn
2014-08-26 16:05 Mao: that could work as well
2014-08-26 16:06 Macuilxochitl: okk
2014-08-26 16:06 Macuilxochitl: done
2014-08-26 16:08 Mao: 01:31:892 (2) - Please, what does this actually follow?
2014-08-26 16:08 Mao: that bg sound doesn't seem to land on any ticks
2014-08-26 16:08 Mao: also it's pretty quiet
2014-08-26 16:08 Mao: I'd go for a simple 1/2 Slider
2014-08-26 16:09 Macuilxochitl: aha i think is's okay..
2014-08-26 16:12 Mao: well, I don't know
2014-08-26 16:12 Mao: I know what you want to follow there
2014-08-26 16:13 Mao: if you want to keep it I'd still remove some repeats
2014-08-26 16:13 Mao: just until the red tick
2014-08-26 16:13 Mao: as the sound actually ends there
2014-08-26 16:15 Macuilxochitl: uh..
2014-08-26 16:16 Mao: well, take you time to think about it
2014-08-26 16:17 Mao: do you want me to go on?
2014-08-26 16:17 Macuilxochitl: lemme think..
2014-08-26 16:17 Mao: ok
2014-08-26 16:17 Macuilxochitl: players wont feel anything weird tho
2014-08-26 16:18 Mao: I felt a weird sound ingame
2014-08-26 16:18 Macuilxochitl: but the audio is actually stop at red line
2014-08-26 16:18 Macuilxochitl: hmm
2014-08-26 16:19 Macuilxochitl: im trying drum-hitnormal
2014-08-26 16:19 Macuilxochitl: it covers the audio
2014-08-26 16:19 Mao: lol
2014-08-26 16:19 Macuilxochitl: but..then it becomes what we call as overmap..?
2014-08-26 16:19 Mao: I guess it does
2014-08-26 16:20 Macuilxochitl: anyway i feel acceptable to it
2014-08-26 16:21 Mao: woudl shortening it be such a problem? =v=
2014-08-26 16:21 Mao: ACTION runs
2014-08-26 16:21 Mao: xD
2014-08-26 16:22 Macuilxochitl: oo shorten it
2014-08-26 16:22 Macuilxochitl: yea i can :D
2014-08-26 16:22 Macuilxochitl: done
2014-08-26 16:22 Mao: ok
2014-08-26 16:23 Mao: 01:34:292 (1) -
2014-08-26 16:24 Mao: this is a must fix
2014-08-26 16:24 Mao: these slow sliders are unreadable and unfitting
2014-08-26 16:24 Mao: even though I've played the map several times I always think this is faster
2014-08-26 16:24 Mao: I've also asked other BATs and they agree
2014-08-26 16:24 Macuilxochitl: orz..
2014-08-26 16:24 Macuilxochitl: i want to keep it ;w;
2014-08-26 16:24 Mao: but it feels wrong
2014-08-26 16:25 Macuilxochitl: the bass
2014-08-26 16:25 Mao: the bass is the less dominant thing here
2014-08-26 16:25 Mao: and even though it gets kinda lower it's not worth to foll0w with a slowdown
2014-08-26 16:26 Mao: I barely hear the bass while playing
2014-08-26 16:26 Macuilxochitl: when i first listened to this song the bass here impressed me
2014-08-26 16:27 Mao: well, you are right
2014-08-26 16:27 Mao: they do fit
2014-08-26 16:27 Mao: but
2014-08-26 16:27 Mao: 1,00 -> 0,5 SV change is too much
2014-08-26 16:27 Mao: way too much
2014-08-26 16:27 Macuilxochitl: yea
2014-08-26 16:27 Macuilxochitl: so i think 0.6 or 0.7..instead?
2014-08-26 16:27 Mao: 0,8 ~ 0,75 coudl work
2014-08-26 16:27 Macuilxochitl: k
2014-08-26 16:27 Macuilxochitl: lemme try
2014-08-26 16:28 Macuilxochitl: kk 0.75
2014-08-26 16:28 Macuilxochitl: good
2014-08-26 16:28 Mao: send me a .osu after you've redone that
2014-08-26 16:28 Mao: I want to see how it works
2014-08-26 16:30 Macuilxochitl: http://puu.sh/b8DGA/0a623c15f3.osu
2014-08-26 16:31 Macuilxochitl: i have something to cope with
2014-08-26 16:31 Macuilxochitl: will be back soon!
2014-08-26 16:33 Mao: call me when you're back
2014-08-26 16:42 Macuilxochitl: aa
2014-08-26 16:42 Macuilxochitl: yea back!
2014-08-26 16:42 Mao: feels better now
2014-08-26 16:43 Mao: also wb
2014-08-26 16:43 Macuilxochitl: xD
2014-08-26 16:45 Mao: 01:56:577 (1,2,1,2,1) - I know you like the pattern but I feel like the flow is pretty forced due to the movement from 01:56:749 (2) - into 01:56:920 (1,2) -
2014-08-26 16:45 Mao: it just simply doesn't feel smooth
2014-08-26 16:46 Mao: the main problem is that 01:57:092 (2) -
2014-08-26 16:46 Mao: follows the path of 1
2014-08-26 16:46 Mao: rather than changing the direction
2014-08-26 16:46 Mao: a direction change to the right would flow so much better
2014-08-26 16:47 Mao: gwah, these objects locations are pretty unfortunate because of the slider
2014-08-26 16:47 Mao: there's not much you can do different here lol
2014-08-26 16:47 Mao: http://puu.sh/b8EHT/09174bf33b.jpg
2014-08-26 16:47 Mao: this would work well imo
2014-08-26 16:48 Macuilxochitl: ah
2014-08-26 16:49 Macuilxochitl: hmm
2014-08-26 16:49 Macuilxochitl: lemme draw
2014-08-26 16:50 Macuilxochitl: http://puu.sh/b8ESg/73eda18fc5.png
2014-08-26 16:50 Mao: lemme draw
2014-08-26 16:52 Mao: http://puu.sh/b8EZt/4024ab87b9.jpg
2014-08-26 16:52 Mao: I personally aim the second 1 pretty fast
2014-08-26 16:52 Macuilxochitl: oh yes
2014-08-26 16:52 Mao: and then have to slow down there in order to get 2 properly
2014-08-26 16:53 Mao: which felt very harsh while playing it first
2014-08-26 16:53 Mao: I mean, obviously it would play smooth if it would be played like this wavy movement youÄve drawn
2014-08-26 16:55 Macuilxochitl: http://puu.sh/b8ESg/73eda18fc5.png
2014-08-26 16:55 Macuilxochitl: how about this
2014-08-26 16:55 Mao: what, didn't you sent me this already? :V
2014-08-26 16:57 Mao: *send
2014-08-26 17:02 Macuilxochitl: OTZ
2014-08-26 17:02 Mao: xD
2014-08-26 17:02 Mao: disconnect?
2014-08-26 17:03 Macuilxochitl: yea..
2014-08-26 17:03 Macuilxochitl: so did you recieve the pic..?
2014-08-26 17:03 Mao: send it again
2014-08-26 17:04 Macuilxochitl: http://puu.sh/b8Fai/6e59b0471d.jpg
2014-08-26 17:04 Mao: lemme test it
2014-08-26 17:05 Mao: yeah, looks good
2014-08-26 17:05 Macuilxochitl: xD weee
2014-08-26 17:06 Macuilxochitl: u'll be the best BAT <3
2014-08-26 17:06 Macuilxochitl: u check everything carefully
2014-08-26 17:07 Mao: 02:18:006 (1) - isn't this sound 1/8?
2014-08-26 17:07 Mao: I hear it on every blue/red/white tick
2014-08-26 17:07 Mao: and always 1 time between them
2014-08-26 17:07 Mao: which indicated 1/8
2014-08-26 17:07 Mao: I try my best ^^'
2014-08-26 17:08 Macuilxochitl: LOL
2014-08-26 17:08 Macuilxochitl: it's 1/16 now
2014-08-26 17:09 Mao: yeah, but the slider should be 1/8 to follow the music properly lol
2014-08-26 17:09 Macuilxochitl: ok done
2014-08-26 17:12 Mao: 02:51:349 - Hey, it would be cool to have a note here as this is a build up to the downbeat
2014-08-26 17:13 Mao: just an idea though :3
2014-08-26 17:14 Macuilxochitl: hmm
2014-08-26 17:14 Macuilxochitl: 1/8 is enough :D
2014-08-26 17:15 Mao: 03:01:035 (1) - Please, I really disagree with this one
2014-08-26 17:15 Mao: is there even such a sound to follow?
2014-08-26 17:15 Mao: http://puu.sh/b8Gob/5465bea059.jpg
2014-08-26 17:15 Mao: this works much better
2014-08-26 17:16 Macuilxochitl: 03:01:035 (1) - like here
2014-08-26 17:16 Mao: what?
2014-08-26 17:17 Macuilxochitl: 03:01:035 (1) -
2014-08-26 17:17 Mao: yeah, this is the one I want you to change lol
2014-08-26 17:17 Macuilxochitl: ..copy failed
2014-08-26 17:18 Macuilxochitl: 01:31:892 (2) -
2014-08-26 17:18 Mao: nah, the sound at 01:31:892 (2) - is louder
2014-08-26 17:18 Mao: and more obvious imo
2014-08-26 17:21 Macuilxochitl: hmm
2014-08-26 17:22 Macuilxochitl: ..uh?
2014-08-26 17:22 Macuilxochitl: http://puu.sh/b8GQq/22c6c0435c.jpg
2014-08-26 17:23 Mao: 03:01:035 (1) - is the problem not 03:01:377 (1) -
2014-08-26 17:23 Mao: :<
2014-08-26 17:24 Macuilxochitl: ooo i se
2014-08-26 17:24 Macuilxochitl: e
2014-08-26 17:24 Macuilxochitl: eee
2014-08-26 17:25 Macuilxochitl: idk in fact..
2014-08-26 17:25 Macuilxochitl: but it's fine..?
2014-08-26 17:26 Mao: I don't think so :/
2014-08-26 17:26 Macuilxochitl: like a hold slider
2014-08-26 17:27 Mao: let me get some more opinions on that
2014-08-26 17:28 Mao: well, got agreement
2014-08-26 17:28 Mao: it sounds overmapped
2014-08-26 17:28 Macuilxochitl: orzz
2014-08-26 17:30 Mao: as I've said [http://puu.sh/b8HmN/95047e234b.jpg this] works fine ;b
2014-08-26 17:31 Macuilxochitl: T.T
2014-08-26 17:31 Macuilxochitl: okay..
2014-08-26 17:36 Mao: 03:05:149 (1) - I've liked the old slider better ;w;
2014-08-26 17:36 Mao: ACTION runs
2014-08-26 17:37 Macuilxochitl: orz
2014-08-26 17:38 Mao: my old mod still has the cold
2014-08-26 17:38 Mao: *code
2014-08-26 17:38 Mao: ACTION runs faaar away
2014-08-26 17:38 Mao: but well, personal preference I guess
2014-08-26 17:39 Macuilxochitl: ;w;
2014-08-26 17:39 Macuilxochitl: anyway it's still long
2014-08-26 17:40 Mao: 03:02:406 (1) - Why does this end on the blue tick btw?
2014-08-26 17:40 Mao: Is that intentional? owo
2014-08-26 17:41 Macuilxochitl: ooooo by mistake
2014-08-26 17:41 Mao: 03:26:577 (1) - lol wtf sliderslide hitsounds xD
2014-08-26 17:43 Mao: is that even allowed?
2014-08-26 17:43 Macuilxochitl: yea
2014-08-26 17:44 Macuilxochitl: see Rootus
2014-08-26 17:44 Mao: lemme see
2014-08-26 17:50 Macuilxochitl: O.O
2014-08-26 17:51 Mao: ok it is, just wanted to know ;b
2014-08-26 17:52 Mao: not that I let something unrankable pass without asking
2014-08-26 17:53 Mao: but as it's fine, we don't have to worry :D/
2014-08-26 17:53 Macuilxochitl: yayaya
2014-08-26 17:54 Mao: 03:47:149 (1) - same as the one before the second kiai, it's 1/8
2014-08-26 17:56 Macuilxochitl: yes
2014-08-26 17:57 Mao: 03:52:635 (2) - stop overlapping my poor little HP-Bar ;w;
2014-08-26 17:59 Macuilxochitl: okkk
2014-08-26 18:02 Mao: 03:55:377 (1,2,3,4,5) - meh, what are you following with 03:55:463 (2) - ?
2014-08-26 18:02 Mao: 03:55:377 (1) - and 03:55:549 (3,4,5) - are completely different
2014-08-26 18:02 Mao: and therefore shouldn't be connected imo
2014-08-26 18:03 Mao: Please delete 03:55:463 (2) -
2014-08-26 18:03 Macuilxochitl: a
2014-08-26 18:04 Macuilxochitl: why.. a bit overmap
2014-08-26 18:04 Mao: it feels unintuitive :<
2014-08-26 18:08 Macuilxochitl: orz
2014-08-26 18:10 Mao: brb dinner
2014-08-26 18:10 Macuilxochitl: k

What has been changed:
  1. Fixed some overmapping/general Rhythm
  2. Slight overall flow/pattern adjustments
  3. General Stuff

Since you apparently went to bed while I was at dinner, call me back once you've updated and applied that stuff. I'll check the rest (General Stuff, Metadata etc.) then.
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woooooo all done! thank you mao-chan! <3
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So, after checking this again with the mapper, we've fixed some Spinners and other General stuff. Log

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